Yellowfang (E) ~ Approved

Yellowfang.elder Feathertail was declined, so yeah. ;)

Here we go...And I shortened the muzzle as much as I could without ruining it, but if it needs to be done more, let me know, and I will try my best. Thistle. 03:02, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Moved image 'cause OCD. How come she gets an elder? *missed that discussion* llwildheartl03:05 Sun Nov 27

She was technically an elder between officially joining ThunderClan and Spottedleaf dying. Smooth out the bottom of the muzzle. Shelly For a limited time only 03:06, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, match the style of spikes in the other images. Shelly For a limited time only 03:08, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nick her ears and I thought she was a prisoner, not elder WildfireMistystar's Omen! 03:10, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

After she joined ThunderClan, before Spottedleaf's death. She was an elder. Shelly For a limited time only 03:11, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang was never and elder. True, she was old, but she had never retired from her duties as a Medicine cat. When she was thrown out of ShadowClan, she had been and MC and then was accepted into ThunderClan as a prisoner and then made the ThunderClan medicine cat. She was never an elder. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:14, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Then what would you say she was between officially joining ThunderClan and Spottedleaf dying? She wasn't a prisoner then, and she wasn't a warrior or medicine cat. Shelly For a limited time only 03:15, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

They never said she was an elder, she was a prisoner and was technically still a rogue. They didn't treat her with respect like an elder should be treated with. I think this should be declined. Iveh Yo! 04:23, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar got an elder image for when he was in ThunderClan. What's the difference? Jayce (  ) 04:25, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Point taken, Cloudy. i totally forgot about that (lol OA was me xPP). Any objections? -ScarletwindLisanna 06:06, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

I have none, but could you make the eyes orange? XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:01, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. How could I forget the eyes and ears!? Re-uploaded. :D Thistle. 08:57, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. XD There's some white specks at the tip of the ear though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:09, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

No objections here.) But could you shrink the earpink a tad and make it more triangular. Sweetflower12:30 Sun Nov 27

Very nice! Blur the scar above her eye. User:Shadewing/Sig 16:10, November 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Can I just say something? When ShadowClan attacked, and Rosetail was killed, Bluestar invited her to join the Clan. This image was made wrongly for the right reasons, as she was a warrior, not an elder. If, for some strange reason, I am wrong, then thicken the ear outline. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes!

18:32, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

I have no idea. Either way, Re-uploaded. xD Thistle. 19:28, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

P.S I fixed the ear best I could, but it would go away and blend in naturally. Dx Thistle. 19:35, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Regi, exactly how was she a warrior? I don't get it. She wasn't a warrior. o.o Jayce (  ) 20:59, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think Regi meant MC ? Sweetflower21:27 Sun Nov 27

No. Look, after the first attack on ThunderClan by ShadowClan, when Yellowfang was found to have protected the Clan's kits from her past brethren, Bluestar made Yellowfang an official member of ThunderClan. This was a bit before Spottedleaf was killed by Clawface. Between these two events, Yellowfang was treated as an elder of ThunderClan, and I believe she even lived outside the elder's den. She was no prisoner and not a warrior, medicine cat, loner, rogue, or anything else but an elder. That's that. Shelly For a limited time only 00:47, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out a few of the thicker scars just a tad to keep consistent with the other images. No need to do al lthe thick scars, just a couple will do. Shelly For a limited time only 12:40, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. My layers merged earlier on, so now i'm bearing with what I've got. Thistle. 14:17, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, it looks fine. It doesn't need to match exactly since this is the other half of her not seen in other chararts. For future reference, tho, if you're working with GIMP and you want to keep you layers, save the file as .xcf as well as .png. Shelly For a limited time only 17:24, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thistle, are you sure you're not a warrior with your skills? Anyways, I can see nothing wrong with such a wonderful image...soooooo, CBA? Jayce (  ) 17:52, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt but you have a scar in the clump of fur. It is impossible in placement so either move it or move the patchy fur Iveh Yo! 01:25, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know how, as said before, I lost my layers. But if someone can help me, that would be great. Thistle. 04:30, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I can help, just give me a few minutes... :3 Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:13, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hope this is good enough for you, Thistle! Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 01:21, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Good job! Shelly For a limited time only 05:22, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Velvet (Q) ~ Approved

File:Velvet.queen.png Since Fallow's was declined, I wanted a shot at it. Comments? Jayce (  ) 04:25, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, Cloudy! Make the collar bend in towards her neck a bit more; it looks like it's a bit thick on that side xP, define the area without the shading (light) on the haunch and shoulder a bit more, and, this is just my opinion, but lighten the eyes up a tad; they look a bit dark. -ScarletwindLisanna 04:31, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. Nice job! Ivyheart =P 05:34, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the midriff. (I think that's a highlight, if not, never mind.) ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:13, Mon, Nov, 28, 2011

No highlights on this one. Hollyleaf was a one-time deal. I'll fix her up and re-upload in the morning. Jayce (  ) 06:19, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Color in the nose. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:48, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 17:57, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, please Skye! Looks nice! Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 21:16, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 21:19, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading the front legs a small tad? :D Very awesome. ^^ Thistle. 22:34, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 22:40, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the stomach highlight or brighten the face. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:08, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Cool, maybe move the tag to the front of her neck more. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:13, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

No highlights on this one. Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 00:21, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Doesnt matter if theres highlights or not the stomach and face need to be the same brightness. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:25, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

I know that, Iceheart. I'm not stupid. I'll just redo the shading - no big deal. Jayce (  ) 00:27, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh. Jayce (  ) 06:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

On the front paw farthest away from us, there is a little gray line or something right next to the line through the foot. I don't think it's supposed to be there. User:Shadewing/Sig 21:19, November 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Dunno, but's it's gone now. Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 21:31, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 22:34, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce (  ) 23:14, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (Alt. L) ~ Approved

Onestar.leader.altThis is most likely going to be declined. See CotC, he is some light brown tabby with white markings. Comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

No, you're fine. He looked like he had white srtipes on his legs and tail in CotC, but the error must be put in trivia on his page and the page must be cited before this can be done. Shelly For a limited time only 02:04, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

His white markings on his legs and tail look almost pale gray, not white so try to brighten that. And blur where the white meets the brown on the chest. Mistypebble♪Good day♪ just go with the flow 02:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Also, since you're working from this image, it looks like his body and haunches have white stripes as well. Try to match the image as closely as possible. Shelly For a limited time only 02:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Shelly. Maybe enlargen the white strip in the chest. Lighten the shading on the haunch a little bit. Good work. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:59, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shading is fine, Sandstorm, oh well, it looks strange...  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:33, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

You could try making the white stripes less prominent as it goes up. That would probably look more natural. ~Breezewhisker~ 03:48, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look cream to me. My motto is: When in doubt, color-pick! Iveh Yo! 04:06, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

It looks cream to me too. And could you make the stripes slightly more pointed? It makes them look more natural. Looks good! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:48, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fail. I made the stripes slightly more pointer, and I made them white. Next time I won't choose a such a difficult tabby.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    15:46, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is actually really cool looking. Blur the white stripes more. Givingheartstar Enjoy :D 19:22, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

No, I (and I think Ivy) meant the stripes look cream in the CotC image. XD Not on here. I was saying you should make them cream on here to match. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:28, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The bottom stripes are white, but slightly cream, all of the others are white.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:40, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

I like that color Stoneclaw, but Im looking on this and can you blur the white stripes and blend them with brown a little? Its good on the tail :-) LeafyAbsolute maniac 16:54,November 15,2011 (UTC)

Pretty! But with the white and cream stripes, it looks awkward just switching colors on the stripes, could you maybe make them all one colour? Sweetflower 01:12, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste on <----- side of his face in between the whiskers, and can you smudge the white stripes? 17:58, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

There's also a tiny bit of waste above both his ears. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 19:44, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge and blur the white stripes, and smudge the earpink into the ear. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:11, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I will fix the waste.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:21, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch on -----> that side a touch. Beatiful! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:08, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There is no waste.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    05:25, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, there is a bit of waste right above the gap between the forepaw and haunch as well as right to --> that side of the haunch. Tilt your screen to see it. Also, make the earpink on <--- that side of us stay confined to the ear as there is a bit it on the side (->) where you can see the ear tilted. This looks great! Atelda insert vague subtext here 04:51, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

The stripe on the legs look sprayed on. Could you smudge then or blur them more? Also, there is some white leaking from his hind paw onto his haunch. 09:05, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the image.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    18:39, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

This look really good. The only thing I'd do is maybe darker the fur on the back. It appears a little darker in the picture. ~Breezewhisker~ 18:51, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

I lied. Looking at it again it looks just fine. Ignore me. ~Breezewhisker~ 18:53, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit yellow instead of white. 21:08, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can i do lillykit and withdraw this one? I am withdrawing.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:57, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

I am withdrawing this to do Pinenose.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:00, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, she is reserved.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:09, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The creamy brown stripes comes from the image, oh well. I color picked. Wait... Why aren't changes showing?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:31, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:46, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. wrong file name...  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:51, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes on the body look yellow. The ear pink looks a little bit to bright. There are two dots right above the ears, waste. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:58, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is completely fine. Splook it's a long way down. 23:52, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome Stoney! I think you should blur the stripes on the tail. Tell me if you disagree though. StarshineCinderheart Awaits Lionblaze's Return 22:37, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe the white stripes on the tail should be thinner like the cream stripes on the body. Blossomtear Tearing the blossom 16:39, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are fine.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:33, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes so they're less rounded at the ends and sharper. llwildheartl02:22 Sun Nov 27

