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Kestrelwing (Alt. Medcat) - Approved

Kestrelwing.mc.alt

Setting 24 hours before approval. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights just a tad more.. Beautiful image, though. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:42, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten him a bit. Mossy go away. 22:21, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights can't be blurred anymore and don't need to be, and if lightened she'll be light gray instead of gray. I am approving this. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:52, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (KP)~ Approved

Shrewtooth.kittypet

Setting 24 hours before approval. Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think the pelt color is way too dark. The lineart can't be seen, and the image looks like a silhouette with yellow eyes floating in it, if you know what I mean. X) --Midnite Talk 20:25, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Lighten it a bit more, and there is some blurred/smudged line-art near the tail. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:27, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- Matched his shade to the warrior image. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Renewing 24 hours. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:46, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:12, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Fernshade (W) - Approved

Fernshade.warrior Comments?--Nightshine 02:23, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is a bit brown, and could you blur the splotches a TAD more? Not a lot, or else it will ruin the awesomeness. XD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:34, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Looks amazing! Darken the tail shading toward the tip. (Or dodge the tail a bit more; I'm not sure which you should try.) --Midnite Talk 02:43, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened tail shading, blurred splotches a bit more, changed ear pink--Nightshine 03:04, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Very good! Smudge the white transistion on the tail though. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 18:13, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded smudged white on tail.--Nightshine 22:13, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is kind of oddly coloured, the bottom of it is darker than the top. Make it all the same colour. oblivionAudience? 01:05, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks more realistic that way; like it's a shadow. So I'd like to keep it.--Nightshine 01:22, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, then. I see nothing else wrong; CBA? oblivionAudience? 01:23, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 02:54, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather (W) - Approved

File:Sparrowfeather.warrior.png Here she is! Not so sure about the mottling... comments? oblivionAudience? 03:02, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

I love it. :D Could you darken the shading, though? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:02, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Can you also darken the ear pink and blur it? Darken the scars as well--Nightshine 03:05, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed shading. oblivionAudience? 03:05, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Darkened and blurred earpink, darkened scars. oblivionAudience? 03:08, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more. I love the mottle :) -ſceheartBlah blah 03:12, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink more still. Maybe change the colour to be more reddish. Can you also make the scars a deeper colour? They're a bit hard to see--Nightshine 03:57, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! Make the scars more red, and darken the shading/brighten the highlights. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 05:39, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Darkened shading, scars, and earpink. oblivionAudience? 12:13, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Oblivion, this is stunning! All I see is that you should add some shading on the scars. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 13:03, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

It looks awesome :) Maybe just darken the shading a bit. Mossy go away. 21:43, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. The shading just looks bad if I darken it. And I tried to add shading to the scars, don't know how well that turned out :D oblivionAudience? 23:28, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

If the shading won't darken, then brighten/add highlights--Nightshine 00:27, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 01:01, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading/highlights to the tail; it looks sorta flat. This is great otherwise! :) --Midnite Talk 01:18, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Added highlight to her tail. oblivionAudience? 01:29, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, the whole thing looks a bit flat to me still. Are you sure you can't darken the shading? I can try to help if you'd like--Nightshine 01:31, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the entire thing a bit darker? It looks light brown to me, instead of just brown, but maybe that's just me? 70.64.149.241 05:38, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

I was somehow magically logged out. That was me XD Mossy go away. 05:57, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Darkened shading and made fur colour darker. oblivionAudience? 12:24, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit. Can you darken the shading more?--Nightshine 17:54, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. How's this? oblivionAudience? 21:51, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should make thhe brown lighter. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:55, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Center the haunch highlight and make it bigger.--Nightshine 21:56, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Near the ear-pink, there is some blurred line-art. Is it the patches or the line-art? XD If it's the line-art, maybe make it less noticeable. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:52, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changed haunch highlight. Frostheart, there's a dark brown patch there, no blurred line art. I forgot to make the brown lighter, I'll do that now xD oblivionAudience? 21:36, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded again. Made brown lighter. oblivionAudience? 21:40, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the shading could be darkened more. Lighten the ear pink. --Nightshine 02:55, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, lighten the ear-pink. However, the shading does not need to be darkened. You can clearly already see the major color differences between the regular pelt, shading, and the highlights. If it is to be darkened anymore, it has to be blurred a ton. Which is hard to do with a complicated pelt without ruining the design. We should leave it as it as. Sorry about the long 'rant'. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:59, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Lightened earpink. I think she looks really dark now (darkened shading a bit) but that might be just me. oblivionAudience? 03:05, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the forearm, make the shoulder highlight bigger. --Nightshine 03:36, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Whoa! Where are all these critiques coming from? When I saw this picture for the first time, I thought, wow, this is amazing! There is nothing anybody could say about this - it should be approved. No offense, everybody, y'all have the right to think what you think, and I'm not trying to challenge that, but I kind of think all of your comments are unneccessary. If I were a senior warrior, this would already be approved. llwildheartl 08:07, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Blurred forearm shading and made shoulder highlight bigger. Thanks, Wildheart, that means a lot to me :) oblivionAudience? 18:20, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the scars. Can you brighten the shoulder and haunch highlights more?--Nightshine 18:35, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Lightened scars. No, I can't brighten them, Nightshine. Believe me, I tried... oblivionAudience? 18:44, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail highlights. And yes, the highlights are honestly bright enough; and the shading is dark enough. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:45, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Darkened tail highlight. oblivionAudience? 18:50, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Setting 24 hours before approval. Bramble -Hyuu~ 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

No comments; approved. oblivionAudience? 20:23, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Fernshade (Q) - Approved

Fernshade.queen Comments?--Nightshine 03:51, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is probably just me, but her other charart seems to have less brown on it. Mossy go away. 03:54, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, add more black to it. For the white on the tail, make it bigger? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:55, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded added more black and mate white on tail bigger--Nightshine 04:18, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

