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Deputy Blanks - For Approval

having trouble with the tails :// Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? ✧Winter✧ 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded. Songheart

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{17:51 Wed Jan 27}}

the blanks are a little too small --Belllastar (talk) 00:21, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, they're not. o.o They're about the same size as many of the other blanks we have on here. —Jayce(00:23, 1/29/2016)

The necks look thin to me. However, only tweak it if you feel that you need to. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 17:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. I did a whole new tail placement that was suggested. I think it's working for the shorthaired, but does the longhair look alright? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 02:13 Sun Jan 31

It looks fine to me^^ but I think you can add some more tufts on the back of the tail? ~ Cheryl_Champagne^Problems 🍷 (07:15,1/31/2016)

The way the fur swoops up on the chest of the long-haired looks a little too cartoonish compared to the other blanks, at least in my opinion. Consider smoothing that out/making it more realistically fluffy, if that makes sense? It looks cool, don't get me wrong, I just don't think it fits the style of the other blanks. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 23:08, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add more "fur lines" on the long hair's tail? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 00:21,2/3/2016

Define the shoulder more and add some more to the lower jaw? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 07:05, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This isn't meant to rush you, but here's a reminder to upload the blanks! I know you're busy, but giving the section a nudge wouldn't hurt... I think. =P Given that you are not bound by the one-week upload limit, this is nothing other than a courtesy or something. I'd say "friendly reminder", but that's usually used in a mocking tone, and you know that's not what I mean. —Jayce(19:06, 2/5/2016)

reuploaded. my apologies with the delay. my new classes for the semester keep me busy on weeknights. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 01:06 Sat Feb 6

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The gap between the hind leg and the hind foot reminds me too much of a rabbit... Sagestream ^{Visible only in the shadows} 09:10, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The curved line at the shoulder looks akward can I ask why it is there? Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 14:56, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The hindlegs of both the short-haired and long-haired have different lengths to them. I suggest fixing them so they match? Songheart

I'm sorry for the massive nitpicky comment, but could you make the shoulder a bit wider, thin out the lines on the front toes some (and maybe shorten them),move the toe on the back foot backwards a tiny bit, move the far back leg forward a bit, make the close haunch attach to the leg a bit lower down, add a tiny bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest and haunch, make the far front foot a little wider, shorten the shorthair tail a tad, make the gap between the upper and lower whisker a bit wider and make the back of the heads attach to the neck a bit higher up (or the jaw a bit lower)? If you don't get what I mean, I'll gladly give a redline to show you. Most of this is optional. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{16:01 Sat Feb 6}}

It doesn't look like a rabbit, Sagestream, and if it does, can you please tell her what to do, instead of just telling her what you think it looks like? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 19:32, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

A redline would be really helpful, Shinx :) Sometimes I get lost on what to do from just reading the text Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 19:34 Sat Feb 6

Alright, then i think maybe you should shorten the gap between the leg and the foot. it just looks a bit awkward. Sagestream ^{Visible only in the shadows} 02:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

I already said that Sage :P Anyway, hope this helps. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{10:53 Sun Feb 7}}

I think the tail could be raised a few pixels up on the back of the cat, and the neck needs to be thickened a bit ( http://prntscr.com/a1872f ), and the raised paw should be backed up a few pixels and made smaller. The tum could be dropped a pixel or two, and the ears made a bit neater. The longhair should probably have long fur all the way up to the chin too, as well as the shoulder being fuzzy. — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 23:45, 02/9/2016

Rileypaw (Kit) - CBA

File:Rileypaw.kit.png Right let's try this again... I will make him short haired and add a coller if need. Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 16:59, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Could you lighten the base coat, as well as thin out the stripes and add more? You have to match Snowdapple's apprentice image, I don't know if you've seen. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{17:05 Wed Jan 27}}

darken the tail shading as well I can barely see it— Minkclaw^{Never stop believing.} 17:06, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Youll need to add a collar since he was a kittypet. Also do you need my file? ✧Winter✧ 18:16, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Does he need a collar? I am having trouble putting a collar on a long haired blank. Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 18:37, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

You can borrow the collar lineart from Stormcloud's kit image if you like. I can send you an image with just the lineart if you want. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{18:42 Wed Jan 27}}

