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Brightsky (W) ~ Approved

Brightsky.warriorUgh... Major Fail on the stripes... Ya'll know where to find the changes. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 03:42, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Not a total fail.... Enlarge the ear pink a few pixels, and blur where the ginger meets the white. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:58, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :) Define the shading more. Ivyheart =P 04:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think I was looking at the wrong one. Ivyheart =P 04:11, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad, maybe make the gray parts a tad lighter. Silverhmm 11:30, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok,ok, it's good but that stripes are big and needs blurring. Or you can add some more thinner and lighter spripes. It's only one thing.. Leaf-storm,14:12, September 6,2011 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading on the tabby patches. Pearls 20:53, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The patches look flat; add more shading, and smudge the patches and blur the stripes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:40, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes...don't look like stripes. Just a bunch of squigglies and circles. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    22:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay... Huge Revision. I just ended up redoing the whole thing. @Icy, I hope you don't mind me taking a leaf from your book and using your stripe pattern. xP ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 23:57, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look a lot better, but the patches still don't have mutch shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:19, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bunch of waste around her. =P jayce If These Walls Could Talk  02:20, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the ginger and I'm pretty sure you're going to have to redo the stripes because I don't think the stripes now can be worked with...MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:28, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Played around with the shading a bit. @Loudsplash, I think she looks fine, there's no indication at what shade her ginger patches are, so I'm going to keep it as is. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:52, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Don't mind at all. Blur the haunch shading. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    20:02, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Icy. Thanks so much! ;) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:44, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to go ahead and put CBA on this. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:05, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hate to interupt, but she has some waste by her tail. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:24, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm interrupting too XP the stripes look unnaturalMoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:03, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Loudsplash. Her stripes look fine, I used the exact same patter on Lightningpelt's warrior charart. Since it was just waste, I'm going to continue CBA. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 18:18, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:43, September 12, 2011 (UTC)


Magpie (Lo) - Approved

Magpie.loner I love this style of black and white. So, what do y'all think? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:29, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the white a bit and lighten the black. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    00:30, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black so we can see teh shading more, and define the shading on the white parts --Bloo!yo 00:34, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Derp. I forgot ear pink. Also, pelt lightening and shading defined. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:46, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Note: Changes don't show. It's the second one down. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:47, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:06, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the musdged parts a little more. I know it looks pretty and all, but blur it a little. (I really hope I'm seeing the right one...) Iveh Yo! 00:46, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Meh. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:27, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Like I put on Piper's loner image, I realized that Soot was the only one who we saw older, and this might be declined because of it. I don't want it to, but it might :/ Iveh Yo! 17:22, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but I kind of agree, since he wasn't actually seen as a loner, he might not get one. Lets wait for a lead's opinion, though. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

But, he was mentioned in the book. We've made chararts for those mentioned, and not seen. Blackstar as an apprentice, take for example. As well as Barley as a kit. =P jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:45, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Good point. Honestly, I really don't know, since it didn't say that he was a loner, and he didn't have an apprentice name or anything. And, Barley had a whole story about him and his sister as a kit. XD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:51, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

He was over six moons old. The loner charart is for any loner (even if they used to be a kit) over six moons old. And the story wasn't about Violet and him as a kit. They were over twelve moons old when that story took place; far older then a kit. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:54, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the beginning was. Anyway, I want this to get approved, because, well, its pretty. ;) So, since it might, you should probably lighten the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:01, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Misty. And for the umpteenmillionth time... I do NOT use highlights. >.> I did, however, try something else. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:06, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the chest and belly. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 22:03, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:47, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the black a bit more, define the highlights, and there's still some waste around the chest, belly, and between the hind legs. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 03:39, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, for crying out loud! I DO NOT USE HIGHLIGHTS. I'm getting tired of saying it..... I'll go fix the rest now, though. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:44, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is the correct one. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay if you dont use highlights, brighten the entire image and darken the shading. Gives the same look. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:53, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I brightened the entire image, and re-did the shading. There's almost no shading on the paws, chest and tail, but it IS there. I just lightened it up because it made them look gray instead of white... Look here for the most recent one. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  05:10, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

There is shading waste next to the chest and underbelly. Silverhmm 17:22, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

...the changes aren't showing on the page. The one you see up here is NOT current. However, I did notice some gray with the current image, so I fixed it. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  17:27, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:00, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    21:57, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt Cloudy, but could you lighten the eye quite a bit? It's really dark right now, and I can barely see it through the black fur. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:44, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about it. Re-uploaded. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:37, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:14, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:13, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  05:04, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:43, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Tanglewhisker (E) - Approved

Tanglewhisker.elder FINALLY. After over a year of not doing chararts...here's the horrible result. DX Comments? HAWKFIRE98 16:55, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't bad, this is really good^^ there are a fex stray pixels around his head, darken the shading a touch. looks great^^ Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:57, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Love what you did with his pelt. Maybe highlight it a bit more, though. It's really dark looking. Shelly For a limited time only 16:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

You also need to add some gray to his back to match his description. Shelly For a limited time only 16:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think you have any earpink O.o. Please add some. I agree with Maplepool, this looks great! Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 17:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Add earpink, and define shading/highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:01, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Some of the stripes look a tiny bit blotchy, and I think a couple went over the lineart. ShadewingMischief Managed... 18:09, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I agree with the people above, some waste around the ear, and like his description says, he needs a graying back. The Stars AlignIsn't there somewhere I can buy snow? 19:43, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good! Add some Ear-Pink (I dont seee any), erase a few stray pizels behind the head, and add a graying back Fallenstars 04:53, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fallenstars, you don't need to repreat what's already been said. Iveh Yo! 19:29, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Any chance of you lightening the whole thing a bit? It's so dark it's kind of hard to see the messy fur. It's fine if you can't, just a suggestion. This looks AMAZING! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:03, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know I already commented, but I noticed something else. In his description, it says he has a "graying back." I don't see any gray. Any chance you could add some? =) ShadewingMischief Managed... 21:12, August 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

...Are ya still working on this? 0_o lighten up the pelt color and define the shading --Bloo!yo 00:14, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfire hasn't updated in about 48 hours... Should someone else take this up before it's declined for inactivity? Shelly For a limited time only 03:29, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... we usually wait about a week before we decline images. This is fine. Leggo 🏈 14:26, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Did it ever say that he has a gray face and paws? It doesn't say so in the description SpottedtalonMudears 20:20, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's supposed to be a graying muzzle and paws, meaning he's old. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  20:22, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Its been four days without comments now...Are you still working on this? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:19, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

If I remember right, Hawkfire either didn't reserve this, or took their reservation off the table. Iveh Yo! 16:20, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Then, shouldn't this be declined? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:31, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with that. It should be, although it is neat. =( jayce If These Walls Could Talk  05:33, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, someone can always take over...its been a week without reuploads now, so this should be withdrawn. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:20, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can I take over? 8) --Bloo!yo 22:13, August 27, 2011 (UTC)18:37, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, guess Im takin' over! so...
Reuploaded - added graying back, earpink and lightened the whole thing up a bit. changes arent showing..[1] =.= --Bloo!yo 00:22, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the gray in a lot. Shelly For a limited time only 01:19, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I redidit, since it said wide 8) Wow! Look at that, changes aren't showin! Now what are the odds of that? =.= --Bloo!yo 01:43, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Little momnt! We can tke over chararts? Ow.. yes I think there is missing ear-pink? I don't see it.

Leafstorm, if an image is gonna be declined due to lack of work or is withdrawn (or something similar) someone can take over. It's always been like that. And this is looking great, but maybe make the back the same color as the muzzle? Maybe a bit darker. I don't know. XD I just imagine him having a gray back as it being like.... hairs turning white, like they do on humans. This looks great though! ^^

Reuploaded - gaiz forgot to to sign, would ya? xD --Bloo!yo 15:32, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think you could make the back a little less dark, to be more grayish. Ivyheart =P 17:36, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I just lightened it, and I can promise you that it IS gray x) Anything else? --Bloo!yo 18:01, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

The back doesn't look gray to me, because you have brown tabby stripes going through it. If the changes aren't showing, I'm sorry but this computer takes too long to load it. Iveh Yo! 19:45, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the gray on the back softer. Make it a bit more like a tinge rather than a gray tabby patch. Define the ear-pink. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:12, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - second one from the top --Bloo!yo 05:04, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad bit. Grell No question at all! 13:52, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded - I wont be uploading again until I get more than a few comments from now on. I dont like cluttering up the file with different versions DX As usual, changes are on the second one from the top.--Bloo!yo 23:57, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Define the ear-pink a bit more. Make the patch on the back a bit lighter. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 16:43, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

And erase the waste around the back. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 16:45, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'll erase the waste once this gets approved 8) --Bloo!yo 00:38, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Just erase it now, it won't get approved until it is erased. xD Also, define the earpink and darken shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:54, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - That's better xP, Anything else? --Bloo!yo 01:18, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:39, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Bloo!yo 00:10, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit; look at Poppydawn's charart, the colors are similar to this. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:03, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - *eye twitches* --Bloo!yo 00:45, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the darker shading, darken the eye, and make the earpink more triagular as well as a bit smaller and lightening it a bit more wouldn't hurt either. Beautiful job. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 04:37, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink looks perfectly fine to me, but I WILL fix the shading. you sure your looking at the right one I linked above? --Bloo!yo 18:53, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Comments?--Bloo!yo 22:01, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

no comments...C'mon gaiz, is it really that horrible? B( --Bloo!yo 03:04, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

If it was horrible, there'd be a LOT of comments than you can imagine. Make the earpink a liiiittle smaller. --Leafstrike-- 04:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Uh, see, while redoing this, I forgot to save it layered so whenever I tamper with the earpink, I'll just ruin it. So for now, Im just gonna leave it as it is. You cool with that? --Bloo!yo 05:36, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

...Anything else? =.= --Bloo!yo 01:10, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Stop asking if someone has something to say every five minutes. Its a waste of space and recent wiki activity distraction =.=. If you do it for your next charart i wont CBA it. Be warned. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 03:34, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm reaaaaaaally sorry to interupt, but the back's bothering me. Can you make it the same color as the muzzle? If he has a graying back, it's probably just losing it's color, like the muzzle would, not turning a kinda dark gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Change the heading, Paleclaw. XD And, yeah, I sorta agree with her, actually. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  07:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the gray and brown more. Moonstorm88 09:59, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - There, I lightened the back. If it STILL looks too dark to you, its because of the shading --Bloo!yo 05:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't mean just lighten it though, I meant make it around the color of the muzzle. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:55, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Egh. I tried. Yes, I am aware of the waste --Bloo!yo 00:59, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste, and I'll CBA this. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:56, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks Cloudskye --Bloo!yo 00:04, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me, Bloo. CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:54, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:54, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (KP)~ Approved

Sol.kittypet Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:17, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on his collar. Beautiful work! Iveh Yo! 00:20, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Are you looking at the right one? Second in the history, i redid it. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oooh GORGEOUS! Blur the dark brown on the shoulder and tail juuuuust a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:23, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 18:04, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add some brown or dark ginger (whatever that dark orange color is :P) to the face SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The dark orange is shading, and the face is supposed to be wholly orange. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his right ear, blur the shading by the base of the tail, and desaturate the shading on the brown patch on his tail a bit. This is beautiful, Icy! =P ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:06, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 04:14, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the part of the ear pink closest to his head. Sol is amazing, and this makes him look twice as awesome. xD jayce If These Walls Could Talk  05:53, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Thanks. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:48, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the shoulder (the light part, I know there are no highlihgts) and darken the shading a bit. This is amazing! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:28, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 18:27, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink a tad more and then I'll CBA this. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:10, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is from the other images it has to match. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:59, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Then, let's go CBA. ;) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:11, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  06:13, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Whitefang (A) ~ Approved

Whitefang.apprenticeThis will be the 35th image after what needs to be archived has been. Comments? Specklestream Let it Snow! 09:29, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

looks great but the stripes on his tail look kinda odd. and the earpink is a little hard to see. But great job!^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real?

