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Snowy (Ro) - Approved

Snowy.rogue Comments? Atelda Superheroes 16:51, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder shading moar :3  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:44 Wed Apr 11

Reuploaded. Atelda Superheroes 20:25, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading a bit? Dazzy 13:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind legs and the tial. Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 01:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad o3o RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:43, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Atelda Superheroes 02:03, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

C to the B to the A? 8D Leggo 🏈 00:51, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 03:03,4/18/2012

Yellowfang (Ro) - Approved

Yellowfang.rogueOnce upon a time, this was one of the first three images I ever did for Tweak Week, so some nostalgia can be accredited to this piece :3 Though nothing special about my work on it this time. Any comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 20:43, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Whats on her muzzle? Or is that like, her flattened muzzle? Maple♥legsMischief brewing 23:13, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Ya, that's supposed to be there. Blur the flank shading.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:15 Sun Apr 15

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 02:31, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:32 Tue Apr 17

Approved Iveh Yo! 23:06, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Onion (Ro) ~ Approved

Onion.rogueI'm proud of this one. c: Umm...I forgot that she was short-haired, and I made her long-haired (lol, fail), but I'm going to keep her this way since she only gets a rogue image. Comments for improvement?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:50, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the belly shading just a tad. Also, if there's no specified pelt length, it's artist's choice. =P cloud final heaven  11:40, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also (to everyone), about the belly shading, please don't tell me to blur it, since even though it may look like it needs blurring, it's the effect of a black patch on the belly.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink extend down a little more?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:42 Thu Apr 12

I'm not sure, because I don't like the earpink to extend fully down the ear. However, if it's needed, feel free to disagree.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:45, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I sorta like it the way it is... anyway, can you blur the face shading a tiny bit? <3 Leggo 🏈 14:28, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Could you also blur the haunch shading a little bit? :3 Ivyheart =P 23:30, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think the shading's fine the way it is. After all, it's artist's choice. CBA? cloud final heaven 03:01,4/18/2012

Approved.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    14:43, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Nightcloud (Ro) ~ Approved

Nightcloud.rogue I'm not really happy with the new info released by Kate... I actually sympathize with this poor cat, and I'd think she'd give her stupid son a cuff over the ear for betraying his Clan, not that she'd run off with him. Ah well. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 20:57, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah... Oh well. *shrug* Define the shading a little bit? Ivyheart =P 23:50, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 01:49, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Just a preference, but could you add a highlight/lighter part around the belly area? It looks sort of lonely and flat there. Dazzy 22:20, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not. Unless she's really fat (which she probably isn't considering she's a WindClan cat), that area falls behing the shoulders and elbows, and is thus in shadow. Shelly For a limited time only 23:31, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Should the nose be black...? Or can you get black cats with pink noses..? -doesn't know- Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:36, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think you can...can you desaturate the nosepink, at least? Leggo 🏈 14:30, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

You can, though it's uncommon. *cough* Nevermind, I don't think it is..... I was thinking of a bicolor cat. But regardless of that, the nose should still be black to match the queen. And I have to agree with dazzle, a lighter spot should be added on the side. Even if she's thin, her whole ribcage isn't flat. It'd still bump out, and therefore the light would hit it. Paleggy Ship it 23:02, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a bit?--ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 23:51, April 14, 2012 (UTC)Moonshie

Guys, enough with the shading placement comments. It's artist's choice, and she doesn't have to change it. Although, Paleh's right about one thing. The nose does need to be black. cloud final heaven 03:16,4/16/2012

Re-uploaded. Made the nose black. And no, cats ribs do not stick out past their shoulders or their frontal knees. Observe this chart of cat muscels, which displays the cat's front knee falling in front of the ribs and thus casting it logically into shadow. Shelly For a limited time only 21:15, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? cloud final heaven 03:09,4/18/2012

Approved.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    14:43, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Ro) - Approved

Brokenstar.rogueMy eyes finally wised up so I could get the lineart. Lineart credit goes to the wonderful Mountainheart. Aye Sir! Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:25, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

In some areas (the bottom of the tail, belly, and front chest fur) the lineart looks thick. Beautiful work by the way Iveh Yo! 02:40, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? Ivyheart =P 04:57, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes to match his warrior/deputy/apprentice. Dazzy 11:35, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:59, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

This looks great. Let's try a CBA on this, cool with you? Iveh Yo! 23:03, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Approved c: oblivionAudience? 23:38, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Pine (TS) (Ro) ~ Approved

Pine (TS).rogue Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 03:44, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:47 Mon Apr 9

Define the ear pink just a tad? cloud final heaven  04:08, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems too dark, and the scars seem a little too straight. Iveh Yo! 19:55, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'd rather leave the scars as is, they seemed rather straight in the comic. Shelly For a limited time only 20:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm assuming your light source is coming from below, if so, lighten the belly between the front and hind legs. Breezewhisker 03:17, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

No, it's coming from his front. Shelly For a limited time only 03:20, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. X'D Then you should probably lighten the ears and go higher up with the haunch shading highlights. Breezewhisker 03:27, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fffff, white cats... Shelly For a limited time only 21:18, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:54, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:47, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Ro) ~ Approved

Boulder.rogue Hey guys! Another rogue up. C; Rogues win all. You know it. Comments, please and thank you?

Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 02:33, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nice one! Define the tail shading, if any. And darken the front faraway leg to match the back faraway leg ^^ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:35, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 02:41, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Uhh You went off the old one I think right? That's a triangle tabby, Boulder's images are being redone so you can do whatever tabby style on this unless Paleh is still gonna do the other images.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:58 Wed Apr 11

Blur the flank shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 11:16, 11, 04, 2012

Yes I plan to. I think I have an open space, so if I do then I'll post my version now. If not I'll do it ASAP. XD Or send you the file on chat to match. Paleggy Ship it 20:34, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid stripes completely, based off his new elder. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 01:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base coat and add/define the pale belly and chest. You want the xcf for the colors? Paleggy Ship it 14:24, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 04:42, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:26, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 15:05, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear more WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:06, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 02:15, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken the white on his tail? It doesn't seem to be covering the whole side. Mistypebble 02:21, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 03:32, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur/smudge it now? Mistypebble 20:26, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 04:36, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Mistypebble 17:25, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:52, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Rock (Alt. Ro) - Approved

Rock.rogue.alt Gah forgot the mud. Anyways, this is basically what I came up when I searched for jagged stumpy tails, and since his cg is being redone, and hiw normal rogue is currently up, I think we should just change it. I don't think the current version of the tail is very realistic. Comments? Paleggy Ship it 16:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on this tail a bit? Love it! <33 Thistle. 18:04, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Epic kitty is epic. Blue the foreleg shading a bit~ Dazzy 04:51, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

blur the highlight/lighter spot on his back <333 Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 19:35, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - So basically blur all the shading. XD Paleggy Ship it 14:51, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? cloud final heaven 20:38,4/18/2012

Approved. oblivionAudience? 23:54, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Half Moon (Alt. He2) - Approved

File:Stoneteller (Ancient).healer.alt2.png Yeah, I probably named this wrong... But she was mentioned as dark brown in TLH (who does that?) so I snagged her 8D oblivionAudience? 22:17, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Yup. Named wrong. Rename it Stoneteller (Ancient).healer.alt2.png :3 And, could you make the smudges curve a little more with the body shape? Wonderful, Loonie~ Dazzy 22:51, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Silverhmm 22:54, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the fur texture? She looks mottled instead of fuzzy (no you don't have to get rid of it) Iveh Yo! 22:56, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

...Loonie...I'm probably wrong, but it didn't specifically say it was Half Moon walking with Graystripe...when I read it at first, I thought it said that, but reading over the cite again, I'm interpreting it as a random Ancient cat walking with Graystripe...please don't shoot me. ._. (At least, where I think it calls her brown....where's dat citation on her page, missy? >:|) Leggo 🏈 00:46, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

^^Urg. Ignore that..Loonie persuaded me otherwise...and I'm supposed to 'state how incredibly wrong I am'. So there ya go. xD Leggo 🏈 01:03, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

darken the earpink? it's very bright~ Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 03:07, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and renamed. oblivionAudience? 23:04, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the back shading. Silverhmm 10:59, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 11:35, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading just a tad? Mistypebble 14:30, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 22:59, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

She still looks kind of mottled, in my opinion. Mistypebble 15:23, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Compare her to Mistkit, below. Imagine Mistkit is brown and the size of the healer blank. The fur texture looks exactly the same. Besides, cats aren't all one colour. Like our hair, they have highlights and lowlights in their fur, so there's bound to be some texture. oblivionAudience? 15:39, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

It's not mottled. It's an epic furry texture worthy of Half Moon. One that causes Kelsey to to weird things...like this. CBA? cloud final heaven 15:47,4/21/2012

Approved. Mistypebble 16:39, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Mistkit (Ki) - Approved

Mistkit (TC).kit Kate answered my question! 8D *squeals* Mistkit's a gray she-kit. ^^ Since the shade wasn't specified, I'm gonna go on personal preference and make her on the darker side..... I also figured out to do the furry texture. :D *is having a good day* Comments? Paleggy Ship it 21:08, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her neck a little bit? o3o --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 01:27, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oh look I reuploaded. owo

Lol, you forgot to sign xD and... If I was you, I would make the nose a darker gray than the rest of her so it's distinguished from her pelt (preference). I reapeat: this. is. awesome. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:58, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Whoops I did forget to sign. And it already is Ivy. Paleggy Ship it 14:15, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Why is everyone copying the furry effects >.< CBA?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:49 Sat Apr 21

Approved. Mistypebble 16:43, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Nightkit (Ki) - Approved

Nightkit.kit I've been wanting a description for her for a while now...poor Nighkit. I liked her, despite the fact she wasn't around for a whole heck of a lot. XD cloud final heaven 21:29,4/18/2012

Make the earpink stand out a bit more. Lovely cloudy~ More blacks cats. xD Paleggy Ship it 23:18, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Me and my black cats. <3 cloud final heaven 23:23,4/18/2012

Blur the chest shading? :3 Mistypebble 02:07, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 19:11,4/19/2012

Hmmm...CBA? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 23:07, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 23:18,4/22/2012

