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Harley (Alt. R) - ApprovedEdit

Harley.rogue.altAtelda 21:51, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

He was actually described as gray-black so that would be just dark gray. Nightshine 22:15, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

This would be declined then, wouldn't it? Mossy go away. 05:26, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ I don't think so, because he's originally brown and grey. I just messed up on the coloring XD. Atelda 16:29, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think Nightshine meant that it just had to be a solid dark gray. No patches or anything. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 18:26, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, mkay. :3 Mossy go away. 18:43, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, so I'm somewhat confused. Is he grey and black or just solid grey? Atelda 22:48, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Solid dark gray. Mossy go away. 23:09, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Atelda 00:20, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

The shading could be more consistent; there's highlighting on the bottom/chest area as well as the back, so where's the light source? xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:24, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading on the back a bit*Canyonsong**Warrior Of Fireclan* 02:29, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Figure out your light source and change the shading; right now it doesn't really make sense. There's no visible light source. Blur all the shading as mentioned above, and make your earpink a bit smaller. 207.81.88.82 03:15, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me ^^ I keep on getting signed out. llwildheartl 03:31, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ not sure if it's showing up or not... btw, I smudged and blurred it as much as I could on pixlr without messing it up. Atelda 04:05, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading doesn't make any sense, where's your light source? Mossy go away. 18:27, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Ok sorry uploaded the wrong one. The light source is now right in front. Atelda 21:26, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Harley.rogue.alt.png --Leafstrike-- 17:36, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and maybe see Nightshine's tutorial? It shows how to do the shading/highlights and light source... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:45, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Atelda

Blur the highlights. Great job! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:12, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ I'm being really indecisive with the shading, experimenting. Atelda 16:47, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights/shading and lighten the whole image a tad. It looks black now, he's supposed to be gray-black. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 19:10, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Ok I lightened the image, and blurred it as much as pixlr would let me. ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:01, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look kind of unnatural. Make them more oval-shaped, maybe? xP Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:23, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest having a light source from behind, It doesn't look natural to have little spots of highlights. SplookMavinotp♥ 20:59, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Sorry, internet has been down, but so I did this one on GIMP but I also did one with the light source behind. So...does this shading look good or should I put up the one with the light souce behind? ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 20:00, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more reddish, the current color is hard to see. ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 22:45, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good, but the highlights are too light, the earpink should be reddened, and the shading should be blurred. The eyes should also be darkened. Nice work, though! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:24, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think the highlights are the right shade, but blur them a ton, along with the shading, darken the eyes, smudge earpink, maybe add a tiny bit of highlight on his <----- ear, and there's a white pixel on his nose. Wait, is that white pixel supposed to be there? I dunno. Good job.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 09:54, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the bottom part of the tail. SplookMavinotp♥ 20:51, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is faded, it needs to be block pink and then blurred. LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 12:39, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Harley.rogue.alt.png. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:10, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Ok. Atelda 23:38, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:34, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Atelda 18:15, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

The eye looks kind of odd to me. It's kinda... i don't know... boxy? :P Or it could be just me :P -- Cherryfur 13:10, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Ok, done! Atelda 22:41, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:52, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Comments? Atelda 17:41, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a bit on the bottom part? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:59, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Of course! Atelda 19:05, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten it just a little. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 19:59, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ok I lightened it, and I've blurred it without trying to blur the lineart. Atelda 03:16, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Stretch the shading up the tail to where the hind legs and the tail touch and darken the ear-pink a tad. This is looking good. The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 21:52, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I switched with Atelda, so I'm taking over Harley now. I don't know if it looks any difference, but I darkened the ear-pink a bit. @Scarletwind - What do you mean by stretching the shading up to the tail? I'm a bit confused. Rainey 03:19, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good Rainwillow! Blur the shading a bit though. Willowwhisper 06:53, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @ Willow: You should have said it looked good to Atelda. She was the one who originally had this reserved. xD Anyways, comments? Rainey 07:04, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the muzzle ;) -- Cherryfur 14:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The darkest shading looks too dark, lighten it a tad. Make it a much smoother transition between light and dark, currently it's very harsh. Iveh Yo! 14:45, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't know if the changes are showing yet. Anyways, does it look better? Rainey 02:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

There appears to be a 'stripe' inbetween the shading and highlights. Smooth that area out. Leggo 🏈 02:59, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't know what you meant by the stripe, so I just blurred the shading and highlights. Anything else? Rainey 03:03, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Commenting on my use-to-be-mine charart xD. Blur the earpink a bit, the hindleg shading looks a bit odd. There is a darker spot on it. The bottem of that same hindleg looks a bit lighter too. Make the eye color more green too. (glad I switched this to you) Nice job though, better than me! Atelda 04:08, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Now? Rainey 06:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little more triangular. Looks almost ready! :) ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I made the earpink a bit triangular. Comments? Rainey 13:33, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! darken the nose color. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:34, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Anything else? Rainey 03:05, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Not for me, awesome job on my fail! Atelda 03:09, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The nose still looks a bit funny. I think it's just cause the shading's dark over there. Maybe lighten it a bit. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 03:24, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How does it look? Rainey 04:03, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the earpink a little. Rainey 11:01, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look a little abrupt; blend them into the pelt a bit more. Also, darken the ear pink :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 11:39, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Paleclaw! =D I will go blur the earpink later.....Rainey 11:55, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Rainey 16:29, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Looks wonderful, Rainy! Can you make the nose black, though? :3 Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:14, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest and bring the highlights down on the shoulder and flank so it rounds. It might be easier to show you with a redline. Sorta, stretch them down and round the bottoms so it looks a bit more 3-D. I hope that made sense... xP ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 23:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I kinda redid the shading. Does it look okay? I still have the old version of this image, so if this doesn't look better, I can upload the older image. The changes aren't showing yet though....Comments? Rainey 07:47, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Pinken the ear pink a tad. LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 14:56, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

If I pinken the earpink some more, it'll look weird. I think it should stay the way it is. Anything else? Rainey 02:23, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'm taking it the light source is on it's back? Can you darken up the highlights a tad? It...just seems awkward.    ℓightning      02:45, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think this looks even weirder.....Changes aren't showing. Comments? Rainey 04:04, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a tiny tiny bit. LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 08:05, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I tried lightening the earpink a tiny tiny bit, but it still looked the same, and when I just lighten it, it looks to bright. I'm just going to leave it the way it is. Rainey 12:43, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? Comments? Rainey 03:05, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a tad. And, is the shading/highlights in the right places for the light source you've chosen, on the tail? They probably are, so, just lighten the tail shading a tiny bit. Maybe blur the shading and highlights together on the tail a bit.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 05:40, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't know if the changes are showing.............Rainey 05:07, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great. CBA? :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:17, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry but I think that the ear pink is too light for the pelt color. Darken it just the tiniest bit, than it's perfect! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 18:29, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do it right now. Rainey 21:47, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Frankly, I think the earpink looks fine. Atelda 22:18, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

So do I darken it or just leave it? Rainey 22:19, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It looks just fine. Don't touch it. =)    ℓightning      22:31, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Then I'll leave it the way it is...... Rainey 22:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah it looks fine. Repeating CBA. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Considering nothing was changed, I'm approving this. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 07:06, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Petaldust (W) - ApprovedEdit

Petaldust.warriorHere she is. Not much to say, so comments? x3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:49, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger patches more orange and less red. Gοldenpelt 01:53, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This.is.STUNNING.(Lol at first I was all like'NO fair I wanted to make Petaldust,but then again, Rainy is better at chararts than me) Do as Goldenpelt said, and define the earpink, It blends in to much.And there is coloe right under the haunch, add/darken shading to the ear farthest from us.Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 01:58, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the brown parts, it just looks white and orange, not tortoiseshell. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:02, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The white ear looks a little to light after shading.( @Maplepool I wanted to make Petaldust too! But sadly, I'm a kit :'( ) Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 02:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, torties need black parts. Add much more blank to her image. And guys, you DO realize there is probably still her kit and apprentice to do? ;) Nice job Rainy! Iveh Yo! 02:34, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to her far ear. Great job! -- Cherryfur 09:09, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! But the earpink is hard to see, try to define it more. ShadeyIro Ni! 14:34, July 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

No! You told Maplepool! Anyways, yeah, the ears to light. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 20:35, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

MUCH better! It kinda reminds me of Spottedleaf. Only problem I see is the ear pink. It looks to triangular. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 21:27, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh thanks. x3 I forgot to say Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:41, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this looks wonderful! One thing, is she supposed to have a white chest and paws, or is it gray? Lawliet Talk 01:29, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It's white, it just looks gray because of the shading, but I can try to lighten it if needed. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. --Leafstrike-- 02:08, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is one of the best tortoiseshells I've ever seen!! *.*The eye color should be saturated a bit more though, it looks gray right now. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

lighten the shading. Great job! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 15:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:55, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I just redid it because I didn't like the other version at all, but the changes aren't showing. x3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:33, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is REALLY good, but I don't remember her being mentioned with white patches. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well tortoiseshells can have white on them, and I thought it looked better. But if anyone else thinks I should remove the white I will. xP Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 13:28, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little bigger, like more triangular. Ivyheart =P 16:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, not to be a downer, but I agree. If it said "toroiseshell-and-white" anywhere in the text, then yeah, but if just a tortie, then no :( Iveh Yo! 16:46, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Fernshade and Poppycloud have white on them and they are just listed as tortoisehsells. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 17:51, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, so if they have white, what can't Petaldust? It would be stupid if we don't let this one have white, but we let them have white. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:54, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think its fine with white, but it doesn't really match her apprentice version. Maybe you should talk with Poppypelt about whether you should lighten it or she should darken hers. And, make the earpink a bit bigger. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:55, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I didn't know they did, in that case, keep it. Iveh Yo! 01:04, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:11, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

@Mistystar and Rainy I re-did it to match this one. Btw I'm a dude... Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 23:44, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

The white looks very gray. Lighten it up. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 09:10, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:04, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fantastic. CBA. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:38, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstar (Q) ~ ApprovedEdit

File:Leafstar.Queen.pngAww, she's such a pretty queen! I played around with the smudge tool, and I must say that I like the results! By the way, hope you guys had a nice fourth of July! Iveh Yo! 04:40, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the cream portions a bit more to match the leader art and blend the shadows more.

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 04:54, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Color the white spot on her tail. Willowwhisper 06:38, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The white spot is supposed to be cream like on her other images. Iveh Yo! 14:11, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

this looks good, but the "cream" seems more white, the earpink is barely visible and pretty trans

[[File:Leafstar.Queen_improvements.png|thumb]]

parent, and, to me, the stripes, or, more of, lack of, look weird where i circled in red Bluestar11796 21:37, July 5, 2011 (UTC)



There's a little strip of pixels next to the haunch that is lighter than the shading, so make it so it matches the shading color. Also, make the earpink bigger. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:30, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

[[File:Leaf_circled.png]]

Alright, I've circle the gray portions that need fixing(No, it's not just the tail) I dont know if you put them there on purpose, but try to fill them in. --Bloo!yo


Make the parts of the stripes that are on the patches of cream a darker cream, rather than brown. Gοldenpelt 00:38, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a lot. You can barely see it right now. Good job though, it looks great! ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:15, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Its so pretty! =) Fic the gray parts, define the earpink, and blur the shading in the middle. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 15:45, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Ivy! Add some cream portions. Mintstar This time for Africa! 16:54, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Since we're back to normal, this has been reuploaded since then Iveh Yo! 19:52, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The cream needs to match her other images :) Vega; Beauty is absoulute.50px 20:03, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I've said this over and over- I CAN'T see the cream on her other images! Iveh Yo! 20:06, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly...if I can't get it right soon, I might withdraw, because apparently everybody else can tell on her other images, but for some reason, I can't. Iveh Yo! 20:15, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The cream patches are easy to see. They are the lighter parts. The underbelly is an odd color, make it match her leader image. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:13, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

But for me, they're not. I can't tell if they're shading or highlights. Iveh Yo! 01:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Here, I circled the cream portions so you know where they are. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 13:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

[[File:Leafstar.leader.redline.png]]

Thanks! I'll adjust this accordingly :) Iveh Yo! 14:45, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I do not think the changes are showing. Iveh Yo! 15:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. Looks great! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, also, the reason the earpink is brighter is that I accidentally had it underneath my shading layer, but if it was correct before, I'll put it underneath the shading layers. Changes aren't showing. Iveh Yo! 00:00, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blurr the ear pink, and darken the face highlight. Or just the face if there isnt a highlight. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:51, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 19:56, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I've also reuploaded again, as I found some minor miscolored pixils, and blurred the cream a little bit more into her pelt. Anything else? Iveh Yo! 04:43, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

