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Tigerstar (Alt L)~ Approved

Tigerstar.leader.alt Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on the tail and paw. Sky- Killer of Daleks 02:44, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should work in the scars. But man, that looks powerful. Shelly For a limited time only 02:45, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Niceee X) Teh earpink looks kinda too red & theres this white spec on his front paw --Bloo!yo 02:47, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Clever me forgot to save the layers. Anyway, i wont be able to reupload until friday, but i might be able to get on the internet, but dont count on it. See y'all in 5 days! -ſceheartBlah blah 05:49, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! I love this! But anyways lighten the shading on the back and darken it on the left side :P Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading looks fine. It gives Tigerstar a "scary" look. Iceheart, when you get back, blur the scar on his tail a little bit. jayce  07:33, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- There isnt supposed to be anys shading on the left side >.>. And thanks Cloudy i think the darkness it fine to. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:18, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add a small line of darker pink on the inside of the scars to add some depth. I dunno; play with it. Looks good :3 llwildheartl06:24 Mon Sep 26

Lighten/pale the ear-pink a tad and sharpen the scars to make them look more gruesome; they kinda look a bit paintbrush/too blurred. xP ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:10, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the scar on the bridge of the nose blurred less. Ivyheart =P 04:45, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, you still working on this? jayce  03:22, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ya sorry life's kicking my butt right now. I'll have the new version up by saturday. ---ſceheartBlah blah 03:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 16:13, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... Looks good to me. CBA? jayce  21:06, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  00:34, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (W) ~ Approved

Mudfur.warrior Yes. I realize I forgot the pale belly. I realized that AFTER I uploaded it. jayce  03:42, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, blur the shading, and give his eyes depth. and of course the belly XD Maple♥poolMischief brewing 03:44, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Already took care of that. I also changed the pelt color to match his MC.Re-uploaded. jayce  03:48, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Great right off the bat! darken the ear pink and the highlights, lighten the shading. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:09, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't use highlights. For the millionth time. Are you sure you're looking at the right one? jayce  22:31, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Lighten the shading on the upper side of the tail and darken it on the bottom part, and there appears to be some mis-colored lineart on the back ear and on the bottom of the tail. Ivyheart =P 05:52, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

It's not the lineart that's miscolored. It was how I do my shading. I goofed and erased some of what I shouldn't have, and didn't notice it until just now. Anyways, I re-uploaded and y'all know where to look if you can't see the changes here. jayce  06:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, did I say lineart? Oh yes I did. -_- Sorry about that, I meant right by the lineart I think. Either way it's fixed. Ivyheart =P 16:28, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more visible by the neck. Silverhmm 17:31, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  17:45, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you move where the pale belly is? Right now it's on the chest and neck, the belly would be inbetween the legs. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 17:50, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. After all, Spiderleg has a amber belly, and that's how his belly is shown. jayce  17:55, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job, Skye! Blur the earpink a little. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 21:05, September 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. jayce  21:59, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the back and flank, darken the shading on the tail and maybe feather the pale belly a bit? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:50, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  02:52, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Their is some waste underneath the front hind leg. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:24, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  22:30, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Give the shading a bit more depth and darken it on the tail. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:53, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jeez. The last time I had this much trouble was with Oakheart. >.>;; jayce  04:19, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the haunch highlight larger. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:22, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, the NEXT person that tells me to use highlights is going to get their e-butt kicked. I don't use them, because I cannot work with them. jayce  23:29, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail. Thicken the shading. And what Mistystar meant was to thin the haunch shading. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 23:44, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, Mintstarr. Now I know what she wanted me to do. jayce  23:47, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  00:10, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oops; sorry for my previous unclear comment, and thank you Mint for explaining it for me. ;) One side of the front paw closest to us seems really light, and it doesn't seem like it matches the light source. can you remove the light part? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:07, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's how I shade. I erased part of what I shouldn't have. jayce  00:51, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the back shading. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:09, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  22:30, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's just been sitting here taking up space. CBA? jayce  19:13, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  19:14, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (W) ~ Approved

Softwing.warriorBleh... Not sure if I like this or not... Anyway, comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:11, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Lighten the patches, though. If the patches are the right color, then lighten the tabby stripes. Ivyheart =P 04:17, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tabby stripes ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 08:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Also make the highlights on the tail brighter ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 08:44, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Epic!! I would blur the chest highlight. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:47, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste on the tip of the tail, where her neck meets her back, and her chin. Iveh Yo! 21:06, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes may not be showing... Now back to history hw... -.- ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the stripes. They're very unrealistic and awkward - they stick out into the white. Define the ear pink and the shading. Darken the tail and paws shading. Define the edges of the patches. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:06, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yuck, I am NEVER doing another tabby patched cat again! ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:57, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add some highlights on the tip of the front paws. And it's not that bad, looks good! ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 00:24, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:47, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the head and haunch highlights; they don't show as much as the chest highlight. Other than that, I see nothing wrong with this. :) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:18, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 04:07, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail patch a tad, other then that this is beautiful :3 SplookMavinotp♥ 20:32, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:26, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes less cluttered together and define them. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    00:52, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I made it a tad better... ...maybe....? -ScarletwindLisanna 00:57, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are just a tad too dark. This is great! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:13, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look fine to me. just make it tanner to match the queen image. Also expand the patches so the stripes are just inside of em. Oh, and define the edges too especially teh on on her leg -Bloo!yo 00:16, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

The patch on her back looks like that from where you did the stripes, it extended outside of the lineart. I know it's kind of tedious but I thought I've seen it before and had to do a double-take. It's the only place I see it, though, you're doing a nice job on this AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 01:39, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:56, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 01:58, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:52, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Brightsky (Q) ~ Approved

Brightsky.queen Gah.... I failed at the stripes. I tired my best to get them to look some-what close to her warrior version's, but I believe I failed. Anyway, comments? Leggo 🏈 03:23, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

No! No you didn't! This is awesome! define the ear-pink a bit. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 03:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes that criss-cross, I can hardly see them. Blur the light part and/or highlight on her belly. Marvelous work ^^ Iveh Yo! 03:31, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

You didn't fail, Rainy. Make the stripes on the forehead closer together. Ivyheart =P 03:41, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't move the stripes, as I tried to match them with her warrior image's. Leggo 🏈 03:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches please. This is epic, dear. :3 Rainey 10:09, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, Rainy! Define the earpink. ShadewingBlades of the Night 21:42, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading around the 'highlights', but, as they are not needed, I didn't add them. Leggo 🏈 00:56, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the tail; its too gray. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:04, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

It's only gray because of shading. If you want me to lighten it, then it will be inconsistant with the rest of the body's shading. Leggo 🏈 03:07, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out some of the stripes, round the patch on her forehead a bit, and blur where ginger meets white just a tad. This is looking very nice! ;) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:59, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. :) Leggo 🏈 13:32, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the foot lineart on the foreleg closest to us looks gray. Ivyheart =P 16:26, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.' Leggo 🏈 17:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blue the top of the patch that is on her left a little? Especially towards the lineart. This is coming out so well =) Iveh Yo! 23:45, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Try making the patches on the tail come together and maybe make one on the belly Oo IDK to give some veriety Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:21, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

The tail is fine. It's supposed to look like her warrior image. jayce  18:01, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't add any patches, as the warrior image really doesn't give a reference to if there is one. (If that makes sense.. xP) Leggo 🏈 22:36, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pink looks a little weird at the tip. Can you fix that? jayce  04:01, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights. This is great! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:19, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. As stated above, I will not add highlights, as they are not required. Leggo 🏈 00:32, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Try and make the "curve" in the ginger fur a little bigger, like the warrior image. I love this<3 jayce  22:28, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Curve where? Belly, Head, Haunch...? Leggo 🏈 23:59, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Whoops. Sorry Rainy. Should have been a little clearer on that. Lack of sleep makes me loopy. I mean her belly. Look at the warrior image to get what I mean. jayce  06:53, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the fuzzy blending a bit neater, they look a bit messy. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:05, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried a new version... but the shading irks me a little. I'm willing to try it again, if this doesn't work out.. Leggo 🏈 01:29, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Gawjus, Rainy. Define the earpink. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:33, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 13:51, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce  00:42, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:52, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rainflower (W) - Approved

Rainflower.warriorHere's Rainflower. Any suggestions? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

19:05, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

It appears you didn't use the correctly sized base, and this should have been put below Blackstar. You're going to have to redo this in the right sized base. Iveh Yo! 19:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC) This is good but yesh, I'm afraid you will have to redo this. ;) ShadewingMischief Managed... 19:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

sorry but what is the right sized base? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

19:44, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Iveh Yo! 19:47, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

oh sorry i see it now. thanx --Cinder Real or Not Real?

19:52, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploded wiith the right base I don't think the changes are showing yet. Comments? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

20:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The changes showed up comments? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

21:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is white. Make her a light gray, or just take the colors from the queen image I have up for approval. Also, rename this Rainflower.warrior.png şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 21:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is smudged all around, define the black in the eye, thicken and darken the shading, and define the highlight on the tail. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

You should give her a pupil, for starters... Shelly For a limited time only 23:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

ok and snow it is light gray. it isn't white!? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:54, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I dont know if the changes show but now she's as close to the color on her queen image as i can get. i think her lineart is not as smudged, i put a pupil but i don't know if it shows. Also how to i rename her? Comments? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

00:14, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Much better Lion! Um, I still don't see a pupil in the eye. If you go to Firepelt's tutorial, you should be able to find the eye design. Also, the earpink looks a bit odd, make it a more natural color. ShadewingMischief Managed... 00:21, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Much better! (holy cow I didn't know Shadewing was gonna say that...) Blur the highlights on her shoulder and haunch Iveh Yo! 00:23, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

ok . i'll try. ummmmmm how do i rename her. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

13:17, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reupload it, but before you do, there will be a box with a "more options", choose this and you can rename the old file. I will mark the wrong file for deletion so it can be deleted and yours will have the right name Iveh Yo! 13:27, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

ok thank you --Cinder Real or Not Real?

18:14, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

when i try to reupload it, it just goes back to a blank reupload page. can someone tell me why it's doing this ? And i don't think i can change the name. I couldn't find the button. sorry --Cinder Real or Not Real?

18:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'll rename it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Renamed. The changes might not be showing yet, so give it some time. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

thank you! --Cinder Real or Not Real?

00:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. ShadewingMischief Managed... 01:25, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

ok --Cinder Real or Not Real?

13:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, and also blur the earpink. :p Grell No question at all! 15:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded i dont know if the changes show. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

21:29, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and the earpink. Maybe perhaps you should redden the earpink a bitDapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:42, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

i reuploaded it so it may not show the changes but i'll do it again and i tried reder earpink but it just looks wierd. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

22:53, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Its too light. Take the color from her queen image. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:27, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I did mistystar --Cinder Real or Not Real?

