Tag: rte-source |
Snowdapple (talk | contribs) Tag: sourceedit |
||
| (28 intermediate revisions by 11 users not shown) | |||
| Line 26: | Line 26: | ||
| − | ==[[ |
+ | ==[[Dappletail's Kit]] (Ki) ~ For Approval== |
| − | [[File: |
+ | [[File:Dappletail's_Kit.kit.png]] Poor kit. The colours are based off Dappletail's images so credit to the OA's.{{User:Stealthfire star/Sig}} 00:12, July 30, 2015 (UTC) |
| ⚫ | |||
| − | Erm...im not trying to yell at you in the slightest, but i cant exactly tell where your lightsource is coming from? And isnt the scar and the rip in his ear supposed to be on his other side? And i believe you may have colored the part in the mouth that's not supposed to be the mouth (i.e the triangle hole next to the tongue) sorry if im confusing you ;-; {{User:StormSongz/Sig}} 02:07, July 15, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded: ''' fixed the scar and ear. for the mouth I used Tigerstar's blank as a guide so...and I don't know how you want me to fix the light source. I shaded it and I didn't use highlights so it'd be awesome if you specified what you meant. {{User:Appledash/Sig}} 02:23, July 15, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | + | Pretty sure it's texture. Anyway, this is cute! Could you define the light on the back paw just a bit more? {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 11:42, July 30, 2015 (UTC) |
|
| ⚫ | |||
| − | Why would she need to change her ''entire'' source just because the light on the tail looks "confusing"? tbh, all she'd need to do is add more shading to the tail-tip to fix the problem. The source itself is just fine, barring the tail. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|05:21, 7/15/2015}} |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | Define light on the legs and tail if needed :) {{User:Bramblesnow/Sig2|08:40,7/15/2015}} |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | Mind defining the light and shading on his legs? I cant really see it.{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 17:58, July 15, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | + | Well, I can smudge it more? I think it's okay... Can I have a second opinion on this? {{User:Stealthfire star/Sig}} 00:29, August 1, 2015 (UTC) |
|
| − | + | Can you please connect the texture lines together to make them lines? Texture shouldn't look like dots. {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 00:34, August 1, 2015 (UTC) |
|
| ⚫ | |||
| − | I can't define it anymore than it already is. It even looks a little too sharp to me. I didn't even know we needed a shape for shading ._. {{User:Appledash/Sig}} 22:04, July 15, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| + | What I'm saying is that the texture you have right now (dots), needs to be lines. Texture isn't supposed to look like dapples. Can you please re-do the texture? {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 01:47, August 1, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| + | You actually can have dapples as texture, if they are dense enough they can be clustered together to look like soft fur. right now, I'd say it could be denser to now confuse it with dapples. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 04:21, August 1, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | Please read my above comment. {{User:Appledash/Sig}} 00:47, July 16, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| + | '''Reupload''' I redid it. It does look much better.{{User:Stealthfire star/Sig}} 00:20, August 2, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | Then add another layer of thinner shading at a lower opacity or something, Icy. I agree with Fox and Burnt that the depth should be defined a bit... {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|12:03, 7/16/2015}} |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded: '''[whispering] i tried {{User:Appledash/Sig}} 14:30, July 16, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | + | [[File:Quiet_Rain.elder.png]] I couldn't resist sorry, Quiet Rain is my favorite cat as well as having my favorite pattern o.o {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 10:42, July 30, 2015 (UTC) |
|
| ⚫ | |||
| − | Do you mean blur it? Or smudge it? {{User:Appledash/Sig}} 00:39, July 18, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | Blur {{User:StormSongz/Sig}} 00:46, July 18, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded: '''Is this better? {{User:Appledash/Sig}} 01:33, July 18, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | + | '''Re-uploaded''' {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 13:38, July 31, 2015 (UTC) |
|
| − | + | Define the earpink, please.{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 04:30, August 1, 2015 (UTC) |
|
| − | + | '''Re-uploaded''' {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 06:07, August 1, 2015 (UTC) |
|
| ⚫ | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded: {{User:Appledash/Sig}} 17:04, July 18, 2015 (UTC)''' |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | I looked up the colour of cats' pawpads and lighter coloured cats typically have pink pawpads. Can you make his pawpad pink?{{User:Stealthfire star/Sig}} 01:11, July 19, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': Yup! Also I kinda hid the scar layer and saved it wtihout noticing...I put it back. <span style="color:#EE4144;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">I</span>[[User talk:Appledash|<span style="color:#F37033;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">c</span>]][[Hollyleaf|<span style="color:#FDF6AF;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">i</span>]][[Ivypool|<span style="color:#62BC4D;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">l</span>]][[Firestar|<span style="color:#1E98D3;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">o</span>]][[Feathertail|<span style="color:#672F89;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">o</span>]] |
||
| − | [[Category:Signatures]] 02:35, July 19, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | My cat is silver and she has black pads... but anyway, with this source shouldn't there be shading on the left side of the main body? {{User:Bramblesnow/Sig2|07:29,7/19/2015}} |