19:34, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - But as usual the changes aren't showing yet. I defined the ear pink and tidied up the tail, so that the stripes are consistent and fit better with his warrior image.. Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:32, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. You did really good in matching my image. The only thing I can think of is make the ear pink about a pixel larger. Excellent job! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:24, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

The edge of the paws and the white color looks messy. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 05:40, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I tidied up where the white meets the brown on the paws, however the changes aren't showing yet XD Specklestream Let it Snow! 08:20, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are showing, it's the second one down. Specklestream Let it Snow! 21:15, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and add a highlight to the tail. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:13, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 08:16, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Stretch the highlight further up on his face. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:32, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 15:03, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the head highlight bigger, and blur the haunch highlight. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:44, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded (But the changes aren't showing) Specklestream Let it Snow! 10:26, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Assuming I'm looking at the right one.... You need to lighten up the shading on the tail. It makes the fur look darker then his warrior charart. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:58, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, too. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded After this I cannot honestly define the ear-pink anymore. Specklestream Let it Snow! 11:29, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the brown and white meet on the hind legs. --Leafstrike-- 01:23, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Whitefang.apprentice.png. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to bug you about earpink (though it doesn't have to do with defining it), but blur the bottom of it. Ivyheart =P 00:14, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

'Re-Uploaded & Renamed 'Specklestream Let it Snow! 10:09, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlihgt on the head. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:02, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 21:38, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

CAB? -ſceheartBlah blah 20:39, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Spelling fail i hate autocorrect but none anyways! -ſceheartBlah blah 23:48, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) - Approved

Tigerheart.warrior.alt Here's Tigerheart! I wanted to do this way back in like May, but Sandstorm beat me to it. :P Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:15, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

He needs some more stripes on his tail, it looks weird with only the few. Iveh Yo! 00:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Not just on his tail, everywhere. But stunning job, Paleclaw! princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    00:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I agree it looks weird, but this is exactly the stripes he has on his Apprentice alt, is it Ok to change them? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:12, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Alts. don't need to be the same....XD Rainey 10:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the tail shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I thought if they were described the same, btu in a different rank, the images had to match? Oh well, that means I can go crazy with the stripes! 8D Anyways, changes aren't showing yet. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:53, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the nicked ear a tad bit more pointer? Other then that, this is wonderful. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:59, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I took the lineart for the nicked ear from the normal image, but I agree that it should be pointier, so I went ahead and changed it anyways. :P Changes aren't showing yet. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:19, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Did you add your own stuff? and nice job better than mine >:P But anywho darken the ear pink and thicken the stripes too thin! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:25, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yes, I added my own stuff. XD It needed more stripes. And the stripes are meant to be that thin, so I'm gonna keep them like that. I did darken the earpink though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 02:51, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the base of the tail. The earpink is amazing. xD I fail at earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:30, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done! ^^ And thanks. XD Your earpinks look fine though. :P I admit though, they ARE pretty hard to do. :/ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:10, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 20:43, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Very neat and artistic =) Looks great Robz You make me feel good! 07:14, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Robintalon, but try not to comment on images just to compliment them, especially when they're on CBA. Thank you again though. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:29, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Correct Paleclaw! Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:48, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Willowkit (Ki) - Approved

Willowkit (CP).kit Comments? Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 03:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the belly. So cute! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:56, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! :3 Looks awesome Atelda! Blur the earpink just a teeny bit. Rainey 10:59, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:42, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

desaturate the earpink a tad --Bloo!yo 00:15, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 01:08, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the file name be Willowkit (CP).png? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Woops, I forgot to rename it, but it's renamed now. :) Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 02:14, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading. It looks too dark. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  02:18, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 02:55, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

the right side looks really dark, could you lighten it? otherwise great job --Cinder Real or Not Real?


Reuploaded. If I lighten it anymore, she won't have highlights. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 00:28, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, Atelda! Blur the shading on her shoulder a bit more and give her a gray nose. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:01, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Final act of tonight *yawn* :P Thanks, Scarletwind! Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 03:59, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:23, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I've blurred it and I see no difference other than a bit of blurred lineart so in other words, it can't be blurred anymore. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 21:48, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the paws' shading a little, they look darker than the rest of the shading. --Leafstrike-- 00:50, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the paws. I also smudged the shading a bit, and I think it looks a little better. :P Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 05:08, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 20:46, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you tell im in a good mood today? Approved! -ſceheartBlah blah 23:48, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lark (Ki) - Approved

Lark.kit Finally, a free space!!!! Comments? --Leafstrike-- 00:08, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the redlink, I just typed it wrong. --Leafstrike-- 00:10, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Good job! :3 I think you should blur the stripes just a bit more. Misty! 01:29, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

It says she's got a tiny tail, make her tail tiny, and define the ear-pink Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:25, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the highlights. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:57, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

defint the earpink --Bloo!yo 04:16, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think her tail might be tiny because she's a kit, but I'm not sure. Ivyheart =P 14:01, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I left the tail as it is. Let's see what other users think. --Leafstrike-- 17:19, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, i still think the tail should be smaller. Not to be rude or anything. I love the shading by the way. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 18:27, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes in the shading and connect a few- all the tabbies I've seen have a tabby "necklace" which connects around their neck from both sides. This is beautiful, by the way! Iveh Yo! 19:17, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, I made a tiny tail. It's horrible, I know. --Leafstrike-- 19:58, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is amazing Moonleaf. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 20:03, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

In my opinion, I don't think she should have blue eyes. Just saying.. :P This is great though! ^-^ SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:26, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly give a little curve to the stripes and/or thicken them as they look out of place. Define the pupil and if you decide to stick with blue eyes, lighten them. :) Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 01:25, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, Moonleaf, I love the way you made her look, i'm glad you re-did her, did you SEE my image of Lark? It was horrid, this is beautiful. Define the ear-pink. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:15, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading/highlights to the tail, too. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:46, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 00:09, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful, Moonleaf! I think she should have a smaller tail as well. I see nothing wrong with this. Love the stripes! 'Petalstep 15:06, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Could you make the earpink stand out more against the fur though? Maybe redden it, or lighten it or something. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:55, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 04:06, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the tail lineart just a little thicker? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  04:29, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 18:06, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing! Can you define the ear-pink slightly on ---> that side. Specklestream Let it Snow! 18:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 20:48, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approved! -ſceheartBlah blah 23:48, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Petaldust (Ki) ~ Approved

Petaldust.kit Ok, this will be the 35th. Hope you like it! Ivyheart =P 21:04, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely epic. okay, define the shading some, and thats all I see --Bloo!yo 21:06, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the brown parts a little to match the other images. --Leafstrike-- 21:08, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Also lighten the white too though. The colors on here are a bit darker than her warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:27, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reploaded. Thank you guys ^_^ Changes aren't showing. Ivyheart =P 22:03, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the earpink a tad? Sky, evil incarnated 12:47, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I doubt the changes are showing. Ivyheart =P 23:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Bee-u-ti-ful! Just define the ear-pink, looks great, Ivy! Flowerpatch 02:39, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink as well. But just a little. This is amazing! Leggo 🏈 03:43, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Aww. The kit looks purdey :3 Define the highlights. And the ear pink. Fallenstars, thanks for the memories! 07:05, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

It looks kind of like a tabby make it more like a tortie. And also make the white on the front legs taller and on the back leg make it cover the whole leg. Moonstorm88 11:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

She made the whole back leg white. You cant make it bigger and then it would go onto her side. And the sides do look a little bit tabby.. .Fallenstars, thanks for the memories! 12:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

You guys, I only copied it to look like her warrior image. Ivyheart =P 14:15, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ok, made earpink bigger, and did I define it enough? I don't think I should change the way she looks because I was copying her warrior image. Ivyheart =P 14:21, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing. Ivyheart =P 15:13, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you could blur the colours a bit more, so people don't think it looks tabby. Sky, it's over 9000!! 16:18, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the eyes a bit. The approved warrior art has her eyes slightly lighter. Otherwise, gorgeous. Very well done. Shelly For a limited time only 16:29, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Thanks Shellheart.

Gorgeous, Ivyheart! The only thing I see is maybe make the white a bit more white, it looks more gray than white. Other than that, it's amazing! 'Petalstep 22:12, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Thanks, peeps. I appreciate all of your compliments. Ivyheart =P 04:10, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is Beautiful, Ivyheart! Good job Ivyheart! Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 20:35, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tiny bit smaller and blur it ;3 SplookMavinotp♥ 21:11, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white paws, and define the shading. Looks great! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:50, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are showing, surprisingly. I thank you guys for your support :) Ivyheart =P 00:55, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink a bit and thicken and blur the shading under the chin. This looks great, Ivy! :) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:08, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Ivyheart =P 04:45, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Could you lighten the whole thing just a biiiit more? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:39, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I bet the changes are showing. Ivyheart =P 00:13, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the black patches, though, to match the warrior version. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:34, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reploaded. To Paleclaw, I kept everything else lightened. Ivyheart =P 03:01, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? It's been a while.Ivyheart =P 16:43, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the patches some. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:42, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Congrats, Iceheart, also. :) Ivyheart =P 00:57, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:13, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:18, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (W) ~ Approved

Voleclaw.WarriorFirst charart so it may be a bit shaky, but what do you think? Misty! 04:50, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

This will have to be redone sadly, you need to get the full sized blank. Make sure to click the image, THEN save/copy it to use it. Sorry. D: ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:53, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry :3 Should I just remove all of this? Misty! 05:02, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is that the right size? Misty! 06:29, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yep! Blur the shading please. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  06:35, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Are the changes showing? Misty! 06:46, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Not yet. XD Give them a few hours and it should show. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  06:50, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the front leg and eye, blur shading, enlarge highlights, make earpink more triangular.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 08:59, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should brighten the eyes a bit. They look almost black. Shelly For a limited time only 12:15, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are definitely not showing xD Misty! 17:48, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

There, now I think they're showing. Misty! 21:00, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Where's your light source? Keep the shading consistent and smooth, and add some along the haunch. See one of the tutorials for the correct shading source. Other then that, smooth out the highlights, and blur/triangularize the earpink some ;) SplookMavinotp♥ 22:25, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, but whats a light source? (sorry first charart Dx) I use Mousetalons tutorial, is that an okay one? I blurred and made the earpink more triangular, and what do you mean by smooth out the highlights? (sorry >.<) Misty! 22:38, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

