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Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ Approved

Featherwhisker.mca My first drawing in this Wiki :3 What do you think about Featherwhisker? :3 - Starforce StarClan 11:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit I think.... SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? xD Starforce StarClan 12:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Only 35 images can be on this page. This is the 36th one. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I'm not very often at this Wiki^^ - Starforce StarClan 12:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and hes longhaired and not a she-cat, change it for next time LeafyAbsolute maniac,13:31,December 9,2011 (UTC)

I'm removing the decline, as the page limit has just become 50. Make him long furred. Shelly For a limited time only 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And male. Shelly For a limited time only 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you just made my day <3 Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. oblivionAudience? 19:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tweaked the heading so no one will get confused. Define the nose colour. --Leafstrike-- 20:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, as you didn't when asked before. :3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 16:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be uploaded here. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 16:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadet and also saved in Featherwhisker.mca.png , sry i didn't read this about the earpink ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights if you use them, and if not, just darken the whole image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 17:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And the nose should be dark grey. --Leafstrike-- 21:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet. @Paleclaw, sorry I don't understand what you mean, I'm not so good at english :/. I used now to make the shading a little bit darker ^^ - Starforce StarClan 21:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred a lot, but the head shading looks alright. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D07:08, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Smooth the shading specifically along the back. SplookMavinotp♥ 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make his whiskers longer to fit his description. Shelly For a limited time only 03:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet - Starforce StarClan 18:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

00:22, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

And smooth the shading too. It is blotchy in some places. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:47, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Make the color match the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:59, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and tone down the highlights if you use them. Breezewhisker 21:48, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Starforce? -ScarletwindLisanna 00:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

If Starforce isn't, may I work on this? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, not yet. It hasn't been a week. They get a full seven days. Vakarian  02:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:11, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Starforce gave me permission to do this. I'll reupload ASAP Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink fail :P Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" tons, it needs to be lighter, and seriously smudge the earpink down. :3 Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 03:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

There's no highlights' to define. Add highlights to the face and front haunch. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 03:30, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image so it matches the MC better, darken the shading, add shading to the herbs, and take the earpink color from the MC. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:40, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the eyes match the MC image... they look red. Shelly For a limited time only 01:32, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

A big chunk of the earpink is missing so fix that, and define/darken the shading. May just be me, but can you make the herbs different colors or is that unneeded? a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:43, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did I hated it so I just re-did it. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:03, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and lighten the color of the eyes.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

In his description it says he has long, feathery whiskers. I think his whiskers should be longer and he should get an extra whisker but I'm not sure.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  18:34, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and add some depth to the eyes. I agree with Mountainheart on the whiskers thing :3 llwildheartl21:41 Wed Dec 21

Reuploaded I didn't add an extra whisker, I just made it longer like the MC image. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:09, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged/blurred part of the ear closest to us. It also looks really dark, but if it's the same color picked off his MC image, then don't change it Iveh Yo! 04:19, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add the shading to the back leg farthest from us. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:34, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I just earsed all around the ear just to be sure and I took the ear pink from the other image. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:37, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

01:08, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes aren't showing. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:27, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, lighten the earpink to match the MC, and make the eyes more yellow-orange (amber) and less plain orange. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:55, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I took the eye color from the MC Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 17:23, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D23:44, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Reuploaded Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:56, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Make the eyes less red. Moonstorm88 22:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I took the eye color from the MC. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:47, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

You took it from the wrong part. That's the shaded part of the eye. Take it from the middle color, not the darkest or lightest one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:13, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste on the outside of the front paw to the cat's right. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:11, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Reuploaded Okay I killed teh waste! >:D Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 16:46, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Once again, lighten the eyes and take the earpink from the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:14, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I took the ear pink and the eye color from the MC. I hope it looks better. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 18:28, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Blur the shading more and make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Also blur the highlights if there are any. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:56, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done Squishee I am le Puppeh! 17:42, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, smudge the earpink into the ear, make the shading more consistent, and define your light source. llwildheartl10:50 Fri Dec 30

Define the highlights and perhaps lighten up the ear pink, or make it more red. The ear pink looks a bit brown to me. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 18:33, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I dont use highlights, Dapple. And I re-did it becuase the shading was bugging me. Comments? Squishee I am le Puppeh! 19:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the smudged earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:01, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Reuploaded Squishee I am le Puppeh! 02:10, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the bum and smudge the earpink into the ear more so it looks like fur sticking into the ear. Also lighten the earpink a tad. llwildheartl22:07 Sun Jan 1

'Reuploaded The shading on the bum is supposed to be that light because of my light sorce, but I did darken it a little bit. The ear pink is now taken from the MC Squishee I am le Puppeh! 23:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the rump and tail shading. Sweetflower01:24 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded okay that's it's blurred as I could get it on pixlr Squishee I am le Puppeh! 02:36, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose and add shading to the herbs. I'm sure you can blur the tail shading a bit more. llwildheartl01:42 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded Comments? Squishee I am le Puppeh! 01:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)


The back shading is darker than the rest of the shading, lighten it, or darken the face, tail and hindleg shading. Sweetflower04:35 Sat Jan 7

Okay I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else says so. It's the correct shading placement. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 19:28, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define your light source and even out the shading; the back shading is darken than the rest, either lighten the back or darken the rest of the shading and define the shading on the herbs. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:24, January 7, 2012 (UTC)



Reuploaded Okay the light source is from the back. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 01:24, January 9, 2012 (UTC)


Oh yeah and I redid it. Derp forgot to say that! Anyway comments? Squishee I am le Puppeh! 21:58, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:23, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well the shading is the same darkness as the MC and the ear pink is the same nowe. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 01:31, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. Sweetflower02:51 Wed Jan 11

Well sorry but if I do, it'll be inconsistent sorry. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 23:37, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the sides of the earpink. Sweetflower21:37 Thu Jan 12

Reuploaded I didn't know what you mean, so I just blurred it more. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 16:20, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I mean you know how you smudged the pelt in the middle of the earpink? Smudge the sides of the pelt into the sides of the earpink. Sweetflower14:26 Mon Jan 16

Lighten the shading on the shoulder a tad.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  20:37, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 16:17, January 17, 2012 (UTC)


Reuploaded Ugh solids are boring! Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 01:10, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the sides of the pelt into the earpink. Sweetflower21:41 Wed Jan 18

Okay not To be rude but it's the artists choice so.... No Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 00:58, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Fix your sig Sandstorm, it has no links in it. XD And I kinda agree with Sweet... Is the earpink even artist's choice in this case? It looks kinda odd like this. The reason for smudging, is to make it look lie there's fur going into the ear, and this looks nothing like that, so either get rid of the smudging, or make it more like fur by smudging the edges too please. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:42, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Well I think it should be the artists choice! Anyway its just hard to see because of the back round. It is there though. Well anyway it's the twentyth so yeah... Try to be gentle when declining? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 21:51, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

If/Since it's going to be declined...could I take over? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:06, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Sand's already got another charart, it looks like, so...Yeah...The eye color came directly from the MC image...So, if you want me to change it, I guess I will. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:12, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Okay it looks like the ears don't have shading and blur it too. Lovely Daddy Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 00:11, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the head shading or lighten the rest of the shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:06, Fri, Jan, 20, 2012

Reuploaded - Bleh. Just Bleh. But, whatever. I redid it on Gimp, and the shading is the exact same from Stonestream's apprentice image...so...I hope it's alright. It's also on an 100% opacity, so...yeah...Comments? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:34, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a while without comments, and I see nothing wrong, so CBA? PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 20:26, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:00, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (A) ~ Approved

Bluestar.apprentice Hmm, I love Bluestar :) All colours are from her other images. Comments? Sweetflower21:31 Fri Dec 9

Blur the ear pink more. Silverhmm 21:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^-^ Looks good, Sweet! Mistypebble 21:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fail on the ear-pink xD I will start on the darkening it shadin' in a moment.Sweetflower21:48 Fri Dec 9

On my computer, it shows/looks like there is some more waste around the charart. Silverhmm 22:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *Jumps up and down* Did I kill it? I think I did. :D Sweetflower22:26 Fri Dec 9

If you didn't already, add shading to the ear on the left. (It just looks unshaded on my computer.) Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 22:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Our left? Or the cats left? Sweetflower22:38 Fri Dec 9

