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Brackenfur (Alt W2) - Approved

Brackenfur.warrior.alt2 Tried a new stripe style with this one. Not sure about what I was supposed to name the file - just let me know if I need to change it. Comments? oblivionAudience? 02:51, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit, I can't really see it.

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 03:40, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

File name's correct. Blur the shading more. jayce Reveℓation   03:42, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I love the stripes. Define the hanch and face shading. If the face doesn't have it, add it in, cause it looks a little bit flat. Ivyheart =P 05:23, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty :3 Darken the shading. llwildheartl05:53 Sun Oct 30

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 19:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the ear-pink. Specklestream Let it Snow! 19:28, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you take off a few brown pixels on the front left paw where the brown meets the white? Maybe it's just me, but I think the paw should look mostly white. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 19:31, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not really sure what you mean, Squirrel... I think the paw looks pretty white to me. oblivionAudience? 21:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think I get what she's talking about. On the paw she referenced, it looks like there's less white, when compared to the others. jayce Reveℓation   23:35, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still so confused... left paw looks exactly the same shade of white as every other one. oblivionAudience? 23:42, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, no. Not the shade of white used, but the amount of white on the paw. It doesn't seem like there's the same amount. jayce Reveℓation   23:44, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Like... say he was wearing socks. His left sock isn't the same length as the other ones? Because white paws don't have to be the same. oblivionAudience? 23:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Good reference. Yes, that's what I'm referring to. And they don't? Never knew that. You learn something new every day. xD jayce Reveℓation   23:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, check out this. oblivionAudience? 23:58, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

You need to darken the shading and the face white looks to..odd. IDk it just looks odd to me. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:17, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, the shading and face are fine. jayce Reveℓation   01:18, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the paws. This is so pretty <3 llwildheartl01:20 Mon Oct 31

Re-uploaded. Aw, thanks :) oblivionAudience? 01:28, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? This looks lovely. llwildheartl07:07 Mon Oct 31

Sorry, but can you define the light/highlight on the tail. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:30, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink DJCandyBud 04:01, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -headdesk- oblivionAudience? 00:58, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Approving. oblivionAudience? 20:26, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Brindleface (alt.Q) ~ Approved

File:Brindleface.queen.alt.png First flecked cat; comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:08, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink Silverhmm 23:14, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on the tail. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:41, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:49, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and shoulder. Grell No question at all! 03:04, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the neck shading. Sweetflower 21:57, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:52, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The speckles on the lower belly and tail are much too light. Very hard to see. Also add depth to the eye. Looks to plain. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:39, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The eye looks fine how it is, if you ask me. In fact, I love this image, Misty. Blur the tail shading a tad. jayce Reveℓation   02:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the scruff a little bit please. Sweetflower 15:46, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the ear-pink? If you don't want to, that's okay. I don't really know what I'm saying sometimes :P This looks great! ɛɱɱɛy! 20:10, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Speckles are supposed to be like that, Sandstorm. The speckles on the belly are supposed to be fainter. Define the shading on the paws a tad. SplookMavinotp♥ 20:13, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. Specklestream Let it Snow! 21:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the side. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:36, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 15:53, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. For the first time ever, I'm going to CBA my own charart. xD Since there hasn't been a comment since the 29th, and I fixed the shading, CBA? :3 Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:49, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting, but blur the shading. --Leafstrike-- 00:00, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Re-Uploaded. Its blurred to the limit this time, and if I blur it more, you won't be able to see the speckles. Repeating 24 hours. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:48, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:51, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefang (k) ~ Approved

Mousefang.kitIt was decided Mousefang would get a kit charart, so I snatched her up. She was like, my what, second tweak? Remember when I gave up on her? Well, look what things ended up to be. Anywho, comments? SplookMavinotp♥ 01:59, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:11, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripe a little more like the other images. Ivyheart =P 02:49, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Like Twilight said, define the earpink, but make it more red. Nice job! Grell No question at all! 19:44, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. The original earpink was a little orangish, so I just changed the color pallet to red. SplookMavinotp♥ 21:22, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a little less visible. Maybe like...10% or something. I know you use layers for this stuff. =P jayce Reveℓation   22:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the chest. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:40, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't use highlights, so I blurred the shading. SplookMavinotp♥ 15:42, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more. oblivionAudience? 19:12, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 01:53, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes DJCandyBud 03:57, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine. If you darken then, it won't match. jayce Reveℓation   21:58, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce Reveℓation   17:48, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce Reveℓation   18:10, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt. D) ~ Approved

File:Mistyfoot.alt.deputy.pngSince Runningnose didn't work, I'll try her. :3 She was described as pale gray somewhere, comments? Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 04:09, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and blur it. This is lovely :3 llwildheartl04:10 Mon Oct 31

Reuploaded Got rid of the waste around it, brightened and blurred the earpink. Thank you! ^-^ Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 04:16, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Make the earpink more triangular. Grell No question at all! 10:31, October 31, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Made the earpink more triangular. :3 Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 11:55, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:25, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined/kind of brightened the earpink. Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 01:11, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Redden and center the ear-pink, thicken the shading on the haunch and define the face highlight (if there is one xP) -ScarletwindLisanna 01:26, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Reddened and centered the earpink, thickened the shading on the haunch and I don't have any highlights. ^-^ Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 02:06, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Grell No question at all! 11:03, November 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Brighten the earpink a little bit more.Sweetflower 15:45, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done and done. ;) Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 22:30, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the highlights more? If you're not using highlights, lighten the shading where there should be highlights. oblivionAudience? 21:56, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not using highlights, and I'm a bit confused by what your saying.. Sorry Dx Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 23:08, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:54, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. llwildheartl00:46 Fri Nov 4

