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Bouncefire (A) - ApprovedEdit

Bouncefire.apprenticeWell, I tried... Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 15:31, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste near his chin/chest and his hind leg closest to us. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:18, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ScarletwindLisanna 20:08, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the whole image a tad brighter? Other than that, I can't find anything wrong with this.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:41, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading? It just does not seem right, but I have bad eyes so it may just be me. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:53, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think the haunch highlight/light part needs to be a tiny bit lighter. Sky-Jedi You will talk to me. 07:00, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the "highlights" bigger. I don't think the shading needs to be darkened at all. llwildheartl09:57 Wed Dec 21

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 17:29, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste on the back, near the tail. :3 Ivyheart =P 21:24, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:11, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reverse the depth on the eyes. Isn't that what it's called? Purplemoon Four candles 4 days!! 15:04, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

I have always used the same method of depth in the eyes of the apprentice chararts up til' now. I'm not changing it. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 15:44 Thu Dec 22 15:44, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and darken it. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:53, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:07 Fri Dec 23 01:07, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

There's a litttllleee tiiiiny bit of waste above his shoulder :3 oblivionAudience? 03:03, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:29 Fri Dec 23 03:29, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate him a little, he looks too grey. oblivionAudience? 12:05, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 15:10 Fri Dec 23 15:10, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

The color seems a bit off. Too bright I believe. Shelly For a limited time only 19:22, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Took all the colors directly from his warrior charart. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:21 Fri Dec 23 22:21, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten/make the highlights bigger. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:22, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Day without comment. CBA? ScarletwindLisanna 02:21, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:22, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Graypool.apprentice Here she is, comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 23:34, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 23:36, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:48, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 23:55, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Smudge the pelt into the earpink.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:13, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 00:24, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge it a bit more. Sweetflower00:38 Sun Dec 18

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 00:53, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Now blur it a little bit? And maybe lighten the shoulder and thigh. Breezewhisker 02:00, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 15:43, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Please smudge both sides of the earpink into the ear Iveh Yo! 01:55, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on th eback leg closest to us. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 23:49, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad on the farthest back leg from us. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 01:49, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 18:23, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's still a lighter part on the hind leg closest to us. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 22:39, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Scratch that, it's for the light source. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 22:45, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 21:02, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 21:16, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

The base pelt color need to be lightened to match her elder. Once you've done that I'll CBA this Iveh Yo! 22:33, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 22:43, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 22:45, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:28, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Harespring (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Harespring.apprenticeOkay, I copied his warrior image best I can.. I only blurred the patches a bit so it would really match the other images. Mistypebble 13:55, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. SplookMavinotp♥ 21:46, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink so its not so purplish. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:27, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 00:35, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

It may just be me, but can you darken and/or define the shading esp. on the tummy. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:48, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤15:30 PM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Reuploaded Did all of the above. (too lazy to list them all) ;P Except for Misty's.. I took the earpink off of the warrior image. Mistypebble 21:32, December 21, 2011 (UTC) Smudge the patches more and blur and darken the shading a bit. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:54, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened the shading, and I only blurred the patches a bit since I want it to match the warrior image. Mistypebble 16:54, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the brown patches exept for the one on the tail. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D23:56, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Reuploaded Blurred them just a tad. Mistypebble 03:21, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Over 12 hours, this looks wonderful ^^ CBA? SplookMavinotp♥ 19:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt but I can barely see the shading Iveh Yo! 19:48, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded So close... >.< Darkened the shading. Mistypebble 00:34, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry D: I'm gonna restart the CBA for you Iveh Yo! 02:18, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:31, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Pinenose (A) - Approved Edit