||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | No? Then that would mean there would be no shading. <span style="color:#EE4144;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">I</span>[[User talk:Appledash|<span style="color:#F37033;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">c</span>]][[Hollyleaf|<span style="color:#FDF6AF;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">i</span>]][[Ivypool|<span style="color:#62BC4D;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">l</span>]][[Firestar|<span style="color:#1E98D3;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">o</span>]][[Feathertail|<span style="color:#672F89;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">o</span>]] |
||
| − | [[Category:Signatures]] 15:25, July 19, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | + | Lighten the belly shading just a tick, please.{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 04:30, August 1, 2015 (UTC) |
|
| − | + | '''Re-uploaded.''' {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 06:30, August 1, 2015 (UTC) |
|
| − | + | This is so beautiful :O CBA? {{User:Bramblesnow/Sig2|10:08,8/3/2015}} |
|
| ⚫ | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': Yup, it's his scar! But I forgot to put it under the shading layer so I did that, and I defined the light. I think I messed it up >: I don't know...I think I need to blur it more? I might have defined it too much. I'm talking to myself. Idk man. Jet fuel can't melt steel beams. <span style="color:#EE4144;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">I</span>[[User talk:Appledash|<span style="color:#F37033;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">c</span>]][[Hollyleaf|<span style="color:#FDF6AF;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">i</span>]][[Ivypool|<span style="color:#62BC4D;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">l</span>]][[Firestar|<span style="color:#1E98D3;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">o</span>]][[Feathertail|<span style="color:#672F89;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">o</span>]] |
||
| − | [[ |
+ | [[File:Snowtuft.df.png]] Yay! Another image :) {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 23:26, August 2, 2015 (UTC) |
| ⚫ | |||
| − | CBA? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|11:52, 7/20/2015}} |
||
| + | I didn't use highlights at all xD Could you specify something else, perhaps? {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 00:28, August 3, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | Sorry to burst your bubble but you still have the little triangle by the tooth in the mouth next to the tongue colored in. That shouldnt be anything at all {{User:StormSongz/Sig}} 00:01, July 21, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| + | Well, 'highlight' as in where the light is hitting his back. Basically, where the shading coming from the stomach ends. Just blur that out a little bit. {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">00:32 Mon Aug 3</span></small> |
||
| − | I already told you, I used Tigerstar's mouth as a base. And I also used Thistleclaw's as well. So if that's an issue then those should be fixed as well. <span style="color:#EE4144;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">I</span>[[User talk:Appledash|<span style="color:#F37033;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">c</span>]][[Hollyleaf|<span style="color:#FDF6AF;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">i</span>]][[Ivypool|<span style="color:#62BC4D;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">l</span>]][[Firestar|<span style="color:#1E98D3;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">o</span>]][[Feathertail|<span style="color:#672F89;text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-family:Indie Flower;">o</span>]] 00:03, July 21, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | + | Also blur the tail shading please. Nice! {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 00:44, August 3, 2015 (UTC) |
|
| + | Wah~! So nice :3 <small>wait I thought this was Splooks?</small> Define light on the shoulder^^ <small> It's so nice omg :o</small> {{User:Bramblesnow/Sig2|09:13,8/3/2015}} |
||
| − | Just thought I'd pop in and say that if Apple says it matches Thistleclaw, then there shouldn't be a problem because that's Jayie's image. {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 00:54, July 21, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | + | '''Reuploaded''' ^^ <small>I took it, but I felt bad so I wanted to give it back, but she said I deserve it ;-;</small> {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 13:37, August 3, 2015 (UTC) |
|
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': This is as much defined as I can get it to without it looking like it wasn't blurred at all. <span style="font-family:Calibri; text-shadow:#000000 0.40em 0.40em 0.40em; font-size:100%">[[User:Appledash|<span style title="Bush did 9/11"><span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">I</span></span>]][[User talk:Appledash|<span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">c</span>]]</span>[[Feathertail|<span style title="Dick chaney made money off the iraq war"><span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">i</span></span>]][[Crowfeather|<span style title="Obama is a shape shifting lizard person"><span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">l</span></span>]][[Firestar|<span style title="9/11 was perpetrated by our own government to justify the evasion of Iraq"><span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">o</span></span>]][[Leafpool|<span style title="Where was bush during 9/11?"