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Creekfeather (W) - For Approval

Creekfeather.warriorEh. Comments? George40 px 00:04, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Define ear pink and make ear pink slightly larger Rainear be as silent as rain

This looks very nice, but the ear pink is gray and very small. ♫ mosspool ♫ 00:30, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Is this over the limit? SandIt's not your fault Texas 01:34, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, there are five discussions and one withdrawn image.

Anyway, darken the stripes a bit. --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 01:56, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and pinker. Frostheart 02:35, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

This good darken the ear pink a little and make it tad bigger and darken the tabby stripes a little Honeyfeather 07:35, August 9, 2010 (UTC)Honeyfeather

Reuploaded. Better? George40 px 13:25, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is sort of a gray color right now, make it pinker or redder. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 14:11, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

He looks more patched than tabby. Perhaps define the stripes more.AshshadowNo really?. 23:29, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Same as Ashshadow, he needs to have more defined stripes. Iceɦɛɑrŧ 23:59, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

The style is a bit messy. I think you should darken and define them. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:29, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I actually like the indefinite stripe pattern; not everything has to be precise, especially in the natural world. Other comments on this? I do agree that the ear pink color needs to be changed to a brighter, red/pink color. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:19, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Dang, forgot to say, Reuploaded. Comments? Elorisa-sama40px 12:54, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I agree that not everything has to be precise, but he really looks patched to me right now. {{SUBST:MosswiskerandStealthfire/Sig}} 20:32, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

I put up another image to consider. It is in the style of Heathertail/Brindleface, and then there's my pitiful "patched tabby" attempt. Which should be used? Elorisa-sama40px 16:33, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

I, myself think that the first one should be used, but many others may disagree with me. EarthbenderTawny Style! 22:02, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

The patched tabby one. ★ Flowerleaf ★ 00:23, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

I like the striped one personally. But for the character, go for the patched one. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:21, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Not to be rude, or anything, but could we come to a decision soon? I am doing the apprentice pic, and I have to decide what style to finish it in =P Thanks llwildheartl 03:37, August 23, 2010 (UTC) ...Oh, and for what it's worth, I prefer the striped one.... but you know that already, Elorisa =)

So 2.5 votes for patched and 1.5 votes for striped (I counted Frostheart as a .5 vote for each cuz she liked both), patched WINS!(unless some else votes ;) ) ★ Flowerleaf ★ 17:19, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

.... I supposed I'll have to redo the apprentice pic either way lol.... COUGHCOUGHSOMEBODYELSEVOTEFORSTRIPEDCOUGHCOUGH...... =D llwildheartl 03:11, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Guys, no one ever said this is a vote. Personally, I like the patched one better, but Elorisa can do whichever they want >.< oblivionAudience? 03:24, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

This isn't a matter of votes. I just looked up Creekfeather, and I believe it's supposed to be a tabby.♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 22:58, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

The patched one is supposed to be a tabby. But in my fail world, that consittes as a tabby. in most other peoples worlds, everything has to be perfect >.< I'm not sure what I should do...I might just withdraw it to spare some pain...Elorisa-sama40px 00:29, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

NO!!!!! I LOVE this picture! ★ Flowerleaf ★ 10:26, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

For what it's worth, I like the first one as it looks more natural. Keep whichever of the two you like Elorisa and don't withdraw this because either way it is close to approval in my opinion. When you have decided which to keep we can go from there. --SandyTalk 12:27, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

They're both very pretty. The stripes are very cool, and so are the patches. The ear pink is kinda small on both of them. Make it a little bigger. The shade is perfect for the cat, I think. Good job! Hollydapple 21:34, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink triangular. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:44, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I have decided. The weird first one is my decision. Elorisa-sama40px 11:56, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, it's not really weird, but you spent most of your work on it...And I like it too.TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!! 13:56, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish and this should be ready--Nightshine 17:32, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Also make the ear-pink more like a triangle. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:55, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the back shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 17:34, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Honesty, I think this should be approved. It's awesome! But, It wouldn't hurt to add a bit more tabby stripes. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 02:42, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, it looks fine to me. Comments before approval?--Nightshine 22:00, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 00:12, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sol (Alt. Lo) - Approved

Sol.loner.altoblivionAudience? 16:35, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Wow this is great! Darken the shading and ear pink. Maybe add a few more areas of white to his paws or tail--Nightshine 16:36, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Nightshine :) Darkened shading and ear pink, added more white. oblivionAudience? 16:53, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Does it look changed to anyone? Because, to me, it looks the same and I can't change it D: oblivionAudience? 16:56, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome. Blur the stripes. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 17:56, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Blurred stripes. Renamed image because the old one was being wierd. oblivionAudience? 18:18, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. --Dawnleaf 21:59, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I can't without renaming it. The image will upload, but it will only show the oldest one D: oblivionAudience? 22:10, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! I think you should blur the transition from brown to white (on tail and paws). And also do what Ice said, about the ear pink. But it looks awesome otherwise! Rainwhisker567 23:14, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Also, add more white to the muzzle. Mossy go away. 03:03, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm not blurring the stripes anymore. They're fine. Blurred white transitions, added more white on the face, and fixed earpink. oblivionAudience? 18:36, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and shading. Make the highlights a bit bigger.--Nightshine 21:58, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 23:48, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

This looks a lot like Leafpool's loner image, but oh well! :P Could you lighten it? It looks a bit dark. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:49, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart (Incase you didn't know), Oblivion did do Leafpool's loner image (but I think you do know). Um, define the ear pink a little more because it looks like it is blending into the brown. Willowheart1231 00:18, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Yes, I did know, Willowheart. :P This is great, Oblivion. ;D The eyes look really pale to me, though. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:26, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add a subtle highlight to the stomach. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 00:40, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if it is my computer, but the art looks dusty right now. There is a highlight on the stomach that is way to bright, and his side is kind of dark compared to the rest of him. Willowheart1231 03:26, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Could you explain a bit more, Willowheart? What do you mean by dusty? And there's no highlight on his stomach - at least not yet - so I don't really know what you're talking about. oblivionAudience? 04:39, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's amazing Oblivion, but what about adding more white..? I don't know how to explain it, urrr here is a older pic I drew of my version... 2ndsoldesign.png What do you think? Don't mind the weird mane and fluff of the tip of the tail... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.30.4.75 (talkcontribs) 01:26, September 3, 2010

I think Willowheart means the spot near his right hind leg, which is a little lighter than the rest of his underside. But it looks great otherwise! Rainwhisker567 13:32, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Willowheart, if you meant that, it's because there's a highlight there. And the unregistered contributor, whoever you are, my design is fine for him. I like it the way it is.

I'll start working on this soon. oblivionAudience? 15:24, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 17:36, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the brown a touch.Elorisa-sama40px 20:03, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is good idk y but to me it looks my friends cat and her is and/silver and white tabby

How does this cat look silver at all? And you need to sign your posts. Mossy go away. 22:54, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Oblivion for the confusion. I mean, there is a really bright spot kinda at the place of his stomach and haunch, and I think you should blur it. And by dusty, I mean is looks a little too smudged and it has a slight grayish tinge. Willowheart1231 02:02, September 4, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

It doesn't have a grey-ish tinge. . . and those bright spots are highlights. Speaking of highlgihts. . . could you add one to the back? Mossy go away. 02:51, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

I guess it is the computer--I have a different one since mine broke down. Willowheart1231 18:59, September 4, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Re-Uploaded. Finally. Added a small highlight on his back, made brown darker. oblivionAudience? 22:03, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink to make it more visible--Nightshine 02:33, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 23:23, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

This sounds odd, but the left back leg looks kinda... flat, for lack of a better word. I realize it's already darker, but maybe you could add a bit of shading at the top so it looks like the shadows are progressing down his leg or something? I dunno. It just looks like plain colour to me. Other than the stripes. Anyways, this is totally awesome, and that was the only fault I could find. --llwildheartl 01:43, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

The right front paw's stripe is faded with the white, making it like an odd color? Kinda like dirt mixed with cocoa powder. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:09, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 12:04, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 20:00, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?--Nightshine 21:57, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. oblivionAudience? 20:35, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Foxheart (Alt. W) - Approved

File:Foxheart.warrior.alt.png Well I think I got the colors right for this one and I counted right so it should be under the limit...unless someone beat me while I was uploading this x] Here's Foxheart as a male :3 Commentsto let me know because I think I might have to darken the image.--35px Gladiator Band Geek 25px 04:42, August 7, 2010 (UTC)


You did WAY!! better than me. XD (Foxheart Alt D) I think it looks awesome!! :D Rainear be as silent as rain

Good! blur the highlights. SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 09:32, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Dawnleaf 19:22, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Updated my updates shall come at a slower rate now that school started for me today.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 00:41, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
mine does not start till september 6 lol blur the earpink a little bit more :) and dont laugh at my siggie its two last names meshed togeher SandleGregxSara forever 16:50, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the ear pink.--nightshine 00:25, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:57, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit bigger. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 23:42, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

The tail shading really doesn't need blurring nor does the ear pink need to be larger. I do agree it needs to be a touch darker and blurred. The midriff shading seems too large and is rather dark and blotchy; further the highlight from his chest area down and make the midriff shading thinner and less in the way. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:57, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry if this is probably a stupid question, but can you please explain the midriff Bramble? Also do you mean the whole image needs to be darker and blurred or just the tail? My mind is overpowered by school work so I'm falling behind on this art O_o please don't decline guys.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 00:54, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

