Hollowflight (A) - Approved

Hollowflight.apprenticeOnto the next! I tried to copy the best I could xD Took all colors form warrior. Comments? Splook it's a long way down. 17:11, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, good job! =) Define the tail shading, and blur the earpink. Ivyheart =P 17:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, another beautiful work :-) Can you make nose gray (?) LeafyAbsolute maniac 17:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks :) Splook it's a long way down. 17:50, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me, CBA? Iveh Yo! 04:21, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 02:10, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather (Alt. MCA)~ Approved

Jayfeather.mca.alt Comments? 01:19, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image a bit, because I can barely see the lineart. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 01:30, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The shade looks fine. There are some MUCH darker, and this will start to look gray if it's lightened more. Make the herbs a bit less neon and add shading to them. Also, make the eyes the same shade as his other images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:42, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Huh. It must be my computer then. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 01:56, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- All the colours are from the old image im not tweaking them again. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more shading to the herbs. Good job :3 llwildheartl02:42 Sun Dec 11

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 03:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could you pale his pupils slightly to match the other images? Shelly For a limited time only 03:55, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 20:02, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Now it's too pale. Look at his other apprentice image. It's just not quite pure black, but still dark. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:02, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- Im not chnaging it again. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:11, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Splook it's a long way down. 23:07, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 14:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Flametail (MCA) - Approved

Flametail.mcaComments? -ScarletwindLisanna 00:58, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink. Lovely Scarletwind! Sweetflower01:13 Sun Dec 11

Earpink is blurred enough, it is fine.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

But the pelt isn't blurred into it noticably. I think she should just a bit more, because it is hard to tell. Sweetflower01:27 Sun Dec 11

I think you mean smudge the earpink, Sweet. llwildheartl02:44 Sun Dec 11

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:20, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back leg farthest away from us. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 03:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

That leg is all in shadow. What're you're seeing is a stripe on the upper part and the plain pelt showing on his paw. -ScarletwindLisanna 04:38, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste near the herbs. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 12:32, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 17:10, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste near the middle of the back. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 23:43, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:12, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think this looks fine and its just taking up space that we don't have, so, CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 00:06, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 14:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Flametail (A) - Approved

Flametail.apprenticeTook all colors from his MCA. Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 17:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. Mistypebble 17:09, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 17:13, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I must say that, myself, I personally don't see anything wrong with this, and it's beautiful. ^^ Thistle. 22:57, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thistle calls it, so CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 00:07, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 14:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Willowshine (MCA) ~ Approved

Willowshine.mca I really love this cat. I got permission to do a new pattern, as the one on her kit image doesn't make much sense. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 15:58, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly tone down the highlights a bit? --Leafstrike-- 18:37, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 03:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?-ſceheartBlah blah 04:10, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 14:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ravenpaw (A) - Approved

Ravenpaw.apprenticeI think I'm getting the hang of these blanks. Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 17:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur/smudge the white of his tail to make it look as if its going into the pelt? (sorry, bad explainer here) Mistypebble 18:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's only as blurred as it is in his approved pixils, if ya take a gander Iveh Yo! 18:14, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, okay. Sorry 'bout. that. ^-^ Mistypebble 18:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

There are a couple of unblurred earpink pixels on the left side of it. Nice job! Ivyheart =P 05:14, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 00:39, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?-ſceheartBlah blah 04:17, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 14:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lionheart (A) ~ Approved

Lionheart.apprenticeHeh heh he's a little lion man. I think he's kinda cute. Comments? (This will take forever -_-)  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  19:13, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

He looks cute in an odd sort of way. x3 Define the shading. Mistypebble 19:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The mane seems a little spiky, round the edges a bit. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ' ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary ' 19:42, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mane more fluffy, like the tail, if that makes sense WildfireMistystar's Omen! 20:13, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Is this what you meant?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  20:46, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah looks great. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:05, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I added the link to his page for you, and maybe define the shading just a tad more? Acornflight Med. Cat ofLunarClan! 21:46, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Oh thanks! XD I fixed the shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  22:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fluffeh! :D The tail looks too bright and the haunch needs to be blurred more. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:16, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

He's so fluffy! Darken the haunch and shoulder shading. oblivionAudience? 02:36, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed the shading. Thank you sooo much for fixing my sig Oblivion :) I never knew how to turn that date thing off XD  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:56, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Curve the stripes on his shoulder to conform to his body's mass right there. They shouldn't be straight like that unless he lost a shoulder blade/muscle. Shelly For a limited time only 16:54, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the fluffeh part. Blur the non-shaded part on the head. <3 Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:32, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I blurred the tabby marks on the side of his face, made the stripes on his sholder more curved, and lightened the fluffeh :) part.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:48, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 04:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 14:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Berrynose (A) ~ Approved

Berrynose.apprentice Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 03:54, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

He looks so funny with his little stump. x3 Lighten the shading. Mistypebble 04:32, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's a tiny tiny dot at the top right hand corner :D but other than that it look great!  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:40, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Daaaww, he's so cute! X3 Darken the eyes a bit to match his warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:49, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm in love with his wittle stump!Addd shading to his rump :3 Sweetflower12:48 Sun Dec 11