Pinenose (Q) - Approved

Pinenose.queen I finished The Last Hope today, and it didn't feel... complete to me for some reason. Here's Pinenose. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 19:16, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. cloud final heaven  19:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:10, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 23:14, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shadin' Weylon Distinctly Unique. 01:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste around her chest and the right forepaw~ Dazzy 14:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes should show when there's no more waste. --Leafstrike-- 23:23, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Also around the tail, I forgot to mention that ^^; Dazzy 01:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I cleared it all, so it's okay. --Leafstrike-- 15:58, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

There looks like there is some waste or blurred lineart around the chest/neck and the front leg furthest from us. (Could just be me). Looks wondeful! :3 RavenBeeeeeees 20:31, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

...XD Raven, that's what she cleared. Blur the belly shading a bit c:

Dazzy 23:16, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 22:38, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make her face and tail shading lighter. Pretty.~ :3 Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 23:34, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added highlights, can remove them if desired. --Leafstrike-- 01:10, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the highlights? Leggo 🏈 14:26, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 02:23, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shadingShoonderpThis band saved my life... 12:10, April 15, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the earpink. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:02, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 00:26, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little more. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:30, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

It's perfectly visible. It does not need defining. --Leafstrike-- 23:57, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define it a tad, please. Not a whole lot, but at least so I don't have to squint to see it. cloud final heaven 03:12,4/18/2012

Also, where the shading is, I can't see thelineart, not even when I squint. Iveh Yo! 19:35, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:01, 19, 04, 2012

Reuploaded Wait for changes... :/. --Leafstrike-- 17:41, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a bit more pink?--ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 15:36, April 21, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:15, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Is it me, or does the front half of the dhading look really hard edged? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 23:49, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Never mind, CBA? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 07:01, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 08:31, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Molepaw (OTS) (Alt.A) - Approved

File:Molepaw (OTS).apprentice.alt.pngOh well, honestly, Its more than a week and Sparkleaf didnt show any notice that she still have a reservation so can I take it now?! LeafyAbsolute maniac, 20:54,April 21,2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 23:04, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

You know you don't have to match the normal image's pattern. :P Your choice though. Make the white a little less blurry. Paleggy Ship it 23:56, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Ehm..experimenting..reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac, 13:59,April 22,2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink a bit. Purty =3 ___Leafy 17:42, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac, 15:16,April 23,2012 (UTC)

Leafstorm...This is amazing. I'm gonna CBA this now.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    15:22, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 19:04, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (Ro) - Approved

Sharpclaw (SC).rogue o.o Another rogue. I think this looks okay. Comments for improvement? :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 12:01, 11, 04, 2012

Aww, cute :3 Define the shading Silverhmm 12:12, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it a tad, too. cloud final heaven  12:13, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome~ Add a couple more stripes and define the pale belly/chest. :3 Dazzy 12:32, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit too hard, (bad at explaining) blur them a bit. Mistypebble 01:08, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - The stripes might need a bit more blurring still. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:40, 13, 04, 2012

Can you maybe define the earpink a bit--ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 17:09, April 13, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded - Not much of a difference, but better? :/ ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:35, 14, 04, 2012

Make all of the tabby stripes more closely-packed (you can add more stripes, too) like on the other images.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:24, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the hip joint looks a little funny. Could you lighten it so that the hip and the back merge together a little better? Breezewhisker 03:26, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Sorry for the late upload, it's been hard to take the time to do it. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:46, 19, 04, 2012

Can you possibly darken the stripes and add some thin stripes in the blank areas? This is beautiful DJ <3333  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:12 Sat Apr 21

Reuploaded - ' Thanks Mounty. I don't want to add too many stripes otherwise it wouldn't match. :/ ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:22, 22, 04, 2012

Actually, I think that you should add more stripes as Mounty suggested. I don't think it matches the other images this way...owo  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:53, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the paler belly? And I think he should have a paler chest and paws too. Mistypebble 18:59, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - owo, now that you mention it, your right Stoney. And yes Misty, you are correct, but he already had a pale chest so I just defined it. These stripes are doing my head in! ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:37, 23, 04, 2012

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    15:21, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Skt ANZAC day 02:09, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Grasskit (Ki) - Approved

Grasskit (CP).kitAlright, let's just say that if you tell me to change the pattern or colors, I'm going to be on the reluctant side since this is modled after my cat Nibbles, and the colors were colorpicked off a photo of him, so you gotta give me a good reason why the pattern and/or colors are unacceptable. Oh, and two more things: "Awwwwwwww" <3 and any comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 23:09, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Silverhmm 23:15, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think you need to rename the file as File:Grasskit (CP).kit.png. Shelly For a limited time only 23:24, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Three things:
Yeppers^
Define the shading.
and d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww <3 <steals image and runs away again> cloud final heaven 23:27,4/19/2012

Also, there's some waste under the tail. Shelly For a limited time only 23:37, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe smudge or blur the stripes a tad. Nibbles!!! <3 Paleggy Ship it 00:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done and I also tinted the shading slightly so that it helps bring out his color :) Iveh Yo! 13:56, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste o3o Tail tip and under back foot. oblivionAudience? 00:21, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste near the tip of the tail too. Silverhmm 11:29, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Silver, I already said that ._. Try not to repeat things. oblivionAudience? 11:58, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad. Cute! ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:02, 22, 04, 2012

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 01:26, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

I love this so much <33 CBA?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:58 Tue Apr 24

None; Approved~<33 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 15:52, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Ro) ~ Approved

Clovertail.rogueChu changes showing? Anyways, Clovertail's rogue. It's ugly ;-; ___Leafy 12:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sweet! May be just my computer, but define the earpink and the shading on the back legs. This is great! Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:44, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ___Leafy 12:56, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights", or at least make them a little bigger, but it's your choice :3 *steals* Dazzy 15:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. Silverhmm 15:52, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and make the back of the paw darker than the front. Dewstar(leaf)~I am no illusion...~ 17:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

You should difine where the light is coming from, it looks like its coming from three places. BrackentailXD call me bracken...

