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Fernshade (A) ~ Approved[]

Fernshade.apprentice Fernshade <33333 lolmadethisbeforethecoverwasreleasedbecauseIhavenolife Geex I love this pattern so much <333 Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:04, 12, 10, 2012

It looks a touch redder than her others; maybe make the redish-browns a bit more brown and make the differences between the shades a bit more dramatic if that makes any sense at all ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:01, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and define the belly and tail shading. This is gorgeous. <3 -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 04:04, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D Changed the colours and made the shading less brown. I can't blur the belly area (or at least the one I think you're talking about) cuz the white chest ends at kinda an inconvenient spot. And made the white underside brown too *missed that before* x.x  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  04:33, 12, 10, 2012

Mounty, this is beautiful, and absolutely stunning. Comments before approval? Jayce(15:57, 10/12/2012)

Approved. Jayce(18:02, 10/13/2012)

Flintfang (W) ~ Approved[]

Flintfang.warrior It's about time he be given a description. Comments? Jayce(06:15, 10/12/2012)

The fur texture looks like mottles. Could you fix that? Also, blur the shading.  Stoneclaw 23:40,10/12/2012  

Re-uploaded. I got rid of the texture. I can't work with them. x.x Jayce(02:36, 10/13/2012)

Lovely my dear <3 CBA? oblivionAudience? 15:30, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Appledash the light of honor 15:15, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Poolcloud (E) ~ Approved[]

Poolcloud.elder Poolcloud has an awesome name. Comments? david 🌈 01:47, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

ehehe Poocloud xD Blur the haunch shading a tad.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:51, 12, 10, 2012

Re-uploaded. You're a Poocloud. =P david 🌈 02:06, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the neck? -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 04:04, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Le done. david 🌈 05:26, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? This is awesome =D -Ducksauce 22:02, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -Casually adds it above the shading- david 🌈 22:53, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(18:12, 10/13/2012)

Approved. Splook sweet  creature 23:55, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Deerleap (W) ~ Approved[]

Deerleap.warriorI know there's an extra dot in the name ;-; Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:33, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more stripes and brighten the ear-pink ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:06, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Kill the waste and also define the shading. Silverhmm 22:07, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

the legs don't appear white. Since I'm doing the elder, I'm going to use all of your colors except the leg color. Iveh Yo! 23:18, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Jayce(23:40, 10/10/2012)

The white legs look more like grey, maybe lighten them a tad? And triangular stripes don't look natural.Pikachushinxthe power of the past 00:47, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing. =P RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:54, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'd like to take over. :3 -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 03:36, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 03:55, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the pale legs a touch, define the ear-pink, and maybe brighten the "highlights" it looks a tad dark ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:59, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thankies. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 17:42, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 18:11, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Legs looks lavender-yPikachushinxthe power of the past 15:50, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

They're fine. They were color picked from the elder, and the shading is a light purple. Also, if you're going to interupt a CBA you need to change the heading to "For Approval." -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 16:27, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Hasn't been a comment since yesterday, so approving. Splook sweet  creature 19:58, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkheart (Alt. MC 2) ~ Approved[]

Hawkheart.mc.alt2 The title remains as Under Evaluation because I'm not sure if I'm an apprentice in PCA or not. But anyway, here is Hawkheart's 2nd alt. --User:Starry Hawk/Sig 02:46, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the brown flow with the fur, and if that's texture on the grey, make that also flow with the fur. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 08:37 Wed Oct 10

The earpink seems a bit bright Iveh Yo! 16:04, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading from the pelt. Splook sweet  creature 19:45, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur the shading too. Silverhmm 20:17, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I changed the texture and re-did the shading since I didn't like it originally. (changes may not be showing yet x.x) --User:Starry Hawk/Sig 02:15, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. david 🌈 23:25, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I darkened the shading. --User:Starry Hawk/Sig 14:00, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define your lightsource/unshaded areas? -Ducksauce 22:04, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I defined the light source as well as darkened the shading a tad. --User:Starry Hawk/Sig 18:12, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 18:14, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce(20:14, 10/15/2012)

Hal (KP) ~ Approved[]

Hal.kittypet Hi! I'm Millie... most of you know me, but it's my first time putting something up. The shading and earpink aren't the best, but hopefully you can give me some pointers on what to fix and how to fix it.

