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''Of course'' he can- you don't have to be apart of the project to give criticism or comment. And its actually the other way around. Tiger's image came first, regardless if its being redone or not. So Hawk needs to match hers, technically. Mind defining the earpink a tad?--{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 20:03, April 27, 2015 (UTC)
 
''Of course'' he can- you don't have to be apart of the project to give criticism or comment. And its actually the other way around. Tiger's image came first, regardless if its being redone or not. So Hawk needs to match hers, technically. Mind defining the earpink a tad?--{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 20:03, April 27, 2015 (UTC)
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==[[Sorrelstripe]] (App) ~ For Approval==
 
==[[Sorrelstripe]] (App) ~ For Approval==

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Owl Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval

Owl Eyes.rogue <screeches> Me no like. ;-; (Did the image align? or did I misname? I can't tell) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Smooth out the shading on the back, define the hind leg shading, define the eye depth, and blur the earpink just a tad. Looks nice, other than that. Coffeeshops 18:51, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, if there is any. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 18:56, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Redone Don't know if changes are showing. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Blur/smudge the shading more, and smooth it out. It's looking a bit blotchy right now. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 23:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have no idea why this didn't happen when I did Spiketail. Probably because I'm used to setting it to at least 20/25 ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Define the shading on the legs. Those eyes look sexy X3 - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:45, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit? User:StormSongz/Sig 12:52, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened shading and tried to define a bit but I don't know if I can see it. By the way, when you said define shading on legs, did you mean all? And thanks about the eyes, Foxy :P ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:38, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah define the shading on all four legs :p User:StormSongz/Sig 13:39, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define the light on all four legs. Tiger Sunny days 02:44, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, but it sort of confuses me to define the shading and the light. I'm not sure if changes are showing but I wanted to get this done so I didn't get this declined for lack of work. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:18, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Defining the light and shading means that basically you need to erase either some shading or put some more shading in, and in this case, it appears you need to erase some shading. So define the light on the legs? :P User:StormSongz/Sig 13:46, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded When I defined the light on the back two legs, it looked weird so I ended up vaguely getting the front right paw and not doing the back left paw. Then again, I'm not sure if the changes are showing, but I wanted to show that I'm still active (The three days felt longer...) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:20, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and the depth on the main body User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:47, April 22, 2015 ( UTC)

Define the tail and facial shading.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 20:17, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I apologize if changes aren't showing. I'm not feeling well at the moment /)_(\ I try to upload within the next two days because for some reason it feels like longer. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:41, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Midgepelt (W) ~ For Approval

Midgepelt.warrior Okay.--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 00:44, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

So yeah, I see no shading whatsoever. Define shading everywhere please User:StormSongz/Sig 00:52, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

The lineart looks faded too, actually. Jayce(00:53, 4/16/2015)

As well as the earpink, define and brighten the earpink User:StormSongz/Sig 00:54, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. My bad, i had the shading layer hidden still. Not too sure about the lineart- but im hoping i fixed it? It looked solid black on my monitor.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 01:00, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

There's still barely any shading. Darken it alot User:StormSongz/Sig 01:08, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 01:22, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Looks much better. Define the shading on the legs? And possibly the tail? Only when you're feeling less tired maybe XD User:StormSongz/Sig 01:26, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 01:35, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

He's in WindClan so shouldn't he be short haired? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:46, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you thicken the tail lineart a bit? I like him. Tiger Sunny days 02:52, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Doesn't the term 'patchy fur' mean 'missing patches of fur'? lmao User:StormSongz/Sig 13:18, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing - i have a ton of exams to study for. Anyone without a project can take this.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 20:02, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:27, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Let me just say this cat has one of the worst names in the series, along with Shredtail and Maggottail. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:47, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Lovely. Define the light on the legs? User:StormSongz/Sig 21:00, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you! Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReuploadedBluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

He looks a tad red- could you shift the base color ever so slightly? Jayce(23:38, 4/22/2015)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink more triangle-like. Lighten the shading a bit, and the pelt color just a tad, like two notches; on my color spectrum, he's a murky reddish-brown. Also define the light on all four legs? User:StormSongz/Sig 00:49, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

ReuploadedBluestar Leaf flying in the wind 02:39, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Looking a bit better, in my opinion.  Acestar of ThunderClan (talk) 04:28, April 26, 2015 (UTC)Ace

Please don't comment without critique as its considered spam. As for the image, define the shadow on the back leg farthest? User:StormSongz/Sig 17:23, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Try and add some ragged fur around the bald patches like Raggedstar's ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:39, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

There are ragged fur patches around the bald, they're just not very visible. Maybe make the lines black? User:StormSongz/Sig 00:55, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I kept the ragged fur the same color and just raised the opacity on that layer. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:30, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Slightfoot (W) ~ For Evalution

