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Nightwhisper (R)- Approved

Nightwhisper.rogueI was gone again, it was rather sudden. I've also been SOO busy with school (I'm homeschooled... basically I'm doing finals I guess?) Anyway, I changed the shoulder and ear.Darkhallows 04:47, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink more and blur the tail shading--NightshineR 06:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? This ear pink is impossible to fix Dx.Darkhallows 20:33, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

If you want, I could help you. I had the same problem with his warrior image. :)--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 22:30, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear pink looks fine. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 16:18, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

The colour for the ear pink is fine. It looks a little to blended in though. Define it a bit more and this will be perfect--NightshineR 05:56, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a bit and add one to the tail. Icefall Icy Winds 22:13, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

That'd be nice, Moonflight! Could you? I butchered the ear more, and the tail...Darkhallows 22:58, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Looks perfect! :)--NightshineR 01:38, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. Comments before approval? -- Sandystar 11:45, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink a bit paler and darker? It's a bit hard to see. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 20:03, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

No, the ear pink is just fine. I can see it easily. Approving. --Bramble 20:10, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Oatpaw (A) - Approved

File:Oatpaw.apprentice.pngOatpaw yay! Comments? (This is 35- there is one discussion) Kaoru Hitachiin 01:32, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

He's very nice! Maybe blur the earpink more, and blur the shading (especially the shading under the muzzle) and highlights. Other than that, he looks nice! Hollydapple 01:58, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Kaoru Hitachiin 23:04, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, you got the shading/highlights thing, but the ear pink is hardly visible now. Hollydapple 01:44, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Kaoru Hitachiin 01:52, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks like a grayish-pink color. It needs to be more of a reddish color. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 15:04, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Kaoru Hitachiin 00:33, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add some ear pink--NightshineR 01:34, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is some ear pink, Nightshine, it's just hard to see. It needs to be more like #e18a8a or #d28282, for examples. I think the second number would work better. Hollydapple 03:19, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Kaoru Hitachiin 11:59, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit more and make it more pinkish/reddish--NightshineR 16:17, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think the earpink is light enough. What does anyone else think? Ringo Starr 14:19, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine in making it a bit more pinkish/reddish. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 14:51, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Ringo Starr 00:55, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great!--NightshineR 05:51, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. It looks very nice. Icefall Icy Winds 12:06, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Ringo Starr 18:47, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? -- Sandystar 19:02, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Approved -- Sandystar 12:44, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (W) - Approved

Nightwhisper.warriorI like how he turned out! :3 What about you?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 22:27, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Just blur the top of his head some more (the shading) DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 22:32, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: What else?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 22:44, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a bit, it looks a little lighter than his rogue image that is up for approval. Move the ear pink up some more and blur it--NightshineR 23:00, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color. 6 Icethroat 8 School's out! For summer! 01:16, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Anything else?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 12:59, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink just a hair, since I can't see it too well, and move the ear pink to the center of the ear rather than on the side. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 14:06, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 19:33, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

You might want to blur the highlights on his haunch and arm a bit more. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 19:40, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

They look fine to me...are you sure?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 22:52, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah just a bit more you know where the highlight is very bright, like gold colored. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 19:53, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

They're supposed to be like this. They're supposed to be bright, right?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 22:49, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It depends on the base pelt color. Derken them a tiny bit but not much.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 22:54, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

THe higlights are very focused, make them a bit bigger and slightly (not much) bigger. It's very good, Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:20, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I need help. I can't make them smaller abd darker without re-doing him. Anyone willing to help me?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 16:12, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I actually think the size is fine. Blurring them some more will darken them a tad.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:05, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better or should I fix it more?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 19:17, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up and make it more triangular--NightshineR 05:52, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on his shoulder a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 12:05, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Anything else?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 14:34, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up and to the left a bit more--NightshineR 21:12, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: What else?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 21:22, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Fantastic! I see nothing else wrong--NightshineR 21:24, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. Icefall Icy Winds 22:28, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's a good size, just needs a tiny bit of blurring.Darkhallows 23:02, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I'm glad you guys like it. :) Anything else?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 15:43, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Brighten the highlight on the tail. Icefall Icy Winds 20:29, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this all?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 22:00, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Sandystar 19:00, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Approved -- Sandystar 12:46, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Pearnose (MC) - Approved

