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Bramblestar (Le) ~ Approved
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Bramblestar! Who called it? I DID! For months I've been pulling for this guy. Everyone else said it'd be anyone else, but NO. I CALLED it! WOO. Anyway, I made this... a month ago. The pale underside is a preference, and if you guys like it I'll nominate the other images for tweaking. If not, I'll remove it. Shelly For a limited time only 00:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
So beautiful <3. Define the scar. SilverThe Glee Project 00:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Nooo, spoilers! Blur the shading. --Leafstrike-- 00:12, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Wow! You got it, nice! It's a preference, but can you blur the stripes on the chest a bit? This is awesome. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 00:57, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
You don't have to...but maybe expand the right side of the pale chest a little? C: Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 01:04, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I made the scar paler. At this point the scar is older than it is in the other images, and could have changed color or had scar fur grow over it. Shelly For a limited time only 02:02, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
That sounds good, Shelly. I bet it'd an old wound. This is a bit of a preference, but the highlight on the flank looks a bit like a line rather then a round pool of line. This is honestly one of the most beautiful things I've every seen! Maybe blur the stripes above the eyes a touch as well. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:08, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Whatever it was you just said, I hope I did it right, Scarlet. Shelly For a limited time only 15:33, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Hmmm.... CBA? I simply adore this, Shelly. —Garrus ღ 15:40, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Garrus ღ 14:43, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Misha (Ro) ~ ApprovedEdit
Atelda 16:41, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading a bit and the ear-pink looks a little neonish. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:06, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Shading an earpink is fine. Just define the nose pink, 'Teldy. =3 She's cute!~ Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:40, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
I do think the earpink looks a bit neon, actually.. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 23:16, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Why you guys so conflicted Dx lol, so I de-saturated the earpink slightly, and made the nose pink more noticeable. Atelda 03:25, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 06:23, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Garrus ღ 14:47, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Tigerstar (Ro) ~ Approved Edit
I was actually going to sit out the rogue rush, but I decided that I might as well do Bird and Tigerstar since I already did them before. Comments? (I'm just putting the png versions as I upload so the changes show). Shelly For a limited time only 18:25, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
I love this, Shelly. Can you define the scars on the tail a bit? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 02:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Looks great to me! CBA? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 03:04 Tue Apr 3
Approved. —Garrus ღ 14:47, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Lilykit (Ki) ~ ApprovedEdit
http://www.iaza.com/work/120403C/iaza18027888334400.png here It goes here :33 Mounty likey. Changes aren't showing for some strange reason. It's right here. Comments? I'm really sowry Atelda ;.; MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 00:40 Tue Apr 3
Wait for me to move the file please. D8 Atelda 00:56, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
I was told to reupload it. I ish sowry :s. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 00:58 Tue Apr 3 Blur the stripes on the legs and the stray square pixel on the face. This is really good! Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:00, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
The leg stripes are fine. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 01:03, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah, I'm not gonna change the stripes. Changes are here if they're not showing now. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 01:07 Tue Apr 3
I don't think she should have those gingery patches. Her descripton just says dark tabby and white. o3o Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 03:32, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
I looked up a torbie and it had those. I think it's fine. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 03:35 Tue Apr 3
I know, but is she actually torbie? Unless there is a reference somewhere in the book, I think she's just tabby and white. -Hates self for messing with epic image- Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 03:38, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Sky, she's not tabby and white. She's tabby with white patches. Google that description and you'll only find torbies. Google tabby-and-white and you'll get tabby cats with white undersides. I say the ginger should stay. Shelly For a limited time only 03:45, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Eh, I know when I'm beat. -Raises white flag- In rhat case, blur the neck shading a little and define the leg shading a tad. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 03:54, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Eh I tried. Kit shading is hard. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 04:03 Tue Apr 3
Love this! Just blur the chest shading a bit. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:12, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Personally, I think the shading is fine. If it's too flat, the image looks off. Wonderful job, dear. CBA? —Garrus ღ 02:33, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Approved~ Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 04:04, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Snapper (Ro) - ApprovedEdit