File:Slightfoot.Warrior.pngYay! My first Warrior for the PCA! Tried to match him as best I could to the apprentice, and im super proud of him! ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 01:06, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Oh goodness. Define the earpink quite a lot. It shouldn't be blurred that much. Maybe smudge the white chest some more as well User:StormSongz/Sig 01:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I can see you changed the earpink, but you have to say reuploaded when you post a new change. But the earpink still needs to be triangular. Try using a binary pixel tool. Erase the ear pink all together, redraw it in a triangle, and blur it very slightly. User:StormSongz/Sig 01:21, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, make sure the white patch on his chest is shaded too. Maybe make the earpink a little less neon? Ravenstep 01:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Better? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 01:34, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Still a problem with the earpink. Look at some other images to get a feel for how you should draw the earpink triangle. As for the other parts of Slightfoot, some of the shading is leaking away from the legs and stuff. If you want to look closely and change it, then I'd advise you to do that. User:StormSongz/Sig 01:38, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't we wait before this is settled? 免得我们还要重做 - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:48, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

No- there's no need, considering it wouldn't be done for a long time. Jayce(07:50, 4/16/2015)

As far as I'm concerned, the chest is smudged with a hard-edged brush - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 01:31, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

he needs texture, and on top of that texture theres dull highlights, and it was all smudged with a 1px hard edged brush. david 🌈 04:05, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

The chest too, it still looks over-blurred - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:53, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using the smudge tool in GIMP? I know you said you used GIMP. Use the smudge tool on the white chest. The earpink looks a lot better! Maybe lighten it a bit more? User:StormSongz/Sig 13:41, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Oh my, the texture didn't fail… Im insanely proud of this ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 00:42, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink a bit, and make it less neon-y? User:StormSongz/Sig 00:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

It's not neon at all. It blends well perfectly with the fur. User:Burntclaw/Sig 01:24, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make it more pink than purple please. That's pretty much what Storm was asking, simplified. Just make it a lighter pink on the spectrum. Very nice^^  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:51, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 17:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I just looked at the apprentice, and I think the patch on his chest is a tiiiiny bit smaller Correct me if I am wrong It could just be my screen though ~Snow~ 07:07, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

But that is the apprentice, which is a smaller blank.  -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 13:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the chest white is fine, so im not changing it yet ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 19:15, April 19, 2015 (UTC) 

It's supposed to be small, so please shrink it. While the apprentice blanks are smaller, the patch of white you have on here is much too big. Jayce(20:47, 4/19/2015)

Re~Upped Ok ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 22:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I actually saved the image and zoomed it in to see details, and I think I can see a black outline around the white chest and the bottom whisker. There's also a black hard-eged splotch on his back. I like him! Just try to see what I was talking about (might be just my screen) and blur the hind paws shading slightly^^ good job ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 14:13, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

That's actually normal "waste", per se. Define the light on the front paw closest? User:StormSongz/Sig 18:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

How is it "waste"? It's on the pelt. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 00:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, were you talking about on the warrior or apprentice image, Silver? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 00:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I was talking about this warrior image. It could  be just my screen though ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 00:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Uh yeah... Here world ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 02:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I think there's a lil bit of waste on the top of the nose; also, make the earpink more triangular. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:35, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I like this. :) ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 01:16, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

There's still a somewhat outline around the white, is it just the shading? But the shading really shouldn't just go around the shape >.> ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 13:49, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Closest to le lineart or towards his body over there? ===> ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 14:03, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Idk, just around the white chest ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 11:43, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Clover (AFD) (Ki) ~ For Approval

File:Clover (AFD).kit.png-in mysterious voice- Mustachio comfirmed Tiger Sunny days 02:19, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink and define the shading on the legs. Ginger Mustache confirmed - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:48, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Tiger Sunny days 18:07, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yay different colored eyes!!!!!!!!!!!! Btw, Did my eyes break or the shading is supposed to look purple? >.> Like, reddish purple. She's soooo cute! Idk what's going on with the shading, it looks a bit weird but I can't find any problems with it. you know what, ignore me. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 14:17, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Bramble, im pretty sure its a tint and it looks fine as it is. Define the facial shading, please.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 14:56, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

ha, dapper moustache cat. can you define the tail shading as well? david 🌈 17:18, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on both visible front legs. Jayce(01:35, 4/21/2015)

Still working, Tiger? User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:20, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for lack of re-uploads Tiger Sunny days 16:13, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Curlfeather (W) - For Approval

