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Pouncetail (Alt. A) - Approved

Pouncetail (RC).apprentice.alt

Setting 24 hours before approval. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

I can hardly see the shading and highlights. Umm, add more of them, I guess. Mossy go away. 22:02, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the shading that they have, but I think that they should add a bit more, like down onto his bottom, and shade his tail. Then blur the shading and highlights. Snickers Blastoff... 00:07, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? oblivionAudience? 21:49, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

I will take over. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

I've added more shading and highlights overall. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 04:15, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes on the shoulder and haunch longer, blur the ear pink a bit--Nightshine 04:30, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I can take over on this since Bramble is gone--Nightshine 03:24, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I made changes--Nightshine 03:43, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tabby stripes more; I know it is supposed to be this way, but it looks too..blotchy like this, blur it only a bit more. Maybe add one tabby stripe on the chest. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:21, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred stripes more, but I would prefer not to add stripes to the chest--Nightshine 05:34, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:25, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made ear pink smaller--Nightshine 02:34, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. oblivionAudience? 02:40, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't add a highlight to the haunch; I don't see where there is to blur --Nightshine 02:46, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the chest. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:01, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened chest shading--Nightshine 04:08, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, CBA? ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:58, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink some more, it seems as if it is really big; maybe it's just me though. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:14, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded changed ear pink--Nightshine 00:32, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:26, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded defined tail stripes--Nightshine 02:41, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? oblivionAudience? 21:58, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 22:02, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt. Ki) - Approved

Willowshine.kit.altThis is a major fail--especially the ear-pink. XD Comments? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:30, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad. :) The ear pink is crooked, and the front paws could be shaded more. Willowshine's eyes are blue, and is her nose supposed to be that color? --Midnite Talk 00:34, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter. ---ſceheartBlah blah 00:39, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried fixing the size of the ear-pink; not sure how that turned out. XD Darkened shading on fore-arms, I think the ear-pink colour is fine. Also, the eyes are blue, and the nose color is supposed to be that colour. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:42, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Usually light grey cats have a lighter colour, but anyways, the right ear pink needs to be centered. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:46, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Tried centering it, beware, I said tried. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:52, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Very good job, Frostheart! Darken the shading left side of the body, and on the head. This is great by the way. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:55, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:00, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. oblivionAudience? 01:43, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 01:54, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:58, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading on the tail go to the other side, since the light is coming from the left. Darken the shading some more--Nightshine 02:18, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:24, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. I'll let y'all decide which one is better. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:59, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one on the right better. --Nightshine 04:02, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

These are amazing! Personally, I think the left one looks better, but if the right one's shading is blurred a bit, it will look better. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, I prefer the one on the left. On that, I think you should blur the arm shading. Other than that, marvelous. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:30, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, I love the one on the left. It looks incredible! :) I think you should blur the chest shading. Great job! --Midnite Talk 22:20, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think the one on the left is better, but like i said before the ear pink seems a little orange to me. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:25, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, left onen wins. :3 Any more comments? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:50, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour a bit, darken the shading, brighten the highlights a bit more as well--Nightshine 02:18, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think the nose colour is fine, and when I did darken the shading and brighten the highlights, everyone preferred this one, so I'm keeping it as is. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:20, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Just like it was with the alternate Ivypaw image, it just looks too flat to me. If everyone prefers it this way though then I guess it's fine...--Nightshine 02:26, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with you Nightshine. Make the ear pink look more natural by darkening it and blur it. Lighten and blur all highlights. ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 09:40, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't see a need to darken the ear-pink, and it's blurred enough to me. Lightened highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:28, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the forearms and under the chin--Nightshine 03:23, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:33, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the head shading and blur the tail shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:51, December 17, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:54, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading and forearm shading--Nightshine 23:52, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:04, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the muzzle highlight. oblivionAudience? 19:27, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:54, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? oblivionAudience? 22:57, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

It seems kinda unnatural that there are highlights on the underside of the tail. Put the shadows under the tail and highlights on the top. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 14:38, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but no. The light is coming in from the left, it belongs there. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:00, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the tail highlight and make it so it doesn't look like the light is coming from the bottom, but from the left. Darken the shading between the forearms--Nightshine 19:08, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:53, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks blotchy now, try and smooth it out. oblivionAudience? 21:05, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:07, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Restarting 24 hours. oblivionAudience? 21:38, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

No comments; approved. oblivionAudience? 02:32, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Splashheart (L) - Approved

Splashheart.leader oblivionAudience? 20:08, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest and haunch highlights. Rainwhisper 20:10, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, I can hardly see any. Blur the shading, blur the ear pink, add nose colour. Does Splashheart even need a leader image? He was never seen as a leader--Nightshine 20:11, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose a dark gray, not pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:13, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The leader guidelines were already decided, and i think this qualifies. Bladd more shading to the eyes. 174.7.99.84 20:18, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry that was me. My computer logged me off. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:20, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 20:47, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The size of the ear pink is fine. I'm pretty sure it's supposed to fill up the whole area--Nightshine 20:55, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I thought it should be smaller since that's how the ear-pink is usually shown on most other leader chararts. add a small highlight to the face. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 21:00, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Splashheart became a leader? When? Blur the highlights, making it look like the highlights are smoothly fading into the pelt. MistfireOwl City! 22:06, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Try to blur the tail shading in particular. It's smooth, but the transitioning needs work. --Midnite Talk 23:30, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

On the left earpink, there is a tiny little smudge of lighter color. Blur that in so it looks consistent. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, but it's not showing the changes yet. Please don't comment until I say the image is fixed. oblivionAudience? 21:02, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, it's done now :) oblivionAudience? 21:03, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, Oblivion. I think the tail shading should be darkened, and blur the ear-pink. Also, the head-shading should be darkened as well. Great work! ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Icestorm :) oblivionAudience? 21:49, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

No problem. All I see now is that you have to darken the arm shading. (I'm on a roll with shading!) ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 22:01, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 22:11, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful now. Comments before approval? ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and brighten the highlights a bit. Blur the chest highlight and tail highlight--Nightshine 00:25, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the highlights, actually. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:20, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

He looks black instead of dark gray. Mossy go away. 22:14, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

The nose color-looks a bit odd to me. Maybe lighten it up a bit? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:00, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think the nose color is fine. Lighten the highlights along the tail. This looks quite beautiful =3 ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 09:38, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 22:05, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the tail shading, blur the haunch highlight, darken the shading where it should be darker such as around the belly and under the chin--Nightshine 22:09, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 18:40, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the left ear-pink some more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:19, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 21:54, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:00, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 23:05, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:09, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on the chest looks like there's a ring of darker fur around it before it reverts to his normal pelt. Maybe smooth it out by the shoulders? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 02:12, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his right fore arm. --Nightshine 07:29, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading between the ears. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 14:16, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Scarletwind, there doesn't need to be any shading between his ears. oblivionAudience? 18:38, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Mossy go away. 19:00, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 19:04, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken haunch and belly shading--Nightshine 19:05, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 19:40, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:39, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights- espiecally the chest and tail ones, still don't look blurred enough to me. Mossy go away. 00:59, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 01:48, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:20, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 21:28, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Pikepaw (A) - Approved

Pikepaw.apprenticeFor the page, Pikepaw. Crystalstar999

I've moved this image to the right place. Please sign with four tildes when you're on a talk page. Do rename this image as Pikepaw.apprentice.png. Remember to place the image as full sized, which I've done too. As for the image itself, the shading on the haunch and that on the belly is a little intense. Just lighten that and then darken the image overall, because it looks like a pale gray tom, not a dark gray one. Otherwise, great job! =) Starlingflight Take Flight into the Sky! 13:50, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darkhallows has already reserved this image. It will be declined. I think Bramble will issue a 24 hour ban --Nightshine 23:52, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Um sorry if I'm contradicting you, but I really think this shouldn't be declined. Darkhallows' version of Pikepaw was already declined. Doesn't that make it allowable for someone else to create his charart? Please correct me if I'm wrong. Starlingflight Take Flight into the Sky! 10:56, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'm just an apprentice. XD But even though Darkhallows's was declined, this Pikepaw is being declined because Darkhallows still has it reserved on the PCA chart. Basically, whether the image was declined before or not, if it's on the chart, you're never supposed to put it up for approval if you're not the user that reserved it first. At least, that's what I remember :) --Midnite Talk 20:32, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, Shady's image was declined due to lack of work shortly before the Project closed. I didn't know about it, so I reset her current project like I did the others to the 23rd. But, as she's stated she'll be inactive indefinitely now, and the image was declined and should have been removed from the current projects table, the image is fair game. This can stay up. Thanks for saying something, Starling. If Crystal no longer wants to work on it, someone else can once the week is out. The only thing I see right now is that the eye needs color. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 04:39, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Rename this Pikepaw.apprentice oblivionAudience? 17:21, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I personally think the shoulder highlight should move down a bit, just enough so it touches the top of the forearm. This is fantastic otherwise, though =) --Midnite Talk 20:48, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I think the highlight looks fine where it is. If others disagree with me, then change it. Moonflight 22:47, December 9, 2010 (UTC)
I also just noticed Bramble's comment. I'd be willing to take it over once this week is over. Moonflight 22:50, December 9, 2010 (UTC)
There's blurred lineart on the shoulder - fix that. And darken the shoulder shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:35, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is she still working on this? ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 16:48, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

No. I've taken over. Moonflight 21:44, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Comments? Moonflight 00:46, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Make the ear pink bigger and blur it. Darken the arm shading some--Nightshine 00:52, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for the compliment. Which arm, exactly, should I fix? Moonflight 00:56, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Both of them--Nightshine 01:00, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Does this look better? Moonflight 01:08, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear-pink up and make it a tad bigger. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:14, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the front paws if you have one. ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 09:04, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Moonflight 14:57, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 07:30, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add a highlight to the forehead. MistfireOwl City! 18:03, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure what that would do. I've never added a highlight to the forhead and never had a complaint. Moonflight 22:37, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 02:47, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 03:05, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt. Queen) - Approved

Daisy.queen.alt2 So many things wrong with this charart...This is my first one for the project! Mistflower 07:05, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the patch on the forehead a bit thinner, and darken the shading. Great image! ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more noticeable. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:12, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. It's barely visible. --Midnite Talk 20:50, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

~Reuploaded~ Mistflower 23:13, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear-pink can still be slightly darker, other then that it's really good.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 01:54, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the ear-pink is still un-noticeable. Shouldn't you color in the nose? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:27, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

~Reuploaded~ Mistflower 05:45, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the patch on her paws a bit more. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 20:36, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the stomach a bit more. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:27, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patch on her lower haunch by her tail a bit more. Looks lovely so far! ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 17:39, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Can you darken the ear pink a tad? It looks a little light to me. :) --Midnite Talk 20:16, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear-pink color is fine. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:19, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind then...XD. Darken the tail shading maybe? This is amazing! --Midnite Talk 01:45, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Daisy.queen.alt oblivionAudience? 02:04, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

~Reuploaded~ Mistflower 03:42, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit more. Rename this Daisy.queen.alt.png. There is a white pixel on the forearm. Darken the shading some more--Nightshine 07:04, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

The small piece of line-art near the shoulder (not the shoulder, near) is faintly gray. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:54, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

There's a white pixel near her front left leg. Fill that in black. BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare!

