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Tallstar (A) ~ Approved

Tallstar.apprentice

UGH this is such a fail DX Took all colors from his Warrior image, and highlights are coming from the back. *hangs head in shame* Fail fail fail fail fail! I tried to smudge...and got a major fail....Dont look at my shame DX! Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:15, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black into the white a lot and add shading, because I can't see any. Shelly For a limited time only 16:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay. *bags head* I hate this image DX Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:32, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:35, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The black on his head needs to be touching the corner of his eyes like on his leader image. And lengthen the tail. Shelly For a limited time only 18:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

One thing, I can't make his tail longer, for stuff like that, I use Pixirl, and his tail touches the end of the box. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:39, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can do it for you if you email me the file with layers. Neneshell@gmail.com. Shelly For a limited time only 18:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't use files on this one, for fear i'd lose them like i did with Rubblepaw....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

So how are you editing it? If you don't have the file, how can you make changes, besides redoing it each time you exit? oblivionAudience? 19:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, like no, i have the one file that's his image, but i didn't do layers like a layer for his color and earpink and shaidng and stuff, and just did that on the one thing. Like I opened up the blank, and took the black, drew on his patches, filled in the patches, and then darkened the white a bit, added shading and highlights, the blurred everything, and added his eyes color. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 20:18, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

And i did this one on Pixirl....not Gimp, 'cause Gimp is being spazzy for me atm. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 20:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

You have to save the image as an .xcf, I believe - if it's the same on Pixlr - for the layers to save. Doing everything on one layer is not a good idea. For example, what if someone asked you to lighten the patch, which I was going to? You can't just use the dodge tool, or it'd lighten the lineart as well. I can't tell you how to make your chararts, but I can advise you to use layers. oblivionAudience? 22:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, no matter what the tail does need to be lengthened to match his leader blank. Shelly For a limited time only 23:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/add shading. I really can not see it. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawing...for reasons....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 04:00, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over, if thats okay. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:03, Wed, Dec, 21, 2011

Go ahead, DJ. Maple: next time you withdraw an image, remember to change the title. llwildheartl10:01 Wed Dec 21

I did, I put 'withdrawn.' I'm sure i did....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:28, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

She did, DJ changed it I'm assuming. DJ, don't change the heading; only leads should do that. oblivionAudience? 21:23, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D03:17, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

Lighten up the black a bit. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 03:20, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:06, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I redid the whole image, and fixed all of the above. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D23:18, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

Also fail on the tail stretch. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D23:23, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

There's waste around the charart. Silverhmm 00:24, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D03:21, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Extend the image border up so his tail isn't cut off. Shelly For a limited time only 03:36, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but how do I do that? I'm kind of new around GIMP... I tried rotating the image but the lineart just got blurred. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D23:20, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Go to 'Image' then to 'Canvas Size' at the top, then make it taller. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:27, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I did that, the canvas went bigger, but the border stayed where it was. I could just make the tail tip rounder so it looks like it's not cut off from the border. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:46, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Would you like help? If you have an .xcf file then send me that in an email, otherwise I'll just work off the .png to help you out :3 Iveh Yo! 02:15, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I forgot to mention. After you change the canvas size, you have to go to 'Layer' then hit 'Layer to Image Size' or something along those lines. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 11:08, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I tried that too Pale, but unfortunatly, it didn't work. :( Ivy, if you want to fix it, you can. I suggest you work off the png image, since the Gimp one (xcf) is really odd and doesn't look like the image I have here. I also made the tail tip rounder a bit, so Reuploaded I guess. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D09:33, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

Actually, don't worry. I've got it. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D09:39, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

Reuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D09:47, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

It looks like his tail is kinked near the middle, try to smooth it out like the regular chararts. Mistypebble 15:30, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried that "kink" to try to make it look like the normal blanks. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:28, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Smooth out the tail. It's too thin in the middle and too thick at the top. Shelly For a limited time only 00:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white, and make the markings match the leader image more. The white on the forehead should go up higher, the white should cover the whole haunch, there shouldn't be any white on his shoulder, only on his forearm, and the white on his chest should go up quite as high. also redden the earpink a bit and make the eyes more amber than yellow. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:37, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I can help you with the lineart on the tail if you need it. It's really no that hard. Just select part of the tail, move it up higher, and add in the missing lineart in the middle of the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:42, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  :/ I don't quite like the tail. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:52, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Thicken the lineart on the tail and don't make it bulbous on the top Iveh Yo! 01:58, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I could probably do it for you, if you like. I know a perfect way to do it. oblivionAudience? 02:00, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Oblivion. Just do it off the png image though, since the xcf is bad. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:02, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Re-uploaded. There you go :3 oblivionAudience? 00:14, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Oblivion, this looks great. Comments? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:44, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Define the shading and darken it, I can barely see it, and make the white on the face a bit.... cleaner. I don't know how to describe it, it just looks kinda messy right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:19, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yuck! ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:23, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Lighten the black a bit and darken the shading slightly. It's not bad! I like it :3 llwildheartl01:02 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded - I don't think changes are showing. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:18, Sun, Jan, 1, 2012

Add some more shading to the tail and darken the shading on the haunch. Clean up the white a bit more on the face, and make the face "highlight" bigger. llwildheartl01:57 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded - I don't know how good that went, but I want this approved before it gets to number 1. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D04:23, Wed, Jan, 4, 2012

Blur where the white patches meet the black.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:34, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Dull down the ear-pink a bit; it looks too bright ScarletwindLisanna 02:41, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ... ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:57, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

This looks good. CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:43, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:43, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (A) ~ Approved

Thornclaw.apprentice An opening! Did this in like... 10mins. Yes, very sloppy. I know I did say I'd never do a wavy tabby again (is this one?) but, this was the first thing I saw. Tell me if the uploading doesn't work. It comes up with Tallstar Apprentice, for soem reason. I know there is waste. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:55, Wed, Dec, 28, 2011

Very nice! Thin out the stripes on the haunch a tiny bit.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  07:09, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad. This is wonderful! Mistypebble 16:01, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thank you. The lightening of the highlights didn't do much -_- ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:38, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

There's a halo of waste around the image Iveh Yo! 16:14, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, Changes are not showing yet - Dang you waste. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:22, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Maybe it's just me, but it looks like there should be another stripes on the haunch (if you're matching the warrior image) llwildheartl22:49 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded - Yep, you're right. I added them. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:47, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Smudge the earpink a bit into the ear. Lovely job :3 llwildheartl02:18 Tue Jan 3

Lighten the face and chest shading just a tad. Mistypebble 02:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I didn't lighten the shading too much, otherwise it wouldn't match, so I lightened the belly shading too. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D04:04, Wed, Jan, 4, 2012

