Harley (R)- Approved

Harley.rogue I'm proud of this one. There are three discussions and I withdrew Pineclaw so this should be under the limit. Comments?AshshadowAg 03:07, August 7, 2010 (UTC)'

This is very good! I like the way you used the brown. Blur the ear pink a tad. SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 09:54, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's great:) Blur the stripes a bit. Clarrissa!My talkpage! 12:22, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. I blurred the earpink more but the stripes start to look really faded if I blur them more.AshshadowAg 13:59, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Wowee this is great! My only suggestion is to define the ear pink some more. Dawnleaf 19:18, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. Defined the earpink.AshshadowAg 01:56, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Sandystar 10:51, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 17:08, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenheart- Approved

Here's Brackenheart!! Constructments? ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:24, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think you meen Comments and all I can really see that's off is you could make the ear pink a teeny weeny bit smaller Rainear be as silent as rain

Constructments means the same thing. I'll do that :) ♫ mosspool ♫ 00:01, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the ear pink smaller.

Looks very nice way beter than mine (Foxheart AD) Rainear be as silent as rain

Thanks :) ♫ mosspool ♫ 00:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome job! Darken the face shading. ♥Icestorm★ 01:16, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is absolutely beautiful. The only thing I see that needs improvement is that the herbs need shading. Other than that, this is extremely well done. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:18, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I darkened the face shading and shaded the herbs more. Thanks, Bramble :D ♫ mosspool ♫ 03:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Theres a tiny bit of color outside the lineart on the top of the muzzle and back of the tail.User:Ashshadow/Sig. 18:59, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Ok, I fixed that. You must have really good eyes, Ashshadow. XD I hope I got all of it because I could hardly see it. ♫ mosspool ♫ 20:49, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

It must have been the angle I looked at it at. It looks good to me. Comments before approval?User:Ashshadow/Sig. 20:52, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:22, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (W) Approved

File:Gorsestar.warrior..pngSo here he is. He's my first one, so I know he's not that great, but what do you think? Let me know if this is under the limit; I think it is, but I'm not sure. Skydragon 18:13, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow this is really good perhaps where you put the stripe below his ear you should've put another stripe as on his leader image he has two grey stripes either side. Hope that helps :D :)Wildear~101:) 18:32, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good but the file needs to be named Gorsestar.warrior.png. Jpg files dont have the best quality and look pixilated. Besides that darken the shading a bit.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice :) Thicken the stripes a bit, in addition to what Wildear and Ashshadow have said ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:49, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? Skydragon 21:30, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It still looked funny to me, so I fixed it again. Skydragon 18:24, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add a few more stripes on his haunch and tail and thicken them a bit--NightshineR 01:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think he has any more stripes on his tail in his leader image. Is this better though? SkydragonRide the wind.... 02:42, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Move the tail stripes up more. Lengthen the stripes on his haunch a bit more--NightshineR 16:32, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lengthened the stripes and moved the ones on his tail. SkydragonRide the wind.... 17:52, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and this should be ready--NightshineR 06:33, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the shading. SkydragonListen...the wind is singing... 14:53, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

He's very nice, Skydragon! There's just one thing that's bugging me; on the first tabby stripe going down the back, there's a pixel that sits in between the Y fold. Does that make any sense to you? Hollydapple 01:54, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

It bugged me too, but I looked at the leader image and it was in the leader image, so...--Snickers

Oh, okay, then. Sorry. If anything, brighten the highlights on the face. If you don't use highlights (I don't think they're neccesary), then don't bother, but it looks like you do, so maybe try that. Hollydapple 03:22, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added a highlight to the face. SkydragonFollow the wind... 14:46, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

This may just be my moniter but I can barely see the shading. Can you darken it more.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 18:16, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. darkened shading. SkydragonRide the wind 18:35, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Try changing the color of the ear pink to a more darker color, like on Ashfoot. This looks really nice! --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 14:02, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? It's not darker, but it's closer to Ashfoot's. SkydragonRide the wind 14:50, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I think that looks much better....can't really see anything else. Good job! =D --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 19:36, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes. MoonpeltTM 23:15, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