A light source means where the light is coming from. For example, if the light is coming from the left side, the left side will be brighter than the right side. If the light is coming from the right side, then the darker side will be the left side. Smoothing out the highlights means to blur them and stretch them out more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:15, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

And rename this as Voleclaw.warrior.png. Its case-sensitive. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:42, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the highlights as much as I could.. And added some shading along the haunch. Is it okay? >.< Misty! 01:08, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Move the tail highlight on the left side, near the top. It's not supposed to be on the tip of the tail. Man, I'm bad at explaining things.. xD SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:35, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moved the highlights, is that alright? The changes aren't showing (sorry that I keep on saying that xD)

Blur the highlights, shading, and earpink. Good job! Grell No question at all! 21:00, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Blurred the highlights, shading and earpink more. And Thanks :3 Misty! 21:17, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Try to darken the highlights so they don't stand out as much. Lookin' good! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  06:31, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Are the changes showing for you? Misty! 07:01, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Don't worry though. With the amount of images this wiki has, changes may take some time to show up. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  07:03, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think the changes are now showing, can you see them? Misty! 01:33, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

There is a sort of streak of highlight extending from the face highlights. Can you get rid of it? Grell No question at all! 14:03, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Oh, and (sorry I didn't catch this until after I published) there is blurred lineart all over. Can you fix that as well? Grell No question at all! 14:05, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Sure, but I'll have to hold that off until my internet comes back, (using a differnet computer) is that alright? Misty! 19:28, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded How does it look? :3 Misty! 02:26, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing, and blur the chest a little. WildfireHazelxThorn! 19:03, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think it should be lighter gray, because Voleclaw is not dark grey. Also some of the shading needs to be blurred. Stoneclaw33 12:35, August 30, 2011

Sorry, I'm kind of new at this.. BUt any tips on how to lighten the whole thing?? I use pixlr.com. (sorry >.<) Misty! 20:04, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Use the dodge tool, I think, or redo it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:22, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the whole thing, making it a lighter gray. (changes are not showing) But if you don't like, I still have the old image on which I could just use the dodge tool on. Misty! 02:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur over the shading and smooth it out; it looks really blotchy. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:38, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:46, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading and made the highlights bigger, though I'm having trouble with the shading on the back. >.<

Sign with 4 ~s. If you'd like help, you can always ask. :3 Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:39, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oops! Sorry 'bout that. I would like help with the shading x3 Misty! 00:56, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll help! :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:05, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! :D Misty! 00:18, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I redid the shading for you, but the changes aren't showing yet. I also renamed it correctly. Check the second file on the file page to see my version. If you don't like it, you can revert it to your version. :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:23, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! And what tutorial do you use? xD Misty! 07:09, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. :D And, I used Nightshine's tutorial at first, but then I just began doing things my own way. xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 07:14, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. --Leafstrike-- 01:51, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded How does it look? Misty! 03:47, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more like a triangle by just smudging it slightly. Then I would smudge the edges of the earpink or blur it depending on artist's preference. Darken the eye color, and you may want to airbrush the edge of the highlights so make them smoother or blur them. Nice work. :) Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 03:54, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks ^-^ Is that okay? Misty! 05:25, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Mmhm.. Make it more triangular, more pointier xP --Bloo!yo 05:33, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing :P Misty! 16:23, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blurthe edges of the chest hightlight, then it will be ready for CBA. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    20:27, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is that good? :3 Misty! 21:36, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight. Eh, me commenting on something that I started. ;P Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:06, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it okay now? Misty! 00:08, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:10, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it good now? Misty! 03:08, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. CBA? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:15, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Robz You make me feel good! 07:11, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is this approved? Ivyheart =P 02:50, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Not until a lead approves it. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:16, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. Life's been hell. Approved. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  21:20, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (W) ~ Approved

Sunfish.warrior

Now that Shellheart is done, on to Sunfish. And, for the record, I have Darkhallows' permission to do this. I just couldn't decide on whether or not to make her default brown or gray to match the "manga", and it was suggested I do gray. Not sure if I should darken it, but she appeared to be a very light gray anyway. I made her eyes amber because her name made me think that that would be the correct color. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 20:25, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and smooth out the shading; it looks a bit blotchy. Darken the ear-pink. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 20:34, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the pelt colour ever so slightly? It seems too pale. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  20:43, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, darken the shading, lighten the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:11, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reffen the earpink and define it and the shading too. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:50, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I mean redden. Sorry. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:52, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded changes not showing. Did all suggested above, only darkened her pelt an iota because she really looks pale in the "manga". Shelly For a limited time only 03:38, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make her long-furred, as all riverclan cats have a thick pelt. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:07, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, make it longhaired, and darken the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:22, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

In the image from which I took her description, she was short furred. I'm leaving it as is, since it was the general agreement that we'd only make them long-haired if they were never described or seen as short haired. I will darken the shading, though. Shelly For a limited time only 00:30, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so. In manga, you can hardly tell how long the fur is. You never know, maybe she's jus really skinny with lots of thick fur. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:36, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so. In any case, her description is 'slender', and that typically translates to short-furred. Shelly For a limited time only 00:51, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Not all the time, my cat, Flash is selnder, but she has long fur, and look at Poppyfrost; slender it says she's SLENDER, but her pixlis have long fur. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:48, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, fine. If everyone insists, I'll redo her with long fur. Shelly For a limited time only 02:57, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Erf. There's a random slash of highlight on the shoulder, which looks like the only highlight, and a random dade on the closer back paw. Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 19:09, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done. Changes not showing. She's now long haired, as per popular demand. Shelly For a limited time only 15:23, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

You know, if she's called SUNfish, don't you think she'd be like a really pale gold?Cardinalfire My fluffy yellow cake! 16:19, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

That would be too presumptuous. Darkhallows advised me to make her gray to match th eonly decription we'll probably ever have of her from the manga at the end of Crookedstar's Promise. And we can't go by names for descriptions. Have you seen Tawnyspots? How he got that name is an enigma. Shelly For a limited time only 16:52, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

There is some blurred lineart near the tip of the earpink. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:26, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see it, but whatever it is it isn't blurred lineart. I don't touch the lineart, I work under it. Shelly For a limited time only 20:13, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and round it; it looks a bit flat. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 02:44, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading tons except on the tail--Bloo!yo 03:13, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks darker than the rest of the body. Lighten it a bit. Grell No question at all! 13:59, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the shadking thicker. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    15:06, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is a little too blured on one side but other than that great job! --Cinder Real or Not Real?

20:52, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, lighten the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:42, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Did all suggested above (though most of it was the same thing repeated over and over again by different people), basically redid the shading completely. Still think she looked like a short furred cat in the graphic novel, but I digress. Shelly For a limited time only 01:19, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better! Blur the neck and back shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:35, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, changes not showing yet. Blurred it literally as much as it would go. Anything else? Shelly For a limited time only 22:56, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if its my computer, but the base of the tail seems to have some waste near it. Also, lighten the front paw. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, got rid of any waste I could find, lightened front paw. Changes not showing yet. Shelly For a limited time only 16:22, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights on the muzzle, it almost makes it look like she has a graying muzzle. This is looking great! ^^ Keep up the good work! :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:24, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

It looks like there's some black or dark gray mixed with the ear-pink. Blur the shading around the head and darken/add some shading under the chin. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 15:08, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened shading under the chin more (though I'm betting another user gets on to tell me to lighten it again) and got rid of the shading in the ear. Shelly For a limited time only 20:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and more triangular. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:10, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 00:09, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight and the shading under the chin. Specklestream Let it Snow! 18:08, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Honestly, I've pushed that shading as far as it will go. Shelly For a limited time only 23:42, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's a few bits of waste around the whole image. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  02:41, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Even out the shading on her back and blur the shading around the head. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:22, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud, could you circle the waste? I can't see it no matter what I try. Shelly For a limited time only 17:33, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Gaiz..shading is fine, just make the earpink triangular, desaturate it a bit, and THEN it'll look prefectly fine to me --Bloo!yo 04:27, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I've literally done everything that's been suggested, even if the suggestions have contradicted eachother. Got rid of any shading waste I could squint at. Fixed the ear-pink. Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 11:33, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'm going to be gone until Sunday night. Heading home to celebrate my dad's birthday and leaving my computer here in my dorm. Ta till then. Shelly For a limited time only 18:21, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'm back. Is there anything else needing done? Shelly For a limited time only 20:27, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can find nothing wrong with this, Shelly. CBA? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:05, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but from my perspetive the neck looks messy. Robz You make me feel good! 07:08, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Good eye, Robintalon. I didn't catch that. Fix that, then I'll reinstate the CBA. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  07:10, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the neck. Changes not showing here. Shelly For a limited time only 16:31, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, about forgetting, Shelly. CBA? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  16:36, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it, except on the tail. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:12, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is fine and other users agree. It's at max opacity and I've blurred it to death. This charart is fine. Someone please re-instate the CBA.

It looks just fine, Mintstarr. Continuing CBA from where it left off. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  21:31, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Woo, 24 hours are up! (waits happily) Shelly For a limited time only 19:11, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Heehee, congrats Shelly! Ivyheart =P 23:32, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Approving now. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:35, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Alt. R.) - Approved

Mapleshade.rogue.altSince we agreed that if a manga description is a lot different that they would get an alt., I think this this is enough to be considered for an alt, and since she died as a rouge, I made her a rogue. I think this is one of my best. Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 04:07, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and also, I tried copying her markings to a t. I couldn't decide if the half or all of her chest since they changed it, though, and I did some guesswork with the colors. Iveh Yo! 04:08, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more noticeable. This looks really neat! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  04:11, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and thanks =) I think my charart keeps getting better with each one I do. Iveh Yo! 04:14, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Dayum! I think this is pretty much your best one XD smudge the black spots moar --Bloo!yo 04:18, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and by the way Blue, even though it doesn't bother me, you should probably watch your language on the talk pages since younger users use this site. I'm glad you like this! Iveh Yo! 04:37, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more visible. Silverhmm 12:15, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 16:21, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I love this! Blur the ear-pink, I think. (Unintentional rhyme, I swear) Shelly For a limited time only 20:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and really now? ;p Iveh Yo! 20:32, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading lighter on the belly, it makes it look gray. Nice work! Ivyheart =P 01:04, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 03:26, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the tail so it doesn't look so gray. I really <3 this. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  06:24, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) Iveh Yo! 15:41, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. Looks awesome! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:13, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded Iveh Yo! 01:27, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading a little more, and I think this may be ready. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  16:06, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded And oops, I didn't mean to wipe the page...dunno how that happened...Iveh Yo! 20:02, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Me to Cloudy. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:29, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:11, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wing (PH) ~ Approved

Wing.ph Moonflight started this, but withdrew it. It never got done with the new blanks. I LOVE the mudstreaks. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:04, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks awesome~ Blur the paws a tab more :) Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 03:40, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and isn't the shading supposed to be on the bottom of the tail instead of the top? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:12, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's around the whole tail. If you look on her kit mother image, the top half of the tail is gray, and the bottom half is white. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  04:13, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  04:17, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear more, and blur the shading, too. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:12, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:08, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    14:26, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Wow. That was quick! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  14:44, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wing (Alt. PH) ~ Approved

