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Clawface - Approved

[[File:Clawface.png]]

Nothing interesting to asy about this one. Comments? -- Dawnfeather  21:22, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

What do you mean, nothing to say about Clawface? HE KILLED SPOTTEDLEAF!!! -Sparrowwing talk

So?

Anyway, I really like this Dawnfeather.-- Darkhallows  Lair 23:38, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I'd like to claw his face for killing Spottedleaf. I like the texture...ish...ness...:P -- Goldencloud  00:14, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Slow down a little, Dawn. :) We're over 25 now, I'm getting a little nervous. But your image looks great, and I'll echo Goldencloud on the cool texturizing. Comments before approval, members? --Bramble My Realm 03:20, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Bramble! I'll try and make worse images from now on so they take longer to be approved. :P I said 'nothing much to say about him' because i too hate him for killing Spottedleaf. I didn't want to honour him with having a description. Anything i can do to make him better? -- Dawnfeather  07:31, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

It's okay. :) I meant the number of images you had up, not the number you had apporved, why would I want that decreased? But the image looks awesome, I don't think there's anything wrong with it. Good job! --Bramble My Realm 21:41, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


I know what you meant - what i meant was if I take longer to get images approved i won't post so many will I? lol. -- Dawnfeather  23:33, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Anymore comments before approval?  Sandy Talk! 12:43, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved  Sandy Talk! 13:15, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Tumblekit - Approved

[[File:Tumblekit.png]]

Okay, back to the kits, lol. Comments?  Sandy Talk! 11:15, 10 June 2009 (UTC)


really good, except some of the tabby markings are bothering me, the ones with a 'y' in them ,especially. -- Dawnfeather  13:36, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I removed the 'y' markings on the image and I tried blending them slightly on the second image to see if it looked any better. Comments?  Sandy Talk! 14:44, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

He's really cute, but I liked the tabby markings better before they were blended. Can you sharpen them a little? Or alter the other one to match Dawn's suggestion. --Bramble My Realm 15:40, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

I did alter them but it won't show... I've uploaded twice now and they still won't show on the first image.  Sandy Talk! 15:43, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Strange... --Bramble My Realm 16:00, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I messed with the files and then it decides to change. Better?  Sandy Talk! 10:21, 11 June 2009 (UTC)


Awwww! So cute! Isn't he the one who died from the twoleg liquid? (P.s--> I think he is ready for approval) -- Dawnfeather  10:52, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

That actually could be, right age, same timing; wow, never occurred to me before. On the image, I think it looks great. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 15:37, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I think he could have more chin shading, btu otherwise, it's good. By the way, I use the "jagged y" tabby markings because they're on the cats that Kitsufox approved, and she knows more about art than I do. --Mallinois Herding Talk 00:09, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay I reuploaded with more neck shading. (I know Mal; I use them mostly because of that very same reason but I couldn't get them to look right for him...)  Sandy Talk! 08:58, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Sandy Talk! 18:05, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments before approval?  Sandy Talk! 12:59, 13 June 2009 (UTC)


I'll second that, any more comments until approval? --Mallinois Herding Talk 14:32, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

(lol, I'm impatient and Bramble had alreday written it so I just brought it to the bottom of the page again)  Sandy Talk! 14:40, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments; approved. --Bramble My Realm 19:20, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Rosekit- Approved

[[File:Rosekit2.png]] I used the same shading as I did with Blossom. I wanted her to be long-haired, and a a nice looking image... but my GIMP froze and I lost it. Soo I have this. The whole 'dark cream' thing was confusing- Cream is a diluted ginger (I think) so dark cream would be similar to light ginger? Whatever, here she is.-- Darkhallows  Lair 19:45, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

I love her!!! But she could use some more shading inder the head, and between the front legs. ;) Nice work!!! --MUMBLE785 19:55, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Haha I just noticed we both reserved Rosekit. :) You reserved her first, and got her uploaded first, so I'll let you have it. Mine looks waaaaay different than yours. Yours is a lot lighter, and I didn't put any tabby markings. I imagined dark cream as being more of a rosy ginger color. Yours looks more like a smoky pale brown. But maybe that's just me. Also try making the tabby markings less saturated, they look kind of odd against the diluted fur. Do I sound harsh? I don't mean to... -- Goldencloud  22:46, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Cream is a real color in cats. It's like a diluted ginger tabby. I agree that the color isn't perfect tough. I'll try and fix that.-- Darkhallows  Lair 02:09, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Made her more red. -- Darkhallows  Lair 02:29, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks better now. I know about the whole cream thing, I had just pictured "rose"kit as being slightly more reddish. The only thing I suggest is maybe making the stripes less orange. But if it doesn't look good then you don't have to. It just still looks...funny to me. -- Goldencloud  03:44, 10 June 2009 (UTC)


