Berrynose (Alt. W) ~ Approved
Being mentioned with a long tail is far from being normal. This warrants an alt because tails do not grow back on cats, and Longtail got one for when his eyes got clawed out, and I do believe Berrynose has alts for this already...but I think they're when he was a kit. I know it's darker now; I'm lightening it and fixing that. —Jayce(00:13,5/7/2012)
Re-uploaded. Eww. —Jayce(00:18,5/7/2012)
Blur the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:22, May 7, 2012 (UTC)
It might be my computer, but I think there's waste near the torn ear. User:~Leafy~/Sig 00:25, May 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Paleh is a lifesaver. <3 —Jayce(00:45,5/7/2012)
Blur the shoulder shading~
00:45, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
If I blur it, you're not going to be able to see it. o.o —Jayce(00:53,5/8/2012)
*must have been looking at the old version* It's fine now ^^" Darken the shading a tiny bit? :3
02:41, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(02:44,5/8/2012)
Blur the midriff-ish shading. It seems to be darker than the rest of the shading. But that could easily just be my computer. :/ ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:48, 10, 05, 2012
I can't blur the shading. If I do, there's going to be no way you can see it. —Jayce(16:31,5/10/2012)
It looks fine. I'm going to call CBA on this one. oblivionAudience? 22:10, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(22:11,5/11/2012)
Sharpclaw (Alt D2) - Approved
File:Sharpclaw (SC).deputy.alt2.png Yay for furry solids! oblivionAudience? 01:48, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
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Can you lessen the furry effect so he looks less mottled? :3
02:44, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe make him long-haired? Just a suggestion. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 14:52, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Hi! Just an outsider suggestion. Since PCA can't have solid gingers, I suggest switching this to grey-scale. Shelly For a limited time only 15:43, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Bluestar, since his normal images are shortfurred, I think this should be like that as well. ^^; —Jayce(16:51,5/8/2012)
Ok, it was just a suggestion because he kinda looks long-haired in the manga. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:56, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
I agree with Shelly, because it never says he's ginger, but you don't have to. I also agree with Bluestar, but again you don't have to because it is never confirmed and it could just be perspective, I could try finding a picture of him so you can choose. :) WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:08, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Here. Scroll to page 17 for a good picture. Hope this helps. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:18, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Erm...he's not even mottled. He's a solid colored ginger cat drawn this way because the artist doesn't realize all gingers need stripes. It is a long-furred effect drawn on his back, nothing more. If he were meant to be mottled, he'd be mottled in all of his art anyway. Sorry but this should be declined and I should really stop commenting on stuff and leave like I'm supposed to Iveh Yo! 00:23, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
Well, no, not declined. He's cited in the books as a tabby, so being shown as a solid is grounds for an alt. But since he's ginger, this will have to be grey, or it'd have to be striped and then it'd be too close to his current charart. Shelly For a limited time only 00:42, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Can't remember if he was shown with a lighter or darker muzzle... oblivionAudience? 01:22, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink a liiitle bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:48, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
I disagree. Any more and it'd be too blurred. oblivionAudience? 21:59, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
I can haz CBA nao? —Jayce(22:13,5/10/2012)
Approved. —Jayce(22:14,5/11/2012)
Tawnypelt (W. Alt4) - Approved
Dang, she has about as many alts as Daisy :P Alright, I have my reasons for this. For one, I believe that she has been described as a dark tortoiseshell, and a dark tortoiseshell and a pale tortoiseshell are two totally different pelt colors. A pale, or dilute, tortie consists of blue, cream, and white hairs, while dark torties are black and dark ginger or even brown. Secondly, when I was reading, it said something along the lines of "he could see her pale fur crouching in the undergrowth", meaning that her fur must have been pretty light to stand out against the shadows. She gets this alt, in my eyes. I feel that I should probably either lighten the shading or the fur effect some and define some of the dapples on her cream patches, you guys agree? Iveh Yo! 00:36, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
Um... blur the earpink. I'm speechless, this it beautiful. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
Desaturate the earpink, it looks too neon. --Leafstrike-- 01:05, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
I'm not sure whether it'd be a pale tortie or just a pale solid color, as it's only mentioned pale. But whichever it is, she'd get an alt of some kind. Lighten the gray a tad. Lovely job~ Paleh Send help 01:42, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
Erm... that other image is just a tortie and white, otherwise known as a pale tortie... saturated blue as a photograph (as in the entire photo is saturated blue, it has gray fur, not blue)... and Tawnypelt already has a tortie and white alt... And maybe the passage in the book was describing her lighter patches of brown fur? I'm sorry, the image is lovely, but she already has an alt for this. I believe it should be declined, unless someone can convince me otherwise. --Shelly For a limited time only 01:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
In any case, we don't have a cite for Tawnypelt being a dark tortie. And she's been described and depicted as pale enough times that I'm lobbying to change her to a tortie and white. Shelly For a limited time only 02:03, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
The dark tortie picture you showed looks kinda like a brindled tortoiseshell to me :/ just throwing that out there... Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:16, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
Scratch that. Can you define the shading a little more? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:18, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the flank shading. Silverhmm 23:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
Just beautiful. Maybe blur the earpink not where you smudge the pelt up but by the sides. This is so awesome, I nearly died of awesomeness. X3 ☾Mossnose☽User blog:Mossnose33 03:16, May 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Ok I'm not sure what's gonna happen with this but until it's declined I'm gonna keep working on this. And yeah the picture was of a brindled tortoiseshell, it still gives a color example lol Iveh Yo! 05:31, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
