Dawnpelt Alt Apprentice - Approved

File:Dawnpelt.apprentice.alt.pngCan someone redo the highlights for me? It's not fixing. Also, I'm probably not going to work on this until Saturday...unless I'm lucky any old time. --Quailflight 11:07, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Hurrah for pixlr's color replacement tool! --Quailflight 11:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some. The ones on her haunch and shoulder look white.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:42, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

That's the problem. I need some help with them. So I would like someone to correct them for me. Quailflight 23:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I was able to fix the bottom highlight, but could someone give me help with the top? --Quailflight 10:45, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Help and comments? I'm the world's most horrible charart person. I don't know what happened with my style. Quailflight 08:14, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Comments? --Quailflight 09:28, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading some more. If you can't do it I'll be happy to help. Also, make the earpink brighter but not too bright. I can't see it. :) BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 16:31, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'll do the earpink, but the highlights are killing me. Quailflight 11:07, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I think Birchy's helping me with the highlights. Quailflight 08:56, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Kay I'll blur the highlights for you Quail. BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 16:44, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Birchy. Quailflight 21:12, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. Icefall Icy Winds 22:29, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Birchy's supposed to do it, because I'm using pixlr, but hasn't done it yet. I'll have to really work on it if Birchy can't do it. Quailflight 07:46, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Quail, you're just going to have to do it yourself because you put this image up and it's not fair to sit waiting on Birchy to do it. Just keep at it and you'll get it right eventually. Pixlr has a perfectly adequate blur tool if you know how to use it. You just need to practice. -- Sandystar 12:42, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

>since Quail requested this to be declined, may I take over? Icefall Icy Winds 20:11, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

um hmm. Go ahead. -- Sandystar 18:04, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I re-did the shading and highlights. Icefall★ Talk 16:35, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add/Darken the earpink.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 16:37, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink. Icefall★ Talk 16:42, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

It might just be me but I still can't see the earpink.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 20:02, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Icefall★ Talk 23:13, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the legs farthest from us, and thicken the shading on her chin Night Fall 04:25, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done. Icefall★ Talk 14:08, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great to me. Comments before approval?

Darken the ear pink a bit more and make sure it doesn't touch the line art--Nightshine~ 01:24, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Icefall★ Talk 02:01, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 06:19, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 21:02, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) - Approved

Goldenflower.apprentice There is one discussion, Cinderpelt123, so this should be under the limit. Comments/Criticism for Goldenflower? --晶須 20:50, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit. Blur the chest shading. Darken haunch shading--NightshineR 20:53, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah blur it a bit more as Nightshine said as the dark ginger looks a bit splotchy on my computer screen:)Wildear~101:) 13:14, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

The color looks kinda off with the dark splotches everywhere. Highlight the tail and muzzle more. FrostCloud 15:34, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Didn't she get a cut ear in battle training from Bluepaw? Scarletwind 21:30, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like she has darker patches of fur on her pelt. Other then that its great :)DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 23:15, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Put a nick in the ear closest to us. Quailflight 08:40, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The darker patches of fur are supposed to be shading, and I can't blur them any more. And yes, I'll add the nick in her ear. 晶須 01:51, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

She looks slightly lumpy. Try blurring those dark parts more--NightshineR 16:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I'll do that in a sec. 晶須 22:04, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Is it better? I blurred the dark parts, but it didn't work so well so I lightened them. 晶須 23:40, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. Just blur the haunch shading a tiny bit more--NightshineR 23:42, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Anything else to work on? 晶須 00:04, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the back shading. Icefall Icy Winds 20:45, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

That is where the light source is coming from, so there should be no back shading. Darken the shading on the neck a tad then this should be ready--NightshineR 05:54, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, okay, then lighten the ear pink a little. I can't really see it. Icefall Icy Winds 12:03, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks fine on my screen--NightshineR 23:26, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Ice, it looks a bit dark to me. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:30, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Night, it looks fine on my computer. If I lighten it any more you probably won't be able to see it. 晶須 23:06, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I darkened the shading on her neck. 晶須 23:12, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see is to maybe blur the shading a bit, it looks a bit bumpy. And thicken the line art on her torn ear Night Fall 00:40, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Icefall★ Talk 13:45, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I've blurred the shading as much as I can. Pixlr's blurring tool isn't that great :( And I thickened the torn ear lineart. 雨晶須 五六 七 17:44, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great, Blackclaw. Comments before approval? --Bramble 19:39, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 21:02, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Rabbittail (W) Approved

