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Berrynose (alt. kit) - Approved

Berrynose.kit.alt Berrykit without his tail. Comments? Rainbreath 11:41, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tail look more natural-perhaps make the cuts less straight. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:28, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger, and darken the shading on the left side (our left). 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 18:09, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pinkish. Look at Berrynose's chararts for reference. Anyways, nice job! ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 18:27, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

On his warrior charart the tail isn't all zig-zaggy, and it looks a little odd that way anyway. Looks nice, though! ;) Mossy go away. 23:56, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading between the front legs. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:26, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The tail looks a bit funny XD BloodangelStarshine 12:15, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Try to copy the tail design from his apprentice image. Moonflight 15:51, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind. It looks fine. Moonflight 15:55, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

There is some gray spots outside of his tail, erase those. oblivionAudience? 18:43, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tail a little fluffier looking. Right now it's just a stub--Nightshine 19:09, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'd add a small pink scar at the tip of his tail, as his wound would've been pretty recent. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:08, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The tail doesn't look funny. It looks better. I'm so happy =D BloodangelStarshine 15:17, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading below the chin; on the neck. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:07, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

That area of shading isn't required. Moonflight 23:39, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it matters that it's not required, it would look good and is easy to add, it's not like asking to add in highlights or anything. Mossy go away. 05:21, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? BloodangelStarshine 12:08, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading under the neck and darken it a bit.--Nightshine 16:03, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. -ſceheartBlah blah 05:50, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. BloodangelStarshine 08:44, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Good job. :) The tail must've been hard to do. XD Anyways, there are scraps of shading under the chin, as well as on the tail. They look really blotchy. Could you try blurring them in or completely redoing them? :3 --Midnite Talk 14:17, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken or brighten the earpink a tad. :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:12, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 04:15, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine--can I take over? Lone Wolf 02:53, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I didnt had a pc so I can`t work on it. I`ll work tomorrow on it (sorry vor my bad spelling) BloodangelStarshine 18:46, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? BloodangelStarshine 19:25, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading in the chest area a LOT, smudge it a bit if you want. Lone Wolf 20:51, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading--nightshine 02:09, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest a bit more and on the face it looks as if there's a stripes of darker shading running through it. Maybe try to take that out? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:29, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is it better? BloodangelStarshine 09:04, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit. Lone Wolf 18:12, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and move the chest highlight up. Right now it looks like it's on his legs XD --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:26, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

The chest hi-lite is a little blotchy. Mistfire Epic Fail 05:16, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone do that for me? It doen't work when I do it. It still looks blotchy. BloodangelStarshine 09:25, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

I can blur it, if you want, but I'm going away for a few days, so probably won't be able to do anything 'til Monday or Wednesday... so if somebody else wants to do it...? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 08:01, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blured the ear pink more. I'd be happy, if you blur it for me, Wildheart. BloodangelStarshine 16:39, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest. Mistfire Epic Fail 17:47, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'm heading out to soccer practice but I'll do it as soon as I can. I would be happy to blur it for you =] --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:31, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it for you. Hope I helped =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:01, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

It looks beautiful. Thank you =D BloodangelStarshine 10:00, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

No problem =) Perhaps brightent the earpink some --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 23:38, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, the earpink needs to be more, well, pink. -

UNI 01:02, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights just a tad. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:23, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 16:48, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is too dark, brighten it some.MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 01:10, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? BloodangelStarshine 14:12, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more on his right side. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 22:11, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Rainbreath? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 02:45, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a touch more noticeable. Mistfire Epic Fail 04:03, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. This is a really great charart so if someone wants to just touch up the ear pink it will be ready. --Nightshine 05:36, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do it. Working on it now, will reupload in a sec. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:05, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Even though I absolutely despise doing kit pixel earpink, I did it. If it looks worse, we can wait for Rainbreath to get back and do it. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:18, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink needs to be shrunk and blurred. Mistfire 1000 Edits! 02:15, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a reddish pink colour--Nightshine 05:17, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hey guys, I was really busy so, sorry. And thank you for working on it Wildheart. I have worked on it so I will upload it tomorrow or at Wednesday. BloodangelStarshine 15:50, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

YAY YOU'RE BACK! --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:49, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ok, here he is! I hope it looks better. BloodangelStarshine 18:46, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?---Nightshine 02:27, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 00:03, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Pod (Kittypet)~ Approved

Pod.kittypetI'm not entirely sure if Pod would get a kittypet charart, but he was mentioned as a kittypet, so I thought it was appropriate. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 19:23, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks Great! There's a faint stripe going down his back. Is that supposed to be there? Leggo 🏈 19:27, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make his muzzle gray. The shade of brown in this looks like a different colour than on his loner image. Can you fix that? --Nightshine 19:34, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I also added a scar to his muzzle. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:57, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his back and tail a tad more. Leggo 🏈 21:28, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the muzzle gray, darken the highlights, blur the shading--Nightshine 21:38, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:43, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and make the face highlight match the rest. [In intensity] Leggo 🏈 02:27, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe fix the eyes so he doesn't look cross-eyed. You don't have to, I'm just saying ☾Ⓜⓞⓞⓝⓛⓔⓐⓕ☽⓴⓾ over already? 03:11, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the scar more pink. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:39, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:26, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and shoulder highlights some more. They seem blotchy right now. Leggo 🏈 03:28, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan

Make his scar look more like the one on his loner image, right now it looks like hes blushing, whoa TINY FONT Maplepool 06:37, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

The scar should look sharper and more defined. Wee I has a tiny font also~ xD Lone Wolf 22:15, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

To Lone Wolf and Maplepool: I fixed it. For the image, I would say to make the highlights more consistent. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:09, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I wasn't sure if the darker gray lines on Pod's loner charart were his scars or not. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:17, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Blur the highlights and shading and brighten the earpink a tad. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:20, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I know the highlights look horrible. I've tried everything, but they won't blur well. Do I make them lighter or re-do the image? Idk. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 05:08, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

I would try rounding out the haunch highlight first. Let's see what that looks like before we try redoing this amazing charart. ;) Leggo 🏈 15:30, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I know. Still epic fail on highlights... ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 01:16, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay.... They're better. Just lighten them a tad. Leggo 🏈 01:23, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights - they're a bit blotchy. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 22:51, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 17:38, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Just blur the tail highlight a tad. Leggo 🏈 23:07, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

It looks as though he is crying. Did you intend that? It looks a bit odd. Moonflight 01:48, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Moonflight, in response to your question. Yes, I did mean to make the scars like that but I did not mean to make it seem that Pod was crying. eheheh... I'll try to find a new way to style the scars. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:33, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really see the scars at all. Define the gray muzzle near the top a bit. Darken the highlights and shading, fix the blurred line art on the tail and muzzle--nightshine 02:04, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some more and lighten the earpink. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 20:45, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:36, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and (sorry) blur the highlights some more. What helps me is smudging them all in one way and then putting my blur tool on 100% and blurring it all. Do you use pixlr or GIMP? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:12, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Wildheart: Actually, I don't use either. I use photoshop for my chararts. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 17:32, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Huh. That's certainly shaking up the norm. XD Dodge that line of shading on the haunch to make it match the rest of the highlight. I'm really sorry to press the issue like this, but the highlights still need blurring. I can help if you want me to =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:59, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm still having problems with the highlight on his flank and it doesn't seem like it'll blur anymore in photoshop, so Wildheart, if you want to blur it, go on ahead so long as it's alright with Oblivion and Frostheart. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:59, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