CBA? llwildheartl03:55 Sat Jan 7

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:43, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Voletooth (A) ~ Approved

Voletooth.apprentice Took the colors from the other images. (I did the elder) Comments? Ivyheart =P 18:30, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. Very pretty! <3 llwildheartl02:37 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded. Thank you. =3 Ivyheart =P 00:24, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? llwildheartl06:42 Fri Jan 6

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:43, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Dawncloud (A) - Approved

Dawncloud.apprentice Bleh. Comments for improvement? llwildheartl05:54 Fri Jan 6

I feel weird CBA'ing this without any comments, but it's been a day since I posted, I'm impatient, and if anything will provoke last-minute comments, CBA'ing this will XD So speak now or forever hold your peace, folks ;) llwildheartl06:00 Sat Jan 7

Sorry for interrupting CBA D: light the face shading to <---- side. Silverhmm 18:07, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, if Wildheart lightens it, I doubt the shading wil match. You forgot to change the heading Silver, so I just changed it. Sweetflower18:42 Sat Jan 7

The shading's just fine. Although there seems to be less stripes on the queen image. Maybe it's just how the lineart is though... jayce Reveℓation   00:53, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

No, it's the same on the queen image. There's just less space on this one :P llwildheartl04:01 Sun Jan 8

Reinstating CBA because of lack of comments llwildheartl01:43 Mon Jan 9

24 hours. llwildheartl02:20 Tue Jan 10

Egg (A) ~ Approved

Egg.apprentice At long last, space! I know it looks weird, but any comments? Dazzy 23:20, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:21, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little less neon. Grell No question at all! 23:47, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There is miscolored lineart on the paws and on his head/whiskers. Mistypebble 01:05, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy 04:17, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

He's way too yellow right now. Make him more cream. oblivionAudience? 04:22, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy 04:59, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

This still looks yellow. Darken the shading after you have fixed the color, although it might just be my bad eyes.. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:12, Wed, Dec, 28, 2011

Reuploaded. Pixlr keeps crashing on me... Dazzy 05:45, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more to blend in more to the higlights/unshaded parts. And add depth to the eyes. Mistypebble 16:08, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the ear pink meets the pelt. It looks to rough. Silverhmm 18:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

That colour hrts my eyes. o.e Can you color pick off his loner image? Sweetflower20:09 Wed Dec 28

Reuploaded. Mistypebble, there already is depth in the eyes, but I defined it just in case. ;3 Dazzy 23:47, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Omigawd, I'm a Derp, forgot to blur the shading. Eh, reuploaded. Dazzy 23:52, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I meant add shading around it to not look flat.. But never mind, it looks fine. Mistypebble 01:25, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Should I reupload it for that? Dazzy 14:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, its fine. ^-^ Mistypebble 06:03, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur near the back leg..it looks blotchy. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

17:21, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy 23:28, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot. llwildheartl22:41 Sun Jan 1

Withdrawing. Sorry, Pixlr spazzes out trying to work with the image. I can't cope with it randomly freezing and such, because then my blurs just don't work. Dazzy 07:19, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. (took out one of my reservations) Mistypebble 17:00, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took all the colors from his loner image.. But something just doesn't look right to me.. >.< Mistypebble 18:53, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah idk looks like it needs to be lightened: both the shading and the pelt colour. llwildheartl02:15 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded There, I think I fixed it. Mistypebble 21:06, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more, make sure the belly is completely shaded, and smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. llwildheartl02:12 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded How does it look? Mistypebble 02:23, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define your light source/darken the shading a bit. ScarletwindLisanna 02:38, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more please. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:13, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Reuploaded I darkened the shading just a tad and smudged the earpink. Mistypebble 22:12, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the ear-pink a tad more, then I'll CBA this. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:51, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smudged the earpink. Mistypebble 15:36, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:31, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:14, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Rushtail (A) ~ Approved

File:Rushtail.apprentice.pngWeird shading again :S Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  21:33, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, dull the highlights. oblivionAudience? 21:49, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  22:27, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! DUll the highlights a tiny bit more. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 12:09, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you :D  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:05, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Sweetflower20:15 Sun Jan 1

Define the ear pink a little more. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 03:01, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:26, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base fur. On the warrior image, it looks a little lighter.

Re-uploaded MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:53, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great, but Define the front earpink, I can't really see it at all... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:23, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:10, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great, Mountainheart! CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:13, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:14, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Minnowtail (A) - Approved

Minnowtail.apprentice All colors from her warrior. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:26, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Lovely job :3 llwildheartl01:07 Wed Jan 4

You still working on this, Pale? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:18, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yeah sorry. Procrastination stinks. X.X *feels guilty* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:36, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? llwildheartl08:42 Sat Jan 7

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:14, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Brambleberry (MCA) - Approved

Brambleberry.mcaIf Russetfur gets one, so does she. She's been given all the same information. Comments? ScarletwindLisanna 03:04, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, define the light parts on her shoulder and top of her haunch, as well as her tail, define the herb shading, define the white shine in her eye, and try making the spots blacker. Iveh Yo! 03:45, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Ivy Gee... Was there anything alright with the old version xP ScarletwindLisanna 03:52, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Of course ^^; Iveh Yo! 03:56, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

She didn't say anything anything about the earpink. xD Can you make the shading on the back leg farthest from us a little less flat? Ivyheart =P 04:02, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindLisanna 04:28, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose, it looks socially awkward :P and this is BEAUTIFUL! Icewish 12:06, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brambleberry is described with a bright pink nose and I got it right from her MC charart. I'm not changing it. ScarletwindLisanna 14:58, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful <3 CBA? llwildheartl05:13 Sat Jan 7

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:14, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (A) ~ Approved

Mothwing.apprenticeI'm pretty sure I can post this now. Thank you so much Stoney for letting me have this :D This will take for ever... Comments? Why must Icy's desgin be so complicated?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:40, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste under the chin... Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 05:56, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yeah there was O.o But that's another story XP  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:03, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

OMG! So pretty! <3 Define the tail shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:07, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded :D Thank you Stoney <3  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:20, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Derp Fixed the shading XD  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:27, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

If I'm correct I think the stripes need to be slightly more sharper and square shape at the edges. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:13, Sun, Jan, 8, 2012

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:32, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Great job. CBA? llwildheartl01:44 Mon Jan 9

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:14, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderheart (A) ~ Approved

Cinderheart.apprentice This was a challenge... I like it. 8D Leggo 🏈 00:52, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

She's so pretty! <3 Smudge the pelt into the ear pink. I luff this.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:56, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