Rabbittail.warrior Ah, finally xD Okay, the first image is how he's described in Battles of the Clans. The second image is how he's drawn in Battles of the Clans. I wasn't sure which description to go with, so I thought I'd put them both up and see what you guys think Night Fall 21:32, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one best, but they're both nice. Whichever one you choose the tail should be shortened. His description says stunted white tail.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:36, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think it should be just like his description says. Pale gray with a stunted tail. It would probably look like Berrynose's tail--NightshineR 21:42, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

The second one looks good, but both of them are lovely. For the second one, Blur the white patches, and for the first one, blur the ear pink and highlights. Icefall Icy Winds 21:49, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Yeah, Nightshine was right about the tail :) "Stunted -Slowed or stopped abnormally in growth or development" So on the first one, I stunted the tail, blurred the ear pink, and blurred the shading and highlights. On the second, I blurred the white patches. I would have stunted the tail on the second one, but I couldn't figure out how to copy and paste the lineart of the stunted tail on the first one, on to the second one Night Fall 23:08, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

I could help with the line art. But I like the first one. His tail is supposed to look like a rabbit's tail, so maybe make it a bit fluffy and shorten it. Lighten the tail more--NightshineR 23:40, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Night :) I shortened and fluffified the tail Night Fall 00:00, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

I shortened the tail on the other one for you--NightshineR 00:19, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should blur the ear pink (on both of them) and also, I think you should stick with the first one because some cat images colored by artists can be wrong. 晶須 01:36, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred the ear pink on both. So, you guys think I should go with the first? I think perhaps I should go with the first too; Rainwhisker is right about Wayne getting the images wrong :) Night Fall 05:55, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should go with the first one--NightshineR 06:02, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe, in the gallery of his article (if there will be one) we could add his grey version as: Alternate grey version. Just a thought. Raffyjack123 10:38, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

That was my original thought, but I don't think it's really necessary. Like, if we had an alternate image for every character Wayne messed up xD So I'll just go with the first :) Night Fall 20:42, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tiny bit bigger.Ashshadow.Got Cake? 14:54, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Center the earpink. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? Night Fall 08:19, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yes =) Nightfall, you astound me with your use of the blur tool; truly amazing. Comments before approval? -- Sandystar 10:06, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Sandy, that means a lot :) Night Fall 00:28, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 21:02, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist (Q)- Approved

Graymist.queenThe stripes just... don't work on the queen image DxDarkhallows 01:04, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink. Lighten the shading a bit--NightshineR 01:37, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are too jagged or crooked. Her warrior image stripes are much more umm straight, like this:(Graymist) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 01:42, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

That's just a furry pattern. The stripes are pretty much impossible to copy without it looking awkward.Darkhallows 03:32, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

One word. WOW. Shady, this is incredible! Define the stripes on her forehead more Night Fall 05:41, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe we should see about adding that furry pattern to her warrior image. It does look like an almost different cat now.Ashshadow.Got Cake? 14:48, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I really do not want to see this beautiful image go to waste over something such as additional texture. I think it would be fair to approve this (it truly is stunning Shady, as always) and see about adding the 'furry' texture to the warrior image during Tweak week. That is the only real difference between the two after all. -- Sandystar 10:10, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

That sounds fair enough. I'll add Graymist's warrior image to the nominations for consistency issues. Besides the texture, are there any comments before approval? --Bramble 16:45, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 21:02, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Millie (Lo) - Approved

Millie.loner &nbsp Yep mah first charart any comments? MOSSLEAP:)

Looks nice despite the fact I had to open Gimp to see it. Some tips would be darken the shading. Dappleclaw ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 02:18, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Save the image as a png file type--NightshineR 03:05, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED I saved it as a png file and made the shading darker anything else?MOSSLEAP:)

Rename it

RE-UPLOADEDi renamed it anything else?MOSSLEAP:)

Maybe make the tabby stripes on her back and hind leg on this side stretch farther. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:44, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED i made them longer and i darkened them up a bit too ^^ MOSSLEAP:)

Darken the shading on her chest a bit. Great job for a first Charart! Totallytawnypelt (TT) 00:10, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED thanks :D i darkened the chest shading anything else you find that needs editing?MOSSLEAP:)

On Millie's other pics she has almost black stripes and many more. So you might want to compare and change as you feel fit. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 01:52, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED thanks for pointing that out i darkened them anything else?MOSSLEAP:)

The stripes on her back could go almost to her belly. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 02:40, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED made the stripes longer :) anything else?MOSSLEAP:)