Also technically wouldnt you need to wait until blossompaw was archived before posting this? ✧Winter✧ 19:12, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think they would, since it was mistakenly reserved/posted, and the other artist came forward to claim it? Not sure in this situation though. Sorry I don't have anything constructive to say on the art, but it's all been said. — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 19:17, 01/27/2016

That would be great Shinx and actually Snowdapple would it be possible for me to get that file. I want to re do him Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 20:10, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hope this helps :) Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{20:21 Wed Jan 27}}

Reupload fixed collar and stripes. Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 21:40, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the base to match the apprentice? — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 21:13, 01/27/2016

Um it's the same I colour picked? Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 21:40, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

It looks much darker. Either define the light, or make sure you didn't colorpick from a shaded part. Define the shading depth too. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{21:42 Wed Jan 27}}

Reupload defined shading and lightened Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 21:51, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hey shinx could you do me a flavor and give velvet the file? Im out of town rn ✧Winter✧ 22:12, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Sure thing buddy- Velvet, do you have an e-mail or something I can send it to? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{22:20 Wed Jan 27}}

Yeah sure it's Leia.clark@gmail.com Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 22:21, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened base Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 23:07, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Remove the collar. It is not said anywhere in Ravenpaw's Farewell that Riley had a collar, and it's an assumption to say that he did have one. —Jayce(23:51, 1/28/2016)

I will remove it only if more people say Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 11:57, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

It's an assumption to have the collar, Velvet. Assumptions are not allowed on character pixels, so you have to remove it. It doesn't matter if people disagree; if there's no mention of a collar (which there is not), then he doesn't get one. Simple as that. —Jayce(12:28, 1/29/2016)

Remove the collar. Also make both ears dark gray, as seen on the loner image ✧Winter✧ 14:38, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload there is no need to get angry. I just did want to remove the collar only to be told to put it back on. Any way removed it and my kit always had grey ears. Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 18:26, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading. —Ivy ☆ 22:19, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload defined shading Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 09:23, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the parts that aren't darker, such as the legs and head, neck, etc. Also, is there texture on this? I can't make it out, since mine does have texture. There are also pale parts that need to be on the muzzle, neck, chest, underbelly, and paws. Did you get the file from Shinx? ✧Winter✧ 13:59, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I played around with the texture slightly but if I add too much it looks messie. Also lightened paws but were they really ment to be paler I never knew. Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 17:36, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:05,2/1/2016

The shading is getting a little too flat, could you define the light? ✧Winter✧ 04:23, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened him, he looks like a wee white tiger. Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 08:12, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add a little more shading around the edges? The shading depth could be defined a little, and it appears it might be leaking just a tad. Also, define the shading on <-- leg and the tail. —Ivy ☆ 02:49, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload difined shading Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 16:27, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the texture, please. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 15:18 Wed Feb 3

Reupload I am having so much bother with this texture! Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 18:35, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(16:41, 2/5/2016)

Can you define the pale parts? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 20:19, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

reupload lightened pale parts Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 21:15, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading need. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 01:03, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

I meant more, sorry. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened shading Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 14:52, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

This is actually starting to get a bit too bright in comparison to the apprentice image. Dull down the overall pelt color, and define the pale muzzle, chest, underbelly, and paws please. ✧Winter✧ 23:41, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I'm starting to hate this pale , muzzle underbelly and paws! Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 09:46, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

There's waste by his right ear. Songheart

Reupload thanks fixed that waste Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 13:11, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:28, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Pasha (KP) - For Approval

probably gonna redo this later. i was in a hurry. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 21:48 Tue Feb 2

Could you maybe lighten the base slightly so we can see the shading? Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 22:19, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base is fine, as the description does state very clearly "almost black" but could you define facial shading just a smidge? ✺Misty~_{R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~} 03:23, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This could be my screen but he looks too dark to be "almost black". Perhaps a darkness like Crowfeather would do. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 13:48,2/3/2016

Define the shading depth? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 15:19 Wed Feb 3