That's odd. Photoshop won't blur it? How do you do your blurring? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:24, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

No, it does blur, it just won't blur it anymore. So instead, I smear it into sharper edges and blur it then. I was gonna play with it a bit more. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 01:19, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred it for you. I can't tell if I fixed it or made it worse XD I think it looks good(ish?), but you can revert it if you don't think so. Hope I helped. =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:38, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks a million, Wildheart! I owe you a fresh-kill mouse! lol XD ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 01:39, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lol no problem, Scarletwind! *noms mouse* =P --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:46, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Great Scarletwind! Add a hi-lite to the leg, too. Mistfire Epic Fail 02:35, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, but which leg? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:37, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate the highlight on the tail. I think it looks good without the leg highlight =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:41, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:42, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps brighten it a bit more so it matches the haunch and shoulder highlights --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 23:34, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Photoshop is being a pain about blurring stuff these days, I think it just hates this shade of brown though. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:35, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Maybe make it a bit bigger. Sorry to be such a pain P= and it is most definitely the shade of brown. When I blurred it for you, GIMP was having issues... and GIMP never has issues! XD but it's such a pretty shade of brown.... lol sorry for the tangent --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:56, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:10, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back near the far edge so it doens't looks as flat--Nightshine 01:00, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. my computer still hates this shade of brown. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:33, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the tail highlight some more. It looks good =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:56, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 01:31, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 18:17, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:51, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail highlight a teeny-tiny bit. Leggo 🏈 03:53, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 01:59, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight a touch. Mistfire Epic Fail 00:47, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:09, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

This looks really good! make the earpink a bit more noticeable. Mistfire Epic Fail 04:08, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:24, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink more Nightshine 05:14, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 01:24, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?---Nightshine 02:24, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely charart, here. (: --Quiet!... 21:21, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 00:13, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Longtail (Alt.W) - Approved

Longtail.warrior.alt

My Alt Longtail For approval. Comments? Feathermoon Of NightClan... 23:48, February 26, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Well, you probably want the image full-sized, and to start from scratch. You also need to make his pelt silver instead of brown. Leggo 🏈 23:54, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

We can easily change it to silver during the next tweak week. Use his warrior image for the alternate Longtail.warrior Nightshine 00:09, February 27, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded- Reuploaded and fixed. Comments? Feathermoon Of NightClan... 00:32, February 27, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

The eye lineart seems to be blurred. Also, blur the scar a little, too, and maybe add more then one? If it was claws raking his eyes, then there would be more then one scratch, right?Leggo 🏈 00:40, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I'm not sure... I was just trying to copy his elders image wound. Just now I fixed the lineart, blurred the scratch, and extended the scratch. Feathermoon Of NightClan... 00:57, February 27, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

The lineart still looks a little blurry to me. [Either it's blurred, or my eyesight's failing] Leggo 🏈 01:02, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- it very well could have been my idea of his blind eyes, but I tried to make it look a little better Feathermoon Of NightClan... 01:09, February 27, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Change the eye colour to blue please --Leafstrike-- 01:30, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, Im pretty sure they already were blue, but I made it more noticeable. im not sure if its just me, but is the bottom part of the scar sorta....short? Feathermoon Of NightClan... 19:18, March 1, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Looks good to me =) Did you change the eye lineart? And you don't need to upload a NEW file every time you want to make a change to the image; just click the "upload a new version of this file" button near the bottom of the page. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 22:49, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yes the lineart was fixed. Anything Else? Anybody? Feathermoon 23:21, March 3, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

The ear pink gets lighter where it meets the line art, darken it to match the rest. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:48, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay, ear was fixed...Anything else? Feathermoon 19:46, March 4, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon (godda change my siggy back, eh?)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 00:06, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

dosen't look like it, this section doesn't get very many comments! XD User:Feathermoon/Sig' 00:44, March 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Isn't Longtail, silver-gray? Maplepool 00:54, March 5, 2011 (UTC)\

The image can be tweaked during tweak week along with his normal warrior charart. Repeating 24 hours. Feathermoon, please don't comment if it doesn't have to do with the image--Nightshine 01:01, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 04:00, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Halftail (Alt. W) - Approved

Halftail.warrior.alt Here's Halftail's alternate warrior. Comments? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:08, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make the tail more curved. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:10, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks kind of...blurry. Did you save it as a jpg.? Either way, lighted the shading on the haunches. Lone Wolf 01:53, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think the tail's fine as it is. Have you seen a cat with a gimped up tail? They don't really have full control of it. @Lone Wolf; it's a .png and looks fine to me. Maybe it's your computer? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:32, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add a few more stripes to his back? It looks a little.... bare. And if the shading's coming from the front-ish, he would have highlights on his feet. Leggo 🏈 03:48, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added highlights. I'd add more stripes, but I'm basing it off of his warrior pixel... so... yeah. Comments? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:23, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

I still think the tail should look more like the one oblivion did. That one looked good. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:51, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:02, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree with Iceheart, just take the line art from the tail of the old picture, and paste it over this one. --Nightshine 07:14, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

It must've been, it looks fine now. The chin shading looks a bit odd. Lone Wolf 15:02, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changed tail lineart. Lightened chin shading. Be more specific in what you mean, Lone Wolf. Comments? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:27, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on his right front leg a little more. This looks great! Leggo 🏈 15:19, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Rainlegs! I didn't know if you meant his right leg or our right leg, so I blurred both. Better? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:09, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Better. :) I meant his right leg. Leggo 🏈 03:13, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thanks =) Comments? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:19, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe your should make it look more like the tail got chopped off not like it's just short (dont meen to be rude) But thats just what I think. -- Spottedleaf ❤ⓛⓞⓥⓔ❥ 03:46, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I had it like that before, but two people wanted me to change it so I did. If you can get somebody else to agree, then I'll change it back. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:50, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I agree as well with Spottedleaf. As for the image, darken the tail stripes a bit, blur the stripes some, and add one or two more stripes to the face--Nightshine 16:37, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

If his tail got chopped off, I believe it did can't quite remember, then Spottedleaf is right. Yeah, stripes could be blurred.MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 00:58, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

So I should change the lineart back to what I first had? I'm confused. I thought you wanted me to change it before, Nightshine. (working on image, will reupload in a sec) 173.183.120.76 03:00, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

That was me, sorry. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:27, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded So should I change the tail lineart back to my original tail, Nightshine? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:57, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur stripes. Mistfire Epic Fail 03:21, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:25, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur them even more. Then make the earpink a touch more purpleish. Mistfire Epic Fail 23:27, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tweaked earpink and blurred stripes. I think it looks worse, but it's you guys' call... --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:58, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think the ear pink looks great. The entire charart looks great. Just blur the shading a bit. Mossy go away. 05:14, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, blur the shading, and also lighten it on the front leg farthest from us. Mistfire Epic Fail 04:45, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Mosspool! Comments? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:01, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:54, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks good to me. Comments before approval?--Nightshine 00:08, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 04:00, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Plumwillow (A) - Approved

Plumwillow.apprentice

Either lighten the shading on the back or get rid of the highlight next to it by darkening it. Then blur thoroughly. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sunspirit, are you still working on this?--Nightshine 07:22, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