Curlfeather.warrior Yippie! My first PCA charart! If i shoud make her shorthaired, let me know!  -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 15:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Remove some of the shadow from her hind leg where it curls when she sits, as well as the knob of shadow at the back of her tail; it should be a straight shadow line. Also mind blurring the shadow a bit more? And define the light on the front and hind paw closest to us. User:StormSongz/Sig 15:28, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading to the head as well. —Ivy 16:27, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the highlight on the haunch and add a bit more light to the foreleg closest to us. If you want, there's a shading tutorial here ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 18:11, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more… triangular? And blur it more It might be just me, it looks a little too neon-y ~Snow~ 22:25, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, sorry i haven't had a chance to reupload it yet, i'll do it first thing tomorrow.  -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 04:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The light could be defined on all the legs tbh - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 14:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, use a hard edged blur tool at the rate of 100 - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped- Yay!  -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 14:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading seems to be... disconnected on the back, and it should be connected, so add some shading there. I hope that wasn't too confusing. Also, can you define the light on the legs? —Ivy 15:13, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped I didn't change the light on the legs because that is how it looked on the shading placement.  -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 15:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking all up his back and in other places too. Define the earpink as well. Sorry if I'm commenting too much. I really like this! —Ivy 17:14, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad more, please? It's difficult to see. Tiger Sunny days 17:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There is some waste on the back. If you're gonna add shading to the back and chest fur and tail, add some to the legs please. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 18:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped- Just re-did all of the shading. @Icebreeze, Don't worry, you can comment all you want :)  -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 19:48, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, because now the shading is looking... green? I suggest that you shade in black and lower the opacity (you don't have to though) but at least make the shading less greenish. Blur the shading as well. I'm sorry I'm commenting again, you're probably getting really annoyed —Ivy 20:04, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped Ugh it isint showing up… You are not annoying me don't worry   -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 22:43, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lolp at first I thought her name was "Cerealfeather" for some reason :P I see that you're having some problems with the shading, maybe try to make the shading itself smoother, then blue it, if that makes any sense ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 09:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I zoomed in and I see some waste around the image. Please remove it. User: Dewdrops56/talk 7:02, April, 20, 2015

Blur and maybe dull the shading a bit more. Also, there's a speck of waste at the very top of the image over the tail User:StormSongz/Sig 18:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also there's still some shading on her hind leg where it curls when she sits that isn't connected to anything, so if you could get rid of that...? User:StormSongz/Sig 22:22, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and then blur the shading more on them - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:52, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, will post soon... -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 15:50, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 18:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Still need to get rid of the random shadow. It's like right by her underbelly, where the hind leg curls into it towards the knee (?) User:StormSongz/Sig 18:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I've promoted you to an apprentice, and changed the file name. Caps are very important for these filenames- it should be File:Curlfeather.warrior.png. Jayce(20:06, 4/22/2015)

Did you set your shading layer to multiply? It might help the shadows look a little more tinted to the base color and natural. If you just shade with black and lower the opacity, it might throw the color off a tad. It's just a suggestion, you don't have to go with it if you don't want Iveh Yo! 18:10, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the texture flower with the fur more? Can you lighten the shading? (If Ivy said this, Im sorry I couldn't understand what you said.. sorry  lel ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:42, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 01:41, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, it still looks really hard edged - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:21, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 23:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. —Ivy 14:11, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define and lighten the earpink? I can't really see it. User:StormSongz/Sig 00:53, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval

Appledusk.star What a traitor. —Ivy 21:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I never read MV yet, so I can't agree with you xD Define the light on his tail-tip? User:StormSongz/Sig 01:44, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could define the shading on the legs and define the ear pink just a little. Yes, Appledusk is a big mouse-brain and I was like too bad when he died - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy 12:21, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There should be light on his chest, and I think the shading could be defined and blurred/smudged more. Tiger Sunny days 17:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy 18:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking on his tail-tip? User:StormSongz/Sig 14:08, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Exactly I didn't read MV yet but when I saw he was killed my Mapleshade I went like "Beautiful job girl" blur the shading below the chin and the shading is leaking on the shoulder ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 15:05, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The shading was leaking in several other spots, too. —Ivy 20:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I really hate this and I want to do something else, so I'm withdrawing. —Ivy 23:39, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Even though im not officially in the PCA, can i take over? Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 23:19, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

You don't need to ask just reserve it

-ReUpped Ok, my turn. Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 03:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading way more and change the heading please - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:51, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his pelt color. User:StormSongz/Sig 18:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, please. —Ivy 23:29, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

here is the base colour for the warrior image. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:27, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thanks for the colour, Stealthfire :) Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 01:34, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more until it blends perfectly with the pelt - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:40, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thankfully i was still online Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 01:48, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

You've got to blur the shading way more than that. Try to use a hard-edged blur tool with the rate of 100 (if you're using GIMP) and blur the edges only. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:19, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink and define it on the other ear ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:27, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks cut off at the edges (by that I mean there's space between the shading and lineart). Fix that, please. Also, blur the shading a lot more. V̵͘͜͠I̵̸͡B̡Ŕ̷͟A̛҉̀Ņ̶̨̨͞T̶͞P̴͞A̴̶̢̢͡S͜҉S̵̛͢͡͠I̵͘͢͞͡Ò̶͞͞Ņ̨͞͞ W̡AS ̷I̷T M̵E̵? 21:36 Fri Apr 24

