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Featherwhisker (Ki) - For Approval

^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing. —Jayce(18:56, 11/28/2014)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking away from the lineart.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:26, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 16:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the left foreleg, please.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color to match the other images? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 10:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

The base colors with this image and his other images match perfectly, so I think it's fine.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 13:49, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Should be uploading soon. Not sure when, because school computers block WWiki. Saturday at the latest. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 20:48, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, are you still working, Gia? —Jayce(20:39, 12/10/2014)

Yep, I am. I just haven't been able to use the computer, otherwise I would have uploaded before now. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 01:53, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. finally ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 15:41, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Dull and blur the highlights, please.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 00:45, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 14:51, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing. Tiger ^{Sunny days} 19:21, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

They're showing for me. I don't know what the problem is, if it's on your end or what... ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 17:27, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the light on <-- visible leg. —Jayce(05:18, 12/21/2014)

Ashheart (Ki) - CBA

Tried Jayie's shading. All colors from the warrior image, which I'm the OA of. Comments? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:57, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the chest? — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 22:22, 12/1/2014

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 22:33, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source and blur the shading a bit more. Burntclaw (talk) 00:24, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the light source just fine, though I'll change it if others agree. As for the blurring, I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur or smudge her shading. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 00:53, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I still think the shading above the hind leg could be defined more— ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 05:32, 12/2/2014

Reuploaded. Changes [1]. I'll fix the waste next. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:30, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on this <------ front paw. Tiger ^{Sunny days} 03:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 03:35, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I honestly cannot tell where the light is coming from on this source. The head tells me it's coming from straight above, the chest tell me it's coming from the left, and the legs and side tell me it's coming from the right.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 13:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'd prefer not to change the shading again unless it's either absolutely necessary or involves dulling the highlights. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 13:33, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs and blur it everywhere else. david ^🌈 03:46, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just defined the shading, as I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur her shading. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 16:06, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Can you try and smooth out the shading somehow? I know it seems silly, but this looks a bit too abrupt, for lack of a better word? I'm sorry, I'm mobile and can't fully explain what I mean. —Jayce(23:35, 12/6/2014)

Reuploaded. I redid the whole shading. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:12, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

define the face shading and maybe blur the right side chest shading, lookin good. david ^🌈 00:30, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 01:59, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Can you try and smooth the shading out a little more? Maybe blur it or something, idk. —.neha ^{it's that gloom boy season.} 17:40, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:02, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more, please? —Jayce(04:25, 12/13/2014)

Okay so I did that on mobile yesterday and it totally didn't go where it was supposed to. =/ —Jayce(18:31, 12/13/2014)

Ok, by that, do you mean the comment was supposed to go on a different image, or what? Sorry, I'm just confused. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:49, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, I was in a hurry when I typed that. It was meant to go on this image, but it just went above a different comment, despite me being at the right part of the page...aka I really shouldn't edit from my phone. —Jayce(22:03, 12/14/2014)

Reuploaded. Redid the shading again. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 22:21, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a bit. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 04:04, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:08, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail please. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:23, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 13:49, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry for the lack of comments, Blue. ^^ CBA? —Jayce(05:17, 12/21/2014)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval

File:Sparrowpelt (SC).kit.png omg don't kill me for ruining Sparrow's images please Amber ^{The One and Only}18:30 Tue Dec 9

Thin out the pale chest and define the shadin. This looks nice! :) ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:18, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pale chest edges into the fur more. He looks amazing, you did a fine job, Amber!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 00:42, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the ear pink more. You made him purrty :) The Fox Girl (talk) 02:51, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

the pale part on his face should only go up to his nose. david ^🌈 04:29, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks everybody ^-^ Amber ^{The One and Only}18:03 Wed Dec 10

Define shading. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:30, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading is dark enough. In fact, I think it could be lightened up a tad. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:31, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

It needs to be defined, defining doesn't just mean darkening. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:33, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading a bit? I can't see the pattern through the shading. Nice job Amber. ^^ Tiger ^{Sunny days} 01:52, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Just saw that Fox said that already. ^^ Tiger ^{Sunny days} 01:58, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Still working? —Jayce(22:05, 12/14/2014)

