Skyheart (A) - Approved

Skyheart.apprenticeYep, here's Skyheart at her apprentice age. I'll blur the stripes more if I need to. Silverhmm 12:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I forgot tehear pink, so I added it. Changesaren't showing yet. Silverhmm

Very nice. Hm, lighten and blur the earpink a little. ShadewingBlades of the Night 12:27, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

First of all, the heading should be Skyheart (A) - For Approval. Second of all, blur the stripes a lot x3 SnowyXPerry = Serry! 13:49, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Add another stripe right where the haunch starts. This is great! Ivyheart =P 15:18, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I changed the heading for you :) Blur the earpink as well, and define the shading. Splook it's a long way down. 15:33, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more light stripes, nice work! Leaf-storm,16:39,September 18,2011 (UTC)

There is waste all around the charart Iveh Yo! 21:22, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

blur the earpink --Bloo!yo 02:54, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add smaller stripes ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 08:54, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it when I get home from school. Silverhmm

Darken the shading a bit. Shelly For a limited time only 23:18, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it on Saturday. School, y u keep me busy? Dx Silverhmm

Blur the stripes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:30, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink.And theres waste around the image --Bloo!yo 01:25, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Added a few light stripes like Leafstorm suggested. I blurred the stripes a lot, defined the shading more, and instead of lightening the ear-pink I made it more pink than brownish-red. Changes should be showing. Silverhmm

Sharpen the edges of the stripes a bit. Looks better :3 llwildheartl07:11 Sep 25 Sun

Add some stripes to the back legs. Lookin' good ;3 SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:59, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added stripes on the back leg. I didn't know what you meant by sharpening the stripes, so I didn't do that. (Also, this is kinda off-topic. But can someone fix my siggy so the time part doesn't show?) Silverhmm

Sorry, I meant smudge the edges of the stripes so they look a bit sharper, and then blur them out so it's smooth. I dunno about the siggie, though. When mine was doing that, I just deleted the category and put it on again. llwildheartl06:26 Mon Sep 26

Ok, before I do anything else, is there anything else that should be edited? --Silverhmm 11:13, September 27, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the earpink a bit and blur it. Ivyheart =P 23:34, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made it lighter and blurred it more. Changes aren't showing yet. --Silverhmm 00:43, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The changes are now showing. --Silverhmm 19:49, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Should I brighten the ear pink/make it look more pink? --Silverhmm 14:51, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Make the ear pink brighter. Comments? --Silverhmm 11:27, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are now showing. --Silverhmm 19:21, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is way too birght. Tone it down and darken it the center it more and blur it. --Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:11, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Cloudskye for fixing the ear pink, since it was being a pain. Comments? --Silverhmm 20:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Anything? Sorry for sounding impatient. Silverhmm 20:46, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you take all the colors from her warrior image? The pelt, stripe, and earpink colors don't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I took all the colors from her warrior image Paleclaw. Silverhmm 10:48, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, nvm. Silverhmm 20:34, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please? Anything? Silverhmm 11:31, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look a little stiff. Perhaps blur them a little? Not smudge. --Splook it's a long way down. 19:12, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I've been blurring them, the smudge always comes out messy when I do that x3. --Silverhmm 23:58, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? I'd really like to work on my next charart... --Silverhmm 23:24, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Patience is a virtue. Darken the earpink and blur the stripes. llwildheartl23:38 Sun Oct 9

I'm withdrawing this. --Silverhmm 20:36, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Changed the heading. If someone wants to take over, they may. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:37, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

K, I steals it. XD I hate it, honestly. -.- Sky- Stealing all ur candy 03:18, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Its not bad! Just blur the stripes more, and define the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:38, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh...I think I just made it worse. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 21:57, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks good! Just blur the stripes on the legs a little. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 17:32, October 13, 2011 (U

Re-uploaded. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 19:36, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more to match her other versions. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:22, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 23:58, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

I like it just darken and blur the ear pink and good to go --Acornfur 01:48, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

I took the colour off her warrior image, and I don't want to change it. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 01:52, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and it'll be purr-fect (HA. See what I did thar? :P) llwildheartl10:57 Sun Oct 16

Re-uploaded. Such a lame joke...xD Sky- Stealing all ur candy 12:27, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me Skystar. I see nothing wrong. CBA? Iveh Yo! 00:41, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:32, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Daisy (KP) ~ Approved

Daisy.kittypetDaisy looks good in blue. I like her collar. Comments? Ivyheart =P 14:46, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little. This is marvelous, darling, simply marvelous! ;) Rainlegs 14:49, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Her pupils look a little weird xD Try doing the eyes like Smudge's kittypet charart. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 14:56, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is stunning XD Darken the shading on the back a tad. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 15:49, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't change the eyes because really you can make them look how you want. However if it becomes a problem I can change it. Ivyheart =P 16:16, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well, she kinda looks a little cross-eyed... I would just move the white in her left eye to her right a little to make it better. :3 Rainlegs 20:47, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yea. This is BEAUTIFUL ivy! blur the shading JUST a tad. Rainfacestar Vampire time! 21:38, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, when was Daisy ever a kittypet? She was a loner, then a queen. Shelly For a limited time only 23:13, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