Pearnose.mc With one declined and three discussions this makes the 35th. I just loved her name and had to give her a go... though I think I've lost the knack. Anyway, constructments? -- Sandystar 23:41, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Adorable Sandy. Just blur the ear pink just a tad. :3 .Dawnleaf.Deputy of SnowClan 23:45, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

You should fix the 'lost the knack' into 'gotten even more wonderful with art'. XD The pelt and the eye color are absolutely beautiful. The only thing I see that needs fixing is that the herbs are missing some shading. The ear pink actually looks pretty good; I'd only blur it a small bit. Bramble 23:50, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Looks wonderful! Darken the tail stripes. Did you change the line art on the eye?--NightshineR 23:52, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Lineart fixed, stripes darkened, earpink blurred and shading/highlights added to the herbs. -- Sandystar 00:09, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
Looks great Sandy, all I see is that the muzzle shading should be darkened a tad. Lol, agreed Bramble. Ice fall 00:24, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It seems a little dark. Lighten it a tad--NightshineR 00:27, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I kept looking at it for 10 minutes, trying to find a flaw, but could not. Excellent work, congrats! Helixtalk 05:35, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's beautiful! You would never lose the knack Sandy! Comments before approval anyone? SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 07:24, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Nightshine - I reluctantly lightened her (I liked the old colour myself, but ya know). Ice - I have not darkened the muzzle shading as that is highlighted not shaded to start with. Helix - Glad you like her :) Sunspirit - Again, I am glad you like her but I'm afraid only senior warriors can approve images or set the 24 hours =) Anything else? -- Sandystar 09:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
She looks good, I see nothing wrong with her. Icefall Icy Winds 12:08, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
Sandy, you have to stop making me feel inferior! LOL, Pearnose looks gorgeous. Only thing I see is blur the shading on the haunch. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 18:51, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded: Shading blurred. Anything else? -- Sandystar 19:48, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I liked the old (dark) version better, it was much nicer; this looks "dusty" because of the unsaturated color. Of course, this is only my opinion; what do you all think? Kind regards, Helixtalk 20:22, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I really like the new one. Just add another stripe near the tail tip--NightshineR 01:37, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'm with Helix. The herb shading is a bit off. The bottom right is a dark while the others are light. Sorry to by picky, your work is always wonderful to see, Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:18, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I liked its original pelt color as well. It was richer, as well as a dark brown whereas the new version looks just like a regular old brown. That can be easily fixed by saving one of the past revisions of the image, should you so choose, Sand. And Fawnstorm, how should the herb shading be oriented? You weren't very clear about that; it looks fine to me right now. Are there any other comments about the pelt, so we can reach a consensus? --Bramble 05:11, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I have to admit that I'd already got a darkened version with the same improvements made as the lighter version on my computer because I preferred it... I only changed the colour because I was asked to ;) So I have uploaded that and will fix the herbs as soon as I know what to fix - the extra stripe will be added at the same time. -- Sandystar 13:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)


Brighten the ear pink a bit I can barely see it Wildear~101 14:23, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Sandystar 18:50, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little smaller--NightshineR 21:11, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit once more. Icefall Icy Winds 22:20, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Sandystar 22:26, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink more still. :]--NightshineR 01:39, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Sandystar 06:28, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks beautiful. Comments before approval? Bramble 22:38, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble 00:54, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudstar(W)- Approved

Cloudstar.warrior Not much to say. He was harder to do than expected.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:00, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

He looks really good Ashshadow! but just brighten the white pixel on his eye. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 22:24, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the rump and hind leg. :) So beautifuuull! BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 14:12, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 14:31, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Reuploaded. Thanks for the nice comments.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 15:56, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the white pixel in the eye. Blur the patch on his shoulder some more--NightshineR 16:12, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:59, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the midriff shading. Otherwise amazing job, Ash. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 00:29, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Mouse but it won't blur anymore.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 10:45, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this is really good, Ashshadow, but the eye looks strange. I can tell instead of the eye color being in a backward L shape, it's in a square. Could you add another black pixel? Do you see what I mean? Another thing would be the ear pink--it's too pale. I can hardly see it. Hollydapple 02:55, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

There are many ways to do eyes and this is the style I use. Sorry but I'm not going to change it. Also the earpink is the same color as his leader image and I can see it quite clearly. Does anyone else have a problem with it?Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:23, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the top of the white patch on the shoulder. Icefall Icy Winds 20:38, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:35, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit more then this should be ready--NightshineR 21:09, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 22:16, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:43, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 20:33, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble 00:54, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Moss (Q) - Approved