01:12, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, too~ Oh, and Bracken: shading placement is artist's choice :3 Dazzy 02:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry! I'll re-upload in a few minutes! ___Leafy 21:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redid the shading. ___Leafy 21:49, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the shading on the haunch and back, and define the eye depth a little. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 23:37, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and tail shading Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 05:08, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the flank "highlight" bigger. Totally optional. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:30, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded =3 ___Leafy 00:23, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, your light source doesn't really make sense. There's a highlight on her back, as if the light was coming from above, but there's not one on her tail, and then there's one on her face as if the light was coming from the front. Choose a light source please. oblivionAudience? 15:46, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, Loonie? There's several images with quite similar shading up for approval right now... Dazzy 06:16, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

o3o So, do I change it or...? ___Leafy 21:41, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

I would suggest changing it, 'cause Loonie is right...But, this light source is on many images. I still suggest changing it.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:56, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'll re-upload when I get home from school =3 ___Leafy 15:12, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ___Leafy 22:13, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. --Leafstrike-- 23:54, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on her stomach (or something xD) looks tinted gray, can you fix that? Mistypebble 16:46, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shading looks crappy... I think I should redo the shading... ___Leafy 17:33, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

waste all around the immaggee~ --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 19:49, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *fail* ___Leafy 20:03, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading now. (; Dazzy 22:15, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ___Leafy 11:14, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Well done, Leafy. CBA? cloud final heaven 14:11,4/24/2012

None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 15:57, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Coal (Ro) - Approved

Coal.rogue As far as I know, this was declined before and nobody else reserved it/got it approved, and I needed a charart to do~ :3 Comments~? ouo Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading. Silverhmm 23:25, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Make the earpink more pink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 14:47, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken it just a tad? :3 MoonehGoodbye, everyone...

19:19, 04 16, 2012

Blur the shading on the haunch and tail C: --Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 19:22, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this... Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:12, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. Mistypebble 03:32, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gimp always spazzes on me when I do black cats, so sorry if it's messed up. Mistypebble 03:50, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink? c: --Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 05:48, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink. ^^ Mistypebble 14:57, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some? It might just be me, but they seem a tad blotchy. :/ ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:47, 18, 04, 2012

Reuploaded No, the highlights are like that. >.< Blurred them. Mistypebble 15:42, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define/Darken the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:53, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. Mistypebble 20:20, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink a bit?--ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 23:10, April 18, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Hmm. The earpink looks fine to me. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:19, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading/highlights or both. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:35, 19, 04, 2012

Reuploaded Gah blotchy highlights, why you haunt me??!! Defined the highlights. >.< Mistypebble 18:14, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Since it's been over 24 hours, I'mma go ahead and CBA this. Okay? :3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:29, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

I hate to interrupt, but can you blur the highlights some? O.o ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:14, 23, 04, 2012

Wait I worded that wrong. Blur the highlights as they seem to be somewhat blotchy (although it may just be me) and then define them so you can see them more. O.O Sorry about that. >.< ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:42, 23, 04, 2012

They're fine. Continuing CBA. cloud final heaven 14:06,4/24/2012

None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 15:59, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) - Approved

File:Minty.rogue.pngBirdie's got declined. Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:29, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights a tad. Mistypebble 02:47, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:49, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Silverhmm 11:27, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 20:11, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:56, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. <3 Dazzy 22:08, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the overall base color a bit. Lovely Scarlet! ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:08, 23, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:33, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

CBA! Uppa!  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:55 Tue Apr 24

I'm so sorry for interuppting the CBA Scarlet D:. But I see waste along the back/tail and near her face. Silverhmm 11:24, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Waste doesn't effect the quality of the image. I'll continue the CBA.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:16 Tue Apr 24

None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:03, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (Ro) - Approved

Leafstar.rogue Taking five days to do this like a boss. oblivionAudience? 19:01, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Rawr, I wanted to this >:< But I love it! <33 Define the earpink and I think you may be missing some stripes on the stomach, but not sure. Mistypebble 20:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

(steals) She's a cutie. X3 Is the pelt already smudged into the earpink? It might be just my computer, though. MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 00:35, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 01:14, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit? Dazzy 07:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

It matches her queen. oblivionAudience? 21:09, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? cloud final heaven 21:48,4/26/2012

I hate to interrupt a CBA, but could you define the earpink just a tad?--ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 20:33, April 27, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

It's fine. Continuing CBA. cloud final heaven 20:35,4/27/2012

Approved. Skt Knock knock 22:49, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. A) - Approved