From re-reading the second arc, I've never seen her mentioned as one. Silverhmm 23:31, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Up above, Iceheart mentioned that she would get one, as with Smoky and Floss. I'm not sure how they would qualify to receive one, though.. Rainlegs 23:34, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes but they take food from twolegs and have been called kittypets multiple times. I already had this discussion with the other leads and we all agreed theyd get one. End of story. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:46, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright then, Iceheart's the boss. Refocus the pupils, it looks like she's about to pass out. Shelly For a limited time only 00:33, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pfffft XD Anywhooo define the earpink! Nice work! -Bloo!yo 02:12, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done, done, and done. You're right, now that I look at it, it does look like she's gonna pass out. Sorry about that. Did I do the eyes right? I'm pretty sure it matches Sharpclaw's but I'll check anyway. Ivyheart =P 02:46, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. This is beautiful! Rainey 05:29, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink just a tad. llwildheartl06:22 Mon Oct 10

Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 14:05, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely. I see nothing wrong :3 llwildheartl23:32 Tue Oct 11

Darken the shading a bit. Other than that, this is wonderful!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    12:32, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shading's fine. Comments before approval? Appledash 01:11, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, this is GORGEOUS, but she looks cross eyed. Do you think you could fix that? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 04:47, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading a bit. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:40, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

How can I make her not cross eyed? Ivyheart =P 00:26, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind, I mirrored Sharpclaw's eyes. And I blurred the shoulder shading. Ivyheart =P 00:34, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:41, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

The haunch highlight should me more to the right, not extending onto her back. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:33, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Seems we're on a roll here. xD Anyway, Reuploaded. Did that. Changes probably aren't showing, but will when I publish this. We shall see. :3 Ivyheart =P 00:37, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful Ivyheart. It's weird that it would be CBA'd and then someone would comment XD. Any way, maybe blur the haunch highlights just a tad. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! Might bite underneath the moonlight 00:43, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It's all right. Criticism is good. Ivyheart =P 16:05, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. Iveh Yo! 00:43, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:34, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Smoky (KP) ~ Approved

Smoky.kittypet Comments? llwildheartl03:07 Tue Oct 11

Define the shading on the gray area of his rump xD Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 03:11, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded teehee rump. llwildheartl03:18 Tue Oct 11

^_^ Blur the gray patch on his face. Ivyheart =P 04:58, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 06:26, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

And the shading by his belly. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 22:17, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded llwildheartl23:30 Tue Oct 11

Make the ear-pink a tad pinker. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 15:44, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded llwildheartl23:50 Wed Oct 12

This is gorgeous. Define the earpink a little. User:Shadewing/Sig 14:51, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:35, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded llwildheartl05:34 Sun Oct 16

And maybe the highlights just a bit, they seem sorta...hard. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 12:29, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Don't have highlights, but I blurred the shading. Dunno if it made much of a difference... Comments? llwildheartl22:59 Sun Oct 16

Simply loverleh, madame. Define the shading on the head just a bit. --Splook it's a long way down. 20:10, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded llwildheartl23:34 Mon Oct 17

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:50, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

None, approved. --Splook it's a long way down. 01:11, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Ki) ~ Approved

Leopardstar.kit My first charart. I don't think it's good. Comments? OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall 3:25, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the markings to match her other images. Color-pick it off directly, it should help Iveh Yo! 03:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Ivyheart =P 04:43, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the base pelt color to match her leader image. (Wait. I think my eyes are playing tricks on me. I dunno...) Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:24, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Use the female kit blank. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:28, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the shading more. Silverhmm 11:08, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now I think there are two options to the blank, you can either re-do it on the female kit blank or add the eyelashes yourself. Also, the spots need to match Leopardstar's leader image. This is really cute!MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 12:45, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

It'd be easier to just add in the eye lashed, or add a layer that has the female kit blank on top of it. You don't have to redo it. Darken and emphasize the shading. :) Atelda insert vague subtext here 12:50, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye color a little different then the pelt. Splook it's a long way down. 21:39, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The spots are brown, make them gold. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, match all the colors and designs from her leader version. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:44, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I also want to mention that I did color pick the colors off her leader image, so I didn't change the colors yet. It could be just the shading and the highlights, but I don't blame you. At least the main color is. I need help doing this. Do I have to re-do it? OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall

23:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to, since I don't think you can change the spots without redoing them, and they need to be golden... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:53, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah they look sorta like the warrior and deputy except a bit lighter. It would prob take less word to just re-do it..MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:16, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded hmmm.. OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall 02:20, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

On her leader charart, it shows her with golden/brown paws.. Can you fix that? Misty! 13:15, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The paws were already colored.. looks better now anyway. OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall

02:22, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 04:13, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall 00:21, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job so far! But can you make the right ear pink a bit more triangular? User:USERNAME/sig 20:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall

00:00, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the spots just a tiny bit darker, make the spots on the chest more round, and brighten the earpink a bit. I really like this! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and the highlights are blotchy. Blur them so they're smoothed out. Appledash 22:22, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I need to blur the shading and highlights more, but I'll wait. OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall

06:28, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, the shading and highlights are still a little blotchy, so blur them a little more. Other than that, this is looking good!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:42, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yes! I'm finally getting somewhere here! OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall

08:05, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the paws' shading some more. This is getting lovely. :3 Rainlegs 17:38, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall

04:24, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the spots some. -ſceheartBlah blah 17:54, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. llwildheartl23:45 Sun Oct 9

Define the earpink. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    07:13, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't like how that one spot near the edge of the pelt at the top of the body is darker than the other spots OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall

05:15, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is really blotchy, blur it.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    07:55, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the spots more. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:30, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pink, and define it. User:Shadewing/Sig 14:57, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall 00:46, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:26, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Her paws look blotchy. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:32, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Loudsplash, the whole point of constructive criticism it to tell someone what to do, not what is wrong. So instead of telling Owl that the paws look blotchy, tell her to blur the paw shading or smooth it out or whatever you want her to do. llwildheartl23:43 Mon Oct 17

Looks fine to me. Repeating CBA. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:46, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:12, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur (Alt.Ki) - Approved

File:Stonefur.alt.kit.png So, I'm walking on thin ice here, but comments? Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:50, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:56, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and the earpink are fine, I can see them clearly. Blur the tail shading just a bit. Splook it's a long way down. 21:13, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Add some light highlights. Silverhmm 21:14, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights aren't mandatory, Silver. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:16, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Only suggesting because she's half Riverclan, and they are described as glossy. *zips mouth* Silverhmm 21:18, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

All RiverClan cats are described as glossy? I know they're longhaired, but glossy as well? o.o Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:20, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Well, in the article for RiverClan it does say their 'long fur and glossy coats.' But I don't know if tonefur would qualify anyway since he's half ThunderClan. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 22:17, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpinks smaller. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:23, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

On the RiverClan glossy coat thing, some of them do, some of them don't. I think the long-haired ones tend to have more glossy coats than shorthairs. But it's not my decision. Anyways, define the earpink a little. User:Shadewing/Sig 23:01, October 13, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Well, like it said on I think either Code or Cats of the Clans, Mistystar said that it takes a while for the RiverClan cats to get their glossy, long fur. But, anyways... *fail eyesight here* Can you define the eye color a bit? *fail eyesight again* Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 01:11, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think that they should be by default, glossy. In any case, I don't think Stonefur specifically should be glossy as he is ThunderClan. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:20, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Exactly. That would mean forcing people who make RiverClan cats to use highlights. And a LOT of tweaking.... >.>;;;Define the ear pink a tad. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:03, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yup. Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:09, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 08:38, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Needs a gray nose. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:39, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done. Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:32, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eye colour just a tad and brighten the earpink. llwildheartl10:53 Sun Oct 16

Reuploaded. D: Silly earpink :P Atelda insert vague subtext here 19:22, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. CBA? Iveh Yo! 21:34, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:12, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Harley (Alt Ro) ~ Approved

Harley.rogue.alt2 Gray brown is different then gray and brown. Comments? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:03, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Haha. Chocolate kitty! Define the shading a bit more. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:05, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Power to the Choco-Kitteh! Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:21, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Om nom nom. :3 Make the ear pink a tad larger. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 10:49, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make him a tad grayer... if you know what I mean. XD llwildheartl10:51 Sun Oct 16

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 14:31, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's a white pixel in the underbelly line, fix that. --Silverhmm 21:21, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The stray pixel is on every rogue lineart. Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:26, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

This looks beautiful. I see nothing wrong. llwildheartl02:15 Tue Oct 18

Thanks, Colleen! CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:36, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you CBA your own image? 0.o ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:15, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I've done it before. I don't usually do it unless I haven't gotten any constructive comments in two days. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 15:11, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 19:18, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Russetfur (Alt.W) - Approved

Russetfur.warrior.altI'm quite fond of this one! Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 01:30, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I am also quite fond of this one. xD Define the shading a little more from the pelt, though. Ivyheart =P 01:40, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:18, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wooow awesome!! Define ear-pink! Leaf-storm,9:10,October 16,2011 (UTC)

I like it! Lighten the white paws, the shadings making it a bit dark. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 13:28, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 20:55, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Her swirls and just her pelt make me think of velvet...xD Anyways, awesome job, perhaps you could define the shading on her head. I love it! Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:34, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Atelda! -ScarletwindLisanna 12:05, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I love it. Brighten the highlights and if there are no highlights move the shading back from where highlights should be. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:52, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Omg this is beautiful! I love it! Though I think the stripes on her tail should be alittle more curvy to match the body. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 00:34, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Starshine, I think the tail stripes are fine. I designed them that way. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:51, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm gonna go CBA on this; it's only taking up space. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:32, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:32, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. L.) - Approved

Bluestar.leader.altSorry for the momentary lack of activity, I'm trying to regain my composure. Anyway, since she was described pale in The Sight, it's her leader that is pale. I rather like how she looks. The color comes from the muzzle of her leader but I lightened it even more. Comments for approval? Iveh Yo! 22:21, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear nick exactly the same as her leader image. It's not pointy enough. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:23, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 22:27, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a scar as well, correct? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:29, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Errrg I had it but when I undid the ear edit guess I undid the scar. >.> Stupid me Iveh Yo! 22:30, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the edges of the shading need blurring, like the left side of her haunch and chest as it looks like there is a line that seperates the shading. Also there's a faint miscoloring on the top and near the tip of her tail. It might be a scar, (I haven't really checked her other images) but if it is a scar you may want to darken it a bit. Love the color by the way and awesome job! Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:32, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, and I also redid the scar to match exactly. Iveh Yo! 02:42, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the dodge and the scar. This is really pretty!!!! MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the dodge? o.0 I have no idea what you mean by that. I'll blur the scar but please clarify your other statement. Iveh Yo! 21:04, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think Loudsplash might've meant the highlights by "dodge", because highlights are done by the dodge tool a lot far as I know. I use the dodge for them. Anyway, yeah, blur the scar a bit and the shading on the neck and <---- shoulder place just below the neck are a tad blotchy.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 22:58, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Actually blur the scar more than a bit. I saw the scar on her main image on her page and the scar was quite a lot more blurred.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 23:01, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, I didn't use highlights for this, and I think really blurred scars look unrealistic and painted on. Iveh Yo! 23:31, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