Could you possilby blur/blend the patches into the pelt a lot? [1] the patches are very blurred and blended, and to look realistic, wouldn't this need to be too? Sincerely: ChanCharm 05:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
They're fine. Paleh Send help 07:42, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
This hasn't been commented on in two days x.x I think that pale should be added to her description and that this should be her main image o3o ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:08 Wed May 9
Yeah since we agreed her images should be redone this should be added to her page, unless you guys want me to reserve it and put it on the tweak page, which I see no point in doing. Sorry just checking up on my images Iveh Yo! 02:15, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
I agree with Mounty. This should be her main image, and since Ivy's already done such a wonderful job, I say it should just be moved over to the tweak page. —Jayce(02:19,5/10/2012)
I agree, though I'm not in PCA. This charart is beautiful, and with a few minor color adjustments it'd be perfect. Shelly For a limited time only 03:27, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
I'm going to get killed for this... but.. there really is //nothing// wrong with this image. I think it's perfect, so I'm going to CBA it, then we'll replace her main image with this one. —Jayce(03:02,5/12/2012)
Approved, and switching this with her main one. —Jayce(07:43,5/13/2012)
Antpelt (Ro) ~ Approved
File:Antpelt.rogue.pngSince we are redoing the Dark Forest cats as rogues, I chose Antpelt. Any comments for improvements? ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 11:04, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
sharpen the scars and thin them out a little bit --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 12:59, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 14:09, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
Yay! Antpelt is awesome x3 Blur the tail shading and define the scars. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:36, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 10:03, April 25, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the body shading, and I think the sideways scars should extend down the back more. Skt ANZAC day 10:06, April 25, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Did what Trolly told me to do. XD BerryGradients, gradients... 11:07, April 25, 2012 (UTC)
He needs more horizontal scars. oblivionAudience? 01:52, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 13:25, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a little. ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 21:07, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Lightened shading BerryGradients, gradients... 08:53, April 27, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading a bit. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:42, 28, 04, 2012
Re-uploaded Defined the shading. BerryGradients, gradients... 05:15, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the belly/haunch shading. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 17:59, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Blurred the belly/hunch shading BerryGradients, gradients... 08:24, April 29, 2012 (UTC)
I'm actually going to CBA this one. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 04:59, 30, 04, 2012
Sorry but the two patches of scars are too close and they need blurred some. Iveh Yo! 00:39, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 06:55, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink if any. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:06, 02, 05, 2012
Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 11:04, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
What happened to his black ear? oblivionAudience? 11:14, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
lighten the shading on his paws, it looks like he has darker paws owo --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 12:42, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
Add a black ear, define the nose color and desatuare and define the earpink. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
Bluestar, please don't repeat things that have already been said. Blur the shading. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 19:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Bluestar, I am keeping the earpink because it came from his Warrior image. BerryGradients, gradients... 07:03, May 4, 2012 (UTC)
The ear pink from his warrior isn't as neon. Change it, please. —Jayce(08:13,5/4/2012)
Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 09:23, May 4, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading some. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:57, 04, 05, 2012
Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 06:24, May 5, 2012 (UTC)
He still needs more scars, and the ones coming down should be longer. oblivionAudience? 16:12, May 5, 2012 (UTC)
blur the shading on his flank and haunch. --Jack never let go, loonie ❤ 17:07, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Grr...I swear the blur tool hates me BerryGradients, gradients... 08:12, May 7, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the belly shading
00:33, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploased BerryGradients, gradients... 06:49, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Uploased XDDD Define the flank-ish scars. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:53, 08, 05, 2012
Re-iploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 12:13, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Add two more chest scars. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:02, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
He already has three chest scars. The position of the blank makes them a little less visible than the rest. BerryGradients, gradients... 12:21, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
The one going across his arm doesn't make much sense... You should remove it. oblivionAudience? 18:55, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 09:16, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
The changes, they aren't showing e3e. be here :3 BerryGradients, gradients... 10:49, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
That link is broken. But if you haven't already fixed it, there's a whole lot of waste around his chest area. oblivionAudience? 22:08, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded BerryGradients, gradients... 07:51, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading on the back leg furtherest from us, if there's supposed to be shading. XP Skt Like a baws 22:06, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded If changes aren't showing, they're here: [2] BerryGradients, gradients... 00:58, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
Lovely! CBA? Stoneclaw 16:21, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 19:58, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ Approved
As in After the Flood. Comments? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:51, May 5, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:52, May 5, 2012 (UTC)
Blur it too. oblivionAudience? 21:52, May 5, 2012 (UTC)
Define the ear pink and make it more triangular.