Re-uploaded. Not adding shading to his rump, as the lighting is coming mostly from behind. Shelly For a limited time only 01:07, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

There's a lot of empty space at the top of the image. Crop it so the edges of the frame are touching the black. oblivionAudience? 03:13, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 03:22, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the lines on his tail look a little thick (especially towards his bum) Could you thin them out a teensy bit? This is so cute Iveh Yo! 04:23, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not much different, but I used a .1 sized pen tool, so that's as small as it gets. Shelly For a limited time only 16:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading circling the haunch? ^^ Thistle. 23:01, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 03:09, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. :) CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:42, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 00:45, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (A) - Approved

Sweetpaw.apprentice Comments? Rainlegs 00:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you juest smudged the shading, blur it some more. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:22, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add some gray/black batches to her -ScarletwindLisanna 00:25, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darn I was hoping to get her :3 , define the shading a tad. Sweetflower00:31 Sun Dec 11

Reuploaded. @Scarlet- I'm following the colors and patterns of the kit image, so I'm going to leave the gray patches the way they are. Rainlegs 14:22, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, they're like that on the kit image Scarlet. Could you darken them a bit though? Right now they look like smudgy shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Rainlegs 23:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

You matched it wonderfully, my dear. Since there haven't been any comments, CBA? Jayce (  ) 21:44, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:34, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Breezepelt (A)- Approved

Breezepelt.apprenticeHmm. Sky☀Surfin' Santa 18:54, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights (if any) a tad and blur the shading. :3 Mistypebble 20:24, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Usually I do, but not on this one. :3 Sky☀Surfin' Santa 20:32, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the shading on the belly/that general area is much to dark, one spot on the belly looks like the lineart melts into the shading. :S Other than that, I see nothing wrong and it looks wonderful. ^^ Thistle. 22:50, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How bout now? ^^ Sky☀Surfin' Santa 22:56, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Defone the shading on the tail. Sweetflower23:27 Mon Dec 12

Re-uploaded. Sky☀Surfin' Santa 23:35, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Perfect! Comments before approval? oblivionAudience? 02:11, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved. oblivionAudience? 21:55, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Rosetail (A) ~ Approved

Rosetail.apprenticeOkay, so before you begin your horrific screams, just want to say one thing... I know the earpink is kind of hot pinkish, but I got it off the elder image, but if people agree that it should be changed, then it shall be changed. ^-^ Mistypebble 20:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that bad, Misty. Make the stripes match the elder image and make the color more like the elder...that one has more of an orange tint to it. Jayce (  ) 21:25, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the colors off of her elder picture, and I got rid of the highlights. (bleh) I'll work on the stripes a bit, but do you know how to blur them like they are shown on the elders image?? Mistypebble 21:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, I don't. If you're stuck, go as Bloo, the artist of Rosetail's wonderful elder image. xD Jayce (  ) 21:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on her tail and make her body stripes bit small and add some more of them. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes, and Scarletwind, Rosetail doesn't have stripes on her tail on her other images. --Leafstrike-- 02:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Kind of redoing to look more like her other pictures, so I will probably uploaded the picture tomorrow when I'm done. Mistypebble 02:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind, I'll upload it now. :P I know she only has a few strips on her, but I counted the ones on the elder image and tried to match them exactly. xD Mistypebble 04:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes paler and blur them a little more. oblivionAudience? 18:22, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know it looks as if I didn't make them paler, but I did. :P Mistypebble 19:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

They need to be more pale then, and more orange. oblivionAudience? 20:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I took them off her elder image, though. (I took it off the unshaded part) But if anyone else wants them to be changed, I'll do it. >.< (sorry mentor 3:) Mistypebble 20:30, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the pelt into the ear-pink, the ear-pink looks as if it;s blurred into the pelt. Sweetflower00:08 Sun Dec 11

Reuploaded Oh earpink how I hate you so. xD Mistypebble 02:22, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and darken the shading on the bottom of the belly. Colourpick the non-shaded parts of her other images to get a better sense of what the colour should be like, and try to adapt the stripes so they match better. Darken her eyes as well. llwildheartl02:41 Sun Dec 11

Lighten the stripes and make then less brown. and it loks like you used black for shading. If you did, then make it more red. i used this colour File:Colour.example.png Bloo!yo 02:47, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about this? Mistypebble 03:42, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken/define the shading? Neat! ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D07:11, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. Thanks! Mistypebble 17:13, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed some colored lineart and eyes.

