Ice (Alt R)-Approved

Ice.rogue.alt heres Ice as he is in "A clan In Need". Comments? FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 23:29, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Iceheart already has this up for approval. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Before you post something, check to make sure the information you are putting is absolutely correct. I do believe Iceheart had Snake up for approval, who is Ice's brother. Moreover, I've just approved Snake. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 23:42, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Darken the shading a bit and blur the ear pink--Nightshine 23:46, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry Bramble. I thought Iceheart had Ice up. Blur the ear-pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:51, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Ya, i did Snake. Make the first stripe darker or blurr the second (i had the same problem). Maybe make the nose grey, because it's on the black fur. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:39, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back and belly shading. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 16:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Uploader's not working for me. :( FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 03:26, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink a little less hot pinky.-ſceheartBlah blah 18:27, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, less hot-pink. Also, make it bigger. WhiteStorm is back! 20:30, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

It is not hot-pink. But I agree, make the ear-pink bigger. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:34, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded fixed most but like I said The uploader wasn't working. FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 00:37, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

This looks lovely :) But the collar spikes are weird. Also, darken the black patches. Mossy go away. 23:13, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

The first black patch now is wierd, sorry. FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 00:34, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. In fact, everything except the tail-shading looks wonderful. Blur the shading on the tail a bit, though. llwildheartl 02:28, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about now? is it good enough? FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 02:42, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ehh, I still think you should make the black darker. Mossy go away. 03:44, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

When I do that it looks like a black stripe with gray sides. this is as dark as I can allow it to be with out looking crazy. Sorry.FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 22:45, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks great. Don't darken the stripe any more, and yes, Fiercestar, the tail looks good. llwildheartl 01:40, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Maybe lighten the ear pink a tad. Out Page

Reuploaded Lightened ear pink. FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 19:17, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, does Ice need reinforced dog claws? I'm not sure. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:09, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Snake got the claws, so i think he does to. Add some big claws-ſceheartBlah blah 17:11, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded added claws, but look Here. you see any claws. It doesnt matter if his brother has them. FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 20:24, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Try adding a bit more white by the flank. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:30, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Where? On the leg, or on the side?FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 23:33, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome job! The only thing I can see is that the back hind leg looks kinda flat, so maybe add some extra shading at the very top of it, where the leg meets the belly. I think it'd be darker there. llwildheartl 23:26, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the hind leg nearest to the tail (Sorry xD) SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:28, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed.FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 20:52, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't the nose supposed to be pink? User:Kittypet1/Sig 15:38, September 26, 2010 (UTC)\

Nope, cuz there's black around the nose so he'd have a black nose. Mossy go away. 21:17, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, the name needs to be changed to Ice.rogue.alt.png.--Nightshine 05:46, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Quite right; making the change as I approve this. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (W) - Approved

Pebbleheart.warriorI hope this looks alright! My fourth charart! :) Comment for approval? ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading a bit, center the earpink and desaturate it. oblivionAudience? 01:15, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and darken the shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:39, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:51, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger and blur them. =) Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 20:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 20:58, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little lighter.-ſceheartBlah blah 22:02, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 22:07, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripes look sorta unatural, but maybe thats just me. SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 22:42, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 23:55, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, it does look a bit un-natural. Maybe you should try another style of tabby? But again. might just me. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:13, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

yes also there is a pixel on his chest that is not colored in Mossleap You burnt my ice cream!!! 18:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I was just trying to get the stripes to match up with the design on his medicine cat charart. But if you all think they need to be redone, I'll give it a go. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 19:17, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I re-did the tabby pattern... What do you think? Comments? ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 19:37, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I like how his stripes are now, make the ear pink a bit smaller.-ſceheartBlah blah 19:50, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ends of the stripes sharper. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:53, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink as well. WhiteStorm is back! 20:18, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 20:31, September 12, 2010 (UTC).

Lighten it to match the first color image. Sorry. :P That one is the same color as Pebbleheart's other image. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:33, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear-pink bigger. :) WhiteStorm is back! 20:47, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected, except for the ear pink. I think it's big enough... ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 22:03, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mossy go away. 23:52, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:39, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten him a bit, so he matches his warrior image.-ſceheartBlah blah 05:26, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:36, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's beautiful, but define the stripes a bit more =) llwildheartl 02:33, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected! :) 21:57, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and lighten it--Nightshine 17:50, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 21:42, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

It's a little too light now, make it more reddish. --Nightshine 03:16, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the ear-pink should be biggger. On your first image, the ear-pink is bigger than it is now. WhiteStorm is back! 12:24, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 13:58, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is way too bright. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:08, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 20:00, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

