Crookedstar (Alt. A)~ Approved

Crookedstar.apprentice.altComments? -ſceheartBlah blah 16:11, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Could you tweak the stripes to conform to his body's shape? It looks really flat like this. Shelly For a limited time only 16:30, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Twist the jaw -ScarletwindLisanna 17:21, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and make them curve more on the shoulder and head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Im not tweaking the stripes again. Im quite happy with them. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:36, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Several hours without a comment, CBA? Iveh Yo! 16:40, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 01:19, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (A)~ Approved

Poppyfrost.apprentice I find it icky. Tell me how to fix it. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:30, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I think this is amazing! Lighten the nose a bit, and smudge the orange into the grey on the foreleg closest to us.Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 19:34, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 20:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks perfect to me, CBA? Iveh Yo! 17:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 01:19, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (A) - Approved

Pebblefoot.apprentice Comments? llwildheartl23:41 Fri Dec 16

The only thing wrong with this I can see is darken the shading. This is so freaking beautiful, I think I'm gonna cry (not literally :P) Iveh Yo! 23:45, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I love you, Ivy <3 llwildheartl23:53 Fri Dec 16

This is so wonderful! define the ear pink a little bit and blur it. *steals* This is my favorite! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:05, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

It's the same as on the warrior Iveh Yo! 01:12, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I love this so much I'm going CBA on this Iveh Yo! 16:52, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 01:19, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail (A)- Approved

Dappletail.apprentice Comments? llwildheartl23:47 Wed Dec 14

She also has a white back right paw. Add it? --Leafstrike-- 23:50, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Lighten the white chest just a little. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 00:52, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

That's shading, and it's fine Wildheart, this image is perfect! (Once you add the black paw if she has one ;) Sweetflower12:16 Thu Dec 15

No, I think it needs to be lighten just a tad to match the other images. (it almost look just plain white in the warrior image >.<) Mistypebble 20:38, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hey! I took ALL colors from Dappletail's elder image(The white) so if it's to plae, don't blame me! Maple♥poolMischief brewing 21:28, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Calm down Maple, there's no need to get angry. Silverhmm 22:01, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Not getting mad, just defiending my charat :3 Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:48, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Me sorry. Didn't mean for my comment to upset you. 3: Mistypebble 22:51, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wait I'm confused, what do you mean your charart Maple? 0.o This is Wildy's image.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:09, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, i did her warrior image! Mistypebble was complaing about Dappletail's warrior image's white being to pale, to which, i said i took all colors from her elder image. I felt like my image was being insluted, so I defined Dappletail's warrior iamge. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ohhh Ok. And I don't think Misty was saying it was too pale on here warrior image.... she was saying this should match that I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lol I leave for two days, and then I come back to a complicated debate XD I'm not lightening the white as it's so dark because of shading, and I can't lighten the shading without making it inconsistent. I think there should be darker shading on the warrior image to make it match. llwildheartl21:59 Fri Dec 16

It's been a day without comments. Setting 12 hours. llwildheartl23:05 Sat Dec 17

12 hours. llwildheartl10:04 Sun Dec 18

Spottedleaf (MCA) ~ Approved

Spottedleaf.mcaFirst tortie, comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:14, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the pelt into the ear-pink. Sweetflower01:29 Sun Dec 11

Also, smudge it into the earpink. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 01:40, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add dapples. Pretty. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the nose. xD SnowyXPerry = Serry! 02:01, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fail with the dapples. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:08, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the belly's shading a tad. Silverhmm 12:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the image, there are dapples. Fail. Dx  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink a wee bit. *steals* Sky☀Surfin' Santa 22:51, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the tail stripes. Good job. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:49, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    18:40, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Looks goooood to me ;) Setting 12 hours. llwildheartl20:39 Sat Dec 17

12 hours. llwildheartl12:00 Sun Dec 18

Cinderpelt (MCA) ~ Approved

Cinderpelt.mca I took all of the colors (except the nose X3) from her mc. I kinda like it. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:45, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The broken paw should curl a little bit more, like in her other images. And make the nose dark grey. --Leafstrike-- 16:55, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define ear-pink on →→ this ear LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:57,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed the nose, ear, and foot :).  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Poor Cinderpelt. Blur the shading to make it blend in more with either the highlights or the unshaded parts. Nice job with the lineart! Mistypebble 18:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you. I think this is a blurred as I can get it. :)  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  19:03, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her ankle joint looks swollen. make that part a little smaller.I know it's supposed to be twisted but it just looks kind of awkward right now Iveh Yo! 20:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the ankle thinner and changed a little of the lineart on the leg.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  21:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the toes less long and make the paw a bit smaller. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:43, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Wow this is taking longer than Lionheart. Fixed the paw. O.o  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:53, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink on her right side. ^^ Sky☀Surfin' Santa 03:40, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Made earpink lighter.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:16, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The broken leg still looks a little swollen. Thin it out a little bit more. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Ehh I think I made the leg too twiggy.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:28, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should shorten the leg a little. As it is, it's longer than the normal apprentice image. Breezewhisker 16:50, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  18:36, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Fabulous. CBA?-ſceheartBlah blah 23:30, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

12 hours. llwildheartl12:03 Sun Dec 18

Ferretclaw (A) ~ Approved

Ferretclaw.apprentice I'm putting this here on behalf of FerretclawLover, who just joined the wiki and PCA today but can't edit this page yet. I think it's great for a first charart. ^^ Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 16:46, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely for a first charart. :) Add shading to the back leg farthest from us, lighten the cream a bit, and smudge/blur the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 17:07, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.Shelly For a limited time only 17:39, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful charart. :) Define the shading, but lighten it on the heel of his back foot (one closest to us) and blur the shading on his belly and front leg. (one closest to us) Also, his back leg (farthest away x3) doesn't look like the same color of the other spots. Mistypebble 20:35, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Also, erase the cream on the front foot and on his belly that leaked over. (I feel like I'm talking to myself...) Shelly For a limited time only 20:52, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

x3 But we know your not. Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. (This is ver lovely!) Sweetflower21:15 Thu Dec 15

Define the tail shading. ^^ Sky-Jedi You will talk to me. 21:30, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 17:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks excellent. CBA? oblivionAudience? 19:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

12 hours. llwildheartl12:07 Sun Dec 18

Jayfeather (MCA) - For Approval

Jayfeather.mca He's my favourite character of all time! I copied the stripes from the apprentice image very precisely, and that was hard. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 18:03, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

You did wonderful, Moonleaf. Define the shading a little. Ivyheart =P 18:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ --Leafstrike-- 18:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darn, I wanted to do this one. :P Make the herbs less blue. Take them form the MC image maybe? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:55, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and lighten the stripes to match the MC. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:50, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The herbs didn't look blue to me, but I darkened them anyways. --Leafstrike-- 03:06, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a teensy bit? Once you do I'll CBA this because you did such an amazing job! Iveh Yo! 17:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Go ahead. --Leafstrike-- 19:16, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and then I'll CBA it ;) llwildheartl21:02 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded Go ahead. --Leafstrike-- 21:46, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

As promised... CBA? llwildheartl21:50 Sat Dec 17

12 hours. llwildheartl12:11 Sun Dec 18

Robinwing (RC) (A) ~ Approved

Robinwing (RC).apprentice I think it's actually okay. Comments? Ivyheart =P 18:06, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oi! This is sooooo much better than my Robinwing! If anything, I say the warrior should be tweaked a bit, because I know for a fact it doesn't match. This is so much better. xD Lighten up the shading on the back patch of white. Other than that, this is pretty dang amazing. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:31, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Wow, thanks Cloudy! <3 Ivyheart =P 01:51, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful <3 CBA? llwildheartl21:03 Sat Dec 17