No, it matches the leader image. I think it looks fine. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:20, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, I'm gonna be gone until about the 20th of this month, and I won't be able to work on him. Please don't delete him. Thanx!--Whisper on the windSkydragon 03:20, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know...I think it needs more stripes. Skywish16 I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 03:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like his leader image. I tink it has the right number of stripes; you can't even see the entire side of his body in the leader image anyway. Kaoru Hitachiin 21:43, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

He does need to add a couple more stripes to the (our) right foreleg. Moonpelt1786 22:06, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know about that, Moonpelt, because I've been working on Gorsestar's deputy image, so I've been studying the leader image very hard, and I haven't seen any other stripes on that foreleg, though Skydragon does need to add one of those funny spots to it. Hollydapple 15:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and make it bigger. Lighten the stripes a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 22:32, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hi everybody, I'm back! I added the spot on his foot and darkened the ear, but I didn't do anything to the stripes because I used the same color as on his leader image. Let me know if I still need to lighten them! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Skydragon16 (talkcontribs)

I'd lighten them a tinsy bit, I think the shading makes them look too dark. Thicken the stripe on his front leg farthest from us, and darken the shading on both the front legs Night Fall 00:39, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened the shading on his legs, and I tried to thicken that one stripe and lighten the others. Let me know if it worked. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Skydragon16 (talkcontribs)

Blur the tabby markings, on the tail, and desaturate the ear pink.Dawny 00:20, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the markings on his tail and desaturated the ear pink. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Skydragon16 (talkcontribs)

Make the stripes a little longer Night Fall 04:19, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and darken the ear pink. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lengthened the stripes, but I can't darken the shading or ear much more before they get too dark. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Skydragon16 (talkcontribs)

Okay, just blur the stripes slightly and he looks good to me. -- Sandystar 16:37, June 27, 2010 (UTC) </span>

Reuploaded. Blurred the stripes. Anything else? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Skydragon16 (talkcontribs)

I would say to make the ear pink bigger, and darken it. Icefall★ Talk 13:51, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think the ear pink needs to be any bigger or darkened. It seems to be large enough to me, and it also looks too dark. You should lighten it again. Hollydapple 18:02, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Sooo... am I darkening it or lightening it? --SkyStorm's brewing... 22:59, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say lighten it. And make it more red, right now it looks too purple. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 14:51, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? --SkyStorm's brewing... 01:43, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Move it up a bit and make it more red--Nightshine~ 17:18, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How's that? I tried to move it and I used the ear color from his leader image. --SkyStorm's brewing... 19:55, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Excellent. That looks better. Hollydapple 05:03, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - This is optional, but maybe you could consider adding a mini-highlight to his left foreleg and his tail. If there's a little lighter area there, it makes it looke more rounded. I think the image looks good. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 13:04, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit of a pale-ish pink colour, its looking a bit neon right now.--Dawnleaf 03:22, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see is the hindleg away from us (the left one, I think?) could be shaded a touch darker. Hollydapple 04:49, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shaded the leg. SkydragonFlight of dreams... 22:50, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is consistent with the existing images and I see no issues. Comments before approval? --SandyTalk 11:28, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. User:Icethroat21/Sig 14:08, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) - Approved

Tawnyspots.elderThere are several discussions so this should be under the limit. Anywho, here is my first elder for PCA. An epic fail, if you ask me. My little depression is meddling with my art skills. =( lol Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 01:50, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Thicken the stripes and darken the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 02:06, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

i sorta think the fur at the ear should be stickin up more rather than flat...ish so maybe fix that, other than the tufty ears great job x3bracken- 02:43, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, nice tabby stripes, Mousetalon! Could you make the ear pink a little more triangular? I can hardly see your highlights, so brighten them a bit, and blur the shading on the back and darken all shading, though not too much, particularly near the base of his tail, his forepaws, and under his chin. Good job! Hollydapple 04:51, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The blank didn't give me room to change the ears. Okay, anything else? Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 17:12, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good, Mouse. Blur the shading and highlights some. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 22:08, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred and added some texture to the fur. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:17, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
The stripes should be lighter. Because on the deputy image, the stripes are gray, here, the stripes are black. I also think they should be thickened more. Icefall Icy Winds 23:19, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the whole thing. I think, personally, that the stripes are fine. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 15:05, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