Smudge the white near the head part more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:55, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

~Reuploaded~

Define the ear pink, rename this Daisy.queen.alt.png --Nightshine 05:20, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

There's two alternate Daisy's. I don't want mine to get mixed up with the other.Mistflower

Well, there are, but they're both for the same ThunderClan Daisy. :) That's a good point. See what some other users think about it, maybe. In the meantime, I think the stomach highlights could be blurred a tad more. --Midnite Talk 21:44, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

~Reuploaded~ Mistflower

Darken the shading on the white patches-Nightshine 02:29, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure the ear-pink isn't touching the line-art. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:16, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Mistflower said on her userpage that she is leaving the wiki, so is someone going to take over the image? ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 21:59, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

If Mistflower is leaving, anyone who's not doing anything can work on this. I've also changed the character pixels box to have two alternate queens, so this image can stay named as it is. oblivionAudience? 20:33, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'll take over. Leggo 🏈 03:03, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed earpink and darkened shading on the white patches. Leggo 🏈 04:27, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little smaller and darken the shading on the white areas more--Nightshine 05:34, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a more natural color. ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 08:53, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried to make it a more natural color. I copied it off of an earpink chart. I also had some problems with blurring.....Leggo 🏈 03:37, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

The white patches on the back look pale gray, not white. Make them whiter? Mossy go away. 00:02, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think that's neccissary. They look that way due to the shading. Moonflight 15:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I thinned the shading a tad, so the the back patches aren't fully coated in grey. Leggo 🏈 16:14, December 19, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, well, it's fine if the shading is on the white parts but it shouldn't make them look fully grey. It looks better now :) I think you should make the ear pink a more natural colour, it's almost fuschia right now. Mossy go away. 01:10, December 20, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Stole earpink from Cloudtail. Leggo 🏈 03:29, December 20, 2010 (UTC)
Looks better :) Now just move that pesky ear pink up a teeny bit, it's a little low down. Mossy go away. 19:09, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Moved it Northward. Anything else? Leggo 🏈 23:22, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
Make the nose gray, and these`s a tiny piece of lineart on her cheek that looks a bit blurred. I also think I might see some blurred lineart on her far front leg. Mossy go away. 23:41, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Fixed blurred-stuff. Does her nose have to be grey? I think it looks fine pink. Leggo 🏈 01:04, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks blurred to me. There is also blurred line-art on the tail. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:06, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed all the blurred lineart I could see, and lightened up the exterimly dark shading at the base of her tail that looked like blurred lineart. Leggo 🏈 01:46, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 17:37, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, her nose should be gray. You could just change it now without repeating CBA though because it's not really worth it but her nose SHOULD be gray. Mossy go away. 22:14, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. [Hopefully for the last time!] Leggo 🏈 01:08, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Whiten the white patch on her back leg, I think there is some smudged line-art on her shoulder sag, and smudge the white patch near her eye some more. It seems un-natural, as it is one big smudge, an then a bunch of small ones, ending with another big one. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:34, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged head patch some more, and whitened the patch on her back leg. There's no smudged lineart on her shoulder sag. Leggo 🏈 14:13, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 17:29, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add the smudged texture to the patch on the tip of her tail and on her right forearm? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 17:38, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

They're smudged already. Do you want me to smudge them more? Leggo 🏈 00:01, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 17:57, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 19:01, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sootfur (Alt. W) - Approved

Sootfur.warrior.altI honestly hate this one. XD But since I'm getting bored of trying to fix it, I just decided to post it so I can receive some comments for motivation. o3o ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:23, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing some, desaturate the ear pink, darken shading, brighten/add some highlights--Nightshine 03:27, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded~I think the ear-pink colour is fine. Not sure if the changes are showing. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:35, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

No the changes aren't showing up. To add to my other comments, make the ear pink a bit smaller--Nightshine 03:40, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image, I can hardly see the lineart. oblivionAudience? 01:14, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:59, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten/add highlights on the shoulder and haunch, and blur the shading. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 03:03, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing again--Nightshine 14:42, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I decided the add texture. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:08, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'mma let you guys choose which one is better. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:27, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

The right one looks a lot better. Just blur the shading some more and brighten the highlights. Blur the ear pink some more as well--Nightshine 18:34, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

The one on the right is definately better. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:35, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

I like the right one. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 03:13, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

The right one. Blur the shading on his shoulder a lot. oblivionAudience? 16:35, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:41, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights and blur the ear pink a bit--Nightshine 17:43, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the shading from the right, back paw bled into his left foreleg, blur that out a tad. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:28, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the image..again. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:04, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like theres blurred lineart or shading around most of the outside of the image. I might just be my computer, or I'm going crazy, but if not you really outta get rid of it. 174.7.99.84 07:39, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:42, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing, brighten the highlights, make the ear pink smaller--Nightshine 18:47, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:31, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

There are black speckles at the background. Fix this. BloodangelStarshine 12:33, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and blur it--Nightshine 15:52, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I already checked the background thing, and I can't find it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:01, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

I still see the blurred line-art. It's at the base of the tail, the front paws and the muzzle. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:49, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

There's also blurred/smudged lineart at the tip of the ear, the shoulder below the ear, and the tail tip. Also darken the ear pink a tad. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:57, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for pointing out the spots. My eyesight is bad. XD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:06, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Just lighten the whole thing a bit more and it will be ready--Nightshine 21:16, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:45, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

There's gray markings all around his ears, muzzle, tail and forepaws. This usually happens something when you're editing an image thats transparent. Just erase them.-- ❄ Shimmering Snowflakes ❋ 21:45, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

I erased all of them in that section. I think you are seeing the previous image, instead of the overwrited one. But I did fine one more black speck.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:11, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

I can still see them XD They are like just strips of very pale gray markings around his muzzle, tail, and fore-paws. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:34, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

No, there are not. I used the wand tool to select the background. No more pixels show up. You guys just cannot see the new image. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:49, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

I know you already fixed it, but I can still see the background. Wanna reupload it another time to see if that helps? Blur the bottom of the shoulder highlight just a bit. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:59, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:58, January 4, 2011 (UTC)]

The ear-pink looks too bright, maybe desaturate it a bit. Also, unless it didn't show the new version, I can still see the gray marks. XD Do you want me to show you where they are if they're still there? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:38, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

You're eyes are fooling you then, Rainwhisper. I will repeat this; there are no black spots unless you are seeing the wrong version. I selected the background, no pixels show up. Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:58, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

I can see the pixle's too. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer 02:21, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

There is nothing there. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:25, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Um, yes, there are. :P There's a faintly outlined ring around Sootfur's entire body. But if you can't see them, that's that, I guess. And you are the artist. =P In the meantime, try brightening the tail highlights and the haunch highlight. :) --Midnite Talk 14:15, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

No, there isn't. I will repeat this once again. I selected the background. If any pixels are faintly transparent, but still visible, it will show up as a stray pixel, but none did. I think the tail and haunch highlight is fine. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:48, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Frostheart, there is. I can see it... would you like me to try and fix it for you if you can't see it? Or maybe you were selecting the background on the lineart layer, not the shading. oblivionAudience? 16:22, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

No, I merged all layers down and also did it on t he png file. I'm not sure what's going on, but you guys can try and fixing it. Nothing shows up when I do it, though.. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:10, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

I got 'em. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer 21:15, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I outlined the backgrouns with the eraser. Tell me if you can still see it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:21, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's MUCH better, but I can still see some by where the tail meets the back and there's a tiny bit underneath the chin and over the forehead. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:24, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and lighten it a bit--Nightshine 00:19, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Wildheart: The spots are not there anymore, I asked Rainwhisper and Midnite, and they said it was fine. I also selected it once again. Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:13, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?--Nightshine 01:38, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 08:26, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnstripe (Q) - Approved

Dawnstripe.queen Comments?--Nightshine 23:32, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more. oblivionAudience? 23:55, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes on the back and make them thinner. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:57, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Where exactly? There are stripes on the back --Nightshine 00:16, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I know there are stripes on the back. Add more. Make them a tad bit more noticeable too. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:18, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened some of the back stripes--Nightshine 03:06, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. oblivionAudience? 18:18, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred tail shading--Nightshine 07:25, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back leg beneath the flank. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 14:40, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened shading. I hope that's the area where you meant.--Nightshine 15:54, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Where is the light source coming from, if there is one? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:42, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

The left--Nightshine 20:24, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. Good job. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 05:20, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

It seems on the back that the highlights are coming from the top, could you fix that? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:24, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded it looked fine to me but I changed it a bit anyway--Nightshine 17:13, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

It looks sort of yellowish to me. ℳerryspirit 16:43, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

I took the colours from her warrior image. She is a creamy golden tabby after all--Nightshine 04:50, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on the tail. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:15, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are supposed to be lighter than the pelt colour, unless you meant lighten the stripes--Nightshine 19:26, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with them. I think they should stay the way they are. Moonflight 16:14, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is stunning. The only thing I can really see is to darken the shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened shading--Nightshine 20:08, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks too dark in some places, and on the belly it's . . . lumpy. Mossy go away. 23:21, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed shading--Nightshine 18:23, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the belly and arm shading. oblivionAudience? 21:25, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred shading--Nightshine 21:36, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. :) I don't see anything wrong at the moment. ~Lazy Mumble785 didn't log in. 02:16, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Define the stripes at the top of her flank a tad. They seem to disappear in the shading. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:58, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded defined stripes--Nightshine 05:25, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:09, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 19:09, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart Alt. Apprentice~ Approved

Brightheart.apprentice.altNot thrilled about this one. I think I'm gonna make her scars bigger. Comments for improvement? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 20:15, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The entire side of her face was torn out; you're right about making those scars bigger. oblivionAudience? 20:21, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Rename the image Brightheart.apprentice.alt. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:25, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more shading to the tail. Rainwhisper 20:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

There's quite a bit of spots where the lineart is blurred, particularly her whiskers and the middle of her forearms. Also, I took a quick look at her other chararts, and the tail isn't completely orange; there's a bit of white at one end. --Midnite Talk 20:42, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure the ginger patches are in the same spot as they are on her other apprentice image. --Nightshine 21:17, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I also blurred the highlight on her shoulder. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 21:21, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