There's a speck of white on the tail. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 00:51, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's not white, it's the fur turning lighter like in her leader. I figured that would stay the same, I can lighten it more if you'd like, however. Iveh Yo! 01:39, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Imean in like the lineart, there's a speck. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 01:42, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

That's part of the original lineart. llwildheartl02:07 Tue Oct 18

Ya its supposed to be that way. CBA?

I think it looks a bit dumb with that white speck on the tail lineart. But if you want to keep the white bit of lineart that is "the original lineart" keep it that way.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 23:54, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

A) opps forgot to sign, B) watch what you say kitty, dumb isnt concidered constructive criatsism, C) please change the heading when you comment & D) Its fine. Continuing CBA. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:57, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Just a suggestion, if I were to keep that miscoloured speck on the lineart, I'd make it the same colour as her pelt, like the speck is gray on Hailstar's leader Charart and is brown on Crookedstar's.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 23:59, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gee Kittycat, that was real nice to say <3 Lol but if it bothers you THAT freaking much I will. But that is supposed to be a gap in between the tufts of fur on the tail. Iveh Yo! 02:05, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Starting from Iceheart's original, since Kitty's comment was unneeded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 16:11, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 24 hours without a comment. Approved. Iveh Yo! 01:56, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Mothwing (alt.K) ~ Approved

File:Mothwing.kit.alt.png Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:02, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh beautiful, Misty. Define the ear-pink, darken the shading on her forelegs, and blue the shading on the tail. -ScarletwindLisanna 23:04, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Connect a stripe or two. Silverhmm 23:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Wasn't that Hawkfrost who was the gray kit, though? Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 23:12, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, it was Mothwing. Hawkfrost was his regular color, brown. And, I'm not changing the stripes, since I like them separate like that, but I'll do the earpink and shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:13, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

RE-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:15, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful XD Blur the ear-pink on -----> side. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 15:42, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:32, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's waste near the back, but it might be my computer. If there isn't, ignore this comment. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:34, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, its just your computer. I checked, and there isn't any waste. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:48, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

This really is lovely! Darken the earpink a little. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 08:30, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job! ^-^ But can you blur where the shading meets the highlights (if you have any) on the tail? And blur the earpink, but only on the left ear. :)

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 22:56, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded.' Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:57, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:35, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 24 hours and looks fine to me. Approved. Iveh Yo! 01:57, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Soot (Ki) ~ Approved

Soot.kit Okay, so after someone else stole my image, I declined it. Now, here's my version of it. Comments? Also, the eyes don't match for a reason. She's supposed to have green eyes, but her loner has blue. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:09, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste underneath the front paw. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:17, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

The light part of the tail seems sorta like a straight line...Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 00:19, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

That's just how the shading was. I didn't blur enough. Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:22, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base color. It looks pure black and I can't really see the nose and mouth, to be honest. Oh, and add some highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:02, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, how many freaking times do I need to tell people? I do not use highlights.. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 23:07, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Grr... I have edit conflicted with both you two, Dapple, Cloud.... Grrr.... :P Brighten the ear-pink a tad, darken the shading under the chin, and define the tail highlight, or where the shading isn't; whatever floats your boat ;P. -ScarletwindLisanna 23:10, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. There is no chin shading. It's optional. And ear pink came straight from her loner image, so I'm not changing that. I did mess around with the tail though. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 23:14, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Great image. Appledash 00:22, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:44, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki) ~ Approved

File:Bluestar.alt.kit.pngHere is Bluestar when she was described as dark gray. Comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:46, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt color, as she looks black. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:47, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I Lightened the base color.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:51, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. Silverhmm 21:51, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Still should be lightened a little bit more. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:53, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    22:10, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a gray nose Iveh Yo! 22:14, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and I didn't use highlights.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:50, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:15, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    11:59, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! Blur the chest highlight. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 15:22, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit big and looks like its touching the lineart.. Can you fix that? ^-^ Great job so far! And do you use highlights? If you do, can you define them on the tail a bit?