Pinenose.apprentice Eh... well comments? Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 15:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Pinenose is a girl...and shorthaired. o3o Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 15:34, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. *headdesk* Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 15:53, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Her ear farest from us, is pale gray, almost dark gray, make it black. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it was....forget that. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:09, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the belly shading, since the paws have dark shading, and the shading would make more sense if you did darken it. --Leafstrike-- 18:31, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Green eyes, Atelda o3o oblivionAudience? 22:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Woops. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 22:13, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. Ot'z all around the image. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 23:01, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 21:47, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think this looks great, CBA? Iveh Yo! 19:00, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:33, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Furzepelt (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Furzepelt.apprentice I feel I need to do more WindClan cats. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 16:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white patches.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    20:08, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The white points on her white patch look a little too pointy. Maybe blur them a lot? FerretclawLover 20:18, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Um...I think some of the white is smudged in the wrong direction. Smudge the white above her haunch more up and down her back (aka smudge it left to right in our perspective) This is adorable though =3 Dazzy 23:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Guys, Stone said that above. You don't need to repeat the same critiques. Darken the shading a tad, Shelly. She's pretty. ^^ Breezewhisker 00:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the bit of white on the belly. FerretclawLover 18:00, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Actually guys, I'm withdrawing this to pursue another charart. Someone else take over. Shelly For a limited time only 20:21, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, nevermind. I'll keep her. Shelly For a limited time only 20:44, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. She's about as spiky looking as her warrior image, I think. :\ Shelly For a limited time only 02:54, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste by the underside of the tail and brighten the ear-pink a tad. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:57 Fri Dec 23 03:57, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 20:50, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the smudges a teensy bit more to match her warrior and I'll CBA it Iveh Yo! 19:43, December 26, 2011 (UTC)


Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 23:13, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 00:59, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Excellent, Shelly ^^ oblivionAudience? 18:19, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thistlepaw (P3) (A) - ApprovedEdit

Thistlepaw (P3).apprentice Not sure uploading this will work. If it doesn't, let me try again. Anyway, that was quick. Comments? Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 19:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay it worked. :3 Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 20:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 20:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 20:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, so sorry Cloudskye! I tried to edit, it restored changes and I clicked publish before I reallized it deleted your edit. Well, I changed the name, anyway. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 20:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

It happens. I changed the file name at the top of the page for you. Now, darken the shading just a tad. Vakarian  20:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Re-uploaded. Fixed shading. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 20:24, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

In the fold in his neck, there appears to be some lighter pixils than the surrounding pelt. Make sure they match ^^ Iveh Yo! 22:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 00:14, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. Sweetflower01:28 Sat Dec 17

In what way...? Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 03:36, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

She fixed the heading for you. The link probably wasn't correct or something. Enlarge the "highlight" on the face and blur all the shading. llwildheartl21:05 Sat Dec 17

No, it didn't say: (A). There's gray lineart on both of the ears. Sweetflower00:35 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 01:50, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

There's still smudged lineart. ;) Sweetflower15:25 Sun Dec 18

If you need help, I could get it. Sweetflower18:06 Sun Dec 18

No that's fine, I just din't have wifi for a little while. Um... I'll try again. Wait...how should I fix it? Where exactly? I'm a little confused how to fix it, I'm sorry. :( Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:30, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay reuploaded, did my best, did I fix it? *is hopeful* :3 Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:38, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

This ---> ear. If you can't get it I will. Sweetflower22:34 Mon Dec 19

I'm so sorry, I don't know how to fix it. Could you? If you help, will this not count in the future as one of the three chararts that I did myself approved to become a warrior? Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 00:37, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay so I looked at the Reservation chart to get Shadepelt, and it said that I still had Hollyleaf apprentice (It's been approved) and that Thistlepaw was a tweak. Um, I'm just going to change that, unless people say otherwise. If not, it was a mistake. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 00:42, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think it wouldn't count to becoming a warrior. But I'll fix it. Sweetflower18:54 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded Sweetflower19:49 Tue Dec 20

I can not help but notice that the whole tail is shaded (it appears) so can you lighten that please? And if you did not shade it, can you lighten that part of the tail? a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:44, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

It did, but I defined it. Re-uploaded. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤15:58 PM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Fix the blurred lineart in the ear and smudge the pelt into the earpink more, and then I'll CBA this pretty image :3 llwildheartl21:54 Wed Dec 21

Feather...has been blocked. :( Just saying that someone will need to take over this image, 'cause Featherwillow isn't here anymore...  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:57, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I will. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 00:58, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I will if that's okay, now Tigerheart is approved. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:24, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

You don't need to ask, just take it Iveh Yo! 04:02, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Hope I fixed it. If this does get CBA'd like Wildheart said she would, I take the credit to Featherwillow for this lovely image. Also am I supposed to change the heading this time, since I've taken over? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D09:25, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

