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Berrynose (Alt. W) ~ Approved

Berrynose.warrior.alt Being mentioned with a long tail is far from being normal. This warrants an alt because tails do not grow back on cats, and Longtail got one for when his eyes got clawed out, and I do believe Berrynose has alts for this already...but I think they're when he was a kit. I know it's darker now; I'm lightening it and fixing that. cloud final heaven 00:13,5/7/2012

Re-uploaded. Eww. cloud final heaven 00:18,5/7/2012

Blur the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:22, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

It might be my computer, but I think there's waste near the torn ear. ___Leafy 00:25, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Paleh is a lifesaver. <3 cloud final heaven 00:45,5/7/2012

Blur the shoulder shading~ Pouncey! 00:45, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

If I blur it, you're not going to be able to see it. o.o cloud final heaven 00:53,5/8/2012

*must have been looking at the old version* It's fine now ^^" Darken the shading a tiny bit? :3 Pouncey! 02:41, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 02:44,5/8/2012

Blur the midriff-ish shading. It seems to be darker than the rest of the shading. But that could easily just be my computer. :/ ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:48, 10, 05, 2012

I can't blur the shading. If I do, there's going to be no way you can see it. cloud final heaven 16:31,5/10/2012

It looks fine. I'm going to call CBA on this one. oblivionAudience? 22:10, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 22:11,5/11/2012

Sharpclaw (Alt D2) - Approved

Sharpclaw (SC).deputy.alt2 Yay for furry solids! oblivionAudience? 01:48, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lessen the furry effect so he looks less mottled? :3 Pouncey! 02:44, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make him long-haired? Just a suggestion. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 14:52, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Hi! Just an outsider suggestion. Since PCA can't have solid gingers, I suggest switching this to grey-scale. Shelly For a limited time only 15:43, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar, since his normal images are shortfurred, I think this should be like that as well. ^^; cloud final heaven 16:51,5/8/2012

Ok, it was just a suggestion because he kinda looks long-haired in the manga. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:56, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Shelly, because it never says he's ginger, but you don't have to. I also agree with Bluestar, but again you don't have to because it is never confirmed and it could just be perspective, I could try finding a picture of him so you can choose. :) WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:08, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Here. Scroll to page 17 for a good picture. Hope this helps. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:18, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Erm...he's not even mottled. He's a solid colored ginger cat drawn this way because the artist doesn't realize all gingers need stripes. It is a long-furred effect drawn on his back, nothing more. If he were meant to be mottled, he'd be mottled in all of his art anyway. Sorry but this should be declined and I should really stop commenting on stuff and leave like I'm supposed to Iveh Yo! 00:23, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Well, no, not declined. He's cited in the books as a tabby, so being shown as a solid is grounds for an alt. But since he's ginger, this will have to be grey, or it'd have to be striped and then it'd be too close to his current charart. Shelly For a limited time only 00:42, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Can't remember if he was shown with a lighter or darker muzzle... oblivionAudience? 01:22, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a liiitle bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:48, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

I disagree. Any more and it'd be too blurred. oblivionAudience? 21:59, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

I can haz CBA nao? cloud final heaven 22:13,5/10/2012

Approved. cloud final heaven 22:14,5/11/2012

Tawnypelt (W. Alt4) - Approved

Tawnypelt.warriorDang, she has about as many alts as Daisy :P Alright, I have my reasons for this. For one, I believe that she has been described as a dark tortoiseshell, and a dark tortoiseshell and a pale tortoiseshell are two totally different pelt colors. A pale, or dilute, tortie consists of blue, cream, and white hairs, while dark torties are black and dark ginger or even brown. Secondly, when I was reading, it said something along the lines of "he could see her pale fur crouching in the undergrowth", meaning that her fur must have been pretty light to stand out against the shadows. She gets this alt, in my eyes. I feel that I should probably either lighten the shading or the fur effect some and define some of the dapples on her cream patches, you guys agree? Iveh Yo! 00:36, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Um... blur the earpink. I'm speechless, this it beautiful. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink, it looks too neon. --Leafstrike-- 01:05, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure whether it'd be a pale tortie or just a pale solid color, as it's only mentioned pale. But whichever it is, she'd get an alt of some kind. Lighten the gray a tad. Lovely job~ Paleggy Ship it 01:42, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erm... that other image is just a tortie and white, otherwise known as a pale tortie... saturated blue as a photograph (as in the entire photo is saturated blue, it has gray fur, not blue)... and Tawnypelt already has a tortie and white alt... And maybe the passage in the book was describing her lighter patches of brown fur? I'm sorry, the image is lovely, but she already has an alt for this. I believe it should be declined, unless someone can convince me otherwise. --Shelly For a limited time only 01:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

In any case, we don't have a cite for Tawnypelt being a dark tortie. And she's been described and depicted as pale enough times that I'm lobbying to change her to a tortie and white. Shelly For a limited time only 02:03, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