Me up there.. xD Mistypebble 00:38, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

This should be Scarlet's since she's the OA of the redone version. Do you have her permission to do this? If not, get it, or this will have to be declined I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:07, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, forgot to mention that I got Scarlet's approval before I posted this. :3 Mistypebble 01:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

In that case, lighten and blur the stripes a bit, and I'll CBA this. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:40, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the stripes. (didn't lighten them a lot, since I got the colors from her old image) Really want to get this approved. :D Mistypebble 20:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, just noticed something. Did you get the tail color from her other chararts? Cause it doesn't really look the sae color right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:13, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I did... I think the shading is making it look like that. But Bloo told me what color they used for shading... Mistypebble 22:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually I didnt. I used dark pink for the tail xD -Bloo!yo 23:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you're having a lot of trouble matching it, ask Bloo to send you the .xcf file. I've done that before with particularly difficult images :3 llwildheartl01:25 Wed Dec 14

Smudge th epelt inot th eear-pink. Sweetflower01:34 Wed Dec 14

Well poo. xD I'll fix it later. Mistypebble 02:13, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind, fixed it. Mistypebble 02:55, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I love this. CBA? Iveh Yo! 05:20, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 22:01, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt. A) - Approved

Berrynose.apprentice.alt Comments? oblivionAudience? 03:17, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. <3 Ivyheart =P 05:15, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. :3 oblivionAudience? 20:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

This description of him needs to be cited before this gets approved. Sorry. Shelly For a limited time only 04:01, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

There used to be a cite for it on his page, I know I added it, I'm sure it's in the pages history somewhere. ---ſceheartBlah blah 04:12, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, I found it; it's on there now. oblivionAudience? 00:20, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Cited, no art commetns since the 12th, this needs to be on CBA asap =) Brilliant work Oblivion! Iveh Yo! 05:24, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 22:04, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomfall (A) ~ Approved

Blossomfall.apprenticeI know it needs work, let the comments begin WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:46, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's pretty, Wildfire. ^^ Just try to match the pattern from the warrior image a bit more closely. There should be more white patches, and the white patches should be smaller. Shelly For a limited time only 23:49, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the patches are too shiny, daken them (or lower the layer's opacity) please. Sweetflower00:04 Sat Dec 10

Darken the shading as well. Splook it's a long way down. 00:16, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid all the spots, and darkend the shading WildfireMistystar's Omen! 04:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

She looks, messed up... --WildfireMistystar's Omen! 04:49, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Crap this is a male template, I stole it from Firestar's apprentice version, back to GIMP. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 05:02, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 14:58, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have a white belly, just a white chest from what I see on the warrior charart. -{{SUBST:Signatures/Guradian1098}} 17:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

No I looked and it's fine. She has a white belly too. It's just not connected. Iveh Yo! 20:06, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the white patches, they're still too shiny. Sweetflower23:00 Sat Dec 10

What do you mean too shiny? They're supposed to stand out a little. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm debating if I should withdraw this and let someone more experienced try it, would anyone like to redo her? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 03:19, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Keep her, my apprentice. She's looking wonderful! Try to darken the white patches a little by... Hmm... Maybe adding a little bit of shading to them, and lower to opacity of the layer so it's faint, but so the patches aren't so bright. Jayce (  ) 04:06, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, this is lovely work and Cloudy is right. Maybe try add hightlinks and..just play with it :-) LeafyAbsolute maniac 17:20, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes mentor, I'll try. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:11, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Add a shadow to the back hindquarter becuase of the light source. Sweetflower20:07 Sun Dec 11

Shading** Sweetflower20:12 Sun Dec 11

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 20:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Umm.. this hasn't been commented on for three days... WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the patch on her back haunch. Sweetflower00:06 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded Oh and sorry about the other comment I just really want to get Whitewing. And get this done WildfireMistystar's Omen! 03:37, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is fine and youre right should have been CBAed a couple days ago. Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Cinders (Lo) ~ Approved

Cinders.loner Yep, Cinders is Sol's mother. I went by what I saw in the manga. Sorry I didn't get to add it to the table. I'm not back on it yet. Silverhmm 00:43, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the patches. Nice work. Ivyheart =P 00:48, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, darken the earpink, and possibly smudge the patches a bit, as they look a little...conform, not sure if that's the appropriate word. *shrug* She looks neat! Iveh Yo! 00:50, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll work on all those in the morning. Silverhmm 01:13, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Did you use pure black? You shouldn't have, as it messes with the lineart. Change it to a darker gray. Jayce (  ) 04:42, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, if you look carefully, you can just see the lineart. Trollsky She who Trolls everything 06:45, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well regardless of whether it's pure black or not, it still needs to be lightened. Also, smudge the patches a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:48, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular and blur it. Rainey 10:41, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did everything said. Changes are showing. Silverhmm 14:21, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit. User:Shadewing/Sig 14:42, November 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

ig i can still comment here, the back left leg seems a lot darker than it should beBluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 15:00, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's supposed to be Bluedawn. Silverhmm 21:10, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the ear-pink too. Silverhmm 22:22, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

You still need to blur and smudge the patches a lot but other than that darken the ear pink and make it triangular. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:26, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the "black" or whatever it is a little bit. I'm having trouble telling it apart from the lineart. Jayce (  ) 22:29, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 22:46, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define/largen the ear-pink. And make it less, hot pink-ish. Sweetflower01:46 Thu Nov 24