There was a lot less, if any, brown speckles on the other one. Tone them down a little bit. oblivionAudience? 21:51, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the white near her face some more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:54, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should get rid of the brown flecks on her chest, it looks kind of odd. Other then that it looks great.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 22:48, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the top of her back a bit more. Looks lovely! ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 23:16, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded took away some of the ginger specks, made back darker, blurred white on face--Nightshine 02:28, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add/brighten highlight on her belly. oblivionAudience? 02:54, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading or brighten the highlights? I can't really see the shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:02, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded added highlights and darkened shading. --Nightshine 03:40, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:42, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded brightened highlights--Nightshine 02:09, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? oblivionAudience? 20:32, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 23:54, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sunstar (Alt.D) - Approved

Sunstar.deputy.alt

Ear pink is too dark and desaturated. Use Firestar's ear color, and see how that works. There is also a white pixel on the chest fur, near the top. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Are the changes showing? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:36, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink is too big. It's almost out of the lineart; try making it smaller. oblivionAudience? 03:37, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Made it smaller. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:39, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, and I also blurred the little orange outline.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:49, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I still think there is something going on with the ear pink. Also, the lineart near the part of the tail nearest to the rear looks slightly blurred. --Midnite Talk 20:30, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

There is no blurred line-art there. Could you be more specific on what is wrong with the ear-pink? :) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:31, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Are you sure? I guess I described the area wrong. Here:

Sunstar.deputy.alt.fixes

I've drawn an arrow to the blurred spot. It's okay if you don't see it; maybe it's just me. :) Also, for the ear pink, could you make it a tad lighter? It's sorta hard to see it. ^_^ --Midnite Talk 20:45, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:52, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

That's better. :) Looks good. --Midnite Talk 20:59, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is still all weird... There's a section that seems to be cut out from the original and stuck further up the ear, if that makes sense. oblivionAudience? 21:44, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Better? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:01, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the haunch, midriff, muzzle and forhead shading. Other than that it's beautiful. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 22:06, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Mosspool if Bramble didn't decline it this should be ok. Blur the earpink a tiny bit.AshshadowNo really? 22:36, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:41, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is just my computer, but I see faint lines going horizontal through the body. Blur them a bit, but don't mess up the shading/ highlights. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 16:09, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Those are the texture that I gave him. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:18, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Can you desaturate it? It doesn't look like a very natural colour. Darken the ear pink and tail shading. There is some blurred line art on the tail--Nightshine 01:23, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

I won't desaturate it, it was described as a bright ginger tom. And before, people said it was too 'desaturated' and too saturate it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:57, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and haunch shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 17:39, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more noticible. oblivionAudience? 21:42, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:09, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure the ear pink doesn't touch the line art, there is some blurred line art on the haunch. Brighten the highlights a bit and add a highlight to the tail--Nightshine 07:23, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading/highlights to the tail. MistfireOwl City! 16:11, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

It does have shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:23, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Nightshine, didn't see your comment. I brightened the highlights and fixed the ear-pink. I checked closely and there isn't any blurred line-art. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:57, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add more shading to his muzzle. It's too light. Also, give him more of a highlight on his tail. Mossy go away. 20:06, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure the ear pink doesn't touch the line art. I circled the places where I see blurred line art: File:Foxheartredline.png Brighten the highlights on the tail.--Nightshine 00:25, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed all of those problems a long time ago..I'm not sure why they are not showing. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:59, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

I see nothing else wrong; CBA? oblivionAudience? 02:17, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Hold on, I think we should wait and see if it uploads properly. Try uploading it again--Nightshine 02:21, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, hopefully it'll show. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:23, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I see the changes. Repeating 24 hours --Nightshine 02:27, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

God I'm really sorry if this wastes another 24 hours, but I really find the ear pink to be unnaturally straight on the top. Just blur a little. It's wonderful otherwise! Starlingflight Take Flight into the Sky! 14:01, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine, if it is blurred anymore than it is, it will blend in with the pelt, thus looking as if it's a darker part of the pelt, not the earpink. Continuing 24 hours. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:06, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

None, approved. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 01:28, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Dewkit (Kit)- Approved

Dewkit.kit Yeah.. this is my first Charart so, comments?ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 00:36, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Either make the highlights thinner or thicken the shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 00:46, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

It looks nice, but the ear pink is too large, and she looks very bluish, but she was only described as gray, so maybe make her, umm, grayer? XD Mossy go away. 01:19, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 02:27, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and make the ear pink more reddish. Thicken the shading as well. --Nightshine 02:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Blossomfire₰Misty's best friend!₰ 19:03, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hmm, ear-pink didn't turn out too well, oh well that can be fixed. I darkened the shading as well.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 20:30, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded again, I fixed the earpink more.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 01:12, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is still too big. Thicken and darken the shading; something looks wrong with the eyes o_0. Maybe that's just me. XD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:38, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added another white pixel to the eyes to see if it might look any better.

It doesn't seem like you're doing the eyes right...read the apprentice tutorials again, maybe. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:13, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ok how about now?ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 16:21, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. --Midnite Talk 17:46, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think it's as blurred as it can be.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 18:07, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, if you look at her chest, the contrast between the shading and highlights is too much. If you blur her chest, the look becomes more natural. But feel free to do as you please; it's your charart. :) --Midnite Talk 18:08, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are a bit thick. blur more. MistfireOwl City! 18:50, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading and highlights are fine right now. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:38, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ok, it's as blurred as it's going to get. ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 02:34, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading under the chin.--Nightshine 07:24, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added shading under the chin.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 14:51, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights--Nightshine 05:57, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Can you brighten the highlights on the tail and blur them? --Midnite Talk 20:17, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred highlights as much as I could and made the tail highlights brighter (and blurred them).ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 21:09, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

The chest highlight is a little misshapen because it goes down to her forearm, can you even it out?--Nightshine 00:22, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 00:50, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight around the belly and blur the face highlight some more--Nightshine 06:23, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 22:03, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good =D Comments before approval?--Nightshine 01:02, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 01:59, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Mistkit (SC) (K)~Approved

Mistkit (SC).kitNot extremely proud of this one. I wasn't sure if I should the bristled pattern on her pelt like Thistleclaw has, but I'll put it in if needed. Comments for Improvement? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 03:54, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading a little more. --ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 04:07, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 04:42, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look white; they need to be way less brighter. Darken the shading and make the eye color more noticeable. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:51, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 05:09, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit. I think you should just leave the lineart and do what we did with Thistleclaw because it looks better to ne, but that's only my opinion. 70.64.149.241 05:45, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Somehow magically got logged out XD That was me. Mossy go away. 05:49, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 12:53, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, add some spiky fur to her fore arms. --Nightshine 20:59, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 02:18, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any change from before. Did it upload correctly?--Nightshine 03:51, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, it changed. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:56, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

