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You still workin' or...? {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 10:33, November 25, 2014 (UTC)
 
You still workin' or...? {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 10:33, November 25, 2014 (UTC)
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'''Reups,''' lol I keep uploading the file but I just forget to reup (derp) {{User:.Amber/Sig}}<span style="{{User:.Amber/Time}}">12:58 Tue Nov 25</span>
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Define the shading on the legs, and I know it's artist's choice, but please lighten the shading on the back and tail a bit, doesn't have to be a lot. And define the light on it some more, I can't see it {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 09:39, November 26, 2014 (UTC)
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Blur/smudge the shading on the chest a little bit?--{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 23:35, November 26, 2014 (UTC)
   
 
==[[Snake (DotC)]] (Alt Ro) ~ For Approval==
 
==[[Snake (DotC)]] (Alt Ro) ~ For Approval==
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'''Re-ups''' [[User:Burntclaw|Burntclaw]] ([[User talk:Burntclaw|talk]]) 10:36, November 25, 2014 (UTC)
 
'''Re-ups''' [[User:Burntclaw|Burntclaw]] ([[User talk:Burntclaw|talk]]) 10:36, November 25, 2014 (UTC)
   
 
I still can hardly see it, please define it more. {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 10:44, November 25, 2014 (UTC)
==[[Graywing (WC)]] (Ancient Tribe) ~ CBA==
 
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[[File:Graywing (WC).ancient.png]] [http://oi61.tinypic.com/2ugyjy8.jpg Jayce said I could have this. Not that proud of the shading but whatever.] {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 19:17, November 18, 2014 (UTC)
 
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<b>Re-ups</b> Okay, it's defintely visible now. [[User:Burntclaw|Burntclaw]] ([[User talk:Burntclaw|talk]]) 12:26, November 25, 2014 (UTC)
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Smooth out the tail shading and that blotchy bit on the part below the (our right) shoulder. Also, are there two white pixels in his back foot? {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 20:41, November 25, 2014 (UTC)
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It looks like the shading's leaking away around [http://prntscr.com/5a4753 here] and a bit on the legs, but that could be my eyes. Regardless, this is a really good image- well done! {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|20:55, 11/25/2014}}
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<b>Re-ups</b> Thanks! :) [[User:Burntclaw|Burntclaw]] ([[User talk:Burntclaw|talk]]) 08:46, November 26, 2014 (UTC)
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Extend the tail shading to the tip, please. Also; is your shading layer on top of your earpink layer? One side looks darker than the other on my screen; Mind fixing that? if not, its completely fine. =)--{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 23:40, November 26, 2014 (UTC)
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Please remember to sign with 4 tildes (~'s). And why is having the shading layer on top of the earpink layer bad?? I /always/ have my shading layers above the earpink layer. Ears have shading too, so I think that's fine. But I do agree about the tail shading, and it's also leaking away from the tail lineart ^^ {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 23:49, November 26, 2014 (UTC)
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It honestly ''does'' not matter either way if the shading layer is above or below the ear pink. I personally put my ear pink above the layer of shading, since it's smudged and blurred so much you can barely see it in most cases anyways. Commenting solely for ear pink unless it's like neon pink or purple really isn't necessary- it's fine as it is and each person will make it differently. There's no one way to do the ear pink on any of these blanks. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|23:54, 11/26/2014}}
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My bad; I forgot to sign with my signature. And alright =). My comment on the tail shading still stands, though. Could you also define the light on the front legs a bit, while your at it? I can barely see it.--{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 00:02, November 27, 2014 (UTC)
   
I spy a tiny bit of waste by (his) left ear. He's beeauutiful {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 19:29, November 18, 2014 (UTC)
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<b>Re-ups</b> [[User:Burntclaw|Burntclaw]] ([[User talk:Burntclaw|talk]]) 08:56, November 27, 2014 (UTC)
   
 
==[[Storm (Ro)]] (Lo) ~ For Approval==
'''reups''' thanks! {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 19:33, November 18, 2014 (UTC)
 
