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Webfoot- Approved

[[File:Webfoot.PNG]] -makes mental note to lay of on tabbies for a while--- Darkhallows  Lair 06:50, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

I really like it, except the markings next to the eye don't look right. Make a wave from the eye, and maybe a fork form the whiskers. -- Dawnfeather  06:52, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

The marking on the cheek looks, odd. It looks too much like the actual cheek.Minnowclaw 22:25, 20 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw


Changed eye mark.-- Darkhallows  Lair 07:51, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

It should be longer and in this shape ~ -- Dawnfeather  09:37, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Why lay off on the tabbies? It looks great! Goldencloud 22:13, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

There is some smudging outside of the line art around the tail. Minnowclaw 22:48, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Fixed the smudging and removed the eye-mark. It was too much trouble, and I couldn't get the shape right.-- Darkhallows  Lair 07:16, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I think you should try again with the eye mark. I think it really needs it! -- Minnowberry   Dawnfeather's Den  10:46, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't think so Dawn, it looks good.Minnowclaw 02:48, 25 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw


Added it anyway. (I've had it done for a day or so now.. I must have forgotten to upload...)-- Darkhallows  Lair 07:11, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

It should be a tiny bit away from the actual eye - leave a tiny gap of a pixel or two  Sandy Talk! 21:43, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Anything else?-- Darkhallows  Lair 04:26, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

He looks good to me. Nobody else has commented, so 24 hrs starting now. --Bramble My Realm 16:24, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Bramble My Realm 17:26, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Marshkit - Approved

[[File:Marshkit.png]]

Tallpoppy's little kit... who disappeared. Comments?  Sandy Talk! 12:38, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

The tabby markings could stand out a little tiny bit more. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 12:49, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I made them darker if the change ever shows.  Sandy Talk! 13:34, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

The eye looks a bit weird. Maybe try something with the pupil or darken the yellow.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 22:30, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I darkened the eyes and the tabby stripes are showing up darker now too. Anything else?  Sandy Talk! 15:41, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't think so. Does anyone else have anything? (I'm really hoping we eventually get to see Marskit and Applekit as warriors, I miss them) --Bramble My Realm 21:02, 25 June 2009 (UTC)quote from bramble

quote from bramble"(I'm really hoping we eventually get to see Marskit and Applekit as warriors, I miss them)" what about toadkit hmmm? birchfall mentions he misses them from the great journey and wonders how they are, as far as i could see, they werent in the alliegences for shadowclan agian. Emberstarfireclan



The pink of the ears is down below the ears. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 08:46, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Sorted  Sandy Talk! 09:15, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Oh, wow, I just called Marshkit Marskit. xD He'd be like a little reddish kit with antennae sticking out in place of his ears... (apologies, I just had to point that out.) Image, again looks great Sandy. --Bramble My Realm 22:29, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Hmm, tough crowd. I was hoping for at least one comment on that. :) Anyways, comments before aproval? --Bramble My Realm 18:16, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

lol Bramble :p  Sandy Talk! 12:21, 29 June 2009 (UTC)


I just see that the markings stand out a lot. (lol Bramble, Marskit-a red tomkit with green antennae sticking out where his ears should be, and speaks in a computerized-sounding mew) --Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 16:58, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

I know they are Mal... they weren't originally but I was advised to make them darker; this is the least amount I could make them darker by. What do others think? Lighter again or leave them?  Sandy Talk! 17:00, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Well, I think their color is fine, maybe blur them just a tad so they don't stand out so much? (lol, thanks for responding to the joke. "I-AM-MARSKIT-TAKE-ME-TO-YOUR-LEADER". Wow, it's a wonder I ever got nominated for leadership... I act like a 9 yr old xD) --Bramble My Realm 23:28, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Sandy Talk! 08:32, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

I think so. They certainly stand out less. Repeating 24 hrs. --Bramble My Realm 16:20, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments; approved. --Bramble My Realm 17:27, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Smallkit - Approved

[[File:Smallkit3.png]]

Here he is, just as I promised. Comments, critism? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 22:56, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Can you make his black patches lighter? It's hard to see the lineart against them. I like their position a lot, though. --Bramble My Realm 23:11, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Better? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 23:41, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, it's better. He's very cute. I don't see anything else. --Bramble My Realm 00:21, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 18:16, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