Yeah. I modeled him after my cat. Problem? *trollface* (here if the changes won't show) Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 06:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
This is the wrong version of the blank. There's no fur on the back of his arm nor his hock, and that weird random spot on his tail wasn't fixed. Look here for the correct version. oblivionAudience? 10:26, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the scars a little. Very, very impressive :) Iveh Yo! 15:59, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Your cat is lovely, define the ear-pink please, I think its too small..or I need glasses. Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,16:50,April 2,2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded~ Changes here. >.> Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 00:35, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
O.o That's...amazing. CBA? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 00:39, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry to interrupt, Sky. But maybe give him his trademark, three scars across the chest/shoulder? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:13, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
IRe-uploaded. Here. Yes. Right here. ^^ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 03:21, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Alright. I'mma re-CBA this. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 04:15, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. 8D Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 04:16, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Mapleshade (Ro) - Approved Edit
Meh, not as epic as all the other rogues up right now. :P Changes aren't showing, so the proper images is here; [1] Yes I realize I forgot the scars, I'll add em next reupload. XD
Paleggy
Ship it 23:18, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the tail shading. <3 Amazing, typo sister! Iveh Yo! 23:31, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Best I could do with scars without making them look like they're bleeding. Paleggy Ship it 22:54, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
I like. I'm gonna CBA y'know? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 00:03 Wed Apr 4
Approved. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:25, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Jaggedtooth (Ro) - ApprovedEdit
Comments? Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,13:03,April 2,2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. Nice job~ —Garrus ღ 14:26, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
When you reupload, can you link us to the file? The Wiki isn't showing images and it would make this a lot easier for us crtiquers, thank you :) Iveh Yo! 15:53, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
You cant see it? Okay I upload it to my personal gallery...Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,16:13,April 2,2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded, Here: look. Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,16:18,April 2,2012 (UTC)
24 hours without comment, CBA? Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,17:30,April 3,2012 (UTC)
Leaf you're not supposed to CBA your own images. Could you darken the shading? Paleggy Ship it 22:41, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Ok..sorry, reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,12:24,April 4,2012 (UTC)
Now CBA. XD Paleggy Ship it 22:02, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 02:51, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Nightwhisper (Ro) ~ Approved Edit
It sucks. Don't look at it Dx Anyways, I had no idea what to make to nose color. Changes may not be showing... comments? ___✫Leafy✫ 16:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Oh, they aren't showing, so look here. ___✫Leafy✫ 16:05, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Theres a lot of waste around, erase it and blur the shadings Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,16:22,April 2,2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I think I broke the shading ;-; ___✫Leafy✫ 16:31, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
No, good, its only a little lighter..can you darken the legs like before and make something with that dark patch of shading on his flank? Maybe just lighten it a little...and blur the ear pink into the fur..if you can, Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,16:44,April 2,2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Hmmm... better, better... ___✫Leafy✫ 18:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Waste, agin! But yes its better, nice job. Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,18:53,April 2,2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I hate waste ._. ___✫Leafy✫ 20:17, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Tone down the highlights and earpink a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:07, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Re=uploaded Re-uploaded =^w^= ___✫Leafy✫ 10:54, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Waa Im annoying whah, there is a patch of light on his back, blur it please. Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,13:30,April 3,2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded xD ___✫Leafy✫ 15:35, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
woo it looks really good now, hey if you blur the shadings more maybe I CBA it XD Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,10:30,April 5,2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Hoorah =D ___✫Leafy✫ 10:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
So, it looks good to me, CBA? Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,12:23,April 5,2012 (UTC)
Approved Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,17:40,April 6,2012 (UTC)
Ice (Alt. Ro) ~ Approved Edit