Reuploaded. I am a failure. I messed with the stripes, :)-- ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:14, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are too dark, and a bit dirty yellow, maybe make them more like Daisy's color? And make ALL the white on him that color, instead of having some white and some cream? It looks odd this way. Also, the tips of the stripes need to be pointed a bit more still. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:49, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:38, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I totally didn't mean for you to smudge the stripes like that, but it looks really cool this way ^^ smudge the pelt colour into the earpink a tad more. llwildheartl04:00 Wed Nov 30

It does look cool~ Blur where the white meets the rest of the body on the chest/belly/whatever you call it. Not a whole lot, but you get my point. xD Jayce (  ) 05:21, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, they look awesome like this. 8D But ALL the white needs to be cream. Meaning the chest and the tail too. It's been commented on multiple times, but it's still not fixed.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 18:53, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Paleclaw, I know it's bad but I am trying my best, though it probably won't make it. XD  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:44, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, shut up, Stoney. This is beautiful <3 CBA? llwildheartl04:00 Fri Dec 2

Approved. Jayce (  ) 05:49, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Alt. Q) - Approved

Tallpoppy.queen.altUgh... Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 15:20, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! She looks kinda cross-eyed, though, and can you put less shading on the foreleg closest to us? Because I think you used highlights on this one, and if you did, make it not look so straight. Sorry, I'm a terrible explainer. :3 Ivyheart =P 17:46, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading a lot. oblivionAudience? 19:47, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes may not be showing. -ScarletwindLisanna 20:00, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

If they are showing, the eyes still looked cross-eyed. Sweetflower00:58 Thu Nov 24

The changes aren't showing yet. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:26, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Now they are -ScarletwindLisanna 17:40, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more visible. It's kinda hard to see. Silverhmm 21:22, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me, just make it a bit bigger. Anf blur the shading. Sweetflower01:36 Fri Nov 25

Re-uploaded. Reworked the shading. -ScarletwindLisanna 04:52, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mm. Much better. However, there seems to be an area of non-shaded pelt right beside the haunch. Shade that in, please :3 llwildheartl04:59 Fri Nov 25

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 23:08, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 23:23, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:46, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the top of the hind leg to keep the shading consistent. ~Breezewhisker~ 06:45, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 23:58, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste on the back. Silverhmm 18:39, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:26, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

No one's commented in a while, so I'm gonna say, CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna
04:45, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry to break CBA, but pinken the earpink a bit. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 19:17, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Leopard, change the heading next time. Jayce (  ) 19:18, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back looks blotchy. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 19:19, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Instead of saying what's wrong with it, Sandstorm, try suggesting a way to fix it. Jayce (  ) 19:24, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I just wanna ask: where's the light source? The shading placement doesn't make sense to me :s llwildheartl21:15 Tue Nov 29

Re-uploaded Huge shading make-over... Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 22:38, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stomach shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:59, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:47, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Much better ^^ Darken the shading a tad. llwildheartl03:52 Wed Nov 30

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 04:03, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the muzzle, in the little area right below the whiskers. Jayce (  ) 05:26, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:57, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the bottom of the belly. llwildheartl01:47 Thu Dec 1

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 04:14, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 Hours -ScarletwindLisanna 22:10, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 22:23, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Shadepelt (Lo) ~ Approved

File:Shadepelt.loner.pngNow I can upload it. *shot* ~Breezewhisker~ 01:26, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty, Breeze! Brighten the ear-pink, blur the shading on the neck and maybe add some under the chin. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:28, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear-pink and make it triangular too. Som eof the shadin gis in the wrong place too if you look on the tutorial. The two middle paws are covered in shading and the hindquarter line goes up to the back. And the tail is covered in shading too. (Just going by what's on the tutorial). Sweetflower01:34 Mon Nov 28

There should be some shading on the front of the middle legs and the top of the tail since the light source is in front of the cat in slightly above. ~Breezewhisker~ 01:42, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Not shading, I meant light/highlights. XP ~Breezewhisker~ 01:42, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice Breezewhisker, brighten the earpink a bit. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:03, Mon, Nov, 28, 2011

I broke the wiki. OTL I don't know what I did.

Anyway, I'll try and edit it tomorrow. ~Breezewhisker~ 06:00, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There's a subtle difference. ~Breezewhisker~ 21:57, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded (Again). Fixed the shading a bit. ~Breezewhisker~ 22:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear-pink. Sweetflower00:21 Wed Nov 30

I think with the loner lineart, the ear pink could go either way. The head's facing front, so, the ears might as well. It's all up to the artist, and how they see the image, I believe. Just like the eyes on an image. Jayce (  ) 05:31, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

So move it or no? ~Breezewhisker~ 21:39, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Only if you want to. I like it like this personally. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:21, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I like the earpink. Blur the shading just a little bit. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 01:13, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading. I didn't center the earpink as I think the ear is facing forward. ~Breezewhisker~ 21:53, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay all of the other images have the ear pink just in the center. The rules shouldn't change. Also dull the ear pink and blur the highlights a tad. <3 Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:34, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

@Sandstorm It's not really a rule.... and it looks more natural if its facing that way. More realistic. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:03, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't center the earpink since these ears look as if they're facing forward to me, and several have said that it looks fine. ~Breezewhisker~ 22:07, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Comments before approval? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 16:55, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for interupting CBA but I don't like the earpink. Could you please make it a bit more pink? But if anyone disagrees feel free to change the heading back and put up CBA again. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 19:48, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Cinder, when you comment during CBA you have to change the heading back to "For Approval". oblivionAudience? 19:50, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I least I meant to. Sorry 'bout that. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 19:54, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly I really do think the earpink is fine.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:36, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, can you make the earpink the same as her other images? Because this one is duller Sweetflower22:43 Sat Dec 3

The ear pink is fine, Sweet. It's probably how the ear pink is blurred or something. Jayce (  ) 22:44, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Gah. I'm so confused. So do I need to change it or not? ~Breezewhisker~ 23:09, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

No. I am continuing the CBA on this image. Jayce (  ) 23:11, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't mean to be annoying, but it's been 24 hours. XD ~Breezewhisker~ 00:46, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

For future reference just wait dont comment. -ſceheartBlah blah 06:23, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Lo) - Approved

Loudbelly.loner I think he would get one since he got left back in the old forest when the Clans left. Well, comments? Blossomtear Tearing the blossom 16:46, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Does he get a loner? Did we ever discuss this at all? Well, if he does, define the earpink and blur the highlights. User:Shadewing/Sig 16:53, November 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The discussion is on the talk page. Are his eyes purple? I think you should change them to more of a blue. Ivyheart =P 17:04, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

@Shadewing. No highlights on this one.

@Ivyheart. I took the eye color from his elder image... should I change it still? Blossomtear Tearing the blossom 18:20, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well he could get one along with the others who died. Tone down the shading a tad and make the ear pink more visible. Silverhmm 18:43, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes are purple, fix that, define the earpink, and blur the shading a tad.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    20:02, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye if you want too. Sweetflower20:22 Sun Nov 27

Yes, you should change it to another color. Ivyheart =P 20:45, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Blossomtear Tearing the blossom 00:13, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading pwease. Sweetflower01:26 Mon Nov 28

And make the ear-pink more triangular please. Sweetflower01:29 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded Sorry, I've been really busy. --Blossomtear Tearing the blossom 20:21, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a tad bigger. Sweetflower23:25 Sat Dec 3

Earpink looks fine to me. CBA? llwildheartl08:06 Sun Dec 4

Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 06:23, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwhisker (Alt.W) - Approved

Rainwhisker.warrior.altTell me youre not going to declide this, its manga alt, look in The Lost Warrior. Please :-) LeafyAbsolute maniac 07:25,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading a bit. And define the earpink. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 17:02, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm I mistakenly blurred hightlights, I maded something with it LeafyAbsolute maniac 18:02,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Oh and I forget earpink, fixed now LeafyAbsolute maniac 18:06,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Erm, wasn't he an apprentice? Sweetflower18:07 Wed Nov 30

  • steals* The stripe on the head looks a tad uneven, could you smooth it out please? I love this. Iveh Yo! 19:17, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

If it was The Lost Warrior, he's a warrior, not an apprentice, Sweet. Jayce (  ) 20:15, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yes reuploaded :-) LeafyAbsolute maniac 20:46,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Could you add a bit of depth to his eye? Maybe one lighter pixel at the bottom? Shelly For a limited time only 18:48, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac 19:26,December 1,2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail stripes. Nice! User:Shadewing/Sig 20:31, December 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Could you colour pick the eye colour from his warrior? They're a lot lighter than this. oblivionAudience? 20:44, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac 09:17,December 2,2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I see nothing wrong with this, it's beautiful! CBA? Iveh Yo! 05:48, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 06:23, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Bouncefire (Alt. W)~ Approved

Bouncefire.warrior.alt If Russetfur gets one so does he, comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:04, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Now this is what I call pro. Define the tail shading -Bloo!yo 00:16, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty x3 *noms* Brighten the earpink. Mistypebble 01:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldnt he be short haired, or was it shown otherwise? Hey Shelly.... Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 01:21, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- He was shown as long hair as far as i can tell. This is my 43rd charart... -ſceheartBlah blah 01:57, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. Blend the shaded parts more into the non-shaded parts. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:06, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Lighten the ear pink. Right now it looks purpleish. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:36, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 21:59, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:07, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

If i blur it more then it blends to well with the pelt, the ear pinks on this colour are impossible. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:14, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Iceheart, this is a beautiful image. Jayce (  ) 19:20, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Why thank you. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:46, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong, so CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:24, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. ---ſceheartBlah blah 06:23, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Frogleap (W) ~ Approved

Frogleap.warrior Hah! I found viable reasons to make both the Ceaderpelt kits! :D Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 01:16, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Add neck shading. --Leafstrike-- 01:26, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Neck shading is fine, this is lovely.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:30, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. Sweetflower01:35 Fri Dec 2

