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Brokenstar (Alt. Elder) - Approved

Brokenstar.elder.alt Brokenstar was mentioned as black in BotC and at that point in time he was an elder, so I figured it would be fine to make this. I need some help with the broken tail. I was just gonna copy it from his elder image, but that turned out to be harder than I thought it would be.... Anyways, comments? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:50, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, I managed to copy the broken tail. XD ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:07, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh. Me likey! Maybe redden the earpink a bit and blur it. Perhaps darken the image, as right now it looks more dark gray than black. And change the shading on the tail; if your light source is from the front (which it appears to be) then the shading should be the opposite of what it is right now. And maybe smudge the eye lineart a tad just so it looks more like he's blind. wildheart spring rain ♫ 08:12, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I darkened the image, fixed the tail shading, and made it look like he's blind. :) ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:26, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Blur the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:35, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I blurred them as much as they can be blurred now. :) ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:49, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the haunch a tad, add/darken the shading under the forelegs, brighten the ear-pink a tad and center it. ScarletwindStep into theLight 00:49, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'm not sure that helped much, but I did my best. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:56, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit.

Reuploaded - Personally, I kinda think this is getting TOO red, but that's just me... XD ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:50, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and darken the tail shading. Nightshine 05:24, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Centered the earpink best I could and darkened the tail shading. I also desaturated the scar on his eyes cause it was really buggin me. XD ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:45, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments? Sorry I'm a bit impatient. XD ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:19, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading a bit. Nightshine 03:50, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:16, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the tail shading and darkened the neck shading. Edit - The changes aren't showing for some reason. They might later though. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:03, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

I see the changes. Darken the tail shading a bit? wildheart spring rain ♫ 06:44, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened the tail shading. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 21:59, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The earpink could be reddened a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:19, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading by the base of the tail, by the belly, and on his right forelegs. ScarletwindStep into theLight 20:58, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

The eye looks blurred to me, but that could just be me. Otherwise it looks pretty darn good :) Iveh Yo! 00:08, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I lightened the shading said places and reddened the earpink. That's as red as I'm going, if I do it more it'll look like his ear's bleeding. XD And yes, his eye's blurred. I was told to do that. He was blind when he was an elder and it helps make him look like he was. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:58, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 00:37, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be picky, but there looks like there's a patch of a shading by the base of the tail that's darker than the rest. Can you blur it out a bit more? ScarletwindStep into theLight 22:47, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I did my best to fix the shading there, but it's blurred as much as it can be and it seems to be the same tone according to gimp, so.... *shrugs* ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 23:33, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste outside the front paw. I like this =D wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:01, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :) And there's nothing outside the front paw.... 0.o I make sure of that before I reupload, and I don't see any... ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 01:19, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's a faint outline on the front paw that's closest to us. Maybe try re-uploading the pic again. Perhaps the changes aren't showing...? wildheart spring rain ♫ 03:01, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I didn't see anything before and I still don't see anything, but I reuploaded it.... ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 03:40, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. Nightshine 05:53, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think the scars should be more spread apart; they almost look like one big pink face stripe. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:48, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

The 24 hours were over when Nightflower commented. This should be approved. wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:50, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

So is this approved or do I have to do what Nightflower said...? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 21:32, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with the scar, and it was been 24 hours, I think it should be approved and go on his page. It's not for me to decide though xD [Ivystripe not signed in] 209.34.114.210 14:21, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to go ahead and approve this. --Nightshine 05:48, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ice (K) ~ Approved

File:Ice.kit.png☸ferndapple☸nothing else i can say 19:13, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. Make the earpink more pinkish. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    19:33, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the shading. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:02, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
I agree about the shading, it just needs defined a bit. Ivystripe 20:32, April 4, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Make the ear pink smaller so that it doesn't cover the whole ear. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:59, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a tad bit.Ice Cave 22:16, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ferndapple told me she doesn't have enough time to work on this anymore, so someone can take over now. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:28, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken shading and brighten highlights. Mistfire Spring rain falls 15:39, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, gray cats don't normally have pink noses. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 00:36, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

No point in posting comments if there is nobody working on it. Who is going to take over? --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 01:32, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Whoever can take it over, I guess. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 03:46, April 11, 2011 (UTC)'

I will! 207.62.246.62 21:45, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, not logged in XD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:47, April 11, 2011 (UTC)


Re-Uploaded. Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:04, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make his nose more gray-pink, look at Feathertail and Crowfeather's kit images, they are pink, but a darker color of pink, his is too bright. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 23:31, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Anything else? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:35, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 01:56, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Umm...I was recently told to darken it, so...I'll try to make it in-between-ish... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:48, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Anything else? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:23, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and either lighten the areas where there isn't shading or darken the shading. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 23:03, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Ta-da! :P Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:11, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Look's good! Blur the highlights. MINTSTARR You can stand under my Umbrella! 20:37, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Re-Uploaded. Anything else? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:44, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redden/brighten the earpink. Whatever works to make it stand out more. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:33, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think it stands out enough, but thats my opinion... (not logged in)

It doesn't need to be changed a lot, just a tad. Redden it a little or brighten it a little. wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:09, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Anything else? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:23, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! I would still say it needs to be reddened, and the shading and highlights seem a little blochy so you can either define them more by adding more to it, or you can blur it so the viewers won't see the little blotches. Nice job though, it is truly great. Atelda 23:01, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, it doesn't look very blotchy to me, but, Re-Uploaded - reddened ear pink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:36, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink lighter and redder Nightshine 05:37, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:09, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

re-Uploaded. I think its ready now... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:02, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more consistent. The paws shading is darker than the rest of the shading. Lighten the earpink a little too. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:31, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Also, you might want to make the shading a bit more noticiable, just a little bit, and then make sure the earpink almost fills the ear, very nice! Atelda 03:42, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Woot! :P Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:16, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm...no comments for two days. I wonder if its ready for CBA...? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:51, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and brighten the earpink. Everybody always forgets about the middle images =P wildheart spring rain ♫ 00:56, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Ikr? Its always top, bottom. No comments on the middle whatsoever XP. Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 02:10, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well? Sorry for the impatience, but I don't see anything needing to be fixed. XD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:37, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looks like tha whole thing needs to be lightened or just do more hightlights Sandstormrocks32 23:07, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

No, its supposed to be that dark. Previously , I was repeatedly told to darken it and I'm not going ot change it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:09, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad smaller and brighten it some. Thin out the neck shading and blur it a bit. This is nice =) wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:27, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:43, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading Nightshine 00:52, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 03:00, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:02, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Be patient and wait a few days until asking for comments again. Comments before approval? Nightshine 06:01, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Sandstormrocks32 16:20, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks like it's coming out of the ears from the bottom... Maybe move it up a bit? XD Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:11, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:46, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Technically you didn't have to change it. It was already approved when Rainy commented on it. }wildheart~ 02:01, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh! Oops...then, shouldn't it be archived? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:51, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh.. sorry about that I didn't look at the date when it was on CBA. xD We'll just have to wait for a lead to archive it. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:31, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Approving --Nightshine 05:51, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Swoop (CG)~ Approved

Swoop.cgBefore everyone says change the ear pink, it's the same as the queen image and staying that way. Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:33, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, make the paws ginger and the tail tip ginger. Smudge the mud streaks so they are a little uneven. Darken the shading. Nightshine 02:42, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the streaks thicker and make less of them. They kinda make her look like a tabby... ScarletwindStep into theLight 03:14, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaed- Sorry Scarletwind, i didnt see your comment until after i re-uploaed it. I kinda did it anyway though. Anyways i redid the stripes. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:30, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

The mud streaks kind of look ordered and arranged. Try making it more spontaneous in random places. Make the earpink more noticeable and darken shading on the right side, unless it's coming from there..XD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:11, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- the light is ont the right and i already said about the ear pink. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:59, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink a bit more and darken the shading by the jaw. ScarletwindStep into theLight 22:20, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 21:59, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the mud streaks a bit Nightshine 01:03, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 01:31, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpen the mud streaks and darken the ear pink. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:31, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more mauve. Mistfire Spring rain falls 15:49, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I defined the mud, but i already said about the earpink. Stop asking please. Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:19, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mud streaks more. Nightshine 00:27, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like she's tabby..I think you should make the mud darker. --Spottedleaf!¡ɟɐǝןpǝʇʇodS 05:38, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:00, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely. I see nothing wrong. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:38, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think the mud streaks can be sharpened a bit. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 03:12, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:08, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 22:45, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner and define the ear pink. --princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    20:11, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's mud, not stripes. The earpink looks fine to me. wildheart spring rain ♫ 00:43, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

When looking at it, it looks like on the left paw there looks like there was a shading/ coloring mishap so perhaps make it darker to make it fit in more. Good job, i love the highlights, the earpink is fine, shading is beautifully done. Great job. Atelda 01:54, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

The two mud streaks farthest to the right kinda make a curve and look like two stripes. Try and straighten them out, or make it so there's only one of them over there. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:11, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mud streaks darker so they don't look as red and stripe-like Nightshine 05:37, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more reddish. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:01, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Sorry for the delayed upload, my computer was buggering up. -ſceheartBlah blah 16:44, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely. I see nothing wrong. wildheart spring rain ♫ 06:20, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

That is really good! The ear pink looks great Sandstormrocks32 23:11, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink stand out a tad bit more, otherwise, amazing work! Iveh Yo! 00:28, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

The streaks still don't look like streaks. Especially on the forearms, they looks like dark stripes. I suggest you redo the mud streaks so they aren't as stripe-like. Nightshine 00:51, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I copied the style from Night's. It either looks like that or looks like stripes. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:21, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely, I see nothing wrong. wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:36, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. Nightshine 06:09, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved. Nightshine 02:17, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Snake (K)~ Approved

File:Snake.kit.png

Yeah AT LAST A CHARART, eh Ive gotten better, but he can be better, and hes not taken I took him, I LOVE him why? I don't know^^, anyway, comments? Maplepool 22:17, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the sides of his face, thin out the shading on his right (our right) side, make the highlight bigger and add a highlight to his face. Make the earpink bigger too. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:37, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- fixed shading added more highlights, slimed the shading on his right(our right) ear pink enlarged....hmm its not showing the changes dont comment till I say you can. Maplepool 02:43, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

O you can comment now Maplepool 02:45, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the chest highlight, it looks like he has a pale grey chest. --Leafstrike-- 20:07, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight. Rainey 22:34, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- fixed the chest, blured the highlightes, comments? Maplepool 23:05, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular and blur it. Lighten the shading on the inside of the right (our right) leg --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:39, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

There fixed and reuploaded, comments? Maplepool 01:48, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make it fit into the ears themselves; right now it looks like it's falling out. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 02:11, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

There Fixed, I think..... ANWAY, comments? Maplepool 15:32, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the earpink and blur the shading. (Mintstarr)98.22.156.110 18:03, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

AT LAST I fixed the earpink AT FREAKING LAST!!!! Maplepool 22:40, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and blur the shading a lot --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:22, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 02:43, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

There fixed and reuploaded, comments? Maplepool 20:02, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the leg shading and enlarge the earpink some. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 04:30, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken shading under the chin Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

There, fixed and reuploaded, comments? Maplepool 20:50, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading under the chin, make the ear pink more noticeable. Nightshine 01:06, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Question, what do you mean, make it more noticeable, like make it a darker color? Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 02:50, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

I belive she meant to ublurr the front right leg highlights\shading, Blrr the top part of tail shading. And I belive theres a peice of lighter lineart near the foor kinda, and the areas circled in red need to be blurred: se the burn tool. Feathermoon 13:30, March 30, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Not everyone uses the burn tool for shading. But yeah, she means, make the shading darker/more noticable. Mossy go away. 22:24, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hey guys, Since T.A.K.S is coming up, I won't be on untill wendsay, so...I can't upload till then, then AFTER, seciece taks, I have to go to a wedding for my aunt, so untill in like May, COMMENT AS FERICE AS YOU CAN DON'T HOLD THE COMMENTS BACK!!! YOU WILL COMMENT WITH FERICE-NESS (thats a word right?) anyway imma upload then COMMENT Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 21:04, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ok comments? Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 21:07, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear-pink. And since there are a few spots to blurr, im going to give you a picture indication where. Green: Blurred lineart. Red: highlights\shading needs to be blurred. : File:Snake.K Guildlines.png Feathermoon 23:20, April 1, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Ok tried to fix it and reploadde Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 01:42, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think you forgot to fix the pink ear :3 Feathermoon 02:01, April 2, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

No I fixed it, It just looks more ... >.< Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 14:53, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink bigger and more centered. --Nightshine 17:56, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the ear pink is WAY too high up on his ears, and blur the belly shading and the shading on his . . . the place around his legs, but not on his legs. xD Mossy go away. 22:38, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed and reuploaded,comments? Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 21:45, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the leg shading.  Darkhallows...Mew? 03:01, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:31, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink on both ears the same size and color. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:52, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 15:19, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok,I'm about to fix it, any other comments? Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 12:49, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangulish, it's just right now a dot. SplookMavinotp♥ 21:07, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, fixed and reuploaded, hmm doesn't look like the changes are showing...comment when they do Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 20:09, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpink fit the ear so it doesn't look sloppy. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 01:54, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

I already blurred it as much as Plixr will let me. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 02:32, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

I can help with the blurring if you want. Also brighten the earpink. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:44, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please Wildheart, When I reupload it, you may blur it, thank you very much ^^ Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 20:54, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

There Fixed and reuploaded, comments, Wildheart, you may fix it now. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 21:01, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are a bit too bright.

Whoever posted /\ sign with four '~' when you post a comment, and i'll fix it right away.Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 02:59, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

There darkend highlights a tad, comments? Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 03:01, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hey! Sorry I forgot about this XD I'll blur it in a bit. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:26, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

You can download it here. It's free and I love it to death XD wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:15, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. And you can still use the pencil tool, just select the brush tool and then check off "Hard tip". --Leafstrike-- 21:12, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

For the light shading, perhaps you should make that part a little bigger, and then lighten the ear pink just a tad it seems to almost disappear. Looks amazing, keep working on it and I'm sure it'll be perfect :) (By the way, I love gimp but it takes just a small amount of time to figure out everything and you can still use Pixlr like Moonleaf said) Atelda 22:57, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

The light shading....you mean highlights? Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 15:00, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm....Not to proud of the way it looks now...Hey, Wildheart, can you PLEASE blur the shading now? Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 22:26, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry! I forgot, but I reuploaded it a couple seconds ago. It's done. By the way, I had to fix the earpink, because I accidentally messed it up when I was blurring and I didn't want to go back and redo all the blurring. You can redo the earpink if you don't like it. wildheart spring rain ♫ 06:37, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a little, it's hard to see.  Darkhallows...Enter the cave? 11:37, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed and reuploaded, comments?Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 21:09, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 05:51, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Woot!^^ my frist CBA, comment on ANYTIHNG...and I will fix it.Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 20:47, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is a little bit sloppy. Other then that it looks great :)Sandstormrocks32 23:03, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

It isn't sloppy. It just needs to be blurred some. MINTSTARR You can stand under my Umbrella! 20:02, April23, 2011 (UTC)

I am still working on this, i am banned from the comp, but i will work on it on monday! Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 01:51, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:26, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

It looks a little dark Sandstormrocks32 23:05, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

No, its not. It just looks like it is because the highlights are too light, Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:10, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly? I think it looks fine. I see nothing wrong, lovely job. wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:32, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

It looks a bit light, silver almost. Maybe darken the whole thing a bit? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 16:53, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

ok give me a few mins and i will fix it Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 22:28, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

There, fixed and reuploaded, comments?