I love black and white kitties. 8D Also, /please do not/ tell me to blur the shading. I like it this way, because it gives it more dramatic depth, and I think that's artist's choice. I made the claws on the fore paws longer so they looked scarier. =3 Comments for improvement? [2] Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 04:55, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
He has another black and white alt, so make sure the things that can be seen, such as the legs, on that alt match. GORGEOUS. Paleggy Ship it 07:10, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
He should have an underbite. (Unless that's Snake...>.>) Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 07:34, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. He doesn't have an underbite. I removed some black. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 00:06, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Define the collar shading. :3 Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 04:14, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 04:27, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
I think this looks awesome! CBA? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 05:09 Wed Apr 4
Actually, yes, he does have an underbite. Revealed in Heart of a Warrior (I don't have the book, so I'm not sure on the page). Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:54, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Actually, you didnt changed the heading so Im counting it as comment, Approved Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,17:51,April 6,2012 (UTC)
Brokenstar (Alt. Ro) ~ ApprovedEdit
Yays! Everything is exactly the same as his old one so I'm not changing it. And to however is doing his main rogue(I don't want to do it) you can use this lineart. Comments? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 01:11 Tue Apr 3
I've been told that the changes aren't showing. Look here . MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 03:14 Tue Apr 3
Lighten it just a touch? It's really hard to see the ragged fur cause of how dark it is. Paleggy Ship it 23:50, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
I'm withdrawing this to work on something else. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 00:15 Wed Apr 4
Taking this back XD I'll reupload soon. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 01:33 Wed Apr 4
Re-uploaded MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 03:39 Wed Apr 4
Epic image is epic. CBA? (also, woo, 18,000) —Garrus ღ 16:58, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Garrus ღ 19:12, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Percy (Ro) - ApprovedEdit
Alrighty, here was admittedly one of my better chararts and I'm glad I was able to do his image. I don't want to put up his alt where his eye is gone until this gets approved, as all I'll be doing is adding another layer on top of his eye anyway. Iveh Yo! 16:36, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading just a tad. Ivy, I'm going to steal this and run away now. <3 —Garrus ღ 16:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Nyu don't steal him XD Iveh Yo! 16:57, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Hickory!!!! Honestly, I don't see anything else wrong. CBA? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:40 Thu Apr 5
Mounty was being a derp and forgot to change the heading. —Garrus ღ 22:44, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 20:52, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Harley (Alt. Ro2) ~ ApprovedEdit
Eh. I really don't care for this one. —Garrus ღ 14:43, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a tad. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:56, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Actually, I'd rather not. I'm quite partial to darker shading. —Garrus ღ 22:57, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Then blur it a little. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:00, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. That I can do. —Garrus ღ 23:03, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
I'm not sure if the changes are showing, but the.... belly highlight I guess it would be? It needs the be blurred, and it look a bit too perfectly round. Otherwise, I see nothing wrong, nice job cloudy! ^^ Paleggy Ship it 23:19, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 23:24, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Paleggy Ship it 23:27, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
None, approved. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 01:48 Sat Apr 7
Ivypool (Alt W) ~ ApprovedEdit
She was called black in TLH, and everyone knows Cloudy adores black cats.. —Garrus ღ 14:53, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Give her green eyes and enlarge the earpink. Paleggy Ship it 22:50, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. You'll know the changes are showing when you see the green eyes. —Garrus ღ 22:57, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
I honestly cannot find anything wrong with this, so CBA? Paleggy Ship it 23:20, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
None, approved. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 01:50 Sat Apr 7
Seedkit (Ki) - ApprovedEdit
Yeah...'Teldy's tired. ._. Atelda 04:29, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. Cute <33 Weylon Distinctly Unique. 13:06, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Atelda 02:10, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Hmmm...CBA? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 02:47, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Approved, Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,18:24,April 7,2012 (UTC)
Stripes (Ro) - Approved Edit
He's a classic tabby! Comments? --Leafstrike-- 17:31, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Awesome job! ^^ Darken the shading. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 18:20 Mon Apr 2
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 20:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the stripes some more. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:05, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Also, smudge the stripes in the way the fur goes and layer the shading on top of the stripes Iveh Yo! 21:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 23:51, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
