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CBA? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|21:20, 3/26/2015}}
 
CBA? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|21:20, 3/26/2015}}
   
==[[Nettlepaw (MV)]] (A) ~ For Approval==
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[[File:Nettlepaw (MV).apprentice.png]] These edit conflicts burn. I saw the waste, I'll fix it next upload. {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)
 
[[File:Nettlepaw (MV).apprentice.png]] These edit conflicts burn. I saw the waste, I'll fix it next upload. {{User:Pikachushinx/sig}} 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)
   
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Define the eye depth just a little bit and I think this is ready. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 05:08, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
 
Define the eye depth just a little bit and I think this is ready. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 05:08, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
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Sorry, I think the eyes are fine. I'd think we can just go to the CBA. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|11:02, 3/27/2015}}
   
 
==[[Rabbitfur]] (E) - CBA==
 
==[[Rabbitfur]] (E) - CBA==
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Add pupils, if you want to look at examples, you can look at some of [[User:The Fox Girl/Chararts|mine]]. {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 04:56, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
 
Add pupils, if you want to look at examples, you can look at some of [[User:The Fox Girl/Chararts|mine]]. {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 04:56, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
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'''Reuploaded''' Added pupils (who ever knew eyes could be so difficult? I need new glasses). Might as well do this before I sleep since it's fast. Thank you for the examples, Foxy :) --<span style="font-size:12px;">[[User:Skiddleybopblitz|<span style="font-family: Rockwell;font-size:12px; color:blue; text-shadow:green 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~Skiddley Riddley </span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Skiddleybopblitz|<span style="font-family: cambria; font-size:11px;color:blue; text-shadow:green 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪</span>]]</sup></span> 05:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
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You're welcome! If you need help you can always ask me. :) Now, just darken and define the shading and define the eye depth. We're getting there and he looks awesome. {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 10:49, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
   
 
== [[Eeltail (MV)]] (Warrior) - For Approval ==
 
== [[Eeltail (MV)]] (Warrior) - For Approval ==
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Define the earpink a bit, it looks a little grayish and it's hard to see. {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 21:17, March 26, 2015 (UTC)
 
Define the earpink a bit, it looks a little grayish and it's hard to see. {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 21:17, March 26, 2015 (UTC)
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'''Re-ups''' {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 13:42, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
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I think this is the tom blank, and it needs to be the she-cat blank. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 15:13, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
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But doesn't it confirmed that he is the same Eeltail who appeared in Code of the clans? {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 16:37, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
   
 
==[[Sloefur]] (MC) ~ For Approval==
 
==[[Sloefur]] (MC) ~ For Approval==
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Lighten the shading just a bit, please. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|22:17, 3/26/2015}}
 
Lighten the shading just a bit, please. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|22:17, 3/26/2015}}
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Define the earpink just a little? {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 10:48, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
   
 
==[[Myler]] (KP) ~ For Approval==
 
==[[Myler]] (KP) ~ For Approval==
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== [[Appledusk]] (W) ~ For Approval ==
 
== [[Appledusk]] (W) ~ For Approval ==
 
 
[[File:Appledusk.warrior.png]] My first warrior. For the chest, I tried to go for a soft look (feather soft!) {{User:Stealthfire star/Sig}} 02:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
 
[[File:Appledusk.warrior.png]] My first warrior. For the chest, I tried to go for a soft look (feather soft!) {{User:Stealthfire star/Sig}} 02:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
   
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'''Reupload''' I know, I thought just the lighter chest is fitting, and tried to make it look soft. {{User:Stealthfire star/Sig}} 02:55, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
 
'''Reupload''' I know, I thought just the lighter chest is fitting, and tried to make it look soft. {{User:Stealthfire star/Sig}} 02:55, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
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Unless he's said to have a lighter-colored chest, I think it should be removed. It's allowed on tabbies because they usually have them. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|09:20, 3/27/2015}}
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Blur the shadin more {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 10:46, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
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Make the base color a ''little ''less gingery? [[User:Russettail13|Russettail13]] ([[User talk:Russettail13|talk]]) 16:03, March 27, 2015 (UTC)Russet
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== [[Rainfall]] (W) ~ For Approval ==
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[[File:Rainfall.warrior.png]] Black cats are hard to deal with. {{User:Bramblesnow/Sig}} 09:17, March 27, 2015 (UTC)
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Lighten the shading a bit. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|09:21, 3/27/2015}}
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'''re ups '''that's why I thought it looked so weird 0.0{{User:Bramblesnow/Sig}} 09:23, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