So purdy. *.* There's some waste by the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:08, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hehe. Thanks. =3 Leggo 🏈 02:40, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading a tad. Breezewhisker 04:01, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 04:32, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

B'aww, she's so cute! Define the shading on the head ;3 Dazzy 08:46, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :3 Leggo 🏈 23:07, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a tad. Nice job :3 llwildheartl23:18 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded. Thanks. :3 Leggo 🏈 23:58, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit sharper? llwildheartl02:29 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 02:37, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Her nosey looks a lil pinkish. So adorable!! Icewish 12:15, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. =3 Leggo 🏈 01:05, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Stretch the pink down in this side --> on the side of the ear closed to the eyes and brighten it a touch. This is beautiful, Rainy! ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:09, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. =3 Leggo 🏈 15:44, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Holy heck this has went a VERY long time without a comment. CBA? Iveh Yo! 17:11, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, since it's been since the 7th, approved. You've waited long enough. Iveh Yo! 17:30, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Weaselfur (A) ~Approved

Weaselfur.apprentice Got permission to redo the pattern since the warrior image needs to be redone anyway (lineart's messed up bad). And yeah, that's how Shelly do! >8D Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 06:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think he only has white paws.. And they look a tad bit cream. Awesome job, Shelly! ;3 Mistypebble 21:37, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Your right. Maybe blur/smudge the stripes abit more. They look hard edged to me. Bloo!yo 23:05, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Cats with white paws almost always have white elsewhere on their body, typically on the tail and the muzzle. I'd really rather keep it for realism's sake. Shelly For a limited time only 01:04, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

...I think your taking this "realism" thing too far but okay. xD Do what I said in my comment before and I think you forgot to fill in the nose Bloo!yo 01:15, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, maybe. :\ Look, if someone else agrees, I'll take the white off this tail and muzzle. Shelly For a limited time only 01:20, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

No, it's alright. It's just something minor. I'm just worried we might start doing this on every tabby eventually by assuming stuff based on realism. And then, all the newbies sees this and starts complaining all like: "OMGZZ u gaiz r so st00pid It doesnt matche teh descriptions!!!111" I just saying we should only make the chararts based soley in cited descriptions, so it wouldnt upset dem Warriors fans, ya know? xD Bloo!yo 01:35, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I think the white on the tail and muzzle (and the eys?) should be taken off too, I agree with Bloo. Cool 3D effect! ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:03, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Re-uploaded. (sigh) I reel I did him a disservice, but oh well. Shelly For a limited time only 02:35, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome, darken both the earpink and eye Bloo!yo 21:09, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:03, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Been a while with no comment. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 02:06, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great, approved Iveh Yo! 04:51, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (Alt. Lo) - Approved

File:Snake.loner.alt.pngI reserved this before the decision was made to redo the loner blanks, so I'm allowed to post this. I messed up the filename, it's supposed to be Snake (BC).loner.alt, could an admin move this to the correct name? Otherwise it just kinda wastes space. Iveh Yo! 06:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ass ADD (XD) shading to the collar and the back ear. And I THINK this is supposed to be shorthaired, but correct me if I'm wrong. :P Good job luff. ^^ —Preceding unsigned comment added by Paleclaw (talkcontribs)

  • laughs butt off* ^^Best typo EVER. Anywhoo, blur the earpink and make it smaller -Bloo!yo 18:38, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Poor person who made that typo, define the back leg shading. Sweetflower01:19 Tue Jan 3

It was Paleh xD I've added the unsigned thingy so people will know. Nothing about the image for me, just do what everyone else said ^^ oblivionAudience? 01:23, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oh goodness, I fail.... XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 04:56, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded XD poor Paleh! And no because his rogue alt is longhaired Iveh Yo! 19:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the border and there's this weird darker grey thing on his right front leg. oblivionAudience? 04:12, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 21:02, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to the white ear (I think that'd be in shadow) and define the highlights a bit more. (And if you don't use highlights, then where the shading isn't xP) ScarletwindLisanna 02:30, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 04:32, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Nearly two days without a comment, let's go CBA Iveh Yo! 21:41, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours, approved Iveh Yo! 04:53, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (A) ~ Approved

Plumwillow.apprenticeMy least favorite charart :\ FerretclawLover 16:24, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Why, shes cute! Smudge her ear-pink into her ear. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty! Define the tail shading a tad. Grell No question at all! 18:16, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

REUPLOADED, the reason is that she just isn't up to what I call the Icewish Standard. She's average :\ FerretclawLover 18:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more on either side of where you've already smudged it Iveh Yo! 20:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, is this what you mean? I got a little confused so I just did what I think you're saying...FerretclawLover 20:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The face shading needs to be more defined. The shading chart in the tutorials shows shading on the face, and it is hard to see if it was added. Otherwise great job! a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not actually sure whether I put face shading or not...FerretclawLover 17:57, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cheshire, the shading placement is artists choice, as long as it makes sense, than it's fine. ;) Sweetflower23:44 Wed Dec 21

Blur the earpink. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 23:46, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like disagreeing but I think the earpink looks fine. :) Icewish 14:21, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think the earpink should be fixed, so it looks like it going into the ear, not into the pelt. (if that makes any sense at all) And blur the shading on her belly tons, looks darken than the rest of it. Mistypebble 17:02, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Icewish 17:40, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? -ſceheartBlah blah 21:03, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for inturupting, but can you please lighten the back paw shading on the heel, and the belly shading? It's darker than the rest of the shading. Sweetflower18:15 Tue Dec 27

I think the intensity of it is fine (don't lighten it) but I also think the shading could be defined on the chest, neck, and front foot. Also make sure the shading is the same darkness at the top of the hind leg farthest from us if not darker. llwildheartl10:59 Fri Dec 30

It has now been a week and two days. Anyone that wants this can take over. If not, it's archived in 24 hours. oblivionAudience? 04:36, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. --Leafstrike-- 15:45, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did the shading instead, wait for changes. --Leafstrike-- 15:55, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

OMG please don't decline this! I really want to continue doing this! If you decline it then it's my fault :| *kicks self* Icewish 18:34, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Icewish, but you didn't work on this promptly enough, so this image is now Moonleaf's. Could you lighten the base coat, Moon? llwildheartl22:19 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 04:46, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. llwildheartl04:48 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 18:36, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the shading over her head going to her tail. Silverhmm 00:06, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded You mean the waste? I noticed that, but waited until someone else pointed that out? --Leafstrike-- 00:26, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:42, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 01:35, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the haunch and tail and define the light on the face. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:45, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Was in a rush... --Leafstrike-- 18:22, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Its been 3 days without comments; CBA? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:16, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:24, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (A) - Approved