There's still a ton of blurred lineart, on her tail, arms, face... oblivionAudience? 21:31, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did you see my above comment?--Nightshine 21:57, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I basically redid the whole charart. Nightshine, yes I got you comment, but it didn't show up until I had posted the edited charart. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 03:10, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

For the ear-pink, shrink it a tad. The ear is torn, yes, however, the ear-pink size shouldn't enlarge. And the patches should still be in the same spot as the others. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:00, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Moved the patches around a bit and made the ear-pink smaller. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 01:33, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be way smaller still; it shouldn't be touching the lineart at all. oblivionAudience? 01:57, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 02:14, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think you understand what I'm saying. The earpink can't be touching the lineart on the sides, not just the end. On yours, it seems to take up her whole ear. oblivionAudience? 19:57, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That look better? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 02:42, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Now it's not even there.... look at her apprentice image, and use that earpink, just with a ripped ear. oblivionAudience? 22:03, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patch on her tail and the front leg farthest away from us. Otherwise, very nice! Merry Christmas! o3o 22:17, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry it took so long, I had an english paper to write. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 01:52, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Um...sorry if I sound daft, but I can't see any scars.... Apart from that, I'd just blur the patches a tad. ClarrissaMy Talk Page 18:33, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

This may be my computer screen working up, but I can't see much shading, if any at all. If it isn't just me, use the blur tool to darken and/or add it. Moonflight 20:50, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add a ginger spot to the leg ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:12, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art on the back leg is blurred, I think the patches are blurred enough. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:16, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Doesn't it say that it took, like, all her ear off? Make the ear smaller. Wolfwhisker Trick or Treat 23:26, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened the shading and made the ear smaller. Icy, I didn't add a spot to her leg since there isn't one in her first apprentice charart and I'm not sure which leg you're referring to. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 00:33, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the patches, darken the ear pink, make sure there is no blurred line art, make the patches more like the ones on her apprentice image--Nightshine 02:22, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Desaturated the orange patches, darkened the ear pink, and made her scar a bit smaller. Should I add in some darker, claw marks on her face? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 22:56, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think you need to, there aren't any on her queen image. Blur the patches on the forearms and tail, darken the shading, --Nightshine 00:50, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Start the orange closer to the base of the tail. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:11, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened the shading, blurred her patches, and move the orange on her tail. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 15:20, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm...maybe add a deeper red to the center of the scar to give it some more emphasis. The pink that rings around the outside is just the flesh, but the red on the inside will definately show that it's a life changing wound. Just experimenting, you could give it a try if you wanna.MoonWillow77002Can you hear me Ashflight? I love thee." 20:27, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white areas--Nightshine 20:30, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened the shading on the white ares. Moonwillow, I did try your advice, I'm not sure I did it very well/like it, but I tried. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 21:02, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

I can scarcely see any actual scars. Try adding some/making them more prominent. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

'Re-u'ploaded. Added some scars around her eye. Scarletwind 03:21, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

The scars sort of look unnatural. Try making them more curvy and less blotchy. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:51, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed around her scars, but I'm not sure if I like this look, but if other do, I'm not gonna complain. Oh yeah, just a heads up that I'm going to camp from the 28th to the 1st, I think this'll be alright to sit til when I get back, unless it's approved by then, but if anyone feels otherwise, let me know. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 23:58, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I suggest making the scars more sharp. That might give out more of a feeling that it is natural. Make the small amout of ear pink look more natural. ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 09:32, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:58, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading around the neck.--Nightshine 04:00, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:19, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken/add shading on the white areas--Nightshine 23:53, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't think the shading is this dark on her other apprentice charart.... ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:32, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try making the patches more in her warrior image's area. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:33, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Now I'm kinda confused. I've been told to make her patches like her apprentice charart and now I'm told to make them like her warrior charart. Which one should I make her look like? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:59, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make them look like the ones on her apprentice images since this too is using an apprentice blank--Nightshine 07:30, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

There's a line kinda connecting the two patches on the back, sort of like you smudged one into the other. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 13:16, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 14:14, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 19:10, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

The patches look messily blurred/smudged as do the scars, and her markings are wrong. Look at the warrior image and change them. Mossy go away. 05:19, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:55, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

You didn't change the markings. Go look at her warrior image. Mossy go away. 02:12, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I was told to keep them like her apprentice charart. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 02:15, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Repeating 24 hours-Nightshine 02:48, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

The scars look a bit unnatural. They look like..stars. XD The shading is also a bit messy on the legs and haunch. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:59, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 05:20, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

More of her images have the markings like the ones her warrior image, only her apprentice charart has the ones like these, so you should probably just change these and we would only have to tweak her apprentice image at tweak week then. It would make more sense that way. Mossy go away. 19:05, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I actually think that it looks fine. Since, this is Brightheart from a different view and none of her chararts give a full view of her back, I think this looks fine. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:03, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

if you actually bothered to properly observe her other chararts you would see that's not the case, here she is shown with a ginger chest and paw, which her other images do not have. Mossy go away. 22:45, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

We can tweak the images in the next tweak week, for now this is fine. Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 02:21, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

That makes no sense! Why would we leave this, which is up for approval where it can be changed if needed, and later tweak more than one image and waste time we could save if we just changed this? She has only one image with this marking style so if we changed this we would have less to tweak. Mossy go away. 21:39, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Just change it at this moment, and also, there is blurred line-art on the eye. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:44, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I basically made a second charart with different markings. I left a mark on her chest, because she had on in her kit charart that didn't stretch all the way to the other side of her chest, so it wouldn't be seen in her warrior charart. Comments? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 22:49, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it looks good, maybe just lighten the patches on the new one a bit. Mossy go away. 01:03, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:35, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Are you keeping the one on the right? Or the one on the left? --Nightshine 17:31, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I was going to wait and see what Oblivion thought, but it seems Frostheart and Dovesong are in favor of the right. What do you think? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 17:55, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Oh sorry, I didn't see this :) I like the shading and the markings on the left one, but the scars on the right. I know I'm being difficult, but perhaps combine the two? oblivionAudience? 19:51, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

So, just move the scars onto the left one? And the patches will be tweaked or kept the way they are? Either way, I can do that. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 19:53, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the left one. Brightheart.apprentice.alt2<--- Is that what you mean, Oblivion? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:02, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Guys. I already told you all why we should keep the patches on the other one, it saves time and makes thing way easier, it doesn't matter which one you think looks better. Mossy go away. 20:08, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

This is getting really annoying with opinions going back and forth. Which is it? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:11, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think the newer one, it makes more sense because then we have less images to tweak. If we use the other one we're only creating more work. Mossy go away. 20:24, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean, Mosspool? If the patches are different, Scarletwind can just change them to the way they are on her apprentice image. oblivionAudience? 20:33, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

The marking style you said looked better is only on one of her other images: her apprentice image. Her other three have the marking style of the right image. So if we use the one on the left's markings, we have three images to tweak: her queen, warrior and kit. If we use the one on the right's markings, we have on image to tweak: her apprentice image. So if we use the one on the right we're saving time. Mossy go away. 04:15, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, so what do you want me to improve on now? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:04, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Okay! I think it looks good, except it seems a bit weird how her scars have two long, umm, things sticking out of them, if you know what I mean xDMossy go away. 04:28, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Those were the deeper claw marks from the dog fight, I wasn't sure if I should put them in, but without them, it just looks like a weird pink patch around her eye. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 14:08, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, that makes sense, actually. It just seems a little . . . funny looking. I dunno . . maybe add another big long streak like that or something? 70.64.149.241 20:15, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Where? I'm not sure if I can fit another scar without making it look really messy, but I'll give it a go. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:18, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shortened the scars a tad. I'm not sure if I should make a third streak or a slash over her muzzle or anything. Comments? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:27, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading. Which one are you keeping?--Nightshine 18:57, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm keeping the right one. Deleted the left one. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:52, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a lot. Make it also a bit thin. BloodangelStarshine 12:27, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 15:14, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:25, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 16:49, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Just a heads up, I'm leaving for camp tomorrow and I'll be back late Saturday, so I won't be able to work on this until then, since this isn't a full week, I don't think this'll be declined. Just wanted to give you a heads up. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 23:00, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm still a bit confused what the consensus is for the patches. It looks like this pattern is staying. If it is, all you need to do is drop the two in the name. If that's not the case, read on.

Brightheart.apprentice.alt2Brightheart.apprentice You should have these two side by side like this. I've had Charart making expirience on Pixlr, Photoshop Elements 7.0, and GIMP. On all three programs, you can put the Chararts side by side to each other. I highly recommend you use this method so that the Chararts look more or less identical. This is, of course, disregarding the scars on the former. So basically, what needs fixing, is:

  • Make the pattern of patches on the alternate apprentice match the original.
  • User the sponge tool or some other method to make the colors of the patches match. If you got the color from another one of her imagers, however, don't worry about this one.
  • Rename your image "File:Brightheart.apprentice.alt.png." In other words, drop the two. :)

I made this longer than neccissary. 0_o I just hope this helps you understand what exactly is the issue with the patches. The shading, highlights, etc. all look acceptable. Just do all these, and this should be approved in no time. :) If it's already all set, than I may be giving myself Carpal Tunnel Syndrome by typing this. O_o Moonflight 00:53, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

The patches are fine. The o nly problem is that there needs to be another one near the beginning of the chest. All the other images match the patches here; the apprentice image right now just needs to be tweaked. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:20, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Just got home; so you want one more patch towards the top of her chest, Frostheart? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:20, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

The pink patch on her face has to be a bit bigger... Could you maybe make the facescar look like it has a bit of a lumpy texture? Shrink the brush diameter down really small and then click around using a a darker version of the colour you used and once you're done blur it all together... I've tried this. It looks cool = ) Butterfly }{ Song! 00:30, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Frostheart, I didn't add the patch yet since I don't know where you want me to put it. In her kit charart, there is only one patch on her chest and in her queen charart, I can't see any patches by her jaw and her chest is blocked by her forepaws and shoulders. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 18:06, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think she meant expand the current one on the chest to match the one on the original. Moonflight's right; you need to have them side by side to match up the patches. Don't go by the kit and queen chararts, go by the original apprentice charart. The patches are close, but not completely accurate. Also match up the colour to the original one. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 08:04, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Wildheart, we already had a really long debate about her patches and we decided to have them match her warrior, kit, etc. chararts and just tweak her apprentice patches during the next tweak week. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 02:39, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

This must've been extremely difficult to do. :3 Darken the shading. --Midnite Talk 14:28, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 02:53, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oops sorry Scarletwind haha it looks good other than what looks like a little bit of blurred lineart on the haunch near the stomach. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:09, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:17, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink--Nightshine 00:30, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 01:38, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 00:24, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 19:09, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Minnowtail (A) - Approved

