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Percy (R)-Approved

Percy.rogueI withdrew my other one so... here's Percy! I actually kinda like this one xD. Comments? --- -- Cherryfur 11:02, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hm...I've never seen Percy as a character before. The ear pink is too big and kinda a odd shape. Silvery 12:19, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't this over the limit? There can only be 35 up for approval and this is the 36th. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 13:06, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, Nettlsplash is being withdrawn, so this is fine. Anyway, fix up the earpink. oblivionAudience? 13:15, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! I didn't see that. XD But yeah I agree with Beautiful Oblivion and Silverdapple! RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 13:28, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

i think you should make the earpink smaller. but im just an apprentice so idk. Sunnyfrost 13:29, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is too big. Blur the stripes more.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:24, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Shrink the ear pink so its not as big as we think, then blur the stripes on the fur

ha ha I got that from Zorth ;P (i made up the las part) and now this means I can't do Percy when Rockshade gets approved :( (DON'T WITHDRAW THOUGH!! THIS IS REALLY GOOD!) TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!!

Reuploaded Thanks, Tawny!! And, sorry, I didn't know you were planning to do his image too. xD Anyways, I blurred the stripes and fixed the ear pink. What else? --- -- Cherryfur 20:17, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add some more shading? I'm an apprentice as well... WillowheartMay StarClan light your path! 00:40, August 26, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

lol willow, i second that last part. but i think it looks great, me being an apprentice :P Sunnyfrost 01:10, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried adding some more shading, but it didn't go so well. I couldn't blur it because it made the stripes unevenly blurred xD. I just added some to the head. Anything else? --- -- Cherryfur 01:19, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes and darken the entire thing just a bit. Mossy go away. 02:03, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added more stripes and darkened the whole thing. Anything else? --- -- Cherryfur 10:38, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur it a bit more? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:31, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

lol its okay Cherr Cherr (mah new nickname for you!!O.O) anyways, I'd just say to blur and center the earpink :P TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!!

Reuploaded Lol, Tawny! Thanks for the new name :P Anyways, I blurred the earpink and centered it. Anything else? --- -- Cherryfur 20:40, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes on the belly and make the ear-pink like a triangle. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:06, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I believe you meant the chest. The stomach has enough stripes. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 01:49, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

I mean the front part of it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:30, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well... I just added some stripes to the chest and I made the earpink like a triangle. Anything else? --- -- Cherryfur 11:22, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink. --Dawnleaf 18:23, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is just me experimenting, but try making the stripes reach down farther. Don't save it if you don't like it, but it could give it a more...tabby effect. TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!! 18:33, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I centered the ear pink, but for the stripes, I tried to do that but, it made the stripes meet each other so I just left it with the short stripes. Anything else? --- -- Cherryfur 11:07, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add some stripes to the paws. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 18:00, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added stripes to the paws. What else? --- -- Cherryfur 01:05, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Add stripes to the back legs. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:42, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yup add stripes to the back and front right legs other than that Nice!! ShadowandBlue 13:53, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added stripes to the back and front right legs. Anything else? -- Cherryfur 15:26, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art is blurred a lot in various places and blur the highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:12, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred the highlights, but I wasn't sure where the blurred lineart was... other than that, what else? -- Cherryfur 23:19, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Theres blurred line-art along the back and tail. Shrink the ear pink a tad. --Dawnleaf 23:59, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? -- Cherryfur 11:28, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are really. . . round. IDK, make them pointier if that makes sense. Also add more stripes to the shoulder, there's none there. Darken the ear pink and nose, lighten the eyes. Mossy go away. 20:33, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I couldn't make the stripes pointier, though I tried xD. It made it look... strange xD. Should I just leave it like this or should I try to make it pointier again? Other than that, is there anything else? -- Cherryfur 11:10, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights, or darken the shading. --Dawnleaf 22:07, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, because they look unnatural. But it could just be my computer screen... Willowheart1231 00:39, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Make the earpink smaller. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:25, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? -- Cherryfur 20:23, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes to tail and face. Blur highlights and darken shading.--Nightshine 01:14, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? -- Cherryfur 12:01, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Mmm.... I just realized my changes weren't showing up.... I'll try again in a day or too, if I have time. -- Cherryfur 22:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It shows my changes now. Anyway, is there anything else for me to do? -- Cherryfur 16:06, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks lovely :) CBA? oblivionAudience? 23:50, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 20:11, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Nutmeg (Q) - Approved

Nutmeg (Ro).queen I thought her rogue charart was really beautiful, so here's the queen version! Comments?--Nightshine 23:46, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the transitions some more and blur the highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:51, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I smudged the black paw and tail tip. I didn't add any highlights--Nightshine 00:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. I meant the ear-pink. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:07, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I blurred the ear pink a bit more--Nightshine 00:16, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is so beautiful! Make the ear pink bigger though. SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 04:13, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made ear pink bigger--Nightshine 04:30, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I love this! The white seems a little grey, though.   Darkhallows...Mew? 11:59, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's just the shading, it looks slightly gray on her rogue image as well: File:Nutmeg.rogue.png--Nightshine 17:31, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a tiny bit on the white parts. It looks a bit too gray.AshshadowNo really? 18:00, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened white shading some--Nightshine 18:18, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the patches don't go with her rogue image. It's a very well-done image, though. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 20:19, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Which patches should I change?--Nightshine 23:27, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The orange on her haunch (by her tail) is orange with a black piece but on her other image, the black is atthe top of there and then it's white. Also, by her shoulder where there's orange there's a black piece, but that's not there on her rogue image. I think that's it. Also, lighten the shading more. It's still too gray. Mossy go away. 01:46, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oh! Also, on her rogue image there's black on her tail. Mossy go away. 07:15, September 12, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