12 hours. llwildheartl12:14 Sun Dec 18

Softwing (A) - Approved

Softwing.apprenticeTook all the Colors from her warrior charart. Changes may not be showing yet. Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 15:56, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make her a girl. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 17:06, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Haha... Wrong blank. -ScarletwindLisanna 17:18, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno if I'm just being a n00b, but when I withdrew her I asked if I could post her at a later date, when I had time to work on her, and I was told sure. I kinda thought I'd have until my two weeks to have a charart reserved were up. ^^; If not, maybe lighten the tops of the paws a bit? Breezewhisker 21:57, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Breezewhisker. Sorry, but withdrawn is withdrawn. When a charart is withdrawn, the timelimit expires and is up for grabs once again. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, but people did tell me I could do that. It's fine, I can find something else. But I'm still irritated I can't be told correctly. Breezewhisker 00:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

We did that with the maker of Plumwillow's image, I don't understand why Breeze couldn't do the same Iveh Yo! 00:37, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Since when? But I did ask Iceheart about this and she says that once a charart is withdrawn it's fair game again. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:45, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was snappy. But it's fine. I can pick someone else, and she's already working on it. It's not like there isn't a surplus of projects. It's just a small mixup. Breezewhisker 00:54, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine Breeze. Thanks for being so awesome :) -ScarletwindLisanna 03:42, December 16, 2011 (UTC)
Hmmm...pretty! Blur the stripes a tad. :) Dazzy 23:39, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna

05:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:27, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

The back of that (<--) ear is pure white, without any shading. Add some shading to it, and then a lead can just archive this, as it's only a minor thing. llwildheartl12:05 Sun Dec 18

Re-uploaded. As Wild said, since it's so small, I'm gonna archive this now. So, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 15:21, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Whitestorm (A) - Approved

Whitestorm.apprentice I think I can do this. Alright, I'm really proud of this charart. Please do tell me if something is wrong with it. I adore Whitestorm, so I like that I can do his apprentice charart. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D22:33, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

There seems to be some white pixels in his ears. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 22:37, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Also make his ears feathered like his deputy image. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 22:42, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if the ear's should be like the deputy charart because he is older then and has been in more battles, and it's not like that in the warrior image. The white pixels on the ear is the smudged pelt color into the earpink, unless you want me to change that. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D22:53, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

That would probably work if the earpink had white all around it and you're right if the warrior charart doen't have it then the apprentice charart doesn't need it. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 22:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I see what you mean now by the white pixels. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D22:59, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Darn, I was hoping to get this after Badgerpaw was done. XD Anyways we he actually got the scar as an apprentice, but since we don't know at what point, and you can't see the back of the ear anyways, I'd say forget about it. Can you darken the shading. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have tufted ears, too? Bluestar11796 23:20, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't mention what was already said, Bluestar. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 23:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Mmmm xD. Okay, but you can't really see the scar on the warrior image anyway. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:03, Sat, Dec, 10, 2011

Define the shading. Sweetflower00:11 Sat Dec 10

Don't berate Bluestar for stating what needed to be done, Firestar. It hadn't been mentioned before. She's right: this does need tufted ears. Blur and darken the shading a bit. Lovely job, apprentice ;) llwildheartl01:11 Sat Dec 10

I already said it needed feathered ears. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 02:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

But then DJ said something about it not needing them, and it wasn't fixed on the next upload. Bluestar has every right to say that. Don't get bossy, apprentice. She was only making a point, and a good one at that. The warrior charart probably wasn't tweaked yet, and that's why it doesn't have the ears. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 06:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, just so lightly! Sweetflower13:32 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded - Fail on the tufts. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:59, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Make the tufts taller and not contain earpink. Right now his ears look torn in three pieces. Just add it on top of the lineart Iveh Yo! 18:11, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you're having trouble, just copy Iceheart's lineart on Redtail. llwildheartl06:23 Mon Dec 12

Darken the tail shading. Sweetflower00:07 Thu Dec 15

Reuploaded - <3 this charart. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:39, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

It seems like the earpink's two different colors. Fix that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:49, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better like this? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:45, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Define the shading just a tad. PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 03:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D23:18, Sat, Dec, 17, 2011

He looks great. CBA? oblivionAudience? 23:30, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Excellent! oblivionAudience? 11:50, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

One-eye (A) - Approved

One-eye.apprentice This was done pretty quickly :P. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 18:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I think she should have the faint indication of a pupil in her eye, as well as her warrior and queen. Iveh Yo! 18:45, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like this? --Leafstrike-- 18:51, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yup! I think that's good Iveh Yo! 18:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the blind eye more glossy? Maybe not, as people tend to correct my critiques. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 19:03, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, that's not half bad of an idea. But, how would someone go about that? Maybe adding white to the eye and blurring it, perhaps? I have no idea. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 19:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I looked at a few images, you could try making the pure white shine a little bigger and the edges of the eyes looked slightly tinged blue, but you don't have to do that, just what I observed :3 Iveh Yo! 19:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried something like this. --Leafstrike-- 16:44, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. oblivionAudience? 19:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:49, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

She looks awesome! CBA? oblivionAudience? 23:36, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 11:58, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hollyleaf(A) - Approved

Hollyleaf.apprentice It's my first Charart. Yay! Isn't she cute? I might of messed up with the eyes. comments? Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 22:23, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's taking a while to find the new image I did. No the weird extremely stretched old apprentice pizel, or a red link, or nothing. I guess it's coming soon. -_- Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 22:24, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yay it worked! Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 22:35, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more and blur it :3 Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 22:38, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes look a bit too yellow, make them greener like her warrior image.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  22:41, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 22:50, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose black, and it seems like there's some missing lineart there, so fix that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:01, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more. Sweetflower00:12 Thu Dec 15

Reuploaded. Missing lineart? You mean the nose thing? Hmm, I'll try, one sec. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 00:44, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 00:50, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nosepink gray. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:12, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed nosepink. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 22:44, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Loudsplash, the nose pink should be black for a black cat, so fix it again, sorry. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:49, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And make the earpink fill the whole ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. I'll fix the nosepink, but...the earpink is in the whole ear. What do you mean by that? Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:06, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, fixed the eyes a bit. Can't wait till this is CBA! I mean, *clears throat* if it is. :3 Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 17:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear and darken the shading in the eyes. llwildheartl22:44 Fri Dec 16

Earpink into the ear? You mean Earpink into the pelt? What do you mean by that? And also, Re-uploaded, made the eyes have more contrast and smudged the earpink into the pelt, it that's what you were talking about. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 00:06, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. Sweetflower00:45 Sat Dec 17

Re-uploaded Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 00:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded again, fixed earpink Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 04:58, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? llwildheartl19:58 Sat Dec 17

Sorry to interrupt but the shading needs to be a little darker Iveh Yo! 01:58, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Her nose should be pure black. It's not consistent with her kit image if the nose isn't black. There's pink tinged into it. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:02, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sigh. Really? You had to? Fine, Re-uploaded, now i have to wait much longer. >.> No offense. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:37, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Crap, it messed up the highlights. Trying to fix it...Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:47, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:47, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nope too much. Re-uploaded Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:52, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

You erased my comment. Anyways, what I said was...if you keep complaining, then I will make you wait even longer to have your image approved. Get over it, and move on. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:53, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Will you guys please stop saying "get over it" on every annoyed comment I make? I wasn't that serious, I was just a tad bit annoyed. Sorry. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:56, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