Wing.ph.alt

Meh...The shading looks horrible. Shall re-do it later. XD Anyways, comments? Rainey 05:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add some mud to the head, smudge the earpink a little, and add some to the foot. Iveh Yo! 05:27, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The mud on her tail is touching the lineart...I think --Bloo!yo 05:31, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

D'awww.... Cute! Blur the mud a bit. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  05:32, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur and smudge (?) the mud a bit. 'Petalstep 15:12, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading some :3 SplookMavinotp♥ 15:45, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The mud streaks look like they are blood spots. Make them more brown. Silverhmm 17:27, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 00:34, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Rainey! Darken the shading a tad, and brighten the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:50, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Rainey, you forgot to add "For Approval" to the heading. I fixed it for you. =) jayce If These Walls Could Talk  04:10, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Cloudy! :D Rainey 08:07, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

The mud streaks still look kinda red, but they look more brown than last time. Silverhmm 12:24, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Silvereye, the mudstreaks do not look a bit like red. It is a mixture of light and dark brown. Rainey 13:16, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possible darken the highlights on the tail and paws. Otherwise this looks amazing! Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 23:11, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the earpink. Lovely charart. ^_^ Ivyheart =P 01:07, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 10:28, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading on the back a bit. Great job! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:25, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights on the mud need to be dulled. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:30, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 11:13, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the streak on the head, please. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:08, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 10:40, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the streak on the tail, and lighten up the shading on the back ever so slightly, and I think this'll be ready. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  14:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 15:02, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  15:05, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  17:27, September 16, 2011 (UTC)


Sharpclaw (KP) - Approved

File:Sharpclaw.kittypet.png I never realised how epically cute the kittypet blacks are. XD I'm not completely happy with the stripes on this, but meh. *hopes that this is still below the limit by the time I hit the submit button* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:43, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Stunning, Paleclaw. Redden the earpink just a tad. This looks amazing :D SplookMavinotp♥ 00:50, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Thicken the upper stripe on his forehead to match his deputy image. Ivyheart =P 00:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)'

Reuploaded - Thanks guys! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:04, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink just a smidge.... and your tabbies are freaking EPIC. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I seriously have a hard time thinking of him as a kittypet... Ahk. Anyway, he looks a little darker than his warrior charart to me. But otherwise, you've done a wonderful job. Shelly For a limited time only 01:53, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Cloudy, you tabbies are the epitome of epic. Lengthen the stripes coming off his back and darken the shading on the foreleg. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:05, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the ear pink to match the deputy image? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  15:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Shellheart, the reason it looks darker is cause there's more shading on kittypet images that warrior ones (at least the way I shade them). I took all the colors from his deputy image. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 16:41, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the head. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:15, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the earpink, and blur the shading on the collar. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:24, September 14, 2011 (UTC)\

Darken the shading on the back. Otherwise, stunning. =D princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    14:23, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done, done, and done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 04:39, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    20:38, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:19, September 17, 2011 (UTC)


Harrykit (K) ~ Approved

Harrykit.kit

The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 06:45, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I moved this to the bottom of the approval section for you. Please keep that in mind next time. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  06:50, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the blotch of shading on his shoulder/ face. Other than that, looks good. Shelly For a limited time only 13:01, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well, there's no light source. Look at this on how to do shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:34, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 02:42, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 05:14, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and make the ear pink more triangular. :3 Misty! 07:31, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are too light; darken them a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:17, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 15:48, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this "Harrykit.kit.png" Iveh Yo! 20:45, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:47, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded.The name can be changed when it will be approved.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:44, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

It won't be aprroved until yu re-name it i think. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 14:46, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

But if is to rename-it ,it show two options:change the name,or the original image.This is the original image:

.cries The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 15:36, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Just change the image dear, It's fine, I'll show you changes, and if you don't like the way it looks, you can revert it back ;) Maple♥poolMischief brewing 20:49, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose. Moonstorm88 10:23, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:05, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights as well. You still working on this, Gost? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:23, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Weee, tiny green font xD But it has been a week sience this has been uploaded, I believe this is declined. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 14:59, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

If this is declined, can I take over? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:05, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Snowdazzle, if you don't have another image up for approval, he's yours. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:14, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll work on him tomorrow. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 01:37, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This sucks D: SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:21, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks GREAT, dont be a downner. Define the pupil Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Change the nose colour to grey and erase the waste beside the tail. --Leafstrike-- 00:56, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Why is he short haired now? He looked long-haired in the graphic novel to me. Shelly For a limited time only 19:43, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, make it longhaired and darken the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:19, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *cries* GIMP crashed, I can't download it now, now I have to use Pixlr! I made it worse. And I know about the blurred lineart on the ears, but can someone help me fix it? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:47, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I can help you fix it. Give me like five mins, Okay? I'm really good at kits. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:53, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- There, and i went ahead and did what i was going to tell you to do, I define the highlights and shading, and blurred them, defined the ear-pink, and fixed the blurred lineart. There you go :) ^^ Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:59, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, thank you Maplepool! It looks way better ^^ SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:23, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Your welcome^^ ;) Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:30, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a bit, but lighten the shading. He looks nearly white, but the shadings so dark it almost looks like a gray and white cat. Great job on this! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:47, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Paleclaw. ^^ SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's a tad blotchy and dark on his <--- front paw. All I see. Well done, Snow! :D -Kittycat79aka Rowantail 23:40, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit. Other than that, I see nothing wrong with this. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:34, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

It all looks fine to me. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:44, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Woot! Second image! xD SnowyXPerry = Serry! 01:38, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)


Blackstar (A) - Approved

Blackstar.apprentice Since one image is declined and one is withdrawn, I made this one. Comments? DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:43, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded 'DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:47, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the heading for you. :D Blur the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:30, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his white body and make sure there's shading on his farther hind legs away from us. I hope that makes sense... ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 23:32, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make his back paws black too. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 01:47, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Shade his underbelly. ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 04:08, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks fine. Just darken it a tad. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:50, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 05:54, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

The changes don't seem to be showing. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 06:03, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Give them some time. When there are a lot of images, sometimes the changes don't show. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  06:05, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink just a bit more :3 Misty! 03:50, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Blur the haunch shading a little bit. Grell No question at all! 14:06, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:21, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:59, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and round out the shading on the white areas. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:31, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 00:41, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more on the white areas. Don't be afraid to make it look a bit gray. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 15:05, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darn, I think I messed up pretty badly this time! The highlights look all wrong. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 05:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Psh, no you didn't. Just define the highlights some more on the tail, and blur the earpink. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:48, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:12, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't blur any more. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:57, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:41, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)


Mitzi (Lo) (Q) - Approved

Yes, since a few things are archived i am now allowed to post this. Anyway, Comments?

Mitzi (Lo).queen

Pearls 00:28, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit. Sorry, Pearl, this will be declined. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 02:40, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

It was under the limit before, Seems like someone made it over the limit, Apologies. Pearls 20:56, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think it was because you, Icestorm and I all put our images up at the exact same time. Sorry, Pearls. =( jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:49, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

But Hey! you can always re-post it once any of these get approved! 8) --Bloo!yo 00:11, August 30, 2011 (UTC) I guess this can stay up. Take the ear pink off the farthest away ear. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:50, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, Changes arent showing. Pearls 21:01, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The nose should be black. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:02, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Done, Changes arent showing. Pearls 23:14, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Mitzi_(Lo).queen.png. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:07, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

lighten the face up a little it is hard to see her mouth and whiskers. Other wise great job! --Cinder Real or Not Real?

20:23, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, Changes arent showing. Pearls 21:19, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading ever so slightly. Looking good, Pearls! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  02:16, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Changes arent showing Pearls 00:04, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the front paw shading/highlight. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:39, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'd Like to withdraw this, for the moment, i'll keep it reserved due to the fact that i'm gonna be camping, Sorry guys! Pearls 21:18, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind that, They have wifi Pearls 21:25, September 2, 2011 (UTC) 21:24, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Did you re-Upload it yet? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:13, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks very good. But I mostly say that about everything. XP. There is some waste above her back (near her neck). Fallenstars, thanks for the memories! 22:57, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded ~ Small tweaks Pearls wanted me to do. Very minor. ;) Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 00:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks atelda, Anyway the fair has been pushing my scheduals around, so i might not be able to work on this. Pearls 02:28, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Then are you withdrawing it? If not blur the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. i figured everything out, Sorry atelda --Pearls 17:03, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! :) Rainey 21:21, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There is still some waste by her neck, other than that it looks great! 'Petalstep 21:26, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There are some blotches of really saturated shading along her shoulders and around her belly. Blur those and then I'll put CBA on this. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:14, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

@Scarletwind Which areas are you meaning? circle them and email them to michtea2000@hotmail.com. Thanks. Pearls 20:42, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shoulder highlight? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:16, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

File:Mitzi (Lo).queen.redline.pngHere. There's also some pale gray lineart within her right forepaw. Change that to black please. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:17, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, Changes might not be showing. Pearls 00:02, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ban you lighten the whole thing a bit? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:22, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose a bit. Looks GREAT! :D ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Meh, Reuploaded Pearls 21:32, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Mmmm....mmaybe define the tail highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:59, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Then it would be too bright. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:47, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)


Night (Q) ~ Approved

File:Night.kitmother.pngSo, I made Night as a kit mother. I hope it's good. Comments? ★☺Starshine☺★Too Much School! 22:06, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Needs more mudstreaks. Try and make them look like her cave guard image, if you can. Blur the highlights as well. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  22:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a grayish-black nose Iveh Yo! 22:12, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

VERY nice! blur the stomach highlight & make the mud streaks more realistic(smudge). Also add a few more smaller streaks like Skye said --Bloo!yo 22:12, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add more mud; smudge it, and define the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Didn't see the above comment 'til now. I'll define it. ★☺Starshine☺★Too Much School! 22:56, September 6, 2011 (UTC) (Defined)

Make the mud streaks a little brighter. Other than that it's beautiful :3 Silverhmm 23:02, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Brightened it. ★☺Starshine☺★Too Much School! 23:13, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

She ish glowing for all the waste around her, ge rid of that, LOVELY image! ;) Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:23, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the haunch. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:28, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; I re-did the shading, so sorry if it looks different. ★☺Starshine☺★Too Much School! 23:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I love the shading, if you want my opinion. Ok so blur the mud into her pelt more. There's waste next to the front paw farther away from us. And there's a tiny bit of waste on the ear closest to us. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:25, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I also think that i see some waste above her back. Can you fix the ear closest to us, the back, and the paw farthest from us? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 18:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; ★☺Starshine☺★Too Much School!