Re-Uploaded changed the patches--Nightshine 16:57, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the front leg shading and it should be ready. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 19:06, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred forearm shading--Nightshine 19:12, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the ear-pink and make it more noticiable. WhiteStorm is back! 20:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened ear pink--Nightshine 21:54, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

The patches haven't changed. . . ? Mossy go away. 22:08, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I changed the one on the haunch--Nightshine 22:16, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

So you did. Put on her rogue image, those two haunch patches should be smaller. Also, you still need to change the other patches. . . Mossy go away. 23:12, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Which patches do I need to change? I don't see anything wrong with them, they don't need to be completely exact.--Nightshine 23:18, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

it's on the same side, so they should look the same. Above, I already described to you what needs to be changed. Mossy go away. 23:53, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, aslo, darken the ear pink to match her other image, and lighten the shading very slightly. Mossy go away. 23:54, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

I was told to lighten the shading, it was the same as her rogue image before. I think the shading is fine. Can you actually describe to me which patches you want changed? I think they look fine-Nightshine 00:08, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

For the patches, the hind leg (closer to us) has only white on the haunch for the rouge image. And the tail for the rouge has a bit of black/dark gray as well. DappleclawCan you read my poker face ... 00:20, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

The majority of the haunch is white, so when she is standing it looks more white, and on the tail it is just the shading--Nightshine 02:53, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

I'm 100% sure that's black, not shading. I think I said something else, too. Mossy go away. 03:44, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that is black on the tail. --HAWKTALONö 19:12, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded added black to tail--Nightshine 00:10, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think that little black patch on her shoulder should be there. Mossy go away. 03:28, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I got rid of it--Nightshine 03:35, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Looks wonderful. Perhaps blur the stomach shading a LEETLE bit. Otherwise, perfect =) llwildheartl 02:31, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred belly shading--Nightshine 02:54, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think she looks great! Comments before approval? =) oblivionAudience? 00:19, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 01:49, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Rowanfur (W)-Approved

Rowanfur.warriorIt's not very often I use this shading style and now I know why. Comments?AshshadowNo really? 23:05, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more stripes near the face. :) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:07, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

He has the same number of stripes on his face as his kittypet image does.AshshadowNo really? 23:12, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes a bit. Blur the ear pink a bit more--Nightshine 23:13, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Shred the ear a bit more, it looks more shredded (?) in his kittypet picture. And sorry, didn't see the stripes near the eye. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:15, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on the legs a bit more. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:02, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks overblurred if I blur it anymore. I'm against darkening the stripes because 1. they're the exact same color as the ones on his kittypet image and 2. they're not going to get darker just because light is shinging on them. The ears look the same to me. Does it look different to anyone else?AshshadowNo really? 12:30, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yes they DO look different. On the kittypet pic it's like this: /W\ While on here it looks like /V\. On the ear closer to us anyway. ★ Flowerleaf ★ 22:43, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

No, The ear looks fine Flowerleaf. Blur the shading a little more. SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 22:45, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Both ears and the shading loo fine to me. If you feel the need to change it, go ahead. I think it looks fine the way it is. Moonflight 15:31, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, but I think the ears are different. On the kittypet image, it looks like each ear has two nicks in it, but on this image it looks like one ear has one nick in it and one ear has three or four nicks in it. Just fix the ears and I think this will be good; the shading's blurred just the same amount as it is on the kittypet image, and it looks good as it is now. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 19:41, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink looks almost brown. Lighten it. WhiteStorm is back! 20:56, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

No, the ear pink is fine. What's bothering me is the torn ears. ★ Flowerleaf ★ 01:19, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

You have to realize that the ears on the warrior blank are smaller and harder to work with. Ice: there are more than two nicks in the more shreeded ear in the kittypet image.AshshadowNo really? 10:46, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks fine. This is probably as close to the kittypet image ears as it'll get. Moonflight 20:09, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Mossy go away. 23:48, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it needs to be blurred anymore. Any other comments about shading.AshshadowNo really? 19:33, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The lineart on the ears needs to be the same thickness as the rest of the lineart.

It is the same thickness.AshshadowNo really? 02:21, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine as is; it looks very beautiful. :D Comments before approval? IcethroatHappyHolidays! 03:31, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

The tear on the far ear looks too exact for a bite mark. Make it more chunky and uneven (LOL), like the closer ear.--Shaf Girl 20:09, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

It's the same as the kittypet image.AshshadowNo really? 21:48, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 04:50, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Heathertail (alt. W)- Approved

Heathertail.warrior.alt Heathertail. Need to fix the shading but not willing to let someone else get this spot. I'm going to fix it now. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:52, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. Otherwise, this is great, Iceheart. :) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darkened/messedw ith the shading. How many approved image do you need to be a warrior? This is gonna be my third so i'm hoping 3.---ſceheartBlah blah 01:24, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Three, Iceheart. :) Thicken the shading on the belly. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the entire thing, because on this she looks pale gray. Also, don't you think you should use the same eye colour that's on her other images? Mossy go away. 01:54, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice! But, I'd add shading on the back of the left front leg. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:57, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- did as i was told. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:13, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely job! Blur the shading on her flank. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 03:10, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

