Beetlenose (A) ~ Approved

Beetlenose.apprentice Here he is. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:52, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten him up, then add shading. The lineart is very hard to see.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:28, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is my computer or does he look like a really dark brown but not black. Acornflight Med. Cat ofLunarClan! 20:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably your computer and re-uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC) I can barely see the shading. Darken or define it. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:31, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Re-Uplaoded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour a lot and add some depth to the eyes. llwildheartl22:54 Sun Jan 1

Blur the earpink a lot. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 03:18, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:58, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour more and blur the shading. Smudge the earpink into the ear with a smaller brush so it looks like fur. llwildheartl02:23 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uplaoded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:30, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. llwildheartl02:15 Wed Jan 4

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:33, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:06, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and shoulder ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:07, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:38, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe lighten the shading on the face...? It looks a little dark on my screen... User:Twilightheart200/Sig 17:54, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this. My time on Wikia "has been limited", says Mom and Dad. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:18, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. I withdrew Firestar Squishee I am le Puppeh! 04:22, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay it doesn't look like it, but it's different. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 02:35, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Remember to change the heading. Nice work, but define and blur the shading/highlights and blur the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:08, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I forgot to change the heading. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 01:33, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink and redden it, and either brighten the highlights, or lighten the base coat. It's too dark to see the shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:51, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did it using the colors from the warrior. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 16:30, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Nice. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 01:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else says so. I took all of the colors from the warrior. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 01:19, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Sweetflower14:35 Mon Jan 16

Blur the earpink.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:04, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the light parts lighter, I can hardly see him. o3o Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 01:09, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm working on two solids? Oh, joy! :\ Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 01:13, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Everything's up with Leggy. xD Anyway, can you smudge the earpink into the ear a little more? Rainlegs 01:24, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Umm if I do, whitch I tryed, it looks really horrible and bad. And I cant blur it easily... oh yeah I know why, because your awesome. End of the world xD Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 01:32, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

It's spelt 'tried'. ^^ Try smudging into the ear using the sides of the earpink, it just seems to go up from the middle. ^^ Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 10:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded well you know I cant spell! Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 01:00, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make the smudges look natural by making it a bit smaller. Ivyheart =P 02:04, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

No offence, but the earpink smudge looks like a blob. Smudge the pelt into the corner of the ears please. Sweetflower22:14 Thu Jan 19

Reuploaded Okay now does it look better? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 22:32, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink some more. --Leafstrike-- 03:59, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt a little so that the shading is more noticeable.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:49, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the corners of the earpink. Sweetflower20:56 Sat Jan 21

Make the "highlights" a bit more noticeable. It almost looks like you just filled him in with black. --Cinder Real or Not Real?21:43, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm sorry but the base color is taken exactly from the warrior. The shading is also taken from his...sorry. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:05, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think this looks fine, CBA? Iveh Yo! 04:44, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry but smudge the (<---)corner of the (--->) ear more, oter wise this is perfect. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 02:56, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur the earpink.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    09:56, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the back leg shading. Sweetflower19:15 Sat Jan 28

Lighten the earpink so that it matches the warrior.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  20:10, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I think this'll be my last reupload because...well look at my user page. Anyway all of the colors are from the warrior. I hope nobody kills me >_>;;; Sandy I think Daddy's my slave!

 17:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think this is ready Sand, CBA? Iveh Yo! 17:49, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 21:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Scorchfur (A) ~ Approved

Scorchfur.apprentice I think this is the last spot! This is my first as an apprentice, from User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 02:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! There's some waste by the ear on ---> that side and on that side of the tail. This is great Mooneh! Squishee I am le Puppeh! 02:47, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 02:56, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's specks of waste around the charart, and part of the earpink closest to us leaked onto the back of the ear, could you erase that? --Leafstrike-- 03:07, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Just tell me if you see any more waste, I tried to get it all. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 03:23, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 03:24, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Smudged, got rid of the waste. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 03:43, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the... I don't know if that's a highlight or part of the normal fur, "spot" on the haunch a tad. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 14:34, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's a chunk of waste below the hind paw closest to us, and flecks of waste around his paws. Dazzy 17:13, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. So much waste! XD User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 19:03, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the hindleg. Sweetflower19:54 Sat Dec 31

Re-uploaded. I blurred. =3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:15, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Is the haunch highlighted? If so lighten it. Silverhmm 16:11, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Light enough? User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 20:27, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the face a bit. Looks nice :3. I dont know if its my computer, but there is a little waste on the sides of the tail.--User: Fallenstars 23:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

The highlight on the haunch seems to be too big. Make it kind of rounder and smaller. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 03:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I really made it worse, but see to it. =3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:42, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

There is still some waste around the tail. Raineh Has returned :D 21:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. If there's any more waste, I'm a mouse. =3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

You're a mouse ;) there's some above his tail. Smudge the earpink into the ear some more. llwildheartl02:33 Tue Jan 3

There is also some more waste near the base of his tail. Mistypebble 21:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. *squeaks like a mouse* I know there's more waste...go ahead, point it out. XD User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:04, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on both of his hind paws. ♫Purplemoon♪ 2012! The end of the world? 01:54, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

And around his head. oblivionAudience? 04:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Enjoy =3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The part at the base of the tail looks kind of like a highlight, darken that part.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:28, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is that better, or too dark? I smudged and blurred it a lot to blend it in but still be darker. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 03:46, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the earpink is smudged into the cheek. Erase that and make it black. Sweetflower02:54 Wed Jan 11

Re-uploaded. There you are. Enjoy. =3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 23:52, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste around the head. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:07, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah, that was when I fixed his ear from Sweetflower's advice. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 16:07, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink does not look defined enough, but it is fine if it matches his other images. JustCall Me Crazy! ~Chez 22:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. Otherwise it looks great, Mooneh! Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:29, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 18:16, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Better. Darken the shading a bit more and blur it, and it should be ready. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:34, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Enjoy =3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:22, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

He looks too dark to me. Make the light parts lighter? Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 23:33, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hope it looks better! User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 11:28, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Give him a torn ear since he was described with it as an apprentice I believe. And either brighten the highlights, or lighten the whole image if you don't use them. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:28, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

There is some waste/miscolored lineart on his back foot closest to us. Mistypebble 15:45, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Gah, forgot the waste. -.- Do that later. Paleh, I don't want to give him a torn ear unless you know for sure he got it as an apprentice. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 01:20, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 01:41, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Lovely~ User:Twilightheart200/Sig 01:44, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Twi! User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 15:14, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, also, I looked at Scorchfur's other apprentice image, and it didn't have a torn ear...So unless it was approved wrong, I'm not tearing his ear. =) User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 00:31, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waster beside his chin. Dazzy 09:28, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 09:43, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the haunch "highlight" (if it is one)? :3 User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:23, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but okay...=) User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:43, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten and redden the ear-pink a bit more. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:06, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Reddening it made it brighter, so enjoy. (Yes, I see the waste by his ears). User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 09:41, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill his whole ears, it looks like it doesn't quite right now. And lighten the base coat a bit to match the warrior. Paleggy Ship it 22:36, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Could you darken the nose a tad? Not too much, though... User:Twilightheart200/Sig 00:32, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

How would I lighten the base coat? Because I think using the dodge tool would make it too light, but when I colorpick from the warrior, if I just slab a color on there, I might blur it into the shading/highlights...Gosh. I need to tear his ear. I Found where he got it, and he was an apprentice. -.- User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 10:15, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is taking too long. Withdrawing. Anyone who wants to work on it can go right ahead. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 11:34, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I will take this over, if that's okay, however, I can't reupload until Monday or Tuesday because I have to go to a hockey game and I'm busy on sunday, I might be able to upload today, not sure...{{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 15:22, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED {{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 17:52, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the earpink? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 20:06, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be "Under Evaluation" because Oakbreeze is a kit?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    09:58, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Purty! Blur the earpink a bit! Sweetflower23:58 Sat Jan 28