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 19:34, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. and I didn't use highlights.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:15, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The nose colour needs to be darker than the pelt colour. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:39, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink still looks a bit big, and lighten the shading one the haunch/thing near back paw xD

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 00:37, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I fixed the earpink and nose-pink, but I failed at that dark patch of shading. Can somebody help me with that?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:26, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the pupils a bit bigger? User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 21:18, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink a bit lighter Acornfur 01:05, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

I was told to redden the earpink, I won't to do it, unless someone agrees with it.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:08, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should still lighten the base color and make the highlights more visible. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:41, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

The base color is fine. However, redden the ear pink a little more. Impressive work, Stoneclaw! Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:46, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Cloudy! Is the earpink too red?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:10, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash 00:14, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:48, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (Q) ~ Approved

Leafpool.queen Ok, I redid the image and I tried to make the stripes match warrior image. Comments? User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 17:01, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

One word. Beautiful! Maybe blur the shading on the tail a bit. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! Might bite underneath the moonlight 18:18, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, amazing! Maybe define the stripes on her forehead. Wuahahaha! Yup. I've been working on my evil laugh. >:D 18:22, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

They're right. This is wonderfully done. If you use highlights, dull them on the chest/belly/back area. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:23, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Smudge the back white paw more, to make it smudged evenly with the front ones. Ivyheart =P 19:17, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded (Thanks for all the compliments XD) User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 19:23, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing, you managed to match up the stripes perfectly~ although, the farthest front paw seems to be a tad lighter than the main part of the body, could you add some more shading or just darken that leg? ;) Feathermoon. 21:25, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Friggin beast, add some shading to the earpink or darken it. Bet you all are feelin alittle guilty for voting against now, huh? XP -Bloo!yo 22:00, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

i'm sorry, I forgot all about this! It doesn't matter because i was going to give it away when i came back but TOTALLY forgot about it. asnyway, this is epic! Maybe define some of the stripes on her neck a tad.Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 17:51, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks Bluedawn XD and Bloo, I never really thought about it. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 19:06, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh Starclan, this is fantastic! Blur the white on the belly some more. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:49, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

And to make your life more anoying, define the smading of the white on the chest. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:42, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

How you managed to copy the stripes still amazes me..... just smudge the white on her front left paw a little more. This is lovely! Rainlegs 00:50, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is gorgeous! I don't think I have anything to say right now....I'm still speechless. Good job Specklestream! Rainey 11:07, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks guys XD User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 17:46, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Beautiful image. Appledash 00:16, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:47, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Toadstep (Alt. W) ~ Approved

Toadstep.warrior.alt Woo, I finally managed to get another tom! I'm really proud of this one. :3 Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 20:18, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Silverhmm 20:41, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The color of the stripes look a tad off. Is there any way you could make them more of a darker golden color instead of orange? Iveh Yo! 21:03, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, but I love his unique stripes! D: Can I get a second opinion there? I'll change it if someone else agrees. Shelly For a limited time only 21:04, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Meh, redid his coloring to be more gold and less yellow. I'm not changing the stripes's coloring though! Shelly For a limited time only 21:31, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I liek the stripes, make the earpink smaller -Bloo!yo 22:01, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I like the stripes, but this isn't very ginger... could you tweak the colour? llwildheartl23:28 Mon Oct 17

It said that Toadstep was described as a golden tom. golden and ginger aren't the same thing. Define the shading just a tad. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! Might bite underneath the moonlight 23:30, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined the shading as requested. And he was, as Ivy said, called a golden tabby. I think the writers must have confused him with Lionblaze, who was narrating the scene. Shelly For a limited time only 00:39, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, sorry, thought this was a ginger alt; this still doesn't look like the right colour, however. The stripes are fine, but the base colour is tinted green and just looks off... Could you tweak it? llwildheartl05:47 Wed Oct 19

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 16:32, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 21:16, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.Shelly For a limited time only 22:52, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon pink. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:45, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Fffffff.... fine. Re-uplaoded. I get really sick of people telling me to do the opposite of what others have told me. Shelly For a limited time only 23:04, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Fascinating image, Shelly. Appledash 00:18, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:46, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (Alt. Ro) - Approved

Sol.rogue.alt I meant to get this up a lot earlier, but I found out it had to match his Loner alt, so I had to redo it. :P I matched it best I could, but since the loner charart is facing the opposite way, I figure I could mess around with the stripe placement a bit. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 18:21, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Derp. You forgot the heading. xD Pretty! Darken the shading a bit. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:27, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the earpink a wee bit, This is very nice. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 18:30, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Herpaderp, I fail. XD How could I forget the heading? XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 19:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful Paleclaw! Blur the shading a tad more. On the back it looks kinda blotchy to me. Silverhmm 20:07, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

kewl, darken the white on the tail -Bloo!yo 22:02, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

dArken the shading. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:06, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the brown a bit. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:45, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing XD Could you blur the shading on his back right leg a bit. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 20:27, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ok, did everything, except lighten the brown. I took these colors from his loner alt, and made sure my shading didn't mess with the color so much. It matches, and I'm gonna keep the colors like this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 04:22, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

The underbelly could use a bit more shading. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:55, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. Comments before approval? Pretty image, btw. Appledash 00:19, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:51, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Longtail (Alt. W) ~ Approved

Longtail.warrior.alt2 Lalala solid coloured cats are so boring... Comments? llwildheartl05:43 Wed Oct 19

Make the shading a bit darker. --Silverhmm 10:55, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading near the closest back foot can use a little blurring. Feathermoon. 13:19, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front legs. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 20:56, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Not to be mean, but, yeah, at a first glance, I couldnt tell it was shaded. Good otherwise though! ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 23:32, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened and blurred shading. llwildheartl06:23 Thu Oct 20

Define highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:57, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. Comments before approval? Great image. Appledash 00:21, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:52, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Shiningheart (Q) - Approved

Shiningheart.queen If Wind gets one, so does Shiningheart. Brightspirit was her daughter, therefore, she was a queen. She was described as a silver tabby and silver tabbies have black stripes. I'm planning to redo her warrior charart with black stripes once Reedwhisker is approved. Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 22:39, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Darken the shading just a tad. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 22:43, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:46, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the light source, i cant really tell one from the current lay out, and add another stripe to the head. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:51, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:09, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:46, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink slightly and largen the highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:59, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose a bit Iveh Yo! 23:48, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Dapple, no highlights in this one. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:58, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading just a bit. Splook it's a long way down. 02:40, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:27, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

On the front paw that is closest to us, there is a white pixel on her elbow. Can you fix that?