File:Moss (Lo).queen.pngThere are four discussions and two declined images, so this is technically under the limit. Anyway, it was my birthday four days ago:D --HAWKTALONö 14:52, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Happy beleated birthday, Hawk! :) This image is lovely. All I see is that a highlight could be added on the face and tail. Icefall Icy Winds 14:55, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Icestorm:) Added highlights to the face and tail. --HAWKTALONö 15:05, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Your birthday was four days ago? Wow, mine was five days ago. Happy belated birthday, Hawk. :) Image-wise, blur the highlight on the stomach some. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 15:49, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Happy belated birthday to you, too, Icy:D Blurred higlight on the midsection. --HAWKTALONö 19:30, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, mine was on May 29th. The shading on the back should be blurred some more. Icefall Icy Winds 20:02, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yeah, I probably missed a lot of people's birthdays so far this yearXD Blurred back shading. --HAWKTALONö 19:57, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit--NightshineR 21:08, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened ear pink. --HAWKTALONö 15:30, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 22:10, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble 00:54, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (D) - Approved

Gorsestar.deputyOkay, I've counted three times, so I'm pretty sure this is under the limit. How does he look? I'm kind of happy with how he turned out. Now I know the earpink doesn't match his other images, and I can change that, but I thought this pink looked more appropriate, so that's why I used it. I'd be fine with changing it, though. I've been studying his leader images and taking a look at what Skydragon's done on his warrior images, and I've worked hard on this guy. I copied the pelt, tabby stripe, and eye color shades from his leader image. I don't nkow about some of the stripes on him, though. I might tweak them later. So anyway, comments? Constructive criticism? Hollydapple 04:59, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome! Darken the tail shading a bit, it looks flat right now. Darken the forearm that is farther from us.--NightshineR 06:15, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I like it. Brighten the highlights and darken the stomach shading. Icefall Icy Winds 11:47, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, guys! I tried doing everything you said. Is the shading on the tail too dark now? I tried making it more 3D-ish. Did I get the forearm right, Nightshine? Hollydapple 02:43, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

It's great! Darken the tail shading a bit near the base of the tail and blur the shading on his left forearm--NightshineR 20:21, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the bottom part of the ear pink. Other than that it looks amazing! Love the shading! Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:16, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thank you, Mousetalon, I'm glad you like the shading--I've worked hard on him. If there was anything I tried to perfect other than his markings, it would have been the shading. Because of his unusual stripes, I had to make sure I got all of them right. I blurred the bottom part of the ear pink. Did I get it? Hollydapple 04:26, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Sorry, Nightshine, I didn't see your comment until I had already re-uploaded. *Blushes in embarrassment*. I tried darking is rear shading, but I couldn't blur his arm shading any more, so I lightened it a tad. Any better? Hollydapple 04:38, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks wonderful. Nice job, Holly. Comments before approval? --Bramble 02:15, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Whisper on the windSkydragon 19:27, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble 00:54, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Alt K) - Approved

Dawnpelt.kit.alt There are six discussions, so this is under the limit. Comments? --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 20:10, June 16, 2010 (UTC)


I luv it. The ear is the right pink and the pelt color is perfect!!!! Totallytawnypelt99 22:17, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 22:36, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading and darken the ear pink a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 22:56, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 23:12, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! The ear pink doesn't really match her warrior image though. Darken the shading under the chin a bit more--NightshineR 06:19, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 21:39, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the head shading. Icefall Icy Winds 22:08, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Done. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 23:03, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

She looks beautiful :) Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 04:27, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 21:01, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Shellheart Alt (D)- Approved

File:Shellheart.deputy.alt.png Hi! This is Shellheart as an alternate she-cat. He/she is deputy. I hope you like her! SunspiritGotta Love Newleaf 05:17, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Good Job Sunspirit! Maybe just blur the shading a bit more. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 11:39, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Its over the limit

No it isn't.There are 3 discussions and a declined image.ZNightsong 13:23, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Is this my image with just an eye lash added? Or did you make it from scratch? I need to know, because if it is just a tweaked version of mine; there really isn't any reason for it to go through this whole process again :) If you did make this from scratch, then just disregard everything I've said xD Night Fall 16:18, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

