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Cow(R) - For Approval

File:Cow(MV).rogue.pngAlright, so unless it says in the books she was named after the apperance of a cow, I'm giving her the apperance of my cat since the last time I did that, the cat's description was magically changed by an author later on, so let's try this pattern again. The eyes are also a warmer green color but if they look too yellow I can tweak them a bit. But yeah, as always, if something's outta place then just tell me! I had fun with this Iveh Yo ! 01:33, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her side just a tad? --Dewsplash (talk) 04:42, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge (i assume thats what you did, judging by how it looks) the shading a lot more. I can /see/ the smudge marks... User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

I can't smudge on Sai. She has fur texture Iveh Yo ! 04:53, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Either way, I can see strange markings on the main body where I think the shading is meant to be. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:42, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

still working? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:57,11/18/2015

Yes, I plan on working on her tonight, offline has been kicking my ass Iveh Yo ! 04:14, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo ! 05:34, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(08:50, 11/18/2015)

Sorry but the white can stand to be smoothed out a little more. It looks sharp on the chest and the shading still looks a tad blotchy. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 22:07, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

How/where is it exactly blotchy? Iveh Yo ! 05:36, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

I guess just smooth it out in general - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 06:54,11/19/2015

I think the image could be darkened a tad. —Ivy ☆ 21:56, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Just a reminder here to not forget to upload! User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:56, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not, remember that I have obligations outside of the Wiki and I will reupload in the timeframe allotted Iveh Yo ! 04:50, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo ! 07:19, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(12:22, 11/24/2015)

Hate to break the CBA, but I think the dot on her hind leg can stand to be blurred/smudged a little more. Sagestream ^{Visible only in the shadows} 07:56, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Also, the forepaw closest to us looks kind of gray. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 06:13, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

The chest can be smudged and the shading could be msoothed out some more. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:50, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

I feel like the white should be smudged/blurred more, if you don't mind. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 20:26 Thu Nov 26

I've already stated this, but I cannot smudge on Sai Iveh Yo ! 08:58, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Well, maybe blur it then? Or use a different program? Or smooth it out in a different way, like add some on the edges on a lower opacity? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 21:32 Fri Nov 27

I honestly think it's fine, and you guys are being way too picky. There is nothing wrong with having the white how it is; smudging isn't even mandatory on any image. —Jayce(21:36, 11/27/2015)

I agree it looks fine honestly. And iveh if you need help smudging in SAI i csn help c: User:Winterflurry/Sig 21:43, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:22,11/28/2015

Ok but even if the white was agreed to look fine, the part where the shading needs to be smoothed out is still not addressed. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:25, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Mistpelt (Star) - For Approval

tired lil elder cat Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 03:50 Fri Nov 13

sharpen and expand the shading - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:35,11/13/2015

I don't think she should sharpen it but she could definitely blur it and expand it a lot. User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:32, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

there's like a dot in the far lower left corner? User:Winterflurry/Sig 13:26, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 02:35 Sat Nov 14

expand the shading everywhere, especially on the tail. Define the light on the legs. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 12:26,11/14/2015

reuploaded. redid shading again. idk if this is good or not Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 22:41 Tue Nov 17

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 01:01, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the shading depth could be defined a lot. It's looking a bit flat on the tail and forelegs. —Jayce(14:43, 11/18/2015)

There's a weird streak of pale texture on the tail.. mind fixing that?~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 21:47, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:06, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. redid shading. again. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 03:18 Sun Nov 22

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 00:06, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but the shading on the legs is still flat - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:33,11/23/2015

it's fine. I took a look at her file and that's the best she can get it without having it look even worse. re-CBA? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 05:44, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Nope. just because she can't do it, doesn't mean it's fine. please define it, it looks very flat. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:55, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

that's what i've been trying to do for the past 3 uploads. can you possibly give me a hint on to how to deepen it then? cause nothing i'm doing seems to work. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 01:41 Wed Nov 25

Perhaps add a new layer of thinner, darker shading? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:42,11/25/2015

I can't see where the light source is. Could you define it? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 20:25 Thu Nov 26

reuploaded tried a new light source. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 22:51 Fri Nov 27