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 01:46, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

I still think there should be neck shading. :/ --Leafstrike-- 02:00, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

There is neck shading. The light is just coming from the front, and he's a dark cat, so it looks lighter. Shelly For a limited time only 02:10, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, then darken it a bit. --Leafstrike-- 2:43am Fri Dec.2/11

I'd rather not. The lighting is coming directly from the front. He shouldn't have much of a shadow there, if any. Shelly For a limited time only 03:22, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

There shouldn't be shading on the front of the neck if the light scource is forward. I would erase some of the shading on the shoulder a bit. Cats have large shoulders and it would help the neck shading look better. ~Breezewhisker~ 05:27, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 05:32, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Shellheart, but can you lighten this a bit? I can barely see his stripes. Silverhmm 14:44, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I prefer subtlety, and I picked this color based on his father's charart made slightly darker. I won't lighten the coloring. Shelly For a limited time only 14:49, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Shelly. The color looks good. Blur the earpink a little. User:Shadewing/Sig 20:29, December 2, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Lighten the shading on his tail, then; it looks darker than on his body. oblivionAudience? 20:30, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Since the light is coming from the front, maybe darken the leg shading. --Leafstrike-- 8:42pm Fri Dec.2/11 20:42, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 01:54, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading on his belly, just above where the line of the haunch is. oblivionAudience? 03:34, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 03:43, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the belly and dull the ear pink. It's too bright for the body. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 19:11, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on his belly is blurred and the ear-pink is appropriately colored. Shelly For a limited time only 20:14, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit and blur the shoulder shading ever-so-slightly. I love this image so much. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:34, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does he look like he's tinted green? No offense Shelly, I just want to make sure I'm not seeing things. Iveh Yo! 05:47, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't use a greenish-brown for it, but the highlight may be giving it a green look. I don't think it's so bad, though. It isn't blatantly green like Jingo used to be, haha. Shelly For a limited time only 17:52, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a little? Ivyheart =P 00:10, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's fine like this. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:37, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

24 hours. Shelly For a limited time only 04:28, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (KP) ~ Approved

File:Honeypaw (SC).kittypet.png They were taking food from kittypets, and now that her gender's confirmed, she gets a kittypet image as well. I figured she didn't get the collar though, so I removed it. Jayce (  ) 02:26, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, Sunfish KP :P. It really does look like Sunfish. Lighten the shading a tad, or darken the base a tad. That's it really. :P ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes!

02:32, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I colored picked again, and this is the darkest I'll make it. Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 02:36, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart where you removed the collar.

~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes!

02:55, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

You need to be more descriptive. Where do I thicken the lineart? Jayce (  ) 02:58, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Between her shoulder and her chin. Shelly For a limited time only 03:22, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. At least someone was specific enough. >.> Jayce (  ) 03:25, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

The neck looks weird. Like on the chest where the collar was. It should be moved and curved in a bit. ~Breezewhisker~ 03:56, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does that look better? Jayce (  ) 04:06, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Much. :) ~Breezewhisker~ 04:09, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. Define the earpink slightly and if you can blur the shading a bit more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:21, Sat, Dec, 3, 2011

Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 05:29, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the nose and blur the shading just a little bit. <3 llwildheartl08:16 Sun Dec 4

Re-uploaded..... I'm not adding shading to the's fine. Jayce (  ) 15:43, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, Cloudy. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 13:29, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:23, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice Blanks~ Approved

File:Appblankshortf.pngFile:Appblankshortm.pngAppblanklongfFile:Appblanklongm.pngOkay figured id finally post these. Its going to take forever to get them approved anyway. So ill make the back ground transprent when im done, and deal with any half erased pixels. Its just easier that way. And ill post the MCAs after these are approved. Its gonnna be a long approval process.... -ſceheartBlah blah 05:03, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I got bored and played with these to make a charart already (random cahrart, not submitting) and found that there's a bit of blurred lineart around the image. Take out the white and fill in the cat in and you can see it. Shelly For a limited time only 22:27, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Woot the comments are slowing down. I said id get rid of the waste when these are CBAed and i will, but for now theres no point. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:08, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the bottom part of the back leg closest to us slant a bit more to match the inside of the leg's slant. If that makes any sense. XD llwildheartl02:30 Fri Dec 2

Not really.. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:35, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

On the longfurred tailThe tip,i looks like, it wass flattend, and it looks werid, maybe curve it a bit more? And make the Background transparent. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:41, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'd move the far hindleg forward so that the toes are barely hidden by the foreleg. That'll help the cat appear more balanced. ~Breezewhisker~ 05:06, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful but could you spread the toes a little? But my computer is messed up so I it might be okay. --Acornflight Med. Cat ofLunarClan! 00:49, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'm kind of nervous critiquing a line art, but on the long haired blanks, the tail tips seem a little flat. Please feel free to disagree. :3 Thistle. 01:02, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

You made them smaller! I liek it. Okay. So. What I meant was that the inside of the back leg closest to us is slanting to the right a bit, correct? Well the outside of the back leg is kinda perfectly vertical, and I think it should slant like the inside of the leg. Keep in mind I'm talking about the bottom of the leg, not the haunch. Hope that makes more sense. llwildheartl03:14 Sat Dec 3

Can you bring the chest closer to the ground, thus bringing the head closer to the ground? Right now it looks sort of like the cat's are making an arch posistion, but still while crouching down though. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:11, Sat, Dec, 3, 2011

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 06:21, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

SO CUTE!!!! Awww. Um, the fluffiness in the longhaired ones needs to stick out more, it looks like the fur is just poofy, not long and sticking out. Also...the wrinkle behind the face is kind of odd, and the face seems to be slightly off in position. But other than that i absolutely love it! can't wait! Does this mean we will have to redo all of the apprentices or once apprenticed characters in this wiki again???? If so, awesome! I'll have lots more work to do and not be bored! xD Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 21:30, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Also the fluffiness is too small. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

The fluffiness looks just fine. Otherwise, the lines will be a pain to color and shade. ~Breezewhisker~ 22:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the top of the long-haired cat's heads? Cat's rarely get long hair there. It's reminiscent of those cats everyone draws with emo bangs, which makes me die a little inside. Shelly For a limited time only 18:12, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

That hurts, Shell. That hurts me. Could you round the tip of the longhaired tail a little more? --Splook it's a long way down. 21:08, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- The tuffs on the tops are fine, the queen charart has them, and it looks weird when its flat. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:39, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can you bring the muzzle closer to the nose <<-- that way. User:OwlXGlitter4EVER/Sig 05:14, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, they sort of look like they're biting their lips, and only sort of look like the chest isn't connected to the underbelly. Other than that...*speechless* Dazzy 12:03, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

They look fine in that regard, Dazzlewing. Cats have :3 faces. You could make the curve on the belly go the other way. Then they'd match up. ~Breezewhisker~ 22:10, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Their paws look odd. They're too big, and they look too round. Look at this. The toes are longer as well. oblivionAudience? 22:51, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Im getting so sick of these blanks. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:28, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

You know what? These are awesome. Comments before approval? llwildheartl01:38 Wed Dec 7

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 00:30, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

MCAs~ Approved

AppblanklongfFile:Appblanklongm.pngFile:Appblankshortf.pngFile:Appblankshortm.png Here these are. All i did was add herbs. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:15, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with these at all. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 01:22, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking, should the hearbs be the same as the MC's and not the Healers? If not, purrfect! Sweetflower01:24 Thu Dec 8

They're just herbs, and honestly, they're fine the way they are. Iceheart, I can't see anything wrong with these either! Jayce (  ) 01:25, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, nevermind, purrfect Iceheart! Sweetflower01:29 Thu Dec 8

Agree. RowanOnly One Can Judge...

Absolutely amazing! Nothing to critique of course! Beautiful as always :) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 01:37, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing to improve either. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 01:53, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Uh... Iceheart... Just out of curiosity... Why were these uploaded over the warrior apprentice blanks? -ScarletwindLisanna 02:56, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

She can't upload them over the normal apprentice blanks/medcat blanks 'cause they're locked for editing. llwildheartl03:17 Thu Dec 8

Oh, okay. I think with the prey hunter blanks, a new file was just created and then replaced on the PCA page in the gallery. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:49, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 02:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oakheart (A) ~ Approved

Oakheart.apprentice Comments? Jayce (  ) 02:33, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, Cloudeh! Define the ear-pink in this ear -->, define where the shading isn't on the back shoulder and haunch a bit more, and, this is just my opinion, but lighten him up a touch, he looks a bit dark. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 02:54, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more please. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D08:08, Thu, Dec, 8, 2011

Since Cloudy won't be able to continue this, I'd like to take this over if that's okay. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not leaving yet, you idiot. I'll still be working on this up until the day we move. Jayce (  ) 16:44, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well now I feel like a derp, thank you. Okay, please blur the highlight/dodge/whatever that is :P Fail MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:46, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

There are no highlights, and the shading's fine. I did fix the ear pink though. Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 16:46, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, since you're leaving and honestly there isn't anything to fix here, CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 17:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce (  ) 17:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt. MC2) - Approved, I tried. Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 01:10, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing!! Could you darken or enlarge the earpink a bit? I don't see anything else wrong with this.....--Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:25, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I changed the heading a bit, if that's fine, so no one will get confused. Make the creases on her broken leg more like the ones on the original MC image. --Leafstrike-- 01:29, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit bigger and more "into" the ear. Sweetflower01:59 Tue Dec 6

Define the shading on the herbs. This is beautiful! Ivyheart =P 02:28, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Could you just cut and copy the lineart on the other image for consistency? This is lovely. llwildheartl02:40 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity

There's waste around the herbs. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 03:21, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity

Lighten and blur the earpink and shading. llwildheartl03:55 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 04:01, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Should the herb be lighter? Add more depth to the shading/highlights on the herb too. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:40, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