Oops /\ was me. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 22:53, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. Nightshine 06:12, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved Nightshine 02:18, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lion's Roar (Ki) - Approved

Lion's Roar.kitComments? --Nightshine 20:04, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. MINTSTARR You can stand under my Umbrella! 21:04, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten and blur shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 21:24, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred shading. But I think the darkness of the shading is fine. Nightshine 21:46, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten shading on the tail. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:21, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened tail shading. Nightshine 01:27, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful. Perhaps thin out the belly shading. It kind of looks like his belly is cut into two. =P wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:18, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

GORGEOUS! Maybe just lighten the neck shading slightly. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:18, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is AMAZING! Nothing I wouldn't expect from you. You've always been great at character art.Cardinalfire My fluffy yellow cake! 18:37, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. This is awesome. I see nothing wrong with it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:34, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don't want to sound picky... but isn't he supposed to be identical to Lionblaze? (who's kit charart should really be on the agenda for tweak week, xD.)  Darkhallows...Enter the cave? 11:23, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, lighten the ear pink and nose, and the stripes are brown which really clashes with the yellow and looks gross. Make them darker golden. 70.64.149.241 00:51, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened neck shading a bit. Wait, did it say that he looked exactly like Lionblaze? I can't remember. I think it should be fine though since we didn't really make Jay's Wing match with Jayfeather. Oh and to the unregistered user, I don't really agree with any of those suggestions, sorry. Unless another user says otherwise I'm just going to keep it as is for now. Nightshine 00:56, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Are unregistered users even allowed to comment on chararts? I don't really agree with any of those suggestions either. The earpink looks a tiny bit round. Maybe point the top so it looks a bit more triangular? I know you can't really make it to point with kits, but I think it could be slightly more sharp right now. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:33, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know; maybe some unregistered users are just members of PCA that aren't signed in. But that's just me. Anyway; blur the shading and stripes; they sort of stand out against the fur. And to the anonymous user; the stripes look dark golden to me, so they fit fine. Koisplash 07:46, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay ^^. He's so pretteh! Darkhallows Enter the cave? 11:03, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, that 'unregistered user' was me. And I still stand by everything I say; the shading really needs blurring and yellow and brown clash. And there's way too much neck shading, it goes half way down his chest. Mossy go away. 17:36, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Mossy is right when she says there is too much neck shading. It does go down a little far. But it doesn't need to be blurred, and its a darker golden for the stripes. I agree that the neck shading is too big, so make it smaller, and it will be great! MINTSTARR You can stand under my Umbrella! 14:57, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. --princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    19:07, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made ear pink a little pointier, made neck shading shorter. The stripes look like a fine colour to me and if I make the shading lighter it will be hard to see. Nightshine 21:16, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

ITs awesome! just blur the earpink a bit, and I see nothing wrong with it :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:18, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out the belly shading some more. wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:24, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

I loved it and i like the way you made the tabby stripes Sandstormrocks32 17:55, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's pretty good but you can't really tell where the light is coming from. Wildfire 02:46, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

If you took a lot of time on this it showed! I think it's great but it agree with wildfire Sandstormrocks32 23:18, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred ear pink and thinned out belly shading. How should I change the shading then? The light is supposed to be coming from the left. Nightshine 00:39, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps thin out the shading a little bit? wildheart spring rain ♫ 03:03, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ooops, sorry I meant the NECK shading. wildheart spring rain ♫ 03:04, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

From the beggining and still now, I LOVE IT! sorry but i have just fallen in love with it Sandstormrocks32 03:31, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstormrocks32; please don't comment just to give out compliments. Nightshine: Blur the shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:35, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and blur it moreSandstormrocks32 23:54, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I think the ear pink is fine so I didn't change that. I blurred the shading where I could and also thinned out the neck shading. Nightshine 05:57, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail-tip a tad, maybe.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 05:15, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading seems a little dark - or is that how it's supposed to be? --Cloudskye The Wind Waker 19:04, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred tail shading. The shading is supposed to be that dark. It doesn't look too dark on my screen. Nightshine 22:51, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't look to dark to me either. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:40, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved--Nightshine 01:09, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Dark (to-be) ~ Approved

 File:Dark.tb2.pngDark Shadow on Water as a to-be. Comments? I'll name it Dark.alt.tobe (I think) when I edit it next o3o Done :3SplookMavinotp♥ 19:27, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights and blur the earpink. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 19:55, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Dark.tobe.png and you don't have to make a new file to make changes. --Leafstrike-- 19:58, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I made a mistake, rename this Dark.tb.png --Leafstrike-- 19:58, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and lighten it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:54, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see any shading. You only have to do the light parts since Dark is a black cat. If you want to do shading, make the black lighter. Iveh Yo! 00:46, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I took the color from Cora's charart (since she is a black cat) and used it. I now realize it's way easier to shade now. SplookMavinotp♥ 01:52, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bunch and extend it upwards a bit. Lighten and shrink the earpink. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 03:03, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Used Cora's earpink. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:27, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up more, it doesn't really . . . fit the ear and blur it. Darken the shading a lot. Mossy go away. 22:32, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Contrary to Mossy, I would say make the highlights brighter instead. It looks dark enough to me. :3 Nightskyy 02:01, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Really? I can hardly see it at all. If she brightens the highlights he might not look black. Mossy go away. 03:25, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree. Darken the shading. Also, I think there's osme blurred line-art in the ear. I'm not sure. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:29, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps erase a little bit of the bottem of the ear pink so that it looks more natural. Good charart! Atelda 03:57, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 02:45, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Either darken the shading or brighten the highlights. Looks epic Splook :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:36, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Cool, Splash! Darken shading and brighten highlights. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:40, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks :) SplookMavinotp♥ 17:01, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

define te shading a little more, i can hardly see it, but it still looks great! Atelda 03:25, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the ear pink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:53, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 02:02, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 01:15, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and blur the shading. This is very nice =) --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:52, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded. 'Thanks :) SplookMavinotp♥ 03:30, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on his back just a tad, and the ear pink looks like it has a little chip in it, that looks odd. Great work on the reddening the ear pink, and just amazing. :) Atelda 23:11, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Splashpelt isn't going to be working on this for a few weeks due to some obligations in real life. She will resume working on this in around two weeks, so don't decline this for lack of work. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:02, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, thanks for the notification :D Make the earpink more triangular, and blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:12, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the legs. Mistfire Spring rain falls 20:58, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I am back! Thanks for saying that Nighty :) Mkay, -resumes working- It will be up today! SplookMavinotp♥ 19:37, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:47, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little bit smaller. This is loverly XD wildheart spring rain ♫ 00:45, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Loverly? XD SplookMavinotp♥ 22:41, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and the highlights larger. Awesome Splash ^.^ ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 00:29, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yus. Loverly. This is LOVERLY, I see nothing wrong XD wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:39, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Loverly eh? XD SplookMavinotp♥ 19:37, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the paws, neck, belly, and bottom of tail. Nightshine 06:03, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:35, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Maybe lighten the shading a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:36, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading looks fine. Blur the earpink a little bit. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 13:57, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the delay =) SplookMavinotp♥ 21:12, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

This is love(r)ly, I see nothing wrong. }wildheart~ 05:14, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:35, May 11, 2011 (UTC)


Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:17, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Talon of Swooping Eagle (E) ~ Approved

File:Talon,elder.pngTalon as an elder, any suggestions? Atelda 22:54, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:03, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok sorry i wasn't thinking with my last post. Rename this Talon.elder.png and this needs to be a tabby that matches his other images. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:13, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

You also need to add a scar across his face. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:15, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh boy get ready. First of all he's a long fur. Darken the fur, add stripes, and make the ear pink a little tiny bit more pink.Honeybreeze 23:20, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thanks, one sec lemme reupload it. Atelda 23:28, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes should be darken that the pelt. Look at his other images to get a sense of the colours and the style of stripes. Darken the shading and smudge the stripes. Nightshine 00:43, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, is that good? Atelda 02:17, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

He still needs to be long-haired. Leggo 🏈 02:34, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Right, thanks! Atelda 03:15, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great. Smuddge/blur the scar a bit; it looks like someone drew it on. Mossy go away. 07:00, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ad some highlights, he looks all one color to me. (Mabe add some shading to) FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 17:39, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

The whiskers look blurred, it could just be me though Iveh Yo! 19:29, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

They DO look bIurred, So does the rest of the line-art... FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 00:20, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and fix the blurred lineart. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 01:36, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok so i fixed the blurred lineart, reddened the ear pink a little, and the stripes are noticable. Thank you for your suggestions, anything else? My first charart and i want to do it well. Atelda 02:43, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

You need to add shading and/or highlights. Desaturate the earpink and blur it. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 14:59, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart of some sort on his chest fur like right above his paws. It looks gray if you can see it.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 17:45, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
Is it just me, or is the whole bottom half of the lineart blurred? (except the paws) Make the BG transparent and darken the shading (if there is any), you can't really see it. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:24, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, and the bottom of the earpink needs to be blurred. Looks like you might have missed it. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:29, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know what it looks like on your computer but i know i never blurred it. hmmm? and oops thanks for reminding me Paleclaw! Atelda 22:45, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

De-saturate the stripes a bit and make them a bit browner (they look a bit reddish to me). Make them a bit thinner and add some so that the pattern matches his Cave-Guard one. ScarletwindStep into theLight 23:29, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Everything in this looks blurred. I suggest redoing it or trying your best to sharpen everything up. Also you could place a new line art over top to get rid of the blurred line art, I can help you if you need any. Nightshine 00:18, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please! Atelda 03:24, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think I found the problem with this. You're saving the charart with the file extension .jpg. This tends to make the final version of any image all pixel like which is why so much of this is blurred. You can try to save this by copying the file and re-saving it with a safe extension like .png, but more than likely you may have to start over from part one.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 17:17, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok so i've posted it with a safe extension but it's still seems blurry but i'm waiting to see if nightshine can help but that's probably going to be after her vacation, but thanks for the advice for next time.

Saving it as a jpg ruined the quality and it can't be fixed now. You have to redo it. Mossy go away. 03:39, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Why is this picture on his page, it hasn't been aproved yet.Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 22:58, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

It shouldn't be... if it is, remove it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:18, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

It is approved. Atelda 00:04, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

...no it's not. Are you going to redo it? wildheart spring rain ♫ 00:06, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, can't see without my glasses. Anyways, yes im going to redo it, but it may be one or two days before i reuploaded it. Atelda 00:25, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the scar. --Leafstrike-- 15:54, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Did you reupload this without saying reuploaded? Because this looks loads better and is quite beautiful now. =) Perhaps brighten the earpink. wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:22, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and fix the little white part in the lineart on the chest. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:15, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:43, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink, add highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:23, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok reuploaded it Atelda 21:23, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 98.22.156.92 21:24, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes. They don't exactly look like the ones on his cave guard image. Make the scar angle the same way it does on his cave guard image. Nightshine 05:29, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes and define the ear pink. --princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    14:54, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok so i reuploaded it, copied all the colors from the cave guard image and blurred/smudged the lines without doing so to the line art Atelda 03:15, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, but perhaps re-work the shading/highlights so they follow these guidelines, as they are kind of confusing right now. wildheart spring rain ♫ 02:55, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Atelda 03:24, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

What program are you using? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:39, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

I use mainly pixlr but sometimes gimp, it depends on what im doing, like the color i like to use pixlr but for some shading i like to use gimp. why? Atelda 16:41, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ahhhh alright. Cause something about the shading was off, but I'm not sure what was going on exactly.You use gimp for your shading? Do you use the burn/dodge tool, or layers with different opacities? cause if you're doing the Dodge/burn tool, it might be better to use layers in this specific case. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:36, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

I use the burn/dodge tool on gimp because truth is, i'm still learning with gimp and i dont know how to do layers. Could you possibly do it? Otherwise i'll redo it. Atelda 19:10, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sure I can! :) Though it's very simple to do layers, if I were better at explaining I'd show you how. I'll fix up the shading for you though. :) ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 12:06, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! Atelda 00:40, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the belly. wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:19, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried to fix the shading while changing as little as possible of the other things, but if you don't like it, I'd be perfectly fine with you reverting it back to your version. :) ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:44, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Don't like it, I LOVE IT! Thank you so much Paleclaw! The shading looks amazing! Atelda 20:57, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

No problem! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 21:49, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good! Define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:32, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the ear pink needs to be lightened a lot so we can see it, it looks like he has none. Other than that I really like this! Iveh Yo! 00:17, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ok so I defined the earpink and made it loads lighter. Atelda 22:20, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. Nightshine 00:44, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Atelda 01:17, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Try making the scar more bright pinkish other than that it's really good!Sandstormrocks32 03:23, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ I hope it really did upload, my computer is havin difficulties Atelda 17:34, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

This looks beautiful XD Make the ear pink a tad more 'triangular'ish. SplookMavinotp♥ 22:44, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ ok Atelda 16:23, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Talon.elder.png. Make the ear pink smaller. Darken the shading on the neck and back. Nightshine 06:01, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --> Talon.elderOk, so I made the earpink smaler and darkened the shading. Comments? Atelda 21:49, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a few days... Atelda 15:30, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely, I see nothing wrong. }wildheart~ 05:20, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

The eye seems really bright to me. Other than that, it's great. MINTSTARR Want to eat orange ice cream? 21:30, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED ~ Ok, thanks! Atelda 03:46, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Its really good! Do you think you could blur the scar a bit? It looks more blurred on his caveguard charart. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:04, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED ~ Blurred. Atelda 23:09, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:23, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

None. Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:32, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (Alt. SC)~Approved