Her body is on an angle, which is why the tabby stripes look funny. Her right, our left, tabby markings should be shorter, and her other side tabby markings should probably be a teansy bit longer. -- Dawnfeather 

Once again this may be my computer but can you make sure the background's transparent as it's showing up black right now. I like the colour but I think there are too many tabby markings on her sides and they're way too close together and kind of... bright.  Sandy Talk! 09:11, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

The background is transparent, I never edit the bg... so I don't know whats up with that. || I made a new version, same shading. Is that one better? -- Darkhallows  Lair 06:02, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I love the second version Shade! That is dark cream if I ever saw it. The only thing I see is the eyes on the second are kind of dark, make them a bit lighter. --Bramble My Realm 15:52, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Eye color changed.-- Darkhallows  Lair 22:56, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

This looks really great! Any more comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 08:35, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


It might just be me, but it seems like the eyes are blurred a little bit, and there are faint lines where the tabby markings used to be. -- Dawnfeather  07:07, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Used to be? I started a whole new image so I'm not sure what you mean? There are very faint tabby stripes...

But I will fix the eye.-- Darkhallows  Lair 07:17, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Oh, right! Could you make the tabby markings on our right a bit shorter, because she is on an angle to us. -- Dawnfeather  23:49, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Better?-- Darkhallows  Lair 06:30, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


Yes. I think that this is ready for approval. -- Dawnfeather  06:54, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Any comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 12:58, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Bramble My Realm 16:30, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Tigerclaw - Approved

[[File:Tigerclaw.warrior.3.png]]

Yay! The ultimate villain! I did him as a warrior when i realised that no one else had. What do you think of my ultimate crazy guy? -- Dawnfeather  21:19, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

The tabby markings are great, but can you make them more pronounced? I can barely see them. Awesome work though. :) --Bramble My Realm 21:58, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Amazing as usual! The only thing is is that Tigerclaw has a V shape in his ear, and a scar across the bridge of his nose. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 22:26, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I agree, he looks amazing! It seems that Bramble and Mosswisker have already covered everything. Also I don't know if this makes any sense, but have you tried shading the eye? (like how I do on mine) It would just make his eye a little more interesting, rather that just being the one shade of amber. -- Goldencloud  23:53, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I fixed the ear, added a scar (I hope it's okay), and changed the eye. What do you think? -- Dawnfeather  07:27, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

This looks really beautiful Dawn  Sandy Talk! 09:02, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't think you changed the stripes, but the added scar and vshaped ear look really cool. --Bramble My Realm 21:41, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Awesome job on the V and stripes! *highfives* Although I have to agree with Bramble on this one; it looks as though you didn't change the stripes. You did color Millie, didn't you? Try doing your stripes like that, but don't have them connect together (if that makes any sence...) Mosswisker&Stealthfire 23:19, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


Oh sorry! I missed the bit about the stripes. I burnt over the stripes but not the not-stripes. Is it better? -- Dawnfeather  23:40, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Much better, Dawnfeather. I'm in love with that eye, now! Maybe darken the stripes a tad bit more, then he should be good to go! -- Goldencloud  23:32, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

I burnt over them again. What do you say now? -- Dawnfeather  23:41, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Perfect! I think, anyway. -- Goldencloud  01:41, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

I can't see anything wrong with it. 24 hours starting now. GB57 04:30, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble My Realm 16:28, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Onewhisker - Approved

[[File:Onewhisker.warrior.png]]
Until we get the blanks, I thought the leaders deserved some kind of character art. So here's Onewhisker. I actually loved this guy until he turned into Onestar. I wasn't sure how to do "mottled tabby", so I did a few tabby marks with tiny spots dispersed throughout. If anyone has any suggestions, don't be shy! -- Goldencloud  18:42, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