It looks red to me, though it might just be my computer. WhiteStorm is back! 02:15, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. Sorry, but updates will start coming more slowly. School's getting more complicated and I have Stage crew. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 03:27, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and make it a bit lighter as well. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:29, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. I got the color from his medicine cat charart, but I'll re-do it if you think i should. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 00:17, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger and put it closer to the ear, it isn't very close to the ear now. WhiteStorm is back! 03:25, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

re-uploaded and corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 23:08, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and blur the highlight on the face. This is really good :) SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:29, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

re-uploaded and corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:52, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. I lightened up the image. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 22:42, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I love this image though, its quite dark compared to his other images, I suggest lightening it a bit. Blur the earpink a little bit as well. --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 22:06, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, it's a bit dark compared to his mc charart. But idk how to lighten it without having having to do the whole charart over again. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:18, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. Well, I tried to lighten it up a bit. Idk if it looks really bad... ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 03:41, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

I really love this image. :) Add one more stripe on his tail. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:33, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

It has the same number of tail stripes as his med. cat image. I think this looks great. CBA?User:Ashshadow/Sig 17:41, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

What does CBA mean? ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:37, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

CBA, means: Comments before approval --Dawnleaf 02:39, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Oh! Ok. Thanks! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Pebbleheart.warrior.png--Nightshine 06:08, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Will do as I approve. Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Petalnose (W) - Approved

Petalnose.warriorWell, my first charart. Bad, but who cares!!!! Comments??? Alpha Power to the Pack! 01:54, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The eye has a purple tint ★ Flowerleaf ★ 01:58, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Add and darken the shading along her back and add some shadows between her ears on her forehead. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:59, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is great for a first charart! Darken the shading along her back. Zoe27Gossip Queen!!! 17:16, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading around the whole thing, and possiblr lighten the tail a little.-ſceheartBlah blah 22:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 22:44, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and thicken the shading a lot. Make the ear pink smaller. Mossy go away. 23:09, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: Fixed everything. Comments? Alpha Power to the Pack! 20:19, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck under the head. See Hazeltail's warrior image for an example. Blur the shading, too. Mossy go away. 21:53, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Blur the shading. Our User Page

Updated: Like this? Alpha Power to the Pack! 14:00, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a bit more. --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 16:49, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. WhiteStorm is back! 12:22, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, blur it, and thicken it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:07, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: Is THIS blurred enough? Alpha Power to the Pack! 19:29, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it more. It helps if you smudge it, blur, smudge, blur, etc. Willowheart1231 02:21, September 20, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Thicken the shading. WhiteStorm is back! 03:22, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think It's thick enougth Rainear Let the rain guide you 03:37, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the head and midriff. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:07, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad bit smaller. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:31, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Quite honestly this looks fine by my standards. It has adequate shading, ear pink and no blotchiness or anything that seems to be wrong with it. This is good to go. Setting 24 hours; if comments about how the ear pink needs to be tweaked in some little way, I may scream. Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - D:D:D: I'm ruining another 24 hours but I think the shading could be blurred a little more. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:35, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Stealth, but it really doesn’t need to be, as I stated before. It looks fine. Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Ki) (Alt) - Approved

Blossomfall.kit.alt Sorry for my slight inactivity, marching band has gotten the better of me. I wasn't sure what the preferred way was to leave a new message without having it at the bottom of the page, so I just made one manually, but if I should do it differently let me know. Well, here's Blossomfall's alternate kit image. I had some troubles uploading it but now the changes are showing, so comments and suggestions? User:Icethroat21/Sig 15:20, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is over the limit. With Birchfall's image up, though it is in the wrong section. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Birchfall's image may have been up first but Ice got her's up in the right section first. The point of the sections is to know how many images are up for approval. Images put up in the wrong section shouldn't count. Blur the shading and highlights.User:Ashshadow/Sig 16:13, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, thanks Ashshadow. :P I was confused about that. Define the stripe a tiny bit. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:25, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, you got to defining the stripe before I could say reuploaded for blurring the shading and highlights. I'll get to the stripe in a bit. User:Icethroat21/Sig 16:32, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I'm having difficulties defining the stripe because of the way there's shading and part of a highlight on it. Suggestions? User:Icethroat21/Sig 17:07, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. WhiteStorm is back! 19:58, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I do not know, Icethroat. What I would do, is I would just redraw the stripe, and blur it, then add highlights and the shading, and try to make it as equal as i can. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Whitestorm, I've already blurred the highlights, or do you mean blur he highlights some more after my reuploading. Frostheart, I tried that and it didn't look good at all, and the stripe looked too big. Personally I think the stripe is already defined enough, and when I define it is has to be blurred again and the cycle repeats itself infinitely; does anyone else think I should definie the stripe? User:Icethroat21/Sig 20:46, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing, she looks brown, not pale brown. Also, blur the highlights. Other than that, she looks great! Mossy go away. 20:53, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

If you want it to look paler, consider desaturating it. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 22:11, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I meant to blur the highlights some more. WhiteStorm is back! 23:16, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say the stripe dosen't need any more blurring or defining, you just might want to sharpen the end of the stripe. But that is just a suggestion. DappleclawP-p-p-poker face 03:10, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

I meant the highlight on the stomach. WhiteStorm is back! 20:15, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took a few days, I've been busy (as it seems I always am these days). I think this is just the right color for being pale, and I think that I've finally got the highlight blurred just the right amount (it was an awkward shape, I had to fix its shipe by adding more and then darkening all of them). Comments? User:Icethroat21/Sig 21:18, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

No, this is brown, not pale brown (srry if i sound like a nitpicker) ★ Flowerleaf ★ 23:50, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

In my opinion the brown is fine the way it is. DappleclawDanger! Mousefur bites! 01:47, September 17, 2010 (UTC)
It doesn't look pale, though. Pale brown would be like Fallowfern's image. Mossy go away. 03:46, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I agree; try using the color of the highlights. Our User Page!

