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'''Re-ups''' Thanks:) I smudged them a bit {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 16:31, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
 
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Hawkfrost (Alt. DF) ~ For Approval

Hawkfrost.df.alt I'm seeing these blanks everywhere now Jayie I love them so much! ~Snow~ 01:09, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, please. Jayce(01:45, 6/13/2015)

Re-ups ~Snow~ 08:59, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

The shading still looks dark - lighten it a few more ticks, please. —Ivy 22:46, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~Snow~ 22:59, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture and add shading depth on the back - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:18, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~Snow~ 10:17, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the overall shading some more. It still looks a bit too hard-edged.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 16:45, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture more on the tail. —Ivy 23:58, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~Snow~ 09:53, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is still a little hard edged. Btw I don't think two highlight points (well, explaining) are needed on the shoulder...? Might be wrong :P I love his belly Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 01:01, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

It looks like your shading is coming from the right, so remove all the shading along the top of the back and add it onto the belly, behind the legs, and directly behind where the shoulder ends. Cover all of the tail in shading, as well, except for the very top, which is lined up with the slope of the back. Nice job! Rainlegs 02:09, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups – I completely redid the shading, but I didn't exactly understand what you meant by the tail shading. I also got rid of the texture as it seemed to make the shading look more hard-edged than it is ~Snow~ 06:06, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

The whole tail besides the top should be shaded (the right side too). The shading still looks a little hard edged though. Can you blur it a little more? —Ivy 13:44, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more please. ~Sunstream ☽☾ Was it ME? 15:41, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

(Pardon me if this sounds similar to what the others were saying) Smooth out the shading? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:16, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? Jayce(11:42, 6/26/2015)

Sorry, gonna have to withdraw — my art programs crashed >><< ~Snow~ 10:52, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over. —Ivy 17:55, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped My turn. —Ivy 18:49, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Oh wow this is beautiful. Can you define the shading on the main body a bit? <3 ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 19:17, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you, Sun! —Ivy 19:44, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere except for the tail. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:49, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy 12:29, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading that's in front of the hind leg, define shading on his shoulder and maybe on the hind leg as well. I love the texture :D ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (02:48,7/3/2015)

Re-upped Thanks. The shading was bothering me so much I redid a lot of it, taking into account your comments. —Ivy 14:14, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

The shading in front of the back leg seems a bit too straight and tall. Maybe erase a bit of it, and make it rounder to follow the curve of the belly, if that makes any sense? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:55, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy 13:22, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Snowtuft (DF) ~ For Approval

Snowtuft.df So many Dark Forest submissions, they're going like hotcakes! I've always had a soft spot for Snowtuft. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 01:22, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 06:35, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading depth ~Snow~ 00:26, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg closest to us and the light on the one farthest from us please Storm 12:33, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly expand the shading a tad everywhere?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 16:44, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded, not sure if I made the shading too dark or not. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 18:57, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

It is a little on the dark side, tbh. Maybe lighten it just a slight bit? Smooth out the shading a little more as well. Nice :) —Ivy 00:40, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source, it looks a bit like there's shading all around the outline ~IceThe Spirit and the Soul 06:48, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the legs? Also, the chest, back leg and tail end shading looks a little grey. Might I suggest tinting the shading to a colour other than grey, such as blue? It'll make it look less grey. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:12, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? It's kinda flat at this moment I know, I swear I screw up way worse than you do when I shade white cats Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 01:08, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Wouldn't the scar show? If I remember right it said that he was sliced all the way to his belly Iveh Yo! 04:09, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

That's on his left side, I think User: Dewdrops56/talk 04:17, June, 16, 2015

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 16:13, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading a lot more? And can you define the light/shading on his legs please? Storm 17:06, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. —Ivy 18:09, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

If the shading is coming from directly above, more of the tail would be in shadow and there would be less shadow defining the top of the shoulder. Also remove the shading separating the tail from the rump, if that's the case. If it's coming from the right, add even more shading to the entire tail-most of the body would be blocking all of it out! Fantastic job on dealing with the white cat, though, because I still can't do them. Rainlegs 02:08, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Something came up so I won't be able to access my computer and reup the pic till Wednesday. Is that alright? I'm so sorry I can't get it up till then. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 01:49, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 16:14, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the back leg furthest from us? Also, define the shading on the paws. —Ivy 16:27, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not sure if there's a set style for these blanks, but I can hardly see the pupil.. mind moving it toward the center or where it's easier to see? --Nachtide The Wikian Squad 05:46, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps define shading overall especially the tail? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (06:01,6/25/2015)