It looks too light now.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:21, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT! 22:05, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlights a bit and lighten the stripes a bit. The ear tufts don't look right. Thicken the line art more. Lighten his muzzle--NightshineR 22:13, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes won't lighten. Pixlr hates me. =( (I'll try and reupload soon!) ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT! 04:33, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Can someone lighten the stripes for me? Pixlr is all icky for me right now. And the lineart on the ear tufts is the same thickness as on his deputy image. ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT! 14:21, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Smooth out the ear pink. It looks too bumpy. Blur it. Icefall★ Talk 14:25, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smoothed out the lineart and blurred it so you wouldn't have to ask. ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT! 17:53, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Is there anything else I need to do? I might withdraw it so I can reserve a SkC's Destiny charart . . . ANDYSCHLECKMouseh is now obsessed! 15:36, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge and blur the ear pink so it looks as if it has depth, and it's not just a wad of pink lying atop the pelt. Then I'd call this ready. Please don't throw this good image away just so you can do another one. It's very well done. Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:01, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. MousehObsessed with Andy Schleck! 18:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look black. On his other images, they're lighter. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 03:33, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

As I stated before, I don't really have the tools do do anything about that. Pixlr is dumb. MousehObsessed with Andy Schleck! 16:04, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Lightening the stripe will ruin the image... from experience XD Comments before approval? --SandyTalk 11:41, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. User:Icethroat21/Sig 14:08, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkheart Alt (MC) Approved Comments? Moon Talk 15:08, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Blur the patch on his neck a bit. Dawny 17:37, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded How is that? Moon Talk 17:55, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the herbs. They're a bit bright right now. Lighten the ear pink--Nightshine~ 18:42, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Mõŏń ۞ 13:01, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

I would say to blur the patch near his jaw/chest area. This is really good! ♥Iceshine★ 13:03, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is GREAT! I'd just say to darken the herb farthest from us, because it's kinda similar to the second herb, but otherwise, brilliant! SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 09:50, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

...???... What? Mõŏń ۞ 14:12, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the herbs look fine... they don't have to be different colours. Comments before approval? --SandyTalk 11:56, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. User:Icethroat21/Sig 14:08, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Plumwillow (W) - Approved

Plumwillow.warrior I counted about five times, and since discussions and withdrawn images don't count towards image numbers, this should be under the limit. If it's over the limit and I just fail, let me know. Sorry I haven't been on as much these past two weeks, I know I've hardly been on at all, but I've had Band Camp everyday for almost all day the first week and still a large portion of my day the second week. I'll try to make up for it this next week, but after that school starts up again...woot. My excuses aside, I don't know why, but I love the name Plumwillow. I like the ending willow a lot (not as much as throat, of course :P), and the prefix plum is pretty cool, too. I also think that Rabbitleap is an awesome name, and that SkyClan's Destiny was epic. :)

And now things image wise, I feel that I've lost some of my talent for chararts, and that this isn't very good. I'm not sure if I got this dark enough for dark gray. Comments and suggestions? Icy :) I see smile! 03:56, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Looks nice! But you should make the shading a bit darker Rainear be as silent as rain

Blur the earpink and darken the highlights a bit.AshshadowAg 14:00, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Expand the highlights- they're too concentrated. ANDYSCHLECKMouseh is now obsessed! 16:23, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened some of the shading, I darkened the highlights (which made them less concentrated), and I blurred the ear pink. I knew that it would kill me. Comments? User:Icethroat21/Sig 16:51, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --SandyTalk 12:06, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. User:Icethroat21/Sig 14:08, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Bouncefire (W) ~ Approved

