Frostfur (A) ~ Approved

Frostfur.apprentice <3 Frostfur. Comments? --Cinder Real or Not Real?02:18, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading <3  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:20, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is somewhat blotchy. Blend it into the pelt and together, and smooth/even it out. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D{{SUBST:SUBST#timeH:i d m j Y}}

The shading doesn't seem blotchy to me. However, it does need to be defined. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:57, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I think I messed up the tail shading. Do I need to define the light source? --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:47, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and give it some volume, it looks kinda flat ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I think the tail shading should be under the tail... ~Pouncey~ 01:20, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Fallow, shading placement is artist's choice, remember that. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:58, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Well...blur the tail shading a bit. Sky Promises, promises 01:26, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I'll fix the earpink since it's so neon. --Cinder Real or Not Real?18:14, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and there is waste by the (our) left side of (our) right ear, near the (our) right side of the hind leg haunch and the front (the cats) right paw. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 05:46, 27, 02, 2012

It might just be my computer, but it looks a bit pink-tinted. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 09:45, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading more.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 14:51 Mon Feb 27 14:51, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I really had no idea what you said Dj, but I did erase the waste and blurred the earpink. --Cinder Real or Not Real?01:00, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the chest shading a little more? :3 Rainlegs 03:58, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:43, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

I like this :3 CBA?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:06 Thu Mar 1

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:28, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Skywatcher (Ki) - Approved

Skywatcher.kit Look at the adorable little crazy cat! Needed a kit for the same reason as Firestar. oblivionAudience? 01:01, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

When was he described as a kit? I don't remember it being the same instance as Firestar. Iveh Yo! 01:33, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

If Firestar gets one for remembering a smell, then Skywatcher gets one for remembering his first mouse. oblivionAudience? 01:49, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

He never specified how old he was when he got his first mouse. In Firestar's dream, he was still nursing. I don't think this gets a kit charart. Shelly For a limited time only 02:08, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Also, if I remember correctly, he said he remembered catching his first mouse. How many kittens do that? Shelly For a limited time only 02:15, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sky points out the edge of SkyClan's territory and the small cave where he was born. If Firestar remembers what he did, Sky remembers enough. oblivionAudience? 02:23, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Remembering a cave seems to me to be more than just a smell. Why not? o3o Sky Promises, promises 02:26, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Fine, I concede. This looks fine, by the way. Just blur the shading a lot and I'll likely CBA it. Shelly For a limited time only 17:39, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

But I think you should make him a little less blue-gray and more gray. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 22:17, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dewstar, there is not a trace of blue in his pelt. I shaded with black, and his base colour is grey. oblivionAudience? 04:26, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Cute Skywatcher is cute. CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:31, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:32, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Alt. KP) ~ Approved

Sol.kittypet.altEw, Sol >.< Anyway, there was a discussion about this and it seems like the answer is yes, that he should get an alt for his colors on the cover of Beyond the Code and Long Shadows. All of the colors, including the strane earpink, were taken from the cover of Beyond the Code. He didn't look like he had tufted ears in the book. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:47 Fri Mar 2

Define the ear pink? Holy crap. *steals* Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:50, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded XD Thank you Cloudy. Steal him because Sol is annoying.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:57 Fri Mar 2

Define the shading a tad. *Kills Sol* There. Problem solved. 8D Sky Seedlit Proxy 11:31, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

>:V *revives Sol* Make the white parts look more white and less pink? Dazzy 11:58, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, I forgot to mention, smudge that white end of the tail a bit more? It ends a little abruptly. *Sends Dazzle to the 12th dimension and turns Sol to dust* 8D Sky Seedlit Proxy 12:48, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

My goodness Mounty! :o *dies of epicness* Just smudge the ginger on the face a bit to match the body, and should he have tufted ears, or no? Paleggy Ship it 14:57, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yay! You killed him 8D Thankies Paleh <33 I'd rather not change the white since it's from the cover of BTC and it didn't look like he had tufted ears in the manga.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:03 Fri Mar 2

<3 Could you define the shading on the shoulder and neck? I love this. 8D  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:40, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Stoney 8DD  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:49 Fri Mar 2

Blur the shading~ 00:13, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred to the max.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:21 Sat Mar 3

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:27, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:50 Sun Mar 4

Tigerstar (Alt W) ~ Approved

File:Tigerstar.warrior.alt.png First official Photoshop charart. :3 Discussion is on the talk page. Comments? Ivyheart =P 23:24, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! Lighten up the whole image a tad, and make the earpink smaller. <3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:26, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Stoney! =) Ivyheart =P 01:37, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink >8D Sky Promises, promises 04:25, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if it's my night vision, but I can just see the tail scars. Can you define it? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 04:26, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful Ivy! Can you blur the scars on the shoulder/haunch just a tad? Mistypebble 06:11, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading. I'm having a rough time telling it apart from the lineart. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 11:54, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried. xD Ivyheart =P 17:09, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe run the dodge tool over the scars on the tail? I can hardly seen them 19:10, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink darker and define it. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 21:12, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hey look, it's better now! :3 Ivyheart =P 01:37, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Sky Promises, promises 04:47, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scars along his body so they look more natural. Great charart! Sunnyfrost 22:01, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

The scars look fine to me. Could you darken the whole thing and define the depth in the eye a bit? Paleggy Ship it 21:13, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried. :3 Ivyheart =P 03:49, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Looks amazing Ivy <3 CBA?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:13 Sat Mar 3

None, Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:42, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Alt. Ki) ~ Approved

Sol.kit.alt To go along with Mountain's images. All colors come right from Mountain herself, so I'm not changing 'em. Chibi Sol<3 Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:41, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripe on his head more. <3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 01:45, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:47, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Cute Sol is cute~<3 Define the shading~ 03:33, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:41, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Who's a cute little kit? Sol! Define the earpink. Silverhmm 12:52, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I can't define it without changing the color, which I'm not. Plus, I can see it just fine. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 17:00, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlight/nonshaded parts a tad~ ^^ 18:27, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Shading on these colors is very difficult. I don't think I'll be able to get it much better... Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:33, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

This looks perfect ^^ CBA?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 21:20 Sun Mar 4

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:17, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt. D) - Approved

Oakheart.deputy.alt He was described as bracken-colored on page one of Into the Wild. I took the colors from his other bracken alt. Comments? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:27, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading and blur the tail shading. c: Sky Everyone likez teh cats 06:50, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:58, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. ^^ Mistypebble 22:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Why not just blur the shading in general? xD Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:52, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Also, lighten up the shading a bit.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:04, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:09, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the haunch shading. Sky Promises, promises 12:03, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:57, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the shading a bit and ever so slightly enlarge the earpink c: Dazzy 11:31, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading C: Weylon Distinctly Unique. 13:49, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Pull the shading on the face back a bit. It sort of looks like he has a really narrow face with it like this. Shelly For a limited time only 17:35, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

REuploaded - I'll redo the shading and stuff later, fix it up. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:53, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-re-uploaded - I redid the shading...changes might not be showing... o3o Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:09, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and define the non-shaded part on the face <3  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 18:12 Sat Mar 3

Reuploaded ;3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:32, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little and I'll CBA <3 Ivyheart =P 02:06, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:26, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? <333  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:28 Mon Mar 5

Sorry to inturupt but the face "highlight" looks like its gray...okay kill me if it's supposed to be like that, I just don't always follow confersations. :\ Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 22:44, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

It's looking fine to me. Continuing CBA. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:48, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:24, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Alt. W) ~ Approved

Sol.warrior.altEw, Sol again >.< Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 01:08 Sun Mar 4