I will take over. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Define the highlight on the flank. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 21:09, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink -ſceheartBlah blah 00:06, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are a bit too bright. Maybe shade them a bit. Wolfwhisker Trick or Treat 01:02, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble, are you still working on this?--Nightshine 02:33, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think since Bramble has retired, someone will have to take over. Could I continue working on this, if someone else hasn't already taken it? Rainwhisker567 00:29, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, Blackclaw, I have Tawnypelt (Alt.Ki) up for approval, and it's on CBA, and I planned to take over this because I've made all the changes for Plumwillow's apprentice image. You are free to take it, but...well, I worked really hard on the changes I made to her image, and I really wanted to take over it. There are a couple other images that need taking over as well, but if you would like to continue working on this, I don't mind. You asked first, after all. :) It's up to you. --Midnite Talk 01:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Since you have worked on this image before, I think you should take it instead. I'll just find something else to do. Rainwhisker567 21:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, Blackclaw! :) It's a privilege to take over this image. I'll get to it and upload my version as soon as Tawnykit gets approved. --Midnite Talk 22:20, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Yay, Tawnykit's approved! I've uploaded my new version. :) Comments? --Midnite Talk 20:12, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur haunch highlights a little, otherwise it looks great :) Rainwhisper 21:16, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Rainy! :) --Midnite Talk 21:29, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and make it more triangular, make the haunch highlight a bit bigger and blur it--Nightshine 02:23, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Hope that looks better! :) --Midnite Talk 20:24, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink more, blur the haunch highlight around the edges--Nightshine 23:02, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

You did a great job taking over the image! Blur the haunch highlight. ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 08:48, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Aw, thank you, Sunny. ^_^ --Midnite Talk 21:22, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:14, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. =) --Midnite Talk 02:09, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more visible. WhiteStorm is back! 14:28, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look quite messy. I'd re-do them. Moonflight 15:02, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Well...re-do the bottom one at least. All you need to do with the top is brighten it. Moonflight 15:28, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I brightened the top highlight. Moonflight, what do you mean by "messy"? Like, is it blurred too much, or too big, or simply out of place? It looks fine to me. Please tell me! :) --Midnite Talk 19:55, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

I think the highlight on the head needs to be brightened just a little more, so it matches the haunch and shoulder highlights. It looks great though! Rainwhisker567 22:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Blackclaw. :) --Midnite Talk 03:03, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

The shoulder and haunch highlights are very bright. darken them. MistfireOwl City! 16:26, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. =) --Midnite Talk 20:46, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

There's a spot on the haunch where the shading is lighter, try and fix that if you know where it is :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:14, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights a bit more consistent. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:44, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. :) --Midnite Talk 12:10, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight a little more, but otherwise it looks amazing :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:41, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Is that any better? :3 --Midnite Talk 03:04, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight, move it up, and make it bigger. Lighten the ear pink--Nightshine 19:03, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm not sure if it showed the changes... --Midnite Talk 19:33, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the haunch and lighten it. BloodangelStarshine 12:19, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I apologize if there doesn't appear to be any change. :) If I blur it too much, then it will "cut away" at the highlight, and that makes me darken the highlights and brighten the highlights and darken...etc. I tried to blur it as little as possible, once again, I'm sorry if the changes don't seem to be there. ;) --Midnite Talk 17:56, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Center the highlights and blur them. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

You use Pixlr, I assume? What I would do is re-do them entirely. When you take the dodge tool, you can obviously change the brush. Chose a circle brush that sort of fades out at the edges. Then change the size to somewhere between 50 and 70 and dodge. It then only requires a little blurring. If you use Photoshop, go to Pixlr. From my expirience, Photoshop makes my Chararts turn out horrendous. If you use GIMP, I really have no idea what happend here. 0_o Moonflight 01:14, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I do use Pixlr. What you say is intelligent and worth trying. :) I think redoing the highlights is crucial at this point. XD I'll get right on it. :) --Midnite Talk 13:05, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I completely redid the haunch highlight. I personally think it turned out much cleaner and brighter than before. :) --Midnite Talk 18:34, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yes it did. :) Except there's a darker patch on it, so make it all like the same... color? Or maybe just tries to blur it more. Anyway, it looks great! :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 18:40, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I just lightened it and blurred it in. Thanks, Rainy. ^_^ --Midnite Talk 19:34, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darkened the ear pink or make it more noticeable. And the haunch still kinda looks the same.XD There's just one spot n it that is darker then the rest, so I guess try and blur it again, or maybe smudge it. :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:28, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks for the awesome tips, Raineh. :) I'm positive I got the dark spot now. If anything still needs work, tell me. =) --Midnite Talk 20:23, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, the spot is gone. Just maybe blur the haunch highlight a little more to make it a little smoother. :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:29, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Hopefully the changes showed; if not I can always re-upload it again. :) Anything else? --Midnite Talk 20:42, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:30, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I personally think the earpink looks worse now. :P Tell me to re-upload it to the previous version if you agree. :) --Midnite Talk 15:27, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with you. You don't need to upload the old one though, just put a lighter shade of earpink over top--Nightshine 19:50, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing that I think needs to be done (besides the earpink) is to blur the haunch highlight again. XD Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:05, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I fixed the earpink, and I. Blurred. The haunch. -_- --Midnite Talk 21:25, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah..fix it please. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:01, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Fix what? I already fixed the earpink and blurred the haunch. I'm not sure what you mean. XD --Midnite Talk 21:58, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink, darken the highlights and blur them, --Nightshine 01:48, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. --Midnite Talk 02:42, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger and blur them. They almost look like spots. Otherwise, great image! ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:27, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Yeah, Nightflower, they almost do. XD Hopefully I fixed it. :) Brightened highlights and blurred them thoroughly. And thanks. ^_^ --Midnite Talk 22:49, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights and blur them--Nightshine 04:19, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

I've already brightened the highlights and blurred them, and they look fine to me. I've darkened the highlights, brightened the highlights, and if you ask me to darken them again, I think that's useless because some other user's going to come along eventually telling me to brighten them - again. :P Besides, they look good to me. --Midnite Talk 20:01, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Move the haunch and the shoulder highlights up a tad and brighten the earpink a lil' bit too =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:03, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. =) --Midnite Talk 16:04, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

The highlite is too bright. Blur it or darken it. MistfireI'd like fries with that 18:28, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. --Midnite Talk 00:09, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Move the highlights up a bit more and brighten the earpink a bit more. Blur the shading/highlights. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:58, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the highlights a tad bigger. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. --Midnite Talk 17:53, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think the highlights on the shoulder and haunch should be blurred just a bit more, and the head hightlight should be brightened to match the other highlights I mentioned. It looks great though! Rainwhisker567 20:59, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Aw, thanks Blackclaw! ^_^ --Midnite Talk 02:07, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the hanch highlight. Leggo 🏈 01:20, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights a lot. -nightshine 02:17, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. --Midnite Talk 02:54, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights a bit, and make them a tad bigger. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 06:30, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think the highlights' shade and size are fine right now, thanks. I've been darkening them and brightening them, and I think right now, they're good. Also, if I keep blurring them, they either get smaller or larger, and I think I like the size and shape right now. Hope you understand. :) Not concerning the highlights, are there any other comments? --Midnite Talk 21:11, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Midnite, But I really think the highlights are much too bright. It's nearly white. Either that or you need to blur massively. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:14, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Also, jw, where's your light source coming from? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:20, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Alright, Frostheart, as you wish. XD @Wildheart, my light source is coming from the upper left hand corner, since the top of the muzzle, the haunch, the shoulder, the tail, and a little bit of the middle of the front legs are highlighted. ;) Please, everyone, it's really tiring brightening the highlights and darkening them but not really doing anything else, and they really do look fine to me now, so, not concerning the brightness of the highlights, is there anything else that should be done? :3 --Midnite Talk 21:42, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, another hi-lite comment :P. Darken them til they match the face. MistfireI'd like fries with that 02:09, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

