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Millie (Lo) - Approved

Millie.loner Ugh.. Moonleaf, I am so sorry I totally wrecked your charart... Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:39, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Hush. This is a pretty charart. Thicken the collar a little bit. jayce  01:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:06, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think thats really good! Better than mine!

Echosong3...Ruler of water!!! 18:39, February 12, 2012 (UTC)Echosong3

Echosong, please don't comment just to tell the person you like their image. Make the collar tag a little rounder Iveh Yo! 20:17, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

It's alright! Make the stripes sharper. --Leafstrike-- 22:36, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the highlight on the back a little larger. Breezewhisker 00:36, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:28, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Iveh Yo! 03:15, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  05:39, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Husker (Lo) ~ Approved

Husker.lonerHere he is! Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:53, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

He needs a patch of light grey fur on his head. Shelly For a limited time only 16:54, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste about his nose. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 17:32, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading a little.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:35, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:45, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

There's a block of waste by the tip of the tail. This is great <3 Iveh Yo! 23:55, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded *derp* Thanks, Stripey! >:D RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:12, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little sharp. Blur it, please. :3 This is really good. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:21, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter patch on the head. c: Sky To Kill An Empire 07:08, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:07, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great. CBA? Iveh Yo! 03:21, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  05:37, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt. Ki) ~ Approved

Oakheart.kit.altHi! Like my charart? I made it pretty quickly =)

On the "characters needing art" page it said they needed a bracken alt, which might mean the alternate kit version, but I'm not sure so I'll post this anyways. Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 18:08, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

This isn't bracken colored. In fact, it looks exactly like his current kit image... Shelly For a limited time only 18:13, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I know it looks like his current kit image, but I made it on photoshop (I didn't copy it). I wasn't sure what the "bracken" meant. I'll make it lighter momentarily. Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~20:41, January 20,2012 (UTC)

It's a...thumbnail, I think? Change it pleeeease. MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

23:38, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I know I am not a part of the project, but if you don't know what "bracken colored" means, then you shouldn't do that charart. Chez

Dethumbed. Rename the file Oakheart.kit.alt.png. Bracken colored is along the lines of this:[1] If you use photoshop, use the eye-dropped tool to pick a color and use that as your base color. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:21, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on his face and tail. You might want to fix it. ♫Purplemoon♪ Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons! 13:58, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Light source looks a little bit, confused LeafyAbsolute maniac,18:37,January 21,2012 (UTC)

I know what bracken looks like! I just wasn't sure what they meant by bracken on the characters needing art page. I'm going to use the colours from the alternate warrior version so that it looks the same. I'll also fix the lines around the muzzle and tail ASAP. Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~22:01, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~10:05, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

...Any more comments? -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 20:02, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

You should save it as a .png, not a .jpg, so the background will be transparent and there won't be waste pixels around the image. --Leafstrike-- 02:10, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

It has to be png for more reasons than just that, so yes, change that. And rename this Oakheart.kit.alt.png. Also, be a bit more patient. Don't ask for comments unless you've been waiting a day or two and nobody's CBA'd or commented on it. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 23:58, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry; I'm just kind of an impatient person. Re-uploaded Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 00:52, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Minorly fixed heading, it still looks really pixely. Ivyheart =P 04:22, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, that's cause it was saved as a jpg at first. I'm sorry, but there's not much way to fix that without redoing, so I think that's what you'll have to do. Sorry. Paleggy Ship it 16:14, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Oh...great. That's ok though I guess, since I can do solids really quickly. I'll re-upload it ASAP Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 21:02, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~22:07, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Look here for shading placement. Right now I can't tell where your light source is. llwildheartl02:36 Fri Jan 27

Are you still working on this? Iveh Yo! 03:06, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but two weeks isn't over yet. -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 23:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean exactly? You've got one week before a chararts declined, it's been 6 days. Just cause you have that long till you can reupload doesn't mean you should take the whole time. If you're still working on this, reupload it then. This will be declined if it's not uploaded by tomorrow. Paleggy Ship it 18:00, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 00:09, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Have you looked at the shading placement? It still is lacking. llwildheartl04:52 Thu Feb 2

Sorry, just forgot the shading on the legs. Re-uploaded -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 23:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I can't tell where your light source is still. It looks like a highlight on the chest. Define your lightsource please. Sweetflower01:10 Sat Feb 4

The light source is kinda coming from the front. If you look at all the other kit images, (especially Bluestar's) they look pretty much the same. -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 02:03, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Round/darken the shading; it's a bit flat and define the light on the face. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 06:04, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, re-uploaded. There wasn't much I could do about the shading; I think it's fine. -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 16:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the face and the shading still isn't right. It looks really flat and the light source doesn't make much sense. Look at the apprentice tutorials? Paleggy Ship it 20:29, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

The light source is fine, I think. Look at Bluestar's kit image. It's the same. -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 22:00, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Not really.... Paleggy Ship it 03:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

If you want to copy the Bluestar kit image's light source, you'll need to have shading on the neck, forehead, edges of the face, legs/paws, back/waist, and near the base of the tail. If you want to, add a big highlight on the midriff/chest, on the face, and on the tail tip. Look here for some shading placement. do you use the dodge tool for highlights/burn tool for the shading? If yes, I suggest you make a new layer for highlights/shading and draw on your light source with a black/white pencil. Then guassion blur it. I can help you if you like. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:57, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Still workin' on this? jayce  20:51, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, still working on this. (And no, I don't use the dodge tool for highlights, I use the gradient tool. I don't think I need help, DJ CandyBud, but thanks for asking) Re-Uploaded -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 21:30, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Much better, this looks nice. Slightly blur the earpink, specifically on the cat's left ear. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:59, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Aww he's so adorable!! Just make the earpink a bit more pink than orange. ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:42, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, Re-uploaded -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 18:02, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again; forgot the to make the earpink pinker -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 19:23, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little more and I'll CBA. :) Ivyheart =P 04:09, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading a bit more too Paleggy Ship it 16:30, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 21:23, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?

Wildy forgot to sign. CBA started about 9 hours ago. Paleggy Ship it 18:16, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  18:58, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Alt. Lo) - Approved

Sol.loner.alt Just see if you can find the subliminal message, Cloudy! >8D oblivionAudience? 03:31, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the white into the pelt please C: Iveh Yo! 03:35, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I was just waiting for you to take this, Oblivion! ;P Define the ear-pink a bit more and define the feathered ears. (Garr!! Edit conflict, Ivy!) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:37, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 03:53, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the what-seems-to-look-like a brown paw on his left hind leg. =D MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

20:27, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 02:58, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Loonie!! You cut his poor wittle footsy off! DD8  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:37, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Pfft, he doesn't deserve feets. Blur the haunch shading a little. Sky To Kill An Empire 11:22, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Oh noooessss D: oblivionAudience? 21:45, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. <333 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:30, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 22:35, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:19, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 17:41, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (Lo) ~ Approved

Violet.lonerIts my first tabbie how is itAcornleaf 02:11, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Where was she mentioned as a loner? If this stays up, please, make the white look a little less orange. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:14, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Clean up around the back a little; looks like you got a bit out of the lineart. Fix the paws too.