You shouldn't be annoyed. It's a part of the approval process. I've seen images with three separate CBAs that have been corrected. If you can't deal with it, you should remove yourself from the project right now. I'll CBA this now simply because you did a good job. oblivionAudience? 22:10, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to inturupt CBA, but there is gray waste/blurredline art near the tip of <---- that ear. Sweetflower22:20 Sun Dec 18

Okay, thanks, Re-uploaded. And sorry about that. I'm seriously trying to be easier now. Soo...I think I fixed the ear, and I also fixed some blurred lineart on the face. :) Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:12, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Since it's been more than 12 hours since the last art-related comment (waste doesn't count), approving. oblivionAudience? 12:11, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ashfur (TC) (A) ~ Approved

Ashfur (TC).apprenticeTried to copy his warrior image markings. Comments? Breezewhisker 16:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

He's beautiful <3 Darken the shading. oblivionAudience? 18:58, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened it by about 10%. Breezewhisker 19:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define/darken the flecks, and lighten the stripes. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:20, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, and define the tail shading. Sweetflower01:03 Sun Dec 18

Thicken the shading where? And I color-picked everything from his warrior image in the most neutral spots I could find. I agree on the spots, though. Breezewhisker 01:19, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

If you're having trouble with the color-picking, I could email you a color swatch Iveh Yo! 01:37, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading everywhere. This is bootiful. *steals* PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 01:40, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, the reason the stripes are lighter in the warrior image is that the highlights are so bright. I'll pump up the highlights on this to match it better. Breezewhisker 01:45, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redefined and slightly darken the spots, thickened the shading, and lightened the highlights. Anything else? Breezewhisker 01:56, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

As beautiful as this is, it still doesn't really match the warrior image. In the warrior image, the stripes are much more crisp, and way lighter: almost transparent. See if you can put the stripes on a different layer and lower the opacity, and try your best to match the spot/stripe placement to a tee. llwildheartl12:17 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded. Lightened and defined the stripes. Anything else? Breezewhisker 20:33, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh Breeze, that's friggin awesome. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 02:40, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. Approved. oblivionAudience? 20:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Willowpelt (A) ~ Approved

Willowpelt.apprenticeI quite like Willowpelt :) Bluefeather Jingle all the way! 15:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but thicken the shading until it matches the warrior image. Shelly For a limited time only 15:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Bluefeather Jingle all the way! 15:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing Bluefeather Jingle all the way! 15:36, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smudge the ear pink. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 23:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, sigh...darn blur tool :\ every time I don't use layers my chararts stink, but every time I do use layers with this blank it changes the placement! Raaaawrrrrr Bluefeather Jingle all the way! 00:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I decided to completely redo it, please don't tell me to lighten it because Pixlr's being annoying :\ I'll try if you ask but no promises I can completely fix it... Bluefeather Jingle all the way! 12:35, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her a lot and try and make the shading like on of the ones in the Apprentice Tutorial. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink please. Sweetflower01:33 Wed Dec 14

Are you still working on this, Bluefeather? -ScarletwindLisanna 00:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this, I have better chararts already made that i'd like to do instead of this soooo yeah. Bluefeather Jingle all the way! 18:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Anyone who wants it can take over. Ill archive it in 24 hours. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. I need something to do. XD Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Took all colors from her warrior image. Comments? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:39, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the light source (i know you don't use highlights Cloudy) on the shoulder and haunch. Other that that this is bootiful. PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 03:03, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Rain. ^.^ Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light part on her shoulder and haunch Iveh Yo! 06:01, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 14:03, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't look like anything else can be done to this. CBA? Iveh Yo! 02:00, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

There should be shading on the top of the head, if there is then define it because I don't see it...MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:53, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is fine, Loudsplash. Shading placement is artist's choice. Continuing CBA. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 15:52, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 20:17, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Frecklewish (A) - Approved

File:Frecklewish.apprentice.pngIf Icy wants this, she can have it since she originally did it. Took all the colors from her kittypet charart. Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 18:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

-Dies of the awesomeness of this charart- Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. Sweetflower00:12 Wed Dec 14

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:12, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Put mottles in her fur. I can see them on the kittypet pixil though I think they need to be tweaked. Iveh Yo! 05:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't the right colour, either. It's too grey. Also, Ivy: her kittypet image is fine; I think it's beautiful. oblivionAudience? 01:34, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the delay. -ScarletwindLisanna 17:57, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Swapped around the colors, thanks to Oblivion! ;) -ScarletwindLisanna 00:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could maybe add/bright the highlights so it matches the KP image better? This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

There should also be lighter mottles as well. No problem :D oblivionAudience? 01:01, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:40, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Woah now I can see why you're deputy. Anywho darken the shading and the ear pink a tad. Lovely! -Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 04:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make her a tad more brown and the stripes should be more pointy. oblivionAudience? 18:54, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna

21:15, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is taking up space that we haven't got to spare and no one's commented so, CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 02:31, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 20:17, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt. A) - Approved

Heathertail.apprentice.altComments? -ScarletwindLisanna 15:58, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the hind legs look flat. Ivyheart =P 20:59, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it as well. Splook it's a long way down. 21:44, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:06, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

She should have "heather-coloured" eyes. AKA, make them darker. oblivionAudience? 23:43, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:50, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty. :3 Could you blur the bit of shading on her back that sticks out? About half way between the base of her tail and her shoulder. Shelly For a limited time only 02:09, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:30, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the light source on her haunch Iveh Yo! 19:49, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 21:21, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind leg closest to us a bit. Sky-Jedi You will talk to me. 21:50, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:00, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Sweetflower23:13 Mon Dec 19

I see a bit of waste where the back curves, the tail, and above the head. Dazzy 23:19, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 23:53, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe...there's also some under the left hind paw. I really don't find anything else wrong with this...;)

I don't know who ^that^ was, but you need to sign, and I don't see any more waste. This is lovely. CBA? llwildheartl02:56 Tue Dec 20

Yes, there is waste, but it's very, very faint and I don't think anyone would notice it. So I guess you can continue CBA. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 03:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, that was me. Yea, don't mind that one, I had to tilt my laptop until it was flat in order to see it (I do that). Didn't mean to interrupt CBA, please continue. Dazzy 04:37, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, it can't be approved till that's gotten rid of. It's under the -----> hing paw. I'll approved this once it's gone, as it's not a problem with the actual image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:33, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's just waste, so I'm going to approve this. -ScarletwindLisanna 15:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (MCA) - Approved

Mudfur.mca I'm EXTREMELY proud of this one. Comments? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 17:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! Can you define a pale underbelly a tad please?*like it!* LeafyAbsolute maniac,17:19,December 11,2011 (UTC)

And add the pale belly to his belly, like between the haunch and foreleg. :3 Ivyheart =P 17:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded SnowyXPerry = Serry! 18:19, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a smidge. Sky☀Surfin' Santa 22:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste all around it. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 00:51, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I too see the waste. Dull the ear pink a touch and the herbs look like it's all...different colors. I know I'm being blunt, but it just looks unatural and odd. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:13, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, its the same color as the one on the medicine cat image. And the herbs can be any color, I think. (has the same herbs on his medicine cat image, too) Mistypebble 02:33, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

You matched his MC wonderfully, Snow. Define the shading just a tad though. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 15:55, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you smudge the earpink into the ear some more? ^^ Thistle. 22:55, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:14, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source on his shoulder and don't have the back of his hindpaw that is furthest from us have a light part on the back of it. Iveh Yo! 00:54, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. Sweetflower23:14 Thu Dec 15

Are you still working on this? Iveh Yo! 18:18, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this. Sorry guys, I can't work on this since I broke my right arm. (And yes, I'm typing with my left hand) --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 02:01, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Since I only have one apprentice image, may I pick this up? :3 User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:02, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