Reuploaded Changes are showing now. Silverhmm 12:52, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the fur more or blur the black spot more. WildfireHazelxThorn! 00:30, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing yet Silverhmm 00:43, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok now they are showing. Silverhmm 00:46, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Also, try to smudge where the black meets the white on the neck. I think you overblurred. Silver, if you have trouble trying to fix it, just ask. ;) Jayce (  ) 02:27, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry the new version is horrible. My computer needs fixed AGAIN so I'm on my dads. Silverhmm 13:22, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, it kind of doesn't look like it has any. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 23:19, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Also enlarge the earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:13, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

I'll get to that tomorrow morning. Silverhmm 00:56, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This scares me >_> Silverhmm 18:37, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

I really like this. Can you possibly blur the patches more, though? Ivyheart =P 05:39, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Actually I'd say smudge the patches a tad more so they look like Ivy's image. llwildheartl08:01 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded Yes it's smudged not blurred. Silverhmm 00:17, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? User:OwlXGlitter4EVER/Sig 05:19, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

The white on the muzzle looks pure white. Iveh Yo! 21:05, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing yet. Silverhmm 21:05, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay this hasn't changed too much since you started. Make the ear pink bigger and blur it. Lighten it a little bit too. Smudge the black patches by the legs and then blur it. Do the same with the patches. If it doesn't seem too different, just keep repeating the process. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:30, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded hateithateithateithateit >_____< Silverhmm 22:26, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Try to look at other pictures of cats that are tortoiseshell, like Poppycloud or even Sol. See how the patches are smudged like that? Try to blur it and then smudge it, like on DJ's charart above. (Sorry, I'm very horrible at explaining) Mistypebble 21:13, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I need to make it look like Cinders queen image Misty. Silverhmm 22:12, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Giving a slight bump. Silverhmm 13:36, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I feel like I'm making myself sound impatient ._. Should I smudge it more? Silverhmm 23:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC) not comment like that on your images. When someone finds something, they'll comment. Make the white come up past the muzzle and onto the forehead like the queen image. Jayce (  ) 20:47, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are showing. Silverhmm 22:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the spots or blur them more. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:49, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular to make it fit more into the ear. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:26, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

Could you blur or smudge the parts where the brown and black meet? --Cinder Real or Not Real? 16:17, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Splook it's a long way down. 23:13, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen the earpink. Sweetflower22:52 Wed Dec 7

Sorry I haven't made an edit. My new computer doesn't like pixlr and I have to wait until after new years to download GIMP again. I'll try to download Gimp as soon as I can though. Silverhmm 22:41, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did everything said. May I please have some help with the ear pink? It's being a real pain for me ;-; Silverhmm 22:58, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

For the earpink, you can fuzzy select it if you don't use layers and move it around, guassion blur, etc. If you use layers, you can always move, blur, dodge it without having to use any fuzzy select or going into the other sections of the charart. Hope this helps. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:05, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Reuploaded Finally, earpink I'm proud of 8D. Silverhmm 13:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink looks good :3 smudge the patches and darken and blur the shading. llwildheartl00:07 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded Decided to smudge it to look similar to Cinders queen. Also darkened/blurred the shading. Silverhmm 12:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge it even more. llwildheartl23:45 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded Silverhmm 00:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where you have smudged it. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 15:56, December 11, 2011 (UTC)


Make the earpink triangular. (You forgot to sign xD ^^) Sweetflower19:50 Sun Dec 11

Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:09, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's ready for CBA Iveh Yo! 05:15, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Gah sorry Silvereye, but... there's some waste above her head. Erase that. llwildheartl07:57 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded Oh that's fine wild. I actually thought that was a smudge on my computer xD. Silverhmm 12:09, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Restarting CBA. Iveh Yo! 23:04, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Waste had nothing to do with the image itself. Approved. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:48, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Olivenose (A) - Approved

Olivenose.apprentice Yes! Free space!!! Comments? --Leafstrike-- 16:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-upload it correctly, and use the right lineart. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 16:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Regi, she did, the changes just haven't showed yet. Ivyheart =P 16:53, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger lighter like it was in her old apprentice, right now it's too ginger Iveh Yo! 18:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Actually Ivy, it's fine. If anything it needs to be saturated a bit more. The old one didn't match her warrior image exactly. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 01:33, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

The places where you smudged looks way to sharp. Blur it a little bit. Darken the shading the tiniest bit. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:09, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The smudged areas are sharp like that on the warrior image. --Leafstrike-- 03:23, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink and ginger patches a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:01, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 18:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Excellent job matching her warrior. CBA? oblivionAudience? 02:14, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:49, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (A) ~ Approved

Cinderpelt.apprenticeComments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:54, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

P *eats Stoney* Me wanted Cinderpelt. >.< So cute. :3 Blur the shading to blend more into the unshaded (or highlighted) parts. Mistypebble 17:11, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. Sweetflower23:36 Sun Dec 11

Fill in or darken the nose. I wanted her to. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 14:59, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:27, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Excellent. CBA? oblivionAudience?

