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Graywing (WC) (Star) ~ CBA
File:Graywing (WC).star.png I used highlights so i guess this would look a little lighter. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:50, August 16, 2015 (UTC)
I thought we had to wait to reserve images from PoS until its release..? Just because the browse inside was out fully temporarily, doesn't mean its out. And this did happen in that book. Correct me if im wrong, im not 100% sure. ~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:15, August 16, 2015 (UTC)
The cite for his post death was from kate's blog. So this should warrant - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:35, August 16, 2015 (UTC)
Please don't die, my Gray Wing T^T Can you smudge the earpink a little bit because it looks kinda "edgy" if it's a thing? :P Also I think his ear should be more ripped (ouch)? Idk ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (06:52,8/17/2015)
Breezeheart why you gotta spoil T^T. As for the image, can you smooth out the shading on the tail, legs, and face a tad? User:Winterflurry/Sig 12:23, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
Um, the cite wasn't from PoS at all, it was from Kate's Blog. This does not mean Gray Wing will die. User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:54, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
...shit, my apologies. I didn't even realize it till now. ^^'.. as for the image, smudge the facial shading just a tad. More so near the top of the head and ears. ~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 21:47, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
add the second ear rip.
~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 22:42, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I hate torn ears, really. ;; - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:18, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
I think this image also needs to be withdrawn, since Skye withdrew theirs, and this is basically a spoiler. User:Winterflurry/Sig 21:45, August 18, 2015 (UTC)
Sigh nvm... User:Winterflurry/Sig 21:50, August 18, 2015 (UTC)
Define and slightly darken the shading on the main part of the body, and also the facial shading. By main part of the body I mean like where all the limbs and tail and stuff meet- I know I had to actually explain this before and idk if it's clear enough. —Jayce(18:28, 8/20/2015)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:21, August 21, 2015 (UTC
Maybe smooth out the shading here : http://www.ezimba.com/work/150823C/ezimba16683134459400.png I also think you forget his nosepink Sziri the goat sails away ツ 11:43, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:32, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
Beautiful image. CBA?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:40, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
Cats of the Park Blanks ~ For Approval
File:CatsOfThePark.sh.m.pngFile:CatsOfThePark.lh.fm.png They're so icky omgggg please rename them for me if I named them wrong? I'm no good at lineart ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (05:47,8/21/2015)
I'll fill them in and fix the longhair's leg in the next upload. ;-; ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (05:47,8/21/2015)
I suggest looking at the other blanks, you might pick up some good points. Maybe try drawing lines that helps show the muzzle, sorta like the cave-guard or leader. Just keep trying until it seems right.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:13, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
Round the tips of the ears and maybe make the eyes a little bit smaller. ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 07:18 Fri Aug 21
IDK but the (our) left leg on the short haired blank looks a bit too thin on it's staring point? (My vocabulary omg ;;) I think you get what I mean? User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:44, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
The muzzle looks a bit small. Try enlarging it? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:06, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
re-ups I tried... The eyes looked like aliens >.> still very icky ._. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (09:48,8/21/2015)
Maybe make the edge of the eyes a /little/ sharper? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 11:26, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
Could you make the lines thinner? User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:19, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
Could you enlarge the muzzle? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
The lines don't need to be thinner, Burnt. They match the thickness on some of the blanks we have, and it's honestly fine. —Jayce(15:44, 8/21/2015)
Largen the eyes? ~ Silver Cloud ~ 16:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
I don't know, I think the lines should be thinner. Anyways can you space out the eyes a little? They look too close together. But you did an awesome job! Appledash the light of honor 18:07, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
There's a couple of white pixels on the long-haired's left ear. Songheart (talk) 18:15, August 21, 2015 (UTC)Songheart
The eyes should have thicker lineart, and the eyes should be further apart and follow the curve of the face more. The chin should be more noticable as well. Nubface (talk) 18:33, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
The face is bent downwards at an angle. Right now, the eyes are facing forward with the same perception. If the muzzle where to be there, the eye on our left would have to be angled a bit differently, to make way for the shape of the muzzle. if that didn't make sense i'll try to explain it better Splook sweet creature 20:15 Fri Aug 21
Will this get declined if I'm gone for a week...? Because I'm going to my friend's house for a couple days. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 ()
No. A week without uploads on blanks is not fair. Blanks are a much different process than a normal image- I don't remember the timeframe we decided on, but if you don't upload for a week, you won't lose your blanks. I think we ended up picking two weeks...or something like that. Regardless, working on blanks is a very long process and there's no need to hold you to the same requirements as a normal image. It just wouldn't be fair, flat out. —Jayce(16:17, 8/22/2015)
Forgot to mention earlier, but the tail should be moved down a bit, especially on the shorthair. The tails rests on the ground and tends to curl around their front paws. Nubface (talk) 20:46, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
Lizardfang (W) ~ Under Evaluation
Shading this colour is hard. Also didn't know if I needed 'under evaluation' since I'm not actually part of the project, but I did it anyway. Nubface (talk) 11:47, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
Define the shading everywhere- I'm having a hard time seeing it. User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:08, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
Define the ear pink a tad too - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:26, August 24, 2015 (UTC)