Bluestar.apprentice.alt Mentioned as pale gray as an apprentice. Adding the cite in now. Comments? Paleggy Ship it 15:37, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shadin'. Nice job, Paleh~ Dazzy 12:00, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I think that we decided that Bluestar and all other bluish-gray cats wouldn't get alts. for being described as gray because blue is the scientific word for gray. Look at the talk page. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:05, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

I know that bluestar, but this is pale gray. that's different. She'd still get an alt. Paleggy Ship it 17:06, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, Shelly said that they wouldn't get pale gray or dark gray alts. either. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:28, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - That's not decided yet. This stays till then. Paleggy Ship it 21:56, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur or smudge (your choice) the shading on the shoulder? I love it. :D MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 00:59, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, I can barely make out the shoulder shading as is.... I'd rather not blur it too much. Paleggy Ship it 01:06, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Round out the shoulder shading a tad? Also, define the underbelly shading near her arm. Pouncey! 19:34, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I liked it better before. XD but there ya go. Paleggy Ship it 20:49, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:41, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

None, approved.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:43 Mon Apr 30

Silverhawk (Ro) ~ Approved

Silverhawk.rogueWoo~ Since we're doing the dark forest residents as rogues...I guess he should have one. Eh, I did a bad job on this image. >.< Comments for Improvement?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    05:17, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Needs to be ragged Iveh Yo! 05:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

The color and the pattern seem to be a little off. I can email you the .xcf file of his warrior image if you want? c: Pouncey! 20:22, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the image. I had fun with the ragged fur. c:  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:11, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Ermm...I just fixed something. Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:13, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to do this, but (if you want) thinnen out the ragged fur w=by around 1-2 pixels? owo :/ ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:07, 26, 04, 2012

deinfe the stripes owo --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 19:31, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm not defining the stripes since if I did that, they wouldn't match the warrior. It's just the ragged fur that maybe blocks out the visibility of the stripes...And honestly, I like the ragged fur lineart the way it is.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:14, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lessen the raggedness to match the warrior? Pouncey! 19:29, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, he'd probably have more ragged fur as a rogue. But it's up to Stoney. Paleggy Ship it 18:43, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, Paleh has a good point. I really like this, so I'm gonna CBA it. He //would// have more ragged fur as a rogue... cloud final heaven 02:47,4/29/2012

Approved. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 05:08, 30, 04, 2012

Redwillow (Ro) ~ Approved

Redwillow.rogue So we're doing this? (shrugs) Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 02:02, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the mottles. =P Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 03:00, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a bit?--ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 14:56, April 26, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Blur the haunch shading. Dazzy 09:21, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Shelly? cloud final heaven 02:45,4/29/2012

Re-uploaded. Yup. Sorry. Apathy set in for a moment. Shelly For a limited time only 02:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Paleggy Ship it 05:14, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 05:34, 30, 04, 2012

Snowtuft (Ro) ~ Approved

Snowtuft.rogue Sparrowfeather's main image is a rogue image, so Snowtuft gets one as well. cloud final heaven 01:37,4/24/2012

Smudge the scar sideways to match the warrior. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 02:14, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

If they're getting rogue images, I don't think it matters. Sparrowfeather no longer has a warrior image on her article, so neither would Snowtuft. cloud final heaven 02:16,4/24/2012

Perhaps make the scar a tad thinner? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 02:57, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 19:14,4/24/2012

Add/Define the shading on the chest as it would appear unnatural when in accordance to the light source if there is no lighter shading. And perhaps taper the scar to a point when it appears on the flank. Atelda Superheroes 22:20, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

'Teldy, you are aware that I don't actually use a light source when shading my images, right? Regardless, the shading on this bothers me, so I'm going to re-do it anyways. cloud final heaven 22:24,4/25/2012

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 22:41,4/25/2012

Thin out the scar and sharpen it, also, it blends into the earpink at the top, can you fix that? Blur the shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:27, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 00:32,4/26/2012

Blur the body shading some. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:46, 28, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 17:07,4/28/2012

Define the shading on the tail. c: Mistypebble 18:00, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 18:03,4/28/2012

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:42, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 06:48,4/30/2012

Thistleclaw (Ro) ~ Approved

Thistleclaw.rogueFigured I should post him now lol. Woohoo I've done two of his images now! Yay? I'll never understand to method of shading on this, it seems like all highlights and no shading o3o I must have had zero sanity as an apprentice x.x Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 01:18 Tue Apr 24

Hold on. When did we come to a consensus that DF characters get a rogue pixil? (I can see the logic but I don't remember ever coming to an agreement)Iveh Yo! 01:22, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather has one. Therefore they should all get one. oblivionAudience? 01:29, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

But where have we actually come to a conclusion that every DF cat would get one? Because if it hasn't been stated anywhere and made sure that everyone agrees to it, none should be reserved or up for approval. Iveh Yo! 01:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

No, nobody has commented on the darn discussion in ages. >.> But if we agree that Redwillow should get one for turning against his Clan, all of them should get one too with that logic. Paleggy Ship it 04:33, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. I luvs it. :3 MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 00:37, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading. Beautiful. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:02, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I redid the highlights (because they looked awful) and I added shading. I don't want to blur it too much because the warrior's shading is very smudgy.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:47 Fri Apr 27

Define the shading? Mistypebble 18:00, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 20:16 Sun Apr 29