I'm going to be that person but I seriously still can't see any shading on the face and legs. :x - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:23,11/28/2015

Rockfall (Star)- For Approval

File:Rockfall.Star.png;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is! Shine like the Sun ^{Stars in the Sky}

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! Coffee shops 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shine like the Sun ^{Stars in the Sky}

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:19,11/15/2015

Reups. Shine like the Sun ^{Stars in the Sky}

Reuploaded again. Shine like the Sun ^{Stars in the Sky}

Blur the shading more. Also, it's still leaking on the chest. The lineart near the ears looks messed up, did you put the earpink over it? —Ivy ☆ 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups, that CBA is getting farther and farther away ;-;. Shine like the Sun ^{Stars in the Sky}

Please blur and lighten the shading, it looks like he has Siamese - like markings.

Blur/smudge the earpink more. —Ivy ☆ 20:46, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The face shading should be coming from the other side based on your light source ~Russettail13

Reuploaded. No, the face shading can be on either side, its just that the other side is commonly used. I'm making the shadow appear on that side of the charart. Shine like the Sun ^{Stars in the Sky}

smooth out the shading - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 06:52,11/19/2015

Reuploaded. It looks bootiful ^-^ Shine like the Sun ^{Stars in the Sky}

Define your light source. The tail looks like it's in whole shadow, and the shading on the legs looks blotchy. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:16, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:34,11/23/2015

Reups. Shine like the Sun ^{Stars in the Sky}

The shading is leaking on the tail and main body - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 11:24,11/25/2015

http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283571116800.png Alright, here are all the issues I see. ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 03:14, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Dust Muzzle (ES) - CBA

I totally forgot I had this file saved under the wrong name and just uploaded it as was without changing the name. :P Sorry to ask, but could someone fix that for me? Anyway, I'm really happy with this, trying to match the kit was definitely interesting. ^^ Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:24, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

define the chest shading - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:37,11/16/2015

Reuploaded. Also put more pale fur on the hip, it seemed to cut off awkwardly before. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 16:41, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the hind legs. ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 12:40, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

still working? User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:21, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Yes. It's only been two days since I've been given something to tweak, give me a chance to get to it. :) I'll try and upload the changes tonight. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 01:52, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 02:55, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the tail - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:17,11/24/2015

Reuploaded. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 05:06, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? (Also, you might want to put your signature into a template) - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:22,11/28/2015

Gooseberry (Q) - For Approval

the base itself is actually really pale... if I lighten the image too much more, I don't think I'm going to be able to see it, so please keep that in mind. Base =/= stripes, and I think you can have darker stripes on a paler base. —Jayce(22:12, 11/16/2015)

Define the head shading a tad? Lovely. ~Russettail13

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(23:38, 11/16/2015)

define the shading on the legs Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 02:43, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(07:46, 11/17/2015)

Define the shading everywhere. My macbook shows everything darker and I still can't see it on the screen. User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:16, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I am not used to this color in the least. —Jayce(11:31, 11/17/2015)

If you could, perhaps define the facial shading a little bit? I cannot see any shading on my screen. ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 03:15, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is a very difficult color to shade. —Jayce(14:41, 11/18/2015)

Define the shading on the back leg furthest away from us? And if possible, could you define the facial shading some more? Perhaps adding some depth might work? ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 12:14, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded. If someone could give me some shading color advice, that would be appreciated. I'm currently using an orange-brown, but are there other colors that would work better? (just not green ;;; ) —Jayce(15:20, 11/19/2015)

Maybe just black? :P Can you smudge the earpink a little? Sorry if this seems nitpicky. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 18:44, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

use dark red. it's really good for golden cats. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 23:25,11/19/2015

Re-uploaded. Hmm. Shading might be a tad flat in places, but I like this coloring much better. —Jayce(16:28, 11/20/2015)

Could you thicken it on the tail a little? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 03:23 Sun Nov 22

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(11:06, 11/22/2015)

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 00:05, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, the shading could stand to be defined on the legs as it looks on the tail and belly. By that i think i mean add some depth User:Winterflurry/Sig 11:49, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, but you do know that shading thickness, definition, darkness, ect, doesn't need to be the same throughout the entire image, right? —Jayce(21:38, 11/23/2015)