13:53, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Then why is it too light? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 15:36, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

i don't know maybe i did it wrong. i'll try to make it a little darker. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

20:56, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

The color is better now, but the shading should blend into the pelt more. Try either making the highlights bigger, or blurring it a lot. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:07, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't know if it looks any better --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:16, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Um, there are white pixels surrounding the eye. Also, the eye still needs a pupil and all. Grell No question at all! 14:32, August 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

i did put a pupil and i don't know about the white pixles let me fix that. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

16:06, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. fixed the white pixles and there has been a pupil. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

16:12, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, fix the eye (Look at Nightshine's tutorial on how to do eyes), and smoothen the pelt. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:59, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

What exactly do you mean by smoothen the pelt? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:43, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the eye and earpink but i don't know what smoothen the pelt means sorry. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

00:01, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, nice job Lion! Blur ze chest highlights. xD. Grell No question at all! 21:03, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

As Shadewing said, blur the tail highlight. But the other two are really sloppy, no offense, and blurring would make them inconsistent. Make them like the tail and face highlights. Also, she's pale gray, not white. Add shading or darken it. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 22:02, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

there i shading. i think and none taken. i'll try anyway. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:16, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think it looks any better. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:22, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights stick out, and the earpink is too pink. Damn Skippy. 23:53, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

She looks white right now, darken the whole thing a bit. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 00:43, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I Don't think the changes are showing. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

She still looks white. Try to make her pelt colour darker. Stoneclaw33 09:37, August 28, 2011

I made her darker i think the changes will show up in a while. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

17:11, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think the changes are showing. I made her darker. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

19:15, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can I make the picture from another time become the picture that shows up on this page? Because i upload it but it just goes back to the original picture. Can someone help me?? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

19:23, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Calm down. The changes just aren't showing. Give it some time, and they'll show up. We just have too many images on this wiki.... jayce  00:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shade of gray; it looks like she's a white cat. Darken the ear-pink as well. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:06, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

ok thank you. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

19:12, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I fixed her. She is darker, Fixed earpink and highlights. Changes aren't showing yet. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

13:57, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty good. She looks much better now.I think the shading on her back needs to blurred a little more Stoneclaw33 12:42 August 30 2011

ok. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

20:26, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think the changes are showing. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

21:22, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink; it looks too neon. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:48, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing though. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

17:24, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice job for your first charart Cind! ^-^ SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:30, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. awwwww thanx snowy. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

21:36, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:41, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think it looks better though. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

00:09, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

highlightes are odd have you looked at a tutorial? That could help. And the ear pink is too bright and blur it.Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 17:19, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. changes aren't showing yet. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

21:05, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink not so hot-pink and brighten the eyes a bit. Also, maybe darken the main fur color just a bit more? Still looks white to me. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

22:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink just a tad more. SplookMavinotp♥ 01:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. changes aren't showing yet. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

20:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

So is this image approved? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

00:36, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, it was never CBAed, this looks lovely, Only thing, darken the ear-pink, it looks to neon....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:40, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

ummmm what's CBA? Sorry i'm new. I'll try. thanx. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

00:46, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and the shading, please. jayce  04:19, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

earpink look way too neon..and define the shading & add some shading to the right ear x) --Bloo!yo 04:30, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

ok and what is CBAed? Thanx --Cinder Real or Not Real?

12:44, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The head is way too white, and the shading is blotchy. I suggest you re-do the shading and pick a different lighter and more natural color for the earpink. Rainey 14:33, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

CBA=Comments Before Approval. Take the ear-pink from Sunfish's warrior image, or Ferncloud's warrior image. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:33, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

ok just gimme some time. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

02:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

sorry guys my computer is having some problems they'll get fixed in about maybe 24 hrs. I'm sorry once it starts working i'll work on the image, wait it won't get declined because of this will it? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

18:59, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, unless you're gone for over a week, this will be fine. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:48, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

When you come back, lighten the ear-pink, make it smaller, and blur it. Darken the shading and define the light source. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

great! and thanx guys. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

17:22, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think this one is the best so far ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:51, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, make it look smooth. Robz You make me feel good! 06:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:34, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shade the feet farthest from us. Ivyheart =P 02:49, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, blur the highlights, add/brighten the face highlight, and the earpink is too pink. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:19, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:09, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink slightly. --Frosted Apple 01:47, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think you've covered a black pixel or two with the eye color. ShadewingBlades of the Night 12:07, September 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. @ shadewing u were right but i fixed it thanx for catching me! --Cinder Real or Not Real?

20:27, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

the highlights and ear pink are both too bright. And please don't use chat speak ;) Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:47, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. and sorry. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

14:22, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is still a little bright. Dull it down to a soft pink. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:35, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:17, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the highlights on the haunch and shoulder, lighten the shading/darken the highlights on her tail and blur them together, and her head is way lighter than her body.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 23:50, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are too layered, smooth them out by blurring. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ8362☮♫ 19:10, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:37, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, and darken them. Looking good~ Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 01:57, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

The whole image looks a little blotchy. {+{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Stoneclaw33/Sig}+} 09:41, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink still looks a bit purple. Make it a tad pinker :3 SplookMavinotp♥ 21:35, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

18:05, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, they are somewhat concentrated. Frosted Apple 04:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

18:09, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and darken the pelt color just the slightest bit. And the ear pink is purple O.o Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:33, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

I found some things that needed to be fixed so Reuploaded. Violetpelt☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 22:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eye. If need be I can show you an image that shows how to shade an eye up-close. Iveh Yo! 04:12, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't look like the right color. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 02:55, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

ok i'll fix it and ivystripe could you show me how? Violetpelt☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 15:44, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cinder, this is a AWESOME charart, the onlt main prob here is the ear-pink, take it from Willowpelt or Petalnose Maple♥poolMischief brewing 03:28, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Eye chart

Here you go =) Use this as a guide, and make sure you zoom in on her eye a lot so you can see all the details. It seems tedious but it really does give the pic life =) Iveh Yo! 17:22, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I've fixed the eyes "I think" and i'm sorry but i don't know how to "take it" from them. Also thank you to everyone who made this image possible. :) Violetpelt☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 19:55, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

There is pelt color around the ear pink that is a different color and also darken and blur the ear pink. Good! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:36, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 17:30, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and blur the tail highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:30, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 23:48, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Take the colors from her queen image. Pelt, ear pink, and eye color don't really match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:17, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

I told you i don't know how to "take from" images. but ok i'll try to match up the colors. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 23:27, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

ok here i tried the best i could.XD changes aren't showing yet... Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 23:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? (Are Apprentices allowed to suggest CBA's?)-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 04:49, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

nooope! Only leads X) --Bloo!yo 04:57, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Kitty, you should already know that only leads can CBA an image. Blur the edges of the ear pink, and I think this might be ready. jayce  06:42, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

How could I know? No one ever told me that rule. Sure, I've never seen an Apprentice CBA an image, but...that could've just been a coincidence. Well I know now...-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 09:32, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if this made it worse but I tried to match the earpink on her queen image. And I blurred the edges like you said Cloudskye. Also Kitty i didn't know either XD. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:54, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Just an idea, but you could lighten the tip of the tail and make the shading flow up in the tail. Also, who can and cannot suggest CBAs are in the guidelines, I suggest refreshing upon them. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 22:43, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I don't get what you said. How do I do it? Sorry i'm pretty new. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:05, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

This has been up for longer than a month. Are we following that rule? ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:12, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Good point. There are some others that have exceeded a month too. Should we just decline their work that they've worked over a month on already? I personally do not like that rule, it's just declining work that the user has worked very hard on. But, it was agreed. Should we decline them or no? SplookMavinotp♥ 15:54, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

no it's says even if it exceedes a month but they are almost done they can still work on it like mine i am almost done. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 19:57, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

We are following that rule, but frankly, this should be CBAed very soon. All you need to do, is strech the lighter shading/ highlights (if you use them that is) to the tip of the tail (i.e. the smudge tool). AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 21:05, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

added the highlights. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 15:33, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight a bit more, then this will be ready. Nice job. SplookMavinotp♥ 22:04, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

thanxs. and blurring is done! Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 23:07, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce  03:39, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 16:41, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (Q) ~ Approved

Sunfish.queenFirst charart. Tell me how i did. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 20:26, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed it for you. Blur the shading and highlights. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:29, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's the 36th image, so it'll be declined. Silverhmm 20:30, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

No, this was posted before Flight (somehow it got moved down., look at the times) Add light parts to her arms. So many edit conflicts! :P Iveh Yo! 20:32, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hiya Rainy, it looks good but I think the shading and highlights need to be blurred more. ;) Silverflower ...the flower of the heart 20:46, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'll work on the haunch leg by the way. I know it is still a bit darker. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 21:18, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch's shading. Silverhmm 21:42, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Have the shading go all the way up the haunch, and all the way up the shoulder. Blur/smudge it more, and darken the shading a tad on the face. Also, add some shading to the eye. SplookMavinotp♥ 21:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know that you're about to reupload, but the haunch really needs blurring, and the tail.=) Silverflower ...the flower of the heart 21:53, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I made the eyes on her warrior art an orange-ish amber color in honor of her name (I actually used three different shades to add depth, you'll have to zoom all the way in to get all three pixels of color). Feel free to download it file and copy the color for the sake of consistency. Shelly For a limited time only 23:19, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I re-uploaded awhile ago. Sorry, my dad dragged me away before i could write that i did re-upload. and, i know no one can really zoom in here, but i have different shades for the eyes. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 01:35, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not sure if changes are seen on here, but they can be seen from her file page. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 01:52, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's better but can be blurred more. Do it on 100% a few times with a big brush it should help SpottedtalonMudears 03:39, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like me to do it? It wouldn't be a problem. And you can zoom in by saving my file and opening it in any art program. Shelly For a limited time only 11:22, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Rename it as Sunfish.queen.png and blur shadings. Leaf-storm,13:37,September 9,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I know the legs need to be tooken care of. i found a method that helps with with blurring now, so i will use that on the legs. I will also re-name it when i am done editing. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 18:37, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Yeah, the whole thing (not including the lineart, obviously. =P) needs to be blurred a LOT. Silverflower ...the flower of the heart 20:28, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there is too much shading on her front legs, lighten that up. Silverhmm 20:31, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy, blur the shading a lot. Also define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:44, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The changes aren't showing here on on her file page though. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 13:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

There is too much shading on the front legs and their blotchy anyways. The whole thing still needs shading. Silverflower ...the flower of the heart 13:57, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Silverflower, don't you mean the whole thing needs to be blurred? Also, the shading is getting on my last nerve. I've gone through it 30 times and it's pretty much the same. I've even used the smudge tool. Can someone help me with the shading getting more.. blurier? (however you spell it) Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 20:32, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just blurred the front leg for Rainface, by her request. Ivyheart =P 21:08, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Now you need to blur the haunch's shading. Silverhmm 21:10, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Took care of the haunch's shading, anything else? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 21:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Umm....... any comments on this now? Or should it be CBA'd? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 22:31, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-named it so i thought i should tell you i re-uploaded. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 23:19, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still looks blotchy. You should use Gaussian Blur (A filter), it doesn't come out blotchy. Silverhmm 23:30, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... Silvereye, not to be rude but i use pixlr and there isn't a Guassian Blur tool there. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 23:48, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

There is a gaussian blur on Pixlr. It's just if you don't use layers, there might be a conflict with the lineart. Ivyheart =P 14:49, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 'Petalstep 18:42, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ummm.. I wasen't doing this in layers. i just took care of the shading and highlights on the first layer. Was i not supposed to do that? because if i wasen't, i'll redo the image and make it look pretty close to this. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 19:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 19:48, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, the eyes look almost white. Please rectify this. Shelly For a limited time only 20:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Shellheart: They do? Ok, any way, i think i might of fixed that. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 21:09, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. And sorry I sounded snappy. I felt as if my comments had been ignored. ^^; Shelly For a limited time only 21:12, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok Shellheart. This is my first charart so i wouldn't really blame anyone for sounding a bit snappy. I don't understand a bunch of the stuff i did on here and i now think this charart looks amazing. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 21:34, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, and there's also some gray around the charart. jayce  21:37, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think it is blurred as far as it will go. Comments? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 22:08, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's still gray around the image. jayce  22:13, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Right, thanks for telling me. Re-uploaded. I think i got all the gray from it. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 22:15, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