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:49, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower (A)~Approved

Morningflower.apprentice Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 21:34, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is lovely! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:33, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 05:01, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more and I'll CBA. :) This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:50, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- Sorry if im inactive for a bit, my internet keeps going on and off. Stupid Shaw. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Beat you to it Paleclaw XD CBA? llwildheartl23:43 Wed Dec 14 23:43, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:49, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Petaldust (A) - Approved

Petaldust.apprentice comments? Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a white chest? :3 User:Twilightheart200/Sig 00:13, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fail. Yes, she's also longhaired and a female. So I'll reupload this tonight/tomorrow. *headdesk* Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:16, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the brindle patches brighter Iveh Yo! 00:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also redden the earpink and darken the black. Pretty. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I think I got it all right concerning lineart and what not... =P Atelda insert vague subtext here 17:16, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. (if any) Mistypebble 18:26, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Mm, and make the orangy whatever colour brighter. :3 Sky☀Surfin' Santa 22:32, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The brown/orange still needs to be a bit brighter, the black needs to be darkened, the earpink reddened, and the eyes should be blur. XD Darn edit conflicts. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:05, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Best I can do to match with her warrior image. And eyes blurred, excuse me? O.o Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes BLUE. Sorry. XD Fail. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:39, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. XD Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste near the ear farthest away from us. :3 Mistypebble 01:36, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Waste... >.> XD Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:40, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

The pelt needs to be blurred like the warrior more. :3 Sky☀Surfin' Santa 20:44, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred. Atelda insert vague subtext here 06:06, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Let's go CBA on this Iveh Yo! 05:21, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but the pelt still needs to be blurred more to match the warrior. I'll CBA this after you do :) oblivionAudience? 22:03, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:43, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:24, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approving, since it was more than 12 hours between the first CBA and a comment. oblivionAudience? 02:19, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Littlecloud (MCA) ~ Approved

Littlecloud.mcaJust realized that I named the file wrong. xD I'll fix it in a second. I took everything from his medicine cat image. Mistypebble 18:03, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the shading on the herbs, and the tail shading. Ivyheart =P 18:08, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the file named and defined the herb shading and tail shading. Mistypebble 18:20, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

His nose looks very dark Iveh Yo! 01:36, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

His description says he has a brown nose, and I took it from his medicine cat image. Mistypebble 01:42, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

He looks a bit ginger to me. Shelly For a limited time only 03:18, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I took all of the colors off of his medicine cat image. (made sure they were the unshaded parts) Mistypebble 20:04, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe darken and/or define the shading a tad? He looks kinda flat. ~Breezewhisker~ 00:35, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink more. Sweetflower02:33 Tue Dec 13

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. I think the earpink is fine, in my opinion. But if anyone else agrees, I'll change it.. Mistypebble 02:41, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Well it could be blurred a bit, but I think the smudging's fine. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:45, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink. ^-^ Mistypebble 21:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the eyes. llwildheartl01:20 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded Done. Mistypebble 21:14, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the very back paw on the heel, it's darker than all of the other shading. Sweetflower23:53 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded Lightened the shading. (in that one spot) Mistypebble 01:21, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 15:18, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 11:57, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Mottlepaw (A) - Approved

Mottlepaw.apprentice I just love my dual colours! Comments? oblivionAudience? 02:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Of course! I look away form the approval page for a minute, and *BAM* I lost a spot xD Define the shadin, and smudge th epelt inot the ear-pink a bit more. Sweetflower02:14 Tue Dec 13

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 00:29, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches a lot so they're less dramatically smudged. Looks good ^^ llwildheartl01:08 Wed Dec 14

Re-uploaded. :D oblivionAudience? 01:26, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Very cool. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 15:15, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 11:57, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (A) ~ Approved

Spottedleaf.apprenticeMy goodness! The page isn't at 50!? Anyway, here she is. -.- *Highly Dislikes* It's going to need a lot of work! D: Thistle. 04:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! ^^ Add stripes to the tail though. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:47, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! :D Maybe blur the patches a bit more? (I am horrible at noticing this stuff) Dazzy 08:41, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

  • bops thistley* 'tis beautiful~ :3. Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. Elorisa 13:38, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the tail once, and then it looked dull, so I changed the color of the stripes and added some extra shading to the tail too. Thistle. 14:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the black on the far side of the cheek and make the borwn on this side bigger. If you look at her kit charart, the darker fur is around the eye closest to us, and it's brown, not black. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. Sweetflower11:53 Thu Dec 15

Re-uploaded. Okay, there. @Sweetflower, I just left it because I thought it looked okay, but if others agree that it needs to be smudged I will. :3 Thistle. 14:19, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great, Thistly, especially for a character with a description as long and complicated as hers. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 15:13, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. She looks perfect ^^ oblivionAudience? 11:57, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (A) ~ Approved