Pretty much the entire lower half of the tail should be in shadow if your light's still coming from right above! Rainlegs 02:31, June 28, 2015 (UTC) Do you mind lightening the tail tip some? I know its shading, but it looks very dark.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 22:50, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded, starting to regret picking a white cat. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 15:09, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I know white cats aren't the easiest, but this looks good :) However, can you define the main body shading? —Ivy 19:36, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Could you try to smooth out the shading? Queen Beebs 12:42, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 21:21, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Purtty :) maybe define the tail shading a little more? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (02:50,7/3/2015)

Could you add some shading to the left edge of the front leg that's touching the ground? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:57, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

The back leg furthest from us and the tail tip look a little grey. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:42, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Beepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval 

File:Beepaw.kit.png ~IceThe Spirit and the Soul 10:15, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and perhaps lighten it a little. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:54, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw. Looks wonderful for your first charart! Storm 12:27, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad, please.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 16:43, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture a little bit. Cute (: Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 23:06, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a tad. I like this! —Ivy 23:59, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks ^^ ~IceThe Spirit and the Soul 09:48, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a little bit more, dull down the texture some more as well, and add some shading between her front legs on her underbelly? Storm 14:27, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Why would she need more shading on her front paws and underbelly? She has enough there. I think you should lighten the shading a little more. Appledash the light of honor 17:45, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

No, between the front legs on her underbelly. There'd be just shadow there, and there's not really enough. Storm 20:48, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, but I agree that it is fine. There is shading there, and there's no less than there is on a bunch of other images. —Ivy 21:11, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Storm. The underbelly is approximately 3 pixels wide, and 5 pixels long. It does not need that much shading. Appledash the light of honor 00:05, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups — hope I got it, I'm crap at shading, and Wikia won't let me upload the image to the correct file name… did I miss anything? ~IceThe Spirit and the Soul 11:37, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a little more. —Ivy 12:32, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? Jayce(11:42, 6/26/2015)

Withdrawn — wifi's being turned off ~IceThe Spirit and the Soul 10:59, June 27, 2015

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Can I Take over? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 13:30, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

you dont gotta ask lol Storm 13:31, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups huh❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 14:37, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Cool. Could you blur/smudge the shading more and define the texture a bit? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 14:44, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the texture to match the apprentice? Storm 14:50, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

yo ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:57, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs and the texture just a tad more. —Ivy 13:47, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

blur the shading on the main body some more Storm 14:43, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to them soon ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 14:45, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not sure if texture needs to match, but the texture on her apprentice image is more dense :P ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (08:57,6/29/2015)

Oh, is it just me, or are her eyes torquoize (green)? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (12:47,6/30/2015)

They do look sort of turquoise, but I compared them to the apprentice's eyes and they seem to be the same color. So I think it's ok —Ivy 15:03, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

May i ask why theres light on ==> side of the right forleg? It should just be shading User:StormSongz/Sig 01:17, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

I can still barely see the texture... define light on all her legs though, and maybe smooth out the "right angle" formed by the shading below her head. If you understand :P ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (02:53,7/3/2015)

Could you erase the shading a bit and show more light on both front legs and the tail? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:59, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstripe (DF) - For Approval

Darkstripe.df I tried Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:58, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Also, I am aware that it looks a bit flat - I'll sling in a few highlights on my next upload. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:29, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reups that's better Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:35, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:46, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:32, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:35, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but he really doesn't look dark gray at all. This seems like more of a neutral shade. Also, he's supposed to have black stripes, and these don't look black at all...his images only appear darker on his warrior imho because of the shading... Jayce(12:09, 6/30/2015)

Reups I colour picked from the warrior - come to think of it, that looks a little light compared to the others; I've now colour picked the base/stripes from the kit. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:04, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

The whole tail should be in shadow. User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:12, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Sorrel's light source seems to be coming from the left, not the right, so I think left side of the tail would be in light. —Ivy 14:51, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