It is exactly the same with an eyelash. Should it be made from scratch?--NightshineR 19:34, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think so. It's not like Sunspirit is trying to use this for a completly different cat.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:41, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Icefall Icy Winds 20:26, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I did add the eyelash in. I though it would be better not to add the changes in. If I should start it from scratch, I can if you would like. I'll blur the shading. SunspiritGotta Love Newleaf 20:52, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Oh no, this is fine :) I guess I can just go ahead and put the CBA on this in a little while, as it's already been approved :) Night Fall 21:01, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Oh Yay! This is technically my first charart... xD Thanks Nightfall, and I'll ask permission next time! Sorry! SunspiritGotta Love Newleaf 21:05, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, it's fine :) Night Fall 21:12, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 21:13, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved Night Fall 02:16, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (A) - Approved

Tallpoppy.apprenticeWell...Here she is. Since some people said I needed work on my art, I tried doing this kind of tabby style. Not too proud, but a bit. Comments? Icefall Icy Winds 21:18, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink more. Darken the stripes a bit--NightshineR 21:32, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Defined Ear Pink, darkened stripes. Icefall Icy Winds 21:37, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

*blows kisses* Beautiful Ice! You can wipe those comments clean off of your brain. Blur the back shading on the haunch a touch. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:35, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Mouse. :) Blurred back shading on the haunch. Icefall Icy Winds 23:38, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink-Darkhallows 23:44, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Lightened ear pink. Icefall Icy Winds 00:03, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

This is lovely Ice =) I think the pelt needs to be slightly darker to match the other images but the shading is nicely done -- Sandystar 20:26, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Sand. Darkened pelt color. Icefall Icy Winds 20:28, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

All I'd say is do the ear a bit more. Like add more pink to it so it can easily be seen. Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 19:36, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Um....could you please explain? Like....darken or lighten? Icefall Icy Winds 23:31, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I think maybe what Dappleclaw is saying is to define the ear pink a bit more. Correct me if I'm wrong though Night Fall 00:36, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Or maybe make it bigger. Perhaps both.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 00:38, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Defined the ear pink. Icefall Icy Winds 00:39, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

I can't find anything else wrong with this, great job Ice :) Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 00:43, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear pink could be more visible. --Quailflight 11:52, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine...Icefall Icy Winds 19:13, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks okay too. Approving Night Fall 23:13, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Fernpelt (A) - Approved

Fernpelt.apprentice This wasn't too hard. •Maplefern• 00:31, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Nice highlights! Just lighten the ear pink to make it more visible. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 00:55, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes don't really look like her warrior image. Lighten the eye colour. Did you take the colours from her warrior image?--NightshineR 01:03, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I agree that the color could be a little darker but I think the stripes look fine.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 10:47, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner and sharper. Ice fall 00:51, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on his haunch could use some more bluring along with his front legs. DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 14:12, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Try to lighten her ear pink. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 21:07, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Maplefern, good work! The ear pink could be paler, but maybe in the same section of reddish-pink. The shoulder highlight needs bluring, and the stripes on her haunch look too blurry to me. Other than that, it' really good! Hollydapple 22:58, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined,Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:22, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I was busy this week. •Maplefern• 11:57, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed all things. •Maplefern• 12:12, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

The base pelt color still looks a little light. Darken it a bit more.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:37, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is barely visible. Darken it. Icefall Icy Winds 22:25, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darkened all that needed to be done. •Maplefern• 20:20, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? -- Sandystar 20:23, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. Add a stripe coming out of the eye like on her warrior image.--NightshineR 19:24, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Done. •Maplefern• 07:18, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating, Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 21:15, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more peach coloured like her warrior image and darken the highlights. They look a little golden-ish--NightshineR 21:47, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

I find the earpink on her warrior image too peachy. •Maplefern• 07:09, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Maplefern; I've nominated Fernpelt for a slight change of ear pink color in the tweak week nominations. I would lighten this ear pink a bit though Night Fall 16:28, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Tried to do it. •Maplefern• 07:21, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks good. Repeating CBA?Ashshadow.Got Cake? 14:51, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Nice work Maple. -- Sandystar 18:09, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar(Ki)-Approved

