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Voletooth (A)--Approved

Voletooth.apprentice

Revised Again! Any comments?Hawkfur7 05:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is my 1st charart and I went off of the tutorial pages. Can you help me make this better? Hawkfur7 04:45, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the paint and blur messed up the lineart and I don't know how to fix it. Suggestions?Hawkfur7 04:57, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Layer over another line art. This is really good for your first charart! The eye colour needs to be fixed--Nightshine{ 05:00, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Adding to that, the image is a little too red. Copy the colour from his elder image and use that--Nightshine{ 05:06, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make the eyes a lighter shade of green? Is that what you meant? Because I based his eyes off of his warrior picture.Hawkfur7 05:16, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

If I'm making him his elder color, do you want me to make the stripes a darker brown or keep them as is?Hawkfur7 05:25, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Use all the colours from his elder image. For the way the eye should look go here and look under the eye section--Nightshine{ 05:23, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a more natural color. SilverpawChase that mouse! 19:03, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad for a first image :) First thing first, the eyes don't have their line art anymore and most of our images keep their lineart of the eyes. When you re-add the lineart like Nightshine said, you should good to go with that. Make the ear pink the same color as his warrior and elder image. His colors look closer to his warrior image so it seems fine, but of course those don't technically match the color of his elder image as they're lighter. Then there's the highlights on his tail, just burn those a little as they're too bright against the rest of his fur.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 22:04, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
How about now?Hawkfur7 04:10, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
Convert into a png. This looks like a jpeg.Quailflight 06:15, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
Converting might not help...and I just noticed that you named the file wrong too. Change it too Voletooth.apprentice.png if I'm correct I believe--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 21:37, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
Well, the weird thing is, I did save it as a png file, not a jpg. But, I resaved and renamed as a png file, just to be sure. It should be fine now.Hawkfur7 05:41, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
I also made him more of his elder colors, but lighter. And I fixed the lineart on his body and on his eyes. How is it now?Hawkfur7 05:49, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

He stills looks .jpg...I'm afraid even I have never found a way to undo this. However, I got the reverted version here:

Now I suggest just redoing him with this one, that way you won't have to start from scratch--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 23:53, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

How do you layer over another line art? Because I'm using Pixlr, and everytime I add a layer, it just deletes the one I was working on.Hawkfur7 06:11, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind. I figured it out how to layer over another lineart using GIMP2.Hawkfur7 19:40, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I reuploaded the modified png image you posted, and it's at the top. Better?Hawkfur7 02:16, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hello...? :(Hawkfur7 05:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Is there anyone there?...Hawkfur7 09:40, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. Blur the ear pink just slightly more, but other than that it looks great! :RiverpeltHeart of Amber 21:10, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. At the top. I blurred the ear pink more. Is it good to go?Hawkfur7 21:50, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

You'll have to ask Bramble, but it looks good to me! RiverpeltHeart of Amber 21:55, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye and add stripes to the tail.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 22:00, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. at the very top. I added stripes to the tail and fixed the eyes a little. How is it now?Hawkfur7 02:09, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. at the very top. I also brightened/darkened him with the burn/dodge tool, just to give him a little more depth.Hawkfur7 05:32, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try using This to see a way to do eyes. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:16, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I fixed the eyes. How is it now?Hawkfur7 06:51, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made his spine a little darker to add depth and around his haunches. Now, how is it?Hawkfur7 05:30, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

The eye still seems off to me. It's too square. Besides that darken the shadinag on the legs faruthest from us.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:21, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Add a stripe on his head, and make the shorter stripes longer. Also, highlight the tail and front legs. FrostHeart 02:57, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, the highlights are unessessary. Quailflight 09:25, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. how about now?

It looks like there is blurred line art around the tail. Fix the eye again.--Nightshine{ 05:25, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Are the eyes better? I also fixed most of the problem areas on the tail.Hawkfur7 21:38, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also blurred the stripes a little more because they seemed to bold.Hawkfur7 21:50, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I fixed the ear pink, the eyes, the stripes, and the tail. Are there any more mistakes? Comments?Hawkfur7 05:49, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Look Here for a tutorial on eyes.The rest of the image is nice though! $Coolstar$ 19:05, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I finally fixed the eyes! How is the ihis flankmage now?Hawkfur7 07:03, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Much better.There are two little dots on his flank...$Coolstar$ 19:58, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I removed the two dots from his flank and covered it up the most I can. How is he now?Hawkfur7 04:29, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I put more stripes on his flank to cover up the removal of the two dots.Hawkfur7 00:11, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Nice Job. I think he's ready. CBA?Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 00:18, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 15:43, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Frostfur (Ki) - Approved