The patch on our right looks sortof unnatural. Fix that and it would look great.Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 20:28, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Changed it. Anything else? Is it better? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:12, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hrs. He looks great, Dawn. --Bramble My Realm 16:23, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments;approved. --Bramble My Realm 17:28, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Thornclaw - Approved

Thornclaw.warrior

Well, his brother was being done so I thought it was about time he had an image too. Constructments?  Sandy Talk! 20:24, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripe on the hind foot closest to us is... a blob. -User:SparrowWing

I know this isn't mine, but I looked on his hind foot and I don't know what you're talking about, Sparrow. I think he looks perfect, personally. could you explain some more? --Bramble My Realm 18:16, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

Now it looks fine. :-) I was on my other computer and it looked like a big blurry mess. Sorry, it looks great. -User:SparrowWing

No problem Sparrow :)  Sandy Talk! 12:17, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

I feel like being extremely picky, so maybe make his ear pink a tad darker? It blends into the pelt at the moment. But I had to look hard to pick that up. :) --Bramble My Realm 23:24, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

lol Better?  Sandy Talk! 08:28, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Yep. No one else seems to have a problem, so comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 15:51, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Bramble My Realm 17:29, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Mistyfoot - Approved

[[File:Mistyfoot2.png]] Mistyfoot of Riverclan. Awesome cat. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 00:00, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

As the same with Redtail, Mistyfoot is a deputy.--Yai-Girl 15:49, 28 June 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl


Mistyfoot was once a warrior, and if this gets approved, I'd be glad to do her deputy pixel since those have been approved if anyone else hasn't reserved it. On the pixel, the color should be a bit more like Bluestar's, and the color has a purple tinge to it. --Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 15:55, 28 June 2009 (UTC)


Changed the pelt colour, added highlights because it looked flat without them. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 07:24, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

She looks just as I pictured Mistyfoot to look. Very very pretty. Her pelt even looks misty. --Bramble My Realm 23:23, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 16:21, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Bramble My Realm 17:30, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Queen Blanks - Approved

ShortHairQueen2LongHairQueen2

I have to thank Minnowclaw for bringing this up. These blanks here are not mine, I claim absolutely no ownership; they belong to Melonlemon. She left, and these were declined. But many people liked them, and there were only a few minor things even wrong with them. On her page, User:Melonlemon, it says we may edit/use her images, and that she's leaving. These are very good, and it would be a waste if we just threw them away. Now, I have done the tweakings that needed to be done; Darkhallows: got rid of that flip on the longhair's tail; Goldencloud: unenclosed the toes on the paws; and Dawnfeather: shrunk the ears. Whew, okay, is there anything else that needs to be done? Will make changes later, I have to go do my dad's FD present. --Bramble My Realm 23:01, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

I never edited this. I think you're confusing me with someone else. :) Goldencloud 23:21, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Oh no Goldie. :) I meant the comment you put in it's section. Look at Declined Art 6, under the queen blanks section, and you'll see that you made a comment on it. --Bramble My Realm 23:40, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Here, is this better: I fixed the ears, as Dawnfeather said they were too big, I got rid of a flip on the longhair tail, as Darkhallows said it looked unnatural, and I got rid of the enclosed toes on the paw, as Goldencloud said they looked odd. --Bramble My Realm 23:45, 21 June 2009 (UTC)


The hind legs, the top curve on it should curve outward, not inward. --Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 00:20, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Done. --Bramble My Realm 00:26, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I get what you're saying now. I wondered what happened to these queen blanks, I had remembered that they were really good. I'm glad you're re-posting them, Bramble! --Goldencloud 00:56, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Also, th lines need to be thicker, and there are little lines infront of the ears... -- Minnowberry   Dawnfeather's Den  08:18, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Thickened the outside lineart, does it look better? --Bramble My Realm 15:35, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

[[File:Silverstream2.png]]

Here's an example of what they would look like used. (I did this before I thickened the lineart and didn't feel like making changes.) --Bramble My Realm 15:38, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Meh, I couldn't sleep for the guilt, so I changed it. --Bramble My Realm 16:30, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I think these look amazing! And I love the one you colored! Once these are approved, you should actually post her as a queen. If you don't, I'll steal it and do it myself! :P Just kidding I wouldn't do that. Or would I? --Goldencloud 17:53, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Lol Goldie. I actually didn't think she was that good. It's Silverstream, btw, in case that was hard to guess. :) --Bramble My Realm 17:57, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