Sunfish.apprenticeHere she is! The bluring just wasn't working with me on Pixlr. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 20:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eyes, blur the shading/lighting a lot, and lighten the ear pink. If you're using lighting, you may want to add a bit to the tail as well. Shelly For a limited time only 21:05, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Comments? Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 21:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Upload a new file that has the spelling correct and mark the old one for deletion. And the shading still needs to be blurred a lot more. And by adding depth I mean add a few yellow pixels in the bottom of the eye. Shelly For a limited time only 21:34, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't it artists choice for the eyes, Shelly? (sorry, have a memory block) Tone down the earpink. And if you want, you can go here to see the shading placements. ^-^ Mistypebble 21:43, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know. It was just a suggestion. Shelly For a limited time only 21:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Pixlr's blurring hates me. No matter how much I blur I need more. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 01:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste by her face. This still needs blurred tons more. Do you have your blur tool set on 100%? Iveh Yo! 02:48, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the waste. I might be getting GIMP this Sunday so I'll try then about the blurring (And yes it is on 100%) Firest ar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 22:16, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't you use Gaussian Blur for the shading? It's in the filter part of pixlr. Silverhmm 22:19,

December 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is still some waste by the face. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 01:20, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

How do I use the guassin blur. It just makes everything all blurry. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 03:26, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Are you using layers, Firestar? Thistle. 18:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also lighten the eyes. They look brown. Splook it's a long way down. 20:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I am using layers. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 21:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. This is horrible. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 21:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Just lighten the shading to make it look not so two-toned and remove the waste. Splook it's a long way down. 22:18, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Comments? Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 02:59, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down all of the highlights, smudge the pelt into the earpink, make the nose dark grey, and remove the highlights from the back paws and the chest and add some on the front paws. You might need to re-do this if the highlights become too blotchy. --Leafstrike-- 03:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. There isnt much to do about the highlights because they aren't highlights. That's how the guassian blur makes it look. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 04:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Then tone down the shading a lot Iveh Yo! 22:26, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 23:27, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing a bit and smudge the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:29,

RE-UPLOADED. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 21:40, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more and blur it. llwildheartl01:32 Wed Dec 14

RE-UPLOADED. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 01:45, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:18, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:58, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Copperpaw (A) ~ Approved

Copperpaw.apprentice Comments? Ivyheart =P 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad Iveh Yo! 18:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red.-ſceheartBlah blah 19:39, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 03:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but Copperpaw is technically mine, since I did the original...would you mind if I took over, or would you like to continue? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:51, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, if you want it, you can have it.. Ivyheart =P 02:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

But isn't Sandstar the OA?.. Ivyheart =P 02:23, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, this is perfect. Ivy might as well keep it cause I'm gonna CBA it.-ſceheartBlah blah 04:19, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but she's RiverClan, so she should be long haired. I'll CBA again when you do that. 09:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

(^Me) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How could I forget she was in RiverClan? Ah, oh well. Converting it wasn't hard. Ivyheart =P 04:29, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

CBA'ing this for Icy ^^ Nicely done btw Iveh Yo! 05:22, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Ivy, but the top of the tail's cut off for some reason. Fix that and I'll reset the 24 hours. llwildheartl07:59 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded. Agh, fudge! XD I fixed it using a longhaired blank reference. Ivyheart =P 00:35, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

CBA again? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:58, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (A) - Approved

Crookedstar.apprentice He's one of my favourite characters, so why not? I took all the colours from the leader image, and also made the stripes consistent with the same leader image. I also kind of need help with the crooked jaw. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 18:33, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Have the top of the mouth curve up and in a little bit, also, possibly have the bottom of the jaw come up and over to the left (his right) more. Possibly add a very dark red to the inside of the mouth. Hope this helps since I worked on making his jaw the way it is. Iveh Yo! 18:39, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. --Leafstrike-- 20:50, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

The inside of animal's mouths isn't white. Change it to dark red. oblivionAudience? 01:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tooth smaller. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:12, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oblivion: The white is the tooth. :) --Leafstrike-- 18:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tooth a little smaller. Good job on the jaw. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 03:41, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *-* --Leafstrike-- 18:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

At such as funny angle, this is probably the best the jaw will get, so CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:58, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nettlepaw (RC) (A) - Approved

Nettlepaw (RC).apprentice Since he only has one image, I figured I could do whatever I want with the stripes. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 14:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Love his eyes! Mistypebble 21:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you. ^^ But if I lighten the shading it will look flat. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:05, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! shorten the earpink in the left ear a tad. It seems to go right down his head. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 19:50, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

(where'd my edit go? 0.o) The earpink's SUPPOSED to fill the whole ear Leopard. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:24, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Same as Heavystep, no comments for a while. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:40, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:58, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Heavystep (A) - Approved

Heavystep.apprentice All colors are from his elder and warrior image, so don't tell me to change them. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is just a preference, but could you thicken his legs a tiny bit? I mean, obviously it'd be a noticeable trait since he's named for it. Shelly For a limited time only 16:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure what Thickset means, but I don't think it means he has big paw/legs, does it? Cause if not, it's not in his description, and we can't change it. It'd be like giving Lionblaze a mane like Lionheart just cause of his name. So unless thickset means big legs, no, I'm not changing them. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 16:10, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I was talking about "stocky" actually. When referring to an animal, stocky usually means that said cat has thick legs. Shelly For a limited time only 16:37, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm.... I don't think that's really enough to add. If someone else thinks I should, I'll add them, but I'd rather not for now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmm...Define the shading a little. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:54, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink on <--- this ear. User:Shadewing/Sig 20:14, December 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded - Defined the shading. Shadey, where exactly am I supposed to blur? Cause it's supposed to fill up the whole ear on that side. There's no place that should be blurred. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:10, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