Yes you are. I did that for you :) Blur the shading on the belly more. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 18:37, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

The shadings fine. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 20:59, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewing (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Whitewing.apprenticeHere she is, my first charart as a warrior, hope you like her. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 13:50, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Sweetflower15:32 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:48, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken it more. oblivionAudience? 23:42, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:02, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

This probably sounds contradicting, but lighten the base fur colour if you can. She looks grey right now. oblivionAudience? 00:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up her rump a bit. Breezewhisker 00:31, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:44, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eyes and enlarge the "highlights" on her haunch and shoulder. llwildheartl02:53 Tue Dec 20

Okay I will finish this but I can't for the next few days, I don't want to take up space so can I withdraw this and put it up again later? --WildfireMistystar's Omen! 17:36, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead. Keep in mind that everybody will most likely be busy because of the holidays. If you want, just go sign up on the vacation list. But for now, I'll mark this as Withdrawn. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:53, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

No, Sandstorm. They haven't withdrawn yet, so it's wrong to mark it as such. Shelly For a limited time only 21:14, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

No its fine I'm just asking if it is okay for me to withdraw this and put it up for approval later, I've already signed the vacation list but I'll try to work on this if you want. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's fine to keep it up unless you're planning to be gone more than 7 days. I see no problem with hit. And Sandstorm, if the user who's doing the charart doesn't mark it as Withdrawn, it's the leads' job. You shouldn't change it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:34, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, the image looks fine to me. CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 21:01, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Cherrytail (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Cherrytail.apprenticeI just realized I made her long haired.. Idiot me. I will fix that this second. xD Mistypebble 15:43, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nicely done! Define the shading. Ivyheart =P 21:54, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The ginger looks kinda...green. Colo pick off her warrior. Her warrior also looks like it has a texture. Iveh Yo! 01:54, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, I had to re do it, and I tried to copy the image best I could.. How does this look? Mistypebble 03:40, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

smudge the patches more to make it look furry like the warrior image -Bloo!yo 21:04, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, hows this? I only did it to a few patches, or else some would look to faded and weird.. Mistypebble 22:32, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the patches more, and define the shading. Also smudge where the black goes into the white parts. And...smudge the pelt into the earpink more. :) Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:38, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading in general. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:26, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is the nose colored in? :3 Ivyheart =P 18:30, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Long list there, Feather. ;) And don't repeat what has already been said, Cheshire ^-^ (just a future reference). And yes, the nose is colored in, I took the same color that I have for the earpink, but I could lighten it if you want, Ivy. Mistypebble 21:44, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches more so they look more like the warrior image. llwildheartl22:05 Wed Dec 21

Reuploaded So sorry for the wait! It was such a busy week.. Here she is! :) Mistypebble 16:47, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I love this image, it's beautiful.I'm also kinda new so I'm not used to these chararts yet, but I really see nothing wrong with it.--When darkness turns to light... I come a callin' 16:58, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Don't comment just to compliment the images Itendstonight (what can we call you). Could you darken/define the shading Misty? This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Paleclaw. :3 Defined the shading. Mistypebble 14:39, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and add some depth to the eyes and I'll CBA. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:45, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink and added depth to the eye. Thank you! ^-^ Mistypebble 00:21, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The ginger still doesn't look like it matches the color of the warrior. Iveh Yo! 02:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I took the colors right off the warrior image... :/ Mistypebble 03:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It had some evil waste, so I killed it. :P Mistypebble 20:30, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

As promised, CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:26, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Graystripe (A) - ApprovedEdit

Graystripe.apprenticeHere's Graystripe (Graypaw at the time)! I like this. I'm sorry I didn't get around to posting it earlier... Purplemoon Four candles 6 days! 14:38, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and I got the earpink, stripe, eye, and pelt colors from his warrior charart. Purplemoon Four candles 6 days! 16:21, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, fix the nosse. Define the earpink on the ear closest to us. Blur the shading. Bluefeather Jingle all the way! 16:41, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded As I told you before, I got the earpink from Graystripe's warrior charart. I have no idea what happened to the nose. I blurred the shading as much as I could. Purplemoon Four candles 6 days! 17:50, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded' I realized I didn't crop it enough... Purplemoon Four candles 6 days! 17:54, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