The cats left. XD But it's just a suggestion. Firestar!Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :) 22:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies. Stupid edit conflicts! Sweetflower23:04 Fri Dec 9

The nose should be gray. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add a shadow to the back of her haunch. You're doing phenomenal my awesome apprentice <3 Iveh Yo! 20:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

A shadow? Sweetflower22:43 Sat Dec 10

Shading, I don't know how to explain it further XD That part would be darker because of the light source. Iveh Yo! 23:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll I needed was to her the word shading ;) Re-uploaded Added a grayy nose and "shading" to the back of the haunch.. Sweetflower23:47 Sat Dec 10

Does she have the same color nose like her other images? Mistypebble 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her nose is pink on the other images, but I was told to make it gray, do I make it pink than? Sweetflower23:20 Sun Dec 11

The nose is a lighter gray on her other images. Color pick off of that, if you'd like. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Got the nose colour off her kit image. Sweetflower00:52 Mon Dec 12

Re-uploaded Smudges ear-pink more. Sweetflower00:55 Mon Dec 12

Her ear should be torn. :3 Sky☀Surfin' Santa 06:18, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when she got the torn ear, do we? Meaning she probably shouldn't have it on her apprentice. Darken the shading and make the shading color match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, Sky's right, she got it as an apprentice. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I love this images, so proud :) Sweetflower23:00 Mon Dec 12

Add a silver tip to the tail. Shelly For a limited time only 14:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got the colour off her leader image, so I'm probably not changing it. Sweetflower21:27 Tue Dec 13

Actually, she shouldn't have a silver tail tip. That's from age. Could you get rid of it and darken the shading? Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadedThat's fine, I don't mind xD Sweetflower00:04 Wed Dec 14

Blur the earpink and add depth to the eye. I love the shading, Sweet! Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 06:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Doesn't everyone? ;) Sweetflower23:22 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading and the highlights.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are no highlights, and no offence, but the shading is blurred enough and to the max. Sweetflower11:08 Thu Dec 15

Darken the shading, on the rump especially. And have you tried Gaussian blurring it? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I always use gaussian blur for shading. Sweetflower00:56 Sat Dec 17

Darken the shading and blur it Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:07, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don't want to darken it, because it will turn out black. Sweetflower22:13 Sun Dec 18

Re-uploaded. Sweetflower23:07 Sun Dec 18

Darken the shading and blur it. Make sure you're using the pencil tool when you're drawing on the lineart for the torn ear, as right now some of the pixels are semi-transparent. llwildheartl01:22 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded I did use the pencil, but I erased some of the ear off first. That's probably why. Sweetflower18:56 Tue Dec 20

Darn it. I was hoping to get this once Bluestar's kit alt. I'm working on was approved, but, oh well. Anyways, this looks a little too gray, with not enough blue, to me. Bluestar11796 19:02, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe I wanted it too, so as soon as Frostfur's loner was approved I quick reserved it. I colour picked off one of her other image, so I'm not comfortable about changing it. Sweetflower19:12 Tue Dec 20

Define/Add shading to the farthest back leg. It is in the apprentice tutorial shading placement. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:37, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is the artist's choice, as long as it makes sense and there is a definite light source. Plus, I'm pretty sure there are other tutorials that show the shading a different way. I don't see anything wrong with the shading, except fo the fact that the the neck shading looks too black. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤4:29 AM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Oh, add depth to the eyes. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤4:31 AM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Add shading to the back leg farthest away from us. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:18, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

There is depth in the eyes, plus it's my choice anyways, and the shading placement is my choice, and it's fine. Sweetflower17:19 Wed Dec 21

Can you try to match the nose color with the other images? It just looks a little bit off to me.a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:54, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It is off her leader image. So I don't intend to change it.Sweetflower21:49 Fri Dec 23

Blur the smudged earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D23:47, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

I don't blur apprentice earpink, only smudge. :3 Sweetflower01:29 Sat Dec 24

Sweetflower, I know you don't blur the earpink but it needs to be blurred, at least just a little. You can't blur by smudging of smudge by blurring. ;) Also, darken the shading on the hindleg farthest to us, and maybe lighten the shading on the flank just a tad. This is lovely. :3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    22:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I caved. :D Just for you Stoneh! :P Sweetflower03:11 Mon Dec 26

Make the highlight/lighter bit bigger on the face, and make all the highlights/lighter bits brighter. Also, make the belly completely shaded, chest and back foot farthest from us. And blur the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:38, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done. I re-did her, she looked awful. Sweetflower17:41 Wed Dec 28

I don't think changed are showing. Sweetflower17:45 Wed Dec 28

Define the shading. I like this one. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:55, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

(Just wondering) Can you see the changes? 'Caus eI can't. Sweetflower02:15 Thu Dec 29

I think I can. thicken the lineart on the ear, and either add or brighten the highlights so it matched the leader image. Also, make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:41, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think you can see it Paleh! Sweetflower18:55 Thu Dec 29

It's been 20 days, I think it's time this was CBA'd ._. oblivionAudience? 23:49, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be a nitpicker, but the slit in her ear needs to be sharper and the shading needs to be blurred more and darkened a tad. llwildheartl10:52 Fri Dec 30

Re-uploaded. Nah, it's ok Wildheart. Sweetflower17:12 Fri Dec 30

Restarting CBA. oblivionAudience? 22:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

O.e Ugh...So sorry but the highlights still need to be brightened a lot, on the leader image, they are like...silver. Bluestar is hard to do, I know, I tried tweaking the warrior version but I failed.... -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

o.e I don't use highlights. But if I have to add them I will.Sweetflower19:48 Sat Dec 31

I agree with Stoney. You either need to add highlights or lighten the base colour a bunch and keep the shading at the same opacity it is now. llwildheartl22:09 Sun Jan 1

Re-uploaded *Sigh* I didn't want to mess around with highlights, so I lightened the base colour. Sweetflower02:18 Mon Jan 2

Still needs to be a bunch lighter. Check the leader image for reference. llwildheartl02:01 Tue Jan 3

Re-uploaded. Sweetflower02:39 Tue Jan 3

Fix the nose, the shading placement looks off too. Icewish 20:39, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

The nose if fine, and the shading placement is my choice. Sweetflower01:36 Wed Jan 4

Make the lineart completely black (not semi-transparent as it is now), blur the shading, and darken it. Make sure the shading extends to the lineart on the places where there aren't supposed to be "highlights". llwildheartl01:44 Wed Jan 4 Re-uploADED. Sweetflower02:10 Wed Jan 4

The blue seems too blue. Try to match it with her other images. Nice job! a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:54, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded. Sorry for the wait y'all. Sweetflower19:21 Thu Jan 5

Blur shadings A LOT LeafyAbsolute maniac 19:26, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Check the file page, changes aren't showing. Sweetflower19:34 Thu Jan 5

Blur the shading still. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

00:45, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sweetflower02:44 Sat Jan 7

The light source doesn't quite make sense. Fill the top of the haunch with shading and make a highlight in the middle of the back, add shading under the head and remove the light from her belly. Or if it's coming from eye-level from the front, move the tail highlight down. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:38, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

And add another layer for the darker shading. llwildheartl04:39 Sat Jan 7

o.e Ok, I tried to copy the apprentice tutorials, and I don't use highlights. I can tell this won't be approved by Monday, so I'm withdrawing.