All you people are so nice. You all say how nice it is before you critasize(sorry i can't spell) it and it just makes me feeel good about myself XD. Anyways, i blurred and blurred and blurred until it could blur no more.---ſceheartBlah blah 03:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like she has dark gray paws, lighten the paws and the tail tip! This is lovely! :3 SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 03:58, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yikes! I think she might have actually been an apprentice when they described her this way (I was the one who put the source on her alternate appearance) I believe it was just before she became a warrior, but I could be wrong. If I'm right, then you could just keep this up and quickly make the new image, and put Heatherpaw for approval instead of Heathertail, right? Can someone check for me? I don't have an available copy of Long Shadows right now. Mossy go away. 05:08, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

It's probably a warrior if it is that late in the book, I re-read it recently. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:13, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-upload-I checked before i started (I plan aheadXD) she was a warrior when she was called grey. -ſceheartBlah blah 05:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The paws are still dark gray :P SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 06:03, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ya i just realized that, i thought it was because something was wrong with the uploader again, but nope it was just me.-ſceheartBlah blah 06:12, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is really pretty :3 Thicken the shading on the neck though. SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 06:23, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I hope you become a warrior, Iceheart. ;) Anyways, blur the ear-pink a bit more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:17, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thanks Sunny and Frostheart!!!! What next?-ſceheartBlah blah 17:43, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the belly shading, still. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:08, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thickened the shading, but if i do it anymore it just looks....bad. Comments?-ſceheartBlah blah 20:28, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the midriff shading. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 20:39, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Your comments have been noted. But the uploader's being flustrating, and not working, so I'm going to go to complaint to Wildheart instead of upload it a gazillion times.-ſceheartBlah blah 22:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

It's been Re-uploaded!! What's everyone's thoughts and concerns now?-ſceheartBlah blah 18:33, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks pretty good. Maybe, thicken the shading on the belly and make the ear-pink less... purple? XD WhiteStorm is back! 20:16, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's not purple to me, just a pinkish red. I enjoy that color. xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:31, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, i'd rather not change the colour of the ear because it matches the chart, and then some people will say change it again and it will become one vicious circle, and as for the belly shading, what part of the belly? the part between the legs or the chest/belly part? If it's the chest/belly, like i said before, if i thicken it anymore it looks stupid. And i'm sorry whitestorm because i just kinda turned down both your comments XD.-ſceheartBlah blah 20:59, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ehh. I've never trusted that chart >:P But I think the ear pink looks fine. Blur the highlights. Mossy go away. 22:10, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- Whats next?-ſceheartBlah blah 23:37, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the very back of the haunch and its looking good, Special K ;) llwildheartl 01:30, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- Comments????-ſceheartBlah blah 01:37, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is really tiny, but there's this little zigzag just where the tail begins to curve. Smooth it out a bit. llwildheartl 02:00, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed the tail and figured out a new way to shade the tail, so thanks XD.-ſceheartBlah blah 02:09, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

You need to blur the highlights some more. Mossy go away. 23:34, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I understand what you mean. WhiteStorm is back! 23:35, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Ta da! What do y'all think now?-ſceheartBlah blah 03:15, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

After this, you'll be thinking: Grawr! I want. . . to. . . kill her! Once I say, blur the highlights more. Mossy go away. 03:26, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

I don't feel to grawr, but the the think is i didn't put highlights on her. :/-ſceheartBlah blah 04:29, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Huh. Well I've said that three times. .. blur the shading, then. Mossy go away. 03:50, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ya, when you said blurr the highlights, i just assumed blurr the shading and stuff so i just didn't say anything. bat anyways i blurred and blurred until it wouldn't blurr no more. What next?-ſceheartBlah blah 22:49, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oh no, it looked great as it was :\ The highlights on the head are too concentrated now ;( SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 05:55, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

So should i revert it to the previous version, or mess with the face highlights?? What do people think?-ſceheartBlah blah 22:44, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Honestly? I don't think you should mess with it at all. It looks great. I also think this is worthy of approval, but, again, I AM an apprentice, so what do I know? =P llwildheartl 23:30, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Could you thicken the belly shading again? Sorry, but it seems as if it got thinner again. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:56, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

What part of the belly? people really gotta stop telling me belly shading. sigh.-ſceheartBlah blah 01:20, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think the belly shading is thick enough; if you thicken it anymore then it will ruin the nice width of the highlights, which I love very much (even if you didn't put them there, they still look very good :P). Comments before approval? IcethroatHappyHolidays! 03:20, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for ruining your moment. xD Anyways, I noticed this right now and it seems as if the muzzle has a weird line on it? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:22, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if it matters much, but the color of the legs on the back is diffrent from the color on the front. Silvery 12:21, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I may have had two images approved, but that was my first time with CBA, thanks Icethroat! well i mess with the muzzle aand wasn't sure about the leg thing so ya.-ſceheartBlah blah 18:41, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Honestly, I don't see a line, and I'm not just saying that because Iceheart is my friend. llwildheartl 01:24, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Repeating CBA?--Nightshine 03:15, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 04:50, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Alt A)-Approved

File:Crookedstar.alt.apprentice.pngGah finnaly anyways fith char-art im happy how he turned out :) comments?Mossleap You burnt my ice cream!!! 14:23, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good darken the pink ear a bit Maplepool 15:08, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and make his jaw crooked as on his apprentice image. oblivionAudience? 16:16, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I can see you based the eye on the warrior's eye. Use an apprentice tutorial to see what the eye should look like. You don't have to of course, but I think it looks a wee bit strange. Moonflight 17:30, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink, and blur stripes. I don't think his jaw was crooked as an apprentice. Zoe27Gossip Queen!!! 17:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Give him a twisted jaw. Very nice though! ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 18:37, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tabby markings. 19:57, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED I did all that and i forgot about the crooked jaw XD so I put it in :)Mossleap You burnt my ice cream!!! 22:01, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

wha? its not showing my changes...Mossleap You burnt my ice cream!!! 22:03, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Give it time. It'll show. If not, reupload it. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 03:33, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED its working :D anyways more suggenstions?Mossleap You burnt my ice cream!!! 15:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes still need to be blurred and make the ear-pink smaller. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:30, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