The midriff is between the haunch and shoulder area. It's okay, no problem, my mind is overpowered by school work and marching band, too, so I understand compltely. :) IcethroatHappyHolidays! 20:37, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
Smooth out the darker shadow patch on her shoulder. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 03:54, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks Ice...well updated--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 18:26, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
Make the ear-pink a bit reddish. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:14, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
Looks great, but can you try to darken the ear-pink? I can barely see it.♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 18:08, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
Make the ear-pink a bit deeper. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:59, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
The highlight on the tail looks a bit weird. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:41, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded...and you might actually want to say whats weird about it--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 04:51, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
Define the ear-pink to make it like a triangle and lighten it, it looks very bright right now. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:54, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry Frostheart but that doesn't make any sense. Why would I need to lighten it some if you say its bright?--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 21:25, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

To darken it is usually to make it deeper shade of red, but either way could go if it is too bright. By make it lighter, I meant make it more salmony or pink..xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:32, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

T_T I'm about to seriously stop listening to anyone about color changes. Thats back to original color that I had the ear pink, the exact color I got from Foxheart's original image. This problem has happened too many times and I'm considering to take a break from this and go hiatus...Reuploaded--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 16:57, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry about that. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:08, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading in some places.--Dawnleaf 22:18, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken it as well. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:26, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a TINY bit darker. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 02:33, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I couldn't take it so I decided to compare the two images side by side and made my version lighter like Foxheart's original image. You guys are making me almost make him a dark ginger at the rate we're going. Here's the original image to look at to help prove my point now

Foxheart.warrior I know my highlights are like those but they are kind of hard to get like that...anyway, Updated--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 03:54, September 4, 2010 (UTC) .....Just played with the image again and got the highlights like that one now. Its not showing up for me at the moment but it should show soon enough--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 18:54, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

  • whistle* Approving this. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (W) - Approved

Waspwhisker.warrior I counted and this was the 35th, and this is Waspwhisker. Any comments/critisism for him? SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 08:15, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Fixed blurred lineart around body SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 08:15, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Blur it a little more, though. Clarrissa!My talkpage! 12:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading.AshshadowAg 13:37, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

The patches are unevenly blurred, ANDYSCHLECKMouseh is now obsessed! 15:37, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Fixed up some of the patches, I don't know about the shape, but I blurred and darkened the shading. SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 22:24, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Theres blurred line-art on the back, and the ear pink needs to be blurred a bit. Also darken the shading, otherwise this is pretty good :) Dawnleaf 22:27, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I tried to darken the shading, do you mean to burn it so it gets darkened? Thats what I mostly did, I blurred the shading and fixed the blurred lineart. Can someone do the scar for me? pixlr is all fuzzy for me right now. SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 06:24, August 8, 2010 (UTC)


Dude, the scar I drew was bad, but I added the scar for you Sunny. Hope this is good enough EarthbenderTawny Style! 17:27, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Tawny, It's great. Comments? SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 05:13, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Your berry welcome Sunny. ;P So far, its looking great. Myself, I can't see anything wrong. But maybe...theres a patch near the ear pink. Blur the gray part just a TAD more. EarthbenderTawny Style! 12:55, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Honestly, the scar kooks unrealistic. It's unevenly blurred, like before. MousehObsessed with Andy Schleck! 16:00, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if this really matters, but isn't his pattern a little. . . far fetched? I thought he would just be gray with white markings. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 20:24, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

If it is bad, I can honestly start it again, if the scar's unrealistic. But Thats up to you guys. Should I just start him again??? SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 21:53, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about the scar you guys, Sunny, I have an original version of Waspwhisker without the scar if you like. But if you have a version,...then you know...EarthbenderTawny Style! 22:20, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I agree that the pattern is a little unlikely (but what do I know of cat genetics?) and perhaps starting over would be a good idea. Persevere though because this is almost there and your second try will be infinitely better than your first. I haven't read SD so I don't know where the scar should be, but having it drag over his flank, midsection and chest area seems a little... well not quite realistic. --SandyTalk 12:08, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Tried a different style. I'll add in the scar later. SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 23:48, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches more. AshshadowNo really? 23:56, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink -- Cherryfur 00:26, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Much better Sunny! Darken the shading and make the ear pink more pinkish. Perhaps darkening the eyes too. Dawnleaf 02:30, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Waaay better. Blur the patches and ear pink a bit. Also, the highlights need to be blurred in some places. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 06:18, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Dawny & Mosspool AKA Dovesong! Is this better? I darkened the shading a tad, and blurred the patches. SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 09:13, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

There's a blurred spot outside the lineart on his chest you should remove, and maybe blur the highlight a bit more in between the haunch and the left foot, but very good Sunspirit! TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 12:26, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches a little bit. Dawnleaf 20:15, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred patches, fixed lineart and blurred highlight. LOL i just figured out that you weren't supposed to use the smudge tool for a blurring tool XD SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 07:17, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. This image is a gray and white patched cat; do you think he should look more like he did in the SkyClan manga (Gray with a white muzzle, chest, and underbelly)?--nightshine 15:00, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it has to. It matches his description and the manga is just how the artist pictured him. Feel free to ignore me.AshshadowNo really? 16:27, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, as Night said, blur the patches and earpink. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:56, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on his haunch a bit more. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 23:41, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I made a different version, sorry if thats inconvenient. Choose which one looks better or something. User:Sunspirit/sig 09:37, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

The first one. The patches just need more blurring.AshshadowNo really? 13:57, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I perfer the first one. The shading on the white fur needs darkening though. Dawnleaf 19:23, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Did as everyone asked. Nightshine has got a point about the magna, but in the magna Ravenpaw didn't have a white dash on his chest, and he did in the books. I'm horrible at making gray & white chararts! SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 05:32, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot--Nightshine 01:28, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

It's great, but it looks kind of flat. Add some highlights and more shading Silvery 02:16, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional. The shading on the white fur needs to be darkened. Dawnleaf 18:14, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, i don't know how to darken it! I've had a guess, but how does everyone blur everything without touching the line-art? SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 01:59, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

To darken the shading on the white fur, set the burn tool to "Highlights" and set the exsposure to 6. Blurring just takes practice ;) Dawnleaf 05:50, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Dawny! Darkened fur color, is this anywhere near done? XD SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 06:03, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Lineart on the bottom of the haunch is blurred.AshshadowNo really? 12:29, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Line-art around haunch and back is blurred. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:40, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

I love it! But like someone said, can you fix the blurred lineart? It's also blurred near the tail.♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 18:09, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is a bit brown right now. Blur it, also. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:00, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry everyone, I will upload it tomorrow, pixlr wont let me get on today. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 06:58, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the transitions a bit. oblivionAudience? 12:15, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the spots a bit more.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:42, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred the patches, fixed the line-art, blurred transitions and everything else. I also made the highlights more visible, because I had them before. Is this better? SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 05:48, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks a little bit blurred, I think. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:44, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the back paws a bit, they look like a very pale gray colour on my screen, rather then white. The lower part of the haunch as well as the tail, has some blurred line-art. Darken all the shading, particularly on the white fur. Other then that, I think it looks pretty good. :) --Dawnleaf 03:45, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't a white she-cat suppose to be a very pale gray? If its slightly darker, it's probably due to the shadows the other legs are casting. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:33, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, a white cat is supposed to be very pale gray. I'm just trying to point out that the back paws look a little too pale gray, and that they need to be lightened in my opinion. --Dawnleaf 06:02, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Alright. xD The flank (I think..xD) that connects with the back-paw line-art looks blurred. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:34, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think this is Ok! Comments? SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 05:43, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the gray-white transitioning, and darken the shading. Theres a lot of blurred line-art by the haunch, tail and ears. --Dawnleaf 05:54, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred line-art near the haunch and some blurred-lineart on the back. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:12, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:27, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches too. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 17:32, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading and highlighting, and blur the patches. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 02:34, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I've blurred everything... I Hate the line-art. I know this is going to be on here for ages. If this is not good, I don't think I should do Waspwhisker anymore and leave it to another user. The blurring I've done is horrible... this is no-where near done :( SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 05:47, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I have an idea, how about you smudge, in stead of blur, the grey, white transition? FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 00:59, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

That's up to you, Sunspirit. I suggest not withdrawing it though. If worse comes to worst, you'll just have to re do it. Don't worry about it though. We all have Chararts that are a little off. :) But this isn't bad. Keep it, it'll get fixed. Moonflight 21:29, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Honestly? It looks perfectly fine to me and I don't know why it's still up for approval. I realize I'm not a lead and can't do CBA, but if I was I would. I think we're splitting hairs here. --llwildheartl 01:53, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Wildheart and Moonflight! :) I think The patches won't blur anymore on my computer that much, but I'll see what I can do, If this is bad, I put up a new one like Nightshine said in the magna, The first one looks sorta like Hazeltail, the second Mousewhisker. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 22:09, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