I hate to do this but I'm declining it because I'd like to reserve Shadow's loner. {{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 19:50, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make sure you change the heading when you do withdraw your image, Oakbreeze :) Did it for you this time. Anyone with a free project may take over Iveh Yo! 22:28, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:19, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:19, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I can't see anything to fix, so CBA? Paleggy Ship it 02:29, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

He needs a torn ear. 8D User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 11:33, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added the torn ear, so CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:44, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it's not acceptable to CBA your own image like that. It's unfair and a bit cruel to the other users that do not have the privilege to CBA their own image. I'm not going to interrupt CBA but this is a reminder. Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oops! I'm sorry about that, but I was thinking that since Paleclaw CBA'ed it, and I just added a torn ear that it would be alright. I'll keep that in mind. I knew I was gonna mess up a lot as SM. Dx But others do it...? ;.;  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine ^^ Approved. oblivionAudience? 21:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (A) - Approved


Never thumb an image. Also, you have to re-upload this over Cedarheart's apprentice image. Also, make the ear-pink fill the ear completely. Add depth to the eyes, blur teh shading and highlights a lot. Raineh Has returned :D 21:30, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How is it? This might be a stupid question, cause I'm not a computer wizard, but what does "thumb" mean? *dies of embarassment*

It means it has the frame around it, or something and says who it was added by. Blur highlights (if there are any) and blur ear-pink, a lot, and define shading. Also, don't forget to sign with ~~~~ Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 22:49, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, but can someone help me delete the thumbed one? I can't seem to find a way to do it..... sorry.MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 23:04, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, blur it plenty more, the ear-pink still needs to fill the ear completely, define the shading. Raineh Has returned :D 23:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should Add depth to the eyes... User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink, its too hot pinkish. Rainface, Leafy already said to define the shading. :P Mistypebble 21:13, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I just need I reminder on define-ing shading on gimp 2.6, and then I'm covered. Also, I don't want to be rude, but Rainface on your second comment what do you want me to blur? the shading or the earpink? help?MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 21:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste where haunches are and it seems flat. Plus it seems like you smudged where you need to blur. Shading could be gaussian blurred. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 08:05, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think you added shading so you need to add some. Darken the nosepink. Blur the highlights a ton, though that was already mentioned, I think. And Twi, adding depth to the eyes is the artist's choice. Icewish 12:10, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

She knows Ferret, It's just a suggestion. The earpink needs to fill the whole ear, than the pelt smudged into it. Sweetflower20:01 Thu Jan 5

In my opinion, I think the nose color is find. I think you should lighten it just a tad instead. Mistypebble 20:59, January 5, 2012 (U

Reuploaded I did everything except gaussin blur. I'll be on vacation for couple days as wellMossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 15:20, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more reddish-gray, like his warrior & elder images, and blur the highlights (If someone's already said this, just disregard it). Dazzy 04:36, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and darken the shading. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 16:33, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a whole bunch. It looks too blotchy. User:A Cat Named Cheshire/Sig

Are you working on this? It's been 7 days ._.

  1. REDIRECT User:~Leafy~/Sig 16:11, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. If any user wishes to take over, they may. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:37, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I will, please. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 21:43, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, didn't Mossnose say she wasn't going to be back to the 13th? So shouldn't she get to post it again when she comes back? Just wondering... Sweetflower22:17 Sat Jan 14

Maybe so, but more than a week without work slows the process of the project and the project's goal. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 06:26, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

If she's not working on it, I could take over. I just noticed the heading change. If she's going to continue, that's fine, just an offer. User:Shadewing/Sig 01:53, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Go for it. Shelly For a limited time only 15:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Alright then. I'll get working. User:Shadewing/Sig 15:26, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Changed heading. User:Shadewing/Sig 20:20, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Smudge th epelt into the earpink and define the depth in the eyes if there is any. Sweetflower20:25 Mon Jan 16

Re-Uploaded - Man I am bad at those eyes. User:Shadewing/Sig 21:17, January 18, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Smudge the earpink more? Ivyheart =P 02:08, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink, and darken the shading at the base of the tail, on the neck, and between the back and front legs (where would that be, the flank?) PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

(Yes, I think that's the flank :P) Sweetflower21:05 Sat Jan 21

Hey guys. I am so sorry I wasn't able to come on, my computer crashed, and I can't access anything. I'll try to get on when I can on my kindle, and I think Shadewing's doing a way better job than I was anyway. :p MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 00:05, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Shadey? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:08, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Sorry guys. Got really busy. User:Shadewing/Sig 20:54, January 24, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

It's been a few days without comments, let's go CBA Iveh Yo! 06:38, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting! The legs farthest from us are lighter than those closer. They should be darker. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 17:50, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

The neck shading could also be darkened, the head shading should go along with the light source, and the highlights should either be darkened, or the base coat should if you don't use them. Paleggy Ship it 09:50, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I will get all those things done soon, but one thing concerns me. I just checked out his other blanks, and they are lighter than this. If I darken it anymore, it won't really match his other blanks. I will still darken, if that is what you wish, just bringing up a point. User:Shadewing/Sig 23:54, January 28, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Eh, I'm not a huge fan of him right now. Comments? User:Shadewing/Sig 21:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

I don't mean to rush or anything, but it's been a couple days without comment. User:Shadewing/Sig 00:23, February 3, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Absolutely right. CBA? Iveh Yo! 01:12, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 21:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (A) ~ Approved

Swallowtail (WC).apprenticeI am posting this behalf of Thistleshine who can't post this yet. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:51, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Fill the ear with earpink and add the highlights to the eyes. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 03:54, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes and blur the highlights a lot. Also, define the shading. Shelly For a limited time only 04:08, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart all around, mainly on the paws. And add highlights/lighter part to the face. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:10, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base color. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:42, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Also, you're using the wrong blank. It needs to be the short furred female, not the long furred. Shelly For a limited time only 20:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, but still have to change to short fur. Thanks everybody.

Thistleshine 21:36, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

After you change it, blur the shading a lot. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:39, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. Short fur now. Comments, please? <3

Thistleshine 05:08, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, and the shading on the back. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 21:40, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. Pretty good? Comments please and thank you.

Thistleshine 17:04, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

There are some miscolored spots on the side of the haunch Ivyheart =P 19:08, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur where the "highlights" meet the shading. Lighten the nose color a bit, and smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:20, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste. llwildheartl03:48 Wed Jan 18

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Sweetflower22:28 Wed Jan 18

Reuploaded. Comments, please and thank you? <3 --ThistleshineThe name's Thistleshine... but you can call me Thistle. 01:18, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/"highlights". You use SAI, correct? If so, I'd recommend Pixlr or Gimp. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 01:23, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? Thanks for all the support and comments you guys. <3 Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥

There's some waste by the haunch/tail. Also, blur the shading more, and get rid of the lighter strip on the back of the haunch. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:19, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

And there's a speck of waste near the haunch. --Leafstrike-- 02:04, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? --ThistleshineThe name's Thistleshine... but you can call me Thistle. 11:37, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Sai's still good. Do you use layers with SAI? If you do, then blurring the shading would be easy. I could teach you if you would like me to. Anyway, the shading still needs blurring.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:46, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

I'm kind of confused with the whole layers thing, please teach me. I just signed up for the mentor program, thanks for offering. I'll do a reupload as soon as I can learn.

Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥

Reuploaded. Help from mentor, completely redone. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥

The shading needs defined. Raineh Has returned :D 03:57, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely, my apprentice! Smudge the pelt into the earpink.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:00, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged and defined. Thanks for the support. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥

Smudge the earpink in a bit more, take the earpink color from the warrior, and make the white in the eye on the other side of the pupil. Where's there's a black speck missing. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 00:07, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Lovely. ^^ -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:16, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tail shading defined, moved pupil, changed ear colour. I'm going to smudge the ear in a moment. Comments? Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥

Blur the haunch shading. It...disturbs me. Sky Watchu want? 06:10, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the haunch the best I could. Sorry about the disturbance. ^^; Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 04:17, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:19, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. She looks better, thanks for all the comments. CBA? C': Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 04:37, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thistle, you can't CBA your own image unless you are a SM. Define the shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:38, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Reuploaded. Defined shading. Sorry, DJ, I never really understood CBA. And do you mean Senior Warrior?(SW) Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 07:08, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. --Elolegs

13:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that any better? I hate that haunch. >> Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 01:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

That's okay. A Senior Member (SM) is a Senior Warrior, deputy or leader. Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D03:10, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Reuploaded. All smudged. Any more comments? She's gotta get through sometime with a mentor such as Stony. ;3 Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 03:17, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Nice! The earpink and shading seems perfect, so CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:20, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry for inturrupting CBA, but can you darken the tail shading? ;.; Sweetflower23:58 Wed Feb 1

That's alright. Reuploaded. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 00:31, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:42, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'm really super sorry, but, could you move the eye highlight over one pixel? Mostly because I'm pretty sure that's why there's a missing pixel there. And make the pixel completely white? ・ω・ User:Twilightheart200/Sig 03:53, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That's okay, Twi. I want it to be perfect. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 00:21, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

For something so minor, continuing CBA Iveh Yo! 17:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) - Approved

Hawkfrost.apprentice Thanks Silver for lettin me have him! 8D Bah. Fail image is fail. Bloo!yo 17:46, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

See? I told you you'd make this amazing! Lighten the shading where the front haunch and back meet. Silverhmm 21:20, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look too green, so make them more blueish. Feel free to disagree. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:33, Thu, Jan, 19, 2012

I think the eyes look fine. They look like they match the warrior to me. Anyways, lighten the earpink a bit more to match the warrior and this'll be perfect! ^^ PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:46, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

On his warrior, the white chest goes right up to his throat. Change yours to match please ^^ oblivionAudience? 19:52, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Iveh Yo! 19:48, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded yeah, sorry bout that. Bah, stupid computer lost all the layers.. Oh, and Oblivion, I dont really think the throat as an "underside" cause it said his underside was white. I shoulda been alittle like this:[[1]] I wanted to say this while you were redoing his warrior, but I forgot to. Heh, oops. Bloo!yo 23:12, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:28, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Technically, it still is an underside. I'd rather you change this than I have to change both his warrior and deputy. It doesn't matter how far up it goes as long as it's still on his belly, which it is. oblivionAudience? 18:30, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Bloo? llwildheartl01:47 Sun Jan 29

yeah, I'll just upload it when I get back from school Bloo!yo 15:40, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

ReUploaded - De nada. And since theres been no other comment in the past 2 weeks, Imma CBA may own image 8D Bloo!yo 01:08, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smallear (A) - Approved

Smallear.apprenticeHe was mention as an apprentice when he got his nick in his ear. Comments? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:59, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

The shading/lighting looks to be a bit blotchy. And did you shrink his ears? I can't tell, and his elder image has them shrunk rather significantly. Shelly For a limited time only 15:31, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

On the the fron right paw, is that a lighter part? Cause it looks like a lighter paw. Tone it down or blur it or something? Sky Dovahkiin 21:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:43, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:12, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Scarlet, but could you blur the shading a bunch? And make sure it's all the same darkness. llwildheartl03:08 Thu Feb 2

Re-uploaded. Four words: I HATE THIS CHARART! ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I have three letters for you. CBA? Iveh Yo! 00:30, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Lo) - Approved

Loudbelly.loner Mhm, so happy I have weeks off! 2nd loner! (Worst charart I've ever made >.<) Comments? Sweetflower16:10 Mon Jan 30

Erm, I'd say actually upload the file first... Shelly For a limited time only 16:11, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I accidently spelled the file name wrong. I uploaded it correctly now. Sweetflower16:23 Mon Jan 30

Blur the shading. Sky Dovahkiin 21:34, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Actually, I like this one. :3 Sweetflower23:16 Mon Jan 30

The eye looks a bit wierd... Outline the white pixel in black. --User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 02:18, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eye looks fine, but, that's my opinion. ^^ User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:20, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. The eyes are fine to me too. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D03:06, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Re-uploaded. Eyes are artists choice hun. Sweetflower16:10 Wed Feb 1

Looks good to me. CBA? Iveh Yo! 01:16, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Thunder (Lo) - Approved

Thunder.lonerWell, Im bit suprised, I was been thinking that all loners are almost reserved o.O suprise!..Hmm i tried match the stripes best..but failed.. LeafyAbsolute maniac,20:33,January 30,2012 (UTC)

Love this! Amazing! The only thing I can think of is to define the earpink. Sweetflower20:49 Mon Jan 30

Make the eyes the same colour as the leader. ^^ Sky Dovahkiin 21:38, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,15:18,January 31,2012 (UTC)

I don't see a pupil, and he'll need that in order to see. Just saying. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:00, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

hmm reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:40,January 31,2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading that's by the closest hind leg. ^^ Sky Dovahjerk 07:44, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,18:04,February 1,2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit ;) Really nice job Leafy! --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:20, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,20:42,February 2,2012 (UTC)

CBA? Great job Leaf :) Iveh Yo! 01:18, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Ravenpaw (Lo) - Approved

Ravenpaw.loner Now I might get flamed for this, but I think that the loner blanks look a little chubby... Anyways, I was surprised no one had reserved Ravenpaw yet. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 20:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink...? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 20:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:06, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Well you should have interrupted CBA to say that. Oh well. Define the shading on the legs furthest away, especially where the torso would cast shadows on the areas closest to the body Iveh Yo! 22:17, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't, because I only realized now. --Leafstrike-- 22:37, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Two things, one this is beautiful just define the 'highlights' and two I have a neighborhood cat that looks just like this minus the tail tip. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:23, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Mudge th epelt into the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:25, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded GIMP has somehow waken up from its comatose... --Leafstrike-- 21:34, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:21, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Floss (Lo) - Approved

Floss.loner I <3 this charart. Comments? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:39, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Define the overall shading. Lovely. <3 -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:08, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the gray on the shoulder. Good work! Ivyheart =P 02:15, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and there is waste around the image. Ivyheart =P 03:09, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:05, Thu, Feb, 2, 2012

This is marvelous! CBA? Iveh Yo! 19:12, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but on her other images, there's no grey on <--- this side of her head. Could you erase that grey on her head? --Leafstrike-- 03:52, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

It's only on that side on her kittypet image. And since that needs to be tweaked, I think this is fine.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:56, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Continuing with the CBA Iveh Yo! 17:34, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 02:57, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Spiderstar (Lo) - Approved

Spiderstar.loner Spiderstar!! <3 He was my very first charart :3 Sweetflower, I'm sorry for stealing him, but I just had to c: oblivionAudience? 20:57, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It's ok :P You did most of the work anyways. Lighten the shading a bit. Sweetflower21:08 Mon Jan 30

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 00:03, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

You got the earpink on the wrong side of the ear xD Bloo!yo 00:28, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