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[[File:Storm (Ro).loner.png]] another cursed image, perhaps? {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 15:16, November 25, 2014 (UTC)
   
maybe remove a little of the shading on his earpink so its more visible? {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 08:13, November 19, 2014 (UTC)
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Define the neck shading, perhaps? Lol, just don't withdraw this time ^_^ {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 15:45, November 25, 2014 (UTC)
   
'''Reups'''{{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 09:55, November 19, 2014 (UTC)
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'''Reups''' I'm not withdrawing this time {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 19:49, November 25, 2014 (UTC)
   
Smudge the eye-to-nose shading a bit more. I love the shading, it looks so cool! =) {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 15:56, November 21, 2014 (UTC)
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Maybe lighten the shading on the back a tad? This is beautiful :) [[User:The Fox Girl|The Fox Girl]] ([[User talk:The Fox Girl|talk]]) 00:30, November 26, 2014 (UTC)
   
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Actually, could you could lighten up the whole shading just a bit? {{User:Hawkmask121/Sig}}<span style="{{User:Hawkmask121/Time}}">0:35 Wed Nov 26</span>
I spy missing pixels on right arm, 12:00. Define earpink. Darken shade on left flank. Define and smudge shading on right arm. ~Spottedgorse
 
   
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Define the ear pink slightly? [[User:Burntclaw|Burntclaw]] ([[User talk:Burntclaw|talk]]) 08:47, November 26, 2014 (UTC)
...Wha-..? There aren't any missing pixels, I opened the blank from my computer, and I //made// these (Well, finished them off after Breezey withdrew them), so I can assure you, there are no missing pixels. IF there are, I request you please show me.
 
And as for the shading, there is no way I'm defining or darkening it. It's pretty dark to begin with, and the earpink is fine. Sorry, mate, but no.
 
'''Reups''' to Frosty's comment, though.{{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 11:34, November 22, 2014 (UTC)
 
   
I see no missing pixels, and he looks incredibly handsome - CBA? {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 18:15, November 24, 2014 (UTC)
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I think the earpink is fine. They do have other images to match, and I can see it well. {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 13:24, November 26, 2014 (UTC)
   
 
'''Reups''' I can see the earpink fine {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 18:15, November 26, 2014 (UTC)
==[[Millie]] (Ki) - For Approval==
 
[[File:Millie.kit.png]] do not like. [http://www.ezimba.com/work/141120C/ezimba19950253678700.png changes] {{User:Fernflight/Sig}} <span style="{{User:Fernflight/Time}}">22:29, 11/19/2014</span>
 
   
She's adorable. =) Define the light on the left leg?--{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 23:34, November 19, 2014 (UTC)
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Define the neck/facial shading, please.--{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 23:40, November 26, 2014 (UTC)
   
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Sorry, but I can see it very well, and think it's fine. {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 23:53, November 26, 2014 (UTC)
'''reup''' {{User:Fernflight/Sig}} <span style="{{User:Fernflight/Time}}">23:52, 11/19/2014</span>
 
   
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==[[Jake]] (Ki) ~ For Approval==
Add some shading to the collar chip, because I think some of it'd be shaded a little. And extend the neck shading all the way across her neck, as it is slightly flat. This is gorgeous!! {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 13:39, November 21, 2014 (UTC)
 
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[[File:Jake.kit.png]] He has a cite, so I can post this, right? {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 13:12, November 27, 2014 (UTC)
   
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So adorable! Lighten up the face shading a tad? [[User:Burntclaw|Burntclaw]] ([[User talk:Burntclaw|talk]]) 13:35, November 27, 2014 (UTC)
thicken the collar some. she's only a kitten and a collar would be pretty big on her at this point. {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 01:45, November 22, 2014 (UTC)
 
   
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I'd rather not, it's the same shade as the rest of the shading, and it's not that dark V_V {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 14:29, November 27, 2014 (UTC)
'''reups''' {{User:Fernflight/Sig}} <span style="{{User:Fernflight/Time}}">21:25, 11/24/2014</span>
 

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Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval

Swallowtail (WC).star I can't get enough of character art, making! I enjoyed making this simple but she's very pretty. o3o キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 18:21, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Please remove the texture; none of her other images have it, therefore this shouldn't either. Jayce(18:24, 10/22/2014)

