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Cats of the Park Blanks ~ For Approval

File:CatsOfThePark.sh.m.pngFile:CatsOfThePark.lh.fm.png They're so icky omgggg please rename them for me if I named them wrong? I'm no good at lineart ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (05:47,8/21/2015)

I'll fill them in and fix the longhair's leg in the next upload. ;-; ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (05:47,8/21/2015)

I suggest looking at the other blanks, you might pick up some good points. Maybe try drawing lines that helps show the muzzle, sorta like the cave-guard or leader. Just keep trying until it seems right.Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 06:13, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Round the tips of the ears and maybe make the eyes a little bit smaller. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 07:18 Fri Aug 21

IDK but the (our) left leg on the short haired blank looks a bit too thin on it's staring point? (My vocabulary omg ;;) I think you get what I mean? User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:44, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The muzzle looks a bit small. Try enlarging it? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:06, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I tried... The eyes looked like aliens >.> still very icky ._. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (09:48,8/21/2015)

Maybe make the edge of the eyes a /little/ sharper? ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 11:26, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the lines thinner? User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:19, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you enlarge the muzzle? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 13:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The lines don't need to be thinner, Burnt. They match the thickness on some of the blanks we have, and it's honestly fine. —Jayce(15:44, 8/21/2015)

Largen the eyes? ~ Silver Cloud ~ 16:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know, I think the lines should be thinner. Anyways can you space out the eyes a little? They look too close together. But you did an awesome job! Appledash ^{the light of honor} 18:07, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's a couple of white pixels on the long-haired's left ear. Songheart (talk) 18:15, August 21, 2015 (UTC)Songheart

The eyes should have thicker lineart, and the eyes should be further apart and follow the curve of the face more. The chin should be more noticable as well. Nubface (talk) 18:33, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The face is bent downwards at an angle. Right now, the eyes are facing forward with the same perception. If the muzzle where to be there, the eye on our left would have to be angled a bit differently, to make way for the shape of the muzzle. if that didn't make sense i'll try to explain it better Splook ^{sweet  creature} 20:15 Fri Aug 21

Will this get declined if I'm gone for a week...? Because I'm going to my friend's house for a couple days. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 ()

No. A week without uploads on blanks is not fair. Blanks are a much different process than a normal image- I don't remember the timeframe we decided on, but if you don't upload for a week, you won't lose your blanks. I think we ended up picking two weeks...or something like that. Regardless, working on blanks is a very long process and there's no need to hold you to the same requirements as a normal image. It just wouldn't be fair, flat out. —Jayce(16:17, 8/22/2015)

Forgot to mention earlier, but the tail should be moved down a bit, especially on the shorthair. The tails rests on the ground and tends to curl around their front paws. Nubface (talk) 20:46, August 22, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't a little bit of the hindpaw be visible somewhat through the tail? ~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 13:40, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Do you think this lineart is a little... Too big? Not gonna be rude. --ShellaxySpaniel (talk) 05:10, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Lizardfang (W) ~ For Evaluation

Shading this colour is hard. Also didn't know if I needed 'under evaluation' since I'm not actually part of the project, but I did it anyway. Nubface (talk) 11:47, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere- I'm having a hard time seeing it. User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:08, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a tad too - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 12:26, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Get rid of the texture. It has to match Lizardfang's other images. User:Winterflurry/Sig 12:51, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 13:39, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

I don't believe there's texture, Winter, I think it's just the shading. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:29, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Breeze, you just repeated what Burntclaw said. Can you sharpen the stripes on the paws? (if you get what I mean - if not, feel free not to do it) Appledash ^{the light of honor} 17:53, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Uh, my bad?? I didn't see her previous comment.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 19:24, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded I know, I'm not stupid, I know it has to match. And yes, it is shading. Nubface (talk) 19:46, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink just a little bit more? :) Splook ^{sweet  creature} 20:30 Mon Aug 24

And can you just define the shading a tiny bit more? This looks awesome by the way. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:10, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Robinwing (TC) StarClan ~ Declined

 I would think Robinwing would've gone to StarClan, as I believe she never did very much against the warrior code, so I made this charart here. Of course, I don't know this character very well, but I doubt she went to the Dark Forest. Is it okay?{{User:NeonDawn/Sig}}

This a lovely image, NeonDawn, but unfortunately we have no proof written/spoken proof that Robinwing is in StarClan, so this will be declined. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 10:31 Tue Aug 25

Alright. --NeonDawn (talk) 10:33, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Declined, sorry NeonDawn, this is a lovely image but we have no proof that she even died. User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:33, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, but I think it said she died near the end of Bluestar's Prophecy. I'll check when I get home. --NeonDawn (talk) 10:37, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Just because it said she died is not a valid cite for her in StarClan. She has to have been seen in StarClan for her to have an image. User:Winterflurry/Sig 12:42, August 25, 2015 (UTC)