22:25, May 5, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge/blur where the white meats the gray a tiny bit. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:31, 06, 05, 2012
Darken the shading. —Jayce(18:42,5/6/2012)
Still working on this? oblivionAudience? 18:54, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah sorry I'll reupload asap. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Finally :) WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:24, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink more triangular and define it, and define the tail shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:58, 10, 05, 2012
Define all the shading --jack never let go, loonie ❤ 00:22, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
Unsmudge the white markings so it looks more like her image in the manga
00:59, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:39, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading a bit. Dazzy 21:56, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
Can you tone down the earpink just a tad? It looks too pinkish >3< ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 01:40, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 14:41, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Stoneclaw 04:27, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading a lot. Paleh Send help 06:39, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the white just a tad to make it look less hard-edged. Dazzy 12:50, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:04, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
I'mma Re-CBA. <3 Stoneclaw 23:23, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(00:23,5/17/2012)
Dodge (R) ~ Approved
owo I made him a marbled tabby 8D Comments? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:05 Thu May 17
Bleh changes are here ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:06 Thu May 17
Could you maybe put more of a striped pattern on his tail? The diamonds look neat and all, but they don't really match the rest of him. Asdfghjkl Your tabbies. <3 Breezewhisker 04:10, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded YESH!! *celebrates* Thank you for say that 8D I went off of a picture and thought they looked weird but I went with it anyway XD *hugs* Thank you so much <3333 Changes are here ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:17 Thu May 17
...this is really good. (preference) Maybe make the nose gray? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:35, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
I think the nose is fine. —Jayce(21:35,5/17/2012)
Yup, brown cats don't often, if ever, have gray noses. Could you blur/smudge the stripes that go over onto the pale parts of the legs? Paleh Send help 23:30, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Here~ ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:38 Thu May 17
CBA? <3 Stoneclaw 21:15, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(22:27,5/20/2012)
Tangle (Ro) ~ Approved
Meh. Not really liking that ragged fur. .-. View the changes here if they're not showing already.. —Jayce(01:22,5/17/2012)
Maybe lighten the shading just a little bit. Nice job, Cloudeh :3 ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:07, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. [3] —Jayce(06:14,5/17/2012)
Define the shading. I can't really tell where it ends and the highlights (sorry) begin. oblivionAudience? 02:20, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(02:41,5/18/2012)
Tis is awesome. 8D CBA? Stoneclaw 21:15, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(22:27,5/20/2012)
One-eye (Alt.W) ~ Approved
Seeing as it was said that she had lost the eye...:S Comments? Skt Like a baws 00:52, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
Is this the male blank, or the female blank? It's kindda hard hard to tell. Maple♥legsMischief brewing 01:05, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. LOLwhoops. Skt Like a baws 01:09, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
Can you give more depth to the eye-hole...(?) XD
02:26, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Lol, eye-hole..Skt Like a baws 03:21, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten up the shading/base pelt color to match the other images. :3 Looks nice ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:47, 18, 05, 2012
Re-uploaded. :3 Skt Like a baws 07:08, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
Ugh I think I used the male blank again xD I'll fix it as soon ss I can. Skt Like a baws 02:01, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
I think it's just the changes. --Leafstrike-- 02:21, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Nah, I actually forgot the eyelash. xD Skt Like a baws 03:49, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Epicness. CBA? Stoneclaw 21:14, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(22:27,5/20/2012)
Plumwillow (Alt. W) ~ Approved
I made her long-haired because she was shown has having such in the manga. I'd rather not change the base pelt color, but, I will if you want me to. Here be changes. —Jayce(22:03,5/16/2012)
Just make the earpink... pinker <3 oblivionAudience? 22:05, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. [4] —Jayce(22:11,5/16/2012)
Purdy 83 Can you define the shading just a tad? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 00:53, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
I think it's defined enough, honestly. —Jayce(00:54,5/17/2012)
Can you blur it a bit? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:29, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. [5] —Jayce(02:08,5/17/2012)
Can ya define the tail shading? Skt Like a baws 06:06, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. [6] —Jayce(06:15,5/17/2012)
Okay...could you blur the tail shading some more? Dazzy 07:43, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. [7] —Jayce(19:38,5/17/2012)
Define the rump shading. Stoneclaw 21:19, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(23:21,5/19/2012)
C to the B to the A? Paleh Send help 15:40, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(17:40,5/21/2012)
Bluestar (Alt.W) ~ Approved
Taking over for Stormboot. Not sure if changes are showing so you can find them here. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:13, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Lets go CBA on this, since it's been sitting here for days without comments. Well done, Rowan. —Jayce(22:24,5/20/2012)
Approved. Skt Like a baws 22:36, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
Boulder (Alt W) - Approved
Boulder was shown as a solid light gray tom on pg. 76 of The Rise of Scourge. Comments for improvement? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 13:38, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading and earpink and enlarge the earpink as well. Also rename this RowanOnly One Can Judge... 13:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploded Also, why don't you rename it. I don't know how. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 13:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
Because she's not an admin. It's not that difficult. Go into whatever program you use, choose "Save AS", and name it "Boulder.warrior.alt.png" and when you upload it to the Wiki, it will be named that. Iveh Yo! 13:50, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded (Sort of) just renamed the file with a new image. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 13:56, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink and make it more triangular. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 14:54, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading and smooth it out so it's not so blotchy. oblivionAudience? 18:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded changes might not be showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
Enlarge the earpink more. Silverhmm 20:21, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
Blur and smooth out the shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:21, 21, 04, 2012