I'm going to be that person but I seriously still can't see any shading on the face, and legs - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:08,11/24/2015

And I don't understand how you can't see anything. My laptop and phone both show tons of shading. If I tweak this again, I'm going to be in the same boat as the first time I redid the shading, and it feels like I'm going in circles. =/ —Jayce(01:24, 11/24/2015)

Sharpening the facial shading and the leg shading might help with the visibility issue. I can't really see it either. Rain legs 07:25, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I already talked with Fox about that and I hate the sharpen tool. —Jayce(09:09, 11/24/2015)

Try adding a layer of shading depth in black, or maybe add some highlights. It is still pretty hard to see... User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:43, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. >.> —Jayce(12:11, 11/24/2015)

Too many issues. Withdrawing. —Jayce(12:22, 11/24/2015)

I'll take over ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (13:13,11/24/2015)

re-ups ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (13:57,11/24/2015)

Could you smoothen the shoulder shading? Also, I believe there is some shading leaking out from there. ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 03:07, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the facial shading? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 20:23 Thu Nov 26

re-ups~ ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (05:44,11/27/2015)

Echosnout (Star) ~ For Approval

The MC is hard to match.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 23:33, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white parts a lot, and smudge the earpink a little more. ❄Finchpaws ❄ 00:17, Nov. 21, 2015 (UTC)

for some reason the eyes look strange to me... Maybe define the gradient of them? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 06:02,11/21/2015

Reupload I tried moving the pupil's away from the lighter part of the eye.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 19:48, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the main body shading a bit? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 17:22 Sun Nov 22

Smudge the black a bit more. —Jayce(17:26, 11/22/2015)

Reupload Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 19:18, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

define your light source on the chest - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:14,11/24/2015

You mean cover the light spot? It's usually fine with other images, and the light source is coming from the <---.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 04:33, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

if it's coming from <== there, then the leg shading is in the wrong place. Switch it, please. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:50,11/24/2015

No, the light source is coming from there. The shading will be ==> that way then.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 07:45, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ahh, I see. I thought you meant that the light was hitting <== this way. But that means the chest shading is in the wrong direction. Perhaps flip that around? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:08,11/24/2015

I'm sorry I'm still confused.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 20:41, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Just swap the position of the chest shading around. User:Burntclaw/Sig 23:30, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I think I understand what you mean now.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 07:29, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Note quite. This is what I meant for you to do with the chest: http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283593286300.png - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 11:18,11/25/2015

Reupload Like that?Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 19:40, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you get rid of some of the shading on <== side of the chest? Now the whole chest looks shaded, whereas part of the chest on that side should be in light like Fox's image shows. —Ivy ☆ 21:53, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 04:21, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the white, like on the mc? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 20:22 Thu Nov 26

Reupload Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 20:57, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

define the facial shading - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 14:08,11/27/2015

Reupload Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 00:58, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Moss Tail (ES) ~ For Approval

Tis who has done terrible tinted shading and shall never do thy again? Tis I has done the job and tis failed terribly. ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 17:00, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading on the overall body?--Dewsplash (talk) 17:12, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

'Reuploaded 'This is just horrifying ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 17:31, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading? 🎁 Winterloon (Christmas Tree) 17:33, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

I can't tell if it's the shading or not, but he looks awfully green. —Jayce(17:39, 11/24/2015)

I see red, Maybe change the shading tint to blue of black? 🎁 Winterloon (Christmas Tree) 18:00, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-up im cring in le inside. ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 21:49, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

The tail is looking a little bit flat. If the tail's supposed to be in entire shadow, perhaps add some depth to it. ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 03:06, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 20:20 Thu Nov 26

re-up wait a second, i need to go flip a table ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 15:22, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Shattered Ice(ES) ~ For Approval

About half of the time I spent of this image was on shading. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 15:06 Wed Nov 25

Define the shading on the stomach & tail? Lovely! Sorry about commenting on the shading >3< 🎁 Winterloon (Christmas Tree) 15:18, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 16:45 Wed Nov 25

