Stoneteller (NP) (Alt. He) - Approved
He was described as a stone gray tom in Outcast. Solid gray cats kill me... Comments? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:34, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Doesn't he already have an alt for this but just with stripes? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:40 Wed Apr 4
Blur the shading on the arms, chest, and back thigh (whatever yu call cats' thighs) Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 06:07, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Shouldn't he have mud? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. @Mountain, Whispering Breeze has an alt for being called a tabby and there are two different descriptions. @Sky, Stoneteller's don't get mud because they don't leave the cave or something, I don't remember the actual fact, besides that they don't get mud. ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:26, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Then how come his normal image has mud? O.o Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded @Sky sorry, I got it backwards... xP ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:41, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Could you smudge/blur the mud some more so it looks less like tabby patches and more like mud? :3 Dazzy 23:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
There's a little bit of waste around the border of the image. From the mud, I would assume.. —Jayce() 03:05, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:01, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading well. --Leafstrike-- 22:46, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
I think what you might be seeing are the burn patches I put on the mud patches, because I think the shading looks fine. ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:01, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:52, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
None, Approved ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:02, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Ratscar (Alt.W) ~ Approved
He was described as a russet color. Comments? Silverhmm 23:15, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading lots. --Leafstrike-- 23:40, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Up the red a bit please? It looks a bit too close to the warrior image for my own preferences. Russet's a fuzzy color, you can bend it to suit your needs a bit. Shelly For a limited time only 23:50, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Correct me if I'm wrong, but he was described as fox-red, and red is basically a dark ginger, so shouldn't he have stripes? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:21, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
When I was looking at his page, it said he was described as russet, not fox-red. Silverhmm 19:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Russet is reddish brown, not ginger. Shelly For a limited time only 21:38, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:47, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:10, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading a lot, and darken it on the haunch. Stoneclaw 16:31, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded I just redid the shading. Silverhmm 23:56, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the back~ Dazzy 18:27, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:21, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:52, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
None, Approved ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:02, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Pounce (Ro) ~ Approved
I named his file wrong DXXX I wll fix it ;.; So yah... Comments?
00:22, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:39, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded~
02:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Brighten the eyes. Make his pupil look somewhere else as he was described with a lazy eye. Make the tooth more visible. Smudge the back stripe and thin it out some. Lighten the shading on the legs farther away. Iveh Yo! 03:12, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded.
03:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
This is stunning. 8D Could you maybe at some highlights or something on the back so it stands out that it is more of a stripe and not so much darker shading? Breezewhisker 04:02, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded~
16:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading on the tail a little more. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 01:25, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Darken/define the haunch shading a bit. Dazzy 18:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reuplloaded *failed the shading* DXXX ;.;
01:56, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:52, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
None, Approved ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:02, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Boulderfur (W) - Approved
DDDx Please comment on this if you want to : / Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded there was weird stuff above his eyes. If changes don't show, contact me for link. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:22, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. —Jayce() 02:24, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded I tried to replica the shading on the apprentice Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:39, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
The shading is a bit blotchy, as is the ear pink. Can you even it out a bit?
03:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Round out the shading on the shoulder and lighten the fron of the legs. Breezewhisker 04:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:30, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading some more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:23, 06, 04, 2012 Reuploaded (here:http://www.iaza.com/work/120406C/iaza17767461998000.png) Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:19, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Center the earpink a bit please. ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real?13:43, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded c: tell me if changes don't show Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 14:14, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink smaller and blur it OwO
19:26, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink more pink. This is good~ RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
I colorpicked so I might not change it Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Uh...going in a different direction from Rowan, desaturate the earpink ever so slightly? (just make it a bit more gray) Dazzy 15:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Oh sorry, I meant gray XDD RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Also, make the earpink more triangular and define the light source. Stoneclaw 16:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 18:52, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Still, define the light source. Stoneclaw 21:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
And blur the earpink more. Dazzy 22:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. My pixlr is acting up again =_= contact me for link if changes don't show Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 23:13, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:42, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
None, Approved ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:02, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Sol (Ro) ~ Approved
Yay :) finally done. Although I don't think I did such a great job with the shading >.< User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 17:21, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
this is over the limit and will be declined. —Jayce() 17:26, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Not needed anymore, Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,17:53,April 6,2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. Silverhmm 18:10, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
What do you mean by "over the limit"? User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 19:36, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
The limit for numbers of images that can be up for approval is 40 at one time, and this was over 40, but its fine now. Blur the earpink~
20:56, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Oh ok- I forgot about that. Re-uploaded the shading wasn't defined cause I only saved the shaded version in psd :S gee, I'm so smart. I blurred the earpink, too, which I forgot to do in the first place User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 23:24, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Remove the tan waste on his back. Silverhmm 23:44, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the back paw closest to us. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 00:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded not sure if changes are showing User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 01:11, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge the earpink up a tad. Silverhmm 11:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 13:39, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink and blur the tail shading. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 16:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded changes should be showing. I didn't Blur the tail shading much because I don't think it was really necessary. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 17:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
It might just be me, but the ear farthest away look tinted green o.O Also blur the highlights and lighten the tail shading.
19:22, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I don't think changes are showing yet... I didn't blur the highlights cause I think they're fine. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 19:28, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
The highlights look too concentrated. At least lower the opacity on them.?