Also blur the earpink. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:55, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the highlights. It might be just me, but it looks like they're rectangle-y. Spark Love me some chocolate~! ♥ 22:02, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded I really hate blurring. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:29, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink more triangular. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:23, 23, 04, 2012 20:23, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
blur the shading? c: --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 22:53, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded I still really hate blurring. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
You may not like blurring, but blur the shading more. :3 ☾Mossnose☽User blog:Mossnose33 00:33, April 25, 2012 (UTC)
And blur the earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:36, 25, 04, 2012
Reuploaded I can't blur the shading or highlights anymore. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:12, April 25, 2012 (UTC)
The shading still looks a little blotchy. Blur it more if you can, or redo it. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:46, April 25, 2012 (UTC)
Enlarge the earpink a little as well. Dazzy 07:46, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
And blur the earpink more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:19, 26, 04, 2012
Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:20, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 21:06, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink and make it bigger.--—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 20:41, April 27, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Define the shading, its really hard to see. ❄ Sunnyfrost ❄ 23:58, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Changes not showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:55, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
Center, enlarge and make the earpink more triangular. Define the haunch highlight, and there is some waste between the legs. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 19:24, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink, make it more triangular, and make it more pink instead of dark purple. ❄ Sunnyfrost ❄ 21:51, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
Define the face "highlight" RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
Blend the highlights. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:08, 02, 05, 2012
- And blur the earpink's edges. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:12, 02, 05, 2012
Center the earpink a bit more too. --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:48, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
Dull the haunch and stomach highlights. —Jayce(05:16,5/3/2012)
Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 14:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Again. Forgot to center earpink and the head highlight seemed too light. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:08, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading, and define it. —Jayce(17:58,5/3/2012)
- What I mean is make the shading easier to see, like by darkening it, but blur the edges of it so it's not so blotchy. —Jayce(17:59,5/3/2012)
Hmm, Just a suggestion, but how I make shading easier, I make a new layer, I use paintbrush or pencil, I draw the shading in pure white and full opacity and then blur it, and then set the layers opacity to whatever level looks best, and it makes it easier to work with. --RavenBeeeeeees 23:19, May 3, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink. --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 13:09, May 4, 2012 (UTC)
I don't want to seem rude or anything, but this has been up for two weeks? Shouldn't this be declined? Silverhmm 19:54, May 4, 2012 (UTC)
Silver I think that's only for tweaks..I think original art on the approval page gets a month..I think. And make the highlights bigger, and less blotchy. I suggest the shading placement on the tutorial. --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:42, May 5, 2012 (UTC)
Yep, original art gets a month. --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 00:46, May 5, 2012 (UTC)
I read it wrong, so I tried to edit it back to me not even posting that at all but it didn't so through. Can you possibly move the earpink so it doesn't look sideways? Silverhmm 13:10, May 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:16, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:46, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
Make the ear pink a little bigger. BerryGradients, gradients... 05:52, May 7, 2012 (UTC)
Thicken the shading a little bit too. Silverhmm 22:53, May 7, 2012 (UTC)
darken the shading a tad --jack never let go, loonie ❤
23:01, May 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:34, May 7, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading tons.
00:30, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
blur the earpink, it looks too sharp-edged.--SpotzGraystripe FTW!!! 06:01, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:21, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink a little more. Silverhmm 20:11, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the face shading and blur the rest of the shading to make it less blotchy.
00:21, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink triangular—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 11:37, May 12, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
Make the earpink smaller. Dazzy 22:04, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
Still working on this? oblivionAudience? 22:06, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
It's been a week since the last upload. If no one minds, I'd like to take this. oblivionAudience? 00:30, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Changes here. oblivionAudience? 01:00, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
Tone down the mottled effect a tad~ Dazzy 05:49, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 19:02, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
Is it just me or does the whole charart seem a little bit blurry? ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:06, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
It doesn't look blurry to me. Maybe it's showing you a distorted old version. Skt Like a baws 06:08, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Tone down the furriness a bit~ :3
19:35, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Changes probably aren't showing (still... Really, Wikia?). Look here. oblivionAudience? 02:19, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the furriness a bit to make it seem.... softer. And blur the front leg shading. Paleh Send help 07:36, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
The furriness is fine. Half Moon's is worse. Anyways, blur teh shading. —Jayce(21:45,5/18/2012)
Re-uploaded. Three days later~ oblivionAudience? 01:57, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? xD —Jayce(08:00,5/21/2012)
None; approved~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 17:49, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
Berrynose (Alt. A 2) ~ Approved
Please fix the title if I got it wrong c: . Berrynose, for the times he was said to have a tail as an apprentice. Comments?
BerryGradients, gradients... 08:13, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading and maybe add more depth to it. Great job, Berry~ Dazzy 08:40, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded The changes are here: [8] if they're not showing :3 BerryGradients, gradients... 09:37, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading a tad more, especially on the haunch and front leg. C: Skt Like a baws 12:40, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
Oh, and add/define the nosepink as well. :3 Dazzy 12:49, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded The changes are here: [9] o3o Berry♫Your presence still lingers here...♫ 13:14, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
Change the nose to match his apprentice. oblivionAudience? 19:17, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [10] o3o Berry♫Your presence still lingers here...♫ 10:00, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
Define the front haunch (is that right? o.o) "highlight" a little bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 11:21, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [11] o3o ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade!