I was literally on my way here to say that :p Burnt, I doubt I need to change it, since my light source is indeed the left, as Ice said. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:55, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe define shading on his shoulder, other than that - I think it's ready :) ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (02:58,7/3/2015)

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:05, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading just a touch? It looks a bit light, though it's hard to make it stand out with his dark stripes. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:05, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I've only dropped it by 4 or 5%, because otherwise the image will look flat and icky. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:40, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Boulderfur (Star) ~ For Evaluation

Boulderfur.starOkay... first image in a while. pardon if it looks bad, i'm posting this at almost 3 in the morning and am as scared as hell of the thunderstorm. Anyway... I chose green eyes instead of the blue on the other images because I realize I suck at blue eyes and since the eye colour isn't canon. (if i misnamed or aligned my bad) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 07:40, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Your eyes have to match the other images, sorry. If they are blue on the other images, then so does this one. Also, blur the shading more and it's leaking on the main body (omg im almost crying it's the end of the school year, so I apologize if I sounded blunt there ;.;) - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:22, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the front legs. And could you possibly add some shading depth to the side of his face? And maybe some earpink shading as well, I know there should be earpink shading. Not much, just a little bit towards where the ear canal is and on ==> this side of the ear a little bit to show your light is coming from where it is Storm 14:18, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

The nose should be gray like it is on the apprentice. —Ivy 14:44, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Kinda redone Sorry if I forgot something. I'm just having a hard day. Couldn't sleep 'til 4am (Stupid storm making me cry) no worries, Foxy ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:06, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail. The shading is still leaking a little on the main body. —Ivy 19:14, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry if this sounds like a stupid question, but could you tell me specifically where? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:37, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, it doesn't sound stupid at all - I know, "main body" is real vague. It is mainly leaking where the main body meets this <--- side of <--- foreleg. It is also leaking a little bit along the bottom of the main body - just zoom in on that area because there are a few places it's leaking just a little. Hopefully that was helpful - sorry, I'm really bad at explaining. —Ivy 19:25, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not a problem, but I think I blurred the shading too much because I did define the shading but it's not showing up. I can't tell if the shading is still leaking by the bottom. Anyway, does anyone think I should darken the shading? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 23:04, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Defie the light on the tail and both legs.User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:42, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Shading is leaking next to <----- forepaw ~Snow~ 07:32, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shading is probably still leaking. I think that's my weakness. I'll probably blur the shading a bit more on the main body and chest then define light on tail. p.s, someone call the shading plumber ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:48, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and front legs/paws. And yeah, shading is still leaking by the shoulder where the line meets <== leg, as well as under the chin. Storm 20:58, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded someone call the shading plumber ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:09, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is receeding a little along the belly line and outside of the elbow. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:19, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I really think at this. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:47, July 1, 2015 (UTC)D

don't put yourself down! That ain' tcool. Also, some of the shading is leaking from the lines, so try to define/fix that?? Queen Beebs 12:44, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the chest. I'm pretty sure there should be some there. —Ivy 23:37, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Shading leaking between his side and his "arm" :P ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (03:44,7/2/2015)

I give up. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:32, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can I take over? Dappledlight (talk) 19:36, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

As long as no one else has it reserved, it's all yours. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:27, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Okay! Do I reup it here, or on another section? Dappledlight (talk) 22:42, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reups... I think I did this right? User:Dappledlight/Sig 00:57, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot my dear.Russet: The fun has been bubbled! LMFAO...

Lighten it, too. Also, the nose should be gray to match the apprentice. Nice first image though =) —Ivy 01:08, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups :) User:Dappledlight/Sig01:16 Fri Jul 3

Beautiful for your first Charart :) lower the opacity of the shading and blur it more with a hard edged blur tool (a rate of 100). I can send you a tutorial if you aren't sure. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:24, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to blur it with hard edged but that's a good suggestion. Smudge the earpink more, define light on the tail and /his/ left paw. Nicely done :D ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (04:36,7/3/2015)

Reups, thanks :) User:Dappledlight/Sig14:39 Fri Jul 3

Is your shading layer above your earpink and eye color layer? They look very dark on the <--- side, so perhaps move those layers above it or lighten it?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 21:37, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups :) User:Dappledlight/Sig21:49 Fri Jul 3

