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Graywing (WC) (Ancient) ~ For Approval

File:Graywing (WC).ancient.png I've added to the table now. --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and then define it everywhere. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:36, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Also, the wiki is case-sensitive, the file should be named Graywing (WC).ancient.png, not Graywing_(WC).Ancient.png. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:55, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have a ripped eartip? RaisuRice (talk) 14:12, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think so, because when he was in the tribe, he didn't have the ripped ear tip. Define the light on his forepaws. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 14:31, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Try to give the shading more shape. You could use some shading on his shoulder, have it line the inner edge of his tail instead of just being in the tip, more shading higher up on the neck, and shading along his cheek. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 16:09, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I've redone the shading and renamed the file. I have already checked when Graywing got the ripped ear tip and it was in The First Battle I believe so he had no ripped ear tip as an ancient tribe member. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:34, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I know this sounds weird but define the tongue shading lmao. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 21:45, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload this is a really new template XD --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:57, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. ikr xD Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:07, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I thought I'd change the eye as well. How he looked directly towards us looks a bit creepy, and his not a creepy cat. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:51, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I think the haunch shading should be extended and up towards the back. It would kinda look like a "C", I think. —Jayce(17:04, 10/19/2014)

Reupload Like that? --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:30, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

The left front paw and chest seem very dark. Maybe lighten it up a bit? Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 17:38, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the leg underneath the paw? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:17 PM, Mon Oct 20, 2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:30, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, and try to give a little more of a curve to the shading. Look at some of the other images for examples of what I mean. It doesn't really go with the body as well as I think it could. The body shading kinda seems like a straight line.. or something along those lines. I can't phrase things correctly, my apologies. x.x —Jayce(18:58, 10/22/2014)

Reupload I've added a bit more shading at the tip of his tail and base of his tail. I've done a highlight around the tail facing away from the body and I've blurred the overall shading a bit. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:53, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:37 Thu Oct 23

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe make the tongue more pink? Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 13:35, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 20:38, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws, and it appears the body shading is leaking away from the lineart. This is looking very nice! Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 15:57, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

The paws are just shading and I don't know how to deal with shading leaking away from the lineart. and Thankyou! --Stealthfire star (talk) 20:25, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Add more shading near the lineart and only blur part of it (the part that's away from the lineart) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 3:33 AM, Sun Oct 26, 2014

Reupload Thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:28, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Add more shading to the haunch/back leg/hip/whatever it is and define the light on the tail. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:31 AM, Sun Oct 26, 2014

Reupload I think it's his side, belly to back. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:04, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure that there would be some light on the paws, though. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 17:14, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I've added a bit to his right paw. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:44, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten/blur/smudge the shading from where it extends from the belly up to the back. It looks really dark and a little paintbrushy compared to the shading over <--- here. I think this is almost ready. =) Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 13:32, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload =) --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:15, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail/paw shading; wouldn't there be some light on his chest? ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 00:42, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

I define the tail or paw even more it's going to be too dark I think. You want me to make it lighter? And you mean a bit right next to his left leg for the chest? --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:53, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and chest, yes. Also, maybe add some shading to the haunch? Looks a bit flat. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 00:56, 10/30/2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:10, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Did you add shading to the haunch? It still looks flat. Hmm... To make your light source make sense, try adding shading where the red is and taking away where the blue is on this. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 01:18, 10/30/2014

Reupload Thanks! That has helped a lot! --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:37, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Fill in the shading here as it's leaking away. Also, no problem, I'm here to help any time you need it. c: — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 03:11, 10/30/2014

Reupload :) --Stealthfire star (talk) 03:49, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval

I can't get enough of character art, making! I enjoyed making this simple but she's very pretty. o3o ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 18:21, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Please remove the texture; none of her other images have it, therefore this shouldn't either. —Jayce(18:24, 10/22/2014)

Re-uploaded - removed the texture, got a little to carried away with this one. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 18:31, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Those eyes are beautiful. :) Lighten the shading on the top of the shoulder, and darken the shading on the right side of the chest. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 17:07, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thank you, Jayie! I've lightened the shading on the closest shoulder and attempted to darken the right side of the chest. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 23:43, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 20:09, 10/24/2014

