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Onion (Ro)- Approved

Onion.rogueSecond charart! this is like a fail though... Mossy I fight to live I live to fight!


Looks good! I think you should make the silver parts darker, though. They look very pale gray- almost white. And maybe make the ear pink bigger. It's a little small. ♫ mosspool ♫22:27, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED :3 did what you saidMossy I fight to live I live to fight!

Good! Sharpen the black patches. (If you use pixlr, I'm not sure if they have an option to do that but they should) ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:58, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED okey dokey x3 Mossy I fight to live I live to fight!

Lighten the ear pink and lighten the shading on the paws, otherwise, very nice! SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 06:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED done :) anything else? Mossy I fight to live I live to fight!

Make the ear pink more trianglular. Dawnleaf 19:20, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED fixed :) anything else?Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 13:56, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I think you could afford to sharpen the patches some more. They're a little too blurred. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 20:16, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is he supposed to be black and white? The white needs to be lightened.  Darkhallows...Mew? 21:22, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Onion is silver and black, not white, so I think that the color is fine, but the ear pink needs to be more of a reddish color rather than pink. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 03:36, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED i re-did the whole image because the sharpen tool hates me for some reason xD but i think it looks better now but thats for you guys to decide.Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 18:59, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I suggest making the earpink more reddish then pinkish. Dawnleaf 20:14, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED x3 did that :) anything else?Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 22:08, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should blur the transitions more. oblivionAudience? 04:20, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED fixed :) anything else? :3Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 16:48, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

De-saturate the earpink. It looks too bright now. oblivionAudience? 22:03, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED done anything else? :3Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 22:10, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish--nightshine 00:31, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED fixed x3Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 01:16, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Good! She looks fine now :DoblivionAudience? 01:23, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thank yew x3Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 03:56, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stomach shading and blur the gray transistion. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:51, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED fixed anything else? :)Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 14:47, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful. Well done for only your second. Comments before approval? --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:00, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble -Hyuu~ 18:22, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Frecklewish (A) - Approved

Frecklewish.apprenticeHere you go. A terrible Frecklepaw. Yay. :3 Construcments? ♥Icestorm★ 01:15, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes are rather hard to see. Darken them a bit. --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 01:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are too light, darken the shading. SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 06:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and highlights. Clarrissa!My talkpage! 11:46, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, i thought I had Frecklewish up for approval. I reserved it before you and had it up for approval before you......River storm 14:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

No Riverstorm you have her as a Medicine cat apprentice this is her as a regular apprentice.As for the image define the stripes more other than that its wonderful :)Mossy I fight to live I live to fight!

OMG I'm so sorry Icestorm! *hits self on head* I must be going blind!! Anyways, as an apology gift, I'll tell you what to do...I agree with Mossy, i'd say just define the stripes. River storm 15:40, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back leg farthest from up :) -- Cherryfur 23:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The mottle spots sort of look whitish. I think you could afford to make them darker. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 21:35, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the spots and stripes. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 11:45, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Lol, Riverstorm, it's okay. :) Anyways, I re-did the stripes and mottles and removed the highlights and added new ones. It was IMPOSSIBLE to do. :P ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:50, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a tiny bit.AshshadowNo really? 17:42, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Add a white spot on the eye. Moonflight 17:45, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the ear pink fine and it's a perfect hue right now, and the eye already has a white spot. This looks beautiful; nice job, Ice. Comments before approval? --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:02, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I added it, but I forgot to say reuploaded. *facepalm* And thanks, Bramble. It means a lot to me. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 19:16, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

No problem, Ice. Approved. Bramble -Hyuu~ 18:22, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Snooky (KP) - Approved

Snooky.kittypet I counted and this should be under the limit. I hope I named the image right, because I wasn't sure if his current name is Snooky or Snookthorn (I love the name Snookthorn). I'm pretty proud of this image, but I'm not sure if the black patches are dark enough in some places. Comments and suggestions? IcethroatHappyHolidays! 14:31, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