These look great, oh how I missed this blanks, but do you see the little lines near her right (our left) ear? It looks very sketchy like stinking out against the image. You should erase them. It looks like its the leftovers from when you shrunk the ears. Just fix this and I believe their perfect. Amazing job Bramble!-- ♪Shimmer 01:28, 23 June 2009 (UTC)


It's like there is 'inside' line art and 'outside' line art. As soon as the line art stops being on the very outside, it gets a pixel or two thiner.-- Minnowberry   Dawnfeather's Den  09:03, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

I thickened all lineart, except for facial area and and some small ones, and erased those little lines by the ear, thanks for pointing that out, Shim. What else? --Bramble My Realm 12:22, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

The changes didn't upload, so I did it again. --Bramble My Realm 23:12, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

They look good. - Dawnfeather talk! 06:10, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I can't see any problems now.  Sandy Talk! 10:58, 24 June 2009 (UTC)


No one seems to have a problem. Comments before approval in 24 hours?-- Darkhallows  Lair 07:20, 25 June 2009 (UTC)


Change the file format to .gif, because some computers can't handle lowercase pngs, bu they can handle uppercas PNGs. That's why the kit blanks show up black, even in photoshop, and so do the elder, med cats, and these. I know, I copied them into Photoshop, and they were black. --Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 01:42, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Is PNG format okay? (caps)  Sandy Talk! 16:16, 26 June 2009 (UTC)


I think it is, but the transparent backgrounds are what'sg them black for me, even in photshop... --Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 16:18, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

We could make the backgrounds white and then when people do their images they could turn it transparent themselves so that it doesn't go black...  Sandy Talk! 16:26, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

That should work fine cause just about everyone has learned how to make them transparent. If they can't figure it out someone could help them or do it for them later once its been approved.-- ♪Shimmer 20:24, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

I've reuploaded them with white backgrounds, and if people don't know how to do transparency we'll do it for them. I'm doing it with the .png format, though, if that's alright. Darkhallows already said this, I'm just repeating: comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 04:27, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

I seriously think that they need transparent backgrounds. All of the others have them! For some reason I can't make transparent backgrounds on any program but photoshop, which i am not allowed to get. I only know this becasue they have it at school. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 04:57, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

Not all of the others have it already Dawn. The warriors don't - I know that for a fact because I have to remember every time. (you can do transparent background on pixlr)  Sandy Talk! 09:25, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The whiskers seem awfully crooked. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 18:19, 27 June 2009 (UTC)


The muzzle seems slightly twisted. (About Silverstream, her markings should be darker) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 23:35, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

I will fix the whiskers and the muzzle, and work ion Silverstream when she's up, but what do you want o do about the background.?I'm alright with it either way, because we can change it to transparent when it's approved. --Bramble My Realm 18:16, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

I tried to fix the whiskers, but I have absolutely no idea how to fix the muzzle. Dawnfeather, maybe you could edit their muzzles so they look better? I only make them worse. --Bramble My Realm 01:40, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Like you, I dn't see how can be done, but it just looks that way to me. It doesn't matter. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 07:12, 29 June 2009 (UTC)


Important:The blanks do not need be transparent. Then, peple can't color in their cats, and even in photoshop, thhey still show up black for me. So, no transparent background. It's notlike the blanks will be used in an article. Someone can get it transparent once it's colored as a cat, say Ferncloud. --Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 15:42, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Mal, we can do that. After tampering a bit, I came up with a muzzle i think looks better. It consisted of moving the eye over a pixel and moving the muzzzle with it. Changed it on hte blanks and on Silverstream. Is there anything else? --Bramble My Realm 16:52, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

None that I see.--Yai-Girl 03:46, 30 June 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Repeating 24 hours before approval: these have been sat here for long enough - I can't see anything wrong.  Sandy Talk! 19:23, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

If it's okay, I'm going to add these to the main page now. The 24 hours are done. --Bramble My Realm 18:21, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Runningwind - Approved

[[file:Runingwind.png]] I'm not sure about the stripes, I am so sick of doing the other ones though... -- Darkhallows  Lair 09:18, 18 June 2009 (UTC)


I don't know about the stripes either. I think that the idea could work though. Try and use this effect to do cats that have marbled tabby markings. It could work. Fiddle around a bit more. Maybe make them curved and wavy randomly, so with and some without forks. Could work... -- Dawnfeather  09:49, 18 June 2009 (UTC)