I really like the second one. Blur the gray/white transition, blur shading, desaturate the ear pink a bit and lighten the tail tip.--Nightshine 22:12, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred transition, shading and highlights (Ichose to blur the highlights) Desaturated the ear pink and lightened tail tip. Thanks Nightshine :) SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:21, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I like the first one better, but compared to the other one it just looks gray and... well, darker gray, so maybe make the white whiter. If that made any sense. --llwildheartl 04:14, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Approving the second one; it looks fine, really. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Billystorm (KP)- Approved

Billystorm.kittypetI can't get the earpink the right color. The eyes... what do you think? idk  Darkhallows...Mew? 22:27, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the eye highlight slightly smaller, lighten the white, color the nose, and darken and enlarge the earpink. That was a mouthful. AshshadowNo really? 22:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

His pupil should be black, no? oblivionAudience? 22:41, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the white parts whiter and make his foot completely white. Darken the shading a bit. There is some blurred line art around the collar--nightshine 22:50, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Add some white near the arm and the haunch. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 22:55, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Ice, there doesn't need to be white there. It looks like his image from the manga and his warrior image--nightshine 23:05, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. On the warrior image, he has a white stomach, but nevermind about that then. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:19, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

The white sort of looks ginger-ish. Also, blur the highlights. And he needs nose pink. Also, his eye lineart looks grey instead of black. And his ear-pink is way too small. Mossy go away. 02:58, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the colllar tag the same colour, and there is some colour outside of the tag. oblivionAudience? 16:41, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ehh... This was somewhat experimental. Is he better now? I didn't blur the highlights- those were there to show faint striping (if you look at a cat in the sun, you'll see them.)  Darkhallows...Mew? 21:35, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Why did you get rid of the collar tag? I just wanted you to make it all one colour :S oblivionAudience? 21:40, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I had some formatting issues... somehow the tag disapeared, I wasn't trying to get rid of it. I just fixed it.  Darkhallows...Mew? 21:44, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and make it more reddish--Nightshine 21:51, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Done. And changed to Billystorm.kittypet  Darkhallows...Mew? 22:02, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink more and darken the shading a bit more, excluding the back shading.--Nightshine 04:38, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

The white on his tail covers almost half of it. It should be smaller. Also, in his other image he has white on his belly and such. That little space by his leg and haunch should probably be white as well. Mossy go away. 22:03, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Done.  Darkhallows...Mew? 23:14, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

The white still covers half his tail, and there's still no white on his chest. Mossy go away. 05:32, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Oops . Sorry! Fixed.  Darkhallows...Mew? 05:43, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

The foot thats mostly hidden wouldn't be white. Thats the back of the foot, not the paw.AshshadowNo really? 21:21, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a deepish red. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:19, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

There's still too much tail-white if compared to his other image. Mossy go away. 05:48, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, at the top of the haunch. --Dawnleaf 22:16, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit deeper. It looks hot pink to me, then again, it could just be the color against the orange skin. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:50, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry this is taking so long. I was switching internet providers (again) and now GIMP isn't working. I'll try and fix this in a few hours.  Darkhallows...Mew? 01:43, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should lighten up the ear pink. On my screen, it looks like it's blending in. Willowheart1231 00:12, August 31, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

(S) - Does he have a white underbelly? Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 21:04, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Yes (I think) ★ Flowerleaf ★ 00:57, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, he has a white belly. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:14, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, it is just not visible. Darken the shading a bit. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 14:12, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Try making the ear pink a darker hot-pink-red. If that doesn't work, try a dark, scarlet red. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 03:16, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I just redid it. It's not showing up yet, though.  Darkhallows...Mew? 04:43, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Still not working -_-.  Darkhallows...Mew? 08:37, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
Make the earpink brighter. -Mistfire
It's showing now ^^  Darkhallows...Mew? 09:15, September 7, 2010 (UTC)
Add some more face-white and make his pelt consistent with his other image. FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 16:43, September 7, 2010 (UTC)
The white on his face looks funny. . . it starts out thin and then gets really thick. It looks. . . like a blaze. It's not like that on his other image. And what happened to the colour? it's almost brownish orange now. Mossy go away. 01:38, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks fine, and the "blaze" looks fine to me, but what happened to the colour? I mean, it looks good now, and it looked good before, but why'd you change it? :3 --llwildheartl 01:59, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink seems hot-pink or purple. Maybe make it a reddish color. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:03, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

I redid the image, so I guess the color got changed? It still looks orange on the computer I did it on, but on my other it's way too brown. Ugh, I'm going to withdraw this- ginger cats aren't my thing.  Darkhallows...Mew? 11:36, September 9, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

(S) - I don't think you should withdraw it - it looks really nice! And, I think this color looks ginger. It might be a different shade then before, but I would still call it ginger, and I like it! It's actually a far more natural looking color than Firstar's or Squirrelflight's. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:24, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, Stealth, but Billystorm has another image that's a different shade of ginger. I think you should keep going- it's a nice image, but if you want to withdraw maybe someone who has time on their hands could take over? Mossy go away. 21:22, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Don't withdraw it! It's beautiful! --llwildheartl 23:19, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

It's very pretty, but if you want to withdrawn it i can take over it. I really want to do a kittypet.---ſceheartBlah blah 01:22, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Kay I still say DONT WITHDRAW IT, IT IS BUUUTIFUL! But if you do decide to do so, please give it to Iceheart. I promise you she won't mess it up. ...And maybe she'll shut up for once about doing a kittypet pic =D haha luv you Special K jk --llwildheartl 04:27, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Iceheart, you can do it. I really don't have any interest in finishing this /lazy  Darkhallows...Mew? 15:53, September 10, 2010 (UTC)


Iceheart, you already have an image up for approval. Shady, if you like, I can finish this. oblivionAudience? 20:49, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

I wanted to work on it though!!! I want to make a new image!!! :( Alpha Power to the Pack! 21:13, September 10, 2010 (UTC) Heck, there’s nothing wrong with it right now. Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Mintfur (SC) (A) - Approved

Mintfur (SC).apprentice It should be under the limit because Gorsestar's warrior pic got declined. This is my first one, and I did it on pixlr. Willowheart1231 01:24, August 19, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

The tabby stripes seem odd. Make the ear-pink smalker and more neutral. The line-art is blurred in his leg area. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:40, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripes are cool, but more should be added. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 02:33, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more. WhiteStorm is back! 11:57, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Willowheart1231 21:47, August 19, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

The kit picture doesn't have any stripes on the chest. Iceheart Destruction by Ice would Suffice 21:55, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Most tabby kits are like that anyways. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:20, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

So... no stripes on chest? Willowheart1231 22:40, August 19, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

You could afford to add some more stripes. And by the way, most of the time people don't draw stripes on the kit image's chests just because they can't. . . just saying. It looks lighter than her other images, too. Darken it a bit. Mossy go away. 23:24, August 19, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. I darkeded it a bit and added two or three more stripes. Willowheart1231 23:37, August 19, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

I think you need to brighten up the ear some more, I can't hardly see it. WhiteStorm is back! 22:59, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Brightened ear pink. Willowheart 23:54, August 20, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

I still think you should remove the chest stripes. For consistency.AshshadowNo really? 12:19, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure. I made her kit image a long time ago when standards weren't as high as they are now and people not quite so picky so I was never asked to add stripes to her chest. Dovesong: It wasn't that I couldn't draw them, rather that they weren't asked for and I did the image in a different style. I'm quite happy to add stripes to her kit image if this is deemed the better version. --SandyTalk 14:21, August 21, 2010
(UTC)

No i'm doing the warrior version and i didn't put stripes on the chest and i agree with Ash that they should be removed. But aside from that i like this picture. Iceheart Destruction by Ice would Suffice 20:33, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think so. Real tabbys do have stripes on their chest, and usually on the kit images, they don't put stripes on the chest because they can't. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:30, August 22, 2010 (UTC)


Can someone tell me stripes or no stripes on the chest? Thanks! Willowheart 01:36, August 23, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

For consistency, like Ash said, i wouldn't. The images should look all the sameish. Iceheart Destruction by Ice would Suffice 04:35, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Most tabby kits who become warriors have stripes on their chest. Their could be a few stripes on kits chest, but most people don't do it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:43, August 23, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Took off chest stripes. WillowheartMay StarClan light your path! 21:28, August 23, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Good choice now sorry to bug you about the stripes again but you should have more stripes on the back across from the chest and blurr them a bit. Iceheart Destruction by Ice would Suffice 22:07, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Add some more stripes. WillowheartMay StarClan light your path! 23:23, August 23, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

In my personal opinion, remove the stripes again (LOL. OPPOSING MINDS xD) the stripes looks crammed. In my personal opinion, the other one was much better because of the akward transition of the stripes to no stripes. Just my opinion though, ignore it. LOL. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:26, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

The second stripe on the top of his back has this little white glob on the end of it... and maybe make the earpink a teensy bit smaller llwildheartl 02:30, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think your talking about the highlights.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:31, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