Tigerstar.kit

Hope this goes better than the last time I think i could do a bit more for the tabby stripes on his shoulder... Scarletwind 02:03, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Er it's good but this is the 36 but you can only have 35 Birdy 02:12, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hi, It's okay, but the stripes look a little bit unreal. Blur the shading and I de-thumbed it. SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 08:30, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

ok then make the ear pink and the nose Birdy 11:44, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes some more and make the ear pink more pinkish. DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 14:13, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

A bit more like this? Scarletwind 14:19, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

A bit more..Dawnleaf.Deputy of SnowClan 02:49, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Third time's the charm... I hope, I hope... Scarletwind 22:50, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Don't rename the file every time. Just re-upload it. There is an outline of black around the ear pink and it is touching the line art--NightshineR 23:20, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I'll get it eventually... I hope.. I hope... Scarletwind 23:21, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Is it just me or is that ear pink purple? It is on my computer. :Sunspirit 09:09, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

It does look kind of purple... SkydragonRide the wind 18:16, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

They look like the shading for a black or white cat which we don't need for Tigerkit. Just get the pink from his other images and it'll be fine. Also it looks like you made an outline for the ears, heh, I notice small things. Could you get rid of those and just blur the ear pink?--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 20:11, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more if you can.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 22:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hope this looks OK, I'm going away tomorrow and I won't be able to fix it for a few days Scarletwind 01:14, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

When you return, make the ear pink central and a more pale, peachy-pink colour like the one on his leader image, (it might be an idea to take the colour from the image itself). Also, the stripes on his sides look seriously clumpy compared to his other images, and the highlights on his stomach and face look like patches. :3 Sorry for being so critical though, he's a hard character to do. Look at his other images for references. Have fun wherever you're going away to! Brightfrostof SunClan... 19:38, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for all the advice!:) I'll get on it right away! Scarletwind 14:27, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hope this works! =^.^= Scarletwind 18:26, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

This looks much better. Add nose color.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:39, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and stripes and add nose color. Icefall Icy Winds 22:23, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

You might want to check the tutorials for how to do the eye. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 22:48, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

De-thumbed it again. Make sure you don't leave it in thumbnail. It looks messy. Other than that, It's good! Make the ear pink more pink! SunspiritGotta Love Newleaf 07:33, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you so much, mentors! I hope I can one day be as good a mentor to another apprentice! Scarletwind 02:18, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

We acually don't do mentors and apprentices anymore, as it was a bit too inconveniant in the past. As for the image, desaturate the ear pink and the nose, they look too hot pink. Then blur the shading and stripes Night Fall 00:43, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

By mentoring, I meant more like advice. I'll get on the image right away! ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 02:16, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Like this? I'll keep at it until Leaf-bare if needed! (Okay... Maybe not that long) </span> ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 02:26, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Haha... The third time I de-thumbed it xD. Remember to de-thumb! Sunspirit

ß 09:09, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

What does de-thumb mean anyway?ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 14:09, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

It means that, your image was in a thumbnail before, so she made it bigger, into full-sized, whitch is the size you want it to be in. :)Dawny 00:17, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. Okay. Thanks! :) ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 16:25, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes on his tail thinner and blur them.

Done!

This tabby kit is getting to be pawful!

ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 20:01, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

He looks lovely to me, nice work. All I'd say is that the image needs renaming to [[File:Tigerstar.kit.png]]. Comments before approval? -- Sandystar 21:45, June 25, 2010 (UTC)
Great! Thanks so much!

ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 18:55, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, you need to change the file name to "Tigerstar.kit.png" Night Fall 22:34, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Done!

ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 02:21, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Awsome :) Approving Night Fall 02:54, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Whitetail (A) - Approved

File:Whitetail.apprentice.png My first apprentice this is the 34 this is another white cat fail so yeah comments? BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 14:02, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add earpink. Kaoru Hitachiin 14:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make her eyes greener, and give her a pinkish tint like her warrior image. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 15:23, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Er it wont work its either too white or too pink besides isint she a white cat..... BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 16:37, June 13, 2010 (UTC) </span>

What do you mean? Just take the ear pink colour from her warrior image and add it on here. Blur the chest and back shading a bit more--NightshineR 17:44, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

On her warrior image she has a pink tinge and my concern was shes a white cat not a cream cat BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 19:16, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded added ear pink and blurred shading on chest and back