Birchfall.apprenticeTrying a new stripe pattern because on his warrior and kit, all his stripes just look paint brushed on, not a real tabby. Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:57, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Nice! Blur the shading a bit. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 12:44, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:47, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

More than 24 hours without comments. CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:09, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:24, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Foxleap (A) ~ Approved

Foxleap.apprentice Tabbies aren't my strong point but I tried. :D WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:33, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. This looks great!  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:38, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I love the stripes! ♫Purplemoon♪ Stay up until Midnight 01:48, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:59, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and define the "highlights". I luff dis! Dazzy 02:11, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Okay not everybody used highlights, and thats pretty much making them brighter. The nose is supposed to be gray. Define the stripes. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 02:49, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is not supposed to be gray. It's only supposed to be gray on gray cats, and black on black cats. Lighten the whole image, define the shading, blue the stripes, and try and make them match the warrior a bit better. Maybe add more? I'm not sure, I just know it doesn't really match right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:28, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The nose isn't gray... nevermind you were talking to sandstorm, I took the colors from his old apprentice and warrior images, I'll fix the shading and 'highlights' WildfireMistystar's Omen! 15:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 16:32, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

This also hasn't been commented on in two days. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 16:29, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Again, patience. Make the white shinies smaller, define the stripes, lighten the base colour, and smudge the earpink into the ear. llwildheartl02:30 Tue Jan 3

Can you make his stripes to look more like the ones on his warrior image? Mistypebble 21:08, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took all colors from his warrior, I lightend the image but just saying, also what do you want me to do to fix the stripes? --WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know what it is, but the image doesn't really seem to match, at least stripes-wise. I'd say add highlights, personally, 'cause it seems like there are highlights on the other image. llwildheartl02:24 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:42, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink paler; don't worry if it doesn't match. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:10, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 03:55, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Its been days without comments. CBA? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:47, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Leafpool (MCA) ~ Approved

Leafpool.mca Heh... I like drawing her stripes. Comments? :3 Leggo 🏈 20:51, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The nose pink is barely visible. Can you define it? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:31, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little. Wow, you did great with the stripes! ♫Purplemoon♪ Stay up until Midnight 23:52, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

You did a much better job than me! Blur all the shading, and lighten the shading in the middle of the body. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 12:13, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't notice it was you doing this. X3 Define the tail shading. Sky-Jedi You will talk to me. 22:47, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh he he. :3 Leggo 🏈 00:02, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it blends in with the fur too much. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:20, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 01:11, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit pinker. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:11, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 15:49, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the white chest a little more. Excellent, m'dear. jayce Reveℓation   00:57, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leggo 🏈 14:04, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 16:23, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MCA) ~ Approved

Mothwing.mcaFirst charart, comments? Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 22:38, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Forgot to make transparent, made it transparent. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 22:44, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! but you have to do these things. 1. Take the colors from the MC, that includes the ear pink and eye color. 2. Smudge the ear pink into the ear more and blur it. 3. I can barely see the nose pink, if there is any. 4. make the pattern match the MC, because it has to match. Wow that's a lot of stuff xD Squishee I am le Puppeh! 22:48, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Add colour to the nose, it's white. Sweetflower22:56 Sat Dec 31

Re-uploaded I tried to match the MC the best I could. Took all colors from her MC image. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 23:18, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Her face looks gray. Lighten the shading if its that. --Acornflight Med. Cat ofLunarClan! 23:23, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

I see youre trying to match. Her color is lovely , Leafy :-) Just try to sharpen stripes and make them more zig-zag looking, just play with it and dont be scary, you taken a really brave choice.. LeafyAbsolute maniac,24:25,December 31,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried... <:3 Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 00:51, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes need to be sharper and zigzagy still. Don't blur the stipes that much. Also redden/darken the earpink, so it's a hot pink color. Other then that, this is great for a first charart. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:57, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Re-uploaded I think I made it worse D: Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 03:51, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Leafy, It looks like you havent changed anything. And dont waste it, spend on that cat more time. Dont be such *mouse-brained* xD Why you dont try match the stripes more? Its not worse, only wasted. Try make more stripes too. LeafyAbsolute maniac,19:21,January 2,2012 (UTC)

Well said, Leafstorm. If it helps, I'm pretty sure that Icestorm used the "Ripple" tool which in GIMP is under "Filters". Ivyheart =P 02:51, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I don't think I'm ready for Mothwing yet. So I'm withdrawing this. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 21:08, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, then I'll take over. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:23, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Are you working on this? Its been four days. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 22:02, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm working on this. Remember, I have a week to upload, not 4 days. Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:14, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look...thicker on the other images, the eyes look different shades and could you blur the shading, perhaps? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:09, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I used the apprentice image as a template to copy the stripes, so I'm pretty sure they're the same. The eye color is also from her apprentice image, but I blurred the shading. RE-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:07, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes still need to be a bit thicker, and I think square at the edges. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:55, Wed, Jan, 11, 2012

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 02:02, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I usually don't CBA my own chararts, but...its been over 24 hours without comments...so...CBA? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:45, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Owlclaw (A) - Approved

Owlclaw.apprenticeHaha space :-) LeafyAbsolute maniac,19:17,January 2,2012 (UTC)

There are less stripes on the warrior image, can you erase some? Ivyheart =P 19:20, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yea, Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,19:32,January 2,2012 (UTC)

I think you forgot to fill in the nose. o3o Sky Lather. Rinse. Obey. 00:53, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

No..its filled LeafyAbsolute maniac,19:03,January 3,2012 (UTC)

In that case, define it o3o. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:24, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Match the stripes with his new warrior. Silverhmm 12:22, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I have done the new warrior, it looks good to me, defined nose, reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,18:30,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and define the white pixel in the eye. ScarletwindLisanna 02:28, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,19:25,January 6,2012 (UTC)

There's evil waste all around the image. I demand you to kill it. XD Dazzy 10:14, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Oh..killed xD LeafyAbsolute maniac,12:26,January 7,2012 (UTC)

Leaf, I adore your tabbies... I really do. =) CBA? jayce Reveℓation   05:37, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sootfur (A) - Approved

Sootfur.apprentice Yeah...my terrible pixlr skills right here. :S Atelda 02:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Terrible? Who's terrible? Certainly not you. Add some shading to the top of the head or move the "highlight" on the haunch up to clarify your light source, and make sure the belly is completely shaded :3 llwildheartl02:11 Wed Jan 4

I'm terrible. Tone down the highlights a bit. --Leafstrike-- 03:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image. oblivionAudience? 03:20, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I luv this :D Who says pixlr stinks? I use it! Blur the earpink a tad. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:17, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Oooh so pretty! Lighten the shading. :) Icewish 12:07, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I never said Pixlr stinks x3 Atelda 23:54, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