That look better? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 05:07, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I see it now. Darken the ear pink and darken the highlights some--Nightshine 02:53, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 23:01, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink some more--Nightshine 05:59, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 03:08, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice but it looks like shes pink/gray to me... i dont know if that my laptop or what...Maplepool 03:42, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That look any better? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 04:33, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 04:39, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 02:02, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Weaselfur (Alternate Warrior) - Approved

Weaselfur.warrior.alt

Thanks for approving my first charart! Here's the alternate form of Weaselfur. Comments? Starlingflight Take Flight into the Sky! 04:46, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! He looks a little to golden though. Other than that it looks great =) --Nightshine 04:52, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the brown darker so it is more discernible from ginger, and rename it Weaselfur.warrior.alt. oblivionAudience? 04:54, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Wow, I didn't expect comments so soon! Anyway, I darkened and desaturated it to make in look more brown than ginger. I did save the old one though, just in case. Further comments? Starlingflight Take Flight into the Sky! 07:02, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 00:20, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink could be a tad bigger, and less purple. oblivionAudience? 01:57, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look purple to me, but I guess you can make it bigger--Nightshine 02:09, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Enlarged the ear pink a bit. I tried lightening it a bit, but it seemed to merge in with the colour. Sorry. Anything else? Starlingflight Take Flight into the Sky! 07:52, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's ready now; repeating 24 hours --Nightshine 23:50, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 02:09, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Mothpelt (L)~ Approved

Mothpelt.leaderWhat do ya think?-ſceheartBlah blah 02:38, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Fantastic! Darken the shading on the brown transistion near the back. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 02:47, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Though the right ear-pink looks slightly smaller then the left.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 02:56, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

The nose seems really dark. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:02, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded05:45, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, put to many wavy things -ſceheartBlah blah 05:46, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes are really orange in this, make them yellowier like on his warrior charart. Also, maybe move down the haunch highlight so it is more centered, and you should probably make his nose brown because the fur around it is brown. Looks really nice, though :) Mossy go away. 05:52, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Can you lighten the hind legs and then shade them darker? XD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 06:14, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. The brown looks like it's a different shade than his warrior image, can you fix that? --Nightshine 06:35, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

The area around the right front leg is really dark. Lighten it a bit more. MistfireOwl City! 22:03, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Worked on everything, except the nose. I think the colours good the way it is.-ſceheartBlah blah 00:58, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, but it's pink, and brown cats have brown noses. Also, you still need to move down the haunch highlight. Mossy go away. 03:45, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, and you forogt to adjust the eye colour. Mossy go away. 03:51, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I already did the haunch highlight before, but anyways, changed the nose and messed with the haunch highlight some more. The eye colour is exactly the same shade as the warrior image, and looks fine to me. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:40, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the right ear pink bigger and darken the left ear pink a bit. Darken the shading under the chin a bit and darken the haunch shading--Nightshine 07:26, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:45, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on his left legs (his left), they look really dark compared to the rest of the image. oblivionAudience? 18:22, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 20:34, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's mostly the same colour but you put some reddish pixels in it and that changes it a lot. Mossy go away. 20:48, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Can you blur the chest highlights a tad? Otherwise, looks marvelous! --Midnite Talk 20:22, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 02:56, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

There's two blurred line-art places on the haunch. Also some on the connection of the chest to the leg, and the right leg. (from our side) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:59, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the left ear pink and make both of them bigger. --Nightshine 03:09, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I can't make the ewar pinks bigger or they're touching the line art, but i did everything else. I think i got all the blurred line art. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:59, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think the leader blanks were made so that the ear pink would fill in the ear area of the line art. It looks too small to me if it isn't filled in all the way. Lighten the left ear pink more still.--Nightshine 06:27, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- It looks different now. it kinda looks like rabbit ears to me XD -ſceheartBlah blah 00:43, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks cool this way =) Comments before approval? I see nothing else wrong--Nightshine 01:01, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

I close-upped at the ear and it looks (the back part) true black and blurred. Could you fix that? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:03, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- both backs of the ears are supposed to be black, but i lightened it and blurred a bit. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:19, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours --Nightshine 02:00, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to ruin another 24 hours, now. :( edit conflicts=bad XD Just add shading on the enclose of the belly. Don't make it too dark though. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:33, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Approval, so close, yet so far away XD. Added the shading. and just wondering, who made the last comment? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:52, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours --Nightshine 02:58, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me. The edit auto took away the four ~ for some reason. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:33, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 00:31, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Skipper (Ro) - Approved

Skipper.rogue Comments? --Nightshine 01:17, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

I moved this to the correct section. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:19, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, and also, make the white whiter. XD It looks more like a peachy color. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:20, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded changed white. --Nightshine 01:32, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink a tad brighter. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:24, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, I think it looks fine --Nightshine 02:57, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Aaaaah! I wanted to do this one! =P. Anyway, yours is way better. There seems to be too much white on the tail and it looks a bit unnatural. Just make it a bit more orange. Otherwise it's fantastic! Starlingflight Take Flight into the Sky! 08:27, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

The white on the tail looks fine to me. :P But whatever. XD The shading on the haunch looks sorta unusual; kinda triangular. Could you blur it a tad so it reaches the shading to the left of it? This is amazing! =) --Midnite Talk 20:35, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I changed the shading on the haunch. I hope it's what you meant--Nightshine 02:40, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on the legs, right now they're not visible. And arms. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 13:13, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