It looks a little darker than her leader version. Can you lighten the cream parts a bit? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:30, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I took them directly FROM her leader, I can try but they look ok to me Iveh Yo! 23:48, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded does that help? Excuse me if I'm a little irritable, something bad happened today Iveh Yo! 00:06, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

There's a strip of lighter color on the haunch close to the lineart. Blur it? Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:18, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded anything else? Iveh Yo! 23:12, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is real big. Or define it so it doesn't blend too much. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:22, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 23:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the cream on her tail darker to go with the shading And Im thinking you should get the earpink color from Leafstar's mama 8)--Bloo!yo

00:32, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and the earpink was hardly seeable before, so I think it's ok Iveh Yo! 00:39, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:11, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded By the way, on Wednesday, I'll be leaving for vacation, so if I could get this approved by then would be great. Iveh Yo! 16:35, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Once I'm on vacation, I won't be able to work on this, so please, if you see anything wrong with this, tell me now :) Iveh Yo! 02:34, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the tail, and define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:48, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded lol there is shading on the tail, I just added another layer Iveh Yo! 18:41, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:16, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Love it, just one question. Is this going to become her current image? From what I saw in the manga, she isn't really spending much time in the nursery, so... Shelly For a limited time only 19:56, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, currently she is a queen, but once she goes out of the nursery she will probably go back to her leader image. Iveh Yo! 19:58, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:38, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar(W)- ApprovedEdit

Leopardstar.warriorIf this shows up twice, my laptop is failing. Bird hasn't been moved/archived, but the CBA is over and should be approved whenever a lead comes around. If this needs to be removed, I'm sorry and will take it again. I like this, comments? Mintstar This time for Africa! 03:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, Nice! Blur the tail rings towards the tailtip ;D SplookMavinotp♥ 03:35, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Blurring this was hard! Mintstar This time for Africa! 03:42, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

LOVE THIS! Redden the earpink. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 11:04, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Um...Leopardstar already has a warrior image... Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 18:33, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

No she doesn't... it's not in her gallery on her page. Snowdazzle¹²³Lets count numbers! 21:16, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I love this too! Yes, make the earpink more visible, but the shape of it is perfect. I love the way you did her back. Ivyheart =P 23:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

It was there just yesterday! I know that one has been approved already Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:11, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

One has been approved already, but it was taken down because she wasn't shown as a warrior then. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.50px 20:02, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- do I keep this up or not? Changes aren't showing. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:52, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I tried this with GIMP. But I can go back to the other one if it's better. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:56, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please keep doing this (it's wonderful). Since the original hadn't been approved for a rank she was seen to have, it was declined or never used. It's the same as people doing Willowbreeze's warrior before CP. It was declined. Iveh Yo! 16:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

It actually was approved and put on her page. It was taken down after that rule was put in place. This is a lovely image though :) Vega; Beauty is absoulute.50px 18:22, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:55, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I've kept with the GIMP image, if there are no objections. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:12, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is very good. Blur the highlights a tad bit. ShadewingMischief Managed... 14:40, August 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Anything else? Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:22, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add some spots to the tail? şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 13:11, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

No, both her leader and deputy image don't. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 13:50, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

There's a spot the wraps from her underbelly to her...I suppose it would be the thigh? idek xD but it just doesn't look right to me. Maybe blur it more, or round it out more. Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 18:17, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, the part on her underbelly is a stripe. XD I'll smudge it and see how it looks. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 21:38, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I don't think the changes are showing. I redid it, for no reason really, but I didn't like it. I'm not sure if it's too brown or not. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:14, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Comments or CBA? I'm sorry if I'm impatient, but my summer's been long and I'm almost ready for school to start up. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:12, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could tone down the highlight on her tail a tad? Iveh Yo! 23:23, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I also made her more golden, since it looked too brown to me. You know where to find the changes. XD Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:38, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little too hot pinkish, could you maybe darken it and blur it more? ShadewingMischief Managed... 16:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 18:13, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the spine a bit more. Define the ear-pink and darken the shading on the chin. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:24, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- yuck. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 13:30, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:19, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

None; Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:38, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart (E)~ ApprovedEdit

Shellheart.elderMy first official charart! Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 23:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot and the lineart loks grey... --Bloo!yo

23:47, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I think that's just some waste from the highlights, so fix that where they leaked over the lineart ^^' Blur the shading on the back and paws :3 SplookMavinotp♥ 23:56, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changes not showing yet. Any better? If not, I'm going to redo, as I forgot to save it as a psd as well as a png. =.= My layers are gone. Anyway, I went over the gray lineart that I could see and blurred the shading the best I could. Shelly For a limited time only 00:09, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart, my layers are gone too. ; - ; I have no idea if you use GIMP or not, but I just looked at Insaneular's charart tutorial and if you scroll to the very bottom it helps with layers. Once again, I don't know if you use GIMP, but there it is if you are curious. Ivyheart =P 00:46, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Aww lucky, I wanted to do this if Leafstar had gotten improved in time. Oh well. The spots need to blend into the pelt more, and make them more like his deputy. Also, the shading is too dark, lighten it Iveh Yo! 01:57, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, and I use Photoshop actually. I'm going to redo this really quick to look more like the deputy image. Should be done in an hour or so.Shelly For a limited time only 13:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, changes not showing at the moment. Re-did it using GIMP. Shelly For a limited time only 14:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Changes still not showing... anyway, I tried to get his speckles to look as close to the deputy image as possible, but I wasn't going for exact as this is the other half of his body opposite the dep image. Shelly For a limited time only 15:12, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

The image showing right now isn't the latest one. You have to go to the image page to see it, it's not showing the changes here for some reason. Shelly For a limited time only 17:21, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and blur the shading on the shoulder. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:53, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, yet again the changes aren't showing. If you want to see it, you have to go to the image page and look at the second from the top on the list at the moment. I blurred the ear-pink and the shading more (though I think the shading you wanted me to blur was actually some of his speckles). I re-worked his speckles again to be more variant in size. Shelly For a limited time only 19:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, now the speckles don't really match his other chararts'... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:41, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eheh, sorry. Fixed the speckles to match the dep art. Changes still not showing, though. =_= Shelly For a limited time only 00:45, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/blend the chin shading more, and on his near his chest where you have shading I think there's a little bit of waste Iveh Yo! 00:46, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blended the chin shading and got rid of the waste. Thanks for spotting that. ^^ Shelly For a limited time only 00:53, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, really. Why is it refusing to show any changes I made since the original? Shelly For a limited time only 02:20, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

No comments for about 24 hours. Does that mean I'm done here? Shelly For a limited time only 19:58, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think you need to wait for a lead to CBA the image first. =)    ℓightning      20:13, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Kay. It's still not showing any changes, though. Annoying as all get out. Shelly For a limited time only 20:19, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Holy jeebus that is awesome 0_o. This looks almost ready for CBA(Sadly, its not my decision =.=) Anyway, define the earpink a bit and maybe saturate it a little bit --Bloo!yo

00:28, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redefined the ear-pink a little. And thanks for the compliment. ^^ Shelly For a limited time only 20:08, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading some. You don't have to do this, but it looks flat to me, so could you see if adding highlights would make it look better. It looks good without them, but I was wondering if you could. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 21:39, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

It has highlights, I just have them very dim to match the deputy charart. Same goes for the shading. Every time I darken it I'm told to lighten it again, so I think I'll leave it as is. Thanks, though. Shelly For a limited time only 22:17, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Teh shading is fine
Infact, its the best shading done Id say(everybody always seems to have a problem with the shading for some reason .-.) Anyway, when you blur the shading, do you also blur the gray markings too?--Bloo!yo

23:09, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

No, I have the shading and markings on different layers. I think they blend together a bit, though, since they're so similar in color. Shelly For a limited time only 23:10, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, okay. Just wanted to know --Bloo!yo

23:15, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

How often does the project lead come through to label chararts for CBA anyway? If no one else sees any problems with this, I'd really like to move on to a new one soon... Shelly For a limited time only 03:31, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

That's how I feel about my Leafstar image, there's another I'd like to do and I'm afraid someone's gonna snag it. I know that Iceheart had stuff to do this weekend, the others, I dunno Iveh Yo! 17:06, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink or make it smaller. You just have to be patient with the whole CBA thing. But I've got one I'd like to put up too, so I understand. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:19, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can't tell which one, but there's either a spot or some shading beneath the head that needs blurring. ShadewingMischief Managed... 16:41, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 20:59, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Kay, just fyi, I might not be available for a couple of days after tonight. I'm moving to my college dorm and don't know when internet will be able to be connected. I'm won't be ignoring anyone's critiques, just not available. Shelly For a limited time only 17:22, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Dont think you need to. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:21, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yayyy, finally! :D Well, I'll be here the rest of today, so fire away community. Shelly For a limited time only 19:54, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, it's been 24 hours. Done? Shelly For a limited time only 19:09, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but be patient and wait until a lead archives this. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:14, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Patients are key. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:38, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt. L) ~ ApprovedEdit

File:Pinestar.Leader.Alt.pngIt was declined due to lack of work, so I thought I'd give it a try. XXXSpecklestreamXXX 06:46, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks lovely! ^^ Blur the shading/highlights a bit more and maybe smudge or blue where the earpink meets the fur.

^ That was me, sorry, forgot to sign. XP ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:17, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Blur and darken the shading more. :D Rainey 11:04, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a bit, and blur and smudge the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:50, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I darkened the whole thing and the shading and blurred the ear-pink. Specklestream Let it Snow! 21:30, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice! Redden the nosepink, and smudge the earpink more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:36, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! I'm sorry, personal business has kept me away from PCA. Make him a little more reddish, like mine. Mistfire Spring rain falls 22:12, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing again and then more hightlights Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:36, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

The bottom of the tail could be a LITTLE bit darkened, otherwise it is AWESOME! *Ivyheart* 17:28, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I darkened it, blurred the ear-pink, reddened the nose and darkened the shading on the tail. Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:15, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Slightly pinken the earpink. LeopardclawEyes watching in the Dark… 13:11, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Fill the ear completely with earpink and then smudge the pelt colour into it. Darken/blur the shading and fill in the white pixels in the bottom of the eyes. You also need to erase the smudged lineart outside the bottom of the haunch. llwildheartl 00:26, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton all the way down the right side. Fill in all the white pixels on the ears, mainly on the left ear. Also, blur the shading and highlights together on the right side of the chest. Blur tail shading a tad at the edge all the way along. Same for the front legs. Give the face a small highlight and blur it when you put the light on.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 04:41, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the shading, add tail shading, intensify the highlights. Mossy go away. 06:57, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Like they said ^ blur/smudge the shading, and I would darken the bottem of the tail a bit more. Nice job! Atelda 22:51, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading above the forelegs. Other than that, he looks very handsome!

-♫Millie♫It’s getting cold outside... 22:57, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this "Pinestar.leader.alt.". Mossy go away. 05:19, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I intensified and blurred the shading and highlights, and smudged the ear-pink. How do I rename it? Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:30, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Save this file under the correct file name, then place the "delete" tag on the duplicate image and an admin will remove it for you. Iveh Yo! 01:37, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Thanks :) Specklestream Let it Snow! 15:37, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail highlighting. Nice job! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:31, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Either darken all the shading so it matches the intensity of the shading on the back/tail, or lighten those bits. Blur all the shading/highlights as well. llwildheartl 23:28, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Less hightlights on the chest area and redden the ear pink. Then darken the shading a little bit. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:13, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest and back shading, too. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:38, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 08:43, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the shading on the chest a little more. This looks amazing! Atelda 23:06, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the back shading more. =) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:01, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

The right ear pink looks too big. There's a lot of stray lineart, and some of the shading looks blotchy. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 02:29, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the belly, legs and haunch. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:00, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink just a tad and lighten the nose color. Light the shading a lot Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:30, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's this area near the place where the haunch starts that just looks kind of... weird. Can you fix it? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 19:40, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading to the backs of the front legs. ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 22:32, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights. This is really good! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 16:44, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is the tawny alternate, correct? If this is, shouldn't it be more like the image I have above? (See Oakheart's Alt Warrior) ...This seems...too orange. Lawliet Meow 18:23, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Pinestar.leader.alt. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:08, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is sort of orangeish. Other than that more highlights and lighten the shading on the right side more Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 17:41, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the nose pink a bit? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:31, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Specklestream? The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 01:25, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I completely changed the colour (but it isn't showing yet). Specklestream Let it Snow! 12:43, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

This is too ginger. Make it more brown. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 14:33, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading along its back and on its tail. It looks good ;) -- Cherryfur 00:05, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. Rainey 13:18, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill all of the ear where it indicates. Add shading to the eyes. All the shading and highlights need to be blurred, when I look closely it is not a smooth transition. Iveh Yo! 01:34, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

He looks lovely! But...um...nosepink(whatever they call it: nose colour or something)could be a bit brighter. Spearfall I do chararts!!!