Lighten the ear pink and blur it. Remember to sign with four tildes ~ --NightshineR 19:39, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Just use the color dropper like I did for the color. It worked on my Whitetail. I just withdrew mine. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 20:30, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Er how do i get the pinish tinge on mine BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 21:05, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Select a pink color, go to the bucket on pixlr, change the opacity to around 10 or 20, whichever you think is better, and fill in the whole image, making sure it is all even. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 00:28, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added pinkish tinge and made ear pink more lighter BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 01:14, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

You got the color perfect. Maybe blur the haunch shading. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 22:17, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred shading as much as much as i could BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 22:25, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, just lighten the back shading a little. Icefall Icy Winds 20:37, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Er how do i lighten it? BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 00:52, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Go over it with the dodge tool, and maybe set the dodge's strength down a bit to 30 or 20. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 03:09, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it ok? BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 19:29, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit more--NightshineR 06:20, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

There is a spot of dark shading on her haunch. Blurr that.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 21:26, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and haunch shading. Icefall Icy Winds 22:11, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thats as far as it will blur and i will do the haunch shading as soon as i can BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 22:47, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pin more--NightshineR 01:37, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thats as far as it will go the pixlrs blurring tool is bad BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 17:44, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Would you like me to see if I can blur it some more?Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 23:50, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sure but how will you do that someday i might need to do that too BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 01:25, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

I actually use GIMP with the blur tool set to 100. Using pixlr, repetition is key.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:22, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit pink on my computer. The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 13:10, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit pink on my computer aswell.Dawny 19:03, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Um hate to burst your bubble but look at her warrior image it also looks pink BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 19:35, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

What they mean is that is should be more reddish like her warrior image, so I suggest you save her warrior image to your computer, then open it in pixlr and get the ear pink color from the warrior image. Then color the ear pink on your image again, and blur. (Sorry if this is confusing) 晶須 22:14, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Aw i am so certian i have the right color..... BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 23:30, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. I meant the image looks a bit pink on my computer. The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 12:26, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a fine color for a white cat, and the image is supposed to look a little pink. Whitetail's warrior image and queen image look a little pink, too, so it's pink to match the other images. I don't see anything wrong aside from that the file has the wrong name, but I've already put the Rename tag on it for you. Comments before approval? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 15:10, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Her fur has a bit of a purple hue, it looks really nice though! ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 18:53, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Its her pinkish tinge its suppoesed to be there BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 19:24, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

One more thing Birdpaw, change the file name to "Whitetail.apprentice.png" Night Fall 22:33, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

The file name's been changed, so there shouldn't be any problems if this is archived. Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 16:59, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Rushpaw Alt (A) - Approved

Rushpaw.alt.apprentice

Okay I don't think that this is over the limit, but tell me if it is. I tried to make it look like the male apprentice image, so how's does it look? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 20:09, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

It looks great but this is the tom blank. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:11, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

It's also Icethroat's image Night Fall 20:14, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I put the wrong one up. =P Here's the real one! RiverpeltHeart of Amber 20:18, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Darken the tail stripes and darken the haunch highlight a bit--NightshineR 21:05, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done! RiverpeltHeart of Amber 21:45, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink--NightshineR 21:46, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I like it. Very good. Darken the chest shading. Icefall Icy Winds 21:49, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

The head stripe looks odd, could you shorten it?Darkhallows 22:53, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay I fixed the headstripe, darkened the chest shading, and darkened the ear pink. Anything else? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 11:32, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit too reddish. Change to a more pinker color, but not too pink :) 晶須 01:03, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. do you think i should make the ear pink a bit pinker colored? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 15:44, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Just a tiny bit.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 23:44, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done. Anything else? Oh and thanks for the nice comments! RiverpeltHeart of Amber 00:04, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tiny bit. Icefall Icy Winds 12:06, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done! RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 20:27, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Any more Improvements? RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 23:15, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Just to let you know, you should wait at least five days before asking for comments. As for the image, Blur the earpink.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 00:59, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about that! Reuploaded. I blurred the earpink. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 11:42, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad.Dawny 19:07, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the shading! RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 20:25, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on her neck Night Fall 04:24, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thickened the shading on her neck. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 11:46, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The ear pink is now the same exact color as the male version of Rushpaw. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 22:57, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Sandystar 14:48, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 16:59, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Boulder (Ro) - Approved

Boulder.rogueThere are 5 discussions, making this under the limit. Anyways, here's Boulder. He's terrible. Icefall Icy Winds 23:58, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

This is pretty! In my opinon just darken the shading a bit. :3Dawny 00:01, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened shading a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 00:03, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