EDIT1 I lightened him a little bit, and took out some of his mini-spots. -- Goldencloud  23:21, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
EDIT2 Added a few more tabby marks. Plus I blended the muzzle into the rest of the pelt and added some light brown dots for texture. -- Goldencloud  17:10, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
EDIT3 Switched pupil and highlight pixels, and tweaked the ear color. -- Goldencloud  23:09, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

I dunno about your question, but Onewhisker looks awesome!!! --MUMBLE785 20:47, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Mumble! (do you mind me calling you that?) -- Goldencloud  23:03, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Love the texture! But I think you can make him more light brown. But (I dont know if this is right, Its from CoTc) but he may have white tabby stripes.Sandwich989 22:26, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! I was wondering about that too. I looked him up in CotC and noticed the white striped-ness, and was going to change it, but there are some mistakes in CotC, and the books never mentioned anything about white, so I just left it. I'll make him lighter, though. -- Goldencloud  23:03, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Goldencloud... I think we need to ban you on the basis that you need to make art that isn't so good! Well done! May get rid of a tesnsy bit of the texture, and add a bit more shading though. -- Dawnfeather  22:48, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Actually, I think you're the one who should be banned, not me. :) Thanks a bunch, though! I'll flush a few of the dots down the toilet. Do you mean make the shading darker? I used the same shading layer I did for Hazeltail. -- Goldencloud  23:03, 10 June 2009 (UTC)


I love it. The thing is that the muzzle doesn't really match. Maybe add some texture or more shading to it?-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:33, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
Do you think you could add a few more tabby stripes, like in your Heathertail image? He only has about four that I can see. And what Darkhallows said. Other than that, I'm echoing Dawnfeather here. :) Oh, Goldencloud, when you post, do you think you could do it in one section? It just makes it easier to find and read and it also takes up less space. --Bramble My Realm 15:42, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Alright, I'll try that. Sorry about the whole posting thing, I'm just used to deviantART still. I'll keep that in mind! -- Goldencloud  17:10, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I finally remember what this remings me of, a marble! Sandwich989 19:31, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - AMAZING. You should make a guide for coloring blanks. No really, you should. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 23:05, 11 June 2009 (UTC)


Sandwich lol you're right he kind of does look like a marble!
Mosswisker Thanks! Really? I have no idea how I would do it, or I'd be happy to. Any suggestions?
(is it okay how I posted this?) -- Goldencloud  23:47, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Yep. That works great. I like the added number of stripes, he looks great now. The only tiny thing is that his eyes somehow look odd to me. Could you try maybe switching the pupil with the white pixel? If it looks bad we can switch back. --Bramble My Realm 03:04, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Mumble! (do you mind me calling you that?) Your welcome! And no, I don't mind. ;) --MUMBLE785 21:15, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - All you'd have to do is explain, step-by-step somewhere (Maybe on your lookup if possible) how you make them. For example: First, I find a picture of a cat that looks the the charature I'm drawing... ect. You also could take screenies and post them (Prt Scrm Sys Rq) and do it like that. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 23:14, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


Okay, you just need to try the eye like Bramble suggested and I alao think the ear pink needs to be more visible  Sandy Talk! 12:58, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Mumble Okay then, Mumble!
Mosswisker Alright...I get what you're saying. I can try to do something like that. :)
Sandy Done!
 Goldencloud  23:09, 13 June 2009 (UTC)


Is there anything else? -- Goldencloud  04:23, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't think so, he looks magnifique! :) (I was talking to one of my French friends) Anyway, any comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 19:22, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Bramble lol Merci!  Goldencloud  00:16, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved  Sandy Talk! 07:56, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Crowfrost - Approved

[[File:Crowfrost.warrior.png]]

I decided to colour a warrior as I haven't done one in a while :)  Sandy Talk! 13:49, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Oooh, Sandy, love your new sig. :) I think the shading on the black part of the pelt is too dark and distinct. Maybe lighten and blend it a little bit? --Bramble My Realm 13:55, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Thank you Bramble; I was getting bored of the old one :) I've lightened the shading as much as possible and blended it more. I also remembered to make the background transparent! [I always forget that]  Sandy Talk! 14:05, 8 June 2009 (UTC)


Sorry! Every time we try to edit the main page, the computer freezes. /sob/ Mosswisker&Stealthfire 14:09, 8 June 2009 (UTC)


