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=Images Pending Approval=
 
=Images Pending Approval=
 
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==[[Graywing (WC)]] (Star) ~ For Approval==
 
[[File:Graywing_(WC).star.png]] I used highlights so i guess this would look a little lighter. {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 03:50, August 16, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
I thought we had to wait to reserve images from PoS until its release..? Just because the browse inside was out fully temporarily, doesn't mean its out. And this did happen in ''that'' book. Correct me if im wrong, im not 100% sure. {{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 04:15, August 16, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
The cite for his post death was from kate's blog. So this should warrant {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 04:35, August 16, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
Please don't die, my Gray Wing T^T Can you smudge the earpink a little bit because it looks kinda "edgy" if it's a thing? :P Also I think his ear should be more ripped (ouch)? Idk {{User:Bramblesnow/Sig2|06:52,8/17/2015}}
 
 
Breezeheart why you gotta spoil T^T. As for the image, can you smooth out the shading on the tail, legs, and face a tad? {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 12:23, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
Um, the cite wasn't from PoS at ''all'', it was from Kate's Blog. This ''does not'' mean Gray Wing will die. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 12:54, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
...shit, my apologies. I didn't even realize it till now. ^^'.. as for the image, smudge the facial shading just a tad. More so near the top of the head and ears. {{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 21:47, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
add the second ear rip.
 
 
<span style="font-size:12px;">[[User:X-Silvercloud-X|<span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:silver; text-shadow:darkgray 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Silvercloud </span>]]<sup>[[User talk:X-Silvercloud-X|<span style="font-family: Lobster; font-size:11px;color:silver; text-shadow:darkgray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">There is always</span><span style="font-family: Lobster; font-size:11px;color:silver; text-shadow:darkgray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> hope...</span>]]</sup></span> 22:42, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
'''Re-uploaded''' I hate torn ears, really. ;; {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 23:18, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
<s>I think this image also needs to be withdrawn, since Skye withdrew theirs, and this is basically a spoiler. {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 21:45, August 18, 2015 (UTC)</s>
 
 
''Sigh'' nvm... {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 21:50, August 18, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
Define and slightly darken the shading on the main part of the body, and also the facial shading. <small>By main part of the body I mean like where all the limbs and tail and stuff meet- I know I had to actually explain this before and idk if it's clear enough.</small> {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:28, 8/20/2015}}
 
 
'''Re-uploaded''' {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 01:21, August 21, 2015 (UTC
 
 
Maybe smooth out the shading here : http://www.ezimba.com/work/150823C/ezimba16683134459400.png I also think you forget his nosepink {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 11:43, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
'''Re-uploaded''' {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 13:32, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
==[[Clear Sky]] (Star) - For Approval==
 
[[File:Clear Sky.star.png]] idk there's a cite on his page???? All colors are from the leader, and the only reason the leader looks darker is because of the thicker shading. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|21:14, 8/17/2015}}
 
 
Smooth out the shading a little on the right leg? This is a beautiful image, and Clear Sky doesn't deserve it. {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 21:27, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
'''Re-uploaded'''. <small>I'm actually starting to like him oops.</small> {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|21:31, 8/17/2015}}
 
 
Define the facial shading a tad. <small>ugh teach me your ways of doing texture ;;.</small> {{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 08:20, August 18, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
The shading on the front (our) right paw is leaking, i don't know if it is just me or...? {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 10:29, August 18, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
'''Re-uploaded'''. It wasn't leaking- I think it's your screen. I checked, double-checked, and triple-checked and I saw nothing. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|11:20, 8/18/2015}}
 
 
Alright, I'm unclear on the legitimacy of the cite, so I'm just going to withdraw. The more I look at it, the less I like it. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|20:53, 8/18/2015}}
 
 
Can i take over? {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 15:52, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
'''Re-ups''' Eh dunno {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 23:12, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
Define the tail shading a bit? I love this image...{{User:Russettail13/Sig}}.
 