(Sighs) -_- Can I just brighten the muzzle highlight instead? :3 --Midnite Talk 02:12, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments now? :3 --Midnite Talk 02:20, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Did you forget to reupload it? Because I went on the pic's page and it said you haven't uploaded it for a week... --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:05, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Of course I didn't forget! It says I last updated it on January 29, 2011. :P --Midnite Talk 19:31, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the hi-lites on the fronts of her legs. Mistfire Epic Fail 17:47, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

They are blurred. They look fine to me. --Midnite Talk 18:24, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the haunch, its to consentarted and bright. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:06, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Since Midnite has retired from the wiki, someone can take this over. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:28, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

All right, I took over. Fixed the haunch hilight, darkened the shading to make it more even, and darkened her because she's supposed to be dark gray. Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin 16:42, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights the same shade. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 18:18, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the shoulder and haunch. Fix that and brighten the earpink. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 23:50, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin 18:40, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Still looks like there's some blurred lineart at the top of the arm --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:08, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the haunch hi-lite. Mistfire Epic Fail 01:44, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:23, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin 14:50, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:22, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

File:Plumwillow.apprentice.issues.png I noticed there a some more places in which your lineart is blurred. The red indicates where. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:28, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 18:17, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Is she still working on this? It's been over a week now ._. --Leafstrike-- 18:18, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

If she's not, is there any chance I could take over? I've been looking hard for a character in need of art, but I'm failing miserably. XD Paleclaw 04:12, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little bigger. Mistfire Epic Fail 03:42, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Actually this looks ready, comments before approval?--Nightshine 05:42, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight a little --Leafstrike-- 15:43, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

It looks find to me, repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 18:12, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to ruin CBA but can she fix the blurred lineart before it gets approved? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:42, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

What is there to fix on the line art?--Nightshine 07:42, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shoulder and the ear are blurred. Everything else looks fine... but... --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 22:46, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

I"ll get to this tomorrow. (This is Elorisa.) 99.25.97.75 02:53, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Well on my laptop I don't see any blurred line art, so I'm repeating the 24 hours--Nightshine 00:00, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 04:00, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt. A) - Approved

Birchfall.apprentice.alt

Blur so that the pelt is smoothed, and not blotchy. Use the blur tool and smudge tool, whatever you can, to smooth out the patches of light and dark so it all runs together smoothly. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? If so, blur the shading a lot. oblivionAudience? 21:50, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

I will take over. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Shading overall has been modified as well as blurred. I've uploaded twice, but there does not seem to be any change in the actual image. I will check back tomorrow and try uploading again if there is no change. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 04:27, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I see the changes, I think. XD Move the ear-pink up so it isn't touching the line-art. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:57, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight, blur the shading on the paws and tail. oblivionAudience? 02:26, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think this is the correct version. The shading looks much to blotchy. Moonflight 01:00, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

I see it fine, however, the shoulder highlight does need to be blurred. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:19, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Since Bramble no longer wants to do images, anyone who isn't working on something can take over this. oblivionAudience? 20:25, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

If no one is taking over this image, may I do it? Rainwhisker567 21:33, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, make sure you reserve it, too. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:13, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:30, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to smooth it out as best I could. Comments? Rainwhisker567 03:04, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading, lighten the ear pink a bit and move it up-Nightshine 23:06, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I would blur the highlights some more. WhiteStorm is back! 14:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? Rainwhisker567 22:42, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

The shading seems really blotchy and the ear pink needs to be blurred and made a bit bigger. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:15, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 19:06, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! I'm on vacation and I didn't have internet until today. I'll edit it as soon as I can. Rainwhisker567 14:39, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I've blurred it to the max. Comments? Rainwhisker567 15:15, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights more consistent. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:24, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any comments? Rainwhisker567 01:34, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Move the earpink up so it isn't touching the lineart and make the transition between shading and highlights more consistent. Smudging then blurring helps. Looks good. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 08:00, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! :D However, it appears to me that there's too much contrast between the shading and the highlights. Could you lighten the shading a little or blur it more? :3 --Midnite Talk 14:39, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 19:59, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll upload it in a sec. Sorry for the delay! Rainwhisker567 18:08, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the shading and darkened the highlights so there is less contrast between the two. I also moved the ear pink, and blurred everything to the max. Any comments? --Rainwhisker567 18:21, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit splotchy, try to smooth it out with the smudge tool. Lighten the ear pink. Darken the shading--Nightshine 19:54, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger as well. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:11, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I would say lighten the ear pink. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I wasn't able to darken the shading, because it got all blotchy and when I tried to darken the highlights to fix it, I couldn't really blur it well. I can try doing it on GIMP. Oh and I need to work on the ear pink. I'll do that in a sec. Rainwhisker567 22:01, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading--nightshine 02:18, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:18, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks really blotchy, I suggest blur it in one direction only so it might help a bit. Darken the ear pink, as well. Lone Wolf 00:48, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't matter if you blur in different directions; but it seems as if you have smuged the shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:29, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and there is also some extra line-art pixels near the tail. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:30, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit when you enlarge it. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:15, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still working on this, but just to let you all know, I won't have internet on Friday and Saturday because I'm going away. I will reupload in a sec. Rainwhisker567 02:31, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Err... Reuploaded I don't think there's much of a difference, in my opinion. Or maybe its just my computer. Rainwhisker567 02:35, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur everything, darken the shading on the bottom of the haunch, lighten shading under the neck, enlarge highlight on tail, and move the earpink up a tad. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:56, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading on back/neck. Mistfire Epic Fail 05:16, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

I don't have any time to work on this; Withdrawing. If anyone would like to take over, feel free to do so. Rainwhisker567 00:59, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

I will ^^.  Darkhallows...Mew? 07:36, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I did use the shading , but added muscle definintion.  Darkhallows...Mew? 08:13, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad under the chin. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:45, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 23:52, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, there seems to be gray lines running under the head. Fix that please. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:23, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, though I see no gray lines?  Darkhallows...Mew? 21:31, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and lighten it--Nightshine 01:07, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes might be a little light and make the leg blend in. It sticks out a bit.

The neck and shoulder-ish shading needs some lightening/blurring, it looks too much like stripes. Mistfire Epic Fail 03:39, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.--Nightshine 05:42, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

If no one wants this, I can take over. It would be my first charart. Cloudskye The Dark Forest Is Rising 01:11, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead, I don't have the time :/.  Darkhallows...Mew? 10:26, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm not really good with highlighting and such... I tried my best. I ended up re-doing the ear pink to try and center it more. Cloudskye The Dark Forest Is Rising 17:43, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder and neck shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:07, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded Look any better? Cloudskye The Dark Forest Is Rising 13:36, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Defind the ear pink and this will be ready--Nightshine 23:59, March 4, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded I did what I could with limited resources. I had to use Pixlr, and I'm on a laptop, so, it's probably not good enough... Cloudskye The Dark Forest Is Rising 00:34, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 23:16, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 03:02, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W)- Approved

Brackenfur.warrior.altHe was mentioned as a russet warrior in Night Whispers, so here he is. :) Comments?Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 03:07, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Where in Night Whispers? Anyway, lighten the earpink a tad and make the scar a little longer and more pink-ish. Looks great, though! Leggo 🏈 03:14, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