Bouncefire.warriorOkay I made him using the same exact color as his apprentice image. Comments? TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 00:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good but you should make the ear pink smaller Rainear be as silent as rain

The shading on his neck goes all the way around his neck. It looks funny. Also, shade the bottom of the muzzle. ♫ mosspool ♫ 00:21, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunch, add more shading to his forelegs. 雨晶須 夏天來了! 01:18, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, but blur the shading on the haunch a bit more. Clarrissa!My talkpage! 11:29, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay I made the ear pink smaller, fixed the shading around his neck, shaded the bottom of his muzzle and blurred the haunch as much as it could go. Anything else? TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 14:18, August 8, 2010

Lighten the ear pink a bit more. Like always, very impressive River! XD SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 05:15, August 9, 2010 (UTC)(UTC)

He still needs more shading on the bottom of his muzzle. Also, add some shading to the bottom of his ear. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 05:58, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I added more shading to the bottom of his muzzle, and added shading to the bottom of his ear, but do you think I should still change the color of the earpink? I mean it matches the same color as his apprentice image. Oh and thanks Sunspirit! TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 23:11, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --SandyTalk 12:14, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. User:Icethroat21/Sig 14:08, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Nutmeg - Approved

File:Nutmeg.rogue.pngThere are three discussions, so this is under the limit. I like how this one came out:) Constructments? --HAWKTALONö 14:39, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good, maybe you could blur the shading a bit more. Tansyfoot. 15:14, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Great job, Hawk! I would say to lighten the white tail tip. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 18:06, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink just a tad bit. Otherwise, this is really awesome. How do you get the smudge tool to work so well? I fail every time. DX User:Icethroat21/Sig 18:24, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the shading, lightened the tail taip, and defined the ear pink. And Icethroat, I blurred the patches first, smudged them them with a three pixel brush, then smudged them again with a one pixel brush. --HAWKTALONö 01:07, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Whatever you did works Hawk as this looks amazing =) Comments before approval? --SandyTalk 12:19, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Hawktalon, I tried that on some images in pixlr and it worked well for me, so thanks a ton. :) There have been no comments, so this is approved. User:Icethroat21/Sig 14:08, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ebonyclaw (KP) Approved

Ebonyclaw.kittypetHere's my 1st charart. It's Ebonyclaw as a kittypet. Comments? Dovesong Dove's gentle song. 12:35, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good for your first charart:) Make the nose and ear pink more pinkish and blur the highlights a tad. --HAWKTALONö 14:42, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Very nice.AshshadowAg 14:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink seems a bit dark, and I see white as an outline for it. Blur the shading/highlights more. Frostheart 18:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome. The earpink is...too pink. It should be a reddish color. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 18:08, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good! But yes, the ear pink is too pink and there's some white pixels around it. Also, blur the shading xD User:Cherryfur123/sig 23:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks purplish. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 05:59, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 12:08, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is your first Charart?!? :O OMG this is better than mine! Anywyas, the only thing I can say is to blur the back shading...and the earpink looks kinda wierd. Try using the coding: (#) 973735 and use it for the earpink. That's what I used for Rockshade.(my character up for approval) EarthbenderTawny Style! 13:01, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the earpink and shading. Anything else? ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 14:04, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Much Better!! For now, I don't have anything to say. This is excellent. EarthbenderTawny Style! 17:02, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Again, blur the highlights on the back and tail. Otherwise, it's really awesome. xD Frostheart 19:13, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blured shading more. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 21:58, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

First charart? This is very good. Comments before approval? --SandyTalk 12:17, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I think you should darken the entire image. Run over it with the burn tool, I suppose. Also, you could add some shading and highlights to the collar. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 20:14, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the entire image and added shading and highlightsto the collar. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 20:25, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?  Darkhallows...Mew? 21:05, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --HAWKTALONö 13:30, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Fallowfern (Q) - Approved