His jaw needs to be bigger. Look at his apprentice/warrior images. oblivionAudience? 19:25, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink as well. WhiteStorm is back! 19:59, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just a tiny bit. Also, the ear pink is a bit too big and very bright. This looks great, though :) Mossy go away. 05:29, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink isn't too bright, but I would focus on blurring the tabby stripes on the tail. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 22:05, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Shall I re-word that, then? The ear pink needs to be redder. Mossy go away. 00:23, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED GRRRR to much hooooooommmmmmeeeewwoooorrrrkkk! anyways how bout' now ?Mossleap You burnt my ice cream!!! 21:38, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit. Otherwise, this looks really good! And I understand the homework thing completely; try that with marching band, too. :P IcethroatHappyHolidays! 02:38, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Nice job, especially with the jaw! Our User Page!

RE-UPLOADED fixed and thanks :) anything else?Mossleap You burnt my ice cream!!! 15:18, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Comments before approval?-Nightshine 18:09, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I'm so sorry for ruining CBA, I just think you should darken the highlights on the tail. Sorry! SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 09:19, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED nah its fine with me :) anything else? or no lol Mossleap You burnt my ice cream!!! 23:08, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Since the 24 hours was already up when Sunny commented, I think he's good enough to be approved :) oblivionAudience? 02:32, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Snooky (A) - Approved

Snooky.apprenticeBlack and white cats are so hard to shade>.< Constructments?--HAWKTALONö 19:20, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Beautiful! The lag away from us seems to be a solid grey though, and dodge the white patches on his tail so they look more white instead of grey. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 19:53, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! You might want to darken the ear-pink, though. WhiteStorm is back! 20:00, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear shading and it is the same color as his kittypet image. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:03, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular DappleclawP-p-p-poker face 22:04, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpen the patches. Mossy go away. 03:22, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Define the earpink. --Dawnleaf 16:44, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Sharpened the spots, lightened the tail, and fixed the hind leg and ear pink. --HAWKTALONö 21:29, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks better to me. :) WhiteStorm is back! 12:07, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? IcethroatHappyHolidays! 23:33, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm ruining CBA :( But I think you should make the black. . . well, darker and sharpen the patches a bit. Mossy go away. 03:01, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. If the black gets any darker it will actually be black.AshshadowNo really? 20:49, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Restarting 24 hrs. CBA? oblivionAudience? 19:10, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. oblivionAudience? 01:52, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Egg (A)- Approved

Egg.apprenticeI think it came out horrible, but comments? RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 19:20, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The torn ear looks like the line-art is...gray or faded? :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:34, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry about that! =P RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 19:42, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's still faded and gray/whiteish. The tail highlight is really bright. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:15, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

the torn ear is still gray/faded. Sunnyfrost 20:17, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yupp. The tail looks a little to bright. (: ShadowandBlue 23:03, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be darker. WhiteStorm is back! 23:24, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more highlights and blur them (I know highlights are optional, but you already have them so I'm pretty sure I can make suggestions for them) Thicken the shading. Mossy go away. 00:08, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I redid him, I fixed the torn ear (so everyone knows there is no gray/white on it, and is not faded.), I darkened the ear pink, lightened the tail, and brightened the highlights. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 23:18, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

It's still faded, I checked up close. :P ~~ ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:56, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

But there's no gray and it's not faded when I checked it. How should I fix it? RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 11:42, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

I could help if you want. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:39, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

k, so should i thicken the lineart on the ear, would that help? RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 18:34, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

No, someone would have to fix it for you. -ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:55, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Okay so who knows how to fix it? RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 20:45, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

I opened this up on Pilxr, and the ear didn't seem faded to me at all, it looks fine. Just darken the shading. --Dawnleaf 22:05, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

I opened it up on pixlr and it is. I'm not sure if you would like it, but I fixed it. File:Egg.Apprentice2.pngℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:46, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

I like it. thanks Frostheart and Dawny for the help! I'll get to it ASAP! RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 18:43, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink just a tad more. Willowheart1231 00:31, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Reuploaded. Blurred ear pink more. Srry it took me a while to load, I started school yesterday. So it may take me a bit to reupload images. =P RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 22:22, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. This is great overall. --Dawnleaf 23:14, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! I darkened the shading and blurred it as far as it could go. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 13:00, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The lineart for the torn ear needs to be the same thickness as the rest of the lineart. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:33, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thickened torn-ear lineart. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 15:23, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Riverpelt, the lineart is still faded. It needs to be pixelly. Hard pixels. Also, thicken the tail shading. Mossy go away. 23:26, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look faded to me, and I used hard pixels. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 20:19, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I see it too. Honestly, though, it's the only thing that I can see that's wrong with the image. llwildheartl 02:18, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

I made sure that all of the pixels were not faded, and I darkened the shading on the tail. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 22:24, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

There's still faded pixels. . . Mossy go away. 00:57, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the base of the tail a bit, and for the pixels, use the pencil tool instead of the brush, that might help (if you use photoshop, press the N key, and pencil comes up o.O) EarthbenderTawny Style! 14:22, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oh, I see it now! I changed the opacity of the image, and I saw that there were faded pixels and I hopefully fixed them this time. Sorry guys, I didn't see them until now. Oh and I fixed the tail shading a bit. I hope I can get this approved soon, It's my 7th charart! RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 23:27, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Comments before approval? oblivionAudience? 18:57, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 01:56, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (KP)- Approved