He's actually not a tabby, I just added those for design, so I think it's fine as is. --Nightshine 23:17, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make it more..gingery. XD It's kinda a pale brown right now. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:51, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Wow. A lot better than my first image over 2 months ago XD. The white on the tail is just a little too blurry. MistfireOwl City! 03:38, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:04, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded changed the white on the tail. I like the ear pink the way it is right now---Nightshine 04:20, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I think you could make the orange, well, a bit more orange. Curently, it looks alomst brownish. But that's just my oppinion. Others might think otherwise, but when I think orange, I think a bit more orange than that. Wolfwhisker Trick or Treat 04:53, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, he isn't supposed to be orange, but ginger. I think the colour it fine right now--Nightshine 04:56, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Could you saturate it just a tiny bit? Brighten the highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:19, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I saturated it a bit --Nightshine 21:12, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the haunch. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:42, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't add highlights to this--Nightshine 05:32, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Like Frostheart said, I think you should probably add highlights just to give it that depth that will make it look more...real. Wolfwhisker Trick or Treat 01:06, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are never required. I think it looks fine like this. Moonflight 20:46, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? oblivionAudience? 02:20, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 03:15, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (Alt. W) - Approved

Thistleclaw.warrior.alt Since he was mentioned with green eyes, I gave him those, too. Comments? oblivionAudience? 21:53, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Ooh! Lovely! Add the spiky fur tone. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 22:17, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Added fur tone. oblivionAudience? 22:21, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Add a few stripes to his forehead. Make the haunch highlight bigger. Blur the ear pink--Nightshine 00:19, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 01:54, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Make the haunch highlight bigger still, and move it to the left so it's at the front of his haunch--Nightshine 02:08, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Could you make the spiky fur more noticeable? Perhaps you can move it, it's kinda hard to see for me with the tabby stripes. This is awesome. :D ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:16, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I made the fur lines darker, hopefully that'll help. oblivionAudience? 02:28, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Did you see my comment above?--Nightshine 02:51, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I did, I thought I'd fixed it. oblivionAudience? 03:12, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, it stills looks the same where the haunch highlight is. Darken the shading around the neck and belly--Nightshine 03:15, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Add some texture to the forearms and maybe the tail. XD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:30, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changed position of haunch highlight and darkened shading. Frostheart, if you look at his warrior image, you'll see the texture is only on his main body, not on any of his limbs or his tail. oblivionAudience? 20:26, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit. Make the highlights brighter where the stripes are; it looks unusually dark --Nightshine 00:29, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are fine, however, could you lighten the stripes? It's a large color contrast between the stripes and the pelt color. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:33, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Defined earpink and lightened stripes. oblivionAudience? 01:08, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight a tad more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:59, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and maybe the spiky fur tone and add it to the tail. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 21:06, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Blurred shoulder highlight. Scarletwind, the fur tone's lines are black, as dark as they can go, and once again, if you look at his warrior image, you'll see there is only texture on his body, not his tail. oblivionAudience? 21:08, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the haunch highlight, I can't see it that well.--Nightshine 04:25, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the image a slight bit, it may be my computer, but it looks very dark. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:07, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tail highlights a tad. --Midnite Talk 21:47, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Brightened haunch highlight, lightened image, and blurred tail highlight. oblivionAudience? 20:57, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the forehead shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:15, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the leg highlight a bit, otherwise, it's great. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:23, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 23:54, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 02:26, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 03:15, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ivypaw (TC) (Alt.A) - Approved

File:Ivypaw (TC).apprentice.alt.pngNot a very good one. o.o Oh well, comments? XD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:44, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, mostly on the haunch =) llwildheartl 02:00, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the highlights. There is some blurred line art on the forearms --Nightshine 02:07, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it is showing the changes..ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:12, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Ivypaw (TC).apprentice.alt and then we can talk changes. oblivionAudience? 00:51, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Done. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:42, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. oblivionAudience? 01:44, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. --Nightshine 07:06, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

If I darken the shading, it makes it nearly impossible to blur more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:58, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

I say it still needs to be blurred, and maybe brighten the highlights. oblivionAudience? 21:00, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:11, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more--Nightshine 04:24, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Like I said, I cannot darken the shading anymore. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:30, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Are you using GIMP? You should still be able to darken it--Nightshine 04:33, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I use Gimp. I am able to darken it, but I won't. If I darken it, it'll be really hard to blur, it'll make it look worse. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 06:31, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

but it looks flat now. a bit darker shouldn't be too hard to blur. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:58, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Done. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:04, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the bit of shading at the belly under the forearm. Either brighten the highlights or darken the shading --Nightshine 21:13, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Done. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:00, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on her tail. oblivionAudience? 00:01, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Done. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:10, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the haunch shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:13, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:29, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the belly and under the jaw. Looks very nice! :) ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 02:50, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:12, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the underbelly and the chest. Rainwhisper 21:18, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. They are blurred to the max, even using Gimp, regardless, I tried anyway. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:08, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me; CBA? oblivionAudience? 21:17, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights or darken the shading--Nightshine 02:25, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine right now. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:43, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, it's fine. Resuming 24 hours. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 03:00, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but it looks flat to me, can you try and see what it looks like?--Nightshine 03:03, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I did, it looks much too weird. It's fine the way it is now, it doesn't look flat. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:05, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Could you at least brighten the highlights?--Nightshine 21:11, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine, it's fine. It doesn't need anything else. I'm not going to restart the 24 hours, it will be resuming. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:14, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think we should wait and see other users' opinions about this--Nightshine 21:23, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think so, CBA has been on at least three times and no one else commented. So this will stay as it is. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:29, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

We should postpone it for longer so people can comment --Nightshine 21:38, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine, I think it looks fine, and Frostheart said she can't brighten them any more or it'll look better, but I'll restart the 24 hrs to give other people a chance to comment. oblivionAudience? 23:37, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:50, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. Kit)-Approved