-ReUpped I tried texture too Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 15:01, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

You'll need to remove the texture, sorry. His warrior image doesn't have it, and you need to match that. Jayce(22:14, 4/25/2015)

Expand the ear-pink in --> this ear and blur/smooth the shading inside the ear ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:40, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Both of the earpinks need to be expanded. The earpink on this blank usually is literally the whole ear. And the shading is leaking a lot around his pelt. User:StormSongz/Sig 00:52, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't need to be in the whole ear- that's just a preference that many of us do. Jayce(01:05, 4/27/2015)

Sorrelstripe (W) - For Approval

Sorrelstripe.warrior Wheeee 8) User:StormSongz/Sig 00:52, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Very pretty! Define the light on the tail? Also, you're an apprentice now, so shouldn't your heading say "for approval"? —Ivy 01:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

lmao oopsies. re-upped. User:StormSongz/Sig 01:42, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:20, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped. Noticed some waste between the third and fourth chest tufts, lmao dunno how I missed that. User:StormSongz/Sig 13:55, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped again. Got rid of the paler chest/belly after some research. User:StormSongz/Sig 14:15, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur or smooth out the shading on the neck/back/main part of the cat. Jayce(02:15, 4/23/2015)

Reupped. User:StormSongz/Sig 12:39, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink just a tad- then i think this can go for a CBA.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 14:19, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped again. Had the texture layer hidden on accident, and Breezey I'll do that right after I get out of work lmao I'm cutting it close by uploading this real quick User:StormSongz/Sig 14:22, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped User:StormSongz/Sig 23:27, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Heathertail (Q) - CBA

Heathertail.queen She has a SCARF! Everything from the kit, as I have the file. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

She needs more stripes on her legs. You need to look at all the files, not just the kit file, as that only shows the front view. The warrior file is a much better view-point. Also maybe make the eyes more blue-ish, because they look violet. And the head stripe looks super off. Define the shadow on the hind leg closest to us, and the light on the one farthest from us. Maybe add some shadow to the front leg closest to us, define the shadow on the tail, as I can't see any, and get rid of some of the shadow on her face by the side of her muzzle. If the light source is where I think it is, the shadow on that side of the muzzle wouldn't be there. ^^; Sorry if I sound harsh. User:StormSongz/Sig 03:15, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes were color picked off so it's fine. All her images are facing another side so it doesn't have to match perfectly to her other images, especially on the body. Also, be careful of how you word things please, because "super off" borders to being rude.... User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I fixed the shading around the left legs and tail but that's it. Be mindful that I have the file for the kit, so I gave a hint I made that image, so I know what I am doing. I studied every single image Heathertail has very closely, and she has thick stripes because the queen image is large. Please show a bit more respect, I have been around for a good while and have done many images. I recommend for a new user to just look at the images and advice people give, basically learning through others and give one or two pieces of advice when you're more confident. There's a lot to learn, and that's partly why I like it here. There's something new to learn everyday. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:44, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

You could define the eye depth and tail shading a little. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:06, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:36, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I do apologize for my behavior. I was extremely tired last night. I still think you could define some of the light on the legs though User:StormSongz/Sig 11:57, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Also I think some of the shading on her hind leg farthest from us is leaking a bit. User:StormSongz/Sig 12:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe dull down the shading a bit? User:StormSongz/Sig 23:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I lowered the opacity ten ticks. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:34, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shadow on the front leg farthest from us? User:StormSongz/Sig 18:59, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge and lighten the facial shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:13, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

can yu sharpen the stripes a bit? theyre not this blurred on her other images. david 🌈 19:29, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail? gorgeous - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:14, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload thanks! Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:16, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a few ticks on the face, please. Jayce(23:20, 4/22/2015)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:58, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? Maybe just a smiiiiiiiiiiiidge more? User:StormSongz/Sig 00:06, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload lightened it a couple of ticks. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:10, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. It looks almost completely in shadow.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 14:20, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload the limited wi-fi is ridiculous >< Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 08:46, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(21:56, 4/27/2015)

Cricket (Ki) ~ For Approval

File:Cricket.kit.png ew on the stripes, but I did have a lot of fun making this. Everything should be the same as the rogue.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 12:06, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes look fine imo. Add some shadow to the side of his face? Also define the shadow on his front legs and back paw. User:StormSongz/Sig 12:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:38, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 18:31, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 14:21, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Featherpelt (W) ~ For Approval

Featherpelt.warrior It's a rosetted tabby. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot16:23 Sun Apr 19