Fallowfern.queen I had a hard time getting the shading to be blurred enough. Comments? --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 02:23, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! I can find like, no fault with this. Although I don't think you coloured the nose. ♫ mosspool ♫ 05:03, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Brown cats have brown noses. --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 05:04, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I've seen lots of brown cats with pink noses. If tabbies count, my friend has two and also there are plenty of pictures of brown cats on the internet with pink noses. But if you're keeping it brown, shouldn't it at least be darker? ♫ mosspool ♫ 05:13, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Go to google images, search brown cat, and look at any of the results that aren't tabbies or have white around their noses. :) I guess it could be darker, though. --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 05:22, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I guess you're right, but their noses are pink-ish. Not that it really matters, but if you leave it the way it is people will think you just didn't bother to colour the nose x3 ♫ mosspool ♫ 08:08, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Technically, I did color it (gave it its own highlight and shading), but I made it dark, so now the highlight is about the same as the fur's base color. --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 08:19, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but maybe you should blur the highlights more. Clarrissa!My talkpage! 11:40, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

How's this? --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 17:21, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Define the earpink. AshshadowAg 17:24, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is this any better? --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 17:38, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Very good. The earpink looks too...blurred I don't know how to put it. Like it should take up more of the ear. But it my just be my mac... EarthbenderTawny Style! 17:04, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I redid the ear pink. How is it now? --Gοldenpelt 22:23, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?User:Ashshadow/Sig 12:02, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --HAWKTALONö 16:09, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Billystorm (W) - Approved

Billystorm.warrior Billystorm as a warrior. Comments? Dawnleaf 22:14, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great!! The only thing I see wrong with it is that the ear pink is hard to see. ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:28, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Fixed earpink, better?Dawnleaf 22:49, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Mmm, It's still a little hard to see. Just a bit. ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:50, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Better?Dawnleaf 23:01, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Way better :) Rainear be as silent as rain

Smudge and blur all the white transitions, as they're a bit solid looking right now. Other than that this is wonderful. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:14, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks Bramble. Blurred and smudged the white transitioning. Better? Dawnleaf 02:33, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome Dawny! Make the war pink a little more triangular. SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 06:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the eyes, they're very, very dark. ♫ mosspool ♫ 08:11, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

He should be more of an orange color. Right now he's brown.  Darkhallows...Mew? 18:04, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Made the ear pink more trianglular, and fixed the eyes and pelt colour. Dawnleaf 19:47, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights on his back look a bit thick Rainear be as silent as rain

There are no highlights ;) User:Dawnleaf/Signature 19:59, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Opps I meant shading Rainear be as silent as rain

Personally, I think the shading looks fine. Anything else? User:Dawnleaf/Signature 20:24, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think that shading needs to be darkened. I only see highlights.  Darkhallows...Mew? 21:09, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the shading. User:Dawnleaf/Signature 22:01, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, blur the shading on the white areas--nightshine 00:34, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened ear pink and blurred shading. User:Dawnleaf/Signature 00:44, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --SandyTalk 11:06, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved --SandyTalk 10:26, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Frostclaw (KP) - Approved

Frostclaw.kittypet This is the 34th image. I am pleased with how she turned out. Comments? MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 18:44, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks semi pale gray almost whitish and make the ear pink go up higher Rainear be as silent as rain

If I lighten her, it will look too unnatural. I'll fix the ear pink though. MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 19:01, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

This looks almost silver. Make it whiter. lighten the shading on the forearm, and define the earpink. Frostheart 19:03, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I fixed the ear pink. I'll fix the shading and color later today. MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 19:07, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I lightened the entire image. MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 15:21, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading a tiny bit more noticeable. Frostheart 17:16, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! Much better! Just make the ear pink bigger. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 20:11, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Anything else? MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 00:32, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image a bit.User:Ashshadow/Sig 01:21, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done. MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 01:27, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Very pretty! My only advice would be to make the tag gold instead of pale silver. Gah, I'm suffering, my copy of SkyClan's Destiny is in, but we haven't gotten a chance to pick it up! Darn. Anyway, that about the tag to make it more noticeable, because it looks like Frostclaw's pelt coloring almost. Either a gold or bronze color, maybe? 04:08, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Woops. Sorry. That last comment was from Hollydapple, who forgot to log in. :3 Hollydapple 04:27, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done. Moonflight 16:24, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --SandyTalk 11:08, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved --SandyTalk 10:31, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Macgyver (KP)- Approved