Make the nose color a darker version of the pelt - solid colored cats have a nose color similar to their fur color unless the fur around it is white, ginger, or cream. --Gοldenpelt 00:31, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like it has been reuploaded. If so, make it a little more ginger. Good job! Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:54, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps expand the shading on the back to the side of the face and bottom of the haunch, to smooth it out. It looks great :) SplookMavinotp♥ 19:35, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights and lighten the earpink, then make it fill up the whole ear. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 20:10, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

This look AMAZING! It does need to be made a bit more ginger though. This is brown, not tawny. I was told below on my charart to use Birchfall's alt image for a good reference on tawny, so maybe you could look at that for reference. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:57, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the earpink fill up the whole ear? :3 Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:42, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay during tweak week I basically redid this to get the shading and colour right. Specklestream Let it Snow! 10:13, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, its great! However, the earpink should fill the whole ear. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:54, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

^ I know, but the changes aren't showing yet, when it does fill up the whole ear you'll know that it's the right image. XD Specklestream Let it Snow! 07:44, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:44, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Is this the alt. for the tawny one? Because I looked up tawny and it's 'orangey brown color tinged with gold' WildfireHazelxThorn! 21:01, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:02, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 10:03, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

This seems too light to be tawny. When I did Oakheart, mine was a orange-brown color. This is..light brown. XD Should this be changed?    ℓightning      00:59, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 09:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

That looks much better. I see nothing wrong.    ℓightning      04:49, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Darkhallows Enter the cave? 07:02, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

None; Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:32, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mist (Lo) (K) - ApprovedEdit

Mist (Lo).kit

Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:03, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a little more, as well as the neck/chin shading. Iveh Yo! 17:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Sorry, I really can't blur it much; I use pixlr. If someone with GIMP or anything better could help with the blurring, it would help a lot. :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I could try helping you out with that if you'd like :) I've got GIMP handy Iveh Yo! 17:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! It'd help a lot. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Try defining the Ear-pink on the right ear. Fallenstars 18:09, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

There you go! I blurred it some more, smudged it, then blurred it again. Hope this is good :) Iveh Yo! 18:27, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you so much! It looks great! Anything else? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:56, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and blur the shading a bit more. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 13:59, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:16, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks blotchy now. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 20:33, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

No it doesn't. Whatever. re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 15:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I've seriously blurred it as much as I can on pixlr, and Ivystripe blurred it for me on gimp, so I doubt it can be any more blurred than it is already. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 15:57, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

In that case CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 16:28, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

None. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:32, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (W)~ ApprovedEdit

Sol.warrior Comments? All the colours are from his rouge image. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be a lighter part on his paws? Or darker shading on them if that's not where you intended your light source to be Iveh Yo! 19:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. The paws are whiter in his rogue image. ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 19:21, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- You know where the changes are. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:43, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Love it. But maybe highlight it a bit more? Shelly For a limited time only 19:51, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Which one? Theres four. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:53, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Stretch the shading down from the chin and jaw and darken the shading behind the foreleg. This is beautiful, Iceheart! ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 20:09, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is really handsome (lol). There's some little thin (pencil?) streaks on his tail and the tip of his ear furthest from us. If that's supposed to be there, excuse this post, but, yeah. And the white paws look a tad dark.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 08:24, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! I think the one orange paw could be lighter to match his loner charart. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:41, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is AMAZING! The only things I see wrong with it are, there's a little white speck on the back ear, and there's quite a bit miscolored lineart. Maybe past a whole new lineart over this image to get rid of that easily. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 19:00, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:00, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great, Iceheart! CBA? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 03:06, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

There seems to be some miscolored pixels on his tail...Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:13, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Look at the newer version, i got rid of them all on the last upload. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:17, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

None that can be fixed, approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:17, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Pine (K) - ApprovedEdit

Pine.kit

Comments? DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 20:31, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section XD Blur the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:46, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a little as well. Iveh Yo! 22:33, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:39, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eye color too. Atelda 01:44, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is a bit lumpy and uneven in some places. Blur it out. Darken the shading a lot, too. And I'm having a hard time seeing the ear pink. Mossy go away. 08:04, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Very good, but I agree, the ear could be darker- more visible to see. Blur the highlights on the front right leg a bit. *Ivyheart* 17:05, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make him more pale, please.Cardinalfire My fluffy yellow cake! 01:59, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eye color. Are you still working on this? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 17:25, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Its been four days, wait awhile. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 08:33, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur the shading. LeopardclawEyes watching in the Dark… 13:09, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back seems a bit blotchy on the back and legs, blur them please =) SplookMavinotp♥ 01:10, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Don't decline this. Dapplecloud's internet is down, so it might be a few more days until she can work on this. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:32, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

You should blur the shading a little more on his back. It stands out too much. SpotzGraystripe FTW!!! 22:00, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 03:30, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading doesn't look consistent. Look at this on how to shade kits: [[File:Tutimgshadleadcgkit.png]]This should help you immesnley, it really helped me :) Iveh Yo! 15:21, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Ivystripe. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 05:49, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eye color and lighten the highlights a little bit. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:27, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

No prob. Define the shading on the legs. 71.72.157.130 21:51, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more, there are still a few spots where the shading falters. Also you might want to redden the earpink. Nice job! Atelda 01:39, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

What color is the eyes supposed to be? And the hightlights and the shading looks sort of blotchy. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:16, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is fairly blotchy, blur it, and you can't really see the ear pink too well, so make it pink. LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 05:39, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 08:34, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading on the back moreOh no! emergency!CanyonsongCandypaw to the rescue! 04:38, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Remember that because of the uploading problems, the image will be the one that is under the most recently uploaded one. Make the earpink a bit redder, but great work! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:15, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ok, thanks. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 04:27, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste around his left foor, we see it as the right. So erase that. Iveh Yo! 01:21, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I meant FOOT. Iveh Yo! 01:25, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Except of course, the waste around the foot. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 02:32, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight a ton. Same with the streak of light down his -------> front leg. Blur the shading on his ------> side. Also, blur highlight a tad on his <-------- front leg. And, obviously, erase the waste beside his visible back paw. Blur highlight on it, too.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 10:03, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is really blotchy. And you need to lighten the nose color. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:31, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 19:09, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 22:40, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome work! Redden the earpink a bit, Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:36, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly blur the chest highlight. --Moonleaf 01:17, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded DapplecloudA pang in the heart...

Rename this Pine.kit.png. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:09, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading a little more. It looks really good! Atelda 15:04, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights on the chest and face Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:10, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, but blur it as well.

I think that was me ^^ I thought my siggie showed up when I posted it, But maybe I just forgot to sign ;D SplookMavinotp♥ 15:48, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

The highlight on the chest it blotchy Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:59, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink just a tad bit more -- Cherryfur 19:22, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 05:38, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

The torso of the pelt looks...smudgy? Like where his chest it is. Blend it out more. Iveh Yo! 03:37, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

The chest looks like a square. Make it look more natural. Mintstar This time for Africa! 16:07, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. Looks good :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:27, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still looks blotchy Blur it to smooth it out. And make the earpink stand out more. Good job! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:59, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Other than that, awesome work! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:38, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:18, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, changes still aren't showing? xD Its still the second file on the file page. I think its great! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:35, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight, darken the shading under the head, and define the ear-pink. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 23:13, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ermm why does this have a black background? ShadewingMischief Managed... 23:40, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It doesn't; you're probably looking at the wrong file. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh oops, I'm sorry Dapplecloud! ShadewingMischief Managed... 17:29, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Its okay. x3 Re-Uploaded. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 17:37, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 00:01, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight and the shading. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 14:54, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm horrible at the blurring....DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:14, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Its not horrible! Its pretty good! It looks a lot more blurred now. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:09, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yup. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:38, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:17, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefur (Alt W.) ~ ApprovedEdit

File:Mousefurwarrior.alt.png She was described as a brown tabby in The Darkest Hour. Well, here she is. I did this version, cause I felt I could use some practice. I also have a Y-tabby version, if you'd like to see that as well.    ℓightning      02:46, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

There's a lot of waste around her. Shelly For a limited time only 02:56, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good, but to be honest, I have a thing against traingle tabbies now, because that kind of tabby pattern doesn't exist naturally. It exists on their extremities, but not their whole body. Iveh Yo! 03:03, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Then I'll switch it. To be honest, I really don't care for this one anyways. XDD    ℓightning      03:15, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Y-tabby looked cooler anyways. Also, I forgot the eye color, I know. XD    ℓightning      03:16, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Wait. Never mind. I uploaded the OTHER file. Haha. One had the eye color, and one didn't whoops. Okay, I fixed it. Changes might not be showing atm.    ℓightning      03:19, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I forget the outcome of the discession, did they say yes to making tabby alts for characters who were never mentioned as tabbies before? I don't remember the answer. Anyways, this looks GREAT! I think I like the Y stripe one better, but do you think you could make the ends of the stripes a bit pointier instead of so rounded? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:01, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, but since it's in the trivia, I say it's worthy of a charart. Since both you and Ivy say I should keep the y-tabby, I will. I'll fix the markings now.    ℓightning      04:18, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, guys. I got bored. Yes, I know about the file name. I'll change it later, so don't comment on that.    ℓightning      05:58, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes. And they look... awkward, if you know what I mean. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:05, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know. It was only a test run. I just wanted to see what it would look like.    ℓightning      15:14, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

That looks incredibly unique. Suits Mousefur. Shelly For a limited time only 20:10, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well then. Should I keep this one up then? I personally like them, but, they do look odd. But, then again...no two cats markings are the same.    ℓightning      20:43, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The shading was bothering me/defining stripes.    ℓightning      20:48, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

You should keep this one it looks great, just blur the haunch highlights. WildfireHazelxThorn! 21:36, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think they look awkward because they're much darker than the pelt (the stripes.) Lighten them, if you're okay with it, just a suggestion. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 21:44, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Wildfire, I don't use highlights. Mintstarr, Dustpelt's tabby markings are like that. So are Longtail's, and Darkstripe's as well. However, to avoid another issue like what we had with Foxleap, I'll see what I can do. =)    ℓightning      01:23, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I lightened them, but only a tad.    ℓightning      01:29, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a tad and blur the shading. I love the stripes. :) Leggo 🏈 03:25, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Done and done. Give the changes some time to show. =) Also, thanks, Rainy.    ℓightning      03:49, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I like this! There's waste around the shape of it all around. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:32, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Mintstarr! Re-uploaded.    ℓightning      00:36, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

There's still some waste around her. SilverThe Glee Project 20:40, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. There isn't any more waste.    ℓightning      20:54, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, don't you already have a tweaked image up? *confused* Well, redden the earpink. ;) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Because I already had them reserved, I can keep them up.    ℓightning      17:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.    ℓightning      17:30, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

But did you reserve this after you already had the tweakable images reserved? Because thats not allowed and this would have to be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:02, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, you've got to be kidding me. I took over four hours to do this dang image. If this gets declined, someone will take over, and ruin what I did. I've wanted to do Mousefur since June... I reserved it right after Oakheart was approved. I reserved it on the 17th, which was my birthday. Is there anything that even needs to done with this? I don't even think it's worth declining, because it looks good enough to me. If I have to, I'll sacrifice the other two just to keep this one up.    ℓightning      23:49, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Then do that. We cant make exceptions just because you put in a lot of work. Withdraw some of your images, or this will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:52, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I was having trouble with Stormfur anyways. Ugh, so anyways... Is there anything else that needs to be done with this?    ℓightning      00:01, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add a couple more stripes to the shoulder, or at least the one to the lower shoulder. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:03, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yuck. Re-uploaded. Thank StarClan for layers...    ℓightning      00:11, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. I see nothing else wrong. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 15:19, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.    ℓightning      15:48, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading a bit more? It looks pretty good to me. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:46, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Great job! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:18, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing on here. I know because of the tabby markings. There should be two extra on the shoulder, but I'm still not seeing 'em.    ℓightning      01:35, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? (PS wanna finish Stormfur? Nobodies taking over) -ſceheartBlah blah 01:48, August 25, 2011 (UTC)


None, Approved. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:17, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (W)~ ApprovedEdit

Willowbreeze.warrior...I still don't think I sync well with gray cats... But whatever. Comments? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 23:00, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