I think the darkness is fine but can you add some more eye ddepth? Unless it's there and I can't see it. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 19:53, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base could be lightened a little bit- she was supposed to be almost black, and this looks black. Crowfeather's shade would work wonderfully for this, I think. I also think the shading could be darkened a bit too. —Jayce(00:07, 2/4/2016)

can you make him more brown too. david ^🌈 15:22, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. Some said Crowfeather and Skt said brown so I tried to split the difference Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 00:53 Sat Feb 6

Why would he need to be brown? He was never described as "dark brown, nearly black" Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honorW~

The collar looks flat. Define the shading on it please. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:16,2/6/2016

He's not specified as dark grey or dark ginger or anything, so the default would be brown, correct? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{11:37 Sat Feb 6}}

yes, it would be. :T david ^🌈 11:46, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Define the nosepink, and the shading on the front leg? — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 20:08, 02/10/2016

Bellapaw (Lo) ~ For Approval

File:Bellapaw.loner.png I tried to match Berry's apprentice while Rileypaw was on CBA, but I couldn't ;_; So instead have a classic tabby Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{19:15 Fri Feb 5}}

Maybe you could make her colors more like Firestar's? She is said to look exactly like him after all. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 22:01, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

I've been playing around for a little while and honestly I can't ake the colors any more like Firestar's whilst still matching the pale orange description. I even colorpicked and just made the colors lighter- it still doesn't like anything like Firestar. Unless you can give me a color that's both pale orange //and// looks like Firestar..? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{23:35 Fri Feb 5}}

Mind if I play around with a new pattern/colors on the apprentice and see if I can get it to look more like Firestar but still light? If not, that's totally fine, I'll match this. :) Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 05:49, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

I'd much rather keep the pattern like this if possible (I'm really proud of it) but mess with the color all you like. Would you like the file? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{11:08 Sat Feb 6}}

So what's our stance with this? Is Jayie still going to take the apprentice to fiddle around with it to get a color Shinx can match? Or are we not doing anything? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 12:42, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Jayie has the file and has said that she's going to fiddle with the colors on the apprentice. I'm still waiting for that though. This isn't going to be declined if it hits one week while I'm waiting for Jayie, is it? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{13:47 Wed Feb 10}}

Nope. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:48, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

reups Heard back from Jayie. Any more firestar-ish from here just looks dark tan, or bright red, or yellow rather than pale orange. Trust me, I've tried. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{15:21 Wed Feb 10}}

Larkwing (FQ) (MC) ~ CBA

david ^🌈 01:07, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:18,2/7/2016

reuploaded just redid the shading entirely david ^🌈 16:42, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the ear-pink a touch scarly likey ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 05:23, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded ^^ david ^🌈 05:34, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:32, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Barkface (MC) - CBA

bork bork — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 01:26, 02/7/2016

Could you shorten the tail just a little bit more? Maybe... by no more than six pixels, if that? Seems a bit too long as it is. —Jayce(01:27, 2/7/2016)

Aww, so cute <3 Could you blend the shading break on the chest a little? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 03:02 Sun Feb 7

Reuploaded thank — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 18:41, 02/8/2016

Define the light on the chest ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 22:13, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just sharpened the spot that I blurred earlier, since that's all I could do. — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 22:18, 02/8/2016'

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:32, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Icewhisker (MC) - For Approval

This looked better in gimp. :/ Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 01:37, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and eye depth. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:46,2/7/2016

Re-uploaded: :/ Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 19:11, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define and expand the shading? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 19:52 Sun Feb 7

Define the light on the legs, actually, and expand and define shading everywhere else. The herbs also look pretty neon, perhaps saturate them a little more? — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 18:29, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 18:45, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

smudge the earpink ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 21:09, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 22:12, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? It doesn't look any different from before, they still look fully covered in shading — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 22:50, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: THe earpink was already smudged before but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 23:23, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I think since your source is coming from the top left, the shading on the legs and tail would be switched to the other side. ✧Winter✧ 00:39, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 05:43, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Theres some shading leaking on the back leg. Define the light on the legs and theres also some shading from the tail leaking onto the cheek. ✧Winter✧ 18:54, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I think this is as defined as the light's going to get, however, if it isn't satisfactory I'll try and do it some more while wrestling with a shark. Is that funny? Idk, I'm tired. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 23:59, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth a little? —Ivy ☆ 01:22, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Leafpool (MC) - For Approval