Triangle tabby shouldn't be accepted like this. Use your regular tabby markings, DH. Plus, If you want color info, Runningwind is a brown tabby, look in Rising Storm when he dies. --
[[File:Cinderpelt (medicine cat).PNG|40px]] Mallinois Talk Page
12:50, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

I love these kind of markings, personally. Real cats have the markings, I think, from some cat pics I've looked through. Anyway, maybe darken him because he looks more golden than brown.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 17:42, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

He definitely needs to be more brown and less yellow in my opinion. Also, there is a dark stripe down his back not disimilar to Greystripe's...I don't remember him having this  Sandy Talk! 18:08, 18 June 2009 (UTC)


Actually, the smooth y's are the most accurate, like the one's on Leafpool. --Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 22:32, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
Depends on the cat, actually. Does he look better now?-- Darkhallows  Lair 07:47, 19 June 2009 (UTC)


I reckon he could be a bit browner. I i like the stripes. :D -- Dawnfeather  08:41, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

He's supposed to be light brown. I don't wanna make him too dark...-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:51, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

I like the colour better now but the ear pink needs a bit more blending. Also, the markings on the top of his head look a little strange...  Sandy Talk! 09:27, 19 June 2009 (UTC)


Alright, I changed it.-- Darkhallows  Lair 20:18, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Extend the ear pink a little bit.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 21:16, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Alright, done.-- Darkhallows  Lair 07:02, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Could you add some tabby marks coming out from his chest? That part of his body looks bare. Also add some more around the facial area. --Bramble My Realm 23:30, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

I don;t think they look right, but I tried.-- Darkhallows  Lair 06:56, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Extend the stripe at the top of his foreleg coming from his chest so it reached further towards his back and move the eye marking away from the eye a little.  Sandy Talk! 21:45, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Done.-- Darkhallows  Lair 04:19, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 15:25, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

None; approved  Sandy Talk! 13:54, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

Whitewing - Approved

Whitewing.warrior

Next on my list lol. My first white cat actually I think... Constuctments please!  Sandy Talk! 12:28, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

The shading is rather thick, blend it some more. The ear pink also looks too circlish and too far away from inside the ear. Make it a tad more triangular and inside the ear. She looks beautiful otherwise. --Bramble My Realm 17:43, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

She's way better than the one I did in the beginning. Sandwich989

Better? (and thanks Sandwich)  Sandy Talk! 08:27, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Yeah lots better.Sandwich989 18:10, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

She looks good to me. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:14, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

None; approved  Sandy Talk! 13:59, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

Ashpaw- Approved

[[File:Ashpaw.png]] Well, it's my first Charart; I hope it turned out okay. Constructive criticism would be well-appreciated. =) Caroline Stimpson 15:14, 29 June 2009 (UTC)


Make the shading a little more visble. Otherwise, great job! --Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 15:45, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Agreed with Mallinois. Also, blur your specks some more and add some specks on the tail. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 19:11, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

The changes haven't been showing up for me yet, but I blurred the specks, and added some on the tail. The shading didn't come out very well, though. Any helpful suggestions as to what I can do to improve it (the shading)? Caroline Stimpson 21:46, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

You need to add more of it and make it darker. Then blend it into the pelt for a natural colour transition.  Sandy Talk! 07:58, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay; reuploaded him. Oh, and thank you, Sandy! Is he still in need of darker shading? Caroline Stimpson 18:43, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

I like him, he's cute. Back when he was nice... Anyways, I think the forelegs need some shading, and also add a few tinier flecks along with the big ones, to just add some more. --Bramble My Realm 21:12, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Bramble! Is this better? Caroline Stimpson 20:43, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Yes, he looks awesome! I wonder what he'd do if I tried to cuddle him and call him Ashiepaw.. meh. lol, comments before approval? Great job, Caroline. --Bramble My Realm 20:50, 2 July 2009 (UTC)


None. Ashiepaw is approved! --Mal Sorrel-Wolf 12:24, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

Mistyfoot - Approved

[[File:MistyfootDeputy.png]] Mistyfoot as the deputy. I used the same colour and shading that I did with her warrior. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 22:25, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with it. It looks as good as her warrior version. --Bramble My Realm 02:21, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

She's gorgeous Dawn :) Really beautiful  Sandy Talk! 18:24, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 19:19, 2 July 2009 (UTC)