23:37, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. better? (Changes should be showing) I also made the grayish parts more beige to match his other chararts. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 00:56, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
I think, though it might just be my computer that ther is waste inbetween the ears. User:Brackentail/siggie 01:19, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
I kinda looks like that, but it's just the pixel blank User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 01:40, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Lower the opacity on the highlights a bit more, blur the shading, smudged the ear pink down, and on the tip of the tail there are lighter pixels where it looks like the shading was erased.
03:38, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Going along with the "shading erased" that Pouncey mentioned, it's like that on a few pixels on his left legs, on the edges. Dazzy 13:08, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 14:08, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Wonderful, Dewstar. CBA? Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:40, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
None, Approved ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:02, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Heronpaw (A) - Approved
File:Heronpaw.apprentice.png Comments? Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:24, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
D'aww. Fail. Declined, over the limit. x3 Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:25, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Nope, you're fine. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 21:37 Sun Apr 8
Ohmygoshsoperdy. x3 Can you define the nose color a tad? Rainlegs 03:13, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Did you forget the earpink? XD But this is amazing <3 Paleh Send help 03:40, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shadin'. Gawd, Teldy, y u so awesome at this? Dazzy 11:01, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thanks guys. Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:56, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Beautiful<3 CBA? Rainlegs 02:32, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
None, Approved ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:02, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Sparrowfeather (DF) (Ro) ~ Aproved
File:Sparrowfeather.rogue.alt.pngCould it be? A tabby, completely my choice? *celebrates* I tried to do a certain pattern but...I fail ;.; Now, on the talk page, it kinda came to a consensus that all Dark Forest cats that don't have a rank would be rogues. But I honestly don't care if she gets a rogue or a warrior (I made both lol) Anyway, she was described as a tabby and since I'm the artist, it's my choice of color :3 And yes, it should be male. Comments? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:04 Mon Apr 9
Actually, since she was just described as "tabby", shouldn't she be brown? And actually, I think that the tabby thing should just be added to her description, personally. With it she could actually /get/ a charart, since currently we have no color for her. Just mottled. Shelly For a limited time only 06:12, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
I don't really mind adding mottles and making this her main image, but I'd rather keep her silver if that's alright. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:16 Mon Apr 9
Actually, no. I found the cite for her being brown. Sorry. It was there before and Squirrelflame removed it for some reason, but I looked it up and the cite was correct. She's brown. Shelly For a limited time only 06:18, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Uh yeah I can see that XP I tried to add mottles, which was hard to add to this pattern (which I refuse to change *took forever* x.x;;;) ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:49 Mon Apr 9
Just a side comment, it's not artist's choice what color a tabby is, it's brown if there's no specified color. Just pointing that out for future reference mounty. :P this is lovely though, I don't see anything wrong. Paleh Send help 06:56, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Sdgsdmfigierddfs I forgot x.x; *tired* ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 07:03 Mon Apr 9
Define the earpink~ *steals* Dazzy 07:29, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploade Thank you Dazzle :3 ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:02 Mon Apr 9
Add a battered muzzle? --Leafstrike-- 18:11, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Derp I forgot about that >.< ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 19:58 Mon Apr 9
Wow.... Blur the shading a little. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 22:25, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:39 Mon Apr 9
CBA? —Jayce() 17:05, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Approved Iveh Yo! 17:26, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Shorty (Ro) ~ Approved
I saved a poor soul from doing this trololol. Everything is the same as the warrior. Comments? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:48 Mon Apr 9
Can you blur the mottly markings some? :) Iveh Yo! 19:57, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I tried not to blur it too much since it's the same as the warrior. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 20:02 Mon Apr 9
There's a random row of black pixels on his front leg farthest from us. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 23:03, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:22 Tue Apr 10
Lovely work. CBA? Iveh Yo! 00:42, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Magnificent work. Iveh Yo! 01:45, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Shrewtooth (R)~Approved
Here his is! I love doing black cats so.. Anyways, Comments?—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 23:55, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Rename it File:Shrewtooth.rogue.png (basically just get rid of the extra .png) and maybe define the shading~<3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:20, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
I can see a bit of waste trailing off the ear. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 05:46, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 11:18, April 5, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Define the shading and smooth the edges. Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:25, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded--For some reason when I uploaded the file, it added an extra .png to the name. Now it is Shrewtooth.rogue.png.png. I tried to get rid of the extra .png, but it wouldn't let me. Any ideas?15:09, April 10, 2012 (UTC)—.neha it's that gloom boy season. Moonshine
Just upload the right name with this file. That doesn't affect the image quality, so CBA? Iveh Yo! 00:33, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Iveh Yo! 01:53, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Honeyleaf (Ro) - Approved
Comments? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:01, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Can you blur the shading a tad? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:02, 09, 04, 2012
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:09, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
It's so pretty <3 Define the shoulder shading a little more? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 21:12 Mon Apr 9
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:53, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:42, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Iveh Yo! 05:15, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Snowkit (OTS) (Ki) ~ Approved