As I stated on the IRC, I don't think he should get an alternate for this because russet is very similar to ginger and he has been described as ginger multiple times throughout the series. --Nightshine 03:24, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well can we see what others think? Oh and he was mentioned as russet on page 127 of Night Whispers. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 03:28, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

I think he deserves an alternate. Russet is more reddish dark brown, while golden brown is..well..yellow/orangeish. Darken the stripes, and define them. Lighten the shading on his front legs. Lighten the ear-pink and blur it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:34, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

The point is that he has been described as ginger many times and this is ginger. --Nightshine 03:41, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Russet means dark brown with a tint of red. This will stay. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:48, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

The shading could probably be shaded a little bit. His front leg looks a little too dark. But it looks pretty good otherwise. Mintstarr (Talk) 22:02, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mintstarr, I didn't know what you meant by shading the shading, so maybe clear that up a bit. XD Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:26, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look a little pinkish and could use some blurring, but you did a beautiful job! :) MistfireI'd like fries with that 23:58, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. The scar is kinda odd. The colour is...hot pink/purple and it just looks like a line. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:37, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink so it shows up more. Looks good. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:15, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I didn't do too much to the scar, so if you want me to change it more I will. DX The reason why it was a line was because I tried to make it look kind of like the one on his warrior charart, but I guess I made it too straight. :P

Oh, wow, I forgto to sign. XD That was me. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:45, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno. The scar looks fine to me. But it looks good =) Blur the shading/highlights transition some more and enlarge the earpink. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:08, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:26, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the hi-lites on the shoulder and haunch match the head hi-lite. Mistfire Epic Fail 17:09, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

They do match... 99.58.17.98 19:55, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

That was me. Sorry, I was logged out. DX Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 19:57, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit and make it triangular, darken the stripes, make the haunch highlight more even--Nightshine 20:11, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:42, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and blur the highlights. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 02:47, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about that typo. I originally meant blur the shading, but now it looks great except the tail shading could be blurred a little Minstarr (Talk)75.91.249.254 17:32, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:29, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes. Mistfire Epic Fail 14:47, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I know I just joined. The top of the tail might need to go with the rest of his body color because it is a much lighter shade. ♥♥♥Valentine♥♥♥ 19:37, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I tried sharpening it, but it didn't go so well. XD Oh and Valentine, it's a lighter shade because I added highlights to it. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:09, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, blur the haunch highlight, darken the tail stripes near the tip, define the scar and the stripes--Nightshine 00:59, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:34, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hang on, I'm going to re-do it. :P Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:45, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It hasn't shown the changes yet so....Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 03:41, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink's a little large, and the shading needs to be blurred, but other then that, this look spectacular! Leggo 🏈 01:13, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the scar -pang of envy, sorry I'm feeling that way today ._.- --Leafstrike-- 03:28, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I meant to brighten the scar a little, sorry --Leafstrike-- 03:29, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. When I blurred it the stripes got all messed up so sorry if it isn't blurred enough. :P Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:24, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his back and neck a little more, and define the scar. Stripes look fine to me. Leggo 🏈 15:30, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded... Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:46, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the head and shoulder highlights a tad.MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 16:11, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think the head highlights are fine, and if I blur the shoulder highlight andymore the stripes will become less visible. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:29, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and define the ear pink. Looks epic Rainers :D ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 00:57, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good Rainy! Blur the hi-lights around the neck-area a tad. :D SplookMavinotp♥ 01:03, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes; if you wish to follow what Nighty said, you might want to just smudge them a bit, because they're kind of indistinct and blurring them might make them even more so. The lineart on the top of the head is kind of faded, too. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:55, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid it again. :3 Oh and I blurred the shading to the max, so it probably can't be blurred anymore. XD Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:06, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes :) ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 21:09, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes and make the scar a little curved so it looks more natural--Nightshine 23:25, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, but I don't think it has shown the changes yet. If it doesn't seem to look different in a while, tell me because I've had uploading problems with this. XD Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:36, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Just make the scar a little... less noticable. Mistfire Epic Fail 00:47, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

And blur it. XD Mistfire Epic Fail 04:34, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 05:33, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. XD I'm working on it right now. 99.58.17.98 14:55, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Oh that was me... wasn't logged in. It won't let me reupload the new image. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:04, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading >:) --Leafstrike-- 15:36, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading can't be blurred anymore. >.> I already said that. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 17:16, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great Raineh! if you can't blur the shading any more, then at least lighten it. Mistfire 1000 Edits! 17:21, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me, the line art where the scar touches is thinner than the rest, fix that. Make the ear pink more centered in the ear--Nightshine 18:08, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:40, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish--Nightshine 05:13, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks ok. I tried making it more red but the color just blended in with the pelt too much. 99.58.17.98 02:26, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

-Facepalm- Sorry, I was logged out again. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:03, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

But the colour it is right now clashes too muh with the pelt. Make it a dark red like this: File:Earpinkexample.png Nightshine 00:12, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:14, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 23:25, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I see a dot above the ear, erase it please XD --Leafstrike-- 18:14, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:18, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 02:57, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 05:36, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather (Alt. MCA)~ Approved

Jayfeather.mca.altComments? -ſceheartBlah blah 03:28, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! It doesn't look like he has a pupil, though, and the image needs to be named 'Jayfeather.mca.alt' Leggo 🏈 03:31, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights, lighten the ear-pink, give him a pupil, and add shading to the herbs. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:35, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Its sad i forgot the pupil XD. -ſceheartBlah blah 05:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:39, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:53, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the fore arms, blur the shading, darken the belly shading, blur the ear pink and darken it--Nightshine 07:02, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:58, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading/highlight transition. Looks good =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:19, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 01:28, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a tad. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:29, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken him a bit, as this looks dark gray. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 09:57, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is good. ^U^ Lighten shading a bit. Sakura-chan 15:30, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 16:42, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the legs --Leafstrike-- 16:55, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

There is shading on the legs, and if i add anymore than it will be inpossible to blur. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:18, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the chest area near the forearm and darken the shading on the far hind leg--Nightshine 16:38, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 23:46, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Darken the tail hi-lite. Mistfire Epic Fail 02:45, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Going away for the weekend, see you sunday/monday! -ſceheartBlah blah 17:14, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a touch more purplish. Mistfire Epic Fail 00:33, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is fine the way it is. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:35, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree that the ear pink looks pretty good. However, the shading looks like a gradient to me . . . ? Ehhh, maybe it's just me, but I think it looks funny. I guess I can understand that you probably wouldn't want to redo it and it still looks really good, but it needs to be blurred, too. Mossy go away. 05:16, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mossy is right, the shading does look like a gradient. maybe move the haunch highlight to the middle of the haunch. Mistfire Epic Fail 04:41, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thanks dovesong. If i move the highligh any more into the center it wouldnt make sense with the light source. -ſceheartBlah blah 06:01, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Can you get rid of the clump of black pixels on the back foot? Darken the neck shading and lower chest shading --Nightshine 18:05, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:36, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

There is still a clump of black pixels on the back foot. Desaturate the ear pink and blur it Nightshine 00:09, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- i fixed the ear pink, but i still cant see the pixels. Do you want to fix it nightshine? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:24, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-name this 'Jayfeather.mca.alt' Leggo 🏈 02:28, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know. Look at the images page and its been requested. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:31, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Just for clarification, the clump of black pixels is here: File:Jayfeatherblackpixels.png and I got rid of them for you. --Nightshine 02:56, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