Again, DJ, the herbs aren't shaded. There are many types of herbs that are very dark green. Shelly For a limited time only 15:40, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, amazing..I was always thinking if that cat in the manga isnt Spottedleaf xD Hmm can you make a shoulder hightlink a little, ehm *sorry i forget the right word* bigger? o_O LeafyAbsolute maniac 16:40, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity

Is your light source from the front? If so, erase the shading on the front of the legs and the front of the haunch and blur it all a bit :3 llwildheartl20:21 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:30, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading please? MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 01:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:57, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the "highlight" extend further to the right the front leg closest to us and dull the highlights and/or lighten the shading a bit. Maybe lighten the herbs a bit. This is very pretty <3 llwildheartl02:24 Thu Dec 8

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:44, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:59, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 23:00, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (Ki)- Approved

Sol.kit Here is Sol... This is my first charart! I like this a lot. Purplemoon Christmas time! 00:38, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Um... Kit? Since when? oblivionAudience? 00:40, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

He was seen as a kit in Beyond the Code, I think. Anyway, smear the patches to match the other chararts and add shading please. Shelly For a limited time only 00:41, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

There's a quote on his page where he's speaking to his mom, as a kit I assume, since he supposedly hasn't seen Cinders in quite some time. Jayce (  ) 00:42, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Purtyness :3 Add or define the shading a little.Fallenstars, thanks for the memories! 00:46, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Fallenstars, I already said that... Shelly For a limited time only 00:49, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the pelt color is outside the ear lineart on the tufts. Also, make them more natural. Right now it looks like spikes on his ears. User:Shadewing/Sig 01:47, December 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Also, you need to make it transparent. Shelly For a limited time only 02:14, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks too purple. Make it more pink please. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:56, Thu, Dec, 1, 2011

The white looks pure white. Make it a light gray please. Sweetflower12:06 Thu Dec 1

Add shadings LeafyAbsolute maniac 19:23, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

I feel immensely proud XD ANyway, can you smudge the different colours a bit more. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 19:29, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, there seems to be orange in the left ear where black is supposed to be. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 21:10, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I did what you said, but now it has a black background. I don't know how to fix that... Purplemoon Christmas time! 23:16, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Save the pile on your computer as a .png to submit it, not .gif or anything else. This will make it transparent. Also, rename the file Sol.kit.png. Shelly For a limited time only 23:16, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink on ---> this ear. User:Shadewing/Sig 02:57, December 2, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded I enlarged the earpink. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 22:52, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

...are you going to make it transparent? Save it as Sol.kit.png. oblivionAudience? 23:00, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

It is saved as that I even clicked on it. Do you need some help Purplemoon? Sweetflower23:05 Sat Dec 3

Um, yes. The blank opens up with a black background. I can't help it. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 23:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There you go, Purple. ^-^ (sorry if I messed anything up *fail*) Mistypebble 23:21, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I tried to open it up again, but it had a black background! I need to fix something but it always has a black background. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 23:23, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Use the Snipping Tool. Most Windows computers have them. Then just make the white transparent. oblivionAudience? 23:28, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

How do you get to it? Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 23:31, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Another way to do it is, right click on the image, then click 'Save as' and save the picture to your computer. Open it up into gimp, or program you use (I'm assuming gimp since it's the only program I know that does the black BG thing) and you should be fine. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:01, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! I see that you smudged the white patch in, could you smudge it out then blur it? I would make it bigger and make it look better. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 19:30, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you cut off the top of the ears. Fix that please? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:31, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed all of that and it opens up with a transparent background now! Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 20:56, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad. --Splook it's a long way down. 23:01, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me... Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 21:11, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Please, darken the shading. I can't really see it. --User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:48, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

And smudge the colours thogether more. Sky..... Just...dust and echoes 00:10, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 12:28, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur the shading on his front legs and I'll CBA it. ^^ Shelly For a limited time only 02:16, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 03:27, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 04:42, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 05:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lilykit (Ki) ~ Approved

File:Lilykit.kit.png Well....comments? Atelda insert vague subtext here 18:34, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you perhaps just sharpen the patches a bit? It may just be my opinion, but I think it'd look a bit better that way. Shelly For a limited time only 18:45, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

This is just preference, but could you add some black to the left (her right)? It looks kind of bare without a black patch to even it out. Iveh Yo! 19:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 19:46, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Why do she and Seedkit get chararts? Sorry that I didn't see the discussion, but I'm curious. Silverhmm 23:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Her description was cited from Kate's blog. =P Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:19, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the ear pink a bit. She's pretty, Atelda. Jayce (  ) 04:11, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the spots a little more WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:00, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:45, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink stand out a bit more and define the shading? This is lovely! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 19:42, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:39, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

The epicness of this image is showing. CBA? Jayce (  ) 02:10, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 05:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (Alt. L2) ~ Approved

Firestar.leader.alt2 Okay, I actually withdrew another charart for this, so I mean business. Firestar is shown on the cover of The Last Hope with a white muzzle and, if you look down, chest. He has never been described as such before so this deserves an alt. And don't give me anything about us not using book covers, because if you look up, we obviously have been if Leopardstar's up there. Shelly For a limited time only 04:54, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

This also deserves an alt because Firestar is typically described as a bright ginger where on the cover he is dark. Shelly For a limited time only

Oh my goodness, GORGEOUS! *.* Could you brighten the eyes a bit more though? They look kinda grey, but they're shown as bright green on the cover. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:15, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, on the cover of Firestar's Quest he is shown with a white muzzle and white eyes. Sweetflower14:20 Wed Dec 7

No, they're green on there too..... 0.o And anyways, isn't this alt being made for The Last Hope? Not Firestar's Quest. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 14:56, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried to match the pattern in his eyes from the cover of The Last Hope as best I could. I also added a scar on his flank, which I forgot earlier. I would split his ear, but it's not split in the source image. Shelly For a limited time only 15:17, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

This is a little more of a preference kind of thing, but the whole pattern on his body needs to be blurred a little to get it a smoother transition between colors, but that's just kind of my preference. If others think it's fine then disregard this. This is very nice btw Iveh Yo! 22:30, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Ivy, I appreciate the compliment, but I prefer my tabbies unsmudged. It's just my style, as I've observed many tabby cats that look like this. ;) Shelly For a limited time only 22:41, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks lovely, Shelly. :3 But can you lighten the shading on the front leg closest to us? I also have a question.. Now that both of the new apprentice chararts are approved, will we be making them right away?? Just wondering. ^-^ Mistypebble 02:01, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 17:26, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh...My...Gosh...That is BEAUTIFULL!!!!!!!!!! I love it! Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 03:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, do not just comment on an image to say how much you like it. Give Shelly a comment for improvement as well, although I can't find any myself. Jayce (  ) 03:13, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Me either Cloudy. Let's go CBA on this Iveh Yo! 16:42, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 05:46, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (Alt. W) - Approved

Thistleclaw.warrior.alt2 As he's shown in The Rise of Scourge. ☾Moonflight☽ 18:15, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

(As I am too lazy to look it up) did you ever get rid of one of your three reservations so you can do this? SonIvy I love impossible relationships =) 18:18, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

No. If I was supposed to, then decline this. -_- ☾Moonflight☽ 18:20, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind. ☾Moonflight☽ 18:23, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the ear-pink, and there is some gray in between the he haunch, and back paw, and make him long-furred, he looks long-furred. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:50, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Theres waste between his legs -Bloo!Spam! Email! 18:53, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink? :) Thistly. 18:57, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen the ear pink and center it while dulling it.Also smudge the paws and tone down the highlights if your using them. Also darken the shading a touch. Very accurate! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:08, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's dark enough. .-. However, can you blur it and blend it with the highlights a little more (if you use them, that is)? ღ~Cloudskye~ღThe Demon's Lexicon 21:11, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you please blur the neck shading? Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 21:43, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

His legs are shown as dark grey, not black. ❦oblivionR.I.P. 02:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

You forget color one leg..or he have only three dark legs? Leaf-storm,16:45,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: He only has three dark legs. ☾Moonflight☽ 16:52, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and blur the highlights a lot. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 19:19, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ear-pink is fine, Sand. Define the highlight on the face and middle of the tail a bit more. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 02:07, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste, make the earpink just a tad smaller (sorry Scarlet, but she's right) and move the chest highlight to the left a tad/thin out the shading on the left of the chest and thicken it on the right. llwildheart™l00:42 Tue Nov 15

Just letting you guys know that I probably won't be able to work on this until Friday, because of school. ☾Moonflight☽ 11:11, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the high-light into the pelt a little bit more please. Sweetflower Merry Christmas!01:50 Thu Nov 17

There's some waste under the belly. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 19:23, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the eyes be amber unless they said otherwise? Trollsky She who Trolls everything 01:33, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. ☯Stoneclaw☀Merry Christmas! 05:31, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlight a bit. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 17:15, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the tail? Specklestream Let it Snow!