Tigerstar (Alt.L2) - Approved

Tigerstar.leader.alt2Ok, I tried match him correctly but I stopped on the stripes. I made him a bit looking like on the covers..please tell me you dont decline this! Leaf-storm,9:18,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Ah! This is beautiful. Make the earpink less purple. llwildheartl10:50 Sun Oct 16

Reuploaded - Leaf-storm,11:08,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Add shading. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    13:49, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Would he need scars too? Sky- Stealing all ur candy 13:51, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. At least, I would think so. jayce Reveℓation   14:30, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded, and that scars and torn ear? Leaf-storm,15:00,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes the same color even in the highlights, they look brighter in those places. --SplookMavinotp♥ 20:32, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit more brown. Otherwise this is amazing <3. --Silverhmm 21:19, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the colors don't really match those on the cover, his base pelt is cream in color and his stripes are darker and don't have that much red in them. Iveh Yo! 22:38, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, the Ear-pink is to bright and neon pink, darken it and make it more natral? :) Feathermoon. 02:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, i cant match everything but I try... Leaf-storm,13:16,October 17,2011 (UTC)

You can color-pick off of the cover (that's what I did for Millie), at the very least, darken the stripes and make them less red colored. I know you try hard and that's not my point. Iveh Yo! 13:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I take colour from cover.. Im working on it now Leaf-storm,16:34,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Epic FAIL! Leaf-storm,17:04,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Thin out the stripe above his nose. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:21, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded- Leaf-storm,18:29,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink smudges. Ivyheart =P 19:15, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

yawn* Im sleeping on my keyboard...Whats? I was thinking they're look good..ok reuploaded Leaf-storm,19:27,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Whoah whoah, wha-? We're doing teh manga alts now? -Bloo!yo 22:04, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

@BlueOrca: Yep. Haven't you seen Milie's loner and kittypet manga alts up?-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 23:05, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple and more red and blur all the stripes; make sure they're all the same colour, too. Right now it looks like you forgot to change the colour of a couple stripes (mostly on the tail) llwildheartl02:09 Tue Oct 18

reuploaded Leaf-storm,17:38,October 18,2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:37, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur and smudge the stripes and maybe dark it slightly. Make the ear pink darker and tone it done. Also blur everything Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:37, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't repeat what's already been said. You don't need to say blur twice. >.>;; jayce Reveℓation   01:47, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon, maybe take the color from another approved one. Sand, Bro, would ya quit saying to smudge already? Its doesnt really need to unless its really needed and the stripes are dark enough -Bloo!yo 01:52, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

ear-pink, my biggest problem xD Leaf-storm,15:04,October 19,2011 (UTC)

I really like the colors on this it is awsome but yes i agree with the others about ear pink. Acornfur 01:08, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

You should darken the shading. Nice stripes! DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:37, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,12:20,October 21,2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink slightly and try to smudge the pelt into the ear pink slightly. Good job! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 16:08, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste right outside the bottom of the haunch in front. Grell No question at all! 16:26, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded, Shadewing, ehm..what? Leaf-storm,17:36,October 22,2011 (UTC)

There's the smallest bit of waste between where the tail begins and the haunch. It's the small corner. jayce Reveℓation   17:45, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think I not found it... anything changed? Leaf-storm,18:41,October 22,2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink and make sure all the stripes are the proper colour. You missed several on the tail and legs. llwildheartl21:31 Sat Oct 22

I would upload a version of it with the waste circled, but I don't think we're allowed anymore. It's right on the bottom, in between the leg and tail. Fill the background in white or neon, and you should see it. Grell No question at all! 23:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The right ear pink looks blurred into the face. Can you fix that? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:12, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded, Its not blurred, Squirrelflame :-) Leaf-storm,8:51,October 23,2011 (UTC)

Fix where the stripes turn yellow (I believe because of highlights) on the tip of the tail, if I am looking at the correct revision. :3 --SplookMavinotp♥ 19:50, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Im blind xD Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:54,October 25,2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have scars...? Sorry if I'm wrong. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 21:27, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I add them if the other says yes too Leaf-storm,8:27,October 27,2011 (UTC)

I think he should, it's part of his description. Plus, this is beautiful! Feathermoon. 22:06, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add scars, and darken the forehead a little please. Sweetflower 22:43, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded Leaf-storm 11:52,October 29,2011 (UTC)

Smudge the scars into the pelt some. --SplookMavinotp♥ 21:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the scars a little. They look too pink right now. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 00:13, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm 11:48,October 30,2011 (UTC)

Add a small line of red to the middle of each scar to give them depth. llwildheartl00:32 Mon Oct 31

Blur the scar above his nose. Grell No question at all! 10:35, October 31, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

reuploaded Leaf-storm 15:42,October 31,2011 (UTC)