No need to ask. Go for it, and you can keep this space as well. Shelly For a limited time only 02:04, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I reserved it first ^^; I'm sorry. Though if you really really want it then I guess I can take something else :/Iveh Yo! 02:06, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

No. It's fine. There are still other chararts I can do, and like Skye said on chat, it's first come, first serve. You reserved it first, therefore you can do it. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:09, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 19:27, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think you need to add the pale belly to the belly.. between the the haunch and foreleg. Ivyheart =P 19:36, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's not on his MC or warrior image Iveh Yo! 19:54, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

But on the warrior and MC images, most of the belly is hidden. I think you need to add a pale belly, too. llwildheartl01:29 Tue Dec 20

Reuploaded Changes weren't showing last I looked Iveh Yo! 01:34, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Now they are ^^ CBA? llwildheartl01:41 Tue Dec 20

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 15:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Frecklewish (MCA) - Approved

File:Frecklewish.mca.png I actually really like her :3 oblivionAudience? 02:19, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I do too! :3 Bring down the highlights a little. And, normally, the lighter part in the eyes starts in the bottom part, not the top...but I'm no expert. I actually like the eyes that way. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

The eye is the artists choice. :3 User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:30, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And the highlights are fine. Redden the earpink a bit though? This is gorgeous! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:37, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this is fantastic! Maybe define the tail shading a bit? Love it! Dazzy 09:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. And actually, since the highlight is at the top of the eye, it would go lighter to darker, not the other way around. oblivionAudience? 12:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Actually Oblivion, realistically, the eye WOULD go lighter at the bottom and darker at the top. If you look at an image of a cat's eye, you see that it does do that. The bump above the eye, where the eyebrow is on humans, causes a shadow. But it does look fine like this, no need to change it, just wanted to clarify. Anyways, darken the spots/dapples a bit. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:45, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Oh, I didn't know that. You learn something new every day ^^ oblivionAudience? 18:55, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the image just a tad. Lovely job! llwildheartl20:50 Sat Dec 17

It matches her kittypet. oblivionAudience? 22:08, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch a tad more. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:33, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 11:56, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 21:23, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 15:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Toadstep (A) - Approved

Toadstep.apprenticeSince I redid his warrior, I thought I should go ahead and do the apprentice too. His design is based off of someone near and dear to me, so I'd rather not change the pattern. Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 16:51, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Sweetflower16:54 Sat Dec 17

shading's fine, just do all the things we said on the tweak page -Bloo!yo 17:03, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry for the delay, I've been having a rough time IRL, but I promise to see this through to approval Iveh Yo! 19:31, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! CBA? -ScarletwindLisanna 01:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 15:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) ~ Approved

Sandstorm.apprenticeYay space! All of the colors are from her warrior. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:20, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

That's beautiful! <3 smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more, and define the shading jut a ad bit more. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 19:00, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you :)  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  20:11, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the tail shading. Ivyheart =P 21:12, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much :D  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  21:21, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink a tad. Ivyheart =P 23:55, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:29, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know the stripes are supposed to be barely visible, but I gotta squint to see them. Can you define them a teeny-weeny bit? I'll CBA it afterward as this is lovely Iveh Yo! 01:57, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadeed Thank you so much Ivy! You are awesome! :)  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:14, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 19:51, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The lines were too bright.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  20:21, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if you interrupted your own CBA (can you do that?) but if you didn't, I'm doing it now. Add a "highlight" to the shoulder and then I'll continue the 12 hours. llwildheartl01:40 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded Oh heh heh whoops :P  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:04, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Continuing CBA Iveh Yo! 05:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 15:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (A) ~ Approved

Squirrelflight.apprentice That pattern was hard! D: Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 01:17, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

*nods* You have me to thank for that =P Smudge the earpink some Iveh Yo! 01:19, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading above her back haunch, ahead of the tail. Sweetflower01:21 Sun Dec 18

This is beautiful! Add some depth to the eyes. llwildheartl05:01 Sun Dec 18

Re-uploaded. Thanks! Shelly For a limited time only 23:46, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing, Shelly!! Erase the little orange on the white paw. Bluefeather Jingle all the way! 16:15, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'd rather not. I put it there on purpose. The white is proportional to the warrior image. Shelly For a limited time only 20:17, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! CBA? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:20, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt CBA, but I think the nonepink needs to be darker, I can barely tell if it's pink. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:42, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Next time you interrupt CBA, please change the title, Featherwillow. The earpink looks fine to me. Continuing CBA. llwildheartl02:51 Tue Dec 20

I'm sorry, oops, and it's nosepink, not earpink, in case you got confused with the two. And okay, if it looks good to you, continue with CBA. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 03:10, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Both the nosepink and earpink are fine. Continuing CBA. llwildheartl03:16 Tue Dec 20

None, Approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 15:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Wetfoot (A) - Approved

Wetfoot.apprentice I figured since I'm redoing his warrior, I might as well do his apprentice. Especially since I'm the OA and I hate the old image. Comments? llwildheartl10:14 Sun Dec 18

Blur the shading on his head a bit, and maybe define the structure of it if you want. Breezewhisker 00:29, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you darken the stripes just tiny bit? It's a lovely image, Wildheart. ^^ Shelly For a limited time only 02:15, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Shelly. Breeze: I didn't really know what you meant by define the structure, so I just kinda played around with it and this is what I got. llwildheartl01:00 Tue Dec 20

It looks really good, I love it! <3 The highlights make it look like there is a lump or bump right below the top of his back. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 03:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Featherwillow. The "highlight" (I don't actually use highlights) on the top of his back is where the light hits him because his haunch blocks the part of the light. So it's not a bump, it's just there's a dip and the light doesn't hit the dip. If that makes any sense whatsoever... :P llwildheartl03:56 Tue Dec 20

Since there haven't been any comments for a day, I'm going to CBA this. llwildheartl08:16 Wed Dec 21

If I can count, properly... 12 hours. llwildheartl21:16 Wed Dec 21

Redwillow (Alt. W) ~ Approved

Redwillow.warrior.alt Horrible. Comments? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:00, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading, define the haunch highlight and the one on the tail. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and brighten it. Mistypebble 02:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh I just noticed I uploaded on meh B-Day ^^ Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Either darken the head shading or lighten the "highlights". llwildheartl02:27 Thu Dec 8

This doesn't look very tawny... Maybe take the color from Birchfall's alt? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 02:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the color from the ear pink chart, I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else has an opinion. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be blurred a lot. Also, Take the colors from Oakheart's alt warrior, if you're looking for tawny. This doesn't look...tawny...if you ask me. If it is, it's pale and should be darkened. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did Okay I darkened it because it is tawny I took it from the ear pink chart. I would have used gausion blur, but I don't really know how to use it :P Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better, actually. Now, define the ear pink. I don't care if it's from the chart or not. I can't see it. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading quite a bit. Also, just cause the color (pelt OR earpink) is from the chart, doesn't always make it right. Sometimes the colors just need to be tweaked to fit certain images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 16:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading (sorry I don't mean to repeat things) and make the earpink darker. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 16:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is gonna be the death of me Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 18:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad more. Silverhmm 13:10, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made it worse. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:27, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be darkened more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more umm pink and not peach. xD This looks great! --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:19, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded @ Cinder I don't know waht you mean so I just darkened the ear pink. Changes not showing. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:43, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading; it's a bit flat. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry I meant that you should make the earpink pink-ish because right now it looks peach..--Cinder Real or Not Real? 21:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink looks horrible. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:47, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot more and darken the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading also. PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 03:05, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *hides* Don't kill me for making it worse! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:42, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I like it.... not sure if it's my place to say that though Tigerheart273 14:50, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Course its your place to say that. I love this picture. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 16:41, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, yeah, you can say that it looks nice, but only after 24 hours of no comments, and if nobody has already commented to say the same. Otherwise, it just clutters up the talk page. The shading needs to be blurred and darkened a lot. llwildheartl20:04 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded I used layers now. Tell me if it's too dark. Thank you for your positive comments, you guys :) Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:50, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yay layers! It looks so much better. Lighten the layer opacity a tad and erase the shading on the top of the muzzle and add some to the ears. Also make the earpink more visible, as I cannot see it at all right now. llwildheartl20:53 Sat Dec 17