That's actually part of the apprentice pixel =P I always thought it was weird... --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:00, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks a bunch Nightshine. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:26, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 05:34, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 00:50, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Macgyver (W) - Approved

Macgyver.warriorWhich one is better? I used different smudging methods--Nightshine 21:03, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

The right one.But they both look too gray instead of white. Mistfire Epic Fail 21:08, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

The right one, and last time I checked, Magyver was a tom. Leggo 🏈 21:16, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, my mistake. I've fixed it. I'll keep the right one. Nightshine 21:25, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make it like his kittypet image. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:29, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean?--Nightshine 21:48, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think she means, make the spots and patches more like his kittypet charart so that they match. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 22:10, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred the patches some more and made the white area a bit lighter--Nightshine 00:20, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white much brighter and make the patches more like his kittypet version. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:05, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I redid him--Nightshine 20:45, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Bravo, Nightshine! Blur the ear pink a tad. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:47, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks much better, Nightshine. The ear pink is a bit like an oval at the bottom, blur it a teensy bit. Lone Wolf 20:53, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred ear pink--Nightshine 21:01, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white match the kittypet image. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:12, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can you explain?--Nightshine 21:40, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

its to silver right now, maybe brighten it a bit. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:51, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't this the she-cat blank? Macgyver was a tom, the last time I checked. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin 02:08, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed blank. Iceheart, it looks fine on my screen, maybe it's your computer that's making it look darker?--Nightshine 00:10, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks silver to me, too. --Spottedleaf!¡ɟɐǝןpǝʇʇodS 01:30, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps you could brighten the highlights a tad, but I think it's just the shading that looks silver. Or at least, it's that way for me. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:17, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Try brightening the shading, not so dark and maybe it won't look to silver for those who say it is.MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 16:13, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

There aren't any highlights on this, the shading just makes the white areas look darker, but the rest of it is still white.--Nightshine 18:54, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the white areas, then. The shading looks fine to me, Mintstarr. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:57, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded brightened white areas--Nightshine 16:40, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

That black box on the bottom of the hindleg, is that part of the black or a blur mistake? And back there I was recomending that because some people were saying it looked to silver when it really didn't.MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 00:49, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Black box?--Nightshine 00:53, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

See on the hindleg where the black from the paw and the haunch would meet? And that little dot? Is that blurred lineart or is that part of the color?MINTSTARR Don't startle that Witch! 01:18, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

That's just part of the line art--Nightshine 01:20, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail a bit more. 69.209.55.152 15:10, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me, I got logged out. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:48, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred tail shading--Nightshine 01:13, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. Mistfire Epic Fail 00:40, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. (Wildheart who is too lazy to log in)

Hm, well if someone else thinks I should make it more triangular then I will -- Nightshine

I know it's not my place to say this, as I am neither a lead nor even a warrior, but since none of the leads are active (save for you, Nightshine) I feel I must. Does anyone else think this should be approved? Nobody has even commented on this for a while, and I'm thinking it's because it's good enough and there's nothing to say. Forgive me if I'm out of line, but I just thought I should say something. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:11, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'll talk to Frostheart on the IRC to see if she can put this on CBA. --Nightshine 00:50, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yay. I can finally edit. XD CBA?ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:54, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe it's just me being finicky, but blur the shading on his chest and behind his ear. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 02:29, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred shading--Nightshine 02:47, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great. I see nothing wrong. Good job. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:26, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches on the back and the tail. Crystalstar999 10:34, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

If I blur them more then it will look all messed up. And no one else has asked me to do that Nightshine 01:58, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Don't blur. It's fine without it. As far as I can see, there's nothing wrong with how he is now. Cloudskye The Dark Forest Is Rising 20:02, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

I spoke to Frostheart on the IRC and she said it would be fine to put this as CBA, so CBA?--Nightshine 06:18, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 06:29, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Elder) ~Approved

Brokenstar.elderOkay... Major fail on the tail and hind leg. Comments? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 01:25, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Umm...I thought the heading was supposed to be Brokenstar(Elder) ~ For Approval... Mistystar Trust the fire within... 01:27, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the toe of the hind leg a bit rounder 01:29, March 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Darken the whole image, brighten the earpink a little, tiny bit, and round out the hind paw a tad. ^^ Leggo 🏈 01:36, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 02:03, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to be darkened some more. Leggo 🏈 02:17, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, make his eyes be all scractched out since he was an elder after that happened, make his tail less spiky, get rid of the cuts in his ears, and darken the shading--Nightshine 02:41, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Use Longtail's elder charart for a reference for the scratched eyes. --Gοldenpelt 02:55, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and redone. It was starting to look kinda yellowish since I was using the burn tool to darken him. Got rid of his torn ears and added scars to his eyes. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:24, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better! I think the eye's missing a little lineart on the bottom. [Either that, or I'm going blind. :P] Leggo 🏈 03:54, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Give the face a brighter highlight. Mistfire 1000 Edits! 19:44, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 19:54, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make his eyes look all scratched up. Darken the stripes, make the tail not to spiky, make his back foot smaller--Nightshine 23:17, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

When you say, less spiky, you mean have it look more like the tail in his warrior and deputy charart? And to make the eyes look scratched up, you mean to just add more scars or to smudge the lineart a tad with the scar color? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 05:42, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Remember he can't see, so I think Nightshine means make his eyes look like they can't see or like they have scars through them. Something like that. Make the tail's tufts look more like they are natural, rather than like they have large clumps of fur sticking up everywhere =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:15, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Why not try gently blurring the color inside the eyes? That may make it seem like he can't see. That's what it looks like they do for Jayfeather's eyes on the cover of Eclipse. Cloudskye The Dark Forest Is Rising 02:19, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:11, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

This is wonderful. Great job, Scarletwind! Perhaps blur the shading/highlights on the bottom of the haunch a tiny bit. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:11, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Wildheart! :) ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 01:23, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and darken the shading under the chin--Nightshine 02:50, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 02:36, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the chest shading--Nightshine 17:59, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:09, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?-Nightshine 23:05, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a touch smaller. Mistfire 1000 Edits! 16:11, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 19:57, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours-Nightshine 20:47, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 23:14, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Mosspelt (Alt. Q) - Approved