Ooh, I like the texture of the scars ^.^ Darken the shading just a tad. --SplookMavinotp♥ 20:16, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded Leaf-storm 20:19,October 31,2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:21, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

ok,ok reuploaded Leaf-storm 14:49,November 1,2011 (UTC)

Redden the nose pink and the scars if possible. Also darken the scar on the nose bridge, it looks really light. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:06, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, anything changed now? Leaf-storm 16:44,November 2,2011 (UTC)

The nose pink looks like it doesn't match the ear pink. I thought it was supposed to. jayce Reveℓation   04:58, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

It must? ok sorry Leaf-storm 19:06,November 3,2011 (UTC)

Blur the smaller scar on the tail. Grell No question at all! 20:57, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Leaf-storm 13:05,November 4,2011 (UTC)

Most of these comments lately have been about the scars and I think it looks fine. CBA? Iveh Yo! 00:04, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but why are the eyes green? I just assumed up till this point it was like that on the manga, but I saw the cover today, and his eyes don't look green, they look pale amber like they're supposed to be. Can you fix them? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:36, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

They looked like green to me Leaf-storm 9:54,November 5,2011 (UTC)

Oh, they ARE green on the first book. I was looking at the third one, where they're not green, sorry. XD I guess he should have green eyes on here then. Reinstating CBA. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:06, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Good job. Approved. Iveh Yo! 15:28, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Ki) ~ Approved

Blackclaw.kit

Ok, second charart. Comments? Rainface<3 19:15, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, noticed i forgot the ear pink, i'll fix that. Rainface<3 19:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Add nose-pink, blue the highlights, and make them smaller, make the shading larger, and define it, and blur the shading. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:22, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, is the black supposed to be shading? If so, please lighten it and blur it. It looks like a whole other tone to the fur. The nose should be dark gray, since Blackclaw is a black cat. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:24, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur, blur and blur some more. Also, did you get the eye color from either the warrior or elder images? It seems a little off. jayce Reveℓation   19:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, this one was a TOTAL fail. gonna re-do it so i can make the shading right and... yea. Everything that you guys said. Rainface<3 19:54, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Crud monkies! forgot to blur. What else will i forget today? Rainface<3 20:06, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blurred it. Comments? Rainface<3 20:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better ^-^ Now make the earpink more triangular and blur it. 22:10, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Take the pelt color from one of his other images, this is a bit too light. Looking great though! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:40, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Rainface<3 01:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I looked at it for a REALLY long time (actually, it was only like, 30 seconds :P) and I can't find anything i could complain about. it looks purrfect:PBluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 20:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the nose needs to be darker than the pelt, so it should be almost as dark as the lineart. Also, define the shading and blur the earpink more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:36, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks bluey. Re-uploaded. Comments? Rainface<3 23:01, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur blur and blur more (the shading. Everywhere) jayce Reveℓation   01:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Rainface<3 02:22, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to lighten the shading, it looks blacker then it should be. Blend it in with the pelt some more as well. SplookMavinotp♥ 22:41, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image a bit; right now I can't even tell the lineart from the pelt colour. llwildheartl22:40 Thu Oct 6

The shading looks weird. Blend it with the highlights. For an example of a black kit, look at Hollyleaf's kit image (remade by me, funnily enough). jayce Reveℓation   19:50, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, my cpu stopped working. I will get started on it. Question, how did you make the chest so bright though? Rainface<3 16:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind. I had to use gimp for it. Re-uploaded. Comments? Rainface<3 19:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, and also add some earpink. (Hope it's the right one...) Sky- Trick and Treat 05:17, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope i got it all. Rainfacestar Vampire time! 12:31, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Rain, this is fabulous! Define the earpink a little. I wish I could do a black cat like this one. Ivyheart =P 20:03, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, defined more. Thanks Ivy, though i think that you can do amazing black cats also. *gives a hug so she will feel better* Any way, comments? Rainfacestar Vampire time! 01:20, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I think this still looks completely black. It needs to be lightened a lot and then the shading needs to be darkened. llwildheartl06:17 Mon Oct 10

Dude, it's not black. It's the dark-gray from the other image. I won't fix it unless someone else argues about it. Rainfacestar Vampire time! 10:32, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it. It's not completely black, but it's still too dark. jayce Reveℓation   15:28, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you brighten the ear pink just a tad? Not a lot, though. I'm very picky with ear pink.. xD {{SUBST:Mistypebble/sig}} 01:14, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. Specklestream Let it Snow! 06:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think the changes are showing, i only defined the ear-pink a bit so... yea. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 10:38, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Take the ear pink right from his elder or warrior images. They're not the same. jayce Reveℓation   19:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time! Might bite underneath the moonlight 18:23, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading/highlights. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:19, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. Grell No question at all! 14:55, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time! Might bite underneath the moonlight 19:29, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and there is a bit of waste on the outside of the neck. OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall

23:26, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Think i got it all and blurred the shading. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! Might bite underneath the moonlight 00:32, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The edges of the ear pink come down onto the face. Move them, and the blur the ear pink. jayce Reveℓation   22:28, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. *sigh* ear-pink is not my thing, is it? Any way, Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time! Might bite underneath the moonlight 22:50, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's hard, I know. Make the ear pink a little more triangular. jayce Reveℓation   22:52, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks for understanding Cloudy. Okay, made it more triangular without it touching the lineart. I really do not like ear-pink any more. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! Might bite underneath the moonlight 23:33, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looking great so far. Extend the highlights (Or have less shading) on the tail. Ivyheart =P 19:40, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the legs is a lot darker then the rest of the shading. I don't think that's supposed to be like that. Make it a tad bit lighter. jayce Reveℓation   21:54, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, changes aren't showing. They are on the file page, so, look there and Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time! Might bite underneath the moonlight 22:43, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Theres waste around the charart get rid of it. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:32, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time![ 19:39, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more triangular. Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:51, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 00:26, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and the shading between the front legs. Specklestream Let it Snow! 21:29, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, move the earpink into the ear more and blur it.