She needs to match her apprentice art. Also, you have a lot of shading waste around the image. Shelly For a limited time only 23:06, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing yet... -.- ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:08, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm. To make this match her other two chararts, you need to darken the pelt, lighten the eyes, and re-work the stripes to be symmetrical to her other half at portrayed on her kit and apprentice arts. Also, you need to blur the shading a lot and lighten the ear pink. Shelly For a limited time only 00:31, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Take the colors from her apprentice image. This color is far to light. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:56, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done. Ended up redoing the whole charart. Personally, I think it's too dark to fit her description, but I took the colors from her apprentice charart. Changes aren't showing up yet. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:36, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

The color has spilled out of the lineart, so you'll want to fix that. The earpink also extends a tad too far down. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 08:49, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

The markings don't match, like, you need to add the two stripes on the side of her face/chin Iveh Yo! 17:09, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, I was seeing the wrong one Iveh Yo! 17:10, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Keep her image light, the other two images should've been pale. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:10, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. Especially the shading beneath the head. ShadewingMischief Managed... 01:39, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

This is good, make the earpink bigger SpottedtalonMudears 20:18, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I went back to the silvery version. It fits her description better. I also did her apprentice charart and I think the reason it got so dark was because I kept on having to darken the shading. The others can be tweaked. It's a pretty easy tweak. @Spottedtalon. Ear pink is fine. Changes aren't showing. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 20:23, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch stripes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:44, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing up yet... ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 20:07, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

No one's commented on this for a while, so I'm gonna put CBA on it. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 05:43, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the neck/shoulder shading, or darken the haunch shading because it doesn't match. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:49, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope that worked... ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 03:25, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yup. Just define the haunch stripes and then this'll be ready. ;3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:26, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:32, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great now. ;D CBA? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:25, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

None, approved. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:28, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Nutmeg (KP) - ApprovedEdit

Nutmeg (KP).kittypetOh at last, I´m apprentice! This is my Nutmeg! comments? Leaf-storm,August 16,21:00,2011 (UTC)

Mmm..define the shading tons and the stripes alittle too --Bloo!yo

21:03, August 16, 2011 (UTC

Blur the stripes, add shading, and redden the earpink. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:09, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white on her muzzle and on the back of the haunch facing us. SplookMavinotp♥ 23:37, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reupdoaded:I added shadings,redden ear-pink , shaded and blurred stripes and added some more stripes. I'm sorry changes aren't showing yet!And please can someone add me to the list on the main Charart page please? I'm not here. Thanks. Leaf-storm,8:35,August 17,2011 (UTC)

Name this File:Nutmeg_(KP).kittypet.png. And, add more highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:03, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on the legs Iveh Yo! 00:20, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, looking good! 8D Anywho, define the shading on the white parts and make earpink more...pink --Bloo!yo

16:27, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don´t know how to rename file.I added new file and added and blurred highlights,changes aren't showing yet,Leaf-storm,7:50,August 18,2011 (UTC)

Ok it's good now..but i must blur lightings.Leaf-storm,18:30,August 18,2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink a little bit more. şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 19:55, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leaf-storm,20:04,August 18,2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink a bit and define the shading some more, and the white on the front right leg seems to go around the hauch :\ --Bloo!yo

23:40, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leaf-storm,8:28,August 19,2011 (UTC)

mkay, now blur the shading on everything except the head and darken the ear pink(Oi! xP) --Bloo!yo

23:11, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-I know that ear-pink is problem and I'm not shading master. Leaf-storm,12:15,August 20,2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink by using (depending on the program you use) the pencil, draw a triangle and then blur. Define the shading, (i.e. brighten the highlights, and darken the shading) and add some shading to the collar. Atelda 17:25, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-mmm Is this good? That ear still loking bad. Leaf-storm,8:40,August 22,2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of purply. Make it light red. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:05, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Or you can just take a color from the Earpink chart. şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 17:59, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-ear-something like this or darker? I'm sorry if changes arn't showing but I still see only older version...this is mad..sorry! Leaf-storm,20:11,August 23,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back some. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 15:13, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-I blurred that shadings on the back..changes aren't showing..agin.:-(( Leaf-storm,16:32,August 24,2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:33, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:04, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-Ear-pink..somethink like this?? Leaf-storm,19:32,August 25,2011 (UTC)

Great job! The earpink looks better. Now just blur the white on the back paw, chest, and front leg, and it should be good! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:23, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-oh! Changes showing! At last, ok I blurred white marks.. Leaf-storm,12:40,August 26,2011 (UTC)

This looks great! CBA? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:09, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:58, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lilystem (w) ~ Approved Edit

Lilystem.warriorAlright, I used the earpink from her Queen and sent the finished charart to Nightflower, to see if it was all right. She told me to darken it, so I did a tad. If it still needs some work, could someone get me a color for it? Anyways, My first warrior! SplookMavinotp♥ 14:15, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This looks beautiful! Blur the shading a bit! Good job! -- Cherryfur 14:20, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reaname this Lilystem.Warrior.Png Add light part to the front legs and to the top of the foot. The earpink looks a little bright, but I'll have to check her queen image Iveh Yo! 14:22, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, it's fine. But you need to darken the fur to match the queen. Iveh Yo! 14:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This looks good, blur the shading, add highlights. Plus, when you re-upload, please just keep the same name and overwrite the old image. Paulmer 15:59, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Before I start to remake the image, I have a few things to clarify xD @Ivystripe - I got the base color from the queen already, so where exactly do I have to darken it? @Paulmer - I do have highlights, and it's not required to have highlights anyways :) SplookMavinotp♥ 16:02, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well, her coat just seems darker but I think the image needs tweaked in tweek week, I see many mistakes so I guess it doesn't matter then. Iveh Yo! 16:18, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Re-Named. Alright, I'll keep it at this color then. SplookMavinotp♥ 17:07, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink, and darken the shading on the tail. --Leafstrike-- 01:58, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

darken the shading overall, and darken the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 15:35, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I darkened the shading, but I'm not too happy with it and I tried blurring it all I can. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:09, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Its pretty good! The tail shading still doesn't look right, though. Either lighten the highlights or darken the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:08, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'll be gone until the 20th, I'll reupload it then. SplookMavinotp♥ 22:23, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I figure I should reupload it before I leave. This is my redid GIMP version, but I think I'm going to redo the shading pattern on my trip, I don't like it this way. Changes aren't showing. SplookMavinotp♥ 00:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe brighten the eyes a tad? Shelly For a limited time only 15:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, Splashpelt, could you darken the shading a tad?    ℓightning      16:53, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights and blur them. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:14, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 14:40, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:14, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define the shading a tad Iveh Yo! 01:19, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. SplookMavinotp♥ 16:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

All shading besides the tail needs to be blurred a tad bit more. This looks great! =) ShadewingMischief Managed... 16:48, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I made the changes show by reuploading it a couple times xD Just to let you guys know, this is the correct version. SplookMavinotp♥ 23:51, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Fff, Reuploaded, I just saw that little bit of waste between the legs. xD Changes not showing. SplookMavinotp♥ 00:15, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, in effort to get the changes to show, the really old image came back. Ignore it please. SplookMavinotp♥ 00:06, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and there isn't waste in the current image, like I said, the image is really messed up. SplookMavinotp♥ 00:08, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 14:59, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights on the tail and blur the shading on the chest and belly. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:22, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

the tail shading is blotchy, define it and make the highlights lighter. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:51, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Don't know if the changes are showing. I can't, I have no highlights and if I did, I can't make them lighter then white. SplookMavinotp♥ 00:26, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, Splashy. CBA? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:32, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Splash. Can you blur the ear-pink a bit more as well as the shading around the head? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:14, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Alright, there is no waste on this. I deleted it before I uploaded it, but the whole image changes thing doesn't allow me to see the correct one. SplookMavinotp♥ 22:33, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 18:34, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:24, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Skyheart (W) ~ ApprovedEdit

Skyheart.warriorYay, my first charart to be approved. :) Comments? Ivyheart =P 23:55, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

YESS! First one xD Okayy, define the shading alot and make the earpink bigger(more triangular) and darken it alittle --Bloo!yo

23:58, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Also make the stripes longer and pointer so they flow into each other better. :) Atelda 00:14, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Defined shading, tried to fix up the stripes and earpink. I think I still need to do some more work on the stripes, though. Changes aren't showing yet. Ivyheart =P 00:36, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I understand that the changes aren't showing yet, so please don't get mad if I say this, but the earpink is hitting the lineart. This looks good! ShadewingMischief Managed... 02:37, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I don't get mad easily, no worries :D I'll fix that up soon, once I receive some more comments. Ivyheart =P 02:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reupoloded. This time, thankfully, the changes are showing. Anyway, I tried to fix up the earpink a little. Ivyheart =P 16:04, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

On the tip of her tail, it looks like there's a few stray pixils of main pelt color on her stripe. Nit-picky, I know D: Btw, this is really good! Iveh Yo! 16:12, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, but I think its supposed to be longhaired, since on page 143 of CP it says that all RiverClan cats have thick pelts. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's ok, Dawnbright and Leopardstar are both short haired. :P Ivyheart =P 19:56, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the ligher pixels on the tail tip. Ivyheart =P 20:02, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes get lost in the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:31, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. I tried to fix the stripes so they didn't look lost in the shading, but I'm not that positive about how it turned out. Ivyheart =P 04:41, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look awkward. If you're using GIMP, use black for the shading and lower the opacity. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 13:55, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reupoaded. Changes aren't showing, though. I just re-did the whole thing, because the stripes really annoyed me. Thanks Mintstar, I did the opacity thing, I think it helped. Ivyheart =P 16:47, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Your welcome, they look way better. Blur the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 21:41, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing as always. Well, I tried to blur the shading, but I couldn't much without blurring the stripes. I'm sure you may see a tiny difference, though. Ivyheart =P 23:38, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:15, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Reddened earpink. I can't tell, but I think the changes are showing. Ivyheart =P 23:54, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes that are towards the top of the tail. This is really nice! Iveh Yo! 23:55, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Thanks :) I tried to define the stripes... Ivyheart =P 00:54, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

There's one stripe on the haunch, near the hind foot, that has this blob of paint next to it. Can you fix that? ShadewingMischief Managed... 16:37, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There's stuff by the tail outside the lines SpottedtalonMudears 20:22, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shadewing, I looked but I don't see where, could you possibly circle it in red for me? Ivyheart =P 22:37, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

File:Skyheart..png
Right there. I just thought it look a little odd, how there's just that paint kind of sticking out of the side of the stripe, because none of the other stripes have it. ShadewingMischief Managed... 23:35, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing




You're actually looking at one of the older uploads :P I re-did the whole thing recently. Ivyheart =P 04:14, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, oops, I'm sorry! ShadewingMischief Managed... 13:37, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

No worries. I did that for Dawnbright's image the other day... :P Ivyheart =P 16:03, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

You guys, should I switch this to longhaired? I might have to re do it though, and I'm proud of this one :( Ivyheart =P 04:38, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I made a copy of it converted to long hair.. but I'm not so positive about the tail. If I must switch it to longhaired, then shall it be. Ivyheart =P 05:20, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Ok, I did it- I converted it to be longhaired. I think it looks ok, but I'm not sure about the tail. Still, it's ok, right? Ivyheart =P 17:39, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good. Just lighten the shading and highlights on it. Other than that, I don't see much else. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 15:15, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing, I don't even think they're showing on this link. Once it shows, I made it noticeably lighter. Ivyheart =P 15:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:43, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I can try to blur the shading, as I did in previous uploads, but I can do much without blurring the stripes. Ivyheart =P 21:59, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink; its hard to see. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:25, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Ivyheart =P 05:20, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck and midsection(between haunch and shoulder, i never know what to call it) shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:40, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are showing, I think. Ivyheart =P 03:36, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I think maybe you should make the earpink bigger. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:57, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

There seems to be waste pixels near the chin. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:15, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

There is also waste right above the tip of the tail. Grell No question at all! 00:38, August 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Ivyheart =P 04:45, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I checked the file page, and the second-to-top file still has waste. Try using layers to erase the waste. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:04, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Err... sorry about that. It's not showing that I got rid of the waste in the file changes link, but I used layers to get rid of the waste. Ivyheart =P 03:35, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

She looks great! CBA? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 18:49, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:24, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fallowtail (W) - ApprovedEdit

Fallowtail.warrior heh, I took all the colors from her queen image, and here's the link in case of uploading problems :P Atelda 23:26, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Fallowtail's queen version is shorthaired, or is it up for tweaking? Fear the pink mist! 23:30, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Define the pupil of her eye Iveh Yo! 23:31, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make her short furred, and no her queen image doesn't need tweaking. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:33, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

SWEET.
make earpink more visible --Bloo!yo

23:36, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

According to the RiverClan article in the description, it states that all RiverClan cats are long haired and sleek. I've asked a lead, but for now I'm going to keep it long haired. I don't think changes are showing. Reuploaded. Atelda 04:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pink, and there's some light part on her back foot that looks misplaced with the lighting SpottedtalonMudears 20:15, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing... Atelda 00:50, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and lighten the front of the front paws. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the very bottom of her tail has lighter shading when it shouldn't Iveh Yo! 19:38, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Blur the tail highlights a tiny bit. :) ShadewingMischief Managed... 21:36, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Atelda 01:51, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is still hard to see. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:34, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda 23:10, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:15, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, I can hardly see it. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:37, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Are you looking at the correct one? Changes aren't showing, and I got all the colors from her queen image. Atelda 22:52, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm looking at the right one. Second-to-top, right? The earpink needs to be reddened. It doesn't matter, because her queen image is going to be redone as a longhair. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:25, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste around it. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 23:39, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'd ask where the waste is, but whatever. And ok. Reuploaded. Atelda 00:20, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading behind the ears and add/darken the shading under the chin. This is looking really nice! ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:18, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda 16:31, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and brighten the earpink some. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 22:03, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

There is a little dark splotch right below her head. Ivyheart =P 03:11, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda 18:07, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 18:32, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Her earpink is kind of hard to see. But other than that Great job! --Cinder Real or Not Real?