If you want perhaps make the shading more pinkish? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:39, 16, 05, 2012
I'd prefer not to DJ, sorry. Thanks for the suggestion, though :3 ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:04, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Mmm... CBA? :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:32, 17, 05, 2012
I'm sorry but I have to agree with DJ. It seems kinda grey-ish now, and it'd be better if you tinted the shading. Paleh Send help 07:34, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [12] o3o ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 07:10, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
There's waste around the image. Dazzy 21:43, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
I don't see waste around the image... I only see one little pixel of waste by the tail... Correct me if I'm wrong. User:~Leafy~/Sig 22:15, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [13] o3o ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 03:32, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Nope. I still see waste--it's basically a line of waste clinging near the lineart. Dazzy 15:14, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Hmmm... I don't see any waste. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:20, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
There isn't any waste... But define the shading on the front paw furthest from us.~
02:19, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
The waste is there--on the linked file. Dazzy 05:54, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
The ear farthest from us seems to be a different color...although I'm not sure if it's just my computer. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion☣ 06:02, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [14] o3o And, Nightflower, the only reason the earpink would look a different colour on the ear furthest from us is because the close one has the pelt smudged up into it. c: ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 07:57, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:24, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Le changes be here: [15] o3o ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 10:24, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? Skt Like a baws 22:27, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 23:27, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
Hawkfrost (Alt.Ro) - Approved
Well, I made him, comments? Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,13:18,May 20,2012 (UTC)
I think this is purty =3 Blur the ear-pink a wittle bit. ...but I don't think you have to. User:~Leafy~/Sig 14:44, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
I think he should have scars in his muzzle..-not sure- Skt Like a baws 14:54, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
Yea, he should have the scars. Blur the shading a bit. Dazzy 05:52, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading some, also? Breezewhisker 04:45, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,15:08,May 22,2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:29, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
Condense the scars a bit so that they're all down on the muzzle. If he really had scars like that he'd have lost an eye. x3 Dazzy 22:48, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,10:04,May 23,2012 (UTC)
Approved. Skt Like a baws 23:49, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
Onestar (Alt. L) ~ Approved
M'kay, so, I was told to remake the image since I lost the last file. I also like this image better than my previous work. The project agreed to restore the alt, so comments? Stoneclaw 21:08, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe make the nose pink or gray? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:01, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Pink. oblivionAudience? 22:11, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Right, pink. And perhaps smudge the pelt up into the left ear a little more so it matches the smudging on the right ear. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:22, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe blur the neck shading a little and lighten the back shading. This is lovely <33. Silverhmm 23:21, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Wah! So lovely, Stoney ^.^ Blur the haunch shading just a tad. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:23, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
Is his nose filled in? o3o Skt Like a baws 22:34, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
This alt is based off of the one in Cats of the Clans, right? Could you adjust the brown color since that picture has a more saturated red brown color? Breezewhisker 04:48, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
Still working on this Stoney? o3o ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:27, 24, 05, 2012
Reuploaded. I always forget the nosepink. xD Stoneclaw 23:25, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
Kill the waste all around his left hindpaw and that single speck of waste high about his tail
23:34, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Stoneclaw 23:37, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
Well, I think he looks perfect! CBA? oblivionAudience? 23:38, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. Skt Like a baws 23:53, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
Plumwillow (A alt) ~ Approved
Plumwillow, in the SkyClan'd Destiny manga, where she was described as having a tabby maring on her head and on her legs. Comments? ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 08:58, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
I re-uploaded it, because I thought the base pelt was to dark. Le changes be here: [16] o3o ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 09:20, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
Define the tail shading some more. Lovely, Berry~ Dazzy 09:28, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 09:58, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
Would this qualify for an alt? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:29, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
Rainwhisker has one, so I believe so. Skt Like a baws 21:27, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the haunch stripes some. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:33, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
Define the tail and haunch shading some. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:57, 26, 05, 2012
I would say define all the shading. Appledash the light of honor 02:08, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 02:40, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading a little bit, and I think there's waste by the whiskers, but it may just be my computer. This looks nice~ <3User:~Leafy~/Sig 23:38, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 02:43, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
Although I'm unsure because I don't have the book, if she was described with stripes on her legs wouldn't she need stripes on all her legs? —Preceding unsigned comment added by ChanCharm (talk • contribs)
No, I looked at the book just then, and she only has then on her back legs. ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 04:05, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:54, 30, 05, 2012
Redwillow (Alt.Ro) ~ Approved
I doubt this will get through, but I might as well try. Apparently he was described as dappled ginger in TLh...so do with it what you will. Skt Like a baws 01:48, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the stripes just the tiniest bit. <33 ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 02:32, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. :3 Skt Like a baws 02:42, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