Waspwhisker.kittypetMy first kittypet, I really enjoyed doing Waspwhisker as a warrior, so I decided to do the kittypet version! Constructments? --SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 03:49, September 11, 2010

Blur the white. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:54, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. and define the ear pink. This is great! Dawnleaf 03:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred white, darkened shading and defined ear pink. Thank you Dawny :) SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 04:30, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks lovely, but the white markings look pale yellow. Mossy go away. 05:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Mosspool :3 The white color is the same as his warrior image though! :) Sunny'Yes O Great One, I shall do as you 'command... 06:01, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I agree. It does look like a pale yellow. Blur the ear-pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:15, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

pale yellow? Clearly my eyesight is going. The colour looks okay to me. --SandyTalk 17:36, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yes it does have a yellowish tint but it looks the same as his warrior image and is fine. Blur the transition on the paws a bit more.AshshadowNo really? 18:13, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the belly shading extend farther into the belly, instead of being just a blob of shading. Also, blur the back shading near the tail. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 20:38, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is a tiny bit of blurred-line-art on the front leg, though I bet no one would've noticed that..except for me. xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred shading on the tail, made belly shading larger, fixed line-art (Thanks Frostheart XD). I like how he turned out. :) SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 22:12, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his back. Moonflight 22:29, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 22:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blurr the shading a ton DappleclawTigerstar's best buddeh!! 01:18, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done! SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 03:11, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I, think you forgot to make his bell colored. FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 03:28, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Well Spotted Fiercestar! Thanks! SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 04:05, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink brighter. WhiteStorm is back! 20:08, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the color of the ear pink is fine, but define it some. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 20:24, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

On my computer, I can barely see it. WhiteStorm is back! 20:32, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Whitestorm, but the earpink is the exact same color as the warrior image. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 07:00, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, maybe it can be tweaked later on. WhiteStorm is back! 21:04, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Add some white to the belly area. Mossy go away. 04:02, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think the belly needs any white, but blur the shading on the bottom of the haunch. I've always liked the kittypet pics =) llwildheartl 02:38, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Wildheart- Do you mean that you like my image or the kittypet blanks? ;P SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 05:53, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Both hahahahaha but especially yours. XD Maybe brighten the earpink a little bit cause it kinda blends in llwildheartl 23:35, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry guys but the ear-pink is the exact same color as the warrior image. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 07:16, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. This is really good :) --Dawnleaf 16:47, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Dawny! Comments? SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 21:54, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Sunny, sorry for the unnecessary comment, then. Maybe enlarge the earpink a little bit. 'Cause it still kinda blends in, but maybe if you make it a bit bigger it'll be better =) llwildheartl 00:07, September 19, 2010 (UTC)\

Reuploaded: Done! :)

Lighten the back shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:06, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I really don't feel the need to lighten the back shading, But it's up to you guys :\ SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 22:57, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? oblivionAudience? 19:07, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. oblivionAudience? 02:02, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Creekfeather (A) - Approved

Creekfeather.apprentice

MY FIRST CHARART!!!! =D

Elorisa has yet to decide, which means so have I. The striped style or the patched tabby style? The patched tabby style looks more like Elorisa's, but I like the regularly-striped one better. Even though it doesn't look very much like Elorisa's. Anyways, comments? =D llwildheartl 02:37, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink needs to be bigger. The patched one looks really blotchy to me. Do the striped one more like the Creekfeather one up for approval. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:42, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Will do. But even though the second one is prettier, it doesn't really look like Elorisa's and I couldn't get the patched tabby one to look... well.. patched-tabby-ish lol ... Argh... --llwildheartl 02:48, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed earpink --llwildheartl 03:01, August 26, 2010 (UTC)


I like the patched tabby. Blurr the stripes on the striped one a bit. Iceheart Will the thaw ever come?03:37, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

All of them? Or certain ones? Specific, please =) --llwildheartl 04:59, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the stripes a little bit. Problem, though. I use GIMP, and, unfortunately when I saved this as a .png (because the wiki can't upload .xcf s) I accidentally forgot to save it as a .xcf as well, so now my little flashing line around the lineart is gone and I can blur the lineart where I couldn't before. So I'm having issues working on it without blurring or drawing on the lineart. Does anybody have suggestions? --llwildheartl 05:17, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really help with that. I just save it on png on Gimp and it's fine. As for the image, make the striped one more like zigzags unless you like it this way. Blur the ear-pink a bit more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Second one. Blur the stripes there and lighten it. On the first one, darken the patches. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 18:31, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the patched one. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:08, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like how the patched one looks, but the stripes one needs to lightened. Iceheart Will the thaw ever come? 00:58, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Patched: thickened shading, added a few patches, blurred earpink. Striped: dodged whole image with a brush on 10% exposure, fixed lineart issue (THANK YOU ICEHEART), blurred earpink. Better? --llwildheartl 01:16, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Both images: darken the head shading, it's not visible. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 01:48, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Both images: Darken the ear pink. Patched one: blur it more. --۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 02:59, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

What should I blur? The earpink? --llwildheartl 03:10, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

If you decide on the regularly striped one, I'd say blur the stripes, and add more striping to the legs, face and tail. Mossy go away. 21:50, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