No, I wasn't, but it's gone now, so did you change it Willowheart? It looks fine --llwildheartl 21:58, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, Wildheart, about that. I did change it, and you were right, there was a whiteish blob at the end. Do you think I should change the ear color to match Mintfur's ear color in her warrior image? (See above, her warrior image is still being approved) WillowheartMay StarClan light your path! 23:26, August 25, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Reuploaded. Changed ear pink color to match kit picture. WillowheartMay StarClan light your path! 00:09, August 26, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Maybe go over that one stripe again because it got a little fuzzy when you blurred the little white blob out. Otherwise, looking good!! --llwildheartl 05:40, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Remove some of the back stripes. It looks crammed. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:35, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you Wildheart! Does that look better, Frostheart? I also want to say thank you for your invaluable advice! Though I still have a while aways to get this pic high-quality. =D WillowheartMay StarClan light your path! 23:41, August 26, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Hehe thanks. xD The ear-pink line-art is blurred and make the ear-pink a tiny bit smaller. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:58, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps shrink the earpink a little bit - it seems like it's touching the lineart. --llwildheartl 05:12, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. The earpink is filling the whole ear-space. Silvery 14:27, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art seems blurred on the head, ear, and the fore-arm closest to us. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:27, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. AHHHHH!!!!! Mintfur is starting to make me crazy.... Sorry for not getting back earlier--school has started and it is like a nightmare! =D Frostheart, I checked the lineart, and it wasn't blurry, but I went over it anyways.Willowheart1231 03:11, August 30, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Make the ear pink a tiny bit smaller. --Dawnleaf 04:25, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink line-art is still blurred. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:56, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Add some stripes to the muzzle. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 17:46, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Hey fellow warriors! I'll get it fixed once my computer bug gets fixed. I'm using a different one. Willowheart1231 01:50, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Finally got my computer back! Reuploaded! Willowheart1231 21:51, September 4, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

The earpink line-art is blurred on the second to last line of the ear; it's dark purple instead of black. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 20:22, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and fix the lineart on the ear, but otherwise, it looks wonderful! --llwildheartl 02:00, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded! Willowheart1231 02:11, September 10, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Dappletail (A) - Approved

Dappletail.apprentice This was fun! Comments?--Nightshine 21:56, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Wow this is really nice!! You should probly make the ear pink more pink.(= And I was wondering my nettlesplash kit version when is that going to get approved?? IShadowandBlueI 22:03, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink on Dappletail's elder image: Dappletail.elder Is pretty much like this one.--Nightshine 22:05, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this looks really good. I can't really think of anything wrong ... (= DappleclawTigerstar's best bud!! 22:21, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Try blurring the markings a tiny bit. This looks great! --Dawnleaf 22:45, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Oh well in that case great!! IShadowandBlueI 23:08, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

If there isn't anything that needs to be approved, you shouldn't really say anything at all. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:58, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Pinken just the tip of the ear pink, because it looks like that on the elder image. Lighten up the back stripes just a tad bit. Otherwise, looking good! Willowheart1231 00:10, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Blur the stripesand darken the shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:29, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit thicker. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:32, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, they arent stripes and I think they look fine she looks exatly like her elder image :) nice job nightMossleap You burnt my ice cream!!! 00:41, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred stripes, lightened black, and changed ear pink--Nightshine 00:43, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur + add more orange. Mossy go away. 02:55, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Err. . . that was probably a bit unclear. I'm lazy. I meant add more orange and then blur it. Mossy go away. 03:00, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I can't really add more orange to it. --Nightshine 04:14, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Well, there is a little bare spot on the haunch...Maybe put some there? MapleOn dA and Skye 10:45, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add some white. (I know it's not consistent with her elder image, but it's a part of her description.) --Gοldenpelt 19:04, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the markings a ton. Elorisa-sama40px 20:02, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Why can't you add more orange? The orange parts are bigger on Dappletail's, just make them bigger. Mossy go away. 21:36, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more into the fur. Tawny (Talk) 22:08, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred stripes. I don't think I should add white to it, her other images don't have any--Nightshine 02:43, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. We can put white on her images during tweak week. Blur the orange more. Mossy go away. 02:49, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

woah this is GREAT! you probably used GIMP, becuz i could never do something like this on pixlr :) Sunnyfrost 20:01, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred markings more--Nightshine 22:17, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Sunnyfrost, you should comment on a picture to criticize it. Define the ear-pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:55, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the markings. Elorisa-sama40px 20:49, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded changed ear pink. If I blur the markings any more they won't be defined enough--Nightshine 21:42, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

They still look more blurred in the elder picture though, and now the earpink is too pink. Elorisa-sama40px 02:00, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think the markings are fine but I agree about the earpink. AshshadowNo really? 13:42, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed ear pink--Nightshine 17:41, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the markings look fine but they're not blurred enough. If you compare it to her elder imge which happens to be on the screen, they're a little more blurred there. Mossy go away. 19:59, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is so beautiful! I think the markings are blurred enough, but they should be a bit brighter Night Fall 20:00, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded brightened stripes--Nightshine 20:22, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

I still think they should be blurred. Look at her elder image. They're more blurred there. Mossy go away. 01:53, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

I really like them the way they are. Does anyone else think they should be blurred?--Nightshine 02:36, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe just blur them a little bit more. --Dawnleaf 12:31, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I blurred them some more--Nightshine 00:29, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

The tortoiseshell patches should be shorter, maybe make them halfs and so forth so it looks more like the elder image. DappleclawTigerstar's best buddeh!! 21:44, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

What exactly do you mean?--Nightshine 22:44, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think I know what she means, and I disagree. It looks perfect to me. Perhaps smooth out the earpink a LEETLE bit --llwildheartl 01:45, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Dappleclaw is a guy. . . xD and also, I think he means the orange patches are too long. I don't know. . . anyways, the orange is too bright if you ask me. The elder image's ginger is very very very slightly, like. . . yellowy, I suppose. I hope you know what I mean xD Mossy go away. 02:05, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

The different shading and highlight style will change the way an image looks. I think that the coloring is fine.AshshadowNo really? 19:03, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (A) - Approved

Nettlesplash.apprentice My first apprentice....comments? --Dawnleaf 22:17, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some. This is great for a first apprentice! ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 23:51, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is nice. Define the ear pink by making it pinker, and then blur it. Willowheart1231 23:59, September 2, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Re-Uploaded: Thank you Willowheart, and Dovesong. :) Blurred shading, and fixed ear pink. --Dawnleaf 01:27, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the muzzle. Mossy go away. 02:59, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Agreeing with Mosspool, add shading on the muzzle. Just a little bit. Because if you add to much, it looks odd. Add shading to the base of the tail as well. Willowheart1231 03:20, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Re-Uploaded: Added shading to the tail, muzzle, and forelegs. --Dawnleaf 00:12, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Honeyleaf(D)~Approved

Honeyleaf.deputyThis is my 4th charart. Comments for approval? ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 14:46, September 3, 2010 (UTC)



That should probably be moved to the approval area above^^^, but apart from that, its pretty good! Ive never commented on a charart before, so i hope some people might agree, but you could make the ear pink bigger? idk, any way.Sunstar27'Be true to your dreams... 15:14, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

make the ear pink a bit bigger and lighten it. Sunnyfrost 19:48, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

If this is the same Honeyleaf I'm thinking about, then I think the pelt color should be more of a bright ginger, like her rogue image, not dark ginger. I can't find the image right now, it's a redlink for some reason.2011 Light paw It's anew year! 22:20, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink, it blends in really well with the tabbystripes. The stripes on the tail look weird and a bit different, could you make it more like wavy? :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:27, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Okay! Major make-over for this charart! I lightened the ginger coloring and did the tabby stripe patter differently. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 23:19, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Looks nice, but the highlights are too bright and covering the eye and tinting it. Also, the neck stripes are really thick. Mossy go away. 02:47, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Here's the rogue pic :3 File:Honeyleaf.rouge.png★ Flowerleaf ★ 11:12, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Change the colour and stripe style to match her rogue image. oblivionAudience? 15:18, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

All these tabby stripes are getting on my nerves! I tried to match the color and the stripe pattern. Comments? ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 20:40, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. ★ Flowerleaf ★ 22:32, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Flowerleaf, only comment on a picture if you are going to criticize it again. Add stripes to the belly. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:50, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really nice! But maybe change the y-stripe on the lower haunch to a triangle-stripe like the others, it looks kind of out-of place. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 02:33, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, that's funny, how come Scarletwind's charart is also on Flamefoot's page? o.o 24.189.173.167 12:13, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

It is?