Unless this is just the shading/colouring, there is a lighter spot near the tip of the tail. Try to make it blend/travel into the shading on both ends. Pretty. ChanCharm 03:49, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I decided to add a stripe there~ Skt Like a baws 04:15, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
Round off the shading on the shoulder. This is very nice. ^^ Breezewhisker 04:30, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thanks. XP Skt Like a baws 04:44, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
You know what? CBA! ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:46 Tue May 29
And approved. :) ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:54, 30, 05, 2012
Approved~ Skt Like a baws 22:46, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
Harespring (Alt. A) ~ Approved
File:Harespring.apprentice.alt.png He was described as a light brown tom in We Need to Talk. This isn't a partial, since it goes against his normal brown and white description, and characters have gotten alts for less. —Jayce(20:41,5/31/2012)
Blur the shading some. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:26, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
If I blur it, you're not going to be able to see it. I think it's fine. —Jayce(21:31,5/31/2012)
No, don't blur it just maybe lighten the shading in his rump a tad. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 12:57, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
No, it's fine. But I'm sorry, I have to agree with blurring the shading a bit.... at least on the haunch. Paleh Send help 14:05, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(15:04,6/1/2012)
Blur that haunch shading a smidge and define the tail shading a tad. Skt Like a baws 07:17, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Eh. I also tweaked the color a bit... still looks a little iffy though.. —Jayce(07:26,6/2/2012)
CBA? Paleh Send help 20:09, June 4, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(20:19,6/5/2012)
Runningnose (Alt. MC) - Approved
Tried a new shading technique for him <3 oblivionAudience? 02:38, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
Purdy =3 Define the shading a tad? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 02:53, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 03:06, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
To be honest, the patches look...well...not blotchy. I don't really know how to explain it. I think that maybe if you used a harder-edged smudge tool and got a few points to each patch to match the lay of the fur, it would make it look more realistic. Iveh Yo! 03:40, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
I'm sorry... I don't quite know what you're asking of me. oblivionAudience? 16:02, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
I think she's saying that the patches don't look quite realistic, to take the hard-edge tool, and and smudge the pathces a bit. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:10, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe blur the areas where the patches join the other patches a tiny bit? Otherwise I honestly think they look fine. --RavenBeeeeeees 08:35, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 01:09, June 4, 2012 (UTC)
Oh, so purty. <3 CBA? :) (Dunno anything about patches >.<) ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:53, 04, 06, 2012
Approved. 8D Skt Like a baws 23:23, June 5, 2012 (UTC)
Toadstep (Alt. Ki) - Approved
Finally an original image! *dances* If Graystripe gets a black one, then Toadstep gets a gray. Comments?
Paleh
Send help 00:34, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define the earpink and eye color? Cute! =3 ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 00:36, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Eye color's from the main image, not changing it. Paleh Send help 00:54, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the legs. Skt Like a baws 13:03, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
Paleh, you still working on this? —Jayce(04:34,6/4/2012)
I am. See my comment on barley for why it's taking so long. I'll reupload as soon as I get a chance. Sorry D: Paleh Send help 20:08, June 4, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Huzzah, caught my internet when it's working for a minute! Paleh Send help 19:37, June 5, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 22:12, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
Thistleclaw (Alt. Ro) - Approved
Bluestar seems to have forgotten about this. Don't ask me to change the colours; I have the .xcf for his alt. warrior, so they're exactly the same. oblivionAudience? 23:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
I say lets go CBA 8D ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:40, 09, 06, 2012
24 Hours ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:49, June 10, 2012 (UTC)
Talon (Ki) - Approved
Um, trying to stuff patterns from a large rogue charart on a small kit blank is not fun. And shading on kits is not fun, either. But I did it, didn't I? Appledash the light of honor 00:51, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
Changes not showing. Appledash the light of honor 00:52, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
-hopes this is the right one- I don't think he needs mud, since kits aren't allowed to leave the cave till they're to-bes at 8 moons. Also, he needs the scar. C: Skt Spoilers... 00:54, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
Nope. He doesn't need the mud. ^^; —Jayce(00:57,6/9/2012)
Which ones are you looking at? Appledash the light of honor 00:59, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: Doesn't matter, the other one had mud and was missing a scar. So I removed it and added a scar. Appledash the light of honor 01:15, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
And changes aren't showing. >_> Appledash the light of honor 01:16, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
Kill the waste :3 RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:19, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
You're looking at the wrong one. This isn't mine. The changes aren't showing. Appledash the light of honor 01:23, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
Make him a tabby, remove the waste, and move the scar to the other eye. Dazzy 07:42, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: Made a tabby, removed waste, moved scar. Appledash the light of honor 14:07, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
Can you lighten the shading a smidge and blur it, and possibly make him less green? Skt Spoilers... 23:07, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: I lightened the shading and blurred him, but he is not green. I did lighten his highlights in case that's what you were thinking. Appledash the light of honor 23:28, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the opacity on the stripes just a tad. Perhaps then I'll CBA. 8D —Jayce(23:35,6/9/2012)
Re-Uploaded: Lightened opacity on stripes. Appledash the light of honor 23:51, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
Could you give the shading and/or highlights a bit more of a brownish-orangie tinge so the base isn't as grayish. :/ Nice job Icey. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:10, 10, 06, 2012
What do you wantm e to do? I didn't really understand - and I see no gray on the base. Appledash the light of honor 14:55, June 10, 2012 (UTC)
Hmm...I don't see gray either. Plus, having a more "dull" brown or something doesn't mean that it's not brown. Actually, I'm gonna go ahead and CBA this. Stoneclaw 18:40, June 10, 2012 (UTC)
Approved w00t Skt Spoilers... 22:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