This is gorgeous. On the hind leg, can you maybe smudge the black into the red or vice-versa just a tad? Als, define the earpink. Clover day Woo ♣♣ 03:39, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:50 Sun Mar 4

Hate to say this Mountain, but he hasn't been accepted as a warrior in the manga yet. I'm not sure this would count. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:38, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

He's already got a warrior image, so this counts, Scarlet. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 06:18, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. >8| Sky Gatlocke 11:15, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlights~ 13:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D Sweet I get to keep this Thank you Cloudy ^^ There wasn't any highlights so I darkened the shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:53 Sun Mar 4

Smudge the ginger/red patches a bit more 22:34, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:42 Sun Mar 4

This is wonderful, Mountain! =D But the white parts look a bit pinkish to me, at least on my computer... >.< Mistypebble 01:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Is that triangular patch of gray between the front legs (the ones in front that we see) is that supposed to be there? And the foot on the other side of him (the one not turned to us) that looks gray, match the shading gray on the other back paw with the one on the hind back paw. Like on his kittypet image. Clover day Woo ♣♣ 01:59, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

I know that he was shown somewhat pinkish of the Beyond the Code cover, but on the Long Shadows cover it looks more white. Mind tweaking it to look ever so slightly more white? :3 Dazzy 11:06, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, guys? The color's fine. It needs to match the kittypet image, which it does in terms of color. If you had an issue with the color, you should have said something when the kittypet was up for approval. The colors have to match. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 17:39, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yes, I had all of the colors from the kittypet. @WooWoo that patch is supposed to be there, it's his underbelly.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:24 Tue Mar 6

Cloudy adores Sol. Cloudy shall CBA this image. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:32, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

I was looking at the manga, and shouldn't there be four different colors on the tail? Not just white, black, and red/ginger? I apologize if I'm wrong. x: 01:32, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

What color would it be? There's only ever been three of his colors shown in actual color. I mean, you're right, but, there's no way to tell what color it should be. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:05, March 7, 2012 (UTC) 012 (UTC)

True... But based on his other fur compared to it, I would guess a darker shade of red/ginger. :s But it is kinda hard to tell... 04:43, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think it's fine the way it is, and since we're not supposed to match the art directly, I'd say the image is good enough. I'm going to restart the CBA, because I think it's fine. If you disagree, feel free to comment. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:47, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:14, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Lo) ~ Approved

Sasha.loner ~Pouncey~ 16:15, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, like a lot XD  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:17, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

And blur it too >8D Sky Promises, promises 16:18, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

The light sorce is from above, so the light wouldnt reach under neith so it would be very dark x: Me and Stoneh had this conversation on a different loner~ ~Pouncey~ 16:22, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it a smidge, then? :3 Rainlegs 16:50, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Kay~ Reuploaded-- changes not showing o3o ~Pouncey~ 16:55, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the brown paws?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:25, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Pouncey!

 00:14, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Please lighten the shading on the legs. I realize where the light's hitting, but, it seems too dark..and it bothers me. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 11:53, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think that she should have more stripes on her legs...Dazzy 11:58, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I added highlights to the legs. :3 I won't add any more stripes because I copied the kittypet image. Pouncey!

 16:19, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

It may just be my stupid computer, but the shading looks like it's tinted green. User:~Leafy~/Sig 17:16, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's your computer o3o 18:07, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, when I see all of Sasha's pixels side-by-side, the colour on yours seems a little too yellow, make her slightly red? --Leafstrike-- 18:40, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Make those higher stripes lighter to blend in with the pelt. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 23:18, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes are fine, they looks the same on the other chararts. Can you lighten the shading just a t'eensy winsy bit more? '^^ Mistypebble 20:56, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the two back paws and the tail. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 13:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Sorry for the wait :x 00:45, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:16 Sun Mar 4

Sorry, but the color still seems off and the shading placement looks flat. If it isn't showing, then I apologize. Iveh Yo! 01:02, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:37, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is fine in darkness, it's dark/light enough.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:27, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, I thought this charart was already done by Scarlet. The loner image is already on Sasha's page, and it's in the approved archives from February. If I'm right, the image should be reverted back to the original artist's version.

Oops, didn't look closely. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 05:37, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Restarting CBA. Mistypebble 00:45, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:26, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefang (Lo) ~ Approved

Mousefang.loner If Frostfur and the other elders get one, so does she. Anyways, this is the style I want to remake her images into, so no whining that it does not match her other ones. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:28, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Ish so purdy *u* Define the neck shading <333  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:32 Tue Mar 6

Re-uploaded. I also gave her a little color. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:56, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and blur the haunch shading :3 01:37, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:41, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Er... Shade on the back ear, just a little? User:WooWoo/Sig 06:06, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. There's a highlight on most of the head, and the back ear happens to be part of where the highlight is. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 06:07, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ahhhh... I see. User:WooWoo/Sig 06:09, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading just a tad? Mistypebble 02:00, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:05, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Sky Molto bene 02:58, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:10, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ruby (Lo) - Approved

Ruby.loner So I have Ruby, Redstar, and Rowanclaw for approval xD Comments? oblivionAudience? 03:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

It... it... she looks really... really nice. Could you maybe lighten the shading a little more, near the tail? Clover day Woo ♣♣ 03:39, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the two legs that to be shaded. *doesn't know how to say it otherwise* It's the legs that are on the left of the cat. :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 11:03, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly and shoulder shading a bit. Dazzy 11:13, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the highlights (if there are any)~ 12:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the shading and the 'highlights' with the pelt more. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:40, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define a light source. Breezewhisker 05:06, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Breeze, could you explain better? What should I change? oblivionAudience? 20:10, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think she means that there's lught coming from the front, but also on the back of the tail, ehich doesn't make sense. o3o Sky Gatlocke 00:24, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

The light's not coming from the front, it's coming from where we are... Probably my shiny loonies. oblivionAudience? 01:33, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the highlights User:WooWoo/Sig 05:26, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 22:18, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Loonie, your images are beautiful. CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:46, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

None, approved.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:13 Sun Mar 11

Littlecloud (Ki) ~ Approved

Littlecloud.kit Made for the same reasons Badgerpaw, Whitethroat and the others. Tiny Littlecloud is cute~<3 Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:15, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Littlekit <33 Lighten the shading  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:35 Sat Mar 10

Personally, I think the shading's fine how it is. I'm partial to darker shading. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 06:38, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

XP Define the earpink then.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:39 Sat Mar 10

All colors are from his MC image. <shrugs> I'll see what I can do. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 06:43, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 06:45, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger, and blur the shading. Is it possible to define the eye depth too? (Unless it be being the same colours xP) Sky Molto bene 08:42, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. All colors are from his other images.... Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 08:48, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Littlekit is adorable <33 CBA?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:33 Sun Mar 11

Really sorry to interrupt, but there's a couple flecks of waste under all paws except the front left (his left) ^^; *runs* Dazzy 12:25, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Waste does not affect the overall quality of the image. Continuing CBA. I'll fix the waste though. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 07:54, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt. A) ~ Approved

Ivypool.apprentice.altW00t Ivypool. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:27 Thu Mar 8

Lighten the shading on the back ear. 8D Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 06:28, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:35 Thu Mar 8

Blur the back shading/highlight/thing. Bleh, I liked Ivypool when she wasn't spying. >.> Sky Molto bene 06:57, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

She looks kinda mottled. Can you lessen the furry effect just a tad so shhhe looks solid? Define the earpink. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:07, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems a tad dark. Otherwise, this is wonderful :) Iveh Yo! 19:16, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the eye colour a tad. This is stunning, like all your chararts Monuty. :-) LeafyAbsolute maniac,20:47,March 8,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D Thanks so much <33  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 21:48 Thu Mar 8