Looks like you're getting along well with layers. ;) Also add some shading to the foreleg farthest from us. Ivyheart =P 21:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I would reupload but when I do the opacity, it just...does what it's not supposed to do >_< I can't explain it. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:33, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and define the earpink (if there is earpink).  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:09, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay the opacity is not working for me so....bleh. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:58, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I'm sorry guys but I'm gonna have to withdraw this. With Christmas time aournd, I just don't have time at the current moment. I might be able to work on something else, but not right now. Sorry Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:35, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. Splook it's a long way down. 02:05, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Splook it's a long way down. 21:57, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

He's perfect, and frankly he's been up for far too long. CBA? Note to leads that this image will be approved after 24 hours, not 12. oblivionAudience? 23:27, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, this image is lovely, but it looks more brown than tawny. Try taking the color from either Birchfall or Oakheart's alts. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:21, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes on file history, dumb me forgot to erase the waste before hand. Splook it's a long way down. 04:08, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Good job. Continuing CBA. oblivionAudience? 20:14, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Everything about this is lovely, except the intensity of the shading. I can barely see it well enough to tell that it's shading. Darken it a tad, please, and then I'll continue the 12 hours. llwildheartl01:12 Tue Dec 20

O.O What in the world happened to Redwillow....??? Um, is there a reason there's waste scribbled everywhere outside the lineart? Is it my computer glitching weirdly, or is that a test or...what? o.o Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 03:38, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think your computer's glitching, 'cause I don't see anything :P llwildheartl03:45 Tue Dec 20

This is really good! Layers help. :P Is this brown? If you can, can you make it a tad more tawny. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    20:42, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, did you read the comment on my last upload? The changes aren't showing. Go to the file history. Splook it's a long way down. 01:11, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It's strange how the changes won't show, even now. Help with it? Stoneclaw: I took the colors from Oakheart's tawny alt, so yeah, it's tawny. And yes, I love layers <3 Splook it's a long way down. 01:16, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely job. CBA? llwildheartl08:17 Wed Dec 21

12 hours. llwildheartl21:34 Wed Dec 21

Brokenstar (A) ~ Approved

Brokenstar.apprenticeNot gonna lie, I really like this one. All of the colors are from his elder and I tried to make the stripe like it. I'm pretty sure he should have a flat face but it doesn't say that in his description. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  15:44, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a tad more -ScarletwindLisanna 16:08, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:31, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Someone mistakenly took out the flat muzzle in his description. I put it back. Please flatten his face. Shelly For a limited time only 16:59, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

It is flattened. I wasn't sure if I should have kept it that way. Should I make it flatter?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:01, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, make it more visible. Or just leave it if I'm blind. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 17:59, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried to change the posistion of the mouth to make it more flat.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  19:15, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the curve in the end more sudden and sharp. It just looks like a normal tail right now, just in a different position from the normal blanks. Make it look m ore broken, as he is named for that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:14, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Before I actually thought it looked too bent compared to his elder. But you're right. It worked out because I needed to fix the lines on the tail. How does this look?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:26, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading some? This is amazing, great job as always Iveh Yo! 01:52, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much Ivy :D  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:03, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make his hair stick out a bit more where his tail is broken? He's described with unusually long fur, so it should stick out at least as much as the rest of his fur. Shelly For a limited time only 04:13, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:24, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. I meant the outside curve, not the inside. My bad! Shelly For a limited time only 05:32, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:45, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 01:25, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. llwildheartl22:02 Wed Dec 21

Minnowtail (Alt. A) -Approved

File:Minnowtail.apprentice.alt.png Comments? llwildheartl04:41 Sun Dec 18

Is this gray and white? If so, can you lighten the gray? I love the white placement. <3 Ivyheart =P 04:45, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :3 I think it's supposed to be black and white. llwildheartl04:47 Sun Dec 18

I just checked. It's supposed to be gray and white. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 04:48, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm a derp. She was described as black (as a kit) and then gray and white as an apprentice, and I somehow merged those two alts XD I'll lighten it a bunch gimme a sec. llwildheartl04:52 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded llwildheartl04:54 Sun Dec 18

Awesome! Blur the shading a tad. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 04:55, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Was she described with green eyes? If so, just ignore my comment. ^^ Sky-Jedi You will talk to me. 04:56, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

No, she wasn't described with green eyes, but I think it's the artist's choice if it's an alt, isn't it? I mean, it's a completely different description, so why keep the eye colour? (I'll blur the shading after the eye-colour thing is resolved) llwildheartl04:59 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded I'll fix the eyes if somebody else agrees with Sky :3 llwildheartl06:58 Sun Dec 18

I have to agree with Sky on this one. Her alt. kit has amber eyes, so this alt. should have them too. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 13:42, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is supposed to be grey-and-white, I believe? Lighten the grey. oblivionAudience? 23:41, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It is gray and white :3 I lightened the gray a little bit, but it never specifies the shade of gray so... llwildheartl00:52 Tue Dec 20

I love grey-and-white cats. Could you blur the haunch and tail shading? --Leafstrike-- 18:35, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. So do I ^^ llwildheartl08:04 Wed Dec 21

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 22:11, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 04:16, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Snooky (A)~ Approved

File:Snooky.apprentice.png Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 01:14, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, so very cute! <3 Lighten the shading? Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 01:39, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, define the tail shading. Sweetflower01:55 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 07:32, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good :3 CBA? llwildheartl21:26 Wed Dec 21

Okay not stopping the CBA, but if his warrior image gets a collar, so does his apprentice one, so i added a collar. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:59, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wait i dont know what im talking about i didnt change anything >.< 22:02, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Confusing, but 12 hours. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:43, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (A) - Approved

Willowbreeze.apprenticeComments? -ScarletwindLisanna 15:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink a tad. Besdies that, I see nothing to improve. Shelly For a limited time only 17:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Aww... Thanks, Shelly! :) -ScarletwindLisanna 20:10, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shoulder "highlight" bigger and I'll CBA this bootiful image ;) llwildheartl09:59 Wed Dec 21

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 17:31, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? llwildheartl21:13 Wed Dec 21

Sorry but the stripes need to be darker. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:09, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 00:04, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Kay CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:09, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Apporved. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:43, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (A) - Approved

Cloudpelt.apprenticeHmm, I must practice shadings more LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:51,December 11,2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me. Just make the nose pink, since white cats have pink noses. --Leafstrike-- 16:57, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I like the shading, too. Cute! And, the deputy version has green eyes. :3 Ivyheart =P 16:58, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Its not green, but blue (Im going to tweak it and pre-made him). And I dont like white cats with blue eyes... Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,17:00,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry. =3 My bad. My eyes are obviously not very good. Blur the earpink. Ivyheart =P 17:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Its ok, that eye is really small xD Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,17:07,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Make the nose more pink. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,20:30,December 11,2011 (UTC)

His eye colour should match the original image. Change it to blue. oblivionAudience? 02:15, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