The color of his nose needs to be darker than his pelt Iveh Yo! 19:47, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Heh heh, I forgot.. Purplemoon Four candles 6 days! 00:24, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dang I wanted him! Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a little more. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 02:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, Graypaw is uber cute!! <3 blur the shading more, and make the "highlights" bigger. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 02:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think the "highlights" are fine as they are (except the shoulder one, which should be bigger) but the shading does need to be blurred, as well as darkened. llwildheartl03:04 Tue Dec 20

Blur the stripe where it goes across the back a tad it more. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The shading and stripe are blurred as much as I can. Purplemoon Four candles 4 days!! 22:17, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Smudgethe pelt into the earpink a little more. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 23:52, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Purplemoon Four candles 4 days!! 15:13, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 21:34, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Purplemoon Only 3 days 'till Christmas! 21:39, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back leg shading a bit more and ill CBA it. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) Purplemoon Meap! Just 2 days! 19:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay. Let's go CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 19:20, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Spiderleg (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Spiderleg.apprentice Comments? Ivyheart =P 20:36, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up his belly a tad Iveh Yo! 20:38, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely, blur the shading a tad. PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 20:43, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base coat a tad and darken the shading slightly. Nice job! llwildheartl01:15 Tue Dec 20

Reuploaded. This is so ugly. Ivyheart =P 16:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

No critisizing your own work. :D Great work! Just blur the shading more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:25, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. You're right, I guess I'll just say this isn't my best. :3 Ivyheart =P 14:57, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. oblivionAudience? 03:03, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oblivion's right, it looks like he has a dark gray aura...X) Dazzy 13:20, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the brown belly. And Dazzle, no offence but you don't need to share your opinion on the waste. It is waste and Oblivion pointed it out. Unless someon ehas disagree, you don't need to repeat what has already been said. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:35, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 03:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 19:41, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sagefur (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Sagefur.apprentice Okay, lets see, female, long hair, blue eyes, I think I've got it this time xD Yeah, my mentality level has been off lately. Comments? Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 21:53, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

For gray cats, I think you're supposed to make the nose a darker gray. Lovely image! Ivyheart =P 22:03, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. You are. xD Thanks btw. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 22:08, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad and add some shading to the back of the tail and enlarge the "highlight" so it extends all the way along the tail. Pretty :3 llwildheartl22:27 Wed Dec 21

Pretty, except I thought Sagefur is a male...? Dazzy 22:27, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is awesome! It would be even better if this was male and had green eyes like the warrior image. Bluestar11796 22:55, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made him male but he has blue eyes... Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 23:59, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, he never had a confirmed eye color (as far as I know) but the blue looks awesome on him ;3 Dazzy 00:46, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It should still match though. And he does have green eyes; I made his warrior. It's extremely ugly, but it's mine x3 oblivionAudience? 02:41, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. x3 Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 21:41, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 19:25, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ice (Alt Lo) - Approved Edit

Ice.loner.altMmaky, Ice was seen with this pelt type as a loner as well. You guys are probably sick of apprentices already :P Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 04:15, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, thank god you saved what little sainty I have left! Move his collar down a bit, looks like its trying to kill him. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 04:23, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, I can't see it all that much. Oh, I owe you for saving my brain; it was going crazy at the thought of apprentices overrunning the approval page X3 Dazzy 04:38, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the edges of the patches a little more? All of these apprentices are driving me crazy! Purplemoon Only 3 days 'till Christmas! 13:47, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Rainy (I think) also suggested to me to smudge the patches with a slightly larger brush so it'd match Iveh Yo! 17:07, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

There seems to be a ring around the shoulder patch. Maybe blur/smooth it out a bit? :3 SplookMavinotp♥ 18:03, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded A-hah! I figured out why that ring was there. I'm not so disappointed with this anymore <3 Iveh Yo! 18:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty good Ivy. Can you blur the ear-pink just a tad more? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 22:25, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sankyew Iveh Yo! 22:28, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's ok for me to CBA this since it's been over a day without comments Iveh Yo! 19:45, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Whitetail (A) ~ Approved Edit