File:Whispering Breeze.alt.sc.pngI really like this one! :) Comments? ScarletwindStep into theLight 01:51, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this is amazing! :) The ear pink looks a little unnatural because there's too much contrast between the area of high concentration and low concentration. Try blurring it a tad more. You also might want to darken the shading or brighten the highlights. Nightskyy 01:55, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. And try filling in a little more of the ear if possible. I would possible also blur the stripes all together because at times it seems defined as two layers. The dots on the side of the head could also be blurred so it blends better with the shade of the head. Nice job! Atelda 02:00, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done. The two-toned stripe pattern was getting on my nerves, so I did it over. Comments? ScarletwindStep into theLight 02:58, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Still very nice. Blur the stripes on the face and the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:01, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 03:11, April 8, 2011 (UTC)I hate to say this but, with Broken Shadow she was described as tabby and it was added to her appearance instead of her getting an alt. I don't think we need this. Her image just needs to be tweaked. Mossy go away. 03:20, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I can see reason in what you're saying, Mossy. But Night Shine put it in her trivia, so I think she should get an alt. And if we find it unneeded, it can be deleted. ScarletwindStep into theLight 01:39, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sure tabby was in Broken Shadow's trivia at one point and anyways, Nightshine isn't always right. XD That has nothing to do with it. So we should approve an image that probably won't be needed later? We should deal with it now, not just put it off until after the image is approved. Mossy go away. 07:37, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I like this. Define the stripes. --princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    21:57, April 9, 2011 (UTC)


Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 23:21, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you actually read and listen to what I'm saying? It's really annoying and rude when you just ignore me like that. Mossy go away. 23:33, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I did read it. But until I get a final verdict, I'm gonna keep working. ScarletwindStep into theLight 23:35, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
But you didn't even do anything, or say a word. Ask someone about it. If you just leave it no one's gonna do anything. Mossy go away. 23:49, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well I think since it was a one time mistake in pelt colour, she should get an alternate for it. --Nightshine 00:17, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll also ask Frosty. Anyone else you think? ScarletwindStep into theLight 00:22, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good art, but I think the stripes should be added in the next tweek week. -Sunheart- 00:50, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Tabby was only said one time for Broken Shadow and her image is just being tweaked. Mossy go away. 05:04, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

So this is declined? ScarletwindStep into theLight 16:05, April 10, 2011 (UTC)+

Nope, it'll stay. --ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:27, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, on IRC I talked with Frostheart and we decided that Broken Shadow should just get an alt, too. And the stripes taken off her image. Mossy go away. 18:32, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay! Thank you both! :) ScarletwindStep into theLight 18:57, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks beautiful:) Darken the belly. SplookMavinotp♥ 01:24, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 02:22, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are pretty blurry, and maybe add a few more. And this is just a suggestion, but maybe the tail stripes should start out silver instead of gray because it looks awkward the way it is right now. It looks great otherwise. Mossy go away. 03:36, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I was only able to add in two stripes, but if anyone thinks i should add more, i may just change the pattern. ScarletwindStep into theLight 23:13, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

I love the pattern! Don't change it =) Maybe sharpen the stripes on her face a bit, as they're too round to match the sharp edges of the other stripes. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:22, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 22:35, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a tad. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 22:43, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 02:14, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add another marking (or markings, if you can fit more than one) on to the other side of her face. It looks a bit empty... By the way, this is lovely =) --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 08:05, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Blur the earpink a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:02, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 03:45, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there is some blurred lineart on the tail. Darken the shading a bit. Nightshine 22:18, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 00:14, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the face stripes a bit more. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:38, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 00:47, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes on the face still look like they should be.... pointier? Maybe just make the ends of them sharper. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 03:02, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

you could also make the stripes on the face fit the stripes on the body and like Paleclaw said, make them pointier, great job, it's amazing! Atelda 01:31, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know about the stripes . . . while the pattern is pretty, they're random and scant. Move the ear pink down a touch in its ear. Mossy go away. 03:07, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Do you mean the stripes on the body, head, or all of them? ScarletwindStep into theLight 20:51, April 22, 2011 (UTC)
All of them. Mossy go away. 02:07, April 23, 2011 (UTC)
So you think I should re-do it? ScarletwindStep into theLight 02:25, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by "random and scant"? Darken the shading. wildheart spring rain ♫ 02:33, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

I actually like the markings. They look pretty! And I can't see much wrong with this, just do what Wildheart said, darken the shading.Amberfire3, RAVENCLAW!!!!Smartypants!!! Luna is awesome! 01:40, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Still waiting to here others' opinions on stripe pattern. ScarletwindStep into theLight 04:02, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes look fine like that, but the earpink could be blurred a bit more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:34, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe the grey around the ear pink could be defined more, I'm not sure. Other than that I really don't see much more you could do with this, it's very nice! Iveh Yo! 00:16, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 02:22, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Waiting for changes to show. Fixed a couple things that were bothering me. ScarletwindStep into theLight 23:06, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good other than the ear pink needs to be reddened Sandstormrocks32 03:25, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 20:50, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a little bit more, blur it, and sharpen the stripe on the front right leg. This is very nice =) wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:46, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I've been having problems with changes showing so sorry about re-uploading this so many times. XP ScarletwindStep into theLight 01:42, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add a few small stripes on the torso. Nightshine 06:00, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 23:42, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the almost-white bits on the shoulder and leg and blur the stripes. }wildheart~ 02:13, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blurred the white parts but kept the blurring of the stripes to a minimum. If I blur them too much, they look kinda messy... ScarletwindStep into theLight 02:41, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink a lot. It's too hot pink =P }wildheart~ 02:48, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 02:51, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely, I see nothing wrong. }wildheart~ 05:22, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the hind leg closest to us looks lumpy, blur it some. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:28, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindStep into theLight 01:14, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 01:16, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with it, lovely job, Scarletwind! Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 18:27, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:43, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Toadstep (A)- Approved

Toadstep.apprenticeMy first charart in a long time. I'm not sure I like it though x3.  Darkhallows...Mew? 08:52, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Needs highlights. The spots look good to me, but I'd have to look at his other images to be sure. 209.34.114.210 13:53, April 7, 2011 (UTC) [Ivystripe, not signed in]

Blur the smudges. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 20:34, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

On his other images his entire back is black and he has a black chest, and the markings are smudged which they shouldn't be - his other chararts are not smudged either. And I see you made his eye blue, it should be green. The ear pink is rather small and needs darkening, and I don't see much shading. Mossy go away. 22:26, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Only half his chest is black. Remember, this is a different angle than the other images. As far as I'm aware, a slight texture difference is okay. Admittedly, I tried a new style, it seems I should have stuck with my old one :/. It's alright, I'm going to redo this, in the long run I think that will be easiest. Also, his page said blue eyes, but that's removed now.  Darkhallows...Mew? 01:22, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I personally think the tail is too solid black. If you added a white tip or a stretch of white somewhere, I think it would look better. :) Same thing with the back foot; it looks way too dark to me. Nightskyy 01:59, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the smudging is okay. It needs to be consistent. It's really more like three quarters of his chest . . . I removed blue eyes because it was false. And the black back still needs to be one piece too. Mossy go away. 03:23, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Redone. I feel weird not doing my smudgeys Dx.  Darkhallows...Mew? 08:03, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work! Blur the black on his flank a bit more, darken the shading on the shoulders, brighten the ear-pink a tad, and darken the shading under the chin and by his jaw. ScarletwindStep into theLight 01:08, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The earpink could be a bit redder.

Hey, my internet is out, and I'll be gone for a few days. I exist, though!184.11.129.18 03:49, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:55, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Internet = back on! Reuploaded  Darkhallows...Enter the cave? 11:22, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Blur the haunch highlight. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:47, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded but I couldn't blur it much more. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 17:14, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! If possible, add highlights to the tail...it might be highlighted already, just hard to see... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:23, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

define the ear-pink a bit more. ScarletwindStep into theLight 21:39, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. Nightshine 05:32, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkhallows Enter the cave? 10:51, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

On the back foot there are some lighter pixels, get rid of those and this will be ready. Nightshine 00:08, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 02:27, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the markings, darken the black, and make the ear pink larger. Mossy go away. 06:14, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink, and fix the faded pixels on the hind leg. This is lovely =3 wildheart spring rain ♫ 03:02, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and fill in that white spot on his belly. That's supposed to be part of the cat lol wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:17, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink larger and a bit redder. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:30, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 00:46, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. sorry for the wait. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 17:33, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the white pixels on his belly. They're part of the cat =) wildheart spring rain ♫ 03:17, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

I have... none of the changes I did earlier are showing up yet Dx Darkhallows Enter the cave? 04:26, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oh... oops! Sorry, then. wildheart spring rain ♫ 04:43, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

I still can't see the changes. Perhaps reupload it again? wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:42, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Finally showing up :D. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 02:18, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a little bit. }wildheart~ 05:16, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Done Darkhallows Enter the cave? 04:10, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 23:59, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Since its been 24 hours I'm approving this. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 05:52, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Owl Feather (SC)~ Approved

Owl Feather.scIf Cloudy Sun gets one, so does Owl Feather. I'm not fond of the speckle style, but what do y'all think? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:22, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great to me! Blur the shading and desturate the earpink. MINTSTARR Want to eat orange ice cream? 20:46, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the legs a bit more. This looks fantastic! :) ScarletwindStep into theLight 23:46, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thanks. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:25, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

GORGEOUS! The spot on his forhead looks funny though. Maybe make it look more like it's a couple of small spots rather than one big one? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 00:35, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Gawjus, dahling, gawjus. Perhaps make the earpink a tiny bit smaller. }wildheart~ 00:43, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:03, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Love it! Blur the tailtip a little. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 05:20, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. Mistfire Spring rain falls 12:57, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 18:25, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the speckles on her tail, darken the shading on the forearm that's closest. Nightshine 22:38, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:46, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the underbelly, it looks beautiful :D SplookMavinotp♥ 02:18, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Do more speckles that might help... Sandstormrocks32 15:22, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 19:58, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink just a little bit. }wildheart~ 03:14, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:17, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely; I see nothing wrong. llwildheartl 00:20, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, wait. Aren't we going to redo her colour, 'cause she was mentioned as looking exactly like Kestrelflight? llwildheartl 00:47, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think she's going to get an alt or something will be done over tweek week. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:54, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely Iceheart! Maybe darken the shading on her hind leg farthest away from us and a touch on foreleg that's held out. ScarletwindStep into theLight 00:08, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:01, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is wonderful! I see nothing wrong with it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:06, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 23:55, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

This looks very, very nice and it's oh so close to being ready, but the back shading is too dark and her ear pink is a little bright and it sticks out a lot. Other than that, this is perfect. Mossy go away. 05:00, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is probably one of the greatest chararts I've ever seen! Ivyheart =P 04:02, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.-ſceheartBlah blah 06:03, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely, I see nothing wrong. llwildheartl 23:18, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Darkhallows Enter the cave? 16:53, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

The changes arent showing but you can see them in the upload history. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:30, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

None; archiving. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:24, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Rosepetal (A) -Approved

Rosepetal.apprenticeToadstep seems to be getting one, so Rosepetal shoud as well. Not so proud of the stripes on this one. Cronstructaments? Lone Wolf 02:16, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty but not as unique as I think, the stripes should be a little more creative Applestorm :) 21:10, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. Make the earpink stand out some more. Leggo 🏈 02:18, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Take the eye colour off her warrior charart, fix the blurred lineart on its head, and make the stripes like the ones on her warrior charart. They just look like random swirls right now. Mossy go away. 02:20, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, shouldn't this be declined too? Toadstep's was decbe sides, they were never seen as apperentices, so unless frostheart, or Nightshine say it can stay I think it might be declined. Maplepool 02:31, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Frostheart wants them to have images. I think it has a chance. Lone Wolf 22:08, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, don't just go saying random things before you know the whole story. There are reasons it stayed up. :P Mossy go away. 23:19, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lone Wolf 02:13, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more stripes on the back so it matches the warrior pixel's stripes. Lighten the tail highlight. This looks good =) --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 02:18, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lone Wolf 17:13, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

The stripe style just looks way different from her warrior charart. Examine it for a little while to see what they look like, and copy off of it. Also, define the ear pink. Mossy go away. 17:42, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried my best to copy the stripes. Lone Wolf 19:25, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

There is one part right before her tail tip which is lightet then the rest of her tail, darken that, other than that very nice Maplepool 22:43, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are too dark, and still kind of big, and while they look more like her warrior charart's, they're not quite there. And what's cronstructaments mean? xD Mossy go away. 01:10, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

See if you can edit the colors to match the shade of her warrior charart's. --Gοldenpelt 01:20, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten/darken the earpink and maybe try blurring the stripes. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:28, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone just redline where the stripes would be? That would help a lot DX Lone Wolf 20:01, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Mistfire Spring rain falls 21:21, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

I would suggest outlining the stripes in the 'smudge' tool, that would blur them a little. SplookMavinotp♥ 21:33, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

File:Rosepetal apprentice issues.png You said you wanted a redline for the stripes? Here it is XD You had the right idea, but a couple of them were off. Basically, all you have to follow is where the stripes meet the lineart, but you can take artistic license with the rest, as we haven't seen the right side of her body yet. So go crazy =) --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 04:44, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the redline, Wildheart. I owe you one xD Lone Wolf 21:28, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes' color. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:20, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

No problem =) Maybe add some stripes to the front leg and the front of the haunch. I didn't add any to the redline because I didn't want to influence where you put them =P --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 22:51, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

On the back leg, there is an area that isn't blurred. It's the tip of the bottom stripe. Ivystripe 00:19, March 29, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Reuploaded Lone Wolf 21:11, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

You could another stripe to the front of the haunch... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:13, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make all of the stripes consistent with eachother. The one on the front of the haunch is what all of them should look like (color wise) in my opinion. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:10, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Lone Wolf 21:05, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and define them =) --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 00:01, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, it seems to almost blend in with the pelt color. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 17:34, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think I'm going to withdraw this; anyone who wants can take over. Lone Wolf 16:39, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'll be happy to take this over for you for you Lone Wolf. Okay everyone I made the few edits that were last said, but I'm not done blurring as I have to go for tonight. Comments for now?-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 02:04, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
:There are some places that are the base color, not the stripe color, and should touch the lineart, unless that's what you were going for and they are the sides of a stripe? Ivystripe 18:33, April 4, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe
Sharpen the stripes =) --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:27, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes look like the ones in the redline. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:25, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes skinnier. Mistfire Spring rain falls 15:22, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pelt color more creamy-pink like her warrior image. 96.51.53.81 17:01, April 9, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon


Lighten the stripes a tad, blur the highlights, and define the ear-pink. ScarletwindStep into theLight 23:23, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Finally found time to upload this. After studying the earlier image with Rosepetal's other images, I redid Lone Wolf's version completely to give her the pelt color as the rest of her's. I gave her the red markings like you wanted Mistystar and added in the markings from her other images. I don't really think making the stripes skinner will actually work with this Mistfire, but tell me what you think. And yes Ivystripe thats what I'm going for. Comments?-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 17:33, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make everything a little more pinkish. Lighten the stripes and blur them. Darken the ear pink, blur the shading. Nightshine 00:36, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 04:18, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
:She looks a bit too pinkish... I dunno if she's supposed to be, but make her creamier brown. Mistfire Spring rain falls 17:12, April 10, 2011 (UTC)