 
Yes, this is very pretty. Smooth out the chest shading a little though? {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 00:38, August 20, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
'''Re-ups''' Thanks ^^ {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 00:52, August 20, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
Can you either lighten his base or his shading? Something about him makes him look a little darker than the rest of the images. {{User:Appledash/Sig2|}} 00:53, August 20, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
'''Re-ups''' Lightened the shading a bit {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 18:05, August 20, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
The base is #E4E5E5, as per the leader. That image only ''looks'' darker because of the shading. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:23, 8/20/2015}}
 
 
Could you smoothen out the shading on {our left) his hauch (Where the leg and the shoulder meet) {{User:Brambleshade/Sig}} 11:28, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
'''Re-ups''' {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 14:17, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
Define the chest shading. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 03:06, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
 
 
'''Re-ups''' {{User:Sziri/Sig}} 10:32, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
 
   
 
== [[Cats of the Park]] Blanks ~ For Approval ==
 
== [[Cats of the Park]] Blanks ~ For Approval ==
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Forgot to mention earlier, but the tail should be moved down a bit, especially on the shorthair. The tails rests on the ground and tends to curl around their front paws. [[User:Nubface|Nubface]] ([[User talk:Nubface|talk]]) 20:46, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
 
Forgot to mention earlier, but the tail should be moved down a bit, especially on the shorthair. The tails rests on the ground and tends to curl around their front paws. [[User:Nubface|Nubface]] ([[User talk:Nubface|talk]]) 20:46, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
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Shouldn't a little bit of the hindpaw be visible somewhat through the tail? {{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 13:40, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
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Do you think this lineart is a little... Too big? Not gonna be rude. --[[User:ShellaxySpaniel|ShellaxySpaniel]] ([[User talk:ShellaxySpaniel|talk]]) 05:10, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
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The size is fine tbh. There are other blanks the same size/bigger. Also, if you were talking about the lineart itself, the thickness of the lines is fine as there are other blanks with the same thickness of lines. {{User:Icebreeze (TC)/Sig}} 21:01, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
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I think the lineart could be just a touch smaller and the lineart just a touch thinner, but that's just me. Also, the angle of the face looks a little off - it looks like, from the position of the cat, the head is titled a bit downward, but the face seems tilted too much upward. Also, the tail is a little too high up on the shorthair, it should be even with the front paws, at least at the base, since that's where it would connect to the back. May I offer a redline to help with anatomy and such? If not, that's cool, just offering. ^^ [[User:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#6699FF;font-family:Comic Sans MS;">Jayie</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">Unwritten </span>]][[User:Jayfrost (BC)/Chararts|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~</span>]]</sup> 21:51, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
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== [[Lizardfang]] (W) ~ For Evaluation ==
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[[File:Lizardfang.warrior.png]] Shading this colour is hard. Also didn't know if I needed 'under evaluation' since I'm not actually part of the project, but I did it anyway. [[User:Nubface|Nubface]] ([[User talk:Nubface|talk]]) 11:47, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
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Define the shading everywhere- I'm having a hard time seeing it. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 12:08, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
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Define the ear pink a tad too {{User:The Fox Girl/Sig}} 12:26, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
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Get rid of the texture. It has to match Lizardfang's other images. {{User:Winterflurry/Sig}} 12:51, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
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Define the tail shading.{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 13:39, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
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I don't believe there's texture, Winter, I think it's just the shading. {{User:Burntclaw/Sig}} 14:29, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
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Breeze, you just repeated what Burntclaw said. Can you sharpen the stripes on the paws? (if you get what I mean - if not, feel free not to do it) {{User:Appledash/Sig}} 17:53, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
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Uh, my bad?? I didn't see her previous comment.{{User:~Breezeheart~/Sig}} 19:24, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
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'''re-uploaded''' I know, I'm not stupid, I know it has to match. And yes, it is shading. [[User:Nubface|Nubface]] ([[User talk:Nubface|talk]]) 19:46, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
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Could you define the earpink just a little bit more? :) {{User:Splook/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Splook/Time}}">20:30 Mon Aug 24</span></small>
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And can you just define the shading a tiny bit more? This looks awesome by the way. {{User:Appledash/Sig}} 23:10, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
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This is gorgeous. :) Is it just me though, or do the stripes look a little too dark to match the other images? Maybe it's just the shading. Can you define the shading on the tail? [[User:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#6699FF;font-family:Comic Sans MS;">Jayie</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">Unwritten </span>]][[User:Jayfrost (BC)/Chararts|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~</span>]]</sup> 21:54, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

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Cats of the Park Blanks ~ For Approval

File:CatsOfThePark.sh.m.pngFile:CatsOfThePark.lh.fm.png They're so icky omgggg please rename them for me if I named them wrong? I'm no good at lineart ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (05:47,8/21/2015)

I'll fill them in and fix the longhair's leg in the next upload. ;-; ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (05:47,8/21/2015)