File:Whitetail.apprentice.png:3 Comments? Silverhmm 21:03, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:07, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Its very faint but you can see it. Silverhmm 21:12, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink redder. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 21:34, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:40, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading in the eyes should be in the top part of the eye, and the tints in the bottom.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:53, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just my computer or does the earpink look super dark? Blur the shading on the tail a bit.When darkness turns to light... I come a callin' 16:49, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Probably your computer. Silverhmm 18:43, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 19:46, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt. A) - ApprovedEdit

Cinderpelt.apprentice.alt It was fun making the leg. Comments? Leggo 🏈 00:52, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ha, it's funny that you're leggy and you made something with an odd leggy :D Anyway blur the ear pink and maybe darken the shading a touch and blur it. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:32, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is fine. Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more too. Very pretty Leggy!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:51, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

But I thought whne she was a warrior apprentice she didn't have the twisted leg yet, because they gave up her training when she got the injury.When darkness turns to light... I come a callin' 16:46, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

It happened when she was an apprentice so she was still technically an apprentice and therefore it warrants an alt. Iveh Yo! 16:56, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 14:51, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

24 hours without comments, CBA? Iveh Yo! 19:47, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Rabbitleap.apprenticeBlah I hate this. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:33, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste by his back lag. Also, lighten the shading and blur the pelt into the ear a bit more (hah! got all the basic stuff people pop out in one comment). Shelly For a limited time only 01:30, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:50, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the top of the rumps shading and the chest. Sweetflower03:28 Sat Dec 24

Blur the transition from the pelt to the earpink. SplookMavinotp♥ 05:19, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Merry Christmas Eve :D RowanOnly One Can Judge... 14:07, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the face is too dark. Your shading layer shouldn't even make contact with the eyes. Iveh Yo! 19:43, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:14, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger, I think you smudged a bit too much. Sweetflower17:04 Sun Dec 25

Re-Uploaded. Comments for Improvement? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 21:08, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MCA) ~ ApprovedEdit

Yellowfang.mcaI know the muzzle isn't the same as the apprentice. I kinda don't want to change it because it's the same as brokenstar. It would look kinda messed up if I tried to change it. Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  18:53, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great. Slightly define the tail and head shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:08, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Re-uploaded Thank you DJ :)  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:22, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the paws on her right. Dazzy 11:23, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  15:35, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

This looks excellent! I see nothing to be improved. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 01:40, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, this is lovely, but the shape of the muzzle needs to match mine more before this gets approved. I know I haven't uploaded mine yet, because I've been really busy, but I haven't had any comments to change the shape of the muzzle, only the lineart within it. llwildheartl05:52 Mon Dec 26

Re-uploaded The layers didn't save when I made this. That's why I couldn't change the muzzle before.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:00, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

REpeating CBA -ſceheartBlah blah 21:10, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (A) - ApprovedEdit

Yellowfang.apprentice I took over for Maplepool: we're doing an art swap 'cause I fell in love with this charart XD I'll archive her previous section for space in a minute. Comments? llwildheartl21:19 Wed Dec 21

I love her face. XD Can you give the neck shading some more depth, because it looks a little flat. Otherwise, amazing~ Ivyheart =P 22:05, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :3 and I know! Her face looks ridiculous. I tried to copy images of Persian cats for the flattened face aspect, but this just looks... hilarious. Which is why I love it XD llwildheartl22:20 Wed Dec 21

Epic face. XD I honestly see nothing wrong with this, but should she have scars? Or do you think she got those as a warrior/MC? (edit conflicts -.-)♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think she got them as a warrior/MC. I'm working on her mca image right now (and hoping feverishly nobody will steal it from me before I can reserve it) and I put scars on that one, though. (I know what you mean. I hate edit conflicts ._.) llwildheartl22:24 Wed Dec 21

Move her nose <-- that way and down a smidge to conform to the angle the head is at. Also change her expression to match the other apprentices if you can. Looks... cool. XD Shelly For a limited time only 00:51, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

I love her face. XD Blur the shading on her back. Breezewhisker 03:27, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

So glad you took over, I'd be laughing so hard, i wouldn't be able to work on this! Define her highlights if you used them. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 04:28, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