Expand and define shading i can hardly make it out User:Winterflurry/Sig 17:58, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'll probably be told to lighten it, but whatever. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 3:11 Thu Nov 26

The lightness looks ok to me. But perhaps smooth it out - I can see the smudge lines very, very clearly. ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 03:15, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I swear, I did actually smudge the shading on every layer, even if it looks pretty similar to what it looked like before. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 14:36 Thu Nov 26

dont smudge it all horizontally - smudge it to the direction of the fur flow - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 14:49,11/27/2015

It's intended to be smudged in the direction of the fur... Where did I mess up? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 15:28 Fri Nov 27

It does look rather horizontal, instead of flowing into the direction of the fur. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:21, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 3:15 Sat Nov 28

Jackdaw's Cry (es) ~ For Approval

I set title as evaluation since i dont know if anyone promoted me to an apprentice, I actually like this! 🎁 Winterloon (Christmas Tree) 15:58, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. This is just a personal preference, but the eyes look slightly cross-eyed. Perhaps fix that? ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 03:04, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

You already had one image approved, so you should very much be an apprentice, hence why I'm changing it now. Sorry about not being able to give you the file; I've been really busy the past two days or so. x.x It doesn't look like you quite need it though. —Jayce(03:38, 11/26/2015)

re-up Thanks Snowed and Blossom! 🎁 Winterloon (Christmas Tree) 05:40, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

He needs a torn ear. Very nice! Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 06:16, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Thank you Bluestar! :) 🎁 Winterloon (Christmas Tree) 16:00, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

there's some waste around the torn ear. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 18:14 Fri Nov 27

re-up :J 🎁 Winterloon (Christmas Tree) 18:19, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Nettlebreeze (Star) - For Approval

Shaggy old guy :D Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ}

Ooh, beautiful. The shadow on the chest is contradicting to the light source. Perhaps you could swap that around? ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 03:03, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 18:42, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Man, I love his eyes. Can you smooth out the shading on his arms? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 20:56, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks c: Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 14:16, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Swift Minnow (ES) - For Approval

This has faint texture on it, correct? Because my monitor's being weird, and I can't really tell too well. —Ivy ☆ 21:35, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

yes it does but its much more blurred than that. yours tbh kinda looks like she's got visible veins. Also could you smooth out the shading some more? User:Winterflurry/Sig 23:36, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blurred the texture and shading. Already this image is a nightmare, especially given I can hardly see what I'm doing. What is wrong with my monitor?? —Ivy ☆ 01:10, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

could you blend the arm/hind leg shading a little bit? cute! Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 22:38 Fri Nov 27

Quick Water (ES) ~ For Approval

Good morning (first sunny day Shanghai's had in weeks) - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:00,11/26/2015

I realized there's waste. I'll fix that later. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 07:19,11/26/2015

Re-uploaded - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 12:05,11/26/2015

pretty! could you smoothen out the shading on the shoulder a little bit? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 03:45 Fri Nov 27

Re-uploaded Thank you! I hope this made any difference... - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:58,11/27/2015

Red Claw (ES) ~ For Approval

Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣• 03:17, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

I doubt you need it, but would you like the file or either his rogue or loner? (I can always shoot it to you in the morning) The colors and texture are a bit....misleading, to say the least. =P If you don't want it, that's fine, although would you mind softening the texture a little bit? it's not quite as distinctive on his other images. —Jayce(03:36, 11/26/2015)

Define the light on the face - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:41,11/26/2015

Morning Fire (K) - For Evaluation

My first charart - I'm also not sure if I got the right template, and if I didn't, I'm sorry because I got a little confused on her page. Thanks. Comments? Misty~ (talk) 07:02, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

She's dark brown - darken the color please. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 07:15,11/26/2015

Re-uploaded (I think this is how you do it? Sorry, I'm new to all of this...) Misty~ (talk) 07:22, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

that's exactly what I wanted you to do. Darken it some more, and I'll promote you into an apprentice, since you clearly know what you're doing. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 07:26,11/26/2015

Re-uploaded I don't think the changes are showing at the moment though (For me at least). And thanks