Woo patch of green 273 02:15, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm I'm not sure. but if she should get one, lighten the stripes, make the ends pointed and blur them.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:40, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

She wasn't mentioned as a loner. Declined for now, unless anyone disagrees. Paleggy Ship it 08:48, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, no, she was never a loner. Just BloodClan and then Kittypet. Shelly For a limited time only 14:14, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I thought because she and barley rn from bloodclan but...Acornleaf 21:04, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, that's not half bad of a point. She and her brother did attempt to flee from BloodClan - so, how exactly would that still make them BloodClan cats? I don't think that automatically means Violet qualifies for the rank of rogue, either. jayce  21:09, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

If she was no other rank and was not violent, such as the point I made with Sasha, then I sincerely believe she would get a loner image. Besides, she doesn't seem like the type to be a rogue and she was forced to be a BloodClan cat against her will. Iveh Yo! 23:11, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I never really thought all of BloodClan should have rogue blanks for that very reason. It's not like all of them chose to be in BloodClan. I'm not sure how to solve that problem though.... Paleggy Ship it 15:41, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

We made apprentice images for cats who we simply mentioned having a mentor. I havn't read the manga but if there was a point after Violet left the Bloodclan and before she became a kittypet and she wasn't at all involved in Bloodclan affairs, then I think she would qualify for one.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:38, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

As far as I know, she didn't actually participate in the affairs of BloodClan. If anything, she was forced to do it, if she did. It's been a while since I've read anything concerning Violet. But, I think this is another Sasha-like ordeal. jayce  05:40, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think she should get both, she was part of Bloodclan and they are bad even if she was forced she should get one. She escaped for a little while=loner. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:22, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. jayce  20:18, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

May I take it? LeafyAbsolute maniac, 21:02,February 14,2012 (UTC)

Go for it. I was going to decline it anyways. jayce  21:06, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded, comments? LeafyAbsolute maniac, 21:30,February 14,2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Shadow the back ear a bit.

Woo patch of green 22:16, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad ^^ This is gorgeous!  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:12, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on her right hindleg (her right) and could you lighten the shading on the legs~ ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 02:34, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac, 14:41,February 15,2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Leafstorm. CBA? AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 04:03, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Approved LeafyAbsolute maniac, 18:30,February 18,2012 (UTC)

Brook (Lo) - Approved

Brook.lonerHere she is. My first Charart in a long time. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:41, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Whole image lineart is blurred, redone it please LeafyAbsolute maniac,17:43,January 30,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to do it without redoing the image totally. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:55, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little? And on chat last night, we agreed Brook should be either tweaked or redone becase she needs more stripes on her body. On her back leh leg and face especially. Would you be fine with doing that? :) Great work by the way Iveh Yo! 18:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart's blurred too. oblivionAudience? 19:23, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

The ear-pink is in the wrong side of the ear where we can see it (edit conflicts! How dare it!) Raineh Has returned :D 19:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, that was me with the conflicts. Changes not showing. I think the earpink should be forward. Just looks more natural to me. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:35, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and thicken the lineart one pixel at the torn ear.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:03, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Please say what parts need to be blurred. That would really help. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:56, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Try matching the stripes with the warrior version, as in, less smudging, and thicker stripes. Also make the shading more noticable while not overdoing it. So far, nice work! AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 00:40, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Atelda, I told her she could change the stripes because on chat we agreed Brook needed more stripes. Iveh Yo! 02:51, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you have the smudging go in the direction of her fur a little more and darken the shading? Leggo 🏈 03:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I love swirled tabbies, which is why I chose this design. Changes not showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:36, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

The fur smudging still isn't going in the direction of the fur. And this actually has less stripes than the other images, so add more. They also look kinda unnatural, like they're paintbrush strokes, not stripes. And try looking at a reference of a swirled tabby to make it more realistic. And if her stripes are gonna be redone anyways, there's no need to keep the color of the other images, so can you make the base coat less ginger? Paleggy Ship it 17:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:30, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner, smudge them, and change the color of the main pelt color and stripes to brown. Right now it looks red.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:56, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. It's weird. It shows a previous one. Hmmm. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:05, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it a lot? It's too dark right now. And the stripe pattern still doesn't look very realistic, it looks like brush strikes instead of stripes. Paleggy Ship it 16:23, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

The very first tabby style you uploaded was good. You might want to go back to that style. But instead of rounded point ends, make them narrow out into points a bit (if that makes sense)  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:04, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, her prey-hunter was redone. You'll have to change to stripes.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  15:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this? Paleggy Ship it 08:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, please. Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 22:26, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a week since this was last uploaded. Declining this and any user without a current project may take over if they wish. oblivionAudience? 02:56, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ooh, I'll take over~ I've always wanted to do one of Brook's images. XD Paleggy Ship it 03:44, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Though it may not look like it, the stripe match exactly from the preyhunter. Oblivion sent me the xcf cause it's hard t see through the mud. Comments? Paleggy Ship it 16:27, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a bit :3 Beautiful <3  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:17, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - What on earth...? I could have sworn I reuploaded this..... Huh, I must be losing it. XD Sorry for the wait. And thanks Mounty. :) Paleggy Ship it 15:17, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmmm, Cloudy likes this. Cloudy shall CBA said image. So, CBA? jayce  19:10, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  21:08, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Pod (Lo) ~ Approved

Pod.loner Woot! I snagged another one! Comments? MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

14:16, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear pink more. Silverhmm 14:21, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. =3 MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

15:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the muzzle a little.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:09, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes are showing now. MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

17:32, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  18:39, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bettah? MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

18:49, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Well done, blur the muzzle a tad more, and the ear-pink and define the shading a tad. Raineh Has returned :D 02:32, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing. MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

03:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. <3 Sky Dovahjerk 04:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Add some scars around his muzzle, since he was described with a scarred muzzle. --Leafstrike-- 04:47, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

It looks good to me, but yeah you should add the scars --Tigerheart stay golden... 04:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

TIGERHEART! Dont mentoin the same things, please learn to read, yes? LeafyAbsolute maniac,11:58,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. (optional I think ;3 ) ~~

Re-uploaded. I know I fixed the earpink! D= Added scars~ MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