You could, for the muzzle, add that crease, ya know? Like a sideways parentheses ). If it looks weird you don't have to upload it. Breezewhisker 17:30, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

You still workin' on this, Wild? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:02, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yup. Sorry, guys. I've been really busy with family stuff. I'll upload it in a day or two. llwildheartl05:53 Mon Dec 26

Reuploaded Thanks for your patience, everybody :3 llwildheartl23:35 Tue Dec 27

Looks good to me. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:31, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. llwildheartl08:02 Thu Dec 29

Ferncloud (A) - ApprovedEdit

Ferncloud.apprenticeWhoo, fourth charart. I had to do both siblings. XD Took all colors from her queen image, but this seems so much darker. Help with that? Breezewhisker 17:53, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

The only reason it seems darker is because the queen image has some bright highlights on it, I think. I don't believe you need to match that perfectly, lighting changes with environment. Shelly For a limited time only 18:29, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm, okay. That makes sense. If anybody thinks I need to edit the hightlights, tell me. Breezewhisker 03:10, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 05:44, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breezewhisker 18:30, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the flecks a tad more and redden the ear-pink a bit more. ScarletwindLisanna 02:25, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink was color-picked from her queen image. Breezewhisker 04:38, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 21:07, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Not quite, I hadn't uploaded the blurred flecks. Sorry for the delay. Breezewhisker 21:42, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I know her queen image has a pink nose, but shouldn't it be grey? It's not like Mistystar. Sky-Jedi You will talk to me. 01:41, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think the pink is grey enough that it's fine. And if I have to match the earpink, I will also the nose. Breezewhisker 03:37, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well the thing is, it should be changed on the queen too. I'll actually go do that now. So it's easier to change it on the apprentice now, rather then having someone change it for you later, after it's approved. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:12, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, make her eyes lighter, since they're supposed to be pale green. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:20, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? Breezewhisker 23:44, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, looks good to me. CBA? :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:22, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. llwildheartl08:06 Thu Dec 29

Birchfall (Alt. A) ~ Approved Edit

Birchfall.apprentice.altFinally. A space. Comments, concerns? SplookMavinotp♥ 20:20, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Theres a patch missing on his toe on the far right leg (our right).  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  20:24, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make his eyes less brown and more yellow. oblivionAudience? 01:08, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear more and reverse the shading in the eyes so the darkest part is at the top. llwildheartl01:18 Tue Dec 20

Reuploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 02:25, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

The white spots don't show up in GIMP.. that's odd. I think the changes are in the file history :P SplookMavinotp♥ 02:26, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. There is definitely a white spot, it's just an ill-filled pixel. Breezewhisker 03:30, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Scratch that, shading looks fine opacity-wise. Sorry. Breezewhisker 03:31, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. oblivionAudience? 03:38, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It may just be me, but smudge the pelt into the earpink a tiny bit more and define the tail shading a little bit too. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:48, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, there's a white pixel on his hind paw on --> It's a little white pixel on the end of the toe, but that's all. X3 Dazzy 14:16, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 23:38, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Over 24 hours, CBA? SplookMavinotp♥ 19:14, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for inturupting CBA, but can you smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more? Sweetflower18:12 Mon Dec 26

I think the smudging's fine on it. However, could you redden and darken the earpink a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:44, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SplookMavinotp♥ 06:04, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Continuing CBA. SplookMavinotp♥ 17:30, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Please change the file name to Birchfall.apprentice.alt.png. Since all you have to do is re-upload under my old file, I won't make you re-do the CBA - it doesn't affect the quality of the image itself, only the file name. Vakarian  03:57, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I've renamed it. Approving. oblivionAudience? 15:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fernpelt (A) - ApprovedEdit

Fernpelt.apprenticeI actually like this one! :) Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 18:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

  • jaw drops* This is amazing! Can you define the light source on the shoulder a bit? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 18:08, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Rainy! :) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 18:12, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the tail stripes a tad? Silverhmm 21:19, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

There looks like there are some black pixels in the left eye. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:38, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 21:59, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