NO ONE understands me there ,20:59,December 14,2011 (UTC)

I get what you mean Leaf, but just cause you're gonna tweak the deputy image, doesn't mean you should change the color of all of the eyes. There was nothing wrong with it before. But since you fixed them, CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:46, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt but I think the shading should be blurred/lightened more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:49, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

lightened? are you joking? I barely see tem on my PC LeafyAbsolute maniac,21:06,December 16,2011 (UTC)

Perhaps blur then. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D22:30, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,12:24,December 17,2011 (UTC)

The earpink should actually be pink, should it not? Since he's white. oblivionAudience? 23:32, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, THIS is earpink from his warrior pic, Im not changing anything :-) reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,21:36,December 19,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and go over the placement. Right now it kinda looks like you tried to merge both of the examples in the apprentice tutorials. Choose one from the tutorials or make one of your own that has a definitive light source. Also lighten the eyes and reverse the depth in them so the darkest part is at the top. llwildheartl01:28 Tue Dec 20

Its the shadings from example 1. I cant see nothing wrong and I think the shading needs to be darket because I cant see them on my computer and this means I cant blur them, Im sorry Wildy. reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,17:23,December 20,2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:00, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Your shading looks weird. Especially on the hind leg. Too much of the shading under the tail and behind got onto the thigh. Erase that so the thigh is lighter and your light source appears from behind like the rest of the image. Breezewhisker 00:18, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,19:58,December 21,2011 (UTC)

She is pretty. Maybe define the tail shading a tad. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 01:33, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Its a tom, Ivypool, reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,12:54,December 22,2011 (UTC)

Lovely. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 03:47, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:19, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blackstar (A) ~ Approved

Blackstar.apprentice Here he is...I hate the earpink and the paws...! Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 22:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black paws User:Twilightheart200/Sig 23:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Also lighten them a touch, I can almost not see the lineart Iveh Yo! 23:01, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black part on the right ear a bit. Lovely! ^_^ Ivyheart =P 23:05, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. I darkened the ear-pink a bit too! Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 00:30, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the smudged ear-pink more realistic. Sweetflower00:53 Sat Dec 17

The earpink is a little...bright...The correct color for white would be this: File:White earpink color.png. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 01:12, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, if you want to give her a colour example, you would go to the tutorials and you'll see there's an explanation there. I put a delete tag on your image you uploaded, as it's just taking up space. llwildheartl01:15 Sat Dec 17

I asked if it was okay before I edited it, because i figured that it would be okay, since it's so small. And it's easier to post, instead of posting the link and giving instructions, and then Fire having to use snipping tool to get the image, put it on gimp or pixlr, and color choose the image. Firestar would just have to copy the mage and paste, then color choose. But okay, whatever, do what you want with that image as I didn't quite understand what you meant by putting a delete tag on it. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 03:34, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. :D Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 03:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, if you go to the tutorial and read what it said, you can see that it is much easier than what you described. Anyways, smudge the paws so it looks more natural and the colors flow into one another better. Also, blur the earpink. Nice work. Atelda insert vague subtext here 04:07, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I failed at the paws :P Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 04:22, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job, Firestar. Smudge the black in with the pelt on the closest ear. Splook it's a long way down. 19:05, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading as well. oblivionAudience? 19:11, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 23:27, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the ear-pink a tad more. Bootiful, and i mean it rowan :) PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 01:44, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Thanks Rainy, that means alot! Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 03:42, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The haunch highlight is a little...triangular. Also, smudge the earpink into the pelt more. It looks great! :) Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 03:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink to match his other images. Lighten the paws a tad. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:24, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 20:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think you shaded all of the tail instead of some, because I do not know if you use highlights or not, but that area needs to be brightened (the area means the area that is not supposed to be shaded). a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 01:44, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is on the left side of the tail and to me it looks fine. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 02:19, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you used the shading tool over the eyes, brighten them and I'll CBA this Iveh Yo! 04:23, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Silly me :3 Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 21:39, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 03:46, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (A) ~ Approved

Blackclaw.apprentice Comments? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:12, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:14, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:18, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" (I know you don't use them, but where the highlights would be) and...smudge the pelt into the earpink. Maybe make the nose the tiniest bit pinkr? It looked better pinker on Hollyleaf(A). Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 01:41, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pink is fine, and black cats have black noses. Not changing it, sorry. Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:54, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bunch. Looks good. llwildheartl03:53 Sun Dec 18

Ear pink is straight from his elder. I still have the .xcf. Not changing it. If you'd bother to look at his elder, you would see the ear pink color. =P Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 14:07, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Dangs, this is better then his kit image which i took care of. Define the shading just a tad more. Bootiful. PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 22:05, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I can't. Computer spazzed and I lost teh layers. xD Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 15:57, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Then redo it :P Doesn't matter how you do it, the shading needs to be defined. Also, the earpink looks normal on the elder because it's blurred all the way around. Since you obviously can't do that on this one, try smudging the pelt colour into the earpink really far. llwildheartl02:49 Tue Dec 20

Actually, it looks fine to me. I'm CBA'ing it Iveh Yo! 17:59, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

No WIldheart is right the shading needs to be defined. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:12, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Whatever, guys. Once again, Wildheart is always right. Why don't I just re-do the entire freaking image if it'll get you to shut up. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:44, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

The ear-pink is fine, guys. It matches the other image. Black cats tend to have dark ear-pinks, if not black or gray ear-pinks. Shelly For a limited time only 21:08, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Forgot to say I re-uploaded a few hours ago... Spazzy computer is spazzing. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:19, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 03:39, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:19, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (A) - Approved

Bumblestripe.apprentice Yeah, eww....comments? Atelda insert vague subtext here 15:50, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cute ^.^ Blur the stripes and define the shading on the tail.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  19:46, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fill the white pixels on the tail. -ScarletwindLisanna 20:29, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

There is also white pixels between the closest front leg and the stomach. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 20:34, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Put some more shading on his neck. Breezewhisker 22:27, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaeded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

it doesn't really match his warrior... The stripes are thicker and blacker, and not blurred as much. oblivionAudience? 00:56, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, as a matter of fact, It looks less like his warrior than my old one. :( Sorry...the gray is paler, the stripes are black and in a different shape, less smudged and blurred, and there's less shading...Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:36, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The gray is fine, just add some highlights if you want to match the warrior. My tip: put the highlight (if you're using one) under the stripes layer to avoid turning the stripes gray. Shelly For a limited time only 02:45, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ahhh. I guess that's what kept mine getting gray no matter how black I made them. :3 I should've put the stripes above the highlights, that makes sense. I thought about that but never did it. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:55, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Keep in mind, Featherwillow, that more is not better. I have absolutely no passion for this image any longer besides dislike. Do what the hell you want with it. >.> Atelda insert vague subtext here 16:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Atelda can I take this over?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:49, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Of course. =3 Atelda insert vague subtext here 16:52, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Taking this over. This was a LOT harder than I imagined. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:12, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

B'awww he looks cute. Blur his highlights. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:22, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Maple :D I changed some of the lines on the shoulder. It looked pretty messed up.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Aww...Adorable! =3 Define the "highlight" on the shoulder. If you don't use highlights, add more shading. Dazzy 05:01, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I defined the highlight. Thank you :D  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:49, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

That was...very mean, Atelda. But it looks totally awesome Mountainheart! You did it perfectly!! Add depth to the eyes and smudge the plt into the earpink. Love it! <3 Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤15:34 PM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Featherwillow, Atelda was not being mean, I suggest to stop acting like a lead and doing stuff like this to users. Atelda's one of the nicest I know. :3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:04, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks Feather but I think Stone is right. Atelda is a very nice person and her comment was not intended to be mean.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  19:25, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes so this matches the other images. llwildheartl22:07 Wed Dec 21