Hawkfrost (Alt.W) ~ Approved
-Found one like a baws- pity it had to be Hawkn00b.....comments? c: Skt Spoilers... 00:47, June 15, 2012 (UTC)
Can you blur the shading and the "highlights" edges a bit, imho? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:42, 15, 06, 2012
Nevermind, wrong version. >.< Epic baws, this time define the shading a bit. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:45, 15, 06, 2012
Doesn't this need scars?--.Boos Dinosaurs on a Spaceship! 11:03, June 15, 2012 (UTC)
Since the scars were revealed in Fading Echoes, I'd say no, as this was in Midnight. Skt Spoilers... 13:36, June 15, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the midriff shading a bit. o3o It's looking sort of pure black there. Dazzy 06:17, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I uh, redid it since I was a derp and forgot to make a xcf...-whistles- Skt Spoilers... 06:57, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading a bit. <steals and runs> —Jayce(18:35,6/16/2012)
Blur the shoulder shading a bit. ouo Dazzy 10:01, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
I think the shoulder shading doesn't need to be blurred, in my opinion. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 14:55, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Please, no more abut the shading. e.e Skt Spoilers... 07:17, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
Tis lovely. <333 CBA? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:06, 19, 06, 2012
Approved. Skt Spoilers... 12:33, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
Plumwillow(Alt.W2) ~ Approved
In the SkyClan's Destiny manga, at the time of her warrior ceremony, she was depicted with stripes on her legs and head. Comments? -Ducksauce 02:16, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink a bit larger and blur it. Also, possibly add more stripes to her haunch and/or make the stripes a bit longer so it matches a bit more compared to the apprentice. Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:19, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Center the earpink and blur the stripes just a tad. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 02:42, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded -Ducksauce 02:46, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Changes aren't showing. -Ducksauce 02:47, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
They are for me. Make the ear-pink a tad smaller, it looks like it's about to fall out of the ear, and center it more. Maple♥poolMischief brewing Sirius lover 03:08, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the leg stripes a tad. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:17, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded -Ducksauce 03:25, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
I believe this is ment to be based off the alt apprentice, right? If so make the haunch stripes go up the haunch more and add more. Good work Ducksplash, I believe this would be 80% complete, imho. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:28, 17, 06, 2012
Blur the leg stripes a bit more, and I think (just my opinion) that they could be just a bit higher up on the haunch. Dazzy 09:45, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Center the ear pink ouo ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 12:36, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:37, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Storm, the pelt isn't required to be smudged into the earpink on the warrior blanks. Dazzy 12:39, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the chest shading a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:16, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded =) -Ducksauce 20:30, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Center the earpink a little more~ Dazzy 21:08, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded -Ducksauce 21:19, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded: I saw waste. =p -Ducksauce 21:57, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the stripes a bit. Nicely done, Duck. You've improved greatly since you last put up a charart. =) —Jayce(23:09,6/17/2012)
Reuploaded Thanks, Cloudy! -Ducksauce 02:51, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded: Earpink didn't match the others. -Ducksauce 03:10, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading a bit more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:14, 18, 06, 2012
Reuploaded -Ducksauce 15:18, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded: There was a lighter streak down her back. -Ducksauce 15:49, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
blur the shading on her chest. -- jack never let go, diane ❤ 17:06, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded -Ducksauce 17:31, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:12, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 21:05, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
Define it just a little more. —Jayce(21:08,6/20/2012)
Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 21:13, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
You know what? Let's go CBA with this. I quite like this image. —Jayce(21:16,6/20/2012)
Even out the shading on the back, haunch, and tail. Darken it by the belly, define it on the forelegs and tail. ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:06, June 21, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded: Changes may not be showing. -Ducksauce 02:10, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
There's waste all around the image. Dazzy 23:37, June 22, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a bit. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:04, 23, 06, 2012
Reuploaded -Ducksauce 03:34, June 23, 2012 (UTC)
There's just a tiny line of waste going around the image, or it's just my computer.--.Boos Dinosaurs on a Spaceship! 12:17, June 23, 2012 (UTC)
Hmm, I don't see any waste. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:38, June 23, 2012 (UTC)
There isn't any waste from what I can see. In fact, CBA? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:23, 24, 06, 2012
There is definitely waste. Just tilt your computer screen back. If you can't do that, put it on an image editing program and try to select the background. oblivionAudience? 01:39, June 24, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I think I got it all. -Ducksauce 21:20, June 24, 2012 (UTC)
Yep, you did. I think it looks great :) CBA? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 04:59, June 25, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry but the stripes on the apprentice alt are much darker and if I remember right, they're supposed to match Iveh Yo! 15:04, June 25, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded -Ducksauce 16:49, June 25, 2012 (UTC)
Continuing CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:53, June 25, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(17:20,6/26/2012)
Nightstar (E) ~ Approved
File:Nightstar.elder.png Wee, black cats. <3. Comments? —Jayce(06:24,6/27/2012)
Blur dem highlights. oblivionAudience? 15:28, June 27, 2012 (UTC)
Can you make the earpink more triangular? It looks like a blurred circle right now. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 16:12, June 27, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. No highlights on this one, Loonie. Eww, the shading bugs me. I hate the shading on elders. —Jayce(17:27,6/27/2012)
Lighten the shading on the paws. --Appledash the light of honor 19:38, June 27, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(19:45,6/27/2012)
Can you blur the shading on the tail just a bit? :3 ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:28, June 27, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(00:21,6/28/2012)
