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Whispering Breeze (Ki) ~ For Approval

Wow it feels like a while......my first charart on a laptop, comments? Amber ^{The One and Only}08:38 Fri Jan 9

Add a few more stripes, thicken them a tad, and lighten up the shading on <== side, I can't see the pattern through it. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 09:39, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the ---> foreleg and lighten the overall shading a bit ~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 11:26, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge and lighten the stripes. They look too dark to me. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 17:24, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the stripes, maybe? They look really hard to me. ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 19:20, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? —Jayce(08:39, 1/15/2015)

Gosh I completely forgot Reups I've been so busy sorry Amber ^{The One and Only}15:49 Thu Jan 15

The forhead stripes still look hard. Good job on her. She's beautiful!^^ ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 20:49, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes and thin them out. They look really fat, unless they're that way on the other images. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:55, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on this <-------- side is still a bit too dark? Maybe lighten it? Tiger ^{Sunny days} 02:29, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I hate tabbies Amber ^{The One and Only}09:22 Sat Jan 17

It's still very dark. Lighten it up? ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 10:04, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

If I lighten it anymore I'm going to be asked to define it. It's fine. Amber ^{The One and Only}18:57 Sat Jan 17

Define the neck/lower face shading a little bit. Doesn't need too much. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 21:06 Sat Jan 17

Define the light on her tail. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 07:44, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes in her forehead match a bit more. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 04:07, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

define all the shading that isnt on our left side tbh. david ^🌈 11:28, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

You still workin'? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:00, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading to the left. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 20:28 Tue Jan 20

Lighten the shading on the left side of the body, like Gia said, and lighten the shading on that right front paw. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 21:44, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes and base up a bit, they're pretty dark compared to her other images. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 19:49 Thu Jan 22

The stripes on <-- cheek are still hard edged and so his the forehead. ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 21:46 January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze is a she-cat, actually. Also, shouldn't the earpink be under the shading? ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:39 Thu Jan 22

I've been told it's artists choice, Gia. Meh, personally I put mine under my shading, at least my first or second layer. But yeah it's artists choice.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 21:28, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Um, Tbh it's well over a week... ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 13:21, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Icicle (Ki) ~ For Approval

oh look more kits ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 19:42 Sun Jan 18

Re-uploaded oh look waste ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 19:43 Sun Jan 18

Can you smudge/blur the shading a bit? Tiger ^{Sunny days} 19:45, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 21:32 Sun Jan 18

The shading is leaking from <== this side. Blur and define the shading. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 02:51, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 15:07 Mon Jan 19

The shading is still leaking at the same place. Perhaps make a new layer, shade over the leaking part and remove the waste? ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 01:43, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Where is it leaking? ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 03:18 Tue Jan 20 03:18, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

<== this side. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 03:20, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit, if you don't mind. —Jayce(18:58, 1/20/2015)

Are you sure those eyes aren't just one plain colour? Also, brighten up the face more please? ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!}

The face brightness looks fine to me. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 21:43, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Erase a little of the shading on both front paws, they shouldn't be entirely in shadow. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 21:46, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean "are you sure those eyes aren't just one plain color?" Do you want me to define the pupil shading? Also re-ups ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:17 Tue Jan 20

re-ups freakin' tails, man ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:21 Tue Jan 20

re-ups WAAASTEEEE also i fixed the eyes for you, at least i think i did. also dulled the highlights because they were wayway too bright ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:26 Tue Jan 20

It's still leaking a bit. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:21, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:26 Wed Jan 21

re-ups ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:30 Wed Jan 21

re-ups wow i swear i can't do anything first try lmao ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:42 Wed Jan 21

re-uploaded 4: a new hope ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 23:29 Wed Jan 21

Lol. Could you define the leg shading just a bit? Also, I think the shading is leaking on the head over on <--- this side. Lookin' good!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 21:30, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups i'm DONE with this shading uGH ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 23:50 Fri Jan 23

are changes showing? ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 23:52 Fri Jan 23

It's still leaking. Also, dull down the earpink. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 13:22, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Star) - For Approval