Minnowtail.apprenticeHere's Minnowtail as an apprentice! I'm not too proud of this one, and I had some trouble making the fluffy fur texture. Comments? ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:41, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, brighten the highlights and lighten the ear-pink. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:47, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:50, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:59, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Minnowtail already has an apprentice image, unless this is for an alternate. If it is, rename this Minnowtail.apprentice.alt.png.--Nightshine 20:29, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Well, if it is her alternate, Gingertail already has it reserved. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:30, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't the one on Minnowtail's page for an alternate? It's gray and white, like it says in the Trivia. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 21:58, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, this one would be the original. I'll go change her character pixels. And Nightflower, rename it Minnowtail.apprentice.PNG, not GIF. oblivionAudience? 22:02, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Oh alright, well then the haunch highlight is kinda blotchy ;) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:10, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 02:30, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, darken the shading and blur the highlights--Nightshine 14:43, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I think we need to change the gray-and-white apprentice to be Minnowtail.apprentice.alt, because now it's not letting me upload my new version without overwriting the others. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:31, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

It has already been changed, just overwrite the previous file and it should be fine--Nightshine 04:38, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks Nightshine! ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 05:04, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing a bit so it's the same shade as her warrior image. The line art around the ears needs to be fixed. Darken the tail shading and blur the haunch highlight--Nightshine 17:36, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:06, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights a bit more--Nightshine 15:51, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a tad. - Ginger Loves Silver! HAPPY VALENTINES DAY! 16:15, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:24, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

This is better than I ever could've done! ;) Try brightening the shoulder, haunch, and tail highlights and making the highlight-shading transition on the tail more smoother. --Midnite Talk 14:10, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks Midnite :) ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 02:04, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Move the shoulder highlight up a bit and narrow the earpink. Looks good. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:30, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 08:12, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 19:30, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpen the earpink some. It isn't touching the lineart, but it looks so. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:58, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 20:07, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 01:42, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 04:49, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Feathertail (alt. W) ~ Approved

Feathertail.warrior.altFingers crossed this one has no reason to be declined :) Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 04:35, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but this has to be declined. Oblivion told me that being flecked and a tabby were not nearly the same thing, so this shall be declined. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:01, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Flecked and tabby are way different! Where's the logic in that? llwildheartl 05:32, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, that was rude. I apologize. But truly, I believe flecked and tabby cats are tonnes different. llwildheartl 05:40, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Iceheart, I'll let you keep this because I feel bad for declining your other images :) Blur the markings a lot. oblivionAudience? 11:59, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Mkay. :) Also add more markkngs, and darken the shading on the legs. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:26, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Get rid of the white pixel on the chest, darken the ear pink, lighten the tip of the tail--Nightshine 22:55, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and, as Nightshine said, darken th ear pink. Maybe take it off Feathertail's ear pink? ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 09:42, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Did everything but add more flecks. I tried, and i just made it look crowded/mottled and icky. And it's really just a difference in opinion. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:36, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the far paws a lot so they're darker than the rest of the pelt, blur the tip of the tail a bit, darken the markings some--Nightshine 03:24, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 22:21, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading, add a few smaller specks to the haunch--Nightshine 23:51, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 01:09, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading and the shading around the belly. Desaturate the ear pink--Nightshine 07:27, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks odd; the blurring at the bottom is only used for leaders, when the earpink fills up the entire ear. Smooth out the bottom of it. oblivionAudience? 18:41, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- ---ſceheartBlah blah 19:21, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular and a softer color. MistfireOwl City! 21:56, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean softer? I'm pretty happy with the colour personally. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:02, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think she means a slightly lighter shade of pink. Leggo 🏈 02:47, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Still, I think the ear pink is fine. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:54, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

The colour is fine but it also seems to come out of the ear a tiny bit, mayne shorten it some. And no offense, but the shading pretty much just looks like a gradient from light to dark. Mossy go away. 19:02, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- ya I'm not a fan of the front to back shading, but I'm not willing to redo the image just yet. Fixed the ear. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:32, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the belly and neck shading.--Nightshine 02:18, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded~ -ſceheartBlah blah 03:39, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the neck and belly shading more--Nightshine 17:33, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded~ -ſceheartBlah blah 18:54, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

There is blurred line-art on the haunch, the chest hairs, and the back. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:26, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the neck and belly shading still--Nightshine 17:15, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Why does the shading need to be so dark? I can barely see her feet. oblivionAudience? 19:52, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded~ It wasn't blurred line-art, just poorly placed and blurred flecks, but i tidied them up. I'm with Oblivion, I'd rather not darken the shading anymore. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:24, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

File:Feathertailredline.png When I said darken the neck and belly shading, I meant in these areas marked in red. Can you still darken the shading there? Darken the ear pink a bit--Nightshine 17:52, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I am never doing shading from the back again. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:07, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the head shading, it looks like there is a line of darker gray on the bottom half of the muzzle--Nightshine 18:54, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -ſceheartBlah blah 04:48, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Is it just me, or do the flecks look too large for fle'cks? Other than that, lighten the shading just a tad. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-The fleck size is fine. Look at Ashfur (TC)'s (thats not a very good comparison but oh well).

This looks great. CBA?--Nightshine 21:19, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

I can hardly see the ear pink, and it's too blurry. Also, highlights would make this look a lot better, even though you don't have to. Mossy go away. 21:34, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I didn't add highlights because they wouldnt make it look a lot better, it would just make the back unusaully bright. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:25, December 30, 2010 (UTC).

The splothces on the chest hairs make the line-art look blurred. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:33, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 23:03, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Now the chest area..looks empty. XD Maybe add two small spots, not touching the line-art. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:50, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, and there is one misplaced line-art pixel near the tip of the tail. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:51, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- I couldnt find anything wrong with the tail. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:44, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Oh oops. I meant the connection of the tail and leg area--where the very end of the belly should be. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:09, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

I still cant find it. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:46, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

File:Feathertaildiagram.pngHere is the diagram. The lower red circle means that there is a pixel missing, or two. And the other one with the 'donut' shape is mis-coloured and blurred line-art. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:23, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Add a tiny itty bitty bit of shading behind the ears. The light is coming from the lower-left, so the head should be casting a small shadow on the ears. Otherwise it's nice Butterfly }{ Song! 00:35, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 01:24, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

It looks extraordinary! =D I can see nothing wrong. :) --Midnite Talk 14:25, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink--Nightshine 00:22, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thank you Midnite :) -ſceheartBlah blah 00:34, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish--Nightshine 00:50, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink is fine. I've changed it before and i dont want to get into a loop with everyone and their different opinions. Other gray cats have a similar colour anyways. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:07, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I can barely see it though--Nightshine 00:24, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Fine you win ;) -ſceheartBlah blah 01:11, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is odd now. It has a darker colour dot instead one whole solid colour. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:11, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ya thats the shading. The other earpink had it too, i didnt do anything but burn it. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:06, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

You shouldn't just use the burn tool to darken it, take a new colour, put it over the old one, and blur it in. Nightshine 19:33, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- i really dislike this image. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:56, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Just make it bigger and desaturate the ear pink-Nightshine 20:01, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded--ſceheartBlah blah 20:12, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 20:14, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Tone the earpink down a little more. MistfireI'd like fries with that 15:48, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

No. Everyone has a different opionon on how thw ear pink should look and i've already changed it a bunch and its fine. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:45, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 01:46, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 04:49, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. W) - Approved

Brightheart.warrior.altI really like this. Comments? Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer 00:37, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Nice tortoiseshell! Blur the patches a tad more, make the ear-pink larger, give her a blue eye, and darken the shading a bit. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:41, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink as well. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:44, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck/chest shading a bit. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 02:52, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

When was she seen as a tortie? I want a page number, and the book, i have Night whispers and she wasnt seen as a tortie in it.... 71.164.203.114 03:40, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

There was a discussion below that says she was seen as a tortoiseshell; check there if you think she wasn't seen. Elorisa, this is outstanding. I never could've done something as good. ;) The only thing is, could the shading and highlights be defined a bit more? Otherwise, it's breathtaking. :) --Midnite Talk 20:29, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't think this would turn out this good; I haven't done a tortie in a while and I'm a little rust at chararts anyway. Comments? Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer 20:49, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches more near the lineart, and I think you should give her a blue eye, since that's the only colour we have a reference for. Good job! oblivionAudience? 21:04, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black patches on the heel of her forepaw and hind left paw, I can't see the lineart. Looks lovely! ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 21:58, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Try to darken the shading, or brighten the highlights. Also, make the ear pink more even. This is picturesque :) ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:41, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the patches, changed eye color, lightened the black patches, and darkened the shading a bit. Comments? Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer 15:05, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Where was she seen as a tortoiseshell? Whitestorm17 wanted me to ask; then we need to add it to the trivia before you make a charart, she says.NightfernSnowsong and Bearclaw 15:35, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Found the citation; you're good to go. Great job! She looks amazing! NightfernSnowsong and Bearclaw 16:02, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely fantastic. Is there smudged line-art near the top of the shoulder? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:05, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There wasn't, but I fixed some faded lineart that I found. Comments? Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne 20:42, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Can you add a patch or two onto her shoulder? It looks a bit blank right now. Darken the ear pink and make it bigger--Nightshine 23:04, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add a patch on her right front leg ☾Ⓜⓞⓞⓝⓛⓔⓐⓕ☽⓴⓾ over already? 03:08, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed earpink and added a patch to her right front leg. Nightshine, where do you mean? Her shoulder is covered. Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne 00:18, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the tail patches more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:15, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried, and failed xD. Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne 22:52, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The tail is hard to do anything with because of the size. Looks fine, though. =D Enlarge the earpink just a bit. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:39, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think it's big enough now. Comments? Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne 21:10, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:13, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 14:35, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cora (W)- For Approval