The dark tortie picture you showed looks kinda like a brindled tortoiseshell to me :/ just throwing that out there... Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:16, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Scratch that. Can you define the shading a little more? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:18, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading. Silverhmm 23:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Just beautiful. Maybe blur the earpink not where you smudge the pelt up but by the sides. This is so awesome, I nearly died of awesomeness. X3 MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 03:16, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok I'm not sure what's gonna happen with this but until it's declined I'm gonna keep working on this. And yeah the picture was of a brindled tortoiseshell, it still gives a color example lol Iveh Yo! 05:31, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possilby blur/blend the patches into the pelt a lot? [1] the patches are very blurred and blended, and to look realistic, wouldn't this need to be too? Sincerely: ChanCharm 05:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

They're fine. Paleggy Ship it 07:42, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

This hasn't been commented on in two days x.x I think that pale should be added to her description and that this should be her main image o3o  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:08 Wed May 9

Yeah since we agreed her images should be redone this should be added to her page, unless you guys want me to reserve it and put it on the tweak page, which I see no point in doing. Sorry just checking up on my images Iveh Yo! 02:15, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Mounty. This should be her main image, and since Ivy's already done such a wonderful job, I say it should just be moved over to the tweak page. cloud final heaven 02:19,5/10/2012

I agree, though I'm not in PCA. This charart is beautiful, and with a few minor color adjustments it'd be perfect. Shelly For a limited time only 03:27, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to get killed for this... but.. there really is //nothing// wrong with this image. I think it's perfect, so I'm going to CBA it, then we'll replace her main image with this one. cloud final heaven 03:02,5/12/2012

Approved, and switching this with her main one. cloud final heaven 07:43,5/13/2012

Antpelt (Ro) ~ Approved

Antpelt.rogueSince we are redoing the Dark Forest cats as rogues, I chose Antpelt. Any comments for improvements? Berry got it memorized? 11:04, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

sharpen the scars and thin them out a little bit --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 12:59, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 14:09, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yay! Antpelt is awesome x3 Blur the tail shading and define the scars. Mistypebble 21:36, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 10:03, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading, and I think the sideways scars should extend down the back more. Skt ANZAC day 10:06, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Did what Trolly told me to do. XD BerryGradients, gradients... 11:07, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

He needs more horizontal scars. oblivionAudience? 01:52, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 13:25, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 21:07, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Lightened shading BerryGradients, gradients... 08:53, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:42, 28, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded Defined the shading. BerryGradients, gradients... 05:15, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly/haunch shading. Mistypebble 17:59, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the belly/hunch shading BerryGradients, gradients... 08:24, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I'm actually going to CBA this one. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 04:59, 30, 04, 2012

Sorry but the two patches of scars are too close and they need blurred some. Iveh Yo! 00:39, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 06:55, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink if any. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:06, 02, 05, 2012

Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 11:04, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

What happened to his black ear? oblivionAudience? 11:14, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

lighten the shading on his paws, it looks like he has darker paws owo --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 12:42, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a black ear, define the nose color and desatuare and define the earpink. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar, please don't repeat things that have already been said. Blur the shading. Mistypebble 19:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bluestar, I am keeping the earpink because it came from his Warrior image. BerryGradients, gradients... 07:03, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink from his warrior isn't as neon. Change it, please. cloud final heaven 08:13,5/4/2012

Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 09:23, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:57, 04, 05, 2012

Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 06:24, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

He still needs more scars, and the ones coming down should be longer. oblivionAudience? 16:12, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his flank and haunch. --Jack never let go, loonie ❤ 17:07, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Grr...I swear the blur tool hates me BerryGradients, gradients... 08:12, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading Pouncey! 00:33, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploased BerryGradients, gradients... 06:49, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Uploased XDDD Define the flank-ish scars. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:53, 08, 05, 2012

Re-iploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 12:13, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Add two more chest scars. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:02, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

He already has three chest scars. The position of the blank makes them a little less visible than the rest. BerryGradients, gradients... 12:21, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

The one going across his arm doesn't make much sense... You should remove it. oblivionAudience? 18:55, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 09:16, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

The changes, they aren't showing e3e. be here :3 BerryGradients, gradients... 10:49, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

That link is broken. But if you haven't already fixed it, there's a whole lot of waste around his chest area. oblivionAudience? 22:08, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 07:51, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg furtherest from us, if there's supposed to be shading. XP Skt Like a baws 22:06, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded If changes aren't showing, they're here: [2] BerryGradients, gradients... 00:58, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:21, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Mistypebble 19:58, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ Approved

Petalnose.warrior.altAs in After the Flood. Comments? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:51, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:52, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it too. oblivionAudience? 21:52, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink and make it more triangular. Pouncey! 22:25, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge/blur where the white meats the gray a tiny bit. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:31, 06, 05, 2012

Darken the shading. cloud final heaven 18:42,5/6/2012

Still working on this? oblivionAudience? 18:54, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah sorry I'll reupload asap. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Finally :) WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:24, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular and define it, and define the tail shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:58, 10, 05, 2012

