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[[File:Running_Horse.ancient.png]]Whoo this was fun. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 08:24, February 26, 2015 (UTC)
 
[[File:Running_Horse.ancient.png]]Whoo this was fun. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 08:24, February 26, 2015 (UTC)
   
Can you edit the lineart slightly to go with the wrinkles? I made him in mind to basically be like a Devon Rex without the super fancy fur and they are big wrinkle monsters with lots of rolls {{User:Ivystripe/sig}} 10:13, February 26, 2015 (UTC)
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Can you edit the lineart slightly to go with the wrinkles? I made him in mind to basically be like a Devon Rex without the super fancy fur and they are big wrinkle monsters with lots of rolls {{User:Ivystripe/sig}} 10:13, February 26, 2015 (UTC)
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Define the shading, too. Nice job^^ {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 13:08, February 26, 2015 (UTC)
   
 
==[[Frogtail]] (Ki) ~ For Approval==
 
==[[Frogtail]] (Ki) ~ For Approval==

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Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) ~ For Approval

Mitzi (Lo).kit OK, I shouldnt be doing black cats on this laptop because the colors are all screwed up and I have to squint to see the shading. But here. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 20:01, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her maybe and dull down the Ear Pink. She looks grey on my screen. (correct me if I am wrong about the earpink) ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 20:14, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a blacked out nose? giaria time on my side 03:09 Tue Feb 10

Actually, I think I asked Breezey about this once, and black cats don't need to have black noses. I think they can have a darker reddish nose, or something along those lines. Jayce(03:12, 2/10/2015)

Mind darkening him a tad? He seems pretty light. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:45, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Brambleshade already said that, Burntclaw^^ Also, may you define the tail shading?  Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:55, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Dew Nose Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:46, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over :P ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 22:13, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Updated ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 23:12, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Nice job!  Frosty ☾Supernatural 23:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna bring attention to the fact that it's got the wrong file name; could an admin fix that for Bramble? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 00:07, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I believe I could fix it. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 00:09, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated There we go. I really like her :3 ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 00:11, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Mind lightening up the ear pink a little? Gorgeous, Bramble :$ ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated I think she is one fine kitty <3 Any better? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 00:21, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the legs, and define the light on the legs. giaria time on my side 12:57 Wed Feb 11

Updated I wonder if this has any difference... ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:44, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten ear pink a bit--☽ Sunstream 19:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 21:22, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the lighter parts of the image- I'm having issues really seeing the shading too, but I think it's a good darkness, so tweaking your highlights and/or lighter areas (if you don't use highlights, which aren't mandatory) might help with this. Jayce(15:53, 2/17/2015)

Updated Huh.. I wonder if anyone else see's the difference in this magnificent cat <3 ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 21:06, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps lighten her up a teeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnnnyyyyyyyyyyyy bit so that we can see the shading? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:08, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Updated It looks better on my screen :P ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 13:32, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Eagle Feather (Ki) - For Approval

Eagle Feather.kit Yes, the shading is black. I don't feel like tinting it since it's not mandatory and it doesn't look green. Jayce(13:30, 2/13/2015)

Define the shading, and maybe smooth it out a little. giaria time on my side 15:51 Fri Feb 13

Re-uploaded. Jayce(15:58, 2/13/2015)

If you zoom into the bottom of the picture, you can see waste at the front foot. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:47, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope I got it... that's odd, though...there's never waste on my images with how I have my layers... Jayce(19:53, 2/13/2015)

Yeah, that is strange, but you got it off. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 20:01, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Mind defining the shading on the ---> front leg? I can barely see any. This looks great =).--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 22:31, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

I doesn't need defining, but it could use a little blur. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:57, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

I think it needs defining, as it looks like there is only a smidge of shading on the leg. The paw shading could use a blur, but the leg shading needs to be defined.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:56, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Great Spirits, make up my mind already you nerds. I cannot feel my hands because of how cold it is. Jayce(14:04, 2/16/2015)

The back leg tells me the light source is coming from <== whereas the rest tells me it's coming from the other way around, could you fix that? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:16, February 19, 2015 (UTC