19:40, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

No im not letting CBAs be ruined by earpink issues. This is continueing. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:41, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sides, she said she took all colors from the Queen image. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:03, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:24, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Marshstar (L) - ApprovedEdit

File:Marshstar.leader.pngHere he is!Wildfire 20:46, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Darken the shading a bit, make the ear pink fill the ear, define the scar on the haunch. Darken the nose colour as well. Nightshine 20:48, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and the haunch on the left (my left.). Looks good! :) SplookMavinotp♥ 21:01, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 21:11, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for taking my advice oh and make the scars on the right front paw longer and possibly a scar on the tail Sandstormrocks32 21:40, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Add a touch of shading by the edges of the inner ear to make it look a little less flat, sharpen the scar on his flank, darken the shading under the chin and add shading the under part of the tail. ScarletwindStep into theLight 01:24, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

You don't necessarily need to add shading on the earpink, but smudge the pelt colour into it with the smallest brush possible. He doesn't have a scar on his tail, so you don't need to add one. Blur the shading and darken it a bit. llwildheartl 03:46, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the bottom of the haunch closest to us. Apart from that, it looks pretty good!-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 07:12, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 19:38, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear oink then I belive it should be ready Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:13, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 22:35, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading :) --Leafstrike-- 20:07, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:01, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 23:29, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the bottom of the scarred haunch still needs a tad more blurring.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 01:07, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

And the shading on the chest. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:16, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 23:43, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is gray... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:42, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

The nose should be gray. Blur the haunch shading and smudge the pelt colour into the ear. llwildheartl 01:26, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. The haunch scar too. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 20:39, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think the eyes need some shading as well. Iveh Yo! 00:28, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

blur the tail shading. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 00:32, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 01:13, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the face highlight.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 07:06, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 01:13, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

On the hind leg the shading looks odd, so smudge or blur that just a little. Also you could darken the scar on the hind leg. Darken the eye color and this will be perfect. Good job Atelda 02:15, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the bottom of the un-scarred front leg. The haunch highlight could do with some blurring/smudging, too. This is cool. I think it should get approved in not too long.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 09:23, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt colour into the ear, and add some depth in the eye by darkening the bottom pixels. llwildheartl 00:22, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 12:54, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the earpink from the deputy charart so I'm going to leave that Wildfire 15:07, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, especially on the haunch. Mossy go away. 19:59, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the middle of the tail, the scarred front leg, and scarred haunch. Those three problems mess it up quite a bit, especially haunch light. Go pretty much blur crazy there. This looks good, apart from my suggestions.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 23:51, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight, and smudge the earpink into the ear a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:44, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 22:34, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the whole thing, or darken the highlights and shading. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:22, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:18, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 23:11, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is wonderful, I see nothing wrong. Iveh Yo! 01:19, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 02:24, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on the tail a little Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:27, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you could shade the area where his haunches meet his left leg and his chest between his legs, since those areas are likely shadowed by his legs. :) Fawngaze 23:33, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 15:17, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and the shading on his front left leg (his left :3). Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 18:34, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bit on the haunch. 82.42.59.123 19:13, June 14, 2011 (UTC) (Dovewing145 not signed in)

Blur the shading. Sorry, I know it was said, but I can't help it! :D SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 19:34, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the scars. ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 22:11, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. Specklestream Let it Snow! 06:56, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

[[Marshstar|File:Marshstar leaders.png]]The red is where you need to blur where the highlights meet the base pelt color/shading. The green is where you need to darken/add shading. SplookMavinotp♥ 17:53, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights on the face Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:17, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are optional. His left hanuch shading really needs to be blurred. Oher than that I like this :3 Iveh Yo! 20:54, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:17, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes 67.237.233.17 02:23, June 26, 2011 (UTC) (Wildfire not logged in)

  • points at picture* Errrrrmm.... Blurr the haunch aaaannd..Tats all I got xP --Bloo!yo

Reuploaded Sorry I haven't been on Wildfire 20:33, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink some more. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:50, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add more shading. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 16:58, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a ton. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:24, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone with Gimp please blur the haunch Wildfire 00:05, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred it. Add shading and a pixel of white for shine to the eyes. --Gοldenpelt 00:40, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blacken the eye lineart and blur the highlight on the tail.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 09:24, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading.Honeybreeze 18:05, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Especially the shading on the haunch. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:26, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken shading on the eye. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:38, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 23:02, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Use the apprentice tutorials to see how leaders are supposed to be shaded. If you have added shading, darken it. Mintstar This time for Africa! 17:58, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire 23:01, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:52, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore. Wildfire 22:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 22:51, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:57, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink more. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 13:46, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

The chest and haunch highlights look like dots; make them larger. You might want to see Nightshine's tutorial on how to do shading on leaders. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:41, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireHazelxThorn! 00:29, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

The two scars on the leg are thinner when compared to the others. Are they supposed to be like that?    ℓightning     

Yes, I think so. WildfireHazelxThorn! 17:36, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the shading on the haunch a bit more and I think this'll be good! Great job! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:23, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireHazelxThorn! 21:19, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:52, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireHazelxThorn! 16:02, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! One thing, the haunch highlights look...a tiny bit blotchy. Try blurring them a little bit more. =) ShadewingMischief Managed... 01:07, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the edge of the haunch highlight. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:04, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireHazelxThorn! 22:26, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading with the highlights at the haunch. and blur scars a bit. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 00:17, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I know I've said this before, but I looked through all the images to make sure I was looking at the right one, and I only saw shading at the bottom. Add some on the back, neck, and forelegs. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 14:51, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Look at Nightshine's tutorial on how to do shading. Here's the link: User:Night shine/Tutorials. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:43, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

1. okay 2. I have shading on his back and paws but I'll add to the neck 3. I used a different tutorial than thatWildfireHazelxThorn! 01:50, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlight on the chest lighter, it stands out a bit. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:42, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights on the tail look a bit awkward, maybe extend it a bit to go to the tail tip. Ivyheart =P 17:44, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, seriously, this thing has been on here since May. It looks fine. Can someone either approve or decline it already? Shelly For a limited time only 23:04, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireHazelxThorn! 15:18, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart that isnt your decision. And if you hadnt noticed, it had been CBAed before this. And I'll do it again. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 17:40, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:28, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (W)- ApprovedEdit

Sedgecreek.warriorSedgecreek. My first one any suggestions on how to make it better? Sorry if it's in the wrong spot. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

14:08, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I moved this to the correct section, and took the image out of a thumbnail. Her description says she's a brown tabby, so she needs to be more brown, and her stripes need to be a darker shade of brown, instead of black. Her eye also needs a pupil. Pretty good for your first one, though. :) Leggo 🏈 14:16, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you. and i couldn't figure out what color her eyes were. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

14:21, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

does someone know what color her eyes are? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

14:46, August 20, 2011 (UTC)


Ehh, 0_o;; Sorry to tell you dis, but the whole thing is blurred, 'ts not transparent, and save it as a .png, okay? --Bloo!yo

16:13, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

np and ok --Cinder Real or Not Real?

16:29, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

File:Sedgecreek.W.png It's a png. And thank you whoever deleted my old ones. If you have any suggestions please tell me. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

17:04, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, erase the blurred lineart, make the earpink larger, give the eye a pupil and add shading to the stripes. :) Atelda 17:07, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

First off, stop uploading fifty different versions of this. This is why we are having trouble seeing the updated version of a picture. Second, you're going to have to redo this. She's a brown tabby. Take the brown off of an already approved blank. I really think we need to stop making stripes like this, because seriously, have you ever seen a cat with such uniform stripes? That's just my suggestion (in my tutorial, I have examples of realistic stripes if anyone is interested) Iveh Yo! 17:17, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

^Yep, your gonna havta redo this, sorry. It just bugs me how this is gonna get approved with the lineart all blurred with no way being fixed other than being redone --Bloo!yo

17:31, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry either can someone do this for me or can i just leave it cause it seems like i'm not ready to put up my charart yet. I'll just pratice first. Thank you for giving me suggsttions on how to make it better but now i don't think I'm ready to do this just yet. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

18:11, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

i can make her tabby, I'm really good at tabbies, I'll make the base, and the stripes, but, you have to do the highlights and stuff, I won't do that for you. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 21:46, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, here i drew the stripes, and make her eyes like blue, green, yellow, orange, gold, whatever color you want, as long as it a real eye color, you can choose, okay? File:Sedgecreeck.help.pngHows that? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 21:53, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanx! I'll try to do it. i may not get it right though. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

22:45, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Fill the strips in ;) I forgot to do that then blur them. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:09, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

like make them darker? or fill them in with color? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

16:07, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Fill the stripes in with color Iveh Yo! 16:38, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cinder x Lion, you can't do this one and have Rainflower's warrior image reserved on the table. It's either one or the other. How did no one catch this before now?    ℓightning      19:33, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Since you "say" you aren't working on this by working on Rainflower, this should be declined. Iveh Yo! 20:25, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the colors together ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 06:54, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think Cinder is working on this anymore, Owl. The person who does it next will end up making a new one.    ℓightning      06:56, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Should we change the status to "withdrawn" or "declined"? Iveh Yo! 14:00, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

yes sorry but i really dont think i can do this one. So i think we should decline it or whatever is best for you guys. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

15:58, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I guess this will be archived now, unless anyone wants to take over. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:17, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over, but I'm going to redo it. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:27, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, reuploaded. I put mine over the old one. .3. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:48, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! This is beautiful! Define where your light source is coming from- currently, she has a light source from both the left and the right. Her head has a light part, but on the back of her arm and bottom part of her tail, there is no shading. Iveh Yo! 21:51, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the earpink less blotchy, and less purply. Make it pinkish-reddish. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:53, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Omg you made it way better than i did! But the earpink looks a little odd. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

01:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Heh. I redid the stripes and shading.. x3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:51, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better! Lighten the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks misty, make it more noticable. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:35, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit more on the chest? Maybe thicken it a tad as well. This is really nice! ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:14, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made the light come from the front of her now... x3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:26, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the head highlight? Looks great! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:55, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:38, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iciloo 13:32, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt, this looks AMAZING, but do you think you can make the tail stripes as dark as the rest? They're lighten than all the rest right now. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 00:45, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 14:44, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

CBA once more? Iciloo 17:17, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:28, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (W) - ApprovedEdit

Cedarpelt.warrior Finally, a long haired cat >_>. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 19:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Define the shading and the earpink. Iveh Yo! 19:22, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 19:32, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

make the highlights a little lighter and the stripes on the tail more definedOh no! emergency!CanyonsongCandypaw to the rescue! 20:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 20:29, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Aw I love his tail! Lighten the earpink. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:10, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:34, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a little bit so the smudges blend better with the pelt. This looks good. :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:10, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 02:47, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe shorten the tail a bit more? It seems a bit long for a 'short, stout tailed cat' as the description says. Other than that, I see nothing wrong, this is wonderful! ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:18, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It is! :P Can you add some highlighting/shading to the front leg? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 15:29, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) --Leafstrike-- 16:09, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Should the earpink be a little lighter? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me! ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 00:58, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! (Ya know this kinda looks like my charart xD) De-saturate the earpink and maybe add highlights to the the front legs and pawz --Bloo!yo