You're right about the black patches. Darken them a bit where the highlights are.AshshadowNo really? 14:40, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened them, but I don't think that the changes are showing yet. Let me know if they don't show, and I'll try uploading again. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 14:54, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't know why, but I had to upload again for the changes to show. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 22:17, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the patches. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:32, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
This is nice, but I think the eyes are neonish. It looks like he sees through the dark, wait cats DO see through the dark. OOps —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sunfrost (talkcontribs)
I'll get to blurring the patches soon, but the eyes are the exact same color as they are on another of my kittypet images, Jacques. (For the unsigned thing, I'm pretty sure that's who it was, but if not please let me know.) IcethroatHappyHolidays! 14:09, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. He looks pale gray-and-black. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 15:19, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? Not sure if I lightened the shading enough or not. Also, this is sort of random, but as of today I've been a member of the wiki for a year (that's why my sig is like my old ones, just a little revamped). IcethroatHappyHolidays! 17:19, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should darken the ear pink. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:26, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Congratulations on one year, Icethroat. =) That makes me feel a little less old. =p Anyhow, I believe the ear pink color is fine as it is - you know, perhaps we should have an official chart that has an ear pink for a certain basic color so we don't keep debating on the ear pink color and it would be easier to add. Maybe I should make a discussion on that.. anyhow, comments before approval? --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:27, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble -Hyuu~ 18:22, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Misha (R)~ Approved

Misha.rogueOkay, I counted 3 times and this is the 35th, since one image is being approved, but someone please tell me if this is over the limit. Anyways, comments? Oh and I made her eyes green, unless does it say her eye color? TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 20:23, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is over the limit again maybe the 36th BirdpawYay for randomness 20:31, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Are you sure? Because I counted all of them and there were 35 I thought, and then one was being approved. TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 21:01, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is the 36th image, but with one in CBA, I think its fine... Anyways, this image is lovely :) Maybe just make it a bit more of a creamish colour and darken the ear pink a tad. Dawnleaf 21:08, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is this better? TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 13:18, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit peachy, try to make it like Berrynose's or Daisy's, fur colour. Dawnleaf 20:12, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I made it the same color as Berrynose's picture. I hope this picture is good, it's my 5th one.

TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 21:26, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Just make the ear pink a bit smaller, other then that its great! :) Dawnleaf 22:05, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Made the ear pink smaller, and thanks Dawny! TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 23:58, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and ear pink--nightshine 17:23, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened the shading and ear pink. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 22:57, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

The shading could be blurred. Darken the face shading. The ear pink should be a reddish color, it's like hot pink now. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:19, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Done! RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 14:01, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful, well done. =) Comments before approval? --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:28, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Bramble! =) RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 14:28, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 18:30, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Spiderstar (L) - Approved

Spiderstar.leaderComments? oblivionAudience? 12:41, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think this over the limit. I tried to submit one yesterday and it over the limit Flowerleaf 13:40, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Nope. This is under the limit. As for the image, it looks great, but perhaps make the ear pink more reddish? 雨晶須 夏天來了! 14:02, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! But I agree, just make the earpink a tad redder. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:55, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is lovely. Just blur the stripes and earpink. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 17:05, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks guys :) But I won't be able to do it all day today. Please be patient with me. oblivionAudience? 17:44, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look fine to me. Just blur the ear pink as everyone else said--nightshine 21:34, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Blurred and made earpink redder. oblivionAudience? 22:39, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Oops, just realized the right earpink was less blurred. Blurred it more. oblivionAudience? 22:49, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose. AshshadowNo really? 00:03, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Made the nose the same colour as the earpink. oblivionAudience? 01:15, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose colour a lot darker. Maybe a really dark red-brown colour--Nightshine05:18, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I was originally going to reserve this when SkyClan's Destiny came out and I am SO glad I didn't. This is BEAUTIFUL. I never would have done it justice. No critiques, just a comment =) User:Wildheart7/sig 06:45, August 16, 2010 (UTC) (ps my siggie is messed up, but this is Wildheart7)

(S) - HOY FOXDUNG SKYCLAN'S DESTINY IS OUT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? And yes, this image is completely and utterly amazing. And I like your sig. (my signature is broken)