Also, his eyes and pelt length will stay like this until he is mentioned as having otherwise. Comments? MillieUser blog:Feathertail Millie all black magic! 09:02, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

This... is really pretty. Can you lighten the farthest back shading just a bit? It's too close to looking black. Silverhmm 11:03, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes... They're a little neon, and I can't see any depth in them.Pikachushinxthe power of the past 11:40, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

This should be named File:Hal.kittypet.png. Daaaamn, Mil. Nicely done. Jayce(15:25, 10/10/2012)

Is there any possibility of you adding a greater distinction between the background fur and the stripes? They're kind of difficult to tell apart from, especially since they're so close. Iveh Yo! 23:04, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded MillieUser blog:Feathertail Millie all black magic! 09:43, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Renamed. Lovely by the way. Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:45, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes? I love this =D -Ducksauce 22:12, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

I believe the stripes are fine. But can you just enlarge the earpink a bit? After that, I think I will CBA this lovely image c: Mistypebble 01:57, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to bust the bubble on this, but it needs to look like Raggedstar's images, as it's noted in the book that they look exactly alike. Unless you want to nominate Raggedstar for a redo. Shelly For a limited time only 04:26, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

He also needs amber eyes. It's just been cited and added to his description. Jayce(04:25, 10/12/2012)

I wanted to nominate Raggedstar for a tweak anyways. Mil, go ahead and keep the stripes how they are. This style looks /much/ better than mine anyways. Jayce(04:28, 10/12/2012)

Reuploaded Changed the collar because amber and purple are... blech. sorry Skt ;.; MillieUser blog:Feathertail Millie all black magic! 05:45, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The purple DDDDDDDDD: Define the earpink a little k :c david 🌈 12:45, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded MillieUser blog:Feathertail Millie all black magic! 22:23, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Love it! CBA? Mistypebble 17:51, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce(20:14, 10/15/2012)

Mudclaw (ShC) (W) - Approved[]

Mudclaw (ShC).warrior Lollookatthatearpink. I'm not a fan of him. Comments? oblivionAudience? 02:25, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

if he was female and had blue legs and long fur he'd be perfect Uh, I mean, Blur the shading on his paws a bit. x3 Rainlegs 02:27, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes not showing. oblivionAudience? 00:42, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

I can't find anything wrong with this, so comments before approval? o3o Appledash the light of honor 15:27, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Featherвαʐïṉģα 12:53, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. It shows depth, which is what shading is for. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 21:06 Mon Oct 15

-casually puts back on CBA- david 🌈 23:09, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

No other comments. Approved. Splook sweet  creature 00:08, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Silverflame (Q) - Approved[]

Silverflame.queen W00t shading! Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:57, 15, 10, 2012

Haha, fixed the heading, love. Blur the tip of the ear-pink a touch ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:58, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *facepalm* Thank you my love. This is what happens when I go away for the weekend xD  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:03, 15, 10, 2012

And darken the shading a touch, love <3 ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:05, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:09, 15, 10, 2012

Let's do this because I like it. CBA? Jayce(02:39, 10/15/2012)

Approved. Jayce(06:08, 10/16/2012)

Amberleaf (W) ~ Approved[]

Amberleaf.warrior It's been a while since I've made a charart..so I'm a little rusty. But, damn, I love this cat. <3 Comments? Rainlegs 13:50, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the front legs? As I said on the join.me this pattern is amazing <333. Silverhmm 15:53, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading just a tad. Dear, this is wonderful. Amberleaf has been done justice. <3 Jayce(15:55, 10/12/2012)

Reuploaded. Well, I was an idiot for not saving the layers for this image, so I blurred it as much as I could without murdering the stripes. :s Rainlegs 18:18, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

The shading just feels too dark. Maybe lighten it a tad? The one on the neck is good, make all the shading that shade. Shimmy ~Call me wave ♥ 23:32, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine. =3 Beautiful image, Leggy. -Ducksauce 23:47, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. oblivionAudience? 00:46, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'd just like to point out that all of the shading is technically the same shade. Oh thanks. =3 Rainlegs 05:03, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty~ CBA? Mistypebble 20:27, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Splook sweet  creature 23:51, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Nettlespot (Q) - Approved[]