Macgyver.kittypet Comments?User:Ashshadow/Sig 02:22, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's really good. Make the ear lighter, or darken the ear. xD Frostheart 02:23, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Are you talking about the earpink?User:Ashshadow/Sig 02:46, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. Hehe. Lighten the earpink slightly, or darken the nose. xD Frostheart 15:04, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink and nose don't have to be the same color . . . Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 15:10, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

I know. But something seems weird about the balance. (may just be the lighting in my room. xD) Frostheart 16:43, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

She probably made it that way since the ear is black and needs darker ear pink, whereas around the nose is white so it needs a light nose. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 20:53, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

You're right Dovesong (or Mosspool). If I made the earpink the same color as the nose I would be told to darken it. If I made the nose the same color as the earpink I would be told to lighten it since theres white around it. If anyone else has a problem with the color I can tweak it a bit.User:Ashshadow/Sig 22:31, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink does look slightly reddish, but it might be just me :S oblivionAudience? 14:01, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Look at other black cats. A lot of them have reddish earpinks.User:Ashshadow/Sig 22:35, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

The only problem I see with the ear pink is that it needs to be defined some; the color is okay. Great job as usual, Ashshadow. User:Icethroat21/Sig 22:53, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Ice. I tried to define it more but it didn't look any different so I left it. Anything else?User:Ashshadow/Sig 13:12, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? --SandyTalk 16:21, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--nightshine 21:41, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) Approved

Dapplenose.apprentice fail,fail,such a fail.The sun is the left corner not the right.That's why the shading is on the bottom.Snickers 11 Days! 23:35, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

You'll have to resave the blank. Here:


Also, look at a turtorial for the eyes. And I can't see much shading.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 23:54, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I resized it:

[[File:Dappleresize.png]]It's going to need to be blurred a lot more to look like her other images (Dapplenose.warriorDapplenose.elder) and shading.Darkhallows 01:44, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr's blurring tool is very bad,but I'll try.Snickers 8 Days! 21:09, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

CoughUseGIMPcoughcough ;) The blurring tool is at least twice as strong as pixlr's. insane brick'd 21:39, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thats's why I don't use Pixlr... GIMP is so much better (I also have photoshop, but never use it.....)Darkhallows 23:12, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be able to get on any art program for a couple days....Dunno why.Give me ummm 4 days.Snickers 7 Days! 18:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a lot more. And the line art is messed up at the eye area. FrostHeart 03:07, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Like I said, I'll try to blur it more.Snickers 7 Days! 19:45, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Snickers 3 Days! Whoohoo! 19:46, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr is fine and is in my opinion better the GIMP once you know how to use it properly. I'll make a tutorial in a day or so showing you how. xD For the image: Blur the hgihlights some more. Γǻώήςτόŗm 17:06, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Will do.$Coolstar$ 19:50, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Needs to be blurred and smudged some more to look like her elder and warrior image, try going for a smoother effect :)DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 00:17, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Rrrr. Pixlr froze when I opened it.Not again. =( I'll keep trying to get it to work.~Blue Lightning Strikes!I'm so shocked 11:42, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded SnickersOh the simpleness of simple stuff 13:10, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye line art and I think this will be ready.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:09, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Where...Oh never mind, I see.Will do.SnickersOh the simpleness of simple stuff 21:16, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedGoldenthornEpic! 11:51, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

She's beautiful! --SkydragonRide the wind 23:31, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! *blushes* Snickers

Comments? GoldenthornEpic! 14:07, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome! Just add some more highlights! :Sunspirit 05:01, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I have highlights....Snickers!