'Kay, I'll add more stripes to the legs, but the tail I tried to copy from the warrior pic, which doesn't have as many stripes, I think, and could you give me some tips on how to stripe the face? I tried when I was first making it, but it just looked stupid, so I took them off --llwildheartl 05:39, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Elorisa has decided on the patched one ★ Flowerleaf ★ 13:19, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes she has. So, define the stripes, as I said before, it looks blotchy--ish. xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Can you take out the stripe by the eye? it looks like its coming out of the eye. Sunnyfrost 20:19, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

It does not matter. Elorisa chose the patched one. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:08, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

oh ok Sunnyfrost 23:19, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is taking so long, but I'm working on renovating my bedroom. Please don't decline, as I AM working on it. Comments noted. --llwildheartl 22:22, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

The spot on his haunch looks funny. Either remove it, lighten it up, or add little speckles around it. (Sorry if I sound demanding!) Willowheart1231 00:36, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Add some spots to the face to, it just kind of stops ina line on the the neck.--Iceheart Will the thaw ever come?: 19:25, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any more comments? --llwildheartl 18:08, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

He is very pretty, just blurr the highlight on his face a little more and he's purrrrrfect;)--Iceheart♥: 00:08, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded This look good? --llwildheartl 01:40, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:13, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thickened shading and added a few patches. Comments? I am desperate to do whatever it takes to get this approved XD --llwildheartl 03:33, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks really dark along the back and haunch. Lighten it a tiny bit.AshshadowNo really? 18:05, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Can you tell? For some reason, it looks like it didn't reupload. Is that silly? Is it just me? --llwildheartl 06:41, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded again Checking to see if the uploader is working. If not, I'll try again in the morning. Any more comments? Please? I love comments XD llwildheartl 08:39, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

It is definitely working. PLEASE COMMENT. I really wanna get this approved =D llwildheartl 01:51, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken/blurr the shading along the back, but don't make it any darker.---ſceheartBlah blah 02:02, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? llwildheartl 03:11, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to be impatient, but all I ever do is go on WW, so I get impatient naturally.... Any comments?? llwildheartl 23:16, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading, and give him more patched stripes. oblivionAudience? 23:49, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the shading (it still looks bad) and added a few patches, but I'm having issues. I can't make them look good!! GRAR! lol any tips for making the patches look normal-ish? llwildheartl 01:23, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks as good as any other approved image. But i'm just an apprentice and can't do much about it.---ſceheartBlah blah 23:36, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Aww, thanks Special K. It means a lot =) llwildheartl 01:34, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ugh! I DEEPLY apologize for being so impatient, but I can't help it! COMMENTS, PLEASE! XD llwildheartl 23:14, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

If no one says anything constructive, i can keep saying how nice it is, which it is, and together Wildheart and i will take up the entire charart page XD just you wait and see.---ſceheartBlah blah 23:20, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Wildheart, please be patient. Asking for comments because you can't wait a few days isn't going to accomplish anything other than cluttering up the talk page, which is not a good thing. Anyway, lighten the shading, and add more patches. If you don't know how to do that particluar stripe style, I suggest asking Elorisa for some help. oblivionAudience? 00:25, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Oblivion, but all I do is go on WW all day( I'm a bit of a loser =P) so it's kinda of... a side effect, if you will. I promise to be more patient in the future =) Oh, and I'm editing my pic as you're reading this haha llwildheartl 01:17, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I don't see anything wrong, and I agree with you Wildheart. Im a WWiki nerd. EarthbenderTawny Style! 14:21, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval, then? --Bramble -Hyuu~ 04:56, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blurr the shading onhis head ---ſceheartBlah blah 07:46, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? llwildheartl 08:48, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Match up the tabby style with Elorisa's. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:12, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks enough like the warroir image, but blurr the back shading---ſceheartBlah blah 23:42, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

I personally do not. Darken the patches, make them bigger, and smudge. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:46, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

What happened to my image?? Why is it a redlink?? llwildheartl 22:29, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Try reuploading it again. --SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 01:10, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind, I figured out what happened. Bramble moved the page so that she could rename it. All this panic over nothing =) I fixed it. oops, forgot to sign llwildheartl 01:43, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Oh and I'm sorry Frost, but I don't think it really needs much changing. Does anybody else agree with me? llwildheartl 01:54, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Just blur the highlights a tad more. --SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 05:12, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but there is nothing wrong with this image. It looks higly similar to the approved warrior image, and if the highlights were blurred more they would distort the pelt. There is nothing more needing to be done. Approving. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:42, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Egg (Lo) - Approved

Egg.loner-I'm really proud of this. =) I worked hard on it, and I really like the way how I did the shading. Comments? ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:52, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

It's really great. :D Make the ear-pink darker. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:01, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading along his back. oblivionAudience? 00:05, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks Frost! I blurred the shading and made the ear pink darker. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:09, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink a tiny bit more noticible? oblivionAudience? 00:24, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

What about the shredded ear? :3 Mossy go away. 01:39, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, yeah, add the shredded ear. :P I can see the ear-pink fine, but make it more triangular. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:36, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I added the shredded ear, took me lots of times. :P I also smudged the ear pink into a more triangular shape, and I darkened the ear pink a tad. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 12:06, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on his ears. oblivionAudience? 20:34, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

The torn ear looks a bit tufted. Make the tear more noticeable and not stick out--Nightshine 01:17, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head a bit. Rainbreath 16:57, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Icy told me to tell you that she will be gone for a week and to not decline this Squirrel Do You know... THE MUFFIN MAN!?!?!?! 20:01, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. Well, for when she gets back, the shading on the ears is way too dark, lighten it. Mossy go away. 23:32, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

It might be better if you got some transparency...I think the ear should be shredded a bit more, it's barely noticable, but otherwise nice!