There stil seems to be some waste around it. I would add a layer and color it a bright floresent color and then you can see where you missed some of the waste. Lighten the highlights or add some and then you might want to use an airbrush/fuzzy brush and make it a color inbetween the highlights and shading and then color over the edge of the shading so it's smoother. And then blur where needed. Nice job! AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 23:33, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think this is AMAZING now. Comments? Also, i will TRY to see what i can do to lighten the eyes just a tad. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 18:56, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I brightened the eyes to match her warriors pretty closly. Comments? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 19:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :3 {{SUBST:Ms ds nerd/Siggie1}} 22:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looking better! :) Maybe a tad more blurring on the flank and's lookin' good! Silverflower ...the flower of the heart 00:04, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I tried blurring it but it won't blur anymore. Sorry. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 00:41, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want some help with blurring it?MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 19:16, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, that would be nice Loudsplash. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 19:29, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define the earpink; it looks faded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing yet. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 00:39, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are showing now. I am ashamed, this looks AWFUL now. *cries* ok, anyway, comments? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 01:23, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED ok here it is. I got the idea of using dodge on it to blur it in a way so I blurred it then used dodge on it. Is this any better? MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:11, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. jayce  15:21, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think you did good blurring it loudsplash, thank you *wugz* Ok, any way, blurred the ear pink to the beyond, comments? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 18:23, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ummmm... no one has commented in awhile. I am now a bit consernend. lol, jk, but any way, is anyone caring enough to comment? (sorry, i just want this approved SOOO bad!) Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 18:23, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Again, you've lightened the eyes too much. The eyes on the warrior charart are orange, not pale yellow. Shelly For a limited time only 18:35, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, haha, sorry. now i am blaming that on the guiassian blur thingy. any way, fixed that. comments? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 18:44, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is starting to look EPIC! I would blur the stomach highlight a tiny bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:49, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is kind of blotchy, smoothen it out. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:08, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. Umm, with the shading and blotchy and smoothing it out, i use pixlr and i want to know HOW to smoothen it out? any one know? i'll take care of the stomach btw. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 00:38, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Well, what do you all think? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 01:07, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Now it looks like there is no shading. And you should blur the ear-pink a bit. Shelly For a limited time only 20:29, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

There was shading, i just made the pelt a tad lighter cause it did say pale gray, err, something like that. any way, Re-uploaded, I liked it before, maybe that's why i liked the shading before. one comment and i undo the shading and change the picture back. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 01:42, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and haunch. jayce  01:49, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ugh, this thing gets worser and worser every time i edit it now. kinda not long ago, it was Epic and now i think it has just gotten worser sense then. :P Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 02:03, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Chill, hun. Sunfish is just a tricky cat to make, trust me. Light, solid colored cats typically are. You're doing fine. Just darken the shading until it looks to match the warrior charart and blur the ear pink. It's all about consistency. Shelly For a limited time only 14:36, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also brighten the earpink to a shade that a light colored cat would have, which usually is a pale/soft pink. SplookMavinotp♥ 21:32, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

i'm gonna fix that as soon as my cpu decided to recognize pixlr. errr, today is just mean. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 22:04, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose a tad Iveh Yo! 15:34, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

ok, i am fricking going to find something to do with this. i re-did it to make the colors match and it won't show anything! i saved it 30 billion times! errrrr. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 19:43, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, it's showing now :P Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 19:19, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh noes! i forgot the nose color! err, i'll fix that.... Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 19:27, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed :D Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 22:31, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the tail looks a little weird--might wanna fix that. The top of the highlighting on the haunch, shoulder, and back need to be blurred more. Sorry, I know you're frusterated because you've blurred it a gazillion times..... Silver wuvz her friends 00:24, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

oh great, IT UPLOAED THE WRONG FRICKING ONE! *kicks cpu in anger* Rainface<3 00:19, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

oh wait, nyeh, stupid piece of scrap. any way, if you wanna see the real image and how it's supposed to look cause it won't show anything here, click here. Rainface<3 00:32, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, it's showing now, awkward. Comments? (i think it is LOVELY!) Rainface<3 17:45, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

NOW IT'S NOT! WHAT THE HECK IS HAPPENING?! Rainface<3 18:36, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Don't use capital letters, please. The changes may not be showing because there are too many chararts being uploaded at once. Blur the back shading more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:03, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred it as much as i could. i don't think i can do more about the shading. Rainface<3 19:21, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I have one thing to say. I LOVE this! Rainfacestar has been apart of PCA for under a month and has showed great spirit in art. This charart looks great! I have no objections. Firestar! 20:18, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should do some more highlights and blur the shdaing on the back. It's to black Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I've blurred it to the max and can't blur it anymore. and as for highlights, where? they are everywhere they were supposed to be. Rainface<3 20:24, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back looks a bit unnatural. Try lightening it, then blurring it again. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:40, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lightened, changes not showing. Comments? Rainface<3 01:05, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

oh wait, they are showing. Comments? Rainface<3 01:09, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think this looks good. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫

Thanks Twilightheart. Rainface<3 22:29, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Emphasize the shading more as she looks a bit flat, and then blur where nessecary, nice work. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 22:31, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done Rain ;) AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 23:18, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the middle highlight bigger, and define the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:43, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Took care of the highlights. Comments? Rainface<3 01:14, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and thank you atelda. Rainface<3 01:23, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice! Just blur the bottom of the earpink. Ivyheart =P 01:10, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry if it's not visible, but i did blur the bottom of the ear pink. Rainface<3 01:17, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there's some gray lineart on her front left paw. I might be wrong, though. :3 Leggo 🏈 02:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Took care of the paw. Rainface<3 03:07, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading along the back and the haunch Scratch that, it's fine. SplookMavinotp♥ 14:21, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? I blurred as much as possible without getting the lineart. Rainface<3 19:24, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong here. Good job. Shelly For a limited time only 23:03, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

For your first charart this is excellent! A tiny thing, possbly make the earpink a teeny tiny bit more pink. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 13:41, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tried to make it brighter without having to re-do it. I could of just used dodge now that i think about it. Rainface<3 17:30, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 04:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 16:41, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlenose (Ki) ~ Approved

Beetlenose.kit&nbsp I'm pretty sure Beetlenose's kit image isn't taken. And I think it's under 35 (until I posted this) So here it is. This is my first charart so I hope I did well... ❄ Blizzardpelt ❄Freezing in the Summer! 01:55, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

kewl (de-thumbed it) define the shading some & add earpink x) --Bloo!yo 02:16, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

And make the nose a dark grey. --Leafstrike-- 02:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Are the eyes filled in? Sorry, but my own eyes are acting up, it's kinda hars for me to see. jayce  04:25, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

No, you're right Cloudy. The eyes aren't filled in. Rainey 09:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

add earpink, Make the nose black, lighten the highlight ont he tail. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:01, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. ❄ Blizzardpelt ❄Freezing in the Summer! 23:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

And rename this Beetlenose.kit.png. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:32, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok I filled in the eyes some more, changed the nose color, added the ear pink, renamed the picture, and everything else :P ❄ Blizzardpelt ❄Freezing in the Summer! 06:05, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cool! Now make the earpink smaller, and blur it. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 16:38, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok. Took me a while to get the earpink just right..but I got it! I hope it looks a bit better now. ❄ Blizzardpelt ❄Freezing in the Summer! 17:02, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed it for you. Okay, move his ear-pink up, it looks odd where it is. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:22, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

You need to take one of the png.'s out of the name. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:31, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little more red, please. jayce  18:00, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:10, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, still, I think. Ivyheart =P 16:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? it's been a week. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:19, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 10 days since the last reupload, I'll take over from here. SplookMavinotp♥ 01:38, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, and define the shading. Also make the earpink redder. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:36, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I completely redid it, you'll know when the changes show. Since I did his apprentice, why not do his kit? (I'm an idiot) After this, I should really stop my solid cat spree xD Anywho, comments? SplookMavinotp♥ 22:40, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

You didn't do his apprentice, Squirrelflame did, and you did Blackclaw's apprentice. xD I think I can see the differences. Define the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:03, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'm such an idiot xD SplookMavinotp♥ 23:33, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the whole thing again, because stupid me forgot to save the xcf file x-x SplookMavinotp♥ 03:26, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I can hardly see the earpink. It needs to be pinker. And a bit bigger. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 13:51, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 22:12, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 04:56, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 16:41, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (Ki) ~ Approved

Sunfish.kitGot to post this quick before the slot goes XD Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:12, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, she's cute! Blur the earpink a tad ;3 SplookMavinotp♥ 20:22, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:51, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. Ivyheart =P 23:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlights a bit. :3 Misty! 00:34, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 06:32, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose the same color as the earpink, or a darker grey. Cute! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:25, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 16:05, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose, and blur the shading. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:32, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 21:46, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the base of the tail. Ivyheart =P 22:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Smallen the ear pink a tad. Looks great! ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 00:17, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 14:26, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more visible on the tail. Silverhmm 15:27, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 18:16, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

and blur the ear pink. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 00:19, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 13:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? SplookMavinotp♥ 22:11, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:22, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud (E) ~ Approved

Cloud.elder Hmm...comments? AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 22:03, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great ^.^ Theres a tiny bit of waste above the back area, and also blur the tail highlight/shading (which ever one xD) a little. :3 SplookMavinotp♥ 22:33, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, Atelda! Darken and enlarge the ear-pink a tad and just darken the shading a tad more. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:54, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Nice... :3 Add some shading to the chin. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:58, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks gaiz! AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 23:04, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten/define the highlight on the shoulder, chest, and haunch. This might break the record of time for approved charart ;P ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:51, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lolz, I think I might've found my specialty. (Hope I didn't just jinx it) :D AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 03:16, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste all around the charart. Man I'd hoped I could have done this after Screech got approved Iveh Yo! 03:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Waste as in where specifically. I honestly don't see any waste and I have a florescent background looking like a mad man :P? AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 03:59, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

It's all around her, I mean, I can pretty much see where the eraser went and it didn't reach all the way out to where it is. All I can really describe it as as the area just outside how big your eraser brush was Iveh Yo! 04:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ohk, on the very outside. xD I gotcha. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 04:14, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading on the tail, blur the shading, and brighten the earpink. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:43, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading looks fine Mintstarr. There is shading on the tail... although it needs to be darkened. jayce  21:57, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tail shading has been darkened >:D AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 22:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:19, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -_- AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 22:31, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno if you fixed this already, but there is waste around the tail. Ivyheart =P 05:11, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It's fixed but just for laughs :) AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 12:42, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 04:18, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Mmmm...her description says pale gray, so I don't want to make her look white which happens when I lighten the shading :P... AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 04:21, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste like, all around her, get rid of that, and there is a long thing of white on her chest. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:59, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 01:18, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 21:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail and darken it on the tail. ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:40, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Because your comment was unneeded, the CBA is continued. Thus, this image is now approved, since it would have been 24 hours. jayce  23:58, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Skyheart (Ki) ~ Approved