May I take over, Sweet? Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 18:05, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Forgot to sign up there. And yeah, it's all your 'Teldy. (: Sweetflower18:26 Sat Jan 7

I changed the heading if you don't mind. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 20:02, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

If Bluestar's leader image will be tweaked to make it less purple, then won't this need to be redone? Chez

Hopefully not. Reuploaded. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 03:52, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Well since they're being redone anyways, might as well start with this one. Maybe take the color from Mistystar's image? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:45, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 23:48, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Looks great! =D  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:25, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. x3 Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 22:54, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? llwildheartl02:49 Mon Jan 16

Sorry but can you darken it a bit to match the leader and make the tear on the other side? PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 16:26, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 20:18, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think Bluestar's been long enough without an apprentice image. CBA? :3 PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 16:14, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

I hate to interrput even though it's been 24 hours, but the ear needs to come down a little like it is on the leader...please don't kill me x.x Iveh Yo! 03:40, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face--Acornleaf 21:02, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is fine on the face... Sweetflower00:57 Sat Jan 21

Reuploaded. Hmm...now where did I put your address....x3 Kidding <3 Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 04:55, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. o3o PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 00:11, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:00, January 25, 2012 (UTC)


Dustpelt (A) - Approved

Dustpelt.apprenticeWell i dont like it much.. LeafyAbsolute maniac,12:18,January 14,2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Ivyheart =P 16:24, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:40,January 14,2012 (UTC)

Wow! Excellent job in matching it, Leaf! I'm amazed at how well this looks. As I've said before, I love your tabbies. <3 The only thing I can think of right now is to lighten up the shading on the belly. I don't think it should be that dark. Vakarian  21:34, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you! Reuploaded. LeafyAbsolute maniac,22:25,January 14,2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. I love this<3 Leggo 🏈 18:31, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

This is awesome! Can you darken his nose pink?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:04, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,22:09,January 16,2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the belly shading a bit. Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 23:18, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,15:37,January 17,2012 (UTC)

Also, is there a stripe on that belly? If so, define it ^^ Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 14:32, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah there is one, reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,19:50,January 18,2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the earpink a bit more? Ivyheart =P 05:38, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,18:34,January 21,2012 (UTC)

Could you take the earpink from the warrior? I can't see anything else wrong. Lovely job Leaf. ^^ PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 19:05, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm it's taken..but i make it agin... LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:14,January 22,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:18,January 22,2012 (UTC)

Lovely, Leafy! CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:16, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:19, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (alt.A) ~ Approved

Feathertail.apprentice.alt Its kind of sloppy... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:04, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:18, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:21, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it some more. Breezewhisker 03:53, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Does she have a pink nose or am I going blind? Ivyheart =P 06:12, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I would say you are, but yeah, it's pink. Since she wasn't mentioned with a pink one, it should probably be grey. ^^ Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 10:35, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur ze highlights.. xD --Cinder Real or Not Real? 23:25, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:15, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on both of her legs that are the farthest away from us (if that makes sense o3o).  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:19, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Ivyheart =P 05:34, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Along with Ivy's comment, blur the haunch shading. Raineh Has returned :D 06:07, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back "highlight." --Cinder Real or Not Real? 16:38, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Blurred to the limit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:50, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 19:49, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

12 hours. Shelly For a limited time only 14:57, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Tinycloud (A) - Approved

Tinycloud.apprenticeComments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 16:24, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! 8D Lighten the whole thing a bit, and darken the earpink. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 16:33, January 19, 2012 (UTC)


Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 16:45, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit? And I also think that one of the earpinks is a different colour than the other. o.o Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 21:05, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:29, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Fill the entire ear with earpink and smudge the pelt into the ear. Otherwise, you did a great job. <3

ThistleshineThe name's Thistleshine... but you can call me Thistle.

It is Thistle... Anyways, lighten the head highlight/thin the shading and I think this'll be perfect. <3 ^^ PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 16:36, January 20, 2012 (UTC)


Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:24, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Lessen the tail shading Ivyheart =P 05:41, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:26, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

This is good but it still doesn't look like a white cat, just a light gray cat. Is there any way you can fix that? Raineh Has returned :D 06:05, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I agree. I think you can fix that by using overlay with white on photoshop. Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 20:03, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:11, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 23:02, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

12 hours. Shelly For a limited time only 14:58, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (A) ~ Approved

Nettlesplash.apprenticeFinally posted it. ♫Purplemoon♪ Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons! 13:57, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm lighten the shadings please :) LeafyAbsolute maniac,18:35,January 21,2012 (UTC)

Define the near the end of the tail shading. Sweetflower19:16 Sat Jan 21

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons! 19:27, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the flank shading. Sweetflower19:33 Sat Jan 21

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons! 19:40, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:41, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons! 19:53, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the belly shading. Silverhmm 20:57, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

And the right back paw shading. (The one you can barely see.) Sweetflower21:10 Sat Jan 21

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons! 21:16, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Very nice! I suggest defining the tail shading, but other than that, perfect. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 8:08, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the face shading. Sweetflower22:19 Sun Jan 22

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons! 12:24, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 23:00, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

12 hours. Shelly For a limited time only 14:59, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyfern (A) ~ Approved

Honeyfern.apprenticeNot many more apprentices left. ;.; All of the colors are from the warrior. This will take forever *dies* Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:27, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think her stripes should be just a tad bit darker to match her warrior image, but I can't tell. >.< Cute! Mistypebble 15:49, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Misty :D Yeah, I think you're right.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:28, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

This is so pretty!!! Darken the shading just a tad. Raineh Has returned :D 06:02, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you R-face :D  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:21, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink and make the light on the back a bit larger. Very pretty, Mountain! ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:20, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Scarlet :D Sorry this took forever XP  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:07, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 04:37, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 06:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Alt. W) ~ Approved

Poppydawn.warrior.altHere she is! I won't darken the shading, that's the only thing I won't do. I already lightened the highlights, by the way. Comments? Icewish 14:11, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give her a graying muzzle? When Bluefur notices her, she said her muzzle had been graying for a while. Do not color-pick off mine as I need to lower the opacity. Iveh Yo! 17:27, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, I can't blur the graying muzzle so... Icewish 17:50, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Why won't you darken the shading? I personally think it needs to be darkened, but if you absolutely refuse, brighten the highlights more. Also, blur and center the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 18:12, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger too please. Sweetflower22:09 Sat Jan 14

Define the depth in the eye.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:16, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

You need to work on this or it will be declined Iveh Yo! 03:30, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. anyone can take over. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I will. Sweetflower21:46 Thu Jan 19

Uploaded. Didn't bother making a new section. So yah. Here she is! Sweetflower22:17 Thu Jan 19

Blur the shading and the earpink. --Leafstrike-- 02:08, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Shading is fine. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:09, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste on the top of the image. Awesome work my newly graduated apprentice 8) Iveh Yo! 02:22, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light part of the tail. Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 20:13, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded. Thanks my magnificent mentor 8D Sweetflower01:32 Sat Jan 21

Define the ear-pink ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:36, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Oops. Forgot to say Re-uploaded yesterday. Sweetflower17:27 Mon Jan 23

CBA? Iveh Yo! 04:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 06:33, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Alt. A) ~ Approved

Lionblaze.apprentice.alt Okay, before anyone bickers, he was described as Orange as an apprentice. Any way, comments for improvement? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 17:33, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make it match the warrior charart and dull the ear pink and smudge it into the ear. Blur the stripes and make them piontier. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 17:35, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sand, it doesn't need to match the warrior charart. If anything, make it look more orange, and less golden. Beautiful. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 17:37, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 17:48, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The paws look yellow.. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:00, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 20:21, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The whole image seems to bright/yellow. Desaturate the image a tad and make it have a slightly more orange hue. Also, sumdge the pelt into the earpink a tad more.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    20:25, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 00:51, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make it more orange, blur/smudge the stripes, and lower the highlights or darken the shading. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:55, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love the smudge tool. Any way, comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 01:36, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, Rainy! Blur the ear-pink abit. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Maple. So happy for the smudge tool to be there. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 01:55, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

---> This eye (at the top) looks pink-ish tinted. It might be my conputer, but could you make them more orange. Sweetflower03:25 Mon Dec 26

It's the same as the warrior image. I'll change it if someone agrees to it. PRESENT TIME! Give me them! 04:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree with Sweet on this. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 07:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably your screens. It's not pink. It's amber. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 19:04, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Agreeing with Twi here, its fine. Can you make the tear in his ear go a bit deeper? I know its supposed to look the warrior image, but right now it looks odd. Mistypebble 21:24, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Like the pixil closest to the white pupil thing it pink tinted, it really looks like it's pinky/orange. Sweetflower21:31 Mon Dec 26

I opened it up on Pixlr and zoomed in, its fine in my opinion. Mistypebble 22:19, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? RainheartHaunts you 03:44, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think I did this one when I just joined PCA, and it got declined. Shouldn't this be declined as well? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 17:20, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't have an image with the old blanks. Do you have a quote from when he was described? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:12, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Well, maybe after it was declined, they deleted the file, then Rainy posted it back up. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:17, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

But wouldn't it have a delete log on it? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:19, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Well the same thing happened with a lot of alts, including Bluestar's. Sometimes as the members change, our opinions change I guess. If pale ginger (sandstorm) is different from orange, golden is too, so I think this should stay. Make him a bit brighter. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ya, a friend told me to say that if someone tried to get it declined. RainheartHaunts you 04:59, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink slightly and make the torn ear follow the line of the back of the ear more, if that makes any sense. Just make sure the left side of the torn ear doesn't flip back unnaturally. llwildheartl22:36 Sun Jan 1