Nettlespot.queenColors are all the same as her warriors. Comments? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:26, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the belly shading a little? And maybe add a few hightlights on the neck? -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 04:06, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:14, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more.  Stoneclaw 23:34,10/12/2012  

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:52, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

She looks grey. Lighten the shading and blur it some more, especially on the belly. oblivionAudience? 01:33, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:36, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

<3 CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:05, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry Scarlet, but she still looks grey and the shading still needs to be blurred and the "highlights" defined. oblivionAudience? 18:36, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also, define the earpink? -Ducksauce 19:35, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 20:48, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the stomach "highlight" horizontally and maybe add a few more/expand the current ones so she's not so dark? oblivionAudience? 00:43, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:19, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a tad? Appledash the light of honor 15:28, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 16:21, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit? -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 18:13, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 19:54, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur her shoulder "highlight" just a tad? Mistypebble 00:16, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:08, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 21:20, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. david 🌈 00:28, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Ashheart (A) ~ Approved[]

Ashheart.apprenticeIfail...anyways, comments? —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 00:18, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

This should be named File:Ashheart.apprentice.png -Ducksauce 00:30, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Jayce(03:48, 10/9/2012)

I changed the heading so it's proper and goes with her name. She's Ashheart, not Ashpaw. Jayce(06:34, 10/9/2012)

I'll rename it next reupload but, Reuploaded--—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 10:21, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. -Ducksauce 12:41, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink appears to have leaked into the back of the ears. david 🌈 23:53, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried...I know about the waste, so can you guys not comment on that? And I tried to rename the file, but it's not letting me....so if I could have some help? —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 19:32, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

We have to comment on the waste until you get rid of it. To rename the file, just click on this: File:Ashheart.apprentice.png and upload it. oblivionAudience? 19:40, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--'Teldy, could you rename the file for me? Thanks —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 19:42, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Renamed. =) Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:45, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more, and define the haunch and tail shading. Good job! =) -Ducksauce 01:25, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her nose a little. oblivionAudience? 15:35, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--I did my best. I can't blur the shading any more, otherwise it'll look weird. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 18:48, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Jayce(06:08, 10/16/2012)

Approved. david 🌈 08:29, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Pixie (KP) ~ Approved[]

Pixie.kittypet Dude, her name is sexy<33 Comments? Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 12:29 Tue Oct 9

She doesn't look white, could you either lighten the texture or the shading a little? Iveh Yo! 17:45, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you maybe define the earpink a leetle bit more?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:12, 10, 10, 2012

It looks like she has mottles around her neck - could you fix that?  Stoneclaw 05:06,10/10/2012  

She's a little cock-eyed, too. Maybe move her left pupil one pixel towards the middle of her face. Shelly For a limited time only 05:29, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't have access to the .xcf damned usb so I started over owo Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 05:51 Wed Oct 10

Add a bit more gleam to the eye, I can hardly see it :3 Featherвαʐïṉģα 16:27, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

You put earpink in both ears on this black ^.^Pikachushinxthe power of the past 21:12, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

...what? I can't understand if you mean she put the earpink in both ears or you're supposed to. Either way, it's artist's choice because with the shape of the ear, it could be closer or farther away and it's left up to us. Iveh Yo! 23:07, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her so he's more white and less gray and define the shading more too.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:24, 11, 10, 2012

Make her eyes less purple. david 🌈 02:53, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Guess who didn't save the .xcf? :/ Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:22 Thu Oct 11

Can you lighten the shading? -Ducksauce 22:15, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

I tried, but when I do, it's a bit hard to see. but however, if anyone else agrees, I'll gladly lighten it :3 Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 05:54 Fri Oct 12

Maybe just give it a smudge so it blends with the texturing ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 00:24, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

She needs a bell on her collar. oblivionAudience? 15:33, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

the collar has a bell. I just coloured it a little too lightly. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 15:35 Sat Oct 13