Define the earpink, I can't really see it. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:41, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the highlight on the face, please. I'm having a rough time seeing it. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:00, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; ★☺Starshine☺★Too Much School! 22:14, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose black, and lighten the highlight on the tail. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:19, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; ★☺Starshine☺★Too Much School! 23:14, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the mud on the tail tip, it makes the tail look kind of faded. Good job. :) Ivyheart =P 00:56, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Forgot to add this in. Also redden the earpink. Ivyheart =P 02:53, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the charart. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:25, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the shoulder. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:09, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded ★☺Starshine☺★Too Much School! 01:07, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:49, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)


Fallowfern (W) - Approved

Fallowfern.warrior heheh...well this is embarrasing. It took me FIVE TIMES to get the shading right DX --Bloo!yo 06:21, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Don't feel bad. I've had shading issues before. Speaking of, darken yours, if you don't mind. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  06:22, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --Bloo!yo 06:34, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail. :D Looks great! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:07, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

the shading on her neck is a little too dark and looks likea scarf, lighten it a bit and blur it. Other than that awesome job! --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:56, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Jeez, since when did I suck at chararts? idk if changes are showin' --Bloo!yo 00:35, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, if you have them. But still, if you don't, blur the areas highlights will typically go. --Leafstrike-- 00:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploaded - No, I dont use them, but I tried --Bloo!yo 04:37, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like part of the lineart on the top of the tail got cut off. Thicken the lineart. This is coming along nicely Blue 8) Iveh Yo! 15:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The feet are the same way. Also, can you make the ear pink more pink? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  16:07, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Oops. uhh...my bad --Bloo!yo 00:00, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink to match the queen image. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:52, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I took the color from the queen's image. --Bloo!yo 20:41, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:52, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)


Sasha (Lo) - Approved

Sasha.lonerUgh... I think I really hate this one... Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:10, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the dark brown more like the caramel brown color on her kittypet image. Iveh Yo! 04:12, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

There's gray around the image. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  04:26, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make it a little brown-ier. That happens sometimes. Try the caramel color to make it look more alike. I would try to color-pick the color from one of the existing images and make it that color. Very good :3 Fallenstars, thanks for the memories! 21:05, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define the earpink a bit. Nice work! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:10, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

To go with the light source, add more highlights to the tail. Ivyheart =P 01:03, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Fallenstars, there's no need to repeat what I've already said. Iveh Yo! 01:25, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I made it worse... ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a little brown on her muzzle. No no no you didn't make it worse, trust me! Iveh Yo! 15:59, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'll take your word for it, Ivy. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:16, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tip of the ear pink a bit. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  14:02, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 15:05, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blurr the highlights a bit more. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:21, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:29, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the image. Frosted Apple 22:10, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:44, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The colors don't match the other chararts. Then it'll look perfect. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:27, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I took the colors straight from her Kittypet charart, which has been tweaked. Approving. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:28, September 19, 2011 (UTC)


Gorsetail (Q Alt.)~ Approved

File:Gorsetail (P3).queen.alt.pngYes its kind of icky, but thats what you guys are for. Now i have to go change my reservation on the table. Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

It's not Icky at all, it's great! Take the lighter spot off of the big stripe in the middle of the back. Also define the shading a little more, or highlights. Ivyheart =P 00:27, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 04:03, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly add a stripe on the neck for a tabby necklace, as most tabbies have those? It just seems a tad out of place when it is all stripes on her neck, but it's your call. This is gorgeous! Iveh Yo! 15:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! Can you darken the shading a bit more, though? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:33, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuplaoded- The changes werent showing in the last upload. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:00, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Good job. There's a lighter transistion near the back - I'm not really sure if that's a highlight or the pelt after shading, but could you darken it? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    14:25, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

OKay i wasnt quite sure what you meant, but i think i got it, if not be a little more descripitive. Sorry. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:37, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Put some of the mottles a bit closer together on her belly; they look a bit like speckles and maybe give her a mottled design by her eyes? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:12, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 02:09, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, Icy! ;) CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:26, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Wait isn't it supposed to be mottled? And the tip of the ear looks odd and the face is too dark Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:29, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. Continuing CBA. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:32, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:32, September 19, 2011 (UTC)


Graypool (W) ~ Approved

File:Graypool.warrior (2).pngHere she is! What do you think? ShadewingMischief Managed... 01:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink and change the side the highlights are on, on the tail. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 01:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes more orange, less yellow. Rename the image Graypool.warrior.png. Ivyheart =P 01:53, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

blur the earpink.Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Blurred earpink, changed eye and highlights, renamed image. ShadewingMischief Managed... 02:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading on her neck and right by her shoulder more Iveh Yo! 02:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Blurring job is a fail, but I tried. ^.^ ShadewingMischief Managed... 02:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Good job ^_^ Add more highlights to the upper part of the tail, though. Ivyheart =P 02:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

This looks EPIC Shady! xD Brighten the tail highlight ;) şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 13:17, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. ShadewingMischief Managed... 13:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading just a tad. Looks good otherwise, Shadeh! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  16:47, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit blotchy; blur it and smoothen it; define the light source, add more shading to the tail, and blur the earpink. Great work! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Got it. What's the light source? (This is my first charart, sorry). ShadewingMischief Managed... 17:45, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Gosh i know what it is but i am HORRID at explaining things....so i can't help you, I'm sorry DX Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - The blurring was a fail. I tried. And it's fine Maplepool. xD ShadewingMischief Managed... 17:55, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The changes aren't showing. Help? ShadewingMischief Managed... 17:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

If the changes don't show, there's nothing you can do about it. Just look at the second-to-top file on the file page. The changes always start to show after a few days, don't worry. :D The light source means where the light is coming from; for example, if the light is coming from the side of the cat, the highlights would all be on the side; if the light is coming from the front, the back would be darker than the front. Hope this helps. =) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks a million. ShadewingMischief Managed... 21:22, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Changes still aren't showing. Defined light source. ShadewingMischief Managed... 14:35, August 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Their is some blurred lineart near the shoulder. şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 19:43, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think the blurred lineart goes down the back, also. Ivyheart =P 20:05, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, I see. I'll get that cleared up, but I don't if the changes will show...thanks though. ShadewingMischief Managed... 22:17, August 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Um I fixed the shoulder lineart, but I didn't see any blurred pixels on the back. Changes are finally showing! xD ShadewingMischief Managed... 22:43, August 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The earpink looks like it's a little off to the right. Either redo the earpink, or just expand it to go towards the left more. Ivyheart =P 23:25, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Complete FAIL. Oh well, I tried. And of course the changes aren't showing again! :3 ShadewingMischief Managed... 00:07, August 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Alright, the changes are showing again! The earpink is a fail. ShadewingMischief Managed... 13:43, August 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and highlights. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 21:42, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Uhh, I don't think the changes are showing again, but I can't tell. Does it look any different? (Sorry, I'm so stupid sometimes). ShadewingMischief Managed... 01:07, August 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I have no clue xD. Er... blur the earpink some more. Gawjus, Shadeh! şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 00:40, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Blurred earpink. It's not that great, Snowy, but I did my best. :) ShadewingMischief Managed... 00:54, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It looks like there is a gray stripe on the back, get rid of that and blur the earpink a bit more. Also, there is some blurred lineart on the tail, and it may be just me, but the top of the lineart on the tail looks a bit lighter. Otherwise, nice job. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 17:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Fixed. Changes aren't showing again. =( ShadewingMischief Managed... 22:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Alright I think the changes are showing now. :D ShadewingMischief Managed... 13:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The shading is too dark on the back and the....front part of the cat. I think you can fix it ;) Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:24, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I completely re-did her. The shading on the old one was disastrous, I couldn't get it to lighten. Comments? ShadewingMischief Managed... 19:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Much better Shadeh. Blur the tail shading and the earpink. :3 şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 23:00, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. ShadewingMischief Managed... 13:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and highlights. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 15:17, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit and the highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:44, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail highlight bigger. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:23, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Fixed. Grell No question at all! 12:49, August 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:59, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. Grell No question at all! 13:57, August 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Enlarge the ear-pink a bit more and darken it. Blur the shading on the tail and around the highlights; maybe darken the highlights a bit. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:11, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks to bright. And make the original color be seen, not just the shading and highlights. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 01:04, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't worked on this, I'm so busy! XC Grell No question at all! 21:08, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Okay, I might redo this again if I have to. Comments? Changes aren't showing. Grell No question at all! 20:38, August 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the highlights and the shading. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I blurred highlights and shading, re-did earpink and tail. Changes aren't showing. Grell No question at all! 13:50, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I think it's a good time to mention that the top file on the file page is the new version. The first smaller one in the blue table. Sorry, guys. :p Grell No question at all! 00:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Redden the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:54, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Changes still aren't showing. Grell No question at all! 03:02, September 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Something's wrong. I typed in a link for the full size image, and now it's taking me to a page with the name of the link. Can someone help? Grell No question at all! 03:06, September 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I tried it, and it worked fine. Are you sure you typed it correctly? Also name this Graypool.warrior.png. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:33, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Changes are showing. Grell No question at all! 00:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the earpink easier to see by making it more solid and a bit brighter. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:05, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

And dull the highlights a little bit. --Leafstrike-- 17:50, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading under the chin. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 20:42, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't worked on this, I'm just really busy!! I'll upload the new version ASAP. Grell No question at all! 20:54, September 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The shading on the back is WAY too dark and the ear pink needs to be smaller Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:51, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Okay, I officially suck at chararts. Added shading, dulled highlights, and made earpink smaller and brighter. Grell No question at all! 14:28, September 4, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Center the ear pink and ill CBA this. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:32, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Changes aren't showing, and the file page isn't showing the changes either. ShadewingBlades of the Night 16:32, September 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the earpink more triangular. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:23, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the highlights. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:57, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. ShadewingBlades of the Night 22:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Dull the highlights a bit and redden the ear-pink. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:53, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could someone help me with dulling the highlights? I'm not exactly sure what to do.... ShadewingBlades of the Night 14:41, September 11, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I can help. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 18:23, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 03:56, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Blur the earpink. Robz You make me feel good! 06:55, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I will do that. Thank you so much Atelda!!! ShadewingBlades of the Night 19:15, September 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The ear pink is fine. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:20, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I hate to interrupt the CBA :( But to me, it looks like there is some waste outside the lineart by her forehead. Just make a new layer, pick a neon color, then that should help you to see if there's any waste. I'm really sorry >_< Iveh Yo! 17:13, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine Ivy, really. :) And I didn't find any waste..... ShadewingBlades of the Night 19:14, September 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I have a way of seeing waste. Shadeh, there IS some. Use a white background, and if you use a laptop, tilt the screen. You'll see all the waste. If you don't use a laptop, then max the opacity on the shading layer. If you can't get rid of it, I'll do it for you. =) jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:10, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

While you're at it, there are also more flecks of waste by the tail. Ivyheart =P 23:31, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I found all the said waste. But how do I get rid of it? ShadewingBlades of the Night 19:50, September 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It tells you how in the charart tutorail under tortieshells. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:39, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks, Iceheart. I got rid of it. ShadewingBlades of the Night 14:12, September 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

No problem. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:45, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Are the 24 hours up now? Sorry if I sound impatient, I'm just wondering x3. ShadewingBlades of the Night 15:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

No, they're not. It won't be approved until 10:45 tonight (at least where I live). Please be patient. Iveh Yo! 21:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Ivy. I didn't mean for it to sound like that. :/ ShadewingBlades of the Night 00:32, September 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

No it's ok, I mean for future reference, ok? ^^ Iveh Yo! 00:53, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:09, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Minnowkit (CP) (Ki) ~ Approved

Minnowkit (CP).kit First Image! Excited! Anyway, it didn't mention her eye color, so I made it blue. Any comments?

Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫

Darken the shading tons, please. It seems there isn't any there. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  04:24, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Not sure if the changes are showing yet and I'm not sure if I darkened it enough. I darkened it, though!

The Stars AlignTwilight: Gimme a Mango...NAO!Random Person: Uh...Okai! *Gives a Mango*Twilight:YAY! *Huggiez Mango* 04:51, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye highlights on the same side on both eyes so she doesn't look cross eyed. --Frosted Apple 10:39, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed Eye Highlights. (Not sure if changes are showing, yet.)

The Stars AlignTwilight: Gimme a Mango...NAO!Random Person: Uh...Okai! *Gives a Mango*Twilight:YAY! *Huggiez Mango* 15:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink, darken the shading, brighten the highlights; the shading looks a bit flat. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 15:22, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Lightened the ear-pink, darkened the shading, brightened the highlights. Not sure if changes are showing, yet!

The Stars AlignTwilight: Gimme a Mango...NAO!Random Person: Uh...Okai! *Gives a Mango*Twilight:YAY! *Huggiez Mango* 16:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The earpink on this -> side looks darker than the other one. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:18, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the eye color a tad, looks great ;) Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:06, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, and blur the chest highlight. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:20, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Uh, I did all of the above. Just wait for changes to show, (If they do.) The Current Version should have a lighter ear-pink on > this side, and brighter eye coloring

Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫

Blur the chest highlight more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:38, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Blurred it. Just wait for the Changes to show! Twilightheart The Stars Align... 23:10, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there are some pixels on the tail that arev lighter than the rest. Damn Skippy. 11:54, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:03, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-UploadedI fixed the tail. Wait for changes to show! ;)Twilightheart The Stars Align... 16:19, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, nice job! Define the earpink. I can barely see it. Grell No question at all! 14:01, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

And fix the waste below the tail and the little dot of waste above the ear. SplookMavinotp♥ 18:08, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed! ;) Twilightheart The Stars Align... 01:13, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's still some waste. Make sure to get rid of all of it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed, just wait for changes to show Twilightheart The Stars Align... 15:53, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a gray nose Iveh Yo! 20:32, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the tail shading. --Leafstrike-- 15:25, September 1, 2011 (UTC)]

Also define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:40, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed! Wait for Changes to show! ツ Twilightheart The Stars Align... 00:54, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

How'd you do that smiley face? xD Anyways, make the earpink more visible. Ivyheart =P 17:16, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing from when I updated it before, as I gave her a gray nose and defined the earpink. If, after it updated, then the earpink needs to be defined, I'll work on it.. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 19:22, September 2, 2011 (UTC) (Wasn't logged in at the moment) Changes are showing now...

They are? There's some waste near the tail. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Fixed Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:06, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and enlarge the highlight on the chest. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:20, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink alot. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:07, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:13, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:37, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:19, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see the ear pink. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:16, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Agh...I used Pixlr on this try because Gimp wasn't working... Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:08, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source, and according to it, add a highlight to the tail and the correct shading/highlights to the head. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Uh..Okay, I'll get to work on it.. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:02, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I redid the image, so the coloring, nosepink/earpink, and eye color may look different! Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:50, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 18:28, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

None. Approving. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  19:48, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Birdsong (E) ~ Approved

Birdsong.elderI've done better. Comments? ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:27, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

It says a tabby and white she-cat with ginger parches. This doesn't seem to fit that description well. I only see one ginger patch, and it didn't say white patches. Tabby and white typically implies that they have a white underbelly. Shelly For a limited time only 21:32, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ivypool is a tabby and white, and she doesn't have just a white underbelly. Tabby and white can mean anything, but if it's a big problem, I'll change it. As for the ginger patch, there are two, but they appear as one and I'll fix that. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:40, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Also, if she has a gray muzzle, define or, or make it gray. The ginger stripe on her face needs to be ginger spots, as indicated in her description. This is really neat tbh Iveh Yo! 21:41, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Correction: some of the gray flecks got lost in the gray muzzle, which I defined. The "stripe" is supposed to be two spots. I'll probably just redo this, but it won't look a thing like it does now. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:45, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, and make the tip of it closer to the top of the ear. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:30, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Fine then. Just add some more ginger patches, I think, and blur the stripes. But at that point it may look like an odd tortoiseshell. Just see how it goes. Shelly For a limited time only 01:59, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, i would just say add a few more ginger spots and maybe try using a filter called: guassian blur. That will help it, though if you didn't do this i layers, it's gonna mess up the lineart. guassian blur will help with the blurring though :D. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 18:38, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I removed the highlights because they got in the way. Rainface, I already use Gaussian Blur. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:15, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

There is some white from the tail spilling out onto the main pelt color. I imagine it isn't what you intended- if it is, make it irregular. Iveh Yo! 21:17, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the white from the tail smudged onto the haunch. Ivyheart =P 23:26, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

That's what I meant xD Iveh Yo! 23:35, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Oops xD Sorry! Ivyheart =P 00:50, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:44, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you curve the earpink more upward? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:43, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make her muzzle gray. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:12, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:11, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Dull the earpink a little, it's a little too bright. ShadewingBlades of the Night 12:21, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Ear pinks are impossible bottom line. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 18:34, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

None. Approved. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  19:51, September 19, 2011 (UTC)


Mist (Lo)- Approved

Mist.lonerMy second one. :3 Sky, it's over 9000!! 20:52, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  20:56, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fail at loners already. -.- Sky, it's over 9000!! 21:04, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's waist all around the charart. Get rid of it.

Whoops, that was me ^^ SnowyXPerry = Serry! 21:07, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading a little more visible unless someone disagrees. Silverhmm 21:10, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, waist, but there is also like blank spots everywhere. Please color that in. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 21:18, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I just noticed the blank spots and filled them in. Hopefully all the stupid waste is gone too. Sky, it's over 9000!! 21:28, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

No, the waist is still there. and also, there is a white spot right behind the ear. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 21:34, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Unless the changes aren't showing Rain. Silverhmm 21:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, you might be right about that. Though where it was blank before, it is filled in besides right behind the ear and the waste is still showing. oh, also, i'm not trying to be mean or anything. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 21:39, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I got the white spot, and is the waste still there? -.- Sky, it's over 9000!! 21:40, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I can see a little still there. Silverhmm 21:48, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Which area? Sky, it's over 9000!! 21:52, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think around where you've erased. What I do is paintbucket the entire area then see where the waste is. Silverhmm 21:54, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I've gone over it, and didn't see anything. Re-uploaded. Sky, it's over 9000!! 22:08, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is much better. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 22:27, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Also, Rainface, please don't comment saying "much better" or something like that unless you have more critiquing for the image. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:02, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky, it's over 9000!! 00:29, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. This is looking good. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:38, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks. :3 I probably need to blur the shading again though. >.< Sky, it's over 9000!! 00:48, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Not really. Just get rid of the large amounts of gray around the image. It gives it an aura. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:56, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I always forget about that...>.< Sky, it's over 9000!! 01:17, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and darken/define the ear-pink. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:58, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky, it's over 9000!! 03:39, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

File:Mist.loner.circled.pngCircled in pink is miscoloured lineart.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 06:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

There was really no need for the picture. You could have just told Skystar where the miscoloured lineart was. It just takes up space. Also, Skystar, enlarge the ear pink and make it a tad bit more pink. Not a darker neon pink, but a light pink. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  06:54, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. :3 Sky, it's over 9000!! 20:45, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a tad. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:20, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky, it's over 9000!! 06:19, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch highlight. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:11, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Stop right there criminal scum! 00:43, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail highlight! This is epic Sky! ^^ SnowyXPerry = Serry! 21:49, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Me thinks me is getting the hang of this. ^_^ Stop right there criminal scum! 12:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Blur the tail highlight more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:15, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky- The evil juggler! 12:09, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch highlight; the other highlights are lighter. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky- The evil juggler! 02:20, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?? -ſceheartBlah blah 18:30, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:27, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Magpie (Ki) ~ Approved

Magpie.kit Muhahaha. I think he looks cute! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  17:28, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

He is very cute! The dip in his white marking on his chest on our left side looks a tad strange. Even it up a tad. Also, define the shading on the back foot. Iveh Yo! 17:42, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Much better, I would assume? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  17:55, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, this does look cute :3 Define the shading just a bit. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:42, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <3 jayce If These Walls Could Talk  22:48, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

He's so precious! Don't know if it's my bad eyesight but I can't really see the shading. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 01:53, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

There's shading. I have trouble with this because the kit lineart is so small.... And thanks! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  01:55, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then. How about the shading on the tail. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 02:02, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

There's some there too, but, not a whole lot. Re-uploaded. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  02:12, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

He's so adorable! xD The paw on this side -> looks darker than the one on this side <- . SnowyXPerry = Serry! 16:18, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

It's a shading issue. I'll fix it up though. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  16:24, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Adorable. You're improving a lot at charart, Cloudy. Can you just blur the smudged transistion a tad? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    16:42, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Icey. Re-uploaded. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  16:47, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

This looks awsome Skye! Make the ear pink a bit more triangular. LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 07:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hate ear pink on kits. The lineart is too small. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  19:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink looks good to me! Darken the shading and blur the smudge. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:00, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't blur the smudges, because it needs to look like his loner image. I did darken the shading though. Re-uploaded. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  21:10, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    15:57, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  16:54, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (W) ~ Approved

File:Shimmerpelt.warrior.pngIcestorm told me she had approved Silverhawk, so I put this up :P Guh, another black cat. The slots for images for approval go so fast... Comments? SplookMavinotp♥ 16:54, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

What is this I dont even. =.= I wus gonna do this one, check my profile. First Tigerheart, now this? Are you kidding me? brighten the tail highlight. --Bloo!yo 17:11, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Relax, Bloo. You didn't reserve this. Splook reserved this. Ayways, beautiful like always. Blur the shading. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    17:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I have the right to do this, Bloo. You already have Tanglewhisker up, I'm sorry. SplookMavinotp♥ 17:37, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    17:40, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but I COULDNT reserve it, could I? I have no idea why Tanglewhisker was so slow. Its like you people dont think I can actually contribute to the project. Brighten the tail highlight more & lighten the earpink --Bloo!yo 17:43, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Bloo, calm down. Add a little highlights to it to make her look glossy. Silverhmm 17:45, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Bloo, take some ice, cut it in the shape of a pill, and take it, i call this a chill pill. Define the tail highlight a tad. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:47, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just brightened the highlights I already had. Look, Bloo. When did I ever say that you never contribute to the project? You do, greatly in fact. Just forget this happened, I was doing what PCA was meant for. SplookMavinotp♥ 17:57, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