I think I might wait for another response on this if its okay with you Mistfire? Her kit image is rather pinkish than cream while her warrior image is less pink, so I want another opinion before I change the image around. -- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 00:05, April 11, 2011 (UTC)
I actually think the pelt colour looks good. Perhaps add some stripes on the bottom of her haunch, to fill it out. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 01:29, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes, and blur the shading and earpink. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:17, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded....I think I brighten them too much but maybe that's my opinion.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 01:51, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
:Make the ear pink more visible, and blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:09, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 23:16, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the whole thing a tad and redden the earpink a bit. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:31, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
:Hold up Wildheart, first you said the pelt fur was fine, now you say darken it. I never touched the pelt color, just the stripes.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 02:13, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
Haha sorry... I dunno. My opinion changes on things, and I took a look at the warrior image and it looks a bit brighter. You don't need to change it if you don't want to, though. Which image are you following? Her warrior or her kit? wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:12, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
:The warrior image...I find her kit image to be "too" pink if you ask me. Her stripes are hardly visible on it, that's why I chose the warrior one. So you say the warrior is brighter than this one?-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 04:07, April 17, 2011 (UTC)
I'd say that the warrior one is a tiny bit darker than this one, but it's not as bad as I originally thought it was when I asked you to change it =P Brighten the earpink a tad. wildheart spring rain ♫
05:55, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear clor because it's hard to seeSandstormrocks32 23:05, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darken her a tad and tried messing with the ear pink...it's rather hard to find one that goes good with her pelt color.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 23:04, April 22, 2011 (UTC)
There's a random light patch on the front paw which needs darkening, and fix the blurred lineart in the ear. This is loverly XD wildheart spring rain ♫
05:43, April 23, 2011 (UTC)
:Oops how did I miss that? XD Well fixed and Reuploaded-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 21:01, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

One of the haunch stripes looks kind of weird. Make it more triangular. This looks great! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:34, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, but do you mind telling me which one it is? I think you're talking about the one closest to the tail, but I'm not sure. Just want to make sure before any edits =)-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 01:27, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
There's still some blurred lineart in the ear. Other than that, this is great XD wildheart spring rain ♫
02:51, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten the stripe a bit. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:15, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

The only way I can really make these stripes lighter and go with the pelt is by lightening the entire image...sorry about that. And I think I finally got that weird lineart I kept missing.Reuploaded-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 01:06, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the highlights a bit. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:53, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. And the stripes seem to grayish. MINTSTARR Want to eat orange ice cream? 21:07, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink a bit:D Nice job! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:55, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Finally, I'm just about done with finals and have time to work on this. This should look more like her warrior image now :) Rosepetal.warrior Comments?-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 00:47, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and highlights a bit. This is lovely. llwildheartl 06:44, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done and done-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 00:13, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
::Revised edit...realized I was missing a stripe on her face and on her hind paw-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 17:08, May 14, 2011 (UTC)-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 17:08, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
This looks great! Perhaps try to make the eye color lighter. Atelda 02:15, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and make the eye brighter. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 03:53, May 15, 2011 (UTC)


Nice work! :) Make the cheek stripe a tad longer, it looks a bit more like a spot. Blur the shading by the haunch and maybe add some shading by the jaw. ScarletwindStep into theLight 00:14, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
:Reuploaded-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 22:22, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
:Her leg is a bit dodgy(blurred lineart, and some gray stuff has spilled onto her leg): File:Circled.pngWhere the red circle is. And darken the shading a tad on the spot circled with green.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 03:23, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

ReuploadedFixed lineart and darken that area-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 18:56, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
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Define the earpink a bit, its kind of hard to see. Its great! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:40, May 18, 2011 (UTC)
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The stripes look unnatural, they're just squares. And darken the shading. Mossy go away. 04:58, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Mossy, but I love the highlights. Perfect. Ivyheart =P 01:02, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 23:16, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely; I see nothing wrong. llwildheartl 01:19, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:17, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

None; approving. -ſceheartBlah blah 06:04, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream (Alt. W) - Approved

File:Silverstream.alt.warrior.pngShe was described as a black-and-silver cat in Forest of Secrets on page 15. Comments? Rainey 23:06, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black on the tail, make the ear-pink a tad smaller and brighten it, darken the shading on the white parts, and brighten the highlights. ScarletwindStep into theLight 23:07, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 00:00, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white areas silver. Smudge the black transition. Add eye colour, blur the ear pink and blur the shading Nightshine 00:03, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 00:32, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh! I like the markings! The silver still looks white, so darken it a lot, and darken the shading as well. Move the ear pink up a bit. Mossy go away. 00:53, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the shading. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:25, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the black near the shoulder area. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:27, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Silverstream.warrior.alt.png ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:47, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How do I rename it? And I'll thicken the black later when I have time. Rainey 03:44, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwillow: Whatever you are using to edit your image, save it, left click, there will be a list of suggestions, rename it Silverstream.warrior.alt, and upload it as a different image and replace the current image with the different one. Icy123 14:34, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:24, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the white some more; it still looks white, and not silver. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 04:45, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more centered and blur it. Smudge the black transition. Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does it still look white? Could somebody help me with the black and the shading? However much I blur the shading, it still looks the same. Rainey 11:07, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Not to dark, it looks like gray. I would try along the side between white and gray. So its not gray, but its like a light gray, Feathermoon 13:52, March 28, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I can help blur the shading. I'll do it right now, and I can lighten the silver parts like Feathermoon said too. =3 Mossy go away. 21:04, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Mossy! Rainey 10:11, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Wait... When she was described as black and gray I think they meant she was gray with black stripes, her being a tabby and all. It's like saying Brambleclaw is black and brown...   Darkhallows...Mew? 06:17, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Actually she was described as black and silver not black ans gray. XD It didn't say anything about her being a silver-and-black tabby on page fifteen in Forest of Secrets, but I could always fix it. Anyone else who agrees with Darkhallows? Rainey 10:25, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

I thik that it should stay like this; It isnèt the same kind of thing like ginger cats, they natrally have stripes. Silver and Black cats have never had natral stripes unless listed as tabbys. (Feathermoon but not logged it :3)

Feathermoon, what? A silver and black tabby is very possible. She's a tabby, mentioned as black and silver/ I was thinking that too, but I just never got around to mentioning it. xD Rainwillow silver is a shade of gray, same thing. They never said anything about her being tabby on that page, but she IS tabby. :P Mossy go away. 22:09, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm...You do have a point there, Mossy. And since she is a tabby, I will agree with Darkhallows. Feathermoon 22:19, March 30, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

This (click) is a silver tabby. I would describe that as black and silver.  Darkhallows...Mew? 01:17, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

So is it agreed? Should I change this as a silver she-cat cat with black stripes? Rainey 04:39, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I belive so. Feathermoon 13:23, March 31, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Blur the shading and haunch highlight. (This is Mintstarr.)98.22.139.18 21:37, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Considering her main picture is a silver tabby, I don't think she needs an alternate.  Darkhallows...Mew? 06:07, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Wait....so is this going to be declined? Frostheart? Night shine? What do you guys think? Rainey 11:35, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. Smudge the transistions more. Make the ear pink more reddish. Brighten the highlights. Fix the lineart on the tail. --princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:25, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
Make the black more stripey or tabbylike. Mistfire Spring rain falls 02:11, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
Well, im not the lead, or deputy, but, I think that Silver-and-black is different from, Silver tabby, Im just an apperentice, so my opion my not mean much, but I still think this should stay up.... Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 14:57, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think this should stay up since black-and-silver is much different than just a silver tabby. --Nightshine 17:54, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, since it's going to stay up, do I have to change it to a silver cat with black stripes as Darkhallows said? Rainey 02:14, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

That's what I would do, but I guess it's up to you, as it didn't specify. Blur the shading. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 03:53, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, after I read all of these comments, I decided to make Silverstream's alt. image into a silver cat with black stripes. I made the stripes similar to Silverstream's warrior image, so I hope it looks okay. Does the silver still looks white? Mossy, are you still going to help me blur the shading? If not, could somebody help me blur it? Rainey 07:20, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

  • bangs head on desk* I hate myself for making those hard forsaken markings! Anyways... ^^ you missed a few of the markings on her leg from her warrior image, basically on her hind leg and forepaw thats like behind her from our point of view. Also blur and I'll help if Mossy isn't able to. Also don't forget to add in shading and blur the ear pink as well.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 15:38, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 01:06, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred as well. The edges of them looked smudged-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 01:17, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How about now? Rainey 01:39, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

The markings on her back still seem a tad blotchy where the black meets the silver :/ what program do you use by chance?-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 02:07, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

I use pixlr. The stripes looks fine to me.Rainey 02:14, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Rainwillow; the stripes look no blotchier then the ones on her regular warrior image. All I would suggest is shrink the big black spot in the middle of her back a tad. Leggo 🏈 02:44, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes dont mave to match her warriors image because this is an alternate. Someone tried to match the Tigerheart stripes on an alt and someone said they didn't have to match. But if you want to do it like this, you can. 96.51.53.81 03:32, April 4, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Re-uploaded. I made the black spot a bit smaller. Does anything else need to be fixed? Rainey 08:23, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular because on your picture it shows it where one part of it is full but the other side looks kinda wrong...Honeybreeze 15:28, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, Rainey! Lighten the ear pink and center it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:47, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading on the black parts needs to be defined a bit. The grey parts look good! Ivystripe 00:11, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Re-uploaded. The earpink is horrible! Could somebody help me on it? Rainey 04:34, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the earpink again with Frostheart's help. Does it look to bright? Rainey 04:53, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. And maybe add some stripes to the back leg farest from us. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:31, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Anything else? Rainey 11:06, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

The markings need smudged a little more. Make it flow with her shape. Iveh Yo! 00:42, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Er, I don't think the markings need to be smudged. That's for two different colored cat. And I if I blur the stripes, it'll look to blotchy. Anybody else agree with Ivystripe? Rainey 04:28, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. I also think the markings should be smudged. Darken the shading as well. Nightshine 01:04, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Er, could someone help me smudge the stripes? I'm not very good at that. Rainey 11:06, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I could try helping you smudge it, but I don't know if I'm allowed since I'm working on a charart Iveh Yo! 14:21, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I can help, if you'd like. Mistfire Spring rain falls 15:30, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm is helping me now, but thanks for the offer. Rainey 03:39, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, too. Mistfire Spring rain falls 17:17, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:35, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

If anybody is wondering why I haven't been working on it, it's because Icestorm and me are trying to figure out a way to darken the shading without runing the smudged stripes. Rainey 11:52, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

I can help with the shading if you want. Nightshine 22:46, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

You can? Thanks Nightshine! =D After Icestorm smudges the stripes and uploades it, you can darken the shading. Rainey 23:40, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The stripes are smudged now, thanks to Icestorm. Nightshine, you can help me darken the shading now please. Rainey 11:11, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

This looks really good! Make the earpink a bit redder and blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:03, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I tweaked the shading. I had to also get rid of some of the old shading so the stripes are a bit thinner. Nightshine 05:46, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Nightshine! It looks great! So....comments? =P Rainey 12:16, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the front paws and right above the back legs. Other then that it's BEAUTIFUL! ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 21:22, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty *pets Silverstream* Do what Paleclaw said above. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 21:45, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear color more red Sandstormrocks32 23:11, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:25, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How about now? Rainey 12:38, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look really strange . . . the only thing that really makes it look like a classic tabby is the two stripes on its back. If you're having trouble, I could redline it for you. o3o Mossy go away. 17:59, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstreamredlinetabby I made this redline of a classic tabby cat, use it if you want to. :3 Mossy go away. 19:18, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

I like ^that^. Blur the shading. wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:45, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Someone attacked the page, and removed the image that was up here, and replaced it with something else. I got the page back to what it was before it got edited. I'm sorry if that's not the right image up. --Cloudskye 18:46, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

You should do the red line one because it does look betterSandstormrocks32 21:53, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

I am using it. I'm just not done with it yet.... Rainey 11:17, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It looks...horrible all over again! (except for the stripes. XD) Anyways...help? Rainey 12:39, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great! I like it better than the old one Sandstormrocks32 23:26, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Rainey 23:32, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does this look any better? Rainey 23:53, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Totally, I would blur the stripes just a tad, and make the earpink cover more of the ear, it looks great though. Atelda 01:18, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded How does it look now? Rainey 03:07, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge all of the stipes, add shading. Nightshine 06:01, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do it ASAP. Rainey 06:03, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Fill in the white pixel on her haunch. --Leafstrike-- 21:52, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and make it bigger. wildheart spring rain ♫ 02:54, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

You should make the hole body light or brighter. NOT the stripes the stripes are good Sandstormrocks32 15:08, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tweaked it for you, like you asked, Rainy. People: you'll know when the changes are showing when the white pixel on the haunch is gone. }wildheart~ 02:26, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Wildheart! Rainey 04:22, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge all of the stripes. Some of them don't look smudged or blurred at all. Add shading/darken the shading. Make the ear pink triangular. Nightshine 06:11, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of smudgy. Fix that, and everything else said above. xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:56, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can anybody help me again? Rainey 04:21, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

@Nightshine and Mistystar: the changes still aren't showing. But as soon as they are, Rainy, save the image and change the earpink/shading. }wildheart~ 05:40, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Are the changes showing now? Rainey 10:46, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments?Rainey 08:40, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:00, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does it look better? Rainey 08:14, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make sure all of the stripes have been smudged. Darken the shading more. Nightshine 02:34, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the tail highlight. MINTSTARR Want to eat orange ice cream? 21:12, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

blur everything a lot then it would look perfect! Sandstormrocks32 01:32, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Add highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:53, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the haunch, it looks beautiful :) SplookMavinotp♥ 01:06, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I'm still working on this, so please be patient. XD 04:20, May 12, 2011 (UTC)Rainey

Lighten the base coat. Mossy go away. 23:04, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's looks so good! Only, down her tail it goes dark, dark, dark, dark, SUDDENLY REALLY BRIGHT! You should fix that. Ivystorm Medicine Cat of RiverClan</big></big> leaf-like fur... 02:01, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

It seems to me like there are too many stripes. She should look silver with black marking, not the other way around. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 03:55, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see how it looks black with silver markings, but . . . if she does take some off, it should be on the legs, chest and belly. Just a tip. Mossy go away. 05:01, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is getting confusing....I think it looks good the way it is. But if anybody agrees with Darkhallows, tell me. Rainey 05:19, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Darkhallows... But other than that redden the ear ping and blur it Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:18, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't get it! How does it look black with silver stripes? It looks silver with black stripes, unless your talking about the shading. It does look a bit black, but other than that, how does it look like black with silver stripes? Rainey 04:20, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. And besides, she was described as a black and silver cat, not a silver tabby with black stripes, so does it really matter? I think the stripes are fine the way they are. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:37, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, good point. Thanks Iceheart! Rainey 12:49, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I checked all of the stripes, and all of them were smudged except for the tail's stripes, so I fixed that. Oh, and I did everything else above, and blurred the shading as much as I could. Rainey 13:01, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! If possible, define the shading a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:09, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll try to define it more. Rainey 00:56, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be smudged consistently Nightshine 00:05, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the stripes by her eye, and the ones on her haunch. Blur them at about 100%. Iveh Yo! 00:59, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the top of her chin and around the mouth a tiny bit.