File:Skyheart kit.png Comments? llwildheartl07:42 Sep 25 Sun

Make the ear pink more visible. Silverhmm 12:15, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blue text? Anyways, beautiful! Darken the nose pink. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 12:26, September 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Pretty! ^.^ Define the shading and redden the earpink :3 SplookMavinotp♥ 15:53, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, she's cute <3, Lighten the highlights, or define them, and define the pupil. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:11, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink that's in the shading? This is so pretty, nice job =) Iveh Yo! 17:15, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, the blue text was my fault ^^ I forgot to fix part of my signature. Thanks, everybody :3 llwildheartl05:12 Mon Sep 26

Blur the earpink. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 19:33, September 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define and darken the shading on the tail under the chin and on the face. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:52, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. llwildheartl23:02 Tue Sep 27

I lied. Now they are :3 llwildheartl23:52 Tue Sep 27

Looks great. However, the right earpink seems really, really dark. Its the shading, but it should still match her other earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:43, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry in advance for any lateness in my responses; I'm trying not to get addicted to the wiki again ;) Comments? llwildheartl04:20 Sun Oct 2

Brighten the right earpink more; other than that, I don't think there's anything else wrong with this. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:06, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? llwildheartl00:34 Wed Oct 5

Looks good to me. CBA? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:41, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  01:42, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. W2) - Approved

Tawnypelt.warrior.alt2I borrowed the colors from Mosspelt's alternate. Comments? ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:12, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, define the shading a bit. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 20:14, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:42, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Should this have tabby stripes, or am I mistaken? Because she looks like a golden tabby to me but I don't know if braken-colored counts. Iveh Yo! 20:50, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front legs a bit and make the ear pink more triangular. :3 Misty! 22:03, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading, and make the earpink bigger. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:02, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivy, No, this is bracken, which is a form of golden-brown so no. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 03:45, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I don't like the shading, it looks too gray to me. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:45, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tiny bit. Firestar! 21:49, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading between the haunch and the foreleg. Ivyheart =P 05:50, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Add a little shading along the bottom of her forepaws, and enlarge the ear-pink a tad. Leggo 🏈 13:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 15:42, September 24, 2011 (UTC)\

Add some shading to the far ear and try to saturate the shading some so that it looks less gray and more bracken-coloured.llwildheartl 07:17 Sep 25 Sun

Reuploaded- I can't find my way around Wildheart's sig. Help? ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:50, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading everywhere except the body part ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 04:55, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, guys :3 I fixed it so now you don't have to. haha... Wait, this is supposed to be bracken coloured, right? Right now it looks kind of yellow... could you make it more pale browny-red? llwildheartl06:20 Mon Sep 26

Reuploaded- PLEASE don't make me define the shading! ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:00, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Don't make it a thumbnail OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall

01:19, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Make the color a bit paler, it looks a bit to golden. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:49, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! But some of the legs are too dark lighten them a bit. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

Oh, I didn't mean to make it a thumbnail. Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and make it more triangular. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:21, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

This was reuploaded yesterday, sorry. Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:09, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. CBA? SplookMavinotp♥ 01:46, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Either add a small highlight to the hind feet, or lighten the shading along the top. They wouldn't be completely in shadows is the light source is where, well, it is. xP Leggo 🏈 18:42, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I disagree, but I fixed it anyways. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:06, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'd tone down the shading on the tip of the tail, as well as make the earpink smaller. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 22:25, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- obviously, there is no shading on the tail tip, so, explain? :D ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 18:33, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think Atelda meant the highlights. XD Tone down the highlights on the tail tip. And this is great! And I know you took the colors from Mosspelt's alt, but that doesn't necessarily make them right, so could you I'm pretty sure pale bracken colors is like a pale ginger-brown color. This looks pretty much just yellow. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 08:30, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw's right. You're going to have to change it. This is just...yellow. jayce  14:49, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

the leg closest to use needs to be lightened --Cinder Real or Not Real?

Reuploaded- I desaturated it, but, I don't know. Suggesitons for color? ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:28, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

File:Earpinkexample.png How about this colour? Right now it seems kind of... yellow. Too yellow. llwildheartl23:09 Mon Oct 3

Reuploaded- I took that color and made it more ginger. Comments? ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:44, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink from the pelt just a little more and I'll re-CBA this. --SplookMavinotp♥ 20:56, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:19, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:54, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  22:13, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (Ki) ~ Approved

Tallstar.kit Snowdazzle withdrew it. So, how's he look? I made the tail a little longer then it should be on a kit, since that's part of his description. jayce  01:04, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! There is waste all around the charart though. Also, bur/smudge the patches a little more. Ivyheart =P 01:17, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  01:32, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading (if any) on the white areas. This is lovely! :3 Leggo 🏈 01:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  03:00, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

There's still waste around the charart, and this is amazing. :3 Lucky Heart of a lion 21:39, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  19:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. Can you lighten the white parts? They're too gray. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  21:43, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? It's just sitting around, and it looks great. SplookMavinotp♥ 20:01, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  21:36, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lilystem (alt.Q) - Approved

File:Lilystem.queen.alt.png Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:15, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

The right eye is messed up Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:59, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

kewl, blur the earpink more & try fixing the eye if you can --Bloo!yo 00:00, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, Misty. Redden the ear-pink a tad and make sure that the stripes go all the way to the tail lineart, there's one stripe that kinda looks like it's just floating there. xP ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:05, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and give her a gray nose. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:05, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Blur the stripe on the haunch that is closest to the tail. Ivyheart =P 03:14, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Pretty! jayce  05:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

There's 3 white dots on the image. 1.One of her toes on her front paw closest to us is not filled in 2.There's a white dot among her black belly lineart close to her back foot 3.There's a white dot among the lineart on the base of the haunch (on top of her back foot). And all the suggestions above xP-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 05:55, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also her eyes look a bit too neon and unnaturally bright, but I may be wrong. I'd darken the eyes a bit and make them more natural, leafy-coloured if I were u, but meh. I'll see how many disagree/agree with me. This is great, Misty!-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 08:15, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly. Very nice. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:42, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I got the eye color off of her original queen version, and did the eyes the same way, though... ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:00, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I just redid her eyes as blue, since this is an alt, and I like blue eyes on gray cats. Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:17, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, blue eyes on gray/silver cats are awesome. Anyways, back to Lilystem! Can you blur the earpink some more? Rainey 22:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:28, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading over the haunch, it looks pretty :3 SplookMavinotp♥ 01:12, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty, can you darken/add shading to the front leg closest two us? Rainface<3 01:18, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:52, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Any chance you could dull the earpink a tad? SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 01:54, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:54, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Just darken the shading a tad. Nice job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:16, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:19, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce  20:08, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  21:44, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (Alt. W) - Approved

File:Softwing.warrior.alt.pngComments? Rainey 06:53, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. =P jayce  06:56, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing Rainey! ^^ Yes, like Cloudy said, darken the shading. And aslo brighten the earpink and lighten the eyes a tad. Nice job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:58, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I <3 white cats. :3 Rainey 07:04, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. You forgot to add "For Approval" on the heading, so I added it for you. --Leafstrike-- 17:02, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the chest highlight rounder, and the tail highlight bigger. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:24, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 13:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlights. Looks great! OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall 01:07, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. It looks really cool and shiny! DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 03:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 10:29, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

And darken them a bit. They look pure white. Highlights should never be pure white unless you're putting the layer mode on overlay afterwards. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    18:15, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 10:53, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, amazing! Blur hightlights more! I love your cat ♥ :-) Leaf-storm,13:44,October 3,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could on pixlr. Rainey 12:00, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Rainey, the only thing I see wrong is the shoulder shading could use a bit of blurring. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainey 11:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, dear Rainey. CBA? jayce  20:07, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  21:46, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Q) ~ Approved

Yellowfang.queen I'm so happy the vote passed and I can do this. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 23:38, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! You use GIMP, right? Add depth to the eye. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:49, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little dark and the scars don't really seem to match, but that could just be me. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 23:56, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added depth to the eyes. Yes, I use GIMP. ^^ And I think it just looks dark because queens have more shading, but if someone else agrees I'll change it. And I think I lined up the scars right. Do you mean they're in the wrong places or that they're different colors? Shelly For a limited time only 00:02, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink and thicken the shading on the back and on the tail. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:47, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

You dirty little....I can't beleive you beat me to the opening..... This pic is pretty good...I can't find any fault... ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 12:01, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Reddened ear-pink, darkened tail shading. Shelly For a limited time only 17:15, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps just add a little depth to the scars like on Tigerstar's alt. leader image. Looking good! AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 17:21, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

You really think I should? I just made them to match the latest warrior image Icestorm did. If you think I should, I'll put the warrior image on the tweak list to add depth to the scars there as well. Shelly For a limited time only 18:11, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should. If it's OK, I'll tweak her, since I hvae her layers, but I don't see the need to put her up for approval again. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    18:13, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, thanks Icestorm. And I meant I'd put her back on the list, not that I'd take over the image myself. I can't, as I'm working on Tallstar right now. Shelly For a limited time only 18:18, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, okay ;) Can you blur the tail highlight? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    18:19, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Reworked the scars to my liking and gave them depth. Also blurred the tail highlight/shade. Shelly For a limited time only 16:07, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Did you smush in her face? It looks like that, otherwise...Blur the shading a bit, and it's very pretty!Moonstream 20:32, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I did. She's persian, after all. Shelly For a limited time only 23:07, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you blur the haunch and chest shading more? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:09, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. changes not showing. Shelly For a limited time only 17:41, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

this looks AMAZING! Rainface<3 21:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading up a bit and blur it. this is AMAZING Shelly! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:36, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blurred it to death. Huzzah. Shelly For a limited time only 19:37, October 6, 2011 (UTC)\

Gawjus Shelly. Darken the earpink just a little bit. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 19:52, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Don't think I should, Snow. I took the color off the Medicine Cat image. Shelly For a limited time only 19:55, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce  20:05, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  21:48, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (Alt. MC) - Approved was mistakenly called mottled, I never really picted mottled as "spotted", so I smudged it a lot. Hopefully nobody posts another one right before this xD Anyways, comments for approval? AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 00:22, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I wasn't sure if I should give him a pale belly or not. I can upon request AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 00:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should, it is part of his desc, even if he is mottled xD Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:32, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded for the waste, and alright. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 00:35, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and also I found out that I don't have to, but I thought it'd make it more interesting. *crickets chirp* It's been pretty quiet around these parts lately xD AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 03:37, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and make it smaller. Also darken shoulder shading and blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:30, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded finally a comment! Lol! =P AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 01:38, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the top of the earpink a tiny bit. The reason you have no comments: it's practically already perfect <3 llwildheartl22:34 Thu Oct 6

Reuploaded Wildy you are too flipping nice! =) AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 23:00, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Colleen calls 'em how she sees 'em, Ivy. CBA? jayce  20:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  21:49, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. W) - Approved

Brightheart.warrior.alt2 Comments? -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 02:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC) Blur the neck shading. 03:03, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should try for flecks over spots of ginger. 11:00, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

It's manga alternate, we can made them? References says Lost Warrior page 11 Leaf-storm,12:49,October 4,2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Leaf, we can, Mapleshade got her alt. rouge, and she was said to be a tortie-and-white in the manga of CP. Define the ear-pink a tad. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 13:05, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on her leg. Moonstrike 13:59, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I think you may have missed a spot with your shading going outside the lineart, it appears underneath her paws. I'm sorry, I know it's a bit picky D: Also, the markings around her eye stands out a bit, can you blur them a little? This is very nice! 15:23, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