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 16:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more and maybe lighten it? Darken the ear pink too. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 16:11, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink looks fine. I think there's either waste or blurred lineart outside the left side of the head. User:Shadewing/Sig 16:45, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The stripes don't need to be smudged either. Fix the lineart issue that Shadeh suggested, and I think this'll be ready. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 16:49, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the pupil on (<--) side. This is lovely! llwildheartl21:24 Sat Oct 22

The highlights in the silver need to be blurred. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:03, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That does it. I am NEVER doing another silver tabby again! -ScarletwindLisanna 23:13, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Aww but it came out so pretty. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:15, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

None, approved. --Splook it's a long way down. 23:29, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Flight (PH) - Approved I love this xD Comments? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:37, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes, make the mud a lighter color as it looks like shading, darken the back foot unless that's supposed to be mud, add depth to the eye AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 00:39, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define her stripes. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:19, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink --Bloo!yo 01:21, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, you don't need to repeat what I've said. It's just a friendy reminder for the future, ok? AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 01:35, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights and darken/define the shading on the head. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add a stripe to the back of the ear, it stands out from the rest of the body. Ivyheart =P 04:49, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this version better. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:35, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is really cool. Define the mud a little more, maybe to do that make it more reddish. Ivyheart =P 23:22, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches in all directions instead of make it in a straight line. And I'd say take the mud color from an approved cat, let me see if there is a similarly colored cat with mud on it. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 00:54, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make it look more like her queen. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:54, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Loudsplash, please be more specific. Like her queen how? The color, the stripes? What exactly do you mean? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 19:38, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

It does look like her queen. I took all the colors from her queen image, and I tried my best on the stripes. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 21:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and define the stripes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:41, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry for reuploading late guys, I'm just so busy these days! SnowyXPerry = Serry! 19:40, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreaks look pink. Make them brown. Appledash 21:15, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate mudstreaks. >.< Anyways, I hope this gets on CBA now! SnowyXPerry = Serry! 14:55, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

You still need to smudge the mud like I said before. It's too conform. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 22:04, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mud from the stripes. Define the stripes and make them more prominent; they're a bit smudgy. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone help me with the mudstreaks? They're really getting on my nerves. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 11:59, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can help you if you used layers for this and the mud is on a seperate layer. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 15:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I used layers on GIMP. And I put the mud on a seperate layer too :P SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:19, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll give you my email, send me the .xcf file and I'll fix the mud for you, as I have done a Tribe cat before. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 23:20, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded me and Wildy couldn't figure out the layers thing so I just went ahead and uploaded it here. I made it like Screech's. Hope that helps. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 00:25, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you so much! It looks great now! :D SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:49, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Any comments? Sorry, I'm really impatient today x3 SnowyXPerry = Serry! 19:40, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define and blur the mud, smudge the earpink, and define the stripes. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:30, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Someone can take over, I just don't have enough time. And my cat's sick. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:29, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take it over. --Leafstrike-- 23:14, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 00:33, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The mud looks...purple...anyways perhaps lighten the shading a bit because it looks really dark to me. This looks great. Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:38, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mud match Flight's queen image. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:30, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Her queen doesn't have any mud. Iveh Yo! 17:37, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Probably got confused with the tabby stripes. Making the mud redder might help, but not so red that it looks like Oakheart. Mud is tough. Ivyheart =P 19:11, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bleh, I just redid it. --Leafstrike-- 20:31, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:48, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Mottle the mud like I did for her and smudge it in all directionsIveh Yo! 23:49, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights and blur the shading. Really good! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:38, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, stop telling people to add highlights. It's unclear as to what you mean. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:40, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, better than my image. Define the earpink just a little bit. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:50, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate Macs and Trackpads. --Leafstrike-- 19:44, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her upper right front leg (if that make any sense :) User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 21:23, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is actually mud, so I think it's fine. --Leafstrike-- 17:37, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Beautiful image. Appledash 00:11, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but I still find the mud difficult to discern from the pelt. Iveh Yo! 00:15, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened it. --Leafstrike-- 17:45, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:59, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Splook it's a long way down. 23:33, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud (KM) - Approved

Cloud (Storm).km I'm not sure whether she should have mud or not. Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 23:15, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, here's the thing. So I was on the bus, and I noticed you put Poppy up but got declined cause I had it reserved, but during the day I had an idea for a charart and was going to change the reservation! I feel bad about your declining. :( So, bottom line, you can have Poppy, but now you have Cloud up. :3 Either way if you want Poppy, you can have her. Cause I have an idea. Ivyheart =P 23:31, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over then... :3 Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:37, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead then. :I'll put Poppycloud back up. Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 23:39, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, here she is, D: Comments? :P Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:31, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