Define all the shading --jack never let go, loonie ❤ 00:22, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Unsmudge the white markings so it looks more like her image in the manga Pouncey! 00:59, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:39, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. Dazzy 21:56, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the earpink just a tad? It looks too pinkish >3< Mistypebble 01:40, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 14:41, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:27, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot. Paleggy Ship it 06:39, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white just a tad to make it look less hard-edged. Dazzy 12:50, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:04, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

I'mma Re-CBA. <3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:23, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 00:23,5/17/2012

Dodge (R) ~ Approved

Dodge.rogue owo I made him a marbled tabby 8D Comments?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:05 Thu May 17

Bleh changes are here  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:06 Thu May 17

Could you maybe put more of a striped pattern on his tail? The diamonds look neat and all, but they don't really match the rest of him. Asdfghjkl Your tabbies. <3 Breezewhisker 04:10, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded YESH!! *celebrates* Thank you for say that 8D I went off of a picture and thought they looked weird but I went with it anyway XD *hugs* Thank you so much <3333 Changes are here  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:17 Thu May 17

...this is really good. (preference) Maybe make the nose gray? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:35, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think the nose is fine. cloud final heaven 21:35,5/17/2012

Yup, brown cats don't often, if ever, have gray noses. Could you blur/smudge the stripes that go over onto the pale parts of the legs? Paleggy Ship it 23:30, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Here~  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:38 Thu May 17

CBA? <3  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:15, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 22:27,5/20/2012

Tangle (Ro) ~ Approved

Tangle.rogue Meh. Not really liking that ragged fur. .-. View the changes here if they're not showing already.. cloud final heaven 01:22,5/17/2012

Maybe lighten the shading just a little bit. Nice job, Cloudeh :3 Berry got it memorized? 06:07, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. [3] cloud final heaven 06:14,5/17/2012

Define the shading. I can't really tell where it ends and the highlights (sorry) begin. oblivionAudience? 02:20, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 02:41,5/18/2012

Tis is awesome. 8D CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:15, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 22:27,5/20/2012

One-eye (Alt.W) ~ Approved

One-eye.warrior.altSeeing as it was said that she had lost the eye...:S Comments? Skt Like a baws 00:52, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Is this the male blank, or the female blank? It's kindda hard hard to tell. Maple♥legsMischief brewing 01:05, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. LOLwhoops. Skt Like a baws 01:09, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give more depth to the eye-hole...(?) XD Pouncey! 02:26, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Lol, eye-hole..Skt Like a baws 03:21, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading/base pelt color to match the other images. :3 Looks nice ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:47, 18, 05, 2012

Re-uploaded. :3 Skt Like a baws 07:08, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh I think I used the male blank again xD I'll fix it as soon ss I can. Skt Like a baws 02:01, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's just the changes. --Leafstrike-- 02:21, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Nah, I actually forgot the eyelash. xD Skt Like a baws 03:49, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Epicness. CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:14, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 22:27,5/20/2012

Plumwillow (Alt. W) ~ Approved

Plumwillow.warrior.alt I made her long-haired because she was shown has having such in the manga. I'd rather not change the base pelt color, but, I will if you want me to. Here be changes. cloud final heaven 22:03,5/16/2012

Just make the earpink... pinker <3 oblivionAudience? 22:05, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. [4] cloud final heaven 22:11,5/16/2012

Purdy 83 Can you define the shading just a tad? Mistypebble 00:53, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's defined enough, honestly. cloud final heaven 00:54,5/17/2012

Can you blur it a bit? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:29, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. [5] cloud final heaven 02:08,5/17/2012

Can ya define the tail shading? Skt Like a baws 06:06, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. [6] cloud final heaven 06:15,5/17/2012

Okay...could you blur the tail shading some more? Dazzy 07:43, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. [7] cloud final heaven 19:38,5/17/2012

Define the rump shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:19, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 23:21,5/19/2012

C to the B to the A? Paleggy Ship it 15:40, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 17:40,5/21/2012

Bluestar (Alt.W) ~ Approved

Bluestar.warrior.altTaking over for Stormboot. Not sure if changes are showing so you can find them here. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:13, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lets go CBA on this, since it's been sitting here for days without comments. Well done, Rowan. cloud final heaven 22:24,5/20/2012

Approved. Skt Like a baws 22:36, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Alt W) - Approved

Boulder.warrior.alt

Boulder was shown as a solid light gray tom on pg. 76 of The Rise of Scourge. Comments for improvement? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 13:38, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink and enlarge the earpink as well. Also rename this RowanOnly One Can Judge... 13:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploded Also, why don't you rename it. I don't know how. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 13:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Because she's not an admin. It's not that difficult. Go into whatever program you use, choose "Save AS", and name it "Boulder.warrior.alt.png" and when you upload it to the Wiki, it will be named that. Iveh Yo! 13:50, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded (Sort of) just renamed the file with a new image. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 13:56, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 14:54, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smooth it out so it's not so blotchy. oblivionAudience? 18:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes might not be showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink more. Silverhmm 20:21, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:21, 21, 04, 2012