All of my images are made on pixlr *trollface* Anywhoo, define the tail shading Bloo!yo 21:19, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oi. Atelda 23:44, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:59, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart (A) ~ Approved

Skyheart.apprenticeI was kind of waiting for Sky to reserve this, but she never did, so I just went for it. x3 It feels good to be going back to Skyheart, her warrior version was my first charart. I feel so nostalgic. Anyways, I tried doing the stripes the way I made them on her warrior, so they should match decently. Colors are taken from warrior. Comments? Ivyheart =P 04:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Dude, you shoulda just asked me, I would have happily given it away, since I hate mine. ^^ Smudge the fur into the earpink a wee bit more, and blur the shading, and maybe lighten it up some. Sky- Lather. Rinse. Obey. 04:15, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sky didn't reserve it because I asked to do it xD. This is so much better than what I would have come up with. Lighten the shading at the feet in the back. Silverhmm 12:14, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Erm...*runs* And I think the stripes should be a bit lighter, like teh warrior. 8D Sky- Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:34, January 6, 2012 (UTC).

Reuploaded. Heh. Sorry, Silver. x3 Ivyheart =P 03:39, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Let's go, CBA on this. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:06, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Rosepetal (A) - Approved

Rosepetal.apprenticeWell, I tried... Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:28, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on her back. Silverhmm 12:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Also, blur the front-haunch "Highlights" RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:54, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:40, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

No comments for over 24 hours. CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:37, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (A) ~ Approved

Tallpoppy.apprenticeAll of her colors are from her elder. Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:48, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder highlight/light spot and I think this'll be ready already, nice job Iveh Yo! 17:34, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Ivy :D  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:59, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the base of the tail's shadin'. Sweetflower00:12 Wed Jan 11

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:19, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 19:35, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oakfur (A) - Approved

Oakfur.apprentice Here he is. He looks bad. Just a tad. Anyways, comments? Sweetflower19:15 Sat Jan 7

Move the "highlighted" part on the haunch up a bit and blur it.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  20:07, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Silverhmm 16:02, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pshaw, he looks fine. Just smudge the earpink a bit. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 17:07, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks Snoweh! Sweetflower20:33 Sun Jan 8

Can you darken the nosepink and smudge/blur the earpink more into the ear? Looks great, Sweet! :3 Mistypebble 01:22, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadedThanks. Sweetflower00:20 Tue Jan 10

Darken shading a tad :3 Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 23:29, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sweetflower23:38 Tue Jan 10

CBA? Iveh Yo! 22:29, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 01:28, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (Alt. W) - Approved

Jaggedtooth.warrior.alt Okay, before you say anything, the book is in greyscale, so I figured he should be grey. If people disagree, I can easily change it to something else. oblivionAudience? 23:23, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I think it should stay as it is. Perhaps, redden the earpink? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:28, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, he has a white muzzle anyways. Define the tail shading. Ivyheart =P 00:01, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

He was brown on the cover, shouldn't he be brown?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:06, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

We don't know that's him. Besides, that cat has white paws. oblivionAudience? 02:25, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:21, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

enlarge the shoulder and haunch highlight Bloo!yo 21:13, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 17:08, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

5 days without a comment, automatically approved Iveh Yo! 18:45, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Mosspelt (A) ~ Approved

Mosspelt.apprenticeSince it's been two weeks and Dapple didn't upload it, I decided to do this. Comments? Silverhmm 00:01, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white some more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:49, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Darken the black, and I'm not sure if there already is or not, but make sure you have both ginger and tan on her. That's what she has in her queen image, even if it's not that noticeable. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:09, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

She's kinda flat. Define and/or darken the shading. Breezewhisker 04:02, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't darken the black because I got the color from her queen. Silverhmm 14:20, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

She still feels flat. Blur, blur, blur. --Qway 01:25, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Her patches need to look, furry, like the queen, and smudge them into the grey/black more. Sky-Jedi You will talk to me. 01:59, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 19:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Heheh, I couldn't put it on cause the spaces were all filled every time I went on. Oh well, I don't mind. You should define the shading. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 03:12, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 15:43, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Her patches should be more ginger. oblivionAudience? 04:08, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 00:09, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Patches don't look like Mosspelt's. Fix that please :) Icewish 12:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm waiting for a second opinion on that, since I made sure all the patches matched. Silverhmm 12:26, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I agree, they don't. They look too smudged and the patches are two different colors on this. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 14:24, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

They are supposed to be two different colours. Could you darken the earpink farthest from us a bit, even though it's in light? --Leafstrike-- 18:08, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 18:10, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:28, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I will get to this today. Silverhmm 11:34, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 22:13, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 15:12, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 04:04, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Redwillow (A) ~ Approved

Redwillow.apprentice I got permission to redo him since I realize I didn't make his warrior image very realistic or imitable (though it was kinda funny to see three people reserve him and give up). Anyway, I looked up his description and got this. I'll redo his warrior image when I'm done with Mistystar's. Shelly For a limited time only 23:25, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

This is stunning Shelly! Lighten the face's shading a tad. Silverhmm 23:40, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Very stunning ^^ Define the shading. Sweetflower23:46 Wed Jan 11

Darn, I was gonna take a try at it next. XD Anyways, could you desaturate the ginger a bit? Just personal preference, but I think it stands out too much from the brown right now and makes it look unrealistic. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:00, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ... I liked it better before. :C Shelly For a limited time only 04:20, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I agree. The ginger looks kinda cream now. Make it more orange :3 oblivionAudience? 02:54, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 16:24, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely job. CBA? llwildheartl02:40 Mon Jan 16

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 04:05, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Pikepaw (A) - Approved

Pikepaw.apprentice Comments for improvement? Ivyheart =P 15:48, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

This is great Ivy! Only problem I see is that the earpink is sort-of weird, and there's bits of waste around the lineart. Qway 18:40, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I don't see any waste... and how is the earpink weird? Ivyheart =P 19:00, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Disregard. My computer was in low resolution. Forgive me. Qway 20:02, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Looks lovely to me. CBA? llwildheartl02:34 Mon Jan 16

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 04:06, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) ~ Approved

Dapplenose.apprenticeUgh, this is horrible. Comments? Grell No question at all! 23:43, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the earpink fill the entire ear and make it more visible Silverhmm 23:45, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, but, the white in the eye goes where there is one less black...If that made any sense. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:49, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define the shading, on the tail especially. This is nice! Ivyheart =P 23:53, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the dapples a lot. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Squishee I am le Puppeh! 20:57, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, it'll be re uploaded shortly. Grell No question at all! 15:17, January 2, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Sorry Twilight, but I didn't get what you meant. Mind telling me again? Grell No question at all! 15:27, January 2, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Ya' know where on the blanks, the pupils in the eyes are two pixels wide until the top, where the right pixel is white? You didn't fill that in to black when you added the eye highlight on the other side. Just edit the lines so that those spots are black. Breezewhisker 15:57, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Fixed eye. Grell No question at all! 21:29, January 3, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