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Patchkit (MV) - CBA

Patchkit (MV).kit B) david 🌈 00:01, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? He's so adorable :3 - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. too bad he's dead lel david 🌈 00:44, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded again and chnged a few things i didnt like david 🌈 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(21:20, 3/26/2015)

Nettlepaw (MV) (A) - CBA

File:Nettlepaw (MV).apprentice.png These edit conflicts burn. I saw the waste, I'll fix it next upload. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

This looks awesome. :D I love those pale rings on the tail. Could you lighten the shading on the chin and the throat a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Damn I wanted this lol. Mind smoothing out the shading on the legs? User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:30, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Spoiler alert! :) He looks a bit gold rather than ginger, can you make him a tad more ginger? I could be wrong but the tabby stripes seem golden. Gorgeous! Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sorry Stealth, but I colorpicked off of a photo of a real life ginger cat (This one). It's just my shading that makes it look golden :/ I dulled the highlights slightly, though, so maybe that'll fix the problem? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:33, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad bit on the face/muzzle, it looks more like a marking than shading. That might just be me, though. Coffeeshops 01:38 March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink more pinky? It looks more white right now than pink. This is gorgeous, wonderful job Shinxy!  Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:23, March 25, 2015 (UTC)\

the earpink is fine actually, though I do agree facial shading can be lightened. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:30, 03/26/2015

Sorry it took so long woooah whats with the colored highlights in the editor?? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 22:20, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth just a little bit and I think this is ready. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:08, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I think the eyes are fine. I'd think we can just go to the CBA. Jayce(11:02, 3/27/2015)

Rabbitfur (E) - CBA

Rabbitfur.elder Bunfur confirmed. Queen Beebs 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the tabby stripes lighter? They just seem too dark to me. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

i think they're fine unless others disagree - i think it's artist choice on stripe darkness? Queen Beebs 10:07, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

stripes are fine, a shae was never specified. anyway lighten up the area where his tail meets his back just a little. david 🌈 14:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 21:49, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading juuuust a tad. Not much, but kinda like what you did for Mousefang's kit. Jayce(05:55, 3/25/2015)

re-up Queen Beebs 18:38, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA for the ever-so-lovely Beebs? Jayce(21:20, 3/26/2015)

Ravenwing (MC) ~ For Approval

Ravenwing.mc I'll probably redo the earpink later Coffeeshops 00:10, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty! There's waste near the herbs. Also mind lightening him up just a little bit so that the shading can be a bit more visible? User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:29, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

He's black, not dark gray. Please do not lighten him anymore. He'll just be tweaked later to be darker. I actually think darkening the shading and perhaps playing with your shading and highlight layers might solve the problem. Jayce(00:41, 3/24/2015)

Define the ear pink? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

I just read the book poor him. Make the eyes a tad darker please. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes are actually fine. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

lel he deserved it, anyway add some shading or something to the herbs so they dont look flat. david 🌈 14:46, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I pretty much redid most of this because I lost the layered file. Coffeeshops 1:11 25 Mar. 2015 (UTC)

This should say "For Evaulation" since you are a kit, but no need to change it. I'll promote you since you know what you are doing. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more, please.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 06:17, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Coffeeshops 19:37, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

can you please lighten him up very slightly, I can't see any of the lineart. david 🌈 06:55, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope this isn't too gray now. Coffeeshops 19:34, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

lighten him a tiny bit more, still can't see any lineart — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:31, 03/26/2015

Re-uploaded. I'm not lightening it anymore after this. Coffeeshops 23:59, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:14, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Oakstar (L) - For Approval

Oakstar.leader So happy I finally got my first leader image. :D I'm really happy with how he turned out - I tried to make him look like a burmese cat, but I think the darker face kind of got lost in the shading. Ah well. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:16, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink :3 So much like an oak tree, so beautiful(like I said in the chat) ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

I see the earpink fine, tbh - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Very well done! Can you define the legs shading? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading too, please. ^^ Jayce(14:41, 3/24/2015)

Along with define it, could you blur the tail shading a little bit? I can see it, but it looks hard-edged. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the muzzle shading a bit? It almost looks like he has a rope tied around it xD like a muzzle. Lovely image, I love the way you did the texture. =)  Frosty ☾Supernatural 06:15, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his base color just a tad if he's dark brown. Smudge the tail shade just a bit more. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:57, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

tail shading is fine tbh — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:32, 03/26/2015

