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Graywing (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval

File:Graywing (WC).star.png I used highlights so i guess this would look a little lighter. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:50, August 16, 2015 (UTC)

I thought we had to wait to reserve images from PoS until its release..? Just because the browse inside was out fully temporarily, doesn't mean its out. And this did happen in that book. Correct me if im wrong, im not 100% sure. ~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 04:15, August 16, 2015 (UTC)

The cite for his post death was from kate's blog. So this should warrant - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:35, August 16, 2015 (UTC)

Please don't die, my Gray Wing T^T Can you smudge the earpink a little bit because it looks kinda "edgy" if it's a thing? :P Also I think his ear should be more ripped (ouch)? Idk ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (06:52,8/17/2015)

Breezeheart why you gotta spoil T^T. As for the image, can you smooth out the shading on the tail, legs, and face a tad? User:Winterflurry/Sig 12:23, August 17, 2015 (UTC)

Um, the cite wasn't from PoS at all, it was from Kate's Blog. This does not mean Gray Wing will die. User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:54, August 17, 2015 (UTC)

...shit, my apologies. I didn't even realize it till now. ^^'.. as for the image, smudge the facial shading just a tad. More so near the top of the head and ears. ~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 21:47, August 17, 2015 (UTC)

add the second ear rip.

~ Silvercloud ^{There is always hope...} 22:42, August 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hate torn ears, really. ;; - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 23:18, August 17, 2015 (UTC)

I think this image also needs to be withdrawn, since Skye withdrew theirs, and this is basically a spoiler. User:Winterflurry/Sig 21:45, August 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sigh nvm... User:Winterflurry/Sig 21:50, August 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define and slightly darken the shading on the main part of the body, and also the facial shading. By main part of the body I mean like where all the limbs and tail and stuff meet- I know I had to actually explain this before and idk if it's clear enough. —Jayce(18:28, 8/20/2015)

Re-uploaded - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:21, August 21, 2015 (UTC

Maybe smooth out the shading here : http://www.ezimba.com/work/150823C/ezimba16683134459400.png I also think you forget his nosepink Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 11:43, August 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 13:32, August 22, 2015 (UTC)

Clear Sky (Star) - For Approval

File:Clear Sky.star.png idk there's a cite on his page???? All colors are from the leader, and the only reason the leader looks darker is because of the thicker shading. —Jayce(21:14, 8/17/2015)

Smooth out the shading a little on the right leg? This is a beautiful image, and Clear Sky doesn't deserve it. —Ivy ☆ 21:27, August 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm actually starting to like him oops. —Jayce(21:31, 8/17/2015)

Define the facial shading a tad. ugh teach me your ways of doing texture ;;. ~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 08:20, August 18, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the front (our) right paw is leaking, i don't know if it is just me or...? User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:29, August 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It wasn't leaking- I think it's your screen. I checked, double-checked, and triple-checked and I saw nothing. —Jayce(11:20, 8/18/2015)

Alright, I'm unclear on the legitimacy of the cite, so I'm just going to withdraw. The more I look at it, the less I like it. —Jayce(20:53, 8/18/2015)

Can i take over? Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 15:52, August 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Eh dunno Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 23:12, August 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit? I love this image...Russet: The fun has been bubbled! LMFAO....

Yes, this is very pretty. Smooth out the chest shading a little though? —Ivy ☆ 00:38, August 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks ^^ Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 00:52, August 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you either lighten his base or his shading? Something about him makes him look a little darker than the rest of the images. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 00:53, August 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Lightened the shading a bit Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 18:05, August 20, 2015 (UTC)

The base is #E4E5E5, as per the leader. That image only looks darker because of the shading. —Jayce(18:23, 8/20/2015)

Could you smoothen out the shading on {our left) his hauch (Where the leg and the shoulder meet) ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 11:28, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 14:17, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the chest shading. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:06, August 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 10:32, August 22, 2015 (UTC)

Cats of the Park Blanks ~ For Approval

File:CatsOfThePark.sh.m.pngFile:CatsOfThePark.lh.fm.png They're so icky omgggg please rename them for me if I named them wrong? I'm no good at lineart ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (05:47,8/21/2015)

I'll fill them in and fix the longhair's leg in the next upload. ;-; ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (05:47,8/21/2015)

I suggest looking at the other blanks, you might pick up some good points. Maybe try drawing lines that helps show the muzzle, sorta like the cave-guard or leader. Just keep trying until it seems right.Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 06:13, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Round the tips of the ears and maybe make the eyes a little bit smaller. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 07:18 Fri Aug 21

IDK but the (our) left leg on the short haired blank looks a bit too thin on it's staring point? (My vocabulary omg ;;) I think you get what I mean? User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:44, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The muzzle looks a bit small. Try enlarging it? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:06, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I tried... The eyes looked like aliens >.> still very icky ._. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (09:48,8/21/2015)

Maybe make the edge of the eyes a /little/ sharper? ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 11:26, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the lines thinner? User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:19, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you enlarge the muzzle? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 13:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The lines don't need to be thinner, Burnt. They match the thickness on some of the blanks we have, and it's honestly fine. —Jayce(15:44, 8/21/2015)

Largen the eyes? ~ Silver Cloud ~ 16:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know, I think the lines should be thinner. Anyways can you space out the eyes a little? They look too close together. But you did an awesome job! Appledash ^{the light of honor} 18:07, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's a couple of white pixels on the long-haired's left ear. Songheart (talk) 18:15, August 21, 2015 (UTC)Songheart

The eyes should have thicker lineart, and the eyes should be further apart and follow the curve of the face more. The chin should be more noticable as well. Nubface (talk) 18:33, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The face is bent downwards at an angle. Right now, the eyes are facing forward with the same perception. If the muzzle where to be there, the eye on our left would have to be angled a bit differently, to make way for the shape of the muzzle. if that didn't make sense i'll try to explain it better Splook ^{sweet  creature} 20:15 Fri Aug 21

Will this get declined if I'm gone for a week...? Because I'm going to my friend's house for a couple days. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 ()

No. A week without uploads on blanks is not fair. Blanks are a much different process than a normal image- I don't remember the timeframe we decided on, but if you don't upload for a week, you won't lose your blanks. I think we ended up picking two weeks...or something like that. Regardless, working on blanks is a very long process and there's no need to hold you to the same requirements as a normal image. It just wouldn't be fair, flat out. —Jayce(16:17, 8/22/2015)