><span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">o</span></span>]] 01:17, July 21, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | The back leg farthest from us looks a bit odd. Shouldnt the light be on the other side of the leg with your light source? {{User:StormSongz/Sig}} 01:36, July 21, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Erm, no, it shouldn't. It's in the right place? <span style="font-family:Calibri; text-shadow:#000000 0.40em 0.40em 0.40em; font-size:100%">[[User:Appledash|<span style title="Bush did 9/11"><span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">I</span></span>]][[User talk:Appledash|<span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">c</span>]]</span>[[Feathertail|<span style title="Dick chaney made money off the iraq war"><span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">i</span></span>]][[Crowfeather|<span style title="Obama is a shape shifting lizard person"><span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">l</span></span>]][[Firestar|<span style title="9/11 was perpetrated by our own government to justify the evasion of Iraq"><span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">o</span></span>]][[Leafpool|<span style title="Where was bush during 9/11?"><span style="color: #BA55D3;font-size:100%">o</span></span>]] 01:54, July 21, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Eh it's fine tbh. Continuing CBA? {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 03:50, July 21, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Im really sorry but i cant make heads or tails of your lightsource. Can you please define it? I mean the light on your legs and tail dont make sense, and the shading on the back lioks out of place, like where there should be light theres just shading lines... {{User:StormSongz/Sig}} 19:17, July 21, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | I'm sorry, but I can see her lightsource just fine. Just because it's not overly defined does ''not'' mean it's not there. Burnt and I think it's fine, and I'm going to continue the CBA. Overly defined shading on white cats looks ''gross'', or in Cloudtail's case, it looked blocky before I had to tweak it. This is a lovely image and I don't think the shading needs to be "fixed" or anything of the sort... {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|19:20, 7/21/2015}} |
||
| − | |||
| − | I didnt say icy needed to define their shading i said to define the light source. The head shading looks out of place as well as the legs and the tail {{User:StormSongz/Sig}} 19:24, July 21, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | It looks almost the exact same as Tigerstar and many of the other Dark Forest images that were approved. Right now, it's 2-1 in favor of Icy's source as it is. I'm sorry, but I still don't understand ''why'' it needs to be fixed, when it's honestly fine. Everyone has their own shading methods and techniques, and no one is more right than anyone else. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|19:32, 7/21/2015}} |
||
| − | |||
| − | The front of the face, or at least the forehead and nose, should be in light if we're assuming the light is coming anywhere above or to the right of the image, and there shouldn't be shading along the back or shoulders at all, where there currently is. Personally, I think the shading is over-blurred, because I can't even tell where the light on the legs is or if there's even shading on some parts. Harder-edged shading may look gross on white cats, but you can get a sharper edge than this and still have it be visually pleasing. {{User:Rainlegs/Sig}} 22:55, July 21, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': Took Stormsong's advice - thanks to Trolly for helping me. Also, I know that the midriff shading needs a lot of blurring. I'm working on that right now - expect that in the next upload. That should be in like 20 seconds. <small><small>dont yell at me i tried</small></small>{{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 23:46, July 21, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Where's the shading on her back paw furthest away from us? {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 04:55, July 22, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': Non existent but now it's back. <small><small>Is it just me or does it look like I messed something up? I didn't touch anything but the leg...</small></small>{{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 04:59, July 22, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Could you darken the shading just a bit? {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 09:32, July 22, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | I cannot see hardly any shading on the legs. Could you define that? As well as the tail please {{User:StormSongz/Sig}} 14:28, July 22, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': Darkened and defined shading. {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 15:26, July 22, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Also, I don't know why it looks so sharp. It looks fine in GIMP. <_< {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 15:27, July 22, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Looks better! It doesnt look that sharp to me. Possibly define a little bit of light on the front legs? And the head ? {{User:StormSongz/Sig}} 15:29, July 22, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 17:05, July 22, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Hmm...maybe just a tad more? The front legs look like theyre all in shadow and maybe for the head, add some more light on the muzzle and the top of the mouth, and around the eyes and i think itll be good :) {{User:StormSongz/Sig}} 17:47, July 22, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': This is honestly the best I can do without making it look disgusting. {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 02:07, July 23, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | CBA? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|07:41, 7/23/2015}} |
||
| − | |||