Re-uploaded. That doesn't even seem important but okay it's a back foot where you can't even tell but okay. Jayce(14:20, 2/19/2015)

Getting a tad sassy, are we? xD Could you darken the head shading a tad? If you think it's fine though, then don't do anything to it. He's a handsome little thing. =)  Frosty ☾Supernatural 23:14, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

I was more confused than anything, not sassy. I'd rather not darken the head shading, as I think it might clash with the ear pink a bit too much- I don't put my ear pink below the shading. Jayce(23:36, 2/19/2015)

I think the shading on the legs could be defined. If you prefer not to, that's fine. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:13, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. And did some other stuff. Jayce(12:58, 2/22/2015)

Furled Bracken (Ancient) ~ For Approval

Furled Bracken.ancientTiger does it again. =P Tiger Sunny days 03:15, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. Very pretty~ =) nice job.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 03:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks Tiger Sunny days 03:48, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Eye depth could still be defined, try switching the place here the dark part of the eye starts. User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:26, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Mew Tiger Sunny days 15:26, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws a tad. giaria time on my side 15:46 Sat Feb 14

Re-upped Tiger Sunny days 16:06, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you give the shading a bit more depth? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:55, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Tiger Sunny days 01:01, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define your lightsource? Some paws are telling me it's coming from <== and the tail is telling me it's coming from ==> really pretty ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:00, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Tiger Sunny days 04:17, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

The lightsource still looks off. Please clarify the direction the light is coming from.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 16:23, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it fine. It looks like it's coming from the left. However, the shading on the tail looks like it's leaking. giaria time on my side 16:27 Tue Feb 17

Not really, considering the chest, tail, and a couple legs say left, and the head and another leg say right. I'd say it still needs a little clarifying. :/  Frosty ☾Supernatural 16:42, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can I have another opinion or a redline of what you want it to look like? I'm a bit confused. Tiger Sunny days 23:42, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Lol I apologize ahead of time, this is a very rough one since I did it very quickly..here's the redline of what I'd probably do if I was doing that lightsource. Again it's very rough, and you can style it your own way. Hope it helps. =)  Frosty ☾Supernatural 03:57, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for neglecting this. Tiger Sunny days 00:58, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

There are tiny bits of waste. (sorry for being such a picky person with Charart xD) The two pixel holes between fur, aka the Rump and the left elbow have a tiny bit of waste. The earpink is also outside of the lineart for the ear. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 22:32, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

:c) Tiger Sunny days 22:49, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Mind dulling down the earpink a little bit? It looks really bright. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:14, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Boop Tiger Sunny days 01:42, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Petal (Ro) (Star) ~ For Approval

File:Petal (Ro).star.png She's a beauty :p comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Simply lovely! Add a  bit of shading to her side maybe? ☽ Sunstream 15:01, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Um, that is a bit vague, I don't get what you mean. I added shading to her side as the light is coming from ==> there. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 15:06, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? It looks dark on my phone, but if you think it's fine then leave it. she's pretty giaria time on my side 15:52 Sun Feb 15

On my phone it looks fine. Tiger Sunny days 16:53, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Looks perfect on my iPad and Mac,don't change anything yet! 🐈 --☽ Sunstream 17:26, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit. giaria time on my side 22:52 Sun Feb 15

Re-ups thanks guys :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:45, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the Earpink, please? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 17:06, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Earpink looks fine, but you could lighten the shading on the ears. Also The Fox Girl you might want to move your signature into a template - it takes up a lot of space on the editor. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith21:01 Mon Feb 16 2015

I'm not sure how to fix the ear pink... I put the layer above my shading so I can't Lighten it there. And I color picked from her other images. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:31, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Simply beautiful! Maybe do a highlight of the ears, that works for me. she is my baby great job!