Define the "highlight" on the tail. If there isn't one, could you add one? <3 oblivionAudience? 00:23, June 28, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(04:46,6/28/2012)
CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:59, June 28, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading? I'm having issues seeing it very well. Paleh Send help 01:18, June 29, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(01:24,6/29/2012)
Can you blur the haunch "highlight", it looks like there's a slightly darker ring inside the lighter part. Also enlarge the earpink some and center it more. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 05:23, 29, 06, 2012
Ear pink's fine, and I'll fix the highlight when I'm able to see my screen properly. x.x —Jayce(05:28,6/29/2012)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(16:07,6/29/2012)
CBA? Stoneclaw 00:58, July 2, 2012 (UTC)
Approved. —Jayce(02:31,7/3/2012)
Mousefur (W Alt2) ~ Approved
Thank you for reserving this for me, Cloudy :) Durn dentist's appointments and drama... Anywho, I tried something a little more subtle for the fur effect, whacha guys think? Iveh Yo! 23:46, June 28, 2012 (UTC)
Darken/define the shading. Appledash the light of honor 23:48, June 28, 2012 (UTC)
Can you shrink the earpink a bit and define it? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 01:03, June 29, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading on the tail, and make the earpink less hot pink. Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 01:22, June 29, 2012 (UTC)
Before you define the shading, blur it a little. Breezewhisker 17:45, July 1, 2012 (UTC)
Can you blur the earpink? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:47, July 1, 2012 (UTC)
You still working on this? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:47, July 2, 2012 (UTC)
Guys, I am so sorry about this. We lost cable after the storms and I have had no Internet access for several days. I promise to fix this tonight and work on my tweaks. Iveh Yo! 20:50, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
Also reuploaded Iveh Yo! 20:59, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
Beautiful, Ivy. <3 I feel that there's nothing to change on this image, so, CBA? Stoneclaw 21:16, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry to interupt, but can you make the earpink a bit more smaller? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 02:17, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
Also lighten it up. It´s redder than all of the other chararts. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 19:48, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
The ear pink color doesn't have to match exactly. Her normal color is dusky brown. This is light brown; of course they're going to be different. —Jayce(19:50,7/4/2012)
Make the earpink more triangular—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 00:38, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
Can you blur the earpink anymore? -Ducksauce 22:27, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Once again, earpink is proving to be the bane of my existance XD Iveh Yo! 04:43, July 6, 2012 (UTC)
Make the ear-pink a bit paler ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:57, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Does this work? Iveh Yo! 14:55, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
Define the tail shading. oblivionAudience? 16:54, July 7, 2012 (UTC
Also the ear-pink seems to fade into a paler color as it gets into the tip of the ear. Try to make it more consistant, please. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 21:46, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
The ear pink is fine. —Jayce(22:24,7/7/2012)
Reuploaded defined tail shading. Anything else? Iveh Yo! 22:29, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
Let's try this again. CBA? —Jayce(06:11,7/8/2012)
I hate to interrupt a CBA, but the earpink is bothering me. It needs to be more triangular, it's coming out of the ear, and it needs to smudged into the pelt more. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 22:36, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
The ear pink is fine. Continuing CBA. —Jayce(23:02,7/8/2012)
Continuing from original CBA. Approved. —Jayce(15:38,7/9/2012)
Sandstorm (Alt. Q) - Approved
Shown as solid in the manga. Yes the shading's tinted, no I don't intend to change is. Comments?
Paleh
Send help 10:57, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
Can you blur the tail shading a little bit? Loverlyy<33 Rainlegs 14:37, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define her face markings? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 16:07, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
Define the haunch shading/highlight. Appledash the light of honor 01:20, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Shouldn't this be in colour? Cause I know Tallpoppy is...or should that be grey too? Skt Omnia vincit amor ,
- Their done to their own base pelt color, not gray ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Not on ginger cats. ginger cats can't be solid without stripes, we talked about this before. Hence Sharpclaw's alt. And hold on, about to reupload.... Paleh Send help 07:09, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Paleh Send help 07:14, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
CBA? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 10:08 Mon Jul 9
Approved. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 07:00 Tue Jul 10
Wind (Ro) ~ Approved
File:Wind.rogue.png I got the colors straight from Leggy, who made the leader image, so please don't ask me to change them. ^^;; Comments? —Jayce(19:57,7/8/2012)
Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit and blur the earpink.—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 22:38, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
Smudging the ear pink is optional, and I'd rather not do it. It's fine. —Jayce(23:02,7/8/2012)
When I did images in the past, I was told I had to do it.—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 23:14, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
Well, it's artist's choice. I don't know who told you that you have to do it, but you don't. —Jayce(23:16,7/8/2012)
There's some waste by her head. (from highlights, it looks^) Rainlegs 00:44, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(01:09,7/9/2012)
Blur where the shading meets the back/haunch highlights/lighter areas. And maybe expand the back highlight towards the neck a little. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:34, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(01:38,7/9/2012)
Darken the back highlight. Appledash the light of honor 01:41, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(01:47,7/9/2012)
I quite like this image. :3 CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 02:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry, but could you define the shoulder highlight (or non-highlight) spot? And define the nose pink. Stoneclaw 03:49, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I didn't touch the nose because all the colors come //directly// from the file Leggy has. I asked her earlier for the colors. —Jayce(03:54,7/9/2012)
Blur the shoulder-midriff and neck shading some. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:38, 09, 07, 2012
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(06:54,7/9/2012)
Continuing CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:27, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry there's this really dark spot on the shoulder that bugs me. Do you think you could blur/lighten that? Then I'll continue the CBA. Paleh Send help 00:37, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(00:43,7/10/2012)
And CBA? 8D ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:49, 10, 07, 2012