It is a little off, I suppose, but it is really good and I don't think you should redo the ENTIRE thing just because of a few comments. I think if you just dodge the entire image with like, the brush on 10%, it will look fine. Just my opinion llwildheartl 01:08, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I edited the image and made it paler to match close to Fallowfern's image by desaturating it (with the hue and saturation bar under adjustment on pixlr) before all of the comments past Flowerleaf's were put up, but my computer is hating me right now and is trying to tell me I can't open the file because it's in use in another program when it's not. Restarting my computer will probably help (hopefully), but if not then I get to edit the image again (whoo...there's a reason I save under a different file name on my computer each time...); however, I'm at a point right now in a few other things on my laptop that I'm not at a good point to restart it, but hopefully I'll get a chance to restart it tomorrow or in a couple of days. So please only comment on something besides the brown color until I can get the new pale-colored version uploaded. Thanks. User:Icethroat21/Sig 03:13, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

You may want to blur the highlights on the tail, and shading by the chest and paws. DappleclawGod of Ghosts and spirits ... 17:53, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? Blurring the highlights on the tail actually made it worse looking, so I left it without blurring, since it was already blurred some. User:Icethroat21/Sig 16:05, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I still don't think she looks pale brown. Mossy go away. 02:59, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I didn't see your explanation above. Scratch that comment, then. Mossy go away. 03:00, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I've uploaded it now, so comments about colors are okay again (I didn't like to see five different comments on the color when I'd already edited it and my computer was just hating me, it seemed kind of pointless...), do you still think it doesn't look pale? i think it's really pale now... User:Icethroat21/Sig 23:34, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Personally, I think it could be paler, but...

Blur the highlights. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:37, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's great! The colour looks perfect =) Perhaps blur the earpink a little bit llwildheartl 23:22, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink and blur the highlight on the chest. This is really good :D SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:36, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I still think it just looks brown, not pale brown. . . Mossy go away. 21:10, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think the color is fine. You have to remember that shading takes up more space on a kit.User:Ashshadow/Sig 12:38, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Indeed it does, Ashshadow, but she could just make the base colour lighter. Mossy go away. 05:57, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened and blurred the ear pink. if I blur the chest highlight any more, it will lose its shape and possibly ruin the entire image. As for the color, I want it to be pale brown, not light brown, and it doesn't have to be the exact same color as another image with the same description because cats in real life aren't exactly the same, so I don't really want to change the color anymore... (Sorry it's taken me this long to get to this, marching band has kept me quite busy.) User:Icethroat21/Sig 20:39, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Light brown and pale brown are pretty much the same colour. Anyways, I know they don't have to be the same as some other cat, but this really just doesn't look pale. I'm sorry if I'm being arguable, but I just really think it needs to be a lot lighter. Mossy go away. 21:15, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

The color is perfectly adequate for her. Shading is perfect, and she seems to be quite well done to me. Setting 24 hours; please do not comment about a color change. I am not aiming for being rude at all to you, Mosspool. But certain things do not need changing, because some of that has a lot to do with opinion instead of fact. As we have no factual evidence on Blossomkit’s true color, we cannot assume her color would be lighter, darker or paler than the brown presented here. This color is not a dark brown, nor is it just a regular brown; it is perfectly acceptable as it is. Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Owlstar (A) - Approved

File:Owlstar.apprentice.pngEh...Comments? ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:49, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur and brighten the highlights. Mossy go away. 01:23, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Sometimes, I feel like the world would be better without shading :/ Keep the critique coming, please! ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:37, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. There's too much shading on the back, not enoguh on the chest/legs/muzzle area. And the head shading is very. . . straight. (if that makes sense XD) Mossy go away. 03:19, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:05, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Add highlights to the flank, shoulder, and face. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 21:06, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights aren't necessary, but either darken the shading or add highlights. User:Icethroat21/Sig 21:21, September 15, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the shading. --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 01:46, September 17, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Added Highlights. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:05, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights a little bigger. Willowheart1231 01:48, September 17, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Reuploaded - Is this okay? ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 03:59, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Is he supposed to have a splotch on his leg? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:16, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Whoops. Fixed it. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:00, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there is some blurred lineart in these spots: The top of the closer front leg, the back of the neck, the bottom and top of the closer haunch, and the chest. DappleclawGod of Ghosts and spirits ... 22:19, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and make it bigger, so it is more noticible. WhiteStorm is back! 20:42, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I don't see it. I think it may be your computer. If I get another person telling me it's blurred, I'll fix it. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 20:44, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I see the blurred line art. Please fix it =) oblivionAudience? 21:57, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the line-art.⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:17, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