To clarify what I said earlier, I think you should make her look a bit like a reverse of Weedwhisker. 17:33, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Outstanding. Stunning. No. This will stay, unless the artist wishes it not. I only see that you need to lighten the shading. 20:58, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 02:07, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Redden the earpink. 21:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights on the face. This is looking epic! Rainface<3 23:03, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 03:30, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

the highlighting on her chest stands out to much against her really shady pelt. you should blur it. other than that, this is EPICBluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 04:12, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 04:27, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 02:54, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:07, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt L2) ~ Approved

Pinestar.leader.alt2Okay... let's do this. In CP he was described as "fox-red". Red is a type of ginger. Pinestar is brown. Therefore this has a right to be an alt. Just incase anyone had doubts. Okay, I just realized I forgot the nose, I'll add that in in a second. Comments? Ivyheart =P 01:24, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Epic, maybe darken the stripes alittle -Bloo!yo 01:26, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing, you know if the changes are showing if you see the nose. :P Darkening stuff is fun. Ivyheart =P 01:30, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

...Never mind that. Changes are showing. Yes, I darkened the stripes. Ivyheart =P 01:30, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The nose seems a little Darken it, please. Good job, otherwise. jayce  01:42, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    22:16, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 23:55, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce  22:28, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but would this really be needed? He's RED-brown. Not just plain brown. IMO that's not really much of a difference... But I guess since this is being CBA'd the leads think it's neccesary. To me, it's like Sandstorm being called orange though. Not really enough of a difference. HOWEVER despite all of that, I gotta say, this is on of the most gorgeous chararts I've ever seen. *-* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:31, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Still, I think he gets one for the red-ginger. Foxes are ginger, and to get this color, I looked up pictures of red foxes. Pinestar's brown. He doesn't have tabby stripes, because he isn't ginger. I think it can be an alt. Thanks about the charart, though. Ivyheart =P 15:33, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:22, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Floss (Q) ~ Approved

Floss.queen Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 01:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and blur the shading a tad more. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

A note: The shading is especially blotchy on her tail. Also blur highlights, and the nose isn't filled in. Also is the ear furthest from us filled in, or is it just there's a lot of highlight on it? It just looks unnaturally pure white to me---the original blank colour.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 07:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:22, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose pink or gray (either one, I believe xD), it looks white. SplookMavinotp♥ 02:05, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the nose can be both gray and pink in their corresponding areas. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 15:08, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The white on the head is pure white, and looks like it doesn't have any shading to it. jayce  19:37, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

You can have pure white, its not against the rules. The ear pink stays how it is, and reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 22:40, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

She's probably meaning to say that the white brightness doesn't match the other white parts. (Like the highlights) Ivyheart =P 23:58, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, Ivy. That's what I mean. I wasn't paying attention when I typed that. jayce  12:33, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink just a tad. llwildheartl22:36 Thu Oct 6

Reuploaded- O already said im not changing the ear pink. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:09, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I can't see the ear pink; only a streak of light pink. Iceheart, you don't need to change the color at all, just make it so we can see it. jayce  19:51, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

So what exactly do you want me to do? The colour came from the other chararts so its no changing, and its the same size/shape as every other queen ear pink... -ſceheartBlah blah 02:38, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 03:05, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wait isn't it supposed to be a mottled cat? And if not, lighten the shading a tad Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:24, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

She was never described as mottled and the shading is fine. Continuing CBA. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:53, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Fallowtail (E) ~ Approved

Fallowtail.elder Here she isMoonlightBeauty of the sea! 00:22, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons, blur the earpink, and she doesn't have a brown tip on the top of her ear. Iveh Yo! 00:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks blotchy, make the earpink triangula, wheres your light source? --Bloo!yo 00:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do everything in the morning. And the light source is like above her muzzle.MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 00:26, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. jayce  00:28, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Seriously? I just had 4 edit conflicts with all of you. I think you should redo teh shading to make it less blotchy, and do the shading according to Nightshine's tutorial. Also, the earpink is blotchy. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:30, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

If the light source is there, then there shouldn't be shading on BOTH sides of the tail & on the forehead --Bloo!yo 00:41, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

All the shading really needs blurring...and the tail is really blotchy. Silverflower ...the flower of the heart 01:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Silverflower, there is no need to repeat what has already been said. Iveh Yo! 01:39, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 03:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'm just going to redo this, if I don't have it up by 9 then I won't be able to do it until tomorrow. Sry... MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 12:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED better? I have serious issues with ear pink XP MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 12:37, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, blur ear-pink Leaf-storm,14:02,September 10,2011 (UTC)

Better! thin out the shading on the tail & make the shading a darker tan like the others --Bloo!yo 15:55, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink just a bit more triangular? I'm horrible at that too x3 Misty! 16:06, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the face. This is comin' along very nicely! ^_^ SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:03, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED can someone help me thin out the shading on the tail? I'm having serious trouble with that. But that's all I need help with. Is this a dark enough tan or should i make it any darker?MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:11, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help! --Bloo!yo 16:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks.MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:31, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded There ya go. Changes arent showin' yet x) --Bloo!yo 16:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thank you. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 09:46, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I will not lighten the shading as I was told to darken it. Shouldn't this be approved soon? No rush but I haven't gotten a comment that needs reuploaded for in...MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 15:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

You will lighten the shading if someone suggests it. We're here to help you make this image the best it can be. It won't get approved (let alone a CBA) if all you're doing is being stubborn. Plus, the shading's way too dark anyways. jayce  16:03, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

  • sigh* REUPLOADED Again, not trying to be stubborn or annoying but it was darkened so it would match the warriors charart. Arg...(i'm beginning to hate this image more and more) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Now it looks better. It's an odd color to work with, if you ask me. Now, can you smudge the ear pink back into the ear? jayce  17:20, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED is this any better? Arg, I has serious issues with elder earpink XP MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 18:12, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and smoothen out the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

How do you smoothen out shading? I've never really done it before, I know, it's sad ;\ MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:57, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

To do that, you can use either of these methods: You can use a huge brush and set the rate on 100% and blur it, you can smudge it then blur the smudge, or you can use the gaussian blur tool on a very high setting. This method works in GIMP, so if you use Pixlr, then you'd probably have to ask a Pixlr user (my method can work on Photoshop too since they're essentially the same thing) Iveh Yo! 17:30, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I use pixlr but I also use gimp XP But I won't have access to gimp until friday or saturday....I may just need to download gimp on this computer but I dunno :| so if this isn't reuploaded until friday or saturday that's because I didn't download gimp so yeah, I don't know...MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 18:29, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Dull and lighten the shading. ShadewingBlades of the Night 02:01, September 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

REUPLOADED i dont think the changes are showing...MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:30, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED not sure if the changes are showing...anyway, this is as much as I can blur it on pixlr and this is the one comp that doesnt have gimp. Might have to download it though...MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:59, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

smooothe out the shading and blur it, make the shading a golden-tan color, make the earpink neat & triangular, and add some shading between the haunch and the front leg --Bloo!yo 15:28, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone help me do it again? I can do the earpink. And do you want the shading in the front or back.MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 12:33, September 19, 2011 (UTC

I can try helping you. But what do you mean by doing it again? Do you just want it blurred, or do you want help with just the general overall thing? Iveh Yo! 15:37, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty much the whole thing. And by when I mean doing it again I mean helping me with it again. Thanks. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:03, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

So, redo the shading too? Iveh Yo! 16:06, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, well here's the thing, if I redo the shading and blur ir for you, as well as the highlights, I might as well have done the picture for you. So here's what I'm going to suggest- I'm going to show you a picture on how to shade an elder. It should help you. After you do that, then I will blur it for you. Does that sound fair? By the way, this image should help: File:QueenAndElderShading.pngIt's ok to copy off of them. Iveh Yo! 17:07, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

REDONE Alright I completely redid it. Not sure if changes are showing or not...also, I gave her a graying muzzle and i'm not sure whether that was a good decision or not...MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:27, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing and i dunno why its on the right side...MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Still doesnt look right... darken the shading and blurr it --Bloo!yo 22:00, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, changes STILL aren't showing, anyway REUPLOADED Ivystripe are you going to blur it? Could you blur this image, thanksMoonlightBeauty of the sea! 20:33, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, sorry, I didn't know if you wanted me to after you redid it. I'll blur it for you. Iveh Yo! 21:29, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded there you go =) I also fixed a miscolored pixil on the foot. Hopefully this helps! Iveh Yo! 21:44, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Iveh, comments??? MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 18:00, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:16, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh forgot to say that the changes aren't showing. So go to her history and see it. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 22:21, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nicee 8) darken the shading & blurr it more. Also in some areas theres some uneeded/extra shading & highlights --Bloo!yo 02:16, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED alrighty i reuploaded but the image is on the text so can someone fix it, I can't seem to get it down....and the changes aren't showing, I think...MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 14:34, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed it for you. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:22, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading some more...& make the ear pink taller --Bloo!yo 23:57, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the tip of the ear pink. jayce  07:38, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Did it ever say she had a greying muzzle? Or is it ok since it shows her age? Sky- Killer of Daleks 11:17, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I dont think we should keep the gray. look at the other chararts, they have really heavy shading. Take the color from it & try it to get it like that. If you cant, then I can help --Bloo!yo 22:57, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I REUPLOADED but the chanegs will NOT show, AGAIN. I think the gray is fine because she was getting old so...and if this isn't the shading I need help I can't seem to get it right...MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 12:19, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and to me, it's a little dark. Ivyheart =P 19:50, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

If the changes don't show, don't worry. Dull the shading and the highlights. Also lighten the earpink a tad. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 22:14, September 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

REDONE again....ok I think this looks WAY better. I followed the directions on Ivystripe's chart above so try not to be criticizing about that. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:46, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred and dulled, still. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Does it look better? REUPLOADED MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:26, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make that smudged part by the legs less visible. Silverhmm 11:28, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Where? I didn't actually smudge anything... MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 15:04, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it, define the highlight on the tail. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:24, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 01:25, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The shading looks like a whole other tone to the fur. Lighten it some, and give a curve to the earpink. SplookMavinotp♥ 03:17, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

It's gone now. As Shadewing said, ligthen the shading. Also remove some of it. Silverhmm 11:34, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs redoing. Make it follow the curve of the ear, and make it pink. Then blur the shading tons. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 13:43, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and the shading is way too dark. Good job! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:10, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone bring it back down from this, for some reason every time I upload it it goes onto the section. :| Changes aren't showing. Arg. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:00, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

All you need to do it reupload it. It shouldn't be moving like that... jayce  17:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah but that's what I did. But it still goes there. It's really weird....MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 12:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights, and blur it where the shading and highlights meet.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:51, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I never had highlights on it. REUPLOADED MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 18:16, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The, blur the shading a lot, and dull it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I've blurred the shading as much as it would let me and how do you dull it? MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:23, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Either use the burn tool and set it on a relatively low setting, or put a layer on top of the image and take a color that is a bit darker than what the highlights are and just cover it. Need help? AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 12:54, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:16, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. So in short, I basically added a layer and toned down the highlights, and lightened the outer shading just a bit. Hope this is okay for you! AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 01:40, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

This is BOO-TI-FUL!!! THANK YOUUU! MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:51, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Much, much better. Define the shading on the paws a bit please. SplookMavinotp♥ 01:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Then blur it, it looks blotchy. SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 12:54, October 8, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Shadewing stop bolding your time stamp its a pain to get around. It looks fine to me CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 17:49, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

None. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:43, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Ki) - Approved