Define the shading on the tail, both paws furthest from us, and perhaps on the haunch? Stunning work, Hawk. — Fez   talk  16:35, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, isn't there an apprentice's image to match? Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I thought that but when I checked her page there wasn't anything... ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot16:57 Sun Apr 19

Ohh wait I found it... I'll redo it to match. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot16:58 Sun Apr 19

Before I touch it Tiger has nominated her apprentice image so I'll hold off for now. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot17:39 Sun Apr 19

This is amazing.Can yo define the shading on the back leg a bit? -Darkfire☆Peridot Gem 19:50, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

She's sooooooooo gorgeous! But I think you should match the apprentice version not just because of the existing image - and because she needs to look more like Feathertail!!! :PPPPPP ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 09:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I dont think so, as the other one is being redone. Besides this character isnt Feathertail, shes her own character, even if shes named after Feathertail. --Russettail13 (talk) 12:11, April 20, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Umm, I was joking. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 14:31, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Please be aware that if you don't have any critique to give, then please refrain from commenting. Discussions like this belong on talkpages, not the Approval Page. Define the shading on the front paw furthest from us- though it may just be my monitor, so feel free to disregard me if you think its alright.--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 16:56, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:47, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

If you don't mind me asking for clarification, define "smooth out" please. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:32 Wed Apr 22</span

Define means bluR.--Russettail13 (talk) 01:38, April 22, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Actually, no, define means to make more visible. I was asking her to tell me what she meant by "smooth out". ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:39 Wed Apr 22

smooth out = blur and expand slightly, so it doesn't end so abruptly ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:23, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading looks gorgeous. Maybe smooth out the shading on the legs, though :P User:StormSongz/Sig 15:07, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:36 Wed Apr 22

Please define the tail shading. Hawky, this is gorgeous User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:13, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm so jealous at your charart skills :P Btw doesn't this need to match her apprentice image? Anyway, define light on her forepaws :) ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 13:47, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

See, I'm not entirely sure which version has to match which. I mean, Tiger redid the apprentice after I had this posted, and she made a completely different pattern, so idk... do I match the app or does she match me? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot0:04 Mon Apr 27

Define the tail shading a tad. I think Tiger has to match this one... --Russettail13 (talk) 12:01, April 27, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Russet, you have no say whether she has to match this one, or vice versa. You are not a part of the PCA anyway. Are you even allowed to talk on this page??? Sorry if I come off as rude, as I have been noted in the past ;-; As for the image, define the light on the ear farthest from us. User:StormSongz/Sig 14:46, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Of course he can- you don't have to be apart of the project to give criticism or comment. And its actually the other way around. Tiger's image came first, regardless if its being redone or not. So Hawk needs to match hers, technically. Mind defining the earpink a tad?--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 20:03, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

In the meantime, Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot22:54 Mon Apr 27

Sorrelstripe (App) ~ For Approval

Sorrelstripe.apprentice Too much like chocolate? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 17:48, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

re-up its been a while, texture ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 17:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten her up a bit? She seems a bit too dark, nearly black. Tiger Sunny days 18:04, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Her warrior image has a paler underbelly, I think you should add that in. Coffeeshops 18:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I used a longhaired blank, so you might want to change that. And you need to add longhaired texture to her tail, flank, her cheeks, and legs. And as Raven said, I put in a paler muzzle, throat, chest, and underbelly. User:StormSongz/Sig 20:01, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

If her description doesnt call for a paler belly then don't add it User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:50, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

A lot of things don't call for a paler belly, but everyone still adds them. Example is the above Owlnose. He's just a brown tabby tom, but yet the artist added in a paler muzzle, throat, chest, and paws. Isn't it the first artist's choice, at least until the book comes out and they can be tweaked? User:StormSongz/Sig 13:50, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

except tabby cats almost always have paler muzzles and the like. david 🌈 13:58, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I wasn't worried about her being chocoloate until you mentioned it. Anyway, she's cute!^^ I think you should lighten her color just a bit. And back to the nosepink problem. Does she have a pink nose?? (I hope she does :3)  and I expected her to be "striped"! Sorrelstripe. Yea. The Erins made her un-striped ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 14:28, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, the color needs to be lightened a bit, because it needs to match her warrior image. Maybe color pick from that? Also I got rid of the paler underbelly on my image, so don't worry about it. User:StormSongz/Sig 14:32, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up wow I forgot the longhiar.. just wait. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:14, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also I think some earpink is leaking onto the ear? User:StormSongz/Sig 20:17, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 21:31, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on all four paws and define the eye depth? User:StormSongz/Sig 22:17, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up idk ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 22:40, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:57, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Don't forget to add my longhair texture. :3 User:StormSongz/Sig 00:33, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Morning Whisker (Star) ~ For Approval