I should have told you this earlier, anyway just brighten the ear pink.Dawny 00:04, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Brightened ear pink. Icefall Icy Winds 00:09, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry I meant to say saturate it! My heads just not workin today, sorry if this is frusterating you! Dawny 00:14, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Saturated it. Icefall Icy Winds 00:17, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good :) Blur the shading more Night Fall 05:41, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the shading as much as possible. Icefall Icy Winds 14:55, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! I can't see anything wrong with this.Dawny 19:03, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? -- Sandystar 21:56, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approving Night Fall 01:31, June 28, 2010 (UTC)


Shy Fawn-Approved

Shy Fawn.sc Comments?Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:57, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 21:06, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. The colour is too yellow--NightshineR 21:41, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. the shading doesn't blur anymore and it's not yellow. Those were highlights so I darkened them a bit.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:52, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

The pelt colour looks too golden. Blur the ear pink more-NightshineR 22:18, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Like I said before it's the highlights. I'll get to the earpink in a few.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 22:25, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate it a bit. ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT! 22:28, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:44, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit bigger Night Fall 04:26, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 16:18, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the face shading. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

There's only shading on the bottom of her face and it would look too dark if I darkened it.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 20:02, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate it a bit more--NightshineR 02:46, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 15:15, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 16:39, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approving Night Fall 00:01, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~*~Approved

File:Owlfur.Warrior.png This is the 35th, so I'm under the limit. Anyways, comments? Dawny 22:45, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white areas.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 23:13, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred the white areas some more.Dawny 23:29, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye, it looks sort of weird... TotallytawnypeltFeelin' the heat!

Ya it does look kindda werid, but I wanted it to look exactly like his deputy pic, but his eye looked like that in his deputy pic, or else Iw ould.P.S Why is my writting tiny?Dawny 01:21, June 25, 2010 (UTC)


well, maybe it doesn't matter cuz its just the eye. But maybe just like how a warrior eye is supposed to look. This is very good!!!! :) ☼Totallytawnypelt99 ☼Time to celebrate Greenleaf!

Great Dawny! Make the ear pink a little bit bigger though! ღ Şũήמy ★ 06:06, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is lovely, Dawnleaf. The ear pink looks fine, I think the highlights could be blurred a bit. The white on his tail also could be blurred. Icefall Icy Winds 14:21, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred the highlights, and the tail, anything more?Dawny 16:43, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I say this looks very nice!!!!TawnySMEASH 13:58, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition near his nose. ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT! 16:19, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blured the nose, Anything else?Dawny 19:01, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition, especially on the paws and tail tip Night Fall 22:43, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is very nice Dawnleaf. Just do as Night has said and blur the tail shading. Very good though. Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 10:46, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred everything.Dawny 15:41, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good. Darken the shading on the tail just a little bit. Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 16:33, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened tail shading. Dawny 22:47, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 23:06, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approving Night Fall 00:03, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) - Approved

File:Mothwing.Warrior.png I couldn't edit the Reservations Table... Could someone do that for me? Thanks. Comments? --MoonpeltTM 12:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get it. $Coolstar$ 12:55, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Amazing! Awesome! I love it! Make the ear pink more visible though. Γǻώήςτόŗm 13:43, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the markings a bit--NightshineR 16:25, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I used the same exact color. MoonpeltTM 01:30, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and sharpen the markings--NightshineR 01:34, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried.... Comments? MoonpeltTM 18:07, June 7, 2010 (UTC) </span></span>

Blur the stripe more on her haunch next to her tail (right where they meet).

Reuploaded Please remmeber to sign your posts with four ~. Better? MoonpeltTM 15:51, June 8, 2010 (UTC) </span></span>

The highlights on the tail look like they're in the wrong direction; for the light source to be the same for all of the image, the highlights on the tail should be on the tail-tip and a little bit below on the side that they're on now, but not too much. Also, there's some pixels of too light of a color on the front legs. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:05, June 10, 2010 (UTC) </span></span>

Reuploaded Better? MoonpeltTM 14:35, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

There is an outline of light pixels on the right side of the tail. Add a few more markings of the dark golden onto her haunch and shoulder.--NightshineR 16:20, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reploaded Better? Moonpelt1786 17:50, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Great! Just darken the ear pink a tad. SunspiritGotta Love Newleaf 07:22, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Moonpelt1786 15:18, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear that is farther from us a bit.--NightshineR 05:49, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