-♫Millie♫It’s getting cold outside... 04:37, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The changes aren't showing yet, so be patient. Rainey 11:07, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

You can barley see the eyes, and the paws seem a little left out

Whoever left this, please sign with four tildes (~~~~) and explain how to fix the problems. Don't just point them out =) llwildheartl 01:17, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more pink, and lighten the whole image. LeopardclawEyes watching in the Dark… 18:01, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

The changes still aren't showing.....Rainey 22:35, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Other than it is a little dark, I think this almost ready for approval. SpotzGraystripe FTW!!! 22:52, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Um, how long does it take for the changes to show? Rainey 03:07, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

@Leopardclaw: Do you mean to make the earpink darker or lighter? Rainey 11:22, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

I've uploaded this image about two times already. The changes still aren't showing. Rainey 10:35, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

add more highlights and blur earpink. Good job. Wildfire 20:50, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! The earpink is kind of blotchy, though. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:38, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. YES! The changes are finally showing! xD Anyways....Comments? Does the stripes still have to be smudge? --Rainey 10:19, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Why not blur the markings on the haunch? This is beautiful, Rainey! =) Skye Meow 21:29, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Cloudy! Again, the changes aren't showing yet. -_- Rainey 10:45, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Are they showing now? If they are, then you might need to blur the chest shading. Awesome job! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:56, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

They aren't showing yet, but I'll blur the chest shading right now. Oh, and thanks Mistystar! =D Rainey 23:05, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I uploaded the image as a new file. Comments? Rainey 00:36, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think the front paws are shaded too much. But other than that... Wow! This is simply amazing! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 04:09, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You can see the changes from the history. Comments?Rainey 08:46, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:40, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 03:13, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Noneish; approving. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:33, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Pebble (CG) - Approved

Pebble.cg Before you say anything, yes I know this is already on the reservation table, but I was looking through the archives and saw it was declined from lack of work (and it was the same user who has it reserved now), so I figured it'd probably be Ok to do it. Anyways, I'm excited, this is my first Cavegaurd! ^^ Comments? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:27, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and define the mudstreaks, erase the waste around the charart, and enlarge the earpink. I like it =D }wildheart~ 07:02, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - The waste around the charart was already erased almost immediately after I uploaded it, but it was taking a while to show up. I enlarged the earpink (though it's not showing YET), but how do I define the mud streaks? Make them not so blurred? Make the darker? I don't quite understand.... ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:25, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Not so blurred. More distinct. AUGH it's 3:30 here and I have school tomorrow....... }wildheart~ 10:36, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink,. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:23, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and get rid of the smudges around her ears and jaw. ScarletwindStep into theLight 23:45, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried my best to make the mud more distinct, but it didn't work too well without making it looks like spots or something. I darkened the shading and removed the mud from the face. you'll know the changes are showing when the mud on the face is gone. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 00:33, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

They still need more defineing. If you have them in a seperate layer, I'd just redo them. If not I guess I could help you make them sharper? Darkhallows Enter the cave? 05:17, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah they're on a seperate layer. I guess I'll redo them again. My sharpening tool doesn't work. XP I gtg right now, but I'll do this later today. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 23:10, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ok, so I made two different versions. This one's the first, and I'll upload the second one in place of this one if you don't like it. I tried smudging the streaks instead of blurring them, so hopefully that helps. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 01:46, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh! I really like the smudged version of the mudstreaks. Makes it look much more realistic. Perhaps add a bit of mud near her --> side front paw. I know somebody already asked you to remove the mudstreaks on her face, but maybe you could just add some on the ear or the forehead, as the head looks suspiciously clean XD }wildheart~ 03:13, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the chest and haunch, and maybe widen the chest highlight a tad. Blur all mudstreaks except for the chest ones a bit. I agree with Wildheart; Pebble That Rolls Down Mountain's head is too clean. Darken the shading on the <------- side of the chest. Apart from all that, it looks pretty good!-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 04:03, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink is a bit too big, make it a bit smaller, and add mud on the face. Great work! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:12, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I find it kind of funny I got completely contrary comments from the first batch. XD And just by the way, I don't have any highlights on this. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:23, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Shrink the mud on the haunch, they look a little like patches. --Leafstrike-- 00:02, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

The mud looks fine to me. I see nothing wrong; lovely job. llwildheartl 00:49, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the mud should be smudged . . . it makes it look like she's a gray and brown cat instead of a gray cat with mud smeared into its pelt. Mossy go away. 02:12, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Is Paleclaw still working on this? If not May I? Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 05:51, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I'm still working on this. It's only been a couple days. I've been sick lately so I couldn't get on much and when I could get on I couldn't stay long, but I'll try and reupload this ASAP. And Mossy, I'm gonna wait to get a second opinion on not having the mud smudged cause everybody else seemed to like it fine. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 15:53, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changes aren't showing just yet though. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 16:00, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit, and I think its good :) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:55, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Anything else? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:24, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! I see nothing wrong with it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:43, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Nightshine 23:56, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened the shading. :) ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:19, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful. I see nothing wrong!Lark That Sings at Dawn 11:21, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur some of the mud and the highlights. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 23:42, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more red. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:56, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Reddened the earpink more, blurred the mud a tad, and like I said before, there's no highlights on this, so I blurred the shading a bit more instead. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:47, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and darken the shading. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 23:52, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - The changes aren't showing on this image. Look at the second picture down on the file history to see the current one. I actually made the earpink redder before and didn't notice the changes weren't showing at the time. And I darkened the shading. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:20, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit more...its still too light Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:08, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

The new version, or the one that's currently showing on the page Mistystar? Cause I reddened it more already, but the changes aren't showing here. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 20:30, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know what the new version looks like, so yeah, the old one. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:39, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely, I see nothing wrong. llwildheartl 23:16, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

To see the new one, you have to go to the image's info page, and it's the picright below the top one in the file history. :) ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:39, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit. LeopardclawEyes watching in the Dark… 16:07, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's reddened in the newer image.

Note to everyone: Please DO NOT comment on the earpink until the changes are showing. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 20:35, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, I don't see anything else you could do to it. Iveh Yo! 15:11, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments? I haven't gotten any comments telling me to do anything that's NOT earpink in a while.... ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 09:19, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm...this looks really good, but something's bugging me. It looks like the mudstreaks are actually part of the fur (like it's a gray and brown cat). Also, can you please lighten the shading on the left side? It seems way too dark. Skye Meow 12:54, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmmm how do you think I should fix them? Blur them in more or change the color or something? I'm not really sure what would make it better. And I'll fix the shading the same time I fix the mudstreaks. :) ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 16:59, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'm not 100% sure on this, but why not try blurring a bit more, and if that doesn't work, then keep it how it is. I realize that the mud is probably plastered to their fur, but, it just doesn't seem...natural...if you get my point. Skye Meow 13:37, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changes STILL aren't showing, but you can see it on the image's page right below the current image like usual. I blurred the mud a bit, but I don't wanna blur it too much and I lightened the shading on the left side a bit. :) ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 00:10, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit, too. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:28, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the earpink a bit, though I thought it was fine before. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 02:01, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:15, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/redden the earpink a tad. It looks too pinkish. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 20:41, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well the 24 hours were already done before you commented, and also, the earpink's already reddened, the changes just aren't showing. So will this be approved? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 23:57, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 02:13, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think it will be aproved but you would have to ask Iceheart Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:40, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry but the nose should be gray, and then i'll CBA this. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:35, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Actually I talked to Mossy before, and she said this would be approved since the comment was made after the CBA was done, so should I still make the nose gray? The changes will probably take a while to show. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 23:21, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make it gray and then i'll archive this and put it on her page. -ſceheartBlah blah 06:42, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Woah, the changes are actually showing! :o Does that mean we got the uploading problems fixed finally? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:10, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Approved as the confusing said above. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:03, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (K)- Approved

Willowbreeze.kit Here she is..... Comments? Echostar229 03:37, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink darker/more dull. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:39, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see any silver parts, maybe add some streaks or patches? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:57, March 16, 2011 (UTC) scratch that. Darken the whole thing a tad. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:48, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Echostar229 01:31, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 14:19, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Echostar, you can only have one image up for approval. As of now, you have two; Oakheart and Willowbreeze. I don't know what happens next, another user probably know though. MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 14:24, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well she stopped working on it I think. Echostar, I suggest you put withdrawn by user on Oakheart's image, or we can see if it'll just be declined because the image may not be needed. Oh and brighten the highlights a tad on the image. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:12, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

I did put the words 'Withdrawn' on it, and the image has been removed from the page. I had stopped working on him about a week ago, in case no one noticed my lack of updating him, me starting a new image, and the big words in the title. Oh, and, reuploaded. Echostar229 01:25, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well you never actually specified that you had withdrawn it. So please do so in the future. Add tail shading, add shading to the fore arms, add shading under the chin Nightshine 01:29, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Weird, 'cause it said 'Withdrawn' next to it on my computer before it was archived. The light's coming from the left [her right] so I don't think she would have chin shading. There's also shading on her arms and tail. Echostar229 01:38, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

I was the one that put withdrawn there. There should be shading under the chin since all other kit chararts have that and it makes it look less flat. Darken the shading on the forearms/tail Nightshine 23:00, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Whatever. Reuploaded. Echostar229 00:33, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading.  Darkhallows...Mew? 04:57, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:35, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think the shading's gotten worse...... :S Echostar229 03:53, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest. Mistfire 1000 Edits! 16:52, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading go all the way across under the chin/ the neck. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:54, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest and tail. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:16, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Go blur crazy!CardinalfireMy fluffy yellow cake!

Thin out the shading on the top of the chest. It needs to round out more, to fit the shape of the chest. --Wildheart Living with only my thoughts. 07:03, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Will anyone help me with blurring? Echostar229 02:31, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken her shading to make her look more like her other chararts up for approval because they are darker than this..Honeybreeze 18:32, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help =) And the colouring is fine; you don't need to fix it. Enlarge the earpink a bit and then blur it --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:31, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest lots. Mistfire Spring rain falls 20:22, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/blur that little highlight on the tail tip or lighten if that was shading. SplookMavinotp♥ 00:42, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred it and reuploaded it for you, Echostar =) --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:45, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add/lighten the ear pink. Darken the shading a bit. Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more even, and center it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:11, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken tail shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 14:26, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten or darken the earpink a tad. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 17:02, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

I take it you're not working on this anymore since you reserved another. Nightshine 00:37, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

I haven't reserved another. My grandma just died, so i haven't been able to work on this. Sorry. I'll go reupload this. Echostar229 00:40, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh I'm sorry! I thought this was Wildheart's image so I put it as withdrawn. I'm really sorry for your loss. Nightshine 00:50, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

So sorry! Can I take over? YatzSliversword Ah, spring... 00:59, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure Echostar is still working on this. Nightshine 01:00, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still doing this. :S Echostar229 01:17, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I wonked up the shading again... :S Echostar229 01:22, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

blur the chest shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:23, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a little bit. Nightshine 01:28, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur chest shading LOTS. Mistfire Spring rain falls 15:00, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink when you darken it. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 01:19, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to re-do this, she looks like a two-toned cat now. --Leafstrike-- 00:47, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

It'll be fine as soon as it's blurred and the shading is thinned out on the chest. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:41, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:18, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Its been 9 days...blur the chest highlight. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:44, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, ah, Mistystar? It can get annoying when people repeat things that have already been stated several times. Ravensoul101 and I were in a car accident, and currently I have my right hand in a cast, and since I'm right-handed, getting on the computer can be hard. I'll try to work on this tomorrow. Echostar229 02:22, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

My mistake; I'm so sorry! I hope you get better soon =) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:23, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little sloppy. And try to darken it just a tadSandstormrocks32 22:52, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

I ended up re-doing it, and I need desperate help with the shading. Can someone help me? Echostar229 02:38, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

I can help. What do you need help with? wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:32, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you didn't fill in the area for the ear pink. But other than that it's pretty great! Sandstormrocks32 17:43, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:25, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Nightshine 00:56, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Echo's still working on this. Her comp is having issues, and it won't be fixed for a few more days. @Wildheart- she needs help with blurring the shading, and is wondering if you can help with thinning it out. [She's standing right behind me while I type this, so that's how I know. :P] Leggo 🏈 03:23, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is the nose color supposed to be greyish? Sandstormrocks32 23:22, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Um, are Apprentices allowed to comment on other Chararts? Whether they are or not, I'll say this: Darken the earpink a tad. Apart from that, I think it looks great!-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 00:20, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Well, her nose is black on her apprentice Charart, but maybe all apprentices have black noses. I dunno.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 00:25, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, apprentices are allowed to comment on chararts lol anyway, I reuploaded it for you, Echo. wildheart spring rain ♫ 02:45, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, it obviously didn't work. Reuploading again. }wildheart~ 02:35, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:24, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ack. I thought I had uploaded this a week ago. :P Anyway, Re-uploaded. Echostar229 02:43, May 13, 2011 (UTC)


Ummm... guys, lay off of them a bit, they where in a car crash, its gonna be slow-going for a bit.