Eh..her pattern is hard :p Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 20:18, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? This is beautiful. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:31 Sun Jan 18

Thin out the stripes. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:22, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on her cheek looks flat. brighten or smoothen it maybe? Correct me if I am wrong. ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 13:30, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, I think the stripes are good in terms of thickness. Maybe blur them on a very very very very light setting to make them a bit less hard-edged? —Jayce(18:58, 1/20/2015)

Also, lighten the shading a smidge? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 21:47, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 21:04, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a little bit. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:08 Thu Jan 22

lighten her a tad, she looks very dark. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:41, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 17:17, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the muzzle(in the pale part only). This is looking lovely!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 22:06, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

--> this side of the cheeck is looking a little flat again.. ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 08:02 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki) - CBA

File:Honeypaw (SC).kit.png Have a Honeykit! Base Colour from SnowedLightning, everything else from apprentice. --Stealthfire star (talk) 22:22, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 06:15, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 08:44, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

IDK ligten up the shading a bit? Firetail :D ^{Sharks are OSM} 23:18, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 23:27, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload forgot to tone down tail and left leg shading. --Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 23:40, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the neck and tail shading some, and define the light on the left <--- front leg. Also, define where the lightsource is coming from on the tail. the body says from over <---- here, while the tail says it might be coming from below. So far so good!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 21:34, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 22:51, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail more and make the light on the <== bigger. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 23:54 Fri Jan 23

Reupload --Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 00:00, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Add light to the back paw. this looks nice! :) ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 05:12, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks! --Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:20, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs a bit please. Looking good :) ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 02:33, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 07:23, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(19:12, 1/25/2015)

Frogtail (Ki) - For Evaluation

Firetail is back... with Frogkit this time! I used PAINT.NET and colorpicked from his apprentice image, comments? (P.S. this is technically my first charart again since Dustkit got declined) Firetail :D ^{Sharks are OSM} 00:18, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's texture... ? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:22, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Is there supposed to be texture or not? Firetail :D ^{Sharks are OSM} 21:55, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

It's a soft mottle-like texture. Which it looks really neat and if anyone nominates it for that I'm gonna like, idk, feed you to the Dark Forest or something.—Jayce(22:02, 1/21/2015)

So I guess I'll just scribble at paintbrush size 4 or something and blur to get mottled texture. Again, everything is from the apprentice image.  IDK I guess it looks more like brindled right now.  Firetail :D ^{Sharks are OSM} 23:17, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups - How's this for mottles? Firetail :D ^{Sharks are OSM} 02:07, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Really nice. :) define the shading everywhere. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 05:10, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

That looks really nice for your first! I agree with Fox Girl, please define the shading. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 15:37 Sat Jan 24

Reups Done Firetail ^{TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM} 00:23, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and <== leg. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 00:38 Sun Jan 25

His nose is hot pink. Sure of it. Make it a little light, please. ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!}

Good design.. really wish mine didn't get declined but oh well.. well done! :) Flameclaw1 (talk) 17:41, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make the nose the same color as the earpink. Make the earpink a little pinker though, it looks almost orange. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 12:31 Mon Jan 26

Snowflake (Ki) ~ For Approval

File:Snowflake.kit.pngBest attempt at texture. ^^ Tiger ^{Sunny days} 03:06, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shading to this ==> leg. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 12:40, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading and blur the neck shading a little. david ^🌈 22:45, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste above the <== ear, and blur the shading a bit. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 19:52 Thu Jan 22

There's no waste, actually o_O my phone was showing something completely different ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:38 Thu Jan 22

Define the shading, please. i literally can't see any.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 21:37, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Tiger ^{Sunny days} 00:00, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink on the <== ear a little more. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 02:48 Sun Jan 25

Re-upped Tiger ^{Sunny days} 15:39, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sniff (Ki) - For Approval

here have a tiny kit. I'm going back to shooting Geth now, so have fun. —Jayce(05:57, 1/21/2015)

He has yellow eyes. ^^ ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 05:58, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Whoops. May have mixed his eye color up with something else. —Jayce(06:01, 1/21/2015)

He looks flat on the head and the neck. Could you define the shading there? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 08:09, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also did other stuff. —Jayce(18:27, 1/23/2015)