23:51, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:15, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? :3 MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

11:52, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Even out the shading (make sure it's all the same darkness) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:04, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...on another charart for approval, I heard from Moonleaf that shading doesn't necessarily have to be the same darkness. But I'll do my best. x3 MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

14:12, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred the shading a bit, but I'm not making it the same darkness. MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

22:59, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, and it should be ready. Lovely, Mooneh!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:27, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

21:58, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think you could blur the grey muzzle more. Sky To Kill An Empire 11:03, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the scars just a tad? :3 Mistypebble 20:04, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scars a little. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:57, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

If I blur the scars, they'll touch each other and it'll look like he's blushing x3. MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

10:51, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the long wait. Don't look at my shame~! *hangs head* MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

11:20, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful, Mooneh. CBA? AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 16:46, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  21:07, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Webfoot (A) ~ Approved

Webfoot.apprenticeFallow's reservation ran out, so I snatched this up. According to the category page, this is the last apprentice image needing to be redone (but there could be more without categories). Woo! Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 15:36, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps make the stripes fade out a bit more like the elder and I believe the nose should be grey. Brilliant job like always, Shellheart. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 00:17, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I did this to match his warrior image, as the elder image is on the redo list. Shelly For a limited time only 00:51, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

The elder image shouldn't be on the redo list, the warrior is getting tweaked by simply putting shorthair lineart over the old image, so the elder one doesn't need to be redone. I'm removing it now, so could you make this match the elder now? Paleggy Ship it 05:00, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I was the one who was supposed to do that, I forgot to post it XD Problem solved. Bloo!yo 05:06, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Aww, dang it. The warrior image looked so much better than the elder image. (sigh) Fine, I'll do it. Shelly For a limited time only 15:59, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. ♫Purplemoon♪ Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons! 01:21, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, someone else can take over. I just don't have it in me to copy that pattern when I like this one so much. Shelly For a limited time only 20:24, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can i steal this back? ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 20:28, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. Shelly For a limited time only 20:46, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

You workin' on this Pouncey? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:40, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yah, but I'm having computer issues. It'll be posted by Saturday. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 01:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I changed to title since you re-uploaded. Blur the shading on the haunch.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:26, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

My computer still shows Shelly's version o_o Reuploaded... ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 19:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

There it is! Lighten the earpink so it matches the elder.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  20:14, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fallow needed me to reupload for her, since she couldn't edit.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a touch more ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 06:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D08:33, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

Reuploaded ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 16:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, and I think it might be ready. Lovely Fallow!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    22:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the legs darker and the stripes slightly longer. Make the stripes fade out more at the ends and sharpen the stripe by the eye. llwildheartl23:50 Mon Feb 6

Lighten the base color a little. This is gorgeous Fallow ^^  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Fallow? jayce  06:07, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lost the layers so i redid it. All the colors are fron the elder image. Comments? ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 00:26, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes fade out more like the other images. --Leafstrike-- 22:06, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit more.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:13, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

All the colors are from his elder image Mountain o3o it just has shading on it. If someone else agrees I'll change it. I'll try to upload sometime today ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 21:12, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I agree. Shading or not, it's still too dark. And can you make the earpink less gray? Paleggy Ship it 04:53, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 22:25, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

There hasn't been any comments and whatnot for a while...so, CBA? jayce  19:08, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 23:12, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Q) ~ Approved

File:Squirrelflight.queen.png Like a middle manager! >8D But really, convo for this is on the talk page. I edited the lineart to make her not-pregnant looking... so essentially, behold my image of Squirrelflight laying down! Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 00:27, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is..so purdy 8DDD Can you add some more stripes to the flank pretty please?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:30, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

<333 Can you blur the flank stripes a tad also? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:31, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! ^^ Can you blur all the stripes a bit actually? And as for the lineart, it seems a bit like her chest is sticking out a bit too much at the bottom. Like there's flab or something. Could you get rid of the little bit? :) Paleggy Ship it 00:35, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I trimmed her down a bit more. Her back wouldn't be arching so much when she isn't pregnant or nursing. And I would add more stripes, but that'd deviate from her already established design. Shelly For a limited time only 02:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but can you move her pupil more to the centre? She looks like she's freaked out about something beside her xD Other than that, beautiful. oblivionAudience? 02:41, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'd actually rather leave them as is. I kinda wanted to make her look guilty, and I guess freaked out works as well. Shelly For a limited time only 03:38, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Well all righty then c: Tear her ear. oblivionAudience? 03:39, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out that lump in the middle of her back and raise her hindquarters. Breezewhisker 05:29, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you redline the hindquarters thing? I'm not sure what you mean. Shelly For a limited time only 05:42, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

That was badly phrased. Sorry. But I kinda meant to like make the hindquarters more rounded. I'd think with the lack of the belly, her weight would shift to lie less on her stomach and more on her haunches. Can you kinda see what I mean with this guy? I certainly don't envy you with this tweak. XD The anatomy changes a lot in a pregnant cat.. Breezewhisker 06:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Ahh, yup, I got it. Thanks. Shelly For a limited time only 06:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's that?

The hind foot looks a little weird in that position. Move the hind foot a little over <--- side, even if it's only a little bit. --Leafstrike-- 18:48, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the haunch lineart is kind of thick at the bottom. Thin it out to two pixils wide. Looking pretty good thar Ms. Shelly! Iveh Yo! 19:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Taper the tail up by the base. Maybe also make the hip a bit pointier towards the top; a bit too round with the more slender back. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:22, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart at the bottom of the chin looks a bit thick. Thin it out by a pixel or two.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:34, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Did all that, and brought the tail in so it's a bit more consistent with the other queen images. Shelly For a limited time only 04:06, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The chin's still a bit thick and there's a kinda random bump on the haunch. Smooth that out a bit. Paleggy Ship it 04:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I put the bump there in response to Scarlet's comment. Shelly For a limited time only 05:03, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shadin more. Sky Dovahjerk 07:11, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 20:39, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the bump on the haunch a bit flatter? Don't remove it, but just make it less protruding. Make the chest curve in a bit more and add some shaggy hair to it. llwildheartl23:58 Mon Feb 6