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 00:40, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. Or smudge the bottom of it into the top of it. Grell No question at all! 16:50, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading a little more. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:00, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Follow the rest of the comments regarding earpink, then make it a little more pink. Lighten it. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 13:48, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry for not working on this for a while, i was first at a camp-out (no internet service) and then i was at a sleep-over party last night and i just got back. i am gonna work on this. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 20:19, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the legs and bottom of the tail looks alot darker than the rest of the shading, could you lighten it or blurr it? Feathermoon. 23:48, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the bottom of the tail. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:13, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 18:41, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading. jayce Reveℓation   20:43, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed, and also make the ones on it's sides thinner, they stick out pretty far into the stomach. Feathermoon. 22:02, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Don't really know quite how to explain this, but the head and chest shading look, kinda, akward. Sweetflower 22:35, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a lot. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:50, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

ACtually you sould redden it. Also You need tomkae the nose a touch bit lighter. Good job! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:24, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is it really that hard to take a dropper tool and color pick from his elder/warrior image? jayce Reveℓation   02:25, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail and all the paws. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy, i was gone for the week and forgot to notify you all so i never got to tell you all. Gosh. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 01:42, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There you go, Rain. Hope it's good for you! Atelda 02:24, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Unless the changes aren't showing, I can't really see it. jayce Reveℓation   03:58, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink while you're at it. llwildheartl09:35 Mon Oct 31

Well, i tried. Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 20:27, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and darken the nose. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:13, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, comments? Oh, and thank you atelda for earlier! :) Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 01:52, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink? DJCandyBud 03:45, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Rainface<3 22:04, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Personally I don't think you should have darkened the ear pink, I can't see it, well just a little anyways. Can you lighten it please? Sweetflower 23:46, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I am going to lose it with the ear-pink. Rainface<3 01:04, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I feel like that all the time xDD. But lighten the shading and redden the ear pink and lighten the nose. This should be ready soon! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Cpu being dumb again, i made the ear-pink more like the others and lightened the nose. I think the shading looks fine though, but if i get another complaint about it, i will change it back. Rainface<3 18:30, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, changes aren't showing though. Rainface<3 18:30, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on the tail. It's too bright. jayce Reveℓation   05:04, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if these are the changes not showing, but the ear pink doesn't match the other images. It's probably the changes. If someone tells you to change it, don't listen to them, as it needs to match. jayce Reveℓation   05:06, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the earpink a bit? This looks lovely! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:20, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay Cloudy and thank you Paley. Rainface<3 21:37, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Umm isnt this declind? If so may I take over? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:27, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Not necessarily. If the other leads think this is good enough to get approved soon, it stays up. --SplookMavinotp♥ 22:28, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and redden it just a biiiiit more, and I think this'll be ready. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:41, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Okay, comments? And also, shame on you Sandy. That's not very nice, i am very sensitive and i love how this looks. Rainface<3 16:38, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm sorry but it's over the time limit and this will be declined. I am sorry but I just want to take over! May I? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 17:49, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Did splashy not just say that it won't because it will be cba'd soon. Not to be rude but i don't think you will be, i might just put it back up if it does get declined. Rainface<3 17:52, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, images only get declined after a month if they show no signs of major improvement, and this has. It should be CBA'd soon, as I see nothing wrong with it. It took a while, but Rain got it done eventually. Shelly For a limited time only 18:42, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hey I didn't want to be rude I just saw that it was over the limit and it didn't seem like it was ready. No offense... Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 19:25, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, enough. That was rude, even if you didn't mean it. In fact, Shelly is right. So, CBA? jayce Reveℓation   19:32, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce Reveℓation   20:59, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt. W2) ~ Approved

Darkstripe.warrior.alt2 Comments? Changes can be seen here if they don't show on the page. jayce Reveℓation   20:01, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

wait is this not mine anymore? Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:21, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Scarlet declined it. *hands up* I did nothing but claim it. jayce Reveℓation   20:25, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful Skye, darken the shading. Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:27, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce Reveℓation   20:30, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

oh okay! thanx for telling me...and make the earpink not touch the outer parts of the ear =) Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:38, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't touch the outer parts of the ear, but if you'd like, I'll make it smaller. jayce Reveℓation   20:41, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

oh sorry.....and yeah it looks a little big..Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:43, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? jayce Reveℓation   20:45, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Could you darken/add neck shading though? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I thought neck shading wasn't mandatory. . . I don't add it any other time... jayce Reveℓation   23:16, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I always use neck shading, but you don't have to. Define the shading on the tail. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:17, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce Reveℓation   00:23, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely job. Comments before approval? llwildheartl20:00 Sat Nov 5