Also blur the earpink. Mistypebble 20:55, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. It might be just me, but it looks like they're rectangle-y. Spark Love me some chocolate~! ♥ 22:02, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I really hate blurring. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:29, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:23, 23, 04, 2012 20:23, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading? c: --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 22:53, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still really hate blurring. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

You may not like blurring, but blur the shading more. :3 MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 00:33, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:36, 25, 04, 2012</big>

Reuploaded I can't blur the shading or highlights anymore. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:12, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks a little blotchy. Blur it more if you can, or redo it. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:46, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a little as well. Dazzy 07:46, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:19, 26, 04, 2012

Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:20, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 21:06, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it bigger.--ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 20:41, April 27, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the shading, its really hard to see. Sunnyfrost 23:58, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:55, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Center, enlarge and make the earpink more triangular. Define the haunch highlight, and there is some waste between the legs. Mistypebble 19:24, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, make it more triangular, and make it more pink instead of dark purple. Sunnyfrost 21:51, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the face "highlight" RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the highlights. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:08, 02, 05, 2012

And blur the earpink's edges. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:12, 02, 05, 2012

Center the earpink a bit more too. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:48, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the haunch and stomach highlights. cloud final heaven 05:16,5/3/2012

Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 14:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Again. Forgot to center earpink and the head highlight seemed too light. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:08, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and define it. cloud final heaven 17:58,5/3/2012

What I mean is make the shading easier to see, like by darkening it, but blur the edges of it so it's not so blotchy. cloud final heaven 17:59,5/3/2012

Hmm, Just a suggestion, but how I make shading easier, I make a new layer, I use paintbrush or pencil, I draw the shading in pure white and full opacity and then blur it, and then set the layers opacity to whatever level looks best, and it makes it easier to work with. --RavenBeeeeeees 23:19, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 13:09, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't want to seem rude or anything, but this has been up for two weeks? Shouldn't this be declined? Silverhmm 19:54, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Silver I think that's only for tweaks..I think original art on the approval page gets a month..I think. And make the highlights bigger, and less blotchy. I suggest the shading placement on the tutorial. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:42, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, original art gets a month. --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 00:46, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

I read it wrong, so I tried to edit it back to me not even posting that at all but it didn't so through. Can you possibly move the earpink so it doesn't look sideways? Silverhmm 13:10, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:16, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:46, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bigger. BerryGradients, gradients... 05:52, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the shading a little bit too. Silverhmm 22:53, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading a tad --jack never let go, loonie ❤

23:01, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:34, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons. Pouncey! 00:30, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink, it looks too sharp-edged.--SpotzGraystripe FTW!!! 06:01, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:21, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little more. Silverhmm 20:11, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the face shading and blur the rest of the shading to make it less blotchy. Pouncey! 00:21, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangularShoonderpThis band saved my life... 11:37, May 12, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Make the earpink smaller. Dazzy 22:04, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? oblivionAudience? 22:06, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a week since the last upload. If no one minds, I'd like to take this. oblivionAudience? 00:30, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes here. oblivionAudience? 01:00, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the mottled effect a tad~ Dazzy 05:49, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 19:02, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or does the whole charart seem a little bit blurry? Berry got it memorized? 06:06, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look blurry to me. Maybe it's showing you a distorted old version. Skt Like a baws 06:08, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the furriness a bit~ :3 Pouncey! 19:35, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Changes probably aren't showing (still... Really, Wikia?). Look here. oblivionAudience? 02:19, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the furriness a bit to make it seem.... softer. And blur the front leg shading. Paleggy Ship it 07:36, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

The furriness is fine. Half Moon's is worse. Anyways, blur teh shading. cloud final heaven 21:45,5/18/2012

Re-uploaded. Three days later~ oblivionAudience? 01:57, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? xD cloud final heaven 08:00,5/21/2012

None; approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 17:49, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt. A 2) ~ Approved

Berrynose.apprentice.alt2Please fix the title if I got it wrong c: . Berrynose, for the times he was said to have a tail as an apprentice. Comments? BerryGradients, gradients... 08:13, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and maybe add more depth to it. Great job, Berry~ Dazzy 08:40, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The changes are here: [8] if they're not showing :3 BerryGradients, gradients... 09:37, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad more, especially on the haunch and front leg. C: Skt Like a baws 12:40, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and add/define the nosepink as well. :3 Dazzy 12:49, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The changes are here: [9] o3o Berry♫Your presence still lingers here...♫ 13:14, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Change the nose to match his apprentice. oblivionAudience? 19:17, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [10] o3o Berry♫Your presence still lingers here...♫ 10:00, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the front haunch (is that right? o.o) "highlight" a little bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 11:21, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [11] o3o Berry got it memorized?