Morning Fire is such a cool name. Can you make the earpink less neon please? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:49, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, please. Very nice! —Ivy ☆ 14:30, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Misty~ (talk) 03:21, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the color could be darkened. Look at Moss Tail's charart for some reference. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:58,11/27/2015

Re-uploaded Is it a bit too dark now..? Misty~ (talk) 05:21, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Again. Changes weren't showing. Misty~ (talk) 10:53, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink, it look way too neon. Perhaps color pick from an existing image? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:16,11/28/2015

Re-uploaded Misty~ (talk) 03:41, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Song (Q) - CBA

Okay, so it says "splotchy brown", so I wasn't quite sure what to do... given that the white was specifically said to be on the paws and tail tip, I don't think putting it anywhere else is the right thing... —Jayce(18:39, 11/26/2015)

Wow! Awesome job with the splotches! Define shading everywhere? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 20:18 Thu Nov 26

there's waste on the paws. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:07, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

i think she needs short fur. david ^🌈 18:48, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Demonic short-hair tails are demonic. —Jayce(20:18, 11/27/2015)

Ok, I love this so much I just need to CBA this. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:37, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

One Eye (DF) - For Approval

easy pattern easy thanksgiving User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:08, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

There's no cite for this on his page. Declining until a cite is added. Remember, someone saying they think he could have founded the Dark Forest, or have been the first cat in it, doesn't mean it's true. It needs to be 100% certain. —Jayce(10:28, 11/27/2015)

Okay, nevermind. Wikia's showing the previous version on the page again. This is what happens when cache isn't cleared and all that fun stuff again.. >.> —Jayce(10:32, 11/27/2015)

maybe make his fluffier around the neck, legs, and tail? Gorgeous! ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 13:54, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

There is no cited description that his neck and tail have to be extremely fluffy, it just needs to be knotted, which I think I have done, and his fur style doesn't need to match 100% with the other images, but thanks thou User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:04, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

This looks awesome! Can you define the shading everywhere? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 15:07, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste on his tail.--Dewsplash (talk) 17:06, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

can you thicken some of the lines of ragged fur if possible? david ^🌈 18:12, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

There's a smudge of gray at the paw closest to the right. Songheart

Re-uploaded. I only thickened the ragged fur on the outside, cause if i did on the inside it would just be big blotches of pure black (I tried it, believe me). User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:34, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Slate (Star) ~ For Approval

I love this girl. In case you're wondering, I didn't add the scar as I felt you wouldn't be able to see it from this angle. If someone disagrees, though, I'll add it. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 17:04, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Im sorry but honestly this cite for her being in starclan is invalid, as kate only says "i think they would be pretty chill in starclan" that does not confirm anything whatsoever that slate is in starclan at the current commented moment. Nor is "think" something that means "yes". User:Winterflurry/Sig 18:05, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Doesn't that mean that Slash and friends/One Eye don't get DF images? Because all she said was "yes, those cats would make fabulous Dark Forest cats!", not that they are in the DF. Also, the "yes" was in reply to a "Do you think" comment, not a "Are they in the DF?". bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 21:20 Fri Nov 27

Well, given that the "yes" was to the Dark Forest comment, not to Slate, I think it applies. The comment towards Slate said that they'd get along in StarClan, not that Slate died or anything... —Jayce(21:23, 11/27/2015)

Yeah, but the Dark Forest comment was "do you think these cats are in the DF", not "are these cats in the DF". Not that any of that applies to Slate's image. I just feel like the DF "yes" is kinda invalid, considering how the question is phrased. But I am rather new to the wiki and do not know everything that is considered a valid cite, so just ignore this comment if I'm wrong. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 21:29 Fri Nov 27

Uh but it's Kate's answer that is valid, not my question, judging by that, a ton of cites are going to be nullified? And she flat out said "yes" in regards to my question. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:11, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

But the question was "do you think" and thus yes meant "yes, I think so". I dunno, that's how I interpret it. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 3:17 Sat Nov 28

can you bring this stuff to pc, it doesn't belong here. david ^🌈 05:18, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Dew Nose (ES) ~ For Approval

❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 18:41, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Just brighten up the white a tad on the nose and tail? --Dewsplash (talk) 18:46, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a tad thicker on her kit image. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:20,11/28/2015