Mosspelt.queen.alt Comments? ❄Blizzardfur❄AlbinoBeauty❄ 18:20, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Excellent work! =) Blur the shading on the back, blur the ear pink a bit more and extend it higher to the tip of the ear, and make her a bit more golden-brown; refer to Brackenfur, for example, if you need help. She looks somewhere between cream and orange right now. --Midnite Talk 20:04, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ❄Blizzardfur❄AlbinoBeauty❄ 21:19, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. oblivionAudience? 21:26, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think it looks any better :/. ❄Blizzardfur❄AlbinoBeauty❄ 21:38, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back a lot and make the highlights a little brighter, mostly on the face. ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ 21:43, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink so it isn't such a bright colour. oblivionAudience? 21:54, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ❄Blizzardfur❄AlbinoBeauty❄ 22:14, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:18, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. Darken the shading a bit and blur it. --Nightshine 00:20, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I had to redo the shading and highlights ❄Blizzardfur❄AlbinoBeauty❄ 00:45, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, and maybe make it a little less fushia. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:27, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the back and belly look like stripes. Lighten and blur well. Starlingflight Take Flight into the Sky! 09:20, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded There! It looks WAY better! ❄Blizzardfur❄AlbinoBeauty❄ 18:19, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back and on the tail. :) Also, blur the shading on the front paw. -Midnite Talk 20:36, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded :D BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare! 22:34, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and change the eye colour; it's a little too aqua to be normal. llwildheartl 05:21, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot and darken the ear pink. --Nightshine 07:05, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare! 17:34, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish. I don't see a light source in this; thicken the shading.--Nightshine 04:25, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better now? BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare! 17:14, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Mosspeltredline I think you are trying to make the light source come from the left. Darken the shading in the areas I marked with red. Make the ear pink look similar to that colour.--Nightshine 21:09, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Night shine, can you give me the hex code for the earpink colour? I'm having a hard time trying to find something similar. BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare! 17:09, December 6, 2010 (UTC)<-- Never mind that. BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare! 17:21, December 6, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded :)? BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare! 17:20, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more around the neck and belly. Blur thee ear pink a bit more--Nightshine 00:18, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur everything overall, it might be just me, but everything looks quote blotchy. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:21, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind, it was just my brain tricking me. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:30, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare! 18:42, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy to me. Perhaps darkening it could fix it. Moonflight 22:45, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the shading and highlights. It was blotchy because I edited it a lot :/ BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare! 23:34, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot. Center the ear pink. --Nightshine 02:27, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I carefully smudged the different blues in the eyes together for effect. This is NEVER gonna be approved .-. BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare! 03:18, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose color a darker shade of gold. And Blizzardfur, be patient, some chararts take way longer--two months to be approved. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:07, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot in the areas I designated in the redline above --Nightshine 05:16, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded This has better work... BlizzardfurWhiteCatsRuleLeaf-bare! 16:15, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, mostly on the shoulder. Rainwhisper 20:21, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 21:36, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

It stills needs to be blurred a lot more. Rainwhisper 23:48, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I would darken the shading first. Then blur it, like Rainwhisper said. Moonflight 00:51, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink lighter, it looks sorta burnt orange right now; the colour Nightshine originally gave you was good. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:15, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was blurring for half an hour -.- (I HATE the blur tool). My head is telling me to withdraw this... ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 01:56, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The back shading is slightly inconsistent. Make it more smooth. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened it then did it again. Maybe I won't withdraw this after all! ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 18:16, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and make it much smoother. oblivionAudience? 20:40, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded O_o... ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 21:20, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, it looks the same. Be right back while I fix this. ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 21:21, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind. It's fine. ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 21:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur everything thoroughly. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:55, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did you want me to blur the lineart too? Just kidding ;) ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 18:16, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the shading and darken the haunch highlight some--Nightshine 22:59, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woooooooo, that REALLY helped... Blur tool makes things worse in my opinion. ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 23:27, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

You should probably smudge it--Nightshine 23:38, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 00:17, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken to haunch highlight and make it not touch the line-art. ޓSun spiritޓSanta Paws is coming to town! 08:57, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Does that look better? ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 18:34, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading more still and make it look more circular, not following the lines of her back, belly, and legs. oblivionAudience? 20:27, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 20:55, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and add one to the shoulder. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:12, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow, what an epic fail xD ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 15:36, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight and shading, darken the highlights, darken the neck shading.--Nightshine 07:31, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 15:50, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, it looks sorta blotchy. MistfireOwl City! 21:54, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 18:15, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is still really blotchy and is a little dark on her back. Add more shading on her tail too. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:12, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20 days since I have been working on this 0_0 ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 02:52, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the highlights if you cannot blur them anymore. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:01, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 19:39, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Move the belly highlight up, blur the shading throughly, make the ear pink smaller--Nightshine 17:36, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded In the file history, the latest uploader of the image is MarigoldPetalmarble. Sorry about that, that's my Toontown Wikia username (I forgot to log off of it and sign in to Moonleaf:)!) ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 18:16, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Move the belly highlight up, blur all the shading a lot--Nightshine 18:19, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm feeling that I have to give up and withdraw this. But it's not confirmed yet. ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 21:07, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the large highlight on her side and maybe dull it a tad so it doesn't stand out so much. Don't give up yet, you're nearly there! ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 23:12, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her belly and chest and also get rid of the shading on the tip of her tail. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 03:20, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 21:21, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Night shine, I was on vacation for a week and came back home pretty late. I'm gonna work on it right now. ♪Marigold♪ 18:01, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Crap, I'm on MarigoldPetalmarble. It's just me, Moonleaf. I'll go on Moonleaf:) ♪Marigold♪ 18:02, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 18:22, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on her belly. Moonflight 00:28, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any much of a difference? ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 17:31, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

I think so. Maybe darken the belly shading a bit. That might make it look better. Moonflight 02:43, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm gonna change my siggy, be right back ;) ♥Moonleaf☽Luvs Leaf-bare!♥ 01:51, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

The stomach shading looks really blotchy. Perhaps you should blur it a tad more. :) --Midnite Talk 14:32, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have to do research now for school for a report... ._. --Leafstrike-- 20:59, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the belly shading and blur it--Nightshine 00:31, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 02:30, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the belly and haunch highlight, and blur the ear pink. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:28, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the belly shading and blur it a lot--Nightshine 19:49, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded When you mean by "thicken the belly shading", do you mean by making it bigger or making it darker, Nightshine? --Leafstrike-- 20:56, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

The belly shading needs to be lightened and blurred- you might even have to re-do it. Blur the tail shading also. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:08, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I gotta admit, it looks better redone. --Leafstrike-- 01:57, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Darken the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:23, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 17:49, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Just darken the shading a tad more and blur it. Looks great, though! Leggo 🏈 18:48, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 19:21, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, darken it, and blur it. Move the ear pink up and lighten it a bit. --Nightshine 01:47, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 01:54, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

The belly-shading is kinda in a square-shape. Try your best to round/smooth it out. Oh, and blur the shading. Leggo 🏈 02:10, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to fix the belly highlight but it looked messy so I was like "Forget it" --Leafstrike-- 18:12, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, add shading to the back and face, --Nightshine 04:18, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 18:38, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Where's your light source coming from? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:54, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

I have no idea, really O_o --Leafstrike-- 20:23, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

You should find one. Whether it is from the front, side, or back. It needs to make sense. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:14, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

I tweaked it a little so Reuploaded. And I'm assuming it's from the left side. --Leafstrike-- 02:36, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

If your light is coming from the left, then you should probably change the highlights/shading a bit. Look at that picture with the red shading that Nightshine put up when Blizzardfur was still doing it. It will help a lot. =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:06, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Um... Wildheart... Blizzardfur was ME --Leafstrike-- 18:43, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Neck shading = UBER FAIL! --Leafstrike-- 23:19, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

LOL. **facepalm** I just saw the siggie change and assumed... ahahahah sorry Moonleaf. But yeah still use that pic. It will heeeelpp =D haha --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:04, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin 19:15, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:37, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading--nightshine 02:13, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 01:04, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all shading. Do you use GIMP? If so, your blur tool should be at 100% and it should be really strong... Mistfire Epic Fail 05:16, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'm using Pixlr (stupid Parental Controls won't let me download GIMP >:o). --Leafstrike-- 00:43, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like me to help you in blurring your shading? 'Cause I have GIMP, and it'd be no trouble at all :) Mistfire Epic Fail 17:47, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred the shading. But you can still blur for me, I appreciate :). Now to upload it --Leafstrike-- 18:25, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

NOW it's actually Reuploaded. --Leafstrike-- 18:27, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights/shading and use that picture Nightshine put up! Your shading and highlights are in some strange places right now. Brighten the face highlight as well. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:26, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just got the free trial of Photoshop :) --Leafstrike-- 18:10, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:12, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Less shading under her head. -