Approved. jayce Reveℓation   20:57, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenheart (Lo) ~ Approved

Brackenheart.loner Tell me if I'm wrong, but if Spiderstar gets a loner image so should Brackenheart. Comments? Specklestream Let it Snow! 17:32, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more and blur the tail highlights. (If any) Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 19:48, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading everywhere except his legs. oblivionAudience? 20:03, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:26, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure. Techincally, Spiderstar and Brackenheart never left the Clan, chosing to spend the rest of their days in the gorge with the elders. They were still part of a group, would they be loners? Shelly For a limited time only 20:38, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

There's a discussion on the talk page about it, go have your say. oblivionAudience? 20:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well if he stil gets one, brighten the earpink. Sweetflower 20:45, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 21:14, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

This looks really good. Blur the shading on his left back leg. Rainface<3 23:21, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and the ear pink. Blur the legs too. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:26, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

^_^ I think the stripes are fine, but feel free to contradict me if I'm wrong. Also, I think the earpink is fine. Add depth to the eye, please. Very nice. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:58, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't it artist's choice? Grell No question at all! 19:05, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded I darkened the stripes, but the ear-pink matches his MC image. Sandstorm: I assume you meant to blur the shading. Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:23, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a little bit more so it matches the MC image. llwildheartl23:17 Thu Nov 3

Re-uploaded Specklestream Let it Snow! 13:02, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:42, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce Reveℓation   02:40, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar Alt. (D) ~ Approved

Leopardstar.deputy.alt2Okay, so, I do realize the shading looks stiff and un-blurred, but i've blurred it to the max on GIMP. Also, The tawny reference is from Oakhearts tawny color, and i've posted a cite on Leopardstar's page already. Comments? :S Feathermoon. 01:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rename the file Leopardstar.deputy.alt.png and put delete tags on the other images you uploaded. Add some shading under the jaw and brighten the earpink. llwildheartl01:10 Tue Oct 18

How do I add an image when it's in source mode? :S Feathermoon. 01:18, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

On the bar (where you would get your signature) press the button that looks like a picture fame, and then put the name of the file into the part where it says: "Example.jpg". ^-^

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 01:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay...Reuploaded Thanks. Feathermoon. 01:47, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

nooo, name it Leopardstar.deputy.alt.png(its case sensative) :|-Bloo!yo 01:52, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oi. That was....way too much work. It shouldn't have been like that. xD Feathermoon. 02:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

xD Redden the earpink as it almost blends in with the pelt. Maybe blur the edges of the shading, but otherwise this looks great! Atelda 02:19, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Again, way too much work. xD Anyway, fixing the charart itself was pretty easy. And BlueOrca, it should have been Leopardstar.deputy.alt2 becuase it just made another file of the first alt. :3 Reuploaded. Feathermoon. 02:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. jayce Reveℓation   18:29, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading on the head a bit. Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:11, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I think it reuploaded. Feathermoon. 00:40, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur shading. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    00:56, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the shading? You should also define the shading on the tail and make the earpink smaller. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:51, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Define the earpink. Grell No question at all! 12:20, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Good. Lighten the shading and also smudge the ear pink and shading too. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 16:09, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Omg this is so pretty! Just lighten the shading. --Cinder Real or Not Real?


Lighten the ear pink a little. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:18, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Erm...I accidentially closed the tab and lost all my layers, i'm working on re-doing it. Feathermoon. 06:20, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Feather, you still working on this? I know you're redoing it and all, but you still only have 7 days, and you've taken 8 since your last reupload. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 19:01, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my gosh! I forgot all about this! I feel so ashamed now, Give me a moment and I'll have the new one up. Feathermoon. 22:10, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. There. Nobody has any idea how much I love this aside from the earpink. xD Feathermoon. 00:54, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. Hmm... This is interesting. I like it, Feather! jayce Reveℓation   01:08, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Errmm..? Is this thing working? xD Re-uploaded. And Thanks Skye. :D Feathermoon. 01:15, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Beautiful! Grell No question at all! 10:54, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Thanks! Re-uploaded Feathermoon. 19:05, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The face highlights is much too light. Also where is your light source? It just looks randomly placed. O.o Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:26, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

That face highlight isn't a face highlight, it's a face face, like any other realistic cat. and I used the shading spots everyone else uses. Feathermoon. 03:13, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous Feather! Could you darken the shading a bit though? And the face DOES look a bit lighter than the rest of the image, but I'm not sure if that's on purpose or not. If not, could you make it the same darkness as the rest of the pelt? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:26, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is supose to be paler on the face. If you look, it's on the front paws too. And it's also suppose to be on the chest and bottom of the tail. Re-uploaded! :D Feathermoon. 06:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a lot and make it a little less purplish. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 00:07, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely. I think the earpink colour is fine; however, it could be smaller. Add some shading on the muzzle or add some mottles so that it looks less bare. llwildheartl05:47 Sun Oct 30