That's not really a bell... Try doing something like Fuzz. oblivionAudience? 00:14, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Meh Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 07:24 Sun Oct 14

Add eye gleamPikachushinxthe power of the past 20:00, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes are fine. They show depth, as they should. Jayce(20:07, 10/15/2012)

There's a few purple pixels on the shoulder. Splook sweet  creature 21:14, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded owo Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 21:18 Mon Oct 15

Comments before approval? Jayce(06:09, 10/16/2012)

I may be wrong, but the shading needs defining?Pikachushinxthe power of the past 11:41, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

I've tried defining it; it turns grey. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 11:47 Tue Oct 16

White cats are a pain to shade. I can testify to that. Continuing CBA. Jayce(17:36, 10/16/2012)

Approved. Jayce(16:57, 10/17/2012)

Scorchwind (W) ~ Approved[]

Scorchwind.warrior -Finally, I get to do one! =D Except, it's terrible quality. BTW, please do mind if my grammar is terrible often. My keyboard is broken, so I need to use copy-paste to type, unless I (rarley) get access to my bro's laptop(Like now!)Pikachushinxthe power of the past 19:22, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the flank/haunch shading, thin out the arm shading, and lighten the shading. Appledash the light of honor 19:25, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

If he's ginger, please cite it on his article. Also, he needs stripes. Jayce(19:29, 10/9/2012)

Redden the earpink. Splook sweet  creature 19:38, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Also enlarge the earpink a bit and define that tail shading. david 🌈 23:49, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Woo, keyboard fixed! Anyhow, redid the shading(Did the tail in seperate layers because that's harder to do), added stripes, redid earpink. And he is ginger, it already says so on the article. And it did when I reserved it.Pikachushinxthe power of the past 11:38, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him less golden and more gingery? -Ducksauce 12:28, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

And maybe add a few more stripes. c: david 🌈 13:24, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make/extend the bottom edge of this ---> side of the earpink so it completes the triangular shape. It's shaping up nicely Pika! Iveh Yo! 16:02, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Ivy! I'll work on it tonight, I got schoolwork to do >.>Pikachushinxthe power of the past 16:14, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Got spare time, so I did it now. Re-uploaded!Pikachushinxthe power of the past 16:43, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a little more or maybe try erasing some of the shading on the tail. This is excellent 8D  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:23, 11, 10, 2012

The stripes look kinda paint brushed on. Give 'em a smudge and define the ear-pink more ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:01, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Add more (smaller) stripes, he will be looking good...aww *loves ginger tabbies* LeafyAbsolute maniac 16:27, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also, changing title to "Under Evaluation" since I'm a kit.Pikachushinxthe power of the past 14:37, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good, ear pink have a same color as stripes try to change it, maybe you can use reference from any ginger cats around here, around stripes..maybe connect some of them to make more different stripes not only "lines". Good job. LeafyAbsolute maniac 16:51, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

We're going to change the heading on this to "For Approval", since you clearly know what you're doing. You are now an apprentice. Jayce(20:08, 10/15/2012)

Thanks Cloud! Aaanyways...Re-uploaded!Pikachushinxthe power of the past 11:39, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Awesomeness add some light on the tail and I think youre done. LeafyAbsolute maniac 12:31, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadedPikachushinxthe power of the past 13:00, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Shall we go CBA? Jayce(17:38, 10/16/2012)

Approved. Jayce(21:31, 10/17/2012)

Featherstorm (E) ~ Approved[]

Featherstorm.elderComments? david 🌈 10:18, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad. MillieFriend or enemy? 10:35, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. david 🌈 11:31, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Aww furball..define ear-pink please ^.^ LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:57, October 15,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm just gonna put it above the shading from now on. x.x david 🌈 22:55, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Fluffy elders are cute 83 CBA? Mistypebble 00:46, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. `david 🌈 00:47, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Frogtail (W) - Approved[]

Frogtail.warriorSo um, here's Mr. Froggytail. Gimme dem comments. ROO 21:42, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

He's a leetle bit dark. Other than that, sexiness <3 oblivionAudience? 21:48, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Little bit too dark. Lighten the earpink, and lighten the black to a really dark gray maybe? Shimmer Currently Ripple 23:15, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