Re-uploaded - removed the texture, got a little to carried away with this one. キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 18:31, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Those eyes are beautiful. :) Lighten the shading on the top of the shoulder, and darken the shading on the right side of the chest. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:07, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thank you, Jayie! I've lightened the shading on the closest shoulder and attempted to darken the right side of the chest. キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 23:43, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:09, 10/24/2014

Re-uploaded - I tried x3 --キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

Remember to sign with four tildes (~)! Anyway, blur the shoulder and body shading (and expand the body shading some, perhaps), and define the shading depth on the chest, legs, and tail. There's also waste by one of the paws ^_^ Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:37, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

I'll work on it, in a few hours. キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 15:18, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - okay I lied one hour then.キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 16:32, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

You see the shading that's on...uh, I want to say the lower back? Pretty sure that's what that is... can you smooth that out a bit? I'm not sure the smudges should be so visible. Jayce(08:05, 10/27/2014)

Re-uploaded - shshsh-ading, dun dun dun. キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 10:49, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy on the tail. Amber The One and Only11:00 Mon Oct 27

It actually looks blotchy all over^^ give it all a little blur or smudge over..whichever you do.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 22:37, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Should be slightly better but it may appear blotchy because that's how I shade... キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 23:16, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Try using Gaussian blur (if you don't already/don't blur shading) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 1:33 PM, Tue Oct 28, 2014

Re-uploaded - I do use Gaussian blur, but I did it on this one, but the shading messed up. So I've tried to blur it as much as I can without messing it up. キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

What opacity are you blurring on? For blurring shading I usually just put it on 100(the highest setting on GIMP). Blur it some more. If you were not already, try blurring on 100 opacity.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:28, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

I blur it on 30. キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Blurred with opacity on 100 before turning it back down to 30. Hopefully I can master this. キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

It's looking good! Define the tail shading some more.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 03:59, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

the shading on the haunch and face could use more blurring/smudging. david 🌈 12:46, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I never realized what a pain, shading on solid cats was. In the future I think I'll stick to tabbies and such. キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 13:17, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

oOPS, i'll fix the face later キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 13:19, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on this ---> paw and blur the shading on this <--- paw.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 14:32, November 1, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 3:03 PM, Sun Nov 2, 2014

Re-uploaded - the gaussian blur is everywhere -- キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 22:45, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the light on the paws. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:26, 11/4/2014

Re-uploaded - This shading is KILLING ME xD -- キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 20:35, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste by (her) left paw, and the shading is leaking from the lineart a bit on the side. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:15, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - You must have eagle vision, I couldn't even see it until I squinted.. キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 16:34, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add a highlight onto the left shoulder, the shading there looks a bit strange with the way the lights going. Also, can you define the tail shading a bit? Brick The Bite of '87 17:17, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - DUN, I swear if someone tells me to tweak the shading I'll scream.  キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 18:37, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is looking a little blotchy; try either blurring/smudging it to smooth it out a bit? Also, there should be more shading on the face, and the tail and paw's shading could be defined a bit. im sorry.--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 22:32, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, first of I uploaded an old file stupid me, second of all I'll work on it tomorrow and finally I am screaming  キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 22:33, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the nose pink, so I suggest putting some nose pink. Tiger Sunny days 02:54, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Actually tiger, s/he shouldn't put any nosepink on this image. It's a black (Well, dark gray) cat. They usually have black noses. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:36, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - more screaming I couldn't find the old file (probably didn't save it) scrapped the shading and re-did it; the changes are here - http://oi60.tinypic.com/103h6wy.jpg  キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 17:09, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and strengthen the shading on the paws. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:17, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened shading, strengthened paw shading (made it darker there) and I changed the position of the eyes, which I think have made quite the difference.  キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 11:38, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm.. define the tail shading. Also, I think the area near the nearest leg has receding shading. Tiger Sunny days 20:18, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Defined tail shading, and expanded shading on nearest leg. Think I'm getting the hang of shading...  キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 11:06, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