File:Frostfur kit.png for my second charart it turned out horribly (if it is not mine but someone elses because Mine fails but it looks like mine) Birdwing 19:54, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Oms i forgot ear pink Birdwing 19:57, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

You also need to color the nose. Asides from that this image isn't horrible. It's actually quite good.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:54, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ok added nose pink and ear pink Birdwing 20:59, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else i need to fix? Birdwing 22:20, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

The color of the earpink is too bright. Choose a softer shade of pink and blur it.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 23:25, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded chose softer shade and blurred it Birdwing 23:31, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Use a different pink. Something made from red instead of a magenta color. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 23:39, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Used more red color and blurred it Birdwing 23:45, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

[1] It still looks odd. Use the pink next to the white from this. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 00:47, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded used the closest pink Birdwing 00:56, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is good, Birdwing. All I see is that the earpink on both ears should be blurred. Also, Blur the shading on her right. (our left)--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 19:09, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is too bright. Make it darker, like copy the color from another white cat. Quailflight 19:11, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded put more like the ear pink for white cats and blurred the ears and shading (Note: i use pixlr that is proboly why the blurring looks messed up my gimp wont work Birdwing 19:33, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it more, and make it a wee bit smaller. Quailflight 19:34, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded and made the ear pink more smaller Birdwing 19:55, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Better then mine. =) Blur the shading on our right leg.(========> -that way.) ~Blue Lightning Strikes!I'm so shocked 20:40, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred shading

Blur the earpink a bit more.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:22, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Thats as far it will blur pixlr blurring tool is bad but i will try tomorrow Birdstar 01:48, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit more. The ear pink looks a little too purple. Make it pinker--NightshineR 06:30, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded made the ear pink more pink and blurred the chest shading Birdstar 13:42, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else need fixing? Birdstar 17:21, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Doesn't look like it. Comments before approval? Bramble 20:56, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approving Night Fall 20:04, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Adderfang (D) - Approved

Adderfang.deputy Hey, guys! Sorry for not contributing to the project lately. =P Our computer broke down a couple months ago, and I've been using my mom's laptop ever since. I thought Pixlr wouldn't really work well on her computer, but I think Adderfang turned out alright. What do you guys think? Oh, and also, I drastically changed his deputy image from his warrior image because I was planning to re-do his warrior image during the next tweak week. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 20:43, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I'm not sure you can totally re-do another person's image, even for Tweak Week. Mousetalon!! 23:45, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Could someone remind me when he was deputy? I don't remember that; but I guess I could have overlooked it in BP ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:15, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

He wasn't. Sunstar's only deputies were Tawnyspots and Bluefur, and Bluestar's deputy was Redtail up until his death. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 01:03, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Huh; where did we get that he was a deputy I wonder? Oh well. Sorry, Honeyfur; is there another cat you can use this as? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:46, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

He was temporary deputy for a while. Kinda like you Night. He filled in while Tawnyspots was sick.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 01:49, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I was the one who did Adderfang's warrior image, so that was why I was planning to re-do him. Also, when Tawnyspots was sick, Adderfang filled in for him, so he was a temporary deputy. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 10:57, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the chest area. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:41, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? And also, I'm really sorry for causing all this confusion; if Adderfang doesn't work out, I could always choose a different cat. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 20:15, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. This is really good!--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 20:17, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Snowflight! I actually re-located the highlight. Is it blurred enough? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 22:44, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great to me. -- Sandystar 21:28, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bramble 10:27, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripes and earpink could be blurred more. Quailflight 05:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights can be blured a little more too.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 22:56, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr's blur tool is kind of weak, but I tried to make it work. How's this? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 21:04, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't this look more like his warrior image? The colours on this one are all different and so are the stripes. I prefer the style of his warrior image--Nightshine{ 06:25, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

She said that she wanted to redo his warrior image during tweak week. I dont think that the colors are different but the highlights make them look different.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:55, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I used the exact same coloring for his deputy image; I guess the shading and highlights just make it look different. I personally think his warrior image doesn't look very good, but I can always re-do him. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 23:14, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I personally like this style better. Stripes aside make the earpink a little bigger.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 18:16, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, Ashshadow! Made the ear pink bigger. And I'm sorry, Nightshine. Is there anything I should do to make his stripes look better? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 18:42, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you can change the spots into stripes. They looks kind of strange at the moment--Nightshine{ 06:23, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Highlight the tail and legs. FrostHeart 02:56, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