Lightningstar

Who was giving them trouble? Nobody's been rushing them since like... /checks. like a months ago. And Lightningstar, sign with four ~s when you're on talk pages. This looks lovely, maybe just make the earpink a bit paler, and make the nose color match the earpink color. Other than that it's great! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:27, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

It looks pretty good, but it's a bit flat. Darken the shading a tad and I think it will be ready (unless someone else notices something o3o). Mossy go away. 02:22, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink Sandstormrocks32 17:07, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink neater and more triangular, and blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:28, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 00:33, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the pelt a bit so it matches her apprentice. This hasn't been updated in a week.Lark That Sings at Dawn 11:08, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

...and? Pixlr's been malfunctioning. It'll probably be a day or two before I reupload. Sorry. Echostar229 23:13, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

There are other programs you can use. Sumopaint is pretty good, I like it better than Pixlr, tbh (I really don't like Pixlr, the blur tool isn't strong enough). Then you could always download GIMP, which is my favorite for coloring. Program or not, if it's not worked on soon it will have to be delcined, and this image is so pretty that I'd hate for that to happen! Darkhallows Enter the cave? 01:08, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. My parental controls won't let me download gimp, so i tried Sumopaint. I had issues with its blur tool and burn tool, though. It gave me dark flecks on the tail, and when I blurred, it brought up the gray in the center of earpink. :P Echostar229 01:23, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? Darkhallows Enter the cave? 02:19, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, not yet. There's some smudges near the ear pink. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:50, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Left ear. It's kind of hard ot see, though. And also blur the tail shading. It should look more blended. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:57, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Her left, or ours? Echostar229 14:09, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think ours, also you might want to darken the rightside of her face showing more of where the light source is. This looks absolutly amazing, nice job. Atelda 01:31, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think she's looking pretty good so far! Ivyheart =P 03:46, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shading looks kind of blotchy; blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:49, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Like Mistystar said, blur the tail shading. It looks like it's shaded on one side and dodged on the other. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 04:03, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

the nose pink needs to be a little lighterOh no! emergency!CanyonsongCandypaw to the rescue!

Reuploaded. I didn't do anything about the nose, since it looks fine to me. Echostar229 02:05, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

The real image is under the 'current' one on the file page. :P Echostar229 02:07, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, the tail shading still looks unnatural. Please blur some more to smoothen it out. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 03:06, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's some blurred lineart on the tail on <-------- side. Other than that, it looks fantastic! I see nothing wrong! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:53, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Are kits allowed to critique?If so,the shading on the bottom of the tail is a bit blotchy.Maybe if you blur it it will look better? Other than that it looks great! Dovey Newbie! 20:12, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, Dovey, you are allowed to critique :). Anyways, it is only the tail shading that needs to be fixed. But looks fine to me other than that! Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 19:22, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the blurring you did affected the lineart on the tail. Other than that, I see nothing wrong! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 18:16, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? XD it's time I got back to PCA and WWiki, since I got kicked off of WCRW for a while. Mist: Not emo, not a psycho, not a freak, but a loner. 18:28, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I am. Just been offline due to school. Anyway, people, please, you don't have to constantly repeat the same thing over and over again. It gets annoying, and, re-uploaded. Echostar229 00:38, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is so pretty :D. Repating CBA. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 09:36, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Darkhallows Enter the cave? 11:13, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Barley (K) ~ Approved

File:Barley.KIT.png

My other charart was technically approved, so I'm going to do this one. Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:14, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, got through the first day without comments...is that good or bad? XD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:45, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't there a kit barley already up somewhere on this page? Sandstormrocks32 22:53, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

No, there was, but it was declined, and no one else has reserved it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:56, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, Mistystar. But, can you blur where the black meets the white a little more (mostly around the chest area)? --Cloudskye The Wind Waker

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 04:06, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur, lighten, and define the earpink, and define the markings. }wildheart~ 02:21, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

There is a white pixel between the leg and tail. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 05:13, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller. Nice job Misty! MINTSTARR Want to eat orange ice cream? 21:38, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :D I'll try... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:56, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

RE-Uploaded. This time I got the colors off the loner charart, so I don't need to fix that XD Anything else? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:07, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading at the bottom of the tail, Good job on this ;D SplookMavinotp♥ 22:12, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Anything else? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:04, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the impatience, but its been 6 days since the last comment; 2 days since my last upload. Comments? :P Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:46, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on his left foreleg and I think there's some blurred lineart on the opposite paw but that could just be the shading throwing me off. Also, he has that fuzzy gray around him like when you've done all your shading.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 21:46, May 18, 2011 (UTC)
Finally, a comment! XD Re-Uploaded. Any other comments? :P Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:54, May 18, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the earpink. Other than that, I see nothing wrong with it :D SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 00:30, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:36, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great, I see nothing wrong with it :) Atelda 01:58, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there's some waste around most of the charart, but it could just be this computer. But zoom into it and see if you can find any, if so erase it. Iveh Yo! 21:05, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 03:56, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmm maybe darken the shading a bit more. It's a tad hard to see right now. Other than that it looks great! Goodjob! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:21, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. anything else? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 02:52, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

The markings look really awkward . . . they're very . . . straight. They don't curve at all. And you used a single stroke over both legs and the stomach, which looks unnatural. They're also way too blurred. Mossy go away. 07:01, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:03, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, changes might not be showing...yet. Its an epic fail :P Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:11, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

The changes still won't show...I guess this computer isn't working. Anyone, help? :3 Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:28, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nvm. I think the changes are showing now xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:02, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:14, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

It looks awesome! I think it's ready for approval. Maybe just a few more tiny things, but it's there! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:34, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Anyone else, comments? I'm sorry for the impatience, but this is my fourth charart, so I hope you understand xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:26, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the gray bits around the charart and make the earpink smaller and brighter. llwildheartl 23:14, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I got the earpink off of his other images, so I'm not changing that, but I already erased the gray bits, but its not showing yet. thanks for commenting, though! xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:19, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

re-Uploaded as a new image. Don't comment on earpink, I got it off of his loner charart; and don't comment on the curves of the markings. They're like that because they're supposed to be like that. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 02:12, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Redraw the thinnest part of the markings again; it's too blurred. Darken the shading some. llwildheartl 04:15, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

The marking on the left side (his right) match his loner image but his other half doesn't match his rogue image. I can still see some stray waste close to the lines of the charart, zoom in and erase them and that should help you get them all. Iveh Yo! 15:08, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Well, his rogue and loner images are different, so I'm leaving the markings how they are. I'll try to erase the waste pixels, and I'll darkent he shading and unblur some of the markings. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:52, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Again, don't comment on earpink, I got it off of his loner charart; and don't comment on the markings. They're like that because they're supposed to be like that, and I'm not changing them. :P Anything else? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:54, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

And don't comment on the file name, either. Its like that because the changes weren't showing on the previous one. Again, comments? xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:59, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

No one's commented for a while. Looks, amazing! Nice job, Mistystar! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:15, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job Mistystar!=D Rainey 23:19, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well then should we Tweak his rogue image in Tweak Week then? Iveh Yo! 03:17, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. It doesn't really matter, okay? None of the images are exactly the same and this is the closest it will be to perfect. I seriously can't see anything else to do, but comments? 207.62.246.62 21:45, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. That was me. Sorry for the impatience, but its kind of annoying when no one comments with constructive comments. xD Thanks SquirrelFlame and Rainey, and is there anything else I should change with this? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:48, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches on the legs to make them look less "Straight." Looks great Misty!

Thanks! Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:20, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I'm not going to go through everything not to comment on again, so please read the above comments. I made two, whichever one is better, you can choose. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:24, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, the previous comment was mine xD. Can't believe I forgot to sign! SplookMavinotp♥ 01:33, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, which version is better? :P Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:47, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing! I like the one on the left better :) All I really have to say is smooth out the shading on the tail. Great work! SplookMavinotp♥ 22:27, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Re-Uploaded. Just a reminder, don't comment on the earpink; I got it off his rogue charart. xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:39, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this is great! I like the one on the left better. This might be ready for approval! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:49, June 8, 2011 (UTC) 01:47, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks really nice and I think the left one is better. It looks pretty much done and doesn't really need anything much to me. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 02:19, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I deleted the right one. Thanks! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 15:58, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Put some black in the area between the left ear and the right ear Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:37, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Why should I? There isn't any on his other chararts, and I already said, I'm not changing the black markings, because I want them like that and they match his other images and if you seriously can't stand it looking like that, change it during tweak week. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:10, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights and darken the shading. This should be ready soon. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:22, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hopefullly; Its my fourth charart... Re-Uploaded. I can't darken it any more, though, since its a black-and-white cat. And I'm not changing the markings or earpink, so there really isn't anything else I can do with this. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:56, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Nice job, Mistystar! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 19:23, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add a bit of a highlight to the tail. Mist: Not emo, not a psycho, not a freak, but a loner. 19:44, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 02:05, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:07, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Approved

Ivypool (W)- Approved

Ivypool.warrior Here's what I got of her so far! Critique? Ivystripe 02:20, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Pretty good! Blur the highlights and earpink some more, and add some smaller patches. She also has white paws, so fix that. Lighten the white some more, too, so it doesn't look so gray, and add shading. If all the darker gray is the shading, thin it out. Leggo 🏈 02:26, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Dont make the highlights so bright. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:28, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and lighten the silver fur. --Gοldenpelt 02:30, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Extend the highlights on the forelegs, brighten the highlight on the gray part of her forehead, darken the ear-pink a tad. ScarletwindStep into theLight 03:13, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

I had a feeling I made the shading too dark. By the way, I got the ear pink from her apprentice image, so I thought that should be right? If not, oh well Ivystripe 16:26, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Make her white where you had the gray (like her apprentice image). Darken the ear pink to a darker colour. Also whiten her paws and where was the tail-tip from? I'll need to check her charart at the moment E-SCOPE IS HERE 18:41, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the ear pink, lightened the shading, tried to add more light parts to the legs. Ivystripe 19:27, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Lighten the whole thing up, it looks too grey. --Leafstrike-- 19:42, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

I uploaded the fixed version but it's not showing. This isn't right....Ivystripe 19:54, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Make the highlights bigger and make the earpink more triangle-shaped. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 19:56, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Stunning! blur the highlights a tad, and lighten the white, to make it look, whiter....(<----FAIL WORD DX) there seems to be a lighter part on her legs, IDK what it is, so blur it out, if its highlight, its dosen't go thereMaple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 21:25, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Make the highlights more visible, and blur them. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:08, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the gray a lot, and smudge the patches too. And the stripes looks different . . . also the big patch on her back doesn't make sense with the markings on her apprentice charart. And she had a gray patch on her chest. Mossy go away. 01:31, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great so far! Center the earpink and make it more trinagular. Rainey 04:48, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can update this at home, but for some odd reason it won't let me type, so I can't say when I re-upload it. Please be patient with me. I looked at her kit image to get her spots the way they are. What's different about the stripes? Do you mean that I should make them thicker, thinner...? Ivystripe 16:27, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Completely redid the spots and stripes, lightened her silver/grey color, and fixed the ear pink. Ivystripe 19:59, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

The markings still don't work. Here she has one huge patch on her back, but on her apprentice image she has two patches on her back. Mossy go away. 23:08, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

But also, that's her other side. I looked at her kit image to help her with the reverse side. If I reversed this warrior image of her, THEN I'd need to use those exact markings. Iveh Yo! 23:20, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you need to add the chest patch because on her apprentice charart it comes over to this side of her. Also, the edge of the patch on her chest is kind of sharp. Make it a little rounder and more natural. Brighten the shoulder highlight and make the earpink a little more red. Darken the tail shading as well. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:48, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ahh, I see. Lemme go fix that really quick...Iveh Yo! 23:58, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 00:06, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's her other side, but the patches aren't attached and they can't randomly go from unattached to attached. Mossy go away. 01:28, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

I referenced off her kit image as well, and that's how I percieved it. Do you think maybe you could redline what you mean? I'm just not sure exactly what you're envisioning 209.34.114.210 13:56, April 7, 2011 (UTC) [Ivystripe, not signed it]

File:Ivypool.redline.png The shape of the patches doesn't have to be the way I drew it, it just needs the space between them. Smudge her patches a lot more too. Mossy go away. 07:15, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hope this looks alright. Iveh Yo! 19:59, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh! You didn't have to change the patches' shape, just put a space between them. :P Mossy go away. 21:11, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks better, but it still doesn't look right though. I might need to smudge it more....Iveh Yo! 21:12, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the patches so they match her apprentice image and blur the shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:29, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, it would make it much darker than in her apprentce image. I picked the colors off her charart. Iveh Yo! 11:29, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 11:31, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights and darken the earpink. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 15:03, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is great, Ivystripe! Darken the shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 15:44, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, it looks kinda lumpy. ScarletwindStep into theLight 04:35, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Iveh Yo! 01:18, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading; the white is a bit too inconsistant. The patches are beautiful! --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 01:33, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I cannot blur the shading any more, all I can do is smudge it. No matter how much I smudge it, it just never looks right to me :/ Iveh Yo! 01:38, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink some. I can help with the shading if you want... =) --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 03:42, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 19:07, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Lighten or redden the earpink, and blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:09, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 22:22, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Neck shading needs to be blurred, so does the leg shading. The earpink needs to be changed, brighter or darker, not too sure. And there is some kind of color outside the lines. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 01:59, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

And you might want to blur the edges of the markings a bit. They look a little too smudgy. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:48, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Man I hope this is finally the right earpink color Iveh Yo! 21:14, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sadly, no, I don't think it is. Use the apprentice tutorials to find the right one. some of the highlights look blotchy. And there is still some gray outside the image which needs to removed. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 23:16, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this looks great! Just make the ear pink redder. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:33, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the ear pink entirely, tried erasing the shadows outside the outline, and I tried to blue the shading some more. Iveh Yo! 19:42, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

I feel mean saying this, but the earpink is too neonish. And the highlights could be blurred some. MINTSTARR You can stand under my Umbrella! 20:35, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

I took it from the apprentice tutorial like I was told to do. If this isn't right then I don't know what color to make it :/ Iveh Yo! 00:16, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah lighten the earpink a bit. Maybe dodge it on like 5% and then colourpick it and redo the earpink. The charts aren't exactly accurate. They're just guides =) --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:37, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Still don't think this ear pink color is quite right. Iveh Yo! 00:22, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit paler. Maybe take from Mistystar's leader charart? --> Mistystar.leaderScarletwindStep into theLight 03:34, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 14:49, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the charart --Leafstrike-- 17:14, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

And make the earpink bigger wildheart spring rain ♫ 21:32, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the ear-pink a tad. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 23:39, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Define the gray patches, it blends too much with the shading. Nightshine 22:45, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Note: I am having some computer issues at the moment, but I am going to try saving the xcf. file to a flash drive and working on this at school. This shouldn't take long until I can reupload this 71.72.151.61 22:55, April 19, 2011 (UTC) [Ivystripe, not signed in]

Looks perfect! :)Sandstormrocks32 23:15, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

This. Is. Beautiful. Ivystripe. Blur the earpink just a teeny bit. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:05, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

The smudging on the two patches on her back looks a bit messy, and make the ear pink larger and a bit lighter. Mossy go away. 17:56, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hopefully the rest of the waste around the lineart is finally taken care of! Iveh Yo! 00:12, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Neaten up the edges of the tabby patches and brighten the earpink a tad. wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:48, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 15:40, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/add shading to the tail. This looks great! Leggo 🏈 16:05, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out the neck shading, blur the earpink, and erase the waste around the charart. wildheart spring rain ♫ 00:58, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see the waste around the charart. Could somebody help me fix that? Or, at least, where is the waste at? I can't see it. 209.34.114.210 13:30, April 26, 2011 (UTC) [Ivystripe, not signed in]