That's an effect of the highlights I think. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:33, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on her tail. Icefall Icy Winds 22:29, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Why is everybody using <span style="font-family:Heather">? Lightning talk 04:04, June 24, 2010 (UTC) </span>

Please work on this or it will be declined. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really blur that highlight... I don't see why you said that. Moonpeltis very strange... 01:53, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tinsy bit more reddish, to match her other images. Night Fall 07:49, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

When Icestorm said to blur the highlight I think she was talking about the transition between the shading and the highlight on the tail, which I agree that needs blurred. There's also a few pixels of blurred lineart on the edge of the ear (going into the fur that draws the line of the head, not the edge of the ear) and in the middle of the tail on our right edge. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 03:13, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Moonpeltis very strange... 16:32, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah but there's still a little bit of blurred lineart on the ear. Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 16:41, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Moonpeltis very strange... 17:26, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Defind the ear pink more Night Fall 04:23, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Moon Talk 14:47, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Looks fine to me; comments before approval? -- Sandystar 17:08, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. I'll mark this with the rename tag. -- Sandystar 09:50, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (D) - Approved

Hawkfrost.deputy This should be under the limit. Which is better? I used a different shading method for the second one--NightshineR 02:56, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm...I'd say the second one? I don't know they're both really beautiful. Skywish I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 03:25, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good. I say the first one looks better. But if you pick any one, the shading is really dark. I'd say lighten it and brighten/add a highlight on the muzzle. Icefall Icy Winds 17:59, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I like the first one. But I would add that the shading could be blurred a touch. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:10, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I used the first one and fixed up the shading--NightshineR 23:16, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and the shading still is really dark on the back. Lighten it to match the rest of the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 22:09, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened shading a bit and blurred ear pink--NightshineR 01:35, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think the midriff shading is a little dark. I would lighten that shading some Night Fall 00:57, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened shading--NightshineR 01:11, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Should I add a bushy tail?--NightshineR 17:28, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say yes, as then that's one less thing to redo in Tweak Week. -- Sandystar 12:56, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I changed him to long haired--NightshineR 18:48, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

maybe make the white chest extend up a bit farther.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 23:48, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded extended white underbelly--NightshineR 03:10, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition. But wait, does that mean we'll have to redo all of Hawkfrost's images? I'm very fond of his warrior image Night Fall 03:19, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Is there a way he could be shorthaired and just have a bushy tail? Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 15:00, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white transition. Should I make him have only a bushy tail?--NightshineR 21:51, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Shorthaired cats rarely have bushy tails. All of his images wouldn't need to be completely redone. They would only need a few minor edits.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 22:01, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. I think he should be short-haired with a bushy tail. Icefall Icy Winds 22:06, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred ear pink--NightshineR 22:12, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?--NightshineR 19:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

The colour doesn't look quite the same as the other images; it's too... dark, and I think it needs a teensy bit of saturation. Also, the tail stripes need blending. -- Sandystar 14:40, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred tail stripes and saturated it a bit--NightshineR 00:08, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Sandystar 17:12, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Approved -- Sandystar 09:56, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Chasing Clouds - Approved

File:Chasing clouds sc.png

Wow, I failed at the furry texture there. There are eight discussions, so this should be under the limit. Constructments? --HAWKTALONö 19:09, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the face highlights near the ear. ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT! 20:48, June 21, 2010 (UTC) </span>

Lighten the shaded eye a tiny bit.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:58, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the patch on his tail. Icefall Icy Winds 21:04, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Brightened face highlight, lightened the shaded eye, and smudged the tail patch. --HAWKTALONö 15:26, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the haunch and face highlights a bit more--NightshineR 01:31, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Brightened face and haunch highlights. --HAWKTALONö 16:25, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, just a tad. :)Dawny 19:03, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened shading --HAWKTALONö 20:26, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten his tail tip, and then this should be ready :) Night Fall 04:26, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on his chest a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Brightened tail tip and lightened the chest shading. --HAWKTALONö 17:31, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 23:04, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, could you change the file name to "Chasing Clouds.sharpclaw.png"?

Actually it should be "Chashing Clouds.sc.png". We could always put the rename tag on it.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 01:12, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. I'll add the rename tag and it can be moved when Bramble or Insane get online. -- Sandystar 10:04, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

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