Re-uploaded. Comments? RainheartHaunts you 22:57, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the lineart on the back of the torn ear longer? Now it kinda looks like the top of his ear was chopped off XD llwildheartl02:09 Tue Jan 3

Re-uploaded. Comments? RainheartHaunts you 21:28, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and darken the shading a bit. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:50, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I made it worse! Comments? RainheartHaunts you 03:43, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten it some, it looks pretty close to golden right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:47, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes not that noticeable. RainheartHaunts you 19:18, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the stripes and brighten the ear-pink. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:14, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? RainheartHaunts you 19:31, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Connect a few stripes and maybe add some more stripes.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:30, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? RainheartlegsHaunts you 02:33, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Where's the torn ear? x3 ___Leafy 14:28, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

According to what was said on Tigerheart's apprentice, the stries should match the warrior. :S Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 22:18, January 17, 2012 (UTC) Never mind

Darken the shading a little.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:06, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes seem to have a purplish tint to them.. Or is that just me? XD Make them more orangish. Mistypebble 23:05, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing but what i will say is that the shading and stripes are the right. Also, i bring up Sandstorm alt warrior image, it doesn't look like the original warrior. Raineh Has returned :D 19:26, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the lovely shading :3! Sweetflower22:17 Thu Jan 19

Re-uploaded. Raineh Has returned :D 20:24, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

This will sound stupid but it looks like he has a uni-brow maybe make the stripes like this cat. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:08, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Raineh Has returned :D 03:23, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes on the haunch right now are kind of... idk weird? I think they need to be pointing down to the left some more 'cause right now they look like they're going straight across his body... which doesn't make much sense :P llwildheartl04:39 Sat Jan 21

I'm not sure. I respect your opinion but if you were to sit this image upright, the stripes would be pretty even. Raineh Has returned :D 19:45, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes look find on the haunch, and since this is almost at the 1 month limit, and I think it's pretty much ready, CBA? PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 20:02, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry to interrupt CBA but I really do think that the stripes need to be tilted down more. The hind leg is stretched down, not compressed up, so the stripes should be stretched with the body, not compressed into basically flat lines. llwildheartl01:59 Wed Jan 25

Listen, they are slanted. And even Paleh agrees they are fine. I don't want to argue and this is reaching the one month mark and i don't have much time to redo them any way. They are slanted down, and they would match up if you sat him upright like i have said before. Raineh Has returned :D 19:13, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yup, from what I can tell, she's right. If he were sitting down they're look just fine, and I've seen cats with stripes going right across their legs. So unless someone else disagrees too, continuing CBA. Paleggy Ship it 22:39, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:02, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Longtail (A) - Approved

Longtail.apprentice I hate this image. I hate this image so much. X.X Oh well. Guess that's what the PCA's here for. If Russetfur gets one, Longtail gets one. :P Comments? PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 16:45, January 17, 2012 (UTC)


Psssh I love this <3 can you darken his shading?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:54, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tad more visible. Silverhmm 00:23, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Why do you hate this image? It's lovely, just smudge the stripes a tad. Dazzy 08:26, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the main pelt color. It needs to be pale.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:12, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes sharper and a little more jagged like his other images. --Leafstrike-- 03:57, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Did all those things and had to redo the stripes with a pencil tool. don't tell me to blur the stripes, cause they're as blurred as they are on his elder. If I blur at even 1% rate they get too blurred. Gah, I really do hate this image. I shouldn't have done it, but since I have it up already... :P PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪15:19, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the haunch and define the light on the back ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:28, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Great job! I really like it. My only concern is that I think the earpink is a tad too smudged into the pelt. It looks farther than it should be. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 18:45, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I could have sworn I reuploaded this. 0.o Well anyways, the earpink's this smudged in on other chararts, even more on some, so I'm gonna keep it like this unless someone else thinks I should change it too. Paleggy Ship it 22:07, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Looks fine to me, CBA? Iveh Yo! 06:32, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. llwildheartl01:52 Sun Jan 29

Tigerheart (Alt A) - Approved

Tigerheart.apprentice.alt Comments? Ivyheart =P 06:31, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. :) make him a little less green, and I think the alt should have tiger-stripes to, though I'm not completely sure. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 08:13, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! Nah, I don't think he needs tiger-stripes, though if someone disagrees with me I'd be fine with changing it. Ivyheart =P 15:55, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Make it a bit more yellow.Smudge the stripes around the haunch a bit more evenly. Nice job. ^.^ ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:33, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just a tad. Lovely, Ivy!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:18, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely, but it's supposed to match the warrior version D: llwildheartl02:36 Mon Jan 16

Reuploaded. I gave it a shot. =3 Ivyheart =P 05:30, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I meant the warrior golden alt *dies* sorry llwildheartl05:33 Wed Jan 18

I tried redoing it to match the warrior alt, but honestly it looked terrible and it was basically a triangle tabby and we are redoing those anyways. Could I possibly just use my own design? Ivyheart =P 01:47, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, sure. Run with it. llwildheartl07:05 Sun Jan 22

Oi, den make it less green and moar yellow. :P Sky Watchu want? 23:52, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Well even if the warrior alt wasn't a triangle tabby (which it is) it'd have to be redone to be tiger-stripes, so you're fine with this. But could you make the colors maybe match a bit better? PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 00:04, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Ivy? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:15, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. Will be uploaded ASAP. Ivyheart =P 00:25, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't know what you meant by make it match more, though Ivyheart =P 00:29, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

To be honest, his warrior alt is a triangle and would benefit from having this stripe pattern instead. I'm gonna go ahead and CBA this Iveh Yo! 06:35, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. llwildheartl01:56 Sun Jan 29

Smokepaw (A) ~ Approved

Smokepaw.apprentice A space?! Do my eyes decieve me?? :O Mistypebble 00:38, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading Silverhmm 00:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. Mistypebble 20:05, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Defien the tail shading, and add some shading to the belly. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:12, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Reuploaded The belly already had shading, so I just defined it along with the tail shading. Mistypebble 02:34, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading and smudge the earpink into the ear more. llwildheartl00:50 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded Darkened/defined the shading.. I can never seem to get the earpink right... But I smudged/blurred it too. Mistypebble 19:28, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the stomach so it matches the rest of the shading. llwildheartl22:44 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded Darkened the stomach shading. Mistypebble 02:44, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stomach shading more consistent or add a little patch of "highlights", whichever you prefer. llwildheartl02:14 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded I kind of redid it, since I didn't like the old version of mine. xP Mistypebble 01:31, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and/or define it. Great job Misty! ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:19, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. Thanks DJ! Mistypebble 22:22, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more around the shoulders and head. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:53, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Does this look good? Mistypebble 15:32, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading on the belly and then define the shading, maily on the head and the cat's left frony leg. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:46, Wed, Jan, 11, 2012

Redden the earpink and lighten the base coat just a bit. It looks almost black right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:50, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Had to redo it again since I lost the layers. -_- Mistypebble 01:38, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, otherwise, wonderful job. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 20:21, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded This good? Mistypebble 22:08, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading between the haunch and the shoulder. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:37, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Umm.. Is this what you meant?? Mistypebble 22:40, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I would make the eyes a bit lighter. That's how I imagine Smokepaw. -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 22:52, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Since he wasn't described like that, and eye style is artists choice, I'm going to keep it like this but if anyone else agrees, I'll change him. Mistypebble 14:37, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

They look brown to me and if I'm not mistaken, cats don't have brown eyes. If you're going for amber, this is too dark. Lighten them a little ^^ Iveh Yo! 01:41, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, well I got them off of Owlstar.. But I'll change them anyways. Mistypebble 02:30, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Felt like making them green. x3 Mistypebble 22:18, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the shoulder and belly a bit more . ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:03, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:42, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the light on shoulder and belly and defined the shading on the tail. Mistypebble 22:13, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Mmmmm looks good. ^^ CBA? Paleggy Ship it 15:10, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:41, January 29, 2012 (UTC)