Birchface (W) - CBA

Birchface.warrior Welp. Jayce(00:42, 3/24/2015)

he looks a little green to me, maybe make him a bit more orange or something idk david 🌈 04:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a tad more brown, like one tick or two. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love this image so much. Jayce(11:33, 3/24/2015)

Define the shading on the paws farthest from us, if there is any.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 00:03, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(01:52, 3/25/2015)

It might just be my terrible eyesight, but maybe define the light a touch more on the tail. He's sexy c: ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:34, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(02:43, 3/26/2015)

define the shading a bit pretty much everywhere, i can't see it. this is lovely tho Jayce .o. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:33, 03/26/2015

Re-uploaded. Meh. Jayce(21:38, 3/26/2015)

CBA? Sexykittycat User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:03, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Bloomheart (W) ~ For Approval

Bloomheart.warrior Well, I tried. This is my first in a while, sorry for the cruddiness. For the eyes, I didn't know what color they were so I went based off a really cool chart which I will link. They're hazel, like a greenish for Blooms? Flowers? Pink ears also based off what the same chart said was normal. User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 00:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. :) Add shading to the right side of the front leg. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:01, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Also, would you mind lightening the shading a tad? Correct me if I'm wrong —Ivy 01:09, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Done so. Looks a bit better, did the MLP style of shading the back legs- User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 01:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and make the ear pink a bit bigger. Jayce(01:24, 3/24/2015)

It would suck if you guys made me edit it so much and then regect it, but it's good practice User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 01:31, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye color User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. Remember, defining doesn't always mean darkening but it means making it less blurred. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:53, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

His stripes look too blurred, can you make them less blurred? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Pixlr crap and won't sharpen, if needed I will redraw those stripes //shot User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 11:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Redrew stripes, will fix them soon- User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 14:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the frontmost back leg. Please stop aligning your images. Jayce(14:40, 3/24/2015)

Sorry, it looks really weird. I have to align it, it's the option? Now it's going ----> way, and really weird. Someone fix that please? Maybe a mod? Wow, this image is getting a lot of edits... Knowing my luck, within a week bam it'll be moved to declined. User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 18:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Just remove the |thumb on the end. Anyway, the stripes are very blotchy, do you think you could thin them out and sharpen them a bit? And perhaps add more after that, since they're be thinner?Shinxy used Thunderbolt!

Reupload Redrew stripes. Right now I'm just waiting for it to be declined. User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 23:43, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay first, please stop saying that your image will be declined. You don't know this, and it could very well be approved like every other image on the approval page. It really seems like your trying to guilt trip us, honestly. Saying things like that will /not/ get your image approved faster. This image is very well done, so i see no reason why it shouldnt be approved at some point. As for the image, define the tail and foreleg shading please.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 23:55, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Sorry, I didn't mean too... well, maybe I did, I'm a bit confused right now and I'll stop. Also, fixed the shading. I don't mean to guilt trip you guys, I'm...Not really good at control that stuff? I'll stop, promise. Fixed shading as well. User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 00:05, March 25, 2015 (UTC) 

Dull down the earpink a bit more and smudge it a tad more. And like Breeze said, it is a wonderful image. I see nothing that'll make you think this will get declined. =)  Frosty ☾Supernatural 06:13, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Just bumping OuO User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 12:25, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

sharpen the stripes a bit — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:41, 03/25/2015

Sorry, Fern... I can't really do that with pixlr. OnO; --User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 23:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

The whole thing looks overblurred. Also tone down the ear-pink a bit and erase the waste around the head ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:35, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Tried to use the sharpen tool, I will redraw the stripes or upload the backup w/o pixel effect??? Let me know if it needs to come to the whole redraw thing User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 11:36, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

i'd suggest redoing the stripes and blurring them less then. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:35, 03/26/2015

Darkstar (MV) (L) - For Approval

Darkstar (MV).leader shading black cats more like nope —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 00:56, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Please define the shading. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.neha it's that gloom boy season. 10:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

the shading is leaking about the haunch, and perhaps blur it a bit more. Define the light on the tail and front leg to our right — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:39, 03/25/2015