Define the shading/light on the tail, please.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 21:48, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the neck shading a little more. It's still hard to see. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 23:05 Fri Jan 23

Actually, define the shading pretty much everywhere except the head. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 23:56 Fri Jan 23

Re-uploaded. I actually just darkened it, since I think it's defined pretty well- I'd lightened the shading before I posted it before and I thought it was kinda light... —Jayce(18:11, 1/24/2015)

He still looks kinda flat... Maybe curve the stripes more? IDK :/ ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 04:04, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but what does the stripes have to do with the image looking flat??? I really don't think it's flat- I can see it perfectly fine and I think this is bordering on being picky... —Jayce(04:32, 1/25/2015)

Whoops, he looks miles away on my PC rather than on my iPad. =P sorry. It looks fine. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 04:48, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading just a tad more. (Don't worry, Fox Girl, he looks nearly pitch black on my phone, but fine on my laptop =P) ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 15:42 Sun Jan 25

You gonna mind if I ask for another opinion, Gia? My laptop's has slightly different color settings than the other one I had, and while it looks fine to me, and I already defined it earlier when you asked, I kinda want to see what others think (besides you, who has already said something), since each computer shows something slightly different. —Jayce(15:50, 1/25/2015)

No, I don't mind at all. Go ahead, you're the artist. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 19:27 Sun Jan 25

I think it looks fine to me. Could you maybe blur/smudge the facial shading some more? It looks a bit hard-edged to me. He looks very cute =)  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 19:38, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Shaded Moss (K) ~ For Approval

 Idk. *shoves little Shaded Moss towards ya'll*~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 21:54, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white- he looks pale gray and black. This also needs to be named File:Shaded Moss.kit.png, so I'm gonna rename that for you. —Jayce(22:00, 1/21/2015)

Re-uploaded. ~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 22:20, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smudge the patches more with a size 1 hard edged tool? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:08, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define or add the texture? It's there in his other images. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 00:14, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. He has texture; hes just very dark so its not really noticable. I lightened his base color a few ticks on the opacity bar to define it, though.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 02:07, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

On his other images, the texture is noticeable. However on here I can't even see it. Mind if you can define it? ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:23, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the white on the <== leg. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 12:43 Thu Jan 22

Isn't he only meant to have a white muzzle and chest? Because here the white in his face expands to his whole chin. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:27, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Its the same amount i added as on the ancient?~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 01:20, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I did try to define the texture, however.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 18:12, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the texture, I still can't see it. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 05:04, January 26, 2015 (UTC

Mind if i get another opinion, Burnt? Ive already lightened him a hell of alot, and its about as defined as this as i did on his ancient. If someone else says something, though, ill go ahead and add it. I just dont want to lighten him too much more than this otherwise he'll start to look more gray then black.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 10:55, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the texture just fine. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 12:29 Mon Jan 26

Could you darken the texture? Just wondering. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 13:23, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Webfoot (Alt A) ~ For Approval

File:Webfoot.app.alt.png 我讨厌他 =p but I like how this turned out. =) ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 08:04, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

He looks so much like Bramblestar! His right earpink ---> looks dark. Brighten it up a little? ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 21:41 Thursday January 22 (UTC)

Is there supposed to be pink on his nose, or is it supposed to be black? There's nothing right there right now, so =P ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 22:10 Thu Jan 22

The nose color doesn't matter, however, as for the ear pink, I'll fix that later. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:33, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped lightened up the base color too. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 02:53, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading a tiny bit? He looks almost black in some spots, mainly on the stripe parts- the pale parts are fine, though. —Jayce(19:06, 1/25/2015)

Re-upped ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 02:56, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Some of the stripes look a tad pixely..mind smudging them a tad? If you don't see which ones, I can make a redline for ya. This is amazing, you did a lovely job.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:55, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt Leader) ~ For Approval

Those eyes look absolutely evil, she's a mad kitty O.O ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:21, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

She actually looks cross-eyed... do you mind tweaking that? —Jayce(08:24, 1/22/2015)

Re-upped whoops, made her look too evil XD ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:43, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