Sparrowpelt (SC) (A) - Approved

Sparrowpelt (SC).apprenticeToadstar's reservation ran out, so this is mine now. Took all the colors from his warrior that I redid. Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 17:31, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I really like it~ ^^ I suggest defining the shading on the haunch and face, but other than that, lovely. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 18:04, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also darken the nose color a smidge? This is lovely. =3 Leggo 🏈 02:59, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:22, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:04, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but there's a little bit of waste by the dip in his back, I just noticed that. When you fix it CBA can be continued without restarting it Iveh Yo! 04:51, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Continuing CBA ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:05, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:55, January 30, 2012 (UTC)


Raggedstar (Ki) ~ Approved

Raggedstar.kitI'm not really sure about this. It says on his page that he specifically got his patchy fur from fighting as a kit. I think that should qualify for a kit version. If he shouldn't have one then someone can decline this. Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:48, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

If that whole apprentice-thing is going on, I think this might qualify for a charart. If so, can you make the earpink on our right a little bigger to match the other one? Ivyheart =P 06:09, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:13, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Wow. This looks amazing. CBA? Leggo 🏈 23:36, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but can you center the earpink more and make it a tad bit smaller to fill the ear? Mistypebble 05:03, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:16, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Since that was so minor, I'm continuing CBA Iveh Yo! 17:00, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:55, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Loner Blanks ~ Approved

Loner Blank Short MaleLoner Blank Short FemaleLoner Blank Long MaleLoner Blank Long FemaleOk, what I'm going to do is, post the short haired male for now. Once that gets approved, make it longhaired and post that. Then, when that get's approved, I'll post all of the blanks and have a sort of final comments thing. This will make it easier for people to comment (hopefully) Better to take it slow right? XS So anyway, comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:43, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the tail curve up or down; it looks kinda unnatural just stuck straight up like that. Make a line of pixels from the back of the ear down to define the head and maybe bring the lines of the muscle on the back of the shoulder and the front of the haunch up more. (i.e. extend them) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:45, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded How is this?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:16, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Add whiskers? :3 llwildheartl06:42 Sun Jan 22

Re-uploaded Whiskers are sexy. X3  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:46, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

This is gonna be kinda hard to explain.... oh boy. XD Well, first off the shoulder bone that's sticking up should be on the other side of the body. If you think about it, since he's standing on the far front leg, that shoulder would be push up more. Since the one closest is being stretched out, you wouldn't be able to see the shoulder really at all. And the haunch shouldn't have anything sticking up at the top. It just kinda molds together with the rest of the rump, no bumps. Also, cats tend to have spines and bellies that curve upwards. The belly doesn't taper like a dog's. And on the back leg, that little bit that sticks out, you know, right below the tail? Should be a lot shorter. here's a good reference. It's a kit, yes, but it should help with what the basic anatomy should look like. Also, could you make the neck shorter, and maybe make him look up a bit more? He looks kinda sad. He wouldn't be looking down while walking probably, so it'd probably be more realistic looking forward too. The haunch should also be a bit fatter and go farther down. *can redline if necessary but I don't want to give it where it's not wanted* PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 09:10, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Paleclaw makes good critiques. X3 Tell me if you need a redlining. First thing I have to say, is that when you look at a cat, its body is sleek and streamline. In all honesty, yours looks almost more like a dog. A cat's back, like Paley said, slowly slopes upwards. I doesn't make that dip like you put into yours. Besides making the neck shorter, could you also move the head up a tad. I don't think I've ever seen a cat walk with its head that far down. Maybe make it level with the body? The entire front leg needs to be moved down and shortened. And when you redo the back legs, make sure to line up the front elbow and the knee. Besides what Paley said, you put an extra joint in the in them - they should just end with the paw. The legs on the other side need a little work, too, but it'll be easier to tell what once the front are done. Ugh, I need a link, but I can' find anything that doesn't tell me everywhere not to reuse. >.> Breezewhisker 15:21, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm an anatomy fail >.< There's waste, I'll erase it eventually x.x I redid the back legs, I changed the position of the head, changed the shape of the eyes, made the back curve up, and made the neck and tail shorter. But before I change the front legs, should I make the extended leg be lifted up? No redline yet, I wanna see how far I can go with this (or how long my sanity lasts).  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:08, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I thought I might as well give these for refrence 1 <--that one has a good paw refrence I guess this one--> 2 is just good to look at and has good ears tail and whatever and finally this--> 3 shows the muscle and shoulder. Dip the tail more and make it longer--WildfireMistystar's Omen! 20:00, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the extended paw lifted up and I made the tail longer. I'm not really sure how I should change the shoulder or the ears.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  21:41, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

There are some gray lines by the stomach. Silverhmm 22:15, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think I got all of the waste now.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  22:25, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, personally I'd prefer it if all the blanks were here to make it easier to compare them for consistency. Also, still personal, but could you bring the head up so the cat isn't looking at the ground? It doesn't need to be staring straight ahead, but I like to think that loners (Well, Ravenpaw and Barley at least) can have as much dignity as warriors. Shelly For a limited time only 23:08, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I don't mind the head in a low-slung, cautious stalk position, but this uber-humble ground-staring the blank is doing should stop ;) make it prouder, so that he's either hunting or moving with purpose, not slinking along not even watching to prevent something from eating him! Also, the proportion of leg-length to body-length is... well... off. Cats a long-bodied, low-slung animals. The proportions you've got are much more canine. This image demonstrates what I'm talking about in the proportions. I'm guessing you're more used to drawing dogs (just based on the anatomy choices you're making), and the transition is hard (I've been working on learning cats for years, they're just difficult to draw, IMO). The tail set is much better than it was on the original, but I think shortening it was a mistake. It's simply too short in proportion to the body now to represent the "average" cat tail. Overall, nice work. Replacement Blanks are the hardest to work on because they've got to be perfect to justify replacing the one that was.  Kitsufox  Den/CoSC 23:48, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded To be completely honest, I don't really think I'll be able to edit two images at a time and keep them consistent. I will upload all four after 24 hours of no comments. I fixed his head so he isn't searching for four-leafed clovers now :3 I also made the legs shorter and thinner. I left the eye blank. And I made the tail a bit longer. Sorry it took so long X.x  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:10, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like it has two shoulders on one side, and the leg is not in line with it. Make sure the leg doesn't look awkward. Qway 04:40, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:11, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the forepaw closest to us longer; it looks like it was shrunken. Define a bend in the paw more, then make the paw itself longer. Dazzy 10:19, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make it's front right front paw droop. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:05, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I is so lazy >.<  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:35, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe add one more whisker. Ah, wonderful, Mountain, and the anatomy is good, you're good anatomy. =P -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:07, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Daww Thank you so much Stoney 8D  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:13, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! ^^ I think you should get rid of the shoulder line closest to us, from what I've seen of cats in this position, you wouldn't be able to see it. Just the far side. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 02:53, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Paleh :D Since no one has suggested any major lineart changes I'm going to upload all four now.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:02, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Shorten the far legs so it doesn't look like they're walking on tightropes, and get rid of that extra joint you will have in the hind leg - smooth it out or something please. Also, round off the tops of the paw on the far front leg. Breezewhisker 03:05, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

To me, if it's going to be hunting, the ears should be perked to pin point their prey. Also, the neck just seems weird to me. I always though of cats having their neck and head making a strait line, or maybe neck pointed down and head looking strait ahead, kind of like this picture here: [1] --Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 03:28, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I wasn't really imagining it hunting, just walking. I changed the neck but I'm not really certain about the ears. If someone else agrees that I should change them, I will.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:44, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yay Longhairs! Gaah! Why am I so lazy?!?! >.<  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:55, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Derps I forgot to fix the joints before x.x  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:04, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *headdesk*  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:13, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you possibly curve the paw a tad more? Silverhmm 13:13, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

the change in the position of the head is very nice. It's good that those four-leaf clovers are safe again ;) Then, I'm going to talk about the points of it I consider "weird" again. I'm not going to tell you how to fix them, just what to consider as you work forward. Nitpicking and telling you what I think will fix it isn't going to help you any. *cough* The points i've got for you are the hips, and how those connect to the tail and the legs. There's something off there, and I think it's because you've drawn doggy hips on the kitty. I'm not exactly sure, but it might be as simple as where the tail is set on the hips. I suggest playing with it. The next point is the front shoulders. That whole near-side foreleg just looks off. I know people have been picking at it and telling you to adjust it, but stop listening to them, take it off and redraw it. It's only gotten worse since you started on their incremental fixes. Part of the issue might be that you've take bad advice (putting the bend in the paw so it's rolled under even though the cat's at the part of the step where he's reaching forward to lay his paw down). To aid in forward progress, I present you with some refs: [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] In the future, if a change makes the blank worse, or you know it's going to make it worse rather than better, just don't do it and state why. This is Crit, not a demand session. You're the artist, in the end it's your job to make the blank perfect. Not listen to every nitpick regardless of how useful it actually is to the final image.  Kitsufox  Den/CoSC 14:21, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