Reuploaded Did all suggestions, tried getting rid of the waste...I thinned out the neck shading, but now her neck is bothering me. Does anyone else see that? Iveh Yo! 19:57, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe it might just be my home computer. It looks fine at school, but her shading doesn't match her apprentice shading...should I try lightening the shading or leave it as is? [Ivystripe not signed in]

Yeah the neck shading could be blurred a bit. The shading doesn't have to match =) just the markings. wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:29, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried blurring the shading as much as I could, but it looks to me it could still use more. Iveh Yo! 13:35, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

I love it! Sandstormrocks32 23:12, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

The patches really need to be defined against the shading. Lighten the shading where it's the most dark. Nightshine 00:52, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I had to redo the neck shading since I couldn't save it on my computer, but I went ahead and lightened it. Does the redone neck shading look okay? Iveh Yo! 13:41, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yup. Could be a bit thinner, though. Brighten the earpink and then blur it so it's smoother. wildheart spring rain ♫ 03:02, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 16:24, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes look more like her apprentice's image and make the earpink a tad smaller. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:06, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

But on her apprentice image they are on the other side, I tried copying from both the apprentice and kit images, keeping both in mind. [Ivystripe not signed in] 65.31.51.134 22:10, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't mean like totally match up, I just meant the style of the stripes. :P Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:34, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

But I don't see how they're not similar...? [Ivystripe not signed in] 65.31.51.134 00:14, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

They look fine. Don't change anything. }wildheart~ 01:56, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, well what about the ear pink? Do you agree that needs to be smaller? [Ivystripe not signed in] 209.34.114.210 14:26, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, a bit. And maybe redraw the earpink because it looks a little bit too blurred right now. I meant don't change the stripes :3 'cause they're bootiful haha }wildheart~ 03:24, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the earpink, I don't know if the changes are showing yet because of wiki uploading problems. Iveh Yo! 16:35, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Well can you at least define the stripes? :P Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:04, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

I don't understand how they look wrong though...do you mean darken them? I got the stripe color off the kit image. [Ivystripe not signed in] 71.64.142.101 22:44, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the charart. --Leafstrike-- 00:45, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Umm can you tell me where? I double checked around all the lines and I don't see any [Ivystripe not signed in]

Yes I meant darken them. Make them stand out more. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:31, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mmk defined stripes, I also added a tad more shading to the tail. I still can't see any waste around the charart. Iveh Yo! 21:15, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Any suggestions? Iveh Yo! 01:35, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white areas a bit. Define the patches a little more. Nightshine 02:33, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 16:34, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

The only shading I see is on the back. The white areas seem to grayish. MINTSTARR Want to eat orange ice cream? 21:14, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

But I've been told to lighten it to this point, and her apprentice image looks like it hardly has any. I liked how it was before, but it has to match. Iveh Yo! 22:24, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

The more I look at this, the more I hate it. I might redo her fur, patches, and stripes, and just keep the shading. Iveh Yo! 23:11, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, instead of redoing this, can somebody help me fix the patches? I just don't think the color is right...Iveh Yo! 16:47, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can help, if you'd like =) llwildheartl 23:16, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

What do you think needs to be fixed? llwildheartl 23:18, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

The patches just don't seem to match her other images. Iveh Yo! 23:57, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks to Wildheart :3 Thanks! Iveh Yo! 01:48, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

looks great! but darken the shading Sandstormrocks32 00:21, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, that looks awesome! But I think you should change the tabby stripes to spots, then blur them gently. That'll make it match the apprentice. Petalwhisker Oh yeah, oh yeah... 00:45, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think its perfect just blur the earpink Wildfire 20:43, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I wouldn't change the tabby stripes. They're beautiful, and they match the apprentice version as well as they can without having seen that side of Ivypool. (I don't count the kit version, 'cause it doesn't match the apprentice version very well at all.) llwildheartl 23:22, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Oh god, I have to say her apprentice image is my least favorite out of all of my chararts. I think I abandoned it or withdrew it and it got accepted anyway. Honestly, I'd take out the furry pattern and leave the stripes the way they are. The apprentice image can be re-done in tweak week. Would that be OK with everyone? Darkhallows Enter the cave? 03:58, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Furry pattern? You mean the smudgies...? XD llwildheartl 04:02, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her tail a little bit Sandstormrocks32 17:10, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

So, do I need to redo the patches then? Iveh Yo! 23:32, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so. Why change a perfect image? ;) Moonflight 22:24, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Mmk, well does anybody else agree with Sandstormrocks that the shading is too light? I have a difficult time seeing much shading on white cats in the first place. Iveh Yo! 00:21, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe darken the base shading's opacity like 1% but it looks pretty good to me. llwildheartl 03:00, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine. If you try to change it, it could look worse. Moonflight 13:14, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok well I asked Nightshine to get another opinion. Honestly, I don't see much more I can do. Iveh Yo! 16:52, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

There is blurred lineart on the right foreleg and the forehead. Nice job Ivystripe! Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 20:45, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Iveh Yo! 22:14, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Its wonderful! Just make the earpink a bit smaller, and it'll be perfect! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:13, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think it's showing right now Iveh Yo! 00:21, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely :3 I think its good. :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:23, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps make the earpink more consistant, like just spread it out more, and then you might just want to blur the edge of the spots because it looks like the smudges draw too much attention but that may just be me XD. This looks amazing! Good job! Atelda 01:56, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

The smudging on the patches looks very strange . . . as though she's prickly like a porcupine. xD And they look too dark. Mossy go away. 04:57, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Other than the earpink issue that was already noted, I see nothing wrong. Lovely job =) llwildheartl 23:50, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried to not blur the smudged patches too much, just enough to not draw too much attention to them. Made ear pink bigger. Lightened patches. Still think the stripes need to be darker but I'm having a hard time doing that without effing up the image. Iveh Yo! 00:57, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink -ſceheartBlah blah 00:18, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Just define the earpink, as Iceheart said. Other than that, it's beautiful! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 02:02, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

You've come a long way Ivystripe! Just blur the stripes a tad and it will be ready! Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 02:05, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks guys :) I don't think the image is showing up, even the last time I uploaded it, so look at the full view just to make sure. Iveh Yo! 21:55, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you've got blurred lineart all the way around the cat; fix that. llwildheartl 22:54, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't remember ever doing that...ugh must be this computer I'm on (my other one is unfixable right now). 71.72.157.130 14:22, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I see what happened. Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 14:40, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Much better =) Define the earpink a tad. llwildheartl 23:43, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 18:48, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

She's looking great! Ivyheart =P 23:52, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, she is. :D Maybe make the earpink a bit easier to see? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:31, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken those patches on her Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:33, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

@Sandstormrocks, I've done that in the past and numerous people have told me to make them like this, so I'm not going to change it. @Mistystar, what do you mean? Should I change the color a little bit, or do you mean define it? Iveh Yo! 14:32, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

No, then color is fine. Just define it, since currently, the whole ear looks kind of pink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:58, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mmk, does it look better now? :D Iveh Yo! 02:36, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, by the way, please try to get comments in this weekend. I go to my mom's during the weeks now, and as of now, she has no Internet, and I won't be able to edit until Friday. Not trying to sound demanding or anything, just letting you know. Iveh Yo! 01:20, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Wow, this is amazing! I like this a lot! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 03:16, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, well then could an admin put this on CBA please? Iveh Yo! 21:03, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

The smudging looks really off, like she has little pokey strands of hair, it should be more like the smudging on Fernshade's images. And lighten her gray patches. Mossy go away. 23:57, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried doing the smudges like her's but I don't really see what they difference is between the two smudge patterns. Iveh Yo! 00:23, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:32, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job, Ivystripe! Rainey 10:40, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah! It looks fantastic. The way you did the smudges was perfect, in my opinion. I wonder if this will be going up soon. Ivyheart =P 16:01, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I hope so, too. I know a charart I can do and I would like to get started. Not trying to complain or anything haha! Thanks!Iveh Yo! 21:28, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Comments before approval? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:50, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks straight. I can't quite put a finger on it, but it seems that it's too boxy or too low on the ear. Idk, you can choose which way to fix it. If it's fine, sorry. It just looks kinda off, but, we'll see. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 19:19, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred bottom of earpink a tad hope that looks better. Iveh Yo! 23:57, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad-it looks like a needle right now--and blur the shading between the longest/largest patch and the haunch one. This deserves to be tagged with CBA. Excellent, Ivystripe!-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 01:12, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I undid most of the blurring to the bottom of her ear and blurred the shading more. Anything else? Iveh Yo! 01:44, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Is'nt this approved? Or am I confusued? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:13, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't approved yet. CBA=Comments Before Approval. And enlarge the earpink even more. Mist: Not emo, not a psycho, not a freak, but a loner. 18:36, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded even though I think the 24 hours were up. Iveh Yo! 21:27, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 11:15, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

This deserves the CBA, its very stunning, good job. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 19:17, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approving. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:13, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneteller (Ancient) - Approved

File:Stoneteller (Ancient).healer.png I worked on this for days and it still looks like crap. xD Constructments? Mossy go away. 18:27, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

What? Nonsense. It looks great. Just add highlights to the eyes and herbs. Moonflight 18:39, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her fur, it looks more silver than white. --Gοldenpelt 18:40, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mossy go away. 19:14, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Half Moon, I presume? Anyways, it's good. Make the earpink darker, and that's pretty much all I see. --princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    19:39, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job, I don't see anything that could be fixed. --Leafstrike-- 20:13, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I belive the herbs can be shaded a but mroe detailed. Feather 20:18, April 9, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Darken the shading under the chin and lighten the ear-pink a tad. ScarletwindStep into theLight 22:31, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading near the front left and back left legs maybe, to give it more depth. (Our left xD) This is beautiful. 8D Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:53, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's also a gray line under the tail. Leggo 🏈 00:04, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

There is a border of colour out of the line art around the tail and base of the tail. Darken the ear pink as well. Nightshine 00:14, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Is it supposed to have mud? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:04, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

No, because healers never leave the cave. Mossy go away. 00:43, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten this a bunch. Still looks silver instead of white. This is good. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 01:48, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Please don't comment about the colour around the lineart, I'll get rid of it when the image goes on CBA. Mossy go away. 22:09, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it some more. Where's your light source? --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:56, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a touch. This is epically, awesomely beautiful, Mossy :D Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:29, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Lighten the shading a tad bit around the back, belly, and front paws. Koisplash 07:40, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a while. You still working on this...? wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:01, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I just wasn't getting many comments and had a lot of schoolwork so I figured it could wait. :P Now I have ten days off school!~ I think the shading it blurred enough, I lightened it a wee touch. Mossy go away. 03:05, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it some more. It's beautiful, but the shading is really dark so it looks like she is a light gray cat. wildheart spring rain ♫ 00:07, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

It may be just me, but it looks like the line art on the bottem of the tail has something odd going on about it, but that may be just me, and like wildheart said lighten the shading more, otherwise i think it looks amazing! Atelda 21:45, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, just to clear things up, I didn't mean lighten the shading, I meant lighten the entire image. Unless you want to lighten the shading.... but I kind of think that's more work XD wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:22, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the base of the tail. ScarletwindStep into theLight 21:02, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like on the tail part thee is some shading outside of the charart. Iveh Yo! 00:14, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image just a tad more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:08, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

You know guys . . . I can't lighten the whole image. xD It's like almost pure white. :P I can only lighten the shading, but I personally think it's light enough. And Ivystripe and Atelda, I already said I would erase that after it got on CBA. Mossy go away. 02:13, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Just brighten the highlights and darken the shading a tiny bit then this will be ready. Nightshine 00:43, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry I haven't been on much, I got sick and I didn't feel like doing anything productive. xD Mossy go away. 21:47, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Uh...she's glowing with a beautiful silver light XD might want to fix that though I find it awesome.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 01:26, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shimmerpool: Mossy said she'll erase it when the image goes on CBA :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:29, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more, it still looks silver to me. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:55, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading or make the patch of shading on her legs that's darker than the rest lighter. MINTSTARR Want to eat orange ice cream? 21:33, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Does anybody see the "stuff" sround the charart or is that my computer bugging out? Sandstormrocks32 01:37, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

That's just the way she does her shading, and she says she'll erase it when the image goes on CBA. But honestly, Mossy? You should probably fix it now, because if you miss some later (when it's on CBA) nobody will be able to change it. }wildheart~ 03:05, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Wildheart . . . I know what I'm doing. There are ways to make sure none is missed, I do it by using colour select. So please, everyone shut up about it! I'm getting people telling me to darken it and others telling me to lighten it, so I'm not doing anything. Mossy go away. 00:29, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her base color a tad, so she appears less silvery, and then darken the shading. Leggo 🏈 01:56, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

That doesn't make any sense. Her pelt is white. I can't lighten it. Mossy go away. 22:45, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

No, it's not. This image is really dark, for a white cat. llwildheartl 00:22, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

More hightlights on the haunch and the tail then it would look pretty good for the time being Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:16, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wildheart, I would know. I made the image. Her base coat is white. I can't lighten the coat and darken the shading. That will just make her look darker. Mossy go away. 04:00, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make sure there are no pixels outside of the line art. Darken the tail and haunch shading a bit. Nightshine 23:58, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid it. Does it look any better? Mossy go away. 02:29, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

There is a lot of colour outside of the pixels. Nightshine 02:30, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, the new one still isn't showing up. I use a special method for getting rid of excess pixels in which you go on the lineart layer, dunk the background any colour, colour select the background, and click "cut". You go and click cut on every layer. You can't miss pixels that way. :P Mossy go away. 02:59, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Just saying I LOVE how you did the ears, they look great. *Ivyheart* 17:19, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Is there supposed to be that "stuff" around her charart? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 13:34, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

No. Ivyheart, please don't comment just to say something looks great, unless its "This is great, I don't see anything wrong with it. I think the shading on her left side needs to be blurred and brighten the tail highlight. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 13:50, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Guys, stop commenting! Did I not state above that the charart isn't reuploading? The new version is totally different. I already explained the "stuff" like four times - this is getting really frustrating. All comments about it are going to be ignored until it starts reuploading again, and all comments about "stuff", are going to ignored, period. Thank you. Mossy go away. 21:26, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, the new version can be seen as the second last uploaded version on the image's page. So just find it in there (like I said, it appears as the previously uploaded version before the one that currently shows up, and if you still don't understand what I'm saying, it's the really bright white one) and click it to view it full size. That will have to compensate until it starts working properly again. And if you have read this, can you being your post with a ~? Because I have a feeling a lot of people won't and then they're going to comment on what they see, which will just mislead me and screw up the charart. If I don't see a ~ at the beginning of your post, I'm not going to ignore you, just ask if you've read it. Mossy go away. 21:34, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