The highlights look fine to me but the eye still bothers me. I think it's the way you colored it. It looks too big.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed eye.I had an extra white space in it, that's why it looked weird. GoldenthornEpic! 21:09, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Make the ear pink more visible. Icefall Icy Winds 22:07, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

The eye line art still isn't quite right. It looks like the pixels for the eye lash was moved up a bit. Can you try fixing that?--NightshineR 05:47, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay! I'll have it done in a few minutes.OMG...You killed It! 12:23, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded OMG...You killed It! 12:38, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the fur. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:36, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and make it smaller. I agree with Mouse, lighten the fur. Icefall Icy Winds 22:32, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

You're right, the ear pink out turned weird....ZNightsong 01:06, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ZNightsong 13:29, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Add some tail shading. I also can't see the eye color very well.Darkhallows 23:39, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ZNightsong 17:16, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be more triangular and the darker patches need blending more. -- Sandystar 12:15, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be able to work on this 'till the 27th.Please don't decline. ZNightsong 00:43, June 22, 2010 (UTC) Reuploaded Nevermind about my previous comment, I was thinking about July. ZNightsong 17:08, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur everything. Icefall Icy Winds 20:12, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ZNightsong 13:05, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit pinker.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:19, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Try and see if you can make the base color a darker color, like the warrior and elder picture TotallytawnypeltFeelin' the heat!

I disagree, the colouring looks fine to me, but the ear pink is the wrong colour as Ash said. Fix that and personally I think it's good to go. -- Sandystar 14:15, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will have to be declined (which would be a shame as it is so close to approval) -- Sandystar 14:47, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get to it in a bit. I had computer problems.ZNightsong 19:05, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any better? ZNightsong 19:34, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit more redish.—Preceding unsigned comment added by Ashshadow (talkcontribs)

it looks good Nightmask 00:28, July 3, 2010 (UTC)Nightmask Nightmask 00:28, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - This might just be my computer, but I can't see the shading very well. I know it's going to be harder to see the shading on a cat patterned like this, but on her other images I could see it a bit more. Everything else looks beautiful! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 13:00, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

I just looked at an ear pink chart and I'm pretty sure it's right. I'll work on the shading. --.Silverstar .talk 14:29, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did it help? --.Silverstar .talk 14:50, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is better but you got some color outside the lineart. The earpink still seems off to me when I look at her other images.AshshadowAg 14:57, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Compare the ear pink colour on yours to her other images. It's purplish on yours. Hers is very red. Take the colour from her warrior/elder image. ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:55, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

I just noticed the lineart thing now , and I'll work on the ear pink soon. --.Silverstar .talk 22:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed lineart and took the ear pink color from her elder image. Anything else? --.Silverstar .talk 15:42, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

To me, it seems like dirty fur, as to his other images. Make the dots slightly lighter and adjust them around. (remove or add) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:46, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not entirely sure that's necessary Frostheart... it looks fine to me. Are there any other opinions on this? --SandyTalk 14:35, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

I believe this is ready for approval. It bears semblance to the other images of the same character, it's mottled, and there's really nothing wrong with it. Are there any last comments before approval? Bramble -Hyuu~ 04:12, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the dots look almost black. They need to be lightened and it needs to be blurred a bit. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 05:02, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think that is the discussion we've just had on this image... --SandyTalk 11:00, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Aren't they supposed to be black? 17:32, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, the above comment was me, thought I was logged in. Snickers Blastoff... 17:34, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? --SandyTalk 09:29, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:31, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Pineclaw (W) - Approved

Pineclaw.warriorWith 4 discussions and 1 withdrawed, this should be under the limit. Sorry if the highlights are noticeable, somethings wrong with the pixlr highlighter right now. Frostheart 22:06, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

He needs more shading and some highlights. ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:25, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional. Darken the shading some more. --Dawnleaf 22:40, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add or brighten the highlights on his haunch and shoulder. Darken the shading, and add an earpink. EarthbenderTawny Style! 22:42, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add some ear pink User:Cherryfur123/sig 23:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Updated. I made the shading more noticeable. I tried to make the highlights more noticeable, but if I do, it looks splotched and glitchy like this.