Sandy - the new image had to be saved a a jpeg, while the old one was a gif. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 14:11, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Sorry... I'm blind. I sorted it for you :)  Sandy Talk! 14:14, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay, now that's sorted, any more comments on Crowfrost? lol  Sandy Talk! 14:33, 8 June 2009 (UTC)
The shading still doesn't look right to me.--Warrior 16:26, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I said I wouldn't post again today... but where exactly and in what way Warrior?  Sandy Talk! 16:33, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I blended the shading right into the pelt in an attempt to make it less... wrong  Sandy Talk! 16:39, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Extend the white pelt over the eye. It looks odd to have it stop right at the eye, or at least to me. --Bramble My Realm 22:45, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I messed around with the patches on the head and I think this looks better  Sandy Talk! 12:14, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Blend the white by his head a bit. I can see a distinct line beyond the original blurring. --Bramble My Realm 16:15, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Sandy Talk! 10:31, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments?  Sandy Talk! 17:39, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


No, this is good! -- Dawnfeather  04:27, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Dawn  Sandy Talk! 13:36, 13 June 2009 (UTC)


Look under his ear, there's a bold black line that needs blurring so It won't be seen. --Mallinois Herding Talk 14:34, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

...That's the lineart - are you sure it should be blurred?  Sandy Talk! 14:37, 13 June 2009 (UTC)


No, it shouldn't. It's the line art. Keep it as it is. I think that this is ready for approval. -- Dawnfeather  23:15, 13 June 2009 (UTC)



No, look, it's under the lineart, and it's curved in the opposite direction. Look closely. --Mallinois Herding Talk 15:02, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

I still didn't get what you meant but I blurred under his ears and the rest of his head for good measure! Is it better now?  Sandy Talk! 17:43, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

No curved black streaks that I can see. :) I think he looks great. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Approved (I think, the time on my computer is screwed up :/)-- Darkhallows  Lair 09:14, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Rowanclaw - Approved

[[File:Rowanclaw.warrior.4.png]]

The most gender confused cat in history. lol. What do you think? -- Dawnfeather  21:20, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

lol Poor poor Rowanclaw...he needs psychological help. I think he looks alright! I like your new tabby stripe style. -- Goldencloud  00:13, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


He's ginger, and this is a brown color. --Mallinois Herding Talk 00:24, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


I tried to make him both pale ginger and a realistic colour at the same time. Is it okay? Goldencloud - thanks! -- Dawnfeather  07:29, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

I do think he needs to be slightly more ginger as Mal said. Not fluro orange ginger but a bit darker!  Sandy Talk! 08:49, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Is the colour better now? -- Dawnfeather  13:12, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

much. I really like this :)  Sandy Talk! 17:37, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Is there anything else i can do? -- Dawnfeather  12:52, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

The only thing I can spot is that the ear pink is barely distinguishable from the pelt. If you could make it more pronounced without making it stand out sharply, that'd be great. --Bramble My Realm 19:24, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


I think, personally, the problem is more that it is hard to get a realistic colour that is see-able. I made it lighter, if that helps. -- Dawnfeather  06:51, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Well, I can see the ear pink now and I really can't see anything else wrong. 24 hours starting now  Sandy Talk! 08:21, 16 June 2009 (UTC)


None, approved.-- Darkhallows  Lair 09:18, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Whitewater - Approved

[[File:Whitewater.warrior.png]]

Not much to say on this one. I tried to make her look blind in the one eye by making it sort of a pale blue with a pale pupil, but I'm not sure it worked. Comments for improvement? --Bramble My Realm 19:47, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Beautiful! For the eye, I sugest making it very, very pale blue, like it has a glaze over it. Love the shading, by the way. :) Mosswisker&Stealthfire 20:12, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

I would suggest what M&S said. Make the eye a very pale shade of blue. GB57 23:45, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


Akso make the pupil a pale shade of a dark color. --Mallinois Timberwolves inc. 12:24, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, made the eye a very pale blue, and the pupil sort of pale dark gray(if that makes sense). Anything else I can do? --Bramble My Realm 16:23, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

This looks great, Bramble. :)--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 23:54, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

It does look great. I think the only think is to maybe add a bit of shading on the top of the head (if there already is some then it's not showing up very well). Apart from that this is ready  Sandy Talk! 08:25, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and put more shading on head and put some more on the back and leg for good measure. :) Anything else? --Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

This is great Bramble. Any more comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 12:22, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved  Sandy Talk! 17:44, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Lionheart - Approved

[[File:Lionheart.warrior.1.png]]

Lionheart, the brave warrior. -- Dawnfeather  09:42, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

-0- I can't think of anything bad about it.