The line are still looks blurred on the back of the haunch, where the line is flat, and on the back of the neck, beneath the ear. DappleclawGod of Ghosts and spirits ... 23:48, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also darken the earpink llwildheartl 07:09, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I think you missed my previous message, darken the ear-pink and make it bigger. WhiteStorm is back! 12:05, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I do not think that the ear-pink needs to be bigger, but make it more pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:04, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 20:16, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Umm... I think you made it gray-ish. It needs to be darker and a lot more pink. WhiteStorm is back! 02:11, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I. Hate. Ear. Pinks. For. Grey. Cats. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 14:24, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

If you don't like earpink on a gray cat try a ginger one. I think the problem is the color you're using. It's purpleish. Try a more red shade. User:Ashshadow/Sig 20:52, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to keep bothering you, but I still can't see it very well. WhiteStorm is back! 21:19, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - As stated above, I. Hate. Ear. Pinks. For. Grey. Cats. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:45, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

It looks sort of purple, try to make it bright-pink. WhiteStorm is back! 02:51, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't make it a bright pink, maybe a coral color. Darken the shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:40, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - StarClan, help me. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:24, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and blur the highlights. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:31, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - How's the ear pink? ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:30, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

The color looks better, just make it bigger. WhiteStorm is back! 03:20, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the ear pink. I'm very happy with the charat now. >.< ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 20:59, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

There is blurred line-art on his haunch and ear. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:55, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the haunch. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:39, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - This is the first time I'm actually happy with A charart. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:44, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

This is lovely :3 Darken the ear pink though. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 05:14, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 22:01, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the chest shading. This was the best I could do >.< ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 02:01, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

There is blurred line-art still on his haunch, ear, back, and leg. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:31, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed it. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 18:07, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC) Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (A) - Approved

File:Rabbitleap.Apprentice.pngIt's very blah to me. What do you guys think? Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 01:22, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more triangular. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:27, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Centre the haunch highlight, and blur the highlights. Mossy go away. 03:21, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with blurring the highlights, but the haunch highlight is fine where it is. User:Icethroat21/Sig 21:00, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, blur the highlights and maybe darken and largen the ear pink? --Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 16:16, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 21:13, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think he looks great! CBA? oblivionAudience? 18:18, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear pink could use just a tad more blurring, but that's just me. Rainwhisker567 01:47, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ehh, yeah, the ear pink looks a bit odd. Perfect image, other than that ^_^ Mossy go away. 07:29, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ear pink could be bigger as well. WhiteStorm is back! 12:02, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I can't change the ear pink without blurring the lineart, trust me, I tried. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 12:43, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Okay then, nevermind. :) WhiteStorm is back! 02:09, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:39, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 21:41, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Great job! ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:29, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the earpink into more of a triangular position would make it look more natural. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:41, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I honestly think this looks fine… ear pink is pretty good as it is, while shading is perfect. I don’t think it could be blurred more. Setting 24 hours. Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar Rogue (alt)- Approved

Brokenstar.rogue.altConstructments? I took the tail lineart from his rogue image, if that's okay. If not, I can change it. Mossy go away. 21:36, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his legs. oblivionAudience? 23:59, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

There is color outside the lineart around his chest and legs.User:Ashshadow/Sig 02:16, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

★Re-Uploaded★ Done. Did I blur the leg shading enough? Mossy go away. 06:41, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I can barely see the lineart. Lighten the whole thing. ★ Flowerleaf ★ 17:38, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:41, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

darken the earpink ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:26, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

★Re-Uploaded★ Darkened ear pink. Mossy go away. 21:57, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights. This is really quite lovely :3 SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:48, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten your highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:21, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ehh. . . I'm confused. Should I make them brighter or lighter? XP Mossy go away. 04:48, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

LOL, do both and then blur them :P SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 05:27, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, how can I make them brighter and lighter? I'm going to make them brighter since I can't really see them :/ Mossy go away. 21:06, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't brighter and lighter the same thing? o_O I'm not really sure...anyways, darken the shading a tad. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:29, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

★Re-Uploaded★ I get why some people hate shading black cats now >_< Anyways, I think he looks better now. Mossy go away. 17:19, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Very much so. Very lovely. Comments before approval? Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Alt. D)~Approved

Leopardstar.deputy.altTa da! fourth charart. A mottled cat was hard to do.-ſceheartBlah blah 22:32, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

When was Leopardstar a brown mottled cat? I checked her page and didn't see it, though, I'm really bad at looking. XD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:35, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, Frostheart, it's in the trivia. The alternate stuff's always in the trivia. EchoLeaf-fall.. 22:40, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ya, i just added that now. I meant to do it sooner, but i forgot, but it's legit :) -ſceheartBlah blah 22:41, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Great job. Make the mottles...more visible. Blur and darken the ear pink and darken the head and muzzle shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:25, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- but the uploaders not working, so will try again another time-ſceheartBlah blah 00:38, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't darken the ear-pink too much though. Storm17 Birthday Time! 00:49, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Where's the light coming from? If it's coming from the top, add shading to the front of the haunch, and if it's coming from the front, lighten up the chest. Dappleclaw 02:05, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Changed the ear pink a bit, and lightened the chest shading. What next?-ſceheartBlah blah 00:22, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is really well done :) Make the ear pink bigger, and perhaps define the mottles on the chest a bit. --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 00:53, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-ſceheartBlah blah 01:57, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the mottles a bit more round and bigger. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:23, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