No comments in 24 hours. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:40, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:58, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sunstrike (A) - Approved

Sunstrike.apprenticeComments for improvement? And no I don't think the shading is too dark, her shading is pretty dark in her warrior image Iveh Yo! 00:44, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the markings a ton and add more orange to her body. oblivionAudience? 00:58, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Did you have to take the last spot on the approval page? xD Define the tail shading. I love this mentor! Sweetflower01:05 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded I'm sorry, Sweet =( And I believe there is the same amount of orange on both images Iveh Yo! 04:20, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the markings a bit more and blur the earpink. This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 08:47, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

That's ok Ivy, I was doing it in a laughing manner. ;) Lighten the shading just a little. Sweetflower21:22 Thu Dec 15

Reuploaded Hope I didn't smudge it too much :/ Iveh Yo! 01:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Its great! CBA? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:33, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:58, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Brindleface (A)~ Approved

Brindleface.apprentice Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I like it! Maybe blur the stipes a little more. It feels weird to be critiqueing my mentor. xD Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 23:23, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes on her warrior arent very blurred at all, so i rather not, but if more people agree i will. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:03, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are fine Icheart. ;) Love 'em! Make ----> earpink bigger please. Sweetflower00:09 Thu Dec 15

REuploaded- Thanks -ſceheartBlah blah 00:17, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome, add shading to the forhead and this ----> eye. Sweetflower00:29 Thu Dec 15

I can see it now. Sweetflower21:25 Thu Dec 15

OKay then, its been a while since its got comments, so CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's been three hours... The stripes definitely need to be blurred. Compare her warrior image and this one. oblivionAudience? 00:18, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Actually, since zhe withdrew her comment itd been a day since there was any useful comments >.> -ſceheartBlah blah 00:30, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, sorry, didn't see that :3 I shall CBA; she looks perfect now. oblivionAudience? 00:33, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but there is some waste near the tip of the tail... Mistypebble 00:45, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Youre right. And i fixed it. But im going to continue the CBA czuse theres nothing wring with the actual image XD -ſceheartBlah blah 00:47, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:58, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Molepaw (OTS) (A) -Approved

Molewhisker (TC).apprentice I don't like the shading, but I didn't know the placement. And I got the earpink and nose from the looks a little neon, but that's my opinion. Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:22, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eyes and the shading :) And also, perhaps blur the connection between the cream and pelt color on the tell a tad? Splook it's a long way down. 02:23, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like me to email you the shading placement? I made one for my friend, I'll share =) Iveh Yo! 02:27, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The brown patches look a tad red... Make them a bit more brown and lighten/make the ear-pink a tad less neon. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:28, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

That'd be great, Ivy. I'll work on the rest after my shower. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:30, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the cream a ton. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 02:48, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^_^ User:Twilightheart200/Sig 03:26, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Here are two versions of how you could do the shading ^^ Smudge the earpink into the ear. llwildheartl03:42 Thu Dec 8

The cream looks greenish, unless I need to get mai eyes checked. =3 Ivyheart =P 04:33, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

This doesn't look greenish. Please lighten the nose pink. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:43, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it after teh funeral. :3 User:Twilightheart200/Sig 20:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

No, it looks greenish to me too. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Really...? I don't see it, though it may be my computer... I color picked straight from the kit image... User:Twilightheart200/Sig 05:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

If you did that and are having trouble with the color, why not just color pick off his father, Berrynose? :3 Iveh Yo! 16:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur/smudge a bit more where his cream meets his brown? --Cinder Real or Not Real? 16:09, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded - ^^ User:Twilightheart200/Sig 17:17, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 01:46, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt CBA, but the colours don't match the kit image, and the shading doesn't make sense to me. Try to match the colours better and if you're having troubles with shading placement, look at one of these examples. llwildheartl06:28 Mon Dec 12

If nobody minds, I'm asking for a colour sample for the cream. I just can't figure it out. :3 User:Twilightheart200/Sig 22:23, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

You could save the kit file to your computer and colour pick off that. Sky-Jedi You will talk to me. 21:23, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

I did that, but it was either too light/green-ish, too dark, or as said above, don't match the kit image. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:47, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded User:Twilightheart200/Sig 03:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

The colours are perfect. If they dont match the kit should be tweaked. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 20:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:49, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfeather (A) -Approved