Whoever said that I agree. Wowza. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

It's good. But wait till tomorrow. Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 02:44, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

24 hours is guaranteed, if that's what you meant, Misty. --Bramble My Realm 02:50, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

That's what I meant, thanks. {Not in GB's mean voice ;)} I said that cause it was 11.00 here when I typed it in. Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 22:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Mistyfur, lay off GB please or take it elsewhere. No comments; approved  Sandy Talk! 18:00, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Boulder - Approved

Here is our first attempt at a character image. Critisism welcome! We think the shading turned out pretty good. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 01:47, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

[[File:Boulder.elder.png]]


It's pretty good for a first image. However it needs more shading, and then the shading needs to be blended in.-- Darkhallows  Lair 02:16, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Alright, we fixed the shading (we think) , though we're still having trouble blurring it. Any suggestions? Mosswisker&Stealthfire 03:39, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Use the tool that looks like a teardrop. If you do not have this tool, go to www.pixlr.com -- Dawnfeather  10:31, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

As well as blending the shading you need to incresae the amount on the belly/tail  Sandy Talk! 13:37, 8 June 2009 (UTC)


Thanks a bunch for the website! It helped so much! So, here's our blurred image.


[Edited to put this under the right section and repeat image deleted. Also please sign with 4 ~s]  Sandy Talk! 14:05, 8 June 2009 (UTC)


Okay, now my comment! You only need to upload the image to this page once and if you've uploaded a new version it will show automatically. I can't see any changes yet though; have you actually uploaded the new version?  Sandy Talk! 14:09, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Sorry about the image thing - I didn't notice that. I changed it on here so the new one will show up. Sorry again. I swear I'm blind! I was trying to do a lot at once :)  Sandy Talk! 14:14, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

The image looks...fuzzy, and the shading isn't blended enough.--Warrior 16:30, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I reduced the blurriness a bit. I’ll work on it some more later tonight/tomorrow. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 20:57, 8 June 2009 (UTC)


You sharpened it... not blurred. Either that, or it's from being a jpeg. Try using .PNG-- Darkhallows  Lair 21:15, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I blurred the shadows as much as I could...does it seem better now? Mosswisker&Stealthfire 00:16, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Alright, anything else I can fix? Something is still bothering me about this picture. Should I put in highlights? (And how do I do that on pixlr, anyways?) Mosswisker&Stealthfire 19:18, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

The iris looks grey, it needs to be some color. On highlights, I don't use pixlr, so you'll have to wait for someone who does to comment. Other than that, I think this is pretty good. Oh, and do you want to officially join the project? I can add you in on the main page as warriors. --Bramble My Realm 16:24, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

The eyes are actually blue. We'll try to increase the brightness of them and see if that helps. Also, we would appreciate offically joining the project. We left a request on Gorse's talk page, but he hasn't responded. Thank you! Mosswisker&Stealthfire 17:01, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

On pixlr, to make highlights click on the Dodge Tool(it looks like a black ball at an end of a stick), or press O on your keyboard. Run the tool along just in front of the shading; you'll mouse will look like a regular brush then.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 17:49, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks for the Dodge tool! I don't think I'll bother with highlights right now, but I'm planning to do another image and I'll try it on there. I also increased the eye color as best I could without it looking...unatural. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 20:18, 10 June 2009 (UTC)


Okay, I need to start commenting on images to see what's really wrong. First off, Boulder is a tabby, so you'll need tabby markings. Also the shading by the hind leg that visible is smudged into the lineart, and a few more spots still look sharpened, try getting rd of them with natural color. --Mallinois Herding Talk 01:47, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

(M&S) - Boulder's not a tabby - he's a skinny gray tom. Look at the allegainces in an older book or his lookup. You should never use Cats of the Cans as a reference. (Although the pictures in there do look awesome.) Mosswisker&Stealthfire 16:14, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