I personally like how the mottles look, and if i make them any bigger they all melt together and it looks like a badly shaded cat. I'd prefer to leave them the way they are.-ſceheartBlah blah 02:35, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the mid-riff shading. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:51, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I would still make the ear-pink darker. WhiteStorm is back! 02:56, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the belly, and lighten the rest. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:18, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- Did what was asked. I'm going to be gone all weekend camping, so don't decline please and thank you. I'll do all the comments when i get home.-ſceheartBlah blah 22:47, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm.. move the ear-pink closer to the ear, it is kind of outside of it now. WhiteStorm is back! 02:28, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I'm back!-ſceheartBlah blah 19:12, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome back. =) Comments before approval? Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D) - Approved

Leafstorm.deputyI like this one! Comments? Cobaltpaw 20:06, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger, and she needs a pupil. oblivionAudience? 20:15, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

She does have a pupil. Cobaltpaw 20:42, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger, and possibly darken the paws and ear furthest from us. --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 21:41, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading Dappleclaw 21:48, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make it more gingery. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:00, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Cobaltpaw 22:13, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

There is blurred lineart on her legs and tail. oblivionAudience? 22:16, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Cobaltpaw 22:32, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the pupil more visible and add shadding to the midriff. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 22:31, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the back and stomach. Also, make the ear-pink smaller and a tad lighter. WhiteStorm is back! 22:34, September 23, 2010 (UTC)T

The eye looks weird. I think you should make it like Leafpool's. Mossy go away. 01:41, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? I'm not going to change the eye, because its how I like it. Cobaltpaw 01:52, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, because it's like Heathertail's. Theres still some blurred lineart on the back of the haunch. Dappleclaw 02:05, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I really think you should make the pupil more noticable, it looks strange. Also, still make the ear-pink smaller and lighter. WhiteStorm is back! 02:23, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice! Make the ear-pink a bit brighter, and bigger. Blur the shading on the chest. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:38, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I know cats like Heathertail and Brindleface have that pupil, but it really does just look odd on her. I can hardly tell she has an eye. . . Mossy go away. 02:41, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

File:Leafstorm.deputy.bad stuff.png- The red indicates the blurred line-art and the blue that you should change the eye. I agree with Mosspool. Even though it looks like Heathertail's and Brindleface's, It doesn't match with most of our chararts. Also, Lighten the earpink. --SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 05:09, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't matter if the eye matches the majority or not. It's an acceptable style and doesn't have to be changed.User:Ashshadow/Sig 19:58, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

But, if the majority of the project disagrees with the style, it need to be changed. WhiteStorm is back! 13:39, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Cobaltpaw 15:44, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:27, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine. What’s wrong with it? It’s not out of the ear nor so small as to be unnoticeable. Setting 24 hours; no comments about Mr. Ear Pink, please. Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think if you add a tiny bit of black to the eye, it might look a bit more normal. Like this:


User:Midnitesky/Sig 20:13, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

The eye design doesn't matter, it's not a rule nor is it set in stone. Elorisa can do whatever style eye she chooses, it looks fine to me. Please don't comment on the eye anymore. oblivionAudience? 20:11, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Continuing CBA.User:Ashshadow/Sig 20:35, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Rock Beneath Still Water (Alt. R) ~ Approved


Darken the gray and make the mud more brown. xD Also make the ear-pink pinker. Thicken the shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:21, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Nice! Make the earpink pinker, it looks white right now. WillowheartWhere's the candy? 01:23, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make his tail shorter. Darken the ear pink. Mossy go away. 02:19, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ear-pink needs to be darker and smaller. Also, maybe the mud be lighter? I can't really see it. WhiteStorm is back! 02:38, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

And blurred. Blur the shading, add it on the tail and back. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 11:20, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Definitely shorten the tail. It does look quite stumpy! XD User:Starlingflight/Sig 11:22, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

GEEZ slow down, I'm only one person. I'll get this taken care of ASAP EarthbenderTawny Style! 22:28, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Comments? EarthbenderTawny Style! 22:48, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Ooh, very nice =) Lighten the streaks a little bit more, and maybe add one more on the chest. llwildheartl 22:58, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you could add mud to the legs? Just a suggestion. Dappleclaw 23:35, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the mud streaks and the highlights. In Europe black cats are lucky Tawny ;P SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:53, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Add mud to the legs. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:17, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

And Tail! SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 06:11, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... maybe make less mud streaks but make them bigger? Either way, they still need to be lightened. WhiteStorm is back! 02:26, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Once again...I will get to this ASAP. I'm busy with school...but since its weekend, i can do all HW on sunday. Tawny not logged in.