None, Mistyfoot is approved. --Mal Sorrel-Wolf 15:27, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

Willowclaw - Approved

Willowclaw.warrior

Well I hope this can be as good as my Loudbelly. Any improvemental comments?Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 05:56, 25 June 2009 (UTC)


The shadin at the back of the neck needs to go all the way up to the ear. It is currently stopping just short. (Improvemental, nice. I like coming up with words.) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 11:46, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

The head needs shading, put some front leg shading, and maybe blend it some more because it looks a bit lumpy.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 15:27, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Ok here is the new one. If you notice you can see that I tried to do the whole shading on the thigh thing but i don't know if it turned out that well.Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 20:45, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

I really like this. My only complaint is that whole ear colour thing again... -- Dawnfeather  talk! 03:13, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

I still think more shading is needed...  Sandy Talk! 15:11, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

I agree, I can barely tell that there's shading. GB57 15:55, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

I tried to do everything you guys told me. But I don't think I like this version of my shading.Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 00:46, 28 June 2009 (UTC)


I do. The only thing that I can see that it needs now is a bit of shading on the tail. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 03:53, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

And a bit on the head. Also, that ear pink again...  Sandy Talk! 12:31, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

Ok did what you all said. But I don't get what you mean with the ear pink. Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 19:19, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

It's really bright and it needs blending.  Sandy Talk! 12:19, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Changed the ear.Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 20:07, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

The pink needs to be slightly bigger and fill the whole ear, and it needs to be blurred some more. --Bramble My Realm 16:10, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Fixed ear pink. Sandwich989 14:59, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Good job, she's great. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 19:24, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Omg again!(cause i read thistlekit before this one) :D. Sandwich989 20:09, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Bramble My Realm 21:07, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

Thistlekit- Approved

[[File:Thistlekit9.png]]

My first kit! What do you guys think?Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 19:58, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Blend the spots a bit more, and the background is colored...? (Oops, forgot to sign)--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 22:03, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Anywho, add a spot on the chest and one on the head.Minnowclaw 21:47, 26 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

The backgrounds colored? On mine its white. But anyway just add some spots and fix the background(?) and it would be good?Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 22:35, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Also thoroughly blur his shading and add some more on his front paws and the tail. Blend the ears some more as well. --Bramble My Realm 22:54, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Heres my new one. Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 23:09, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

The shading is still very sharp. Blur it a lot more. You can almost never blur too much (unless it appears melty). --Bramble My Realm 23:16, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Much better, but I second what Bramble said, you need to blend the patches more.Minnowclaw 23:47, 26 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I'll make the background transparent if you don't know how. GB57 15:48, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

that would be much appreciated GB. Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 18:37, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

Ok here's the new one. I think the shading does look melty though...Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 00:59, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

I like it this way. Everything's very soft and natural looking. Except that patch on his left (our right) side is now grayish. Put it back to more orangish, and I think he'd be good. --Bramble My Realm 18:16, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

Added orangish coloring. Does the color ginger look like the orangish color?Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 19:23, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

I really like this but the patch on the head needs blending a little more to make it less of a sharp line between the colours (the other patches are fine) :)  Sandy Talk! 12:18, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Well, GB said he would, but he hasn't been on for awhile, so I made the image transparent for you. If you're using pixlr there is a guide on how to do this on our talk page (Thanks Sandy!) Mosswisker&Stealthfire 19:37, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Lessened the sharpness on the head ginger patch. Thanks M&S for making the image transparent. OH and M&S I'm using GIMP :) Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 19:59, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Sorry, I can't help you on GIMP. Oh, and the image became un-transparent again somehow, so I fixed it again. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 18:22, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Anything else?Sandwich989 17:56, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

I can't spot anything. He looks great. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 19:30, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Omg! :D. Sandwich989 20:06, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Bramble My Realm 21:08, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

Brightheart (queen)-Approved

[[File:Brightheart.queen.PNG]] I wanted to do one of my favorites, but since she has a beutiful warrior pixel I did a queen pixel. I hope I did okay on the face. --Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 20:01, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - *glomps* I love it! The only thing I can suggest is to add another ginger patch on her chest. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 20:32, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Lovely, Mal. I think the shading on the white parts needs a little more blurring, cause it looks a little smudgy, and what Mosswhisker said. Other than that I think she's great. --Bramble My Realm 20:45, 1 July 2009 (UTC)