Make the stripes thinner and define the body stripes, blur the stripes near her muzzle area. Icefall Icy Winds 19:23, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

The furthest down stripe on her front right paw doesn't reach the line art it forms with, when the rest of it does. If you look, you'll know what I mean.totallytawnypelt Make more stripes and darken the shading a little Raffyjack123 10:18, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED i fixed it i tryed to make the stripes thinner but it didnt really work out :(MOSSLEAP:)

Add some shading to her chin, darken the ear pink, and blur the stripes on her tail Night Fall 04:25, June 25, 2010 (UTC)


Blur the stripes on her tail. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Saturate the ear pink.Dawny 04:44, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED fixed anything else? MOSSLEAP:)

Make the stripes on the legs longer Night Fall 08:19, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and blur all the stripes. Icefall★ Talk 14:29, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are actually probably blurred enough, but define the ear pink and darken it some, as has been said. --Bramble 19:51, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED fixed i also added a bit more shading on her tail anything else? MOSSLEAP:)

Comments before approval? -- Sandystar 14:58, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble 15:56, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkheart (W) - Approved

Hawkheart.warriorHere is Hawkheart. I'm not that proud of him...Anyways, comments? ☽Icestorm★ 21:07, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

He's good. Blur the highlights a bit more.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 22:17, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks, Ash! :D blurred highlights. ☽Icestorm★ 22:20, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Make the ear pink a bit smaller--Nightshine~ 22:34, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Night. :D Made ear pink smaller. ♥Iceshine★ 23:16, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great. Comments before approval? Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 18:02, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approving Night Fall

Raggedstar (D) - Approved

Raggedstar.deputyHeeeeeres Raggedstar! This is under the limit, so coments? Ringo Starr 13:00, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Doesn't he already have a deputy image? Or is this for Tweak Week?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 13:03, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

This was never approved, and it was my image (this one) thats on his article. I have no idea how it got there. Ringo Starr 13:04, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

It was a coding issue which I have fixed. -- Sandystar 13:06, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. I see.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 13:08, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Now that that issue been cleared up, any comments? Ringo Starr 19:22, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tiny bit bigger.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:10, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken/add the shading, I can't see it very well. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 22:55, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ringo Starr 16:16, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the back stripes. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get to that, but for some odd reson I can't edit wikia on my home computer. Might only be able to update every friday or so. Is that alright? Influx Lennon - Ringo's Wife 19:13, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

As long as you update it than yes.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 20:06, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Horray! I can edit again! (hopefully). Reuploaded. Influx Lennon - Ringo's Wife 01:24, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the head Night Fall 04:32, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes. Icefall★ Talk 13:38, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to say this to you all, but I wil not be able to work on this from today all the way to the 12th. Is that all right? Influx Lennon - Ringo's Wife 12:31, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Unneeded. Approving to clear up clutter. Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Songbird (Q) - Approved


This is my first Charart so I really like it! But please feel free to criticize! If you didn't know the sun is coming from the right side. Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 21:12, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

You forgot to sign. Get rid of the ear pink on her right ear. This is very good! You need to change the file name to Songbird.queen.png--NightshineR 21:14, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful, very nice job. Only thing I see is to maybe shade the belly, because that would be sheltered from the sun, and blur the ear pink well. Also, please remember to sign by typing four tildes (~) at the end of your message so we know who posted. --Bramble 21:16, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

There is a gray pixel in the eye farther away from us BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 21:37, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: I did what you asked, now is there anything else? Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 21:43, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Great job. --Bramble 22:11, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! :) Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 22:12, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten it more. Make the ear pink a bit smaller and darken the nose pink--NightshineR 22:14, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I make the ear pink smaller, lightened it up, and darkened the nose. Any more? Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 22:23, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Just to let you know any lighter and it starts to look golden instead of brown. Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 22:24, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

De-saturate it first, then lighten it a bit with the dodge tool--NightshineR 22:32, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but how do I do that? Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 22:37, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Use the saturate/de-saturate tool, it looks like a sponge. 晶須 22:42, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see that tool here. What program do you use? Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 22:48, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like a sponge on Pixlr. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 22:52, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, that makes sense because I use Gimp for this, and as far as I know there isn't a tool like that there. Should I still do that? Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 22:55, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