RE-UPLOADED: Comments? EarthbenderTawny Style! 12:24, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I really think that now it looks more like an olive-and-black cat rather than a cat with mud stripes on it! You might want to define the stripes a bit more and make them more brown. Otherwise I think it's perfect! User:Starlingflight/Sig 13:04, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the stripes look yellowish. WhiteStorm is back! 13:41, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes more brown and skinny, add one or two mud streaks on his back legs. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:35, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

I actually love the mud streak style. Ever got mud smeared on you before? It doesn’t come on a nice and straight line. And mud is not one definite brown color; nothing in nature ever is. This is a perfectly acceptable mud. Setting 24 hours. Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Whitethroat (Ro) ~*~Approved

File:Whitethroat.rogue.pngMy first rouge, I like how it came out. Comments? --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 23:48, September 23, 2010(UTC) Make the belly a bit fatter, not longer. xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:33, September 24, 2010 (UTC) Personally, I think the belly looks fine. Anyone else disagree? --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 01:26, September 24, 2010 (UTC) I don't think you're supposed to edit the lineart. . .? Add a highlight to his. . . umm. . . middle section XD Mossy go away. 02:35, September 24, 2010 (UTC) The chest patch shouldn't extend onto his legs, as it doesn't on his warrior image. Mossy go away. 02:40, September 24, 2010 (UTC) File:Whitethroat.Rouge.example.pngI've put a red mark around where the body looks funny. Make the highlights on the haunch lighter and color in the nose... If it's not meant to be black. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 04:52, September 24, 2010 (UTC) Good job. Blur the shading on the white transistion ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 20:45, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look a bit.... fuzzy. :D WhiteStorm is back! 13:30, September 25, 2010 (UTC) Re-Uploaded: --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 16:29, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

The white chest is still on the leg. Other that that wonderful.User:Ashshadow/Sig 17:53, September 25, 2010 (UTC) Re-Uploaded: Better? --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 19:59, September 25, 2010 (UTC) Make the nose a lighter shade of dark gray.xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:59, September 26, 2010 (UTC) If I made the nose any lighter, it would blend in with his pelt colour. --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 05:12, September 26, 2010 (UTC) Oh! I meant darker, sorry. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:24, September 26, 2010 (UTC) Re-Uploaded: Its okay. :) Anyways, I darkened the nose. --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 15:29, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

The white on his chest extends to his fore arm. Can you make it so it's only on his chest? Also, blur the ear pink a bit more--Nightshine 15:37, September 26, 2010 (UTC) Re-Uploaded: --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 15:47, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Whitethroat.rogue.png. oblivionAudience? 19:00, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Fixed. --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 19:48, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bramble -Hyuu~ 14:39, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Rockshade (W)-Approved

Rockshade.warriorFail, fail, EPIC FAIL!! I am NEVER doing a black cat again...ha ha they are unlucky. I know the highlights on the shoulder are too noticeable, but if I blur them anymore, then the color goes missing because photoshops blurring is too strong. So...comments? EarthbenderTawny Style! 15:25, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Use a darker color for the highlight then you should use or Gimp although I use nether, I use My Paint but I alway have to remake the background to make it transparent Rainear be as silent as rain 17:49, August 8,2010

Blur the shading, make the highlights darker. The shading is also lumpy and seems exactly black to me. Make the highlights smaller. Frostheart 17:59, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I fixed the highlights, shading, and I lightened it. Suggestions?EarthbenderTawny Style! 18:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 19:08, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are basically taking over the complete picture now. Just redo the paint, add some shading as you would. Blur, then just midtones in highlights, and click once or twice. Make sure it's not bigger than size 50. Frostheart 19:47, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

He looks dark gray...I suggest making the image darker. Dawnleaf 19:53, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I realized that something changed in the pixlr highlighter, so get rid of the highlights, redo the shading and choose a slightly lighter color for the highlight, choosesize 50 and just pretend thats the highlight. ^^ Frostheart 22:07, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED:Frostheart, I use photoshop, not pixlr. (I only use it to delete the white part). Anyways, I darkened the image,fixed the highlights. Suggestions? EarthbenderTawny Style! 22:30, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights smaller and make the shading noticeable in the leg area. Frostheart 02:37, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I made the shading a bit more noticable, but I epically FAILED on the making it smaller part. ;P Suggestions? EarthbenderTawny Style! 13:52, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

It's much better now. Just even out the shading on the hind leg. That's it. xD Frostheart 19:12, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Ifixed the shading on the hind leg. Suggestons? EarthbenderTawny Style! 22:08, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch,otherwise this is great! :) User:Dawnleaf/Signature 22:12, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a little lopsided. Mossy go away. 03:11, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks fine to me.User:Ashshadow/Sig 13:53, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Same here. And actually, black cats are lucky in Europe, and white cats are bad. 0.o {{SUBST:MosswiskerandStealthfire/Sig}} 12:01, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: fixed the hind leg shading. Suggestons? Tawnyis here... 22:59, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading.--Nightshine 01:28, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Where, specifically? (sorry, but I'm starting to get demented ;P) User:Totallytawnypelt99/Sig