The dapples should be dark grey, not black. ^^ Sky- Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:01, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes, lighten and redden the ear-pink, give her a gray nose, and darken the shading. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:53, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Guys, I don't have time to do this. I'm really sorry, but I'm withdrawing it. I'd change the heading, but I don't know if I'm allowed. Once again, I'm really sorry. If someone wants to take over, go ahead. Grell No question at all! 23:11, January 10, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Yeah, just for reference, you're allowed to change the heading. I did it for you. :3 Now anyone can take over. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:15, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I can take over.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:16, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Great! I changed the heading, again. xD I think you should just redo this, but if you're not, lighten the mottles and blur the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:18, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lol deRp Thank Misty XP Should I make a new heading for this at the bottom?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:52, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think its fine as it is. Just go ahead. :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 02:05, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Alrighty, reuploaded *headdesk* Why did I take this? XS Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:10, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge and blur the mottles just a bit more and I think this'll be good. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:28, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded :)  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:25, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to sound impatient but it's been 4 days since someone has commented on this.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:36, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Woops! This looks wonderful, Mountain, CBA? Atelda 20:00, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 03:24, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Alt E) - Approved

Poppydawn.elder.altI feel I should lower the opacity on her muzzle. Solids are so boring but I love this blank. Iveh Yo! 02:29, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a touch. I <3 the muzzle! ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:03, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should. It makes it look like she has a white muzzle. And add some shading to the neck. Breezewhisker 04:15, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 17:42, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a while without comments, CBA? Iveh Yo! 18:37, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely, but I think this needs to be a bit lighter, as I can barely tell this is brown and not black. llwildheartl02:38 Mon Jan 16

Reuploaded Don't worry about it, I thought that too Iveh Yo! 02:48, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? I would automatically approve it but doesn't feel right since it's my own image Iveh Yo! 04:48, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 03:32, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (A) ~ Approved

Reedwhisker.apprenticeI wasn't sure what color the nose should be, and I know I have to lighten the shading. Comments? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 17:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:00, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

He needs to be long furred Iveh Yo! 17:59, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

That's why he looked so messed up. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:00, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

The nose has to be black, if you were wondering. ♫Purplemoon♪ Stay up until Midnight 22:49, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 16:33, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

No one has commented on this in two days. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 16:27, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Patience, Wildfire. Smudge the earpink into the ear some more, make the white shiny in the eye smaller, and darken the shading on the top of the farthest hind leg. Lovely job. llwildheartl00:44 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded I'm going to get rid of the waste later I have to do HW WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:37, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Reuploaded --WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:37, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail ScarletwindLisanna 02:33, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 03:54, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I would CBA this, but I think the haunch shading could be just a little more blurred. Other than that, great work! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:50, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:24, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? --Iveh Yo! 04:37, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 03:43, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Oatpaw (A) - Approved

File:Oatpaw.apprentice.pngComments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:14, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I suggest defining the shading. I've just started myself, but defining is one of the main things.

Thistleshine 05:21, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is fine, but blur it a bit. Amazing as always, Scarlet.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:23, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:59, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can't really see the shading now. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:33, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 21:12, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. Dazzy 07:58, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 17:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Make his eyes less purple. --Leafstrike-- 23:59, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:20, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

No comments in over 24 hours. CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:43, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting CBA but his eyes still look purple. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 23:23, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

They look perfectly blue to me. Perhaps it's your computer? Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 23:30, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know...maybe. But I don't think so...--Cinder Real or Not Real? 23:34, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Continuing CBA ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:02, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 03:46, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Boulderpaw (A) ~ Approved

File:Boulderpaw.apprentice.png My first apprentice ^^. Tell me what you think. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 17:37, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Smudge pelt into earpink. LeafyAbsolute maniac,17:52,December 23,2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he be short-haired, since he's a WindClan cat? --Leafstrike-- 18:14, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh really? He has to be a short-haired? --Cinder Real or Not Real? 19:23, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well, yes, since all WindClan cats get short-haired images, unless they were described as long-haired. --Leafstrike-- 20:39, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I'll fix it. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:29, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail highlight/lighter part go along with the light source better. There's no possible light source that could make it go in the middle of the tail like that, straight through. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:25, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 21:42, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the whole thing kinda blurry? Like you resized it or something. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

It is a bit smaller than the blank. Fix it. oblivionAudience? 03:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink could be lighter and more blurred. Qway 06:45, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's the same as the others it's 139x134. Or is that wrong? I agree it looks smaller but when I resized it to 139x134 just like all the others it was the same. Even in the file it shows that size. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 18:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

You resized it? That's probably the problem. First off, that would be why this looks blurry, and second, the canvas size may not be the same as the other blanks from the start, so when you resized it, the canvas size matched, btu the blank didn't. You may have to redo. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 08:34, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I just make it bigger so it is easier to work with but then on others when I save it, it goes back to the normal size. I'll redo it if you want me to. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 17:03, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Is it better? --Cinder Real or Not Real? 17:54, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink. Sweetflower18:28 Mon Dec 26

The lineart is still blurred. I can fix it for you if you want me to. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:47, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Nah I got this DJ..@Sweet do you mean make the color duller or dull the earpink I have on there? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

18:55, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded--Cinder Real or Not Real?

19:41, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste around the image, darken and redden the earpink, darken the base coat, and make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:40, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

He still looks blurry, and that image is definitely smaller than the blank. oblivionAudience? 03:42, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Cinder, I think, you must redone it, Im sorry for first, I saved it into my computer and looked closer, the lineart is whole blurred, whole. Im sorry but it cant be approvet if you dont fix that. LeafyAbsolute maniac,21:29,December 28,2011

Re-Uploaded I think it's finally right. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 23:53, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

YUes, the lineart looks good. Smude the pelt into the earpink a bit more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:06, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

And make the earpink redder and darker, and either fill in, or darken the nose. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:33, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I know the earpink is horrible. xD--Cinder Real or Not Real?

03:24, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smudge the earpink into the ear more so it looks like fur. llwildheartl11:35 Fri Dec 30

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 16:04, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. --Leafstrike-- 17:58, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real?