Sandstorm.kit- I like this one. I'm pretty sure this is OK, since Ivyheart withdrew Blackclaw. So. Er. Comments? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:48, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Coolio. Define the earpink some more. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:14, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It might just be me, but it looks like the shine in her pupils are brown instead of white. Shelly For a limited time only 00:19, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Where was Sandstorm mentioned as a kit?-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 03:15, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Where was Tallstar? Where was Onestar? idk, they are just getting them. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 03:16, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Warriors App, I do believe. jayce  03:17, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart, I looked closer, and they are definitely white. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 12:03, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. Silverhmm 19:30, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Shading's fine, Silver. However, you should blur it a bit though. jayce  01:33, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    22:20, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:50, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around it, and I believe this will be ready. Good job. SplookMavinotp♥ 18:20, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

THere's no waste. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    18:23, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

My goodness. I can see it directly. You still won't believe me on Skype. Just go and do whatever you need to do to erase it, even if you think it's not there. SplookMavinotp♥ 18:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yep.. it's there, Icey. Don't shoot me. :P Leggo 🏈 18:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know you reuploaded this, because you've told me (and the waste is gone.) . Remember to say reuploaded, kay? Anywho, like I said I'd do, Comments before approval? SplookMavinotp♥ 20:18, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Approving. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    15:22, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thistlepaw (P3) (Ki)- Approved

Thistlepaw.kit*Sigh* another long haired solid..... Sky- Killer of Daleks 19:59, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Cute ^^. Lighten the shading on the tail. I can't tell if he has blue or green eyes. Silverhmm 20:43, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I took the eye colour off his apprentice, they're like an aqua colour. `Sky- Killer of Daleks

Blur the shading on the tail and possibly on her back (the right side when looking at it) Nice work. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 03:18, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky- Killer of Daleks 10:48, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:24, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky- Killer of Daleks 10:44, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

This iz beautiful! Put a little less shading on the tail. Ivyheart =P 05:14, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

^ I agree. If not, define the highlights on the tail, I can barely see them. Hoping I'm not a derp and there are no highlights... :3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:12, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

You're not a derp. There are highlights xD Anyway, Re-uploaded. Sky- Killer of Daleks 23:23, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make sure the two earpinks are the same color? When people add shading, for example on this one, they shade the earpink too, and then the two earpinks seem to be different colors. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:25, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

They are the same. I put the ear pink on top of the shading. Sky- Killer of Daleks 23:37, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's nothing wrong with the earpink. Erase the waste around his left paw. --Leafstrike-- 21:06, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky- Killer of Daleks 22:31, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be short haired. ---ſceheartBlah blah 18:01, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It says that he is a long haired white tom. Sky- Killer of Daleks, cybermen 20:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I believe Iceheart is right. WindClan cats are known for being fast and sleek, and Thistlepaw is in WindClan. Naturally, he should be shorthaired. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:11, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yet his page says he is long haired, so I think it should stay. Sky- Killer of Daleks, cybermen 21:12, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

WindClan cats are usually sleek and shorthaired. It's different when a cat is mentioned with a long pelt. It should stay the way it is. SplookMavinotp♥ 23:36, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, we decided the shorthair would be the DEFAULT for WindClan cats. If it mentions otherwise, then it should be made longhaired, no matter what Clan he's in. Anyways, lighten the shading a bit, it's kinda dark. This is great! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:23, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's not that great.....Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 10:47, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Did you change it to a shorthair? In the file history, it is only showing longhaired versions. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:51, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Skystar doesn't have to change it to shorthaired. He is longhaired and i agree with that. Blur the chest highlights. Rainface<3 23:23, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sticking with the long hair because it's in his description. If he wasn't described as long, i would change, but he is. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 02:14, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

It stays longhair if that's what he was described as. Darken the shading ever so slightly. jayce  03:31, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.Sky- Allons-y! 02:14, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. (nice sig, btw :3) llwildheartl23:43 Sun Oct 9

Re-uploaded. Yes....I love that saying. :3 Sky is better than candy 23:49, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me, Sky. CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 02:00, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sry to interrupt but lighten the tail shading. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 18:02, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Tail shading is fine. Continuing CBA. jayce  18:05, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:30, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mosspelt (A) - Approved

Mosspelt.apprentice Whoot, got on just in time to get my charart up before the space was filled! 8D Anyways, comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:38, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but the patches are too smudged. Blur them more, to match her queen version. Also, I think you should add a white chest or something, because though her queen version doesn't have one, she is tortie-and-white in the CP manga. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:41, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

make the patches smaller & blur them slightly --Bloo!yo 23:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changes aren't showing. You;ll kow they're showing when she has white on her. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:12, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! The white needs to be desaturated, though. It seems brownish-white. Lighten and whiten it. =) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:32, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Both of those things were because of the shading. I used color shading, not black, so that's why it was like that. I desaturated it, but I'm not lightening it. That would mean lightening the shading, and IMO this looks too flat as it is. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:38, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty ^^. Make the shading a bit more visible on her back legs. Silverhmm 00:36, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:22, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the paw's white fur a bit more whiter. It looks gray. I looks great! DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 04:10, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Blur the haunch highlight a little. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:58, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink slightly more. Silverhmm 20:05, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink looks fine, but artist's choice whether to tweak that. All I see is perhaps make the smudge marks go the same direction but that's optional. :3 Awesome! AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 16:55, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

There should be some tan on it. You can barely tell on the queen version but its there.... -ſceheartBlah blah 04:50, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't decline this, I'm having hard-drive issues, so my files are being transfered, and my hard-drive's being reformatted. I won't be able to access my files for a couple days. I WILL get working on it ASAP though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:49, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Kay, my computer's up and running again, but the actual issue wasn't fixed, so we may need to reformat it AGAIN, so don't be surprised if I post on here again saying thta I won't be able to work on it for another couple days. But for now, I'll work on it as much as I can. Anyways, I did everything above except make the white whiter. Dapplecloud, I already said I'm not changing the white. I added the tan, but you can barely tell. But that's how it is on the queen one, so I figured it'll be fine. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:03, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can see the tan. I also did it faintly on the warrior version. This is coming along great. Ivyheart =P 01:16, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Let's go CBA on this. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:02, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:30, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Ki) ~ Approved

File:Sharpclaw.kit.png Well, I tried right? AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 02:16, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

No offense, but the stripes need to be blurred badly. There is waste all around the charart. Define the shading a tad please. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 02:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I tried to match the kittypet and deputy version, so whether I should've blurred the stripes remained a mystery to be so I left them as they were. So do you think I should blur the stripes with that in mind? :) AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 02:20, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, they are hard-edged and pixilated. What I'ddo is blur them on an incredibly low setting. That is what I did with Goldenflower since she has such thin stripes. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 02:24, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. M'kay, done! xD AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 03:24, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

His other images have stripes crossing muzzle and eyes. You should have this match those. Also, the color looks a bit off. Shelly For a limited time only 03:27, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 03:53, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

the stripes still need to be blurred a bti more. And make the stripes on the head get thicker in the middle and thinner at the ends, they're not supposed to be just straight lines. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:29, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done :3 AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 01:52, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more visible. Silverhmm 11:57, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh, I played with it, but I got the color from the kittypet version. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 22:17, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading tons. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    13:54, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oook :P AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 14:44, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a teensy bit more pwease. :3 Rainey 05:18, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. xD AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 05:21, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Define the stripes on the tail. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 14:48, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blur the stripes - define the stripes. xD AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 22:07, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me, Atelda. CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 02:13, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:30, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Approved

Mapleshade.loner Comments? I like how this one turned out. =) jayce  00:09, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is just a bit of waste all around the charart, and could you possibly blur the area where the white meets the brown on the front leg. Otherwise this looks awesome! AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 00:34, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely. Blur the shading on her left hind leg, define the stripes, and make the ear-pink more triangular. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:47, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Blur everything and also darken and largen the ear pink. Make the tabby stripe a little bit more noticable and maybe a little bit thicker. Make the shading darker. Beatiful! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:50, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sandstorm, I'm not making the stripes thicker. Also, you don't need to repeat what's already been said. jayce  00:53, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and under her jaw. Smooth the shading on her left hind leg a bit more. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:17, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  03:33, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be slightly more pink, and more triangular. Other than that it looks great Skye! LeopardclawLook upto the past… 08:07, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Leopard! I'll fix the ear pink when I get a few more comments. Plus, lack of sleep would end up killing this. XD jayce  08:08, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I'm more awake now. Also, I won't change the ear pink color. It needs to match her warrior. jayce  15:13, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading llwildheartl06:18 Mon Oct 10

Re-uploaded. jayce  15:31, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Darken the stripes a tad, please. They go in with the ginger transition. Overall, very good! princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    16:16, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  16:37, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is looking good, Cloudy. Make sure the stripes go all the way to the lineart and stretch the ear-pink up a bit higher. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:14, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes do go all the way up to the lineart. Also, re-uploaded. jayce  03:20, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think what Iceheart's trying to say is make them bigger at the top (where they touch the lineart) so they do look like they're touching the lineart. I'm not disputing your statement that they're touching the lineart, I'm just saying it doesn't really look like it from afar :P llwildheartl05:15 Tue Oct 11

Scarlet said that. Not Iceheart. Also....they are touching the lineart. In fact, I had to erase waste because they went over the lineart. I'm not changing them. I think they look fine the way they are. Is there really such a problem? jayce  05:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad. As I said, I'm not trying to tell you they're not touching the lineart; I'm saying they look like they aren't touching the lineart. All I'm asking is for you to add just a little bit more of the colour at the top of the stripes where they touch the lineart. No, it's not that big of a deal, but I think it would make the charart look better. I wouldn't have followed up on the suggestion otherwise :3 llwildheartl05:27 Tue Oct 11

Umm.... I can't. I made my stripes in a way where if you zoom in, you only see blurry lines. How can I fix something that kills my eyes if I even try? jayce  05:29, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fair enough. It was only a friendly suggestion :3 Blur the earpink a tad (just a tiny bit and it'll be perfect) llwildheartl05:31 Tue Oct 11

Re-uploaded. Two days. This is a record. I think I'm getting better at this. XD jayce  05:34, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I -swearwordhere- love this, Cloudy. Which is why this deserves a CBA? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    15:18, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  15:31, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (A) ~ Approved

Leopardstar.apprenticeHere she is. Not bad in my opinion. Comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    18:34, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink match the leader image, and lighten the spots to match as well. jayce  18:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading also. SplookMavinotp♥ 18:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the highlights, and can you make the highlights on the shoulder just a tad bit bigger? Oh, and blur the ear pink. x) Misty! 19:16, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I was gonna do this image. Oh well x) Blur the stripes on the tail. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 19:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the markings along the chest match the leader image. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:49, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I lightened the markings, mathced the earpink, and blurred it. I blurred the tail stripes and darkened the shading, and blurred it. I think I kinda made the shading worse.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    07:24, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make her front paws a bit more darker, (match the leader image with it, make them brown I guess xD) and blur the shading. Misty! 20:08, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I blurred the shading, but don't think changes are showing that well.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    07:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

The background should be transparent. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:15, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

When I try to make it transparent, even the lineart turns white, can somebody help me with this?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    08:54, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

What program do you use? If it's pixlr I can help. Silverhmm 13:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it is pixlr.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    13:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Just make the black transparent even if it takes away the lineart. If it does, add another layer of the apprentice blank and make the white transparent with the fuzzy select tool. Ivyheart =P 16:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Stoney, if you are uploading it from your PC, that's the problem. When you go to select a blank, you click on it, right click, and select "Properties". Once you do that, copy the URL (it'll most likely start was warriors.wikia). When you go on pixlr, select "Open from URL", then paste the URL into that box and click "Ok". Silverhmm 12:09, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Good. Try to make it look like the others and also make the ear pink smaller and more highlights. Where is the light coming from? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:27, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink against the pelt. Sandstorm - What exactly do you always mean by "more highlights"? Do you mean brighten them? Make them more vivid? Highlights are optional, and it's the artist's choice if s/he were to use them or not. Cloudskye, for example, never uses them. xD SplookMavinotp♥ 22:34, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

What's the fuzzy select tool?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:08, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I tried what Ivyheart said, I managed to add a white layer with lineart, but I couldn't make it transparent, made the earpink smaller, but I tried to redo the eye, and fill in a white pixel, but I couldn't fill in some certain places, or use the paint brush, and I don't know why. Can somebody do this for me?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:33, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and re-uploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:34, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the background transparent, blur the shading under her chin, move the highlight down her shoulder and tone it down, even out the shading on her back, and enlarge the highlights on her haunch and tail. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:08, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want me to make the background transparent for you? Ivyheart =P 03:16, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yes because I failed to do it. :(  ☯Stoneclaw☯    10:23, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I made the backround transparent and fixed the eye, blurred the shading on the chin, and enlarged the highlights on her tail and haunch. User:Stoneclaw33/sig 18:26, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:18, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I defined the earpink and shading, changes are hardly showing, are the highlights too bright?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:14, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more around the belly and haunch area. The highlights are fine, just blend them in a little more. SplookMavinotp♥ 20:34, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - well, I fixed the highlights, and defined the shading. The markings were blurred to much so I fixed that too.