There is some pink pixels near the top of the head from the earpink, can you fix that? Mistypebble 22:51, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Gonna be gone til' the first, so this, and my other chararts won't be worked on til' then. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:13, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Fine by me, because I'm CBAing it. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 02:34, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose a tad, it looks a bit neon. (sorry for breaking CBA ^^;) Elorisa 03:42, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

First of all, change the heading when you interrupt a CBA. Second, the nose is fine. It's the same color as the earpink, which is the the same color as the warrior's. Continuing CBA. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:25, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 15:45, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Hailstar (A) - ApprovedEdit

Hailstar.apprentice

Here he is! What do you think? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:43, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely May-pay. :P If there's depth in the eyes, make it show please. As far as I can tell it's solid. Sweetflower16:59 Sun Dec 25

Reuploaded-Lol, my chat nickname xD Thanks, Sweet. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:05, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome, can you smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink more? Sweetflower17:47 Sun Dec 25

Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur where the pelt smudges into the earpink? Also...the shading looks messy, although that could be because of my lamp. Dazzy 23:36, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Its your lamp, shading's fine, copied the shading placement thingy. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:42, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:19, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's not her lamp, I see it too. It looks like a line of gray, than lighter gray for the rest of the shading, make the shading one colour/shade. And there's blurred ear lineart in the earpink. Fi xit please. Sweetflower02:08 Mon Dec 26

There is also blurred lineart along the tail. Also, change the nose color to gray. Mistypebble 04:59, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a bit, and make the belly completely shaded. There wouldn't be any light going there. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:01, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Pale, i took the clors from his leader image. The colors are fine Maple♥poolMischief brewing 15:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 15:48, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I believe there's some blurred lineart on the front shoulder closest to us. SplookMavinotp♥ 18:15, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I enpected every pixil, there is no blurred lineart? Maybe its a stuck pixil on your computer's screen? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 21:27, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Pfffttt, there was unblurred highlights on his shoulder, and non of you say it? Pffft. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:27, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It seems like there's a white pixel in his ear. Dazzy 23:06, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Which ear? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:09, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Nevemind, I just zoomed on Pixlr, there was none. Dazzy 11:01, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 01:48, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 15:47, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Stormfur (A) - ApprovedEdit

Stormfur.apprenticeComments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 16:13, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the nose just a tad? Also, there is some waste where his spine begins to curve up. Wonderful! Iveh Yo! 16:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 17:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Nuu~ Me wanted him :P Can you lighten him up a tad? This is awesome!  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  18:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Took the base color from his cg. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 19:33, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a lot and blur the shading a bit. Lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:01, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 14:41, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:28, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Excellent ^^ oblivionAudience? 22:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lionblaze (A) - ApprovedEdit

Lionblaze.apprenticeY u no have realistic tabby pattern? XD Comments? Iveh Yo! 01:03, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u take last spot? x3 Lighten the shading a tad. :3 Mistypebble 01:42, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u make so pretty? XD Blur the forehead stripes a little. Ivyheart =P 03:37, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u....... I got nothing. XD Anyways, could you lighten the stripes, lovely Ivy? o3o ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u use chatspeak liek nubs? Thicken the stripes on his tail. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 07:06, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u use chatspeak in first place? XP The shoulder stripes are slightly inaccurate, that...erm, wavy/pointed stripe thing on his chest should sort of rise up onto it, and the one more in the middle...erm, try comparing it to his warrior, I'm having a tough time explaining this...^.^' Dazzy 12:03, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. --Leafstrike-- 17:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Y u not use chatspeak? xD Anyway lighten the haunch and blur the stripes; maybe make them pointer. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 19:45, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded And Dazzlewing, I'm not quite sure what you mean, I curved the shoulder stripes with the body so...^^; And y u guys no stop using my joke!? Iveh Yo! 22:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Y u so epic? CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:22, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Y u no approve sooner? oblivionAudience? 22:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt. Ki) - ApprovedEdit

Mistystar.kit.alt Just as her brother was mentioned as pale grey, she was mentioned as dark. Comments? oblivionAudience? 23:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make her a female. --Leafstrike-- 00:34, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