Morning Whisker.star all colors from the xcf - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lovely. Define head shading a touch? Russettail13 (talk) 12:03, April 21, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Re-uploaded Extremely difficult to define on the dark spots - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:26, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading just a tad. Lovely work. Coffeeshops 22:11, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:52, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, please. Jayce(22:39, 4/24/2015)

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:49, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, please.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 14:22, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:43, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading inside this <-- ear ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:42, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I didn't add too much because it is mostly in light - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:25, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Rippletail (W) ~ For Approval

File:Rippletail (SC).warrior.png Tell me if he needs to be shorthaired, and if I need to change the eye color ~Snow~ 06:34, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the main body and define the light on the legs. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:49, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Waste in le triangle hole :3 ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 13:50, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading like Fox said, and lighten it a few ticks too. Coffeeshops 19:17, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Also, when I was uploading I accidentally created a file named File:Rippletail (SC).warrior.gif could someone delete it for me? ~Snow~ 21:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten and smooth out the shading a little more, please. Also, add some light to the legs and back ear, along with defining the ear pink. I have also eliminated the image you've requested me to. Jayce(21:38, 4/21/2015)

Re-ups ~Snow~ 07:45, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define it a little . It's way too light at the moment. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:57, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups By define you mean shading right? ~Snow~ 08:02, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shadow and light on all four paws/legs? User:StormSongz/Sig 12:24, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~Snow~ 00:17, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere, I cant see it well. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 12:46, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shadow to the hind legs, there should be some there. Also define the eye depth User:StormSongz/Sig 00:49, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit. I can't see it that much. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 11:59, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - For Approval

Dewnose.warrior A little something before I return to studying for my genetics final. Color picked from kit image. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 16:11, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading more Sziri the goat sails away ツ 18:50, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

His fur is looking a bit too yellow. Are you using yellow to brighten, instead of white? If that's the case, then replace it with white. Also define the earpink a bit more and brighten it. User:StormSongz/Sig 18:54, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

reup I also smudged the highlight on the chest more. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 19:55, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white on the tail a bit more and define the shading on it. Nicely done, Sunjaw! He matches beautifully and I'll make you an apprentice right away. Jayce(20:02, 4/22/2015)

reup Thanks, Lightning! The tail tip just would not smudge as much as I wanted it to >.> ... Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 20:21, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. —Ivy 01:21, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more shadow to his haunches? Looking good! User:StormSongz/Sig 01:50, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

reup Also adjusted the shading to a darker gray-tinted purple. If it looks off I'll change it back. :3 Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 02:15, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:20, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a smidge? User:StormSongz/Sig 12:41, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

reup Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 14:22, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:20, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I love that tail shading there. Maybe smooth out/lighten the body shading? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 13:38, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

reup Finally got my computer to stay connected to the internet long enough to put this up. Idk if the changes are showing though. Thanks to my roommate for overloading the wifi... Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 14:23, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Cloverfoot (W) ~ For Approval

Cloverfoot.warrior I'm assuming I can post this now —Ivy 20:07, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes some more, and define the light on the ear closest to us. Looks good User:StormSongz/Sig 20:35, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you. I blurred the stripes a bit more. I don't think there's supposed to be light on that ear, I used the same light source on him and it was ok, but if someone else agrees I'll add some light. —Ivy 20:48, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit too paint brushy--try and smudge a tip onto them so they're not so uniform. Blur the shading on the back and tail and define the ear pink ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 21:12, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I wasn't totally sure about what you meant on the stripes, but I tried my best. —Ivy 23:26, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see the ear pink underneath the shading. Can you perhaps move it and define it? Jayce(03:31, 4/25/2015)

Re-upped —Ivy 12:04, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Hootwhisker (W) ~ For approval

Hootwhisker.warrior I forgot to log out of my sister's account before I uploaded this, if it says Snowsplash uploaded it it's because of that ~FlameWho's there? 08:21, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit lighter,he looks black Sziri the goat sails away ツ 12:06, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Same deal as Featherpelt - isn't there an apprentice image to match? Jayie Unwritten words~ 12:23, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, there is - File:Hootwhisker.apprentice.png. It needs to be renamed to Hootwhisker. Anyway, I made the apprentice, so it's gotta match. Do you want the xcf, Flame? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:18, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, it looks hard edged. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 22:53, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing sorry my art program crashed ~FlameWho's there? 23:30, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

im not part of the project, but i will take over.  ~Moon☁In another Dimension☁ 19:37, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  ~Moon☁In another Dimension☁ 22:13, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

First, the earpink is neon, so make it less neon-y. Second, blur the shading a lot. Finally, the shading seems to be cut off where the foreleg closest to us meets the body. This is a nice first image, though. —Ivy 22:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