Reuploaded Back to good ol' images. :D --Leafstrike-- 20:40, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded without anyone telling me to I added mottles, since it was on his page. Changes aren't showing. --Leafstrike-- 21:30, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Define the highlights a bit. The tail looks good but somewhat un-natural. Fallenstars 14:55, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think the lineart on the tail needs to be thickened in some places, and maybe you could add some fur lines to the end to make it look more natural, but I'm not sure since the longhaired warrior blanks don't have those (imo I think they should) Iveh Yo! 16:51, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think the changes are showing. And I just left the tail as it is, since the longhaired tails are like that. --Leafstrike-- 20:43, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:45, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the neck and on the shoulder. This is looking nice! ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:19, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Besides that, it looks awesome! DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:26, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, the tail doesn't look like it has any highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:49, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It does, Dapplecloud. And I'm back. --Leafstrike-- 00:44, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Then I would define the highlights. Actually I would define all the shading, it kind of looks flat. Atelda 17:32, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 20:36, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty. Darken the shading. Iciloo 01:49, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 04:34, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink; its hard to see. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:57, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 01:44, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 01:46, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:20, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlenose (W) - ApprovedEdit

Beetlenose.warriorDon't ask about the waste. I know it's there. But anyway, tis Beetlenose, and I think it's under the limit. Take that you Dark Lord! 23:07, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well, its over the limit right now, but once what's supposed to be archived is archived, this will be okay. Remove the waste, and darkent eh shading on the tail. Make the background transparent, too. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:12, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I coulda sworn it was transparent, but anyway. Re-uploaded. Take that you Dark Lord! 23:24, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Now lighten the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:43, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Take that you Dark Lord! 23:50, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iciloo 12:47, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate and blur the shading on the tail a bit more. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:11, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Damn Skippy. 23:45, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Don't forget to change the heading. This looks excellent, Skystar! I can see nothing wrong.    ℓightning      06:01, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Um....been sitting here for a while with no comments? Gulp, gulp what is soap? 11:50, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudskye is right, it's very pretty. :3 So, CBA? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:48, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. Remember to change the heading. xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:16, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's been 24 hours. This is wonderful! Iveh Yo! 23:49, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I always forget to change the heading. xD This is approved. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:20, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Piper (K) ~ ApprovedEdit

Piper.kit

I'm not sure if I'm allowed to do this yet, since its more than the page limit, but my other charart, and another one, are approved, and two are declined, so after they are archived there should be enough room for this. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:46, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

You should blur the stripe on the head. It looks really good! DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:53, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:01, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

For future reference, if you put up a charart before yours is approved or is over the limit, it will be declined no matter the cercomstances. Change the side of the tail the shading is on, it doesnt match the light source. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:38, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, oops! I didn't see that. Bleh, I always skip the most important things in the rules when I read them too fast. xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:03, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I reuploaded it. The changes are only showing in the second-to top file, I think. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:05, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes! Changes are showing now. Well, on my computer they are. If you can't see the new version, go to the file page and check the second-to-top file. :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:16, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gray and white meet on the chest. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 21:59, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:41, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Well, its been 4.5 days without comments, so, sorry to be impatient....but it looks fine ot me. xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 02:34, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Me too. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 04:16, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Approving. Iciloo 00:43, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (A) - ApprovedEdit

Sedgecreek.apprentice Well since it was decided that Crookedstar wasn't gonna get a loner charart, I picked my next favorite character in CP, Sedgecreek! Tried to copy her Warrior image's stripes best I could. I really do love making tabbies. XD Comments? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:38, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

How did you get those stripes? Define the earpink, I can't see it. :3 Grell No question at all! 14:29, August 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the stripes at the top of the haunch and darken the shading around the head. This is beautiful! ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 15:20, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail too. Looks great! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:01, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'm not sure if changes are showing yet. I THINK they are, but I dunno. Anyways, I did all of the comments above, and as for how I made the stripes...... I drew stripes..... lD ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:33, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think she was asking if you used a tablet or something. xD Lighten the highlight on the head a bit, to match the other highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:37, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. And Ohhhhhhhhhhhh, yes I use a tablet. XD Just got it for my birthday this year. 8D ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 00:28, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can you maybe smudge the stripes a little bit? That's what i did on her warrior version. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 14:50, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I stink at smudging, but there ya go. XD ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:34, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink looks a bit too red 8) --Bloo!yo

02:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:28, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. Changes aren't showing yet. Sorry I've been a bit slow on this, my life got a bit crazy on monday. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 20:02, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing, Paleclaw. :3 CBA? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:00, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hate to interrupt CBA, but could you blur the shading on the tail and face please? ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 20:36, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - There. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:03, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, so, repeating CBA now. ;3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:34, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Rainy! Just a reminder, change the heading to CBA. I'll do it for you... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:26, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my gosh... Why do I always forget that? Thanks. x3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 13:52, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's been a day now. Sky, forever flying 15:14, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

So is it approved? Wait no...it will be in a few hours, look at the time. Flowerpatch 17:30, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

You guys are so impatient. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Echomist(Q)~ ApprovedEdit

Echomist.queenI really dislike this image XC. Anyways, i didnt know what to do with her description, so it ended up looking mottled. Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 03:19, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

This looks wonderful! Blur the shading on the chest and lighten the shading a tad on the hind foot. Ivyheart =P 03:21, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading by the base of the tail. For her description, maybe make think highlights or streaks of pale gray around the tips of her fur and blend them in the fuzzy texture? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 15:26, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the chest could be more blurred, but the rest looks great! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:13, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I redid it, didnt really help. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:09, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, which one is the new version? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:41, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Middle one on the file page. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:57, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I guess "fur being tipped with white" is her outline being white...? Iciloo 15:27, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

But all her fur is white tipped. Not just the fur on her outline. Should i just make her like Willowpelt's colour? -ſceheartBlah blah 17:37, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking that you should draw little white zig-zag lines, but you could do that. --Leafstrike-- 20:25, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I got a few examples of possibel things you could do (though you don't have to do any of them of course)

[[File:Echomist_1.png]] You could do almost tabby-like white stripes and smudge them in a bit or-

[[File:Echomist_2.png]]You could do little blotched of white all over the fur then smudge and blur them till they look kinda like this or-

[[File:Echomist_3.png]] You could do a combination of the two. Hope this helps, it's fine if you choose to do it another way, just thought I'd give some suggestions. ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 23:46, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- OKay Paleclaw please dont be offened i put delete tags on your images. I pretty much did the first one and smudged well, and i think its good. Im not changing the style again. Changes are on the second file down. -ſceheartBlah blah 16:54, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, I'm not offended, I was gonna put the delete tags on myself after you reuploaded. XD And it looks great, maybe just lighten the base color a tad? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:15, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 18:57, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Darken the head shading a bit to match the body shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:09, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 01:38, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe tinge some white around the edges of her face, chest, belly, and flank? eheheh... i got no clue.. xP Blur the shading on the chest a bit more. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 19:09, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- The shading makes it look grayish but its there. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:30, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! The only thing I could think to have you do is darken the pixil that is in between the fluff on her arm so it blends in better. Picky, I know...Iveh Yo! 19:36, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 19:37, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I say go with bits of white throughout her fur to match the description. This is a tricky one, so best of luck. Shelly For a limited time only 22:59, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I already had that but then people told me to change it and im happy with how it is now, so im not going to change it again. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:01, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the grey pixel near her front left leg. --Leafstrike-- 02:36, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:36, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the back and blur the highlight on the tail and then I'll put CBA on this. xP ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 15:06, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- The back shading will always look blotchy cause of the white. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:21, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, Icy! ;) CBA? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

None -ſceheartBlah blah 00:11, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lakeshine (W) ~ ApprovedEdit

Lakeshine.warrior

My first no-kit image, I know, I know the earpink looks werid, I nade this image on my laptop, and I couldn't get the earpink to look right sooo I just made it look as best I can.nComments?Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 02:08, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the gray patches. --Gοldenpelt 02:17, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Try to blend the gray and white together a little more. It looks a little spontaneous. Try blurring it again, maybe? And make the highlights a tad bit more visible.( Sorry, edit conflict. That's why I put the white and gray thing. )Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 02:21, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, smudge the patches into her fur, add/define shading on tail, and when you fix the earpink make sure to make it bigger ;) Iveh Yo! 02:35, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmm reuploaded, changes not showing. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 07:02, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Don't know if it's me, but the earpink is like, slanted. Also I can't see the shading. Add shading and fix earpinkPaulmer 12:11, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Paulmer, no you're right. The earpink needs to stand up- it's as if it fell over! Iveh Yo! 14:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the needed places, like where there would be shadows. Maybe add a patch of gray to the head (a smaller one), make the earpink triangular (like previously stated), and maybe make the back hind paw gray. SplookMavinotp♥ 14:19, July 5, 2011 (UT,C)

Lol I know, I was like 'It dpolphin dived to the ear!' xD Ok, I will get right on it, and if the earpink doesn't look right, could someone fix the earpink for me? Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 21:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

VICTORY!!!!I GOT THE EARPINK TO LOOK NORMAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (<------- abuse of the '!'s) Ok darkend the shading, fixed the earpink, should I darken the gray pathces, it looks to bright to me....., Comments? Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 21:58, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the gray patches in the same direction. Also I would darken the shading on the head, chest, and legs. Blur the shading on the tail and back. Nice job so far, Maplepool. Atelda 02:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Ok so I darkend the patches(like I wanted to), re sumged the pathces, comments? Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 03:06, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/add shading. I can't really see much right now. And lighten the eyes a bit. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:13, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded, Comments? (Why is the image next to the title?) Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 13:50, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yay thank you whoever fixed it~ Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 13:55, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

That was me. =P Your welcome! Rainey 13:56, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 15:51, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- Back shading blurred. Comments? Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 18:29, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Gawjus, gurl, gawjus! Add/darken shading on legs. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 22:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, fixed leg shading, comments? Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 23:52, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, some of the splotches are darker than the others, or maybe that's just the shading. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 01:30, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The shading. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 02:22, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, redden zee earpink then make it larger. Snowdazzle¹²³Lets count numbers! 21:52, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's something funny to me about those splotches, maybe not smudge them as far out? Ivyheart =P 00:02, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Alright I'll get to wrok on it, and she was said to be mottled in CP, should I make her mottled? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:50, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Made the patches smaller, and made the ear-pink redder.Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:56, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing, but on the preview it does show, blend the motles in a little more. Iveh Yo! 19:57, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Blurred the mottles, commetns? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Maybe lighten the ear pink just a bit. A tip: If you have paint, before you add the color to the fur, zoom in alot so you can clearly see the ear, then with the pencil icon, draw a triangle inside, then color the fur and stuff, then blur it later on. Fallenstars 00:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are you looking at this image or the second one in her history? That the one that needs to be up. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:44, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches more, and make the tail patch a little more round. it looks kind of square and unatural. Also darken the shading on the white and blur the highlights. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 13:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Blurred the patches to a max, darkened the white shading as much as i can without it looking gray, fixed the tail patch, and blurred it, anything? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 15:56, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I know it's in a small area, but can you try blurring her white ear-tip a little more? Iveh Yo! 15:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Repuploaded- Blurred her ear-tip, Anything else? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, smudge the patches more, darken the shading. Good job! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:52, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I can't darken the shading anymore, I darken the shading, the white becomes pale gray, the gray bomes dark gray, and then it kills the image. So no, i won't darken the shading. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:43, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

The gray parts look awkward, especially the one on the tail. Blur the mottles. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:57, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

The gray patch on the tail looks like a box... şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 11:09, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Snow; that is beacause changes aren't showing, I can't blur anything anymore, gimp has blurred it to a max. So....Mint; what do you want me to do with the patches? Smudge them a bit? Just saying they look awaward doesn't really help me much...xD Maple♥poolMischief brewing 13:16, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry! I meant that the tail looks like a box and they should be smudged and blurred. And if you're using GIMP. you should be able to blur it enough. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:04, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gettin' really tired of syaing this, but, Changes ARE NOT showing, to see the REAL image, go to her history, I PROMISE you her tail patch DOES NOT look like a box(Sorry if sound rude, I'm really tired, waking up at 4:30 does that to you Dx sorry.) Maple♥poolMischief brewing 14:07, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay i played around with the patches and I got this....so....What do ya' think? And the CHANGES are showing. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:28, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ithink, it looks good , but can you bur the patch on Lakeshine's back? Leaf-storm,18:57,August 18,2011 (UTC)

reuploaded-comments? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:34, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest fur shading. Sorry if I'm saying this even though the changes aren't showing. I'm on my phone. şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 19:50, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Blurred Chest Shading, comments? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:26, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. And she looks speckled, not mottled. Mottles are uneven. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:26, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