Frecklewish (TC) (W) - CBA

Frecklewish (TC).warrior - she might fall more into the mottled category than speckled... but I think she looks cool ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:49, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead and... Define the light on the legs? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:36, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:57, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

her eyes should be cloudy and blind, I would think. david 🌈 11:36, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, that would probably be an alt- Longtail had the same thing happen and since it happened later, it would probably be better to have an alternate image of it once this gets approved. Percy is also the same way. Jayce(11:43, 3/24/2015)

yeah i forgot about that whoops. maybe dull the earpink a ittle and define the haunch shading. david 🌈 01:59, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:15, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? This is lovely. .o. Jayce(21:21, 3/26/2015)

Reedshine (MV) (W) ~ CBA

Reedshine (MV).warrior -cough- bae -cough- Tiger Sunny days 02:31, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:55, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main part of the body. Jayce(07:56, 3/24/2015)

Can you make her darker please? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

This should be named File:Reedshine (MV).warrior.png, (I've renamed it for you, but keep this in mind for the future) as there's more than one Reedshine and we have no proof whatsoever that they're anywhere near the same cat. Jayce(16:03, 3/24/2015)

Sorry, I forgot there were 2 Reedshines. Tiger Sunny days 23:21, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make her a bit darker? Given that she's dark orange and all. Jayce(10:24, 3/25/2015)

Blur the ear pink near the tip touching the fur? User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 12:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

^^maybe like a burnt orange. Also I don't know if it's just my eyes but it appears the tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. Wonderful job!  Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:18, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up Tiger Sunny days 00:09, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Put a bit of shading under the chin and blur the shading around the head. Also, smudge the bottom of the ear-pink a touch more ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:36, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

I hate to say this, but now that Reedshine is confirmed to be the same cat as the other one, is this image necessary? ;,; User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:04, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

it wasn't confirmed that they were the same so this image still stays,  anyways define th shading Queen Beebs 21:26, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, the cite is for the cats mentioned around the time of SkyClan's exile, which are the ones listed in Firestar's Quest. There's nothing about Reedshine anywhere near that. Jayce(21:27, 3/26/2015)

So sorry, Tiger ;.; Anyway, mind smoothing out the shading just a bit? This is a gorgeous image. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:12, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped. Tiger Sunny days 03:01, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Gorgeous. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:01, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Swiftflight (W) -CBA

Swiftflight.warriorOkay? Okay. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:57, March 24, 2015 (UTC

Define the ear pink and lighten the shading just a few ticks. Jayce(07:53, 3/24/2015)

Re-upped I was just doing that lol. Much, much happier User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:07, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit more? Nice. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:24, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

define the tail shading. david 🌈 14:43, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The leg shading too^^ all 4.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 06:08, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(21:22, 3/26/2015)

Beetail (D) ~ CBA

Beetail.deputy DD - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:44, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

he looks ginger, can you make him a bit less orange? david 🌈 04:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Much happier now. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:48, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes a tad? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thought it looked fine but whatever - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:19, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs a little? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

What color are your pale parts? They look...kinda pink. Nevermind, that's my laptop- it's horribly miscalibrated right now. Jayce(11:26, 3/24/2015)

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:24, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The pale parts do look kind of pink to me on my laptop, which is more reliable than my phone for colors and what I trust. Would you mind changing it a tad? giaria time on my side 11:39 Wed Mar 25

Define shading a tad?--Russettail13 (talk) 22:38, March 26, 2015 (UTC)Russett

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

the pale parts do actually look a bit pink — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:42, 03/25/2015

Define a d smudge the ear-pink a touch ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:37, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Completely redid the base color. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:53, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:11, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Splashfoot (W) ~ For Evaluation

Splashfoot.warrior My first charart, comments? Also, could someone tell me why this is coming out really small so I can fix it? —Ivy 21:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Well firstly what program are you using, Icebreeze?  Frosty ☾Supernatural 22:32, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

GIMP. —Ivy 23:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, so maybe you're not making it full size. To do it, click on the blank on the charart page and click full size. Also, are you using layers? If not, make a layer and put the colors and add another layer for shading. Okay, so can you define the shading, please? Tiger Sunny days 23:25, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for all the help, Tiger! Your suggestion about making it full size was very helpful, and I think I have a correctly sized blank now. Yes, I'm using layers, and I have defined my shading on my charart. I will re-upload tomorrow. Thanks again! =) —Ivy 01:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

The image needs to be bigger. It isn't the right size as the others. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 03:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Anyways, why is the eye sort of... deformed? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:35, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

It'll probably be fixed when they use the right size blank as they mentioned earlier. giaria time on my side 11:37 Wed Mar 25

Re-upped Okay, at least the charart is the right size now —Ivy 20:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The linear art was weird in some spots, tell me if you notice any more. —Ivy 20:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

the lineart is still blurred. File:Warriorlongm.gif <-- Save that file, clear the white parts, remove your current lineart layer, then paste this in as a new layer. If you don't understand what I'm saying, I can show you. Alternatively, you could just redo this completely with the file i linked you. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:45, 03/25/2015

Add a little bit of light on the front leg. It looks like something out-of-sight is blovking it. Spottehwobble!