File:Snowkit OTS.kit.png Here he is~ I made his page so I'm super happy I got him! Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:25, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. 83 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:46, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Offspring of Cloudtail <3
Darken the shading ever so slightly. Also, define the ear pink. —Jayce() 22:47, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Awww! It's so cute! Keep up the good work! --Physicmew wants to eat your toes with mustard 13:55, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
- Please only comment when you find something that needs to be fixed. 13:59, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:09, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a tiny bit, it looks more gray then white. I luff this <3 Raineh Pwns all others 23:58, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
If I lighten the shading anymore, it would be undefined o3o. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
I'm still having issues seeing the ear pink. Define it? If you do, I may consider a CBA. ;3 —Jayce() 02:05, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:32, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
I'll CBA that for you Cloudy :) Iveh Yo! 22:25, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry, but I can't see the earpink well, either. Also, possibly lighten up the whole image a tad. Stoneclaw 22:26, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
The earpink still isn't very noticable, darken it slightly. ❄ Sunnyfrost ❄ 21:18, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
I see it fine, actually... User:~Leafy~/Sig 21:52, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Earpink is fine, ima CBA. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 05:50, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
So, Approved Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪ 13:30,April 12,2012 (UTC)
Twist (Ro) ~ Approved
8D I based her after one of my deceased/missing kitties...so I honestly don't want to change the pattern. Comments? Rainlegs 03:03, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading a little more? I'm glad you did this, looks way better than the one I made <333 ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:09 Mon Apr 9
Could you darken the earpink? Feels neon-ish to me. D'aww Leggy, this is beautiful...but I don't think it's the one we saw on join.me (is it?) Dazzy 13:31, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Dazzy...it is that one from join.me. XD Rainlegs 13:59, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Oh honestly this was longer time without comment and I dont have anything with it so CBA? Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,12:14,April 11,2012 (UTC)
Approved Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,13:33,April 12,2012 (UTC)
Skipper (Ro) - Approved
Fail (-_-), comments? Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,15:55,April 8,2012 (UTC)
Nice! Maybe lighten the white on both the front and back legs that are closest to us, the white on the tail, and the ear farthest away just a bit. They look too gray-ish. ~Fallen 16:14, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading on the body a tiny bit and blur it~
18:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,18:27,April 8,2012 (UTC)
Purty *u* Define the haunch shading~ Dazzy 23:00, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,14:26,April 9,2012 (UTC)
CBA? Atelda insert vague subtext here 14:50, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
ApprovedAtelda insert vague subtext here 14:52, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Larkpaw (A) ~ Approved
File:Larkpaw.apprentice.png Comments? —Jayce() 02:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define the shoulder shading a little more please? :3 ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:41 Tue Apr 10
Re-uploaded. Oh, and I'm saying this now...since the shade of gray was not specified, it's artist's choice, and I'd like for it to stay dark. —Jayce() 02:47, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the highlight on the shoulder just a little 8) Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 13:07, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 15:49, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Me gusta. Ivy will commence the CBA sequence. Iveh Yo! 19:54, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Approved Iveh Yo! 19:45, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Sol (Alt. Ro3) ~ Approved
Oyus. Comments? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:43 Wed Apr 11
The front leg closest to us looks a little flat, can you define the shading? Also, blur the shading on the back legs. So purty :) Iveh Yo! 19:52, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploadedThank you Ivy ^^ ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 20:05 Wed Apr 11
I'm in the mood for CBA'ing two Sol rogue alts today. So CBA? Iveh Yo! 20:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Wonderful job Mountain <3 Iveh Yo! 21:30, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Redtail (Alt. D) - Approved
File:Redtail.deputy.alt.png Meh... He was described as a russet cat in TLH. I looked up pictures of russet cats on google and a lot of them had pale markings, so I gave him a pale face and chest, but I can remove them. Comments? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:07, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Waste in between the legs. XP Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 05:47, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. Nicely done. 8D —Jayce() 11:41, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 13:55, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Me likey! 8D Me CBA! Paleh Send help 21:26, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Approved :) Iveh Yo! 21:34, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Sol (Alt. Ro) ~ Approved
Eww. Sol. Comments? Dazzy 22:53, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the stomach/back shading. Silverhmm 00:15, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Dazzy 07:37, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
You've done a good job with this, Dazzle. I can't really see anything wrong with it, except maybe lighten the shading on the back foot furtherest away from us. ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 08:36, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Berry...only comment if you're gonna critique something. Dazzy 08:38, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Preference. If you're not going to lighten the shading on the back faraway leg, I would try darkening it slightly on the front faraway leg to even it out. Define the tail shading? ^^ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 13:03, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I defined the tail shading. I won't darken the faraway foreleg because the hind one is blocked more from the light source than the other legs. Dazzy 13:43, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe..define the earpink a tad—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 19:37, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Smudge the white parts in the direction of the fur User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 21:58, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Dazzy 11:35, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
I like this, let's try going with a CBA :) Iveh Yo! 20:28, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Approved :) Iveh Yo! 21:37, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Snipe (Ro) - Approved