Re-Uploaded. I'm not re-adding the bit of shaggy fur going inder the front leg, since it's representational of a fat fold pregnant cats get. Shelly For a limited time only 23:41, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The neck seems a bit fat, could you thin it a bit? Paleggy Ship it 16:13, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Ffff, I just curved it out because Wildheart asked me to. =_= Fine, I'll this it out... again... Shelly For a limited time only 20:52, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I trimmed out the neck and fluffed up the tail. Please don't ask me to trim out the chest as well. She does have a ribcage, you know. Shelly For a limited time only 17:45, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry but the neck still curves out like this; (. It should curve in like this; ). And the chest should be trimmed out. She may have a chest, but in cats, it's much farther back and doesn't stick out like that. Paleggy Ship it 03:06, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. Sorry, but have you looked at a cat lately? Cats, especially wild ones, have a lot of loose skin even when they're thin. I'd rather leave her as is. I think she looks fine, especially considering the fact that the queens are always fed more than the rest of the Clan. Shelly For a limited time only 14:57, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelqueen looks fine to me. CBA? jayce  22:38, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry to disagree, but if she's not pregnant, she wouldn't have that much fat around her neck and chest. And if you look at a cat's anatomy, the ribs are way back compared to this. And the neck shouldn't curve out like that. And using the excuse that she would have fat cause she's fed more, we should just use the normal blank, as she would be fat, and that's not what we're doing. So please fix it? Paleggy Ship it 07:58, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

No, Paleh. If I thinned out her neck to curve in she'd look like a foreign cat, and she is decidedly not one. She's a moggie, and all but foreign cats have very little neck in the first place and they tend to look a little round when they're laying down. She looks perfectly natural. If you don't believe me, just look at this recumbant non-pregnant cat here. Cats have a lot of loose skin, and when they lay down this is how they look. Now, I'm continuing my CBA. Shelly For a limited time only 14:38, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Fine, don't thin out the curve, but at least smooth it, it's bumpy and uneven, like her chest is sticking out from more than just flab. And smooth the haunch juuust a tad. And also blur the stripes a bit. Paleggy Ship it 15:16, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

If I smooth it out it'll be even fatter looking. I've smoothed the haunch as much as I can without it being back to the was it was before I was told previously to make it stick out more, and the stripes match her other images, so they're staying. Shelly For a limited time only 15:20, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

No it won't. It's plenty possible to smooth it out and keep it thin looking. If anything, in my opinion, it looks fatter this way. And the stripes do not match, they're more blurred on her warrior image. Paleggy Ship it 15:36, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fine. I smoothed out the neck and blurred the stripes even more (though they matched the apprentice and kit chararts fine). But I'm not touching that leg, I like how it looks, and it's my right to say no to a critique like that. Shelly For a limited time only 21:35, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Ummm...can I comment on the lineart? If so, where the back meets the haunch is really sharp and unatural. Also blur the stripes a bit more, maybe darken the shaging. Lovely as always. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave!

 01:14, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

That's her knee joint, it's perfectly natural. The stripes are blurred as much as I will go while still matching the other chararts, and the shading it at the exact same level as the apprentice charart. Shelly For a limited time only 14:39, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

doesn't look very natural to me... The stripes don't match the other images, they should be blurred more, I agree with Sand, and just cause the shading opacity works on one image, doesn't mean it works on a completely different blank. And just pointing this out, at this point, you're basically saying you refuse to change anything. Everything that needs to be changed you won't do. Paleggy Ship it 20:55, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for butting in, Paleh, but technically, Shelly doesn't have to /do/ anything. It's stated in the guidelines that an artist doesn't always have to do what's asked of them. If they don't want to go with a suggestion, they don't have to. *is shot* jayce  20:58, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

I know. And that's fine, I'm just pointing out that she's choosing not to change pretty much anything on this image, and that just didn't seem completely right in my opinion... *shrugs* You're right though, it is her choice. Paleggy Ship it 04:24, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

I've changed it plenty. But thanks. I merely refuse to take out her hip joint or blur her stripes into non-existence. I've been CBA'd twice and you've revoked it twice based on things that I'd established that I was not going to change because I don't feel I should for both the sake of realism and consistency. I'm not the one being stubborn here, you are. Shelly For a limited time only 14:01, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Woah there Shelly, not trying to start anything here. Just pointing out that you were refusing to change everything that needed to be fixed, despite mote than one person asking you to. And it was more than just those two things. But if the other SMs agree, then fine, go ahead an start the CBA again. I just thought those things should be fixed, because, whether you believe they should be changed or not, I fully do, but as Cloudy pointed out, I guess it is your choice, so whatever. I just wanted her image to be the best it could. Paleggy Ship it 18:21, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, let's try and not kill each other, please. I'm just going to CBA this, since Shelly's already established her stance on the matter, and in the end, it always has been and always will be artist's choice. CBA? jayce  19:13, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Look, I'm sorry, I just don't like it when people try to force me to make changes I don't want to make. But I re-uploaded, anyway. Shelly For a limited time only 00:57, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 23:13, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Hussar (Lo) ~ Approved

Hussar.loner First loner image and first image for approval made on GIMP. I love GIMP now though. Any way, here he is! Comments? Raineh Has returned :D 19:19, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and tone down the highlights. Excellent! oblivionAudience? 19:21, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I swear, one more edit conflict and i shall lose it. Any way, i gave him the wrong eye color (don't ask how) So I fixed that also. Comments? Raineh Has returned :D 19:35, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar. This is lovely daddy! Sweetflower19:41 Mon Jan 30

Re-uploaded. I have been discovered! Oh noes! Pshaw, comments? Raineh Has returned :D 19:46, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar some more and make it the same colour as the earpink. --Leafstrike-- 20:50, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Nyeh, scar. Your lucky i have the .xcf file Comments? Raineh Has returned :D 21:00, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot. Sky Dovahkiin 21:31, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Pshaw, shading is annoying right now. Any way, comments? Raineh Has returned :D 22:33, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more... --Leafstrike-- 18:27, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar stand out. I also don't think it should be so shoop da whoopy. Make it straighter :3 oblivionAudience? 19:16, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Raineh Has returned :D 21:30, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:27, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Not half bad, Rain. This is looking excellent. jayce  19:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Cloudy. Raineh Has returned :D 18:48, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar thicker and brighter.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  18:50, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing, and when they do, i just gotta say ew. Raineh Has returned :D 19:09, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the scar a bit more. It looks a bit paintbrushy ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 06:00, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ew still. Raineh Has returned :D 19:23, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and define the haunch and shoulder highlights ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, make the scar a bit thinner and smudge it less. Otherwise great job ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real? 21:12, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It wasn't smudged but alright. Any way, thanks ^.^ Raineh Has returned :D 19:29, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur highlights. Chez

Re-uploaded. Raineh Has returned :D 19:37, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar a little more ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 03:01, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. jayce  20:13, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. RainheartlegsHaunts you 20:14, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

The scar looks over-blurred and too dark. Try something like I did with Snowtuft, ask me if you want to know how I did it Iveh Yo! 03:25, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, considering the fact that this cat has long fur, the most he'd probably have there is scar fur unless the scar was sticking wayyyy out, so this looks fine. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 17:29, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:48, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Cinders (Lo) ~ Approved