Re-upped I completely redid the image. I will add some more light on my next reupload, I didn't see your comment until it was too late, Spotteh —Ivy 23:59, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the shading a little less blotchy, define the ear pink, and maybe use this as a reference for shading? Tiger Sunny days 00:07, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the earpink on the back ear and there is waste in the triangular hole between the legs. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 01:23, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the edges of the shading on the hanch. ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 13:31, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ok, I redid the shading —Ivy 21:09, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out some, and there's some waste around the image. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

remove the shading from the tip of the tail, and the shading is leaking at the bottom of the tail. put shading all up the backside of the tail — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:38, 03/26/2015

Re-upped —Ivy 21:53, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste on the back,legs and end of the tail. Good job! 😃 --~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 22:45, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the back, back legs, and on the part under the base of his tail Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:48, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Sun! =) —Ivy 00:13, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs and define the eye depth. Given the shading a good blur with a hard edged blur tool. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:59, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Deerdapple (W) ~ For Approval

Deerdapple.warrior Sweet Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:12, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Oooh, pretty. Can you lighten the base color a bit, please? Tiger Sunny days 22:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define head shading a bit? Russettail13 (talk) 01:52, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Define the shape of the ear pink. I can kinda see it, but at the same time, I can't. Jayce(01:57, 3/25/2015)

define the shading everywhere a tad giaria time on my side 11:36 Wed Mar 25

Reups thanks, Tiger~ Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:45, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

She's silver, lighten up the base color just a little more. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:11, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Thrushtalon (W) ~ For Aproval

Thrushtalon.warrior I love le stripes <33 The shading, I know, comment away about that ;-;❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Given that he's light brown, I think he could be lightened - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:27, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. Coffeeshops 01:29, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Fox. I think it could be lightened a lot - he looks more dark brown than light right now. Maybe lightening up the shading, too, could help. —Ivy 01:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

ups I forgot to blur the shading, hold on.. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 01:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on his forelegs match the rest of his pattern? If you believe its fine, then by all means feel free to disregard me.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 03:42, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'll do it later, I dont have time right now.. And I'll redo the sading aswell.. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 03:48, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more. I like these stripes too - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit browner; he's looking more gray-brown to me (might just be me, though). Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups The shading looks wwwwaaaaayyyyyyyy better, /not ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

blur/smudge the shading some — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:46, 03/25/2015

re-up ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 21:10, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Watch the stripes on the haunch on under his neck/chest; he's starting to toe the line of triangle tabby. Also, blur and lighten the shading on the back ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 21:11, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you could lower the shading's opacity as well, because I can't see the stripes at all through it. —Ivy 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Spiketail (D) ~ For Evaluation

Spiketail.deputy Welp... first charart. Hopefully I don't chicken out or get arrogant and I didn't screw anything up /)-(\ ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:45, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the pupils/eye color? I can't see any at all, and he needs to have them. Also, darken his base just a bit, and blur the main body shading a tad. Jayce(05:53, 3/25/2015)

blur the shading a lot, and make the light on the bent leg more visible giaria time on my side 11:35 Wed Mar 25

There is waste under at the outside of his chest. Pretty goood for your first one! ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:06, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changed eye colour, redid with a darker grey. Eye colour was originally supposed to be grey until my lesson learned: Never put grey eyes on a grey cat. --~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Realized I messed up on shading. I'll start work on it tomorrow when I wake up or after I get home from the hospital. --~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:41, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Add pupils, if you want to look at examples, you can look at some of mine. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:56, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added pupils (who ever knew eyes could be so difficult? I need new glasses). Might as well do this before I sleep since it's fast. Thank you for the examples, Foxy :) --~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

You're welcome! If you need help you can always ask me. :) Now, just darken and define the shading and define the eye depth. We're getting there and he looks awesome. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:49, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Eeltail (MV) (Warrior) - For Approval