As much as I love the furry look, she almost looks vaguely mottled.... I'm not sure how to fix it though. Maybe you could think of a way, but could you try and fix it? That's the only thing I see wrong, awesome as always mounty! <3 Paleggy Ship it 06:11, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that, to lessen the mottled effect, you could blur the pelt ^^ At least, that's what I think. Do that and blur the face shading, and keep being epic at charart~! Dazzy 14:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Daww Thank you so much <3 I didn't blur it, but I smudged it a little and lightened it.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:34 Sat Mar 10

Lighten the shading a little. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:03, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:06 Sat Mar 10

Lighten up the whole image a tad. Also, try blurring the shading some more. I wanted this. >:U  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:28, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Me wanted Goldenflower >.<  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:40 Sun Mar 11

Could you make the eyes more green? They look blue-green right now, it's hard to tell which it is. XD Paleggy Ship it 21:19, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Doh >.<  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 21:29 Sun Mar 11

It's still purty with green eyes, see! XD CBA? o3o Paleggy Ship it 21:30, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Great job. Iveh Yo! 22:52, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Badgerpaw (Ki) - Approved

File:Badgerpaw.kit.png Hooray! 8D I got another one of his images <33333 He's my favorite character ever.... XD This is actually uploaded onto my personal image from much earlier with different shading..... :P Comments? Paleggy Ship it 01:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

So cute! I can't see anything wrong with it other than maybe blur the stripe along his tail a bit. :3 RavenBeeeeeees 01:29, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

I just don't see anything wrong. Maybe just blur the chest and make the stripes darker there. I can't really see them.Spo[[User talk:.Spottedclaw 01:30, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Aww!! Kawaii!! <333 Make the black stripes on his head a bit thicker, brighten the ear-pink a touch, and maybe smudge the chest a bit more. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:12, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

This is adorable, Paleh! Lighten the white on his tail a smidge *steals* <3 Dazzy 08:08, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this Badgerpaw.kit.png. --Leafstrike-- 01:40, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

He's sooo cute <3333 Make the earpink bigger.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:10 Sun Mar 11

Reuploaded - Kay, I think I did everything.... however I'm not changing the color of the white on the tail, it's dark cause it's in the shadows and if it wasn't dark, it'd be flat :P And bah, how did I forget to change the filename before uploading? XD *fails* Paleggy Ship it 21:27, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm in love with this! CBA? Ivyheart =P 04:43, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Approved <3333  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:43 Tue Mar 13

Mousewhisker (Alt.A) ~ Approved

Mousewhisker.apprentice.altHe was described as a fluffy gray cat. Comments? Silverhmm 17:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and define the shoulder shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:26, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Silverhmm 17:35, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make his nose a darker shade of gray unless he was said to have a pink nose. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 17:58, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mistypebble 19:08, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it to the max. Silverhmm 18:45, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to all the belly and chest. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:38, 22, 02, 2012

Reuploaded I redid the shading, and I kinda like it better than the first. Silverhmm 13:14, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. ~Pouncey~ 19:55, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mistypebble 20:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 00:08, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. oblivionAudience? 17:01, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading on the haunch a little less sharp-edged. If you know what I mean. ♫Purplemoon♪ I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3 23:10, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 11:57, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Where's your light coming from? The body says from the left but the face says the right. I'd say move the shading on the face to the other side and blur it a lot, and it should be ready for CBA then. Shelly For a limited time only 17:33, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. Sunnyfrost 21:54, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

There isn't any shading on the right except Shelly. Silverhmm 22:16, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and blur the haunch shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:07 Sun Mar 4

Please work on this or it will be declined. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 08:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 13:09, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and I think there is waste, it might just be my eyes. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:35, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's no waste. 8D Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:34, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yup I agree with Skye. Now I think the shading on the back could be blured a little bit more. Maybe darken the shading on the face while lightening it by the tail. Too confusing? Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 22:42, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur ze haunch shading plz (Chatspeak bad x.x) Sky Gatlocke 07:01, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Also, blur the earpink.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:28, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

What's your light source? It seems to be coming from all over the place. --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:19, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to have to withdraw (Sounds familiar coming from me doesn't it?) the shading is making everything difficult for this image 8c. Silverhmm 12:11, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, Silver, may I take it then? LeafyAbsolute maniac 20:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask; just remember to reserve it. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:01, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Im always asking :-) , so I dont want to steal someones work, so I have done new charart, reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac 13:24, March 9, 2012

Make the earpink stand out more from the pelt. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 00:11, 10, 03, 2012

DJ, the ear pink is fine. In fact, I think most gray cats have gray-ish ear pink, do they not? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:44, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, like greyish brown. Blur the belly shading a bit. Sky Molto bene 08:39, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac 10:27, March 10, 2012

Maybe blur the face shading a bit? Dazzy 06:08, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac 11:30, March 12, 2012

Looks good to me. CBA? Iveh Yo! 17:13, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Approved :-) LeafyAbsolute maniac 18:00, March 13, 2012

Sol (Alt Lo) - Approved

Sol.loner.alt2Kay, got this bad boy done and I must say, I'm pretty happy with how he came out. In Long Shadows, I'm pretty sure he was considered a loner in it, and we agreed the Long Shadows cover counts. Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 16:14, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 19:49, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white on his belly a little. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 23:16, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the poor kitty~ =3 User:~Leafy~/Sig 02:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Where's the waste? I don't see any. Hm... smudge the pelt up into the earpink just a tad. Looks great :) User:WooWoo/Sig 02:25, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste. It's around the top of his back, under his chin, around his paws, towards the bottom under his tail, above his shoulders...~ :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 11:20, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I honestly think since I've darkened the shading that he is too dark now. Iveh Yo! 19:22, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The waste is still there. o3o User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:27, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't see it. At all. Iveh Yo! 21:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I see some~ Anyway, I know you were told to blur the belly, but, it looks more smudged on his other alts... Maybe smudge it a little more...? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:52, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

It would help if you told me where. Iveh Yo! 17:44, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. It (the waste) is above his back, under his tail towards the far bottom, and in between his two hind legs. :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:02, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. Sky Molto bene 00:19, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgive me if this so called "waste" is still there as I don't see it. I tried and blindly took the erase tool over the shading layers :/ Iveh Yo! 02:17, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Waste is gone :D Blur the shading a bit. Dazzy 08:04, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 17:02, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely. <3 CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    18:04, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Approved LeafyAbsolute maniac 18:04, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Whitethroat (Ki) ~ Approved

Whitethroat.kitSo yeah, though I'd post it. Urgh. Sky Molto bene 23:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest a bit more. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 00:34, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded~ Sky Molto bene 00:37, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Adorable! :3 Maybe add some more shading? Then again my computers colors and lightings strange. RavenBeeeeeees 00:41, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading is okay...but we'll see what the others be thinking too. : 3 Sky Molto bene 00:43, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Skyt this is good but can you blur it a little by the white paws and a little more on the chest?Spo[[User talk:.Spottedclaw 01:28, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

The chest is fine. ^^; Try to smudge the paws just a little more. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:28, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploooaded~ Sky Molto bene 01:42, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little larger.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:37 Sat Mar 10