23:20, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Where's your light source? If it's from the back, make sure the stomach and chest are completely shaded, and enlarge the shading on the front of the haunch and shoulder. Blur all the shading as well. llwildheartl22:23 Sun Jan 1

I looks to me almost as if he has a stripe on his hind leg. But that maybe be the shading. Breezewhisker 00:59, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. llwildheartl02:05 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:05, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, add a highlight to the back, and remove the highlight on the chest; it looks like the light is coming from beneath him. ScarletwindLisanna 02:40, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded And I didn't see a highlight on the chest O.o Or do you mean the one one his front leg? Anyway Re-Uploaded. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:26, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a tad more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:18, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 03:28, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define your light source. Make the haunch highlight a bit smaller and make the back highlight a bit bigger. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:46, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I'll fix the earpink and the blotchy patch near his hind leg. --Cinder Real or Not Real?


Re-Uploaded--Cinder Real or Not Real?


Blur the shading near the back more, and smudge the pelt into the earpink. I notice that it is like that on all apprentices. Chez

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 02:00, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image --Iveh Yo! 17:13, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 21:15, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the fur into the earpink a bit more, and blur the shading slightly on the front right leg. (our side) Sky- Lather. Rinse. Obey. 00:39, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real?

01:01, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink stand out more, darken the nose, and define the highlight/lighter part on the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:42, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 22:05, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define shading on the tail. Qway 22:13, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 22:16, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Very nice~! I suggest defining the shading on his hind paw, and gently smudging the fur into the ear pink. Other than that, magnificent! ThistleshineThe name's Thistleshine... but you can call me Thistle.

Well aren't you sweet! xD Anyway Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 22:24, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Pfft I'm sweet. define near the end of the tail's shading. Sweetflower22:58 Mon Jan 16

Re-Uploaded Sorry Sweet..You are sweet xD --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:29, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:43, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken his nosepink a little.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:00, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry..Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 23:09, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I can't find any critique. CBA? Iveh Yo! 02:51, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

You forgot to change the heading Ivy. :P PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:39, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:36, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (A) ~ Approved

Sedgewhisker.apprenticeThe warrior image needs to be tweaked. I'll try to do that as soon as I finish Mousefur's images. Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:06, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Ivyheart =P 04:09, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be much lighter :P she's supposed to be "pale light brown". llwildheartl04:33 Thu Jan 5

Re-uploaded Psssshh I knew that XD *headdesk*  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:01, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Haha of course you did :P lighten it a bit more. llwildheartl05:14 Thu Jan 5

Re-uploaded XP  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:22, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

No earpink on right ear. Icewish 17:40, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

There is earpink, it just needs to be defined. Also, you deleted my comment, Ferret. What it said was: I think the nose should be pink...It is on her kit image. ;3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 16:25, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:14, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I am withdrawing this to do a different one. I promised Stony she could have this. -- MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:04, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

May I take over?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:12, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Of course ^^  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:14, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

There hasn't been any comments for 10 days... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:32, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Well, since nobody has told the artist to do anything, I'm going to CBA this Iveh Yo! 02:46, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:36, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (A) - Approved

Owlwhisker.apprentice Was on the tweak list for his stripes, so I felt no compunction in making my own design. Comments? llwildheartl05:42 Wed Jan 18

Ish so purdy *.* Make the earpink a little more visible.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:50, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I'm amazed! <3 Make the neck shading a little less flat? Ivyheart =P 05:58, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, guys <3 llwildheartl06:26 Wed Jan 18

I honestly can't find anything wrong with this, so CBA? PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:52, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. llwildheartl23:51 Fri Jan 20

Mistystar (Alt.L) - Approved

Mistystar.leader.alt This is for when she was described as gray in the allegiances of TFW. I got ears and eyes off of her alternate deputy. She was described as just gray. Not light or dark, so I didn't colour pick off one of her alts for her pelt color. Comments? Sweetflower16:56 Sun Dec 25

Lovely! Ligthen her up a bit, she looks almost black. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:03, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar is shorthaired. Very nice, Sweet. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 17:04, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Aren't all RiverClan cats long-haired? Sweetflower17:17 Sun Dec 25

All her other images are shorthaired, and, she may have gotten the shorthaired gene from her ThunderClan parent. o3o Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 17:23, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm a derp face. Never mind me. :P Sweetflower17:36 Sun Dec 25

Make the nose darker and either smudge/blur the earpink more. Mistypebble 19:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad, also she's shorthaired because she was described as sleek.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    20:27, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sweetflower01:56 Mon Dec 26

Lighten her, she looks dark gray. Make her nose pink, since she was described with one, and blur the earpink and make it less purple. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:22, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sweetflower15:36 Mon Dec 26

Re-uploaded. Dulled the ear-pink and nose. Sweetflower18:33 Mon Dec 26

Can you make the eye color match the regular leader version? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:51, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sweetflower17:03 Wed Dec 28

Add/define the depth in her eyes, and redden and darken the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The eyes won't look like her leader eyes, because I had to make the depth more "visible". Sweetflower18:48 Thu Dec 29

The earpink's way too hot pink right now, dull it a ton, darken it, and redden it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:17, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. (I colour picked the earpink off the chart, and reddened it. Sweetflower17:33 Fri Dec 30

Make her nose gray. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 17:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

She was described with a pink nose. Sweetflower17:51 Fri Dec 30

I think it's me but I see some waste above the ears. If not then smudge the pelt into the ears some more and blur the shading. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 19:57, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sweetflower21:18 Sat Dec 31

Give her a gray nose, make her ear-pink a bit paler, and define the shading on the tail. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 21:14, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded She has a pink nose, it's in her description. Sweetflower02:24 Mon Jan 2

Make the nose less bright, and also the ear pink in <-- this ear is only halfway filled. If you get what I mean. Fill the whole ear with the earpink. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 14:31, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The ear is like that because her fur could be infront of it.Sweetflower22:23 Mon Jan 2

Make sure all the shading is the same darkness. llwildheartl02:07 Tue Jan 3

Re-uploaded. Sweetflower19:51 Thu Jan 5

Define the haunch highlight, blur the ear-pink a bit more, and give the shading some depth; it looks a bit flat. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:47, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't use highlights. Sweetflower19:17 Sat Jan 7

Re-uplaoded. Sweetflower19:20 Sat Jan 7

Smudge the pelt into the earpink on the left side more, and if you can, do the right ear too. Chez

The ears are fine, the hair in the ear ain't perfect hun. (: Sweetflower22:52 Mon Jan 9

Honestly I agree with her though. Also, there's like, a lack of shading bordering the lineart. It's like you shrunk the shading (probably because of the Gaussian blur) Could you fix that? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:33, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know why it does that. .-. I'll try to fix it... Sweetflower22:35 Wed Jan 11

Withdrawing, for reasons... Sweetflower22:28 Fri Jan 13

I'll take over. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:42, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Go right ahead Twi. (; Sweetflower22:48 Fri Jan 13

Uploaded - ;) Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:56, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

There is always a problem with the leader and healer pics that have pixelation over the ears. It's very small, but better to be safe than sorry, the waste must disappear. --Qway 22:58, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ah yes, that waste. >.< Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:02, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad. Lovely though. RainheartlegsHaunts you 01:52, January 15, 2012 (UTC)


Reuploaded - *wugs* I'm thankful that you commented. <3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:56, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Twi, is it just me or should the left hind paw and tail have a tad bit of shading? Either way, Twi knows best. Good luck! C; ThistleshineThe name's Thistleshine... but you can call me Thistle.