No Frostheart, the legs and tail don't need highlighting. I would change the spots into stripes if I were you Honeyfur. Quailflight 09:23, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Hold on, guys. I've just re-read Bluestar's Prophecy. Adderfang is a mottled tabby tom. I think the spots should stay. I think they look nice, but the shading on the foreleg could be blurred. His warrior image should have mottled marks too. Hollydapple 03:14, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Here, I did an image of him with stripes. We can compare the two and see which would work better. File:Adderfang2.deputy.png --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 19:53, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

I still like the one at the top of the page best.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:49, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

I totally and 100% vote for the first Adderfang. The one on top is so pretty with the spots! Hollydapple 01:59, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

I think the problem hre was that it didn't look similar to his warrior image, but if you're willing to redo the warrior image at a later time in Tweak Week, then we can go ahead and approve this. Comments before approval? Bramble 16:34, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 00:15, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (D) - Approved

Rowanstar (BS).deputy Comments?--NightshineR 00:49, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

First Comment! That looks great! :) Blackstar 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 01:00, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is gorgeous Night! Darken the stripes on the face Night Fall 03:23, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened face stripes--NightshineR 05:29, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Again, Night, you astound me. Make the ear pink more visible, if you can. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 17:35, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ah-maz-ing! The only thing I can say is to blur the bottom stripe on his face some more.DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 00:25, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred face stripe, made ear pink a bit lighter--NightshineR 00:45, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

amazing night, all I see is that the tail stripes along the tip of the tail could be defined.  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 18:01, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded defined stripes on tail tip--NightshineR 01:05, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - You should either add some highlights or darken your shading on the tail - it looks rather flat. Other than that, nice job! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:32, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened tail shading--NightshineR 03:23, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me :) Good job! Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 06:43, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Really nice! This is perfect! MoontailMeRocks! 00:39, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is incredible the stripes are very precise and detailed and the shading looks good. :)Wildear~101:) 13:23, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 00:15, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (Ki) - Approved

Owlwhisker.kit There are a lot of discussions, and this is section 36, so this should be under the limit, but if it's over then please let me know. Image-wise, this is by far fail. I know that the stripes are way too dark, but when I lighten them you can't see them. Comments and suggestions? 6 Icethroat 8 Only two more weeks left of school! 02:19, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


This is really good, just blur the tabby stripes a little more. =) PoppystormFlight of an Eagle 18:00, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 6 Icethroat 8 Only two more weeks left of school! 23:39, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good! Darken the paw and head shading a tiny bit, and blur the ear pink on the left a bit. --IcestormPeace 00:22, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Our left, or the left ear? 6 Icethroat 8 Only two more weeks left of school! 22:24, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Left ear. --IcestormPeace 11:43, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the highlights. This is great!--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 15:57, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it's been a while. 6 Icethroat 8 Last week of school! 21:16, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Everythings good, just highlight the front paws FrostHeart 03:02, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

My shading style has the paws with darker shading rather than with highlights, so I don't think I need to add them, but if I should then I will. Also, please put a link to your user page in your sig. 6 Icethroat 8 Last week of school! 23:41, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Ice, the paws look fine. You don't need to add them. Blur the highlights again. Quailflight 09:27, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't fixed it yet, I haven't had time, but I'll work on it and upload it and a couple of days, so please don't decline this yet. 6 Icethroat 8 School's out! For summer! 03:00, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm soo sorry that I took so long to upload this, I've had Drum Camp this week. I've still got two more days left, but I hope to be able to get on more after that. I darkened the highlights rather than blurring them anymore, because I couldn't blur the highlights anymore without blurring the stripes, too, and having them blurred at different amounts. 6 Icethroat 8 School's out! For summer! 01:13, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see is to darken the shading on his hind paw Night Fall 05:53, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:51, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 21:26, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approving Night Fall 06:23, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) - Approved

Rainfur.loner Withdrawed Reedwhisker (Ki) and put up this! Sooo any comments?DawnleafStarClan is watching 13:30, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Just blur the shading some more--NightshineR 05:27, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! Blur the ear pink.~Blue Lightning Strikes!I'm so shocked 20:37, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the ear pink some more. Blurred the shading too, I personaly thought it looked better before...maybe thats because I blurred it, im the worst at bluring shading >:) DawnleafStarClan is watching 00:03, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

looks amazing, dawn. just blur the chest shading some. after that, I think it will be ready. Also darken the shading on the tail.  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 18:04, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: fixed it.DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 22:31, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it along the back a bit more--NightshineR 06:31, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