Anyway, I added a stripe to the belly and changed around the stripe on the left haunch. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 15:34, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me, I forgot to log in. x) I think you should move the shoulder highlight further up. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 17:39, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Darken the shading on her legs a smidge, and blur the spot right under her eye. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 17:43, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink much bigger. oblivionAudience? 22:15, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Done ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 22:22, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-upload this as Honeyleaf.deputy because the images are working now. oblivionAudience? 19:26, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:56, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink still needs to be bigger. Sorry lol --llwildheartl 01:47, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I agree. It does need to be slightly bigger, other than that, I think that this is lovely. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:12, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The stripes on the tail are more defined than her other ones. Personally, I like the ones on the back better, but I'm not sure how you would go about fixing that, exactly. Maybe blur? Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:43, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected! ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:00, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (W) - Approved

Nettlesplash.warriorComments? Moonflight 16:27, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Whoa! This isn't mine. Looks like Cherryfur123 had this up for approval once, but it got declined, maybe? Anyway, the first time I saved it, I messed up on the name. It got deleted so I tried to upload it with the right name, but the changes won't show. :\ Moonflight 16:47, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the images are all messed up. It should be fixed soon, just wait a bit. oblivionAudience? 16:49, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I know his name isn't right, but I'm woring on it. Comments? Moonflight 21:12, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

This image is lovely. Define the ear pink, and perhaps darken the paws, and ear furthest from us. --Dawnleaf 21:19, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlights. The image is well-done, Moonflight. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:21, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I don't think my changes are showing... Moonflight 13:44, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Fixed it. :D Comments? Moonflight 21:23, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

This looks lovely! But darken the highlights a tad and blur them. Overall, this is nice :) SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 22:14, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Comments? Moonflight 20:25, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Snake (Alt. R)- Approved

Snake (BC).rogue.altMy first rouge. Kind of a fail. Comments?--Iceheart Will the thaw ever come?: 19:19, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blurr the black and white transitions, and the shading. Also did you want the nose to be black? DappleclawTigerstar's best bud!! 19:30, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

You spelled "rouge" instead of "rogue". Rename the file.MapleOn dA and Skye 19:38, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. I told you it was a fail XD. anyways i blurred the shading and patches and i wasn't sure what colour to do the nose so i did a dark gray. I tried to make him look like he did in 'Heart of a Warrior'--Iceheart Will the thaw ever come?: 20:29, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

The collar looks a bit strange to me, like it's a directly straight line and it's too tight. Try to make it slag a bit more, see here: Scourge.rogue Tawny (Talk) I agree with Tawny on the collar, it needs to match his other one more. Darken the shading a bunch, I'm not sure whether the nose-pink should be pink. :P --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:24, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Nobody seems able to save changes right now. --  Darkhallows...Mew? 00:51, September 4, 2010 (UTC) Grrrr. i re-uploaded it, but the changes aren't showing. Can someone help me? or should i just wait and see what happens? Well if you could see it i redid the collar. --Iceheart♥: 22:58, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the photo thing is fixed now, though I am not sure. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:55, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

There, i got the new version up. darkened the shading and everything else. What next? --Iceheart♥: 19:31, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a lot; its barely visible. --Dawnleaf 19:36, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the black transition. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 19:49, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

(Throughing angry tantrum) I did everything, but it won't show my changes!!!! >:( Very frustrating.--Iceheart♥:[[ 19:55, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Please calm down Iceheart. Throughing a tantrum doesn't solve anything. All images are having this problem. Please be patient. Moonflight 22:09, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

It seems it is fixed now. Darken the ear-pink, I cannot see it well. Also, make the teeth whiter? That might sound strange..XD --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:13, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's dog teeth, so the teeth are fine. Tawny (Talk) 14:01, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

It still won't upload for me. sigh. --Iceheart♥:[[ 20:43, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Add some reinforced claws. on his normal picture he has them. FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 01:59, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Mhm, I wasn't sure if I should say that, but yeah. :P Can you make the 3rd and 4th (from left) tooth a bit curvier? --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:15, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Added the claws and messed with the teeth on the collar. Just can't see it. Thought i'd just let y'all know.--Iceheart♥:[[ 04:14, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm. That's strange. I can see the changes just fine. Blur the second (larger) black stripe more or define the first one; the first one looks wispy compared to the second.--2011 Light paw It's anew year! 11:54, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

I defined the first one because the second won't blur anymore.--Iceheart♥:[ 20:34, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

The fourth spike on his collar from the left is a bit skinnier. Could you thicken it? Thicken the shading. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:14, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- fixed the things---ſceheartBlah blah 01:19, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Please rename the image Snake.rogue.alt oblivionAudience? 03:35, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Renamed---ſceheartBlah blah 04:52, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (Ro)- Approved

Shrewtooth.rogueConstructments? --HAWKTALONö 19:42, September 3, 2010 (UTC) 19:36, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. oblivionAudience? 19:46, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it should be blurred. I love the way it shows the muscles/where the shoulders are. But the eye is strange...  Darkhallows...Mew? 00:53, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

In my opinion, the shading should be blurred. I think this shading style looks funny on a black cat. Mossy go away. 02:44, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the shading and fixed the eye. --HAWKTALONö 15:04, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, other than that, it is great. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:54, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. Darken the shading at the base of the tail. Great job! ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 19:48, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit, and make the ear pink bigger. It looks a bit purpley, and I suggest taking the ear pink colour from Hollyleaf's warrior image. Mossy go away. 01:50, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, I meant blur the highlights, not shading, the shading looks fine. Sorry! Mossy go away. 01:51, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened the shading, blurred the highlights, and fixed the ear pink. --HAWKTALONö 13:20, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hollykit (NP) Alt. Kit- Approved

File:Hollykit(NP).kit.alt.png

First tabby. I didn't know what kind of design I should do, so I made two versions...Constructive criticisms? 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 01:05, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one. ★ Flowerleaf ★ 01:11, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one, too, but on that one the stripes are a bit too thick. Mossy go away. 01:44, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Second one, but it needs to be blurred much much more. Also, the eye color seems white to me? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:18, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I can see the eye colour. It's yellow. Maybe it's just your computer? Mossy go away. 03:41, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made right shoulder stripe thinner, blurred stripes. Made the eye color a bit more golden orangey. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 12:29, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)


Tigerheart Alt. A- Approved

Tigerheart.apprentice.alt

Comments? (Billystorm is being withdrawn so this should be okay.) ★ Flowerleaf ★ 20:49, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes longer and thinner. Mossy go away. 21:44, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, it's a big 'fat' right now. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:59, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Better? ★ Flowerleaf ★ 22:10, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

The leggs look really blurred. Add some tabby stripes to the back legs and add more stripes basically. :P Make the ear-pink bigger. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:24, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Better? And can someone fix the legs for me b/c my sharpen tool just distorts the colors. ★ Flowerleaf ★ 20:15, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Not needed. Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)


Jagged Rock Where Heron Sits (Ro)- Approved

Jag.rogueTotal Fail. Criticism/Comments? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:22, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Add some darker mud as well as the mud he already has but it's good a side from that. Iceheart Destruction by Ice would Suffice 18:29, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the brown patches more. oblivionAudience? 18:31, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the mud some. WhiteStorm is back! 18:33, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit--Nightshine 18:48, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure it's the 35th one. I counted it three times. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:50, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

It's the 36th. Sorry. ★ Flowerleaf ★ 19:05, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

One is withdrawed, I believe this is the 35th. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:09, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops. ★ Flowerleaf ★ 19:11, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I added a dark mud and a light mud one. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:36, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

The mud streaks are too thick. Mak them thinner. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:28, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Which one is better? I just did a whole new one.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:06, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one best. The earpink looks sort of...weird, like there's a dent in it, but my eyes might be playing tricks on me. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 23:24, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

The second one looks better. WhiteStorm is back! 12:16, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The second one's color looks better, but the stripes are to thin, in my opinion. User:MosswiskerandStealthfire/Sig 12:21, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the mud streaks a little more Rubyblaze 13:19, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred mud streaks and fixed ear-pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:41, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think the mud streaks should be blurred anymore, but maybe you should smudge them to give it more of a streak sort of look TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!!

I smudged them, but I'm not so sure. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:37, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Should it be non-smudged or smudged? Opinions? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:04, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Dunno.... Also I can barely see some of the mud streaks so can you define them a bit more? Don't define them too much though. ★ Flowerleaf ★ 12:47, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe it's your computer or something because I see it fine. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:41, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Guess it's cuz I have bad eyesight ;) ★ Flowerleaf ★ 17:16, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Do what the others said. Other then that its good.^u^ BreezestarOnly a Breeze... 19:47, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular ★ Flowerleaf ★ 20:48, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is as much as a triangle as it can get. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps make the mud on his shoulder (where ther highlights are) more defined? They look to blurry to me XP oblivionAudience? 04:36, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I can't get rid of this other one. I have two pics in my files titled "jaggedrocksits.rogue and jaggedrockheron.rogue" So I got confused. :P The modify and remove button won't appear. Anyways, reuploaded ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:01, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind fixed it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:36, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. oblivionAudience? 16:08, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yay. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:46, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten this a lot. It doesn't looks like his caveguard image that much:Jag.cg Rename this Jag.rogue.png. Make the ear pink more reddish and define the mud streaks. Darken the shading--Nightshine 01:23, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:57, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I think Hag`s cave guard image needs to be darkened a lot anyway as he`s silvery in that one while Jag is dark gray. I think you should just leave it dark and nominate the other one for the next tweak week, because his images do not look dark gray. Mossy go away. 03:40, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Getting confused now..xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:47, August 28, 2010 (UTC)


Lighten it. For now the Chararts should be consistent. Iceheart Will the thaw ever come? 06:13, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'm just saying, they look silvery not dark gray but for now I suppose Iceheart is right and you should leave it. I was just making a point. And fail, I called him Hag XD. Make the mud streaks darker, longer and thinner. Mossy go away. 18:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is very confusing. xD Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:04, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry xD Blur the mud a tiny bit. Mossy go away. 21:49, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stupid Gimp's blurring keep on making the stripes lighter. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:37, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. Iceheart Will the thaw ever come?:[[ 20:09, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't the mud streaks be smudged, like the other Tribe cats? These look a little unnatural to me. xD--2011 Light paw It's anew year! 23:25, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Gah! First I smudged it then people said 'define it much more' now your telling me to smudge i. Again. Sigh..waiting for a third caller. xD --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:33, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The mud looks fine :D Besides, it's about as smudged/defined as his cave guard image ^ And all mud isn't going to look exactly the same ^_^ oblivionAudience? 23:36, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yay :P Hehe. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:58, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? oblivionAudience? 15:44, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Define the Shading and the Hilights. It looks all one color to me. FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 16:58, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