Re-uploaded Thanks ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:34, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define nose pink a tad it looks kinda black :/ --☽ Sunstream 14:39, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine, and I'm not changing it. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:19, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the main body are a bit too pixely compared to her other images...the ones on her queen are a bit smoother as well, and I'm pretty sure that's the side you should be matching.. Jayce(15:28, 2/20/2015)

Re-uploaded I tried, if you guys think it's still pixely, then inform me. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:37, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

There is small pixel-like waste on --> that cheek. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 22:44, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

There's no waste... I can't see it - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:04, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (Ancient) ~ For Evaulation

Shy Fawn.ancientFirst time trying! Comments?✫Stream on theDark side of the moon☽ 09:45, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Your title needs to say "Shy Fawn Ancient - For Evaluation" since you're kit. Very nice for a first charart. :) Define the shading on the chest and face, and erase a bit of the shading on the right side of the left front leg. Jayie Unwritten words~ 09:50, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Very pretty :) Define the shading on the tail a bit. User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:55, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Also, you needed to reserve it. I've done it for you this time, but you must keep in mind that you have to reserve something before posting it in the future. User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:58, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, I've never contributed much with this page so i don't know anything 0.0 sorry for mistakes everywhere! :P✫Stream on theDark side of the moon☽ 11:41, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

@Jayie this is not the first time for me to do a charart tbh, but it's the first time for me to do an actual character...✫Stream on theDark side of the moon☽ 04:34, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ok. I suggest that you might want to darken the shading. Everywhere. (Besides the neck, face, chest, and front paws." I would also brighten up the shading one the hind paw aswell.  ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 20:41, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tongue. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:08, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Ok. There is waste everywhere. Can you fix that? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 14:49, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Stream, remember to comment here when you re-upload your image. Define the shading on the haunch. Also, the shading is leaking from the haunch as well, you might want to fix that. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:12, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups.✫Stream on theDark side of the moon☽ 12:57, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

So so so sorry about the waste and the comment thing! I was in a huge hurry when I uploaded this pic :'(✫Stream on theDark side of the moon☽ 12:57, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm still seeing waste everywhere..especially around the tail and on the tip of the tail.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:48, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the neck, hindleg, <-- elbow, the tail, the ears... everything. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 22:43, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Tbh it isn't that bad. I'd say just define the light on the chest and the shading depth. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:44, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups✫Stream on theDark side of the moon☽ 07:13, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on (our) left front paw. Also, don't thumb your images, please. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:28, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Rising Moon (Ancient) ~ For Approval

Rising Moon.ancient i know there should be texture i will add that in the next upload giaria time on my side 15:35 Tue Feb 17

Blur and lighten up the shading, looking good ^^. User:Burntclaw/Sig 15:42, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups giaria time on my side 15:47 Tue Feb 17

Blur/smudge the shading some more, it still looks pretty hard-edged. Also, have the texture flow more with the direction of the fur. Nice job =)  Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:04, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a bit? It looks really dark. Nicely done! =3 Tiger Sunny days 23:48, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Add more depth to her eyes ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 11:04, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups giaria time on my side 21:59 Wed Feb 18

Lighten up the shading quite a bit more, it's really dark. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:54 Thu Feb 19

re-ups i just spotted the waste under her i'll fix that in a sec giaria time on my side 12:35 Thu Feb 19

the shading is still very hard edged, especially on the haunch. User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:36, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

if i blur it any more its going to look gross giaria time on my side 12:56 Thu Feb 19

Lighten up the shading, and it still could be smoothed out. Also, define the texture, I can barely tell it's there. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:13, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Curve the texture a bit more to try and match with the flow of fur, particularly when it transitions from one body part to the other. The direction of light is confusing as well due to the head and tail shading. Nice job! Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:03, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

tbh i'm just going to redo the shading and the texture giaria time on my side 00:05 Fri Feb 20

reups the shading is now smudged, will darken texture if necessary giaria time on my side 01:50 Fri Feb 20

The texture looks a bit thick and blotchy, try using an airbrush and run over the image until it looks like texture. Lighten up the shading too. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:16, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

The white splotches looks like it is above the shading layer. could you put it back underneath so it looks more.. shaded? and tbh, I think the hind leg still needs to be smudged or blurred more. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 21:49, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups giaria time on my side 02:55 Sat Feb 21