It Looks really good! Just maybe blur in the spots a little bit more but it looks Great! Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 08:23, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: Blurred the spots and darkended the shading.DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 23:18, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Adorable Dawn, looks to bright thoght darken his pelt some more.Outcast 23:42, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I copyied his colour right off of its warrior image...I don't believe that it needs to be changed.DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 13:43, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, the pelt looks fine. CBA?Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:45, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

It's Great! Comments Before Approval anyone? SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 09:17, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

When an authorized someone says CBA, that means are there any more comments about the image before it's approved, so please don't make unnecessary comments that it looks great. It's not that those comments are bad, it's just that they're not necessary. Image-wise, it's been 24 hours, so the image is approved. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 15:14, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) - Approved

Tigerstar.apprenticeThere are two discussions, so this should technically be under the limit. Anywho, this is the most evil cat ever as little apprenticeXD. Constructments? --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 19:36, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading (or brighten the highlights).Darkhallows 23:33, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten his chest highlight.DawnleafStarClan is watching 00:07, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Brightened highlights. --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 00:42, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look a little reddish. Lighten the ear pink--NightshineR 06:29, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Desaturated stripes and lightened ear pink. --HAWKTALONö 17:13, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the tail stripes- the unhighlighted part is slightly hard to see. Otherwise this is really nice! :] MoontailMeRocks! 03:08, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks^-^ Lightened tail stripes. --HAWKTALONö 17:28, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is fabulous! I can't find anything else wrong with the image, so comments before approval? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 03:41, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:13, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Petalfall - Approved

Petalfall.deputy

For spoiler purposes I won't say who she is. I tried out Nightshine's tutorial on this; it worked pretty well. Constructments? --Bramble 15:53, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

She's pretty =) I'd say a touch too pink though. My computer is on the edge of it being too pink and it has fairly good colour. /ramble. -- Sandystar 16:00, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Sand. XD I desaturated her a touch to give her a more natural gray-pink color. Does this look better? Bramble 16:18, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Much =) -- Sandystar 16:20, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
Amazing Bramble, all I see is the shading beneath the jaw should be darkened a touch.  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:02, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
Her ear pink looks a little too dark and somewhat reddish, perhaps choose a lighter color for it? Otherwise, she's great! (BTW Sandy, what does /ramble mean?) 晶須 21:17, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the fur a bit more orangish so it looks a bit more like cream. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 21:53, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a touch. Very pretty! Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 14:41, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

I've darkened the shading under the jaw, and lightened and broadened the ear pink some. The haunch has been blurred. Goldenpaw; I didn't make the fur more orange, because her description clearly says rose-cream, and I don't want her to lose the touch of pink she has. --Bramble 16:31, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Petalfall.orangish.png]] I was thinking more like this than a more drastic change. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 01:35, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Is the shoulder highlight supposed to be like that or in the middle? Birdy 22:34, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is awsome! But I think she should should be more creamier, shes too pink.DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 22:57, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw; all the highlights are meant to be where they are. And I am highly reluctant to change her color any more; she's not that pink; it's a very subtle tinge on a mostly cream pelt. What'd be the point of having her description be rose-cream if there's no difference at all from regular cream? Bramble 00:31, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

It may just be my mointor, but it looks pure pink, rather than pinkish cream. The image I posted looks fine to me, though. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 02:21, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look pure pink on my screen. It's about Rosetail's color.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 10:29, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The colour looks perfect to me. The only thing I see is that some shading needs blurring in the midriff section. -- Sandystar 21:28, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The midriff shading has been blurred. Are there any other opinions on the color? I'm not ignoring you, Goldenpaw, I just don't want to go to the trouble of changing the color when I don't believe it needs to be changed. --Bramble 21:35, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble, it's really good! The highlights are good too. I agree with Sandy and Bramble when they say it's fine because it is. It's just the right amount of pink too Bramble. It's great! SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 08:28, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the color looks fine. Comments before approval? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 03:38, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:13, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Spiderfoot (W)- Approved

Spiderfoot.warriorWhoo-hoo, I'm on a roll! I got Reedwhisker approved, started fixing my tutorials, re-did my warrior one, and made this one! =) Okay, so here is a warrior I found rather annoying, but cool to make. Comments? Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:35, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I do hate this type of warrior. The image looks lovely though. The only thing I see is to darken the shading on the far hind paw. Bramble 16:40, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit on the chest.SnickersOh the simpleness of simple stuff 22:08, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred all I could. Mousetalon!! 22:39, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink--NightshineR 22:43, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened ear pink. Anything else? Mousetalon!! 22:55, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I hate to be pushy but it's been days . . . Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 22:53, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 03:35, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:13, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwhisker(E)- Approved