Blur the tail shading and I'll put a CBA trololol Skt Knock knock 00:33, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It might be hard to tell because of the mottles.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:40 Mon Apr 30

C and B and A like a baws. Skt Knock knock 00:46, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:04, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Vixenkit (Ki) ~ Approved

Vixenkit.kitYep here she is. I made her eyes orange because I always thought she was an orange/gray cat. Anyway, comments? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:59, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, if there is any.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:24, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:09, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Try adding a highlight to the chest, perhaps? If you don't use them, that's fine. However, they're pretty useful on black cats, who can be a pain in the tush to shade. cloud final heaven 03:49,4/20/2012

Reuploaded I added highlights. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 13:26, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose dark grey/black? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 22:42, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:52, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

define the shading. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 06:59, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:44, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mistypebble 21:37, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, too. Dazzy 21:46, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:38, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur that chest highlight a tad? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:50, 28, 04, 2012</big>

Define the shading. Silverhmm 11:55, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink and darken the nose color. Mistypebble 18:03, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 18:57, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Ima go ahead and CBA. Skt Knock knock 22:51, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:04, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Ro) - Approved

Hawkfrost.rogue He's sexy and he knows it <3 Unfortunately, someone couldn't imagine who.. made the muzzle too small on the rogue blanks, so I could only fit two of his scars. He's a wizard and can heal scars. But just one. oblivionAudience? 01:58, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his haunch ^^ --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 19:03, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. owo oblivionAudience? 01:49, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft, he ain't sexy. Not after what he did. Anyway, perhaps you could put the tip of a scar under his nose? Because on the warrior, the scar goes through his nose. Do I make sense? XP Skt Knock knock 23:35, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ...Ew. ._. oblivionAudience? 19:26, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Not ew. Ima CBA, actually. Skt Knock knock 00:31, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:04, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Shredtail (Ro) - Approved

File:Shredtail.rogue.pngMeh... Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:11, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

o3e I thought I reserved this. :S -shrugs- You can have it anyway. Oh, and maybe define the shading a tad? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:39, 27, 04, 2012

It might be my computer, but the stripes on the bald spot of his tail look their going off the tail. Pure Awesomeness. :3 MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 18:52, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

There be waste 'round the image, m'dear. Can you tone down the ear pink just a tad? It's...neon-y. But, you don't have to if you don't want to. cloud final heaven 21:00,4/27/2012

Re-uploaded. I'm keeping the ear-pink since it came straight from his warrior. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:06, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 17:00, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:41, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the bald part of the tail a bit. Shelly For a limited time only 22:51, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:06, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:29 Mon Apr 30

None, Approved ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:04, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Crouchpaw (A) ~ Approved

File:Crouchpaw.apprentice.png Well, TheBoss2 lost their reservation, so I decided to take it up. o3o Comments? Dazzy 12:44, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the black so we can see the lineart and make the highlights contour more naturally to his body. oblivionAudience? 13:16, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

And make the earpink a bit more pink Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 17:33, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink tooo~ Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 19:34, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I made the highlights too bright in contrast to the rest of the body...;.; Dazzy 22:59, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and define the earpink a tad. Mistypebble 03:21, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy 22:11, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:52, 18, 04, 2012

Reuploaded~ Dazzy 13:32, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Mistypebble 14:31, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Dazzy 09:51, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink some. C: Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 22:44, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I would CBA if I was a warrior or something. Hmm... maybe blur teh earpink? (steals from Dazzy) MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 00:28, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

This is just a preference, but perhaps make the highlights (if any) more visable. And Mossnose, you need to be a Senior Warrior to CBA images. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:41, 25, 04, 2012</big>

Reuploaded. I lightened it a bit, because if I define the highlights the image looks all blotchy and...well, you get my point. And Mossnose, I'd rather not blur it, because it'll lose that smudged look. ^^; Dazzy 07:44, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink on both sides near the lineart, and blur and lower the opacity on the highlight on his hindleg(if there is one o3o) Pouncey! 22:43, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Also, make the nose black. Pouncey! 22:48, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Silverhmm 11:56, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy 08:10, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Imma CBA this. =3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    05:02, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 05:19,5/3/2012

Clawface (Ro) ~ Approved

Clawface.rogue I found a spot! Yay, first charart up in a while. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 23:03, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Are there scars? I can't quite tell. If not, add them. 8D cloud final heaven  23:04, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Is there a light part along his back? If so, make it brighterr Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Take the earpink from his warrior (if you did, take it directly from the center). If you did that...then just disregard this x3 Dazzy 05:57, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 11:14, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could be my computer (I'll try looking at this from a different one later) but could you make the earpink a little more pink? Blur where the back highlight meets thhe shading to smooth it out. Nice job ^^ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 13:06, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the scars pink to match his warrior? And what Ivyshell said. This is beautiful!ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 19:41, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 20:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scars brighter and maybe more red. They're kinda hard to see.... Sunnyfrost 21:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Nice. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 11:28, 11, 04, 2012

Does it look a bit green to anyone else? It looks kind of green to me. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 23:37, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

You're not the only one, Cinder. Not sure if it looks like that to any others, but could you (maybe) get rid of the (possible) green-ish tint? Dazzy 08:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No, the color looks like the warrior but the warrior's shading is brown tinted so just make the shading a reddish brown color instead of black, keep the base coat the same.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:40 Thu Apr 12