Re-Uploaded. Made nose darker. Thanks Wildheart and... eh... whoever that is ;) oblivionAudience? 13:04, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Wonderful! I like the texture on the ears. The only thing is that his eyes look slightly triangular, but that might be due to the lineart. (And that was Stealth commenting above you; I don't know why she said our siggy was broken). Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 18:18, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know why. I did absolutely nothing to the lineart. It might just be your computer; it looks normal to me. oblivionAudience? 18:27, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

It's probably because Spiderstar is dark brown, which makes the lineart harder to see, and his eyes are a bright colour, and if you took away the lineart tand leave just the colour they look slanty. Not that you need to change the eyes :) This is beautifully done, if I was a senior warrior/deputy/leader this would be on CBA! Mossy go away. 20:10, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

So... do you think I should make the eyes a darker shade of amber? oblivionAudience? 20:41, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

If you want. I don't really think it matters though :/ Mossy go away. 22:29, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks fantastic! Comments before approval?--Nightshine 00:44, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Moss - Because it is!!!! Look! {{SUBST:MosswiskerandStealthfire/Sig}} 12:10, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 02:31, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ebonyclaw (W) - Approved

Ebonyclaw.warrior This should be under the limit. Should she have moss and leaves tucked under her collar? I'm happy with how this turned out. Comments?--nightshine 06:07, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is the 36th image, but there are three work or declines. This should be fine. §₩1ƒ₮¥BLAAAHH, Elder dance! 11:21, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

This should be okay because there is one declined so it makes 35. Make the earpink a bit larger. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 15:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made ear pink bigger--nightshine 16:02, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Make the collar thicker, and it seems to slope up really high on her neck. It looks funny. Adding to lineart is hard, thouhg. I feel sorry for the people who did Kinkfur -.- Mossy go away. 18:13, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you give me a redline of what the collar should look like?--nightshine 18:21, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

No, don't change the collar! D= It looks beautiful right now right where it is. Its width seems fine as well. Though I can be over-ridden if more people agree that it should be changed.. but it looks wonderful right now. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 19:36, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the whole image is perfect. --SandyTalk 19:51, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. I think the collar would look more like a scarf if you made it any thicker.AshshadowNo really? 19:54, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yea the collar should be left alone but i do agree with Nightshine that we should add moss around her collar, because it said in the book that she wears moss aroud her collar to prevent it from being seen.Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 20:46, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I added moss under the collar--nightshine 23:40, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the moss a bit. Elorisa-sama 23:45, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Great job Night. I really don't see anything that should be added. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:17, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened moss a bit--nightshine 01:20, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great, but could you blur the highlights on her haunch and face a little? 雨晶須 夏天來了! 14:08, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I still think you should change the angle a bit. It looks funny to me. Whatever. Anyways, it looks bluish now. I don't know, maybe my eyes are playing tricks on me. Mossy go away. 21:06, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred highlights a bit--nightshine 21:47, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Like I said before. . . the collar on this one is blue and on the other one it's purple. You should probably change it for consistency. Mossy go away. 03:07, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Both collars on both images are blue with yellow tags. I think your eyes may be playing tricks on you. =) If anyone else thinks the other image's collar looks purple I could be wrong, but I'm pretty sure they are both dark blue. I'll wait to CBA this one to see what everyone thinks. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:31, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

It has a purple line on it but it's definitly blue.AshshadowNo really? 13:06, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Neither collars look purple to me. oblivionAudience? 18:36, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well, if anyone agrees with you, Ashshadow, that it has a purple line but is blue. . . then shouldn't this one be like that too? Blargh, I've had so many arguments with people on whether something is purple or blue before. I wouldn't be surprised if I was colour blind when it came to this LOL x3 Mossy go away. 19:05, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I took the colour from her other charart, so the collar should be fine--Nightshine 00:42, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I think the purple on the other collar is just the shading, somehow. But I think the image looks great! And, in this position, the shading wouldn't be there, so I think it's okay. This is me, but my sig is broken and I can't get on Preferences to fix it. Again.