Kay, here's one bat-butt cat who looks like a Doberman Pincher (sp?), I wanted him so no one would change the pattern. Geeze, it's been a while since I've made a BloodClan collar...fun! I'll add reinforced claws if ya guys want, just ask. Iveh Yo! 22:28, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
It's spelled Pinscher :). I think you should add the claws too, since he's a BloodClan cat. --Leafstrike-- 22:34, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
He needs amber eyes. ;) Epicness. <3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 11:34, 11, 04, 2012
Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 19:58, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
I think this looks great. CBA? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 20:26 Wed Apr 11
Woohoo! Approved! Iveh Yo! 21:40, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Hawkfrost (Alt.W) - Approved
woo Mr. Hawkfrost, comments? Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,10:39, April 5,2012 (UTC)
Jeez. Tons of errors in TLH. Anyways, define the shading. —Jayce() 15:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
I dont like shadings on gray cats,reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪ 16:19, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Shading on the feet looks darker than the rest. ♣Cloverfern 00:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪ 10:06, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading and the paw shading is still darker then the rest x:
21:01, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
The shading does not have to be the same darkness all around. Still, blur the shading. --Leafstrike-- 23:27, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪ 16:01, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Darken/define the neck and shoulder shading. Paleh Send help 12:36, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪ 16:08, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
There's a patch of waste on his shoulder. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 20:14, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Erase the waste around the back near the head, and the waste near the neck, make the ear-pink fill the ear just a tad more, and blur the shading near the neck more. ~Fallen 23:32, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
The ear pink is fine, imho. If it's too big, it looks awkward and ugly. —Jayce() 11:36, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪ 12:07, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Let's go CBA on this. Leaf, your images are always pretty to look at; there's never much to fix. —Jayce(20:33,4/11/2012)
None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:21, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Nutmeg (Ro) ~ Approved
File:Nutmeg (Ro).rogue.png.png Right, my second charart I've put up for approval :3 Hope it looks okay! RavenBeeeeeees 01:06, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
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I fixed the heading for you. Rename this Nutmeg.rogue.png, not having "R" in caps and without the extra "png". Also can you unsmudge the patches some to match the queen image more? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:19, 04, 04, 2012
Re-uploaded Hope this turned out right, this apparently requires source mode and I've never used it. Anyways, I tried to make the smudge lines a bit sharper and less faded to try to match the queen image. --RavenBeeeeeees 04:53, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge the ear pink a tad more. Silverhmm 10:50, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Blurred the earpink. --RavenBeeeeeees 16:41, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded I re did it to make it look more like her queen image, hope it looks better! --RavenBeeeeeees 23:09, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading. Lovely <3. --Weylon Distinctly Unique. 12:34, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Darkened the shading and made her a bit of a lighter grey to match her queen image better =P --RavenBeeeeeees 15:21, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the haunch shading and possibly add a highlight to her head/face. It seems a bit flat.
19:09, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Added some things, blurred some things etc :3 --RavenBeeeeeees 19:38, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Forgot some waste x.x --RavenBeeeeeees 19:44, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Very pretty ^^ Define/darken the back shading? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:35, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten up the shading on the white a bit. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:43, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Lightened the shading a tad --{{User:Ravenso ng/Sig}} 04:06, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded just lightened the black to look more like her queen and lightened the shading. --{{User:Ravens ong/Sig}} 17:41, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe blur the shading around the neck just a tad? ☾Mossnose☽User blog:Mossnose33 18:01, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded blurred the shading around the neck and lightened the shading just a bit. --RavenBeeeeeees 18:06, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Found a few areas that were a bit to heavy on shading. --RavenBeeeeeees 20:27, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Rename it Nutmeg (Ro).rogue.png Paleh Send help 09:59, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Get rid of the waste around the chest area I amYour worst nightmare 12:44, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Shouldn't be anymore waste, and I renamed the file. --RavenBeeeeeees 16:20, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded had to re-upload because it was back the the old rogue image for some reason. --RavenBeeeeeees 04:47, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the orange patches on the back, as well as the gray patch around the neck area. ❄ Sunnyfrost ❄ 21:14, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Blurred the orange and the dark grey around the neck, Comments? --RavenBeeeeeees 23:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Very pretty ^^ CBA? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 01:10, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
None; Approved~<3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:10, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Heathertail (Alt.A)~ Approved
I don't think I uploaded it right, but I tried. Comments?—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Reuploaded-- got rid of the waste—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 18:47, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
I don't know what happened to the last one. It's not in the declined nor in the approved, I thought this was being worked on already. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 19:33 Fri Mar 30
No, it's fine. Mounty, you derp. =P
Define and darken the shading. —Jayce() 20:23, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
Rename it [[Heathertail.apprentice.alt.png]]. oblivionAudience? 20:32, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded--Defined and darkened the shading and renamed it—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 21:29, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Loonie, would it be [[File:Heathertail.apprentice.alt.2.png]] instead because Heathertail has another one? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
There's waste around the tail, head, and back paws. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:50, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
When did that get there? *wasn't there before* smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:36 Fri Mar 30
Define the shading, and I think there's waste on her front paws as well.