Cora.warriorMy third Charart :) Comments? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:09, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! First comment. Lighten highlights and earpink and blur the neck shading. Well done! ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 22:13, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the ear-pink. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 23:04, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Raineh. ;) Could you make the front and back paws a tad lighter? It's so dark I can't see the line art right now. Good work! --Midnite Talk 21:12, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome! Move the shoulder highlight down a tad, and maybe bright the highlights a bit. I don't know if it'll look better with brighter highlights but I think you should try it out. Just a little brighter. Mossy go away. 21:48, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. It looks almost black. Beautiful Charart! BloodangelStarshine 11:58, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:09, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights so they blend in with the pelt. oblivionAudience? 18:41, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:42, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are really blotchy. MistfireOwl City! 16:21, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I re-did all of the shading and highlights, so how does it look now? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:14, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, brighten the highlights, --Nightshine 00:20, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:15, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, brighten the highlights, and make the highlights bigger--Nightshine 02:15, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:40, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlight bigger still and move the shoulder highlight up a bit, move the ear pink up --Nightshine 17:32, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:35, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights a tad. They look a tad unnatural, maybe try to make it look like the light is flowing off of her by trying to copy the curve of the lineart on her shoulder. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 05:18, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:35, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights, I can hardly see them. Brighten the ear pink as well, --Nightshine 15:45, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:15, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a ton and blur the ear-pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:40, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur/darken highlights and make the earpink more mauve-y. ℳerryspirit 16:46, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, brighten the highlights, brighten the ear pink. Add a highlight to the tail and face--Nightshine 17:15, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 17:48, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights, brighten the ear pink, blur the highlights--Nightshine 17:47, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:37, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing, make the haunch highlight bigger and make all of the highlights a bit brighter, lighten the ear pink, --Nightshine 18:53, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I basically redid all of the shading and highlights. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:22, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred just a tad, as it looks a little blotchy now. The rest of the image looks great, though! Rainwhisker567 15:14, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 17:39, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think the torn ear should be more uneven. Right now, it looks very...precise. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 14:39, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights massively. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:55, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:49, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some more. Smudging then blurring a lot helps. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:06, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:06, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Phenomenal. :) Brighten the entire image, and when I say brighten, I don't mean just run it over once or twice. Brighten, brighten, BRIGHTEN it until you can see the lineart. Or, when you think it looks good. You might want to look at Breezepelt's charart to see what I mean. It's like that, only not too bright. XD If you can't do that, I suppose you can brighten the haunch highlight. --Midnite Talk 14:22, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think it got much brighter so I'll reupload it again if you guys think so. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:44, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

I think it should be about as bright as it is on her head, but if you can't do that, oh well. :) Lighten the paws at least. =) --Midnite Talk 17:40, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I lightened it a bit more. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 17:49, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Perfect. Perfect, perfect! Right there. That's exactly where you want it. :) --Midnite Talk 18:29, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Why thank you Midnite. :D Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 18:37, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I just brightened the ear-pink a little and blurred the highlgiths because they didn't look too good. So anything else? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:14, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:51, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and blur it--Nightshine 00:22, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:59, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch hihglight some more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:10, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:29, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the midriff shading and the edges of the haunch highlight--Nightshine 19:31, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:09, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?-Nightshine 20:12, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading around the mid-shoulders area. It seems the highlight takes up nearly all the room, and it's offset. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:59, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:21, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 20:24, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights a little more ;) ☾Ⓜⓞⓞⓝⓛⓔⓐⓕ☽⓴⓾ over already? 03:06, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks fine, if it gets blurred too much it will start to look really blotchy. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:51, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading some? It still looks kinda flat. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:29, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

  • sigh* I hate to do this, but I can't get it to look right. So can someone try and darken it for me? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:57, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Nevermind, I think I got it. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:48, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink. MistfireI'd like fries with that 23:34, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks fine to me. Desaturating it, in my opinion, would only make it look more dull and worse. But see what Raineh thinks. ;) --Midnite Talk 01:18, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Midnite, I think the earpink looks fine. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:51, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading--Nightshine 04:16, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:47, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours--nightshine 00:13, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and highlights are a bit blotchy. Blur it and then I think it would look fine and ready :) Mossy go away. 00:16, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did it on GIMP this time and it turned out a lot better. XD Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:07, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! I see nothing wrong so, repeating 24 hours--nightshine 01:16, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's grey scraps around the charart, can you erase those? Or maybe it's just my laptop. --Leafstrike-- 18:09, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. MistfireI'd like fries with that 18:35, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The earpink is triangular, so I think it's fine. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 18:52, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Rainy :) I would say make the torn ear a bit more jagged. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 14:48, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make all of the line art black--nightshine 02:10, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:58, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

There are a lot of white pixels outside the line art and the lines look distorted in some areas. Would you be okay if I just fixed those?--nightshine 03:29, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sure that would be fine. Thanks. :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:04, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed it. It looks ready to me now so, comments before approval?--nightshine 02:27, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is AWESOME, Rainy! Just blur the shoulder highlight that's nearest the middle of the body just a teeny bit. Nice job! MistfireI'd like fries with that 15:37, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, but if it gets blurred too much it will get blotchy and I don't really see that it needs to be blurred. It looks smooth enough to me.:) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 18:19, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks perfect to me. Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 00:06, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:32, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt. Queen) - Approved

Daisy.queen.alt

Shade the strip of white on her back, where the shading ends. If the background is transparent, the shading should have no effect on the background. I see nothing else wrong. Nice job, Elorisa. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the back. oblivionAudience? 22:26, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I color-picked this, and it needs to be a very very light gray/silver. (barely white) Yours is completely white, change that, but other that and the other stated, it looks good. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:28, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I am going to withdraw this because I have no time to do it, between school and other wikia duties I have. Someone else can free to work on this. WhiteStorm is back! 03:23, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

There's little left to be done; I'll take over. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading along the back less blotchy. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:31, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Everything has been blurred, the lineart has been fixed, and I've made it slightly more silver and less white. Is there anything else? --Bramble -Hyuu~ 04:05, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. There is a white pixel on the haunch--Nightshine 04:31, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading can be made thicker just a tad more. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:42, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Erm...Since Bramble left and Oblivion said that ppl w/ free time can do the ones Bramble took over I will take over...Snowbreeze 03:53, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded There...comments? Snowbreeze 04:05, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Daisy.queen.alt oblivionAudience? 20:24, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink, and make it less purple. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:59, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded comments Snowbreeze 22:07, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Form the ear-pink into more of a triangular shape. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:15, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded comments? Snowbreeze 23:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Center the earpink. It's WAAAAAY off. And it's touching the lineart. ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 00:10, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, and I would lighten it some as well. WhiteStorm is back! 03:00, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

darken the ear pink and make it smaller. Also, blur the ear pink ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 08:38, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.... Snowbreeze 22:58, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink shape is now good, however, the colour is different. Make it even and darker. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:17, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

REuploaded comments? Snowbreeze 19:56, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. llwildheartl 00:04, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make it more triangular as well. WhiteStorm is back! 14:24, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink shape is fine. Darken the shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:36, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

*coughs* Please rename it Daisy.queen.alt oblivionAudience? 19:02, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed the name comments? Snowbreeze 18:20, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

...no, you didn't. It's still called Daisy queen alt. Rename the image Daisy.queen.alt oblivionAudience? 21:36, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ok,i know what happend,i didnt hit save when i fixed the name,duh,anway fixed that,comments? Snowbreeze 09:26, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Snowbreeze, remember to add a space after commas and periods, and try your best to spell words. The ear-pink seems smudged outward. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:08, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, so very sorry, I fixed the ear-pink, anything else, and what did I misspell? Anyway comments? Snowbreeze 15:26, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink--Nightshine 17:19, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Also, center the ear pink a bit more. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, but the ear pink needs to be blurred. ~Lazy Mumble785 didn't log in. 02:11, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Also, make the background transparent. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:26, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

My regets, sorry for not being on, i have other things gong on, but i Shall work on this. 71.164.203.114 00:13, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about the background. It's already transparent. :) Moonflight 00:32, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... It's been a while since I'd been on. I have no idea what the "alternates" are, and I was just wondering... Isn't daisy supposed to be cream, not white? Butterfly }{ Song! 00:18, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yes she is. An Alternate image is a secondary charart for characters who've been given different descriptions from their normal or basic; such as if Graystripe were referred to as a black tom or something. Does this answer your question, Crystal? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 18:13, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

I hope it's okay if I blurred the ear pink for you. ^_^ --Midnite Talk 14:47, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be blurred some more-Nightshine 00:35, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

oh god dang im so sorry, i've let my grades take over 0.-, thanks, Midnite^^

i shall blur the earpink Snowbreeze January 7, 2011 (UTC) im to lazy to log in.....

Ok fixed the earpink, comments? Snowbreeze 03:50, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and more reddish--Nightshine 03:55, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink too. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:01, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail highlight. MistfireI'd like fries with that 01:56, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Name the image 'Daisy.queen.alt' Leggo 🏈 18:53, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Poor Daisy. This is her second alternate image. Therefore, it can't be named that, since there are two different ones that require the same name. I'll ask Oblivion what this should be named. Moonflight 01:04, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, it can, since I'm pretty sure the other one is named Daisy.queen.alt2 or something. You can go ahead and name it Daisy.queen.alt, Snowbreeze. oblivionAudience? 01:43, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--nightshine 02:19, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, im sorry, i just side tracked, i fixed it but then didn't upload it Snowbreeze is too lazy to log in or upload....

ok i wont let me upload teh pic....Snowbreeze 14:54, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Here you emilaed me the file, i uploaded it for you there you go^^ Maplepool 20:40, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 20:43, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

The background needs to be transparent. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:11, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

It is transparent. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:10, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, it's not. It's white. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 05:41, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

I can make it transparent. Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 07:14, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 23:20, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sagepaw (A)- For Approval

Sagepaw.apprentice

Blur all shading thoroughly, particularly that on the haunch. Other than that, very nice, Dovesong12. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Blur the tail shading and the shading on the back. --Midnite Talk 20:31, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get right to it. Merry Christmas! o3o 15:50, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Had to rename it. Merry Christmas! o3o 17:02, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little.ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 17:08, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Sagepaw.apprentice.alt, or it will not show up on his page when it's approved. oblivionAudience? 11:31, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights brighter. --Midnite Talk 20:07, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

This is his actual apprentice form, I'll rename it Sagepaw.apprentice. Will get to later. Merry Christmas! o3o 21:54, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry, that's what I meant... so many people name the alternate apprentice images wrong, it was just automatic for me to write that. Thanks for pointing that out! :) oblivionAudience? 21:58, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more noticeable. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:32, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'm getting to this, so please don't decline this, for I am VERY busy right now. Merry Christmas! o3o 22:00, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:42, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you could blur the highlight on the tail. WhiteStorm is back! 03:05, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

If someone needs to take over because of inactiveness, could I take over? MistfireOwl City! 04:15, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Dovesong still has a few days to work on this --Nightshine 23:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink not tough the line-art and blur the front paw closest to us. ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 08:41, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Soooooo sorry for not being on here. I'm geting to it, but I had to swich computers. Give me just a bit. I'm off school due to ice, so I now have plenty of time. Merry Christmas! o3o 14:05, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I re-did him. Can someone help with blurring the shading? It won't blur. Merry Christmas! o3o 15:31, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - There is color outside the tali lineart. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 21:13, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Merry Christmas! o3o 21:57, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur highlights and shading. llwildheartl 00:05, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visible. Rainbreath 11:46, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone help me with the shading; it refuses to blur for me. ☯Silver Bells☮ 13:13, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred the shading for you and darkened it a bit--Nightshine 17:59, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights. :) -Midnite Talk 14:40, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 00:32, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I can take over on this--Nightshine 19:14, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Nightshine 19:29, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight and brighten the earpink. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 19:56, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred shoulder highlight and changed ear pink--Nightshine 20:05, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink more. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:18, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:21, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened shading. The ear pink looks fine to me--Nightshine 01:29, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the head highlight and earpink. oblivionAudience? 00:02, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred face shading and ear pink--Nightshine 00:12, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