ZorthEl Awsome Line 23:41, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 17:48, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

But Squirrel said Icestorm will be gone for a week! ★ Flowerleaf ★ 21:54, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that is true. Her computer is broken and she has not received her new one yet. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:11, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I'm back! ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:37, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. oblivionAudience? 19:01, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

It can't blur anymore. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:58, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit brighter then. ^^ oblivionAudience? 22:02, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights near the chest area. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:21, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

The ear and neck shading is still very thick compared to the rest of his shading. Mossy go away. 21:23, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I think the neck and ear shading is fine. The neck matches the rest of his shading, and I brightened the ear. Comments? ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:06, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

It looks great! CBA? oblivionAudience? 21:15, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 18:19, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Frecklewish (MCA) - Approved

Frecklewish.mcaoblivionAudience? 02:51, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make her stripes a bit thinner. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:55, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, this doesn't look that much like her other image. Lighten it, add some specks to it, make the stripes thinner and add more--Nightshine 02:58, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Did my best =) oblivionAudience? 03:03, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit more golden. Add more stripes down her back. Darken the ear pink. Make the arm stripes longer. --Nightshine 03:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add a smaller speckle above the one on her cheek? Define the patch on her flank. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 03:08, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Completely redid the stripes/markings, and darkened ear pink. oblivionAudience? 03:26, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Add some specks on her chest. Darken the shading--Nightshine 04:02, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

On her other images she has more mottles and the stripes are rounder. Mossy go away. 05:03, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her some more. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 20:50, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 18:55, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Why is that one spot next to her eye so big? On her other versions she doesn't have a spot as big as that ★ Flowerleaf ★ 19:05, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

-sigh- Re-uploaded and changed it. oblivionAudience? 19:13, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the reason this image is darker than Frecklewish's other two images is because not only are some of the mottled spots made like the tabby stripes are, but there are also mottled spots made by using the dodge tool for some lighter spots (I think). On this image there are only darker spots, but on the other images there are lighter spots as well, so add some lighter spots to this image. Also, did you add the highlights before you made the stripes or afterwards? I think that on the others the highlights were afterwards and made the image lighter. One more thing: I know that you got rid of the really big spot by the eye, but a decent sized spot should still go on the neck to match the other apprentice image, and because the neck looks really empty. Sorry for the really big and complicated paragraph, but hopefully it'll help. :) IcethroatHappyHolidays! 19:54, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I added the highlighs afterwards. I'll make the stripes more like the other images by changing the opacity of the stripes; hopefully that'll help, then I'll do all that other stuff you said xD oblivionAudience? 19:56, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink darker? :) WhiteStorm is back! 20:09, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Or, more pink, perhaps? WhiteStorm is back! 20:27, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I added some lighter spots, and made the stripes lighter. oblivionAudience? 20:45, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Looks better to me. WhiteStorm is back! 23:33, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink seems a bit brown to me. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:45, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Made earpink pinker. oblivionAudience? 19:32, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks kind of like a cream color to me. Kittypet 01:09, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the opposite haunch. It stands out a bit. Other than that... looking good! llwildheartl 02:36, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 20:48, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur out or enlarge the highlight on the haunch, because it kinda just looks like a brighter circle. It's not a large flaw, just kinda subtly off a bit. llwildheartl 23:33, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 00:10, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I know we're not supposed to just comment to compliment.... but.... Very nice. =D llwildheartl 01:11, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the head highlight, add more specks along her chest and shoulder--Nightshine 17:52, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 18:23, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the head, it's a lot lighten than the rest of her body--Nightshine 03:13, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 03:16, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the opposite ear. llwildheartl 08:51, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it needs darkening. The light source seems as if it is coming from the back of the head. xD Just because we see it from one side, doesn't mean the other ear needs to be darker as if it is a shadow. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:07, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make it more goldy? xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:02, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 23:44, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more flecks to the haunch. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:05, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading along the bottom of the tail. This is lovely :) SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:33, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

There is shading on her tail :) Tried to re-upload, but it won't work >_< I'll just have to wait... oblivionAudience? 01:32, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 22:26, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. :) WhiteStorm is back! 22:51, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 16:09, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?AshshadowNo really? 17:32, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Approving, since no one is going to comment on this anymore. oblivionAudience? 10:53, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Dustpelt (Alt. W) - For Approval

Dustpelt.warrior.altWell he was called a lightbrown warrior before so here he is. Comments?AshshadowNo really? 20:29, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink brighter, and more noticable. WhiteStorm is back! 21:07, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

The reference on his page that says he's light brown looks a little sketchy... It's not *'d and the citation is worded wierdly. If anyone has whatever book it says he's brown is (It's either TDH or ADP, I'm too lazy to check), could you look on page 211 to see if it's a reliable citatation? oblivionAudience? 21:19, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

I checked before I made it. It's relieable.AshshadowNo really? 21:24, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

The pelt colour is kinda...of, to me. I think you should darken it a bit. Other than that, lovely. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 22:03, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink just a bit. Looks nice! EchoLeaf-fall.. 22:33, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:11, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - He doesn't look light brown...I think you should lighten it some. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 00:23, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the earpink but i didn't change the pelt color. How someone views light brown depends on how they view brown. It's light brown to from my prespective.AshshadowNo really? 20:44, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the muzzle shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:21, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ice I don't shade the muzle.AshshadowNo really? 23:24, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Minimize the earpink and blur the haunch higlights. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:57, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