This is just for the long-haireds. Cats' fur kind of comes at a cowlick (lack of better words) on their chest and I feel they would benefit from having their fur go in a realistic way. Iveh Yo! 19:16, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm really sorry this took so long x.x School 'n stuff I think I fixed it. I know I'm more familiar drawing dogs than cats. I think that's why I was changing everything people told me to change.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:31, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Have faith in yourself ;) and use refs if that's what it takes to have it. I'll make actual comments later.  Kitsufox  Den/CoSC 02:41, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

These are lookin' very nice, Mountain! Here's a fairly good canine vs. feline anatomy tutorial if you need some help with those back legs: Here. The main thing I see is that your hocks are still too far up on the leg. Both the femur and whatever the heck it's called, the bone between the knee and the hock, are almost the same length. Also, the back looks oddly flat and straight. Though by no means should the back dip like a horse's, I'd add a little big of roundness to the haunch area. Also, the front leg on the ground looks stiff. I think moving it back a tad will help, so that it looks more like the bone connecting the elbow to the shoulder is there. As it is, you have the leg directly below the shoulder, and that doesn't really happen. Also, show the cat's ribcage a little on the belly. Don't make it tuck up like a canine's, but right now it's a straight line - give it slightly more shape and roundness. Help it show how a cat's skin connects with the legs. Also, don't touch the closest shoulder anymore. And if you're gonna have the front leg extended, I'd think you need to drop the elbow a small amount and smooth out the "wrist" joint. Maybe drop the head also? So that the spine is sorta level. What you have is okay-correct, but I just think that it would help with the slinking look. I'm sorry if I'm repeating anybody else's critiques, but I merely skimmed them. XD Breezewhisker 03:16, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I must be the lamest person ever *had to go look up what a hock was* -_- Anyway I'm pretty sure I fixed it. Thank you so much for that tutorial Breezy! ^^ It helped me alot. Now, I took Kit's advice and changed things on my own accord. I moved the belly down a little and added some fluffy part to the side of the face. I changed the position of the shoulder and front leg farthest away. There might be waste but I'll remove it after 24 hours of no comments. I'm really really sorry this took so long D'X finals are coming up and I needed to redo the longhairs. I'm terribly sorry guys.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:55, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Feel free to disagree, I suck with cat anatomy, but perhaps made the hock on the cat's left hind leg slightly more pointier. Maybe make the shoulder not as close to the upper arm or back (I am so dumb I can't even tell where it's coming from). Maybe make the image slightly more like this one (exept for the tail, back, neck and head). Notice how you can see that it is putting it's weight onto its left front leg. Define that by bringing the paw forward more. and bring the cat's right hind leg closer to the ground like it's walking. Maybe make the part where the earpink/pelt will meet closer to the edge of the ear. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D08:16, Thu, Jan, 26, 2012

Actually, on most cats (not all) the hock is fairly rounded and soft from what I've seen. I think that part's fine. But could you thicken the lineart on the floofy parts a bit and make it more.... fur like, and less uniform and spiky? I luff this so much. <3 Paleggy Ship it 23:00, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Gaaaawww *feels warm and fuzzy* Thank you Paleh 8D  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:40, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Maybe make the neck and belly fur on the longhairs hang down a bit more. It looks a bit too sleek/well groomed 'cause it all flows this way <-- a bit too smoothly. Also, maybe make the forepaw that's lifted curl back a touch and make the shoulder line a bit smaller and maybe a bit sharper (since loner's aren't fed as well as warriors, they might not look as healthy and strong) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:14, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D Yay weekend! Now have have time to work on this >.< Anyway, I think I fixed the shoulder o.e Thank you so much Scarlet <3  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:42, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lol Sorry. I didn't think calling them ankles sounded quite right. XD Either way, the hock on the far hind legs is still to high up. Also, could you move that far foreleg back? In a walking position, the leg isn't directly below the shoulder. There's a bend. Breezewhisker 05:02, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the back legs equal size now (I think) and I made the far foreleg bent.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:09, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste underneath the shorthair's chins. These are beautiful. Would it be premature to CBA these after you remove the waste or.... llwildheartl06:48 Sat Jan 28

I'll remove all the waste and crop these now ;3  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:55, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mmkay, I think I got rid of all the waste. I also filled in missing pixels and cropped.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  07:26, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome. These are beautiful. CBA? llwildheartl07:57 Sat Jan 28

I hate to interrupt the CBA, but if I don't ask for it to be fixed now it'll bug me forever. xD So could you make the tail fur on the longhaired blanks less spiky and thicken the lineart there? Paleggy Ship it 09:44, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It's alright Paleh ;) I needed to fill in some missing pixels on the them anyway.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  15:03, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 8D Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 23:15, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but I think the shoulder line should be a bit smaller and maybe thin the lineart by a pixel or two. Their heads also look a bit small compared to their bodies, but that might just be me. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:10, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aww =( was excited to start making chararts. I changed the shoulder but not the head. I think it looks fine. I think the shoulder looks too thin now though.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:12, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I wasn't exactly clear. I meant, sorta thin out the ends but the two/three pixel thickness towards the middle of the shoulder crease could stay. I'll stop rambling now.... ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 06:14, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:26, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Repearting 24 hours again? XD Paleggy Ship it 06:41, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Elo told me on chat that the front far leg looked too stiff.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:21, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Let's try for a CBA again. I'm really excited to do Fleck again Iveh Yo! 17:02, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry but the belly fur on the longhairs is going to bother me, could you maybe make it more 'shaggy' or seperate them more? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:35, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

It looks fine as it is. Continuing CBA. Shelly For a limited time only 21:37, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, this is gonna make the peeps scramble, but this is overdue since technically we never went off the 12 hour system of CBA. XD Approved! Shelly For a limited time only 15:08, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Loudbelly (A) - Approved

Loudbelly.apprentice Posting this for Brightstripes bause she can't edit the page yet. -ScarletwindLisanna 13:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading a tad. Ivyheart =P 18:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink to give it a bit more of a realistic look. Vakarian  18:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the "highlight" on the haunch and shoulder a bit bigger. Featherwillow Hmmm... HOHOHO!!! ✤✤ 21:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it;s making her look black almost. Sweetflower17:26 Sat Dec 17

Are you still working on this? And Sweet, Loudbelly is a boy =p Iveh Yo! 16:44, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a bit. Grell No question at all! 18:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It has been 8 days since this has been worked on. Declined. Somebody may take this over if they don't have two apprentice projects Iveh Yo! 18:57, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could I take over? Birdpaw got declined, so i dont know :l. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:26, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

No need to ask, just reserve it before someone else Iveh Yo! 19:28, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm taking over. It'll be reuploaded today or tomorrow. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the earpink and shading. Highlights were hard, though, because I don't use them. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:58, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading please, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. Sweetflower02:53 Sun Dec 25

He has waste between the whiskers and smudged lineart on both of the ears. Mistypebble 21:31, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, not just the shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 09:43, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? It's been five days. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 01:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it really? it always fails for me. I added transperency.... I hope >.< ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 21:30, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. oblivionAudience? 22:45, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I actually quite like this. I lightened the shading and smudged and blurred the earpink which i hadn't done before. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 20:31, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 22:11, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'd suggest taking a look at the apprentice tutorials for shading placement as right now I don't really understand where your light source is. llwildheartl22:14 Sun Jan 1

The lineart is blurred/smudged. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:15, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Define and blur the shading a lot, and I'm not sure, but I think there's waste around the lineart. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:29, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:42, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Its been 9 days since the last upload; declined, or withdrawn...? I changed the heading to withdrawn... Anyone can take over. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:20, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:36, Wed, Jan, 11, 2012

Uploaded - Boring solids. Changes aren't showing. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:59, Thu, Jan, 12, 2012