I already told her it was too dark. There's no need to repeat. oblivionAudience? 00:24, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Just an opinion, but maybe make the eye color a bit brighter to stand out against the darker pelt so the depth is more noticeable <hopes that was gramtically correct.... ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:05, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, imho. Splook sweet  creature 00:47, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Well, maybe extend the ear-pink into the ear a tiny bit more. This is lovely <3 Raineh Has returned :D 16:57, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ROO 00:28, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Splook sweet  creature 01:31, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you /please/ lighten it just a tad? This is a little too dark, and looks almost black on my computer. Jayce(04:53, 10/16/2012)

I think it looks fine, in my opinion... Mistypebble 00:29, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Cloudy... x3 -Ducksauce 02:23, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I can barely distinguish it from the lineart. It doesn't need to be lightened that much, but just so we can see the lineart. I'm not the only one who thinks it's too dark; Paleh actually said this as well, but she can't get on to say that. Jayce(16:53, 10/17/2012)

Reuploaded. ROO 21:24, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Gorgeous. Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 21:27, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce(16:03, 10/19/2012)

Flintfang (A) - Approved[]

Flintfang.apprenticeOne of my favorite characters in YS. 8D Comments? -Ducksauce 21:08, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eyes and shading. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 21:09 Sun Oct 14

There's waste around the image. Silverhmm 21:11, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: There was depth in the eyes, though I defined it. =3 -Ducksauce 21:20, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the earpink. Mistypebble 21:50, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 12:15, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the ear pink just a smidge. Another wonderful image, Duck~ Jayce(06:11, 10/16/2012)

Re-uploaded: Thanks =D -Ducksauce 01:47, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(00:16, 10/18/2012)

There's waste.--.Boos Dinosaurs on a Spaceship! 22:02, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Waste has nothing to do with the quality of the image and can be fixed at any time. The CBA will continue. However, Duck, if you could take a couple seconds and clean that up, I'd appreciate it. Jayce(22:05, 10/18/2012)

Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 22:20, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce(16:03, 10/19/2012)

Mintkit (ShC) (Ki) ~ Approved[]

Mintkit (ShC).kit I'm not rejoining... I swear. I'm just really bored. And I like Yellowfang's siblings. Shelly For a limited time only 22:14, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten him and the shading; he's never called dark grey, just grey. oblivionAudience? 01:55, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Dark gray IS gray. Shelly may just be going ton personal preference, and Skye did the same for Larkpaw, did she not? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 04:33, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

No no, it's fine. I lightened him, despite the fact that plenty of chararts made for characters with non-specific coloring have shades that vary from the base color and I was simply basing his color off of his sister. Shelly For a limited time only 04:56, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading. He seems kinda flat. Jayce(16:01, 10/12/2012)

Can you define the earpink on his left side? -Ducksauce 18:18, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You guys asked for it, I suppose. I shaded him like I would shade the rest of the things I draw. Also, as many of you know, I'm moving tonight. I might be offline for a couple days while I'm getting everything set up. Shelly For a limited time only 18:12, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? david 🌈 06:22, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. david 🌈 22:57, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (W) ~ Approved[]

Blackstar.warrior Wee, the most unrealistic cat in the series has a warrior image. Do not tell me to lighten the shading, since I already know it's too dark. I'll reupload with the lighter shading in the morning. I suck with white cats. x.x Jayce(06:06, 10/16/2012)

He has a darker tail tip? o.o Blur the shading. david 🌈 06:08, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No, that was me getting my images mixed up. Jayce(06:16, 10/16/2012)

Can you lighten the black a bit? PadfootMischief Managed 23:48, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(00:17, 10/17/2012)

Make the earpink biggerPikachushinxthe power of the past 13:34, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think the ear pink's fine, honestly. I hate huge ear pink... it looks all blotchy and ugly. Jayce(16:52, 10/17/2012)

I hate it too, but that's a little too small....Pikachushinxthe power of the past 18:43, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

No, it's not. It's a perfectly acceptable size for ear pink. Jayce(18:51, 10/18/2012)

CBA? david 🌈 01:47, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce(02:07, 10/20/2012)

Cinderfur (Ki) ~ Approved[]

Cinderfur.kit D'aww, lil Cinderkit. All colours from the deputy, from when I tweaked it. Comments? Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 05:31 Thu Oct 18

Darken the shading a wee bit. Lurvely. david 🌈 10:11, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 03:38 Fri Oct 19

CBA? david 🌈 02:11, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:55, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Frogtail (A) ~ Approved[]

Frogtail.apprenticeHere's Frogpaw. I kinda messed this one up x.x Comments?