@Maplepool U Mad? Anywayz, I dont mind you doing Shimmerpelt. I just wanted to know if you guys think Im actual help to the project 8) soo..yea, Thicken the highlight on the tail --Bloo!yo 18:05, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mad like anger or rage? Nah. Mad like insane? Then yes 8) And Bloo, chu are a help to the project. she doesn't llok that glossy...Thicken the highlights? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:18, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I already said that Maple /shot Silverhmm 18:44, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I used more highlights on normal, not overlay x3 So I'm trying to make this look as glossy as possible without ruining it :D SplookMavinotp♥ 01:38, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty ^^. I honestly don't see anything else that needs to be edited. Silverhmm 12:23, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading along the back. Specklestream Let it Snow! 12:31, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you, Silvereye :D SplookMavinotp♥ 15:56, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more triangular. This is awesome, btw! 'Petalstep 18:49, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink looks triangular. Blur the highlights some more, this looks very nice. Ivyheart =P 01:01, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! :D SplookMavinotp♥ 21:32, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot. Although, this is much better than the image I pre-made. Nice job. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:54, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks again :D SplookMavinotp♥ 23:38, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:15, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you redden the ear pink a tad? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  17:25, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 21:33, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch and tail are blotchy; blur them and smooth it out at those places. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:00, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm pretty sure I blurred as much as physically possible. SplookMavinotp♥ 00:22, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, where's the light source? If its from the side, then the tail highlight should be towards the middle more, and if its from the back, then the tail highlight should be on the other side, and the back highlights should be closer to the back. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:31, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are fine, but they need to be darkened and blurred. The shading needs to be lightened as well. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    02:30, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur anything anymore without seeing any change. I've possibly blurred to the max, and I can't see any change in whatever I do. SplookMavinotp♥ 20:03, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the highlights. SplookMavinotp♥ 01:38, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I still think it needs a light source...it looks a bit 2D. Move the highlights closer to the back. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:01, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

You just told her to darken it...now you tell her it looks 2D? This is fine - I helped Splashy with it a bit, and we're waiting for Skype to load it. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:16, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened them, once again. It's fine Icy, you didn't have to help me. I think the highlights look fine without moving them back. SplookMavinotp♥ 01:23, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better. CBA? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:23, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

When I said to darken it, I also said to move the highlights back to make it look more 3D...but I think the haunch highlight still needs to be moved back a bit. I never said it looked bad or anything... 22:59, September 16, 2011 (UTC) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within...

Reuploaded. I tried moving them back, but it really made it look bad. So I added another layer of highlights that basically outline it. SplookMavinotp♥ 15:25, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Doing CBA once more. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    16:46, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

The enite upper body shading needs to be blurred. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:41, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 16:23, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

lighten where the nose and whiskers is. otherwise great job! --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:50, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Pinken the earpink & smooth out the highlights some more :] --Bloo!yo 02:51, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks :-) SplookMavinotp♥ 15:26, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

You did a great job with making her look glossy. :) Darken the shading at the base of the tail, that's all I see. Ivyheart =P 01:17, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! Changes still aren't showing from last time, please check the image history :-) SplookMavinotp♥ 20:05, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    20:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

So sorry to interrupt but blur the shading on the tail...this is gorgeous!!!!!MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Continuing CBA. It's supposed to give off a glossy look. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  16:53, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  19:25, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Stormkit (SC) (Ki) ~ Approved

File:Stormkit (SC) kit.pngOk, I know I put 2 images on, but I couldn't decide if she was mostly gray or mostly ginger, so I put them both on, and I'll let you decide which one's better. Comments?Bluestar11796 00:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

First, don't make this a gallery, and don't make it a thumbnail either. Whichever one you choose, which I think the first is better, blur the patches, and define the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:11, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, but when I tried to put them on separately, the first image disapeared, that's the only reason I put them in the gallery. But, it's fixed.Bluestar11796 23:40, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I say go with the second one, but make the gray lighter, since in the graphic novel it appears to be a very light, almost white, gray. Shelly For a limited time only 23:44, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Also, you need to change it to the proper eye color. Her eyes are amber, not brown. Shelly For a limited time only 23:45, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

There, fixed it for you x) Tone down the ginger, looks too bright :\ and blend/smudge the grey and ginger together. --Bloo!yo 23:52, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

If you're going with the second one - The lineart looks a little blurry, though it may change. Blur/smudge the patches and blur the stripes. Also, redden the earpink some and define the shading :3

If you're going with the first one - Blur the stripes, smudge the patches, redden the earpink and define shading/highlights. SplookMavinotp♥ 23:48, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Who is working on this, no one signed. If you go with the first one, make the gray look less...weird, maybe make her paler ginger, and paler gray? and tone tone the gray down? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:18, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me, i forget that quite often.Bluestar11796 00:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I had always thought of her as more of a Sandstorm color. Ivyheart =P 01:04, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Not to be mean, but I don't think this is how she was depicted in the book. Let my check my copy of TR and see which one she is again Iveh Yo! 02:02, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

go to google images and look at a picture of a ginger and gray cat, they mostly have a sandstorm color of ginger. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

U mean leik this? [2] --Bloo!yo 02:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded (or more like re-done). I made the ginger more like on Sandstorm's charart, and I really like the first one, but, its up to you.Bluestar11796 03:21, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Kay, now make the gray a bit lighter and the ginger part a bit more ginger (they look tan now :\) --Bloo!yo 03:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and go with the second one. The first one is awesome but it's not how she was depicted in the book Iveh Yo! 14:51, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be blurred on the ginger patches. Ivyheart =P 16:10, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I decided: Gray with ginger patches (even though I think that the mostly ginger one is cool), so, Re-uploaded. Bluestar11796 16:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is too dark. Please fix it. I love the patches, btw. Good job! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  16:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the stripes on the paws, it looks to unreal. other than that, great job^^ Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:52, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger patches larger on the body, add shading on the tail, make the earpink redder, blur the stripes, along with the shading. Nice work Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 17:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights, and define the earpink. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within...

Reuploaded. changes not showing.Bluestar11796 19:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur lighting, I see circles there. Leaf-storm,7:35,August 18,2011 (UTC)

Instead of completely getting rid of the paw stripes, I say you make them horizontal instead of vertical. But that's just me. Shelly For a limited time only 14:26, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gray and ginger.... huh, is that ever possible? XD Anyways, this looks GREAT, but the shading seems a bit funky, like it's got two different shadings, one for the gray, and one for the ginger, it doesn't look all the same, if that made any sense. XD It's like, it's shaded in different places on the ginger than on the gray. Any way of fixing that? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:06, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 13:52, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

@Paleclaw, Well, it HAS to be otherwise, she wouldn't be Gray and ginger, nor my cat's kit, Spots xD This looks great, blur the highliths a touch. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:59, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should make it look like a dilute tortoiseshell, which is like a cream or pale ginger and gray. It makes more sense if you ask me. xP Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:18, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I know you're not supposed to use the cover images but on that one it has a lighter gray, maybe that would make it look more natural WildfireHazelxThorn! 00:16, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

That's not really what a dilute tortie looks like. Basically they are a gray tabby with light patches of cream. Right now the ginger is too bright. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 06:36, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is a tad off-topic, but maybe she's a torbie (tabby-tortie mix), that could be possible. Iveh Yo! 13:41, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be a bit more solid looking. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:40, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

This hasn't been uploaded for a week. Are you still working on this? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:28, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm still working on it, but I started high school almost a week ago, so I can't work on it much. I'm at school right now!Bluestar11796 16:26, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but try to work as much as you can, or else this might get withdrawn for lack of work. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:01, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:10, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it as well. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:52, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

This should be declined, as the picture hasn't been updated in over a week. Nothing against the user, but I do believe those are the rules. Iveh Yo! 04:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, they are. I think someone can take over now, or this will be archived. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:20, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

A lead needs to decline this, I would change the heading but I do not believed that I am allowed. Iveh Yo! 14:44, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Um...could I take over? I would love to! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:06, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, if you're not doing Tigerheart anymore Iveh Yo! 20:28, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

^^ Thankies I'll get working on it ASAP I'm probally gonna redo most of it.... Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:38, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Uploaded bleh meh no like this. But comments? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:11, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gray and ginger meet. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:15, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluredafyed? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:18, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a gray nose Iveh Yo! 00:24, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Never knew that....

Tone down the earpink, blur it, and smudge the ginger into the gray more. Yo, Sandstorm, mind if I ask you a question? --Bloo!yo 01:34, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I can only be one for a minute so shoot. What's your question? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:45, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ginger; and darken the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 04:21, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's on the second file page. Thanks for all of the comments :3 Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:34, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ginger patches; they look a bit too golden. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 20:41, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Wow it does look better now I really like this

Darken the shading. --Leafstrike-- 00:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches in the direction of the fur, to give it some sort of texture. SplookMavinotp♥ 01:05, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bleh tryed my best with the smudging but, bleh Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 12:57, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink; it looks blotchy. Also, darken the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:21, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make it look more like the Stormkit from After The Flood's manga pic. (i really do love stormkit) So make the stripes in the place like the manga and lighten the gray so it's sort of like a pale gray because in the manga it's shown to be an extremly light gray.MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:35, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I havn't done it in a while school started >_< But I will still be able to work on this ^^ Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:06, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the patches and the stripes more. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:01, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah i looked at my manga book and noticed that it has part of the tail tabby so....I did that :P Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:21, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the gray parts. This is cool, I like it SpottedtalonMudears 03:42, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thankies ^^ But I really do hope this will get approved I think it's turning out good so far! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:00, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, redden the earpink. Most common comments ever. xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:03, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded But it's good! For me at least xD Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 19:50, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches and stripes a bit more. I really like this! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:03, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah thanks and I can't blur no more than this :P Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:30, September 11, 2011 (UTC) well the patches still need to be blurred some more. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:32, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Just to clarify, we don't mean that the stripes in the patches need blurring, but that the patches need to be blurred into the gray. Once that is done, I'll consider it perfect. Shelly For a limited time only 21:52, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Like smudging the patches intop the gray? I'm confuised.... Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

If she meant smudging or not, I think it would look really good with smudges, so I think you should do so. Ivyheart =P 01:16, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes smudge into the gray. For example, look down at the Mapleshade at the bottom of this page. All of her patches are smudged together. Try that, but on a smaller scale. Just blend the patches gently into the gray at the edges so they look soft, not sharp. Shelly For a limited time only 01:28, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh I hope its better now..... Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 12:44, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, make the patches reddish so it looks like the manga and get rid of the stripes on the patches so it matches. (im very strict on that cuz i <3 stormkit) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:13, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

All ginger cats have stripes. That's the rule in this wiki and in life. That the artist of the graphic novel doesn't know much about cat genetics isn't our problem. And I personally think the color is fine, but do what you want. Shelly For a limited time only 17:14, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Had a few oppinions and Imma keep it like this. and I do agree with you Shellheart ^^ Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:52, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the ginger meets the white and I think this'll be ready. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  16:38, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Not trying to disagree or anything but I REALLY think that the patches should be redder. (please dont yell at me *cowers in fear* MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 19:20, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The ginger is fine as it is :). Thicken the shading. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:21, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur it a tad. We don't copy the exact styles seen in the manga. Not sure why though. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  21:24, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah I blured and darkened the shading. But blur what white? That doesn't make sense... Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:06, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I meant ginger and gray, sorry. I am so scatterbrained... >.>;; jayce If These Walls Could Talk  23:10, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I did that and smudged it ever so slightly.... Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:03, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within...