The eyes look...purple...if the one showing is the current version. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:03, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes are purple. Lighten the neck/head and flank shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ... No opinion on this image. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:23, Tue, Jan, 17, 2012

Define the tail shading or lighten the rest of the shading.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:08, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I did both. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:50, Wed, Jan, 18, 2012

Lighten the belly shading and neck shading. Sweetflower21:46 Wed Jan 18

lighten the shading a bit--Acornleaf 22:31, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the front hind leg shading a bit. Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 22:35, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:40, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Forgot to say! ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:14, Fri, Jan, 20, 2012

Lighten the neck shading its to dark--Acornleaf 21:04, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D08:00, Sat, Jan, 21, 2012

Make the shading more consistant. There's a random blurred black blob on the back heel, and no shading on the back of the leg or on the top of the hindquarters. Sweetflower20:52 Sat Jan 21

Reuploaded - I just redid the shading. Now it's going to start all over again, the comments I mean. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D03:12, Sun, Jan, 22, 2012

Add earpink or make it so we can see it. Add nosepink. Also the eyes look blurred. Otherwise great job! ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real? 16:07, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Also the eyes shoudl have white pixels. Sky Watchu want? 00:18, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - *facepalm* I forgot to turn on the eye/ear/nose layer. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:39, Mon, Jan, 23, 2012

The dark part of the eye should be on the top of the eye, not the bottom. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:20, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fail. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:46, Wed, Jan, 25, 2012

This is way to dark to be consistent with the other images. --Shelly For a limited time only 15:08, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I can tell there will be another shading issue. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D07:44, Thu, Jan, 26, 2012

Actually, I see nothing wrong, so CBA? Paleggy Ship it 15:11, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry :/ but can you darken the tail and top of the haunch shading to match the face and belly. Sweetflower01:09 Sat Jan 28

Reuploaded - It's okay Sweet. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:49, Sat, Jan, 28, 2012

Darken the shading and define it on the left hind leg ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:13, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I hate this charart more with each second passing. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:14, Sun, Jan, 29, 2012

Looks fine to me. CBAing again. Ivyheart =P 17:17, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. :3 Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 23:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)


Beechfur (RC) (A) ~ Approved

Beechfur (RC).apprentice I love this :3 Second charart, comments? Solids are easy! :3 Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 16:44, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Lighten the back paws shading. (And only remove the color chart if you don't need it) Silverhmm 16:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Stupid me x3 Forgot to remove the color spots. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 16:52, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Again. Cropped image. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 17:24, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a lot and darken the base color LeafyAbsolute maniac,19:24,January 2,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 21:11, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and where the pelt meets the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:14, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dang! I wanted to do this :\ Lighten the shading a lot. And the nose shouldn't be gray. Icewish 12:12, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur shading a lot too, hey Leafy if you want help, just ask. Sorry if...im just trying help LeafyAbsolute maniac,18:34,January 5,2012 (UTC)

The shading should be in the chest, muzzle and stomach aswell, not just around the edge of the image. Also define the depth in the eye. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:31, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

I'm at school I'll try to re-upload when I get home. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 16:16, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded What color should the nose be, then? And I didn't change the shading or the eye because I have read comments before that have said that shading and eye depth is the artist's choice. Sorry if I sound mean. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 21:15, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I blurred the shading, though. And I meant shading placement. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 21:17, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Any comments? Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 15:06, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the paw shading. Sweetflower23:00 Mon Jan 9

Re-uploaded :3 Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 23:23, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, expecially near the bottom and base of the tail. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:58, Wed, Jan, 11, 2012

Lighten the paw shadin' more. Sweetflower21:34 Thu Jan 12

Re-uploaded Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 22:53, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it more, to match the hind quaters' shadin'. Sweetflower23:00 Thu Jan 12

Blur the haunch shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:01, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading because it looks blotchy. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:28, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading LeafyAbsolute maniac,13:56,January 14,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I gave him a makeover <3 I have a feeling someone's gonna ask me to lighten the image :P Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 16:10, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, shadings and match the color,define hightlinks LeafyAbsolute maniac,18:44,January 14,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded And uh... hightlinks? x3 ___Leafy 19:44, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. Hightlinks. xD Anyway, lighten the shading a tad more. Leggo 🏈 05:17, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't think I can lighten it anymore, or it'll look weird :S ___Leafy 21:45, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:07, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Shading looks too dark on belly. Chez

Re-uploaded I think it's just your computer, Cheshire. It looks the same as all the other shading on my computer. ___Leafy 02:18, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, the belly and flank shading should be lightened. Looks great Leafy!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:21, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the highlight bigger on his hind leg..that is if you use highlights. If you don't make the shing darker around his thigh. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 21:58, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

He looks a bit too dark to be described as a light brown cat.. Lighten him. (shading, base color) Mistypebble 22:14, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, the base color is fine, just the lighten the shading to match his warrior image. Mistypebble 00:54, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 22:11, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading less gray. :3 And smudge the pelt into the earpink more. Sweetflower22:23 Wed Jan 18

He looks like he has gray in him and Sweet I don't think it's the shading.. make him brown o3o --Cinder Real or Not Real? 23:18, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Actually I think it might be the shading, but I'm not positive. Can you make the haunch a little less... mottled-looking? Ivyheart =P 02:03, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

The shading appears blue tinted. If you use layers, make sure you check the box in the transparency lock, then make sure you bucket fill the shading black. If you dodge and burn, try using a brush with a high opacity and make sure it's brown and go over the whole thing, minus lineart and anything not brown Iveh Yo! 02:48, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I use layers, yes, and I accidentally made him darker. D: I'll change his once someone critiques (That's how ya spell it, right??) this. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 21:16, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shdaing less gray. I suggest redoning it with a darker colour than the pelt (ie. if he is cream a dark cream). Sweetflower01:13 Sat Jan 21

Wouldn't Beechfur be more: Colour.example this color? He looks darker than his warrior image. I just color picked off his warrior image. I think you should use a color close to this for consistency reasons. Feel free to disagree though. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 16:33, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I may be wrong, but, I think you should lighten the nosepink, as, right now, it's pure black. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:34, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Leafy are you still working on this? --Cinder Real or Not Real? 22:53, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work, anyone with a free project may take over Iveh Yo! 06:39, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over! {{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 15:19, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Well Oakbreeze, youre not a member yet, I think, I have right to take it...others? well...help LeafyAbsolute maniac17:10, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it says non-members can do chararts too and I did ask to join anyway. And comments?{{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 17:50, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I see you already reuploaded Scorchfur, so Im taking this, Redoned to match warrior LeafyAbsolute maniac18:10, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I believe I can take this because I've seen other apprentices being allowed to get 2 images...not trying to cause a fight or anything. {{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 18:17, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

T think this is already over. Its no reason to keep this rule up. LeafyAbsolute maniac18:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Expecially on the cat's left ear at the top, it looks blotchy. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:57, Sat, Jan, 28, 2012

Since Oakbreeze has already taken Scorchfur, it's only fair to let Leafstorm have this one. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:16, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac11:53, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and thicken the shading a bit. llwildheartl02:12 Sun Jan 29

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac19:46, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Is his nose supposed to be gray? Or is it brown right now? --Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:11, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Gray..well i made it brown, reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac17:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for making it brown, brown cats don't have gray noses. CBA? Iveh Yo! 22:26, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 23:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (A) ~ Approved

Brackenfur.apprentice Okay, this was redone to match the kit image i made. I don't have exactly what i had on the approval page because apparently logging off of my computer and trying to get back on and paste it doesn't work. OA = Shaf Girl, Goldenpaw adding the eye color and Snowdazzle switching it over to the new apprentice blanks. Comments? Raineh Has returned :D 03:33, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Er...Snowy never got this approved. She withdrew it, therefore, I'm kinda sure this has to be on the approval page...I may be wrong... Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:40, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Ya, this goes on the approval page.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:41, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh, I knew Rowan was getting something wrong. Lemme move this. Raineh Has returned :D 03:44, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Also, define the tail shading. I'm not sure the light source is very clear, but, I may be wrong Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 05:05, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Raineh Has returned :D 19:18, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