I'd say to thicken it on the chest and haunch but not the midriff, and to blur it everywhere =) --SandyTalk 08:59, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Thickened the shading, but the shading on the haunch won't blur anymore, I'd HIGHLY appreciate it if someone could help me with the blurring, and I also lightened the highlights because I thought they could have used some brightning. Suggestions? EarthbenderTawny Style! 16:11, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I opened this on GIMP and I don't think I blurred it that well. xD I think you darkened the shading too much. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:23, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Frostheart! Yeah, my shading is now like permenatly black on like all settings, I don't know why. EarthbenderTawny Style! 18:06, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

You should change the opacity, it usually is on 50 you can change it to like 20. :P For Gimp, just adjust the thing at the bottom. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:12, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I took your advice, Frostheart. Fixed the shading and lowered the opacity. Suggestions? EarthbenderTawny Style! 18:39, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm very picky. xD The ear-pink is very blurred....♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 22:56, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Great :( ... do I have to re-do it, or...un-blur it (is that even possible?) EarthbenderTawny Style! 00:44, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is what I do :P. I color pick the area nearest to the ear-pink (the highlights,shadows etc) I fill the pink with that. It's okay if it isn't the exact same color. Choose an ear-pink color make a triangle, blah and then blur it. The blurring should even out the pelt color if it wasn't the same. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:37, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I tried to fix the earpink, but I made it MORE blurred I think....Random Question, but Frostheart, are you an apprentice or warrior for the PCA? User:Totallytawnypelt99/Sig

Yeah, I'm an apprentice. Why? :P

I just thought because you give good advice that you'd be a warrior, and you are very helpful!! :D Well when you get your 5th charart approved, I'll definatly be cheering for you!! Anyways, back to charart, any critcism? User:Totallytawnypelt99/Sig 00:23, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look a little whispy, are you using a smudge tool? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 00:33, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hehe. Thanks. ^.^ ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:54, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

No, I don't use the smudge tool, I use blur...but I've noticed that it's looking sort of...whispyish. I'll fix it ASAP. User:Totallytawnypelt99/Sig 15:29, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Just a reminder, school starts on Monday for me, so I'm not going to have that much time. So on Monday, someone is free to take this and continue to work on it, if that's allowed...User:Totallytawnypelt99/Sig 15:29, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'll work on it a bit if you'd like, and if it's allowed. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:45, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading.--User:Dawnleaf/Signature 18:10, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: That'd be great, Frostheart! You can start the work immediatly on Monday. And I blurred the shading and highlights as much as I could. User:Totallytawnypelt99/Sig 18:22, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Okay. Am I allowed to keep up my Jagged Rock photo and help you work on this? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:22, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Well, it depends. I might leave Charart for a few months so I could focus on school work, but basically, yes. But I need to talk to Bramble about it...User:Totallytawnypelt99/Sig 19:26, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Aww, don't leave. :( ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:00, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

lol if I don't my dad will murder me (it's happened before...) But I won't leave forever! Basically, I would only come on for like the weekends and a month at a time because my main goal is school work. But definatly by December I'll be a full member again.

Just blur the shading more and this should be ready--Nightshine 01:17, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Alright. :) Please leave messages on my talk-page to know your alive. :P Just blur the shading a tiny bit, it's great. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:03, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I tried to blur the shading more, but if I go any harder, my computers gonna blow up at me. And don't worry, I'll stop in every now and then to tell you that I'm alive lol xD Any more Comments? User:Totallytawnypelt99/Sig 13:27, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Try blurring the haunch and chest shading a bit more--Nightshine 17:33, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I tried to blur the shading as much as I could. Still, theres barely a difference :( Someone else is going to have to try and blur it, because my computer will NOT cooperate when it comes to blurring (first it was too strong, now it's too weak) User:Totallytawnypelt99/Sig 01:39, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Comments before approval?--Nightshine 20:23, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights and shading really need to be blurred. But hey, isn't Tawny leaving the project? I suppose someone could always just touch it up for her. Mossy go away. 17:43, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I agree with Mossy, but I don't know about Tawny. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:46, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Since Tawny has left the project, is this going to be archived? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:33, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Well, she did give somebody permission to work on it, I think. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:57, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

If someone takes over, blur the shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:28, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

She said I could take over, but I still have my Jag photo up, and I'm pretty sure that has to be archived first. :P -ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:17, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, when you get a chance to work on this, give him a torn ear :3 oblivionAudience? 12:00, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Alright. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:49, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - And blur the highlights. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:17, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

I will add the torn ear later. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Can you add some highlights? I know they're not required, but without them it sort of just looks like a solid black cat. Mossy go away. 07:18, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Something is really messed up with Pixlr's highlighter. -.- Should I redo this? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:11, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Since this is officially handed over to you, I can comment on it without getting rocks chucked at me. I think that you should try to get either GIMP or Photoshop. I use Photoshop, it cam for free with my tablet, and GIMP is a free download off the internet. And about the highlights, I'd just say try to put them on as bright as they go (believe it or not, I think Shadow is the brightest setting..o.o) and set exposure on 100% to see if the highlights show might work...EarthbenderTawny Style! 23:30, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I do have Gimp. I use both for an image. XD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:45, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Tear his ear >_< oblivionAudience? 01:01, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