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:27, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 03:37, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:19, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedpaw (SC) - Approved

Spottedpaw (SC).apprentice The only thing I want to know is what brown cat has ginger flecks... oblivionAudience? 11:51, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

To me, the flecks kind of look like stripes. Iveh Yo! 19:48, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

That's the point o3o There's also background flecks. oblivionAudience? 20:34, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Why do you want them to look like stripes? Anyways, define the earpink a bit and make the eyes less neon. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:14, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't really want them to look like stripes. I drew them in Paint like flecks - they were separated - but once I blurred them they kind of came out looking like stripes. I actually really like the image this way, and to be honest I'd rather not change it. oblivionAudience? 00:49, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I like how it looks, too, but to be honest, he doesn't look like a flecked cat at all. Try to define the flecks so they look like flecks, and reverse the depth in the eyes so the darkest part is at the top. llwildheartl03:02 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded. Is the eye not my choice? I know it makes more sense like you said it, but I like my eyes this way. oblivionAudience? 12:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

My cat has ginger flecks. She's a brown tabby. She has a splodge on her head and little bits on her shoulders. They fade out as they get further down her body and then become stripes on her legs.--Cynthia-may 16:07, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

It may just be me, but is part of the tufted ear the color of the ear pink? Because I thought so. Pardon me if it was supposed to be like that, but I just noticed it, so if it was not supposed to be,then please fix it. Otherwise great job! a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:50, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cynthia-may: she's a brown tabby, right? This cat is just described with "ginger flecks". Oblivion: He looks like he has stripes, not flecks. Yes, it's pretty, but it doesn't match how he was described. Please change it. llwildheartl09:54 Wed Dec 21

Okay, re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 21:22, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Try looking at this cat. It's a torbie, but it mostly fits the description Spottedpaw has. Shelly For a limited time only 03:24, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think he looks perfectly fine the way I have him now. He looks very speckle-y to me. oblivionAudience? 03:29, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I know. Just providing reference if she wanted to see what a cat with this description would look like and wanted to change it. You're right, it looks fine. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 03:32, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:19, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (A) - Approved

Ivytail (SC).apprentice Ugh...Not a fan of this. Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 20:33, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, define the shading a tad. PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 20:37, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the title for you, and I can see some white pixls on the front hindleg and one on the back foreleg. Unless my eyes are just bad =) otherwise beautiful Twi! Acornflight Med. Cat ofLunarClan! 21:16, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the patches and add some variety in the color. Make the ear-pink a bit paler. -ScarletwindLisanna 21:17, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eyes. llwildheartl01:16 Tue Dec 20

I'm sorry, but, I can't do this. 1) I lost the file when my computer broke again (Still have Stonestream) and 2) I generally don't like this image. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 16:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Mind if I take over? oblivionAudience? 22:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead. Splook it's a long way down. 03:55, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I am now considering redoing all of her images... Her current ones are totally unrealistic. oblivionAudience? 20:47, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Go for it. I really like this, let's go CBA Iveh Yo! 03:42, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to interrupt but the spot on her cheek looks like a chipmunk...Icewish 14:18, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

That's no reason to interrupt. It looks fine. Continuing CBA from where it left off. Shelly For a limited time only 14:55, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:19, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (A)~ Approved

Tawnypelt.apprentice Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 22:04, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black patch in the middle of the haunch a bit and darken the shading. Very pretty, Special K ;) llwildheartl22:21 Wed Dec 21

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 01:00, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a touch and blur the patches a bit more. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity22:29 Thu Dec 22 22:29, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:56, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Really lovely, Iceheart. Anything beyond this is nitpicking. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 03:35, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:19, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Runningbrook (A) -Approved

Runningbrook.apprenticeWell, I tried LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:46,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Darken the shading a tad. Splook it's a long way down. 23:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the shading on the back of the back xD Sweetflower23:37 Mon Dec 12

ReuploadedLeafyAbsolute maniac,18:51,December 13,2011 (UTC)

The paws are darken than everything else, wither make the shading darker everywhere but the paws, or make the paws lighter please. Sweetflower02:11 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading a touch. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:59, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

ReuploadedLeafyAbsolute maniac,21:01,December 16,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bunch and define the stripes. llwildheartl20:46 Sat Dec 17

ReuploadedLeafyAbsolute maniac,21:19,December 18,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. oblivionAudience? 23:34, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

  • trying to match warrior char.* Oh now i see, its too dark, ok what do you think? LeafyAbsolute maniac,21:48,December 19,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes a bunch and blur them. llwildheartl01:32 Tue Dec 20

Im sorry, this is horrible LeafyAbsolute maniac,27:14,December 20,2011 (UTC)

This isn't horrible. It looks great~ CBA? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I disagree with CBA. The stripes should be lighter. oblivionAudience? 23:30, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the stripes, they seem blotchy on the ends of the stripes.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:46, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

ReuploadedLeafyAbsolute maniac,19:53,December 21,2011 (UTC)

The entire image needs to be lighter, still. Run the dodge tool over the entire thing (except the lineart, obviously :P) llwildheartl21:50 Wed Dec 21

Oka! *dies* reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,13:02,December 22,2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a tad. Nice job. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here...
13:39, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! Not without your help :-) Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,18:37,December 22,2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:14, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Accutally since its been CBAed before, it should go straight through. -ſceheartBlah blah 08:44, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt A.) ~ Approved

Brackenfur.apprentice.alt2Brackenfur was described as a ginger tom in Fire and Ice when he was an apprentice. Took the ear color for his warrior image. Comments? Silverhmm 21:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Realized I used the female lineart xD Removed the eyelash thing, but the changes aren't showing. Silverhmm 21:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little (as in color-wise) and blur the edges of them some more Iveh Yo! 21:40, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 21:54, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The back leg looks highlighted instead of shaded. I don't know if it was intentially but I'm just pointing it out. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 22:46, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:09, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for what the shading should look like, and saturate the image a bunch. llwildheartl01:05 Sat Dec 10

I used the shading placement guide wildheart. The gaussian blur just made it look weird. Silverhmm 02:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the shading a tad and saturated the image. Silverhmm 12:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad more. Splook it's a long way down. 20:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 00:25, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the stripes a tad. oblivionAudience? 02:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 12:17, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make him a bit redder? A bit more like Firestar. He looks golder-brown right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 12:30, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a tad more. PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 03:09, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bunch. llwildheartl20:13 Sat Dec 17

Define the ear-pink and maybe give him green eyes since he was mistakenly described with those too. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:03, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded All the changes are made now. Silverhmm 12:23, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

He needs to be much more ginger. Right now he kinda looks gingery-brown, and that's much too close to his actual description ^^ llwildheartl01:20 Tue Dec 20

Also, define the earpink a whole bunch, I can barely see it. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 03:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 12:02, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is too neon. If you want a good color example, my personal charart is a good example of a realistic color you can use =) Iveh Yo! 16:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Its also too red. Use Ivystripe's example color, and also define the stripes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:39, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look a little awkward. Blur them. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:15, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define all the shading except the tummy shading. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 01:32, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can I withdraw this? I found another one I want to work on. Silverhmm 11:35, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. Anyone else that wants him can take over. oblivionAudience? 12:12, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ill take over. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:40, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- Made this in 10 min. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:37, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. Define the tail shading a touch. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D22:58, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 00:54, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

A day without comments, CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:13, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:14, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (A) -Approved

File:Tigerheart.apprentice.png Comments? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D07:30, Tue, Dec, 13, 2011