The shading seems to be bleeding away from the edge of the belly. Maybe smudge it back towards the line? Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:57, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on the left front leg is blotchy, smooth it out a little? Amber The One and Only15:52 Tue Nov 11

Withdrawing because of work.  キノ尺尺乇レ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 21:58, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

I'll take over. I changed the heading for you :) Amber The One and Only17:23 Thu Nov 13

Reups Amber The One and Only18:05 Thu Nov 13

Lighten the shading, and possibly blur it. I spy a tiny bit of shading leaking from the lineart on the bottom of the side. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:18, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Amber The One and Only16:50 Fri Nov 14

Lighten up the shading on the flank and define the light on the tail. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot16:15 Sun Nov 16

Reups Amber The One and Only16:52 Sun Nov 16

Lighten the shading on the back and tail. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:11, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Just popping in to warn you that your monthly limit's almost up! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:28 Tue Nov 18

I think that'd only count if Firrel were still working on it. Amber only took over recently, she should have most of her time left. After all, it wouldn't be fair to her otherwise. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 22:40, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Oh lol sorry. Hawky wasn't paying attention cuz she's tired. Wow I am the worst SW in history ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:15 Tue Nov 18

Yo, Amber, you might wanna reupload soon ^_^ Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 12:20, November 20, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, I just got banned from the computer so I'll try and sneak on... I made the file but being the idiot I am I forgot to reup -.- Amber The One and Only13:16 Thu Nov 20

Reups (btw activity will be spotty this week) Amber The One and Only17:02 Thu Nov 20

The shading still looks really dark. The Fox Girl (talk) 07:47, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

It looks as though there is some waste by the outer side of the tail. {{SUBST:Template:~xXSpottedgorseXx~/Sig}} 01:39, November 22, 2014 (UTC) *correct me if I am wrong* {{SUBST:Template:~xXSpottedgorseXx~/Sig}} 01:39, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

There's no waste. I think it's fine. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:42, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

You know, shading darkness has always been artists choice, as long as it doesn't screw up the base color or look like paintbrush shading. So I think it's fine and it works well with this color. Could you try to make the shading curve more with the body shape? And add some shading to <---- this side of the chest. It's looking good!  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:21, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. Jayce(18:19, 11/23/2014)

You still workin' or...? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:33, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, lol I keep uploading the file but I just forget to reup (derp) Amber The One and Only12:58 Tue Nov 25

Define the shading on the legs, and I know it's artist's choice, but please lighten the shading on the back and tail a bit, doesn't have to be a lot. And define the light on it some more, I can't see it Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 09:39, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading on the chest a little bit?--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 23:35, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Snake (DotC) (Alt Ro) ~ For Approval

File:Snake.alt.rouge.pngI don't like how this came out. =P --Tiger Sunny days 01:21, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

It looks fine don't beat yourself up lol. Define the texture a little, and define your lightsource. The head is telling me it's coming from one direction, and the body another, and the tail another.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 12:59, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

Texture is fine. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:27, 11/6/2014

Texture looks alright to me, though it could be darkened a smidge. I agree about the lightsource though. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:29, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think if you just removed the shading along the back (but left a bit behind the head near the neck) that the light source would be fine. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:32, 11/6/2014

Re upped Tiger Sunny days 01:05, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

blur/smudge/whatever you do the shading on the neck and belly a bit — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:18, 11/9/2014

Reupped Tiger Sunny days 22:20, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Jayce(07:44, 11/10/2014)

Define the light on the face - liking the texture! Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:31, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped Tiger Sunny days 23:19, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Hm, correct me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't there also be shading on parts of his back? Like, near his tail and extending a little more past the neck? I could be wrong, and if I am, I'm sorry. Also, please define the light on the legs; I don't think they'd all be in shade. Jayce(07:08, 11/13/2014)