The legs are looking a bit flat. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:15, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Looks good :) 99.58.17.98 00:27, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened shading and blurred neck shading--Night shine 00:43, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry that comment was me XD I was logged out for some reason. Well I might as well comment again, so maybe brighten the earpink a little. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:46, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

If I brighten it then it will be hard to see. I think it looks fine--Night shine 01:14, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

The neck shading still needs to be blurred a little. Otherwise it looks great! :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:06, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred neck shading--nightshine 00:15, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

very good! PtEЯO  :D I'm back! 00:40, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

The back of the neck should be shaded, and I think the shading and highlights are a little blotchy. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:08, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded smoothed out shading and darkened shading at back of neck--nightshine 00:21, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading in between the shoulder and haunch (the stomach, I guess :P) and there is a peice of darker shading above the eyes. Maybe lighten that so it's the same shade as the rest of his face. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:22, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred shading. The bit of shading above his eye was put there intentionally because if the light is coming from the right there would be a shadow there--nightshine 00:45, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink, and make it bigger as well. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 06:30, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

As I've said before, if I lighten the ear pink it will be hard to see, and if I make it bigger then it will fill up the entire ear line art--nightshine 07:24, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. It doesn't need lightening. Move the shoulder highlight up a bit. Looks good =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:30, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded moved shoulder highlight up. I think the ear pink is fine right now--Nightshine 01:17, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur neck shading. Mistfire Epic Fail 05:16, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred neck shading again--Nightshine 07:35, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

This has been going for a long time, and I can't see no faults with this. Approving. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:47, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Birchfall~Alt (ki)~ Approved

Birchfall.kit.alt

Ear pink desperately needs to be blurred; take care not to blur the lineart. Make the pink color fade into the gray, so it is not popping out. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Background also needs to be transparent. oblivionAudience? 03:35, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

ok i'll get right on itMaplepool 23:00, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

There is one pixel that you are missing; on the back foot. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:50, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded hows that? Maplepool 23:01, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

oh i see a mistake allow me to fix it before you comment on it^^ Maplepool 23:07, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ok NOW you may comment Maplepool 23:13, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please rename it Birchfall.kit.alt.png there is an extra period there. Darken the shading, make the ear pink more reddish, darken the nose colour--Nightshine 04:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

You are still missing that extra pixel. Make the ear-pink smaller. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:32, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 05:14, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

The backgound still isn't transparent. oblivionAudience? 21:43, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

um dumb question how do i make the background transparent? lol^^; sorry i dont know how...Maplepool 14:58, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

I can do it for you. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:25, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

oh PLEASE do it frostheart...I have no clue how^^; and when you do tht i'll make the changes. Maplepool 23:54, November 27, 2010 (UTC) I WAS HERE!

nvm...i'll make the changes then frostheart,if she'll be nice enough,will make it transparent Maplepool 02:50, November 28, 2010 (UTC) I WAS HERE!!

Reuploaded there i did some extra and if frostheart will mke the background transparnet i'd owe her one ^^ Maplepool 03:10, November 28, 2010 (UTC) I WAS HERE!!

Make the ear pink darker. Also, make the highlights brighter and darken the shading. Blur the shading on the tail and on the haunch. --Midnite Talk 20:09, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Birchfall.kit.alt oblivionAudience? 01:55, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded gah^^; i already did Birchfall.alt.kit.png so to upload it i had to add the two...^^; embarssining... Maplepool 03:40, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about the wait, I forgot. :P And I can't upload it, it reverts it to a past..photo. o_o So..I'll tell you how. XD You get the wand tool (looks like a wand. :3) and you click on the background. The kit image has a few loose pixels, so you have to click the strays and erase them. After you click the background, you select the erase tool and erase the background. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:51, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

ok,thanks^^,I'll get it after school Maplepool 04:05, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded hows that?..i hope i got it... Maplepool 22:43, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

dang i didnt....hold on let me fix that Maplepool 22:45, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading along the edges of his fur where you made it darker. ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 22:49, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded there ows that?

Make the ear pinks more even and triangular. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:34, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hows that? Maplepool 22:21, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink fit into the ears. When we say "make it more triangular" we don't mean make it into a perfect triangle, but make it less blobby. Y'know? Also, make the earpink shade a little less violent and blur it a lot. llwildheartl 23:55, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded there hows that? Maplepool 01:52, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

The background should be transparent. Great image, though! ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:19, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded thre got it^^ Maplepool 13:24, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome job! =D There is something going on with the tail shading, though. There are scraps of shading and highlights here and there. Could you make it more smooth? --Midnite Talk 01:49, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks ok i'll get right on it Maplepool 01:58, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Once again, please rename it Birchfall.kit.alt oblivionAudience? 02:02, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

I mean no disrespect,Oblivion,but,I can't see,I have uploaded this so many times,it goes to a past photo,so,I add the number of tries till it gets approved,so if I seem disrepectful,its just because,I can't do it...my aplogies... Maplepool 02:12, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded comments? Maplepool 02:12, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, thicken the shading, add shading under the chin. Rename it Birchfall.kit.alt.png --Nightshine 06:49, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

I cant it revets it to a past photo....Maplepool 14:01, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean? It should just overwrite over the existing one--Nightshine 04:29, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

While it wont!Im sorry it says 'this photo already exists etiher fix the name or go with one we have' ok? im sorry it just wont hacking work!god..sorry if im being rude,but this thingy going on with the names its,ANNOYING ME!....Maplepool 04:33, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's okay to overwrite the existing image. If it isn't named Birchfall.kit.alt.png it won't show up on his article--Nightshine 04:38, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded hows that? i added the shading under the chin,I just use a weaker brush....Maplepool 03:17, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

  • faceplam* missed the name hold on...fixed there we goMaplepool 03:20, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur it. Desaturate the ear pink--Nightshine 03:23, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Erm stupid question again what does Desaturate mean? im like 14 and i dont remeber.....Maplepool 02:44, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturating is used with the sponge tool. It'll give you the option of either saturate or desaturate. Also, the shadin along the edges needs to be blurred more. Rainwhisper 03:21, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded hows tht? gosh i had to keep restarting god GIMP HATES ME NOW T-T Maplepool 05:55, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading a lot more, darken the shading under the chin, make the ear pink more reddish, rename it Birchfall.kit.alt--Nightshine 06:19, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the background transparent. Moonflight 01:10, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded *takes in breath* FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL EPIC FAIL!!!!!! Maplepool 13:39, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink could be desaturated or lightened, it's too bright and also needs to be blurred. Also, add a little more shading on the legs. Rainwhisper 14:24, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded hows that?...doesn't look all that bad now.... Maplepool 15:01, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tips of his fur and make the background transparent. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 15:25, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comment ferclily i shall upload Maplepool 15:40, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Add more shading to the tail. Rainwhisper 15:57, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded comments?

Thicken the shading a lot blur it, add shading under the chin, darken the ear pink a bit. I suggest you make the nose colour dark gray--Nightshine 20:35, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded *takes in breath* FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL EPIC FAIL!!!!!! Nightshine,may i suggest a job for you? Book Editer/Crict,you almost made me miss doing my homework work on this,If i think/blur the shading hes gonna be black....

The shading is too dark on the edge of the fur, just lighten that a little bit... just a little. Rainwhisper 01:07, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to thicken the shading. I don't see how blurring the shading would darken it. Desaturate the ear pink-Nightshine 03:56, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Question(wow...) How do I think the shading? and what i meant was,i keep on adding to the shading,it kept getting darker....Maplepool 04:09, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The background needs to be transparent. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

O.o i thought it was....the plxir background for transpaernt is there.....Maplepool 13:13, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

First off, lighten the shading on his left side (our right) using the dodge tool and then increase the burn brush's size. Then shade the left side of Birchfall again. As for transparency, you can see here on how to do it. Hope this helps! Rainwhisker567 21:38, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Erm...i use Plxir...not gimp....anyway Reuploaded Maplepool 21:57, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, darken the shading under the chin, blur the shading--Nightshine 02:24, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

If you need to, I can make the background transparent for you (I have GIMP). Rainwhisker567 03:06, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 08:46, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ok,Fallingsnow,i'll make the changes,then make the backgound transparent pls^^ Maplepool 22:27, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok,Fallingsnow,if you will make thae back ground transparent now pls Maplepool 22:48, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten/smooth the shading and smooth out the highlights. llwildheartl 00:11, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like the two ear pinks are different colors. It maybe just my computer though. WhiteStorm is back! 14:27, December 18, 2010 (UTC)
Erm whitestrom,I think,when I looked at the picture,she had shading on the right side of Birchkit/fall,so the right ear-pink,will be 2 diff colors....Spotteddapple 15:21, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there's a lump on her chest; blur that out. And thicken the shading, cause now there's only a very thin outline of shading. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 13:19, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

I made the background transparent. Oh by the way, my username isn't Fallingsnow- it's Blackclaw09 (or Rainwhisker). I just made my sig to say Fallingsnow for the holidays. Rainwhisker567 21:32, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

If this is withdrawn/declined I could take over (XD I'm trying to take over a lot of chararts right now). MistfireOwl City! 21:52, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ok,i shall get to work,Blackclaw,my mistake,Mistfire,Are you trying to get rid of me? wha ;_; lol,just kidding,if it is,or if i can not work on this,you may take over,but for the time being,im working on this.Maplepool 01:08, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded comments? Maplepool 01:22, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm not trying to get rid of you, it's just that I am epically, weirdly bored if I don't have some kind of quest on PCA. And maybe lighten the edge shading. MistfireOwl City! 01:53, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

The background still isn't transparent, the right earpink and nose need to be lighter, and the shading around his sides to be lightened or blurred very profusely into the pelt. oblivionAudience? 01:56, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

  • facepalm* of for the love of god,i forgot to downlod the one blackclaw uploaded god*mutters* ok,imm see if i can hunt the one blackclaw uploaded down,and mae the edits on that one,gimme some time...Maplepool 05:45, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ok its not showing the changes,so i request you not to comment till the chages show and once they do comments? Maplepool 05:57, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

There is something going on with his chest....add more highlights to it or blur it out.... Snowbreeze 17:14, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading at the tips of his fur and smooth out the entire thing. Lighten the shading and have it extend further toward his legs. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:45, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded comments? Maplepool 01:55, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading, define the ear pink, darken the shading under the chin and inbetween the forearms, I don't see a light source--Nightshine 02:23, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