The spots are a bit too dark, and this needs to be named Leopardstar.apprentice.png. jayce  15:28, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Just define some of the spots. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 17:44, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

The spots look a bit blotchy, so try to fix that. Also make her paws golden/brown to match her leader image. 20:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Okay, major change in image 'cause the markings were hard too fix, and I thought the shading and highlights needed major blurring. So I redid the whole image. I think this one looks way better than the other one. I renamed the image, and the highlights didn't help me with my charart, so I used very little highlights, and I made the paws darker.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    08:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and darken the shading and blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:11, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Okay, I think the earpink still needs defining  ☯Stoneclaw☯    13:25, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

It does. Define it more, and it should be ready. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:53, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Defined the earpink.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:11, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more bigger and triangular, and it also looks as if its touching the lineart. 23:51, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Made the earpink bigger.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 17:52, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

I really hate to disturb this, this is a great charart but the highlights look like they need to be blurred a bit more. Robz You make me feel good! 07:36, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Er, Am I supposed to work on it while it's on CBA? I don't know what to do.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    08:38, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Just here to answer a question.. Now its up for approval again, so you still work on it, since someone gave a request. (or something else xD) And can you define the ear pink a bit more? :3 It looks awesome! 13:50, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, Stoneclaw, you're supposed to work on it when someone suggests something during CBA. If someone comments, the image goes back to "For Approval", thus cancelling out the CBA. jayce  06:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Now I know. Re-Uploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    12:11, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Opps, bold time stamp. *Oops  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:14, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Very nice image, Stoneclaw. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:05, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (A) ~ Approved

Onestar.apprenticeI can't help but say that this is a fail. First tabby, second image. I pulled the colors from his leader image. Starshine Waiting for Winter! 04:28, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Put some dapples in to match the warrior and deputy art. Shelly For a limited time only 04:30, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; I added Dapples. Wait for Changes to Show... Starshine Waiting for Winter! 04:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is not a fail, it's awesome! Add more stripes to the haunch and define the tail stripes. Ivyheart =P 04:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Thanks... Starshine Waiting for Winter! 04:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This looks nice! There's some waste around most of the charart - a thin line. You can see it if you tilt the screen a bit. erase that please. LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 07:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Niceeee. x3 Define the shading. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 13:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Changes aren't showing. Starshine Waiting for Winter! 14:58, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The color almost looks kind of off to me. Iveh Yo! 21:20, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think the base brown is too dark. Try lightening it just a tad. Maybe it's just the shading...but I don't think so. jayce  18:23, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know the white muzzle is on his other images, but he was never described with one so can you get rid of it? ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

If it is too dark, in GIMP (or maybe another thing) you can go to 'Color' and then 'Brightness-Contrast..' and you can lighten the whole image without some serious work. Ivyheart =P 01:09, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights and this is good! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 12:54, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Again, highlights are optional =) Just define your light parts (where it's not shaded) Iveh Yo! 21:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for not being on. I'll work on it now. Starshine Waiting for Winter! 19:22, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:38, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Starshine Waiting for Winter! 22:27, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste ❀ wildheart ❀ 22:45, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink maybe, and darken the colors on the tail or something so they match with the rest of the image. ;P AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 23:31, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the highlights into the pelt. I don't want to use blur because I think it's already been blurred a lot. Blur it if you can or smudge it. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 00:29, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

In all the updated versions, I cannot see the white muzzle removed. If you did, I am so sorry, but if not, make his muzzle brown, please. Iveh Yo! 01:19, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make is tail color resemble his pelt color. Silverhmm 20:46, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm going to be leaving the wiki due to a lot of work. If anyone wants to take this over, they can. :3 Starshine Waiting for Winter! 21:01, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Changing the heading. If someone wants this, they may have it.If not, I'll decline it later. jayce  05:19, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. --Leafstrike-- 17:53, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 18:10, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah lighten it a lot and also more highlights goood! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:17, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 23:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thin the stripes a bit more, define them within the highlights, define the mottles, and define the ear-pink. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:47, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid it to match the leader. --Leafstrike-- 17:30, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:13, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 00:48, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I can not see the earpink. Make it darker and define it. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 13:52, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 17:07, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. Blurring it less might help. Ivyheart =P 14:04, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it's fine now. --Leafstrike-- 17:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink more, and this will be ready. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 17:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful image, Moon. CBA? jayce  19:29, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt CBA D: but I think you need to brighten the earpink; I can barely see it at all. I know, I know, this contradicts what was said before, but I really can't see it. At least define it. llwildheartl04:22 Thu Oct 6

Reuploaded The first time ever someone interrupted my CBA. But I'm not offended xD. --Leafstrike-- 18:01, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten it a tad more? llwildheartl21:32 Mon Oct 10

Should this have a white muzzle? Or is that just because of age? xD And the ear pink looks odd, can you brighten it a bit? (weird because people were asking you to darken it xD) But just a bit, not a lot. :3 {{SUBST:Mistypebble/sig}} 01:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:50, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded @Scarletwind, if I redden it, it won't match the leader image. And I hate you, earpink. --Leafstrike-- 01:59, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Moon, join the party. It's not bad on other lineart, but the apprentices are a pain. It doesn't match his leader image yet - in fact, I still can't see it. jayce  14:42, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took it from the leader image... again. T_T --Leafstrike-- 17:34, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:35, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:12, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream (Ki) ~ Approved

Silverstream.kitFinally! An opening! Minnowkit was approved, so I sprang for the next available character, which happened to be Silverstream's kit. Comments? Twilight <3 Mangos, Volleyball, and Horses 05:13, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Very cute! :3 Define the shading Silverhmm 12:16, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Adorable! :3 Lighten the nose a bit. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:56, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Re-Uploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 14:01, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Try do make the nose gray not black and add some swirls to it Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:59, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm... that made no sense :P Define the shading a tad more on the paws. SplookMavinotp♥ 15:56, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

She's meaning make it look like the old queen, she must not know we re-did her queen images. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:12, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Yeah, they re-did the queen, Sandstorm. Just check. Kept the tabby stripes the same, made the nosepink gray-ish, Defined shading on paws. Wait for the changes to show Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫

Define the tabby-M on her head. It was made a prominent feature in CP, as her forehead markings match those of Willowbreeze. Shelly For a limited time only 17:35, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 17:45, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

darken the highlights a bit. Looks great =) ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 00:16, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I forgot the highlights in this charart, so I can't necessarily darken them ;3 I thought it looked kind of good without them after I saved it... :P Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:36, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make her stripes like that of And make sure you make her tail-tip black like on her warrior image as linked above. Also her highlights/normal pelt and her shading are wayyyyyy too seperate and defined.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 09:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:58, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Add more stripes to match her other chararts. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:03, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for not working on it...Twilight's a bad girl...Anyway, I'll work on it now. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:51, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded The new stripes are smaller and I lightened the shading a tad because I couldn't really see the new stripes... Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:08, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty Twilight. Rainface<3 22:33, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes. =) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

@Rain Thanks

@Misty Will do, I just need to finish up with my school work before I do that. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:16, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Changes ain't aren't showing yet~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 16:33, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Sorry, Twilight has a tendency to say ain't. If I ever say it, excuse me... =(

Define the earpink, and make the stripes thinner. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:42, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I will, but at the moment, my computer is being fixed, and I have lost the pen to my tablet. I'll work on it soon. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:33, October 6, 2011 (UTC) Also, is it just me or is the font looking a bit big? =(

Are you still working on this, Twilight? -ScarletwindLisanna 01:59, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I am. Sorry, for not working on it. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:27, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:40, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely. I see nothing wrong. llwildheartl23:45 Tue Oct 11

Make her stripes blacker and thinner and add more, and add one above her nose to to match her warrior image.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 00:55, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Kitty, there's only so much you can fit on an image before it becomes cramped. Although you're right about the stripe on the nose. jayce  00:57, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded The changes aren't showing, yet. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:15, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce  14:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:12, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnbright (Ki) - Approved

Dawnbright.kitOk, i was little confused with Darkstripe but its ok, I start working on this cat today's morning, ok this is my work...its my first kit Leaf-storm,19:02,October 4,2011 (UTC)

Pretty, darken the shading. Rainface<3 19:12, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Awwwww <3 she's so cute Define the ear-pink. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:20, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Blur where the ginger and white meet on the belly, please. jayce  19:46, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

And the tail as well :3 SplookMavinotp♥ 20:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail a lighter gray. Silverhmm 20:47, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little...neon. Did you take the color from her warrior? It seems a bit off, I apologize. But the color is a bit hard on the eyes. It's very cute though, don't get me wrong. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 20:59, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye color the same as the other pixils, I don't think he was described with a different eye color at any time, so I'm pretty sure it should be the same as the main ones. Also lighten the whole image, it's a bit dark now for dark grey, it looks almost black. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:38, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, there was an edit conflict, and I copied the wrong on of my posts. XD Anyways, it seems like the ears are lighter than the rest orf the image. Is it just me? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:46, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I darkened shadings, defined ear pink blurred white and made something with tail and darkened ears, comments? Leaf-storm,11:04,October 5,2011 (UTC)

Epic! Blur the shading on the back paw, the paw farthest from us on our right, it's left. Rainface<3 18:13, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlight on the tail. Looks great! Specklestream Let it Snow! 22:08, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded- Leaf-storm,11:38,October 6,2011 (UTC)

Tone down the brightness of the ginger a bit, so it matches the warrior image. llwildheartl22:37 Thu Oct 6

reuploaded- Leaf-storm,11:39,October 7,2011 (UTC)

DEfine the shading, it may just be me, but I can hardly tell where the light source is. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 12:43, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

ehm..reuploaded ... Leaf-storm,14:09,October 8,2011 (UTC)