| − | Not trying to be picky or anything, but I ''really'' cannot see any shading on the legs. Could you try to define them more? {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 09:50, July 23, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | No, I can't. I've already stated this: I cannot define it more than it already is. I'm sorry. I'm trying to but I literally can't. {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 15:10, July 23, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Its not that hard icy. Add another layer and make it a bit darker of a color and use a small brush to add a bit of depth to the legs. And i still cant see the light on the front legs or barely any on the head. When you blur, do you use a large brush setting? If so i suggest using a maller brush. And the part of the tail thats under him should be in shadow as well. {{User:StormSongz/Sig}} 19:16, July 23, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': I'd appreciate you not telling me "it's not that hard". I know how to do this, Storm. I know it's not hard. It's a matter of being unable to do it. I've played around with the shading and this is as much as I can get. But as we speak I'm uploading a version with the tail shaded in - it was being really dumb and didn't upload at the same time. God bless wwiki's uploading service. {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 22:08, July 23, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Can you possibly add some shadow to the very backs of the back legs, and erase some shadow on the very front of the front legs? Looking good ^^ {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 13:27, July 24, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | @StormSongz: the light source is coming from above. Define the shading on the back right leg. ~Spotteh 13:32, July 24, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Spotted, you just repeated what Winter asked Icy to do. Please don't repeat comments. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|13:33, 7/24/2015}} |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': Hm....I tried to define it but I think I might've gone overboard. {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 14:54, July 24, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Define light source on the main body...? I'm not picking, but he kinda only has shading on the bottom side of his body... {{User:Bramblesnow/Sig2|13:02,7/25/2015}} |
||
| − | |||
| − | theres not going to be shading on the top if the lights coming from there? {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 19:23, July 25, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | What trolly said. And I can't define the shading anymore. Please don't ask me to do that because I can't. {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 22:37, July 25, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Not define it, but could you ''darken'' it in general? That might do the trick. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 02:26, July 26, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Re-uploaded: {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 02:59, July 26, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | I think I read earlier in these comments that the light is coming from above the head? If so, could you erase some of the shading on the forehead/nose, as there should be light shining on there if the light is from directly overhead. Also, could you have the belly, shoulder, and back hip shading dip low, following the curve of the shoulder.belly/hip, to show the shape of it when the light falls on it? I dunno that I worded well. XD If that didn't make sense, I can do a redline if you want. [[User:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#6699FF;font-family:Comic Sans MS;">Jayie</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">Unwritten </span>]][[User:Jayfrost (BC)/Chararts|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~</span>]]</sup> 04:58, July 26, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': I did exactly what you said. And for the life of God, no one tell me to define the shading. I can't. {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 05:20, July 26, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | That looks good. :) Could you just bring the shading up a bit on the shoulder, against where it hits the belly, against the lineart? It'll show the shape of the shoulder better and dinstinguish it from the belly shading. [[User:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#6699FF;font-family:Comic Sans MS;">Jayie</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">Unwritten </span>]][[User:Jayfrost (BC)/Chararts|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~</span>]]</sup> 05:22, July 26, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': I think this is what you meant? I don't know, I'm really tired I can't think straight. <_< {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 05:27, July 26, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Er, most of you won't know me and that's okay, and you can disregard this comment because I'm not a member anymore, but I'd thought I share my two cents since I came across this and say that the scar on Snowtuft's belly shouldn't be so far down to the point where it's only crossing the belly fur, because fur doesn't scar and the fur the scar is covering looks like its hang fur and not covering any kind of skin. The scar should be unnoticeable on the other side of him or a little bit more elevated on the side the cat is facing us with to the point where its not just going across belly fur and instead across skin, if you get me? And if that scar is indeed touching the skin, the area there should be bare of fur and not just turn pink, because to me it looks like pink fur rather than a legitimate scar. {{User:Stoemstar/Sig}} <span style="{{User:Stoemstar/Time}}">21:19 Sun Jul 26</span> |
||
| − | |||
| − | Sure, give your two cents, but I don't exactly know what you want me to do with it. You're telling me what's wrong, but you're not telling me how to fix it. And I based the scar from the warrior image, so... {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 02:58, July 27, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Actually, on this side of the image, the only part of the scar that would possibly show is up near the ear... {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|11:34, 7/27/2015}} |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''': hi {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 17:18, July 27, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Could you darken the overall shading just slightly? Just bump the opacity of the layer up a bit? I'm having issues seeing the shading but it ''may'' just be my iPad screen. {{User:♫~Berry~♫/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:♫~Berry~♫/Time}}">10:49 Thu Jul 30</span></small> |