And darker. And make the nose a little less bright. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:47, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Wow, I fail ._. oblivionAudience? 01:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the nose, it's hot pink right now. xD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:11, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 17:14, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a little bit. Silverhmm 18:43, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 00:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little less purple and I'll CBA. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:22, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. :D oblivionAudience? 03:46, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I THINK it's just the changes not showing, but he's a boy again. If it's not, fix that. But CBA since I'm pretty sure it's just the changes not showing again? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:21, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Indeed, approving. oblivionAudience? 22:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Approved Edit

Mossyfoot.apprenticeSince Fallowpounce left, I decided to do Mossyfoot's apprentice. Comments? Silverhmm 23:40, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Nice job! Grell No question at all! 23:44, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Changes are showing now Silverhmm 23:48, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think there should be more white on the foreleg, and perhaps make the pointy brown bit on the haunch rounder. So much better than mine. ^^ Sky-Jedi You will talk to me. 23:50, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white some more, too. :3 Ivyheart =P 23:55, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 00:04, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the brown meets the white even more and get rid of the point on the brown on the haunch. Also define the shading a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:46, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

May I ask what point of brown you're talking about? Everything else is coming up. Silverhmm 11:06, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 11:21, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white go a bit higher on the forehead and blur the white just a biiiiit more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 11:38, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 11:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:18, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 22:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteclaw (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Whiteclaw.apprenticeManaged to snag other one :P Mistypebble 00:41, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading.. I can barely see it. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:14, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:17, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading and blurred the earpink. Mistypebble 19:56, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me or does he look flattened? Also isn't this the old apprentice blank? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:59, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry....I just realised the changes hadn't shown yet xD. Sorry Misty. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

00:02, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I see nothing wrong. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:17, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 22:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (MCA) - ApprovedEdit

Hollyleaf.mca Rainey never posted, so Scarlet (I think it was scarlet... XD One of the leads) said I could have it. Comments? All colors from her old .xcf file. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:10, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Lighten the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:13, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

If I lighten the shading, she'll look really flat. What if I brighten the highlights? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:43, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, do that. =3 Ivyheart =P 03:31, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:45, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 24 hours, so CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:15, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 22:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (A) - ApprovedEdit

Sedgecreek.apprentice Yay, still space for another one! 8D The colors are off on this for some reason even though I took from the .xcf file. Not sure why, but I'll try tinkering around with it. Any suggestions would be good. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:15, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. oblivionAudience? 03:34, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Also blurred the stripes a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:46, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Again, 24 hours. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:16, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 22:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Dovewing (A) - Approved Edit

Dovewing.apprentice*yawns* Solids are boring. And she'd be better off with rainbow eyes :3 Iveh Yo! 15:56, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

She would! Eh... just blur the shading a bit more. Besides that, I see nothing to improve. Shelly For a limited time only 15:59, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm almost tempted to do it then revert the image back XD Iveh Yo! 16:10, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Kay. Looks good. (yawn, solids) CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 16:16, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

That was fast! Approved Iveh Yo! 15:59, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Whitefang (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Whitefang.apprenticeI like his tail. Comments? Purplemoon Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D 19:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes Iveh Yo! 19:39, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I got his colors from his warrior charart. Purplemoon Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D 19:44, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 19:46, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

And his highlights/lighter parts. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:47, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Purplemoon Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D 19:51, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the eyes, they look too dark to be natural. SplookMavinotp♥ 21:10, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I got the eye color from his warrior charart.... Purplemoon Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D 22:53, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

If you took the eye color from the warrior charart, make sure for future reference that you take it from a neutral part, not the shaded or highlighted pixel. I suggest to go over it with the dodge tool. Tone down the highlights if you use them. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:12, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

There is waste by his tail/hind leg closest to us. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 13:26, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes. oblivionAudience? 14:15, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Merry Christmas! Purplemoon Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D 20:23, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

There is still waste. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:01, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changes not showing... There wasn't any waste on the .xcf version, but there was on the .png... Purplemoon Christmas is Tomorrow!!! :D 17:26, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes are still way too dark to be natural, and the stripes are too light... still. At least make them darker to the point where they're visible. oblivionAudience? 04:07, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ Stay up until Midnight 16:49, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Here Something like this color for the eyes. Remember to add the depth to it too. I suggest making the depth a lighter color. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:22, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ Stay up until Midnight 14:53, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good now. CBA? oblivionAudience? 15:59, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 16:14, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

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