I personally think if I darken the shading some more, it'd look really weird and blotchy, even with a good blurrer. (blurrer. xD) if I get any other complaints about it, I'll change it. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:05, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should darken the shading aswell. --Iceheart Will the thaw ever come?:[[ 18:56, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Thw streaks on his shoulder just seem too... straight, for lack of a better word. Could you make them more bent, or natural looking? Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:52, August 30, 2010 (UTC) Too straight? xD I don't really understand that, could you clarify it? Reuploaded --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:02, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the mudstreaks a little more--I agree with Mosswisker&Stealthfire that they do look a little unnatural. Maybe add some more shading. But it looks well right now! Willowheart1231 00:06, August 31, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Reuploaded --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:31, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his back. oblivionAudience? 22:35, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Sorry, Frostheart! What I meant was, they get the streaks by rolling in mud puddles, so they wouldn't be perfectly straight lines. They'd be thicker, or something, I don't know! Hehe, maybe you couold get your cat to roll in mud, hehe. ^^ Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 21:10, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

I don't have a cat...xD. And if a cat rolled in mud, wouldn't their pelt be soaked? With a tiny tint of their real fur color? Eh? ;D --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:11, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - double XD Yeah, but then we wouldn't be able to tell them apart! Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 21:28, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me :D I forgot to sign. Anyway, blur the shading on this back. I agree Stealth, the mud streaks, at least the ones on his legs, should be longer. oblivionAudience? 22:35, August 31, 2010 (UTC) Kay, I'll upload it tomorrow, I'm trying to live life itself before school starts. :) Then I can have something to look foreward to when school starts, xD --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:13, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Great job Frost. Thicken the shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 17:39, September 2, 2010 (UTC) Reuploaded. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:42, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Well done. --Dawnleaf 23:00, September 2, 2010 (UTC) Something is wrong with the image adder right now, so I won't do anything until it is fixed. Which is weird, because it was working fine just 2 days ago before they 'fixed' it. :P --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:38, September 3, 2010 (UTC)


I guess I don't have to re-upload because my picture showed up again. :3 --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:57, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? oblivionAudience? 22:00, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the ear pink (i feel bad for ruining CBA XD) --★ Flowerleaf ★ 22:16, September 9, 2010 (UTC) I'm sorry, but what's wrong with the ear-pink? I see it fine. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:33, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

I meant make it more triangular --★ Flowerleaf ★ 00:07, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

To be honest, and not to offend, I think it's really triangular, though. It's pretty much as triangle as it could get. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:08, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. Restarting 24 hrs O_O oblivionAudience? 01:28, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 00:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (W) - Approved

Shrewtooth.warriorMy second Charart, I didn't know an eye color so I did yellow, comments? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 15:05, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is uneven. Blur the highlights and shading a ton. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:24, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded 'Better? Or more? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 15:43, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing a bit. Make the ear pink smaller. Blur the shading and highlights--Nightshine 17:32, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I lightened it, but I didn't want to overdo it (so it would still look like a black cat), I made the earpink smaller, and I blurred the shading and highlights over again, better? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 19:03, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and blur it. Darken the shading and blur. If you want highlights you should lighten them--Nightshine 19:09, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten it a tad bit more.

ZorthHighly Explosive 01:16, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is still uneven. WhiteStorm is back! 18:23, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think blurring the earpink more will fix that.AshshadowNo really? 13:55, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I decided highlights were too much work, so I took them out. I lightened it a bit (I think) blurred the earpink, and shading again. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 01:27, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred a lot.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:29, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Do you want me to add highlights? TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!!

I agree with Frostheart. The shading needs to be blurred a lot. Maybe blur the earpink some more as well. And Totallytawnypelt? I think the highlights would be a nice touch! WillowheartMay StarClan light your path! 00:59, August 26, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

D E F I N E N T L Y blur the shading. Sunnyfrost 01:12, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Totallytawnypelt, once I blurr the shading more you can add the highlights. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 02:41, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I seem to be doing a lot of blurring, and I'll do some more now just in case! ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 03:09, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I just figured out how to make the blurr tool more effective! Yay! Here I did more blurring, hopefully it's enough. Comments? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 03:15, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Better? Or did that not help? (Sorry but i can't get my cursor past your siggie) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 15:28, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I can't add highlights because there is a large part on the chest that is quite transeparent (I opened it up in photoshop to add the highlights), so just fill it in with the color of the shading...TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!!

Make the ear pink smaller. --Dawnleaf 20:28, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I tried to make it smaller but now it looks sorta weird, comments? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:05, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink like a triangle. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:56, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I made it more triangular, is it good enough? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 23:51, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah it's great. Add shading to the back-legs (like the legs behind the front legs not the legs next to the tail..) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:00, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I think I understood what you meant, but if not let me know, comments? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 03:37, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Just letting people know I'm going camping from August 28 to at most September 3, so don't decline the charart before I get back, then I can work on editing again. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 03:44, August 27, 2010 (UTC)


Okay, I added the highlights, and filled in some transeparent parts of the lineart, but theirs some by the paw that I couldn't really fix...File:Shrewtoothhighlights.warrior.png And I know that the shading is kind of blotchy, but you're going to have to fix it, because my blur tool is demented unless it doesn't have merged layers.....sorry if it's not good enough...;P TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!! 14:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - don't worry, the highlights are great! And I'll get to work on the shading. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 15:13, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blep (shoots self) I meant highlights, because I made the highlights blotchy and couldn't blur them. I'm so sorry if this means you'll have to fix it up a bit, but I'm starting to get crazy.... ;P TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!! 18:24, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

That's okay, I hadn't started on the shading, so it should be okay. (I'm what is called a procrastinator) =) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 18:54, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink still looks funny to me, it's much much darker in the middle to me. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:27, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded - Is this better? I also darkened the eyes becasue they looked unnaturally bright, comments? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 19:58, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, I'm bad at using highlights! ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 20:04, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

(-_-Ugh, I meant to say bold, and apparently i'm bad at typing also!) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 20:14, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink--Nightshine 23:10, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is looking nice! Although, I agree with Nightshine, you should blur the ear pink. Also, blur the shading and add some shading to the face. Mossy go away. 03:37, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the legs behind the front legs..and not the back legs next to the tail. xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:00, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 15:11, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I blurred the earpink and shading some more, added shading to the far front leg (that's right?), comments? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 15:33, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 17:50, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I darkened it, should i do more or is this good, comments? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'Tigerstar's best bud!! 18:12, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Add highlight to the tail, if you want 'cause it is optional. Willowheart1231 01:46, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

I don't know if you can see it or not, but I added highlights to his tail, let me know if it needs more, comments? DappleclawTigerstar's best bud!! 02:23, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights on the tail, and add some shading to the head. --Dawnleaf 19:15, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

I lightened the highlight on the tail, and I think I add the shading in the right spots, comments? DappleclawTigerstar's best bud!! 21:39, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

There's a weird spot by the head, like a piece of lineart....Tawny (Talk) 00:46, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Better? I'm not to sure what you meant but let me know if it needs tweaking, comments? DappleclawTigerstar's best buddeh!! 01:07, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

This looks good! Comments before approval?--Nightshine 01:10, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 15:09, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Alt. MC) - Approved

Yellowfang.mc.alt Constructments? Sigh, I feel bad for putting this up because it makes me feel like I stole this chance from Flowerleaf. The furry texture was really hard, I had to redo the shading a million times, but I think the result is. . . okay. Mossy go away.

How did you steal this from Flowerleaf? Anyways, make the ear-pink a tiny bit bigger. But other than that, it's great. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:45, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Because I told her she needed to withdraw her Tigerheart kit image because he was never seen as a golden tabby kit, but for some reason, it still makes me feel mean. I'll get on that. Mossy go away. 21:09, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

It won't let me overwrite it. . . I tried a bazillion times, and the correct version is at the bottom with the pevious versions. I even tried reverting it to the correct version, but it's not working. . . help. . . Mossy go away. 21:16, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure..also, you have a black speck near the ear. Sorry about that random sentence. Maybe wait a day or two. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:18, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, don't worry. I feel stupid cause now come to think of it, i dont think he was ever seen as a kit while golden tabby ★ Flowerleaf ★ 22:27, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

That black speck's actually a grey speck, cuz I remembered to do her ears after I coloured her in, so I had to erase the excess ear colour but because of GIMP's stupid checkered grey background I missed it. In the correct version that's fixed. I'm glad you're not mad at me Flowerleaf :D Mossy go away. 22:54, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Moss! But when was she described with a different pelt colour? Anyways, darken the paw shading and tail shading. I really like her. =) ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:26, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Look at her page, it says it there (there's a source, and I remember them refferring to her this way anyways :3) Sigh. I'll re-upload as soon as I can, it's just that the uploader isn;t working right now. But I'm still making changes, don't worry, I'll do it :3 Mossy go away. 00:31, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded★ Yes! The uploader's working for me now! I ended up redoing the tail shading cuz it looked funny and I did my best to fix what you guys told me to :3 Mossy go away. 20:07, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm... Should the herbs be all one color? ★ Flowerleaf ★ 22:10, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Make the scars more noticible. oblivionAudience? 22:17, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Try to make the furry texture more noticeable. Willowheart1231 22:19, September 6, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