No I don't :3 The ear could either be facing towards us or to the front of the cat. oblivionAudience? 00:31, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Pfffft. I knew that. >_> Bloo!yo 00:34, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sure ya did xD Perhaps add another stripe on the haunch? Sky Dovahkiin 21:49, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sure, why not? :3 oblivionAudience? 01:04, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing a bit? It's much darker than the leader image. And add or define the depth in the eyes. This is lovely. ^^ Paleggy Ship it 07:27, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks ^^ oblivionAudience? 20:01, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad: it looks a bit too dark. Lovely <3 --Elork 02:22, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. :3 oblivionAudience? 02:36, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 17:59, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 03:02, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Crowfeather (Lo) - Approved

Crowfeather.lonerI'm back, and ready to make this part of the ultimate Twi shipping (lol don't ask. :P) as a loner. xD Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:15, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

  • U* Crowfeather!! Blur the shading please? ^^ Mistypebble 21:17, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

This is bootyful Twi *u* Blur the earpink.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:06, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten him a bit so he doesn't look black. --Leafstrike-- 20:48, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Actually *just stating* I got the color from the apprentice .xcf. I can change it if someone else agrees. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:26, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, it's fine. He's stated as almost black, and if his color is from his apprentice's xcf, you're fine. Could you just tone down the earpink a bit? Paleggy Ship it 00:40, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^^ User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:46, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? o3o Paleggy Ship it 06:22, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 19:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Approved

Mapleshade.lonerWhooo. First loner. And I snagged Mapleshade. ^^ Breezewhisker 22:07, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Eww, I hate Mapleshade herself. Tone down the ginger parts so they match her other images. --Leafstrike-- 22:10, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a scar across thr bridge of her nose? Great job Breeze, you never cease to impress me. Iveh Yo! 22:14, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. Sorry about the retarded scars o3o Sky Dovahkiin 00:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the ginger and stripes to match the other images. I wanted to do this one. =3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I'm taking a while to edit. ^^; I'll try to reupload tomorrow. Breezewhisker 04:28, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breezewhisker 03:01, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, if you look at the warrior version, the legs don't have ginger on them(excapt one) so this doesnt match much. But, you can keep this style and redo all the others to match this if you want. So basically you can either follow the style of the others and make this match or keep this style and redo the others, which I think you should do since in my opinion all the other images dont resemble eachother at all. Your choice, though. Bloo!yo 03:07, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

These two legs were colored in on the old loner image. I went from that mainly since it faces the same direction.. ^^; Breezewhisker 04:59, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

...Eh. Not really. The ginger doesnt reach down all the way to the legs. Dunno. Maybe not. dangit I couldnt read anything with the text messed up Dx Bloo!yo 06:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, think I see what you mean. Reuploaded. Is that better? I don't really want to break up the ginger on the front shoulder, though, since I think it looks better. It is her only image facing this way now, so it shouldn't matter if it is joined instead. I'm sorry if I'm being dense. DX Breezewhisker 06:27, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Looks perfect to me, I've just been waiting for you to reupload so I could CBA, so.... CBA? XD Paleggy Ship it 06:21, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 19:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Leafpool (Lo) - Approved

Leafpool.lonerMeh... I don't like this one that much... ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:43, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job! Can you lighten the brown a tad? Ivyheart =P 05:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Leggy! :) ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 14:55, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

That was Ivy, not Leggy. XD But can you lighten the stripes and make the earpink stand out more? Paleggy Ship it 17:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Haha XP Sorry Ivy! ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 23:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

No problem! This legolution stuff can be confusing. XD Definet the tail shading a little more. Ivyheart =P 02:14, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken all ze shading. <3 Sky Dovahjerk 02:21, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:04, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the whole image and define the earpink a bit more. :) Paleggy Ship it 17:30, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:55, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Breezewhisker 05:32, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:41, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely Scarlet ^^ Darken the earpink a little.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:38, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:19, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

I love this, CBA? Iveh Yo! 18:11, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 19:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenheart (Lo) ~ Approved

Brackenheart.lonerHeehee I snagged another one. He's a triangle tabby so I changed the pattern. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:55, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is absolutely positivly beautiful. Could you tone down the earpink a tad? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:00, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

<3333333 Also, there's waste outside the ear. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:01, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

>.> *Jealous* Blur the shading on the furtherest hind leg. <3 Sky Dovahjerk 02:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much 8D  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:16, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Please don't kill me :( But with how small the stripes are, it makes him look like a mottled cat. Is there any chance you could thicken the stripes a little? *is going to be shot by a hoard of angry charartists* Iveh Yo! 18:13, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Aww but me like pattern :( I can change it if someone agree thoguh.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:10, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry Mountain, but I have to agree. The stripes are so small he looks mottled. Silverhmm 23:55, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Naw It's alrgiht ;) I think I fixed it. How is it now?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

A //tad// bigger? If you make them bigger a tiny bit it'll look better :3 Silverhmm 00:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:35, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Looks perfect to me. ^^ CBA? Paleggy Ship it 06:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 19:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Jingo (Lo)- Approved

Jingo.loner Jingo (again). Woo! Comments? Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:05, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

8O Y u so good Teldy *is jelly* Define the shoulder shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:16, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Crop the image :3 Beautiful. llwildheartl02:56 Thu Feb 2

In her kittypet image, it looks like she has a longer tail, unless the tip of her tail was omitted in the charart (I dunno). If She did have the tip of her tail removed in it, can you make the tail a weeny bit loner? Beautiful work ;-; Iveh Yo! 19:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure what she's saying up there... but could you make the tail longer, since it was only the tip, not half of her tail?

I forgot to sign. --Leafstrike-- 00:17, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:26, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful. CBA? Rainlegs 20:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Ivyheart =P 04:28, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Littlecloud (A) ~ Approved

Littlecloud.apprentice All colors are from his medicine cat. Comments? Dazzy 08:35, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the earpink more, on the sides of the earpink. Sweetflower17:45 Tue Jan 3

Define the stripes and color his nose brown. Mistypebble 20:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Thinen out the shading on the haunch if that makes sence. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:51, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Reuploaded. Naw, I got that, DJ ;) But I think I broke Littlecloud...and the burn tool hates me. XO Dazzy 02:56, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded really quick. I think I fixed him ^^; Dazzy 10:18, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and the shading, add some stripes to the legs, and blur the ear-pink. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:08, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'll darken the shading and add stripes to the legs, but I'll only darken the stripes if someone else agrees. I got them directly from his MC. Dazzy 11:18, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Scarlet. The stripes could be darkened just a tad. Try this hex: 732F0C User:Twilightheart200/Sig 05:25, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid him again...but I like him better =3 Dazzy 05:19, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

The color seems to be a bit ginger compared to the others. Try matching the MCA a bit closer. Shelly For a limited time only 15:09, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy 09:30, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Mistypebble 22:17, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. x.x Dazzy 07:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

The color is still off. Shelly For a limited time only 20:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Too ginger or brown? Or...what? xP Dazzy 10:01, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Too ginger and too dark. Lighten it, make it less ginger, and define the stripes a bit. Try color-picking from the apprentice image. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:23, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. *pants* I died in the making, and shifted the light angle. Dazzy 01:48, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

If you died, you wouldn't have been able to post that. Define the shading. --Leafstrike-- 01:55, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Moonleaf...I was joking. Anyways, reuploaded. Dazzy 03:09, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I smoothed him out a tad, and brightened him, because he was looking squarish. It doesn't look like a big change but...ah, well. Dazzy 03:27, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Extend the stripes a bit more and curve them a bit. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:10, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've been tweaking up his shading, too. ;) Dazzy 10:55, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still a bit too ginger? Are you color picking? And if so, from which image? Maybe try his apprentice if you're not already. Paleggy Ship it 22:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm colorpicking, yes. I used the MC at first, then tried his MCA. Oh, and Pale, this is his apprentice x) Dazzy 04:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I meant MCA. XD And I think you're picking from the shading area then, if you're color picking. It's too dark and ginger. Try picking from and area with little or not shading, like the haunch, or the face. Paleggy Ship it 15:07, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Dazzle? llwildheartl02:09 Sun Jan 29