22:12, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Moon? -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 23:20, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

I could take over if Moonflight isn't working on/uploading this anymore. DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin! 08:15, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

I belive you have to wait for that person to say they aren't working on this. For all we know, Moonflight's internet could be down. Just be patient. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:16, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

If it's been a week without work, DJ, you may take over. ღ~Cloudskye~ღThe Demon's Lexicon 00:20, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - shouldn't this charart have white markings on the face, because that's how he was shown in the Rise of Scourge? DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin! 07:51, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes it should. Blur the tail tip and the ear pink. It's very blotchy. Blur the shading too. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:01, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading, the rest looks fine to me. Sweetflower Merry Christmas!02:05 Thu Nov 24

I think the shading looks fine. It shows the size of his shoulder well. Maybe smudge/blur the darker part on the front leg a bit. ~Breezewhisker~ 02:14, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I don't really like the white markings. I blurred the shading just a bit anyway. DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin! 05:54, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading as it looks flat. Neat! AteldaCalypso 01:59, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, the shading look... awkward, because of the smudging, if other people agree with me, do you think you could fix it? Sweetflower Merry Christmas!12:39 Sun Nov 27

Try blurring the shading, not smudging. You also have blurred lineart near his muzzle, tail and a bit on his haunch. Also, make the earpink more triangular. Sorry for all this. xD Mistypebble♪Good day♪ just go with the flow 21:59, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I redid the shading, and the white face markings still bug me. DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin!06:17, Mon, Nov, 28, 2011

Better. Smooth out the shading a little more. Splashpelt♥Two turtle doves♥ 20:39, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white markings and there is waste around the image. Mistypebble♪Good day♪ just go with the flow 21:15, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. --☯Stoneclaw☀Merry Christmas! 01:16, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin!06:00, Tue, Nov, 29, 2011

There is waste under the chin and smudged lineart on the tail. And blur the earpink. Mistypebble♪Good day♪ just go with the flow 20:59, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -the lineart and waste is bugging me, I bet the next comment will be on that. Also now the earpink sucks... DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin!07:38, Wed, Nov, 30, 2011

o.o *meep* There's waste near the tail lineart. .3. Mistypebble♪Good day♪ just go with the flow 20:44, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

My dear apprentice! *so proud* iz good. Make the earpink a tad lighter and blur it :3 llwildheart™l01:50 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded - I never knew it was this good Wildheart.. xD Thanks. Yes I knew the next comment would be on waste. I hope there's none left. DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin!05:53, Thu, Dec, 1, 2011

It is very good :3 but try taking the earpink from here. llwildheart™l04:06 Fri Dec 2

Reuploaded - I <3 this charart. DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin!06:02, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Reuploaded - Now I've got GIMP lets see how this works. DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin!23:16, Sat, Dec, 3, 2011 Blur the white on the tail, and try and smudge it a bit to give it a "furry" look. ღ~Cloudskye~ღThe Demon's Lexicon 23:18, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - like this? I must say this looks spunkeh! DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin!00:02, Sat, Dec, 3, 2011

Looks good! ^^ Just blur the smudging a bit, and there's so smudged lineart on the tail, so fix that too. Nice. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:37, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh. DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin!05:31, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

I love this :) Blur the earpink, and this might be ready. Splashpelt♥Two turtle doves♥ 03:02, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, I just made it worse. DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin!07:40, Wed, Dec, 7, 2011

Lighten the white on his face. ☯Stoneclaw☀Merry Christmas! 00:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - DJCandyBudEveryday I'm shuffilin!07:57, Thu, Dec, 8, 2011

Looks good, apprentice! CBA? llwildheart™l00:06 Sat Dec 10

Speckletail (Lo) ~ Approved

Speckletail.lonerTook the colors from her redone warrior image. Comments? Ivyheart Happy holidays! <3 00:18, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Bootiful! Define the earpink, pwease. AteldaCalypso 00:24, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 00:28, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ^-^ Ivyheart Happy holidays! <3 00:46, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, my love. Troll-de-mort Eh heh heh. 00:50, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the ear-pink please! Sweetflower Merry Christmas!01:22 Mon Nov 28

Brighten the ear-pink and define the light on the tail. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:29, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I shall do as you say, Sky. :3 And yeah, I did everything else too. Ivyheart Happy holidays! <3 04:08, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. This is vewy vewy noice :3 Marry me? llwildheart™l08:05 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded. I shall. :D Ivyheart Happy holidays! <3 00:14, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and lighten the stripes and make a few less of them. Nice job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 08:51, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken her just a tad. ❦oblivionR.I.P. 12:34, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fail. Ivyheart Happy holidays! <3 00:57, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little more WildfireHazelxThorn!you know it! 00:04, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ivyheart Happy holidays! <3 00:07, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

   steals* This is so beautiful! Maybe smudge the stripes just a tad and blur the shading more. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:32, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

@Sandstorm She can't smudge the stripes... it has to look like her elder image. --Snowdazzle Everything's better with Perry!!! 22:05, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I don't think I should blur the shading because then you would barely see it. If someone else thinks I should, though, I'll blur it. Ivyheart Happy holidays! <3 23:57, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Anways, it looks like a stripe is visible in the earpink. Can you fix that? Snowdazzle Everything's better with Perry!!! 14:50, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done! Ivyheart Happy holidays! <3 16:17, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit fatter to match the elder image. llwildheart™l08:10 Sun Dec 4

Reuploaded. Ivyheart Happy holidays! <3 15:55, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. WildfireHazelxThorn!you know it! 23:52, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine too me. Sweetflower Merry Christmas!02:02 Tue Dec 6

Beautiful Ivy! Could you define the tail stripes? They are a tad blurry. StarshineCinderheart Awaits Lionblaze's Return 16:20, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a bit more. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 21:07, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes still need to be bigger. llwildheart™l01:32 Wed Dec 7

And to be quite honest, they don't really match the elder image very well. They look pretty as they are, but for the sake of consistency, you should tweak them. llwildheart™l01:36 Wed Dec 7

Center the earpink a bit. Sweetflower Merry Christmas!22:26 Wed Dec 7

Reuploaded. I redid it. I did it to match the elder image. Ivyheart Happy holidays! <3 04:16, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great. CBA? llwildheart™l00:11 Sat Dec 10

Breezepelt (Ki) ~ Approved

Breezepelt.kitIf Nightcloud gets a queen one, he gets a kit, comments? ☯Stoneclaw☀Merry Christmas! 05:44, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks prickly. I don't know if that's waste or what. SonIvy I love impossible relationships =) 05:45, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading. If you used highlights, lighten them a little. ~Breezewhisker~ 05:47, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Breezepelt wasn't mentioned by name in the After Sunset play. I'm a bit iffy on whether or not he should get a kit charart. Shelly Hey! Hey, SKY! You jelly? 16:46, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I disagree, Shelly. In the After Sunset play (After Sunset: We Need To Talk), it was mentioned that Crowfeather had a son. Unless you can think of any other WC son of Crowfeather's, then this should continue. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 17:07, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't use highlights. ☯Stoneclaw☀Merry Christmas! 17:27, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Well lighten the whole image a bit then. It's so dark the shading is hard to see. And yes, it did mention Crowfeather's kits in the play. Also, it mentions KitS, should the be added to Crowfeather and Nightcloud's page? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 18:08, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Add it, Paleh. Stoney, blur the shading. ღ~Cloudskye~ღThe Demon's Lexicon 22:21, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☯Stoneclaw☀Merry Christmas! 04:02, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

It still looks like there's something weird with the lineart. Try copying and pasting it from the blank. llwildheart™l02:48 Tue Dec 6

Reuploaded. Fixed that, it was waste. ☯Stoneclaw☀Merry Christmas! 02:05, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlight (Whatever you use) that's on the chest area. :) Thistly. 01:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☯Stoneclaw☀Merry Christmas! 02:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! CBA? llwildheart™l00:24 Sat Dec 10 Sandstorm (Alt. W) ~ For Approval

Lichenfur (Lo)~ Approved

Lichenfur.loner She never got a loner charart so here it is. Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 06:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean? She had a loner charart on her page? This should be a redo, shouldn't it....? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 17:35, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

No she got an alt loner, never a normal one. Its because her description was confused, but the same thing happened with Minnowtail and she still got a normal kit, so sould this. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:09, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Ok. Though, technically, now that I looked into it, she actually got an alt elder, not an alt loner, but I guess it doesn't really matter. XD Make the eyes amber. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -ſceheartBlah blah 23:20, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This looks fantastic, Ice! CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 00:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (R. Alt 2) ~ Approved

Sol.rogue.alt2 Umm...comments? Fyi: he does get one, because this description is different then a tortie. xD Jayce (  ) 21:07, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's some smudge waste outside the charart. Beautiful Cloud! :D Silverhmm 21:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is a tad difficult to see, define it please? Iveh Yo! 21:31, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 21:36, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define it a bit more please. Unless changes arent showing then nvm. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 23:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tinkered around with the shading. Jayce (  ) 00:18, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno where my comment went, but I know you did what I said XD Looks beautiful. Setting 24 hours. llwildheartl00:24 Sat Dec 10

Brightheart (Alt.A) - Approved

Brightheart.apprentice.altI'm actually quite fond of this! :) Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 15:37, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you put a little tear at the bottom of her farthest ear? Other than that I actually think this could be CBA'd, you do so well with Brighty =) Iveh Yo! 16:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I <3 Brighy! -ScarletwindLisanna 17:26, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

So cute.. :3 Blur the shading on the front lef that is closest to us. Mistypebble 20:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the shoulder highlight. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:09, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Needs a ... CBA?