The texture is still blotchy... Try using a paintbrush then adjusting the opacity. The shading is very hardedged, try smudging the edges with a hard edged smudge tool. User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:32, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could I have a second opinion on the shading? It looks fine to me and I really dont want to smudge it more giaria time on my side 16:58 Sat Feb 21

I think it could use more smudging. Also, can you define the depth of the shading a bit? =) Tiger Sunny days 00:00, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Just to ask, what color of shading are you using? User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:42, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading that is on the paw that is overlapped? (sorry if that sounded confusing) - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:10, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Burntclaw, please smooth out the shading some more. Right now, it still looks rather hard-edged.--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 09:40, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm using black shading. I think it looks fine. giaria time on my side 18:02 Sun Feb 22

also it really feels like you guys are just repeating the same comment to smudge the shading, i'd appreciate it if you didn't do that? it feels like you're yelling at me and i don't like it giaria time on my side 18:05 Sun Feb 22

I'm sorry, I don't think it's fine. It looks quite paint-brushy and splotchy. Also, we aren't yelling at you, we are just telling you what you can do to improve the image. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:33, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think if you added some light to the chest and smoothed out the haunch shading, you'd be good. You don't need to smudge the shading, nor tint it- neither choice is required by PCA and these are things that people just like to do. Also, to everyone else, please keep in mind that too many comments saying "I agree" and things like that might be overwhelming to a user, so the overload of comments saying to smooth out the shading could easily have been taken as ganging up on someone because of the amount of people agreeing/saying the same thing. Jayce(01:33, 2/23/2015)

Waste at the tip of the tail ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 22:41, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

To be honest I think it's pretty fine. Everyone has their own style of shading. Can you define the shading on the tip of the bottom front paw?(awkward description) Maybe a tiny bit more shading at the tail.✫Stream on theDark side of the moon☽ 01:51, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

It's not just about style, it does looks quite hard edged imo. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:45, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

hey hey hey giaria time on my side 23:54 Wed Feb 25

Can you lighten the shading? It looks really dark right now, imo. It's pretty. ^^ Tiger Sunny days 00:06, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups giaria time on my side 12:34 Thu Feb 26

Shellheart (Ki) ~ For Approval

Shellheart.kit Hi there. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot17:31 Sat Feb 21

Darken fur color a bit --☽ Sunstream 19:10, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

I think it matches with the other images. ^^ Tiger Sunny days 19:13, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. giaria time on my side 19:37 Sat Feb 21

'Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:21 Sun Feb 22

Should he be more ragged-furred? On his StarClanner his tail, legs, and everything are pretty ragged..not sure if this should be like that though, so if it's fine Hawky, ignore me. :3 He's handsome, nice job^^  Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:55, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

The cite for those is when he was an elder, so only the elder and StarClan chararts would get the ragged fur. Jayce(22:40, 2/23/2015)

The Old She-cat ~ For Approval

File:The Old She-cat.rogue.png My first rogue image! too many kits lately. I tried getting it similarly coloured to Thistleclaw's manga alt, as in the book, they are the exact same colour.--Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:53, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and light on the tail and legs. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 01:54, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:04, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:38, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the belly a bit. Tiger Sunny days 04:39, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere and the light on the tail - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:08, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

says shes got a tooth sticking out, can you add it? david 🌈 12:20, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Can you thicken the lineart a bit where the tufts of fur stick out from the base lineart? It looks a tiny bit out of place. Also, I think the body shading itself is fine and doesn't really need defined. Jayce(12:38, 2/22/2015)

Reupload sorry I didn't answer earlier, my internet crashed >< The tooth sticking out is on her right, as put in her description.--Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:05, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

And since we see her left, it wouldn't be visible here, I'm pretty sure... Can you define the shading on the back legs (as in the back of the image, not the cat herself).. Like, this one and this one because I am terrible at describing things and I think it's her right legs? I just woke up from sleep so I'm kinda half-coherent I apologize. Jayce(01:37, 2/23/2015)

Reupload --Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:05, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:00, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

I define anymore on her left leg her right back leg really doesn't have light. Does it need to have some light or just lighten the shading?--Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:51, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the colour of the nose pink? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 22:37, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