Define the light on the tail :) very nice dapple! User:StormSongz/Sig

Reups, thank you :) User:Dappledlight/Sig21:59 Fri Jul 3

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the back a bit, fix that? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:31, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups :) User:Dappledlight/Sig08:50 Sat Jul 4

There is a line of a lighter color in the bend of <== arm. Is it a highlight or something? If it is, can you blur it? —Ivy 23:03, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstripe (DF Alt2) - For Approval

Darkstripe.df.alt2 Okay, so for those who don't know, the stripes on a black tabby are actually supposed to be lighter than the base (which means I need to redo Crowtail one of these days), so if you're seeing light stripes, this is intentional and I didn't mess up. The eyes, ears, and mouth are the exact same thing as his silver tabby alt, which was just approved. Jayce(00:58, 6/26/2015)

Beautiful. Can you define the shading a bit? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 02:29, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can you be a bit more specific and tell me where you'd like the shading defined, if you don't mind? Jayce(02:33, 6/26/2015)

Like, the main body? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 02:37, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Alrighty. Jayce(07:12, 6/26/2015)

Could you possibly define the earpink just a tad? I know its there, but I literally cant see it. Maybe shift the color to a brighter shade of the one you used, or raise its opacity?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 08:18, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. My ear pink is always on full opacity- it was just a darker color. Jayce(11:58, 6/30/2015)

I'm sorry to even bring this up but can you add a little depth in the teeth? lmao I know. Maybe also in the eye? This is a beautiful tom XD ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (03:47,7/2/2015)

As I used the eyes and teeth directly from my alt, I'd rather not. It's kinda hard to show depth when you have...what? Four pixels that aren't even right next to each other?? Jayce(08:02, 7/2/2015)

Exactly. Forget it. The teeth just look ultra bright on black catsXP  I can barely see the stripes though, maybe lighten them up? Just a little? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (03:00,7/3/2015)

Again, not trying to be difficult, but when I was told about the black tabby thing, I was told that the stripes are supposed to be faint- you're not supposed to be able to really see the stripes. I'm going by the same basic thing that the rogue image had- faint lighter stripes on a dark base. I could probably dig up the conversation at a later date, provided Skype and fb work. Jayce(03:12, 7/3/2015)

Considering black tabbys are just ghost tabbies a large majority of the time, I personally think his stripes are fine. Define the shading on the hindleg farthest from us, please.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 21:35, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(03:02, 7/4/2015)

Could you define the shading more on the hip? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:57, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I might need to redo this... Jayce(05:04, 7/4/2015)

Mumblefoot (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation

Mumblefoot.warrior Oh.My.Gosh.I've failed terribly at the ragged fur xD. PoppyShine (talk) 04:57, June 26, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

There are 2 flecks of waste near the chest fur. Please remove it. Also, should he have patchy fur, or not, as that's what's depicted in the other images? And there's a fleck of waste underneath the tail.~User: Dewdrops56/talk~ 05:30 June 26 2015

I don't think he gets ragged fur as that may be only for his elder rank. Correct me if I'm wrong. Also define the shading on the main body. Hey poppy, I was wondering if you want to, would you be willing to be my apprentice? If so let me know on my talk page, and then file out a request on the mentor program page. Storm 05:35, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Of course ^-^. PoppyShine (talk) 05:37, June 26, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Also on the front front, facing us, there looks like there is some waste under there. Please remove it. ~ User: Dewdrops56/talk~ 05:49 June 26 2015

Yeah I think he doesn't get the ragged fur, since he was a young warrior. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:59, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined everywhere, not just on the main body. Also, blur the earpink. —Ivy 12:04, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

The second fur tuft thing on the chest isn't coloured in. This is amazing for your first(?) charart! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 22:56, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded it.I removed the waste,blurred the earpink, and defined shading.PoppyShine (talk) 00:10, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