Tawnypelt.kit.alt

There is blurred lineart around the yees, which needs to be fixed. The shading on the kit's left side is too thick; lighten some of it in the center and blur the rest, to make the pelt look smoother. The kit also looks cross-eyed; make the pupils in the same position in both eyes. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I completely redid the image because my previous one was so terrible XD. I've fixed the eyes, shading, and pupil location. Thanks, Bramble! ^_^ --Midnite Talk 20:17, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading into oblivion xD oblivionAudience? 22:07, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Nice pun, Oblivion! ^_^ Better? --Midnite Talk 20:16, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Good job. Just darken the shading around the arms, back leg, tail, and head. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 20:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Oh wow, this looks so nice! All I can say is make her a more gingery colour, she looks golden right now. Mossy go away. 05:59, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Icy, Mosspool! :) How does she look now? --Midnite Talk 17:54, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink less of a hot pink, and make it a tad smaller. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:38, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten her a bit, she's a tad dark. Mossy go away. 04:01, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks for the tips, guys! ^-^ I've lightened it, fixed the ear pink, and corrected a mistake in the eyes that I didn't see before. What do you think? --Midnite Talk 18:03, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. Darken the shading--Nightshine 07:19, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Done. --Midnite Talk 00:03, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading or desaturate her body, her fur looks brownish by her back legs. oblivionAudience? 20:19, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I've very slightly dodged her body, but if it needs more work, tell me. :) --Midnite Talk 20:30, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading under the chin.--Nightshine 00:26, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. If there's anything else that needs fixing, please tell me! :) --Midnite Talk 15:31, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the top of her forelegs. oblivionAudience? 00:30, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Done. =) --Midnite Talk 23:13, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

In my personal opinion, against what everyone else seems to be saying... she's TOO ginger. It said pale ginger--a sandy color like Sandstorm, who was also described as pale ginger--not just ginger. She looks as bright as Firestar right now. Maplefrost! 23:34, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I understand what you mean. :) If you look at the image's page, you can see that at first, this image was somewhere between yellow and golden. I can change it if you like, but I'd like to here some other users' opinions first and see what they think of it. --Midnite Talk 21:41, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

I personally think she should look more like Goldenflower, her mother, than Sandstorm. This colour's fine to me. oblivionAudience? 21:55, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, anything else? --Midnite Talk 20:06, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the left side of the chest (our left), and make the earpink smaller, because it looks like it's falling out of her ears. Merry Christmas! o3o 22:13, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Done. --Midnite Talk 19:09, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything else wrong, great job :) Rainwhisper 19:26, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 20:34, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 22:23, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Broken Shadow (Q) ~ Approved

Broken Shadow.queenShe is called a queen at the begining of dark river, what do ya think? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:29, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice ;) Enlarge the earpink. llwildheartl 02:44, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing a tad, it's a bit too dark compared to her warrior image. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:33, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Does she actually need a queen charart? If her son, Fallen Leaves, was leaving to become a Sharpclaw, I don't think she would still be a queen. --Nightshine 07:08, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- The text dirctly calls her a queen, so i think that should count. -ſceheartBlah blah 08:02, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

She was also mentioned as a tabby. Give her some stripes. oblivionAudience? 21:02, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Tabbied up. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:59, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't this just the regular queen, not the alternate? Blegh, I'm sick, might be horribly wrong. :P If this is correct, make the ear-pink more pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:11, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

I would think it would be the altenate because she was mistakenly called with stripes, correct? Moonflight 01:15, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

But she never had a queen in the first place. This could be an alternate, but there'd be no original, and I think it's fine to just leave it. oblivionAudience? 01:22, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I agree with Oblivion, this is gonna be the original. I tried to fix the ear pink, but i cannot get it to look normal X( -ſceheartBlah blah 02:22, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Are you all sure that she was actually a queen? Her only son was about to become a sharpclaw, so I don't think she would still be a queen. Does anyone else agree? --Nightshine 04:22, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that's true. She wouldn't be a queen by that time, and the blanks (I quote from Helix :3) are used to show their ranks, and she was never seen as a queen. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:16, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The book specifically calls her a queen, and she says Fallen Leaves is her eldest, implying she has more kits. oblivionAudience? 17:17, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The exact line is "You're my eldest, Fallen Leaves," the queen whispered.... (Dark River, pg. 1)and it calls her a queen before that too. That's pretty concrete info to me. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:55, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the roots of the stripes less red. Blur the highlights, and try to fix the ear-pink again. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:06, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I dulled the stripes a bit, but i can't do much more without ruining the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:42, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, that'll probably help. oblivionAudience? 20:07, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. This is awesome! --Midnite Talk 20:45, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded--ſceheartBlah blah 21:13, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the stripes look pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:01, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded--ſceheartBlah blah 02:32, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back legs. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:28, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded~ ---ſceheartBlah blah 23:42, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the stripes. oblivionAudience? 21:14, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded--ſceheartBlah blah 02:13, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading around the neck and darken the ear pink a bit--Nightshine 02:23, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Define the stripes at the base of the tail. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:12, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded--ſceheartBlah blah 20:42, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great ^^ comments before approval?--Nightshine 20:44, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Define the stripes at the chest, and some stripes still look pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:49, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Defined the chest stripes. None of the stripes are pink, maybe it's your computer. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:03, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

I'm talking about the 'giant' stripe near the haunch. XD Define that a bit, and it'll be better. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:06, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 23:05, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks more blurred now. Redo the stripe and blur it again. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:17, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 23:55, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the eyes more of a vibrant orange, then this will be ready. :) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:58, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Hopefully for the last time :) -ſceheartBlah blah 00:24, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:29, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:56, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Daisytail (Q) - Approved

Daisytail.queen Wow...I can't believe it! My first charart here in a LONG time. I'm not so good with patched cats...oh well. Comments? HAWKFIRE98 15:07, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

I moved this to the correct section; next time, please put this in the charart section. There is some blurred line-art on the tail, legs, and the ear. The highlights look a tad bit blotchy too. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:23, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on the muzzle, it looks good so far. ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 20:00, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches a lot. oblivionAudience? 22:48, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Add some highlights to her muzzle, shoulder, and haunch with the dodge tool and turn her nose pink. Looks nice so far. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 03:56, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and move up and shape her ear pink a bit, it's sort of low down and lopsided right now. There is also some blurred lineart on the haunch, tail, and some more just above the base of her tail, and then some more on her farther front leg. Oh, and a little bit on her back near her shoulder. I hope you can find all that XD (It's all just tiny smudges) Mossy go away. 05:55, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the patches look more orange. Besides that, it looks great! ❄Blizzardfur❄AlbinoBeauty❄ 17:06, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the muzzle and fix all the blurred line-art. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:43, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I fixed all blurred lineart, made patches orange, darkened shading and brightened highlights, and fixed ear pink. Whew! XD (BTW, the lineart on the ear is not blurred. It's just the ear pink.) HAWKFIRE98 20:23, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