Willow Tail (Star) - For Evaluation

Bleh, I'll probably redo the shading later. Stoatskip (talk) 19:23, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay, that's better. Stoatskip (talk) 20:14, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps try blurring the stipes? Nice. Misty~ (talk) 22:32, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

could you also add some depth to the shading on the main body? it looks a little flat. the eyes are beautiful, by the way! Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 22:36 Fri Nov 27

Thicken the stripes - they look way too thin. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:14,11/28/2015

Bee (DF) ~ For Approval

File:Bee.df.png not the BEES david ^🌈 19:53, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

define shading, beautiful <3 ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 01:39, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded david ^🌈 05:28, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

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 I've already stated this, but I cannot smudge on Sai {{User:Ivystripe/sig}}  08:58, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+Well, maybe blur it then? Or use a different program? Or smooth it out in a different way, like add some on the edges on a lower opacity? {{User:BCPrincess73/Sig}}<span style="{{User:BCPrincess73/Time}}">21:32 Fri Nov 27</span>
+I honestly think it's fine, and you guys are being way too picky. There is ''nothing'' wrong with having the white how it is; smudging isn't even ''mandatory'' on ''any'' image. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|21:36, 11/27/2015}}
+I agree it looks fine honestly. And iveh if you need help smudging in SAI i csn help c: {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 21:43, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+Re-CBA? {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|02:22,11/28/2015}}
+Ok but even if the white was agreed to look fine, the part where the shading needs to be smoothed out is still not addressed. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 02:25, November 28, 2015 (UTC)
 ==[[Mistpelt]] (Star) - For Approval==
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 I can't see where the light source is. Could you define it? {{User:BCPrincess73/Sig}}<span style="{{User:BCPrincess73/Time}}">20:25 Thu Nov 26</span>
+'''reuploaded''' tried a new light source. {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">22:51 Fri Nov 27</span></small>
+I'm going to be that person but I seriously still can't see any shading on the face and legs. :x {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|02:23,11/28/2015}}
 == [[Rockfall ]] (Star)- For Approval ==
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 http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283571116800.png Alright, here are all the issues I see. <span style="font-size:12px;">[[User:Blossomstream|<span style="font-family: MV Boli;font-size:12px; color:green; text-shadow:white 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Blossomstream</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Blossomstream|<span style="font-family: MV Boli; font-size:11px;color:green; text-shadow: White 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The War <span style="font-family: MV Boli; font-size:11px;color:green; text-shadow: white 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Is Over</span></span>]] </sup></span> 03:14, November 26, 2015 (UTC)
-==[[Dust Muzzle]] (ES) - For Approval==
+==[[Dust Muzzle]] (ES) - CBA==
 [[File:Dust Muzzle.es.png]] I totally forgot I had this file saved under the wrong name and just uploaded it as was without changing the name. :P Sorry to ask, but could someone fix that for me? Anyway, I'm really happy with this, trying to match the kit was definitely interesting. ^^ [[User:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#6699FF;font-family:Comic Sans MS;">Jayie</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">Unwritten </span>]][[User:Jayfrost (BC)/Chararts|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~</span>]]</sup> 04:24, November 15, 2015 (UTC)
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 '''Reuploaded.''' [[User:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#6699FF;font-family:Comic Sans MS;">Jayie</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">Unwritten </span>]][[User:Jayfrost (BC)/Chararts|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~</span>]]</sup> 05:06, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+CBA? (Also, you might want to put your signature into a template) {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|02:22,11/28/2015}}
 == [[Gooseberry]] (Q) - For Approval==
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 define the facial shading {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|14:08,11/27/2015}}
+'''Reupload''' {{User:Stealthfire star/Sig}} 00:58, November 28, 2015 (UTC)