I think it's good. CBA?AshshadowNo really? 19:49, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nice shading and highlighting. Also the leaves in the collar was a very nice touch and they are shaded perfectlyTansyPansy 22:01, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble 00:53, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (Ki) -Approved

Rabbitleap.kiteh,third char art comments?Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 21:14, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think that Rabbitleap was ever seen as a kit. Not sure..ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:32, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

yeh he was in SkyClans Destiny im reading it right now its pretty good xDMossy I fight to live I live to fight! 21:46, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

He looks pretty good. WhiteStorm is back! 21:51, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the hghlights a smidge and make the earpink more redish. Other than that very nice.AshshadowNo really? 22:01, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading under his chin.--Nightshine 22:04, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED better? school starts tommorow so i won't be able to edit very fast:)Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 23:13, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. My order of Skyclan's Destiny hasn't arrived yet so I wouldn't know. :P Lighten the nose-pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:12, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his face and under his chin a bit more. Lighten the ear pink--Nightshine 02:30, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Personally, I think the shading looks great. However, could you lighten the nose pink?

RE-UPLOADED done anything else?:)Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 21:15, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?  Darkhallows...Mew? 23:33, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Stick (W) - Approved

File:Stick.warrior.png Comments? --Gοldenpelt 17:20, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:33, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Theres some color above the nicked ear.AshshadowNo really? 17:36, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Tried to blur them the best I could. --Gοldenpelt 18:10, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading some.AshshadowNo really? 21:26, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Gοldenpelt 01:02, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit bigger--Nightshine 04:37, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - If the ear is only nicked, we should be able to see more of it. That sentence sounds weird. I mean, I don't think the ear should be that nicked.

His description says torn, not nicked. --Gοldenpelt 23:15, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

This looks fine for a torn ear and I don't see any other issues. Comments before approval? --SandyTalk 07:59, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Sorry! I thought the ear was nicked. Sandy's right, it looks great! {{SUBST:User:MosswiskerandStealthfire/Sig}} 20:41, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --SandyTalk 10:39, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefang (E) - Approved

Mousefang.elderOkay, this is my 6th charart, and I think she came out pretty good. Btw she's the same color as her warrior image. Comments? RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 13:52, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink could be redder and more noticible. Also, blur the highlights some more. WhiteStorm is back! 13:54, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred the highlights as much as they could go, but the ear pink is the same color as her warrior image. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 14:00, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Okay then, nevermind. WhiteStorm is back! 20:35, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's pretty well-done. Where you also the artist of Mousefang's warrior image? Willowheart1231 22:42, August 19, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

This looks fantastic! Although you don't have to do this, I always thought it made sense for elders to have no or hardly noticable highlights, because they have a duller coat due to their age. Just a thought! Mossy go away. 23:23, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

True..kinda. xD But they can have the sunlight facing towards them.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:52, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

I was not the artist of her warrior image, but this is my first elder, and I just used the apprentice tutorials to help me with the highlights and shading. Oh and thanks everyone! =) I really hoped that this charart would turn out good. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 00:57, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --SandyTalk 08:03, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me. WhiteStorm is back! 20:46, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --SandyTalk 10:42, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Leafpool (Lo) -Approved

Leafpool.lonerThis should be under the limit, since an image is being declined. Anyway, I wasn't sure if I should've used Leafpool's stripe design or my design. I went with mine, but I can change it if you guys want. Comments? oblivionAudience? 14:12, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is good darken the Pink ear but when did she become a loner? Maplepool 14:40, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

When she ran away with Crowfeather ★ Flowerleaf ★ 15:28, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. Make the ear-pink more noticeable. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:30, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Made ear-pink more noticible. oblivionAudience? 15:53, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Still. I can't really notice it. It blends in really well. Maybe make it a reddish color. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:56, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Made earpink redder. oblivionAudience? 15:59, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good Oblivion! Crowfeather should be up in a couple of days. WhiteStorm is back! 19:25, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

This looks lovely. But in her other images, the white goes up much higher on her face. It touches her eyes. Mossy go away. 19:43, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Made white go higher. oblivionAudience? 22:42, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the white like cross through the eye. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:48, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Better? oblivionAudience? 23:01, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, make her white paws a bit bigger, darken the tail and face stripes--Nightshine 23:10, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Darkened the shading, made white bigger, darkened tail and face stripes. oblivionAudience? 23:15, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! ★ Flowerleaf ★ 23:38, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. The stripe, near the midriff, is a little odd-looking. Make it...more natural. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 02:35, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Blurred highlights and changed stripe. oblivionAudience? 03:07, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ummm there's a brown fleck on one of her front paws.... ★ Flowerleaf ★ 15:21, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. So there is. Got rid of it. oblivionAudience? 16:32, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a tad more ★ Flowerleaf ★ 16:43, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 16:49, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darn it... I ran out of things to criticize XD ★ Flowerleaf ★ 17:27, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Haha nice :) oblivionAudience? 17:31, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Blur the highlight on her flank.