I did what you guys said but now the uploader's being stubborn again. Mossy go away. 23:08, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

It seems to be working now. oblivionAudience? 23:15, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded★ Yeah, it did now. I made the scars more noticable and I smudged the furry texture some more. Ehh. . . I don't know if I want to change the herbs. Does anybody else think I should? Mossy go away. 01:48, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

No, the herbs are fine. Make her even more furry :D oblivionAudience? 01:51, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded★ Done! Mossy go away. 01:44, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Wow. This is really great. ^^ Darken the shading a tad. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:17, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded★ . . . I think I killed it. Thanks, Frostheart ^ ^ I'm actually really proud of her :D Mossy go away. 03:49, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

This looks excellent to me, but I think that the scars should be like they are on the other med cat image; the scars are on the face and the ears aren't nicked. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 03:16, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

There were scars on her face. I don't know what happened, sorry. Uploader issues. I just gave her shredded ears because her appearance said she had them. :/ Mossy go away. 01:47, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Nothing wrong with the uploader; just my dumbness. I don't know if I want to get rid of the shredded ears. Well, if you guys think I should I will. Mossy go away. 01:51, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shredded ears are part of the beautiful image Mosspool's made. I really don't think we should get rid of them, but thats you guy's choices :) SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 06:05, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't even see that her description said she had torn ears. Sorry. :P Good, because I loved the shredded ears on this image, anyway. C: I don't see anything else, so comments before approval? Great job on the image. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 16:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, its deifnitely been 24 hours by now. Mossy go away. 21:51, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Mosspool, I'm pretty sure no one noticed it. But in the future, please be patient and wait until one of the leads approves your image before commenting =) Approving. oblivionAudience? 21:59, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Velvet - Approved

Velvet.kittypet

Mmm. Constructments? --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:18, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading on her back a little bit. ♫ Tansy ♫So unbelievable it's believeable! 22:30, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading on the back is great.There's nothing I can say. :D ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:33, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, make this more silvery, right now it looks pale gray. Darken the ear pink a bit more and blur it--Nightshine 22:53, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks fine. This is lovely, Bramble, I can't find anything wrong with it other than the above comments. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:26, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

She looks pale gray, not silver. And may I suggest more highlights, because I've found thye help make silver cats look. . . well, more silvery. (That may sound strange XD) Other than that, this looks great! Mossy go away. 05:33, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make her more 'silvery' ★ Flowerleaf ★ 10:33, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more, and maybe add some more highlights (like on the tail?) WillowheartMay StarClan light your path! 00:41, August 26, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

lol 'silvery' Anyways, I'd just say to....um...did I mention that this was AMAZING!!! TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!!

The shading makes it seems 'silvery' to me. But darken it a little bit. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:35, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

There's an tiny speck of blurred lineart up by the ear pink. You can't really see it, though. Mossy go away. 21:32, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I see it now that you mention it. xD Darken the shading on his back. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:06, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps add some highlights because she looks kinda shadowy. That's just my opinion, though. --llwildheartl 04:18, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Forestheart, Velvet is a girl. And, yeah, add some highlights on the head, back, and possibly tail. Sunnyfrost 17:38, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

My mistake, Sunnyfrost. Highlights are optional, and I personally prefer this deep look. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:51, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Just my opinion --llwildheartl 05:44, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the dark shading makes it look 'silvery' xpℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:42, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

If you ask me, the dark shading just makes it look. . . gray. Mossy go away. 02:15, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Silver is a shade of gray. I think the pelt color is fine.AshshadowNo really? 14:48, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's a very dull shade of gray, silver is brighter. Elorisa-sama40px 15:18, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink line-art is blurred a tiny-bit. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:10, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I dunno, I like the color. Maybe, MAYBE, blur the shading on her right haunch some. But only if it doesn't mess up the rest of the shading, which looks AWESOME! Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 21:00, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Y'all had a field day with this one. I've added very subtle highlights, blurred thoroughly in suggested places, and fixed the blurred lineart on the ear. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:25, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

She looks amazing! CBA? oblivionAudience? 23:15, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's still to pale. Darken it more and it should be good--Nightshine 23:52, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading 142.161.238.236 21:37, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

(Oops, i wasn't logged in!) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'Tigerstar's best bud!! 21:40, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Dappleclaw to blur the shading. I also think you should add more highlights, because to me she still looks dull. Mossy go away. 21:25, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

I very much do not want to change her color. That's the thing about working with book characters; you don't actually see their color. So you have nothing to compare this with. She's not orange or purple, she's a very respectable shade of pale gray, which is considered silver. She is also mentioned as a gray cat in the dialogue; I can provide page numbers if necessary. I will work on the shading tomorrow when I have more time. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:29, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

You don't need to, Bramble, I believe you. But I always thought silver was just, like, a shade of gray, but I always imagined silver to look. . . well, it's hard to explain. When you google silver cat the pictures. . . they just look different! Ugh, I don't know how explain. I guess it's be more like Moonflower's base colour, is you ask me. Mossy go away. 01:51, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

I honestly think the image looks fine. Definitely got some resemblance to silver, but most users point of view it is pale gray. I think It should stay the way it is. SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 06:19, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Shading should be blurred now. Hopefully this can get off the page now; I'm sorry my intervals between uploading are few and far between. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:19, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure it can. :) CBA? IcethroatHappyHolidays! 14:59, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved   Darkhallows...Mew? 14:07, September 14, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

Foxheart (Alt.D) - Approved

File:Foxheart.deputy.alt.pnghope you like it (First Real Chartart) Rainear 03:39, June 29, 2010 (UTC)Rainear

Sorry, this will have to be declined, Shimmerpool had him reserved first. Dawny 03:45, June 29, 2010 (UTC) [[File:Foxheart.png]]

No that that users is "Alternative Warrior" mine is "Alternative Deputy" Rainear 03:49, June 29, 2010 (UTC)Rainear

Opps sorry. Dawny 04:14, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

I took him out of thumb nail for you. You should always upload it full size. As for the image, the lineart looks very strange, and it's way too big. What art program do you use? Second, It's not the same color as the deputy image Foxheart already has. This is yellow as apposed to ginger. Third, there's no shading at all Night Fall 06:15, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks very strange...I would say to layer a deputy image on it. Add shading. The pelt color should be the same as his warrior image. Make the ear pink smaller and darker. Icefall★ Talk 14:37, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks as if you traced it. Did you? Icefall★ Talk 15:03, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Well, it shows up waaaaaaaaaaaay to big. Like you saved it about three times the normal size of the file. And, it does look like you traced the lineart. ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT! 15:15, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Also, rename it Foxheart.deputy.alt.pngMoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 18:37, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Here:DeputyLongMaleuse this and color it in. 雨晶須 五六七☯☮ 02:46, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I used My Paint if you want to know :) -Rainear 19:04, June 30, 2010 (UTC)Rainear

You should use GIMP or Pixlr to do chararts. This is too big. Use this blank:DeputyLongMale--Nightshine~ 19:10, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine is right. Use one of those programs, and save that blank to your computer. ☽Icestorm★ 19:19, June 30, 2010 (UTC)



Please use GIMP or Pixlr to add shading. Layer over the line art I gave you onto your image--Nightshine~ 20:27, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

I Dont have Gimp or Pixlr all I have that works with the template is Paint. RainearMed-cat of Riverclan

Okay, first, this needs to be bigger. Right-click the image Nightshine gave you, press, 'open into new tab' and then save that blank. Go to pixlr.com, and open the image. Then, you should probably re-do it/layer the lineart over this image. Then, darken the shading, blur it, make the ear pink smaller, darken it, and blur it. Also addd shading to the front of the haunch, tail, and face. ☽Icestorm★ 21:10, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Also, use a tutorial for the eyes.MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 23:37, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Rainear, you don't have to start a new section when you are redoing it. Instead use the old section you put up, then put the image there. 雨晶須 五六七☯☮ 14:41, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I've merged the two sections. Please continue to edit from here.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 21:11, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I haven't read Bluestar's Prophecy at all but, how is Foxheart described in the alternate version? (Time for a trip to the bookstore xD) Quailflight 05:17, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

lol, yes. In the allegiances of Bluestar's Prophecy, she is mistakenly described as a tom. And, in Battles of the Clans, there is a chapter where Foxheart is a tom throughout the entire thing. But I'm pretty sure she's supposed to be a she-cat, especially after reading Secrets of the Clans. The Clan suspected Foxheart as being the secret mother of Brokentail, so you know xD Night Fall 05:19, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-How is it now? Rainear be as silent as rain

Add shading.AshshadowAg 03:00, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Added shading Rainear be as silent as rain

Blur the shading and there is color outside of the line art.AshshadowAg 03:23, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Blured shading (Hope it's better XD) Rainear be as silent as rain