 ==[[Moss Tail]] (ES) ~ For Approval==
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 It's intended to be smudged in the direction of the fur... Where did I mess up? {{User:BCPrincess73/Sig}}<span style="{{User:BCPrincess73/Time}}">15:28 Fri Nov 27</span>
+It ''does'' look rather horizontal, instead of flowing into the direction of the fur. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 02:21, November 28, 2015 (UTC)
+'''Re-uploaded''' I tried {{User:BCPrincess73/Sig}}<span style="{{User:BCPrincess73/Time}}">3:15 Sat Nov 28</span>
 == [[Jackdaw's Cry]] (es) ~ For Approval ==
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 == [[Swift Minnow]] (ES) - For Approval ==
-[[File:Swift Minnow.es.png]] This has faint texture on it, correct? Because my monitor's being weird, and I can't really tell too well.  {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 21:35, November 25, 2015 (UTC)
+[[File:Swift Minnow.es.png]] This has faint texture on it, correct? Because my monitor's being weird, and I can't really tell too well. {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 21:35, November 25, 2015 (UTC)
 yes it does but its much more blurred than that. yours tbh kinda looks like she's got visible veins. Also could you smooth out the shading some more? {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 23:36, November 25, 2015 (UTC)
 '''Re-uploaded.''' Blurred the texture and shading. Already this image is a nightmare, especially given I can hardly see what I'm doing. <small>What is wrong with my monitor??</small> {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 01:10, November 26, 2015 (UTC)
+could you blend the arm/hind leg shading a little bit? cute! {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">22:38 Fri Nov 27</span></small>
 ==[[Quick Water]] (ES) ~ For Approval==
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 == [http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Morning_Fire Morning Fire] (K) - For Evaluation  ==
-[[File:Morning_Fire.kit.png]] My first charcat - I'm also not sure if I got the right template, and if I didn't, I'm sorry because I got a little confused on her page. Thanks. Comments? [[User:Mistyfowl15|Misty~ ]] ([[User talk:Mistyfowl15|talk]]) 07:02, November 26, 2015 (UTC)
+[[File:Morning_Fire.kit.png]] My first charart - I'm also not sure if I got the right template, and if I didn't, I'm sorry because I got a little confused on her page. Thanks. Comments? [[User:Mistyfowl15|Misty~ ]] ([[User talk:Mistyfowl15|talk]]) 07:02, November 26, 2015 (UTC)
 She's dark brown - darken the color please. {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|07:15,11/26/2015}}
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 '''Re-uploaded '''Again. Changes weren't showing. [[User:Mistyfowl15|Misty~ ]] ([[User talk:Mistyfowl15|talk]]) 10:53, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+Dull down the ear pink, it look way too neon. Perhaps color pick from an existing image? {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|02:16,11/28/2015}}
-== [[Owl Song]] (Q) - For Approval ==
+'''Re-uploaded [[User:Mistyfowl15|Misty~ ]] ([[User talk:Mistyfowl15|talk]]) 03:41, November 28, 2015 (UTC) '''
+== [[Owl Song]] (Q) - CBA ==
 [[File:Owl Song.queen.png]] Okay, so it says "splotchy brown", so I wasn't quite sure what to do... given that the white was specifically said to be on the paws and tail tip, I ''don't'' think putting it anywhere else is the right thing... {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:39, 11/26/2015}}
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 there's waste on the paws. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 14:07, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+i think she needs short fur. {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 18:48, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+'''Re-uploaded'''. Demonic short-hair tails are demonic. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|20:18, 11/27/2015}}
+Ok, I love this so much I just need to CBA this. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 02:37, November 28, 2015 (UTC)
 == [[One Eye]] (DF) - For Approval ==
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 This looks awesome! Can you define the shading everywhere? {{User:Appledash/Sig}} 15:07, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
-There's waste on his tail.--[[User:Dewsplash|Dewsplash]] ([[User talk:Dewsplash|talk]]) 17:06, November 27, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 17:06, November, 27, 2015
+There's waste on his tail.--[[User:Dewsplash|Dewsplash]] ([[User talk:Dewsplash|talk]]) 17:06, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
 can you thicken some of the lines of ragged fur if possible? {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 18:12, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+There's a smudge of gray at the paw closest to the right. {{User:Songheart/Sig}}