^Thanks! And there we go...although as for the muzzle, I darkened it up with some shading, and I just think it looks kind of weird now. :3 Feathermoon. 13:24, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the mottles. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:22, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the face highlights and the ear. Also lighten the shading too. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:11, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I actually think the shading needs to be DARKENED not lightened, and not everyone uses highlights Sandstorm. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 04:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Ahh. I need to Withdraw this, this is the second time i've lost all the layers, and I don't have time to re-do it every time. :( Feathermoon. 22:03, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Very well then, Feathermoon. Anyone who wants to can take over. -ScarletwindLisanna 21:19, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over since Jag just got archived. Sorry to hear you can't do this anymore :(Iveh Yo! 22:59, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

My goodness Ivy, this is GORGEOUS! The only thing I can find wrong is, can you define the earpink bit? I seriously don't see anything else wrong with this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:09, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely stunning! Just extend the shoulder highlight upwards if you use highlights and if not just thin out the neck shading. 11:36, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Glad you guys like it! Iveh Yo! 04:41, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur the neck shading a bit. Grell No question at all! 13:19, November 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded that's about as much as I can get it Iveh Yo! 15:13, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit. This is marvelous! <^^> --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 15:31, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Specklestream Let it Snow! 19:59, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 20:46, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Setting 24 hours. llwildheartl04:14 Mon Nov 7

Approved Iveh Yo! 15:43, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt.K) ~ Approved

Thornclaw.kit.alt Comments? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness. 20:52, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:09, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the stripe a little? I can barley see them, not a whole lot just a little. Sweetflower 21:15, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Bur the earpink a little bit. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:19, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we decided quite a few times that he wasn't gonna get an alt for being called ginger? Unless this is an alt for something that I missed/isn't on his page? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:53, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think this is for being ginger, but I don't think it should be declined, since ginger is different from golden brown. Ginger is Firestar-color, and golden brown is...Thornclaw-color. They're completely different. Since cats get alts for simply having minor changes like white paws, then there's no reason to decline this. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:57, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:26, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail tip a little bit. This looks really good Squirrel. Sweetflower 15:41, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Sweet! :) SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:56, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make this more ginger. Right now it definitely looks more like golden-brown than ginger. llwildheartl22:56 Wed Nov 2

Re-uploaded. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:57, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

still needs to be more ginger -ſceheartBlah blah 00:55, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you redden the earpink a bit? Maybe make it more like his warrior and apprentice? Grell No question at all! 20:52, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 00:08, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

The nose looks kind of light, but that could just be me though. Iveh Yo! 00:02, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 02:05, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make this more ginger-y. llwildheartl19:57 Sat Nov 5

Can you give me a hex code? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 20:24, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and the stripes. You can hardly see them. Great job! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:51, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to redo the whole image; just take this colour and put it in a new layer and then adjust the opacity so that it makes the image seem more ginger. I learned that trick from Ivystripe :3 llwildheartl22:55 Sat Nov 5

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Wildheart! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:48, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce Reveℓation   21:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but could you fix all the miscolored lineart? Pretty much the whole blank looks miscolored. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:37, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I apologize for the miscolored lineart. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:37, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Restarting CBA Iveh Yo! 23:48, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 15:45, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Alt.Q) - Approved

Willowbreeze.queen.alt Well, if Whispering Breeze got an alt. for being described as a tabby, Willowbreeze should get an alt for being described as a solid cat. Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 01:25, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad, especially in the areas it would be darker, such as under her chin, her belly, and her tail? Iveh Yo! 01:31, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:08, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but can you blur the shading some? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:45, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger. Rainface<3 23:24, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading next to her hind leg? Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:23, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and redden it. Isn't the nose supposed to be pink? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:47, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

No. If it's a gray cat, their nose should be a darker version of the pelt color. jayce Reveℓation   20:48, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the delay. Life's been kicking my butt lately... -ScarletwindLisanna 03:21, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlight on her front left leg. Specklestream Let it Snow! 15:22, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 21:02, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Was she actually called solid gray, or just gray? llwildheartl19:59 Sat Nov 5

It was in the manga, she was SOLID gray. I checked too, since it seemed unlikely that they said she was solid gray in the book. XD Could you blur the shading more? This is lovely! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:43, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Beatiful! Some of your best work! But you need to darken the ear pink and center it. It's too high in the ear. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:52, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 04:35, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. Specklestream Let it Snow! 19:46, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:36, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! ^^ CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:21, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 15:47, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Redstar (Alt. L) - Approved

Redstar.leader.alt Ginger and bracken are two different colours, so comments? Atelda 02:22, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! You reserved it just before I was going to! Anyways, blur the tail-tip and brighten the shading, or is it highlight? I'm not to good at this, the white circles. Sweetflower 10:32, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink, it's a bit bright. This is really good! Specklestream Let it Snow! 19:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

On his page, it doesn't say where he was described as bracken-colored. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 00:05, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Now it does. :P Also, I liked the shading settle, but I brightened it. Atelda 01:14, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight just a tad. Grell No question at all! 20:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Atelda 01:26, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge/move the chest highlight to his right a tad. Specklestream Let it Snow! 09:07, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda 20:25, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make him a bit less green. oblivionAudience? 01:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. La di di. Atelda 17:33, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

This doesn't really look bracken colored to me. Maybe try this color? That was the best I could find when I searched for 'bracken colored' XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 18:38, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The sample was just a bit florescent on him so I dulled it a bit. How's that color? Atelda 20:45, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Great! ^^ Now just darken and redden the earpink a tad and this'll be prefect. 8D ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:36, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made that way more complicated than I should've. xD Atelda 04:31, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me! ^^ CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:18, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 15:48, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail (Q) - Approved

Dappletail.queen Other one was declined. Changes aren't showing yet. Gosh, that pattern was so hard to copy, and it STILL doesn't look right. DX Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great, Paleclaw, it matches! Put some noticable shading on the forepaw farthest from us. Ivyheart =P 15:04, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

WAYYYYY better than my version. The marking were hard, right? Anyways, define the tail shading a bit. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 15:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the base coat a bit, it looks a bit grayer than her other images? Specklestream Let it Snow! 16:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done, done, and done.