REuploaded comments?Maplepool 04:34, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Birchfallkitredline Darken the shading in the red areas, get rid of the shading in the yellow areas. Make sure there is no blurred line art anywhere. This is what I meant by thickening the shading.--Nightshine 17:27, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Hey guys, imma be taking a break for a while so i wont be on till January, im declining this and mistfire offered to take over, im takiing her up on her offer, she will continue this is she wants to im very sorry. 72.181.116.189 15:58, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry that was me.Maplepool 16:00, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Mistfire is working on Blackstar, so unless she wants to withdraw that one to work on this one, someone else can take over. oblivionAudience? 00:00, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'd love to take over! I've proven to be hopeless with Blackstar anyways, so I can take this one! ℳerryspirit 22:16, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I'll do the shading later, I might be somewhere where there's wireless internet tomorrow. What do you think? ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 01:24, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Mistfire. ;) Make sure to blur the shading on the right side, though. --Midnite Talk 02:57, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading in the areas I specified on the diagram and blur the shading--Nightshine 19:06, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Great job by the way! ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℳĨ₰₮₣ĨȒ€Happy New Year! 23:18, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pinks match and blur the shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:24, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Either darken the shading a little or brighten the highlights a little. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:08, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Brightened highlights, fixed earpink, and blurred shading. ℳĨ₰₮₣ĨȒ€Happy New Year! 16:29, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink dark, or just less fushia. -ſceheartBlah blah 06:02, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reupoaded. Darkened earpink. ℳĨ₰₮₣ĨȒ€Happy New Year! 16:12, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. Wow. Sorry. XD It just looks so good! 8) Darken the shading on the tail and make the transitioning more smoother. Also, darken the far right paw. :) --Midnite Talk 14:36, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

This looks good. :) One thing though; is the nose colored in? If it is, darken it. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 18:42, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading --Nightshine 00:32, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:33, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading/highlights, darkened shading, and darkened nosepink. MistfireI'd like fries with that 17:50, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the chest shading ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 17:55, January 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. MistfireI'd like fries with that 18:16, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing; it's too pale. Darken the shading and make the nose colour dark gray--Nightshine 19:57, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed nose, darkened image, and thickened shading. MistfireI'd like fries with that 01:33, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

This looks amazing, Mistfire! Just blur the shading near his chest a little. :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:43, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading. MistfireI'd like fries with that 15:53, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing. Darken the shading--Nightshine 19:56, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened image/shading. MistfireI'd like fries with that 01:52, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest and the tail. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:06, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make them more even. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:48, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed earpink and blurred tail shading. MistfireI'd like fries with that 03:08, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the tail shading a bit. Looks great! ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 03:01, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened tail shading. MistfireI'd like fries with that 14:43, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading, mostly the part closest to the leg. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:31, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred tail shading. MistfireI'd like fries with that 16:31, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back leg (the one that is visible) needs to be darkened. Looks great though! Rainwhisker567 21:04, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened back leg. MistfireI'd like fries with that 00:04, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--nightshine 02:18, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front legs and the back of the tail (near the legs) a bit more. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:12, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I honestly thnk that the shading looks fine, but I blurred it a little, if that's what you want. MistfireI'd like fries with that 01:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great! Just burn the muzzle a tiny bit (on about 10-20%) or til it matches the rest of the highlights. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:18, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Burned muzzle. MistfireI'd like fries with that 23:20, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose colour--Nightshine 19:48, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened nose color. Mistfire Epic Fail 21:13, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours-Nightshine 21:28, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Technically this would be approved, since it's been 24 hours, right? Mistfire Epic Fail 04:21, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Approved--Nightshine 01:32, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Wetfoot (A) - Approved

Wetfoot.apprentice Okay, here he is. He's kinda bad right now, so comment fiercely! I shall improve him! llwildheartl 03:22, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten and define his stripes, so they look more like the warrior image's. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:26, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit. I really like the stripes =) Lighten the shading, it's a little dark looking, but also thicken the shading--Nightshine 03:29, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

There is some blurred line-art on the chest. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:31, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the eaar-pink BUT lighten it,and as Ice heart said ligthen the stripes then define them and fix the blurred on the chest other than that nice ^^ IMPROVE HIM FRECRELY THEN!!!!! Maplepool 03:53, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink doesn't need lightening. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:08, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

At least blur the stripes; to me they look wispy, not like tabby stripes. I actually think the ear pink should be darkened a bit, only a bit mind you. And the shading looks like of ... pressed and flat for the want of better words. It doesn't give me a 3-D effect. Sorry if that's too unhelpful! Starlingflight Take Flight into the Sky! 13:54, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Minor tweaks have been made. I didn't have time for everything. Will work on it later, but it's midnight here. Comments? llwildheartl 08:03, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded (again) Better? llwildheartl 01:49, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

The line art looks kind of blurred along the forearms. Thicken the shading--Nightshine 02:06, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Howzat? llwildheartl 23:16, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights, thicken and darken the shading, and define the stripes on the chest. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:51, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? llwildheartl 05:55, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Something about the tabby stripes looks a bit..odd..They look sort of smashed and around them, it's kind of blotchy. Maybe blur everything a lot, then define the stripes, especially on the belly and legs. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:29, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Lol what do you mean, smashed? I think they look fine. llwildheartl 03:47, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, on the back and haunch it's fine. But the face stripes, the belly stripes, and the leg stripes..look. 'smashed'. XD Too blurred and smooshed together. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:05, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading/brighten the highlights. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't been so quick to update him, but I assure you, I'm still here. I've just been really busy. Will work on him soon. llwildheartl 03:14, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes don't look the same as his other image's. They're too blurry. Mossy go away. 22:17, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think that really matters. I mean, look at Jayfeather's page. It's really different. But, It's up to you. Darken the earpink. ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 09:02, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see how Jayfeather's images are involved in this. They're supposed to be consistent. The stripes are too blurry, either way. Mossy go away. 00:13, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think Sunspirit meant that Jayfeather's images are all very different. Every artist has their own style. However, you do have a point. If y'all make a consensus, I will redo this image to make it look more like the original one. Personally, I like my interpretation better, though. llwildheartl 06:05, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the face stripes a bit, thicken the tail stripes a bit. Darken the neck and belly shading--Nightshine 23:55, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should make him look more like his warrior picture. Consistency is important. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:10, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Well yeah, and I meant it doesn't matter if his look different because this sin't Jayfeather and what Jaufeather's images look like shouldn't even matter. And anyways, you should just change it for consistency because even if you do like yours better it doesn't look like the other one and why change that one when we change the one up for approval? Mossy go away. 06:10, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, consistency is important. We don't need to fix images that don't need to be fixed in tweak week. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:34, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

It might be just me, but the whole line-art seems to be blurred. Though that might just be the shading...2011 Light paw It's anew year! 21:46, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Redoing image. llwildheartl 05:40, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 21:20, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really really sorry, but I've been busy for so long and I just got back from a long trip to Victoria. My redone image is almost ready to be put up but it needs some more work. Please don't decline, as I am working on it, but I have had little time to do so. --Wildheart W h a t i s r i g h t n o w ? 07:07, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Here goes. Comments? --Wildheart W h a t i s r i g h t n o w ? 03:20, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Add more stripes on the upper back and chest. There is some blurred line-art on the chest, too. Darken the shading on the chest and legs. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:37, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better still? =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:03, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

You bet, it's awesome. :) Darken the shading on the back and the haunch just a tad. --Midnite Talk 14:31, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Midnite. =) Redid it sort of. I didn't like the highlights. I still need to blur them a bit though. Of course, I didn't realize this until I uploaded it... feel free to remind me. I'll probably forget. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:16, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Darken the shading some and lighten the ear pink a bit--Nightshine 00:30, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great! The tabby stripes are very nicely done. The only thing I see is that the highlight on the head should be lightened a tad to match the haunch and shoulder highlights. Rainwhisker567 18:26, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the nice comments, Nightshine and Blackclaw! Critique for moi? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:10, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just add a highlight (or brighten the highlight) on the tail. :) Looks fantastic! :D --Midnite Talk 01:23, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded LOL TOTALLY forgot about the tail highlight! Didn't even cross my mind XD --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:36, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading--Nightshine 04:18, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:12, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Brighten/define the ear pink. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:18, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Speshul K! --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:31, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

0.0 Amazing! Blur the shading around the haunch just a tad. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Loudsplash100000 21:17, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Nighty! And yes, as you can see, I am working on this :) I was just temporarily held up.

Comments? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:18, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit more larger ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 06:30, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 20:59, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Comments? XD --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:41, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's only been one day :P define tail stripes. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:13, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded haha it wasn't even a day (for me) I just have a bit of a superstition... don't mind me. I don't know if I need to darken the tail stripes even more... Comments? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:50, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:00, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:02, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading

Reuploaded Lol who was that? ^ ...Comments? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:33, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?  Darkhallows...Mew? 04:38, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

None, approved.  Darkhallows...Mew? 19:12, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (R)~ Approved

Sol.rogueMy fail of trying to do Darkhallows way of torties. Commments? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:33, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing! It looks great, and is very consistent with his loner image. The only thing I would say is to make the fur going in one way, as to me it looks like the fur is going in opposite directions. Looks great! ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 20:14, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! make the earpink a little more noticable, though. :) Leggo 🏈 20:28, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I know the ear pink looks bad, but its the same as the loner images, so i think i should keep it the same. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:47, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white legs some more, and the white chest. The tortie smudgy style is a bit odd. It's kind of smudged everywhere, whereas in one direction. Fix that, please. Darken the shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:01, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 20:40, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

This. Is. Amazing. Iceheart, it's outstanding. ;D I really like the painted, smudged pelt texture. Anyways, could you darken the earpink a tad? It's sort of hard to see right now. Everything else looks incredible. :) --Midnite Talk 21:16, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, but like i said, the ear pink matches the other images, and i know it looks wierd, but i think the should match. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:43, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, alright then. ;) Could the highlight on the stomach be brightened a tad? :3 --Midnite Talk 21:48, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's still quite smudged in different directions, and there isn't enough black showing. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:11, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

You call this a fail! You should see my fails sometime! This is like the Mona Lisa of tortie rogues!Cardinalfire1234 03:11, January 25, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

Re-uploaded- Thanks Cardinalfire :) -ſceheartBlah blah 04:10, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, make the orange on the left ear a little darker, it's hard to see the ear pink.