Re-uploaded - I tried x3 --ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

Remember to sign with four tildes (~)! Anyway, blur the shoulder and body shading (and expand the body shading some, perhaps), and define the shading depth on the chest, legs, and tail. There's also waste by one of the paws ^_^ Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:37, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

I'll work on it, in a few hours. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 15:18, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - okay I lied one hour then.ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 16:32, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

You see the shading that's on...uh, I want to say the lower back? Pretty sure that's what that is... can you smooth that out a bit? I'm not sure the smudges should be so visible. —Jayce(08:05, 10/27/2014)

Re-uploaded - shshsh-ading, dun dun dun. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 10:49, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy on the tail. Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly11:00 Mon Oct 27

It actually looks blotchy all over^^ give it all a little blur or smudge over..whichever you do. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 22:37, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Should be slightly better but it may appear blotchy because that's how I shade... ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 23:16, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Try using Gaussian blur (if you don't already/don't blur shading) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 1:33 PM, Tue Oct 28, 2014

Re-uploaded - I do use Gaussian blur, but I did it on this one, but the shading messed up. So I've tried to blur it as much as I can without messing it up. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

What opacity are you blurring on? For blurring shading I usually just put it on 100(the highest setting on GIMP). Blur it some more. If you were not already, try blurring on 100 opacity. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 13:28, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

I blur it on 30. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Blurred with opacity on 100 before turning it back down to 30. Hopefully I can master this. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

It's looking good! Define the tail shading some more. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 03:59, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

the shading on the haunch and face could use more blurring/smudging. david ^🌈 12:46, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I never realized what a pain, shading on solid cats was. In the future I think I'll stick to tabbies and such. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 13:17, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

oOPS, i'll fix the face later ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 13:19, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Tornear (Kit) - For Approval

Um... This is my first try. Took so long on it, the pattern was kind of hard to match.

The Fox Girl (talk) 10:46, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve it, and you weren't on the table, so I added it in for you. Define the shading- very pretty for a first try, I must say. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:09, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks :) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:29, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes very good for a first try Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:47 Thu Oct 23

Define the earpink. This is really nice! =) Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 17:47, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks guys :) The Fox Girl (talk) 08:09, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

I think I'm gonna promote you to an apprentice (that's something I'm allowed to do, according to the guidelines?), since you seem to know what you're doing. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:25, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded removed a bit of waste and thanks shinx :) The Fox Girl (talk) 10:40, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Remember to sign with 4 (~'s) and define the shading more Vixy Memento Mori... 12:24, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes a little more on the body, but not too much. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 22:35, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Better? The Fox Girl (talk) 10:40, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Very good- vary the stripes a bit more in shape and size, and make them a bit more, hmm, I want to say tangled. Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly10:43 Tue Oct 28

Re-uploaded Meh, not sure if this one ruined the charact The Fox Girl (talk) 10:06, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Remember to sign with ~~~~ , and blur/smudge the earpink Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly13:40 Tue Oct 28

Re-uploaded Is this better? The Fox Girl (talk) 10:06, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Larkwing (BS) (W) ~ For Approval

this is rubbish. Sooooo rubbish. Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly19:33 Thu Oct 23

Lighten up the front paws a bit and the shading. It's fine ^^ Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 19:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly19:40 Thu Oct 23

Lol did you forget the earpink? I don't see a trace of it anywhere. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:00, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

The base color appears to be a little bit darker than her kit and apprentice (both of which I made), so have a screenshot of an unshaded head from the apprentice for the coloring. —Jayce(20:15, 10/23/2014)

Blur the shading some, it looks blotchy. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:26, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, I kinda like this.....I accidently deleted the ear-pink layer before I saved :'D Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:28 Fri Oct 24

I'd say to add a little more earpink. Its really nice, though ^^ ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 16:47, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Nah I think she has enough on there. A lot of images have been approved with that type of earpink style. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 18:10, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Reups You saw it when it had been reuploaded, Frosty lmao Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly18:19 Sat Oct 25