^^Wildheart forgot to sign. xD The CBA started two hours before this comment. Jayce (  ) 03:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:55, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Briarlight (Alt. A)~ Approved

Briarlight.apprentice.altComments? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! This is amazing! Darken the shading on the lower back. Jayce (  ) 00:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Awww! Love it! Darken the bit of shading on the tail. Sweetflower00:53 Fri Dec 9

(Wait Iceheart, I thought you were only aloud 1 image up for approval?) Sweetflower00:57 Fri Dec 9

Blanks don't count. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, Iceheart. I think you could bring the haunch down a bit more without it looking unnatural. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:04, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Not your Scarlet i edit conflicted eith you on this >.> But go read the discussion page on why i have two images up for approvasl. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:06, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermjust saw Lichenfur's loner and I thought... Sweetflower01:09 Fri Dec 9

Lighten the shading on the rump and lower back a bit.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:01, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I was just told to darken it so no. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Stone on this, it's nearly black on the back. Could you please lighten it a bit? And smooth out the lineart on the back, right by the shoulders. It's looks kinda funny, There's like a big bump where there really shouldn't be. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 23:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I still think you could drop her haunch and legs a bit more. Right now, she kinda looks like she's stalking on her front legs and kicking her hind legs out xP -ScarletwindLisanna 00:06, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Clever me lost all the layers, so the less tweaking i have to do after this the better XD. I love that i got to make the line art and then make it gimpy. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely job. CBA? llwildheartl01:12 Sat Dec 10

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) (A) ~ Approved

Cherryfall.apprenticeHey-hey, looks like I'm the first to submit with the new blanks! Told ya I knew where to put the shading :P I'm thinking of giving the shading a reddish tint, but I wanna hear your thoughts. All colors taken off her kit, though it was kinda difficult. I <3 this and Cherrypaw so much (those on chat should know). Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 02:05, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I went ahead and tinted it, and I made her tail much shorter since in her description it said she has a short, stumpy tail. I can put it back but honestly, I'd rather not for the sake of accuracy Iveh Yo! 03:29, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should put it back, since the description was probably just 'cause she was a kit and all kits have short tails. Just my two cents. llwildheartl03:39 Thu Dec 8

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 04:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D08:01, Thu, Dec, 8, 2011

This is gonna sound weird but her pelt looks yellowish. Can you make her pelt a little oranger/gingerer. (I realize that sounds awkward, and i forgot whether her pelt color is orange or ginger so yeah) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:50, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

All colors were taken from her kit. So if I changed them I'd have to tweak her kit as well. Just sayin' Iveh Yo! 18:11, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

This looks wonderful, Leopard gecko buddy! Just define the ear-pink in the ear closest to use a tad more and I'll CBA this. -ScarletwindLisanna 23:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed: this is beautiful. Brighten the "highlight" on the shoulder. llwildheartl00:32 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 00:38, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

The hightlight on the back should be conected to the tail one. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:47, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

If so then all the loners do as well Iveh Yo! 00:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I dont see what loners have to do with anything but its so. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I mean the way the shading is. Same with rogues. They have a light part on their back and a light portion of their tail and they're not connected. Iveh Yo! 00:57, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay well not connected but yours needs to be higher. Ill CBA it when tyou fix it. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:59, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 01:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 01:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 01:17, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudtail (A) ~ Approved

Cloudtail.apprentice Oakheart's is not a re-do, but a normal charart, so this is allowed. I wanted to do him before I left. I don't care who else does mine, as long as I could re-do his image. Comments? Jayce (  ) 02:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

<3 Yay Cloudy I'm happy you got him! Define the light part on his haunch and smudge the pelt into the earpink. *is really happy you got who you wanted :3* Iveh Yo! 02:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <3 Jayce (  ) 02:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. oblivionAudience? 03:01, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 03:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch and shoulder a bit more; i can't tell if there's supposed to be a highlight on his haunch. [Yes, i know you don't use highlights, but I'm too lazy to think of something else that doesn't say highlights xP] -ScarletwindLisanna 03:21, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Meh. Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 03:27, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the unshaded part (or highlight) on the haunch a tad bit bigger? If not, just blur the shading on the haunch. Mistypebble 22:05, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 22:08, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's beautiful. This should be approved fast, we don't want to get this delayed by Cloud's unstable connection. Soo.. CBA? Splook it's a long way down. 22:11, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Augh, sorry for interrupting CBA, but... brighten the "highlight" on the shoulder and darken and enlarge the face shading a bit. I'll CBA it after you reupload. llwildheartl22:38 Sat Dec 10

And tone down the earpink a bit. llwildheartl02:29 Sun Dec 11

....done. Jayce (  ) 03:46, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reverted as asked, and approving. Jayce (  ) 03:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (KP) ~ Approved

Nettlesplash.kittypetI figured if Honeypaw would get one, why not him? And I really don't like this one for some reason.. >.< Mistypebble 18:33, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot to erase some of the collar lineart near where the head meets the neck. :3 User:Twilightheart200/Sig 18:35, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading lots. --Leafstrike-- 18:36, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Do you see how I have the neck on Honeypaw? Can you try and match that so the neck doesn't look so thick? Jayce (  ) 19:12, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

<3 dull the ear pink a tad and give the eye some depth. Also blur the highlights and shading, try to blend them together. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 19:16, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, do not repeat what's already said. Moonleaf already asked her to blur the shading. Eye style is artist's choice. Jayce (  ) 19:18, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading, fixed the neck and I took the earpink off from his warrior image, but I'll dull it if anyone else agrees with Sandy. ^-^ Mistypebble 19:57, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

No, it shouldn't be dulled, if anything, it should be brightened. Define it a bit and make it stand out from the pelt more. Good job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:29, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded K, brightened the earpink. ^-^ Also, forgot to mention that there is no highlights on this one. Mistypebble 22:02, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink the same as his warrior image. Sweetflower23:27 Sat Dec 3

I did take the earpink off his warrior image, I just brightened it... Mistypebble 00:49, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart by a pixel or two where you took off the collar. ~Breezewhisker~ 00:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define it a tad? Sweetflower01:02 Sun Dec 4

Reuploaded Is that what you meant, Breezewhisker? And I assumed that you meant the earpink, Sweet so I decided to re-do it. Mistypebble 14:44, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you thickened it on the chin. I meant the neck. ~Breezewhisker~ 19:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like this? Mistypebble 20:04, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a tad on the hindquarters :3 Splook it's a long way down. 20:59, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried xP Mistypebble 21:33, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:46, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stupid haunch shading.. >.< Mistypebble 00:58, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad darker. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 16:46, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I picked it directly off of the warrior charart, so I'm not changing it. Mistypebble 20:46, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you did overblur it though. Sharpen it a tad. Iveh Yo! 00:18, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but can I withdraw this? I want to reserve another charart. Mistypebble 02:03, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, I'll work on it tomorrow. xD Mistypebble 02:58, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Decided to re-do it since I lost my layers Dx Picked the colors straight off of his warrior charart. Mistypebble 20:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the eyes to add depth, darken the shading a bit, and blur the earpink. Looks lovely. llwildheartl00:15 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded Better? :3 Mistypebble 01:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 18:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt.A) ~ Approved

File:Ivypaw.apprentice.alt2.pngIvypaw needed a silver tabby alt, it's it's in the characters needing art, I believe. Anywho, I'm shocked this wasn't snagged. xD Thistle. 04:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wrong file, Thistly! Shelly For a limited time only 04:16, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad, Thistle! Maybe add one more stripe to the tip of her tail? -ScarletwindLisanna 04:18, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Remove the white belly and smudhe the pelt colour into the right (-->) ear more. I love the stripes, but I'd make this match the kit image more. llwildheartl04:43 Thu Dec 8

I'll re-upload in a moment, but I just thought i'd point out that since they're alts from different pages/pictures, I don't think they need to match, since I matched the style on the face, and I also think the body stripes match the face. But, you're the Sr.Warrior, so if that's still what you think, I can change it. Thistle. 15:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't have to match the main images since it's an alt, but it's the artist's choice. There's some waste by the tail. This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 16:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Theres not trivia for this. When was she described as a silver tabby? If its the cover of Fading echoes, this doesnt get an alt. Shes still tabby and white on the cover, just s different pattern, and that doesnt permit an alt. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:16, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste near the last stripe on her tail. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 04:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Purple, don't repeat things that have already been said. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, I didn't see that there. Sorry. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 20:39, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

If it shouldn't have an alt, it shouldn't have been in the chararts needing art. -_- Thistle. 23:11, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it's been on that page for like a month and nobody took it off. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:13, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ya well its a shame that it was on the page, inever look cause i stand by that the page should exist, but just because it was on the page for a long time doesnt mean it should get an alt >.> -ſceheartBlah blah 23:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still sure that just because you didn't see it, doesn't mean someone else hadn't and could've taken it down but did not. Thistle. 23:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I dont see why it being on the list is such a big deal. The fact is she should get an alt for the cover, regardless of what list she was one. Argueing about a list has nothing to do with it. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

The reason it's such a big deal is because we wouldn't have this problem if it wasn't on the list and that's all i'm saying. I'm not in on why it should get an alt, it was on the list, I took it, and that's all there was to it for me. Thistle. 04:13, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thislte there is some waste by the tip of her tail. xD Besides that I don't see anything wrong... --Cinder Real or Not Real? 14:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Cinder that's been said three or four times now. I get the idea. But I won't be re-uploading this until this whole alt thing is cleared up. Thistle. 17:49, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is declined unless theres another cite for when she was called a silver tabby, without white. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:47, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

It's been added. Atelda insert vague subtext here 19:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then this is fine just get rid of the white. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

It was actually pale gray to represent a realistic tabby, but I removed it whatsoever. Thistle. 21:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me, my dear apprentice. :) Amazing job. ^^ CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:49, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sorreltail (A) ~ Approved

Sorreltail.apprentice I hope this is alright. XD I saw Iceheart has three image on the chart, so I jumped in. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 01:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, we're allowed to do three we can start redoing apprentices too? Great work! smudge the earpink into the ear. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:15, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. Define the tail shading. Ivyheart =P 01:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.' Shelly For a limited time only 02:49, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the chest shading a little bit. Silverhmm 13:07, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 17:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is wonderful, just move the face highlight a ,little closer to the middle of the face. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. This is awesome! llwildheartl00:50 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 03:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 03:54, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) ~ Approved