Featherвαʐïṉģα 12:17, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

This should be named File:Frogtail.apprentice.png -Ducksauce 12:36, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

-derp- It won't let me x.x Could someone help? Sorry... Featherвαʐïṉģα 16:17, October 9, 2012 (UTC)


Blur the earpink —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 18:32, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Renamed. Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:57, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the unshaded part on the shoulder.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:59, 10, 10, 2012

Re-uploaded Featherвαʐïṉģα 12:19, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks kinda purple, and maybe you could define it?Pikachushinxthe power of the past 12:29, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Featherвαʐïṉģα 12:49, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Still looks purple, and now it needs more blurring.Pikachushinxthe power of the past 00:52, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Featherвαʐïṉģα 10:15, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink upwards, and also make it a pale red colour. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 10:19 Thu Oct 11

I'm really sorry, but I'm withdrawing this. Every time I blur the shading, it goes square or purple. Withdrawing. Featherвαʐïṉģα 12:39, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

May I take over? Appledash the light of honor 02:49, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Okay I tried to match Roo's awesomeness. o3o Appledash the light of honor 16:11, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the texture, and maybe make it thinner? =3 -Ducksauce 23:48, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Bah, I tried. Appledash the light of honor 00:56, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more. =)-Ducksauce 20:02, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like he has silver slashes. Lighten the opacity of them and thin them out a bit. Splook sweet  creature 21:21, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blech, I started over. Appledash the light of honor 01:11, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten him. He looks too dark. Jayce(04:55, 10/16/2012)

Smudge the earpink some more. -Ducksauce 12:46, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Appledash the light of honor 19:24, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be my computer, but I think I see waste near his head and haunch. Mistypebble 00:44, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Appledash the light of honor 23:23, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Splook sweet  creature 17:01, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Splook sweet  creature 17:20, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (Ki) ~ Approved[]

Runningnose.kitRunningkit. <3 Comments? david 🌈 00:51, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

D'aww so cute! Blur the earpink on --->this side a little.<333 Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 08:10 Thu Oct 18

Re-uploadded. david 🌈 10:10, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Splook sweet  creature 16:56, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. Splook sweet  creature 17:23, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Foxheart (Ki) ~ Approved[]

Foxheart.kit Foxheart <333 Again, I adore this pattern <33 Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  23:08, 17, 10, 2012

CBA? -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 18:27, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Approved 8D Splook sweet  creature 21:22, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Wetfoot (Ki) ~ Approved[]

Wetfoot.kit He's soooo cute 83. Also, I see the waste on his left side. After a lot of edits pixlr stops doing stuff. (Crazy I know, but I still love it x3.) Comments? Silverhmm 21:16, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail and maybe add some neck shading. david 🌈 06:12, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ewww. Silverhmm 23:38, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Been awhile since anybody's commented. CBA?

Oh geez, that was me. It was like 20 October at 18 something. Sorry. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 05:56, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Dang, I've been on an approving spree today xD Approved~ Splook sweet  creature 21:26, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Brightflower (Q) - Approved[]

Brightflower.queenI was trying to imitate Princess's pattern, didn't exactly go as planned... ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:15, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. This is wonderful Scarlet. =D -Ducksauce 12:11, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 00:06, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think she needs traces of grey on her muzzle, cause I think the book ended with her as a queen and she was mentioned with it as one. o3o -makes no sense- david 🌈 13:17, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose a little pinker. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:30, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:31, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little? Pretty. :3 -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 18:26, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:21, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