Maybe make the earpinks the same size (probably the same as what Mounty said up there) Dazzy 14:12, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. <3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:29, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The earpinks are the same size now. xP Sky Molto bene 05:51, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I forgot to upload the file xDD I'll put it up as soon as possible. Sky Molto bene 06:14, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the paws and chest more User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 20:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I smudged the paws a little more, but I'm not smudging the chest, it matches the warrior. Sky Molto bene 05:56, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur those legs. Cute Whitethroat is cute~ Dazzy 07:46, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

The legs are fine. It matches the warrior. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 23:13, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail "highlight" and it should be ready.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:22, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sky Exterminate! 05:32, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Just noticed the waste....I'll get that when I upload again. Sky Exterminate! 07:28, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Waste does not affect the overall quality of the image. You can fix it when it's approved or something. CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 08:16, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:42, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Egg (Lo) ~ Approved

Egg.loner Changes not showing yet, first loner <3 Comments? Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 23:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Now showing. Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 23:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nice <3 take the color from his apprentice and lighten the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took all the colors from his apprentice, Rowan =3 Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 23:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading more. I think with the light source there shouldn't be a light part on the tail either. Sky Dovahkiin 23:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't really seem to match. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

If you used black for the shading, maybe use a darker colour of his base pelt colour. ^^ ~~,,

Make the eyes have more depth. Lovely otherwise~ Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 05:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 Talk 23:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the hightlights and blur them LeafyAbsolute maniac,11:16,February 3,2012 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is tinted green. Can you fix that? (you can try to get the xcf. file from the original artist) Mistypebble 20:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait o3o ~Leafy~ 20:43, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading less flat; It looks like there are only highlights. Ivyheart =P 02:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Start to do all thing please "Expand the highlights and blur them", right? LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:58,February 6,2012 (UTC)

His hind leg doesn't look completely shaded, the one on <-- that side. :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leafstorm, I did expand the highlights and blur them. I always do everything the people tell me to =3 And I just realized the shading needs to be blurred... ~Leafy~ 02:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think that shading is too heavy. User:A Cat Named Cheshire/Sig

Cheshire, you should be specific. Where is the shading too heavy? Honestly, I think the highlights could be blurred a little more, and blended with the shading more. Right now, you can clearly tell where the shading/highlights meet. When I use them (rare, but I still use 'em now =P), I try and make them flow together. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 17:43, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *headdesk* I made this such a fail >.< User:~Leafy~/Sig 14:43, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

He's kinda starting to look an off-white ish color. Why don't you ask Mistypebble, the artist of Egg's apprentice image, for the pelt color? She probably still has the original file. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:52, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Leafy, are you still working on this? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:00, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the hauche shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:23, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

D= Yes, I'm still working. I couldn't get on yesterday, sorry =( User:~Leafy~/Sig 11:57, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It's about time <3 User:~Leafy~/Sig 12:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his ears and head, and lighten and blur the shading. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 16:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I can't believe no one noticed he needed a torn ear... User:~Leafy~/Sig 16:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more thick and blur the shadings more. LeafyAbsolute maniac 18:47, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, do you mean thicken the line-art on the torn ear or make the torn ear go down deeper? User:~Leafy~/Sig 20:03, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should go back up with the ear, but just cut dont like a "v". This cut sorta looks like a "u". Sorry if that made now sense whatsoever Also could you blur the shading a bit? ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 16:31, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on it Leafy? LeafyAbsolute maniac 19:51, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Mmhmm... I didn't know, so I just thickened the line-art with what Leafstorm said (does that make sense?) Oh, Re-uploaded User:~Leafy~/Sig 20:44, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

You thickened it a bit too much hun. Just remove the top layer of pixels and that should be good. ( I think) And smoothen out the shading more, so it doesn't look like it has a green tint. --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:52, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart from the top of the torn ear. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:01, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading C: --Fenris They know what I am; let them come, if they have the courage.

01:49, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait =( User:~Leafy~/Sig 15:05, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of all of that waste. Shelly For a limited time only 18:32, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded o3o I always forget about the stupid waste Dx User:~Leafy~/Sig 19:13, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a tad bit more. ♫Purplemoon♪ I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3 22:43, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded User:~Leafy~/Sig 23:43, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look a tad insane... What color did you shade with? It looks kinda greenish... ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:22, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the shading and blur it, and make the nick in the ear smaller like the apprentice image. 05:03, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs, and I'm pretty sure his nicked ear should look more V shaped. Dazzy 11:24, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nick in the ear more the same size as the one on the apprentice charart. He was an apprentice after being a loner, I doubt the split would have shrunk over time. Shelly For a limited time only 17:27, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

It's been four weeks since this was first posted. Should this be declined? Rainlegs 02:47, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

It should. I'll take over. Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:48, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 19:45, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a tad neon. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 20:05, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Sky Gatlocke 11:20, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :3 Atelda insert vague subtext here 18:27, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more, well, pink. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 23:22, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Saturating it more will probably just make someone comment that it looks to neon... Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:10, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink a little moar? c: Rainlegs 03:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 05:13, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him a little less yellow? Sky Gatlocke 07:03, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:00, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:16, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I might have been seeing ghe wrong version with that yellow comment, and maybe I still am, but his eyes should be blue. Sky Gatlocke 02:04, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 05:38, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink like one click more? User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 05:42, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 05:47, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

This is just a tad bit darker then the apprentice image. Why not try taking the dodge tool over the base pelt color ever so slightly? Other then that, this is perfect. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:03, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Atelda insert vague subtext here 18:30, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 18:32 Sun Mar 11

Sorry but the shading looks like it could be blurred more. The eyes also don't look the same color to me, but it could just be me. Iveh Yo! 17:14, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah..the eyes look a little darker. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:07, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Also the shading looks really really not blurred and it looks like its...going <--- then ----> ugh I cannoot exlain things... Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 00:11, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

I've already said that Sandstorm. Iveh Yo! 02:07, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can assure you that it is blurred, especially when in contrast to something that is "really really not blurred". Atelda insert vague subtext here 04:32, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image a bit, and I'll CBA.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:33, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:59, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 08:19, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:44, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Lo) ~ Approved

File:Snake (BC).loner.png Ooh, my third loner. And the last one. >:D Comments? User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 20:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the shoulder shading. Lovely Mooneh ^^  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  22:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly thicken the lineart on the color to match with the lineart of the loner. Wonderful! :3 Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:20, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thankies :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a little more or smudge the fur into the ear a tad? :3 Rainlegs 22:59, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and eye depth. Looks good, Mooneh!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:05, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the long wait. I lost the .pdn (the original file with layers) so I couldn't mess anything up for a while. I have the .pdn on another computer, but it's an hour's drive away. I'm trying to get the file sent to me, so, don't say anything about fixing the tail shading, because I didn't. I just defined the eye depth. :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 11:32, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink, maybe the color a bit thinner, the teeth a bit rounder (they kinda look like shark teeth) and define the shading on the neck, collar, teeth, and head. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:06, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Well, Scarlet, the teeth do match pixel for pixel the same as the last loner image, but, I can round them if you want me to. :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 11:39, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's a pixel of waste under his tail~ ~Pouncey~ 14:48, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined tail shading, smudged pelt into earpink, and (hopefully) got rid of the waste under the tail. I lightened it, too. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:41, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the collar thinner and straighter. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:27, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the shoulder. Sky Promises, promises 00:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

The waste is still there o3o it's trapped between the hind leg farthest from us and the tail~ *stinks at explaining things* :|3 ~Pouncey~ 03:56, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the stomach/belly. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:58, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The changes aren't showing; I blurred the shading on flank/shoulder, went through every layer and got rid of waste, but I hate to say it, I can't make the collar thinner. I can re-do it if you want me to, but -cough-itwaskindofhard-cough-. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 09:59, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading some and smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more....and define rhe shading on the front leg if there is any. *is shot* Sky Promises, promises 11:19, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken up the back and back leg shading because it looks like it's like, reaaaaly bright. Then blur it and the ear pink. I l0ve the collar! Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 03:38, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