File:Tigerstar.apprentice.pngComments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:21, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Take the black muzzle out. It was deemed a mistake and removed from his description. Shelly For a limited time only 01:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Also, there's a lot of waste around the feet. Shelly For a limited time only 01:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:27, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Hmm... he was mentioned as having scars throughout his apprenticeship. Maybe add a few scars, but not as many? And not the scar over his nose, we saw him get that one. Shelly For a limited time only 01:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, Stone! Sharpen the scars a bit more and give him a black muzzle. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:15, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shellt told me not to have the black muzzle...Should I still put it on?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:54, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The black muzzle was mentioned one time early in the series. By our standards, it's a mistake and I removed it from the description and put it in the trivia. Shelly For a limited time only 04:02, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. llwildheartl00:52 Sat Dec 10

I checked 3 times just now, there is no waste outside of the lineart.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:18, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Should he have such vivid scars in being just an apprentice? Splook it's a long way down. 03:24, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Stone, there's waste. It's in between the whiskers. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 06:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink more. Sweetflower00:02 Sun Dec 11

I actually blurred a lot there, at first I thought it was even too much, so I think it's fine...  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:09, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:01, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Snowfur (A) -Approved

Snowfur.apprentice Yes I can do this. Anyways, i love Snowfur, so I decided to do her. Well, comments? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 01:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty! Define the shading a bit and smudge the gray on the ear closest to us so that the ear-pink goes all the way to the top. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Scarlet! :D SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Two uploads? This is beautiful! Setting 24 hours. llwildheartl00:54 Sat Dec 10

Sorry to interrupt CBA, but the gray tipped ears should not be included as the earpink. As in the earpink should all be pink because if you look at her other images, the earpink is "on top" of the gray. Atelda insert vague subtext here 18:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, since I had to put the gray ears under the earpink, the gray just poofed. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:03, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Two interrupted CBAs? D: Add the gray to the back of the far ear and make the gray on the closest ear larger. llwildheartl02:28 Sun Dec 11

The tip is covered on both ears, they cant. Continuing CBA. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:34, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Specklepaw (A) - Approved

Specklepaw.apprentice Hmm... not pale brown enough? Anyway, comments? oblivionAudience? 02:21, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make him a tad more brown.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

He's "pale brown". Do you mean saturate him because he looks too grey? oblivionAudience? 03:00, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

In my opinion, he looks kinda tawny. I think you should just run the burn tool over his pelt at a low setting, because isn't tawny a lighter light brown or a deviant from that color? Iveh Yo! 16:38, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 19:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

He looks a little red to me but that might just be me, brighten the tail highlight. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. He looks fine on my computer. oblivionAudience? 18:20, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Swiftpaw (A) ~ Approved

File:Swiftpaw.apprentice.pngI'm so proud of this! I had to fit this in fast, the more the merrier, eh? I love Swiftpaw<3 Comments? Splook it's a long way down. 02:37, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Should it not match his kit? oblivionAudience? 02:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, his kit isn't listed for a redo. Not trying to be mean, but I think we should stick with how his kit looks. Kay? :3 Iveh Yo! 02:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Regardless, his kit image should be tweaked, since it's gray and white, not black and white. xD Jayce (  ) 02:48, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blames on me for completely forgetting about the kit image XD I'll change it tomorrow. Ivy: I would never think you'd be being mean, so it's 'aight ;3 Splook it's a long way down. 02:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Personally I think this is fine and should stay as is The kit image is all blotchy and should be redone. Shelly For a limited time only 02:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll keep it then. Thanks, Shell. Splook it's a long way down. 02:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

MAke the nose gray and darken the shading on the chest where it meets the arm. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Splook it's a long way down. 00:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the shading less periwinkle-ish and more grey? --Leafstrike-- 02:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Splook it's a long way down. 03:28, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the patches just a smidge? They look a bit sharp. :3 Sky..... Just...dust and echoes 09:20, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Could you whiten the white a bit if possible? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 18:26, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Splook it's a long way down. 20:30, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:06, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Gorsepaw (A) - Approved

File:Gorsepaw.apprentice.png Wahooo, I dont have to worry about the 35 limit anymore! Anywho, I know this doesnt look like how it did before, but I felt this style fit his description more, but I dont mind changing it to match the old app. image. -Bloo!yo 15:39, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think this is fine. I've been wanting to see his kit charart redone since the ginger is just specks, it doesn't look natural. Lighten up the shading on the white and make it a bit less red. -ScarletwindLisanna 15:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful, Bloo, but I think Leaf-storm should get this charart as she posted it yesterday and it was declined because, at the time, we were not allowed to to old apprentices yet. This was directly before the current decision was made. I tried leaving her charart on this page but someone else archived it. I think it would be nice to extend the invitation to finish this to her. Shelly For a limited time only 15:43, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm yes, sorry I reserved him as well, Im sorry Bloo :-( LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:29,December 9,2011 (UTC)

Aww, do I really have to? From what I remember, I reserved him the moment the blanks were approved, but held back posting this since Ivy told me we were gonna do the characters in the ones needing chararts first. And technically Leafstorm didnt reserve this. Check the table -Bloo!yo 22:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't you ask Leaf-storm? Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 22:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Regardless of anything, this should be renamed Gorsepaw (A). ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 00:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

It shoudlnt be renamed. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

T.T I never remember what is what >.< ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 00:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

No, you're right, Regi. Iceheart just thought you meant the file name. I changed the heading. llwildheartl01:00 Sat Dec 10

Thanks Im really happy now! :-( LeafyAbsolute maniac,8:16,December 10,2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the ginger? It almost looks russet right now -{{SUBST:Signatures/Guradian1098}} 17:24, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Uh, I cant tell what Leafstorm meant by that, so Im just gonna reupload this, Re-uploaded -Bloo!yo 17:40, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Whatever Bloo this image is yours. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Honeypaw (A) - Approved

File:Honeypaw (SC).apprentice.png I sorta like this one... Comments? =D Rainlegs 03:00, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch just a tad. This is wonderful~ Jayce (  ) 03:01, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. :3 Rainlegs 04:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Move the "highlight" more along the back. This is lovelyyyy <3 llwildheartl00:56 Sat Dec 10

Thanks, but, I disagree. The light is coming from in front of her, so her head would be blocking any light coming to her back, really. If anyone else still disagrees, however, I'm willing to change it. Rainlegs 01:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well if you won't add the "highlight" on the back, enlarge the one on the haunch. :3 llwildheartl22:36 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded. Better? :3 Rainlegs 22:57, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. CBA? Iveh Yo! 02:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (A) - Approved

Onestar.apprentice Nothing special, and used my own shading style. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 21:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink more visible on his right ear? (our right) Silverhmm 22:07, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It was because of the shading, but oh well. --Leafstrike-- 22:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Could you reverse the way the shading is in the eyes? It's kinda illogical, as he'd probably have darker shading at the top of his eyes because of his "eyebrows". Other than that, I see nothing wrong with this beautiful image. llwildheartl01:07 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded Wait for changes... :) --Leafstrike-- 01:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 19:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 19:29, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. CBA? Iveh Yo! 00:27, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (A) - Approved

Brightheart.apprenticeComments? All colors, patterns, etc. all taken from her alt. apprentice charart which I also made. -ScarletwindLisanna 23:07, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Didn't Ice say we could only remake one apprentice at a time? She said we can only have two chararts on this page if one is a new charart and not a remake of an old apprentice. Shelly For a limited time only 23:39, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

She said that one of them had to be an apprentice redo in order to have two on the approval page. She didn't say whether we can have two. I'll ask her. -ScarletwindLisanna 23:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

She says that we can have two apprentice redos up. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt a bit more into the ear-pink. Sweetflower00:40 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks to me that there is a white pixel on the top of the ear to the right >> Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 02:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

There's nothing there -ScarletwindLisanna 03:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see anything wrong, so CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 18:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Feathertail (A) ~ Approved

Feathertail.apprenticeI'm so happy I got Feathertail! I tried really hard to make it look like her warrior. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad for a first charart ^^. Smudge the earpink on her right ear (our right) down a bit. Silverhmm 23:37, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad. And did you get the eye colour off her other images? It looks too dark. Sweetflower23:40 Fri Dec 9

Re-uploaded I used the eye colors from the warrior. How is it now?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:07, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Smudge the pelt (our right) at the bottom of the ear-pink into it more. (If that meakes sense) Sweetflower00:44 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

On the shoulder there should be a patch with no shading, could you add that? Because it looks like there is shading all over the front shoulder, when there should be a patch without it. Sweetflower23:10 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:42, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. CBA? Iveh Yo! 02:51, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (A) ~ Approved

Thistleclaw.apprentice I don't like Thistleclaw but I love his design! Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is beatiful. Can you smudge the pelt into the earpink? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 06:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you!  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:22, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define ear-pink on --> this ear LeafyAbsolute maniac,8:18,December 10,2011 (UTC)

The earpink doesn't fill the whole ear on the ear farthest away from us, can you fill it in? ^-^ Wonderful job. Mistypebble 13:09, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed the ears. Thanks you guys! :)  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:07, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks a little blotchy, please blur it some =) This is wonderful, I can't wait to see this on his page Iveh Yo! 19:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think I made it too dark but this is as good as I can get the shading. :P  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  20:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mottles. Looking good! ^^  ☯Stoneclaw☯    22:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. llwildheartl23:02 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:46, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me, CBA? Iveh Yo! 02:49, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved -ScarletwindLisanna 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt. W) ~ Approved

Sandstorm.warrior.altOn page 271 of The Forgotten Warrior, Sandstorm is described as orange. Pale ginger and orange seem like two different colors to me. I may be mistaken. Anywho, comments? Splook it's a long way down. 17:31, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

She needs stripes. Orange = Ginger. Shelly For a limited time only 17:47, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Splook it's a long way down. 17:54, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit paler/define it. She was also mistakenly said to have golden eyes, so you could give her those too. -ScarletwindLisanna 19:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading Iveh Yo! 19:27, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Splook it's a long way down. 23:48, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:58, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shading is fine, I told her to darken it. Iveh Yo! 02:00, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate this a tad. It looks more browny-ginger than ginger. I like the stripes :3 llwildheartl02:46 Tue Dec 6