Reuploaded Dones I luv this ^^ Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:28, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? This is an amazing image, by the way. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  15:37, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry Sandstorm, but could you make the earpink a lot smaller, and make the stripes on the side stretch all the way to the lineart? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:42, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wait, is the CBA still going on? Or what? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Not while you still had things to do. Once someone comments on a CBA, they need to change the heading back to For Approval, nulling the CBA. But, a lead can reinstate the CBA, which is what I will do now. CBA? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  14:58, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but could you darken the shading a tad? SplookMavinotp♥ 01:10, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded CBA still on? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

No, CBA's stop when someone commetns, and whether the image is ready or not after it's reuploaded, you still have to wait for someone to repeat the CBA. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:31, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

repeating CBA. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:18, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart between the front leg and back leg, and some other places, and there's some miss coloured lineart on the front leg thats farther back. I'd just paste a new line art over the current one and remove the blurred part. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:33, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. Looks nice ;D Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 01:54, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah 1. Thank you for all of the comments and you too Sacrletwind for CBAing it. But I won't be able to work on this untill Monday, maybe Sunday. But I'll get to it soon.

Reuploaded yeah the one above was me xD and also bleh tryed my best DX Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:09, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Let's try this again. CBA? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:14, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh...I'm so sorry but the shading needs to be blurred. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    20:11, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore! I even tryed on Gimp! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:48, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded So Icestorm helped me out. Comments? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:51, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose a slightly darker gray than her pelt. (if this is the right version) Iveh Yo! 02:10, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah it is it was pink before :P Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 12:24, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Comments? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:16, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

This version looks much better. CBA? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  18:41, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Petaldust (A) - Approved

Petaldust.apprentice ...Yeah, comments? Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 01:19, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Define the patches a lot though, they're pretty over-blurred. And maybe make the earpink stand out a bit more against the pelt too. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:50, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Hehe, thanks! Yes, I realize that there is inconsistant coloring in the lineart and there is waste. GIMP is acting up and I hope that it'll return to normal on the next upload. So if your going to say "get rid of the waste", or "redo the lineart" or of something like that, I will ignore it for this upload. Thanks! Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 04:08, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Atelda! Make the white more white, it looks kind of brown to me. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 21:03, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Theres waste near the butm. Er, Bottom. Pearls 21:23, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darkent eh shading. Good job! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the paws if you haven't, if you have, define the smudges. Ivyheart =P 23:34, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 23:58, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is going to sound stupid, but shouldn't the white be on the INSIDE of the tail? It just seems odd on the outside. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  17:58, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I always imagined her when her tail is down to have the white on the outside. Oh well. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 00:58, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make a little less of the chest white. Ivyheart =P 02:28, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Like wise? (I don't think changed are showing...) Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 02:40, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Define the earpink a tad. ShadewingBlades of the Night 12:22, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 17:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The ginger patches need to be more ginger and defined. Looks good though. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:36, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Like that? Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 19:14, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

the patches are still over blurred define them. Othe than that awesome job! --Cinder Real or Not Real?

19:19, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that they are over-blurred, they need to be brightened to match the warrior image. Also define the earpink. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:03, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, so I took the images from the warrior image, keep in mind. Also, sorry for the delay, my computer was being oddly slow, but it's fixed. :3 Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 23:49, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:48, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lol, thanks! Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 00:43, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... I really can't find anything wrong with this. CBA? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:49, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful image, and since there are no comments... Approved. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  05:08, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Soot (Lo) ~ Approved

Soot.loner Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:53, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

My first loner. xD And I've blurred everything as much as I can. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:55, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink just a tad more? If not, I understand. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  22:56, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Awww dang it Dx I was just about to post Piketooth, and chu beat me to it. Ah well, back to waiting . This looks great, Define the highlights a bit. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:00, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry! Don't worry, Firekit is also approved, and will be archived soon. Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:04, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Not your fault. Don't worry ;) Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:08, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wait... aren't her eyes green? They look blue to me. --Leafstrike-- 23:59, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

They're teal, but I'll change it to emerald green. Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:00, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  05:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the back leg. Specklestream Let it Snow! 15:09, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tiny bit smaller and a bit more red. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  15:20, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:37, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I just noticed my typo above. xD Blend the highlights and shading a little more if possible. They still clash with each other. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:53, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:53, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a little more. Ivyheart =P 02:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:51, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Wonderful image, Misty. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  07:36, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 07:40, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (K) - Approved

Onestar.kitI'm actually quite proud of him ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 03:29, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! This looks excellent. Darken the highlights ever so slightlty. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:31, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the bottom part of the white not so long, like make it in the shape of his chin like in his leader. Wonderful work! Iveh Yo! 03:33, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Better? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 03:40, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular. Silverhmm 11:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:29, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED~ Better? ^^ Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 20:53, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    20:55, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, too. :3 Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:11, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the white muzzle some more. :3 SnowyXPerry = Serry! 21:04, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Better~? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 02:08, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

The side`s highlights is very bright. Gotta wear shades. *Puts on aviator glasses*. Darken the side a bit. Fallenstars, thanks for the memories! 02:09, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

xD Fallenstars! Try to smudge or blur the top of the white muzzle. Ivyheart =P 01:19, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't say on his article that he has a white muzzle, nor is it stated elsewhere. Please remove the white. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  19:24, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Good point, the other versions of Onestar with the white muzzle should be tweaked to remove the white. Blur the tail shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:15, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Changes aren't showing 3: Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 01:46, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 16:32, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

None. Approved. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  22:02, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sparrowkit (Ki) - Approved

Sparrowkit.kit Anyone remember me putting this up back in my first days of PCA :D? Anyways, comments? --Leafstrike-- 00:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

I remember seeing this a loooooooong ago. So, the default for a tabby is brown? Huh. Also, can you link a few of the markings? It's cute! jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:44, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, wait, I made my own. I don't know why changes aren't showing. >_> --Leafstrike-- 00:46, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, it's showing. --Leafstrike-- 00:47, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hey! Look! They're finally showing. xD Define the markings, please. jayce If These Walls Could Talk  00:50, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also, darken the shading a tad. SplookMavinotp♥ 00:56, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 01:48, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pupils bigger please. Cute! Iveh Yo! 02:04, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Wait... how do I make the pupils bigger? Because when I try, he looks creepy. So do I just tweak the eye? --Leafstrike-- 02:16, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Just make two more pixils (vertically) beside the existing one. Iveh Yo! 02:23, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. --Leafstrike-- 03:09, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

So cute! :3 I think you should add a little mroe shading to the tail tip. Silverhmm 12:25, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Put some shading below his chin, where his neck is. Ivyheart =P 15:19, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

MAke the white of the eyes smaller. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:27, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose pink. LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 07:50, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 22:30, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and, changes won't show. >_> --Leafstrike-- 23:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:45, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded About time someone commented. --Leafstrike-- 01:56, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add another stripe or two to the tail. Ivyheart =P 16:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think its fine. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 21:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry if I'm impatient, but it's been 24 hours. --Leafstrike-- 01:18, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Remember the leads aren't omnipresent. They can't be everywhere at once XD llwildheartl06:29 Mon Sep 26

Approved. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:13, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Ottersplash (Q) - Approved

Ottersplash.queen Not completely happy with this. :P Oh well. XD Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 02:31, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Whoops, forgot to save the .xcf file over the .png file. XD Colors should match the warrior version now. Changes aren't showing though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 02:33, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the shading a teensy bit pwease. I <3 this! :3 02:35, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the spot above the hind feet where theres supposed to be shading. X) -- 02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:05, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, what a purdy kitty <3 Make the shading on the tail tip less circle-looking, if you know what I mean. Blurring it might help. 04:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a tad. It looks a bit pink orange at the moment, make it pink red. LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 07:49, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks like Mapleshade! Blur the tail shading on the white and on the neck. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:58, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Shading's now blurred as much as it possibly can be. Changes aren't showing. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:59, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

This..is..beautiful! Define the earpink. ShadewingBlades of the Night 00:59, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Thank you, but are you looking at the right one? I just defined the earpink in the last upload, but the changes aren't showing. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:55, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the white parts are really, really dark. Lighten them. 23:43, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - It's just the shading. I lightened them a bit, but they're pure white now, I can't get them any lighter. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:59, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 16:38, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

umm could you make it a tad more ginger it seems a different color than her other chararts. Violetpelt☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 19:59, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's the same color as her warrior charart. I'm not changing it. Um... would the CBA stay in place, or not? And Violetpelt, don't forget to change the heading when you comment on an image when it's in CBA. It gets kinda confusing otherwise. xD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:41, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:27, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Screech (PH) - Approved

Screech.phHey look, I stuck with a character! (I redid most of his to-be) My friend says the mud looks like muscles, but I'll see what you guys think. Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 02:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I just found some waste. Lemme get rid of that Iveh Yo! 02:43, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, ok, NOW comments for improvement? xD Iveh Yo! 02:49, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the edges/corners of the patches. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 08:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and that's mud, not patches. Iveh Yo! 15:19, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, maybe smallen the eaar pink? ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 05:53, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

No, it fills the whole ear where it indicates and I've smudged the bottom into the earpink to make it look like ear fur. Iveh Yo! 15:19, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is looking nice! Redden the ear-pink and texture the mud a bit, (like with mottled cats), it looks a bit too sleek, and darken the shading on his left hind paw. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:26, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 02:30, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, brighten the head hgihlight & smudge/blur the mud on his face --Bloo!yo 02:54, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 03:36, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit, it blends in with the fur too much. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:25, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 23:28, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

There isn't much I can find wrong with this, to be honest. Can you blur the highlights/shading a little more? Then I think it'll be ready. You've improved so much recently, it's making me look bad. XD jayce If These Walls Could Talk  03:25, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and come on, now xD Nonsense Iveh Yo! 16:58, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ivystripe. Shush. This is purdy. Darken the shading on the patches just a tad. SplookMavinotp♥ 05:25, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think the mud is miss coloured, and if its not, make it less red. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:12, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope it's the right color now Icy =) Iveh Yo! 22:13, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce If These Walls Could Talk  17:51, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approving. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:29, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) ~ Approved

File:Mitzi.loner.png Yes, she gets a loner charart. I like the way it turned out. Comments? Ivyheart =P 23:41, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Define the light part (either unshaded or highlighted part) of her tail. Iveh Yo! 23:42, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Great, Take her earpink color from her queen image, will you? i dont want to get an inconsistancy :P Pearls 23:51, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I did take it from the queen image, the shading must have gotten to it. So I'll just lighten the shading on the earpink. Ivyheart =P 00:49, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Also, there is some waste on the outside of her ears. Iveh Yo! 01:37, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 23:32, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Can you blur the highlights more? also, define the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:41, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. My StarClan, layers make everything so easy. :3 Ivyheart =P 01:04, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the highlights a tad.