The ragged fur still needs to be removed...? —Ivy 00:22, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Not trying to argue but, isnt ragged fur part of a cat's trait that they recieve when they are kits, take Raggedstar and Reedfeather for example. PoppyShine (talk) 00:27, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Honestly, I'm not sure we'll know for certain until GC comes out, so for now the ragged fur needs to be removed. If I'm correct in assuming the ragged fur cite was only for his elder rank. Storm 00:42, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Ok.PoppyShine (talk) 00:54, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Define the shading everywhere some more and smooth it out a bit? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:58, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

There is a faint patch of waste between the front leg and back leg( facing us). Please remove it. ~ User: Dewdrops56// talk~ 03:39 June 28 2015

Reuploaded it. I removed the ragged fur and defined the shading,and erased the waste. PoppyShine (talk) 00:41, June 29, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Define the shading on the two legs furthest from us. —Ivy 19:45, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source and expand the shading. Look at some of mine for reference. if you need further help, I can send you a tutorial. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:28, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hope this is better.PoppyShine (talk) 02:20, July 1, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

I still can't see your light source. Did you look at Fox's examples? If you didn't, I recommend that you do. —Ivy 23:45, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

You also still appear to only be shading along the edges of the lineart. Follow the apprentice tutorials as specified User:StormSongz/Sig 01:24, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (08:16,7/2/2015)

Ok, reuploaded it. :3 PoppyShine (talk) 06:11, July 3, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Poppy all youre doing is shading along the edges of the lineart. What you need to do is shade inside the actual blank. Please look at other examples. User:StormSongz/Sig 11:50, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sure she is trying - I remember I had a hard time with shading placement on my first image. I would try the warrior blank redline from the apprentice tutorials, the third blank on the fifth row of redlines (not the one at the top). —Ivy 14:30, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried the best I can >.< --PoppyShine (talk) 00:53, July 4, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

I'm really sorry to have to say this, but I still can't see your light source. Maybe try shading placement like him. In order to follow that light source on this image, remove the chest and muzzle shading, and add light on <--- side of each leg. Also, remove the shading on the top of the tail. The shading itself looks good, so don't be discouraged! :) —Ivy 01:49, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe smudge/blur the highlight a bit more? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:58, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Hootwhisker (W) ~ For Approval

Hootwhisker.warrior Idk. ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 15:07, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the texture; it was stated multiple times before, there is none on my apprentice. It's the shading technique. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:27, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink I cannot see it well Storm 15:31, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading in general and define the light on the tail. —Ivy 18:55, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 20:48, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Theres a random dark line on his haunch where his knee is. and also can you make the earpink a little more...triangular shaped? Storm 21:36, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading. —Ivy 22:54, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I didn't blur it yet, because that is not how it looks in the apprentice. Sorrel did you smudge or blur the shading? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness*

I'm fairly certain it was smudged on the apprentice, so if you want to smudge your shading, would you mind smudging it more? —Ivy 15:57, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

I used smudging - a 1px brush, with quite large, circular smudging, so that some of the shading smears spread onto the non-shaded areas, if you get what I mean - that's what gives it's it's 'texture' look. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:18, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the hindleg furthest from us.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 22:46, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Also define it on the foreleg furthest from us —Ivy 19:43, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I like this shading style... ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 22:00, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a bit. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:20, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a little? I don't think it's the same as smoothing it. Appledash the light of honor 00:30, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Idk he's a plain cat but he looks so catchy XD try to define light on the legs. Oh btw which side is the light coming from? On my computer it seems to be coming from both sides :o ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (03:02,7/3/2015)

From what I can see it is the left. However, with that light source, I don't think there should be muzzle shading. Also, define the shading in the lower back/haunch area (Idk what to call it, hopefully you understand!) —Ivy 01:54, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the top of the rump? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:00, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:41, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I'm just a bit confused. So I should smooth the shading, darken it, define the light, remove some shading, and define the shading? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 14:46, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Alt.DF) ~ For Approval

Brokenstar.df.alt Credit to Burntclaw for the lineart, although I had to make some changes. This is the black alt, as he is called black in Fading Echoes. I used the colour off the elder alt and tried to copy the scars best I could off the Dark Forest image.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:45, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

shouldnt he have torn ears? Storm 14:54, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

It looks torn to me... —Ivy 15:06, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