Mothwhisker.elder Patchy?Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:34, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Some of his patches are pink...and blur the shading more. But good job!  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:36, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the patches are pink because i assumed patchy fur ment that some was missing. What do you think? I'll get to the shading after the patchy thing is sorted out.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:43, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The pink look like patches, perhaps put black lines around the skin part? It is too dark on the left (near his rear), but he's great otherwise! 晶須 22:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

I tried and failed. I might just remake him. Comments?Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 18:22, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe, try making the patches more like Purdy's elder image. Everything else on the image is perfect!--NightshineR 19:37, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Night. I'll see what I can do with the patches.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:53, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 22:09, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

There's a few pixels in the bottom left corner of the image that aren't connected to the lineart, so just erase those and then this should be ready. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 15:02, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Pesky stray pixels.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 16:17, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 18:47, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 15:52, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Buzzardstar - Approved

Buzzardstar.leader

I just love doing leaders! This makes my third one I believe :) Well here's Buzzardstar from Battle of The Clans but I think something is missing...comments?--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 04:28, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading under the chin.--NightshineR 05:32, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

His ear pink looks a little too neonish, and the shading could be darkened more (like under the tail and in between legs) 晶須 21:19, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Finally able to upload after that long scheduled maintaince. I'm not messing with the ear pink because its the exact color from his deputy image. See below and I was playing with the shading out of boredem before this comment so let me know.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 22:58, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Buzzardstar.deputy

I guess the earpink is fine than. Can you darken the shading a tad.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 18:25, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Done~--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 04:11, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the color of his fur a bit to match his deputy image. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 21:28, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! :) Blur his neck shading a biit.DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 23:10, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for the wait everyone. My intern has started up so my free time is cut to only Fridays and weekends now. Lighten and blurred some--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 18:40, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
This is very pretty, Shimmerpool, but the one thing I notice is the pupils; they look too big to me. If you don't want to change them, that's fine, but they should be only a pixel wide. Hollydapple 03:03, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I'd like to keep it as I did the same with Bluestar and Blackstar.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 17:18, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, then nevermind. I didn't want to change Birdy's eyes either. :) It looks great. Hollydapple 19:33, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

It feels good to be able to do this again. Comments before approval? -- Sandystar 10:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 14:10, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Morningstar (L) - Approved

File:Morningstar.leader.png I based this off his image in Battles of the Clans. This should be right under the limit Comments?--NightshineR 00:31, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

He looks very nice! =D I'd just blur the edges around his white fur a little more. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 00:55, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded thank you! I blurred the white some more--NightshineR 01:07, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

He looks awsome! Maybe blur the white under his eyes just a tiny bit more. SkydragonFollow the wind... 14:47, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white under eyes--NightshineR 01:31, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes near his neck. Mousetalon!! 02:14, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred neck stripes--NightshineR 23:33, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! So beautiful! I know I'm being picky but maybe blur the right side of the 'M' on the forehead and the striped on the front, left leg. Really is beautiful! :D BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 18:10, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred M and leg stripes--NightshineR 23:49, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Sandystar 10:28, June 13, 2010 (UTC)
Shading looks good and the stripes are brilliant! Wildear~101 14:48, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble 14:14, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Ivytail (W) - Approved

Ivytail (SC).warrior Epic fail....she was a challenege thats for sure. ?.Dawnleaf.Deputy of SnowClan 01:43, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh sorry nevermind this is over the limit...it going to have to been declined.....Dawnleaf.Deputy of SnowClan 02:00, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, it's okay, some images just got approved so this is under the limit again but please be careful next time. Image-wise, darken the shading on the white fur some, and add a couple more cream patches to the tail. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Will do..Dawnleaf.Deputy of SnowClan 02:51, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: Added more cream patches onto the tail, and darkend the shading on the whiet fur.Dawnleaf.Deputy of SnowClan 03:00, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Define the patches and lighten the ear pink some. Icefall Icy Winds 11:47, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry if this sounds a bit silly, but what do you mean by "define"? Does that mean I should Saturate it?.Dawnleaf.Deputy of SnowClan 00:04, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

No, like... I mean un-blur the ear pink. There's an eaiser way to do it - just line the brush/pencil around it and blur it some. It was too blurred before. Icefall Icy Winds 00:08, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this is really pretty! You did a great job with her, Dawnleaf! My only advice would be to make the ear pink less dark red and more salmon-pink. Otherwise, this is very beautiful. Hollydapple 03:07, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: Thanks Holly, I lightened the ear pink a bit and thats it, Icefall, you kindda confused me a bit so i didn't define the patches...DawnleafThe Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 03:53, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, I meant the patches, and I'm sorry. I would say smudge the patches a bit. Icefall Icy Winds 14:28, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