I love this! Make the stripes wavy like his warrior image. Sweetflower11:48 Tue Dec 13

It's a bit darker than his other images. Could you lighten it up a bit? Shelly For a limited time only 14:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D08:01, Wed, Dec, 14, 2011

Make the stripes a bit thinner on the head and body but not the tail or ankles. Those look perfect. Also give his highlights a tiny bit of a golden-yellow tint like his warrior. Great job!  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  15:32, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes don't go solidly over curves like shoulders like that. It should break where his elbow starts, not go right over the lineart like it's not there. oblivionAudience? 02:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fail. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:27, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Blur the stripes a little. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:01, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make the stripes a bit wavier. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I don't know how much wavier the stripes can get without destroying the whole image. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D09:16, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

The stripes need to be thinner at the ends and more wavy at the ends. Other than that... awesome job! llwildheartl04:03 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded - I hate wavy tabbies on apprentice blanks. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:08, Mon, Dec, 19, 2011

Gonna go CBA on this one Iveh Yo! 16:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to interrupt, but there's waste all around the image. oblivionAudience? 23:13, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Waste does not affect the image itself. Once DJ fixes that, it'll continue from the original CBA. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:53, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I didn't actually see any waste in the first one, but I just double checked. I tryed to kill the waste, but on all the programs it shows up on it says no waste, only in the preview. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:50, Wed, Dec, 21, 2011

The stripes still aren't completely consistent with the other images. Try to make them wavier and thinner at the ends. Other than that... awesome job, my apprentice! llwildheartl09:24 Wed Dec 21

Lighten the stomach shading. It looks really dark. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 01:37, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yuck! I am never doing a wavy tabby again. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D23:16, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

Tigerheart's image was redone. You'll have to change the stripes. Shelly For a limited time only 03:45, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Hmmm.. I personaly like this one better than the wavy tabby one. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D23:17, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:16, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:13, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (A) - Approved

Dawnpelt.apprentice Comments? Sweetflower16:58 Sat Dec 17

Define the shading a little, I think you over-blurred it. Breezewhisker 17:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I just lowered the layer's opacity for the shading, because I blur at like 20. So I darkened it now. Sweetflower18:16 Sat Dec 17

Mind lightening the eyes just a bit? They look a little brown. Splook it's a long way down. 19:03, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I see whatcha mean. I lightened them. Actually I made them more orange, and less brown, I hope that's ok. Sweetflower19:51 Sat Dec 17

Blur the shading a bit Sweet. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 22:02, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sweetflower22:28 Sun Dec 18

Smooth out the shading on the back and add some shading on <-- this side of the face. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:09, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sweetflower21:42 Mon Dec 19

Blur the shading. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 21:44, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sweetflower21:58 Mon Dec 19

Be sure to make the shading go all the way to the lineart. Currently, your shading pattern does not. Once you've done that I'll probably CBA this =) Iveh Yo! 01:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also blur the shading and add a line of "highlights" on the tail. Add some depth to the eyes, too. llwildheartl01:39 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded There is depth in the eyes. o.O Sweetflower19:01 Tue Dec 20

Make the depth more dramatic so you can tell there's depth :P blur all the shading a bunch, and add some shading to the back of her left (<--) ear, as well as enlarging the "highlights" on the paws. llwildheartl21:57 Wed Dec 21

Re-uploaded Sweetflower23:17 Wed Dec 21

Blur the earpink some more. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 23:18, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don' blur ear-pink bud. I'll smudge it though. xD Sweetflower23:33 Wed Dec 21

Define tail highlights/lack of shading. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:43, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading Sweet. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:16, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't use highlights. Sweetflower21:56 Fri Dec 23 The shading still needs to be blurred. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 21:58, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sweetflower22:07 Fri Dec 23

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:18, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:12, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Stonestream (A) - Approved

Stonestream.apprentice Phew. Just made it. Anyway, I must be obesessed with the male apprentice blanks. =P Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 18:49, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. Sweetflower19:21 Sat Dec 17

You took my spot. xD Add a little more shading on the belly, mostly near the haunch :) WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:30, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Why you take the last spot?? >.> Blur the shading to blend in more with the unshaded parts. Mistypebble 19:54, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:29, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Sky-Jedi You will talk to me. 00:29, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Finally reuploaded - Re-did the shading. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 20:58, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reverse the depth in the eyes so the dark part is at the top, smudge the earpink into the ear some more, enlarge the "highlight" on the shoulder, and add some shading in the crease where his right (-->) hind leg folds. llwildheartl21:59 Wed Dec 21

Define where the shading is not on the tail (so either add highlights there or lighten some of the shading). He is handsome. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 01:47, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Did all the above. o3o User:Twilightheart200/Sig 15:41, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:18, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:12, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Runningnose (MCA) ~Approved

Runningnose.mca Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 02:52, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is adorable, Shelly! Make the highlight on the face stretch a bit further this way --> across the forehead and make the haunch highlight a bit bigger. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:55, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

His grey looks a bit darker all over on his other images. It's also more smudged. Other than that, he's gorgeous. Breezewhisker 02:58, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Adorable <3 Define the shading on the tail.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:27, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job, Shelly. Add some more depth to the eyes. llwildheartl03:00 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 16:54, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the head. -ScarletwindLisanna 20:12, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think he'd have patchy fur as an apprentice? It's up to you, but maybe he was born with it. oblivionAudience? 23:32, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I doubt it. But I am considering giving him a crusty nose. >.> Shelly For a limited time only 01:24, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the "highlight" on the haunch and face. I don't know how you'd do it, but you should try giving him a crusty nose :3 llwildheartl22:10 Wed Dec 21

Re-uploaded. .... Yup. XD Shelly For a limited time only 03:02, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

He should be a whole lot darker if you want to match his elder. oblivionAudience? 03:38, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, the elder's shading needs to be redone. The shading is too blotchy and dark. This matches his original Medicine Cat image. Shelly For a limited time only 03:50, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

This looks fine to me. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 02:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:11, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Pouncetail (A) - Approved

Pouncetail (RC).apprenticeWhoopie! Another ginger and white cat! Comments? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity23:10 Thu Dec 22 23:10, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! ;) Can you define the shading on the head and tail? It looks really dark in those places. Dazzy 23:35, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity00:30 Fri Dec 23 00:30, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make his nose a little less neon. Purplemoon Only 3 days 'till Christmas! 13:44, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity15:13 Fri Dec 23 15:13, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

More than a day without comments. CBA? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:49, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:10, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) - Approved

Goldenflower.apprenticeI have officially successfully done all of her images :P Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 16:45, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful Ivy! Define the shading on the tail a little. I love this!  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  19:14, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading everywhere exept for the tail (where you define it like Mountain said) and the head. I think the paws don't need as much blurring though. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:12, Sat, Dec, 24, 2011

That's funny, seeing as how I copied and pasted the shading layer from Jayfeather's approved apprentice image Iveh Yo! 00:25, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather is gray the lack of blurring isnt as obvious. Lighten the shading a little bit. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:23, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 18:47, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! ^^ I see nothing wrong. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:43, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but can you blur the shading on her haunch? Looks awesome other than that! Mistypebble 03:19, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's ok. I'll restart the CBA Iveh Yo! 03:27, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Rockshade (A) ~ Approved

Rockshade.apprentice Here he is, comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 19:43, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:51, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 19:55, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink a little, unless you got it from his warrior charart. Purplemoon Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D 19:59, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I got it from his warrior image. I am pretty sure about that. PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 20:00, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, on both, it is nearly non-existant. Iveh Yo! 22:34, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 23:15, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I see nothing wrong with this. Let's go CBA ^^ Iveh