CBA plz? david 🌈 01:33, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, pleeeeeaaaase don't hate me, but Lizardstripe's queen image had stripes like these, and it was agreed that it was unrealistic and the pattern had to be changed. I personally didn't agree with it, but it's not fair if one gets redone and another stays. (hides and shields self from bricks) Iveh Yo! 03:02, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Made her a modified Willowbreeze tabby but I insist on keeping the stripes on the tail. I <3 them ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:46, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Shall we go CBA? Jayce(03:49, 10/21/2012)

Approved. david 🌈 10:19, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Nightstar (A) ~ Approved[]

Nightstar (ShC).apprentice Ah, I used GIMP for this. <3 All colors are from his elder, so please don't ask me to change them. Jayce(02:34, 10/20/2012)

Prettyy ouo Let's go CBA~ Splook sweet  creature 17:14, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit. Featherвαʐïṉģα 15:36, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine, imho. Jayce(16:37, 10/22/2012)

It is fine. Continuing CBA. Appledash the light of honor 18:34, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lol since I fail so much I forgot it would be approved sorry for my failure everyone; approving. Appledash the light of honor 18:45, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderfur (A) ~ Approved[]

Cinderfur.apprentice Shadingg looks terrible...Pikachushinxthe power of the past 11:36, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the earpink. Nice~ —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 18:50, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks. And commentary at last!Pikachushinxthe power of the past 21:42, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earponk's leaked onto the back of the ear. david 🌈 01:43, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Earponk, lolPikachushinxthe power of the past 07:31, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Splook sweet  creature 17:13, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Splook sweet  creature 22:26, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Foxheart (A) - Approved[]

Foxheart.apprenticeHello, remember me? Its nice to be back, well I've done this small treasure Foxheart..but I surely need to start training in chararts agin..aww great old days. LeafyAbsolute maniac,19:46,October 12,2012 (UTC)

Can you make the pattern match the deputy/warrior more? -Ducksauce 21:55, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a bit brighter too, pweeze ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:04, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, I need some help with those stripes. LeafyAbsolute maniac,10:07,October 13,2012 (UTC)

Well, it's been a week since anybody's commented. CBA? -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 18:21, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but could you still make the stripes match more? -Ducksauce 18:42, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reploaded LeafyAbsolute maniac,14:28,October 21,2012 (UTC)

Another reupload- I realised she is too dark. LeafyAbsolute maniac,14:35,October 21,2012 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Looking great, Leafy. Appledash the light of honor 19:12, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Approving. Splook sweet  creature 22:29, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanberry (A) ~ Approved[]

Rowanberry.apprentice Wow, I haven't put an image up over here in a long time... o3o Well, here is Rowanberry. Hopefully I copied the pattern right c; Mistypebble 20:26, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the markings a little. c: -Rustle it takes a leap of faith 20:43, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Least she's got a description now....Define the shading. david 🌈 22:36, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hope the shading looks okay x.x I was trying to match the way it looked like on her Queen image... Mistypebble 01:53, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Like I said on the queen image, the pattern matches with the lineart too perfectly. When striking a certain pose, the entire pelt doesn't all of a sudden match. So likewise, shift a few things and you should be perfectly fine. Atelda insert vague subtext here 04:32, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Should these colors match the queen? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:44, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I will redo this to match the queen since Feather changed it, but right now I am waiting for the xcf. file ^^ Mistypebble 00:54, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mistypebble 18:00, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Oh, and Misty can I borrow the .xcf for this? My email is rowan.lbishop@gmail.com RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:15, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully I blurred it enough. If I did it too much, it would end up looking weird... >.< Mistypebble 21:57, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Misty, I ///love/// this image. CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:40, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

This can't be approved, lovely as it is, because the pattern still matches perfectly on her hind leg. Like Teldy said, the entire pelt shouldn't line up exactly because she happens to be crouching. Fix it please. oblivionAudience? 01:05, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm kind of bad at these kinds of things... Can you tell me how it needs to be moved? Mistypebble 02:20, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

On the shoulder, shift the pattern, up or down, your choice, and maybe to the side. Then, on the top of the hindleg, shift or turn the pattern down. Something along those lines I'd say. Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:46, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded x.x Mistypebble 21:20, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Beautiful image, Misty. Appledash the light of honor 19:19, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

None. Approved. Splook sweet  creature 22:31, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

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