UNI 01:06, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:23, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yes, I'm still here. --Leafstrike-- 22:41, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading--Nightshine 01:07, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate this charart >:( -pang of envy- --Leafstrike-- 03:24, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Aw! Don't worry, Moonleaf! It'll get approved! You just need to keep working on it! Be persistant. (who are you envious of?) Blur the belly shading and darken the ear that's facing away from us. Brighten the earpink a bit, too. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:07, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded When I'm crabby, I use words like that D: --Leafstrike-- 04:29, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading--Nightshine 16:52, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gotta love the blur tool. You'll die without it. What now? --Leafstrike--

Blur the shading, and try to get all the shading the same tone. There's darker-colored spots in the shading here and there. Leggo 🏈 00:53, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

But if I do, then it will become blotchy. --Leafstrike-- 02:12, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and blur it. Especially on the tummy, back, and the front leg that is closest to us. Mistfire Epic Fail 03:45, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 15:30, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I am going to re-do this. This time, without ANY SHADING :D --Leafstrike-- 00:47, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded No shading :O --Leafstrike-- 00:53, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better, but give her just a TEENY bit shading. Mistfire 1000 Edits!

Reuploaded You can barely see it --Leafstrike-- 18:42, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Here, I have a way you can add shading easily. Colour pick the pelt colour then use a dark shade of that. Use the spray tool to spray shading onto the charart--Nightshine 02:29, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

The spray tool...? Should I use MS Paint then? --Leafstrike-- 20:52, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

No use GIMP--Nightshine 00:01, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

GIMP doesn't work for me, I use Pixlr. --Leafstrike-- 18:51, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then use Pixlr to add shading. You can easily download GIMP though --Nightshine 23:29, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I have, but it freezes on the start-up when it's looking for fonts --Leafstrike-- 02:01, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just used the wand tool and a faint brush tool to add shading. --Leafstrike-- 02:05, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and brighten the earpink. I think there's something wrong with the lineart on the chest... --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:38, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nothing wrong with the chest. --Leafstrike-- 16:16, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit, it's kind of hard to see. RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 20:26, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm getting impatient now. Where's my CBA? D: --Leafstrike-- 00:07, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Just be patient. Darken/add shading--Nightshine 03:00, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Change the colour of this; it should be more golden-browny, not pale ginger. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 08:29, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is epic. --Moonleaf 18:15, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink, add shading to the back and darken it some. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:04, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the chest and on the neck. RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 22:08, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded twice. --Moonleaf 23:42, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink some more. Shading looks good =) Add some specks of lighter colour to her eyes so they don't look just like flat blue --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:28, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! :) Rainey 11:47, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) --Moonleaf 18:35, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is almost ready, just darken the belly and haunch shading--Nightshine 23:12, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tad bigger and more noticeable. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 15:56, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Moonleaf 16:51, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:44, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 23:14, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Goldenflower (Alt. A) - For Approved

File:Goldenflower.alt.apprentice.pngIn Bluestar's Prophecy, page 181, she was mentioned as a tabby. Comments? RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 14:47, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

It's true that she was described as a tabby, but since we don't know the color they were referring to, we can't make an accurate charart. This will be declined. Sorry. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 17:30, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I read the page, it said, "ginger tabby". So should I change it on her page (Trivia) as ginger tabby? RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 20:32, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Change it, this is fine. I just looked in my own copy as a double check and it indeed says "ginger tabby". Nice find. :P As for the image, I'd say darken the ear pink so it's more visible, it's a tad difficult to see right now.--Quiet!... 21:15, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and thicken the shading--Nightshine 23:17, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the stripes. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:45, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make it more ginger :D Mistystar Trust the fire within... 00:03, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

K, sorry, I forgot to make her ginger! XD I'll fix it. RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 14:11, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think this came out better than the last one. RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 14:43, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more and maybe make the stripes more brownish rather than orange. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:07, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 23:19, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading more, made the stripes brownish, and brightened the earpink. RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 23:57, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Looks great! Change the earpink so that it's more reddish. It's too dull right now. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:17, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Um, I don't want to be rude, but why do we need an alterate? She was never described as not being a tabby, and technicly all ginger cats are tabbies. ---Sunheart- 07:25, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well we consider cats described solely as "ginger" solid orange cats, rather than ginger cats with faint tabby stripes, as all real ginger cats are. Hence, the alternate. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:44, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the ear pink more reddish. RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 17:11, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Even more red, please XD It's still too dull. (Wildheart who is too lazy to log in )

Darken the tail stripes--Nightshine 02:51, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm adding to my first comment; here's an example of what your earpink should look like --> File:Earpink.png Or something close to that colour. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:21, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the ear pink like the color above and darkened the tail stripes. RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 20:37, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is great!! Make the earpink a little more mauve-y. Mistfire 1000 Edits! 17:06, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! I made it more mauve-y. RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 19:49, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add one more stripe to the forehead and darken the ear pink a little bit--Nightshine 23:05, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added one more stripe to the forehead and darkend the eark pink. RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 00:20, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 06:28, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

None; Approved  Darkhallows...Mew? 21:35, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes.Alt.(R)- Approved

Stripes Alt. Rouge.

Stripes Alt RogueHe was mentioned as black in Outcast a couple times. Comments?

Feathermoon 14:30, March 11, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Moved to the correct section. Cloudskye The Dark Forest Is Rising 15:13, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it a bit smaller, darken the shading and blur it. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 21:20, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- My, it just looks worse! I darkened it, but the shading wont blurr anymore. I know its blotchy, but unless I lighten the the shading , (witch I shouldnt) I should just re-do this on GIMP. Gimp is better anyways. Feathermoon 00:15, March 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Use the smudge tool on the shading, you have more control over it. Make the ear pink a little smaller and make the haunch highlight bigger. Darken the tail shading--Nightshine 23:04, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

The cat was really annoying me so I re-did it completly on GIMP instead of pixlr. Reuploaded. Feathermoon 02:48, March 13, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Darken the highlights a little. Mistfire 1000 Edits! 16:31, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Feathermoon 19:15, March 13, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Please rename this Stripes.rogue.alt.png. Darken the whole thing, it looks gray right now. Blur the back shading and darken the shading on the limbs--Nightshine 20:46, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Feathermoon 13:45, March 14, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

You spelled rogue wrong in the file name =P --Moonleaf 18:43, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the file name. Feathermoon 23:22, March 14, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Blur the ear pink a tad.  Darkhallows...Mew? 21:43, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Pink ear fixed. Comments? Feathermoon 22:13, March 15, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Blur the haunch highlight and the ear pink more. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:28, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

I saw it comming. I knew someone was going to ask for me to darken the nose, since its a black cat. So i did. I really love the gimp blurring tool. It blurrs way better than pixlr! Oh, Re-uploaded- Comments? Feathermoon 02:14, March 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Add/lighten the ear pink Nightshine 00:46, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- comments? Feathermoon 20:18, March 18, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Comments before approval?--Nightshine 23:01, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Black cats usually have gray noses. Can that be fixed before this is approved? Lone Wolf 01:14, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I darkened the nose. Gray would make the nose lineart a little unvisible to I darkened the pink a bunch. Reuploaded. Feathermoon 04:48, March 19, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Reapeating CBA.  Darkhallows...Mew? 04:52, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Approved.  Darkhallows...Mew? 08:00, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

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