Define the shading depth a tad, and I think the shading is receding from the lineart in some places. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 17:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, changes might be showing, or they could be not. IDK Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly17:39 Sun Oct 26

Hm it looks like you darkened the shading. Defining the depth of the shading does include dakening, but it is really about adding different dimensions to it. So maybe you could lighten it back up a shade, and then where the body is farthest from the light, darken it; In crevices, in between 2 body parts, wherever the farthest parts are from the light, that's kind of where you give it a little darken. I hope this helps. =) Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 12:36, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, I think I did this right? Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly13:02 Mon Oct 27

Reups, blurred the shading Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly18:13 Mon Oct 27

The one back paw looks pretty black. Lighten it up a bit Vixy Memento Mori... 13:57, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, ran the dodge tool over it a few times Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly14:05 Tue Oct 28

It appears the shading is leaking away from the lineart on the back. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 23:27, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 23:15, 10/29/2014

Pebblefoot (Elder) - For Approval

I do not like these dapples. Dapple matching is pain. Brick ^{The Bite of '87} 12:56, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, as it doesn't really match. I like this. Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly14:40 Sun Oct 26

If you look at the starclanner, the earpink matches just fine. It doesn't need lightening. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:14, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Extend the shading further down on that front leg, right to the edge of the tail. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 16:42, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Brick ^{The Bite of '87} 18:14, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Quiet Rain (Ancient) - For Approval

…those spots looked a lot more smudged in photoshop… ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 23:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

they're hard on see on her queen, but she's got a few stripes on her tail, face, and legs (I think for legs) david ^🌈 23:32, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the spots. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 00:03, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Make the spots more hard-edged. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:58 Mon Oct 27

How is s/he supposed to smudge them //and// make them more hard-edged at the same time?? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:12, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe make them hard edged and then smudge them? =3 Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 12:28, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Wouldn't that get Scarlet exactly where s/he is now? Unless s/he uses the hard edge smudge tool...? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 12:44, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

She'd want to smudge the spots first to give them the sort of textured look of the spots of the original image, then use the sharpen tool on them. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 13:07, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Still working? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 22:42, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, it hasn't even been /5/ days, so I don't think you should be asking that, Shinx. Don't take this the wrong way, but please wait a little longer next time? ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:54 Thu Oct 30

I'm sorry >< I just figured that since images are usually declined after a week after a comment with no uploads, asking about halfway through that time seemed like a good idea (plus I remember seeing people ask at about three days before..?) :/ Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 21:07, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Asking at four days is perfectly acceptable. There is no rule that states five days must have passed- I know people who appreciate being reminded around the three - five day window. I ask at four to give a user another three days to make sure they reupload. There is nothing wrong with asking when she did. =/ —Jayce(21:16, 10/30/2014)

Oh, whoops! I knew that... pfft. Sorry, Shinx! ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:29 Fri Oct 31

Sandypaw (KP) ~ For Approval

File:Sandypaw.kittypet.png Got the file from Jayie. So, comments? he has eyebrowsShinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:46, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Lol they make him look nervous. Define the shading depth. I like this~ Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 12:26, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Eyebrowwwwwwwwwssssssssss~ (Thanks) Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 12:42, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the belly, and blur/lighten the shading on the right haunch. Very nice. :) Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 19:29, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uuuuuuups~ thanks Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:53, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

blur or whatever the shading on his back, and his front leg? david ^🌈 12:48, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:20, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Frost (Star) ~ For Approval

Actually kinda pleased with how this came out. He looks very surprised right now. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:43 PM, Tue Oct 28, 2014

The return of the jinxed image; and it's beautiful! Lighten the chest, side and foreleg shading, it looks a bit grey. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 22:54, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the texture so it looks less like painted on lines. —Jayce(22:59, 10/28/2014)

reup uvu thank you sorrel! asdfghjkl I'm so happy with how this came out. (it looks a bit different texture wise on my other computer though...) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 11:50 PM, Tue Oct 28, 2014