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 22:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm... blur the shading a tad. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:05, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can't blur it any more. ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 10:54, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scars some more, they're very difficult to see Iveh Yo! 19:34, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the whole image a bit.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:57, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 22:16, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:52 Sat Apr 21

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 16:12, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

He looks really yellow to me... Up the brown a little? oblivionAudience? 01:40, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mistypebble 18:17, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scars a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:26, 23, 04, 2012

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 21:41, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think that tail scar could be there, cause it's like, fur. Just move it up a tad and make it curve more. Skt ANZAC day 22:41, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 21:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste around the image. If I'm looking at the correct version that is... ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:28, 27, 04, 2012

I don't think you are, because there is none. ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 16:59, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

No, I think there's waste around it too... Blur the tail shading and thicken/blur the tail scar. Mistypebble 18:05, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Still working, Purple? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:20, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 11:04, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading Pouncey! 21:05, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading's fine. CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:18, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

None; Approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:16, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (Ro) ~ Approved

Violet.rogue x.x Alright. So, I tried to match her as well as I could to her kittypet image, I hope I named the file and headline right, sorry if I didn't. Criticism welcome! :3 RavenBeeeeeees 05:14, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Realized I made her to creamyish so I made her a bit pinker like her kittypet image. And I added/tweaked a few things. --RavenBeeeeeees 05:28, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a lot. Nice job Raven~ Dazzy 07:33, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Beautiful!--ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 10:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

You named it wrong, please renamed it Violet.rogue.png and usually when you take over a project you take over their spot, you don't start a new one but its fine for now. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 12:01, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and lighten the stripes a tad. And renamed the heading "Violet (Ro) ~ For Approval" Good job. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 12:04, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. Wild, you don't always have to take over another user's spot. I just forgot to archive the old one because I was tired last night and never did it before I went to sleep. cloud final heaven 14:04,4/20/2012

Make the earpink a little more red. Lovely~ o3o RowanOnly One Can Judge... 14:06, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Made the earpink redder, renamed the file, blurred the shading, lightened the stripes a tad, smudged the stripes. Hope it looks better! --RavenBeeeeeees 18:38, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded just tried to match her earpink color and pelt color more to her kittypet image. --RavenBeeeeeees 19:04, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

waste around the image~ --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 19:43, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shouldn't be anymore waste. --RavenBeeeeeees 20:22, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry. I didn't see that trivia point when I looked. Shelly For a limited time only 02:28, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Huh, Shelly? Blur the shading along the back the tinniest tiniest bit ever~ It can be your choice, though =3 ___Leafy 02:49, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Y'know, it could be my computer, but the earpink looks like it doesn't fill up the whole ear on the left side. Also, define it a little (make it more pink) Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:54, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the earpink color should be fixed. --RavenBeeeeeees 19:37, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little neon. Could you tone it down? o3o RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:26, 22, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded Toned the earpink down :3 --RavenBeeeeeees 19:09, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and round out the shoulder shading. Breezewhisker 19:56, April 22, 2012 (UTC)\

Re-uploaded --RavenBeeeeeees 20:01, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

I see waste all around it. o3o ___Leafy 20:09, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Though I think it's just my computer -.- ___Leafy 20:15, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry! I forgot to get rid of it. --RavenBeeeeeees 01:19, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Add white to the chest. Dazzy 04:54, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Added white to the chest. --RavenBeeeeeees 12:48, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Attention Ok. So I woke up to find my lap top would Not Turn On. It still isn't working, so It might have to be sent in, and so they normally whipe the computer.. So that means I basically lost the .xcf file for Violet.. I Really hope it looks good enough to be approved. Really sorry. --RavenBeeeeeees 01:47, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. After being 99% sure we would have to send my lap top in, it turned on, and I emailed myself the .xcf, so the .xcf is Not gone. --RavenBeeeeeees 19:54, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading. Skt ANZAC day 22:12, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the shading, if I blur it anymore it will disappear xD --RavenBeeeeeees 00:00, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think it necessarily needs blurring, but I would define the lighting on the haunch and chest and tone down the flank/back shading. Atelda Superheroes 22:20, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tried to define the shading more. --RavenBeeeeeees 04:37, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smooth out that shading some more, if not, do what 'Teldy said. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:26, 26, 04, 2012

x.x If you guys want, I can put the shading layer to full opacity, take a screenshot and show you guys that I can't really make it anymore smooth/blurred etc, if I do it will just kind of fade away xD --RavenBeeeeeees 09:29, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more pink--ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 14:58, April 26, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Moonshine, the earpink is already really pink. Raven, try tinting the shading a warm color. Dazzy 22:13, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Do you want Raven? I could try to help if you need it. ;) ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:39, 28, 04, 2012</big>

No, but thank you Very much, I think i'll just redo the shading xD --RavenBeeeeeees 07:03, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you So much, I think it helped a lot, and I think it looks a lot better, hope it does! --RavenBeeeeeees 07:17, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the paw shading, and can you try to make some of the stripes a bit paler so that it matches the other images? Mistypebble 18:02, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I just decided to do the stripe pattern over again, and with a lighter more red color to match her kittypet image, Hope it looks better! --RavenBeeeeeees 00:14, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 05:12, 30, 04, 2012