Crowfeather.apprentice Crowfeather. *squee* I luff him so much, so I had to make him look as good as I possibally could at midnight. All colors stolen from his warrior image, except for the nose color, which came from his kit image. Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 05:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! =3 Define the shading. Ivyheart =P 07:28, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the shading a bit more if possible. Purplemoon We wish you a Perry Christmas... 17:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:Twilightheart200/Sig 19:59, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the pelt is too blurred into the ear-pink. Make the ear-pink bigger where the pelt is blurred into it. Sweetflower00:04 Sun Dec 11

reuplaoded User:Twilightheart200/Sig 16:54, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail bases' shading. Sweetflower02:16 Wed Dec 14

Lighten the base colour; I can barely see the lineart. Are you still working on this? oblivionAudience? 02:24, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. The computer that it was saved on just got fixed, so I've been a little inactive with my chararts, but I'll work on it. :3 User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:29, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - How's it now? :3 User:Twilightheart200/Sig 03:13, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 20:18, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:54, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hazeltail (A) ~ Approved

Hazeltail.apprenticeI just realized I forgot the earpink... Derp. I'll fix that. Comments? Ivyheart =P 16:38, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the nose and lighten the chest and belly shading a tad. Silverhmm 18:16, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did fill in the nose, it's a darker shade of gray than the patches. Ivyheart =P 20:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. Sweetflower02:20 Tue Dec 13

Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 01:01, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are still a little bright. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 01:07, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 23:49, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

The're still a little too bright. Sweetflower00:05 Fri Dec 16

Reuploaded. No more comments having to do with the highlights. I just took them off. :3 Ivyheart =P 00:29, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the eyes a bit and I'll CBA. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:47, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. =3 Ivyheart =P 01:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Helpin' Paley out here, CBA? Iveh Yo! 18:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry to interrupt, but, you smudged some of the earpink out of the ear. The one closest to us on our right. :3 User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oops. xD Ivyheart =P 22:47, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Gonna continue the CBA since it was minor Iveh Yo! 22:51, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:55, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Quickpaw (A) ~Approved

Quickpaw.apprentice I really like how he came out. :3 Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 14:57, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is supposed to be Mistystar's I believe. Do you have her permission? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:00, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

We decided not to use that system. It's first come, first serve. Shelly For a limited time only 15:02, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

In any case, Misty isn't the OA. Icethroat is. Shelly For a limited time only 15:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

When did we decide this? I've heard nothing of it. And Misty redid it, so it's technically hers. If you redo, it's yours. Looks at the list, it's listed under her name. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Here. And Misty didn't redo it, she only added stripes to the old image. Shelly For a limited time only 15:14, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Revise that. It isn't totally first come first serve, but you can claim rights to a couple of your original images if you please. But people can put them up for approval in any case. It's only if the OA asks for it that it becomes theirs. Shelly For a limited time only 15:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Fine. Is this discussion linked to anywhere? If not, it should be linked on the talk page, because none of the project will know about it otherwise. And just to clarify, she DID redo it, I checked the tweak archives and it said Redone. Anyways, make it a bit less yellow. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Moving on from that. >.> She mislabeled it, I think... nothing was changed but the stripes. Shelly For a limited time only 15:25, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Could you redden the earpink, since it looks grey right now? --Leafstrike-- 18:06, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

They're brown, an appropriate color for this type of cat. However if someone else agrees I shall change it. Shelly For a limited time only 02:11, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

i agree, they look grey,make them pink. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 03:55, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'll change them, but not to pink. Shelly For a limited time only 04:03, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Made the inner ears more brown than gray. Shelly For a limited time only 19:47, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think brown was the right color. They should be a pinkish-grey (I don't know what you originally had. XP). Breezewhisker 21:56, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Brown is not the right color for any earpink. I don't know what made you think it was.... anyways, it should be red or pink, or any shade of that. Take the earpink from Sandstorm's image maybe. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:55, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, cats cat have brown inner ears. A cat's inner ear and nose often reflect its fur color, just as their skin does. =_= But fine. Based on popular opinion, I've changed it. Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 01:34, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the rump. Sweetflower21:18 Thu Dec 15

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 15:55, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 20:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:56, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (A) ~ Approved

Shrewpaw (TC).apprentice Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 15:35, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Lighten the left earpink a bit. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 19:44, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Maybe add a little shading between the front legs and lighten the top of the tail. Breezewhisker 21:42, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Also the shading on the head is a little wrong, and there has to be more highlights (or something) on the tail. But is looks cute! Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 21:45, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and i hadn't noticed, the earpink on the left ear looks a little too bright. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 21:46, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The shading placement is correct, and the ear-pink is like that because one has shading. Lighten the shading please! Sweetflower00:03 Thu Dec 15

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 01:40, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Could you get rid of the second white pixel in the eye? This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:58, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 15:54, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! CBA? llwildheartl22:41 Fri Dec 16

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Kestrelflight (MCA) - Approved

Kestrelflight.mcaEw, I don't really care for this one >.> Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 22:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Define the head shading. Sweetflower22:43 Wed Dec 14

You don't like it Ivy? I love this @_@ Tone down theear pink a little bit. Silverhmm 01:08, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the earpink. Amazing. *.* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just don't because for some reason, it doesn't look right to me. Iveh Yo! 01:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/Define the haunch shading, I love this. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 04:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 23:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:06, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

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