Add some more texture. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 03:36, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Add a few more texture lines and smudge them a little. I looked in the archives and I think this makes you the ninth person to try at this image O.o --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 09:47, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Really? I only see five artists on the file history. Anyway, lighten up the white on the highlight, the head, the belly, and especially the front legs. Also, consider tinkering with the texture a bit, and making sure it flows with the direction of the fur. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 13:28, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

There were six, since Tiger had it under the wrong filename. Anyway, define the light on the tail. Good luck, I think this image is cursed. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:51, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

reup I'm gonna assume you meant the shading, Jayie, because I'm not using highlights on this one. This is as much as I'm lightening the shading, because I'll just get told to define it again. It's supposed to be tinted blue but I think I had it too dark, oh well. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 9:45 PM, Wed Oct 29, 2014

I guess a better way to phrase that would have been that the white is looking too gray, and to try and lighten that, not the shading. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 22:22, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Do you mean add a highlight? I'm using pure white for the base coat. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:43 PM, Wed Oct 29, 2014

I think it looks fine. However, the tail could use a bit of light. Define that? — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 22:53, 10/29/2014

Another layer of white highlights might help, yeah. Either the texture or the shading is making the white look a bit too gray to me. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 22:56, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

reup Added highlights, and the opacity of the texture layer is on 5 with a layer style of multiply. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 11:09 PM, Wed Oct 29, 2014

I can't see the texture. This damn image. Define the texture? — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 23:12, 10/29/2014

reup ikr User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 11:33 PM, Wed Oct 29, 2014

Just a tinnny bit more? im so sorry— fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 00:46, 10/30/2014

Okay, I'll have that re-upped tomorrow at some point. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 3:27 PM, Fri Oct 31, 2014

Heronwing (Alt W) - For Approval

File:Heronwing.warrior.alt.png ??? changes — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 20:07, 10/29/2014

Define the light on the front paw closest to us. This is pretty! Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:22, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Heronwing (App) - For Approval

File:Heronwing.Apprentice.png

I tried ,., I think he looks weird... Vixy Memento Mori... 20:56, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

The texture needs to flow in the direction on the fur, and be consistent . The tip of the tail, paws, ears, and muzzle need to be black, and the shading on the midsection is leaking from the lineart. If you need help with texture let me know. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 21:01, 10/29/2014

Reuploaded Thanks for the texturing help ^^ Vixy Memento Mori... 23:46, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the texture on the shoulder and back leg and add the black muzzle, paws, ears, and tail tip. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 23:50, 10/29/2014

Reuploaded Vixy Memento Mori... 00:18, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink? ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 00:40, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Earpink is fine. The entire ear under the earpink needs to be black though. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 00:47, 10/30/2014

Reuploaded Vixy Memento Mori... 00:56, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more and lower the opacity a bit. It's throwing the colour off. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 03:14, 10/30/2014

Oops, forgot to say to lower the opacity of the texture some, as well. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 03:14, 10/30/2014

Reuploaded Vixy Memento Mori... 10:32, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

the fur still needs to flow with the body more. I'd recommend looking at something like this to get an idea of how it should go. david ^🌈 12:45, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Did you lighten anything? It looks the same. I mean to make the highlights less visible because they're too bright. Same with the texture. Just a little bit with the texture, and quite a lot with the highlights. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 16:46, 10/30/2014

Reuploaded I made it darker and added more stripes to make it look more dark. Vixy Memento Mori... 17:28, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Texture still needs to be lightened. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 19:57, 10/30/2014

Rushtail (RC) (Elder) ~ For Approval

Ohmigosh this was hard Tabbies are definitely not my strong suit... I don't think I did her much justice, and this nowhere near as good as the rest of her images. Changes are here if they're not showing. Comments? Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 03:43, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