~ Hmmmmmmm looks great, but maybe darken the earpink a tad. It's a bit too hot pink right now. Other than that itlooks great! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:40, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the blueish-silver glow around the Charart. Blur the shading on the bottom of the front leg furthest from us. Maybe darken the fur on the tail near where it's attached to the haunch.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 06:52, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mossy said:"Please don't comment about the colour around the lineart, I'll get rid of it when the image goes on CBA....and all comments about "stuff", are going to ignored"

So, yeah. don't comment on that :P Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:50, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

~ Ok I looked at the new version. All I can find on it is that the ear pink and the nose seem to be a little bit too bright, maybe darken it just a tad? Other than that I see nothing wrong. Iveh Yo! 14:56, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't see that Paleclaw said almost the same thing xD Sorry! Iveh Yo! 14:58, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

~this is almost ready. Theres just some ear pink on the wrong side of the little line on the right side. I dont know how to explain properly, hope you get it. This is good. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:47, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

This IS GREAT! I love it! The shading's great, but i'd put more highlights(maybe, my computer sometimes makes images look messed up!), but overall, it's an awesome charart! Moonstream 00:23, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

~Maybe make the earpink a little darker. Lovely, though. llwildheartl 02:45, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't see that warning post of Mossy's.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 07:35, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

She looks great! I don't see much that could be changed. I honestly look at the charart and think nothing to be changed. It's almost ready to go up. Ivyheart =P 03:58, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

~Agreed xD Its beautiful. If possible, though, blur the chest highlight a little more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:06, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur tail highlight, and blur the shading a ton on the front paws. It's very hard not to suggest erasing the glow around it but, as Mossy said, it will be erased. *tries hard to convince self* "It will be ERASED. It will be ERASED!"-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 08:26, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:29, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry about the delay. Mossy go away. 14:46, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with this. Good job! Snowdazzle ROAD TRIPPP!! 20:12, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, this looks great! awesome job Mossy! Iveh Yo! 01:16, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:51, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the front paws? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:52, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think the paws look fine. :U Mossy go away. 03:11, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

There's still ear colour to far out on the right ear. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:13, June 10, 2011 (UTC

Blur the highlights into the shading a bit on the <-------- front leg, then I think this should be approved. I see nothing apart from the leg wrong. Great work, Mossy! :) (Oh ya, it looks even better with the weird glow around it erased).-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 05:33, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Whoops, the glow hasn't been erased. I just didn't notice it before.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 09:18, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Squirrelflame-lighten the front paws a tad, lighten the <-------- front leg a bit, and I think this should become 'Stoneteller (Ancient) - CBA like Ivypool's image. It's tagged with CBA.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 01:26, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

It hasn't been CBA'd, but someone really should, considering the comments I'm getting on it. :P Mossy go away. 18:45, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Great work Mossy! I see nothing wrong with it. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 19:31, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

I want to CBA it, but I'm not even a warrior yet D: Mist: Not emo, not a psycho, not a freak, but a loner. 19:14, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the ear thng ive mentioned 3 times now and i will CBA it. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:52, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I said I would fix colour outside of the lineart after it was on CBA many, many times. 70.64.149.241 00:27, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Its not on the out side, its inside. Do you want a redline image? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:10, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

I found and fixed that *coughcoughincrediblyminorcough* ear pink thing, and I'm putting it on CBA. I'm kind of irritated now, considering that I waited for CBA for about three pixels of colour by the ear. Besides, Iceheart said she would CBA it once I fixed that. And yes, I did delete any stray pixels on the outside. Mossy go away. 22:06, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't this approved? It's been two days since it had beed CBA'd Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:23, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on the paws and front legs.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 00:40, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ice (Lo) - Approved

File:Ice.loner.png I'm not so sure about the collar. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 14:55, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken his ear pink, blur and darken shading, and his collar looks stuck to his neck. It should stick out a bit. Mossy go away. 20:10, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely work! Maybe make the teeth a bit bigger. Should he have claws like in scourge's rouge version, since bloodclan cats have their claws re-enforced with dogs' teeth? ScarletwindStep into theLight 20:14, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know. --Leafstrike-- 20:17, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 20:20, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink, blur the shading, and add/darken it on the back part of the right foreleg. ScarletwindStep into theLight 21:22, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 22:04, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wait . . . he doesn't get a collar, because he wasn't a BloodClan cat when he was a loner. Mossy go away. 00:44, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

But he can't really take it off.... And plus Snake got a collar on his Loner image. Good job on this! maybe blur the shading a bit more. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:33, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 15:11, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, blur the pelt. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:04, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred the shading A LOT --Leafstrike-- 22:50, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a lot. This is nice =P wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:25, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 14:38, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I blurred it too much. --Leafstrike-- 20:31, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Define the earpink, redden it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:56, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

The collar needs shading, make the ear pink a little more noticeable. It kinds of blends in with his fur color. Iveh Yo! 01:12, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink perhaps, and put some shading on the tail and possibly the legs. Nice job :) 184.96.25.37 03:03, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the earpink a little, but I'm not gonna change it because I took it from his rogue image. There was collar shading, but it wasn't noticeable. --Leafstrike-- 17:19, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:37, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define the earpink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:05, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 22:14, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink needs to be a bit smaller, it's almost filling the ear right now. Also, the back shading's a bit thick and needs to be blurred more. Otherwise, it looks good! ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:09, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think the earpink is fine. And this charart looks horrible to me. --Leafstrike-- 18:50, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine, but for some reason the shading still looks odd. It somewhat looks like around the lighter shading, there is a darker shade and then it lightens ups around that. I would smudge the shading or possible redo the shading, just the shading, other than that it looks great! Atelda 01:07, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redone. --Leafstrike-- 02:55, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and brighten it. Enlarge the highlights or thin out the shading so it looks closer to this shading redline and then blur it. wildheart spring rain ♫ 02:59, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

I actually redid this, but the changes aren't showing. --Leafstrike-- 16:26, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Try reuploading it again. wildheart spring rain ♫ 03:30, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

I did, but the previous upload turned to the redone version. o_o --Leafstrike-- 00:55, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh that's happened to me quite a few times. It may take a while for it to show the version you need, so just be patient. I think one time it took about a day for it to show the new version. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 19:55, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

I know what to do. It's just been a long time... or not --Leafstrike-- 21:51, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:04, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Here's the redone version, if anyone wants to see: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110430025306/warriors/images/archive/a/ac/20110502005455!Ice.loner.png --Leafstrike-- 00:47, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

The redone one looks wonderful! Perhaps redden the earpik and it looks almost like it goes all the way down to his eye, so possibly fix that. Define the shading just a tad on his body, and add shading on his tail and legs. It looks amazing!! Atelda 03:21, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There is shading on the tail and legs. And I am not changing the earpink. --Leafstrike-- 23:04, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading. Redden the earpink and make it smaller. Why won't you change it? }wildheart~ 03:34, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the earpink from his rogue image, and it doesn't make any sense to me to have two different earpink colours. And NOW the changes show. --Leafstrike-- 21:41, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you can take the earpink from his kit image (I made that xD), I think the earpink on the kit charart looks better. :P Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:59, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

If you say so... --Leafstrike-- 00:42, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 00:44, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, and either extend it up the flank a little, or add some shading at the along its back. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 02:23, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:49, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the teeth on the collar and blur the shading. It might help to look at this redline 'cause the shading is kind of non-sensical right now XD }wildheart~ 05:35, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and make the earpink smaller. }wildheart~ 05:37, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shading ffffaaaaailll --Leafstrike-- 17:30, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the shading, and possibly add highlights (I'm such a sucker for them xD) Iveh Yo! 19:42, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights, blur the shading, and that box of shading isn't anything you'll see on cats, so fix that please. MINTSTARR Want to eat orange ice cream? 21:35, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid this again, but the changes aren't showing. --Leafstrike-- 23:55, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, it's fine. --Leafstrike-- 23:56, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot. Also, blur the earpink and make it lighter. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 20:43, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading on the tail. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:10, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 17:26, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back legs, please. It looks wayyyyyyy to dark. --Cloudskye Delete 17:40, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:11, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks much better. Can you blur just a tad where the shading and pelt color meet (on the haunch)? --Cloudskye Delete 16:29, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 17:02, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the shading and pelt colour meet on the haunch, and darken the shading on the middle of the belly. llwildheartl 00:53, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 18:02, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments? (Sorry, I'm a bit impatient) --Leafstrike-- 22:02, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Its okay, I'm really impatient too XD Define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:07, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do that when my home laptop is back (I'm on a school comp right now) --Leafstrike-- 18:58, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:52, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I now have GIMP :D --Leafstrike-- 03:17, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading A LOT, make the earpink and highlights brighter, and make the earpink smaller(desaturate, I believe, or is that making it paler? I blanked out.) Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 00:36, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Can someone blur for me? --Leafstrike-- 23:58, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

I will. Mossy go away. 05:22, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) --Leafstrike-- 15:24, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred the shading and reuploaded it . . . then I remembered I can't upload stuff. Moonleaf, do you have an e-mail, so I could send it to you? Mossy go away. 21:06, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I do. :P --Leafstrike-- 01:42, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes aren't showing yet. I think it got me too. --Leafstrike-- 17:03, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't really showing for anyone; define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:05, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know. --Leafstrike-- 00:18, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights together on the back leg closest to us. Is it just me, or is the leg I just described way too dark? Should there be some highlights added?-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 00:36, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, I was looking at the top Charart. Erase what I said before from ur mind. The lower Charart is fine. The collar shading could do with some blurring, though. And, is his earpink supposed to be that white-primrose sorta colour? I think you should darken and redden it. It just doesn't seem right to me.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 00:40, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I forgot to show the new blurred version, courtesy of Mossy: http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110525001732/warriors/images/archive/a/ac/20110525004703!Ice.loner.png And the lower charart is an older version. --Leafstrike-- 00:48, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is still kind of hard to see. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:40, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Brighten the earpink, and darken the shading in the middle of the belly. llwildheartl 23:11, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 03:23, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is the right size, it just needs to be pink. I think there is an ear pink chart in one of the above images. Use that to choose an ear pink. LeopardclawEyes watching in the Dark… 18:36, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

I lightened the earpink actually, and I think it's fine. --Leafstrike-- 19:00, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Making the earpink lighter would only make it harder to see. Darken it, and make it a tad more pink, instead of scarlet or crimson.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 01:24, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do it when the changes show. --Leafstrike-- 17:29, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you should put the current version at the top of the section, so people don't get confused. Define the earpink more, though. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:23, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

I said that I'll fix it when the changes start showing. And they're not :( --Leafstrike-- 17:26, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, the changes are showing. You may start commenting. --Leafstrike-- 20:08, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Now it isn't showing. This is gonna take forever to approve. --Leafstrike-- 16:05, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the legs a little. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 02:04, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights and darken the blue on the collar. I don't know. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:20, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes are showing! FINALLY! --Leafstrike-- 21:04, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more red and darken it. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:33, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not easy to edit when your mouse is broken and you have to use the touch pad. --Leafstrike-- 16:21, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe define it a bit more and move it up in the ear? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 19:21, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Give the middleish area of the body a highlight. Mist: Not emo, not a psycho, not a freak, but a loner. 19:35, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think the middle part is fine. --Leafstrike-- 19:51, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Shade thcollar, and the neck directly under the collar, so it looks the collar is sitting there. ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 16:14, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 18:05, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Add a tiny bit of back shading. ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 17:47, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reupuloaded --Moonleaf 19:54, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:01, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

None; approving. -ſceheartBlah blah 06:29, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (Q) - Approved

Shy Fawn.queenComments? --Nightshine 01:28, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks a tad bit...green? Could you make the ear pink stand out a little bit? Iveh Yo! 01:38, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened ear pink. I took the colours right from her sharp claw image. Nightshine 01:40, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok, now that I looked the shading colors are the same :) My bad! Iveh Yo! 01:43, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger. No offense to the artist who did her original image, but the colours are kind of terrible. They look very green. Could we change this in Tweak Week, and if so, why don't we just change the colour now? }wildheart~ 04:35, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded changed colours around and made ear pink bigger. We'll just redo the Sharpclaw image during tweak week. Nightshine 05:21, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's what I meant. Sorry for the miscommunication. Perhaps make the colour a bit richer, as it's still a bit green. }wildheart~ 05:48, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. This is great! :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:54, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded how's this? Nightshine 23:33, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! IF possible, lighten the shading on the tail, its a bit hard to see, but otherwise, it looks great! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:38, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

[[File:Coloursample.png]] <-- how about this colour? llwildheartl 04:08, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back highlight. Nice job Nightshine, Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 20:41, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading seems a tad dark on her muzzle, maybe lighten it just a tad bit? Iveh Yo! 00:16, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I redid the colours. Comments? Nightshine 21:09, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be so fussy about this, but the colours still look a bit green-tinged. If it's just my computer, ignore me, but thin out the shading a bit on the top of the haunch. llwildheartl 00:45, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the highlights, widen the stomach highlight and add shading on top of the back. Mossy go away. 02:10, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Nightshine 20:07, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! If possible, blur the bottom of the earpink, but other than that, it looks awesome! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:18, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred bottom of ear pink. Nightshine 00:27, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. =) I see nothing wrong. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:24, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Same! It's amazing. *Ivyheart* 17:22, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights. Mossy go away. 21:38, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like it's been blurred pretty thouroughly on my screen. Where exactly does it need blurring? Nightshine 00:03, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest, front leg closest to us, and a heap on the hind leg. This looks great. It has too much shadow that's way too dark in my opinion, but that's how it's supposed to be, so yeah.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 04:34, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

The base coat seems a bit dark. Maybe make it a little lighter? And I think the shading looks fine, except for around the muzzle, which seems a bit dark. Good job! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:02, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the shading... looks way too dark... it's not working out for me... Amberfire3, RAVENCLAW!!!!Smartypants!!! Luna is awesome! 07:44, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Nightshine 00:08, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, I don't see anything that needs to be changed. Iveh Yo! 15:14, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. Ivyheart =P 00:00, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine, can you lighten the shading a tad? Still looks too dark. Skye Meow 12:56, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Or maybe blur it, but I don't think its necessary. Its perfect already! =) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:29, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine, are you still working on this? The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 23:58, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I've been busy with other things recently. What exactly should I do with the shading? Nightshine 03:37, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a bit :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:18, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Highlight more on the face? I think it would look better. Idk, it's your choice! XD Squirrel