Blur shading a tad. Chez

The shading's fine hun. Sweetflower22:53 Mon Jan 16

Reuploaded - .3. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:38, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the lower edges of the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:39, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^.^ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 15:44, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong, so CBA? :3 PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 16:01, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:33, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darkstripe (A) ~ Approved

Darkstripe.apprenticeBrambleberry and Russetfur got one so I would think Darkstripe would get on too.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:30, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Great job! Define the tai shading? Ivyheart =P 23:32, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Ivy :D  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:38, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Dunno if you use them, but to match the others I think you should add some lighting under the stripes on top of the silver. Shelly For a limited time only 15:02, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  15:25, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the stripes just a tad so they don't look so solid. ^-^ Mistypebble 17:24, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Misty :D  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:32, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail highlight...thing....whatever. xD Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 19:04, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded XD  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:42, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the back shading. Silverhmm 00:26, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:29, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 22:56, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

None, approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:33, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Rubblepaw (A) ~ Approved

Rubblepaw.apprenticeComments? I don't know what happened to the background, but I'll fix it.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Something is wrong, I can't fix it, help?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:30, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I got it. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:32, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. =)  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:21, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Th blue looks lovely... Anyway blur the shading a lot and the maybe lighten it up Squishee I am le Puppeh! 16:20, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

It's probably because of the layer with the eye colour on it. Did you use the bucket to fill in the blue? oblivionAudience? 21:03, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

No I didn't. I think it's a glitch when I upload it.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:24, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and Sandstorm, the shading is fine.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:25, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Pretty blue background is pretty. ^^ Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution

It does look pretty...But I'm kinda mad since I can't fix this. I'm withdrawing. >.>;; It might be a glitch, or something's wrong with the file, if I work on this, I would be getting nowhere.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:20, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Next time change the title, Stoney :3 This is up for grabs now. llwildheartl04:16 Wed Jan 18

I'll take over. --Leafstrike-- 18:06, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 18:14, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light part of the tail. Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 20:39, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 18:08, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

This looks good, Moonie! CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:28, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:55, January 23, 2012 (UTC)



Firestar(A) ~ Approved

Firestar.apprentice

Okay archived the discussion and redid it. Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 05:28, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes by 2-3 pixels. Dazzy 13:19, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink visable. Beautiful! :3 Silverhmm 16:09, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wow Icy! This is amazing! And there is a brown/cream stripe on his tail..--Cinder Real or Not Real? 02:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 04:08, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a touch. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:10, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 03:05, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the tip of the tail a bit more gingery, it looks a bit pale. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:32, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Redone- Well the pattern got changed again, so i had to redo it. Thanks for that ivy. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:08, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the stripes a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:34, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 02:51, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Really pretty :3 The chest looks a tad bit flat, but otherwise, I really like it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:27, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Wonderful job. ^-^ Mistypebble 14:08, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit more visible great job though Acornleaf 16:12, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the eyes a tad? Ivyheart =P 02:07, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Icy, if you see this, would it be ok if I went ahead and took over your image, or do you wanna still finish it? Iveh Yo! 03:36, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Ivy, snce Icy has left, you may take over. Shelly For a limited time only 03:36, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest fur into the other fur, and make the eye dark smaller. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:02, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded First picture done completly with my tablet...how's this look? Iveh Yo! 01:59, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's been two days. CBA? Iveh Yo! 01:39, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:57, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Sol's Father (Lo) - Approved

Sol's Father.loner He's bad. Don't mock me D: oblivionAudience? 17:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

He's not bad, just tone down the highlights or lighten the shading if you don't use highlights. Blue the shading around his belly as well as the tail shading. Make the earpink a tad bigger and I think you're all set! Iveh Yo! 17:06, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. LOL, such a long comment :D oblivionAudience? 17:12, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

He's not bad, he's sexy. ;D Tone down the "highlight" on the tail. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Rawr. *mocks mentor* >:D Its great, Oblivion! :3 Blur the stomach (I think) and shoulder highlight. Mistypebble 01:08, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sexy Sol's Father is sexy x3 oblivionAudience? 01:48, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the belly. Yes, Sol's dad is sexy. *steals* jayce Reveℓation   06:32, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Since we're redoing the loner blanks, should this stay up or be put on hold? If it stays up, tone down the highlights if you use them, and darken the shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:00, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, let it stay for now, I think. We still have to finish the apprentices, last I checked. jayce Reveℓation   09:13, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 16:18, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 21:31, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Highlights are fine.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:24, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the chest area. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:31, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 21:13, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Isn't he long-haired... or just scruffy? xD WildfireMistystar's Omen! 02:23, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Oh man I hope not... Guys? oblivionAudience? 20:16, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't say anything about being long haired or scruffy in his description.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:10, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

More than 24 hours without a comment, CBA? oblivionAudience? 02:21, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Grah, sorry. Um. Make the "highlight" on the haunch larger and higher. llwildheartl03:45 Wed Jan 18

Could you also blur the shading on the foreleg closest to us? Ivyheart =P 02:11, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the shading near the face. o3o Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 05:56, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 23:46, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

@Mountainheart he doesn't have a decription in the book he only appears twice WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:01, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I can haz CBA now? :3 oblivionAudience? 15:26, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:57, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Splashheart (A) ~ Approved

Splashheart.apprenticeBrambleberry, Russetfur, and Longtail are getting ones. He should get one too. Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:31, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the foreleg and haunch shading. Nice work! Ivyheart =P 05:59, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Ivy :D  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:12, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten him juuust a tad so he matched his leader image. amazing! ^^ PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:51, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Palios :D  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:05, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit more ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:26, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:18, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:24, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think this is as blurred as I can get it now.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:37, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur between the haunch and back foot and I'll CBA. :) PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 19:03, January 21, 2012 (UTC)


Re-uploaded 8D Yays!  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  20:20, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 01:44, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:57, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

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