The muzzle still looks a little dark and maybe make the patches more orange and less red. ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 20:28, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the brown lighter and make sure the ear pink doesn't touch the line art. --Nightshine 05:58, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Run the blur tool over the shading a bit to smooth it out. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 03:09, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Change the eye so she doesn't look cross-eyed. Try to look at another queen image to see an example. oblivionAudience? 02:00, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

umm are you still working on this? if so shes crossed eyed!! Maplepool 01:51, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Patience, Maplepool. The two most powerful warriors are patience and time, as Leo Tolstoy quotes. :) It appears to me that there is a faint scar on her shoulder. Is it supposed to be there? If not, I suggest you remove it. --Midnite Talk 01:44, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Guys, Hawkey can't work on this. She said she quit wiki forever - as seen on Cats of the Clans wiki, I'll link if needed. She won't work on this, as said. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 20:58, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, then anyone who isn't working on anything can pick this up, since it was withdrawn. oblivionAudience? 20:59, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'll work on it. Leggo 🏈 03:29, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I changed the eye, fixed the earpink, and blurred like crazy.Leggo 🏈 01:07, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

There still appears to be a faint scar on her shoulder. Do you see it? If so, try to get rid of it. oblivionAudience? 01:11, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried my best... Leggo 🏈 01:25, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, looks good. Blur the haunch highlight. oblivionAudience? 02:24, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 04:09, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

The patch on her belly looks kind of odd at the right edge because it is all brown--Nightshine 00:53, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 19:16, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 20:32, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

None; approving. oblivionAudience? 22:34, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Minnowtail (Alt.Ki) - Approved

Minnowtail.kit.alt

Add some shading and blur thoroughly, so the pelt is smooth. Darken and soften the ear pink, so it does not stand out so much. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I sorta re-did it. I think I need more blurring, though. Blossomfire₰Misty's best friend!₰ 19:02, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see the lineart at all; the pelt color is too dark. Try using a lighter very dark gray color. --Midnite Talk 20:17, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and lighten pelt color, also maybe make the ear-pink a little bigger.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 22:20, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made it lighter and earpink is enlarged. But I still think the highlights should be blurred. Blossomfire₰Misty's best friend!₰ 23:07, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

It's better, just maybe add some more lighter highlights on the chest and face.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 23:23, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

It's still too dark. If you can't make it any darker, that's okay. :) Also, there is a stray pixel on the far right paw that you should fill in. --Midnite Talk 23:26, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Grr... black cats are not my strong point. Let me guess. I have to make it lighter. MistfireOwl City! 17:03, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, make it lighter a tad. :3 Then try to make the ears even (the shape). ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:06, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened it. MistfireOwl City! 17:18, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the shading. You may want to add a few highlights to make it look less flat.--Nightshine 07:13, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added more highlights and blurred earpink, but I couldn't shade anymore because it was too hard to blur. MistfireOwl City! 16:08, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink the same size and maybe add some more lighter highlights.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 16:12, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. MistfireOwl City! 16:18, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is a hot-pink; tone it down, it's also kinda blotchy. Make the nose a dark gray. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:23, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed earpink and nose and blurred shading a little more. MistfireOwl City! 18:40, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Setting 24 horus before approval. Bramble -Hyuu~ 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, Mistfire! =) Although I still think the ear pink could be fixed. The right ear pink is smaller than the left, and it looks sorta crooked. --Midnite Talk 20:12, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Minnowtail.kit.alt oblivionAudience? 01:56, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed earpink. (chants under breath "please approve, please approve, please approve") MistfireOwl City! 17:12, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and make the ear-pink even. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:56, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed earpink and added shading to the tail. MistfireOwl City! 02:56, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, brighten the highlights--Nightshine 04:28, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Brightened highlights and blurred earpink. MistfireOwl City! 18:55, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more--Nightshine 21:01, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The chest highlight should be blurred.  Darkhallows...Mew? 12:48, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred earpink and blurred chest highlight. MistfireOwl City! 20:17, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is some colour outside of the line art on the right side-Nightshine 00:55, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed lineart. MistfireOwl City! 02:04, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 02:08, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Technically, would this be approved since nobody's commented in the last 24 hours sice CBA? MistfireOwl City! 23:49, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approving; sorry for the delay. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:10, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt. W) - Approved

Darkstripe.warrior.alt

Much too dark. Lighten the entire image, and then blur/smudge to smooth the highlights together with the entire pelt, so it blends together and takes the appearance of a natural pelt. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Done. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 20:32, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? (It was seconded by Bramble, and she asked me, so...yeah ;D) ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 02:44, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights still look like they need blurring to me. Mossy go away. 06:01, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

They can't blur anymore, I tried. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 17:34, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Move the bottom part of the highlight on his shoulder up a bit and bring the bottom part of the highlight on his flank a bit higher. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 05:13, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think that the image needs the highlights to be moved. However, they do need to be less dark. I would smudge the pelt color into the highlights, blur it, and then redo the highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:21, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this is awesome, Icy! ;) Could you make the ear pink a little bigger? It seems a tad small right now. --Midnite Talk 20:10, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Looks too bright. Maybe try using the burn tool or redo the highlights. ❄Blizzardfur❄AlbinoBeauty❄ 22:11, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I re-did highlights and shading, then made the ear pink a different colour. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:04, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlights and blur haunch highlight. Make ear pink triangular --Nightshine 01:04, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Happy first day of December everyone ;D ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 01:39, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger--Nightshine 02:16, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:41, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink --Nightshine 01:53, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 02:19, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

I can hardly see the ear pink. Either brighten it or just add a new on on top --Nightshine 07:01, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:24, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the eye a bit less orange, I'm pretty sure cats don't have eyes like that. oblivionAudience? 00:32, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Form the ear-pink into a more triangular shape, it's kinda like a blob right now. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:44, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:53, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the muzzle highlight some more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:54, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

It can't blur anymore. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:57, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, repeating 24 hours. oblivionAudience? 22:01, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

None;approving. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:15, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Mapleshade (W) - Approved

Mapleshade.warrior Yeah, laugh it up, it's terrible. Bring on the comments! Let me guess, the orange is too bright? You know what, there really is an advantage to staying up late! XD Mossy go away. 05:46, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches together more. This looks great!--Nightshine 06:15, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