+'''Re-uploaded.''' I only thickened the ragged fur on the outside, cause if i did on the inside it would just be big blotches of pure black (I tried it, believe me). {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 02:34, November 28, 2015 (UTC)
 ==[[Slate]] (Star) ~ For Approval==
-[[File:Slate.star.png]] I love this girl. In case you're wondering, I didn't add the scar as I felt you wouldn't be able to see it  from this angle. If someone disagrees, though, I'll add it. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 17:04, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+[[File:Slate.star.png]] I love this girl. In case you're wondering, I didn't add the scar as I felt you wouldn't be able to see it from this angle. If someone disagrees, though, I'll add it. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 17:04, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
 Im sorry but honestly this cite for her being in starclan is invalid, as kate only says "i think they would be pretty chill in starclan" that does ''not'' confirm anything whatsoever that slate is in starclan at the current commented moment. Nor is "think" something that means "yes". {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 18:05, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+Doesn't that mean that Slash and friends/One Eye don't get DF images? Because all she said was "yes, those cats would make fabulous Dark Forest cats!", not that they are in the DF. Also, the "yes" was in reply to a "Do you think" comment, not a "Are they in the DF?". {{User:BCPrincess73/Sig}}<span style="{{User:BCPrincess73/Time}}">21:20 Fri Nov 27</span>
+Well, given that the "yes" was to the Dark Forest comment, not to Slate, I think it applies. The comment towards Slate said that they'd get along in StarClan, not that Slate died or anything... {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|21:23, 11/27/2015}}
+Yeah, but the Dark Forest comment was "do you ''think'' these cats are in the DF", not "are these cats in the DF". Not that any of that applies to Slate's image. I just feel like the DF "yes" is kinda invalid, considering how the question is phrased. But I am rather new to the wiki and do not know everything that is considered a valid cite, so just ignore this comment if I'm wrong. {{User:BCPrincess73/Sig}}<span style="{{User:BCPrincess73/Time}}">21:29 Fri Nov 27</span>
+Uh but it's Kate's answer that is valid, not my ''question'', judging by that, a ton of cites are going to be nullified? And she flat out said "yes" in regards to my question. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 02:11, November 28, 2015 (UTC)
+But the question was "do you think" and thus yes meant "yes, I think so". I dunno, that's how I interpret it. {{User:BCPrincess73/Sig}}<span style="{{User:BCPrincess73/Time}}">3:17 Sat Nov 28</span>
+can you bring this stuff to pc, it doesn't belong here. {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 05:18, November 28, 2015 (UTC)
 ==[[Dew Nose]] (ES) ~ For Approval==
 [[File:Dew_Nose.es.png]] {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 18:41, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
-Just brighten up the white a tad on the nose and tail? --[[User:Dewsplash|Dewsplash]] ([[User talk:Dewsplash|talk]]) 18:46, November 27, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 18:46, November, 27, 2015
+Just brighten up the white a tad on the nose and tail? --[[User:Dewsplash|Dewsplash]] ([[User talk:Dewsplash|talk]]) 18:46, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+I think the stripes are a tad thicker on her kit image. {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|02:20,11/28/2015}}
+== [[Willow Tail]] (Star) - For Evaluation ==
+[[File:Willow Tail.star.png]] Bleh, I'll probably redo the shading later. [[User:Stoatskip|Stoatskip]] ([[User talk:Stoatskip|talk]]) 19:23, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+'''Re-ups''' Okay, that's better. [[User:Stoatskip|Stoatskip]] ([[User talk:Stoatskip|talk]]) 20:14, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+Perhaps try blurring the stipes? Nice. [[User:Mistyfowl15|Misty~ ]] ([[User talk:Mistyfowl15|talk]]) 22:32, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+could you also add some depth to the shading on the main body? it looks a little flat. the eyes are beautiful, by the way! {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">22:36 Fri Nov 27</span></small>
+Thicken the stripes - they look way too thin. {{User:The_Fox_Girl/Sig2|02:14,11/28/2015}}
+== [[Bee]] (DF) ~ For Approval ==
+[[File:Bee.df.png]] not the BEES {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 19:53, November 27, 2015 (UTC)
+define shading, beautiful <3 {{User:Brambleshade.DA/Sig}} 01:39, November 28, 2015 (UTC)
+'''reuploaded''' {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 05:28, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

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