This looks weird, right? xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:13, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image, and add a highlight on his shoulder (I know they're optional, but you have one on his flank :P) oblivionAudience? 23:52, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Alrighty. :P First time using Gimp highlights, besides practice. XD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:38, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Lightened it again. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:11, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and desaturate it--Nightshine 17:44, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:27, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, and I'm not so sure about these things, but I think the highlight on his back looks kinda odd, so maybe blur it more or remove it. I can't tell which would look better XD llwildheartl 07:03, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Added a subtle highlight. Sigh, highlights on a black cat are so annoying for me. xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:21, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I added 2 more images. I tried a new style and I fixed up another black cat I made. Which one do you guys think are better? xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:55, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I like the middle one, he looks furry like a rral cat. just blurr the highlights a little bit on it and it looks good!!-ſceheartBlah blah 17:45, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say the middle one DappleclawGod of Ghosts and spirits ... 17:49, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. :D Don't mind the ear-pink on the third one. XD I tried blurring the ear-pink, but I can't without ruining the texture. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:50, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good Frostheart. I would go with the middle one. WhiteStorm is back! 01:55, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

If you're picking the middle one (which I suggest you to, it's the best one ^^) then delete the other two and rename it Rockshade.warrior. Then desaturate the earpink =) oblivionAudience? 02:56, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I picked it, since everyone likes it. XD I'll get to the edits tomorrow, it's kind of late right now. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:14, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good frostheart :D I'd suggest making the ear pink a tad bit smaller though :) SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:12, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really make the ear-pink smaller without ruining the line-art. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:29, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the highlights then. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 01:08, September 23, 2010 (UTC)


Try to make the torn ear look more natural. --User:Dawnleaf/Signature 22:11, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:03, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really dark, so I would suggest lightening it. Rainwhisker567 00:00, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

The color is fine, after all it's supposed to be a black cat. Dappleclaw 00:05, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Oh dang it, I lightened it one shade. Oh well. xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:07, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks okay! Dappleclaw 01:03, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a smidge.User:Ashshadow/Sig 17:47, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Done! :) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:12, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the highlights more circular? They're a bit oddly shaped now xD oblivionAudience? 00:54, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps blur the main highlight on the haunch thoroughly, so it blends together with the main pelt and does not stand out. Other than that, this is good to go. Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Im actually very honored that Bramble commented on my post thing. XD Anyways, I tried blending it in. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:13, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I love how you did the shading, Frostheart ^_^ CBA? oblivionAudience? 00:25, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but there is a weird light patch on the haunch. And the ear pink should be smaller--Nightshine 05:36, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

The light patch is the highlight and I'll get to the ear-pink after school. xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:41, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

♥Reuploaded♥ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:26, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Maybe it's just me, but the highlights look kind of blotchy. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 21:31, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's just the texture of the cat. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:37, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

Restarting 24 hrs. oblivionAudience? 00:03, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. oblivionAudience? 01:24, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Swallowflight (W) - Approved


Previous comments on this page

Setting 24 hours before approval. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry guys, I wanna withdraw this to do Mapleshade . . . . I don't like it anyways. Mossy go away. 05:15, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I am approving it now, then. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 05:36, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Previous comments left on these are archived here

Stoneteller (Alt. H)- Approved


Setting 24 hours before approval. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

None, approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Rippletail (Alt A) - Approved


Setting 24 hours before approval. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

None, approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Harveymoon (KP) - Approved

Harveymoon.kittypetoblivionAudience? 19:44, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm; make the transition easier. He seems almost a two-toned cat, with gray on one side and white on the other. Use the dodge tool on the haunch and shoulder and lighten it some, so it seems to shift easily from white into gray. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Bramble :) Done. oblivionAudience? 03:31, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Setting 24 hours before approval. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:42, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I sorta think you should add more shading. He looks a bit flat to me. Mossy go away. 22:04, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean? The light is coming from the left side; that's how the shading should look. oblivionAudience? 22:06, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is adequate; the light source is coming from the side, so the shadow would fall on the other side. Comment irrelevant; approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Swallowflight (R)- Approved


Setting 24 hours before approval. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

None, approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Ki) - Approved


Setting 24 hours before approval. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

The nose color is way too dark. Try a bit lighter hue. Very good, though! ^_^ --User:Midnitesky/Sig 20:18, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Gray/black cats typically have dark noses. Comment irrelevant; approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight (Alt. A) - Approved


Setting 24 hours before approval. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really good and I see no problems except to me the back legs look very . . . straight. Like, there's no natura; curve in them if you know what I mean. Mossy go away. 05:40, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure what you mean.--Nightshine 06:14, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think Mosspool means that the legs do not look natural. Like..look at Briarlight's warrior image; the legs are more curved. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:14, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

The back legs shouldn't look awfully natural; now that Briarlight can't feel them anymore, they really just sort of hang there. Sorry to disagree, but approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MCA) ~ Approved


Setting 24 hours before approval. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

None, approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D) - Approved


Setting 24 hours before approval. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

None, approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)