As Nightshine said, blur the patches; right now they look too separated. This is fantastic! --Midnite Talk 20:19, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

The gray/black splotches look...kinda un-natural somehow. Maybe change the pattern, instead of keeping it as the dip and hill thing. XD Nice name I gave it, eh? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:23, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

http://calicocat.info/calico-cat/calico-cat-1.jpg I sorta referenced off this cat. I want it to look like this . . . I love her pattern. I don't know . . . . xD I guess I can try and change it a bit, yeah. Mossy go away. 21:53, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Dovesong. All I see that the shading ion the black transistion should be darkened, and all the patches should be evenly blurred together. Other than that, it's marvelous. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 22:02, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and, like everyone else said, the transitions. Good job :) oblivionAudience? 22:04, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'm re-doing a lot of it XD I found a copy with better shading, I guess I re-did and forgot about it, and also I think Frostheart is right about the patches so I'm changing them completely XD Mossy go away. 22:08, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

VERY good but blur the patches like said they seem very um ah unreal to meal blur them that should fix it other than that its awesome Maplepool 23:05, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe try smudging the patches a tiny bit? It looks sorta cartoony. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:34, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

I was going to, but then I forgot about it XD I'm gonna try changing the shade of ginger . . . it looks really bright to me. Mossy go away. 21:44, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Umm, I tried again . . . better or worse? Not too sure about this . . .

Wow, this is wonderful! The only thing I can see is between that space between the forearm and haunch that's usually transparent is gray. Make that transparent again, please. Good job! Hollydapple 01:17, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Looks wonderful! There's a smudge of gray on the tip of her tail that could be blurred a bit more. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 04:00, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

I hate to bring this up because the charart is really good, but i just finished Night Whispers, and she was never accutally called a tortie, just white and orange. only the authors called her a tortie. This would kinda be like that alternate. -ſceheartBlah blah 05:42, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

OH! Really? Well, I want this to be her official image and I am not to fond of this anyways, so I will change it and make her only white and orange. Thanks, Iceheart! XD Mossy go away. 01:57, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'd just like to point out that we do create descriptions by what the authors say, so this image is completely fine. And no, that does not mean she needs an alternate orange and white image. oblivionAudience? 02:10, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

While we do create descriptions based on what the author says if she appeared in the book as orange and white than her main description should match.AshshadowNo really? 02:30, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Dude shes tortie we go with what the authors say not the book if the book SAID it then is more than likely a mistake the the erins didnt catch nor the proof reader IF we must do a orange and white pic i may be her Alt image but,in the ernin hunter chat it was said the shes a 'big tortie she cat with amber eyes and is cold and decated to revenge' not ginger and white

lol sorry bout' the rant...^^; Maplepool 03:20, November 28, 2010 (UTC) sadly,I was here

Ummm . . . . no. We go with what the books said, not what the authors said before they published the book. They may have changed their mind, or described her as ginger and white in the books before the chat, then forgot and addidentally said she was a tortie. They always make mistakes like that. Yeah, if the books say she's ginger and white, she's ginger and white. Mossy go away. 03:48, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

umm...no look at what Obloivion said....well mabye should we ask Bramble cuz none of us agree?(not a threat just asking cuz like none of us know...) Maplepool 03:54, November 28, 2010 (UTC) I WAS NEVER HERE!

I looked at what Oblivion said . . . . I didn't like mine anyways, so why not just do the other one? Oblivion, the authors once said Cinderpelt was pale gray but we never gave her an alternate image for that. When was it ever decided that we do do images for what the authors say in chats? And if she was only ever described as orange and white in the books, never tortoiseshell, then her image is orange and white, not tortoiseshell. Mossy go away. 07:20, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine leaving it orange and white. Darken the ear pink. darken the shading on the orange parts, darken the tail shading.--Nightshine 07:27, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

It should be orange and white, because, as Mosspool said, the authors always make mistakes - maybe they changed their mind. She was mentioned as an orange and white cat all throughout the book, not just once, as a mistake. llwildheartl 07:30, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well,I asked Bramble,so hopefully we'll get this squared away...cuase im like very confused but,if she says it stays,lighten the earpink then blur it other than that its great^^ Maplepool 15:50, November 28, 2010 (UTC) I was never here YOU CANT PROVE ANYTHING!

I think you are all focusing too much on a calico cat, not a tortoiseshell. There are differences between the two; calico has distinct patches, while a tortoiseshell can be blurred together. Like this fellow here [1] there may not be solid black in the pelt. If it is found later on (cough-Crookedstar's Promise-cough) that she does have black on her pelt, we can add it in easily. It's not like the images are set in stone. Keep it orange and white now (which still does count as tortoiseshell, theoretically) and we can decide what to do later if she is described as a tortoiseshell in the book. Dovesong, keep going on this version. Bramble -Hyuu~ 20:29, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the neck. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:51, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Ok,thanks Bramble^^ and,as i said before,lighten the ear pink then blur it 71.164.203.114 14:39, November 29, 2010 (UTC) IM BACK FROM KANSAS!!!

Phenomenal, Mosspool! ^_^ Blur the shading on the chest fur. --Midnite Talk 20:15, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Hey guys, leaving the Wiki due to real life obligations. I guess someone else could take this over now. Sorry guys. Mossy go away. 05:09, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Unless I have to get Sagepaw approved first, I can take over. Merry Christmas! o3o 21:56, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Dovesong, but you do need to get Sagepaw approved. Anyone else who isn't working on anything can take over this, though. oblivionAudience? 22:17, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oblivion this is a different Dovesong. She can keep this can't she?AshshadowNo really? 22:36, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind. I can take over.AshshadowNo really? 22:43, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. AshshadowNo really? 00:14, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck/chest shading some more. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:29, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