03:52, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded--Got rid of the waste and defined the shading—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
The ear-punk ear-pink seems to go over the line thing next to the ear... o3o On both ears, by the way. It's your choice, but if you want to, can you define the depth in the eye? *Your choice* Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more, too. And it might just be my computer, but there seems to still be waste, too. Sorry if that made no sense about the ear and the line and the ear-punk ear-pink x3 User:~Leafy~/Sig 13:10, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading a bit more ^^
13:48, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
There's waste around the back ear. And, optional, but can you add a little shading to the side of the face that's not towards us? It'll give it more depth. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC
Reuploaded--defined the shading, smudged the earpink into the pelt and got rid of the waste—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 22:41, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
There's still waste on his ear, back paw, and front paw. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 23:03, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the pelt into the earpink some more and blur it. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
Rename this [[File:Heathertail.apprentice.alt2.png]]. And try to not upload a different image every time you reupload. Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:45, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded--removed the waste and blured the earpink into the pelt—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 21:48, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Moonshine, stop uploading a new image each time. Rename it what Atelda told you to. oblivionAudience? 21:56, April 1, 2012 (UTC)
I tried but it became a redlink. I don't know what to do! I am sorry—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 22:00, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
You just upload it as [[File:Heathertail.apprentice.alt2.png]] Just...it works for everyone, it should work for you. >.> Also, erase the waste. Stoneclaw 22:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded--erased the waste—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 18:56, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
There's still waste by the far ear. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 01:24 Tue Apr 3
I can't get rid of it. I have tried erasing it 4 or 5 times. I don't really know what else to do.—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 22:58, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Reuploaded--I tried to get rid of the waste, but I don't think it actually went away—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 11:21, April 5, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
It didn't; Do you use layers? If so, scroll through every single layer and try erasing it. If that doesn't work or you don't use layers, I don't know what to do o3o User:~Leafy~/Sig 11:26, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Do you want me to get rid of the waste for you? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
theres waste still on the cat User:Brackentail/siggie 01:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Brackentail, please refrain from repeating comments. Can you smudge the earpink a tad? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 13:37, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded--I think I got it. If I didn't I don't know what else to do. I also smudged the earpink.—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 18:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:02, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded--I smudged it to the max, I think—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 14:38, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Reuploaded--I forgot to color in the nose...—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 14:43, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
This is wonderful, I don't see anything you could change. CBA? Iveh Yo! 01:49, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:43, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Cherrytail (Q) ~ Approved
I do believe she's preggers now. Bleh. Comments? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 05:12, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Wait, I thought she wasn't going to get a queen image. I remember that I asked if she would get one, and I think Shelly said no. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:27, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
No, I asked, and got a yes. Also, take a look at the talk page again, I think she agreed she gets one. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 16:31, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
- Explodes* Omg so epic! :O This may just be my lap top lighting/screen but darken and define shading =P RavenBeeeeeees 16:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink less gray. Silverhmm 17:37, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Looks good! Smudge the orange color in the direction of the fur just a tad more. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 01:20, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I didn't change the earpink cause it's the same colour as the other images. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 02:41, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Make the orange and bit orangier; it looks kinda pale in comparison to her other chararts and smudge/enlarge the ear-pink. ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:25, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. How's this? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:40, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
I really think both this and your kittypet version of her (I know it's already been archived, but I never got the chance to say this) could benefit from the use of special brushes to achive the same look. I make the Glalaxy brush in GIMP incredibly small, and used that in her patches after I smudged them slightly. I only say this, because her warrior image was not only smudged. Also, gah, Cherrytail, why! You could have picked a much better mate D: Iveh Yo! 14:14, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Ugh. Thank you. -Hates patches- I'll try that. ^^ Heh. Sharpclaw. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink a little taller. :3 Dazzy 23:16, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. How'd I do? o3o Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:18, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Lovely. Just make the ginger/brown/whatever patches ever so slightly brighter to match the other images and I'll CBA. Paleh Send help 12:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 00:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
-"helps" Paleh- :P CBA? <3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:22, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:39, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
Breezepelt (Ro) ~ Approved
Little twat.... >.>;;;;; Anyways, he's a black kitteh, so I can't complain...much —Jayce(22:46,4/12/2012)
Define the tail shading? ^^ Dazzy 07:32, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(11:11,4/13/2012)
Lighten the haunch highlight. (I know there isn't one, but can you lighten it?) Silverhmm 19:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
There are highlights. =P and personally, I think it's fine. —Jayce(20:04,4/13/2012)
Hmmm CBA? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 01:34 Sat Apr 14
Approved. —Jayce(02:45,4/15/2012)
Bone (Ro) - Approved