Re upped I defined the light on the legs. I didn't change the shading because I did that and other users said it made the light source confusing. Tiger Sunny days 00:16, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Fair enough, Tiger. I'd rather you go with the majority opinion on this. Maybe define the shading a bit more on the legs? I know it's there, but it's kinda hard to see it- like maybe have an unblurred part of shading on a lower opacity, kinda like what I did for the legs on Rippleclaw's warrior. If you're unsure of what I mean and if I'm making no sense, I will gladly explain and provide examples. It looks like the shading is overblurred in some spots, mainly on the feet, and it looks like it takes up a bit more space than it should, and in the case of the frontmost least visible back leg, (god that was phrased so nicely, I apologize- I've been killing Geth for the past four hours and my brain is fried) the shading looks like it could be receding. Jayce(08:58, 11/17/2014)

Re upped I redid the shading in the legs. If the shading is still odd, can I have some examples please? Thank you. Tiger Sunny days 01:43, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped I redid the entire shading, with help from Breeze. Thanks Breeze. Tiger Sunny days 02:34, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

One last re up Tiger Sunny days 03:00, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe blur around the unshaded circle on their side or give it a tiny tad of shading, or both. It's just blinking at me.--Stealthfire star (talk) 05:20, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Expand the circle: wider and taller. Also define the depth of the shading, it's looking a bit flat.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 14:08, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped Expanded the light. Tiger Sunny days 03:36, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

It's still blinking at me. It's better. Maybe lighten the shading slightly? --Stealthfire star (talk) 03:42, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. The Fox Girl (talk) 08:09, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten it on the back slightly? Burntclaw (talk) 12:48, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think if I lighten the shading up, it'll look flat, so I'll leave it the same unless someone says otherwise. Tiger Sunny days 01:53, November 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re ups Tiger Sunny days 02:12, November 20, 2014 (UTC)

Add another layer of slightly darker shading, for depth. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 12:21, November 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped Tiger Sunny days 22:49, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. And maybe have the shading get darker as it gets farther from the light, and have it get lighter where it's closer to the light. If I dont make sense, I'm sure someone will come along and define what I'm trying to say.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:27, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

I tried to blur it, but it looked overblurred when I did it. And I'm kind of confused about what you mean about the lightness. Tiger Sunny days 19:26, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

What they mean is to have the shading fade as it gets closer to the light. One way to do this is to have two layers of shading, the darker one being thinner than the lighter one. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:03, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped Tiger Sunny days 20:09, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Blue the shading or smudge it idk what you do lmao. Define the light on the front legs some. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:29, 11/24/2014

Re upped Tiger Sunny days 00:05, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Star) ~ For Approval

Tallpoppy.star eh..colorpicked from elder. Comments?  Frosty ☾Supernatural 23:27, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the main part of the body. Also give more depth to the eyes and smudge the ear pink into the ear a bit more. Jayce(23:31, 11/12/2014)

The shading is throwing off the color a little bit; could you lighten it a tad? If you'd prefer not too, thats fine with me.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 23:39, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Lol wow I just realized you all were staring at the old version of the image for 24 hrs. I'm so sorry, I didn't notice that mine didn't overwrite the prev. version. I tried re-uploading it and here's a link to ezimba for my version.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:15, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Yours had been showing, and my comment still stands about the ear pink- please smudge it a bit more. Jayce(15:53, 11/13/2014)

Well they hadn't for me. I'll re-upload later if I've got time. Is the shading better? I had changed it after you commented but then I saw the old version when I got on so I'd thought you were looking at the old.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 14:43, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I think the shading should actually extend the rest of the way, like to where the base of the tail is. I've never seen a source that looks like that put up for approval. Jayce(02:57, 11/15/2014)

I'll re-upload in the morning or in the evening. Sorry, I've just been really busy.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 08:18, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hope that's better. And yeah I like making up new sources when I have a little time to mess around..lol  Frosty ☾Supernatural 12:42, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad, especially around the top part of the back and the tail. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:39, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'll lighten it on the back, but I think the tail is fine unless someone says otherwise. I always define the tail shading on shorthairs a little more than the rest of the body so it's not flat. And so the light and shading are perfectly visible.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:49, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Ya gonna reup this, Frosty? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 09:48, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

Yup I'll reup soon. My computer didn't want to open my internet. I think it may work now.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:53, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

Woah. She is incredible. Define the shading on the chest then smudge just a hare. {{SUBST:Template:~xXSpottedgorseXx~/Sig}} 01:42, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you =) also I made her eyes look brighter, I thought they needed a little something.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 19:44, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