Not bad for a beginner, but lets get to business. It can be a tad hard shading when your image has a transparent background so you probably see some gray smudges around him. That came from your work of burning my dear friend. Plus it looks like you ran over his eyes with the burn tool as well with changed his eye color. The coloring is kind of darked than Foxheart's original image so try dodging it or desaturating it some. Which ever you prefer :) Once thats done then you can blur in the shading as it looks a little choppy to me, but that might be my computer.--35px Gladiator Band Geek 25px 05:03, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Blured Shading even more to make natral fixed eye and It's not darker than the origanal Charart Rainear be as silent as rain

Is it better or worse? Rainear be as silent as rain

Reloaded-I know no one mentioned but I looked at the Foxheart page and his eye color is light green so I change the Charart's eye color. Comments? Rainear be as silent as rain

It has been a day and a half and no one else has commented is it ready to be acepted? Rainear be as silent as rain

You should wait at least five days, if not a week for asking for comments. As for the image, blur the earpink. MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 02:47, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Also, the line art on the jaw looks a bit odd, as if some of it is missing. MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 02:48, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-I fixed jaw lineart and I blured/redone the ear pink. Comments? Rainear be as silent as rain

Oh! I added some shading/highlights on his face. Any Comments/suggestions? Rainear be as silent as rain

This has an unusual texture that I don't normally see, and it's very pretty. You did a nice job. =) There are a couple of things though; the front foreleg's shading's transition is too hard; blur it and add some more shading down the leg. Add darker shading to the hind paws, as those would be in shadow. Add a little more shading down the tail and blur the existing shading slightly. Off image critique now; I moved the image to the top of the section; please keep it there so it's in a consistent spot. Also, you seem to be only typing three tildes instead of four; please type four so the timestamp will be there as well as the signature. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 12:19, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-I did what you said bramble and sorry about the tail I did what you asked but I think I blured the transaction too much Rainear be as silent as rain 15:31, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is there anything else that needs to be done? Rainear Let the rain guide you 21:02, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

You should wait a few days before asking if anything needs to be done, but I see that there is blurred lineart by his left ear, and on his left leg and haunch, but if it's shading I'm seeing instead then you should blur it. TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 12:20, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Thanks Riverpelt fixed the ear, leg, and shading :) Better? Rainear Let the rain guide you

Darken the ear pink and darken the shading a bit. The chest line art looks a bit funny, overlap it with another of the long haired deputy blanks and it should be good. The line art also looks strange around the front of his haunch--nightshine 00:22, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Darkened the ear pink and tried to darken shading and fixed the Line art Rainear Let the rain guide you

Thicken the shading on the haunch and blur all of it.AshshadowNo really? 13:33, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Did what you said Ashshadow :) . Better? Rainear Let the rain guide you

File:Foxheart.Deputyy.pngThe red part indicates that the shading is blurred and theres also some color mixed up. The blue indicates color outside the line art and the line-art color is changed. Lol..it's kinda messy xD I don't have a good stable hand. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:51, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's coming along nicely. Darken the shading a tad.AshshadowNo really? 17:48, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Tried to fix it hope it's better XD Rainear Let the rain guide you

Blur the shading. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 23:46, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I reverted it to one of its original forms as the shading is lovely right as it is shown now - it doesn't need to be changed further. Saturate and brighten the ear pink to have it stand out a touch more, but don't make the transition hard, and I'd call this good. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:55, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

You took the words right out of my mouth, Bramble! (Seriously, I said the same things, clicked save and it gave me the edit conflict thing) Anyways, I think you should make the eye a bit brighter. It looks really pale. Mossy go away. 03:19, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The tail color where it's not shaded looks...brighter than the rest of him. I'm not good with pixlr or gimp or whatever, but maybe blurring the shading just there would help. Don't mess with it otherwise, Bramble and Dove are right, it looks amazing! Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 11:57, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art is still blurred and some of the line-art is brown. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:07, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the entire thing, this is brown-ish compared to Foxheart's other images. 70.64.149.241 05:37, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded- Just got back from camp fixed it up. Except it is not brownish and I took the color from the deputy Image so yeah! Comments? Rainear Let the rain guide you

Rainear, even if you took the colour from the other images the colour will be different because of shading and highlights, and your shading could've made it look that way, too. Even if you took the colour from it that doesn't mean anything. If you compare it to her other images the colour on this is duller. That was me above, by the way. Mossy go away. 05:23, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

And almost all of the lineart is blurred. Mossy go away. 05:25, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome :) just fix some line art on his ear Dusksong 21:13, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

I just wanted to point out that Pixlr is a website, and a very handy one at that.

ZorthHighly Explosive 01:32, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

None of the line art is blurred Dovesong and Dusksong, I checked and I don't use Pixler or Gimp I use My Paint and I think the coloring is just fine Dovesong Rainear Let the rain guide you

Make the ear-pink noticeable. And the line-art isn't blurred because they fixed it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:15, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'll fix the ear pink (could you give me the color example Red-pink Salmon pink) and I checked the saved copy on my computer Frostheart Rainear Let the rain guide you

Well, I guess just a bit more noticeable. xD A bit pinker. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:37, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's awesome, but try to define the ear-pink a bit more. ♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 23:05, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Done (Still not shure) and yes the ear pink is blurred. Comments? Rainear Let the rain guide you 14:21, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, but try to make the ear-pink blurred, a bit?♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 18:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. Blur it a bit. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:58, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Rainear, the lineart is blurred. I've checked a million times and again just now. It's supposed to be hard pixels. And like I said before, this is very dull in comparison to her other images. . . also, please don't call me dovesong. Not only do I just dislike that name, there's another person on here called dovesong now, so yeah. Thanks. Mossy go away. 05:57, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Also, the shoulder lineart on the shoulder looks different. And the ear pink is very pale. Mossy go away. 06:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art looks fine to me, and make the ear-pink...salmonish? And blur it.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:37, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the chest and head, and front of the haunch. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 03:18, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Guys. I took the image and looked at it in GIMP, the lineart wasn't hard pixels like it's supposed to be. If you took it and put it in GIMP and went close up you would see the lineart isn't pixelly. Mossy go away. 04:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

I see it too, Dovesong. Rainear, look at the line art close up in GIMP and then make it one solid colour. oblivionAudience? 13:14, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I also see it. Spread the highlights more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:20, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Ahh, finally! Also, it doesn't matter too much but I'd appreciate it if you'd call me Mosspool, because there's a different person in the project called Dovesong. Thank you! Also, someone to all of you who don't know I'm pretty sure when Rainear says My Paint she means a downloadable program which is pretty much has all the same features as pixlr. Mossy go away. 00:18, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, yes. I researched it and it is. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:02, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-(Sorry it took so long but I was working on my new Wiki XD) and yes it is the same program your talking about but I got it in a Email I got. I spreaded the shading looks like there's no shading at all though, Fixed line art again (Like the 4th time), and sorry Mosspool Rainear Let the rain guide you 05:22, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. By 'My Paint' I thought you meant 'Paint' and by capitalizing the 'M' I thought it was just a grammar mistake. :P Blur the ear-pink still and make the highlights more noticeable. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:31, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Blurred ear pink and changed/redone shading Rainear Let the rain guide you 07:13, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a lot and make it more reddish, blur it--Nightshine 20:22, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Tame the highlights abit. Sorry if that sounds hypocritical. xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:16, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

I would darken it again but when I darken it people say to lighten it, then darken, then lighten, and I'm really tired of shanging it :P. but I will fix the highlights Rainear Let the rain guide you 23:43, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a little more. The one by the shoulder looks a little funny, but that could just be my monitor. Willowheart1231 23:49, August 30, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Yes, the shoulder highlight is kinda low. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:00, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's also a bit too far to our right. And the highlights looks kind of...dusty. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 22:47, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the chest shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:22, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-I redid the hole Image to make it look 10x better so how does it look now? Rainear Let the rain guide you 03:10, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur it. Blur the ear pink--Nightshine 15:24, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Fixed and blurred shading. Comments? Rainear Let the rain guide you 01:38, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading a bit. Blur the ear pink.--Dawnleaf 01:41, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. I'm VERY picky about ear pinks >.< ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 02:28, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Fixed shading and ear pink. Comments? Rainear Let the rain guide you 02:40, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and ear pink more. --Dawnleaf 20:56, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and earpink. (I'M STOPPING IN TO SAY HI :D) Tawny (Talk) 21:54, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

it's still a bit dull compared to Foxheart's other images. I suggest opening this in whatever program you use and having Foxheart's image open and try to match the colours. Mossy go away. 04:33, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading, and darken the haunch shading where the tail begins.2011 Light paw It's anew year! 20:05, September 5, 2010 (UTC) 19:59, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Blurred, Darkened, and Mosspool that is what I did it's the same color as her deputy Image. Comments? Rainear Let the rain guide you 16:51, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think he still needs his shading blurred some more, particularly on his head and chest, and his ear pink could be blended a bit, too. But, otherwise, nice job. :) --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 20:07, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Ok Blur and Blend (Ha, Ha, blur and blend) Rainear Let the rain guide you 00:32, September 8, 2010 (UTC) Still needs more blurring on the edges, I can help, if you want.  Darkhallows...Mew? 16:02, September 10, 2010 (UTC)


Sure thanks Darkhollows :D Rainear Let the rain guide you 23:20, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred for you.   Darkhallows...Mew? 12:10, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Rainear Let the rain guide you 23:15, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Alright I see nothing else wrong and this has been up long enough. CBA?   Darkhallows...Mew? 17:09, September 13, 2010 (UTC


Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:55, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

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