This is the wrong version of the blank. There's no fur on the back of his arm nor his hock, and that weird random spot on his tail wasn't fixed. Look here for the correct version. oblivionAudience? 23:58, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Better? --Leafstrike-- 00:10, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
There's a white pixel behind the back haunch closest to us. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:06, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
There's some waste behind the front legs. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 03:03 Tue Apr 3
And on the back and tail too. SilverThe Glee Project 21:33, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:59, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
(From what I'm seeing) There is some waste around his flank, tail (tip), bottom of the left ear (the cats left), inbetween the chest and belly fur the left and the hind haunches. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:54, 04, 04, 2012
Reuploaded In case the changes don't show. --Leafstrike-- 17:03, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge the tail stripes a little more, please. —Garrus ღ 23:12, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 17:55, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the stripes on the legs and tail a bit and smudge the face stripes a tiny bit c: ♡Pouncey!♡ 20:49, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 23:33, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 04:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
None, approved. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 15:33 Sun Apr 8
Dewkit (TC) (Ki) ~ ApprovedEdit
Berry lost her reservation, and I decided to take it. He's the offspring of my favorite character~ —Garrus ღ 02:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Can you make the eyes less orange and more yellowy? :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 02:28, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
They're supposed to be amber...isn't that what yellow and orange are? xD —Garrus ღ 02:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
<333 Define the earpink a wee bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:55, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Actually, amber is brown-yellow, like so. Yellow and orange are just yellow and orange. Shelly For a limited time only 15:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I had to re-do it, since I derped and lost the layers. xD —Garrus ღ 18:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the chest shading. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 19:57 Sat Apr 7
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 20:07, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink, and than I CBA this image. 8D Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 20:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 21:06, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 21:08, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
enlarge the ear-pink a tad more BrackentailXD call me bracken...
01:15, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
The ear pink is fine. Plus, if it's too large, it looks awkward. Continuing CBA. —Garrus ღ 01:15, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Garrus ღ 21:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Russetfur (Ro) - ApprovedEdit
Comments? Changes probably aren't showing ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:27, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the haunch shading. Fabulous! MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 03:05 Tue Apr 3
Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 16:48, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading a bit and smudge the ear pink in ^^ ♡Pouncey!♡ 03:10, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:30, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? —Garrus ღ 21:32, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
None, approved. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 21:35 Sun Apr 8
Harley (Alt Ro) ~ ApprovedEdit
From the gray-brown to the gray-black alt. 8D —Garrus ღ 01:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading more on the front leg closest to us. ∗ Dewstar(leaf)∗~I am no illusion...~ 14:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Personally, I think the shading's fine. I took it from an image I just recently had approved. —Garrus ღ 15:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 21:18, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Y'know, I like this. CBA? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:40 Sat Apr 7
None, approved. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:50 Sun Apr 8
Harley (Ro) ~ ApprovedEdit
I had fun making thing :3 Comments? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 02:00 Sat Apr 7
Can you define the brown? It says he was brown and gray and it may be just my computer, but I can't see the brown very well. This looks wonderful. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
I can actually see it fine, it's probably your computer o3o ___✫Leafy✫ 12:42, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Most of the gray and brown tabbies I saw the brown was kinda grayish. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 14:48 Sat Apr 7
Whoa, I could never make that 8D I think the shading on the muzzle should be lighter near the back of the head and darker near the muzzle though ∗ Dewstar(leaf)∗~I am no illusion...~ 15:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
*dies of epicness* Wow, Mounty, amazing. Define the tail shading? Dazzle~♪ 15:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Thank you 8D I left the shading on the muzzle the same because I think it looks fine. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 15:31 Sat Apr 7
Define the shading and give it some more depth. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:05, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:36 Sat Apr 7
Dear god, Mounty. I'll never know how you make these things... CBA? —Garrus ღ 22:43, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Approved... Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:55, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Red (R) - Approved Edit