I won't have the .pdn until Friday at the latest, so I won't work on it since then. Is that okay? *derp* User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 10:39, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, why not? Unless another senior warrior disagrees, we can wait for Friday. Shelly For a limited time only 17:34, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I found the .pdn 8D...I know it looks a bit darker, but...yeah. Skye helped me with the shading (fail) on, so it should be good...I'll fix the collar later once I can catch Shelly or Ivy on chat. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:41, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading..and you could just leave a message on their talk page :P --Cinder Real or Not Real?02:51, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? (Aside from the collar). User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 20:33, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing to match the rogue. Paleggy Ship it 21:16, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I see waste. >.> Bah, I'll fix it later. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 13:20, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink~ :3 00:17, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

...It is. o3o. If I blur it more, it'll be too 'spaced', and some of the gray will show on the ear. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 15:29, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind then.. :s Lower the opacity on the earpink, and there's a speck of waste at the part when his tail meet the back leg farthest from us. 15:47, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 16:05, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya lighten up or blur those blotches of darker shading on the belly and haunch? c: Sky Gatlocke 11:18, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the collar (I hope). I can't blur that without blurring the rest of the shading along with it. Sorry, I can try to make it lighter if it helps. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:20, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy(Did I spell that right?) blur/smudge it. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:15, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add shading to the paw/legs farthest from us? ^^ 01:44, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did the shading. There's waste everywhere, but I can't get it off. I went through every layer and deleted it...but it's still there. So if someone could do it for me, or help or something....? User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 11:35, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I usually open the .png file in Pixlr, and delete the waste there. You coukd try that if'n you want. :P Sky Molto bene 11:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? (Yes, I realize the shading might be too dark). User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 00:09, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. In some places it's darker than the rest, make it more even if you can. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 00:13, 10, 03, 2012

Shading doesn't necessarily have to be the same darkness. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 00:16, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try and add some shading to the tail? It makes it look funky the way it is now. xD Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:46, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and get rid of the waste. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 14:48, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, too. Dazzy 07:55, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I may blur it some more, but I'm done with the shading. x.x Comments...? This is getting close to the one month mark...D: User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:26, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading (Have I mentioned I fail?) I mean light source (xD) on the back legs?? Looking good~ ;) Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:45, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 10:53, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Looks wonderful, Mooneh. CBA? Atelda insert vague subtext here 16:02, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:44, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Lo) ~ Approved

File:Minty.loner.png Browsing and I found a kitty I could do: Minty! I actually like this one, sort of. Comments? User:WooWoo/Sig02:45, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I thought she was a rogue? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:48, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Says she's currently a loner, and listed under the loner category: Minty Loner (see list of loners, under M) User:WooWoo/Sig02:54, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mmhmm. She stays. Define the shading. Not bad, Woo. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:12, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading. oblivionAudience? 03:14, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:WooWoo/Sig 03:40, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred line-art on the base of the tail and haunch. Also, could you define the highlights? :3 03:52, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:WooWoo/Sig 04:12, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and highlights.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:20, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:36, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:WooWoo/Sig 04:43, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

...The blurred line-art on the top of the tail is still there, and it looks like some of the line-art there was deleted also. 05:04, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed. I couldn't see it that clearly though. Erk; this one matches her queen image better (toned down highlights) like?User:WooWoo/Sig 05:25, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights if there is any, otherwise blur the shadin. C; Sky Molto bene 05:24, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

It just may be my computer, but I can barely see the earpink—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 00:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I think you're just looking in the wrong place. Because of which side of the ear it's on, it's really small but it's perfectly visible. It's fine. But can you blur the highlights and darken the shading? Paleggy Ship it 01:02, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded er. awful. I kind of like it, though.User:WooWoo/Sig 02:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste leaking out at the base of the tail :3 Dazzy 11:29, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:WooWoo/Sig 15:30, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Redone Deleted lineart on the tail xP User:WooWoo/Sig 15:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading a little? And there's waste along the back. User:~Leafy~/Sig 15:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Redone User:WooWoo/Sig 15:47, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the highlights on the haunch and flank upward. Move the highlight on the shoulder more to the left and brighten it so it's the same color as the other highlights.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:17 Sun Mar 11

There seems to be some waste above the flank and base of the tail. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:01, 12, 03, 2012

Blur the belly shading. Dazzy 07:49, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:WooWoo/Sig 16:53, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur where the pelt meets the earpink a little more? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:05, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah. Reuploaded User:WooWoo/Sig 21:47, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 08:18, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry...But can you smooth out the shading a bit more, if ya can? And make the earpink redder to match the queen image.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    20:50, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oh... um... yeah. I took the earpink straight from the queen image though, so... I'll make it a bit redder but won't change it that much. Reuploaded User:WooWoo/Sig 21:15, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:19, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:13, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Specklepaw (Ki) ~ Approved

Specklepaw.kitFirst time doing this, hope I didn't mess up :—Preceding unsigned comment added by Ravensong (talkcontribs)

Raven, next time, sign with four "~"'s. This isn't bad, honestly. Darken and define the shading. 8D Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:59, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

And make him a male. --Leafstrike-- 20:41, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Looks nice, make the ear pink less neon , maybe take it from apprentice? LeafyAbsolute maniac,20:45,March 8,2012 (UTC)

His colour is off. Make him browner. oblivionAudience? 21:22, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his shoulder to our left and above his tail. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:26, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I've noticed you've reuploaded quite a few times, comment that you reuploaded next time. --Leafstrike-- 22:51, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a lot, blur the ear pink, and darken the shading. 23:07, March 8, 2012 (UTC) Blur the highlights more and lower their opacity, get rid of the waste outside of the charart, and make the ear pink smaller and a bit more red. Also, when you edit the image, it's best to type Reuploaded after the last comment. And please sign with four '~ or hit the signature button. 23:27, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Thanks everyone for helping meh! :3 And I signed but I was also told I should stop signing.. Should I or shouldn't I? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ravensong (talkcontribs)

No you should always sign. Who on earth told you not to? And define the speckles and dull the highlights. Paleggy Ship it 00:59, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

._. I did not tell you to stop signing. I told you not to sign up there ^ because I had already put an unsigned template there and the time would be wrong. Please don't twist my words around. oblivionAudience? 01:02, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

... And I noticed you signed it again. Please don't put a signature where it says "unsigned comment". oblivionAudience? 01:04, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, I'm Really Really sorry, I didn't mean to twist your words around, I didn't understand. RavenBeeeeeees 01:20, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Thanks again everyone, and again, really sorry Oblivion^. RavenBeeeeeees 01:26, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Try putting the lineart on a separate layer and putting the highlight layer below that; your highlights are making the lineart grey. oblivionAudience? 01:47, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, erased more waste. RavenBeeeeeees 17:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

I can still see waste in the bits I mentioned before....c: User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Did you do what I told you to do? The lineart on his face is still grey. oblivionAudience? 21:58, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, sorry, found the waste, it should All be gone now. And Oblivion, I don't know how to do that, I went back over all of the lineart with Pure Black, so there shouldn't be any grey anymore. RavenBeeeeeees 23:16, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again. RavenBeeeeeees 23:41, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights some. Dazzy 00:21, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, just darkened his shading a bit, added a bit of shading in places. Tell me how it looks! =) RavenBeeeeeees 20:36, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