Also looked better in gimp. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 01:59, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Please smudge the stripes with a hard edged brush instead of blurring them, as they're smudged on her other images. Also, the shading needs to be defined and its leaking in some places. Also, the paws look gray. The ear pink is also very hard edged. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:17,2/7/2016

Could you define your light source? The tail shading says it's the right, but rest of the image says the left. Also, define the light on the raised front leg. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{10:50 Sun Feb 7}}

Re-uploaded: <_< Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 18:56, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Why the "<_<"? It's not like I and Shinx were being rude or anything, I was just asking you to fix something on your image. And define the shading on the back leg furthest away from us. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:56,2/8/2016

Re-uploaded: It's directed towards my image, Fox. Not you or Shinx. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 01:59, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define and expand the shading ? She looks a bit flat — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 18:21, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: I can't expand this anymore. This as much as it'll get before it looks like the entire image is in shading. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 18:44, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I think she has a stripe down her back and tail? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 22:25, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Couch you blur the shading a bit more on the tum? Also define the shading on the raised paw — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 22:44, 02/8/2016

About the stripe, is it visible on this blank? I'm not sure, that's why I didn't include it. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 23:22, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Please kill me. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 05:43, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) ~ CBA

hmm ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 02:44, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Mmaybe sharpen the shading on the back legs? Also doesn't the entire cheek need shading? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 01:59, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

With this light source, no, the whole cheek doesn't need shading. I'd add some to the chest though — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 22:41, 02/8/2016

Reups ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 19:15, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:33, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Oatspeckle (MC) ~ CBA

- Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:45,2/7/2016

Define the shading on all her legs. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 18:27, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:17,2/9/2016

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a touch more and maybe blur the shading around her elbow ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 05:25, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:24,2/9/2016

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:33, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MC) ~ CBA

Oh my god this pattern. I noticed the waste after I uploaded, I'll get it next upload. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{02:46 Sun Feb 7}}

There's waste at the base of her tail. Songheart

.... Not trying to be rude, but I already said I saw it. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{14:36 Sun Feb 7}}

reups made a few tweaks Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{16:43 Mon Feb 8}}

Blur the shading on her lifted paw, it looks like she has gray toes :P ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 05:26, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Expand/define the shading on the chest. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:27,2/9/2016

reups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{09:39 Tue Feb 9}}

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:36, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Kestrelwing (MC alt) ~ For Approval

- Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:15,2/7/2016

idk if this makes sense but there's shading that has leaked onto the tail from the head making it look a little striped???— Minkclaw^{Never stop believing.} 15:58, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Add more shading on the back part of the image, and remove the shading on ==> that side of the tail, as your source is coming from that way ✧Winter✧ 00:40, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:17,2/9/2016

Smooth the shading on his right hindleg and, not entirely sure, but I think he's supposed to have a gray nose ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 05:27, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:25,2/9/2016

Smooth out the shading on the paws, and would he have shading on his back? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:37, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

There's shading leaking from the forepaw on the ground to the raised one — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 20:12, 02/10/2016

Echosnout (MC) ~ For Approval

❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 03:26, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. —Jayce(18:42, 2/7/2016)

I have the file for the StarClan let me know if you need it.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 20:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:10,2/9/2016

Reups ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 19:11, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

can you crop the image? david ^🌈 19:14, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reups ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 19:18, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Shouldn't the image be cropped some more, or is it jsut my eyes? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:37, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Cloudspots (MC) ~ For Approval

File:Cloudspots.mc.pngMy first medicine cat image. All colors from the rogue image, which I still have the file for. Coments? Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 05:11, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Brighten the white on the paws and ears. —Jayce(18:41, 2/7/2016)

Reuploaded. I can't get the ears any whiter than this. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 20:15, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 02:00, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 03:04, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the white paws? That should solve the issue of them looking grey. Also, could you possibly define the light on the herbs? — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 18:15, 02/8/2016

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:34, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more, and please crop the image. —Jayce(23:56, 2/9/2016)

Reuploaded. Tried smudged shading for the first time on an official image. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 17:24, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reed Tail (MC) ~ For Approval