Oops, forgot to reup ^^ Amber ^{The One and Only}12:55 Mon Dec 15

Thin out the pale chest, also lighten it up to match his other images. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 14:00, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up his shading, I can't see his pattern through it at all.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 00:35, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Also, he needs a collar since he was a kittypet back then. Am I right? ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:20, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

You would be correct, Fox. ^^ If they were kittypets when they were kits, then they should get the kittypet collar unless otherwise stated. —Jayce(22:47, 12/17/2014)

Reupssssssssss Amber ^{The One and Only}17:35 Fri Dec 19

Lighten the shading on the left side of his body. So cute :3 (I like the collar) Vixy Memento Mori... 17:46, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the collar lineart on this -----> side of the body? Tiger ^{Sunny days} 18:35, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki)~ For Approval

File:Honeypaw (SC).kit.png Woo~  First white cat (I really hope I did this right I don't wanna redo another charart :/) Vixy Memento Mori... 11:43, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define ur light source. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:48, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading up, too. It's making the white look pretty gray.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 13:41, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vixy Memento Mori... 13:49, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

She's not supposed to be white. She should be a light color, hence why she looks off-white. The base from the kittypet is #E3E5E2. I'm also gonna rename this for you, since it should be File:Honeypaw (SC).kit.png. —Jayce(00:45, 12/12/2014)

Should I change the pelt color then and reup? Vixy Memento Mori... 11:17, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

I suggest you to color pick off the apprentice image and just change the base color. The Fox Girl (talk) 13:18, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vixy Memento Mori... 15:04, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks hard edged, maybe blur it more? Then define it everywhere. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 02:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Meh that would put her back to where she is now. Just blur the edge of the shading dear, that should fix it up and save you a lot of stress. But define the depth just a tad, like darken it where the creases are and where there would be less light. You're doing wonderfully~  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 02:33, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. The left paw and main body is telling me its coming from the <--- while the right paw and tail are telling me it's coming from --->. The head could use a little bit of shading, aswell. Perhaps just switch aroound the foreleg shading; or switch the tail or main body shading.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 00:34, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Sorry I haven't been uploading recently. School, the upcoming holiday, bleh.. Vixy Memento Mori... 14:09, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hey, just as a head's up, don't align the images. It messes up the sections if too many are done at the same time. Define the light just a bit on <-- front leg. —Jayce(21:08, 12/17/2014)

Reups Gah sorry I must've not been paying attention Vixy Memento Mori... 14:29, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Try adding some highlights or something- she's looking a bit on the grey side. This is very nice for a first white cat, though. ^^ ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 03:14 Fri Dec 19

Nevermind, I didn't see that she's supposed to be light-coloured, not white. Anyways, maybe define the shading just a little? ~~

Reups Sorry about the confusion lol Vixy Memento Mori... 14:42, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail and chest shading a bit. ^^ Tiger ^{Sunny days} 19:14, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think they're both fine, tbh. I can see them both clearly. Can you blur the shading a tad more, please?--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 06:11, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Vixy Memento Mori... 13:55, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Jessy (Ki) ~ For Approval

I really meant for this to be up earlier whoops —.neha ^{it's that gloom boy season.} 18:43, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Make the collar larger, as it'd be pretty big on a kit. This is pretty!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 22:46, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

The size itself is fine. Given that there are some pretty thin collars out there, they'd still appear "normal" sized on a kit. It's clear that this collar is too big for Millie because of how it's positioned. If it were too small, then it would probably be moved. This is also the lineart from my version of Millie's kit, and I was told that the size itself was okay to use. —Jayce(17:50, 12/14/2014)

The collar is fine. Define the shading on the left foreleg, please.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 00:31, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded —.neha ^{it's that gloom boy season.} 02:56, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on her right side is a bit dark compared to her front legs' shading, maybe lighten it up a bit? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 05:19, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading over there is fine, but I think the shading on the front legs could be defined, as I can't see it too well.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:38, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Lily (Ki) - CBA

File:Lily.kit.png my rabbit's name is Lily, too ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 19:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the brown just a bit? The face is really bright on the kittypet compared to the rest of her body. —Jayce(19:15, 12/13/2014)

Reups ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 19:21, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the face brown too? That looks a different color than the rest, and I'm pretty sure that's just one big highlight on her KP. It's such an old image wow —Jayce(19:24, 12/13/2014)

Make the collar larger since itd be pretty big on a kit. You did a lovely job!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 22:47, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a touch. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}2:25 Sun Dec 14 2014