Can someone do it for me? Frostheart 02:33, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'll add the shading for you Frostheart :) Rainear be as silent as rain

There are two images, both with different names. Rename one of these Pineclaw.warrior.png, and put it at the top. If you keep reuploading it, it will change automatically so you don't have to keep adding the image over and over again.

As for constructments, blur the ear pink. MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 02:53, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

How is the shading on this Frostheart. hope it's good Rainear be as silent as rain

Blur the earpink a bit more. Question, Frostheart, was this done in GIMP or pixlr or photoshop or My Paint or something like that? EarthbenderTawny Style! 12:58, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr. And it's great Rainear, thanks! Frostheart 15:51, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, okay. Because I myself know that Pixlr doesn't have a strong blurring. (I did my VERY first charart with Pixlr). Anyways, just blur the earpink like I said above. EarthbenderTawny Style! 17:01, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to blur the ear-pink. Frostheart 19:10, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I brought up the image in photoshop and I noticed a few things:

  • There's some color that goes out of the lineart (make the background a solid color, like yellow to be able to see.
  • The following lineart is blurred:
  • The background should be transparent, but is white (that might just be photoshop, but whatevs)

I'd help blur the earpink, but the version saved is a PNG and I can't do it without blurring the lineart :( anyways, hope this helps! EarthbenderTawny Style! 22:16, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I fixed the blurred line-art the best I could, and I fixed the color outside. Frostheart 23:56, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur the earpink a little and this will be ready. --SandyTalk 11:07, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
I Agree with Sandy just blur the ear pink Rainear Let the rain guide you
Yay! I'm so excited! Hehe. Blurred earpink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:00, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

lol Comments before approval? (This image needs naming correctly also) --SandyTalk 10:28, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Like "Pineclaw.Warrior"? I already did that, but the image said that an image already had that name, so I wasn't really sure if I should've done that. xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:54, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

That was a previously declined image; if you check the image and it is no longer needed, you can upload over it. I've moved it to the proper nam now. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:16, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, thanks. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:26, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Comments irrelevant to image; approving. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 15:23, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Coal (W) - Approved

Coal (FQ).warriorCoal as a warrior. I didn't know he was even seen as one, but it said so on his page. I don't think this is over the limit, but I may have miscounted. Hopefully not! ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 03:27, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Also, are you allowed to reserve something in current projects when you have something else up for approval? Just wondering, because I want to reserve Snooky KP. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 03:52, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, you can't reserve anything until this is approved or you withdraw.

Darken the shading. --Gοldenpelt 04:26, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Done. Did I darken it enough? ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 04:53, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

There's color outside the lineart.User:Ashshadow/Sig 12:52, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Rawr! Again? The one bad thing about GIMP. I always colour outside the lineart and fail to see it because of the grey checkered background. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 19:57, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing, as always Moss. Just darken the shading on the front side of the body. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 20:00, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Done, and done! Ha ha, there might still be colour outside the lineart because I erased the extra colour, and then Icestorm told me to darken shading, so more might have ended up on the outside, but I don't have very good eyes and I erased what I saw but there might be more. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 20:08, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hey guys! I would like to withdraw this and reserve Fallowfern as a kittypet in the current projects. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 02:09, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'll finish it for you:) I'd hate to see such a good image go to waste. I found a bit more color outside the lineart and erased them. Comments? --HAWKTALONö 14:17, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for finishing this for me. I just really wanted to reserve Fallowfern as a kittypet because I was pretty sure someone would If I didn't. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 17:06, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

On the constuctments, make the background transparent. At a certain angle, I can see it isn't. Moonflight 01:14, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

The background is transparent. --HAWKTALONö 15:34, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

The background is transparent, but if you look at the image at a certain angle (for example, when I tilt my laptop screen back a lot), you can see some more color outside of the lineart. When I opened up the image in pixlr, I couldn't see it, though. User:Icethroat21/Sig 22:44, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added transparency. --HAWKTALONö 21:03, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nope; looks great. Comments before approval? User:Icethroat21/Sig 14:47, August 15, 2010 (UTC)