Working with my own blank is harder then i tought o-o Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 13:01, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Difine the shading a smidge Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 13:13, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 19:30, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Crop the image, please. There's way too much excess space.—Jayce(23:55, 2/9/2016)

Re-ups Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 15:30, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Swiftfoot (MC) ~ For Approval

Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 13:16, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the shading a bit more? Nice job! bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 19:54 Sun Feb 7

Re-ups ThxSziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 20:38, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Crop the image, please. There's way too much excess space. —Jayce(23:55, 2/9/2016)

Smooth out the shading a little bit? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{13:55 Wed Feb 10}}

Re-ups Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 15:30, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Cloudberry (TC) (MC) - CBA

Ahh, the only original MC I've ever had to my name. —Jayce(18:40, 2/7/2016)

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the tail, and define the eye depth. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 19:12, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Don't comment on the grayness of the legs. I'm fixing that now. —Jayce(19:39, 2/7/2016)

Re-uploaded. Meh. —Jayce(19:42, 2/7/2016)

Define the shading Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 20:17, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Where would you like me to define it? The legs are about as defined as I'm going to get it (trust me, I've tried many times and they just look awful), and I think the tail is pretty good as well. Should I try to define the shading on the main body? —Jayce(20:19, 2/7/2016)

Oh sorry forgot to say. Yes just the body apart from that this is lovely! Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 21:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(22:30, 2/7/2016)

Re-uploaded. Darkened shading as per request but I am not going as dark as Sagewhisker. —Jayce(21:14, 2/8/2016)

I think with this source the head shading would be on the other side. david ^🌈 00:43, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a flat muzzle? — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 00:47, 02/9/2016

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a touch more scarly steals c: ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 05:28, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading needs to be smoothed out more, and I'm not sure if t here would be any shading on the back with the source as well. if I'm wrong feel free to correct me. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 05:31, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. As I told you on Skype, Icy, I don't want to smooth out the shading. It's been a neverending circle with that- it's too smooth for some (myself included) and not smooth enough for others. I also don't want to get told to define it again. And tbh, I really don't want to go back to my old shading- it was too flat and it just ended up getting nominated in a few weeks anyways. —Jayce(13:25, 2/9/2016)

Meh. If you insist. Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:38, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Sagewhisker (MC) ~ CBA

I have a love-hate relationship with white cats. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 19:49 Sun Feb 7

I just realized I forgot to lengthen her whiskers. I'll add them next upload. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 19:55 Sun Feb 7

Lighten the shading a bit, please. —Jayce(19:57, 2/7/2016)

Re-uploaded bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 23:16 Sun Feb 7

Smooth out the shading on the legs and underbelly just a tad? Nice. —Ivy ☆ 03:14, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I feel like the shading could be defused more it look a bit like the lines are blurred insted of shading, also can you please score out the image on the characters needing art page. Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 12:44, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I'm assuming the previous post means to blur the shading more/smooth it out?? Anyway, lighten it a bit more too please — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 22:33, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 4:27 Tue Feb 9

Please crop the image- there's way too much excess space. —Jayce(23:54, 2/9/2016)

What size should I crop it to? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 2:02 Wed Feb 10

It's a common misconception that images need to be kept at the same dimensions as the lineart itself. They should be cropped as close to the lineart as possible. Besides that, the lineart was cropped earlier, so all of these images have way too much space on <-- side of the blank. There's no need for such a massive amount of waste on these images. —Jayce(02:05, 2/10/2016)

Reuploaded bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 2:44 Wed Feb 10

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:39, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (MC) - CBA

File:Pebbleheart.mc.png - all the colors are the same as the old one ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 08:13, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Possibly add some shading depth to the tail? And maybe lighten the berries to differentiate them from the fur — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 22:31, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 02:53, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpen the white chest? It looks too blurred. And I think the stripes go into it but it doens't look like that right now. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 05:44, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 07:08, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

A little more, please. it looks too blended in with the fur. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 15:09, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Crop the image, please. There's way too much excess space. —Jayce(02:05, 2/10/2016)

Re-uploaded I think part of what you may be seeing, Icy, is the tinted purple shading under the head on the white chest. Either way, I messed with it some more ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:56, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Looks good now. :) Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:40, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

change the heading derp :P ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 19:19, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Mothflight (MC) - CBA