The white patch on the front leg looks a bit odd to me. Maybe color it in to match the rest of her leg.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:32, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

What white patch? Do you mean the front white paw? I'm confused :\DawnleafThe Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 16:28, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

No its above the paw. It's kinda hard to explain. It's a gap between the leg and the rest of the body. Does that help?Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 16:31, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Ivytail.Warrior.fix.png|thumb]]

REUPLOADED: Did you mean that I should do that to the leg?DawnleafThe Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 22:47, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yup. Thats exactly what I meant.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 22:50, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, okay good.DawnleafThe Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 23:36, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Looks wonderful. Comments before approval? Bramble 00:54, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

She's beautiful Dawny! Just one thing though, the closest white paw is a little bit smudged. I Marked it here: Besides that, brilliant! SunspiritGotta Love Newleaf 09:34, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Sunny! :3 But to me, the paw looks perfectly fine.DawnleafThe Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 14:03, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. I think it's just the way it's blurred. I believe it's safe to continue CBA.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 17:21, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 20:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (W)- Approved

Crookedstar.warriorWell, this is my first charart, and I think it came out pretty well. Any comments?Riverpelt 23:52, May 13, 2010 (UTC)


That is REALLY GOOD! Try to make his bottom jaw look... strange. Almost like broken, okay? That's how it's supposed to be! But seriously, it looks nice. Shadowstream 11:22, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made the jaw look as crooked as i could. Riverpelt 18:04, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

The line art is really blurred. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:54, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

The jaw needs to look like this. And the lineart is really blurred. --晶須 22:18, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded. How's that, or do I need to sharpen the line art a bit more? Riverpelt 22:29, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes you should. And try expanding the beige on his nect more, and also add sharper edges to the tabby stripes. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 02:24, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


That is awesome! Jut sharpen the tabby a little like Mousetalon said. And try to make his fur an almost red color, like the leader charart. Shadowstream 12:07, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to sharpen the line art more, fixed the beige on his neck, sharpened the tabby markings, and made his fur a red color. Hold on I have to blur the tabby marks more.Reuploaded. How's this? Riverpelt 12:54, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

....The whole image looks blurred likes he's just super FUZZY.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 22:58, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry! I'll redo it completely! Riverpelt 23:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the entire charart! Is this any better? Riverpelt 00:10, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Much better...now lets begin. The ear pink needs to lighter as its too dark/bright and it doesn't match his deputy image one as you can see above. He's also missing a patch of tan fur on his front forepaw. The tabby stripes need to be blurred tremindously.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 01:00, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks Shimmerpool! Reuploaded. Oops I need to blur the stripes a bit more. Reuploaded. How's this? Riverpelt 11:49, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

The pink still isn't hitting it....and you have bits and pieces of gray surrounding the image. They possibly came from editing the image and unable to see it as the image is transparent. I uploaded an image to show, but this image isn't transparent so don't try editing it. Just use it as a reference. I also included the ear pink from his deputy image.
[[File:Crookedstar_deputy_errors.png]] --Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 21:51, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded. I cleared out the gray spots and made the ear pink the same color as the deputy's ear pink.Riverpelt 23:07, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, fix the line art on the muzzle, blur the stripes more and lengthen the cream coloured throat--Nightshine{ 23:51, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... Reuploaded. I fixed the line art, blurred the stripes, and lengthened the cream-colored throat. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 20:37, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes in more. You see how they're supper smoothed in almost like fadded into hsi fur on the deputy image? Also I think some highlights would be nice. Just add them to the same place as his deputy image. :)--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 17:53, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 20:44, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

It looks as if half his nose was cut off ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:25, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the nose. Anything else? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 18:18, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the pelt a little bit. It seems a bit light.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:19, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It's a bit darker now. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 23:48, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

The nose still doesn't look quite right; the lineart is gray at the tip ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:14, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the nose a bit, and cleared away the gray lineart. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 20:15, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

The muzzle line art looks cut off--Nightshine{ 00:37, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

What do u mean about the line art being cut off? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 13:43, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think she means that it looks flat. It's more rounded in his other images.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 01:10, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

The beige stripe on his throat is a little to thick at the bottom. DawnleafStarClan is watching... 13:23, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any more comments? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 22:08, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reshape his ear and highlight the tail.