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-== [[Grasspelt]] (Star) - CBA ==
-[[File:Grasspelt.star.png]]-sobs- More dying kittehs! {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 01:21, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
-Blur the shading, and define it on the paws. {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 06:57, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
-'''Re Uploaded''' {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 14:22, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
-Smudge the fur into the earpink, define the lightsource as the tail tells me it's coming from one direction and the rest of the body tells me another direction. And the body shading is leaking away from the lineart and where the tail is on the body.
-And wouldn't this have to be under the old post or at least the old post archived before this being reposted? Not sure, maybe someone can give second opinion? {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 14:31, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
-I think Tiger's fine with it being here- she was told in chat to just make a new section and the old post would be archived. I also think that smudging the earpink is optional? But I reccomend it, especially on these blanks.
-Define the earpink and the face shading. {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 15:04, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
-Could you possibly brighten the earpink? It looks as though it blends completely and that there is no earpink at all.{{User:~xXSpottedgorseXx~/Sig}} 21:36, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
-'''Re Uploaded''' People on the chat said the lightsource and "leaking" line art was fine so I didn't change it. {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 23:07, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
-'''Re re uploaded.''' I brightened up the earpink. {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 23:33, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
-It would be shaded fully behind the tail. The shading shapes around it at the moment. At least shade that over. {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 00:49, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
-Define the light on the legs and tail? {{User:Fernflight/Sig}} <span style="{{User:Fernflight/Time}}">00:56, 10/14/2014</span>
-Add and define the shading along the edges.--{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 01:24, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
-Add some depth to the shading, too. {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 09:33, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
-The ears are beautiful. Good job Tigerbird with brightening them up. I don't know if you could make it any better.{{User:~xXSpottedgorseXx~/Sig}} 11:15, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
-Smear the fur into the earpink a bit more. I also think there is receding shading on the side, around the tail tip. {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 16:02, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
-'''Reupped''' I think smearing fur is optional but I did everything ya'll suggested. {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 00:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
-It's not always optional. On some blanks it can be necessary, especially on these. Define the light on the paws and tail, and then lighten your shading a bit and blur it. I still see receding shading around the haunch and around the tail tip. {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 16:00, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
-Pretty sure it's optional tbh but anyhoo I don't think changes are showing (for anyone) {{User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Time}}">4:31 PM, Wed Oct 15, 2014</span></small>
-It is not mandatory on ''any'' blank, Darkfrost. That's a very common and quite annoying PCA rumor among members that needs to stop. You can blur the ear pink (as I used to do and sometimes still do) and get the same desired results. Also, no, the changes don't seem to be showing for me either. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:04, 10/15/2014}}
-'''Re upped''' If the changes aren't showing, notify me at once. {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 22:13, October 17, 2014 (UTC)
-The shading is receding from the lineart on the stomach around where the tailtip is. {{User:.Amber/Sig}}<span style="{{User:.Amber/Time}}">15:36 Sun Oct 19</span>
-'''Re upped''' {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 15:58, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
-Lighten the base to about #A06F44, Tiger. This is a little bit too dark for being a light brown cat. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|00:36, 10/21/2014}}
-I will re upload sometime today or tomorrow. {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 13:16, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
-Define the shading on the face {{User:.Amber/Sig}}<span style="{{User:.Amber/Time}}">16:35 Thu Oct 23</span>