She looks striped. Either soften the texture by a lot or get rid of it completely. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}16:07 Thu Jan 22 2015

Whooah! Those eyes look new. Also, the ear pink on this ---> side looks differant from the one on the other (Dont have to match it perfectly!)~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!}

Also the tip of her tail looks cut off due to the Image size. Are you sure this picture is the right size? ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 21:39 Thu Jan 22 2015 (UTC)

The earpink probably looks different because of shading. There's some waste by the tip of the tail. Also, please define the tail shading. This looks really nice! ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 21:44 Thu Jan 22

Die waste die ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 04:32, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

There's also a little bit of waste between the base of the tail and the back leg. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 17:58, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Sorrel. Though I think I see waste on the top of the head too. Correct me in if am wrong ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 01:20 January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading some more.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 01:28, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

I see no waste on top of the head. I do see the waste by the base of the tail, though. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 02:47 Sun Jan 25

I suck at shading ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 03:45, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

She still looks kinda striped. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 15:43 Sun Jan 25

Might just be me, not sure, but she looks very large in comparison to the other leaders[I think, just by glancing..have not actually put them up side by side] and the lineart looks thicker[again just by a semi-memorized look on the other leader blanks, nothing side by side] and I can definitely say it doesn't look cropped right..some of the blank is cut off. But if I'm just seeing things, ignore me.. :/  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 18:22, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Nope, the image dimensions of this one and another one of her alts are exactly the same- the image is the correct file size and uses the normal-sized blanks...although please crop the top part of the image so there's not so much blank space between her ears and the top of the image. —Jayce(18:33, 1/25/2015)

Th bright streaks on her look like rays of sunshine or lightning bolts. (Means a little too bright) Dull them down maybe? correct me if I am wrong.~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!}

God rid of the dumb texture, it was 1) bothering me and 2) not working out ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:44, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

The foot line art is cut off. Can you raise the image some? ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 08:59 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

It's not cut off, it's fine. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 12:28 Mon Jan 26

The shading is leaking away from the lineart in several spots. If you need me to redline where, let me know I'd be glad to help. =) this is looking great!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:58, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (Ki) ~ For Approval

I gotta tell ya, I'm getting used to seeing all these kits. Oh my gosh it's so good to be home c: Comments?  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 18:32, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading- I can't see it at all. —Jayce(18:33, 1/23/2015)

Define the earpink while your at it.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 18:36, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh, I tried. This base color is a butt to work with...  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 18:44, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth it out a bit? Right now it looks quite hard-edged, especially along his right leg.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 18:47, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

It's pretty smudged already..may I have another opinion?  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 18:51, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Define the shading, though. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 23:05 Fri Jan 23

Re-uploaded.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:37, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink, i can barely see any.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 20:47, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make the light on the tail a little bigger. shorthair tails are a pain ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 21:12 Sun Jan 25

Re-uploaded. That's as much as I can define the earpink or else if it needs more definition I'll have to alter the color. I know right? -.-  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 21:29, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Stormfur (Alt W) ~ For Approval

muh blue grey stormfur david ^🌈 05:25, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Eh could you make him a little more blue? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 05:27, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

blue grey cats are barely blue as it is, honestly. like you can just see it. david ^🌈 05:28, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Still, on the cover of Outcast, he looks quite blue. Maybe just a liiittttle bit? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 05:31, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

bluestar's shown blue af in her images, but she's not in the pixels. so I'm gonna say no until someone else agrees he should be bluer. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ david ^🌈 05:39, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not going to tell you to change it but this alt is very, very blue because it was shown like that on the cover. =/ Stormfur is also quite blue as shown here.~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 05:49, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

He's not that blue...and tbh I think it's good for now- he's allowed to ask for more opinions. And honestly, I hate to be that person, but do we have cites for which cat is Stormfur and which is Brook? I know it's obvious, but I'm pretty sure the cite only says it's Stormfur and Brook, not "Stormfur is on the upper part and Brook is on the lower part". —Jayce(06:13, 1/25/2015)

It says that Brook was shown with yellow eyes mistakenly on Outcast....? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 06:17, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