The ear pink looks fine to me, but Frostheart is right about highlighting the tail. Frostheart, always remember to sign after you leave a comment ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:15, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

The tail is highlighted, its just a bit dull. Do u mean brighten the highlight on the tail? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 19:43, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I brightened the highlights on the tail, if that's what you wanted me to do. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 21:10, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Any more comments? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 19:56, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the muzzle line art more. Some of the line art looks blurred. Blur the ear pink. Make the stripes a little sharper--NightshineR 03:02, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 13:02, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look like you've overdone them; too bright and not blurred. The ear pink needs to be more triangular, slightly more reddish and blurred and the stripes/differently coloured fur needs blending also. -- Sandystar 18:31, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Uh, I'm almost ready to withdraw him, but not yet! Is this any better? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 17:29, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Don't give up River. It's getting there. Remaking tabbies has to be the hardest thing in charart. Lighten the stripes some.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:59, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Ashshadow, and yes tabbies are hard, but I lightened his stripes. Any more comments? And could somebody give me a few pointers about tabbies. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 20:38, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink could be blurred just a tad more and there's something about the stripes thats bothering me..lighten them so more I believe. I know how you feel, Squirrelflight was my first image and we all know she's a tabby. So many moons ago that has been and I learned alot from just looking at others styles. But remember tabbies have so many different patterns so if you're doing one who doesn't have an image let your imagination soar, but since he must live up to his previous image its best to lay the images side by side on your desktop and work with your image and compare it to the other. My best advice is after you done practice with making your own charries but you don't have to upload them, just compare them to someone elses image and ask yourself: Is the ear too dark? Are the stripes blurred in enough? Did I smudge the lineart? Eventually it'll come very easy to you :)--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 23:32, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
Also possibly try the fade out with your blurring as the taill seems too crowded and dark--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 02:22, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks Shimmerpool for the advice! =) So how's this? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 22:19, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Layer on another line art. The colours don't look correct. Thicken the muzzle line art more--NightshineR 06:08, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay guys, I'm gonna redo this completely, because I think I know what I did wrong, okay? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 20:16, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

I just got GIMP but it's not letting me color, it's keeping the color black! can someone help me? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 21:01, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

I figured it out! sorry! Since I have GIMP now, does it look any better? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 22:04, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are perfect now, but he's too dark and so is the ear pink. You need to blur in the higlights as well. You almost missed the tan part on his leg again. After fixing the shading you might have to blur in the stripes again.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 22:54, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 00:45, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights still need to be blurred more and add some shading to the top of his head.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:02, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I blurred in the highlights more, and added some shading to his head. Anything else? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 20:38, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bramble told me somethings I should fix and I think I fixed them. So how does he look now? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 18:06, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed the lineart on the head for you; that can be highly tricky to fix. I also renamed it for you; you should reupload each time on the file name: Crookedstar.warrior.png. That's the proper name. I can't see anything right at the moment. Bramble 19:58, June 9, 2010 (UTC)


As bramble said there are a few things wrong with this and there is a lot of differences compared to his deputy his pely colour need to be almost brown-ish pink like his Deputy image as his current pelt colour looks brown-ish red. :)Wildear~101:) 21:27, June 10, 2010 (UTC)


Do you see _______>Crookedstar.deputy Notice how his pelt colour has brighter highlights try to base it off of this hope this helps! :)Wildear~101:) 21:36, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

ReUploaded. Okay Redid the whole thing again, and I think it looks kinda like the deputy image. Comments? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 01:10, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is way better! Though, the lineart arount the eye looks kindda strange..Dawnleaf.Deputy of SnowClan 23:11, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. I didn't change it. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 00:15, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, it looks smudged. Fill in the black pixels again. Take the muzzle line art from his deputy image and put it on this--NightshineR 00:42, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

You're really getting somewhere with this, well done =) The ear pink needs to be a little darker reddish-pink though I think and the bit of shading on his midriff needs blending. -- Sandystar 13:24, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay I fixed it! Anything else? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 13:57, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:19, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the earpink. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 18:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! But you'll notice that the deputy's image has a lighter ear pink. I suggest lighting the ear pink a bit. :Sunspirit 23:08, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay I made the ear pink the same color as the deputy image. Better? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 23:22, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?Darkhallows 04:53, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I feel like it could be jaw could be fixed more. Quailflight 11:09, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I disagree; his jaw is the same as on his deputy image. -- Sandystar 11:14, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think the jaw matches the deputy image well. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 13:20, June 13, 2010 (UTC).