(M&S) - We fixed the blurred lineart. (...We think...) And "a few more spots" isn't very specific. Where, exactly do you mean? Mosswisker&Stealthfire 16:23, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Can you make the ear color a bit darker? It looks unnatural.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 17:09, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I darkened the ear pink - look any better? Mosswisker&Stealthfire 22:42, 11 June 2009 (UTC)


About the tabby markings, I though before he became old, he was a silver tabby tom... *runs to check* Yep, I grabbed A Dangerous Path, and in the allegiances, it says: Boulder-silver tabby tom, formerly a rouge cat. --Mallinois Herding Talk 00:44, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Ohh! It seems he's one of those cats who's all confused about their color. Who thinks I should add tabby markings? (Post below) And they might have only showed up when he was younger or something. o_O Mosswisker&Stealthfire 23:24, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Nah, I really think that you should put in the tabby markings. It seems unlikely that they would dissapear as he got older. -- Dawnfeather  02:57, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - LOOKIT MY SORRY EXCUSE FOR TABBY MARKINGS! xD. So yea, I used Swallowtail for an exaple(Hope you don't mind Bramble. :3) Mosswisker&Stealthfire 19:02, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Oh yea, I also forgot to make the background transparent. (Although I though I did...) Can someone please tell me how to do that on Pixlr? Thank you! Mosswisker&Stealthfire 19:08, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


Those are good markings, but try blurring them a bit more. --Mallinois Timberwolves 22:46, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

(M)_- Blurred tabby markings. I also shortened the ones on the front leg. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 23:53, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

I like him better with tabby markings but I think you now need to increase the shading all over  Sandy Talk! 08:18, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I fixed the shading! ...I think. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 20:20, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

I like your tabby markings (I don't mind you used my technique :). The only thing I see left is that the hind leg curve looks odd without shading, so add that in, and then make the eye a bit more pronounced blue color, as it blends sort of into the gray pelt. This is a great pic, though, guys. Good job! --Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

(M&S) - Thankies! ^_^ I brightened the eye and added haunch shading. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 17:02, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

I think it's ready for approval. -- Darkhallows  Lair 09:10, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks, but the background's not transparent yet. As mentioned above, can somebody please show me how to do this on pixlr? Please! I'm not ashamed of begging! Mosswisker&Stealthfire 20:38, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

I made it transparent for you (I can teach you if you like) and changed the file format to png which is the suggested format. I also renamed the file to fit in with the other approved images. [Your other image is still on the wiki though under the original name) Hope that makes sense. Any comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 21:04, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks a bunch! And yes, I would love to learn how to make the images transparent. And I'll save future cats as a PNG file. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 15:43, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

No further comments; approved. Nice work M&S  Sandy Talk! 18:30, 19 June 2009 (UTC)


[[File:Boulder.elder.png]]

New version on left.

(M) - I feel sorry for Boulder because he was my first image I ever did for PCA. xP

I redid his tabby markings as classic (The old style was fine, but the markings were messy and didn't mach my current style.) I also put the shading in the right places and made it visable, and got rid of the smuded lineart. I aslo changed the ear pink (You wouldn't see it all in this pose.) Comments?

Maybe lighten the sahding. It looks really dark right now. Mossflight 18:46, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Mossflight, lighten up the shading, its a little too dark now! -- ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ  Peacesong's Talk 19:40, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

O.O Lighten the shading like Mossflight said, for I agree that the shading is way to dark. Very good though. --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 15:32, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Could somebody that has Photoshop lighten the shading? There's no lighten shading tool in Pixlr, and my computer discarded my unshaded version. If there's a way to lighten the shading on pixlr, could you tell me please? Thank you! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:01, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

I don't have photoshop, sadly, but I think if you run the dodge tool over it a few times it should lighten it. ^^--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 00:10, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

I tried... I don't know if it worked though. --Bramble My Realm 03:01, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Aww, thanks Bramble! *nuzzles you* It definately helped. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:32, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I fixed the white pixel on the paw, fixed some blurred lineart, and changed the highlight on the cheek because it was bothering me. Anything else I need to change? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 15:38, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

I don't know, the shading still looks really dark. - Skyfeather '95 00:55, 1 September 2009 (UTC)

Yeah i agree with Skyfeather1995, the shadign is still pretty dark, and could you blur the pink in the ear a little more?ღ Sunny ღ 16:37, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Ack! Sorry guys, school is eating up my time. *Headwall* Anyways, thanks for the tip Warrior♥! I tried that and I think it helped. I also changed the highlight on the haunch (Basically got rid of it, actually) and blurred the ear pink with the hardness on zero - I think it helped, but this is definatley the most blurred it's gonning to get. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:40, September 2, 2009 (UTC)