I see no tear. Storm 15:08, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

If you look closely, you can see that the upper part of the ear (on our screen) is jagged rather than straight, which I assume is the tear. I think the dark base just makes it hard to see. —Ivy 15:14, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on all four legs.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 22:46, June 28, 2015 (UTC)

darken him. i thought this was yellowfang at first. david 🌈 08:26, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I added another tear on his ear, to make it a tad more obvious. I promise there is three tears, and the other ear tip is not there. I've darkened his main colour, but they'll mean the elder alt will need to be darkened.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 10:10, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think that if he's black, he should be darkened more. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:26, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

I second that. ^ Don't be afraid to go dark when you make black cats, honestly. And given that this source has a lot of lighter areas, going darker is a better idea. Jayce(12:02, 6/30/2015)

Define the shading some more? Queen Beebs 12:45, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:05, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink a little more? I know it's there but I can't see it too well. Maybe just brighten it ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (03:05,7/3/2015)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:03, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add shading further up on the shoulder? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:01, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:18, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Larksong (W) ~ For Approval

File:Larksong.warrior.png You know...? Nah... Queen Beebs 21:04, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs a tad. This. Is. gorgeous. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:11, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine there imo, but possibly add some shading depth to the main body and head? User:StormSongz/Sig 02:27, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 02:42, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

There's also a black patch of fur that is between the eyes on all the chararts. I think you may have missed that User:StormSongz/Sig 02:49, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a bit? It's making her look darker than she should be. Jayce(02:50, 7/1/2015)

RE-UP Queen Beebs 02:58, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Waste over the nose User:StormSongz/Sig 03:16, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

She's a pure beauty :o Imho her patches kind of are smaller and more spot-like on her other images? I'm not sure about this. I know it's her other side, but a cat wouldn't have differently "formatted" patches on each sides. Anyways, there should be a black patch on her cheek below/beside the ginger patch as there is on her StarClan. (so picky XP) ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (07:16,7/2/2015)

I'll fix that in a second, but could you elaborate on that? Like, how are they more spot like and smaller? Queen Beebs 13:30, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

They're more round and small probably? Like they seem to be like that, but when I compare patches on this and her other images one by one they look quite similar. I'm confused DX maybe you should just ignore that... :-/ ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (14:20,7/2/2015)

There's a patch of gray outside of the charart, above her nose. Songheart (talk) 13:19, July 3, 2015 (UTC)Songheart

I can't really see any light on the back leg furthest from us. Can you define it there? —Ivy 01:57, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the belly, right above and behind the front leg? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:03, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 02:53, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

Mudfur (Alt. MCA) ~ For Approval

Mudfur.mca.altThis probably is warranted as I read through the old archives... Anyway, is this mottled enough or dark enough? XD ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (07:50,7/2/2015)

re-ups made him more mottled-like ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (13:01,7/2/2015)

Define the shading on the leaves and the light on the leg farthest from the first hind leg :) Beautiful <3 ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 15:54, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I don't quite get "the leg fartherst from the first hind leg" so I tried my best to define it on all the legs I hope I got it. And for the leaves, well, I tried ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (02:44,7/3/2015)

Define the shading on the leaves again. Maybe use black for the shading? User:StormSongz/Sig 11:53, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups It's hard, it's like two pixels wide x.x And I did all the leaves on one layer so I didn't actually "shade" it >.> If it's not getting better, I'll change a way of shading the leaves an entire way. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (13:25,7/3/2015)

Is there shading on the top of the rump there, or is that mottles? Either way, define the shading, and if so, I don't think there should be shading there based on the light souce. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:05, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups that better? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (07:25,7/4/2015)

Darkstripe (Alt.DF3) ~ For Approval

Darkstripe.df.alt3 Sziri the goat sails away ツ 12:04, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

theres a random pixel by his tail. david 🌈 14:45, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe blur the stripes a tad? Lovely job, as always. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:40, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think they need to be blurred, personally. Maybe smudged a bit to give it a fur texture look, but that's just a suggestion. Anyway, add shading to the bottom of the chin? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:07, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Buutiful :D Define light on the shoulder^^ I think the stripes are fine. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (07:49,7/4/2015)

Re-ups Thanks:) I smudged them a bit Sziri the goat sails away ツ 16:31, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Possibly smooth the shading a liiiiiittle bit more? User:StormSongz/Sig 03:35, July 5, 2015 (UTC)