classic tabby fail. see it here as changes aren't showing. comments? Weylon Distinctly Unique. 05:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Can you thin out the main body stripes a tad? I did Fleck as a classic tabby if that helps. Marvelous <3 Iveh Yo! 05:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading. —Garrus ღ 05:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. clicketh for changes Weylon Distinctly Unique. 05:41, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink. <3 Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 23:18, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the legs a bit? :3 ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 19:39, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 03:38, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the pale belly~ ♡Pouncey!♡ 19:00, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
This is sooo not a fail. Just define the shading on the tail because it's a little hard to see. ∗ Dewstar(leaf)∗~I am no illusion...~ 15:08, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. BetteR? Weylon Distinctly Unique. 17:18, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
None, approved. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 00:46 Mon Apr 9
Tess (Ro) - ApprovedEdit
Uh.....I'm indifferent about this one...I didn't have my tablet on hand and I just am out of practice with GIMP...kinda.... Uh...if the changes aren't showing, you can look here. o3o Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 05:06, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the top haunch shading Iveh Yo! 05:07, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 05:10, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Lovely! Just blur the shading just a bit where the leg is. Cinder14:36, April 3, 2012 (UTC)(Sig isn't working)
Reuploaded c: Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 16:09, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Define and blur the shading. ;) ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:23, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading a bit. Nice. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:02, 04, 04, 2012
Reuploaded - Not sure about the changes.. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:03, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? —Garrus ღ 21:30, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Garrus ღ 03:06, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Sasha (Ro) - Approved Edit
I actually like this one. If changes don't show, look here. Comments? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:49, 02, 04, 2012
Lighten the shading a tad. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 13:34, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Also, blur the shading some, if you will :) Iveh Yo! 15:56, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Look here if changes don't show. =/ ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:06, 03, 04, 2012
Darken the shading a tiny bit, and define the shading under her neck/chin. ♡Pouncey!♡ 11:38, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading on her tail. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:14, 04, 04, 2012
Maybe make the front of her paws a tad lighter ∗ Dewstar(leaf)∗~I am no illusion...~ 19:53, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:23, 07, 04, 2012
CBA? Atelda 02:24, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Garrus ღ 03:06, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Bird (Ro) ~ Approved Edit
Nostalgiaaaaaaa. This cat has the first tabby design I ever made on my own. :3 Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 20:45, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading a little and smudge the mud a little also? --Leafstrike-- 22:16, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Actually, I think the shading is fine. Nice job, Shelly. —Garrus ღ 23:08, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 00:17, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Hmmm...le CBA? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:03, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Garrus ღ 03:06, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Darkstripe (Alt. Ro) ~ Approved Edit
And that, kids, is how you do a black tabby. 8D Yes, they exist. And they look like this. This is a new image, too, so don't go thinking I have two rogues up when I shouldn't. One's an old rogue, and this is new. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 21:53, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Amazing X3, maybe blur the stripes just a teensy bit, unless my eye-sight is really horrible XD. I amYour worst nightmare 21:56, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Are you calling the dark parts of the light parts the stripes? Because, in this case, the light bits are the stripes. Shelly For a limited time only 22:47, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Black tabbies are the coolest-looking cats. :D Could you lighten the shading a little bit? Breezewhisker 04:06, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 04:09, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
I know this is going to sound so small...but could you define the depth in the eye? Jeez, Shelly. This is stunning. —Garrus ღ 15:47, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 00:17, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Could you darken the earpink? Gosh, Shelly, this is gawgus~ Dazzle~♪ 01:53, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
I'd rather not. I was working from an image of a black cat with ghost stripes for this one, and they had rather pale skin. Shelly For a limited time only 02:03, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? An image like this deserves it. —Garrus ღ 02:04, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Garrus ღ 03:06, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Stoatpaw (A) ~ ApprovedEdit
Hallelujah! Space! Mounty likey :3 Comments? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:45 Fri Apr 6