In GIMP, select the image. Go to Colours>Hue Saturation then move the saturation rectangle to the left until it is a good brown. Then use the dodge tool to make it a bit lighter--NightshineR 23:14, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! I thought you used Pixlr. Also, the ear pink is a bit too big and it should be more reddish. But it looks great otherwise! 晶須 23:20, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thats okay, you couldn't have known anyways! :) I'm gonna start working on the ear but I might have supper first. Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 23:33, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I redded the ears and shortened them, how do they look? Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 00:05, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, lighten the pelt and darken the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 00:09, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Is this enough? Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 00:17, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading around the belly area. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 00:55, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I think I did good with the shading now. Dappleclaw ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 01:04, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:32, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLAODED: I worked on what you said Nightshine, and I'll start on what you said Ashshadow. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:32, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Was that enough or do I need to still blur? And also please specify spots that would need blurring. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:41, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

If no specific area is specified than that means all of it. I can't really see the shading or highlights now. Darken them a bit.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:45, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Is it good now or did I go a bit over the top? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 22:14, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look brown enough. Darken it a tiny bit--NightshineR 22:17, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Darker? Or is this good? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 22:33, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Didn't Songbird previously have a charart? It's very good by the way. I love the shading! :) ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 00:30, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, Icestorm had it up for approval a while ago, but she withdrew it. This is lovely, Dappleclaw :) Define the ear pink more though, it's kind of hard to make out Night Fall 00:41, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! And I saw it on Nightfall's page for pages that needed charart and no one was doin this one so I assumed it was okay. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 00:41, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I defined the ear more, hopefully it isn't too bright. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 00:48, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:23, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Or is it ready for approval? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 01:06, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more--NightshineR 01:26, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Like this or more? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 01:40, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 22:35, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Or is it ready for approval? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 00:38, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

It's only been one day, wait at least four or five before asking for comments :) As for the image, blur the shading a lot on the face and neck, and blur the white transiton on the paws Night Fall 05:44, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Sorry, I was just a little impatient. :/ ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 14:12, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to blur the highlights more. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 03:26, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and the nose color looks as if it is purple. Make it red. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I made the nose redder, shrunk the ear pink, and blurred the highlights again. Anything else? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:39, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add some stripes to her face. And then there are some stripes near her rump that seem to have been cut off Night Fall 01:06, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I added stripes to her face, and re-defined the stripes on her hind leg and back. How does it look? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 02:44, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on her cheeks Night Fall 07:42, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Wow that was quick! I darkened the stripes on her cheeks. Anything else? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 14:28, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

I think you accidently uploaded the original version over the new one Night Fall 04:33, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Really? Well when I tried uploading it again it said it was a duplicate. And that was the newest version. Strange. :/ ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 13:27, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think I might need to redo this. Because I can't delete the backround. Unless someone else can, I'm pretty stuck. (And yes I know about the select-by-color-then-control-plus-x-method, that dosen't work for me) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 14:09, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I added transparency for you--Nightshine~ 01:20, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! ^.^ ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 03:05, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the paw stripes. Extend the white paw further, a bit. Darken the tail stripes, and the stripes that are near the tail area need to be sharpened. Icefall★ Talk 14:27, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Quick question (Yes, I'm done what you asked Icefall) when I upload from gimp do I make the destination file a .png or a .xcf? Because when I choose .png theres an error and when I choose .xcf it uploads but only shows a blank page. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 16:32, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

You should always go with a .png format; try saving the file to your computer as a png format, then uploading that image on here instead of the .xcf file. That way you won't have to change the destination file's format. Bramble 19:37, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Thanks! I did that and it worked! Did I darken the paw and tails stripes and sharpen the tail area stripes enough? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 02:55, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

The whole thing looks a little pixely now... this will sound backwards given that you were asked to sharpen the stripes, but I think define them may have been a better way of putting it. Now you need to get the blur tool and run it over some of the pixelated areas trying not to blur the stripes again too much. Also the ear pink needs to be more triangular. -- Sandystar 14:56, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I made the ear more trianglular and went over with the blur tool, if it needs more work let me know. (That's me but I forgot to sign) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:13, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing. I see nothing else wrong, CBA?Darkhallows 00:23, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Unneeded. Approving to clear up clutter. Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Ivytail (A) - Approved


Well, this is my first Charart. I hope this is good, but it probably will be declined in the first 2 suggestions. (Does it matter that I used Photoshop instead of GIMP? I don't have GIMP) Totallytawnypelt99 00:37, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

It will not be declined if we don't like it. But this is over the limit, however it is only one over so it should bve OK soon. First off, it needs to be taken out of thumbnail (which I'll do). Second, the white on the chest needs blurring and it needs to look more like-Ivytail (SC).queenMousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 00:42, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