That was added long before we really started cracking down on what does and doesn't count as proof and really checking the citation. If it doesn't specify which cat is which, then it needs to be removed. I am mobile and at work so I can't check the cite myself. —Jayce(07:12, 1/25/2015)

It's never even stated in the cite that they're actually the cats on the cover.
"Question:In Outcast, does the title refer to Stormfur and Brook being outcasts from their Tribe?
Answer:CherithBaldry: Yes, it refers to Stormfur and Brook."
I looked through the whole chat and found nothing that cited their appearance on the cover. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 15:09 Sun Jan 25

Nicely spotted, Gia. I'm gonna remove that, actually, and by those rights, this alt isn't warranted. —Jayce(15:12, 1/25/2015)

Doesn't that mean this gets declined? Just wondering, because it says it's still up for approval..  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 16:50, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I was waiting for the opinions of other users before I declined it- I'm aware it still says "for approval". —Jayce(20:04, 1/26/2015)

Frecklewish (Alt. K) ~ For Evaluation

File:Frecklewish.kittypet.alt.png I know most of these comments might be bout the spots. But don't you think she pretty? (I love her. Its better than my last Charart.) ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 06:09, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Please remove the collar- she was seen without it in the back of SkyClan's Destiny. —Jayce(06:33, 1/26/2015)

Reups

Tiiiiiimmnnnnnyyyyyyy writing! Maybe put in some more spots, or make some of them bigger. --Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 06:40, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

You need this reserve d. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 06:42, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!}

Oh Crap! I forgot!! D: How did you reserve it fo me last time, Foxy? ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!}

Right, go to the main page, there's a table full of names and stuff, then find your username, and write the character you're doing. So just write "Frecklewish (Alt Kittypet) ^^ ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 07:38, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Oh! I just did that! Haha well, thanks! Anymore comments for tonight? ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 07:42 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading everywhere and add more light to the back. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 07:44, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 08:04 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source. Add more light to the back. Adding light is to basically deleting shading. Right now, she looks like as if she was shading on the whole body. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:09, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest you to choose a different light source, don't chose the light source that gives all shading on the back. Also, defining means making the shading more visible, right now I can't even see it. See the other kittypets for reference. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 08:11, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 08:23 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I still can't see the shading. Try adding some light to the places where there are light. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:24, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 08:30 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see any change at all... ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:32, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm.. Lets try this again.. poohie. ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 08:33 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Gonna hit the hay. Im tired...~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 08:41 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink, please.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 10:58, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a little bit too. Also, please define your light source more. Try adding white on a seperate layer over where the light is coming from, blurring it the same way you did your shading, and lower the opacity a lot. There's a tutorial on the Apprentice Tutorials page. ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 12:27 Mon Jan 26

She looks grey. Lighten her up and define the shading. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 13:25, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) (Kit) ~ For Evaluation

File:Mitzi (Lo).Kit.pngMy first Character Pixel – What do you think?

Is it black enough? Or is it still dark grey?

– YoungChamp (talk) 07:29, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink and blur it. Also, fixed the thumbnail for you. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 07:31, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

This looks great! Just lighten the shading a tad, wow, you did better than my first go with a dark cat. --Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 07:39, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't her nose be black, for a black cat? Also, If this is your first Charart, its wonderful! ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 07:46 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I darkened the nose and the ear pink, and I made the shading as clear as I could. I hope there's a difference – YoungChamp (talk) 07:59, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

No need to upload a new file everytime. Blur the ear pink more please. This looks good! =) ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 08:02, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't your heading be For Evaluation? ~ ☾Brambleshade ^{The Cookie Monster is out for you!} 08:06 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I fixed it. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 08:07, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Is the ear pink all right now? – YoungChamp (talk) 08:15, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Please do not put "thumb" behind your image, define the shading please. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 08:18, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Where's your light source on the tail? I can hardly see it. black cats are a pain to shade shorthair tails are worse ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 12:24 Mon Jan 26

Also, please define the leg shading a little bit. i could barely tell it was there ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 12:36 Mon Jan 26

Define the earpink. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 13:24, January 26, 2015 (UTC)