Some of the lineart is blurred and gray on the muzzle though. Kaoru Hitachiin 13:35, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. lineart fixed! RiverpeltHeart of Amber 15:08, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Wow hes looking beautiful! Wildear~101 15:14, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating CBA.Darkhallows 05:38, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Approved -- Sandystar 15:45, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight (W)- Approved

Briarlight.warrior

This is my last Charat before I leave PCA. I think it has changed for the worst and I think to truely fullfill that promise I made back when PCA 'closed', I must work hard at Project Characters. To be a good user ti is not about PCA, as most users think. So I will be leaving after this. Sorry to Bramble, but I don't think PCA is as good as it was when I first joined. :( Hope you like Briarlight, I tried to make her my best ever. Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:55, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is good Fawny :) maybe just blur the ear pink and little more. Shruggytalk 16:03, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Γǻώήςτόŗm 16:10, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Though, her pelt is a bit to light, darken it a bit, and blur the ear pink. :)DawnleafStarClan is watching 17:32, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Beautifu work, Fawnstorm! The lineart looks great. The only thing that bothers me is the lineart on the front leg facing us, where it goes up into the body seems a tad long. Does that make any sense...? Other than that, it looks brilliant. We'll miss seeing your work, Fawnstorm! Hollydapple 18:12, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

We had the line art approved before she used it, so it should be fine.--Nightshine{ 02:29, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. Now that I'm looking at it again a little more technically, it looks fine. Hollydapple 05:09, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thnaks guys. Made it darker. xD Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:10, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot. I can barely see any--Nightshine{ 02:25, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - I can see the shading fine myself - maybe it's just your computer Night. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:54, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm. Does anyone else not see much shading?--NightshineR 18:00, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the shading fine; just darken it on the front leg farthest from us, the back leg farthest from us, and the tail Night Fall 21:10, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Weird, I hardly see any. But I can see shading fine on other chararts.--NightshineR 21:14, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

So am I darkening the shading or not? I'm confuzzled. Γǻώήςτόŗm 17:03, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Just a bit--NightshineR 05:26, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

The shading? Sorry, Night(s), I'm really confused...Γǻώήςτόŗm 08:10, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the shading--NightshineR 06:33, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I've done that, but not much because it's blurred into the highlights. Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:53, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Just lighten the highlights. Also this should be on your current projects list.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 18:09, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened highlights. I'm going to stay with PCA, but due to my nature I'd rather not say why. Only Bramble knows, and it was hard enough to tell her why I was staying. xD You guys are stuck with me for a little longer. Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:41, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up a bit--NightshineR 16:20, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Γǻώήςτόŗm 08:58, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 20:49, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. In future, please name images according to the correct conventions. Thanks.-- Sandystar 15:49, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Featherwing (W) - Approved

Featherwing.warrior I think I'm starting to lose my charart abilities, this looks pretty bad. I counted the number of images, and this should be under the limit (number 34 or 35). Comments and suggestions? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:19, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

No your not! This is just lovely Ice, just darken the shading a bit and blur the ear pink. .Dawnleaf.Deputy of SnowClan 02:50, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks dark enough. Darken the highlights a bit--NightshineR 03:18, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't know if I darkened the highlights enough or not. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 03:30, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I think this is over the limit. It will probably be declined. SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 09:00, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, I counted, and this is image number 34. When you count, you don't include declined images or discussion sections that aren't archived yet. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 14:11, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! maybe just lighten the ear pink a bit. But otherwise, beautiful! :Sunspirit 07:20, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 14:16, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is fantastic, Icethroat! The only thing I see that could be fixed is the eye color; I think it should be a lighter shade of the same blue, if you know what I mean. Hollydapple 05:10, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the nice comments, everybody. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 01:52, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble 14:22, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Approved -- Sandystar 15:53, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (W)- Approved

Dapplepelt.warriorDeclined images and discussions don't count. So, I took Dapplepelt's med. image and tried to work it to match the warrior one- and epically failed. Thanks to Bramble for helping. I also edited the highlights a bit. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 18:49, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the gold patch on the nose a little more. SkydragonRide the wind 19:30, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the gold patches on the nose, the tail tip, and the creamish one in the middle. ♦Echostar♦Thank StarClan for greenleaf 20:13, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Echostar, I didn't change the colors because that was the effects of the highlights. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 20:15, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

The line art looks smudged around the muzzle. Blur the tail patches some more--NightshineR 00:45, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The lineart was fine. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 20:22, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there are dark splotches around the whiskers--NightshineR 06:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

There aren't. It's probably from her med. cat image if it looks like it. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 00:30, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble 14:21, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 16:58, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

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