Yea, still working. XO Alright, thanks Pale, we'll see how this goes...reuploaded. Pixlr only lets me blur/smudge on same layer, so don't ask why I constantly redo if it's a color-change. Dazzy 09:16, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes on the haunch and darken the shading a tad. Purdy C: --Elolegs

13:47, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a little more. Ivyheart =P 15:21, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Meep. Thanks Elo <3 Dazzy 01:26, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Atelda insert vague subtext here 20:23, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Ivyheart =P 04:37, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Wind (Lo) ~ Approved

File:Wind.loner.pngI really wanted one of the leaders.. xD Well, heres Wind! I got all the colors off of her leader image, so I don't want to hear anything about that. :3 I don't think changes are showing yet. Mistypebble 20:53, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. --Leafstrike-- 20:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the shading. Mistypebble 21:13, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit now x3 Sky Dovahkiin 21:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Knew that one was coming xD Blurred the shading. :3 Mistypebble 23:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a little?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:40, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. >.< Mistypebble 22:30, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Where exactly is your light source? The shading on her right hind leg looks like it's coming from behind, and the front legs looks like the light's coming from in front. Can you settle on one? :3 Rainlegs 04:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Looking good, Misty! Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 19:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading. I'll fix the light source later. >.< Thanks Cloudy! :D Mistypebble 21:51, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the light source. Mistypebble 20:44, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, and it should be ready.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    18:55, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the shading on the tail. Mistypebble 20:17, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nicely done. CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:38, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:52, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Barley (Lo) ~ Approved

Barley.lonerHmm.. Not one of my favorite chararts, but one of my favorite characters. c: Mistypebble 21:09, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

3: such a beauty I think you're only allowed to have one charart up for approval at a time... (maybe wrong) User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:17, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

She's right. Only one loner image per person. Either this or Wind will have to be declined. oblivionAudience? 21:26, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

So sorry. Can I decline this one? Mistypebble 22:09, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for being so co-operative. I'll list it as withdrawn so anyone can take over if they want. oblivionAudience? 22:15, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over! 8D Paleggy Ship it 00:25, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I think I know who Oblivion was directing that to... Define the highlights. --Leafstrike-- 20:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Redid it completely so I'd have the layers. I'm not sure if the changes are showing.... I tried my best to get the white well shaded without making it gray. Paleggy Ship it 07:41, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I feel bad CBAing this when I only uploaded it once, but there's been no comments for 24 hours, so.... CBA? Paleggy Ship it 15:02, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, sorry to interrupt, but the patches need to be more solid to match his rogue and kit. You've smudged them too much. oblivionAudience? 20:04, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Also, his pupil looks dilated and there wouldn't be a light source underneath his tail. Iveh Yo! 18:00, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Since eye style is the artist's choice and I rather like this style, I'm keeping it this way, but I fixed everything else. (though changes aren't showing yet I don't think) Paleggy Ship it 09:22, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    20:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:52, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Fritz (PO3) (Lo) ~ Approved

File:Fritz (PO3).loner.png I based the pattern after a loved one, so, I'd rather not change it. :3 Rainlegs 03:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the body by the closest back leg. <3 Sky Dovahkiin 04:23, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <3 Rainlegs 04:31, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Daww. <3 One side of the torn ear looks a little too thin and spiky. Ivyheart =P 03:15, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 03:32, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

B'aww. He looks almost exactly like my cat <3 I think you might be able to blur the earpink a tad. Dazzy 10:45, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Not being mean, but the smudges don't follow the direction cats' fur usually go, could you tweak that? And make the shading more grey and less periwinkle... --Leafstrike-- 21:24, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

If a cat's fur doesn't go from their head to their tail, then which way is it supposed to go? Unless you mean the ankles, then please specify that so she knows what exactly to fix. The smudges on the torso is fine to meIveh Yo! 23:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I am talking about the ankles. It seems like everybody hates me. --Leafstrike-- 00:21, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading's black. I really can't darken black. =P Rainlegs 14:30, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

It looks good to me, CBA? Atelda insert vague subtext here 20:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:54, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Lo) ~ Approved

Yellowfang.loner Yay, I get to do another Yellowfang image! Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 04:33, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I love this cat. XD Can you define the shading a little more? :3 Rainlegs 04:34, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Gosh dangit I was going to do this :P Lighten her tail some. Iveh Yo! 04:35, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Gotta be faster, Ivy! Shelly For a limited time only 15:50, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad, and where's your light source? Paleggy Ship it 15:00, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I'm handing this off to Ivystripe. Shelly For a limited time only 23:51, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

As discussed, I'm taking this over ^^ Will reupload in a sec Iveh Yo! 23:57, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? Iveh Yo! 18:07, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

I absolutly love this Ivy!! ^^ I think there's some waste at the torn ears. Define the shading on the tail.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  18:10, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 02:28, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading. >8D Sky Dovahjerk 02:38, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Where? Her torso? Or everything? Iveh Yo! 03:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind Iveh Yo! 20:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur shading a tad =3 ~Leafy~ 21:04, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Where? That's what I just did Iveh Yo! 21:06, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tail/Stomach ~Leafy~ 23:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you. Iveh Yo! 23:13, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Perfect! CBA? oblivionAudience? 03:05, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is a wonderful image. Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:07, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Millie (Alt Lo.) ~ Approved

Millie.loner.alt Hehe. I had issues with the collar, but, everything else was easy. All colors are from her previous image, and those cam directly from Ivystripe. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 19:34, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Nicely done. Can you pretty please with a cherry on top add some shading difference to the collar/define that? Raineh Has returned :D 19:37, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I had shading on the collar. Dunno what happened to it. Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 19:50, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like her muzzle got cut off. You were right on chat, this is phenomenal and I love it :) Iveh Yo! 23:11, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <3 Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:32, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the collar stick out less at the top? <3 Sky Fus Roh Dah 05:31, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:36, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eye ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 23:12, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not changing the colors, since all of them are right from her other image. I did move it so it's above the layer with the shading though. Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:37, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Hey! Guess what? CBA? Bloo!yo 23:16, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:25, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Lo) ~ Approved

Sol.lonerWell, this fails. but at least it's not a tabby XD I got all the colors off the old loner. I tried to copy the pattern -_- *keyword: tried* Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Good job! Smudge the earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:30, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Great work! Add a bit more brown. Dazzy 08:27, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks you guys ^^ I fixed the earpinnk but Dazzle, where do I add the brown?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think she means to add some more light brown near the ginger. I don't envy you for doing this, his pattern kind of confuses me :P Iveh Yo! 17:34, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded My sanity, forgive me XD  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Pwetty. :3 But the patches are smudged in all different directions. Could you smudge them more in the direction of the fur, especially the belly. Breezewhisker 03:01, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Breezy ^^  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:25, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Well you know what? CBA? Iveh Yo! 07:32, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt, but can you smudge the patches more to match his rogue image, and there's waste above the rump.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:21, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to re-instate the CBA. The rogue's image is over-smudged, if you ask me. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:52, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it's been 24 hours. Approved, wonderful job Iveh Yo! 04:57, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (Lo) ~ Approved