This is very nice :) But on her midriff, I'd darken the white, it looks brighter compared to the white on her chest Night Fall 02:46, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say blur a bit more by her muzzle, and brighten the brown, to make it more like the queen pic above. Thats all I can think of now! ^.^ Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 00:51, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I brightened the patches a bit and darkened the fur a bit. If the patches need to be brighter, just let me know. I also blurred the white as much as I could. Please tell me other improvements to put on her. Totallytawnypelt (TT) 00:58, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Mousetalon, this isn't over the limit. Lighten the patches more. Make the ear pink more reddish--NightshineR 01:02, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I don't know about now but when it was first posted it was number 33. And I agree with Nightshine. Dappleclaw ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 01:06, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the patches and smudge them. Darken the shading and blur the white stomach. Icefall Icy Winds 19:05, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Some color went out of the lineart on her left front arm.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:29, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I brightened the patches, which are starting to kill me, but I won't give up! I made the ear more reddish (I think it was different because I was referring to the warrior picture instead of the queen, but hey, it's my first charart.) I also found out what blurring the white meant (i think) and did it. I also erased the extra coloring in front of her left arm (you're welcome, Ashshadow :D ). More comments? Please, please, more comments.Totallytawnypelt (TT) 21:27, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if it is different for the warrior image but the queen image has smaller patches. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:37, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I took Dappleclaw's advice and made the patches longer. Comments? 23:23, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

It looks nice, but maybe add more color into the patches, and also the haunces need more shading I think. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 23:27, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I added shading on the haunches and added more color (I even tried to vary it ^.^) Comments, Suggestions? Totallytawnypelt (TT) 00:04, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say it looks nice! ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 00:05, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

So should it be approved? †ø†åll¥†åwn¥p£l† 19:38, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

One thing about the style: The queen's patches look more like streaks while yours are patches. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:14, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the patches. Icefall Icy Winds 21:27, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I tried to make the patches look more like streaks, and I blurred the patches. It's hard to do it though, because when I save it as a PNG, it merges all the layers together. It frustrates me....totallytawnypelt

This is very good :) but, shouldn't she have darker patches along with her cream patches on her fur?DawnleafThe Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 17:15, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I added darker patches. Comments, Questions, Suggestions? Totallytawnypelt99Greenleaf Awaits!!!

Smudge and blur the patches. Dawny 19:06, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Smudged/Blurred patches. It's difficult because when you blur/smudge, it takes away the color, and then when you save it as a PNG it merges the layers. But I've learned. You save it as a PNG to upload and a PSD or JPEG or whatever GIMP uses, but you use the PSD to work and PNG to upload. (a miny lesson by me!)Totallytawnypelt99Greenleaf Awaits!!!

Make the ear pink a bit bigger. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 03:28, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Made ear pink bigger Totallytawnypelt99Greenleaf Awaits!!! 10:46, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the patches smaller, and add some more. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: made patches as small as I could, added a few more in. Ivypaw's really starting to frustrate me. I'm a master at kittypets. TawnySMEASH 14:23, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Its really good Tawny :) Just make the dark cream patches more visible.Dawny 04:39, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the white front paws Icefall★ Talk 14:28, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

There is barely any "black" ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT! 20:32, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! You got some color onto the lineart on the front legs. --- Cherryfur123Home + work should never be together! 12:20, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I like this image a lot! On the belly between the fore and hind legs and her left hindfoot, the white is lighter than on the rest of the image. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 13:21, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I just did the entire thing, I couldn't fix the "black" part and made them more like streaks. Comments? EarthbenderTawny Style! 12:52, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Unneeded. Approving to clear up clutter. Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Runningwind (Ki) Approved

Runningwind.kit I'm really sorry about my last charart. Real life got in the way and I forgot all about it. But anyway, thre are four discussions, so here's Runningwind. Comments?--Shaf Girl 17:26, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

It need to look like his other images (Runningwind.warrior Runningwind.apprentice ) ZNightsong 17:40, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Try to be more clear when commenting on images, Snickers. Tell her what needs to be improved instead of just telling her it needs to look like his other images. Shafgirl, first of all, no problem :) Second, I would make the stripes thinner, and put some smaller stripes in between the longer ones Night Fall 18:01, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink maybe, and darken the shading. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 23:28, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Dappleclaw mostly, maybe add stripes like they're coming from his stomach like his apprentice and warrior picture. Also, kind of make the stripes thinner as they get closer to the stomach.totallytawnypelt

Sorry Night, Shaf. I had to log off right after that. I meant what Nightfall said and it needs a stripe through his eye. ZNightsong 10:24, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Also blur the highlight on his stomach