The patches are really . .. smudgy? XD It looks a bit messy. Try to make it look more like his loner image. Mossy go away. 01:04, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I messed with the smudging a bit, but i like how it looks messy. Rogues a messy furred, even the line art is messier than the other ones. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:28, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

The ear-pink is two-shaded and the belly is like.. smudged in circles, so it looks really odd. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:23, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:07, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! If you're having trouble with the ear pink showing up, maybe put the dark grey on the ear pink, like on his loner image. Lone Wolf 21:59, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Im not having any trouble with the ear pink. The ear is supposed to be orange, and the ear pink that shading. It may be hard to see, but thats how its supposed to be. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:32, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ginger in his fur. It kinda got smudged out. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:05, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add a face hi-lite. MistfireI'd like fries with that 02:14, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 19:49, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Shade the bottom of the tail. Mistfire Epic Fail 19:39, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 22:14, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

The black and white on the chest looks mixed oddly. Great job :D.  Darkhallows...Mew? 08:17, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thanks Darkhallows. Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 18:35, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA?  Darkhallows...Mew? 04:24, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 03:12, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Tumblekit (Alt. Ki) - Approved

Tumblekit.kit.altKnowing my "great" history with black cats, I decided to practice my black cats, and contribute to the wiki. So, what better image to do than Tumblekit? ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:22, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink a tad and add a highlight to his face. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 01:14, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Is the nose okay? I had to re-do the image. Long story. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:47, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

There is a slightly light area on the right side of his pelt. Make that darker--Nightshine 04:10, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I also blurred the ear pink slightly, and made the eyes kinda purple-ish XD ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:19, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the right earpink the same size as her right. oblivionAudience? 14:16, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:32, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish, blur the chest highlight, darken the nose colour, make the eye colour more noticeable--nightshine 16:24, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 20:47, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Her eyes look kinda purplish. Are they supposed to be like that? There's also a light mark of gray on his left haunch, can you correct that? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 17:43, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Had to re-do the image. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:15, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights, it looks a bit flat. Also, brighten the earpink. Looks great. :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:14, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 00:08, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image a little. MistfireI'd like fries with that 17:03, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:49, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:58, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:01, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller--Nightshine 00:09, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 21:05, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Phenomenal, Nighteh. ;) Just brighten the chest highlight a little, and add a highlight to the tail, please. =) --Midnite Talk 21:23, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reupladed ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 05:18, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is AWESOME, Nighteh! Make the hi-lite on the face a touch bigger. MistfireI'd like fries with that 02:23, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:19, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great. Only make the ear pink lighter I can hardly see it. BloodangelStarshine 16:47, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 05:00, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the chest highlight bigger and brighten the earpink a tad. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:16, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 02:43, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image a bit, you can barely see the lineart. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:39, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 02:02, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't really see any discernable difference. Lighten it some more. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:17, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'm worried it looks too dark gray now. Comments? ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 08:39, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights a bit and darken the nose colour--Nightshine 20:47, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 03:56, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights--Nightshine 01:00, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:58, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights again and maybe brighten the earpink a tad. :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:56, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:18, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

What happened to the lineart!? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:52, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image a tad. Leggo 🏈 04:14, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

The line art seems to have been filled in with another colour. --Nightshine 16:42, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Sorry about that pathetic excuse for a charart >.> Either GIMP was being spazzy, or I was just being being stupid ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 19:37, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 23:22, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 06:29, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sunstar (Alt. L) ~ Approved

Sunstar.leader.alt- My First charart in awhile. Haven't seen me around much, have you? ;) I'm pretty proud of this one. I need to blur the ear-pink, I think... By the way... This is my first leader! ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 05:54, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate it a bit, make the ear pink fill up the whole area and blur it. Brighten the highlights some and blur the shading around the neck--Nightshine 06:02, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I'm worried about the highlights... are they too... unnatural? ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 06:30, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Blur the highlights a bit, and/or make them bigger. Also, the ear pink looks very non-existent. Take the ear pink color from Sunstar's alternate deputy image. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 06:47, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Nightflower =) It's nice to get a compliment once in awhile =3. The highlights in this picture are really bugging me -_- ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 10:06, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more noticeable and blur the strip of shading on the leg that is second closest to us. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:27, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his right foreleg. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 22:03, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink and blurred strip. II'll get on to blurring the right-foreleg shading. ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 22:22, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink more, get rid of the white pixel on the ear tip, make the highlights on the chest and haunch bigger--Nightshine 22:53, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I made 2. I don't see much difference, between the pelt color. ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 03:57, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

I like the right one, but make the ear pink more noticeable and blur the highlights on the tail. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:03, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree the right one is better. Darken the ear pink, darken the nose colour a bit, darken the haunch highlight a bit and blur it, darken the shading--Nightshine 22:12, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

The right one. Make the background completely transparent. oblivionAudience? 22:13, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Right one. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 21:20, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... Maybe desaturate the whole image and make the highlights less bright. MistfireOwl City! 21:59, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-Nightshine 17:49, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

You know what, this won't give me any NW spoilers and I've got nothing else to do, so I'll work on this if it's gonna be declined. Mossy go away. 00:13, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Dovesong, you can take over now if you'd like. Just add it to the reservations table--Nightshine 21:18, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Okay! Will get on fixing this up ASAP :3 Mossy go away. 21:31, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ummm . . . sorry if I take a while :P Mossy go away. 21:47, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

It has been a week, please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 19:32, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Mossy has informed me that she doesn't want to work on this anymore. Anyone can take over as long as you are not working on something else. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:59, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do it! Echostar229 00:06, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I desaturated it, but I have a strong feeling that his color is too dull now. :S Echostar229 00:25, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it's too dull. Look up at the comments that were posted after it was last reuploaded to see what needs to be worked on if you haven't already done so. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:08, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the highlights, define the ear pink --Nightshine 01:44, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Turns out, there wasn't any earpink on it at all! Echostar229 01:44, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing its WAY too dark, make the highlight more noticeable, lighten the earpink, and add the white pixle next to the pupil Maplepool 02:46, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Take the colours from his alternate deputy image--Nightshine 04:17, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

I redid him, using the colors from his Deputy image.. Comments? Echostar229 20:41, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Blur the chest higlight and the shading under the chin, blur the tail shading some more. Darken the nose colour--nightshine 21:15, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks a lot better. There's a...line that runs from the chest highlight to the haunch. Blur that please. Also, the shading between the forelegs needs to be blurred near the top. Nice work, Echostar. Lone Wolf 21:48, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. My blur tool is on 100%, but it isn't very strong. Echostar229 03:25, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe redo the highlights, and use a fuzzy brush. MistfireI'd like fries with that 01:58, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the bottom of the haunch to match the tail shading. I can help with the blurring if you absolutely need it. =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 20:52, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you? That would be great! Reuploaded. Echostar229 21:20, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay =) I'll work on it. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:39, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it. Blurred it a LOT. =) Hope this helped you. I also fixed some blurred lineart you had. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:57, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

De-saturate the shading under the chin, add a tad of shading to the tips of the fur on the left, and move the chest highlight up from the front legs a tad. Nice work! ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 22:38, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Also add a line of shading on the right side of either leg and a small line of pale highlights on the left side of either leg. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:10, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. Mistfire Epic Fail 05:16, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't desaturate the chin shading, because when I did it, it looked... odd. And besides, did they really do that on the deputy image? BTW, thanks a TON Wildheart! [When you uploaded it, you called me Sunspirit, though. ;) ] Echostar229 04:40, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

*facepalms* Silly me. I was just looking at all the old uploads.... XD Anyway, I lurve to help! Blur the shoulder shading and add those lines of highlights/shading on the legs. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:55, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:23, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-Nightshine 01:06, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Wildheart? Can you help me with the blurring again? Pxlr isn't helping me at ALL. Echostar229 01:44, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

No problem, Echostar. First, however, are you putting your blur tool on 100%? You also might want to add highlights to the patch of fur between his legs and the left side of each leg. Then I'll blur it for you =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:02, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I am. Oh, and Reuploaded. Thankies! Echostar229 05:06, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope I helped. Don't forget to save this file to your computer so you can work on it yourself! =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:32, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 16:51, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

The chest highlight looks, well, odd. And the earpink needs to be blurred some.MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 01:12, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well, there's some light coming from the left, and the earpink's smudged to look like fur covering some of the earpink. I think it looks fine. Echostar229 04:54, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

I agree; repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 06:25, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe desaturate the shading under the tail, it looks a bit red... ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 05:40, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Wait. Nightshine gave the CBA three days ago. i think it should be approved. Leggo 🏈 05:47, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Rainlegs. Besides, [As stated above] they didn't do that on the deputy image, did they? Shading is just darkening the color of something. And when I did it, it looked...... stupid, really. Echostar229 16:46, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

I just got back from vacation and this is definitely ready. Sorry for the delay; approving --Nightshine 05:38, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Ferncloud (alt. Q)- Approved

Ferncloud.queen.altFerncloud, as she was described on page 52 of The Sight. Comments/criticsm? Mistfire Epic Fail 14:45, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Just blur the shading a tad, add some white in her right eye, and make the earpink a little smaller. Leggo 🏈 15:11, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten/Add a stomach highlight. Looks great Misteh! :D Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:27, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the face highlight to match the other ones and the nose should be grey not pink. -ſceheartBlah blah 17:51, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, Mistfire! The ear pink is kinda oddly shaped, fix that. Lone Wolf 19:05, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shadows on the stomach and maybe curve it a tad. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:32, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mistfire Epic Fail 11:27, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken the nose colour, make the ear pink more reddish, darken the shading. Fix the blurred line art on the shoulder-Nightshine 20:34, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink some. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:25, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart is blurred/shaded a little too much on the joints. Otherwise, I'd say it looks OK. -

UNI 00:59, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed lineart and earpink. I'm using Pixlr and I don't want to darken the shading or else I'd have to blur it, and you know how that'd turn out... >_< Mistfire Epic Fail 02:10, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour so it's darken then the pelt colour, make the ear pink smaller, darken the shading--Nightshine 00:58, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed nose color, shrunk the earpink, and darkened shading. Mistfire Epic Fail 01:31, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I still see a bunch of blurred lineart on the shoulder and the haunch. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:58, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink more reddish--Nightshine 16:39, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

You need to lighten her a lot. She looks black, not dark gray. Also, blur the current shading and then add more shading, especially on the tail. Mossy go away. 17:52, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

There is blurred lineart, and mosspool is right, it doesn't look so gray. Blur the shading, especially the neck. I'm not sure on the earpink but ask someone else on that.MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 00:53, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger and a bit redder :) ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 18:17, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

And more triangular-ish. Mistystar Trust the fire within... 22:27, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mistfire Epic Fail 02:44, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/lighten the belly shading a tad. Great job Misty! SplookMavinotp♥ 00:33, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Splash! Mistfire Epic Fail 23:25, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading some more and make the ear pink a bit rounder--Nightshine 05:32, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the haunch highlight bigger. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 17:17, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed haunch highlight and earpink and darkened shading. Mistfire 1000 Edits! 17:45, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 18:07, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work, Mistfire! Maybe blur the shading on the belly a tad and add shadows by the bend in her hip? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 05:57, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Scarletwind! Mistfire 1000 Edits! 01:04, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 05:09, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 00:17, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

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