This is wonderful <333 Define the earpink and darken the shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:19 Wed Mar 14

Tone down the highlights and darken the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 23:02, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, I darkened, blurred some areas, tried to match his color a bit more to his apprectice image, Also for some reason I don't think its uploading the new edits on the image, When i'm re-uploading it, it says "Oops, a photo with that name already exists." I click "overwright the existing image with yours." Don't know if i'm doing something wrong. RavenBeeeeeees 09:26, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

That's fine, Ravensong. But I still think you need to tone down the highlights quite a bit, and center/blur the earpink. Mistypebble 19:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Raven, when you re-upload the image, are you adding a new image to the wiki? You should go to the existing file and click "upload a new version of this file" RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:03, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Well, I tried to tone them down, and I blurred the earpink, hope it looks okay. RavenBeeeeeees 20:39, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded' 'again. RavenBeeeeeees 20:47, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to suggest that you shouldn't go heavy on the highlights, as it still needs to be toned down, and go heavier on the shading, so define the shading, while having the highlights toned down more.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:36, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

THere's some whiteness on the lineart of the left eye; fix that. Sunnyfrost 23:08, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Well, I found out why I wasn't toning down things enough etc, I couldn't access the layers because I saved it as png instead of xcf. So I just started over, hope it looks better! RavenBeeeeeees 23:33, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. Lovely. <3 Sky Exterminate! 00:32, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Found some waste, and darkened the shading, Tell me how it looks! =D RavenBeeeeeees 02:07, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

It's alright! Blur the stripes a little. User:WooWoo/Sig

Re-uploaded, Blurred the stripes a bit. RavenBeeeeeees 03:10, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

This looks amazing now~ Just define the shading some, is all I can really say. Dazzy 14:02, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Hope it looks better! Defined the shading a bit more, and made it a bit more of a darker brown/red. RavenBeeeeeees 18:42, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Great! Just define the earpink, blur the shading a tad, and define the tail shading. This is really cute. =3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    20:48, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste above the head, around the tail, and to the left of him. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:39, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Shouldn't be anymore waste :3 Hope it looks good! RavenBeeeeeees 22:44, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Ivyheart =P 23:43, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:13, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (A) ~ Approved

Tawnyfur.apprentice Stoneclaw said she was redoing her warrior, and these are the hex codes she gave me, so don't complain about it not matching. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:37, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the haunch shading a bit? Dazzy 07:38, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 07:46, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the smudged part of the earpink? If not, then it's fine. It may just be me. So pretty. *steals* =3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    18:50, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think it's fine how it is. The color it is now makes it blend into the pelt anyways. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:51, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the "highlights?" --Cinder Real or Not Real?16:09, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, Cinder. But, if the others agree, I'll do it. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 16:11, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Just on the shoulder. And darken and blur it on the face. Paleggy Ship it 18:01, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:07, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:53, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

None, approved.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:56 Sun Mar 18

Nightfur (Lo) ~ Approved

Nightfur.lonerIvy's reservation ran out. Gaah this is boring >.< Commnets?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 18:05 Sat Mar 17

I actually meant to take that off of my reservations. I must have forgotten. XD Looks great! Define the tail shading a little? I know, shading is sometimes difficult on black cats. :3 Ivyheart =P 03:07, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Ivy <3 especially on short hairs x.x  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:13 Sun Mar 18

Can you blur the shading and thicken it at the flank?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:52, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred to the max now.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:04 Sun Mar 18

Lighten the base pelt color or something. I'm having a rough time telling it apart from the lineart. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 11:16, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the reapink a little. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 13:18, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes may not be showing.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:17 Sun Mar 18

I think this looks great, CBA? Mistypebble 22:39, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Approved~ Sky Exterminate! 10:11, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (Alt. A) - Approved

Graystripe.apprentice.alt He was mentioned in Into the Wild with Black paws, and that's the same situation as Tigerstar, so he should get an alt. I don't actually have the book to check what rank he is on that page, but since he's an apprentice most of the book, I'm going to assume he was one, unless someone tells me otherwise. Comments? Paleggy Ship it 14:27, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and yes I noticed I names it wrong again. I'm kinda out of it, sorry. XD I'm gonna ask Teldy to rename it. Paleggy Ship it 14:27, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the whole image a tad, and blur the earpink?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:08, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the ear pink, as well as what Stone suggested? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 07:30, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Also, (it could just be the effect of how dark the image is), but it seems as if the shading has some sort of neon hue to it, but also, it could be just me, if you can, can you try fixing that?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:10, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Okay the whole thing looks black...and the ear pink needs to blurred then smudged into the ear. Are you working on this still? It's been about five days... Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 00:06, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sand, please don't repeat comments. It's already been said that the image is too dark, earpink needs to be blurred. Also, the fur is already smudged into the ear...  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:26, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Sorry for the wait, I was being lazy this week. ^^; Paleggy Ship it 20:44, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 08:04, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 14:28, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Sootfur (Alt. A) ~ Approved

Sootfur.apprentice.alt I adore black cats. I gotta thank Paleh for giving me the cite...xD Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 22:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Personally, I think it's fine. But, if the others agree, I'll change it. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:26, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe define the light on the tail? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 22:30, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:36, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder "highlight".  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:07, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You can say highlights, Stone. I use them, and quite often. XD Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 23:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink just a bit and reverse the depth in the eyes and I'll CBA. :) Paleggy Ship it 09:19, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <3 Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 09:49, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

As promised, CBA? Paleggy Ship it 09:50, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 15:04, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rogue Blanks: Short haired Male - Approved

File:Rogueshortmale.png So I'm starting with him first. Comments for improvement? oblivionAudience? 00:08, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think the heel on the back legs should jut out a little more. Also, add the dew claws (optional), and the toes should also jut out a little more, a little like this. --Leafstrike-- 00:30, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The back leg closest to us looks broken, move it in more. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:38, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make a line to mark the inner ear, slope the forehead down to the muzzle a bit more, and maybe make the neck a bit longer? This is cool! :) ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:09, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you post all the blanks? And round out the front of the muzzle a bit, it's really boxy. Shelly For a limited time only 01:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I stand by my comment that they'd look better with claws sticking out, since they are rogues after all. It is optional, but in my eyes, it'd be better Iveh Yo! 02:13, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, but unless they had dog claws/teeth on them (still not sure how the BC cats got them to stay on), they wouldn't be very visable... Look at them. They're small, thin, and curve in when they're out and the cat isn't sticking them into something (which causes the claws to draw out more). Shelly For a limited time only 02:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the back part of the neck every so slightly, and if it's a rogue, maybe make its back arched like this guy. Dazzy 07:38, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Also, shouldn't he be white, like the other blanks? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:09, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

It just means the blank is transparent. It's fine, Bluestar. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:08, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Though the other blanks are filled in with white, Cloudy. We'd have to make them transparent also if we leave this one as it is. --Leafstrike-- 20:46, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

This is nice but the tail should probally go up about 15 degrees or so. Also shouldn't you post all four like the Prey Hunter and the Loner and the Apprentice blanks? Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 00:14, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

She doesn't have to for one. I found it way easier to work with one until there wasn't very many major lineart changes. It takes awhile to do longhairs and to have to redo them every time there is a major tweak is hard x.x make the neck a tad longer.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:27 Tue Mar 13