He gots a rainbow collar and he don't care who sees! I used the same pattern from the old blank c: oblivionAudience? 02:01, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Nice, blur the scars a bit more, and Looine if they said anything, i think they would be like, killed. Maple♥legsMischief brewing 03:46, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Blue the black just a bit, and I have to disagree about blurring the scars. You can hardly see them as is. Define them a bit. Paleh Send help 14:05, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I tried blueing the black, but it's black... You can't really add blue to it and have it still be black. Just kidding c: oblivionAudience? 03:12, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
C to the B to the A? :3 Rainlegs 15:44, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 11:00, April 16, 2012 (UTC)
Squirrelflight (D) - Approved
File:Squirrelflight.deputy.png Let's try this again... oblivionAudience? 02:22, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Fabulous 83... hm... maybe... define the shading in the space between the front leg and the haunch. May be just my computer, but I don't know... Ignore me if it's just my computer : /. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:39, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
... :-| (sigh) Smooth out the tail to more closely resemble the warrior image. Shelly For a limited time only 02:53, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Make the highlights brighter so it matches the warrior more. Nice. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:09, 13, 04, 2012
Desaturate her juuussst a tad, she's a bit to ginger compared to her warior. --Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 04:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Can you possibly add the scar she got from Eclipse? Since this is her newest rank, she'd need it. Silverhmm 15:19, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe put the floof on the bottom of the tail. It'd make more sense like that. Paleh Send help 23:06, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thanks to Mounty (who's amazing by the way) for doing the tail lineart for me <3 Silver, if I remember correctly, the scar was horizontal on her stomach: from her chest to tail; therefore, you wouldn't see it on here. And Paleh, the floof is on one side of her tail. I can't just change it. oblivionAudience? 02:58, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
Why can't you? It's not only one side of her tail that's fluffy, but just that side is shown on the warrior cause of gravity. The floof would fall to that side, and therefore show up more. In this case, the floof would fall to the bottom..... Paleh Send help 17:45, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
Well the tail is resting on the ground, it would be hard to see the floof anyway. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:53 Sat Apr 14
Not if you did it right.... Paleh Send help 17:56, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry Paleh, I'd rather not ^^ oblivionAudience? 22:01, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
Paleclaw's right. Some of the fluff would rest on the bottom of the tail as well as the top. See how it's all over? Breezewhisker 01:47, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
But what about her warrior image? They have to match. oblivionAudience? 02:04, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Well, fur can move, shift, etc. Like, you could wear your hair in a ponytail one day, and down the next. But it'd still be your hair. Tail fur can do the same thing....gravity wouldn't let the floof just sit all pretty on top...some would be on the bottom, too. :3 Rainlegs 15:47, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
But it's resting on the floor so it'd be flattened against the ground anyway. oblivionAudience? 15:49, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Not if you do it right....at least give it a try? For meee? Rainlegs 15:53, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Okay, thanks to a bunch of people for helping out on join.me c: oblivionAudience? 16:58, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
'Perfect! 8D Very minor thing, can you point the left tip of the torn ear a bit more to match? Then I'll CBA. Paleh Send help 19:33, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 19:39, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(21:07,4/16/2012)
Willie (Ro) ~ Approved
This was a fail... >-> *flails arms* I tried :P ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:48, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Wow! This is awesome. ;D Define the shading on the tail and belly-ish area. Lookin' good.~ Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 22:46, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the stripes Iveh Yo! 16:55, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded I didn't really have any shading on the belly, so I only defined it on the tail.. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:13, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading on both hind legs. This is beautiful<3 Dazzy 13:42, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thank you :3 ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:33, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
I still feel that the shading could be defined some more. Don't be afraid to darken it a lot. Iveh Yo! 02:00, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Darkened the shading as far as it could go, I can define it more, though. >.< ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 00:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
...I think this looks good, and it hasn't had comments in 24+ hours...so, CBA? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:23, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫23:39, April 16, 2012 (UTC)
Talon (Ro) - Approved
Changes not showing again? Here. --> http://www.iaza.com/work/120408C/iaza13655678205100.png User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 17:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Mooneh, this is number 41 on the list xD You nub~ I think a SM may have to decline this. Dazzy 17:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Now it's fine. 8D User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 18:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
The stripes don't really match his other images. Add more and make them lighter. Also define the shading.
19:15, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
>.> The stripes match /exactly/ from his old rogue, which should have matched his other images. I'll fix the rest, though. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 19:21, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
I'm sorry Mooneh, but I compared this image to his other rogue and the stripes on his old one are still lighter and thinner and there's a few more. Also, lighten up the brown to match his elder image.
19:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Try to copy the cave-guard on this one, and add some mud. Dazzy 23:43, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
I added mud in the places like the cave-guard, and some more. I know it's too dark, I'll lighten it in the next re-upload and fix the stripes if necessary. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 13:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Add mottles to the mud to create a more natural effect. To do this, use a speckly brush and burn the mud many times, using different settings, and it will almost create itself in this fashion. Also, smudge the mud some. Iveh Yo! 13:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
He;s got waste around his tail, back, head, and front legs. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 13:53, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ...I forgot to lighten it again. Dx Yay for join.me 8D User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 14:11, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Alright, I lightened it. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 14:13, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge the mud, and give it some texture by adding darker flecks to it. Also, define the shading.