Like someone said on another charart somewhere, I think he could be short haired since it's hard to tell a cat is skinny if it's hidden by long fur. Don't have to though. o3o Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge the ear pink and give it a slight orangish tint~ ♡Pouncey!♡ 23:03, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
N00by comment was n00by. Define the haunch shading a tad? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:22, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I smudged the earpink but I didn't change the color, I think it's fine. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 00:05 Sat Apr 7
There's waste on his left ear. ♡Pouncey!♡ 14:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 20:52 Sat Apr 7
CBA? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 02:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Garrus ღ 03:06, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Barley (Ro) - ApprovedEdit
I tried my best to make it look like the loner, but this is the other side, so I connected to where it went off his body on the loner image. The changes might not show up, just a warning~ Spark ♥ 18:52 pm 08 Apr 2012
Define the shadingShoonderpLike nobody’s around~ 21:49, April 4, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Make him match the kit too. Paleggy Ship it 22:17, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
The highlights on the black make him look grey. Darken it or reduce the highlights. Breezewhisker 04:07, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading just a tad, as well as what Moonshine suggested. —Garrus ღ 15:46, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I tried to darken on another layer, since I closed GIMP accidentally. Spark ♥ 19:47 pm 54 Apr 2012
Looks Wonderful! There is some waste all around the lineart, though. RavenBeeeeeees 20:50, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Thanks! I think I got rid of all the waste. Reuploaded~ Spark ♥ 21:09 pm 46 Apr 2012 21:09, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
There's still some waste near the far ear. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:08, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded; think I got it :3 Spark Candy, here I come! ♥ 16:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
There's some more :P RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:10, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I think I got it all this time. I put a color behind it and tilted the screen and I didn't see any~ Spark Candy, here I come! ♥ 22:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Nope, still waste. Main part I see is above the back. Try putting a neon backgroun behind it to see. Paleggy Ship it 03:58, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Spark Candy, here I come! ♥ 11:04, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Hmm I think this looks great. CBA? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 20:47 Sun Apr 8
Approved Iveh Yo! 22:29, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Kestrelflight (Alt. MCA) - ApprovedEdit
It's been forever since I had something up for approval. Trying a new style of mottled cats but I think he looks a bit like a tabby... He was described as a mottled gray tom in Hollyleaf's Story under the name of Kestrelpaw and Barkface was the medicine cat, so he was a mca. Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:57, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah he does look like a tabby. Isn't this supposed to match my mottled gray version anyway? Iveh Yo! 01:59, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I honestly have no idea how you did that, it's incredible. But I tried. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:11, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
I can always send you the .xcf, if you like C: Also, I used the pen jitter tool with a darker and lighter shade, then slightly blurred it. Iveh Yo! 02:12, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
I'd love that. I PM you my email on facebook. Thanks Ivy! ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:19, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
I'm going to withdraw this, so I can work on a rogue. Anyone who wants to take this over, may. I had no hope of matching Ivy's epicness anyway... ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 20:06, April 1, 2012 (UTC)
I'll take over. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 06:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. File changes aren't showing yet, I think...Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 21:47, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Nicely done, Stone. —Garrus ღ 21:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
I'm sorry, but this looks darker than my image. It's either the base pelt color or the shading that's doing this. Iveh Yo! 13:54, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading and make the eyes less neon-y ouo ♡Pouncey!♡ 15:15, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded (File changes aren't showing yet) The eye's are taken exactly from the MC alt, and the shading is fine, Fallow... Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 15:42, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
I love this. o.o CBA? —Leggo QuailXStoat 02:57, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Approved~ —Leggo QuailXStoat 03:50, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Amberkit (Ki) ~ ApprovedEdit
I luffles this. o.o Comments? —Leggo QuailXStoat 21:45, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Aww :3 Define the ear pink over ----> there. SilverThe Glee Project 22:18, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink a little on this <--- ear. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:20, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Define the neck shading a bit. Cute Amberkit is cute. <3 Dazzle~♪ 23:41, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Since the nose is on the white, could you make the nose pink instead? --Leafstrike-- 00:09, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
The eyes look red. XD Make them a bit more yellowy? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 00:28, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Define where the light is coming from. so cute! BrackentailXD call me bracken...