You've got to match the apprentice, so it needs texture. Do you want the xcf? If you're wondering how I did the texture, I made two layers - one with darker than the pelt, 1px size lines, the other with lighter than the pelt, in the gaps where the darker lines weren't. I took a small brush and smudged the lines on each layer. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:14, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him darker. Hootwhisker is dark gray. Also add some shadow to the back of the ear farthest from us? And I don't know what it is, but there's a splotch of white on the line of his front leg on the back. User:StormSongz/Sig 00:14, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I will post it in a few minuetes, just need to get rid of some waste.  ~Moon☁In another Dimension☁ 01:14, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. Coffeeshops 13:28, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and check the edges where some shadingz leak. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 13:35, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a teeny tiny bit and blur the shading, and define the shading on the ears. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:10, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Perchpaw (MV) (A) ~ For Approval

Perchpaw (MV).apprentice dong ding david 🌈 18:43, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded changed the shading a little cuz i wasnt happy with it david 🌈 20:02, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light and shadow on all four paws/legs? User:StormSongz/Sig 01:43, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

only the back legs need defining tbh, the front legs are fine - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:55, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded david 🌈 08:30, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it - this looks too black to me. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 12:26, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not going to lighten it, a shade is never specified. david 🌈 12:40, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Sneezecloud (W) - Withdrawn

Sneezecloud.warrior Matching the other images was surprisingly difficult. — Fez   talk  18:45, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

should be the male blank. david 🌈 18:53, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fez   talk  18:57, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the body shading a bit —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 20:52, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define it too please. I cant see it very well. Probably just my computer :T ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 22:38, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit too blue... Maybe darken it? User:StormSongz/Sig 17:30, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

@Storm Have you ever heard of something called shading tint? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:41, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

你不用这样了O.O Anyway just define the body shading User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:45, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I kinda think you should smooth the shading out. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 13:33, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing. I honestly can't stand this wow. — Fez   talk  13:20, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Mosspelt (E) ~ For Approval

Mosspelt.elder This was harder to match than it should have been Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 23:49, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink just a little more, please. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:49, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Alrighty Shinxy used Thunderbolt!

Sexy old cat .O. Smooth out the shading at the part where the haunch meets the tail User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:43, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

^_^ Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:09, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Birch (Ro) - For Approval

Birch.rogue well I did try — User:Diablo./Sig Sat Apr 25 01:33

He looks amazing. Define the shadow on the underbelly? And the main flank? User:StormSongz/Sig 01:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more >:V Queen Beebs 01:44, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

reups take 2 — User:Diablo./Sig Sat Apr 25 01:50

define the tail shading and smudge the ear pink a bit - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:54, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

How can you possibly do this. Maybe smooth out/lighten the shading a tad? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 13:32, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Puddlekit (K) ~ For Approval

File:Puddlekit.kit.png  hiya.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 03:19, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot and define the shading. Jayce(03:29, 4/25/2015)

Maybe brighten the brown a bit too. Wasn't there an image already? I could've sworn it was a lighter brown than that. User:StormSongz/Sig 11:33, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, there was a mca image that Jayie made. But when the new allegiances were released, the cite the image was made for is no longer valid and the images are void. So, Breeze really isn't obligated to match any images. —Ivy 11:45, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Exactly how Kate is implying on both lists is that Puddle here is gonna be littleclouds apprentice so it wouldn't really be fair since jayie made her image first. As for the image define the shadow on the legs/paws. User:StormSongz/Sig 17:28, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Still, if thats the case, then this can always be redone once a new cite surfaces for his mca role. Though if anyone else agrees with you, then i wont have a problem redoing his pattern to match Jayie's. =P~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 19:24, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

You're not required to match it, nor would I expect you to. If...Although that would make one cute kit image. Regardless, I think my comment and Storm's still stands- that brown looks black. Jayce(22:11, 4/25/2015)

Dang it I wanted this one. Define the shading on the legs and chest/shoulders. Nice color for the eyes. :) Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:19, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes look red :P define shading on the right (Puddlekit's left) forepaw and the tail. I like him! ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 13:16, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. He obviously becomes Littlecloud's apprentice, so i got the file from Jayie. He doesnt match as well as i'd like it to- and ill probably redo that shading on the next upload.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 14:37, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for matching mine. :D A few comments on the pattern. The white between the patch around the eyea and the brown on top of the head should take up more space, the brown around the nose should be smaller (only a few pixels about the nose, and only on a small patch around the mouth, not the whole muzzle, the gap between the shoulder patch and the back patch should be wider, and there shouldn't be brown on any of the paws. And the white looks a little gray. Love the texture though. :D Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:45, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Berryheart (W) - For Approval

Berryheart.warrior yey all colors are from the queen. Jayce(23:51, 4/25/2015)

Smudge the tail-tip and chest white a little bit more? And define the shadow on the legs/paws closest to us? User:StormSongz/Sig 23:55, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(00:01, 4/26/2015)