If you want perhaps make the shading more pinkish? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:39, 16, 05, 2012

I'd prefer not to DJ, sorry. Thanks for the suggestion, though :3 Berry got it memorized? 06:04, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Mmm... CBA? :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:32, 17, 05, 2012

I'm sorry but I have to agree with DJ. It seems kinda grey-ish now, and it'd be better if you tinted the shading. Paleggy Ship it 07:34, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [12] o3o Berry got it memorized? 07:10, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the image. Dazzy 21:43, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

I don't see waste around the image... I only see one little pixel of waste by the tail... Correct me if I'm wrong. ___Leafy 22:15, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [13] o3o Berry got it memorized? 03:32, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. I still see waste--it's basically a line of waste clinging near the lineart. Dazzy 15:14, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm... I don't see any waste. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:20, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

There isn't any waste... But define the shading on the front paw furthest from us.~ Pouncey! 02:19, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

The waste is there--on the linked file. Dazzy 05:54, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

The ear farthest from us seems to be a different color...although I'm not sure if it's just my computer. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 06:02, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [14] o3o And, Nightflower, the only reason the earpink would look a different colour on the ear furthest from us is because the close one has the pelt smudged up into it. c: Berry got it memorized? 07:57, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Mistypebble 21:24, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [15] o3o Berry got it memorized? 10:24, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Skt Like a baws 22:27, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Mistypebble 23:27, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Alt.Ro) - Approved

Hawkfrost.rogue.altWell, I made him, comments? LeafyAbsolute maniac,13:18,May 20,2012 (UTC)

I think this is purty =3 Blur the ear-pink a wittle bit. ...but I don't think you have to. ___Leafy 14:44, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

I think he should have scars in his muzzle..-not sure- Skt Like a baws 14:54, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yea, he should have the scars. Blur the shading a bit. Dazzy 05:52, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading some, also? Breezewhisker 04:45, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,15:08,May 22,2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:29, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Condense the scars a bit so that they're all down on the muzzle. If he really had scars like that he'd have lost an eye. x3 Dazzy 22:48, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,10:04,May 23,2012 (UTC)

CBA? cloud final heaven 23:39,5/24/2012

Approved. Skt Like a baws 23:49, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Onestar (Alt. L) ~ Approved

Onestar.leader.alt M'kay, so, I was told to remake the image since I lost the last file. I also like this image better than my previous work. The project agreed to restore the alt, so comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:08, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the nose pink or gray? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:01, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Pink. oblivionAudience? 22:11, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Right, pink. And perhaps smudge the pelt up into the left ear a little more so it matches the smudging on the right ear. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:22, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the neck shading a little and lighten the back shading. This is lovely <33. Silverhmm 23:21, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Wah! So lovely, Stoney ^.^ Blur the haunch shading just a tad. Mistypebble 21:23, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Is his nose filled in? o3o Skt Like a baws 22:34, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

This alt is based off of the one in Cats of the Clans, right? Could you adjust the brown color since that picture has a more saturated red brown color? Breezewhisker 04:48, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Stoney? o3o ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:27, 24, 05, 2012

Reuploaded. I always forget the nosepink. xD  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:25, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Kill the waste all around his left hindpaw and that single speck of waste high about his tail Pouncey! 23:34, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:37, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I think he looks perfect! CBA? oblivionAudience? 23:38, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Skt Like a baws 23:53, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (A alt) ~ Approved

Plumwillow.apprentice.altPlumwillow, in the SkyClan'd Destiny manga, where she was described as having a tabby maring on her head and on her legs. Comments? Berry got it memorized? 08:58, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

I re-uploaded it, because I thought the base pelt was to dark. Le changes be here: [16] o3o Berry got it memorized? 09:20, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading some more. Lovely, Berry~ Dazzy 09:28, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Berry got it memorized? 09:58, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Would this qualify for an alt? Mistypebble 20:29, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Rainwhisker has one, so I believe so. Skt Like a baws 21:27, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch stripes some. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:33, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail and haunch shading some. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:57, 26, 05, 2012

I would say define all the shading. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    02:08, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Berry got it memorized? 02:40, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit, and I think there's waste by the whiskers, but it may just be my computer. This looks nice~ <3___Leafy 23:38, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Berry got it memorized? 02:43, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Although I'm unsure because I don't have the book, if she was described with stripes on her legs wouldn't she need stripes on all her legs? —Preceding unsigned comment added by ChanCharm (talkcontribs)

No, I looked at the book just then, and she only has then on her back legs. Berry got it memorized? 04:05, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? cloud final heaven 05:23,5/29/2012

Approved. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:54, 30, 05, 2012

Redwillow (Alt.Ro) ~ Approved

Redwillow.rogue.altI doubt this will get through, but I might as well try. Apparently he was described as dappled ginger in TLh...so do with it what you will. Skt Like a baws 01:48, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just the tiniest bit. <33 Mistypebble 02:32, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. :3 Skt Like a baws 02:42, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Unless this is just the shading/colouring, there is a lighter spot near the tip of the tail. Try to make it blend/travel into the shading on both ends. Pretty. ChanCharm 03:49, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I decided to add a stripe there~ Skt Like a baws 04:15, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Round off the shading on the shoulder. This is very nice. ^^ Breezewhisker 04:30, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks. XP Skt Like a baws 04:44, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

You know what? CBA!  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:46 Tue May 29