So I re-do the mottles? Or what? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:45, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I re-did the mottles. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:09, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Use Thistleclaw and Hawkheart as examples for mottles. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:08, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

But, this how I did Adderfang and Mothwing's image's mottles, and no one had a promblem with those, so I'll change it if someone else has a promblem with them, but really? If I change her, won'twe have to change Mothwing and Adderfang too? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:06, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so for once, i tired to NOT be a pain and make her look like hawkheart's mottles, and quiet honelsty, all I have to say is this; If YOu want it YOU do it! Because I did it and she ended up looking like BLCH! okay, she looked AWFUL, alright, sorry if I soun rude but really she looked HORRID. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:21, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Any commetns? Sorry, I'm antsy, and school starts for me on Monday, so I REALLY wanna get this approved fast, cause after school starts, I'mma be busy Dx Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:16, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink, blur the shading along the chest, and blur the patch on the foot farthest from us. SplookMavinotp♥ 22:36, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

The Ear-pink already is centered.... Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:27, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Fixed the chest shdaing(Blurred it.) And blurred her paws(she has two patches on each of her feet farthest from us, so i blurred them both..)Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:29, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me or do her eyes look gray? They are blue...Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:39, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make them a more striking blue color Iveh Yo! 15:38, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten the earpink. Also, maybe try smudging the patches? They still need to be blended in with the pelt more. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:13, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I was told NOT to sumdge the patches, so which do I do?

sorry, /\ was me, So I will get right on it. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:03, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Blurred the shading, fixed the eyes, lightened the ear-pink, sumdged the patches, commetns? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:18, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Move the earpink up a little, smudge the patches all in the same direction (I.e. like Ivypool), and emphasize the shading, it looks a bit flat. Atelda 01:56, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches on the forelegs. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and lighten the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:32, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

The patches are all sumged the same way?....But anyway, Reuploaded; fixed the shading, defined the ear-pink,sumged the patches. Changes not showing.Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:42, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, now the changes ARE showing, so, let us get ONE thing clear; I will NOT darken the shading ANYMORE, okay? I will NOT is is to dark if you ask me, but. Just to clear that up. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:23, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should blur the earpink a bit. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:47, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:28, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

  • eye twitches* I've said it already, the ear-pink IS centered. I blurred the ear-pink, comments? (Sorry if I sounded rude, but my BIGGEST pet-peeve, is repeating what I have already said, it wastes my time.) Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:44, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, Maplepool, the earpink goes a little too far down. Make it even with the base of the ear. SplookMavinotp♥ 22:35, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I like tha way you did that black. But it is a little bit blotchy. And darken the shading on the chest Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:20, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

  • Sighs* fine, fine, I yeild, I'll mess with the ear-pink. I'll blur the back shading(I think is what you mean, for her back, right?) And I'll darken the shading. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:18, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the gray patch on the earpink. Ivyheart =P 18:53, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Gosh, I hate this image more and more and more EVERY day. I liked it a bit at first...but Not anymore, Should I redo this? Yes, I think I should....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:03, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, nvm I don't wanna re-do this image...mainly because, i can't get it to look better, maybe my heart isn't into re-doing her....but...I won't redo it. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:29, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches all in the same direction, define the shading, and the earpink looks like it's too far down. Atelda 17:36, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Don't redo the image, it isn't so bad that you need to do that. And you should probably save that debate for yourself instead of putting it on here imo Iveh Yo! 19:42, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay, so I am NOT sumding the patches, you tell me to smudge them, You'll be ignored, I defined the shading, and fixed the ear-pink(Again D; ) Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:00, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:58, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 00:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I will get right on it. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:34, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nvm...y'all I really hate to do this...but I have lost all intrest in doing this anymore....i really don't like this image anymore, Someone can take over....I'm sorry, I really don't like to quit....but....I HATE this image....I'm sorry, I've had it sience July, and it seems no matter what i do, it just gets worst. i know someone else will make her look better, maybe my heart wasn't into work ing on this, I really don't know, but, I'm withdrawing this. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:58, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. Atelda 00:37, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, if you want, you can redo it. I changed the title for you. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:40, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

So this has been here over a month should it be moved or declined? WildfireHazelxThorn! 02:21, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ I don't know, either way, I reuploaded it. It is the second one down. Thanks Mistystar. Atelda 03:47, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

The gray parts are kind of unatural. MAybe you should try to make the gray parts like Petalfur's charart or something; it doesn't look realistic with only gray on the back and the bottom of the tail. Also, smudge it or something to make it look more mottled. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 04:28, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

SWEET! darken the gray parts and define the earpink --Bloo!yo

04:31, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Atelda 05:44, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iciloo 00:06, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

None. Approved.    ℓightning      00:36, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Q) ~ ApprovedEdit

Mapleshade.queen I really like this one! Anyway, comments. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 23:30, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Make the stripes smaller, thinner, and add more. Also, blur the shading on the tail, make the eyes less cross-eyed. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:36, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Iciloo 00:12, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:22, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading. It's too dark, and makes the fur look more light gray then white.    ℓightning      05:12, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a little more thin and even more of them. I know you did this alreayd, but they don't really match her Warrior stripes right now. Also, maybe lighten them just a tad? Looks great! ^^♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:39, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste around her. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:06, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not sure if I can add any more stripes without making it look all smudgy. Changes aren't showing up yet. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:14, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

It still looks kind of cross-eyed. I don't know if its supposed to be that way, but it looks like both pupils are facing the same direction. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:29, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes look orange, and they need depth to them. Iveh Yo! 00:18, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Ivystripe, I took the colors from her warriors charart. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 02:55, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Uncross her eyes and blur where the white meets orange a little bit. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:06, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 19:15, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the tail. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 00:42, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit; its too triangular. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 02:13, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the middle chest highlight; especially the part with the ginger. The ginger looks a bit flat. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:04, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 01:37, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

No one's commented on this in a while, so I'm going to go a head a put CBA on it. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 15:03, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, shading/highlights, and instead of blurring where the ginger meets the white try smudgung them? hope Im looking at the right one :) --Guradian1098 15:10, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 19:09, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Repeating CBA. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:36, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white more white.

Please change the heading, and remember to sign your edit. And she wouldn't make it more white, it would be lighten the shading, because that's what is making it seem darker (It's already white as it is). I think it's fine though.    ℓightning      17:15, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Continuing CBA. -ſceheartBlah blah 17:16, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 03:43, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brook (PH)- ApprovedEdit

File:Brook.ph123.png I re-did her to match the new blanks... Comments? Leggo 🏈 02:09, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. I'm looking at the right one. --Leafstrike-- 03:06, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 03:29, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more mud on the face. Looks epic Rainy! ^^ SnowyXPerry = Serry! 14:26, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be on a seperate file. Its not TW, you cant just upload over the old one. Do it once its approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 17:38, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay. I wasn't too sure about that.. Leggo 🏈 02:01, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tabby stripes a bit more and brighten the ear-pink. This is very nice. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 02:41, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.' Thanks. Leggo 🏈 02:13, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define hte shading, lighten the highlights, and make the earpink fill the ear. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:15, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I only defined the shading, as highlights aren't required, nor are they on this image, and the earpink does fill the ear. Leggo 🏈 00:48, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the tail a bit to match the body, and define the stripes on the tail. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:08, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 13:53, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Add some mud to the side of her face, and define it because in some places, it's hard to tell what is mud and what is pelt. Go crazy with it! Iveh Yo! 14:02, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 14:55, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the head shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I keep trying, but it's starting to look very blotchy... could I get a tiny bit of help? Leggo 🏈 14:07, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help. Should I blur it for you? --Leafstrike-- 00:56, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. But just the head shading, though. Leggo 🏈 03:14, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred it for you, and changes aren't showing. --Leafstrike-- 03:48, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Leggo 🏈 03:29, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 03:40, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Um, is there mud on the face/head? If so, could you please define it tons? I could hardly see it ._. --{{SUBST:Signatures/Guradian1098}} 03:46, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I can't define it any more unless I want random black, red, and green pixels scattered around the mud's edges. Leggo 🏈 04:12, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Continuing CBA. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Starting from original CBA. Approved.    ℓightning      03:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Piper (Lo) ~ ApprovedEdit

Piper.loner

I love her! :3 I might re-do the earpink though......Comments? Rainey 05:51, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink like, a pixel or two bigger on <--- that side. This is really good, Rainey!    ℓightning      05:55, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't know if the changes are showing Rainey 07:34, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is awesome. :3 Blur the shading on the back and tail. şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 12:00, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful Rainey! Blur the highlights and earpink. ShadewingMischief Managed... 13:50, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There are highlights on this? It doesn't look like it. Also, blur the shading a bit more, please.    ℓightning      13:53, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white tip of the tail. Looks awesome! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:31, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Looks so cool! Maybe blur the belly where the white meets the gray? DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:51, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could on pixlr. Rainey 03:23, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Extend the shading into the back of the shoulder and maybe around the side of the head. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:34, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink as well. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:23, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do it when I get home tomorrow. School's starting tomorrow. :P Rainey 14:21, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the tail highlight a bit. Looks great, Rainey! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:43, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the stripes a bit. --Leafstrike-- 01:14, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I FINALLY have time to work on her! So.......can someone help me expand the shading? Tried to do it on pixlr, but it didn't turn out so good, so I didn't expand the shading yet. :P Rainey 10:58, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

To me, it looks as if there are a few miscolored pixils along her back. Iveh Yo! 13:46, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'll go fix that..... Rainey 13:52, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 14:01, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks for helping me Icy! I'll go lighten the tail and fix the miscolored pixils later...... Rainey 15:41, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again. There was some, um, mistake with the background, so I reuploaded the other version of Piper instead. Comments? Rainey 10:42, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Umm...not to be negative, but I just realized that I think Piper was only seen as a kit. Soot was the only one of the three kits seen older. This might get declined :( I don't want it to, but I'm just letting you know. Iveh Yo! 17:16, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, if it gets declined, then it gets declined, I guess. I can always work on another image. :P Rainey 11:14, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I expanded the shading. I don't know if the changes are showing though......... Rainey 02:37, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if I'm looking at the right version, but the one I'm looking at has some waste above the back and near the back legs. This looks great Rainey! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:19, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

You were looking at the wrong version Paleh. XD The one I'm looking at right now has no waste. Oh, and thanks! :D Rainey 00:41, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing, Rainey<3 Also, can you make the ear pink a pixel or two larger on the <--- side of the ear?    ℓightning      00:58, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 01:13, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful, Rainey! Blur the shading a bit more on the back and then I'll put CBA on this. ;) ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 15:10, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Woohoo! Yay! XD Okay, I'll do that after I get home from school. I seriously need to go to sleep......XD Rainey 15:13, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you also make the earpink just a liiiiiiittle lighter Rainey? :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:41, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 11:15, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks beautiful, Rainey. You fixed what was asked, and now I think it's ready. CBA?    ℓightning      21:07, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

None. Approved.    ℓightning      21:40, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Echomist (W) - ApprovedEdit

Echomist.warriorI couldn't really see how to do the strpes since I never saw Paleclaw's image, and Iceheart made her's smudged and stuff, but um, here's mine. Comments? :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:30, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Edge her fur in white to match the description. Shelly For a limited time only 01:34, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

This looks stunning, Rainwhisper! Define the shading just a tad on the front leg farthest from us. :) SplookMavinotp♥ 01:39, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing, Rainy! Can you make the ear pink a tad bit easier to see though?    ℓightning      02:03, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the head highlight too. :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 02:27, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty. :) Shade the right (the cat's right) front leg and back leg. Ivyheart =P 02:38, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is fantastic! Blur the shading a tad. Iciloo 15:25, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shellheart, I made it so it would match Iceheart's. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:58, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Now, define the earpink a bit. It kind of seems like the whole ear is pink. ;D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:31, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I really like the stripes! Make the Ear-pink a little smaller and blue the front leg a little bit. Fallenstars, thanks for the memories! 22:07, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

^stripes..? Eh, anyways earpink is fine, just define the edges a bit --Bloo!yo

01:44, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think she meant uh...mottles or flecks I think. xD Blur the tail shading. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:30, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 13:53, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

You said something about stripes. Meh. Highlight the muzzle juusst a tad more.Fallenstars, thanks for the memories! 00:44, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't put highlights on the muzzle. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:39, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading ever so slightly? Other then that, I really can find nothing wrong with this image. I think it's ready for CBA, but, I'm still new with the SW stuff. XD    ℓightning      06:41, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:26, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iciloo 01:29, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt the CBA, but the front paw farther from the shading side needs to be darkened. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