||
| − | |||
| − | The opacity layer is at 100%. {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 16:22, July 30, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | == [[Stonetooth (BP)]] (W) ~ For Approval == |
||
| − | |||
| − | [[File:Stonetooth_(BP).warrior.png]]Eh those stripes :p {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 19:25, July 25, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Smooth out the shading a tad? {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 19:36, July 25, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Is there neck shading? If so can you define it, please? Nice! {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 00:48, July 26, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | The haunch shading kind of cuts the haunch in half, if that makes any sense. Since the haunch is raised higher than the torso of the cat, the shading should go around the whole outline of the haunch. Basically shade by following the haunch lineart around, and make it more circular, then connecting with the shading on the back part of the hind-legs, if that made any sense lol. {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">03:35 Sun Jul 26</span></small> |
||
| − | |||
| − | Can you erase some of the shading on the far ear, it should have more light on it, I believe, with this light source. [[User:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#6699FF;font-family:Comic Sans MS;">Jayie</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">Unwritten </span>]][[User:Jayfrost (BC)/Chararts|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~</span>]]</sup> 05:09, July 26, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Define ear pink, a little? ~User:Dewdrops/talk~ 15:11, July, 26, 2015 |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-ups''' I redid the shading cuz' i was a bit sleepy when i did it yesterday ^^ {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 18:31, July 26, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Can you dull down the shading a few ticks? {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 18:48, July 26, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| − | Can you define the earpink just a tad more? I can't really see it... {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 23:02, July 26, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-ups''' {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 11:31, July 27, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | Lighten up and smooth out the shading. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 03:31, July 28, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Withdrawing''' {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 10:02, July 28, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | I'll attempt to take this over... {{User:♫~Berry~♫/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:♫~Berry~♫/Time}}">10:11 Tue Jul 28</span></small> |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''' Thanks to Jayce for uploading this for me ;-; I tried {{User:♫~Berry~♫/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:♫~Berry~♫/Time}}">12:01 Tue Jul 28</span></small> |
||
| − | |||
| − | Can you define the light on the tail please? Great job! {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 19:59, July 28, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''' again thanks to Jayce for uploading this. I tried but I'm doing this on a laptop and these tails are so thin it's really hard ;-; {{User:♫~Berry~♫/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:♫~Berry~♫/Time}}">07:23 Wed Jul 29</span></small> |
||
| − | |||
| − | Can you dull the light on the chest a little bit? It shouldn't be that white. {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 02:03, July 30, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| − | It's light because the image is supposed to have a light chest, so I think it's fine. {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 02:07, July 30, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | [[File:Dappletail's Kit.kit.png]] Poor kit. The colours are based off Dappletail's images so credit to the OA's.{{User:Stealthfire star/Sig}} 00:12, July 30, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| − | Pretty sure it's texture. Anyway, this is cute! Could you define the light on the back paw just a bit more? {{User:Sorrelflower/Sig}} 11:42, July 30, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| − | [[File:Quiet_Rain.elder.png]] I couldn't resist sorry, Quiet Rain is my favorite cat as well as having my favorite pattern o.o {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 10:42, July 30, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''' {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 13:38, July 31, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | [[File:Millie.loner.alt2.png]] Eww... This. So. ugly. {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 12:33, July 30, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
| − | |||
| − | '''Re-uploaded''' eh {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 08:43, July 31, 2015 (UTC) |
||
| − | |||
| ⚫ | |||
Revision as of 13:37, 3 August 2015
Discussions should be routed to the discussion page, while all Art Tweaks should be routed to the tweak page, and all Tweak Nominations should be routed to the nominations page. | |||||||||||
| Template:Project talk | |||||||||||
Here are some guidelines all users must comply with
| |||||||||||
|
|
| ||||||||||
Discussion
Take it to the discussion page
Tweaked
Take it to the tweak page
Images Pending Approval
Please use this section to put images up for approval only.