And approved. :) ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:54, 30, 05, 2012

Approved~ Skt Like a baws 22:46, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Harespring (Alt. A) ~ Approved

Harespring.apprentice.alt He was described as a light brown tom in We Need to Talk. This isn't a partial, since it goes against his normal brown and white description, and characters have gotten alts for less. cloud final heaven 20:41,5/31/2012

Blur the shading some. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:26, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

If I blur it, you're not going to be able to see it. I think it's fine. cloud final heaven 21:31,5/31/2012

No, don't blur it just maybe lighten the shading in his rump a tad. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 12:57, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

No, it's fine. But I'm sorry, I have to agree with blurring the shading a bit.... at least on the haunch. Paleggy Ship it 14:05, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 15:04,6/1/2012

Blur that haunch shading a smidge and define the tail shading a tad. Skt Like a baws 07:17, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh. I also tweaked the color a bit... still looks a little iffy though.. cloud final heaven 07:26,6/2/2012

CBA? Paleggy Ship it 20:09, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 20:19,6/5/2012

Runningnose (Alt. MC) - Approved

Runningnose.mc.alt Tried a new shading technique for him <3 oblivionAudience? 02:38, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Purdy =3 Define the shading a tad? Mistypebble 02:53, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 03:06, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

To be honest, the patches look...well...not blotchy. I don't really know how to explain it. I think that maybe if you used a harder-edged smudge tool and got a few points to each patch to match the lay of the fur, it would make it look more realistic. Iveh Yo! 03:40, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry... I don't quite know what you're asking of me. oblivionAudience? 16:02, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think she's saying that the patches don't look quite realistic, to take the hard-edge tool, and and smudge the pathces a bit. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:10, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the areas where the patches join the other patches a tiny bit? Otherwise I honestly think they look fine. --RavenBeeeeeees 08:35, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 01:09, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, so purty. <3 CBA? :) (Dunno anything about patches >.<) ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:53, 04, 06, 2012

Approved. 8D Skt Like a baws 23:23, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Toadstep (Alt. Ki) - Approved

Toadstep.kit.alt Finally an original image! *dances* If Graystripe gets a black one, then Toadstep gets a gray. Comments? Paleggy Ship it 00:34, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink and eye color? Cute! =3 Mistypebble 00:36, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Eye color's from the main image, not changing it. Paleggy Ship it 00:54, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the legs. Skt Like a baws 13:03, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Paleh, you still working on this? cloud final heaven 04:34,6/4/2012

I am. See my comment on barley for why it's taking so long. I'll reupload as soon as I get a chance. Sorry D: Paleggy Ship it 20:08, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Huzzah, caught my internet when it's working for a minute! Paleggy Ship it 19:37, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? cloud final heaven 19:46,6/5/2012

Approved. Mistypebble 22:12, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (Alt. Ro) - Approved

Thistleclaw.rogue.alt Bluestar seems to have forgotten about this. Don't ask me to change the colours; I have the .xcf for his alt. warrior, so they're exactly the same. oblivionAudience? 23:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

I say lets go CBA 8D ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:40, 09, 06, 2012

24 Hours ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:49, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Talon (Ki) - Approved

Talon.kit Um, trying to stuff patterns from a large rogue charart on a small kit blank is not fun. And shading on kits is not fun, either. But I did it, didn't I? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    00:51, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes not showing. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    00:52, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

-hopes this is the right one- I don't think he needs mud, since kits aren't allowed to leave the cave till they're to-bes at 8 moons. Also, he needs the scar. C: Skt Spoilers... 00:54, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. He doesn't need the mud. ^^; cloud final heaven 00:57,6/9/2012

Which ones are you looking at? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    00:59, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Doesn't matter, the other one had mud and was missing a scar. So I removed it and added a scar. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:15, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

And changes aren't showing. >_> princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:16, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Kill the waste :3 RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:19, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

You're looking at the wrong one. This isn't mine. The changes aren't showing. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:23, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make him a tabby, remove the waste, and move the scar to the other eye. Dazzy 07:42, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Made a tabby, removed waste, moved scar. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    14:07, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a smidge and blur it, and possibly make him less green? Skt Spoilers... 23:07, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I lightened the shading and blurred him, but he is not green. I did lighten his highlights in case that's what you were thinking. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:28, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the opacity on the stripes just a tad. Perhaps then I'll CBA. 8D cloud final heaven 23:35,6/9/2012

Re-Uploaded: Lightened opacity on stripes. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:51, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you give the shading and/or highlights a bit more of a brownish-orangie tinge so the base isn't as grayish. :/ Nice job Icey. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:10, 10, 06, 2012

What do you wantm e to do? I didn't really understand - and I see no gray on the base. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    14:55, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...I don't see gray either. Plus, having a more "dull" brown or something doesn't mean that it's not brown. Actually, I'm gonna go ahead and CBA this.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    18:40, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Approved w00t Skt Spoilers... 22:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Alt.W) ~ Approved