15:06, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I redid the shading in black, as it was a darker brown. I can't smudge the mud anymore, sorry. Dx And there /are/ darker flecks on the it, but I can make them darker or add more if you want? 8D User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 19:13, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Add different shaded layers to the mud to give it some depth Or would it be height? xD
19:21, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. x.x User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 15:01, 04 09, 2012
This should be the new image showing, the mud still needs broken up by more flecks. My images for Screech of Angry Owl or Stoneteller (NP) should help give you an idea of what I'm talking about :) Iveh Yo! 20:00, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I'm going to have to fix this again...but anyway, comments? >.< User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 14:32, 04 10, 2012
Looks good! CBA? oblivionAudience? 15:45, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:43, April 16, 2012 (UTC)
Snake (BC) (Alt. Ro) ~ Approved
Wheeee Comments? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:56 Thu Apr 12
As much as I love this.... it needs to match the other alt. Paleh Send help 05:17, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Paleh, we've already gotten this taken care of. I told her I'd redo the pattern on mine since her's is more realistic. Iveh Yo! 05:18, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Oh dear, back up goes the ass shading charart again. XD Well then just darken the shading on the far paw and this'll be good. :) Paleh Send help 05:20, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Trolololol ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:28 Thu Apr 12
XD Paleh~ Whiten the white a bit. Dazzy 08:10, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:30 Thu Apr 12
CBA? Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,20:23,April 15,2012 (UTC)
None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:45, April 16, 2012 (UTC)
Rock (Ro) - Approved
I know I forgot to clear the waste, ignore it and comment on something else other than that, and I'll clear it on the next upload. I think I liked the old one better. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 18:07, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
The shading is difficult to see, can you define it? Iveh Yo! 18:29, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink just a tad—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 21:17, April 9, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Reuploaded Took a few tries to get the shading right. --Leafstrike-- 22:35, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the mud and the shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 11:45, 11, 04, 2012
Reuploaded Re-did the mud. --Leafstrike-- 21:22, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
It looks like there's earpink in both ears...o.o User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:50, 04 12, 2012
There is. I don't think there is anything wrong with that. --Leafstrike-- 02:07, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
There isn't except for the fact you added extra lineart there. Please remove that. Having earpink in both ears may be artist's choice, but adding extra lineart anywhere isn't. Paleh Send help 19:15, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Leafstrike, we've had this discussion before...please don't tweak the lineart unless it's necessary. Which, in this case, is only the tail. Please change it back. —Jayce(21:39,4/13/2012)
Reuploaded One of the reasons why I want to leave this wiki. --Leafstrike-- 02:31, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
That comment was not necessary. If you don't like how things are supposed to be done, then propose changes or take a break. None of us are forcing you to stay. —Jayce(02:42,4/14/2012)
-pokes explanation on why my tail doesn't match yours on the alt- Can you change it on here please? Paleh Send help 17:54, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 02:37, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
None; approved. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 15:01, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
Ice (Ro) ~ Approved
File:Ice.rogue.png I used the collar from Scourge, so I hope no one minds. If it bothers y'all that much, I can try and fix it...but...I'd rather not. I did do the rest of the image though...including the fail claws. —Jayce(21:15,4/12/2012)
The claws seem a tad bit big. This is what I noticed with Scourge when I zoomed up close, and how I did Snipe's claws: there is one pixil of the claw color, and you need four pixils around it, one on top, both sides, and bottom. It looks really neat when you zoom away from the image, so maybe give that a try? :) Iveh Yo! 21:28, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I tried two pixels of color instead of one. Any better? —Jayce(21:51,4/12/2012)
Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 23:43, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(01:08,4/13/2012)
The claws seems a bit boxy, maybe add an extra black pixel onto the tips of each to make them look pointier. Paleh Send help 14:06, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(16:39,4/13/2012)
Lighten the base coat a tad to match. Paleh Send help 17:44, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(17:47,4/14/2012)
I love the claws! Blur the shading a tad... the belly and haunch "highlights" er...stand out too much. (Not sure how to word it) WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:47, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
I think it's fine. If I blur it too much, it'll look flat (Kelsey's not all the best with gray cats). —Jayce(00:50,4/15/2012)
C to the B to the A? Paleh Send help 14:11, April 16, 2012 (UTC)
None; Approved. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 15:05, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
Flick (Ro) Approved
reserved it and finished as fast as I could. I hate this. Dx Changes might not be showing...Changes are here. Comments?
Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:25, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Looks great, but needs a transparent backround ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 12:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Grr. I know. I can't get a transparent background... when I took the blank from the charart page, it was white... Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:38, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Add a proper light source and define it. Stoneclaw 14:29, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Okay, thanks :) Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:14, April 2, 2012 (UTC)
Nevermind, reuploaded. Experimenting with fur textures. Gahh, changes ain't showing, look right here. I lightened the neck shading just a little bit. Yuck, yuck, yuck. I also have one without the texture so if you want to see, tell me.Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:31, April 3, 2012 (UTC.