Reups ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 21:08, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define shading on the face? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 07:49, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I see it fine, and I'd much rather not. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 15:09, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Can you thin out the lineart on --> side of the collar? It seems really thick. —Jayce(14:06, 12/19/2014)

Reups ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 16:04, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(04:37, 12/22/2014)

Darkstripe (Ki) - CBA

he may be trash but his kit form is a precious cinnamon roll, too good for this world, too pure Queen Beebs 23:52, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

So adorable! Just blur/smudge the stripes a tiny tad? All of it except the muzzle. Also, define the shading a bit? --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:59, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 14:01, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on his side just a tiny bit, i can't see his pattern through it at all.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 03:33, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

If I lighten it up it's goin to be the same away as before so i think it's fine Queen Beebs 20:52, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'm kinda having issues seeing the pattern myself, though. I think maybe no more than like 5%-10% (if that) on the opacity bar would do the trick. —Jayce(21:06, 12/17/2014)

re-up Queen Beebs 01:55, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit? I can hardly see it. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 02:26, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

it's colorpicked from his other images so i think it's alright-Queen Beebs 20:33, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the neck shading, if there is any? I can't tell. —Jayce(14:05, 12/19/2014)

re-up Queen Beebs 20:13, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Tiny kitty cute kitty too bad he turns evil. CBA? —Jayce(05:15, 12/21/2014)

Slate (Ki) - CBA

david ^🌈 23:04, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Cute! Maybe define the shading a bit? Also, would you like the file? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 00:25, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

I think kits shouldn't have scars, right? ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:25, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Um kits can have scars. It's not impossible; not all kits spend there time in the safe walls of a nursery. Most rogues are out hunting when they're kits. And plus you can remember all Cloudtail's adventures and you can see why they can get scars. Plus I've seen them with scars, it's not a pretty thing.

But we have no idea when this fox incident with the brother happened, right? So it could've happened anytime in Slate's life. Perhaps we keep the scar, in case it happened when they'd been kits? I'm not sure if anyone has a direct contact with one or more of the Erin's but if you do, maybe you could ask? I don't know, I hate to assume so I'd rather have someone find out.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 13:21, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I'm going to keep it purely because we don't know when she got it, and it would seem to be an assumption to not have it. And I think I can manage without the file, but thanks for the offer. I'll reupload it later. david ^🌈 13:25, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded david ^🌈 22:58, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Will I get shot for asking you to define the neck shading a tiny bit? —Jayce(14:03, 12/19/2014)

there isnt actuay any neck shading there's just the chin shading and the head shading. david ^🌈 21:56, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Fair enough. CBA? —Jayce(05:14, 12/21/2014)

Dustpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation

Ok, I don't know if chararts can be done in a day, but anyway, this is my first charart! I used PAINT.NET for this one. He's so cute! How can I improve? This is my first charart, so I may not be familiar with everything. BTW, how to make background color disapperar? I had trouble with that. Hope this helps! FireTail101 (talk) 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Sign your posts with four tides plz. To remove the background, select the linear art, copy it, paste it onto ur base color layer, then use the magic wand tool and delete the background with control+x. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 23:58, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Plz match his other images by adding stripes as well. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups

The stripes are already there, just dark. U probably couldn't see them because of background. FireTail101 (talk) 00:13, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color and define the shading. Not bad for ur first charart! If You had seen my first charart, you'd laugh your head off. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:17, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Colour pick from one of the other Dustpelt images. Just be careful not to colour pick a shaded spot. Also with PAINT.NET, I leave the layers and save as a .pdn, then save again as a .png and that will make it one layer, making it easier to edit the waste. I leave the .pdn as multiple layers so I can edit it easier. This is great for first try! --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:21, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Stealthfire, I colourpicked each color from Dustpelt's apprentice image. FireTail101 (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I still think it's a bit dark. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

He's way to dark. He looks like a black cat on my screen, tbh. You can use  this to colorpick from; Because right now, he's so dark to the point i cant even see his stripes or lineart.