File:Mothflight.mc.png - meh... looking at it now, I need to tweak the shading on the face... ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 08:13, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

None of her other images have texture, dear. =P —Jayce(08:59, 2/8/2016)

she should be greying too david ^🌈 12:26, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 20:02, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Did you crop the image because it looks rather weird idk— Minkclaw^{River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.} 21:45, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

I just cropped off the excess now ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:57, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:40, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Sloefur (MC) ~ For Approval

File:Sloefur.mc.png matched the colors with the old one— Minkclaw^{Never stop believing.} 16:27, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I can barely pick out the herbs from the fur. Maybe lighten the herb colours. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 16:33, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— Minkclaw^{Never stop believing.} 16:39, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading, define and smudge the earpink, and define the shading on the herbs and berries. Also, there's waste in that space between the raised front leg and the hind leg that touches said leg. — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 18:12, 02/8/2016

Try to lighten the herbs some more. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 05:45, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— Minkclaw^{River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.} 17:59, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Should this not be called for evaluation? Sorry if I'm wrong.Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 18:24, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

There's no point in changing the heading now, considering she's already passed the requirements to become an apprentice in the project. —Jayce(18:26, 2/9/2016)

Define the herb shading - they look a bit flat ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 19:10, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— Minkclaw^{River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.} 14:19, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading on the main body, particularly around the lower-back. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 16:53 Wed Feb 10

Milkfur (RC) (MC) - For Approval

File:Milkfur (RC).mc.png I think I misnamed my file and forgot the RC part...and let me know if there needs to be a light texture layer beneath the stripes. It was sort of difficult to tell on the original beneath the smudging. Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{16:58 Mon Feb 8}

Yeah, I'd move it, but that would alter the previous version as well. Just go ahead and upload over File:Milkfur (RC).mc.png whenever you have the time. And yes, there should be texture. I don't know many images of Beebs' that don't have texture. —Jayce(19:42, 2/8/2016)

Reuploaded Thanks, Cloud. That's what I thought about the texture. And I am defining it on the face on the next upload. Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{02:50 Tue Feb 9}

could you define the shading on the front legs a little more.— Minkclaw^{River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.} 21:49, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Since you need to reupload anyways, could you please crop the image? There's way too much excess space. —Jayce(23:53, 2/9/2016)

Reuploaded Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{16:57 Wed Feb 10}

Micah (MC) ~ For Approval

Eyyyyy ✧Winter✧ 00:35, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Receed the shading on the chest, I think a bit more light would be hitting her chest, and, with your light source, the shading should switching to the other side of her left foreleg. Very pretty! ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 05:30, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Micahs a dude bro xD and also no to the leg, because the other leg is in front of that one and would be blocking light. ✧Winter✧ 05:35, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

lightent eh chest and cheek shading— Minkclaw^{River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.} 18:34, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

The shading darkness is fine. Its the same darkness on the other images. Ill get to removing some chest shading tonight ✧Winter✧ 18:52, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to lighten the shading that much, Winter. It does look a bit dark in some places. I know you prefer darker shading, but it does appear to clash in some places, such as the tail, face, and front legs. —Jayce(18:53, 2/9/2016)

But i cant lighten the shading depth without lightening it everywhere else, and id rather not get told to define the shading. ✧Winter✧ 18:55, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

I think in this case, you should be fine. The shading doesn't need to be lightened all that much- it's not that dark, and the way you have it blurred gives it tons of depth, even when it's light (which I don't get how you shade that way but that's another stoRY) —Jayce(18:57, 2/9/2016)

Comments before approval? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:41, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, but can you smooth out the transition from shading to pelt on the neck please? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 16:52 Wed Feb 10

What do you mean? ✧Winter✧ 16:54, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

And my comment still stands, by the way. Also, I think it's a bit too sharp, is what she's saying. —Jayce(16:55, 2/10/2016)

Redthistle (MC) - For Approval

I literally have no idea how I did that pattern last time. o.o This is my attempt to replicate it. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:06, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading on the main body a tad? ✺Misty~_{R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~} 06:53, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also sharpened the pattern a bit to make it match better. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 17:25, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

smudge the leg markings a tad and sharpen shading on the legs as well more to the front— Minkclaw^{River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.} 18:33, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

could you smudge the lighter tail markings a little more? the only hard-edgeness i see is towards the middle part of the tail. absolutely stunning, jayie! Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 20:06 Tue Feb 9