If the shading is still too dark, I can lighten it a bit in PS5, if you'd like? Overall it looks much better than the original, though. Good work! (:--Quiet!... 03:23, September 3, 2009 (UTC)

I think this looks great now :) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:40, September 3, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Could you do that Quietstep? I think it's still a smidge too dark on the paws, belly, and chest, but the dodge tool won't lighten it anymore for some reason. O_o Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:53, September 3, 2009 (UTC)

All you needs to do is to lighten up the shading right above the tail where the legs join.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 13:40, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

[[File:Boulder_elder_3.png]] This good?--Quiet!... 20:04, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

That's good in my opinion :) Further suggestions before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:29, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks Quietstep! That was exactly what I was trying to do. :) I uploaded your version over my old to save space on the wiki. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:47, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:49, September 6, 2009 (UTC)

Sootfur - Approved

[[file: sootfur.PNG]] Nothing much to say. Excuse my inactivity, I've had tons of stuff to do.-- Darkhallows  Lair 21:01, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Nice. But his ears look circular. And I mean the pink part. Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 21:44, 16 June 2009 (UTC)


I love the shading! I think he could be a little bit darker. Maybe just burn over him once or twice. -- Dawnfeather  08:56, 17 June 2009 (UTC)


Maybe make the ear pink look more triangle-ish? Looks good, otherwise. :)--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 21:27, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Darkened him, and changed the ear pink. Anything else?-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:46, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Approvalling please! (I love making up words for my own convinience) -- Dawnfeather  09:47, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 17:59, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved  Sandy Talk! 18:37, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Leafpool - Approved

[[File:Leafpool.medcat.2.png]]

Here is my Leafpool. What do you think? -- Dawnfeather  22:39, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


near the middle of the chest, the shading splits into a v-shape. --Mallinois Timberwolves 22:42, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Wait- are her eyes yellow? I thought they were amber? Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 23:52, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


Yellow and amber are very similar. Sorry Mallinois, but I don't see what you mean. Can you explain in more detail? -- Dawnfeather  06:44, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

I think I see what Mal is saying (if I'm wrong then sorry...). From where the muzzle is there is a line of white stretching down to the chest spliting the shading in a kind of 'V' shape. Also, where the foreleg shading connects to the chest shading there is astrange shape made by the shading that needs smoothing out. You know I love this image Dawn :) Sandy Talk! 08:28, 16 June 2009 (UTC)


Sorry, i still don't understand. One of those things that are just half impossible to explain! -- Dawnfeather  09:36, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Well, I don't really know how to explain Mallinois' thing properly as I'm not sure I even understood it properly myself. What I was saying is that above the near foreleg where you have the shading, this is connected in a thin line to the chest shading leaving a triangular gap - you need to round this off and make the gap less triangular as it looks strange.  Sandy Talk! 13:16, 16 June 2009 (UTC)


The shading seems alright to me, but she looks more ginger than brown.-- Darkhallows  Lair 20:49, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

She actually sort of does.. make the pelt a bit more brownish and then add some tabby markings on her foreleg to balance it out a bit. --Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? -- Dawnfeather  08:54, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

The shading looks better now she's a darker colour.  Sandy Talk! 11:41, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Seeing as there have been no more comments for two days I'm gonna give 24 hours for comments before approval  Sandy Talk! 09:34, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments; approved  Sandy Talk! 20:48, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Kinkfur - Approved

Kinkfur.warrior

I wanted a challenge and she certainly was more difficult that your average cat! I think she turned out quite nice though, comments?  Sandy Talk! 12:54, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

I like your idea with the back and tail, it's just in the tail, some are chunks taken out of the tail, and they don't look right. I think that you should also edit the ones on the chest to make them more pointy. The tabby markings need to be bigger and thicker, and she needs darker and bigger shading on the chest and some other areas. Wow, that must have been hard to do! -- Dawnfeather  13:32, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

I fixed the tail and the chest lineart, thickened the markings by one pixel and increased the shading. It wasn't that hard, just more time consuming than usual  Sandy Talk! 15:23, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