Take a size one brush and smudge the ear pink a bit. On a cat, it's kinda whispy-like instead of more solid like, and I think I asked you to do this before but I don't know if you did or not. Only had Leggy drill this into me a million and a half times and seeing enough pictures of cats'll do that to you. Also, lower the opacity on the chest a bit- you can see the stripes on the other images through it, and I can't quite see them on this. Jayce(18:17, 11/23/2014)

Re-uploaded. Lol yeah..I hope that's better. I finally got the stupid earpink to submit. xD  Frosty ☾Supernatural 01:01, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Hailstar (K) ~ For Approval

Hailstar.kit He's so cute :). Burntclaw (talk) 09:03, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded couldn't find the xcf file for it so I had to redraw it :/Burntclaw (talk) 09:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Hum... The shading seems a bit misplaced, there is some shading on his left cheek. Correct me if I'm wrong. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:04, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups. By the way, I accidentally used my sister's account to re-upload the picture, so it will say it has been re-uploaded by The Fox Girl. Burntclaw (talk) 12:36, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups removed some waste.

Darken the base coat a tad, and define the light on the legs. Amber The One and Only12:56 Sun Nov 16

Re-uploaded I'm pretty sure the coat color was fine... Cause I color picked from his apprentice version, but I darkened it like you said so. I also defined the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 13:11, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. Amber The One and Only13:13 Sun Nov 16

Just removed it as soon as I realized after the re upload :'D Burntclaw (talk) 13:16, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy, smooth it out? Amber The One and Only13:17 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups. Is it better? Burntclaw (talk) 13:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

It still looks rather blotchy; you can try blurring it with the blur tool at rate 100 instead of using gaussian blur, and it's causing some of the shading to recede at the lineart. I can't see where your light source is, either. Also, there's waste all around the image. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot16:22 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups Completely re-did the shading. Never realized shading was so complicated :'D. Also removed all of the waste. Burntclaw (talk) 04:11, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

There's still waste The Fox Girl (talk) 04:30, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Burntclaw (talk) 05:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Give the shading a good blur/smudge. Look at examples of other solid coloured cats for help. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Not sure if I overdid it. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 07:09, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur it a lot more, and define it in the legs. Also, every time you do something, make sure to select outside the lineart and erase on every layer, because there's still waste. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:14, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I hope changes are showing, because the internet is being weird again. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 07:18, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make the eyes look a bit more yellow, like his Starclan image? Brick The Bite of '87 15:50, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the eyes are fine, can you get rid of the waste and define the shading a tad please. Amber The One and Only16:01 Mon Nov 17

Re-ups Not sure if I got ridden of all the waste Burntclaw (talk) 04:01, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Getting rid of all the waste can be a pain with long-furs. Zoom in really close to find it all. It's a smaller image so it won't be much of a hustle. Look especially around the spiky parts of the fur, there is one pixel wastes hiding there. Also, can you darken the shading slightly? --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:29, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm pretty sure I've gotten rid of all the waste. Just worried that changes aren't showing because of my internet -_-. Also darkened the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 05:56, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

You got it! Now, the shading is leaking away from the lineart, meaning it's not right next to the lineart. Even one pixel off is noticeable. Try even moving the shading to the right or carefully add more shading so it will be alined. --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:17, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not sure if I fixed the problem. XD Burntclaw (talk) 06:27, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

You got his left shoulder, can you do the same with the rest of shading? The rest of his side, legs and tail I think where it needs work.--Stealthfire star (talk) 06:34, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Jeez, I didn't know shading was so complicated! :D Pretty sure I got this right. Burntclaw (talk) 07:09, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I think with solid cats is especially focused. It's still leaking away from the lineart. Look really closely to see the gaps. Look at other pictures for examples. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:25, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 07:32, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Much better! At his side, lighten the shading slightly and make sure there is shading on his spiked fur and all his back paw. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:40, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I spy a little waste at his side The Fox Girl (talk) 12:18, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not sure if I made things worse -_- Also, accidentaly used my sister's account to reupload it again :/ Burntclaw (talk) 13:23, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Naw. It's fine, as an artist never doubt yourself, believe in your own work. I've been an artist(in real life. on here for only a couple of years) for many years, first thing I had to learn was to believe in my painting or drawing or even my image on here. Now that I've done my pep talk xD, it looks like the shading is receding from the lineart on the tail, and the back especially. If you add more shading along the lineart it'll fix right up. =)  Frosty ☾Supernatural 14:04, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 08:41, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