Cinders.loner I love Cinders, comments? Silverhmm 21:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? Loverly. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:58, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 22:01, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the transitions between the patches. oblivionAudience? 22:07, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 11:49, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the one on the belly so it's more consistent. oblivionAudience? 03:52, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could you defne the earpink? I can barely see it. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:45, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It might be your computer Bluestar. Silverhmm 21:25, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad? Iveh Yo! 01:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:53, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you brighten the earpink a tad like the queen?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:29, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I took the earpink from the queen. Silverhmm 12:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 20:11, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the parts where the patches meet a wee bit more. Cinder's looking very purty! ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real? 21:15, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I think I see a couple of unfilled pixels on the front foreleg, by the belly. Sky To kill an Empire... 07:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Those are filled in... x3. Silverhmm 19:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

•_• xD Then blur the shading going along the back. Better be shading... Sky To kill an Empire... 22:58, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It is Sky, don't worry xD. Silverhmm 00:59, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and round it; it looks kinda flat, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:59, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 21:38, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste above the back, and perhaps blur the earpink a bit. Nice work! AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 22:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white paws. Very pretty ^^  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:19, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:21, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with this. CBA? Iveh Yo! 00:01, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Wait Ivy, sorry, there is waste around, erase it please. LeafyAbsolute maniac,20:59,February 14,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Waste has nothing to do with the actual charart Leaf. I've seen images approved with waste on them. Silverhmm 22:22, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, that's true, but it did need to be pointed out. So continuing CBA where it left off since it was just waste. Paleggy Ship it 10:31, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but could you make the smudgies more defined? Right now it looks like you smudged and then blurred them a lot: they're really fuzzy and look odd. Could you redraw the lines between the colours and re-smudge them? It just looks really messy. llwildheartl02:42 Thu Feb 16

Reuploaded I only blurred once. Silverhmm 12:06, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think the black needs to be lightened a tad. I'm having a really hard time telling it apart from the lineart. jayce  04:56, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to wait for another opinion on that Skye. Personally I can see the lineart just fine. Silverhmm 12:35, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Cloudy. Lighten it just a bit. Paleggy Ship it 15:11, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 17:41, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great! CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 17:30, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:49, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Speckle (Lo) ~ Approved

Speckle.lonerMeh... *shrug* Comments? Mistypebble 22:27, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the flecks. :P Sky To kill an Empire... 22:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading and blurred the flecks just a tad. Mistypebble 23:07, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading on the midriff and darken it. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:48, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:06, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened/blurred the shading on the midriff and brightened the earpink. Mistypebble 01:24, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Do the specks have shading? Cause they kinda get lost in the shaded parts. And make them not all the same size if you can. good job. ^^ Paleggy Ship it 11:51, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly add some more flecks. --Leafstrike-- 22:33, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oy.. I did not like how this turned out. >.< Defined the specks and added more. >.> Mistypebble 00:44, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Pshaw, this looks great! Darken the shading a tad.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:20, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flecks some more (if you can without making it a mess) ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 00:01, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry that I didn't get to post this sooner, I got sick. x.x Darkened the shading, and in my opinion, the flecks are fine but if anyone else agrees, I'll blur them. Mistypebble 19:17, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur them a tad. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:51, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

No, the flecks look fine. They match the queen.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:31, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

If you look closely on the queen, she doesn't have any flecks on her paws, belly, or the tip of her tail, so could you remove those? Paleggy Ship it 16:00, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got rid of some of the flecks. Mistypebble 22:23, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Make the flecks more oval-shaped and rounded like the queen image.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    08:36, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it looks to match pretty well to me. The queen image is stretched out, so the speckles would be slightly distorted. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 17:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:50, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Coal (Lo) ~ Approved

Coal.loner I don't have much to say about this image. Comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:57, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing just a tad; I can't see the shoulder lineart very clearly. Very nice. ♥ V-day I want sugar ♥ 07:09, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:43, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a tad more? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:49, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Shaindg's fine, unless you mean the whole image.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:24, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

*derp* Yes, I did mean the whole image. xP RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:33, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneh, I reserved this on the 10thShoonderpThis band saved my life... 20:03, February 16, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Yeah, but Moonshine, you didn't put it in the proper column, so Stoneclaw had NO idea you had it reserved. No offense, but it's your careless mistake. jayce  22:29, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Moonshine, sorry but I always look at the right column. You made the mistake, and I don't look at the wrong columns, so if you make a mistake, I can't do anything about that.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail and right front paw shading. Just seems a little dark is all. Otherwise, this is amazing. As always, cousin o' mine. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 3:15, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:07, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little redder. <3 jayce  05:31, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    05:36, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 17:36, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:51, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) (Lo) ~ Approved

Mitzi (Lo).loner I adore black cats for some reason. Comments? Yes, the (Lo) is there twice for a reason. jayce  04:44, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

lol Tone down the earpink a little.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:46, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? I just chose a random red the first time, since I didn't have the color handy. jayce  04:52, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and make it a tad more red. Elork 13:57, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

I color picked from the queen image. I'm not changing it anymore. Re-uploaded. jayce  07:05, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit and add/define depth to the eye? Paleggy Ship it 22:30, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  22:36, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful. CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    05:32, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for interupting, but can you lighten the legs a bit? Silverhmm 18:00, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded......you're evil, Silver. XD jayce  18:06, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:46, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Shelly For a limited time only 16:53, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (A) ~ Approved

Clawface.apprentice Splashpelt reserved it, but didn't put it up, and its past 2 weeks...so here it is. Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:28, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! Smudge the pelt into the ear pink more. Silverhmm 00:31, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:32, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the shading on the haunch. Edit conflicts x.x  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:34, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Look at the innocent face on that evil'un. o3o If there is shading there, define it on the back paw furtherest away. Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:38, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

No, there's no shading on that paw. I blurred the shading. Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:52, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should give him a couple scars on his face. I know we normally assume that scars are obtained while a cat is a warrior, but considering his name... Well, yeah. Might just be me. Shelly For a limited time only 00:56, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Well, there isn't any proof, so I won't. Sorry, but it would probably just get removed, like Tornear's torn ear, because it was based on assumption based on the name. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, for all we know, he could've gotten the warrior name Clawfoot. Can you blur the back shading a little? Iveh Yo! 03:29, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, there's a cite for his scars in his description. Tornear's ear was removed because there was no cite. Shelly For a limited time only 03:43, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