The nosepink looks fine, tbh. Mind defining the facial shading a tad?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 23:22, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:57, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

You see the two fur tufts, in the middle of the tail upperside? Would you mind just moving up the fur lineart between them? No offense, but it looks a little awkward, as the tufts are quite high on comparison. If in doubt, shorten the tufts by a pixel, so that they don't look so 'sudden'. Also, I'd suggest adding a few fur tufts to the legs, too. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:35, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 21:44, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Branch (lo) ~ for approval

File:Branch.loner.png i don't even know tbh Queen Beebs 22:55, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

does he got stripes? and he kinda looks patched rather than mottled. david 🌈 23:00, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

yea he does, it's just that the mottles are over them =P Queen Beebs 23:10, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

re-up lets see if this works Queen Beebs 23:31, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful. Would you mind defining the light on the tail and legs? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:25, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-up i tried, yo Queen Beebs 01:45, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry but i still cant see any stripes at all. david 🌈 12:12, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (Ki) ~ for approval

Jackdaw's Cry.kitHiya everyone :3 I'm back! (also when I was uploading I saw JC had a kit image already? Yet it wasn't posted on his page... So should I not do this or was his image declined when the other person made him?) Anyway, woo- black kitties Vixy Memento Mori... 11:30, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

The image was never approved. Also, he needs texture. Jayce(12:37, 2/24/2015)

Lighten nose pink ~ cute! --☽ Sunstream 13:23, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Unless specified in the books, all black chararts must have black noses, as this is what the majority of black cats have. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:23, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nice job! I think I spy a white pixel next to the (our right's) ear.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:47, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, Sorrel, I believe it's possible for black cats to have darker nose pink, but it might not necessarily be black. I remember asking Breezey about this, and I think that's what she said. But given that his other chararts have black noses, it's best to match that. Jayce(21:41, 2/24/2015)

Reups Thanks everyone :3 I added the texture Vixy Memento Mori... 21:01, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Icicle (Kit) ~ For Evaluation

File:Icicle.kit..png Teenie Tiny Itty Bitty Kitty! ♥♥♥ --☽ Sunstream 14:07, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Very cute :3 darken the shading on the tail and paws ^^ (I also fixed the heading for ya) Vixy Memento Mori... 14:10, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Upped~ better? --☽ Sunstream 14:38, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, please. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:21, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth too. And I'll get to that GIMP tutorial later today I promise. I just didn't get much time last night. .-. sorryz.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:46, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ok I will do asap. Which might not be for a bit... --☽ Sunstream 15:58, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

There is a white pixel on the back foot and there is waste everywhere. One the otherhand, beautiful job! ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 21:38, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

She's pale gray so lighten her up tons. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:06, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Upped~ Made lighter, shading makes him look darker.--☽ Sunstream 16:11, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste below his foot. The color of the cat is also overlapping the lineart on the legs, the lineart should be pure black. Everything should be below it. Define the shading, and lighten him up a little. giaria time on my side 23:28 Wed Feb 25

I made the tutorial I'll get it to you hopefully tomorrow. And could you smooth out the shading a bit?  Frosty ☾Supernatural 05:26, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (Ancient) ~ For Approval

Cloudy Sun.ancientTetszik a neve :) Sziri the goat sails away ツ 21:02, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading. giaria time on my side 23:05 Wed Feb 25

I'm not sure if it's just shading or not but can you fix the muzzle? Doesn't quite seem to match her elder image. Can you also darken her eyes a bit?--Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:13, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Running Horse (Ancient) ~ For Approval

Running Horse.ancientWhoo this was fun. User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:24, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can you edit the lineart slightly to go with the wrinkles? I made him in mind to basically be like a Devon Rex without the super fancy fur and they are big wrinkle monsters with lots of rolls Iveh Yo! 10:13, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, too. Nice job^^  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:08, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Frogtail (Ki) ~ For Approval

Frogtail.kit Well I've still got the file, and he still needs to be approved, so let's try this again. Comment away! =)  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:06, February 26, 2015 (UTC)