@LeafstrikeAsakura, Right now, I guess it can stay transparent. Oblivion can add it later, and if the blanks are approved with transparency instead of white, it isn't much of a big difference, for users could still fill in color in the blanks. I guess it could be added later, when the images are approved.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:39, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, so since I'm away without my laptop, I have no way of uploading this, but I do have a few things to say. First of all, Leafstrike, it does have few claws, but cats don't have them on their back feet. Everyone else, I won't upload all four; Mounty said all I needed to say. And it's transparent. Big deal. I completely didn't realize it upon uploading, and the next time I change it the body will be white. Oh, and bear with me for the little changes; there are only so many pixels available to me and it's hard to make little changes on such a small image. oblivionAudience? 21:22, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Uhhh... Loon? Cats do have claws on their back feet... in fact, the claws on the back feet are longer and don't retract. Shelly For a limited time only 21:28, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Also, you have hundreds of thousands of pixels at your disposal. I advise you make the changes suggested if you want to get these things done any time soon. Shelly For a limited time only 21:32, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lol Shelly, that picture xD Anyway, sorry for the typo. I meant to say dew claw. Cats don't have them on their back feet. And about the pixels: what you say is true, but for a certain area it's hard to do. The paws, for instance. I can only make them so big or so small in a certain direction before it looks stupid. But you're right, I need to do it, obviously. No computer until Tuesday though. oblivionAudience? 21:37, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't say to add dew claws on the hind legs. --Leafstrike-- 04:17, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. Well, I thought that's what you meant since he does have one on his front. oblivionAudience? 13:53, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Just throwing this out there, Loonie's gonna be gone till tuesday, but I think we should make an exception and not decline these. Also, can we make the time limit before a charart is declined 2 weeks for blanks? Especially since we voted on them and all. Paleggy Ship it 01:16, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I don't think there should be a limit on blanks. Not because I'm going to poof on you guys and go AWOL for a month, but because no one else will be able to replicate the blank. oblivionAudience? 01:34, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Loonie, it's fine. Take as along as you need. We're not in any rush to get these done, last I checked. And if we are, those users need to calm their horses and wait. We realize you have a life. XD Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 01:36, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the elbow on the left foreleg, and move it up a bit higher on the leg to be aligned with the abdomen/chest, because that's how it is on a cat.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:15, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Could you straighten the back leg closest to us because it looks a bit crooked and broken. --Cinder Real or Not Real?16:44, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

That's how a cat's back leg looks, Cinder. Shelly For a limited time only 16:49, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Oh. My Bad. Sorry Oblivion. --Cinder Real or Not Real?17:04, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Not sure if this has been said before but the ear on <--- that side make it a pixl or two thicker because it looks quite thin and it doesn't match the rest of the lineart. Also make the little line on the down <--- left paw thicker. Do you know what I'm talking about? Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 00:04, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, with Shelly's help, I've identified what I should and should not do. oblivionAudience? 19:05, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Move the eye forward and round out the front of the muzzle to resemble the warrior blank. Shelly For a limited time only 19:08, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's this? oblivionAudience? 19:21, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

The front paw farthest from us looks slightly squished; can you make the place where the paw meets the ankle-thing a little more corner-y? *can't explain* ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 21:06, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

The tail looks broken, possibly smooth the curve out on the tail? Also, shorten the tail a bit. --Leafstrike-- 21:25, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Purplemoon, I think I know what you mean. The paw furthest away doesn't look the same as the other paws since they're a bit rounder, so round out the top of the front paw furthest from us ^^ Iveh Yo! 00:52, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

The muzzle doesn't look quite right. Try smoothing out the area between the brow ridge and the bridge of the nose.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:57 Thu Mar 22

Re-uploaded. Dat muzzle. oblivionAudience? 01:51, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

This is just my opinion, but it doesn't quite give off the more wild sense of a rogue verses a loner. Maybe stretch the neck out, flatten the ears, and bear their teeth. Maybe also bring one of the forepaws into a striking position. If you disagree, feel free to ignore this. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:24, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Scarlet. That's why I voted no change in the second round, that was one of my reasons, that none really looked like a rogue in terms of their stature (no offense meant at all). You are free to disagree but I think you should at least try it to see how it looks. Iveh Yo! 17:19, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

You both make good points, but there's one thing I want to discuss: he doesn't "look like a rogue". I get that you think rogues are aggressive, and would look more so with flattened ears, bared teeth, etc., but by that logic, the warrior should be doing something warrior-like. The warriors just look like a cat sitting down. Same with the leaders, deputies, sharpclaws, cave-guards, kittypets, and any others I may have forgotten. If you haven't been exposed to our images, none of them may look like the rank you think they're supposed to look like. Let's say you've come to the site for the first time, and you take a look at Thistleclaw's image. Not going off the image, just the blank itself, how does that look like a warrior to you unless you know he's a warrior? I don't think my image has to "look" like a rogue, since none of the other images do.

In addition, rogues aren't always going around terrorizing other cats, are they? Let's take Sasha for an example. While she didn't exactly leave the Clans alone, she never killed/kidnapped any of them, never took their prey, and never got into a fight. The image should be unbiased in that it doesn't look like the cats are "doing" anything.

Now, that's just my opinion. Feel free to disagree/shoot me down. oblivionAudience? 19:09, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

I think baring the teeth or looking like it's trying to start a fight would be over doing it a lot. All it really needs is to look like it's ready to defend itself (like my proposed blanks did). A slight arch up in the spine, a bend at the legs. Nothing too dramatic. Shelly For a limited time only 19:35, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I'm much to lazy to see if this was mentioned or not already, but make the legs farthest from us a bit shorter than the ones closer to us, so it doesn't look like it's one a tightrope. Paleggy Ship it 20:35, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

I think the pose is fine its like the old one, just lower the tail a little or straighten it out. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:36, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 22:22, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! Make the hock a bit shorter, and make the whole back legs curve a but smoother. Also, make the neck longer, and chest less square-ish. Paleggy Ship it 22:26, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ._. oblivionAudience? 00:47, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

The front left leg looks a bit chubby to me.. Can you think it out a bit? Mistypebble 14:51, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 15:26, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks a bit too tall. Shorten the legs, especially the hock, a lengthen the body a little. Also, the shoulder is attached oddly. Round it out a bit. Breezewhisker 16:56, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 01:04, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Give the tail a little bit of an edge, not much but just enough so it doesn't look so round. {{SUBST:Nosubst|Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 15:58, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Cats do have rounded tails. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 19:40, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Preference, but could you add a line where the ear-pink goes, such as in the leader and prey-hunter blanks? To me, it looks better, but you don't have to. Iveh Yo! 22:01, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Aw, he's cute :) you could make a bit more of a curve just behind the shoulder. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 23:03, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 01:35, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, Loonie, do you mind posting the long-haired blanks here? I'm no expert, but this blanks looks like it's ready for CBA, or something. >.< *doesn't know too much about approval of blanks*  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:47, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Like I said on chat, I think they could useca bit more neck.^^ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 01:51, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

This is optional, but maybe flatten the ears a little? It gives them the more "hostile" look, and rogues are pretty hostile. I think this is fablulous. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:21, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. So with the help of Leggy and Paleh (who couldn't seem to make up their minds...), I've fixed him a little. Also, Ivy, see my novel up there^ for why I'm not flattening the ears. oblivionAudience? 02:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I've gotten a recent critique on a cat picture of mine. They said that cat bellies dip a little, so you might need to make it droop some. Iveh Yo! 00:42, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but his back is arched, therefore his belly would arch with it. oblivionAudience? 01:59, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to probably get sent to the firing squad for this.... but CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:40, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudy, we can't approve this without the other three blanks, unless we're going to approve this and then have her put up the female and longhairds. Iveh Yo! 14:38, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