Use the medium brown on the bottom left as your base; while using the paler brown beside it for his pale parts.  The pink is for his ears; and the orange/yellow in the middle is for his eyes.  The darkest brown is for his stripes. Also, his nose needs to be black/dark brown to match his other images.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 00:30, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups FireTail101 (talk) 02:08, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define/darken the stripes? I really can't see them. You're doing well! :) ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 03:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Sure. FireTail101 (talk) 16:57, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base coat a tad. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:23, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Reups - Darkened the stripes and lightened the base. Firetail 22:53, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Also, in terms of image approval, when do I become an apprentice? FireTail101 (talk) 01:27, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Redstar (Ki) - CBA

Well this turned out alright..I'm hoping I can get in one last image before I take off on my vacation, so let's do this! Comment away~  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 03:07, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add another stripe or two to the shoulder/top of the arm? (this is what i mean) You don't have to, though. This is just a preference. ^^'~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 03:31, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah I'll do that in the morning. I almost added a stripe there but I wasn't sure if I should. But looking at it now its kind of weird to just have it blank.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 04:23, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:40, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on --> front leg and on the tail. —Jayce(14:00, 12/19/2014)

Re-uploaded.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:28, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(04:37, 12/22/2014)

Cherrytail (K) - CBA

Cherrytail is my babe, comments? ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:18, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the chest white more. You did a great job! She's pretty =)  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 18:11, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Oh and I also see some waste next to the neck over ---> on this side.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 20:43, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thank you! Question: Does she need a collar? Since she was a kittypet back then. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 02:07, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

You're welcome. And yes she would.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 04:44, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Collars are evil XD By the way, I already got 4 images approved... When will I become a warrior? ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 05:41, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Now, honestly. I couldn't figure out how many images you had approved, hence why I didn't promote you. I didn't realize you had a charart page, my apologies on the delayed promotion. ;-; —Jayce(22:36, 12/17/2014)

Okay let's comment on this... hmm, could you smudge the patches a bit? They appear smudged on her other images, but with this, I really can't tell because the blanks are so damn tiny. —Jayce(14:02, 12/19/2014)

Re-ups I smudged them as much as I can, and I rather not smudge them any further. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 03:18, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(04:37, 12/22/2014)

Falling Feather (Ki) - CBA

Hm. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}22:31 Wed Dec 17

Smooth out the texture to match the other images? This is purrty! ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 02:30, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I did exactly what I did to this image what I did on the StarClanner, so I personally think it's fine. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:47 Thu Dec 18

CBA? —Jayce(04:37, 12/22/2014)

Bess (Ki) ~ For Approval

hello naughty children it's darkness time. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 03:17 Fri Dec 19

Brilliant! Define light on the tail? ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 03:47, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried, but I couldn't do much without making the colour look funny. Also messed around with the white a tad because it was bugging me. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 14:03 Fri Dec 19

Smudge the chest white a tad more. Hi Berry, welcome back! =)  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:31, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also adjusted the front paw shading a bit because it was bugging me. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 14:27 Sat Dec 20

The shading is really dark on his right paw. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:21, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Stormcloud (Ki) ~ For Approval

pls tell me I'm done with this set now Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:47, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading overall, then smooth it out. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 13:49, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think just smoothing it out would solve the problem. It doesn't distort the pattern in any way, shape, or form, and I can see it just fine. —Jayce(13:58, 12/19/2014)

I think it could be lightened just a shade over on the farthest side to our right ---> because I think it messes with the color a tad, and I can't really see the pattern through it. The rest is fine. I think this is the last one in the set Shinx lol  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:34, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

This computer makes shading appear so daaaarrrkk I'm glad my guess was almost ok Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:11, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Could u possibly smooth out the tail shading? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:22, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Reups It already was smooth, but ok Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 12:57, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (Star) - For Approval

The kits taking over the world so here's a StarClanner :3 Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 20:33, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 03:20, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

On the tail too. This is pretty! :) ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 05:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups  Thanks:) Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 12:24, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Ratscar (Ki) - For Approval

I do not remember uploading this at all yesterday, I was that tired. All colors are from the elder. —Jayce(04:30, 12/22/2014)

Could you smooth out the shading on the tail? Niiicceee :) ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 05:19, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Amberclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval

First tabby! XD Also, I'm an apprentice and I have had three images approved, is there anything else I need to do to become a warrior? --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:45, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Nothing at all. Three images is three images, so that means you'll be promoted. —Jayce(05:15, 12/22/2014)

Sunstar (W) ~ For Approval

I looovvvvvvvee Sunstar :p ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 05:12, December 22, 2014 (UTC)