Still seeing waste around the image. Sometimes when the fancy ways don't work, just take a size one hard-edge eraser and go erase it pixel by pixel.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 16:00, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm pretty sure all the waste is gone. Also, I was just wondering, how do you become an apprentice? Burntclaw (talk) 08:54, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

If a senior warrior, deputy, or leader thinks you know what you're doing, they can promote you to apprentice. Which I'll go ahead and do. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:56, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! :) Burntclaw (talk) 11:06, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

There's still a little waste underneath every hair spike on ---> this side. And I see a pixel or two in between his legs.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:30, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups btw I used my sis's account to upload it Burntclaw (talk) 12:36, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink and face shading some? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:27, 11/24/2014

Smooth out the shading, too. And I think there are still a few pixels of waste in between the fur spikes over here ----> ^^  Frosty ☾Supernatural 01:58, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

If there is more waste call me a mouse. Burntclaw (talk) 05:09, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the earpink is fine. The Fox Girl (talk) 09:03, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Ferk, actually. Please define the earpink. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:28, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 10:36, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I still can hardly see it, please define it more. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:44, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay, it's defintely visible now. Burntclaw (talk) 12:26, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading and that blotchy bit on the part below the (our right) shoulder. Also, are there two white pixels in his back foot? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:41, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

It looks like the shading's leaking away around here and a bit on the legs, but that could be my eyes. Regardless, this is a really good image- well done! Jayce(20:55, 11/25/2014)

Re-ups Thanks! :) Burntclaw (talk) 08:46, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Extend the tail shading to the tip, please. Also; is your shading layer on top of your earpink layer? One side looks darker than the other on my screen; Mind fixing that? if not, its completely fine. =)--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 23:40, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Please remember to sign with 4 tildes (~'s). And why is having the shading layer on top of the earpink layer bad?? I /always/ have my shading layers above the earpink layer. Ears have shading too, so I think that's fine. But I do agree about the tail shading, and it's also leaking away from the tail lineart ^^  Frosty ☾Supernatural 23:49, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

It honestly does not matter either way if the shading layer is above or below the ear pink. I personally put my ear pink above the layer of shading, since it's smudged and blurred so much you can barely see it in most cases anyways. Commenting solely for ear pink unless it's like neon pink or purple really isn't necessary- it's fine as it is and each person will make it differently. There's no one way to do the ear pink on any of these blanks. Jayce(23:54, 11/26/2014)

My bad; I forgot to sign with my signature. And alright =). My comment on the tail shading still stands, though. Could you also define the light on the front legs a bit, while your at it? I can barely see it.--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 00:02, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 08:56, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (Lo) ~ For Approval

Storm (Ro).loner another cursed image, perhaps? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:16, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the neck shading, perhaps? Lol, just don't withdraw this time ^_^ Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:45, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Reups I'm not withdrawing this time Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:49, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on the back a tad? This is beautiful :) The Fox Girl (talk) 00:30, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, could you could lighten up the whole shading just a bit? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot0:35 Wed Nov 26

Define the ear pink slightly? Burntclaw (talk) 08:47, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

I think the earpink is fine. They do have other images to match, and I can see it well.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:24, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups I can see the earpink fine Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:15, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the neck/facial shading, please.--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 23:40, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but I can see it very well, and think it's fine. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:53, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Jake (Ki) ~ For Approval

Jake.kit He has a cite, so I can post this, right? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:12, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

So adorable! Lighten up the face shading a tad? Burntclaw (talk) 13:35, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

I'd rather not, it's the same shade as the rest of the shading, and it's not that dark V_V Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:29, November 27, 2014 (UTC)