This still needs to be more of a pastel orange. Look at the warrior image for reference. llwildheartl00:00 Mon Oct 10

reuploaded.. I still cant find the right color Leaf-storm,13:58,October 10,2011 (UTC)

No it looks good now :3 Blur the earpink just a little bit. llwildheartl05:18 Tue Oct 11

reuploaded Leaf-storm,13:51,October 11,2011 (UTC)

Its more than 24 hours without new comment.. any more suggestions? Leaf-storm,14:48,October 13,2011 (UTC)

Yeah. I got a comment for you.... CBA? (xD) jayce  19:24, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hey! Good comment, thanks xD Leaf-storm,19:56,October 13,2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I hate to interrupt CBA, but the shading on her looks too bright. Can you make the shading color look more like her warrior version? Iveh Yo! 15:17, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded- last try, I really dont know how can L match it correctly Leaf-storm,16:28,October 14,2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:36, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 01:07, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Q) - Approved

Willowbreeze.queenI know, I forgot the M stripe on her forehead. I'll add that when I re-upload it. Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 03:16, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be on the other side of the tail, if you're matching the warrior version. The apprentice version isn't consistant... =/ jayce  07:39, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is a little too bright. Darken it. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 08:05, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a tad lighter. Silverhmm 00:05, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just mee but the her right eyes is looking a tad unatural. Rainfacestar Vampire time! 02:06, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:04, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge and define the earpink a tad :3 llwildheartl05:11 Tue Oct 11

Aren't the stripes supposed to match Silverstream's stripes? I'm not sure, but I saw her other versions on the tweak list for that. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not sure about her markings, I checked the book and I didn't see anything about her having markings like her mother. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:57, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Blur the chest highlight a tad. SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 00:50, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Uhh... There is no chest highlight... -ScarletwindLisanna 02:29, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty. Can you blur the stripes and shading a tad more, though? This is excellent. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:15, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:04, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the chest. Looks wonderful! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:33, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:55, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is just sitting here and taking up space so, CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 00:32, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:07, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Millie (Alt. KP) - Approved

Millie.kittypet.altOk, so I took all the colors directly from the cover of the manga and copied the stripes exactly (you all know how I hate triangle tabbies, but it's like her being described with those stripes exactly so what the hey?) It is a major change from her gray pelt. (silently lol'ing as people scrabble to reserve her loner alt.) Anywhoo, comments for improvement? Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 00:04, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blr the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:05, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a tad. Lurvely <3 llwildheartl00:07 Mon Oct 10

Wow, this is really pretty! Make the ear pink smaller. --Silverhmm 00:09, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded before Silvereye's comment, I'll go do that now Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 00:11, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok done Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 00:18, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think she was seen with white paws as well. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:21, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, it was a light tanish cream color for her paws. Silverhmm 00:27, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm let me go look. I only have the first one of the mangas. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 00:30, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Really like this one! ^-^ Once you get the white paws, can you blur the shading on the front leg a bit more? 00:42, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I thought alternates from the mangas weren't allowed to be done. I once tried to put up Russetfur's white deputy alt from the manga, and it was declined.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 00:47, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

That was a long time ago, times have changed. Mapleshade got her manga alt so there's no reason that Mille shouldn't. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:03, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Your's was probably posted before it was decided they could be done. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 01:03, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 02:01, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Does that mean Leafstar gets one? Ivyheart =P 02:47, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

None that I agree with, because her main description is a brown tabby, the only changed color is cream vs. white, and if Leafstar had been originally made like I pictured her, there'd be little difference aside from the white/cream. This is kind of a debated topic among me and the leads right now though xD Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 03:29, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hey! Awesome! I love it. Blur ear pink..(Leaf-storm is trying make Leafstar's alt heh xD) Leaf-storm,14:00,October 10,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! And why does everyone seem to think she needs one? I, for one, don't. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 16:19, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstar? Alt? I think she must get one Leaf-storm,19:17,October 10,2011 (UTC)

Must I copy-paste what I wrote above again? If you feel that strongly about it then start a forum or a new section on the talk page, this isn't helping Millie's image any xD Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 21:35, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Please dont start a forum Leafstar isnt getting one. The ear pink shouldnt be touching the lineart. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:38, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and sorry, I just don't want to start a thing on my image about who gets one and who doesn't. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 21:44, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a TINY bit. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 15:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded On a side note, my signature is shaming me with its messed up timestamp once again -_- Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 15:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Dull the earpink a bit. SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 00:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Darkened it a tad. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 17:59, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks sorta crooked....Sky- Stealing all ur candy 23:54, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 01:17, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and blur or smudge the stripes on the head. This is amazing! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:39, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

It is centered though...Iveh Yo! 23:38, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I only smudged her facial stripe a little otherwise it'd get lost in the color Iveh Yo! 15:03, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Let's go CBA on this. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:43, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:07, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt. Q) ~ Approved

Mistystar.queen.alt Comments? I redid it, and also renamed it. It needs to be queen.alt in order for the template to work correctly. jayce  16:41, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tiny bit and make the earpink larger. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:30, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shading is fine, I think. I did fix the ear pink though. Re-uploaded. jayce  17:44, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is bootiful. Maybe dull the earpink a 'tiny bit' MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think the ear pink looks good, however, if more people agree with you, then I'll work on it. jayce  17:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, dull it a bit, and define the shading on the tail and haunch. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:33, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  21:58, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more along her back and belly. 'Tis lovely, hun. :3 Leggo 🏈 02:58, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

She was described with dense fur, you think this should be longhaired? -ScarletwindLisanna 03:28, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Well, dense could mean thick, but not always long haired. She was also described as sleek, so that's why she's still shorthaired. Re-uploaded.jayce  04:23, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

In the Forest of Secrets, she was described with thick fur... SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:24, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thick does not always mean longhaired. We discussed this before, when we decided the whole River and WindClan pelt issue. jayce  02:00, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it just means her short fur is patted together and well, thick. It's like if your hair is thick, it doesn't necessarily have to be short. This shall stay as short furred. SplookMavinotp♥ 02:03, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great, Cloudy! Let's go CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 00:34, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:07, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Ki) - Approved

Loudbelly.kit Comments? Specklestream Let it Snow! 12:02, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Just added the section in. :3 Sky- Trick and gimmie candy 12:06, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little. Ivyheart =P 14:28, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 19:01, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks to brown. Make it pink. Silverhmm 00:03, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 16:58, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a tad. It's too candy-floss pink XD llwildheartl21:45 Mon Oct 10

Re-Uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 17:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely. I see nothing wrong. llwildheartl23:40 Tue Oct 11

Can you move the ear pink up about a pixel on ---> ear? It looks kinda odd. Other then that, job well done, Speckle! jayce  14:53, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks XD and Re-Uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 15:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:40, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, SquirrelFlame. This is lovely, Specklestream. Comments before approval? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:21, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

None. Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:04, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (ki) ~ Approved

Yellowfang.kit Aww, she looks happy for once. Anyway, Yellowfang was mentioned with her kit and apprentice names in the Warriors App, if anyone was curious. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 01:16, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful Shelly. Maybe darken the shading on the tail and on the legs. Amazing! Rainfacestar Vampire time! 01:26, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

So purdy. :) There is some waste above her ears. Ivyheart =P 02:40, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

She looks...odd without torn ears or the flattened face. xD Blur the where the shading meets the highlight in the chest. `Sky is better than candy 02:52, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You went and challenged me there, Sky. I gave her a Persian muzzle. Yup, just like that. Blurred shading. Forgot to darken it. I'll do it next time I upload. Shelly For a limited time only 03:38, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'd take the lines around the mouth away: they just make her look like she has a mustache:3 you can't really tell it's supposed to be a muzzle. llwildheartl06:23 Mon Oct 10

What wildheart said. It makes her look like a bulldog o3o. --Silverhmm 10:53, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes....does look...odd. Sky is better than candy 11:23, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

This looks amazing. But I still can't read the font >.< ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 14:06, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the muzzle and lightened the shading. If I can't do it that way, how can I make the muzzle look flat? Shelly For a limited time only 17:17, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not really sure, anyway the nose looks bigger than the kit blank. This is cute! MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 19:03, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

@Loudsplash It's supposed to be like that, since she's a Persian. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 19:40, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add very faint, dark gray lines where you had the original black ones. Silverhmm 21:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I was watching Cats 101, the Persian one, and persians' eyes, nose, and mouth all line up. So please make it like that. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:17, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, only purebred persians have faces like that, but since I tried it and it just looked funny... for the moment, and for your entertainment: Yellowkit knows your secret! XD Shelly For a limited time only 23:48, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Dear StarClan....xD I would blur the shading a tad more. Sky is better than candy 02:07, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oi vay.... *facepalm* Darken the shading a bit. jayce  03:22, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Haha, sorry. Couldn't help myself. Okay, fixed the face, darkened the shading, and blurred it as far as it would go. Shelly For a limited time only 03:46, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste around the paws and beneath the tail. Specklestream Let it Snow! 05:59, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Got rid of all the waste I could find. Shelly For a limited time only 17:02, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should make the muzzle as it was when you first posted it. And god...Yellowkit as a purebred Persian looks like she's going to slay me. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:06, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's that? I made it as close to a persian muzzle as I could. Shelly For a limited time only 02:13, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Kay, I'm going to be gone until Monday afternoon. I personally think the image is done, but feel free to comment or CBA, but do not take it over. Ta. Shelly For a limited time only 17:43, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

She's so cute! ;D Blur the shading more. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:37, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Managed to get on a computer. Squirrelflame, I can't blur the shading any more. I've blurred it with the tool set as high as it could go. Shelly For a limited time only 01:15, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? (I still use the traditional's not right throwing away the ancient ways x3) princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:18, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

None. Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:07, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Alt. Ki) ~ Approved

Sweetpaw.kit.alt Mmm... I'm indifferent about this one. I based her stripes after Brindleface, who is also a dappled tabby, so there shouldn't be many complaints about her pattern. Leggo 🏈 02:54, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Not sure about this color, but I think you should redden the earpink. Cute! Ivyheart =P 03:59, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, redden the earpink and lighten the stripes a 'tiny' bit. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:58, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, Darken the nose, and blur the stripes. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:22, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Gracias, Ivy. :3 Leggo 🏈 02:55, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing XD Move the ear-pink up a few pixels. Specklestream Let it Snow! 21:18, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. :) Leggo 🏈 18:41, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:15, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste along the right side of the charart. Iveh Yo! 22:36, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. In the last hour, too... Leggo 🏈 22:43, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy's comment had nolthing to do with the actual pixel itself. So, going on with CBA. An hour left. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    22:57, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Time has passed according to Icestorm. Approved. Iveh Yo! 01:45, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Floss (KP) ~ Approved

Floss.kittypet Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 04:13, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty! Can you blur the design on her collar a teensy bit? It looks a tad bit hard-edged. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 04:15, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Just curious, because she gets a kittypet, would that mean the others do too? Like, Daisy and Smokey? Ivyheart =P 04:38, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Yes it does but Wildheart already has Smokey reserved. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:42, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Daisy? xD Ivyheart =P 04:43, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

No one has her, I don't think. Four edit conflicts. Oi! ...Darken the shading, please. jayce  04:45, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

I snatched Daisy. Anyway, the shading on the flipped ear is a little dark, it looks too gray. Lighten it, please? :) Ivyheart =P 04:46, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Since you said that, let me clarify my comment. Darken the shading on the back. jayce  04:47, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 18:00, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty ^^. Could you add a bit of ear pink to her other ear? Silv