Make the earpink stand out more from the pelt. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:40, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

Mind giving me a color example, Wild? If I play with it now, it'll just look more brown xD And thanks :3 Splook it's a long way down. 01:01, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Here you go :3 Something closer to that. llwildheartl01:48 Wed Dec 7

Reuploaded. I want to get this done fast. .. I'm pretty sure you know the reason why. More room for posting and redoing <3 Splook it's a long way down. 02:15, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make it smaller. Sweetflower22:28 Thu Dec 8

Reuploaded. Splook it's a long way down. 02:00, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The base pelt is much better, but the stripes are still kinda brown. Saturate them a bit more? Make 'em more reddish. llwildheartl00:28 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded. And smudged just for the fun of it ;D Splook it's a long way down. 00:42, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink just a bit and this'll b e perfect. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 18:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine, wit this colour coat I doubt youll find a better match. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

You need to center the ear pink it's odd Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 04:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

It is centered. It's completely in the ear. So.. continue CBA. Splook it's a long way down. 16:51, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 18:28, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Frostfur (Lo) ~ Approved

Frostfur.loner 2nd loner, 2nd charart, interesting! Comments? :3 Sweetflower20:33 Sun Nov 27

Make the shading darker and blur it, and possibly lighten up the non shaded areas. Troll-de-mort Eh heh heh. 21:33, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

You have white pixels on the front back paw, behind her ear, on the belly fur, on her front leg closest to us and on the tail. Sorry if I'm wrong. Dx Mistypebble 22:04, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. This is nice! Ivyheart =P 00:21, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, Misty, I'll try to find them, xD Sweetflower00:57 Mon Nov 28

Re-uploaded Thanks Misty I found those! xD Darkened, defined and blurred zee shading. Sweetflower01:18 Mon Nov 28

Maybe a little too dark. She looks sorta grey. And maybe bring the earpink forward a bit. ~Breezewhisker~ 01:30, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

I hate edit conflicts *coughcough*Breeze...*coughcough* xP Define the light on the tail, add shading to the back of the haunch, and fill the lineart on her left forepaw. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:32, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Edit conflict? Where? :P I don't know what one is Dx) Re-uploaded

Forgot to sign^^) I fixed the shading, it was horrible. Sweetflower02:04 Mon Nov 28

Blur the shading some more, and make the earpink mor pink. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 21:10, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:18, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur it like Leopard suggested. Jayce (  ) 06:57, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sweetflower00:15 Wed Nov 30

You made it too dark. Lighten it a bit. If you use layers, try lowering the opacity of the layer with the shading about... hmm... 5-10%. Also, try and make the highlights consistant with each other, as the face is a lot brighter then the rest of the image. Jayce (  ) 05:29, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, I'm not using highlights. And I don't kno whow ot lower the opacity. Sweetflower11:58 Thu Dec 1

Re-uploaded Lightened shading. Sweetflower00:17 Fri Dec 2

In some places, the shading makes the pelt look gray and it doesn't stretch to the very interior edge of the lineart (as in it stops short a few pixels away from the lineart). So smooth over the shading, blur it, and smudge the shading all the way to the edge of the lineart. Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:28, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by "smooth" over the shading?

Forgot to sign ^^ Sweetflower01:30 Fri Dec 2

The shading is blotchy and inconsistent, I think that's what she means. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:52, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Re-uploaded Sweetflower22:01 Fri Dec 2

Make the shading more consistent in intensity and blur it a lot. llwildheartl08:08 Sun Dec 4

Smooth it out as well. It looks darker in some areas then others. Splook it's a long way down. 17:13, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sweetflower21:25 Sun Dec 4

Blur/blend the shading more WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:51, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sweetflower00:26 Tue Dec 6

Thicken and blur the shading a bunch. llwildheartl04:30 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded Sweetflower23:42 Tue Dec 6

The shading still looks a little bit off. Try this style, make it more consistent, and blur it. llwildheartl01:29 Wed Dec 7

I did? Sweetflower14:30 Wed Dec 7

Re-uploaded I'm not sure changes are showing... Sweetflower22:19 Wed Dec 7

I'm withdrawing this. Sweetflower00:57 Thu Dec 8

Never mind. Sweetflower01:00 Thu Dec 8

Actually, I am withdrawing this. Sweetflower01:30 Thu Dec 8

I just can't make up my mind, but I am for sure deciding to keep this up. Sweetflower01:32 Thu Dec 8

Okay the shading placement is fine, but right now it's darker in places that it doesn't make sense for it to be darker in. Thicken the shading more and make sure the shading is consistent: an important trait for a white cat. llwildheartl00:10 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded Never making the mistake of reserving a white cat xD Because it's challenging to get the shading colour purrfect. Sweetflower00:26 Sat Dec 10

White cats and the loner balnks are hard to shade and this is good. CBA?-ſceheartBlah blah 00:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting CBA, but I still think the shading needs to be more consistent. llwildheartl00:59 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded Hope it's good now! :3 Sweetflower13:28 Sat Dec 10

Lighten the whole image as it's starting to look gray and the shading still needs a bit of blurring. Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:09, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded Sweetflower22:56 Sat Dec 10

Restarting CBA. Great job Sweet ^^ Iveh Yo! 00:30, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but the shading needs to be blurred and the right hind leg looks gray, can you fix that? Also, some areas of the shading look like gray patches, at least lighten them if you can't blur 'em. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-suploaded Sweetflower12:36 Sun Dec 11

Aproved. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:50, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Badgerpaw (A) - Approved

File:Badgerpaw.apprentice.png Yay, I actually got him! He's one of my favorite characters. :P I've got two versions of the white currently, both looking like badgers. I don't know which to use, so if you want me to post the other one, just say so. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Post the other one, because I wanna see more of your epic work. The only thing I can think of is to smudge the pelt into the ear pink a bit. *steals* Jayce (  ) 21:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the haunch shading to make it blend more into the highlight? (or unshaded part) Mistypebble 22:00, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Aww... I was kinda hoping to get this, but this is epic! Define the white on the paws and stripe on the haunch. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:07, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Edit Conflicts. X.X Anyways, here's the other version. I smudged the earpink, blurred the haunch shading, and whitened the white. It's pure white right now though so I can't lighten it anymore after this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

All I gotta say is I think you should stick with this version. He really does look amazing, Paleh. Job well done. Jayce (  ) 22:13, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is wonderful, just define the shading a bit more and it will be perfect. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:52, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And maybe smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. This is wonderful. llwildheartl01:08 Sat Dec 10

Mousewhisker (A) - Approved

Mousewhisker.apprenticeHmm i taken him because i tweaked his warrior charart, shading are horrible :-( LeafyAbsolute maniac,20:18,December 10,2011 (UTC)

The shading is fine, Leaf. ^-^ Just blur the chest shading along with the front foot that is farthest away from us, and the back leg. (one that is closest to us) Mistypebble 20:27, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,20:32,December 10,2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the head and make the gray on the front paw lgihter Bloo!yo 01:05, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Once you've done that I'll CBA this Iveh Yo! 03:01, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Done, reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,7:57,December 11,2011 (UTC)

I edited him myself now, because he has a more white on his head LeafyAbsolute maniac,17:40,December 11,2011 (UTC)

As promised, CBA? Iveh Yo! 18:10, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:50, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. Thanks guys. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:39, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 18:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:48, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather (A) - Approved

Jayfeather.apprenticeI <3 this and Jay. All colors taken from him MC. Sorry bout taking that spot guys, I'm making more room right now. Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 05:38, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I love the way you did the eyes! Make the shading a tiny tiny bit lighter.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:57, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded thanks =) Iveh Yo! 06:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, I adore the stripes :D Blur the stripe just a tad on the front paw away from us. Splook it's a long way down. 22:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the end of the tail a bit sharper. It looks kinda stumpy right now, and it's supposed to be "slender". llwildheartl23:01 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 00:43, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:51, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Redtail (A)~ Approved

Redtail.apprentice Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:17, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely Ice! Lighten up the shading a touch. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 01:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? llwildheartl19:49 Sun Dec 11

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:53, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Pouncetail (Alt. A) - Approved

Pouncetail (RC).apprentice.alt Comments? llwildheartl00:10 Sun Dec 11

Wouldn't this be the alt. apprentice? Iveh Yo! 00:25, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Derp changed the image name but forgot to change the title XD llwildheartl00:43 Sun Dec 11

Isn't Pouncetail male? Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 01:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, just checked his page, you were right. Nevermind. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 01:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lightenn the chest shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The light source is coming from the back so the chest wouldn't be in light. llwildheartl22:09 Sun Dec 11

Wildy's right. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:55, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Frogleap (A) - Approved

Frogleap.apprentice Yay! I got to do one of his chararts! ^^ And I knew where to put the shading before you Ivy. :P Comments? XD All colors are taken from his warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 02:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Orly? Smudge the pelt color into his ear some, it looks more natural this way. Very good ^^ Iveh Yo! 02:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yusrly. And done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 17:51, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear some. llwildheartl03:42 Fri Dec 9

Are the changes showing? Cause I just did..... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes just a tad, and then I'll CBA this! Wonderful, Paleclaw! -ScarletwindLisanna 23:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge it even more, then :3 (dunno if the changes are showing.) llwildheartl00:32 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded - I darkened the stripes as much as I could without making it not match the warrior image anymore. And I smudged the earpink. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the nose :P Silverhmm 12:49, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

It is. It's brown on the kit image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:27, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

As I promised. CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 02:23, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Splook it's a long way down. 02:09, December 13, 2011 (UTC)