Re-Uploaded. Blurred. oblivionAudience? 20:51, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? --SandyTalk 08:03, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good. Excellent work Oblivion! WhiteStorm is back! 20:50, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Whitstorm :D Maybe when this is approved you can (finally) post your image ;) oblivionAudience? 21:46, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --SandyTalk 10:45, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Red (R) - Approved

Red (SD).rogueThis should be right at the limit, if I counted right. Anyways this is my last day before school starts, so I will be kind of busy now and not as active. I'm a very busy girl!!! XD So here is Red as a rogue. Constructments? Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 14:42, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

This isn't over the limit, I think. This looks really nice! All I can say is center and darken the ear pink a bit. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 17:08, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 15:14, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit bigger. Darken the shading a bit--nightshine 17:22, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nice style. The ear pink should be visible more. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:25, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's great! Darken the ear pink and shading more though.

(S) - I feel for you, Mouse. My orientation was today... I love Red! It looks like there's a lighter band running along the middle of the image, horizontally. {{SUBST:MosswiskerandStealthfire/Sig}} 20:11, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ugh I feel horrible. No updates! Sorry, I've been very busy, first week is always uber-crazy. LOL so anything else? Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 21:50, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful! But make the ear pink more triangular. I really like your technique! SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 01:17, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

If I change it, it will appear to touch the lineart. I really don't think I can tweak it more. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 22:07, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

In which case don't as we don't want this ruined. CBA? --SandyTalk 09:14, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The lighter band is still there. Sorry!

I don't know what you mean. Do you mean the style? Like lines running through it? If that's what you're talking about, that's just layers and how this charart is done. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:01, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart is correct, and I’ve looked the image over several times and cannot see anything else wrong. Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:02, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Tangle (E) - Approved

Tangle.elder With Rabbitleap (A) being declined, this should be fine. Comments?--Nightshine 00:13, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful but the ragged patched of fur are blurred so I think you should define them more :)Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 00:18, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a tad bigger, other than that, it's really great. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:19, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made ear pink bigger. I did the ragged fur the same way I did it on his rogue image. I think it looks cool being a bit blurred--Nightshine 00:24, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

oh ok i didnt see :) then i see nothing wrongMossy I fight to live I live to fight! 00:26, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are too dark and there are too many of them. Elorisa-sama40px 00:52, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

I like the stripes but you need to blur the shading coming off the tail by the leg. Iceheart Destruction by Ice would Suffice 00:59, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred stripes and fixed colours--Nightshine 01:10, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

I like it, but maybe a little more blur on the tail stripes? Willowheart 01:57, August 20, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Re-Uploaded blurred tail stripes--Nightshine 05:49, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

There still are too many stripes. Elorisa-sama40px 12:51, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. And blur them. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 16:20, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

I really love the stripes. They remind me of real tabbys. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:02, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I agree, the stripes look fine. And I like the way you did the tangled fur. However, maybe you could add one on his tail? {{SUBST:User:MosswiskerandStealthfire/Sig}} 20:46, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear-pink bigger. It's still pretty small. WhiteStorm is back! 20:49, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't even look like the same cat, thats how much different it looks. I still think getting rid of some of the stripes would help. And lightening it a touch. Elorisa-sama40px 20:52, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