Crop the image, please. There's way too much excess space. —Jayce(02:06, 2/10/2016)

Aren't I supposed to keep it the same size as the original blank? I thought that was the general rule. Otherwise, aren't all the medicine cat images, if individually cropped, going to be different sizes? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 05:57, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

As I said to Princess, it's a common misconception that there needs to be that much space; in fact, there really shoudn't be that much extra space. David also cropped the MC blanks earlier, so that's kind of a defunct statement now. You are more than allowed (and it is very much preferred) to crop your images. —Jayce(06:04, 2/10/2016)

Seems to make more sense to crop the original blanks first, but you said Skt did that already, so kay, I'll crop it to that, then. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 06:08, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC) ~ For Approval

It's been a while... ✺Misty~_{R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~} 06:07, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Defin e the shading and expand it on the stomach, and define the light on the first front legs. Also smooth it out some more. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 06:11, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also tried to match the previous image better. It's so hard o.o ✺Misty~_{R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~} 06:49, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded again ✺Misty~_{R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~} 06:51, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add shading on the back leg and the tail and expand it on the stomach ? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 06:53, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✺Misty~_{R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~} 06:58, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a little more? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! _{_{09:42 Tue Feb 9}}

his stripes need mottles on them. david ^🌈 13:31, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

and crop the image too. david ^🌈 14:33, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not very happy with his mottles and his stripe style, can anyone give me tips? :\ ✺Misty~_{R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~} 07:44, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✺Misty~_{R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~} 08:56, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Again... ✺Misty~_{R u n W i l d W i t h M e F o r e v e r~} 11:00, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Add some more depth on the stripes with the stomach, and possibly smooth out the shading some more? I'm sorry if I'm being picky - you don't have to do it if you don't want to. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 12:41, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Acorn Fur (MC) ~ For Approval

david ^🌈 14:39, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

could you darken the cheek shading a tad?— Minkclaw^{River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.} 18:32, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded that's about as dark as I'll go, considering it's the same darkness as the rest of the shading. david ^🌈 18:56, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Define the stomach shading. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:43, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded david ^🌈 18:42, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Littlecloud (MC) - For Approval

All colors from the previous images. —Jayce(15:02, 2/9/2016)

can you curve the stripes a little more near his side and back. They look a little pointy and when I look at the older image they were a bit more curved.— Minkclaw^{River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.} 18:31, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

The stripes don't need to match 100%, as this is a different side of the image. Plus, it's kinda hard to curve them anymore than they already are without redoing the pattern. I'd also like to mention that the MC image was at a different angle. —Jayce(18:34, 2/9/2016)

Can you possibly smudge the shading some more, and expand the shading on the stomach and bag leg and tail. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 13:44, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Redscar (MC) - For Approval

needed to do more patterns other than solid so — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 21:55, 02/9/2016

Brackenheart (MC) - For Approval

I love this design. Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{22:22 Tue Feb 9}

Don't forget to crop the image. ✧Winter✧ 23:50, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sun ^{Man, that man is} ^nonstop♣•_{16:55 Wed Feb 10}

Smooth out the shading a little on the legs and chest. Very pretty! —Ivy ☆ 01:26, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Ravenwing (MC) ~ For Approval

No idea how to crop this so I'll do it in the next upload —.neha^{it's that gloom boy season.} 11:06, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the tum, and smooth the shoulder shading. Also, define the shading on the hind legs and tail. — ferk was here ✦^{^✦}_{_{_✦}} 20:19, 02/10/2016

Goosefeather (MC) ~ For Approval

thanks to Icy for uploading. Lysandre's battle theme is a great motivator. ★ Berry ★^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 21:54 Wed Feb 10

Define the shading on the face, Who knew team flare could motivate, ps this is lovely! Velvetmoon ^{Personne n'échappe ^{à mon regard!}} 23:36, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Pearnose (MC) - For Approval

Idk. —Ivy ☆ 01:20, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

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