So much betterer than mine. ;D Defgine the earpink, me thinks. Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 02:34, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Pfft. :P Defined. Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:40, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

And did you fill in the nose? :P Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 02:42, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't she white? Ivyheart =P 04:11, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Her base color is white, so I played with the opacity on the shading. Her nose is filled in. Atelda insert vague subtext here 14:17, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Unfortunately, she does need mud. That's how we've done the other kitmothers so far. Shelly For a limited time only 14:32, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading on her front paws? It looks great! :)

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 19:19, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:15, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mud much darker and put more of it. Darken the shading too. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:16, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is fine, although you are right about the mud. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:37, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:14, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I really like how you did the mud. Maybe add some more to the top of the head. This is lovely <3 llwildheartl19:17 Sat Oct 22

Reuploaded. Thanks! Atelda insert vague subtext here 20:56, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks wonderful, darken the mud a bit more and it should be ready. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:05, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ok, done. Thank you! Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:11, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

No worries. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:13, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry to say but it still is a little bit to light with the mud. Alos try to group more. Sorry... Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:19, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

There are a few stray pixels on the tail. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:24, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If I darken the mud anymore, it'll be black. No worries. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:28, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:06, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

None, approved. --Splook it's a long way down. 00:01, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Owl Feather (Alt. Q)~ Approved

Owl Feather.queen.alt Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:31, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten the shading on the back paw ;) SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:44, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Define the tail shading. Ivyheart =P 04:20, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 04:27, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stomach shading somemore. And possibly make the ear pink a tad lighter. Silverhmm 20:10, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 23:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 20:32, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 21:51, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Soften the shading around the haunch, it kinda looks like tabby stripes to me. Define the speckles on the top of her back and brighten the ear-pink. This is looking good! ;) -ScarletwindLisanna 22:42, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Did everything but the ear pink, it worked on Kestrelflights its fine as it is. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:49, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I tihnk you should fix the ear pink. I can barely see it. Just becaues it works on Kestrelflight, doesn't mean it works on Owl Feather. Appledash 00:57, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit brown and define the shading. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:46, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Define the earpink.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    15:17, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Darken the shading and the ear pink. Try to blur the spots if you can, it can get hard. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:11, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Spots are fine, Sandstorm. In fact, so is the shading and ear pink. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:13, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Kestrelfight and this have the same exact colour, why would the ear pink work on one and not the other? Im not changing it. And since Cloudy said its fine im CBAing it. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:31, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

But personally I don't think the earpink is right on Kestrelfeather either, but I guess that's kinda a small thing to tweak it for. I really do think you should change it, but if you absolutely refuse, then can you at least define, as in unblur, the earpink? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 16:08, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Really all this stuff over an ear pink? Its not like its going to make or break the image. I defined it. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:05, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

It kinda looks like there are white specks behind the earpink. Sorry, but it does. Ivyheart =P 19:38, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:58, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? llwildheartl02:11 Mon Oct 24

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:43, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. Ki2) ~ Approved

Tawnypelt.kit.alt2 This is when she was described as a tabby. Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 01:41, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

The color seems to be a tad bit dark, could you lighten it a bit? Define the earpink/make it more visible by lightening it. Define the shading. There is some waste on the right side of the pixil. Add depth to the eyes. Deistinguish the nose color from the pelt. Not bad! Iveh Yo! 01:52, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:14, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add some highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:04, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

^Hightlights are optional, I believe. I'll darken the shainding shading more, though. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 23:39, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded ~ Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 01:56, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 01:14, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded User:Twilightheart200/Sig 01:55, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Blur the stripes on the legs. User:Shadewing/Sig 16:43, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink on that (-->) side. llwildheartl21:23 Sat Oct 22

Re-Uploaded User:Twilightheart200/Sig 22:07, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the stripes just a little bit more? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:20, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded User:Twilightheart200/Sig 01:30, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add a tabby M, though you don't have to, but it's best if you do. --Leafstrike-- 16:49, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Wait for changes to show...(If they aren't) I added it. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 23:34, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely :3 CBA? llwildheartl02:14 Mon Oct 24

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:43, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Daisytail (W) ~ Approved

Daisytail.warriorI can do this, her son was an apprentice. Anyway, please excuse this piece of crap. Comments? Ivyheart =P 04:25, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's not crap. =_= No self-hating. Anyway, define the stripes on the back a bit and make the earpink a little larger. Shelly For a limited time only 14:58, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! blur the shading and highlights, if there are highlights.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    15:08, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! I can't really think of anything to improve it, but I agree with Shellheart to make the ear-pink larger, and maybe you can darken the lightest eye pixil, it looks almost white. Awesome job! ^_^ ɛɱɱɛy! 15:20, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made earpink bigger, played with shading which included blurring it. I didn't change the eye though, cause it gave the image depth and the queen image has that color on it, however if it bothers more people, I will change it. Changes aren't showing for now. Ivyheart =P 15:22, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Forgot to mention, also defined stripes. Ivyheart =P 01:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

The way how you managed to match it perfectly to the other image kinda scares me ^^; Maybe smudge the ends of the stripes on the back since it looks like its sticking out of the patches. {{SUBST:Signatures/Guradian1098}} 01:08, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

If there is one on the tail, brighten the highlight there. *steals* Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 01:24, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Haha, this image took me 3 redoings to get it right. Smudged bottoms of stripes on back, highlighted the unshaded part of the tail. Ivyheart =P 02:17, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Is the red blotch on the tail really supposed to be so bright? It looks brighter than the other red spots. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:27, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's because they tried to highlight the tail but it was too skinny. I would try to darken that, it does look a little not right, unnatural kind of.