As an apprentice though? It just said he was mentioned as being so-and-so's apprentice (I just skimmed quickly) Iveh Yo! 04:09, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. o3o Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 21:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not adding scars...sorry, but there isn't any proof. Like Ivy said, he wasn't mentioned having scars as an apprentice. Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. --Leafstrike-- 02:09, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink more WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:49, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I would make it a bit lighter to match his warrior charart... to me it kind of seems dark. Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 22:29, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

The color is the same, but I was told to define shading, so I had to darken it a little. I got the colors from the warrior charart, though, so its fine. Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:48, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. If you want to make it look lighter anyways and you have photoshop, you can do that by choosing a slightly light foreground color and using overlay with the paint bucket. Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 23:12, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the color is fine as it is. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:40, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading a bit. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 00:00, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:50, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm leaving. Someone can take over. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:58, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:59, January 26, 2012 (UTC)</s>

Sorry I have 3 projects already. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:52, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over.--Cinder Real or Not Real? 17:46, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made him lighter because of his rouge image...but I'll change it back if anybody dislikes the colour. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 18:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please change it back, the color doesn't really match either of his images now. It was fine before. And darken the shading a bit. Paleggy Ship it 22:10, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:50, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:35, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Make the earpink less neon please. Sweetflower19:08 Mon Jan 30

Re-Uploaded O.o I think I made it worse. Oh well..I'll just play with it for a bit see what happens xD..I personally think the earpink is fine but if anybody else wants me too I'll change it. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:29, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and tail shading. ;D Sky Dovahkiin 08:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 17:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:38, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:10, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paw away from us. ^^ Sky Dovahjerk 01:48, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the shading a tad. llwildheartl04:50 Thu Feb 2

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:46, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and blur the shading a bit more ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 06:05, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mak ethe earpink less neon. Purty! Sweetflower18:35 Sun Feb 5

Re-Uploaded.. Changes not showing for the first time :/ --Cinder Real or Not Real? 21:49, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. Other then that, I can find nothing wrong with this atm. jayce  02:21, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

The overall shading seems somewhat blotchy. Smooth it out and blend it into the pelt. Feel free to disagree. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:55, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Re-Uploaded I don't know if I made it better or worse. Changes will show soon..I hope. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 16:31, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind-leg and tail, and smudge the ear pink ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 02:14, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Any more comments? ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:38, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch, and it should be ready.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:24, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Well I tried -.- --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:09, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch/tail shading. Mistypebble 19:59, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 21:34, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

M'kay, I'm basically going to contradict the previous comments, but define the shading in some parts of the charart as it's almost invisible (most likely due to overblurring) and then (I would at least) start over with the back half of the charart (tail and haunch) as it's very inconsistent and splotchy. x3 Lot of work, but I know you can pull it through. :) AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 03:58, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, Cinder. Still working on this? jayce  19:07, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Oyus Cloud..As you can see I just got a comment from Atelda so I'm working on that..--Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:49, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Is it my computer, or did you use the female blank? ___Leafy 16:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, hun, Clawface is decidedly male. Shelly For a limited time only 17:24, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

My bad.. xD Re-Uploaded I brightened the highlights too..--Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:52, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, and it will be ready. 8D  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:56, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded(I think) Dx ughh I hate earpink... --Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:01, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:28, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Over 12 hours, approved.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:58, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Frostfur (Lo) ~ Approved

Frostfur.loner Okay, so my skills are a little rusty, but this is my first charart in over a year. Comments? •Maplefern• 22:56, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, blur the highlights, darken the shading, good job. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:35, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ugh, GIMP crashed and I had to redo it. DX •Maplefern• 01:20, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights a bit. Also smudge the earpink. nice. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:43, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

Reuploaded. •Maplefern• 02:26, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more, and smudge the pelt into the earpink, and I'll CBA.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    22:41, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste on the edges of the image to our left. Dazzy 02:15, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred it. :3 And I cleaned up the waste, too. MapleOn dA and Skye 02:27, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:59, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

None, approved.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:58, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Moss (Lo) ~ Approved

File:Moss (Lo).loner.png Comments? AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 17:07, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely 'Teldy! Tone down the highlights, and lighten the shading on all legs.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:10, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 21:20, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty~ :3 Blur the ear pink ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 22:28, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Define the tail shading.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:38, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the legs a bit ^^ Good Job 'Teldy. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 21:28, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 01:44, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:49, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 02:14, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading some more, and also smudge the earpink more. Lovely Teldz. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:25, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012

'Reuploaded. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 03:18, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Since there is a distinct light source from above, shouldn't there be a highlight/no shading on the back on the neck and the base of the tail? I might be wrong... It might just be the way my phone is showing it o3o ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 03:28, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and/or lighten the base colour; I can barely see the lineart near the legs. oblivionAudience? 03:38, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The light source is not directly overhead otherwise you'd get something where the whole back of the cat is highlighted. My light source is somewhat coming from a 45-90 degree angle away from the spot directly overhead....if that made any sense at all. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 03:45, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

It made enough sense that I understood :P Never mind then~ ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 20:29, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Leggo 🏈 22:56, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

None, approved

Shadepelt (Lo) ~ Approved

Shadepelt.loner Comments? --Leafstrike-- 18:17, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh! I forgot that Ice was still under CBA, even though it should have been approved by now. So, will this have to be declined, or Ice would be approved, therefore I can keep this? --Leafstrike-- 18:28, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

I'll go approve it, but make sure to check next time. Iveh Yo! 18:36, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading :3 oblivionAudience? 21:32, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate th eearpink a bit. It looks sorta gray. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:29, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink's fine - at least, it looks like the other images. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:33, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:31, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Mistypebble 01:26, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base coat a little.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:15, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 01:07, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. This looks great!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    07:21, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) --Leafstrike-- 16:33, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think this is fine. CBA? Mistypebble 01:42, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

None, approved.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:18, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Woody (Lo) ~ Approved

Woody.loner w00t~! First loner. *feels behind* o3o So, comments? ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 03:29, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him less red? Nice ^^  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:42, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploading~ Reuploaded ;)~ ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 03:46, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Stoneh gave me some advice in chat. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 08:44, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and it should be ready.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    09:02, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 09:08, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be defined in some areas. Define the shading on the belly, tail front and back legs that are farthest from us, and the shoulder/neck.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    09:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 09:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Some may dissagree, but I honestly see nothing wrong with this, so CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

None, approved.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:18, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Jet (Lo) ~ Approved

