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Contents 1 Discussion 2 Tweaked 3 Images Pending Approval 3.1 Queen Blanks ~ For Approval 3.2 Shrewtooth (W) (Alt) ~ For Approval	Archives Declined [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10] [11] [12] [13] [14] [15] [16] [17] [18] [19] [20] [21] [22] [23] [24] [25] [26] [27] [28] [29] [30] [31] [32] [33] [34] [35] [36] [37] [38] [39] [40] [41] [42] [43] [44] [45] [46] [47] [48] [49] [50] [51] [52] [53] [54] [55] [56] [57] [58] [59] [60] [61] Accepted [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10] [11] [12] [13] [14] [15] [16] [17] [18] [19] [20] [21] [22] [23] [24] [25] [26] [27] [28] [29] [30] [31] [32] [33] [34] [35] [36] [37] [38] [39] [40] [41] [42] [43] [44] [45] [46] [47] [48] [49] [50] [51] [52] [53] [54] [55] [56] [57] [58] [59] [60] [61] [62] [63] [64] [65] [66] [67] [68] [69] [70] [71] [72] [73] [74] [75] [76] [77] [78] [79] [80] [81] [82] [83] [84] [85] [86] [87] [88] [89] [90] [91] [92] [93] [94] [95] [96] [97] [98] [99] [100] [101] [102] [103] [104]

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Queen Blanks ~ For Approval

Righty-o. Here we go with the queen blanks. Comment away my friends. ^w^ Berry ^{...now what?} 09:42 Tue May 28

I'm no expert on this but maybe square up the shape of this --> forepaw and define where the du-claw'd be. I can't really explain how, the but maybe slope the haunch a bit more, it looks kinda flat compared to the shoulders. Gorgeous work, Berry! Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 22:15, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps ---> this leg could be curved a tad? Raven ^{Dark as the Night} 22:50 Tue May 28

Maybe you could make both sides of the longhair's tail fluffy? The straight line looks a bit odd. ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 01:18, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Do you think you could define the top of the nearest shoulder a bit? Also you might disconnect the line on the same shoulder from the head. As is it looks a bit awkward. You also might define the joints a bit more on the other leg and even out the sizes of the ears. Though I doubt you'd need it, if you need a redline feel free to ask. -Raelic ^{Non temete l'obscurità}2:06 Thu May 30 2013

Maybe the tail can be curved a tad more --- no cat's tail is that straight when they walk.Hawk ^{I know I'm fantastic...} 23:22, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, Breezy I wouldn't say no to a redline. xD Berry ^{...now what?} 06:18 Fri May 31

Re-uploaded meh I did some stuff on the shorthair - decided I'll work on the longhairs later. [1] Berry ^{...now what?} 12:45 Fri May 31

Maybe slant the toe line on her left front paw the other way, or make it straight up and down? And maybe make a small line over the base of her tail where it joins with her haunch on our left; just to show a little more depth. These are really stunning... ☁Knight ^{Taken by the sky} 00:43, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Enlarge the hind paw a bit more and maybe define the "ankle" of the leg that's just behind the lifted forepaw Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 01:24, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

How about these? Ignore the face, though. Yours is fine. Except for maybe the sizes of your ears, which should be more even. -Raelic ^{Non temete l'obscurità}15:48 Mon Jun 3 2013

Re-uploaded officially naming these blanks Hannibal because they look like they want to eat you. Berry ^{...now what?} 08:17 Fri Jun 7

Umm... what happened to these? They look odd.different.♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 10:26, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps thin and even out the tail lineart a little. Raven ^{Dark as the Night} 10:33 Sat Jun 8

Re-uploaded. Sorrrel, I was given a redline by Breezy to fix up some anatomy issues. .-. Please do not call my blanks odd, and don't comment unless you're offering critique. Berry ^{...now what?} 10:45 Sat Jun 8

I'm sorry, Berry. I was just surprised by how different they looked.♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 12:02, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Don't know if this'll make any sense, but can you make the curve around our front right paw more noticeable? -Ducksauce 13:20, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