Make the earpink more noticable. Make the stripes a little thinner. Frostheart[[User talk:Frostheart♥ 16:41, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I failed on the stripes. :P--Shaf Girl 21:33, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think they look pretty good :) Blur the shading on his paws, and make the stripe on his forehead thinner Night Fall 04:27, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 15:45, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and blur it. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Instead of putting one big stripe on his forehead, you should put two horizontal stripes like his other pics. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 02:58, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 00:15, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading Night Fall 04:35, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. Icefall★ Talk 13:32, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Also, make the tail stripes more thiner and define them. Icefall★ Talk 14:31, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 04:51, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?--Darkhallows 00:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Unneeded. Approving to clear up clutter. Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (A) - Approved

Buzzardstar.apprentice Not much to say about him. Comments?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 00:55, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really think of anything right now, off the top of my head. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 01:02, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say to blur the highlights more. Good! Totallytawnypelt99Greenleaf Awaits!!!

Blur the ear pink somemore.Dawny 19:00, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, and blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: If needed, could someone blur the shading in GIMP? Pixlr fails. XP I fixed the earpink though.Sunflight Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 22:31, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

I see no problem in that. In fact I use gimp for charart. :) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 22:37, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Well acually, I don't think you should ask other people to help you with your charart. Pixlr actually has a pretty good blurring tool if you get used to it. (I use pixlr myself, and I find that it's acually pretty effective) Night Fall 04:36, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. Sorry. I'll blur it more.MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 18:54, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I've thought about it, and I've realized that I don't have the time nor the patience to work on this image. :( May I withdraw this?MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 01:31, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Why not let someone take over? There really isn't that much else that needs to be done, and it's really good :) Night Fall 06:39, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

If you are agreeable to the suggestion, Moonflight, I'll finish this up for you as I currently have no image up for approval. -- Sandystar 10:08, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Of course you may, Sandy. :) I'll change the reservation table. You may proceed.MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 18:29, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll be able to work on this on wednesday at the earliest; what needs doing? -- Sandystar 18:03, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

The haunch shading could be blurred a bit more--Nightshine~ 18:06, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Unneeded. Approving to clear up clutter. Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Amberclaw (W)- Approved


Okay, I asked Honeyfur if I could do Amberclaw and she said yes. I made his eyes amber (I didn't know what color eyes he had). Comments? RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 23:43, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's good, but the earpink looks a little bit weird. Also, the front paw needs some highlights. Frostheart 00:07, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay I made the earpink lighter and added a highlight to the front paw. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 01:10, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

It's a bit difficult to see the shading; darken it some Night Fall 01:53, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the shading. Anything else? RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 02:33, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Now the shading is too thin and dark. It needs to be spread out and blurred. ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT! 03:37, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is to neon. Desaturate it some. Influx Lennon - Ringo's Wife 11:56, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add some to the ear not facing us, and add shading to the face. Icefall★ Talk 13:22, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the whole thing, is it any better? RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 16:22, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to bug you on your earpink (everyone does) but it looks like it doesn't really match his pelt color. Maybe if you lighten it to a light pink it would be better, but I'm not so sure, save 2 copys, one of this one and one of the fixed earpink just to be on the safe side. TawnySMEASH 17:08, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Made it a light pink. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 17:43, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is good. Darken the shading on the paws, and I think the ear pink should be red. Icefall★ Talk 21:31, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded. Darkened the shading on the paws and made the ear pink red. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 22:54, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tad smaller, this is really good by the way! Dawny 23:10, June RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 21:01, June 30, 2010 (UTC)28, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Dawny! Reuploaded. I made the ear pink smaller. Anything else? RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 02:30, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Haha np, just desaturate the ear pink :) Dawny 03:33, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

How do you desaturate on GIMP? I can't find a tool for it. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 12:11, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure. You should desaturate it in Pixlr. Icefall★ Talk 14:32, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

You can desaturate on GIMP. I forgot exactly who I learned this from but all you have to do it ckick colors and go to hue saturation. Saturation is at the bottom.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 14:54, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! Desaturated the ear pink. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 15:27, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Thid is very good, Riverpelt. This may be my computer screen, but he looks a little bright. If he looks neon on other screens, desaturate it. Just rub the sponge over the whole thing. If it looks normal to you, leave it. :)

He looks pretty normal to me, but what do other users think? RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 20:41, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

He looks a bit too bright, just desaturate him some Night Fall 00:27, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I desaturated him. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 01:20, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

He looks very dull now. Saturate him a bit because right now he looks grayish ginger.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 19:13, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does he look now? RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 21:01, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