You forgot to sign x3 ) Lovely work! Can you blur the center of the ear pink? It looks solid ;) Sweetflower 20:33, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

What are you talking about paleclaw? This looks beautiful. But could you darken the earpink? thanx! Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 21:11, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful. The earpink looks fine to me. CBA? llwildheartl04:21 Mon Nov 7

Approved Iveh Yo! 15:50, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Alt.D) ~ Approved

Sharpclaw (SC).deputy.alt Okay, this is based on his image in Cats of the Clans. I knew this cat was him and not Leafstar as the other cat image that could have been him (the cat on the top) matched the image of Leafstar on the cover of SkyClan's Destiny. I tried to match the image the best I could, which wasn't easy considering the fact that all I had to work with was a disembodied head and chest. XD Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 19:47, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

...this isn't even fair. How can you make such an amazing charart? Erase the stray pixel above his ear and define the earpink a tad. I adore this. llwildheartl20:05 Sat Nov 5

O *hugs* It is mine now. >.< Its awesome! Lighten the shading a bit. ;3 Mistypebble♪Good day♪ just go with the flow 22:47, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you can't have three images up at once. You'll need to either withdraw one of your tweaks or withdraw this. Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:55, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, it's all good. I withdraw Whitestorm. Shelly For a limited time only 00:34, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Kay. :) Could you add/define the earpink a ton, I can't tell if it's there or not. Though it might just be my computer, the colors are kinda acting funky on it today. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:36, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah, I tried. I used the colors from the image, but I think I've defined it a bit. I don't want to deviate too much. Shelly For a limited time only 00:49, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Why? My Sunfish charart buddy does so much better with charart's then me :( Any way, the stray pixel is still there. Rainface<3 01:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainy, you're fine. You'll get it with practice. Shelly For a limited time only 01:13, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think should be made using the warrior lineart. If you didn't notice, the name in the book said Leafdapple and note Leafstar. Sharpclaw couldn't be deputy if Leafstar still went by the name Leafdapple. jayce Reveℓation   02:56, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, do I have to? I used the deputy lineart because I was looking at the image from the Warrior's App, which called her Leafstar. TT.TT Shelly For a limited time only 03:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I was going straight from the book. Since you mentioned it was in the Warriors app, I think it could be made for BOTH ranks... jayce Reveℓation   03:05, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I was about to mention that, actually. Yeah, I agree. Shelly For a limited time only 03:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

In the meantime, dull the ear pink a bit. It's too bright. jayce Reveℓation   03:08, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dulled it up. Please, no more ear-pink comments. This is the first time in a while that I've been happy with it. Shelly For a limited time only 03:18, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is 100% epicness. It looks like one of the neck stripes is going into the white chest. Can you fix that? If you know what I'm talking about. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 15:09, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like that in the image this is based on, so I think I'll keep it. Thanks, though! Shelly For a limited time only 15:20, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

This looks an awful lot like Brackenfur's :3 NAH, I kid, this is amazing. Lighten the highlight on his shoulder. oblivionAudience? 02:53, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 17:33, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

This is absolutely beautiful. Just blur the two stripes by the eye a tiny bit. Grell No question at all! 20:26, November 7, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'd rather not, as doing so would make it look less like the image it's based on. Shelly For a limited time only 21:08, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. Also darken the stripes a tad and make the ear pink smaller and redder. This looks lovely! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:25, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes match the image this is based on (how many times do I have to say that!?) and the ear-pink is fine. I asked above that nothign else be said on the ear-pink, this is the happiest I've been with any ear-pink in a while. Shelly For a limited time only 02:28, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm.... I like this image. *steals* CBA? jayce Reveℓation   23:20, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. jayce Reveℓation   00:45, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Lo) - Approved

Yellowfang.lonerBefore anyone complains, YES she was called a loner in Into the Wild, I checked and reread it to make sure. When looking at this image, I feel it has some blending issues that I had not noticed before, so I do realize that is a problem that needs to be fixed. Pelt, earpink, and eye color were taken from her queen. Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 19:33, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Blur the scar on the back. Grell No question at all! 20:10, November 10, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading on the shoulder. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:44, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

There's blending issues. Blur the shading everywhere on her body. oblivionAudience? 21:21, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to be blunt, but I already said I know I have blending issues and I was going to fix them. You don't have to repeat what I already know. I'm in the process of fixing itIveh Yo! 21:50, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make her face a tad straighter. It kinda looks like her muzzle is pointing up a bit. xP -ScarletwindLisanna 21:56, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded is this better? And sorry for getting a little frustrated, I could have been nicer :/ Iveh Yo! 04:56, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful Ivy! Can you put the shading on an angle rather than having it straight up and down on her haunch and the back of the shoulder. If you want, I can give you a redline to show you. I suck at explaining xP -ScarletwindLisanna 21:37, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm kind of hoping to get this approved soon for a certain reason, so keep the comments flowing =) Iveh Yo! 23:29, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