01:09, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Actually...just sorta define all the shading (if you want) x3 Dazzle~♪ 02:48, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I didn't change the nose color....she looked very awkward when I tried it. —Leggo QuailXStoat 14:00, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Possibly add one tiny, little highlight to her chest? It looks a little flat. Also, blur the ear pink a little in that---> ear owo ♡Pouncey!♡ 15:12, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Highlights...eeeeewww. Dx —Leggo QuailXStoat 16:24, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
This is just... aw. Define the ear pink on the left ear, make it more triangular. Great job ^^ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 17:44, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Blur, define, blur, define. This is amusing. xD —Leggo QuailXStoat 03:07, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Paleh likes. Paleh CBA. Paleggy Ship it 14:34, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 19:12, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Percy (Alt Ro.) - Approved Edit
Poor thing :c Everything is the same from his other picture, with the missing eye and scars layered over top, so I'm not changing anything else. Comments for improvement, if any? :P Iveh Yo! 18:50, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Imma gonna CBA. That cool with you? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 19:52 Mon Apr 9
Approved Iveh Yo! 00:24, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Cora (Ro) ~ ApprovedEdit
Here she is. I don't know if the changes are showing yet. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Here's the link to the image. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:10, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
The ahding was bad on that. He's another link: =P
Define the tail shading. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 14:02 Tue Apr 3
Blur the shading and smudge the earpink more. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:11, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. Changes. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
This seems small on here, but from what I see on the other thingie up there, maybe blur the hightlights, though could be just me, I had to put my face right to the computer screen to look at it XD I amYour worst nightmare 22:15, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:39, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 15:46, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Shouldn't the nose be black? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 16:03, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:41, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Awesome job. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:31, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Approved Iveh Yo! 00:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Darkstripe (Ro) ~ ApprovedEdit
That was quite fun to do.~ Comments, anyone? (Rogues FTW.) P.S. If it ain't showing up, here y'are: http://www.iaza.com/work/120404C/iaza17380217006800.png
Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 06:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the belly shading. SilverThe Glee Project 10:59, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Define the light on the tail, if there is any. Nicely done, Thistle. —Garrus ღ 16:20, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thanks.;D Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 22:43, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? —Garrus ღ 15:42, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry, but can you blur the shading more on the belly? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 16:28, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 16:53, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading the slightest bit, and I'll re-CBA. —Garrus ღ 16:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
The stripes on his haunch dont seem to match his other images. ♡Pouncey!♡ 19:38, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
? I looked exactly at the other images while doing it, I dunno. And Skye, that's the darkest it'll go. >> Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 19:42, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Thistly...to fix the shading, you can add another layer of shading over what already exists, blur it to the same consistency, and then lighten the opacity. :3 —Leggo QuailXStoat 14:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
I need to learn to be more specific The swirl on the haunch looks a bit thinner then his other images, and the stripes are a bit to spaced with it. Also, the stripe along the spine and on the tip of the tail seem to be edging away from the lineart. It could just be my phone, though. ♡Pouncey!♡ 03:32, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Actually, Fallow, I watched her do this, and it was fine...An image can't exactly match. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 15:48, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thank you, Leggy, I'm apparently an idiot. |D Stony and Fallow, I'm just going to leave them as they are. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 16:47, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:32, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Approved Iveh Yo! 00:36, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Swallowflight (Ro) - Approved Edit
Mmm...Black kitty. <3333 Comments? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 20:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the black a bit and define the highlights~ ♡Pouncey!♡ 20:58, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I lightened the black just a bit, otherwise, it wouldn't match the warrior images. Also, I'm not defining the 'highlights', it looks fine as it is...Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:47, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded (redone) because the image was ugly. xPPP Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
(Maybe) smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more? Dazzle~♪ 23:44, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
I don't smudge the earpink, it's optional, and I don't do that. o3o Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 01:18, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
It's fine. Let's try a CBA on this Iveh Yo! 22:23, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
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