I thinks he's almost ready. :) Just lighten the shading a bit and blur it. BTW: That unsigned comment above was from me. :P *MOONY FAIL*MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 23:33, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the shading and I blurred it as much as it would go. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 00:34, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

The shading clashes with the pelt now. Darken it some.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 00:41, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay I made it darker so that it doesn't clash with the highlights, and not too dark that the highlights look too bright. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan

01:45, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate it and darken the ear pink--Nightshine~ 18:40, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan20:54, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure of how you can fix this but the shading is a redish color. It would look fine if he was more Firestar's color but it looks weird against this pelt color.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 21:05, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Do you think I should redo him, but to have Firestar's pelt color? RiverstarLeader Of StormClan

22:26, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

He doesn't have to have Firestar's pelt color but you need to change the color of the shading. It might be best to redo him.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 22:30, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid him again, and he is lighter than before, but I think he looks better than my first one. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan

00:24, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think so too. Darken the earpink some but other than that he's very good.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 00:30, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Ashshadow! Reuploaded. darkend the ear pink. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan

01:27, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the face shading ♥Iceshine★ 19:10, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkend the face shading/ RiverstarLeader Of StormClan

13:41, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink more--Nightshine~ 18:08, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the ear pink. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 21:28, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Heavystep (A) - Approved


I wasn't sure if he should have a twisted leg or not.--Nightshine~ 19:52, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Oh this is awsome, though he needs a deformed leg. Dawny 21:07, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

How should his deformed leg look?--Nightshine~ 21:23, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and blur the stripes. Icefall★ Talk 21:32, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened ear pink and blurred stripes--Nightshine~ 22:55, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm I'm not sure, maybe just make his leg a little shorter with a stumpy paw. Dawny 00:32, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded is this okay?--Nightshine~ 23:08, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bit.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 01:41, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Also make it smaller. ♥Iceshine★ 01:44, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded the ear pink on this one is tricky--Nightshine~ 04:42, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit more smaller. ♥Iceshine★ 12:30, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made it smaller--Nightshine~ 17:15, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Since Nightshine is away...I was wondering if I can finish this?♥Icestorm★ 02:50, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Unneeded. Approving to clear up clutter. Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar's Mother (Q) Approved

My other was declined, so I can post this, right? Re-did her as a queen.

[[User:XxdovesongXX|XxdovesongXXFile:Leafstar's Mother.queen.png]]

It could use a bit more shading. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 05:21, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Was she seen as a queen? Er, blur the stripes, darken the ear pink, and add shading to the tail, haunch, face, and paws. Icefall★ Talk 13:46, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Well it was assumed that she was a queen at one point because she is Leaftsar's mother. Looks really good Dovesong! ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 14:45, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED How's it look now? I added shading, darkened the ear pink and blurred the stripes. Also, I added a few more stripes to her belly. How do they look? XxdovesongXX 20:04, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and tail stripes. ♥Iceshine★ 17:45, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

This doesn't really look like Leafstar. It should--Nightshine~ 18:06, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine, could you be a little more specific?XxdovesongXX 19:09, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar's cream and brown are a lot darker. Also Leafstar has cream patches all over her body like on her back and head. You should proabably compare yours to Leafstar and try to make them similar. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 19:18, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar's mother is said to look just like Leafstar. This isn't very similar to Leafstar--Nightshine~ 19:32, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine's right, try to make her the same color as Leafstar. Night Fall 20:46, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I can make her the same colours as Leafstar, but I don't recall them ever saying she had patches? Correct me if I'm wrong.XxdovesongXX 22:52, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

It confirms in Firestar's Quest that she's a brown and cream tabby she-cat. Which would mean brown with cream in various places on her body Night Fall 22:56, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do that.XxdovesongXX 23:10, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED Okay guys, made her darker with various patches of cream. How's it look now?XxdovesongXX 23:22, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken/define the earpink, and there is a white speck on her tail tip. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 00:36, July 2, 2010 (UTC)\

RE-UPLOADED Darkened the ear pink, coloured in the white speck. XxdovesongXX 03:06, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good :) Darken the ear that's farthest from us Night Fall 03:24, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED Okay, I've darkened her other ear.XxdovesongXX 05:19, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the haunch stripes and blur them on the end of the back. ♥Iceshine★ 12:29, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED Okay, how's that? I'm sorry guys, but I had to upload the edited version as a new file because even when I put the same name it didn't let me replace the old file! I hope it's not so much of a big deal.