I suggest looking at the other blanks, you might pick up some good points. Maybe try drawing lines that helps show the muzzle, sorta like the cave-guard or leader. Just keep trying until it seems right.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:13, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Round the tips of the ears and maybe make the eyes a little bit smaller. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 07:18 Fri Aug 21

IDK but the (our) left leg on the short haired blank looks a bit too thin on it's staring point? (My vocabulary omg ;;) I think you get what I mean? User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:44, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The muzzle looks a bit small. Try enlarging it? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:06, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I tried... The eyes looked like aliens >.> still very icky ._. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (09:48,8/21/2015)

Maybe make the edge of the eyes a /little/ sharper? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 11:26, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the lines thinner? User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:19, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you enlarge the muzzle? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The lines don't need to be thinner, Burnt. They match the thickness on some of the blanks we have, and it's honestly fine. Jayce(15:44, 8/21/2015)

Largen the eyes? ~ Silver Cloud ~ 16:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know, I think the lines should be thinner. Anyways can you space out the eyes a little? They look too close together. But you did an awesome job! Appledash the light of honor 18:07, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's a couple of white pixels on the long-haired's left ear. Songheart (talk) 18:15, August 21, 2015 (UTC)Songheart

The eyes should have thicker lineart, and the eyes should be further apart and follow the curve of the face more. The chin should be more noticable as well. Nubface (talk) 18:33, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The face is bent downwards at an angle. Right now, the eyes are facing forward with the same perception. If the muzzle where to be there, the eye on our left would have to be angled a bit differently, to make way for the shape of the muzzle. if that didn't make sense i'll try to explain it better Splook sweet  creature 20:15 Fri Aug 21

Will this get declined if I'm gone for a week...? Because I'm going to my friend's house for a couple days. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 ()

No. A week without uploads on blanks is not fair. Blanks are a much different process than a normal image- I don't remember the timeframe we decided on, but if you don't upload for a week, you won't lose your blanks. I think we ended up picking two weeks...or something like that. Regardless, working on blanks is a very long process and there's no need to hold you to the same requirements as a normal image. It just wouldn't be fair, flat out. Jayce(16:17, 8/22/2015)

Forgot to mention earlier, but the tail should be moved down a bit, especially on the shorthair. The tails rests on the ground and tends to curl around their front paws. Nubface (talk) 20:46, August 22, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't a little bit of the hindpaw be visible somewhat through the tail? ~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 13:40, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Do you think this lineart is a little... Too big? Not gonna be rude. --ShellaxySpaniel (talk) 05:10, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

The size is fine tbh. There are other blanks the same size/bigger. Also, if you were talking about the lineart itself, the thickness of the lines is fine as there are other blanks with the same thickness of lines. —Ivy 21:01, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think the lineart could be just a touch smaller and the lineart just a touch thinner, but that's just me. Also, the angle of the face looks a little off - it looks like, from the position of the cat, the head is titled a bit downward, but the face seems tilted too much upward. Also, the tail is a little too high up on the shorthair, it should be even with the front paws, at least at the base, since that's where it would connect to the back. May I offer a redline to help with anatomy and such? If not, that's cool, just offering. ^^ Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:51, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Lizardfang (W) ~ For Evaluation

Lizardfang.warrior Shading this colour is hard. Also didn't know if I needed 'under evaluation' since I'm not actually part of the project, but I did it anyway. Nubface (talk) 11:47, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere- I'm having a hard time seeing it. User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:08, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a tad too - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:26, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Get rid of the texture. It has to match Lizardfang's other images. User:Winterflurry/Sig 12:51, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 13:39, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

I don't believe there's texture, Winter, I think it's just the shading. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:29, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Breeze, you just repeated what Burntclaw said. Can you sharpen the stripes on the paws? (if you get what I mean - if not, feel free not to do it) Appledash the light of honor 17:53, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Uh, my bad?? I didn't see her previous comment.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 19:24, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded I know, I'm not stupid, I know it has to match. And yes, it is shading. Nubface (talk) 19:46, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink just a little bit more? :) Splook sweet  creature 20:30 Mon Aug 24

And can you just define the shading a tiny bit more? This looks awesome by the way. Appledash the light of honor 23:10, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

This is gorgeous. :) Is it just me though, or do the stripes look a little too dark to match the other images? Maybe it's just the shading. Can you define the shading on the tail? Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:54, August 25, 2015 (UTC)