And darken the earpink Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 05:15, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded darkened and defined shading, and darkened earpink a bit. --RavenBeeeeeees 10:34, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading, there's waste around the whole image, and I think theres blurred lineart in the ear. Pouncey! 10:53, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded cleared waste, and blurred shading. --RavenBeeeeeees 11:07, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the ear, and motion blur the stripes by 1 pixel (if you've got the motion blur option) Dazzy 09:18, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, the earpink Should be filling the ear where the earpink is supposed to go, maybe its still to light and it looks like its not. and I do have the motion blur but when I set both the dial things to 1 I don't think it made a difference at all, at least none I could see, sorry. I still don't know how to work Gimp entirely. I'm considering getting a mentor. --RavenBeeeeeees 10:18, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

smudge the stripes more. --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 13:08, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I smudged the stripes and used motion blur, I set the dial things to 1 if thats what you mean by one pixel Dazzle, Hope it looks better! :3 --RavenBeeeeeees 23:12, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Look's great! Mounty tabbies are hard to match. 8D CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:19, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved~!<333 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:20, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ro) ~ Approved

Blackstar.rogue Comments? cloud final heaven 01:32,5/3/2012

Blur the flank shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:36, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 01:41,5/3/2012

Define the shading on the tail. oblivionAudience? 01:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hate tail shading on short-haired cats. cloud final heaven 02:02,5/3/2012

Nice job Cloud!! Just thin the scars out just a bit. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 02:07, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Well, if I thin out the scars, they won't match the leader as well. I tried making them thinner when I first made it, and they didn't look real good. I'd prefer to keep them like this. cloud final heaven 02:10,5/3/2012

This may just be my lap top, but the scars look a bit neon, and blur the scars at the elbow and neck, Looks Wonderful! Again, it could totally be my lap top. --RavenBeeeeeees 06:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. They're not neon. I took the colors right from his leader image. cloud final heaven 13:37,5/3/2012

Lighten the black paws, as I can't see the lineart too clearly. =3 Looks epic!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:21, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.Skt Like a baws 23:21, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 00:05,5/4/2012

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:00, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

None; Approved~Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:23, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Echosong (W) ~ Approved

Echosong.warriorI just removed the herds XD Everything is the same as her MC. Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 18:37 Sun May 6

Blur the tail shading. Silverhmm 18:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

I really can't blur it anymore than it is right now. It's the position of the stripes. It matches the mc so I think it's fine o3o  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 18:43 Sun May 6

When was she mentioned as a warrior? It's not in her history, nor her charcat. Can you add it somewhere? I haven't read the SC manga, but I never saw her as a warrior. Paleggy Ship it 19:24, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Whoops, should've added it. She had a ceremony for being accepted into SkyClan on page 424, then had a MC ceremony on page 500-something. She was a warrior for a good 80 pages. oblivionAudience? 19:25, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

I honestly think that there's nothing to change, since it matches the MC exactly...I may get shot down for this, but CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:33, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

{no shooting} lol x3 Anyway, none; approved. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 19:37, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (Lo) - Approved

Honeyleaf.lonerMwahahaha mine again! :3 Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:13, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon. It's the 7th already? :/ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:17, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

It's the same as her deputy. We've reached the slow season... ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:19, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Ivyshell, I don't know what you're whining about. Woo had this reserved, not you. Her reservation ran out, not yours. Sorry, but I gotta say that. >.> cloud final heaven 08:12,5/4/2012

I'm sorry; I was just wondering. And, I wasn't trying to be a nuisance. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:19, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear-pink a little bit? This is purty <3 ___Leafy 18:43, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks, Leafy! :) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:17, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading a little bit --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 01:20, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:30, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

I know this is the opposite side of the warrior image, and this is just your choice, but can you make the stripes on the belly match the warrior, since they seem to be coming onto the other side? owo This is beautiful Scarlet!~<3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:18, 05, 05, 2012

There's a line of waste under her tail. Beautiful <33. Silverhmm 13:13, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Little bit of waste by her lifted paw and left back leg. Lovely, Scarlet~ Dazzy 05:11, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the delay, Scar's in her busy season @DJ, I think it looks alright since in her deputy, you can't really see her belly because of her position, but I could easily be having a Scarletderp moment... (Been having a lot of those lately... :P) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:50, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Uppa! CBA!!!  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:56 Mon May 7

Aye sir!!!  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:12 Tue May 8

One-eye (Alt. Q) - Approved

One-eye.queen.alt She was mentioned as joining the nursery when Leopardfoot was pregnant, despite not having her own kits. I'm not matching the elder, that's white with very dark shading, not pale gray, I'm about to nominate it. Comments? Paleggy Ship it 05:00, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink just a bit. Nice job Paleh. BerryGradients, gradients... 08:39, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad too. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:15, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading a little bit on the tail. owo jack never let go, loonie ❤ 19:30, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - oUo. Paleggy Ship it 03:39, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little more pink ouo Pouncey! 00:53, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine, imho. cloud final heaven 00:55,5/8/2012

I love her so much <33 Can I CBA? Pretty please c:  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:44 Tue May 8

None, approved. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:22, 09, 05, 2012

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