That's fine :) make the cream patches a bit more pronounced Night Fall 07:43, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I agree, I can barely see them. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 13:29, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

There is some color outside of the lineart on the tail.AshshadowAg 03:08, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Unneeded. Approving to clear up clutter. Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Speckle (Q)-Approved

Speckle.queen I found this image to do so I can't do Pineclaw anymore. Sorry Birchy. :D Comments? Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 16:00, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Ohh, this is good. Darken the shading and make the ear pink bigger ♥Iceshine★ 16:37, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened shading and largened ear pink. Better? Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 17:01, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

In her rogue picture, it looks like she has a bit of a brown underbelly. Perhaps you could add some brown to her belly to emphasize that? ωiſdɦɛɑrŧ 23:10, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Personally, I love this image! However, since I'm too lazy to look up her description, listen to people who aren't. I can't really see the shading. Can you emphasize it a bit nore? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 02:02, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded The patch shoudln't really be there as she is facing the other way in that image, but I've added a small one. Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:43, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Unneeded. Approving to clear up clutter. Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sneezepaw (Alt Ki)-Approved

File:Sneezepaw.alt.kit.png Since I'm withdrawing Morningflower (A) I decided to do Sneezepaw's alternative kit version, anyways comments? Dawny 07:03, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

(S)- He's very... bright. Also, could you add more shading? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 13:34, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the image and the shading. Dawny 18:36, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and lighten it a bit. Darken the shading some more--Nightshine~ 18:55, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred and lightened ear pink....didn't turn out so well lol, and darkened shading.Dawny 20:04, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the black ginger transition.AshshadowAg 03:20, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred black and ginger transitioning. Dawnleaf 19:29, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Unneeded. Approving to clear up clutter. Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (Alt A) - Approved

File:Ivytail.alt.apprentice.pngnot so good. It seemed that I lost my skills over my mini vacation. xP comments? ♥Iceshine★ 22:03, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on the haunch and blur the ear pink, otherwise it looks really good! Dawny 22:48, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Dawn, I've blurred the haunch highlight and ear pink. ♥Iceshine★ 22:55, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the ear farthest from us a tad. Dawny 23:09, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done ♥Iceshine★ 23:38, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight some.AshshadowAg 03:16, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blured shoulder highlight. ♥Icestorm★ 14:22, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Unneeded. Approving to clear up clutter. Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwing (A) ~ Approved


I killed it... o.o" (I bet that one of the comments will be to make her more ginger, to lighten the stripes, to lighten the shading, or to darken the ear pink. xD) Kitties Ruleda WORLD!Mumble sees a kitty!!! 22:13, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lol close. Make her a bit more golden. She looks a bit yellowish at the moment.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 22:16, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Her eyes looks kindda strange. ♥Dawnleaf♥  03:06, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Thought so too... I'll fix her. ^-^ Kitties Ruleda WORLD!Mumble sees a kitty!!! 13:43, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. *hopes the comparison works right* Made her golden and redid her eye. Better? :3

EDIT: The comparison doesn't work with the new naming system. xD Kitties Ruleda WORLD!Mumble sees a kitty!!! 13:56, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I like! Center the ear pink and blur the tail shading. ♥Iceshine★ 16:30, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Saturate the ear pink a tad ♥Dawnleaf♥  20:50, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

kk Kitties Ruleda WORLD!Mumble sees a kitty!!! 17:15, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Unneeded. Approving to clear up clutter. Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Bird (R) - Approved

Bird.rogue Not much to say here. Comments? --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 22:12, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the belly. I really like the mud on the pelt! Looks cool! ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 22:15, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

The belly shading looks fine to me. I'd say, darken the shading a bit and darken the ear pink. I suggest that you change the nose colour to a dark gray--Nightshine~ 22:39, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Better? Also, I didn't change her nose color because a. her caveguard image has a pink nose, and b. she's a tabby, so she'd have a pink nose, even though she's grey. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 23:14, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes/mud streaks ♥Iceshine★ 23:22, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Did the tail stripes, not sure why the mud would need to be defined, though. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 01:34, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

The mud streaks look like brown patches to me. I'd define it. Or maybe it's my computer..... Quailflight 05:12, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

On mine, they don't seem any less blurred than her caveguard image. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 09:09, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more ♥Iceshine★ 12:25, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks blurred enough to me. Lighten the pelt colour a bit. It looks darker than her other image--Nightshine~ 17:22, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 19:59, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Any other concerns? --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 19:37, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Nope. Approving to clear up clutter. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 21:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)