This is great! When you first said you wanted to do Kinkfur, I remember thinking, "How in StarClan does she plan to do her?" You've done a wonderful job at pulling off the kinky-ness. I give you a round of applause! -- Goldencloud  23:23, 13 June 2009 (UTC)


There is still a chunk out of the top of the tail. Don't forget about the tabby markings and shading *see above for my opinion on those.* -- Dawnfeather  23:48, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Goldencloud :) Dawnfeather - I'll sort the end of the tail but I did thicken the tabby markings and add more shading  Sandy Talk! 17:38, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


REUPLOADED I sorted the tail but I really am not sure what exactly you want me to do with the markings and shading  Sandy Talk! 08:43, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Looks awesome! But the tabby markings look very...well, sharp. Maybe try blurring them a bit...?--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 00:03, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Will do. I'm in the process of making them thicker for Dawn but I was almost finished and my cp erased my edit and I can't get them back so I need to start again from the saved version. It'll be done soon  Sandy Talk! 07:59, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I made all the tabby markings thicker again, added more shading and blurred the markings as little as was possible in order to retain clarity. Any more comments for improvement?  Sandy Talk! 12:11, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

As said before, I love the way you did the fur. I think maybe you could lighten the shading, as it's now very dark. The tabby markings look pretty good, but some more need to be added on the spots there aren't any, like the middle of the hind leg curve and a bit on the torso. --Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED taking all comments into account  Sandy Talk! 12:18, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Anything else??  Sandy Talk! 19:18, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Sand. No, I don't think there's anything else. Any further comments? 24 hours starting now. --Bramble My Realm 20:20, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Bramble My Realm 22:10, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Poppydawn - Approved

Poppydawn.elder

I made her muzzle grayish because she is very old. -- Dawnfeather  03:30, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Looks good to me. I hate Longtail! He's the reason she's dead! Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 12:39, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Actually that was mainly Darkstripe's influence... anyways the image looks great, Dawn. Again, I see nothing wrong with it. Your tabby stripes look really cool. I personally think this could be approved now. --Bramble My Realm 17:21, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

I agree. This is great Dawn, as usual :) Any further comments before approval in 24?  Sandy Talk! 19:47, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Approved; no comments  Sandy Talk! 14:19, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Plesae can whoever sees this upload her image onto her page as my cp crashes every time I try. Thanks  Sandy Talk! 14:28, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry - I forced it to obey lol. Archiving :)  Sandy Talk! 15:03, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Yellowfang - Approved

[[File:Yellowfang.png]] I didn't flatten her face because it looked RIDICULUS when I tried. But here she is.-- Darkhallows  Lair 21:42, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Her look red Dark Hollows. Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 21:58, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

?? She looks red?...-- Darkhallows  Lair 22:12, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

The eyes do. Also, the bottom part of the herbs are almost black! -- Dawnfeather  23:18, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

I love the texture! She looks so pretty! -- Goldencloud  23:21, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Opps, forgot to type 'eyes'. And, the herbs are really black. Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 23:53, 13 June 2009 (UTC)


Lightened eye and herbs.-- Darkhallows  Lair 04:41, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


Use the lighten tool on the top part of the herbs so it looks like the sun is hitting them, such as the shadows hit them on the bottom. --Mallinois Herding Talk 15:06, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


Done.-- Darkhallows  Lair 20:44, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

The three lighted parts sort of look like she's being hit with three spotlights. Could you darken them a tad and then blend them some more? Other than that she looks exactly how I pictured her to look. --Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Better?-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:42, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
It still looks like what it did before... -_- Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 20:22, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
Um no. It doesn't :/. Click on the image and see the past uploads.-- Darkhallows  Lair 07:44, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
I mean, it looks like the (as I think Bramble said =/\.) that is still kinda has spotlights? Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 01:53, 20 June 2009 (UTC)


Does she look any better? -- Darkhallows  Lair 06:28, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

I think she looks fine. The highlights are definitely blended better, and less bright. Does anyone else have anything? --Bramble My Realm 21:17, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Looks good to me! Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 12:31, 21 June 2009 (UTC)


She looks kinda blackish instead of dark gray--Paramore Freak Nightgaze 00:44, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Dodged over her a few times.-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:05, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Nice work Darkhallows! Anything else before approval in 24?  Sandy Talk! 14:09, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved  Sandy Talk! 11:52, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

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