Blurred shading and added another ginger patch on the cholder/neck area. --Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 21:06, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

wow. this is amazing Mal. Probably your best so far and probably better than the warrior version (no offense to whoever made it). I really can't see anything wrong right now.  Sandy Talk! 20:11, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Lol, I made the warrior version, but I'll agree this is better. Great job Mal. --Bramble My Realm 20:40, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Lol, sorry Bramble =P Comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 07:44, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

Accepted, nice image Mal.-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:35, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

Willowpelt - Approved

[[File:Willowpelt.warrior.png]] [[File:Willowpelt.queen.png]]

Willowpelt. My very first image. :) I also redid my first one, because I wasn't happy with some aspects of it. The warrior version's up just to show you, comment on the queen version. --Bramble My Realm 21:33, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I see nothing wrong. Great job Bramble! Mosswisker&Stealthfire 18:53, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 07:43, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

Approved.-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:42, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

Goldenflower (queen) - Approved

[[File:Goldenflower3.png]]

My first try at the new blanks (which I think work really well). What you guys think. Sandwich989 19:27, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

I'm glad people like the queen blanks. :) She's beautiful, and the only thing I can spot at the mo is to add some shading on her forelegs and chest area and also make the ear pink a little brighter and more triangular. --Bramble My Realm 20:43, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Added needed shading to needed places. Sandwich989 03:49, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

She's beautiful! Perfect shading and perfect color. Nicely done Sandwich! :) HawkfireMy Den 15:02, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Extend the shading on her foreleg up all the way; you stopped at the angle of her foreleg. Also shade the chest area right between her forelegs. Make the ear pink more like a hot pink color, but not too dark. After you do that, she should be ready. You've done a beautiful job. --Bramble My Realm 19:22, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Added shading to needed areas. Sandwich989 19:58, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Nice work. Comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 07:45, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Bramble My Realm 17:25, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

Mintfur - Approved

[[File:Mintfur2.png]] I just used my Jayfeather... What do you think of him? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 22:24, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

I think you may have to do him as another cat. We don't know Splashheart's description, and likely never will. Maybe you could do Mintfur, if you make him a touch lighter. --Bramble My Realm 02:19, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

I made him lighter and re-named the file. Do you like him? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 09:14, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Yep, he looks great. --Bramble My Realm 19:20, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 17:20, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Bramble My Realm 17:41, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

Ferncloud(Q) - Approved

[[File:Ferncloud1.png]] What do you think? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 04:12, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

She's beautiful.--Yai-Girl 14:50, 6 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

She really is Dawn. I love the way you used the burn tool for her spots rather than painting them on :)  Sandy Talk! 15:33, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

Should we approve?--Yai-Girl 18:02, 6 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Hmmm, we might need to redo Fern's warrior pixel to match this. :) Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 18:03, 6 July 2009 (UTC)


Ooh ooh! Can i do her, can i? Sandy 0 How did you know? =D -- Dawnfeather  talk! 00:04, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

I see no reason why not. :) I'm sure Gorse won't mind, if she ever comes back here. --Bramble My Realm 00:19, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

Speaking of the Ferncloud pic: Does anyone know why it was accepted? It clearly has no shading on it. Anyway this is really good :) Sandwich989 02:30, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

hmm... I actually don't know Dawn... I guess it just looked like you did lol. Sandwich: the Ferncloud pic was one of the first to ever be done and the project wasn't quite so fussy about shading then.  Sandy Talk! 09:43, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

Approved  Sandy Talk! 16:42, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

Ashfoot (warrior) - Approved

[[File:Ashfoot.png]] <33, gotta love Ashfoot. -- Darkhallows  Lair 09:00, 4 July 2009 (UTC)


I luf her!!! --MUMBLE785 17:00, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

She looks great, but does her nose have to be pink? :) It makes her look sweet and cuddly. --Bramble My Realm 18:25, 4 July 2009 (UTC)


The queen version's is... so I thought I'd keep it the same way. It is changeable, though.-- Darkhallows  Lair 19:06, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

Could you change it back? I think it would look better without a pink nose. The queens are just like that cause we didn't color the nose in. --Bramble My Realm 20:49, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

Oh, and could you aslo make her slightly darker? This looks like light gray, and not just gray. --Bramble My Realm 20:50, 4 July 2009 (UTC)


Done.-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:07, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

Absolutely beautiful. 24 hours starting now. GB57 16:24, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

Approved  Sandy Talk! 16:37, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

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