File:Eeeltail.warrior.pngLil' Tabby Sziri the goat sails away ツ 17:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a tad? Russettail13 (talk) 18:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Add a touch more light to the fronts of the forelegs and top of the tail ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 21:12, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 18:51, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it looks a little grayish and it's hard to see. —Ivy 21:17, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 13:42, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think this is the tom blank, and it needs to be the she-cat blank. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:13, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

But doesn't it confirmed that he is the same Eeltail who appeared in Code of the clans? Sziri the goat sails away ツ 16:37, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Sloefur (MC) ~ For Approval

File:Sloefur.mc.png My first medicine cat, and I love his name. ^.^ Comments?  Frosty ☾Supernatural 19:09, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the texture more? Beautiful! And can you define the shading everywhere? Im having a hard time seeing it. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks =) but if ya don't mind I'm gonna ask for a second opinion on the texture, just because I really like the way it turned out, but if someone else agrees I'll smudge it a bit more. I did define the shading, however.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

just lower the opacity a bit more, the way you smudged it is fine — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:47, 03/25/2015

Sorry, but you're going to need to match this image, as we have confirmation that the cats listed in the allegiances of Firestar's Quest are the same cats in Mapleshade's Vengeance. This means removing the texture- I apologize. Jayce(21:29, 3/25/2015)

Re-uploaded. Ah I see. And you're fine, who would've known other than the author herself? But I must say I'm a tad confused. Does that mean instead of^^ this Sloefur being male does he have to be a female? And also have long fur to match the other one? And have the same file name as the original since they're exactly the same cat?  Frosty ☾Supernatural 22:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, everything needs to match- from the gender down to the pelt length. Sorry, that's just how we work- If Vicky says they're the same, then we don't have a choice. Gender can easily be changed later with the lineart, so that's no big deal. It just needs to match. Jayce(01:03, 3/26/2015)

Re-uploaded. k he's now a she, and long-furred.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 22:15, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit, please. Jayce(22:17, 3/26/2015)

Define the earpink just a little? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:48, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Myler (KP) ~ For Approval

Myler.kittypet ???? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot0:55 Thu Mar 26

Define the tail shading just a bit and I am going to steal that collar and run with it goodbye. Jayce(00:59, 3/26/2015)

Re-uploaded. Pff... fine. ;D ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:29 Thu Mar 26

Smudge the shading more on the legs. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:59, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Anywhere in particular? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot20:46 Thu Mar 26

His front leg mainly, just a bit. This is gorgeous. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:09, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Larchkit (MV) (K) ~ For Approval

Larchkit (MV).kit Hiya.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:48, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make him more brown? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:56, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading- I can barely tell it's there. Jayce(21:24, 3/26/2015)

Midgepelt (W)~ For Approval

Midgepelt.warriorSorry for not posting sooner I just got a new lap top and had to redo some stuffs. Anywho, here's Midgey. Vixy Memento Mori... 11:49, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

he needs patches in his fur. david 🌈 11:50, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the eyes...? All I see is the default area- did you forget to give him pupils and such? Jayce(12:11, 3/26/2015)

Reups Oh my xD how could I miss the eyes if all things? Vixy Memento Mori... 12:30, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

There are still no pupils, also define the tail shading User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I reupped the wrong one lel. I added the defined shading though (this time I chose the right one xD) Vixy Memento Mori... 14:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

where's yer light source? the haunch says one way, the chest says the other — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:40, 03/26/2015

Define the light on the legs, please, as well as the shading on the head. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:46, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (W) ~ For Approval

Appledusk.warrior My first warrior. For the chest, I tried to go for a soft look (feather soft!) Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the feather softness was in reference to the fur's feel and not necessarily the color. Thicken the shading on the back and define it on the head, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I know, I thought just the lighter chest is fitting, and tried to make it look soft. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:55, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Unless he's said to have a lighter-colored chest, I think it should be removed. It's allowed on tabbies because they usually have them. Jayce(09:20, 3/27/2015)

Blur the shadin more - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:46, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Make the base color a little less gingery? Russettail13 (talk) 16:03, March 27, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Rainfall (W) ~ For Approval

Rainfall.warrior Black cats are hard to deal with. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 09:17, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. Jayce(09:21, 3/27/2015)

re ups that's why I thought it looked so weird 0.0~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 09:23, March 27, 2015 (UTC)