-Just letting you know, Tiger, that you have until Sunday to reupload, since we only allow one week without uploads before declining an image. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|20:22, 10/23/2014}}
-'''Re upped''' There is a block of waste and I can't get rid of it. {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 15:39, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
-Take a size 1 hard edged eraser to it, being careful not to touch the lineart, and it'll be gone in a jiffy. {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 15:50, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
-'''Re upped''' I additionally defined the tail shading. {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 18:38, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
-Try adding some shading to the neck, I think the head would cast some shadow over it. {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 17:41, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
-<s>We agreed on the chat to leave it as it is. {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 20:17, October 26, 2014 (UTC)</s>
-'''Re upped''' {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 20:46, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
-The chest shading looks a bit wonky. Maybe smooth it out a bit {{User:Vixenblaze/Sig}} 12:20, October 27, 2014 (UTC)
-'''Re upped''' {{User:Tigerbird/Sig}} 03:13, October 28, 2014 (UTC)
-There have been no comments in a few days, and I like this, so CBA? {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 00:49, October 30, 2014 (UTC)
 ==[[Graywing (WC)]] (Ancient) ~ For Approval==
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 '''Reupload''' :) --[[User:Stealthfire star|Stealthfire star]] ([[User talk:Stealthfire star|talk]]) 03:49, October 30, 2014 (UTC)
-==[[Silver Frost]] (Ancient) ~ CBA==
-[[File:Silver Frost.ancient.png]]Well this is it i love her eyes.[[User:Warriorsbutterminecraft|Warriorsbutterminecraft]] ([[User talk:Warriorsbutterminecraft|talk]]) 16:46, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
-The patches need to match her other images and she shading looks a bit blotchy and sourceless. Also the file needs to be named '''[[:File:Silver Frost.ancient.png]]''', so please fix that. {{User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Time}}">5:29 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014</span></small>
-Reups.--[[User:Warriorsbutterminecraft|Warriorsbutterminecraft]] ([[User talk:Warriorsbutterminecraft|talk]]) 02:41, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
-The patches should be solid not smudged. Are changes showing? Try uploading to ezimba.com . {{User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Time}}">5:37 PM, Mon Oct 20, 2014</span></small>
-Crop the space around the image so that it is more of similar size to the other images. {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 17:40, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
-Define the tail shading too. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|16:56, 10/23/2014}}
-I'm gonna rename this for you, since the images won't show right on the articles without it. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|20:19, 10/23/2014}}
-Is this still being worked on? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|07:29, 10/26/2014}}
-Sorry, but as per the one-week guideline, I must decline this. Anyone without a project may take this on if they wish- you don't need to ask, just reserve it. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|08:03, 10/27/2014}}
-I'll take over. {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 09:01, October 27, 2014 (UTC)
-'''Reups''' here are my [http://www.ezimba.com/work/141028C/ezimba17274116457500.png changes] {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 21:33, October 27, 2014 (UTC)
-I spy a little white pixel on the belly that didn't get shaded. This is purrty! =) {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 22:39, October 27, 2014 (UTC)
-'''Reups''' changes aren't up yet; thank you~ {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 10:31, October 28, 2014 (UTC)
-Define the light on (her) front right paw {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 14:49, October 29, 2014 (UTC)
-'''Reups''' [http://www.ezimba.com/work/141030C/ezimba17274152235200.png changes] {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 17:11, October 29, 2014 (UTC)
-CBA, as I thought I promised but apparently didn't? {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 17:13, October 29, 2014 (UTC)
 ==[[Swallowtail (WC)]] (Star) ~ For Approval==
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 '''Re-uploaded''' - I never realized what a pain, shading on solid cats was. In the future I think I'll stick to tabbies and such. [[User:Firrel (Ruefrost)|<span style="color:orange;font-family:'Tw Cen MT';text-shadow:2px 3.5px 6px blue">ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ<font size=1><span style="color:cyan;font-family:'Tw Cen MT';"><sup> í'm nσt rαndσm,</sup> <font size=2>чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє</font></span></font></span>]] 13:17, October 30, 2014 (UTC)