Hollyleaf.loner This is uggy Dx Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:57, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It's lovely :3 Define the ear pink. Silverhmm 00:00, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. Excellent ^^ oblivionAudience? 00:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. >:D RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:18, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Psssh. This ain't uggy XP Define the earpink.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:32, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Aww, thanks Mounty <3 RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:20, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, I can hardly see the lineart Iveh Yo! 23:42, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:53, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little. Rowan, I love this. 8D Rainlegs 15:45, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks <3 Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:41, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink fill the capacity and either darken/define the shading or brighten/define the "highlights" ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:10, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:37, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I can barely see the earpink, try taking it from one of her other images. Paleggy Ship it 20:59, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Took directly off the warrior. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:46, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I still can't see it. Define it some. If it doesn't match 100%, we're not going to kill you for it. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:03, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Actually cloudy, I checked earlier, the changes just aren't showing. The earpink's fine now. Could you lighten the whole thing just a tad though? I can hardly see the lineart. Paleggy Ship it 08:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:18, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Sky To Kill An Empire 10:30, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Purdy (Lo) - Approved

Purdy.loner Ugh. Comments? llwildheartl03:42 Tue Feb 7

This is amazing! Define the shading a little bit, please? Ivyheart =P 04:22, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Very nice! I suggest defining the earpink and smudging the fur into it. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 05:13, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Amazing! Could you saturate the whole thing a bit more to match the elder though? Paleggy Ship it 08:37, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Add some ragged bits to the tail. :P Sky Fus Roh Dah 10:13, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Oh my Wild <3 You matched the design almost perfectly! Lighten the tail shading. Silverhmm 12:06, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ugh... this image... Um I darkened the shading a bit and colourized it to be a sort of browny colour, but it's impossible to match the elder's shading, as it was clearly burned on, not layered on, and that's a totally different effect. I played with the colours for ages and I couldn't get it to work; this is the best I got. If it looked better before, tell me, and I'll change it back. I didn't add any ragged bits to the tail simply 'cause there wasn't any room with the shorthaired blank :P and I tried to define the earpink but there's only so much you can do with the torn ear in the way. llwildheartl02:27 Fri Feb 10

I absolutely adore this image. CBA? Paleggy Ship it 15:30, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Approved.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:58, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Skywatcher (Lo) - Approved

Skywatcher.loner Woohoo! Had so much fun doing Kinky, I had to do another fuzzy kitty. Comments? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 19:38, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You used the female blank. --Leafstrike-- 19:43, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded lol. Thanks, Moonleaf XP ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 19:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

...does this mean I have to re-tweak the elder to match this? Iveh Yo! 20:13, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I was going to go with the fact that with this charart, he's been living as a loner without being properly fed or groomed, so he'd probably not look as sleek as he does in his elder. I don't think you would, but if another lead disagrees or if you want to, go ahead. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 21:38, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Feel free to disagree, but, as much as I love your kinky fur, I don't think it's be this bad even as a loner. Could it go back to matching the elder image? Paleggy Ship it 08:51, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:46, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

The patchy fur wouldn't go through the scar on the shoulder. Move the fur patch over to where the scar is not and define the scars a bit more. (though the two big ones on his flank are fine) Iveh Yo! 19:13, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 23:37, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good to me. :) CBA? Paleggy Ship it 11:45, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 00:04, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Splash (lo) - Approved

File:Splash (Lo).loner.png Reposting 8D Bloo!yo 06:23, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Pretty ^^. Silverhmm 13:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the haunch shading. --Leafstrike-- 05:08, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bloo!yo 01:40, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Been awhile without comments, let's go CBA Iveh Yo! 04:48, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 07:54, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sol's Father (Lo) - Approved

Sol&#039;s Father.loner Woo, here he is again. Oh, and I'm also proud to say that his old image was the very last loner image to be approved with the old blank -confetti- Anyway, comments? :3 oblivionAudience? 04:38, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

*checked the file history* The legs look white, though, it may be my computer. Tone down the "highlights" (if there are any) User:Twilightheart200/Sig 04:40, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:51, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Don't tell anyone, but I forgot the earpink >.> oblivionAudience? 22:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tone tone the light parts more. ^^ Sky Dovahjerk 07:08, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 21:31, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a littlelight part to his back? Iveh Yo! 03:18, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

The light source is from the front. I think if I add a light source up there it'll look odd. oblivionAudience? 03:22, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps the middle of his stomach instead? llwildheartl03:29 Tue Feb 7

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 12:17, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur or either lighten the shading just a tad? ^^ Mistypebble 21:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 02:47, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more or soften the highlights a bit ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:08, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 18:17, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    07:44, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but could you sumdge the ear pink back into the ear? ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 17:42, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine, Fallow, earpink doesn't /need/ to be smudged on these blanks. Continuing CBA.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:46, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:35, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Lo) ~ Approved

Lichenfur.loner Ew. Comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:08, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is bootyful Stoney <3 Can you give her a white muzzle and chest like her elder?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:09, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya blur some of the mottles like the elder? <3 Sky Dovahjerk 02:25, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

It's awesome, but could look a bit more like an elder by blurring the mottles. Nice job, though, it looks so good

TigerheartDovewing.warrior 02:40, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart, please don't repeat comments if they've already been said. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 05:56, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad <3 Elork 14:44, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more~ ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 16:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:25, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There was waste.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    20:25, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Could you match the image to the original loner image a bit better? Because this one doesn't match the elder quite as well. Mostly it's the missing patches and the white could be whiter and the base coat could be lighter. But I think it needs the patchy fur, too, if I'm not mistaken. llwildheartl00:16 Tue Feb 7

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make some of the mottles darker and sharper. Sky Fus Roh Dah 06:24, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Did you do anything I asked...? llwildheartl06:49 Tue Feb 7

Yeah I did...? Oops! I forgot the patches! -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:17, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:20, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Can you define the pupil in the eye? Mistypebble 21:54, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:19, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading under her belly? Nice job Stoneh~<3 ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 01:34, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:07, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:16, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful image, Stone. CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:21, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Approved.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:15, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Mothflight (Lo) - Approved

Mothflight.lonerWoohoo, my favourite, first MC, comments? LeafyAbsolute maniac,14:31,February 4,2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest/stomach area. User:Shadewing/Sig 16:33, February 4, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,19:20,February 4,2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Sky Dovahjerk 07:06, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,18:54,February 6,2012 (UTC)

Lovely job Leaf. ^^ CBA? Paleggy Ship it 00:25, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, disagreeing here. Could you make the shading all the same darkness? And make the neck all dark? And blur it a bit? llwildheartl00:29 Tue Feb 7

Hmm, well, I've never agreed with the philosophy of "All shading should have the same darkness", since it isn't true due to the varying amount of light hitting the different areas, though you could darken the bottom of her neck, belly, and the feet closest to us, if your light source is above her. --Leafstrike-- 22:09, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

sorry for long time..i have problems with gimp and this is blotchy, reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:38,February 10,2012 (UTC)

I see tons of shading waste by the back legs. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 21:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:21,February 11,2012 (UTC)

I think Moonleaf's statement on the shading is right, and this is lovely, so, CBA? -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    18:02, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but could you lighten the highlights? And if there are none, could you blur or lighten the shading? ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 23:07, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Fallow, as Moonleaf stated, the shading is fine as it is. Because from above, the light may be hitting hard on the cat, and below, the sun can't reach the belly, which makes it a gray color. There are examples for shading that has white with gray shading. Continuing CBA.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:31, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Approved.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:18, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Smoky (Lo) - Approved

Smoky.loner Hmm....I feel like I messed it up...Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 23:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ahah. Figured it out. Re-reuploaded User:Twilightheart200/Sig 23:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

The grey should be darker. oblivionAudience? 02:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the patches in the darker color. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 03:35, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink ^^  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:55, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:08, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Actually the grey was fine before, now it looks black. What was wrong with it? Bloo!yo 23:30, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