The hind thigh looks lumpy. Maybe smooth it out a bit more? The tail seems bigger than the body. Also, define the front right paw (the one that is not on the ground). Hawk ^{I know I'm fantastic...} 15:03, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

I'm very confused; when you go to the file for this is shows that it looks more like the original version; here it looks like the redline Breezey gave you. Is the wiki playing up? Just asking.♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 01:39, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe shorten the whiskers by a few pixels, make the tail a bit thinner and maybe shrink her front paws and her right (her right) back paw a just a little. ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 16:28, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

The bottom of the tail on <--- this side looks like it has an extra line on it, the front part of the belly (or chest?) doesn't look like it connects to the belly smoothly, and the shape of the paws look...off? to me. I don't really know how to explain it, but something about the digits on the paws seem to be throwing me off. Iveh Yo! 00:49, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

Still working, Berry? Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 18:28, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yes- sorry for the lack of re-uploads, I've not had access to a computer. The line on the tail, Ivy, is a bit of fur and I'll keep it unless someone else says otherwise. and the Hannibal eyes stay eheheheh Berry ^{...now what?} 07:35 Fri Jun 14

Possibly smoothen the lineart on the back? (there's like a little place where it rises :P) ☀Iciloo☀ 12:21, June 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Berry ^{...now what?} 04:08 Sat Jun 15

Smooth out the hind food and make the actual part that touches the ground smaller and less bulbous. -Raelic ^{Non temete l'obscurità}4:14 Sat Jun 15 2013

Re-uploaded Berry ^{...now what?} 04:17 Sat Jun 15

Thin the tail more. ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 10:22, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I'd like to keep the tail as it is unless someone else agrees. Berry ^{...now what?} 14:33 Sat Jun 15

Can you make the legs and paws a bit thinner too? ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 15:40, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. ☀Iciloo☀ 16:18, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Can you taper the end of the tail a bit more at the tip and the lifted paw looks a little too splayed Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 00:28, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Sorrel. If you think about a real cat, the tail gets thinner at the tip. It does not look that way now - and these are the short-hair blanks after all. I do not want to sound rude. Please don't shoot me! Hawk ^{I know I'm fantastic...} 02:26, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Shorten whiskers by a few pixels? ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 18:44, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the hind paw just a tad and thin out the tail like Hawk and Sorrel said? Other than that, these are honestly fine. Thistleflight (talk) 22:51, June 18, 2013 (UTC)

Could you please remove the dots above the head? It's a style thing and doesn't go with the style of any of the blanks we have. And yes, I agree the tail need to be thinned out a ton. It's almost thicker than the legs right now. Make the dew claw stick out less on the front paw, and make the back paw a more defined shape rather than a really smooth kinda soft line that makes it look too round and blobby. Shrink the paws quite a bit too, they're much too big for a cat in comparison to the leg size. Clean up the whisker lineart so it's a bit smoother, and maybe vary the lengths of the whiskers. Lastly, the chest is in front of the legs, so at this angle, the line for the chest should go over the far front leg, rather than the line that shows the leg connecting with the body being in front. Honestly, I thought it was mostly fine before and only needed a few minor tweaks, but... :/ Paleggy Ship it 23:22,6/18/2013

Re-uploaded I tried a thing with the front paw but I can change it back if needed. I had issues with the hind paw...a lot of issues. e.e Berry ^{...now what?} 10:39 Wed Jun 19

Her front paw that's on the ground is bigger then the others. ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 14:29, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (W) (Alt) ~ For Approval

He was seen as gray in The Rescue. Comments? ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 20:39, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail, back, ears, and forehead. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 22:13, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded same issue with Brackenfur; I may not have gotten rid of all of it because it's very hard to see. ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 22:23, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink a bit, and the "highlight" on his paws and tail? Nice! ☁Knight ^{Taken by the sky} 04:09 Thu Jun 20

Reuploaded wow, solids really are easy... ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 11:50, June 20, 2013 (UTC)