It's not going to look any different.AshshadowNo really? 20:31, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ginger and white patches together a lot. 20:39, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't need MUCH blurring, it's just another style. Blur the shading at the haunch. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:18, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Just so you know this will be my last charart before I leave the wiki. AshshadowNo really? 19:53, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Aw you're leaving? We'll miss you. Darken and define the ear pink-Nightshine 20:33, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'll miss you guys too. Fixed earpink.AshshadowNo really? 21:38, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?-Nightshine 21:46, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oh noes! This image is a curse! Everybody who works on it leaves! Ahh! (I just linger) The ear pink is like, really dark red now, waaay to dark. Mossy go away. 04:48, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's not a curse I've been thinking about it for a while now. About the earpink, you can never win with ginger cats. I don't think it's too dark and you probably wouldn't be able to see it if it was any lighter.AshshadowNo really? 20:54, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear pink looks fine. Repeating 24 hours-Nightshine 02:22, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:33, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsepaw (Alt.A) - Approved

Gorsepaw.apprentice.altComments?ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 03:30, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is too big. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:32, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and blur it. Darken the shading and add shading on the tail. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 13:08, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 21:33, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more noticeable, and center it. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:29, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 23:48, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the haunch and blur the rest of the shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:25, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 22:45, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the ear pink a bit more--Nightshine 07:07, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 14:47, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights if there are any or darken the shading more--Nightshine 04:23, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 14:37, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a teeny-tiny bit smaller. :) BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare! 17:36, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 20:40, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. oblivionAudience? 20:42, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 21:02, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Wow Rainwhisper, this looks great! :) Could you darken the ear pink a tad? --Midnite Talk 21:07, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded... again. Rainwhisper 21:35, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is kinda hard to see, make it pinker. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:02, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 21:22, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit more and blur it--Nightshine 00:12, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 00:48, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure the ear-pink isn't touching line-art. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:19, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed it. Rainwhisper 02:32, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Move the earpink up and make it a bit bigger. oblivionAudience? 02:54, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 21:17, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great. Blur the shading on the haunch a bit. Rainbreath 15:45, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 21:16, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch higlight. oblivionAudience? 02:22, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights or darken the shading--Nightshine 02:24, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is great. I think the hightlights should be brightened. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 02:52, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 03:06, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred ilne-art on the ear. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:20, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think I got it. Rainwhisper 16:35, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art looks a bit..'fat' near the ear. :P Fix the line-art. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:05, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front of the haunch-Nightshine 21:11, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Meh:( the shading won't blurr anymore, or else it'll get darker and blotchy. As for the ear, I tried the best I could to make it un-fat. Rainwhisper 22:20, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight some more--Nightshine 00:51, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It can't be blurred anymore. Rainwhisper 01:59, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

I can't understand how it can't be blurred anymore. Try blurring it and if it doesn't work I'll try--Nightshine 20:31, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. What I meant was, if it was blurred it would start to look... weird. I just decided to redo the highlights, so how does it loook now? Rainwhisper 21:00, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's better now. Lighten the ear-pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:46, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 23:53, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is excellent! Blur the earpink a bit more. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainwhisper 13:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 18:43, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think the highlights are fine. Rainwhisper 21:02, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome! =) Darken the ear pink a tad. --Midnite Talk 21:14, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:41, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 02:20, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:06, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Palefoot (W) - Approved

Palefoot.warrior Comments? Rainbreath 14:05, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Add a few smaller stripes to his shoulder and haunch, lighten the ear pink and make it a bit bigger.--Nightshine 17:54, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading on the back? Looks superb! --Midnite Talk 20:21, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink could be slightly bigger, other then that it's really good :)ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 22:26, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the tail. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 03:58, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is me, but there seems to be a very thin line of shading and then a 'fat' brush of shading again. This is located on the chest area, could you blur or fix that? Add some shading to the back legs. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:53, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? Rainbreath 16:42, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's beautiful, Rainbreath. ^-^ Can you blur the shading on the back and also blur the ear pink? --Midnite Talk 20:19, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink as well--Nightshine 06:23, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading -ſceheartBlah blah 03:36, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Rainbreath 13:34, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't shows the right picture on my pc. =( The right picture is the one with the lightest ear pink. Rainbreath 13:41, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading.

Oh that was me ^ ^. I forgot to sign. Mistflower 03:57, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blured the shading. Is it better? Rainbreath 15:34, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:27, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading in his chest a bit more. Otherwise, very nice. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 15:22, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Center the earpink a tad more. This is amazing! ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainbreath 13:27, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up, blur the chest shading more--Nightshine 02:21, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm very happy =D Rainbreath 14:15, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing. Comments before approval? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:41, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:11, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers (SC) - For Approval

Dark Whiskers.sc

The key word is blur. The shading and highlights must be blurred together to make the pelt smooth and not blotchy. Use the smudge tool and the blur tool together, do whatever you can to make it a blend of light and dark, and not patches of light on a dark pelt. Everything else looks fine, Shaf. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Just wondering, where did it say that he was black? His description on his page just says that he's a big, thick-furred tom. Bring the highlight on his forehead down a bit towards his muzzle. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 15:55, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

His page says "large, thick-furred black tom". Even check the allegiances of Long Shadows if you don't believe me. Shaf, are you still working on this? oblivionAudience? 21:47, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! My bad! Darken the shading his left, hind leg. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 23:19, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm still working on this. Forgot the date that the project opened again. :P--Shaf Girl 16:03, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the highlights profusely, but I think all that did was make them smaller and more prominent.--Shaf Girl 16:20, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look very small. Make them bigger and less concentrated--Nightshine 00:27, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I kinda redid the entire thing. :3 Shaf Girl 05:40, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. Maybe instead of brightening the highlights, you can just darken the shading, or try brightening the highlights to see what it would look like--Nightshine 06:20, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I don't think this needs any work, as for the highlights/shading. It looks perfect to me, and I don't understand where all the fuss is coming from (no offense, all). But I do agree with Night shine, the earpink should be lightened a bit and blurred. llwildheartl 23:31, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is just my computer, but the eyes look kind of flat. Try adding darker patches to the edge of the eyes. Mistflower 01:56, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 01:23, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and maybe make it a bit longer. oblivionAudience? 00:05, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see any falts with this:) ClarrissaMy Talk Page 18:31, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 21:43, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink--Nightshine 21:46, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Also, make it more triangular and consistent. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:42, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights on the tail one long highlight. MistfireOwl City! 03:58, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten up the whole thing PtEЯO :D I'm back! 18:34, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten and blur all the highlights. ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 08:36, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are fine. Setting 24 hours before approval. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:31, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:36, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

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