Jet.loner Meh...I really have no comments on this one. Any from you guys? :3 You may have to check the file history. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:16, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the 'Highlights' WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:14, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:32, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'd rather not change the earpink - I got it and all the other colors off the other image. Yes, this is Twi. :P Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:27, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the base color? It's hard to see the lineart. Also there's a bit of waste under his chin~(that or my phone's being weird again) ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 23:50, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think the color is fine. I can see the lineart, and he's a black cat, not a dark gray cat. Just clean up whatever waste there is and I'll CBA. Shelly For a limited time only 17:37, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Uh...I opened it on Photoshop and saw no waste...even after I gave it a red background to see....Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:07, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I see none either. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 20:30, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt, but there's a missing color pixle on his right hindleg. ~Pouncey~ 21:35, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - .o. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

That was minor so I'll approve now.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:18, February 21, 2012 (UTC)


Mothwing (Alt. MC) ~ Approved

Mothwing.mc.altFinally I got a ginger kitty 8D Mothwing!! Most epic character ever <333 Anyway, there was a discussion about this. On the picture it looked like she had white paws but I can remove them if someone thinks they shouldn't be there. The white parts on her face should be there though. So ya, comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. I hate you for this. Dx Sky Super pervetedness! 06:50, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Oh hush Sky XD  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:55, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit and there's a bit of waste on her right ear. This is so purdy~ ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 12:25, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Aww, are you joking? THIS IS SO CUTE, define the ear-pink please LeafyAbsolute maniac,13:16,February 18,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much :DD  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  15:54, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make her just a tiny bit more orange, as she is in her image, and darken the stripes to match as well? Shelly For a limited time only 16:09, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:18, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the haunch shading, and define the earpink. I <3 this. 8D  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploade Gaaww Thank you Stoney <3333  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  19:39, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

This is gawjus. Make her a bit more ginger? llwildheartl01:10 Sun Feb 19

She was ginger before but I was told to take the colors off of the picture in the book.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:12, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I know you colour picked it, but the cited image still seems more gingery. Could you play with it a bit? I think it's just the stripes that are a bit off. llwildheartl01:21 Sun Feb 19

Re-uploaded I went back to the old colors.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:29, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 18:06, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  18:37, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? <3 Ivyheart =P 19:30, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm really sorry to interrupt, Mounty, but this isn't very ginger. It looks kind of peach to me. Could you up the red balance and at least match the facial pattern from the source image? That's what we usually do with images that portray characters incorrectly. Shelly For a limited time only 00:49, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

In my opinion, it looks pretty red already. I don't think I should change it.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:55, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you match the facial stripes, though? Pretty please with a cherry on top? Leggo 🏈 01:23, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but Shelly's right. I colorpicked the colors, and it turns out to be a modified peach, to make it look dark. But the hue is actually peach, sorry.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:28, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

EggRe-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:30, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

The facial stripes? Both Leggy and I asked you to. Shelly For a limited time only 02:01, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Opacity...*headdesk*  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:32, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Perfect. CBA? oblivionAudience? 19:05, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 00:06, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (Alt.A) ~ Approved

Rowanstar (BS).apprentice.altIt was withdrawn before and no one taken it, well, i have right to do him?! I made him longhaired to match his pelt lenght now, but i can change it. Well? LeafyAbsolute maniac,19:15,February 18,2012 (UTC)

Lighten him up a tad. Silverhmm 19:18, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  19:23, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more. Lovely. =3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:33, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,15:34,February 19,2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the nose a darker shade of gray ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 20:26, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,21:12,February 20,2012 (UTC)

CBA? Ivyheart =P 01:02, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Ivyheart =P 04:46, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (Lo) ~ Approved

Graystripe.lonerThe ear needed to be torn since he was a loner when he was decribed with it. Comments? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:11, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the stripe a small bit? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:13, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, as well. Leggo 🏈 04:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

You're not allowed to have to chararts up at once anymore. You're gonna have to withdraw one of them. If you keep this one, darken the shading. Paleggy Ship it 07:44, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Please pick one or I will choose one at random to decline. Right now, you're pretty much ensuring that you can do both of your images. Just a heads up, alright? Iveh Yo! 18:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I want this one withdrawing the other WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:12, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:24, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:34, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripe a bit more..--Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:31, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:04, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad more, and maybe add a lighter part to the bottom of the stomach. Sky Fus Roh Dah 22:53, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:51, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlights and shading (and if you don't use highlights, then where the shading isn't) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:02, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 20:04, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? jayce  04:50, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry to interrupt CBA :( but could you blur the belly/side shading a bit more? --Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:04, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:57, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add a "highlight" on the stomach area? He looks thinner than thin without it :P llwildheartl02:39 Thu Feb 16

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 13:15, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. Sky To Kill An Empire 13:23, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Mistypebble 01:31, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:51, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the shading a bit. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D03:00, Sun, Feb, 19, 2012

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 16:50, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 00:00, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  00:31, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt. W) ~ Approved

Thornclaw.warrior.alt Comments? jayce  21:45, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

The paw shading looks a bit dark. Can you lighten it a bit? It may be my computer, though...MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

21:48, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Mooneh, unless both of our computers are being weird XD. Also blur the shading on the shoulder and make the ear pink a bit more red. ~Pouncey~

 21:50, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'll fix the shading, but the ear pink comes right from his warrior, and all this image is is a solid version of it. jayce  21:51, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce  21:56, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:48, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded. jayce  01:10, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 00:07, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. jayce  00:31, February 23, 2012 (UTC)



Stormfur (Lo) ~ Approved

Stormfur.loner Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:17, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading <3  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:37, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

And there's a bit of black sticking out from his eye that makes him look like a girl. --Leafstrike-- 00:56, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

You stole my next charart. Meanie. *curses Scarlet* Blur the highlights. jayce  03:35, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:20, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste. 8D  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 02:01, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blurr the shading and/or highlights. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 05:42, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 21:01, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit more, and I'll CBA. =)  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:08, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:35, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

I'll do that for you. CBA? Iveh Yo! 04:04, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:32, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Goldenflower (Alt. Q) ~ Approved

Goldenflower.queen.altThis is ugly. Okay...so, she needed to have a non-pregnant alternate image. I really don't like this one. >.< Comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:20, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the neck and cheek flab, since tht's not on the other lineart, smooth out the top of the foreleg fatherst from us, and bring in the back of her hind leg a bit. Shelly For a limited time only 21:22, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and shoulders~ and i think there's waste under the tail. This is lovely Stoneh! ^^ Pouncey

 21:23, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. You mean the hindleg like this? You might have to check file history to see the changes.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:54, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Grr.. You stole my next charart! *swipes at Stoney* Round the "highlight" on the haunch a bit more, maybe add some light to the top of the forelegs and to the top of the tail. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:53, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yup, looking good! There's still a spike on the base of her right foreleg, though, and what looks like waste outside it. Shelly For a limited time only 23:57, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. May have to check file history to see the changes.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:27, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think I'm doing this right. CBA?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:31, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Approved.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:36, February 23, 2012 (UTC)