+oOPS, i'll fix the face later [[User:Firrel (Ruefrost)|<span style="color:orange;font-family:'Tw Cen MT';text-shadow:2px 3.5px 6px blue">ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ<font size=1><span style="color:cyan;font-family:'Tw Cen MT';"><sup> í'm nσt rαndσm,</sup> <font size=2>чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє</font></span></font></span>]] 13:19, October 30, 2014 (UTC)
 ==[[Tornear]] (Kit) - For Approval==
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 Extend the shading further down on that front leg, right to the edge of the tail. [[User:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#6699FF;font-family:Comic Sans MS;">Jayie</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">Unwritten </span>]][[User:Jayfrost (BC)/Chararts|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~</span>]]</sup> 16:42, October 28, 2014 (UTC)
+'''Re-ups''' <span style="border:3px double blue;"><span style="font-family:courier">[[User:Trunktail|Brick]]</span></span> <span style="font-family:centaur"><sup><span style="text-shadow: orange 0 3px 3px;"><font size="2"><span style="letter-spacing: 2px">''[[User_talk:Trunktail|<span style="color:purple">The Bite of '87</span>]]''</span></font></span></sup></span> 18:14, October 30, 2014 (UTC)
 ==[[Quiet Rain]] (Ancient) - For Approval==
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 Still working? {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 22:42, October 29, 2014 (UTC)
+Honestly, it hasn't even been /5/ days, so I don't think you should be asking that, Shinx. Don't take this the wrong way, but please wait a little longer next time? {{User:Hawkmask121/Sig}}<span style="{{User:Hawkmask121/Time}}">20:54 Thu Oct 30</span>
+I'm sorry ><
+I just figured that since images are usually declined after a week after a comment with no uploads, asking about halfway through that time seemed like a good idea (plus I remember seeing people ask at about three days before..?) :/ {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 21:07, October 30, 2014 (UTC)
+Asking at four days is perfectly acceptable. There is no rule that states five days must have passed- I know people who appreciate being reminded around the three - five day window. I ask at four to give a user another three days to make sure they reupload. There is nothing wrong with asking when she did. =/ {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|21:16, 10/30/2014}}
+Oh, whoops! I knew that... pfft. Sorry, Shinx! {{User:Hawkmask121/Sig}}<span style="{{User:Hawkmask121/Time}}">0:29 Fri Oct 31</span>
 ==[[Sandypaw]] (KP) ~ For Approval==
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 blur or whatever the shading on his back, and his front leg? {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 12:48, October 30, 2014 (UTC)
+'''Reups''' {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 19:20, October 30, 2014 (UTC)
 == [[Frost]] (Star) ~ For Approval ==
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 Just a tinnny bit more? <small>im so sorry</small>{{User:Fernflight/Sig}} <span style="{{User:Fernflight/Time}}">00:46, 10/30/2014</span>
+Okay, I'll have that re-upped tomorrow at some point. {{User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Time}}">3:27 PM, Fri Oct 31, 2014</span></small>
 ==[[Heronwing]] (Alt W) - For Approval==
 [[File:Heronwing.warrior.alt.png]] ??? [http://www.ezimba.com/work/141030C/ezimba19950245226300.png changes] {{User:Fernflight/Sig}} <span style="{{User:Fernflight/Time}}">20:07, 10/29/2014</span>
+Define the light on the front paw closest to us. This is pretty! {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 20:22, October 30, 2014 (UTC)
 ==[[Heronwing]] (App) - For Approval==
-[[File:Heronwing.Apprentice.png]] I tried ,., I think he looks weird...  {{User:Vixenblaze/Sig}} 20:56, October 29, 2014 (UTC)
+[[File:Heronwing.Apprentice.png|left]] I tried ,., I think he looks weird...  {{User:Vixenblaze/Sig}} 20:56, October 29, 2014 (UTC)
 The texture needs to flow in the direction on the fur, and be consistent . The tip of the tail, paws, ears, and muzzle need to be black, and the shading on the midsection is leaking from the lineart. If you need help with texture let me know. {{User:Fernflight/Sig}} <span style="{{User:Fernflight/Time}}">21:01, 10/29/2014</span>
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 the fur still needs to flow with the body more. I'd recommend looking at something like [http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130207062925/warriors/images/b/b7/Nutwhisker.apprentice.png this] to get an idea of how it should go. {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 12:45, October 30, 2014 (UTC)
+Did you lighten anything? It looks the same. I mean to make the highlights less visible because they're too bright. Same with the texture. Just a little bit with the texture, and quite a lot with the highlights. {{User:Fernflight/Sig}} <span style="{{User:Fernflight/Time}}">16:46, 10/30/2014</span>
+'''Reuploaded''' I made it darker and added more stripes to make it look more dark. {{User:Vixenblaze/Sig}} 17:28, October 30, 2014 (UTC)
+Texture still needs to be lightened. {{User:Fernflight/Sig}} <span style="{{User:Fernflight/Time}}">19:57, 10/30/2014</span>
 == [[Rushtail (RC)]] (Elder) ~ For Approval ==

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