No need, Icy. This is beautiful! CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 00:02, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 01:03, November 13, 2011 (UTC)



Leafstar (KP) ~ Approved

Leafstar.kittypet I'm posting this on behalf of Thistleberry, who is having technical difficulties with the project pages. I personally thinks it looks excellent for a first charart! Comments? By the way, if Birdpaw gets a kittypet charart, logically Leafstar should as well. Shelly For a limited time only 02:26, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Just for clarification, this is for when Rock called her a kittypet. Shelly's right, since Birdpaw gets one, so does she. jayce Reveℓation   02:28, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add more stripes to the upper ---> that side and the ears too. Redden the ear pink and add a stripe to the shoulder. Lighten the tail shading. Very nice! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:38, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Couldn't it also count when she was taken by the Twoleg? Sky-Stupidly Spring...✿ 02:39, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Good point. Also, Sandstorm, the image needs to match her leader and queen image, so Thistle doesn't need to add any more stripes. jayce Reveℓation   02:43, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thistle said this; she still can't edit; " I can't fill in earpink in the other ear, it's turned. Look at chararts like Princess, or othe rkittypet chararts, they don't have it either. :3" Elorisa 02:51, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye. What I mean by this (I'm assuming you may need clarification since you're new) is vary the lights and darks in the eye, such as highly dark and light color. Make the earpink curve with the ear and define it slightly. Blur the stripes a tad more. Durn I was gonna do this one Iveh Yo! 16:29, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the neck and possibly add some stripes there. Specklestream Let it Snow! 18:11, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Niceee, I think the stripes on her forehead should be on the other side, but Im not sure (Im looking at the leader image) Also, saturate the cream a bit -Bloo!yo 23:27, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

.*Happy Dance* Finally i can edit PCA! So anyway, this has been up-dated around every two comments, so it's good for more. :) Thistle. 03:35, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

(Thistleberry, what you can do is once you upload the picture again, but in bold: Re-uploaded. It's easier to see what you have or haven't done that way :) 'Dis is very pretty though! Can you lighten the ear-pink a bit? If not that's fine! Sweetflower 11:56, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-- Tried my best, and I also removed some waste I noticed. :) Thistle. 22:53, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Very good! Could you make the ear-pink more triangular? Sweetflower 23:11, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- I've lsot my layers, so i'm working best I can. Thistle. 00:19, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Still very nice. Make the ear pink a touch bit redder and lighten the tail shading. Much too dark. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:57, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Tail shading is fine, Thistle. Don't listen to her. jayce Reveℓation   03:04, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, it's like everyone hates Sandstorm. I think the tail shading should be lightened a bit also. --Leafstrike-- 19:14, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see what's wrong with the tail shading. It looks fine to me. Different areas of a cat's body should have different depths of shading. If it's all the same, the cat won't look 3D. Considering the position of the cat, I think it's fine. jayce Reveℓation   19:20, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I lightened it...although probobly so much you can't notice. ;) And the earpink looks bad becuase as I said on my page, I never use ear-pink unless I need to, because it does not like me. x.x Thistle. 19:32, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Please no hate me...>_>;;; but anyways smudge the stripes a touch. This is very beatiful! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:42, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Err ... Re-uploaded ... Thistle. 04:36, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful Thistle! Let's go CBA -ScarletwindLisanna 00:06, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:05, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Alt. K) - Approved

Crookedstar.kit.altOoh... Epic fail on the lineart... Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 19:49, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Try to make the mouth hanging open a bit, like his leader image is. Just needs a couple black pixels. Shelly For a limited time only 21:39, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also it needs to twist on the other side that the tooth isn't sticking out from. When I tweaked his jaw, I actually added a few pixils of dark red to it, you can do that too if you want. Iveh Yo! 23:24, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink redder and the M on the head looks to un blured and placed. Also make the stripes the slightest bit thinner. I love this! It mine! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:03, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Ivy, thanks! I think it worked. @Sandy, I took all the colors from his leader charart; ear-pink is fine. -ScarletwindLisana 03:29, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you put some shading on the bottom side of the tail? Really like this. :) Thistle. 04:45, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste under his two left paws. oblivionAudience? 22:19, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Thistle, the light is coming from the lower left corner, so the shading would be on the top of the tail xP -ScarletwindLisanna 02:38, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Is the tooth....bleeding? Or is it just my computer? Also lighten the shading the slightest bit. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:59, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Sand, no that's his open mouth. -ScarletwindLsanna 03:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

It does look like it's blood. XD. There's a few specks of waste around his tail and a miscoloured pixel on his back foot. --Leafstrike-- 19:20, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink; it looks darker then the color on his leader version. jayce Reveℓation   21:56, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:03, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Oh fail. Smudge the ear pink and shading. Very ince! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:37, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Shading and Ear-pink are fine. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:57, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? jayce Reveℓation   00:01, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 01:05, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

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