Hawkfrost.warrior.alt-Found one like a baws- pity it had to be Hawkn00b.....comments? c: Skt Spoilers... 00:47, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading and the "highlights" edges a bit, imho? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:42, 15, 06, 2012</s>

Nevermind, wrong version. >.< Epic baws, this time define the shading a bit. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:45, 15, 06, 2012

Doesn't this need scars?--.Boos Dinosaurs on a Spaceship! 11:03, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Since the scars were revealed in Fading Echoes, I'd say no, as this was in Midnight. Skt Spoilers... 13:36, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the midriff shading a bit. o3o It's looking sort of pure black there. Dazzy 06:17, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I uh, redid it since I was a derp and forgot to make a xcf...-whistles- Skt Spoilers... 06:57, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. <steals and runs> cloud final heaven 18:35,6/16/2012

Blur the shoulder shading a bit. ouo Dazzy 10:01, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shoulder shading doesn't need to be blurred, in my opinion. Mistypebble 14:55, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Please, no more abut the shading. e.e Skt Spoilers... 07:17, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Tis lovely. <333 CBA? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:06, 19, 06, 2012

Approved. Skt Spoilers... 12:33, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow(Alt.W2) ~ Approved

Plumwillow.warrior.alt2In the SkyClan's Destiny manga, at the time of her warrior ceremony, she was depicted with stripes on her legs and head. Comments? -Ducksauce 02:16, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit larger and blur it. Also, possibly add more stripes to her haunch and/or make the stripes a bit longer so it matches a bit more compared to the apprentice. Atelda Superheroes 02:19, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink and blur the stripes just a tad. Mistypebble 02:42, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -Ducksauce 02:46, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing. -Ducksauce 02:47, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

They are for me. Make the ear-pink a tad smaller, it looks like it's about to fall out of the ear, and center it more. Maple♥poolMischief brewing Sirius lover 03:08, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the leg stripes a tad. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:17, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -Ducksauce 03:25, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I believe this is ment to be based off the alt apprentice, right? If so make the haunch stripes go up the haunch more and add more. Good work Ducksplash, I believe this would be 80% complete, imho. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:28, 17, 06, 2012

Blur the leg stripes a bit more, and I think (just my opinion) that they could be just a bit higher up on the haunch. Dazzy 09:45, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear pink ouo Berry got it memorized? 12:36, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:37, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Storm, the pelt isn't required to be smudged into the earpink on the warrior blanks. Dazzy 12:39, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:16, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded =) -Ducksauce 20:30, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink a little more~ Dazzy 21:08, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -Ducksauce 21:19, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I saw waste. =p -Ducksauce 21:57, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit. Nicely done, Duck. You've improved greatly since you last put up a charart. =) cloud final heaven 23:09,6/17/2012

Reuploaded Thanks, Cloudy! -Ducksauce 02:51, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Earpink didn't match the others. -Ducksauce 03:10, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:14, 18, 06, 2012

Reuploaded -Ducksauce 15:18, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: There was a lighter streak down her back. -Ducksauce 15:49, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her chest. --  jack never let go, diane  17:06, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -Ducksauce 17:31, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Mistypebble 20:12, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 21:05, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define it just a little more. cloud final heaven 21:08,6/20/2012

Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 21:13, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

You know what? Let's go CBA with this. I quite like this image. cloud final heaven 21:16,6/20/2012

Even out the shading on the back, haunch, and tail. Darken it by the belly, define it on the forelegs and tail. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:06, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes may not be showing. -Ducksauce 02:10, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. Dazzy 23:37, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:04, 23, 06, 2012

Reuploaded -Ducksauce 03:34, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's just a tiny line of waste going around the image, or it's just my computer.--.Boos Dinosaurs on a Spaceship! 12:17, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, I don't see any waste. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:38, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

There isn't any waste from what I can see. In fact, CBA? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:23, 24, 06, 2012

There is definitely waste. Just tilt your computer screen back. If you can't do that, put it on an image editing program and try to select the background. oblivionAudience? 01:39, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think I got it all. -Ducksauce 21:20, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, you did. I think it looks great :) CBA? Mistypebble 04:59, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but the stripes on the apprentice alt are much darker and if I remember right, they're supposed to match Iveh Yo! 15:04, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -Ducksauce 16:49, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Continuing CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:53, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 17:20,6/26/2012

Nightstar (E) ~ Approved

Nightstar.elder Wee, black cats. <3. Comments? cloud final heaven 06:24,6/27/2012

Blur dem highlights. oblivionAudience? 15:28, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink more triangular? It looks like a blurred circle right now. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 16:12, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No highlights on this one, Loonie. Eww, the shading bugs me. I hate the shading on elders. cloud final heaven 17:27,6/27/2012

Lighten the shading on the paws. --princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    19:38, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 19:45,6/27/2012

Can you blur the shading on the tail just a bit? :3 Mistypebble 21:28, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 00:21,6/28/2012

Define the "highlight" on the tail. If there isn't one, could you add one? <3 oblivionAudience? 00:23, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 04:46,6/28/2012

CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:59, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? I'm having issues seeing it very well. Paleggy Ship it 01:18, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 01:24,6/29/2012