It was too light before, and you've darkened it too much. Lighten it just a touch c: oblivionAudience? 02:10, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded' - How's the color now? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 03:39, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Still a bit too dark. Lighten it a tad more? Paleggy Ship it 16:11, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink? ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 12:30, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fallow, I would, but, m'dear (:3) I got it off the kittypet image. e3e I can change it if someone else agrees. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 20:34, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:12, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt, but blur where the gray meets the white on the hindleg closest to us, and enlarge (not define) the "highlight" on the shoulder.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:12, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Stoneh, the shading's taken from my image of Crowfeather - both same rank, fur length. I'm not going to change it unless someone else agrees. o3o User:Twilightheart200/Sig 17:00, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Alright. Anyways, the leg was the biggest problem, so, CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:43, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. Sky To Kill An Empire 08:49, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Speckletail (Lo) ~ Approved

Speckletail.loner Certainly not one of my favorites. Comments? Ivyheart =P 06:31, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes and make them more wavy. oblivionAudience? 16:10, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to while doing my best to match the old loner image. Ivyheart =P 03:13, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit lighter. ^^ Sky Dovahjerk 03:15, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you match the elder image a bit? llwildheartl06:25 Thu Feb 2

There's a bit of waste on the front leg ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 01:09, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Half her images are one color and half are another, so do you want the hex codes from the warrior so then that will be one less tweak later on? XD Paleggy Ship it 20:58, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sure! Ivyheart =P 02:44, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I reuploaded to show you how I redid the stripes. If you think I should change the coloring than I will. =3 Ivyheart =P 02:50, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think with the shading placement, the tail shading it should be moved up the tail more. ^^ Sky Fus Roh Dah 10:10, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is so beautiful Ivy <3 Define the neck shading a little.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:10, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hopefully I got what you mean, Sky. =3 Ivyheart =P 02:23, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and then I think this'll be ready ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:01, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 22:07, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading a bit..--Cinder Real or Not Real?23:40, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 01:49, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

CBA, anyone? Sky To Kill An Empire 08:37, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Sky To Kill An Empire 11:06, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Shadow (Lo) ~ Approved

File:Shadow.loner.png Woo~ I got an original leader! Comments? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:54, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder shading <3  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:03, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye. Looks really neon. Sky To Kill An Empire 10:20, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Colors come right from her leader, Trolly. I won't change the colors, but I could probably play around as to where they're positioned. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 17:20, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:23, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. I can barely see the lineart. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:27, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:45, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the eye colour less lime green. Sweetflower02:33 Sat Feb 11

Does no one listen? The colors are right from her leader image. I am NOT changing it. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:48, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink a tad more ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:14, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:11, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good, CBA? Iveh Yo! 20:46, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:35, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Ice (Alt. Lo) - Approved

Ice.loner.alt The collar looks too bulky to me, and hope you don't mind if I changed the pattern a little... Comments? --Leafstrike-- 17:12, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

It matches better with the manga picture, so, I'd leave the pattern as is. Move the collar down a bit towards his shoulders and thin out the lineart around the edges, and define the ear-pink ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 17:14, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think it has to match the manga... --Leafstrike-- 17:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Why is there black stuff on this collar? Iveh Yo! 20:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oh goodness, I thought this was Snake finally going up again. XD Anyways, I don't know if the changes are showing, but the collar still needs to be moved closer to the shoulder if they are, and yes, it does need to match the manga, though maybe not exactly, at least a bit, and the rogue did so can you keep that pattern? Paleggy Ship it 20:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

...can someone show me how he looks? I don't have the manga, so I don't know. --Leafstrike-- 22:30, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Never mind, I'll match the old version. --Leafstrike-- 01:36, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Didn't he have an underbite when he looked like this? Or was that Snake? Shelly For a limited time only 23:57, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like he got shot in his foreleg farthest away from us xD. Blur it/smudge it unless someone else disagrees. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 20:23, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shellheart: I don't know. Ivystripe: Just the dirt and germs on the teeth. I made it resemble the old image. --Leafstrike-- 21:33, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur where you smudged the pelt. Silverhmm 23:06, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I never put dirt and grime on the old image. Dirt would be more brown colored but I feel it distracts from the image, but this is only my opinion. Iveh Yo! 23:32, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It was brown, though I made it lighter. --Leafstrike-- 23:38, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the back of the collar (The part on the top of his neck) stick out like at the bottom. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 01:13, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

It wouldn't make sense if I did, since his head is hanging down. It would look like the collar is floating. --Leafstrike-- 02:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Well, since there is a tooth/claw there, it would make sense to have the collar pushed up, also since it is connected straight with the lineart it almost looks like the collar is part of the cat itself. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 03:18, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is there any way to satisfy these people? Misunderstanding upon misunderstanding! --Leafstrike-- 18:15, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a tad and then I think this'll be ready ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:10, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 22:43, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Gonna go along with Scarlet here. CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:17, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 18:38, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Lo. Alt.) - Approved

Snake (BC).loner.alt*insert Freudian slip Paleh joke here* Welp, not much to say about this one :P Iveh Yo! 03:22, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white and define the shading on the black. Maybe make two layers of shading? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:17, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded haha I got this. I just use the eraser with opacity on the white and it works. :P Iveh Yo! 18:35, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading XP  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  21:53, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

(darn internet making me post this twice....) Nobody's commented about my mistake yet. XD I was dreading this being put up for nothing. :P Anyways, lighten the tail a bit more, as I said in chat, it looks gray-er than the rest of the white. Lovely job dear. ^^ Paleggy Ship it 03:51, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Erm, I'm getting two totally conflicting critiques and I'm not going to touch it until you guys can agree lol Iveh Yo! 05:46, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

At least lighten up the black a little c: oblivionAudience? 05:48, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe try adding a highlight to the tail.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:15, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 04:17, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and thicken it a bit around the back area... you know, near the derrière... around the fundament... thicken the ass-shading, is what I'm getting at. --Shelly For a limited time only 04:33, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? XD Iveh Yo! 04:38, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? *inserts some kind of Paleh-like typo* Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:47, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm seriously considering doing black and white shading on two different layers, if not now, the future Iveh Yo! 04:52, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Ahhh, there's the comments. XD *sneaks off to slap cloudy and shelly* Anyways, it was totally conflicting with mountain's comment. She meant make the shading more visible, and I said lighten the tail itself, no necessarily the shading. And it still should bedone, the tail's gray. Paleggy Ship it 07:54, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? I really don't wanna lighten the shading on the tail anymore because then it will pretty much be non-existant. Iveh Yo! 20:45, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good to me. o3o CBA? (I shall get this off the page before anyone can make more comments./.... Oops, did I say that out loud? ;) JK) Paleggy Ship it 18:23, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

It's been 24 hours and I ws told I can archive ths Iveh Yo! 03:19, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Stonefur (A) ~ Approved

Stonefur.apprenticeHere he is! Comments? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 15:47, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Take out the shredded ears. We typically assume that the injuries occur in the warrior rank unless the cat is mentioned with them as a kit or apprentice. Shelly For a limited time only 16:02, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Do I remove the scars as well or not? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I imagine when his ears got shredded those scars came along with it as well. Give him a gray nose unless he's like his sister and has a pink oneIveh Yo! 16:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