Dappletail's Kit (Ki) ~ For Approval
File:Dappletail's Kit.kit.png Poor kit. The colours are based off Dappletail's images so credit to the OA's.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:12, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
Define the light on the legs and the back paw. —Ivy ☆ 01:00, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:50, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
Is it just me or is he spotted?? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (11:28,7/30/2015)
Pretty sure it's texture. Anyway, this is cute! Could you define the light on the back paw just a bit more? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 11:42, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
Could you smudge/add more "dapples"? I think they might look more like texture if you did one or the other, right now she does look a tad spotted. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:01, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
Reupload Yeah it's texture. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 20:31, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
The texture still looks like tiny spots, and I don't think that's what it's supposed to look like... I dunno, I'm still really tired and it was a long day yesterday. —Jayce(09:59, 7/31/2015)
Well, I can smudge it more? I think it's okay... Can I have a second opinion on this? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:29, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
Can you please connect the texture lines together to make them lines? Texture shouldn't look like dots. User:Winterflurry/Sig 00:34, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
What do you mean? I don't quite understand.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:44, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
What I'm saying is that the texture you have right now (dots), needs to be lines. Texture isn't supposed to look like dapples. Can you please re-do the texture? User:Winterflurry/Sig 01:47, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
You actually can have dapples as texture, if they are dense enough they can be clustered together to look like soft fur. right now, I'd say it could be denser to now confuse it with dapples. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:21, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
Reupload I redid it. It does look much better.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:20, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
Quiet Rain (E) - CBA
I couldn't resist sorry, Quiet Rain is my favorite cat as well as having my favorite pattern o.o User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:42, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
Remove the tuft of fur on her head or make it less pronounced. It looks kinda odd right now. This is gorgeous btw. .o. ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 10:45 Thu Jul 30
Re-uploaded Thanks so much! I tried messing around with it since I like tufts on heads my linear editing skills are not quite good lol. User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:52, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
Wouldn't the tuft be further up her head? Like, more between the ears...? It seems... kinda like a unicorn horn right now and I now dub her Princess Quiet Rain. —Jayce(20:48, 7/30/2015)
Re-uploaded User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:38, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
Define the earpink, please.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:30, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:07, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
I love Quiet Rain x3 CBA? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (10:09,8/3/2015)
Millie (Alt Lo) ~ CBA
Eww... This. So. ugly. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:33, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
- Slams Foxy out of the way* This. So. Pretty. Smooth out shading a little and define shading on the head? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (13:54,7/30/2015)
Re-uploaded eh - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:43, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
Define the shading on the head a little more? I can't see it, but it might just be me. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:51, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
Lighten the belly shading just a tick, please.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:30, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:30, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
This is so beautiful :O CBA? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (10:08,8/3/2015)
Snowtuft (DF) ~ For Approval
Yay! Another image :) User:Winterflurry/Sig 23:26, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
Beautiful! Could you smoothen out the back highlight a bit? Splook sweet creature 00:25 Mon Aug 3
I didn't use highlights at all xD Could you specify something else, perhaps? User:Winterflurry/Sig 00:28, August 3, 2015 (UTC)
Well, 'highlight' as in where the light is hitting his back. Basically, where the shading coming from the stomach ends. Just blur that out a little bit. Splook sweet creature 00:32 Mon Aug 3
Also blur the tail shading please. Nice! —Ivy ☆ 00:44, August 3, 2015 (UTC)
Wah~! So nice :3 wait I thought this was Splooks? Define light on the shoulder^^ It's so nice omg :o ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (09:13,8/3/2015)
Reuploaded ^^ I took it, but I felt bad so I wanted to give it back, but she said I deserve it ;-; User:Winterflurry/Sig 13:37, August 3, 2015 (UTC)