The shading made it darker. I think it looks beautiful, as the stripes are more realistic, and there is darker shading. On his haunch near is tail, there is a faint darker line. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 21:58, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should use the long-haired blank, just becausehe's supposed to have messy tangly fur. But considering that his other one is shorthaired, I suppose you should leave it. Mossy go away. 22:28, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded added ragged fur on tail, blurred stripes, fixed ear pink. I made Tangle's rogue image when I wasn't the best at chararts. His stripes are a bit odd in his rogue image so I wanted to make them better for his elder charart--Nightshine 23:24, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? --SandyTalk 09:16, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:02, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Oakstep (E) - Approved

Oakstep.elderWell, this was funXD Constructments? --HAWKTALONö 14:58, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Now, this is just me, but it seem like there are a whole bunch of stripe, I would remove some. Also, make the ear pink more noticable. WhiteStorm is back! 15:00, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

I personally love tons of those stripes, they remind me of real tabbys. xD Darken the eye. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:08, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Define the earpink ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 15:29, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look fine to me. In fact, they look lovely. Blur the highlight on the face. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 19:30, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'm quite certain you had fun with this. :P It looks excellent. Make the ear pink more of a reddish color rather than pink, and either blur the highlight on the face like Ice said or expand it a bit so it isn't so much more concentrated than the other highlights. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 19:48, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened the eye, defined and red-ified (lawl) the ear pink, and fixed the face highlight. --HAWKTALONö 21:06, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?AshshadowNo really? 16:45, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful! Great highlights and Great shading TansyPansy 21:13, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

it looks perfect to me. nice job! Sunnyfrost 15:01, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Same here. Wow!

Approving. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:02, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Fernpelt (KP) Approved

File:Fernpelt.kittypet.png Fernpelt as a kittypet. I withdrew my other one so this shouldn't be over the limit. I sort of think her facial striping makes her look angry. Oh well, I'll see what you guys think. Other than that, I have to say I'm quite proud of this one. Comments? Mossy go away. 22:15, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

The first time I saw it, It didn't make her like angry, but I read your comment and then I moved my eyes (lol) to adjust it. And it doesn't really seem like it makes her angry for me. The two stripes above her eyes look weird because they remind me of eyebrows. :P Besides that, make sure the ear-pink doesn't check the head area. It doesn't have to, but it personally looks better to me. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:26, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, lol, that's what I meant. The angle makes them look like angry eyebrows. It's just her other picture had eye dots, so i thought this should too. Make sure the ear-pink doesn't check the head? What does that mean? XD Mossy go away. 22:30, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, do you mean touch the head area? Personally, I just like it this way, but if anyone else agrees with you I'll change it. Mossy go away. 22:31, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

The dots should be vertical.  Darkhallows...Mew? 23:19, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oh DUR. I just thought they looked only slightly angled in her warrior image, so I drew them that way. Is this better? I think I should make them smaller. What do you guys think? Mossy go away. 23:47, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks great! Thicken and blur the back shading some more--Nightshine 00:06, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Done. I also thickened and blurred the shading by the shoulder, it needed that too. Mossy go away. 01:25, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think the nose and the ear pink are a little bright, what do you guys think? LOL, giving critique on my own artwork. Mossy go away. 01:27, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine but you can darken the nose pink a bit--Nightshine 01:29, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

When I tilt my computer screen back a bit, I can see some color out of the lineart... not sure how to explain it, but it looks kind of like shading out of it. Not really sure if that's the right way to explain, though, lol. --- -- Cherryfur 01:47, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's shading, because I use a completely different shading method than most people on here and sometimes colour ends up outside the lineart. I'll fix it later; no time now. Mossy go away. 02:26, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Some of it was also residue from the stripes due to feathering edges on the brush. I think I got all of it. IDK, do you guys think I should change the tail stripes? In her other image, they seem, like, curvier. . . Mossy go away. 04:03, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome job! Blur the stripes a bit. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 14:32, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

You withdrew Fallowfern a kittypet right? because it still says your doing her on the resevring table...Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 14:45, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

never mind as for the image blur the stripes on her tail and this should be good :)Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 15:32, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred! Yup, I withdrew her because it just looked. . . bad. Mossy go away. 19:58, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Still no comments? It feels like I've been waiting a million years. . . Mossy go away. 05:00, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Nothing to be said. BD This is great. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:44, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about not commenting, but this looks really good. Comments before approval? IcethroatHappyHolidays! 01:09, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

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