Rainfur (Lo) ~ Approved

Rainfur.lonerI like this one. Comments? Grell No question at all! 20:03, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the earpink. :3 MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

22:38, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

He looks way too dark. I also used the burn tool several times, so please make the spots differing colors and not just one color. Iveh Yo! 23:10, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink has to be a little more visible ❦ Woo patch of green 273 04:17, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart, please stop repeating comments. MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

12:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Redone. Better? Grell No question at all! 02:32, February 9, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Lighten her more. Maybe don't have the flecks on the highest opacity.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:36, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste right above the nose. jayce  06:02, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add some speckles under the lineart instead of stopping before it along the spine please. Also I think there's a speck of waste on the front leg farthest from us. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 01:22, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Shadeh, are you still working on this? jayce  20:18, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. I've been busy. It'll be reuploaded soon. Grell No question at all! 21:29, February 13, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 00:05, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it's been a week. I'm taking over. Iveh Yo! 03:37, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Alright. That's fine. I'm really sorry about all this guys. Grell No question at all! 00:56, February 17, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 01:22, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

This is amazing Ivy! Define the tail spots =P --Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:44, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Smudge the earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D03:04, Sun, Feb, 19, 2012

Can you define the spots on the stomach a tad? Mistypebble 03:57, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely <3 Define the shading on both of the front legs.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:10, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 00:17, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:54, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

None, approved.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:44, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Soot (Lo) ~ Approved

Soot.loner Well...here she is...Soot! <3 Any comments? Dazzy 10:35, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Define the earpink.

Woo patch of green 13:59, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken all of the shading.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  15:33, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:50, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy 11:48, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink just a little more, to match her kit charart Woo patch of green 20:36, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whol eimage just a tad. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry for the delay ^^; Dazzy 08:34, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit and blur the shading a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:54, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy 10:29, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Gah, found some evil waste and killed it, reuploaded. Dazzy 10:33, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the whole image a bit. I can barely see the lineart. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:35, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on the left side of the lifted leg.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:43, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :P There's no waste around the lifted leg, there was around the far right leg. Dazzy 08:34, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a tad? I can't tell the difference between the lineart and the shading. Mistypebble 22:10, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/Smudge the earpink more to make it look more natural. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 01:21, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lost the .pxd in a file re-orginization...so, redone with a waaaay more epic program :3 <s>even though there's no change</s>. Dazzy 07:38, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oops, no wonder there was no change, I uploaded the wrong file x3 Reuploaded. Dazzy 07:52, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 23:20, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

None, approved.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:44, February 24, 2012 (UTC)


Plumwillow (KP) ~ Approved

Plumwillow.kittypet She ate from the twoleg an' everyone else got one... Comments? Sweetflower02:19 Sat Jan 28

Can you make that curve in the neck like this: ( where the tag was. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back a little.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading too, nice job! Ivyheart =P 06:09, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose color.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    08:07, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sweetflower18:38 Sat Jan 28

The lineart for the neck looks a little bit too fat/blotchy. Try copying it from Nettlesplash's or Honeypaw's. Mistypebble 19:53, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing, I don't feel like fiddling around with lineart. It never works out. Anyone who wants it, take it :P. Sweetflower23:30 Sat Jan 28

I'll take it. ♫Purplemoon♪ Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons! 01:19, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:27, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Darken the shadings please LeafyAbsolute maniac 17:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart out on the ---> side of her neck. --Leafstrike-- 20:52, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:43, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg and the back a bit more. -- Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 02:15, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the shading to my liking. 12:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Sweetflower00:05 Thu Feb 2

Tone down the "highlights". RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I always use highlights. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 22:25, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Dont really see anything wrong. So, CBA-time! Bloo!yo 02:38, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but can you blur the shading some more? -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    18:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is blurred to the max. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 00:38, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

...continuing CBA? -Bloo!yo 00:43, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but, blur the shading, even if you have to use the blur tool :3 Sweetflower01:21 Sat Feb 4

Purple already said the shading is already blurred to the max. Another lead agreed with me on the chat that this looked okay. CBA again? Bloo!yo 02:15, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Hate to interrupt, but can you darken it a bit to match the warrior image? Paleggy Ship it 06:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

If I darken it more, it will look like black. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 12:44, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading just a tad bit more? And can you colorpick off the warrior image for the earpink? Mistypebble 16:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, with earpink straight from the warrior. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 22:58, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you brighten/define the ear-pink a bit more? The color from the warrior might've been blurred over so much that the main color had been smudged into the black. Feel free to change the shade a bit. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 06:02, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit more? ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 16:57, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Whoa....this is great, but, in my view....Plumwillow was never even seen at the Twoleg nest. We don't really have any evidence that she was, and even though she may have gone with the other cats, it doesn't mean that she actually took any food. Qway 18:34, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Quail, look at the article: "Afterwards, Plumwillow is seen with Birdpaw, Honeypaw, Sandypaw, and Nettlesplash getting food from the elderly Twoleg woman". Anyway, add the curve in the neck like this: ( where the tag was. This is lovely, DJ. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Are you sure, I don't want to argue, but I own the manga, and she isn't ever at the Twoleg nest. However, if you really don't agree Purplemoon can continue. Qway 22:36, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. jayce  06:09, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 20:52, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? AteldaBOOM SHAKALAKA 22:39, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting, but can you make the skin lineart curve like: ( that instead of the sking just going down straight like | that. Sweetflower22:54 Sun Feb 12

Yo, Purple, I think you're allowed one image for approval. If I'm not mistaken... you have Ice and this up. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:21, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think Paleh told me one time that you can have a loner and something else up.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:15, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

You misunderstood Mountain, I said you can have an apprentice and a loner up, as the old rule for the apprentices still applies, that you can have two chararts up as long as one is an apprentice. Neither of your images are apprentices however, do you'll have to withdraw one, sorry. Paleggy Ship it 07:01, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sigh, I'll keep Ice. Someone else can have this. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 23:55, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll do it. any way Im Baccckk! >:D Sandy I think Daddy's my slave!

 00:38, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded Okay all colors are from the warrior. Comments? Sandy I think Daddy's my slave!

 01:18, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Curve the neck in like this: ( I love this. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:26, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't curve it all the way so...better? Sandy I think Daddy's my slave!

 01:35, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yep. Now thicken it by a pixel? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:19, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Mistypebble 20:00, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't thicken it to much but I did thicken it at certain spots. Comments? Sandy I think Daddy's my slave!

 01:06, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Sky To Kill An Empire 11:29, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded There. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave!

 02:48, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.