The fur texture looks like mottles. Define the shading and light source. Don't worry, practice makes perfect! Also, blur the earpink. Stoneclaw 05:17, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
All right C: Redone. I made one without texture and one with, but I'm going for the one with texture, even though it's atrocious, it's the less atrocious of the two Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 05:35, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
The fur texture still looks like mottles... Stoneclaw 00:36, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
I wanted it to look like that, but I can change it. If you all like the non textured one better, I can make it the non textured one Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 00:39, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
I know you wanted it like that, but sorry, it doesn't really look like fur, more like mottles. And this is a short haired cat, any smudging on a short-hair would be less dramatic. Stoneclaw 02:05, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
All right reuploaded If changes ddon't show, it's hereStormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:03, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. —Jayce() 15:52, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
reuploaded http://www.iaza.com/work/120406C/iaza17767433748300.png Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
You'll need to dull down the highlights or blur them or something...I don't think it should be that glossy-looking unless the description calls for it. Plus, it seems unnatural. —Jayce() 06:03, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Okay, I redi it :) Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 18:42, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Gaghhhh.... better? http://www.iaza.com/work/120407C/iaza17767482237200.png Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 18:45, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded darkened shading, defined light source, fixed blurred lineart and ears. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 23:15, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
I think this is 80% and better. Add a bit of depth to the eye, and perhaps slightly blur the edges of the back shading. Nice job. :3 Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:52, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thank you so much :D Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 05:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Move the haunch and chest highlights up slightly. Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:08, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:11, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Darken/define the neck shading. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:31 Thu Apr 12
Reuploaded My uploads of this may be a bit delayed... hope to get this CBA'd soon though. Up to the leads though, and I understand if ya think it's not ready. ;) Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 00:46, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Please be patient, your image will be CBA'ed when ready. I'm sorry, but you might have to redo the shading or so. Because I see 3 light sources when there was only supposed to be one. One light source coming from the top, when from the left, one from the light. Move that haunch highlight farther to the left, also, thicken the shading, darken it, then smooth it out, It's a bit flat now. Stoneclaw 06:32, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 14:22, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
I feel like doing a re-upload today. :/ So I darkened shading and fixed the highlights. Rowan told me to blur shading in PMs so I did that too Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:04, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten/Blur the shading. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:58, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded feels good to have something to do again ^^ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 23:46, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Looks nice. CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 00:36, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:01, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
Stripes (Alt. Ro) ~ Approved
I hate shading on black cats. Comments? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:42, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Darken/define the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:44, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Wild, you reserved the wrong one, and I undid your edit. Go fix that, 'kay? Error on both our parts. xD —Jayce(00:45,4/15/2012)
Oops sorry, forgot it was the alt. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:50, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 17:41, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the highlights. Also, this is just my preference, but maybe smudge the earpink? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:30, 16, 04, 2012
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:25, April 16, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Shelly For a limited time only 00:38, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:01, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
Yellowfang (Ro) (Alt) ~ Approved
I'm really proud of this :3 Changes aren't showing. Silverhmm 11:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
There's some waste at the ears. Make her muzzle shorter and extend the line on her face. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 13:33 Tue Apr 3
Can you also define the eye color? To me, it looks pure white. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:58, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded I'm sorry about the white on the side of her mouth. I tried getting rid of it but nothing worked. Silverhmm 23:19, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
The haunch and back scars look a little thick. The scraggly fur could be a little smoother. Could you also darken the shading and blur it some? Iveh Yo! 16:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded It's defined to the max, but I blurred it. Silverhmm 23:05, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
There's still waste by the ears and there's a line coming out of the bridge of the nose so get rid of that and I'll CBA. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:39 Sat Apr 7
Reuploaded I also got rid of that white part near her mouth. Silverhmm 18:25, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
Her ear seems to be split a little more deeply and raggedly than her MC that I made. Iveh Yo! 22:36, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
When I copied the colors and everything, I made sure the ear tear was exactly the same. Silverhmm 20:48, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:29 Wed Apr 11
Sorry to interrupt, but I feel the belly highlight/area with no shading should be extended, as it's kind of small right now. Iveh Yo! 01:58, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
I tried working with that, but when I do that it sadly comes out bad. Silverhmm 22:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
It's fine. CBA? —Jayce(01:53,4/17/2012)
None; Approved. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 02:00, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
Jag (Ro) ~ Approved
Doing Jag again. =3 Comments? Ivyheart =P 04:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Could you add more mud and put some lighter mottled in it? :) Iveh Yo! 05:10, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Extend the earpink down a bit? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:46 Thu Apr 12
Reuploaded. =D Ivyheart =P 23:58, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
8D Blur the mud and maybe add some fleck-y parts around it~ Dazzy 07:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink. I think it' sust my computer though oEo RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
The patches seem to have a slightly greenish-yellow hue. Fix that? Stoneclaw 06:25, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Nah, it wasn't your computer, Rowan. =3 I attempted to fix the greenish-yellow color on the mud. But sorry Dazzle, I kinda like it not blurred. xD Ivyheart =P 22:09, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
None; Approved. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 02:02, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
Stick (Cat) (Ro) ~ Approved
Comments for Improvement? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:43, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Define the tail shading. Awesome Rowan 8D ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:21 Fri Apr 13
Maybe thicken the nick a bit. o3o Nice job, Rowan~ Dazzy 07:33, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded Thanks 8D RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:29, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading on the flank and thicken it. Also, thicken the lineart by a pixel on the torn ear. Stoneclaw 06:22, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uplaoded. Fail with the ear nick. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:50, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the stomach shading. Silverhmm 14:41, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. Blurred to the max. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:38, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:32, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
None; Approved. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 02:04, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
Cinderheart (Q) - Approved
As much as I don't like the outcome of her choice, I still like her character, as well as her design. Though, I have to admit, this became a much bigger challenge than I thought it would be. I think I need to tweak the shading color slightly even though it's the same color from her MC, because to me, it just looks odd. Anyway, I'll leave the nitpicking to you guys since that's what you're trained to do ;D Have fun. Iveh Yo! 21:31, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
I love her! Just blur the earpink a little. This is so cute. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:35, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
Love the chararcter and the charart! :3 Can you define the shading? And I also think there is some waster around her tail and near the ear farthest from us. (but it might just be me) ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 23:22, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
The stripes look a little smudged next to the other inages. o3o Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:27, April 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded I did not smudge the stripes at all. But I did remove the fur pattern from the image because you were probably confused with that Iveh Yo! 02:29, April 17, 2012 (UTC)