Can you define the facial shading? Sorry, i just can't see it super well.  ~Moon☁In another Dimension☁ 01:03, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't really facial shading to define, actually. Jayce(07:24, 4/26/2015)

Could you define the shading one the back and the legs behind the body? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 12:43, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

She's starting to look better.  Legendary Lion

Lion, if you're not going to comment on something specific that the artist should fix, then the comment turned into clutter. Maybe put a bit of shading inside the ear closest to us ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:32, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

The line of shading under his head looks a bit off. Add some shading to the back of the neck and fade out the line a bit better, if that makes sense? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:08, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't define the shading on the back- My monitor doesn't show blacks properly, so I literally can't see what you want me to define, and I can't change the base color without having to change the one on her queen image. Jayce(22:22, 4/26/2015)

Sorrelstripe (K) ~ For Approval

Sorrelstripe.kit wow I actually like this V̵͘͜͠I̵̸͡B̡Ŕ̷͟A̛҉̀Ņ̶̨̨͞T̶͞P̴͞A̴̶̢̢͡S͜҉S̵̛͢͡͠I̵͘͢͞͡Ò̶͞͞Ņ̨͞͞ W̡AS ̷I̷T M̵E̵? 00:09 Sun Apr 26

Cute! Can you smudge the dark brown lines on her? :) ~Moon☁In another Dimension☁ 01:04, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:44, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups V̵͘͜͠I̵̸͡B̡Ŕ̷͟A̛҉̀Ņ̶̨̨͞T̶͞P̴͞A̴̶̢̢͡S͜҉S̵̛͢͡͠I̵͘͢͞͡Ò̶͞͞Ņ̨͞͞ W̡AS ̷I̷T M̵E̵? 13:13 Sun Apr 26

Cute. <3 that texture! Maybe move the earpink more up since it shouldn't be on her head? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 13:29, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I messed something up... ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 13:30, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Birchkit (ki) ~ For Approval

File:Birchkit (TAQ).kit.png as far as I know of you can't get /solid/ beige cats so ye Queen Beebs 15:47, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

He's beautiful. Define the shading on the leg farthest from us? Russettail13 (talk) 15:56, April 26, 2015 (UTC)Russettail13

re-up Queen Beebs 17:35, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Thistle (Ki) ~ For Approval

File:Thistle.kit.png Can't tell whether I like this or hate this Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:30, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define tail shading. He's adorable! Russettail13 (talk) 21:46, April 26, 2015 (UTC) Russet

Possibly darken his pelt color a bit? Looks good! User:StormSongz/Sig 00:57, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Why does she have to darken it? It looks perfectly ginger. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:42, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups thanks, Russet ;) I thought that the pelt was fine as it was, so I left it. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:31, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lionkit (TAQ) (K) - For Approval

File:Lionkit.kit.png The shading kind of covers up her tabby markings, but I made her a classic tabby. I'm pretty happy with how those colors came out. Shading might need some tweaking. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:06, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

She looks awesome, Jayie! However, the ear might need some shading at the top and maybe the part where tail shadow is, too? User: Dewdrops56/talk 22:46, April, 25, 2015

Which ear, and where? And what about the tail shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:03, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on --> this ear, I think they mean. Also, maybe a bit on forehead? It could just be my computer. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 23:09, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the stripes? I know you said the shading was the problem and that theyre there, but I literally can't see them at all Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 23:11, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better with the tabby pattern? Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:18, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it, but perhaps lighten the shading juuust a smidge? Not too much, though. Jayce(23:36, 4/26/2015)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:49, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Ermagerd she's got little pawwwws! >< That's so adorable. Add more shadow in between her legs on her belly? User:StormSongz/Sig 00:59, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. And yus. :D Thanks. ^^ Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:11, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Sparkpaw (K) ~ For Approval

File:Sparkpaw.kit.pngasdfghjkl tiny kit is cute User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:01, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the forehead, if there is any. So adorable! She looks amazing so far, Burnt. :) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 12:04, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Not sure if its just my computer but the stripes look a little hard edged. Russettail13 (talk) 12:06, April 27, 2015 (UTC)Russet

They do look a little hard edged, but she looks fanta+stick! She seens kinda bright compared to her apprentice version, but I think it's just my screen. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 12:35, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? User:StormSongz/Sig 13:01, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you, Skid :D I color picked fom her other images, Silver so I think the color should match? Idk. there isn't forehead shading, so I just defined it on the head. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:32, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

you have to be careful when you colourpick off the apprentice, ive got the same colour as the underside in the pelt as well as the base colour. david 🌈 16:02, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Podlight (K) ~ For Approval

Podlight.kitIpodkit :3 Sziri the goat sails away ツ 19:21, April 27, 2015 (UTC)