It sorta looks like golden-brown to me, but you don't have to change the pelt color if you don't feel so. Did you add highlights? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:19, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think the earpink needs to be any smaller and the highlights look no different when blurred more.AshshadowNo really? 20:11, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 15:34, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, the chest highlight looks lopsided to me :/ Sorry for ruining CBA :( Mossy go away. 21:05, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean lopsided?AshshadowNo really? 21:12, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Looked over the highlights; they are fine. Approving due to irrelevant comments. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:25, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Snooky (W) - Approved

Snooky.warriorI'm not so happy with this one...Comments?--Nightshine 06:17, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

This is pretty, but blur the patches a ton, to make it look more natural. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 06:20, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred patches. I think I made it worse, hm--Nightshine 06:27, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

The patches on his other image aren't very blurred at all, really, and they're rounder, too. Mossy go away. 07:25, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Its very pretty but i think it shold be consitant to the other images. ---ſceheartBlah blah 07:50, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I re did it. This time I didn't blur the patches as much. Comments?--Nightshine 16:27, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the white lighter, it looks more like pale grey. --Gοldenpelt 16:49, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I like the spots anyways. xD I agree, make the white whiter, it looks silver to me. Triangulate the ear-pink a bit more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:00, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded changed ear pink and lightened white areas--Nightshine 17:18, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks silver to me ★ Flowerleaf ★ 17:24, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened it more. I think the shading might be making it look dark--Nightshine 17:54, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

That's what I thought, I kinda like it this way, it makes it look all mysterious. :P Blur the ear-pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:56, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred ear pink--Nightshine 18:04, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Midriff shading looks too straight. Either blur it or change it. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 19:09, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded how is it now?--Nightshine 20:18, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Way better, but a few of the patches are just a bit too big. Mossy go away. 02:13, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Which ones? I think I might be able to make them smaller.-Nightshine 03:09, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

It's hard to describe the location of them, but one on his upper back and two by his haunch. Also, the one around his eye and the one by his ear. They don't need to be much smaller, just a little. Mossy go away. 21:28, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches again. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 22:08, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

This sorta looks..cartoony? xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:16, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made patches smaller. If I blur it more it won't be defined enough. How is it cartoony?--Nightshine 00:25, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think she means because the patches seem fake, blur them some more. Storm17 Birthday Time! 02:42, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

If I blur them more it will be too blurred--Nightshine 22:47, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:22, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Night I think it might be the way you're shading and higlighting because the patches look like they can be blurred more. Maybe try smudging the edges a tiny bit.AshshadowNo really? 23:37, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred the edges a bit. I didn't change the ear pink because I think it looks fine--Nightshine 23:52, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

If she blurs the patches very much more then it will appeared too blurred in comparison to his KP image. Blur the shading a bit. Mossy go away. 04:44, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred shading--Nightshine 23:04, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bit bigger. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:49, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made ear pink bigger--Nightshine 01:19, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the haunch. This is beautiful! SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 01:33, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, lighten the highlights. Add more small spots in various places. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:21, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful. The highlights look fine to me; lightening it anymore would make it look unnatural. --Dawnleaf 21:53, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I added a few more spots, but I didn't change the highlights--Nightshine 22:17, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink a tiny bit bigger? RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 23:41, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, I think it's a good size right now.--Nightshine 01:26, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

You possibly could afford to move it up a pixel, but I don't know, it might make it look worse. I think it looks awesome now, but there are a few spots that are very very small, make them a tiny bit bigger, maybe? Mossy go away. 05:54, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made spots bigger--Nightshine 15:29, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Comments before approval?AshshadowNo really? 17:27, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 23:18, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Ki) - Approved

Brokenstar.kit Would Pouncetail above be declined because the artist did the wrong coloring? I'm not quite sure... but anyways, here is my second charart! I had some problems on the stripes. Comments will be welcome!! --Willowheart1231 21:44, September 15, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart

Ehh, they might be able to keep it up and just change the colours, or tehy might have to take it down. Not so sure :/ Mossy go away. 22:09, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Ahh, Snooky (W) is withdrawn so this fine either way. Mossy go away. 03:24, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

So... any comments anyone? Willowheart1231 03:44, September 16, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Try darkening the shading a tad. Other than that, flawless. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:45, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

There is gray areas outside of the lineart on his tail and cheeks. oblivionAudience? 20:50, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Willowheart1231 21:28, September 16, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Blur the stripes a bit. --Dawnleaf 01:45, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

His tail looks connected to his back (The end of the tail.) Otherwise, this is lovely :3

Reuploaded. I lightened the tip of his tail barely, so it would look more distinct, and not part of the back. And, don't forget to sign! Willowheart1231 20:43, September 18, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Is it just me or is there blurred line art where the tail and chest fur meet? DappleclawGod of Ghosts and spirits ... 22:53, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yah, it;s blurred. I looked at it on Pixlr. Also, while on Pixlr, I saw ONE pixel on teh ear that wasn't blurred. But that's quite minor. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:52, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll fix it when it have time, right now it is 6:40 in the morning for me! 97.118.199.158 12:41, September 20, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Sorry, that was me, forgot to sign in... WillowheartWhere's the candy? 22:56, September 20, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

I do belive there is some gray above his tail. DappleclawIt all started with a big bang! 23:13, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Erased gray, fixed lineart. WillowheartWhere's the candy? 00:35, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink lighter. Besides that, I absolutely love it! :) Storm17 Birthday Time! 02:48, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the paws and define the ear pink. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:27, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added shading to the paws, and lightened and defined ear pink. WillowheartWhere's the candy? 21:25, September 22, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Make the earpink into more of a triangular position. This is great! SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:44, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is fine. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:25, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed. Comments before approval? Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 06:13, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

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