*shakes head* he has a pink nose. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:18, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:25, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. oblivionAudience? 16:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:39, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the earpink and darken it a bit, smooth out the shading on the haunch, it's a bit blotchy, and make the highlight/lighter part of the tail go all to way down, not just at the tip. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Okay....sorry i was busy....I'll get to it in a second....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nosepink. And it looks like he has a lighter muzzle. Icewish 12:19, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing, read what I said on Rosepetal....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:22, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:18, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, alright I completely redid it. I have been wanting to do Stonefur's apprentice and now I can! MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 14:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I changed the heading if that's alright.....--Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:03, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink, define the light on the face and back, and darken the shading on your haunch ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:06, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I can't work on this today because I have this on a different computer. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 14:26, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:59, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the sides of the pelt into the earpink. Sweetflower22:05 Fri Jan 13

Also blur the earpink.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:32, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink hun. --Cinder Real or Not Real?21:53, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that haunch shading, it looks odd. o3o Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 22:07, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be reuploaded tomorrow or it'll be declined for a lack of work Iveh Yo! 03:21, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Anyone with a free project may take over Iveh Yo! 02:50, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? :3 Silverhmm 13:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Course. :) PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:30, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 22:41, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make the color of the earpink be the same in both ears. --Cinder Real or Not Real?23:55, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

They are the same color. It looks different because of the shading. Silverhmm 00:05, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:10, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

No. Don't. He was described with a pink nose. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 00:13, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, all of Bluestar's kits have pink noses. ^^ Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. Sky- Watchu want? 11:47, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Well then put shading on the other ear or something..because they don't look normal. One of them is neon, but the other is fine. --Cinder Real or Not Real?21:48, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 15:00, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit smaller and even out the shading; the head and shoulders looks darken than the haunch and tail xP ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:05, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 00:54, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink into the fur a little. --User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 17:31, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 12:20, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Why are all his images different colors? XD Anyways, I think this is ready. CBA? :) Paleggy Ship it 15:09, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to disturb the CBA, but in his description, it says "light." Shouldn't this and the other images be lightened, as it's in the description.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    09:54, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lighten him up. I'll tell the html coloring for him so all his images will match. Silverhmm 13:04, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

This looks good to me. CBA? Rainlegs 23:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, Silver, but I don't see where your light source is. Your shading is kinda inconsistent. llwildheartl02:16 Sun Jan 29

lol Remember to change the heading, Wildy xP ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:40, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm withdrawing this. I want to work on a loner image. Silverhmm 11:51, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

You're withdrawing this? Can I take over? Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 17:08, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

I took over, Re-uploaded =3 Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 21:59, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:45, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

I think the shading could be blurred more Sky Dovahkiin 03:24, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nosepink, it's very neon. --Elolegs

13:51, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took the nose-pink from Silver's apprentice Stonefur, but I still darkened it. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 22:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing, he's described as light and all his images will be tweaked for that. And lighten the shading and dull the earpink. Paleggy Ship it 18:23, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I've been seeing things saying that only one image can be worked on per person. So I'll withdraw this. If I am allowed to work on more than one, though, (which I highly doubt) you can tell me and rub it in my face saying "I told you so!" =3 Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 22:52, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Declined. Anyone who wants to take over may ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:01, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

So from what I understand, if it's an apprentice, you can still have it and a loner up at once, right? I'm not completely sure, as the way it was explained was very confusing to me, but if so, I'd love to take over. o3o Paleggy Ship it 09:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

May I take over, please? Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 20:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask. Yes, just go reserve it first Iveh Yo! 20:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you. I'm going to reserve it now. Reuploaded. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 21:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear. Looks nice~! <3 User:Twilightheart200/Sig 22:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you. :3 Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 22:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oh... I said I was gonna take over.... *shrugs* Whatever. He needs to be much lighter. Don't bother matching his other images, the color's getting changed anyways. He's supposed to be light blue-gray. Paleggy Ship it 03:54, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry Paley. ;C Made it more blue-ish. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 05:35, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged earpink, dulled nose, and made pelt colour less purple. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 5:41, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The color is like Bluestar's old image that was redone. Make it more gray with only a hint of blue, try coloring the shading slightly blue. Iveh Yo! 05:47, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. Any more comments~? (Made it slightly more gray and blue shading.) Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 06:21, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the base color less dark and smudged earpink. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 06:29, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more and make the earpink less purple. Paleggy Ship it 00:28, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. More pinky, less purpley. And I lightened it a little. C; Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 0:47, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:51, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Add/define the depth in the eyes, and dull the nose a bit. Paleggy Ship it 09:00, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dulled nose, defined depth, defined tail shading. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 19:59, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by the base of his tail running along his back. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:08, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I just realized that too. Thanks. Reuploaded. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 00:10, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? This is very pretty. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:25, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I apologize but the shading looks a touch too dark and it needs blurred, and the pelt needs to be smudged into the earpink. Iveh Yo! 02:52, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

That's fine. Reuploaded. Better? Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 03:17, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Isn't this too light for Stonefur? Or is this his alternate one? Either way define the light source.--Cinder Real or Not Real?16:34, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made him darker and defined the light source. I don't know, everybody said not to match the warrior. ^^; Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 00:19, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Stonefur's current images need to be lightened, as his description says he is light. ^^ Sky To Kill An Empire 01:05, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe go with Mistystar's color perhaps? :3 Define the shoulder shading too.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:32, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Honestly, Mistystar seems too dark to me. I defined the shoulder shading. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 07:16, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading, and maybe make him slightly more grey, he looks a little too blue. Sky To Kill An Empire 08:42, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Less blue, more gray. Blurred haunch best I could. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 02:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:51, February 15, 2012 (UTC)


Ice (Lo) ~ Approved

File:Ice.loner.pngYay! First loner! Comments? ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 22:21, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful! ^^ Tone down the highligh, if there is one, on the haunch.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  22:23, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I always use highlights, Mountain. ;) ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 22:28, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Arrrrggghhhh, I wanted to do this! Blur the shading just a touch. --Leafstrike-- 00:13, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gotta be faster next time! ;) ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 23:01, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to the collar ^^  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:36, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 23:01, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Crop the pic around the lineart please. LeafyAbsolute maniac,11:53,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Something happened, but I know I Reuploaded.... ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 12:24, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the lighter part in the middle brighter. Sky Fus Roh Dah 07:34, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the collar lineart about one pixle thinner? ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 01:40, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded That lighter part seems fine... ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 20:57, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. --Cinder Real or Not Real?01:48, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the collar sorta hang from his neck. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 23:03, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, don't you already have Plumwillow up? Because I thought we were only aloud to have one image for approval at a time... Sweetflower22:08 Sun Feb 12

Good eye, Sweet. Purple, you gotta make a choice as to which one you want. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm keeping this one, and Pouncey, what do you mean? ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 23:56, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. I would bring the collar closer to the shoulders.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:57, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 21:14, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I mean let it hang from his neck like his Alt. Loner image. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 21:39, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't need to hang, as BloodClan collars are tight. CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:55, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

None; Approved. Paleggy Ship it 18:25, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Alt. Lo) ~ Approved

File:Lichenfur.loner.alt.pngNot much to say. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:17, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the shoulder and next and define it on the haunch ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:20, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:29, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:24, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:27, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Goodness Mountain, and I thought you couldn't get epicer. *.* Just define the tail shading a bit and I'll CBA. Paleggy Ship it 20:34, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Gaaw Thank you Paleh <33  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  20:48, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? *hides* Jesus, Mountain...your images are beautiful. o.o Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:44, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I hate to interrupt, but honestly, she looks spotted, not mottled. Motled is more like my alternate version of Mudfur, however, if other SM's disagree, you can continue CBA. Iveh Yo! 04:11, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Also, bur the shading some more.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:12, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I looked up mottled cat on google images and the copied the pattern which was the old pattern. And I blurred it to max now.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks a bit...solid. On her shoulder. Could you possibly blur it a tad? *hides from epicness* I sorry. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 10:20, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Mooneh ^^  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aft