Can you blur the haunch "highlight", it looks like there's a slightly darker ring inside the lighter part. Also enlarge the earpink some and center it more. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 05:23, 29, 06, 2012

Ear pink's fine, and I'll fix the highlight when I'm able to see my screen properly. x.x cloud final heaven 05:28,6/29/2012

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 16:07,6/29/2012

CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:58, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. cloud final heaven 02:31,7/3/2012

Mousefur (W Alt2) ~ Approved

Mousefur.warrior.alt2Thank you for reserving this for me, Cloudy :) Durn dentist's appointments and drama... Anywho, I tried something a little more subtle for the fur effect, whacha guys think? Iveh Yo! 23:46, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:48, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you shrink the earpink a bit and define it? Mistypebble 01:03, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, and make the earpink less hot pink. Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 01:22, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Before you define the shading, blur it a little. Breezewhisker 17:45, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:47, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:47, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Guys, I am so sorry about this. We lost cable after the storms and I have had no Internet access for several days. I promise to fix this tonight and work on my tweaks. Iveh Yo! 20:50, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Also reuploaded Iveh Yo! 20:59, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Ivy. <3 I feel that there's nothing to change on this image, so, CBA?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:16, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt, but can you make the earpink a bit more smaller? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 02:17, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Also lighten it up. It´s redder than all of the other chararts. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 19:48, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink color doesn't have to match exactly. Her normal color is dusky brown. This is light brown; of course they're going to be different. cloud final heaven 19:50,7/4/2012

Make the earpink more triangularShoonderpThis band saved my life... 00:38, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink anymore? -Ducksauce 22:27, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Once again, earpink is proving to be the bane of my existance XD Iveh Yo! 04:43, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit paler ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:57, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Does this work? Iveh Yo! 14:55, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. oblivionAudience? 16:54, July 7, 2012 (UTC

Also the ear-pink seems to fade into a paler color as it gets into the tip of the ear. Try to make it more consistant, please. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 21:46, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine. cloud final heaven 22:24,7/7/2012

Reuploaded defined tail shading. Anything else? Iveh Yo! 22:29, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Let's try this again. CBA? cloud final heaven 06:11,7/8/2012

I hate to interrupt a CBA, but the earpink is bothering me. It needs to be more triangular, it's coming out of the ear, and it needs to smudged into the pelt more. ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 22:36, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine. Continuing CBA. cloud final heaven 23:02,7/8/2012

Continuing from original CBA. Approved. cloud final heaven 15:38,7/9/2012

Sandstorm (Alt. Q) - Approved

Sandstorm.queen.alt Shown as solid in the manga. Yes the shading's tinted, no I don't intend to change is. Comments? Paleggy Ship it 10:57, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the tail shading a little bit? Loverlyy<33 Leggo 🏈 14:37, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define her face markings? Mistypebble 16:07, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading/highlight. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:20, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be in colour? Cause I know Tallpoppy is...or should that be grey too? Skt Omnia vincit amor ,

Their done to their own base pelt color, not gray ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Not on ginger cats. ginger cats can't be solid without stripes, we talked about this before. Hence Sharpclaw's alt. And hold on, about to reupload.... Paleggy Ship it 07:09, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Paleggy Ship it 07:14, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 10:08 Mon Jul 9

Approved.  MΘυητɣ   The Aftermath Is Secondary 07:00 Tue Jul 10

Wind (Ro) ~ Approved

Wind.rogue I got the colors straight from Leggy, who made the leader image, so please don't ask me to change them. ^^;; Comments? cloud final heaven 19:57,7/8/2012

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit and blur the earpink.ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 22:38, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudging the ear pink is optional, and I'd rather not do it. It's fine. cloud final heaven 23:02,7/8/2012

When I did images in the past, I was told I had to do it.ShoonderpThis band saved my life... 23:14, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, it's artist's choice. I don't know who told you that you have to do it, but you don't. cloud final heaven 23:16,7/8/2012

There's some waste by her head. (from highlights, it looks^) Leggo 🏈 00:44, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 01:09,7/9/2012

Blur where the shading meets the back/haunch highlights/lighter areas. And maybe expand the back highlight towards the neck a little. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:34, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 01:38,7/9/2012

Darken the back highlight. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    01:41, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 01:47,7/9/2012

I quite like this image. :3 CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 02:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but could you define the shoulder highlight (or non-highlight) spot? And define the nose pink.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:49, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't touch the nose because all the colors come //directly// from the file Leggy has. I asked her earlier for the colors. cloud final heaven 03:54,7/9/2012

Blur the shoulder-midriff and neck shading some. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:38, 09, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 06:54,7/9/2012

Continuing CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:27, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry there's this really dark spot on the shoulder that bugs me. Do you think you could blur/lighten that? Then I'll continue the CBA. Paleggy Ship it 00:37, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. cloud final heaven 00:43,7/10/2012

And CBA? 8D ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:49, 10, 07, 2012

Approved. cloud final heaven 06:55,7/11/2012

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