Blur the tabby stripes. Silverhmm 12:48, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on her back left leg. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 16:28, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Guys, don't forget to sign! ;) Ivyheart =P 17:50, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Bootiful! <3 CBA? llwildheartl02:16 Mon Oct 24

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:44, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt. Kit) - Approved

Ivypool.kit.alt Here we go again, back to Ivypool once more =) She was mistakenly described as a simple "white tabby" in the allegiances of the Fourth Apprentice. A lot of the markings I used pay homage to Sweetpaw's alternate kit that I withdrew a while ago. Comments for approval? Iveh Yo! 03:05, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can I ask how you get a "white tabby"? I didn't think white cats could have any form of tabby markings on them? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:16, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

They can, the marks are just extremely faint. But this is silver, not white. Shelly For a limited time only 03:25, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, no. The marks can apparently be very clear like here. Shelly For a limited time only 03:31, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Impressive. I didn't know that. Anyways, make the ear pink less purple. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:33, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmm, I might need to give her dark gray markings then, I just thought they were very light markings as in "ghost markings", but also, explain Weedwhisker xD And she appears silver because I think I need to lower the opacity of the shading. And ok, can do. Iveh Yo! 03:38, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

That cat was an ocicat, by the way. I imagine many Clan cats, most notably Leopardstar, have ocicat blood mixed with wild blood. Just thought I'd point that out. Anyway, I think you can go with either stripe design depending on what you want. Shelly For a limited time only 03:58, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

I like this! redden the earpink. Oh and there is such thing as a white tabby, does this count? [1] -{{SUBST:Signatures/Guradian1098}} 05:16, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Guradian1098- I think that would be classified as a silver tabby... And I love this! But can you darken the earpink and blur the shading on the chest? ^-^

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 17:11, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely. Can you add a highlight to the tail? User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 21:21, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights aren't mandatory, Speckle. XD Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:36, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

You should make the earpink less purple. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:05, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 00:20, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Redden and darken the ear-pink a tad. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:30, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:22, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:34, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are a right shade for a silver cat. Define the shading along the back and back legs. Splook it's a long way down. 02:13, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 04:19, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

The ear-pink still looks a tad too purple. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 16:37, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Just redid earpink, I'm gonna facepalm if it's not the right color this time. Iveh Yo! 00:56, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink a tad and this'll be ready. :3 llwildheartl02:14 Mon Oct 24

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 02:17, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ok since most of the comments have been about the earpink and I think it should be fine now, I'm gonna CBA this. Iveh Yo! 15:33, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

24 hours Iveh Yo! 15:38, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Approved Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:34, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't her leg be twisted, or am I just missing something? Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 00:37, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

No, you're right, it should be. You should use the lineart from her existing charart. Shelly For a limited time only 00:57, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

If you aren't using layers and don't want to, I can paste the lineart over your image so it has the leg. Ivyheart =P 00:58, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

For later notice, darken the shading on the legs ;3 Splook it's a long way down. 02:42, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

And probably blur too. :3 Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 02:44, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, @Ivyheart: can you help me do the foot? I don't use layers. RE-Uploaded. Fixed leg shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:32, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I will. I'm on it! Ivyheart =P 02:19, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did the foot. How'd I do? Ivyheart =P 02:36, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is stunning! Darken the shading on the back and blur the shading on the tail. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 18:27, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad. Good job with the lineart, Ivy! Beautiful stripes, Misty :3 llwildheartl19:21 Sat Oct 22

Thicken and darken the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:07, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

this is amazing! Just fix the earopink. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

Be specific on how she fixes the earpink. Ivyheart =P 19:51, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and make it more triangular, then blur it.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 22:08, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, don't enlarge the earpink. And it's the perfect colour, just make it a bit more triangular.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 22:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:54, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely. CBA? llwildheartl02:57 Tue Oct 25

None, approved. --Splook it's a long way down. 19:55, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. W) - Approved

Tawnypelt.warrior.alt3Whoopie! Tortie fail! If we're doing alt.s for manga, I see no reason why not to make one for the Field Guide Series. Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 03:23, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste near the paws and more near the tail. Also, enlarge the ear pink, and if you're doing highlights, add one to the front feet. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 04:19, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the markings a bit, and blur where the shading meets the highlight on the chest. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 07:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger patches more orange, like her CotC image, and maybe smudge the patches a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 14:01, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think the black partch over her eyes was a bit bigger on the cover of BotC. But that's just my interpretation, it looks excellent, Scarlet! Shelly For a limited time only 19:03, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:39, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste and blur the shading, then it'll be perfect :3 llwildheartl02:58 Tue Oct 25

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:11, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? llwildheartl05:03 Tue Oct 25

None, approved. --Splook it's a long way down. 19:59, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. --Splook it's a long way down. 20:00, October 26, 2011 (UTC)