That's what we were planning on. Continuing CBA (hopefully I can without getting shot...). oblivionAudience? 15:10, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Don't stop CBA for this, it's just a question- So if this one gets appproved we can start doing the shorthaired males? Or just wait for the other ones? Ivyheart =P 17:03, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

No, we're waiting.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:04 Sat Mar 31

Approving. Do not reserve any rogues until all four have been approved.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 21:18 Sat Mar 31

Rogue Blanks - Approved

File:Rogueshortmale.pngRogueshortfemaleFile:Roguelongmale.pngRoguelongfemale Changes very likely aren't showing. This is mostly just for the longhaired. Please try not to comment on the anatomy; it's already been approved and anatomy has been decided on. oblivionAudience? 00:35, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I really like these rogue blanks, Oblivion. But on the Short Male, to me the feet seem a little blurry. Feel free to disagree with me, it could just be with my computer. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 00:42, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's the wiki, actually. There've been some issues with the images recently, and the changes haven't been showing properly. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:43, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I saw that yesterday, Cloudy. Just now, the Long Male has changed back to the older blanks. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 00:46, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

For me, the long female is the only one showing. Also; a good way to tell if the male's changes are showing is if it's transparent. If not, no changes. oblivionAudience? 00:47, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I can only see the short haired male, but it looks epic! :3 RavenBeeeeeees 01:21, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Looks awesome! All four! I like longhaired one best :D LeafyAbsolute maniac,8:16, April 1,2012 (UTC)

Okee I'm gonna be a nit picking butt X3 but it's only for the long hairs you don't have to do these things it's just my opinion. Maybe add some floof to the hocks and their elbows I guess (I don't know what they're called) and the floof on the chest seem to be sorta cut off right before it gets to the head. Maybe trying getting rid of the curve that is right there (if that makes sense) Anyway, I'm done babbling. These look AMAZING! <33  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:30 Sun Apr 1

Re-uploaded. Thanks to Mounty and Leggy for the assistance c: oblivionAudience? 16:48, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

These look perfect <3 CBA?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 16:49 Sun Apr 1

I'm sorry, both for interrupting and for my inability to see the blank well enough, but it appears there's long fur on the front of the haunch, and it looks odd to me there. If it's not, ignore my comment. Iveh Yo! 20:07, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

It's supposed to be like that. It's that way on the apprentices and on the loners. I'm going to continue the CBA.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 20:12 Sun Apr 1

Approved! 8D  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:48, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Alt Ro) - Approved

Mapleshade.rogue.altThis one's for you, Mapleshade the fish who looked just like this. Sentiment aside, I had a lot of fun and nostalgia doing this <3 Comments for improvement?

^I forgot to sign, and if changes aren't showing, look here 20120402035038!Mapleshade.rogue.alt.png Iveh Yo! 04:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink color just a bit and it'll be perfect! 8D Paleggy Ship it 04:25, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 04:28, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly...I can't find anything wrong with this. <333 CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

-fails- Um, there's a teeny tiny smidgen of waste by her chest... Don't kill me D: oblivionAudience? 10:58, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, there appears to be a ring of waste around her entire body -hides- oblivionAudience? 11:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Waste does not affect the quality of the actual image. She can reupload it later. Continuing CBA. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 13:21, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Continuing from the original CBA time, this has passed 12 hours. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Alt Ro 2) ~ Approved

Sol.rogue.alt2 Ah, the nostalgia. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:53, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Here's what it should look like, for those that wish to look at the right image. xD [1] Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Beau-tee-ful! Can you define the mottles some, please? :) Iveh Yo! 04:13, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. [2] Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:19, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't care if I get shot for this, I think this looks perfect already, so CBA? XD Paleggy Ship it 04:24, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Flora (Ro) ~ Approved

Flora.rogue Fff I'm late D8 I really like this c: Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:48 Mon Apr 2

This is so epic, just....*dies* I told Mountain what to fix already, nobody objected, so CBA? Iveh Yo! 04:57, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Kestrelflight (MC Alt) - Approved it seems like forever since I've put anything up for approval! I kept meaning to do this but kept forgetting. He is constantly called mottled gray in the allegiances, and I don't think it's a partial description because he is gray-brown with white splotches, so I think it warrants an alt. However, if you guys disagree, I'll respect your decision. Also, I tried a new mottled method, how does it look? :D Iveh Yo! 18:22, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit ^^ 02:15, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 15:02, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

There is a litle gray smudged into the earpink—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 15:58, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I think it's supposed to be like that... Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:23, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it's my style of giving cats fluffy ears. I'm not changing that unless it needs to be smudged more or blurred more and I'm informed by another member. Iveh Yo! 00:57, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I adore this image. CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:03, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Over 24 hours, approved Iveh Yo! 23:25, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (Ki) ~ Approved

Shrewtooth.kit Cloudy has a weakness for black cats. Now, the changes from Dazzle's image may not be showing. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 17:15, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading 8D 14:19, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I know you probably colorpicked, but can you define the earpink just a tad? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 16:20, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. And Ivy, the ear pink is fine. I don't think you're looking at the right image. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:11, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I really don't see anything else wrong. CBA?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 20:24 Sun Apr 1

Approved Iveh Yo! 23:28, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Patchfoot (Ro) ~ Approved

Patchfoot.rogueFirst one to use the new blanks! 8D Comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:50, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Also, This is the image that I did since file changes aren't showing, if you want to see the current version.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:06, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the belly just a tad. This is wonderful, Stone. I can find nothing else wrong. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:28, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:34, April 2, 2012 (UTC)  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? (I expect the firing squad for this, but imho, this image is perfect) Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:37, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

[3] Erased waste....That I didn't see. xD  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:39, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Wow! Looks great, Stone!! Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 07:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Berry, please do not comment on images that have been CBA'd, especially just to say how wonderful the image is. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 07:40, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

This is the wrong version of the blank. There's no fur on the back of his arm nor his hock, and that weird random spot on his tail wasn't fixed. Look here for the correct version. oblivionAudience? 10:27, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Why u wiki spazz? Dx  ☯Stoneclaw☯    13:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

lol, nice derp, Stone. So, shall we re-CBA? I think so. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 13:40, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Approved.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:40, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Scourge (Ro) - Approved

Scourge.rogue Look here if changes aren't showing. Really, this is ridiculous. I'm looking up and down the approval page and all I see is old blanks... oblivionAudience? 10:05, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great. Maybe the claws could be added, because thats part of his decription. Just a suggestion. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 10:08, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -is a fail because she forgot his fail claws- oblivionAudience? 11:22, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think they look good. Honestly, I really can't draw claws and when I do they look horrible. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 11:27, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and tail. Lovely, Loonie. =3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    14:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadeth oblivionAudience? 21:28, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on his rump :3 RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:29, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

No there isn't... O_o oblivionAudience? 23:57, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There isn't a white pixel, I agree. Anyways, this looks amazing. CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:59, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

-doesn't feel this is important enough to pause CBA- No...there's a white pixel right under the tail, where it meets his rump. Rowan isn't crazy. xD Rainlegs 03:57, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's there, I promise o3o oblivionAudience? 01:19, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Approved.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:26, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Oakstep (Lo) - Approved

Oakstep.loner Hmmmm..... I'm never doing stripes with the pencil again. XD This is the best I could do to match it. Comments? Paleggy Ship it 00:47, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading and darken the overall shading a tiny bit~ Also, smudge the earpink into the ear a bit, and the stripes on the tail seem to be edging away from the lineart along the bottom... I hope that made sense... Fix it? OuO 03:48, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Mistypebble 13:59, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'm so laaaaazy Paleggy Ship it 01:11, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mounty likes this. Mounty is gonna CBA.