No, it doesn't. The light is supposed to be hitting it like that. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:53, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. Continuing CBA.    ℓightning      23:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks BEAUTIFUL, Rainy. Great job^^ Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:56, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

When will this be approved? The image is lovely, and I see nothing wrong with it. 71.164.218.204 18:22, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Approved.    ℓightning      20:48, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade (R) - ApprovedEdit

Mapleshade.rogueEr...this isn't my best one. Iciloo 00:27, August 29, 2011 (UTC)


Ive circled the areas, the red circling indicates that the tabby thing needs to be darkened. some areas are a bit too pale. File:MapleshadeRcir.png

Pearls 00:32, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

darken the shading a bit --Bloo!yo

00:36, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur where the ginger meets the white? This looks epic, btw.    ℓightning      00:51, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Pearls, thank you, but I really didn't need that. I would have needed it if I had asked, and uploading that caused clutter. Thanks Cloudy. Iciloo 01:45, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Down on the flank, the ginger part looks like it's a different color, I don't think it's from the shading, could you correct that? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:21, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

That's went I intended to do. ;) Hopefully that's alright? Iciloo 21:51, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and lighten the back a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:04, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the ginger meets the white. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:44, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The front part of the big patch on her back needs to dip down a little bit further where it's close to her front leg/arm Iveh Yo! 05:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean? o_o Iciloo 16:12, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Look at her warrior. They are facing the same way. There's a big dip in her ginger tabby patch that nearly touches her arm- you have it smooth and going up much farther Iveh Yo! 18:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the ginger tinge on the base of the tail. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 03:44, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Add visible stripes on her front leg. Ivyheart =P 00:02, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes aren't showing. I fixed the ginger patch but I'll do the stripes and ginger later. Iciloo 00:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Iciloo 22:56, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can find nothing wrong with this image. CBA?    ℓightning      22:57, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great, Icey. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 21:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Approved.    ℓightning      23:53, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (A) ~ Approved Edit

Blackclaw.apprentice I've been waiting quite awhile to fit this in. I'm sorry that I had to post this right after Piper got approved, but Icestorm told me she approved it and I couldn't resist xD Sorry to all who have been waiting long to post their charart too ;-; Anyways, comments? SplookMavinotp♥ 00:47, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can hardly see it Iveh Yo! 00:47, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights, and lighten th ear pink. Nice job! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:47, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink looks fine. Just define the shading/highlights alot --Bloo!yo

03:04, September 3, 2011 (UTC)m

Reuploaded. Don't know if the changes are showing or not. @Sandstorm - I don't use highlights, and they aren't required ;D SplookMavinotp♥ 03:09, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 04:44, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not show. SplookMavinotp♥ 16:20, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading alot more (think thats the only problem here XD) --Bloo!yo

17:56, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten (or add if you don't have any XD) the highlights a bit. This looks great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:56, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes seem a bit darker that those on the elder charart. Shelly For a limited time only 16:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

To Paleclaw, she doesn't use any, but I think they would help if she is willing to do them. Ivyheart =P 00:12, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the whole thing and made it lighter. Also I added highlights. Not a huge fan of the shading though. SplookMavinotp♥ 00:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I love the shading, Splashpelt. CBA? Iciloo 01:14, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

You didn't change the name, So i did, I hope I don't get in trouble....Flowerpatch 01:15, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

No, its okay; I do that all the time. :P Sorry, but the haunch shading still needs to be blurred more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:58, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:14, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

When should this be approved??MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:57, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to go through 24 hours of no comments. And speaking of, since there has been 24 hours without comments (I won't count yours, since you were asking an honest question), this is approved.   ℓightning      20:23, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rainflower (Q) ~ ApprovedEdit

Rainflower.queen First charart! Comments? This was declined before... ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 01:32, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

In some places around the lineart, it's pixlated. So blur or smudge it so it's all around the same color. Blur the darker shading on the back and tail, and fill the ear in more with the earpink. Atelda 01:57, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think you might have to redo this because it's all pixelated. --Leafstrike-- 02:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

She looks cross-eyed. Try basing the eyes off of one of the other queens for approval, like Brook. Leggo 🏈 02:18, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Save it as a .png not a .jpg, move the earpink make it a tad bigger and darken it. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 02:22, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It is a .png Maplepool, but it looks like it WAS a .jpg before. You'll probably have to redo this, sorry. D: ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:20, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, define the earpink, fix the eyes...and thats it! :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 15:27, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

OH! I know what you did, you used the 'Sharpen tool' Didn't you? I think Gimp might have I don't know, as I have never used it, don't use it, it kills the quailty of a image, when you redo her image, give her a pink-gray nose, like Feathertail an Crowfeather and Jayfeather's kit image, or Marshscar/star's Leader image, it looks like the nose is the same color as the pelt.Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 18:21, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll redo it, I don't really care. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:17, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded or Re-Done ~ Gosh, this looks WAYYY better! ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:50, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It does. :D Blur the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Comments? ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 23:25, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. --Leafstrike-- 02:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 11:12, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Looks good Snowdazzle! =D Rainey 11:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried blurring it as much as I can. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 11:43, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred a lot Iveh Yo! 19:54, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Snowy this is beautiful! Blur shading and highlights. ^.^ ShadewingMischief Managed... 02:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'll reupload this as soon as I come back from vacation. ~Snowdazzle, not signed in.

Darken and define the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but what does define mean? I'm just so stupid at times :P şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 11:58, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make it more visable. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 13:11, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken it too and stretch it up by her foreleg and her haunch. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 02:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid it since I just came back from vacation. Changes aren't showing. şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 20:23, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading or is it just that changes aren't showing? DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:27, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

They are not showing. Look at the second-to-top image on the file page. şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 21:35, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I personally think the earpink is fine... şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 00:08, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Comments? No one's commented in a while. Sorry, I'm just wanting to get this approved by the time school starts. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:34, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Commented in a while? Its only been a few hours since you said that the earpink was fine. Really, I only get impatient after 2 or more days of no comments. xD The earpink seems to fill the whole ear, so make it a bit smaller. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:59, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, xD SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:11, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

You should blur the shading a bit more on the belly and the back. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:52, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Are you looking at the correct image? It's the second-to-top one on the file page. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:01, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the neck and on the hind leg. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:07, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded SnowyXPerry = Serry! 21:27, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the hind leg. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:49, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded SnowyXPerry = Serry! 13:17, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty. CBA? Iciloo 01:50, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights some more~Sorry xD --Bloo!yo

00:35, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's alright. xD Changes aren't showing. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 14:56, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 16:48, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights on the back paw. Other than that, I see nothing wrong. Great job, Snowy!-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 08:38, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded SnowyXPerry = Serry! 19:28, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

could you darken the earpink just a teensy bit? other than that, it looks perfectly ready for CBA --Guradian1098 00:38, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope this gets on CBA! SnowyXPerry = Serry! 13:30, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

She'll get there, Snowy. =) I only see one thing. Could you just blur the chest/stomach highlight a tiny bit? It looks gorgeous, much better than my Graypool. :P Grell No question at all! 15:51, September 2, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Naw, Graypool looks great! SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 03:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but the eapink is really light, you can barely see it. This is amazing though! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:48, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Paleclaw :3 SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

To be perfectly honest, I think this should be darkened a little. This looks a lot like the queen images where they are described as being white. It's a wonderful image, but it just seems a little too light. Iveh Yo! 00:54, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

So..I have to redo it? I have GIMP btw. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:31, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

No! you dont have to redo the whole thing. Go to Brightness & Contrast(assuming there IS a 'brightness & contrast' option..) just lower the brightness --Bloo!yo

23:50, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Also, blur the tail shading a bit, and this will be ready. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:11, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are showing! Yay :3 SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:18, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! There's some waste around the front legs, get rid of it. Specklestream Let it Snow! 18:21, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Pretty sure I got rid of all the waste. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 21:44, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, just a biiit paler & make the eye color the same as before, and THEN I think this wil be ready --Bloo!yo

22:19, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope it's ready now xD SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:24, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 22:46, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:40, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnbright (W) ~ ApprovedEdit

Dawnbright.warrior Meh. I don't really like this XP Anyhoo, comments? Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 14:17, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart. Fix that please. Looks awesome though! :D Rainey 14:21, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

You need to add stripes to the ginger patches. Otherwise, looks great! Shelly For a limited time only 14:22, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Re-did the whole thing. Added stripes, no more blurred lineart ;) Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 15:00, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

UGH! The file is being stupid. I'll work on it, but the one above right now isn't the right one X( Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 15:04, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I fixed it. I know it's not named the right thing, but once it gets approved I'll fix the name :) Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 15:11, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

You need to rename it Dawnbright.warrior.png and try putting a splash of ginger on the paws or something like that. Darken the ear pink so you can see it better. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 18:21, August 18, 2011 (UTC)


File:Dawnbright.lineart.png

There is still some blurred lineart.

I circled in red where the spots are. Sorry if I am being picky about this, I can help with it if the blurred lineart really frustrates you. Ivyheart =P 23:30, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Umm...Ivyheart...that's not the right picture. The one you circled has no stripes. Iveh Yo! 04:40, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yea, I was gonna say o.o the method I used the make the one with stripes, it's impossible to get blurred lineart. I'd explain, but I'm so friggin' tired I really don't want to xD Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 11:33, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ahh, shoot! I'm sorry :P Ivyheart =P 20:43, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail please :) Iveh Yo! 01:23, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined tail stripes, added ginger to paws, and darkened ear pink. Changes aren't showing yet. Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 14:45, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

define the stripes on teh head and right ear and define the earpink too x) --Bloo!yo

22:22, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ginger on the paws.    ℓightning      23:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 00:11, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink doesn't look very visible, it kinda blends in with the fur. Define the earpink. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 00:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hate to say this, Ginger. But this needs to be redone as a longhair. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 02:29, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur the hind leg. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:48, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redo it as a longhair, and make sure to add shading to the tail. This one doesn't have any. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:21, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redone as longhair, tried new style. CHanges aren't showing yet XP Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 19:03, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I like the new style. :) Darken shading, lighten highlights, define earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:06, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

The tail coloring looks a bit wonky. I can't really see the shading and highlights. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 01:10, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Look's good. Darken shading and blur ginger patches a little. Good work! Leaf-storm,14:23,August 27,2011 (UTC)

Dull the ginger parts, it looks too neon. --Leafstrike-- 19:32, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! ;) But I think you should darken the stripes and lighten the shading just a tad. This is really great! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 16:07, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks fine, just make the earpink a little smaller. WildfireHazelxThorn! 17:51, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing. I don't like the way it's turning out, and I made a decent image for Lakeshine's queen. Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 12:46, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Somebody may take this over now, otherwise it will be archived. Iveh Yo! 17:06, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over! My Piper (K) has gone through 24 hours of CBA, anyway. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:51, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Done. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:35, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing, but it's on the file page. Also, don't tell me to blur the shading because I've blurred it as much as it can go. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:37, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Try blurring the white on the forehead some Iveh Yo! 00:51, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 04:07, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, now the shading, and all the white parts, as well as the stripes, are blurred as much as possible, so I can't blur anything else. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 04:19, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink? =P This looks really cool!   ℓightning      04:22, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded.. Are you sure you were looking at the file page's correct file? xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 04:40, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ginger paw and blur where the ginger meets white just a tad. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 20:45, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white more white. Moonstorm88 10:07, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. And, the white has shading on it, so its not supposed to be pure white. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, this is beautiful, Misty! Darken/redden the ear-pink a blur it. Then I'll put CBA on this. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:43, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Re-Uploaded. Is it ready now? :3 Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:58, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me, Misty! CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:15, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the smudge on the tail. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:58, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is no smudges on the tail, and as I stated above, I've blurred everything as much as possible. Can CBA continue, or does it have to restart? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:49, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

It looks just fine to me. Continuing CBA.    ℓightning      22:15, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Since I'm continuing it from the original CBA, this is approved.    ℓightning      22:49, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Firekit (Ki)- Approved Edit

Firekit.kitMy first offical charart :D Comments? I feel like she should be a little brighter. I'll try to brighten the ear pink if people can't see it. SilverThe Glee Project 14:21, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I moved this to the correct section and took the image out of a thumbnail. Since she is ginger, she'll need stripes, and the earpink needs to be darkened. This is lovely for your first charart. :) Leggo 🏈 14:25, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you C: I honestly don't think she has stripes, but I'll add them anyway. SilverThe Glee Project 14:27, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added the stripes, except on pixlr when I try to blur them they fail Dx. Changes aren't showing yet. SilverThe Glee Project 16:25, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

For some reason the changes aren't showing. I'll upload it again. Silv