His warrior image on the tweak page was declined. I'd say go ahead and redo the stripes as you wish. Shelly For a limited time only 22:59, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, they match the kit blank that's up. Raineh Has returned :D 00:04, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more and add some more stripes to the back.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:33, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Actually, the stripes, as i am saying, matches the kit. I'm not sure if i should add anymore. Raineh Has returned :D 19:13, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Go ahead and add some more stripes, the warrior still needs to be redone, and can be made to match this. Redden the ear-pink and darken the stripes on the face and legs a bit more. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:10, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Well, I added a couple stripes but the ear-pink matches the kit image. Raineh Has returned :D 17:49, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 18:49, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. :3 Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 02:22, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Robinwing (TC) (A) - Approved

Robinwing (TC).apprenticeHer mentor was Mumblefoot. Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:18, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights more, define the earpink. Ivyheart =P 23:21, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:26, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D03:32, Sun, Jan, 29, 2012

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:07, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light part of the face. Sky Dovahkiin 23:23, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:00, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Perfect. CBA? oblivionAudience? 19:33, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 02:22, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Magpie (Lo) ~ Approved

Magpie.loner Maaaaagpie<3333 Anyways, comments? I gotta say, I quite like these blanks. Vakarian  16:13, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. I love this image. <3 Sweetflower16:26 Mon Jan 30

Thanks, Sweet. I love it too. =D Re-uploaded. Vakarian  21:41, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly...I really don't see anything wrong with this. At a risk of being shot, I'm still going to CBA this because I see nothing to fix. Iveh Yo! 22:20, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 02:22, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Merry (Lo) ~ Approved

Merry.loner Woo, first loner! Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 15:10, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Great job! Define the tail shading. Ivyheart =P 15:19, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I can't. The entire tail is shaded, since (considering its position) no light would be hitting it with the light source coming from the front. Shelly For a limited time only 15:30, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

You may not be able to add a light part, but you can certainly darken the shadows on the part of her tail where it would be darkest. Nice job, kinda reminds me of Pouncetail Iveh Yo! 18:39, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 19:12, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I honestly see nothing wrong with this, other might dissagree, but I really see nothing wrong with it. So...Comments before approval?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but... blur the haunch shading a little more. --Leafstrike-- 18:28, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I blurred it as far as it will go. Continuing CBA unless another senior member agrees with you. Shelly For a limited time only 20:54, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

12 hours. Shelly For a limited time only 03:54, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Icecloud (A) - Approved

Icecloud.apprenticeOi. Forgive me if I forgot anything...I haven't slept in 26 hours. *O* Don't ask why...Anyway...comments? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 15:10, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or do the eyes look gray? :/ Ivyheart =P 23:06, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look gray, please fix 'em Twi :P Sweetflower00:56 Sat Jan 28

Reuploaded - I know never to use DigitalColor Meter on the Mac anymore. :P Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:08, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawn. Read the talk page to know why. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:53, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 20:32, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ta-da! x3 comments? Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 03:28, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

The only comment you're getting is the Senior Member action to CBA this. :P Good work Iveh Yo! 22:22, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Approved.

Starlingwing (A) ~ Approved

Starlingwing.apprenticeFrostheart's was declined, so I reserved him. Comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:18, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear pink more. Silverhmm 13:10, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! Just darken the stripes to match the warrior image. They seem a bit pale here. Shelly For a limited time only 22:57, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Are the stripes right?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:05, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur them a tad more? Ivyheart =P 01:48, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the stripes.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:16, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm speechless, Stoneh. You're too good for me. <3 The only thing I can suggest is brightening up the shading on the shoulder. You're so good, I'm jealous. :3 Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 02:04, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste surrounding the image Ivyheart =P 23:05, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the stripes a bit more ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:11, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    08:09, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

There hasn't been comments in some time. CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:00, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Approved.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Fleck (Lo) - Approved

Fleck.lonerOk since people liked that I made Fleck a classic tabby last time, I kept that. Though...eeeeeesh, I really don't like how I interpreted the pattern. I'm not gonna sit here and harp on how much I hate it, I'm just going to politely ask fr pointers on how to perfect my classic tabby pattern for him. That is my main concern Iveh Yo! 18:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Try adding some stripes to the back of his flank. Just my preference. Shelly For a limited time only 19:03, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make him oranger? He looks golden brown right now. oblivionAudience? 20:44, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I took the ginger off of the pelt and earpink chart located on the apprentice tutorials page, so if that color is mistaken then it needs to be changed Iveh Yo! 22:04, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded after looking the image over I realized that the color was indeed wrong Iveh Yo! 03:55, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. This colour is perfect. oblivionAudience? 04:01, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ Iveh Yo! 04:04, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

This is so pretty <3 Can you add some more stripes to the base of the tail and the left side of the haunch?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:10, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Agh I should have reuploaded this sooner so it could've got CBA'd and I could get Yellowfang, darn you Shelly XD Iveh Yo! 04:19, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Ivy, this is amazing! Comments before approval?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:54, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

12 hours. Shelly For a limited time only 23:53, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Chirp (Lo) - Approved

Chirp.loner Ugh. There's something weird about this image. Comments? llwildheartl03:28 Tue Jan 31

Just blur the stripes a teensy bit more and you're good to go Iveh Yo! 03:40, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 llwildheartl03:52 Tue Jan 31

Blur the body shading. Pretty. ;D Sky Dovahkiin 06:37, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bleh. llwildheartl06:19 Wed Feb 1

I'm gonna try this...CBA? Sky Dovahjerk 00:45, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 01:28, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Piper (Lo) ~ Approved

Piper.lonerHey! Don't start the party without me >8D Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:38, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. My. Goodness. I'm so speechless. This is beautiful, Mounty! Just darken the shading a little bit :3 oblivionAudience? 23:44, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, I can do better. I think you should remove the stripes from the white, it isn't possible to have stripes on the white, and can cats' stripes be lighter than the base colour...? --Leafstrike-- 23:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded 8DD Thank you so much Oblivion! I think the stirpes look fine.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

.... Any whoo! I <333 this! 8D Blur where the pelt meets the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:55, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's a spot of waste by the chin. Beautiful! Silverhmm 23:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aww Thanks so much you guys 8DDD  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:04, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Holy freakin Jesus Christ FFFFuu- You're even better than me D8 Okay, if you can't remove the stripes from the white then smudge the into it so they kinda fade..? Bloo!yo 00:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, actually stripes can be on the white, I think I remember a discussion about it. Well I think this is one of the best chararts I've ever seen and I'm so jealous (totally wants to steal this pattern for Fleck) Iveh Yo! 00:27, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just a tad. Bootiful <3 Elolegs 01:47, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you guys so much ^^  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:18, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Erm now that I look at it, I can't really see the smaller stripes. I'm really, really sorry.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:53, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Ooow this is...so beautiful! Can you blur the ear pink into the fur a tad please? I love that fur pattern! LeafyAbsolute maniac,15:21,January 31,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much Leafy 8D  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I love this <3 Should the two gray legs have white paws? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:08, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thankies Rowan ^^ The legs are white they just have shading on them.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could make the shading on the back legs lighter and then add some depth? Looks great. Ivyheart =P 00:21, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great! I'd still make the back legs lighter; they look gray with no shading. Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 00:30, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks you guys so much <3  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:47, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

<3333333 this epic image, so good! 8D Anyways Blur/lighten the shading on the white if you can. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:59, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Re-uploaded Thank you so much DJ 8DD  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:11, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Dear StarClan, this is beautiful! Anyways, it looks like there's a small line of white on the back leg. I don't know if it's shading that was lightened too much, or if there's no shading all together. Vakarian  19:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much Cloudy 8DDD I think I fixed it.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  22:35, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know how Moonleaf thinks they could do better... Anyways, I would make the stripes on the white parts lighter. -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 00:13, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:24, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I feel like I do wrong...CBA? Sky Dovahjerk 00:47, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Eh.. Sorry, but there's some waste by the back paws. Other than that, it's so purdy~ :3 ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 01:05, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

She told me on chat she got rid of the waste. Approved and beyond beautiful work Iveh Yo! 01:31, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

River (Leader) (Lo) ~ Approved

River.lonerWoot! Enjoy~ MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

00:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Epic~ Make him a tad more silvery. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:51, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I made him a bit lighter, as all colors are taken from his leader. MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

10:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:41, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Move the ear pink :3 Silverhmm 21:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine, they go either way. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:17, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I changed it anyway. MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

01:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. oblivionAudience? 03:54, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the body shading. Sky Dovahkiin 04:58, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

23:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? Paleggy Ship it 14:58, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 17:37, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

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